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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Mokuton/Fuuton: Kuikkusukōpu-shin!)- Wood/Wind Release: Quickscope Him!
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user grows a bullet shaped piece of wood the length and width of his index finger from his anywhere on his body and gathers wind chakra into his mouth. He then holds the wood up to his mouth and exhales S rank wind directly onto the wood blasting it at high speeds towards an opponent. The wood can be fired with pinpoint accuracy and has rifling on it in order to create spin and increase its velocity.

    -Can only be tracked by 2t sharingan
    -Can only be used 3 times per battle
    - No S rank wind the turn this was used or the next one
    -Can only be taught by Goku2000

    Note: If you think 2t sharingan is too much then feel free to change it to 1T

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    Don't resubmit. Something that small is neither an S-Rank nor can it be approved if it can only be blocked by a certain small number of users, in this case sharingan ones.

    Quote Originally Posted by goku2000 View Post
    Ikaku suru yōna nekkuresu: Menacing Necklace
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (to activate) 15 (every turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    This necklace once belonged to an evil Emperor who ruled over his subjects with his power and intimadated his foes with his menacing appearance this necklace gave him. The necklace has a triangular shaped golden "main" piece with a blue diamond shaped pendant in the middle of it with a golden chain, the main piece spans the users chest as well. When the user puts this necklace on it immediately begins to drain some of their chakra and when activated gives them an "extended transformation" similar to Tsunades the chakra it drains fuels this transformation so that the user is able to take some damage before the transformation wears off, however if the user is heavily damaged then the transformation wears off. The user gains golden spikey hair, their muscles grow much larger, their pupils turn white, and they grow a foot taller. This menacing appearance intimidates foes and also releases an A rank compressed omnidirectional chakra blast that goes into short range upon the activation of this necklace. If the user wants to deactivate the necklace it can be reactivated again in 3 turns. It stores the user chakra into the necklace at all times to use for more attacks. When the necklace is activated it coats the users fist and feet in the chakra it has stored giving him a +10 boost in all taijutsu attacks as well as giving a thin chakra layer around his body which protects him from minor injuries like falling debris and being wounded from kunai and shuriken

    -Actvating necklace counts as 1 move in the users turn

    Note: to whoever checks this feel free to take out the +10 or anything you like i really just wanted the transformation but i added in the other stuff to actually make it a weapon

    ~ Declined, many, many similar techniques exist ~


    ]Ikaku suru yōna nekkuresu: Menacing Necklace
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (to activate) 15 (every turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    This necklace once belonged to an evil Emperor who ruled over his subjects with his power and intimadated his foes with his menacing appearance this necklace gave him. The necklace has a triangular shaped golden "main" piece with a blue diamond shaped pendant in the middle of it with a golden chain, the main piece spans the users chest as well. When the user puts this necklace on it immediately begins to drain some of their chakra and when activated gives them an "extended transformation" similar to Tsunades the chakra it drains fuels this transformation so that the user is able to take some damage before the transformation wears off, however if the user is heavily damaged then the transformation wears off. The user gains golden spikey hair, their muscles grow much larger, their pupils turn white, and they grow a foot taller. The necklace is also able to channel 4 elemental chakras and can channel them into the users hands and feet at will giving them increased abilities depending on which one is channeled.

    Fire: The user's hands or feet get coated in fire and when an opponent is punched with this affinity channeled they recieve 3rd degree burns in the place they were punched

    Wind: The user can move very quickly when this affinity is channeled to the point where the user looks like a blur when they move and their fists moves likewise in the same speed. However a dojutsu user can see the user move like they normally would.

    Earth: The users punches and kicks do extra damage to the point where if an oponent is touched with this channeled that the punch or kick can break many bones at once and even can punch through b rank and below earth structures.

    Lightning: The user can paralyze their opponent with a single punch or kick when this affinity is channeled and makes contact with them
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    - The user can only channel one affinity per turn
    -The user can only channel the affinities 3 turns before needing a 2 turn cooldown using it again

    -Can only be used by Goku2000 and those he allows
    -Activation of necklace counts as 1 of the 3 moves per turn

    NOTE TO CHECKER if you feel it's too many abilities then delete the whole fire chakra part

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    Don't resubmit.

    Fuuton:Takoberu de supagetti yoru (Wind Release: Spaghetti Night at Taco Bell)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user makes a single handseal and focuses small pockets of wind chakra into the earth all around the opponent. They then release the wind chakra upwards towards the opponent, making a shower of small sharp stones hit the opponent and damage him. The stones are sharpened by the wind and move fast so that they cause 1 inch stab like wounds in the places they impact. The shower continues as long as the user is making the handseal they used to activate the jutsu.

    -Can only be used 4 times per battle
    - Can only be taught by Goku2000
    -can only be used once per turn

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    Remove the part i colored and make it clear that the speed is still quite trackable.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 08-22-2012 at 09:24 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Genjutsu: Musei Furi) - Illusionary Arts: "Silent Handicap"
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs a single handseal (Tiger) and traps the target in an illusion where the target finds that they suddenly begin to perspirate (sweat) extremely excessively. Depending on the user, this can either be generalized (all over the target's body) or localized to any specific parts of his body (hands, feet, arm pits, face, and so on..). It is not long until the target is completely drenched in "sweat" making for a very uncomfortable and, not to mention, embarrassing feel for the target. However, this "sweat" is no ordinary sweat - it's properties/viscosity is likened to that of "Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field" being rather viscous and sticky like glue or sticky, wet dough, thereby significantly immobilizing the target's body (or body part). This sweat also puts off a very unpleasant odour which is simply incorporated to add to the realism of this illusion as well as interfering with the target's sense of smell and concentration. This genjutsu lasts until dispelled by the target or cancelled by the user.
    *Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    *Note: While affected by this technique, the target has considerable difficulty moving (particularly affected body parts).
    *Note: No genjutsu in the same turn.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

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    Description makes it seem as if this isn't a genjutsu. If its a genjutsu, you need to explain the two sides of the coin: what your enemy will experience in the illusion and what will happen in reality.
    (Genjutsu: Musei Furi) - Illusionary Arts: "Silent Handicap"
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs a single handseal (Tiger) and traps the target in an illusion where the target finds that they suddenly begin to perspirate (sweat) extremely excessively. Depending on the user, this can either be generalized (all over the target's body) or localized to any specific parts of his body (hands, feet, arm pits, face, and so on..). It is not long until the target is completely drenched in "sweat" making for a very uncomfortable and, not to mention, embarrassing feel for the target. However, this "sweat" is no ordinary sweat - it's properties/viscosity is likened to that of "Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field" being rather viscous and sticky like glue or sticky, wet dough, thereby significantly immobilizing the target's body (or body part). This sweat also puts off a very unpleasant odour which is simply incorporated to add to the realism of this illusion as well as interfering with the target's sense of smell and concentration. In reality, the target is just standing still at his position, unable to move his body (or affected body part). This genjutsu lasts until dispelled by the target or cancelled by the user and does not hurt the target.
    *Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    *Note: While affected by this technique, the target has considerable difficulty moving (particularly affected body parts).
    *Note: No genjutsu in the same turn.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

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    In one part you say its hard for the target to move in another you say he can't move. Make it consistent.

    New:

    (Hijutsu: Chimeiteki Gaihi) – Secret Technique: Lethal Exoskeleton
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to manipulate some of his Kikaichū bugs to release a burst of elemental chakra from themselves thereby coating themselves (the bugs) in a coat of elemental chakra. This coating/infusion of chakra around the user's Kikaichū does not increase the power/damage dealt by the Kikaichū but simply just gives them a layer of chakra and thus, the properties and characteristics, of a given element (basic element only).
    Note: Must be a member of the Aburame Clan.
    Note: Only works on the user’s Kikaichū bugs.
    Note: Can only be used once on each Aburame jutsu.
    *Can only be taught by McKnockout

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    Similar technique exists. To be exact, Black Uchiha's CW.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 08-22-2012 at 09:26 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Black Leg Taijutsu - Rib meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Cotellete)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: An attack as given away by the name is primarily focused on the ribs of the opponent, the user will fall down onto one of their hands and perform a one handed handstand. As they are falling they bring their legs over and deliver a straight kick to the ribs, this can be and usually is if the attack hits followed with Selle.

    Black Leg Taijutsu - Under Saddle Meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Selle)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: This is an attack which is commonly used in combination with Cotellete , the user using the momentum from the Cotellete attack. The user who is still in a handstand will use the momentum to spin back the other way, to deliver a fierce sweeping kick to the opponents lower back or lumbar region.


    Black Leg Taijutsu - Chest/Breast meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Poitrine)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description:This attack is different from a lot in the style as it is delivered as a straight stabbing kick , this attack is quicker than most in this style due to its directness. Although it is better in terms of speed it forfeits the large attack area of the sweeping kicks , thus making it a quite balanced attack.
    These are from the previous CJ Submission Thread.

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    Black Leg Taijutsu - Rib meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Cotellete)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user quickly jumps forward moving in a front flip, or a side flip as the user lands on one hand. The user uses this momentum as they quickly pushes their strong leg and slams their foot into the opponent's ribs, or they quickly slam their shin into the opponent. This technique is used as a quick kick, that stumbles the opponent slightly, giving the user enough time to attack with Selle. This technique may be changed up in different ways as well due to the user's discretion and capabilities such as they front flip, side flip, or back flip, as long as they create the basic function of landing on one hand using the flip as a momentum to slam a hard kick into the opponent's ribs. This technique is capable of fracturing ands breaking bones when the user masters the style.

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    Black Leg Taijutsu - Under Saddle Meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Selle)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: After performing the Cotellete or a technique that will disrupt an opponent's front while in a hand stand, the user stays within the handstand and pushes off in the opposite direction that they first went through hitting the opponent along the front. Using the reversal momentum the user quickly slams their leg, their shin into the opponent's lower back. With this technique it is capable of slamming the opponent making them fly off into the distance of sixteen meters.

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    Black Leg Taijutsu - Chest/Breast meat - (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu - Poitrine)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: A strong, strong kick to the opponent's chest. The user takes their weaker leg and plants it against the ground as they push off, kicking into the chest in a stabbing formation. This technique may be performed in many different ways. The user may kick straight forward where their body is pointed forward, however this does not create a strong enough force to propel the opponent away which would be four meters. However if the user kicks the opponent side ways hitting into the opponent's chest is capable of sending the opponent flying into the distance of eight meters. When the user masters the capabilities of Black Leg Style they are capable of fracturing the ribs within the opponent's body.

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    You need to bold the changes you did to these techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 08-22-2012 at 09:27 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by KeotsuEclipse View Post
    Dead Man's Volley While I still want to be able to create this technique, I decided it would be impossible to do (and balance) as one single technique. Therefore, I'm breaking it down into parts.

    (Kamei Gigei: Raijinshō) Command Art: Raijin Rising
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Kenjutsu technique allows Swordsmen to more easily fight against Shinboi attacks of all sorts; the user will activate this technique by quickly focusing chakra into their weapon and spinning it in a complete circle in front of them. After this simple ritual is completed, a “magnetic” burst of chakra is released all around the user that causes all foreign chakra to be condensed as it approaches the user. Ultimately, the “magnetized” chakra will be drawn into the user’s weapon, effectively concentrating even large scale jutsu into simple, yet still equally powerful, streams or orbs, depending on the incoming techniques composition. This technique can easily be described as turning the user's weapon into a "Chakra Lightning-rod", thus the name.
    *The strength of drawn in techniques does not diminish at all, and if the user doesn’t counter the techniques, the chakra will flow into the user’s body via the weaponand do full damage or preform its intended purpose
    *Once activated, this remains active for the rest of the match, but it’s effect is only valid while the user is holding a weapon.

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    How long does this last again? Whole battle? Nah...4 turns tops. and it needs a usage limit as an A-Rank. Because the way its worded means it would affect any technique up to Forbidden rank. How many technique would this be able to affect at the same time? Basically, this needs a bit more "rules" to be applied to narutobase RPG context. Also, How would this behave against for example a Spike of wood? Or a rock? I see this as working well against Fire and Lightning and Wind or other such elements but solid ones?
    (Kamei Gigei: Raijinshō) Command Art: Raijin Rising
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Kenjutsu technique allows Swordsmen to more easily fight against Shinboi attacks of all sorts; the user will activate this technique by quickly focusing chakra into their weapon and spinning it in a complete circle in front of them. After this simple ritual is completed, a “magnetic” burst of chakra is released all around the user that causes all foreign chakra to be condensed as it approaches the user. Ultimately, the “magnetized” chakra will be drawn into the user’s weapon, effectively concentrating even large scale jutsu into simple, yet still equally powerful, streams or orbs, depending on the incoming techniques composition. This technique can easily be described as turning the user's weapon into a "Chakra Lightning-rod", thus the name.
    *The strength of drawn in techniques does not diminish at all, and if the user doesn’t counter the techniques, the chakra will flow into the user’s body via the weapon and do full damage or preform its intended purpose
    *Once activated, this remains active for four turns, but it’s effect is only valid while the user is holding a weapon.
    *Only useable 4 times per battle.
    *This jutsu only effects "non-solid" techniques like Wind, Fire, Lightning, Water, or objects like mud. Techniques with a sturdy molecular composition won't be affected by this technique, such as Earth or Ice, but does nothing to change their effects if they are not dealt with

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    Remember that because you didn't specify, if an issue occurs, this will only be able to do its effect in techniques same rank and below.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 08-23-2012 at 07:13 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Information, link of signing, and link of me taking over the contract, and link of the contracts approval can all be found by following said link and a few other links afterwards >_>
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...0&postcount=13

    (Fuuton : Kitakaze) Wind Release : North Wind
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user will gather a large amount of chakra, focusing it in either one of their palms, and releasing the chakra outwards towards the opponent in the form of a light greenish coloured wave of wind. The wave of wind both blasts and cuts through the air in the direction in which it was fired from the users palm. When the wave of wind impacts another object however, it forcefully separates into multiple swirling blades (Maximum of 30) of wind which travel at multiple different angles and directions; capable of striking multiple targets. The properties of this jutsu allow it to be used in several tactical ways, such as directing the blast towards the ground infront of the opponent, the blast exploding on contact with enough force so as to causing the dirt to be stirred up, creating a dust cloud which masks the wave of winds separation into wind blades; the wind blades flying upwards and forwards; taking the target by surprise so as to successfully strike the enemy through rather sneaky and underhanded methods. Due to the large amount of chakra forcefully exerted from the users hand all at once, the hand used to release the blast will be useless in hand to hand combat for the next two turns; handseal speed will be halved for the same and next turn, and excruciating pain will surge upwards from the users hand to his shoulder for the same and next turn preventing extreme concentration in most circumstances.

    Note:
    - Can only be used 1x
    - No wind jutsu for the rest of the turn, and no Jutsu above S rank for the next two turns.

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    OPed and similar to existing techniques.

    Quote Originally Posted by Scaze View Post



    (Kuchiyose:Batoidea: Atlantia) -Summoning: Batoidea : Atlantia

    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Atlantia is a small eagle sting ray, no larger than a basketball. Atlantia is one of the three bosses of the Ray summons, and is usually looked upon as the weakest due to her size. Atlantia is a vibrant deep sea purple with turquoise/blue spots. Like all eagle rays, Atlantia has small electroceptors in her snout that allow her to detect the exceedingly weak electric signals generated by prey, or in most cases enemies, within a mid range radius of her. Atlantia is extremely smart, and what she fails to make up in bulk, she makes up for in intelligence, skill and tactics. Atlantia must be summoned in water. Atlantia is incapable of using suiton jutsu, however she is capable of freely manipulating water to create B, A or S ranked constructs such as pillars, walls, vortexes and other useful apparatus, this of course counts as a jutsu. Atlantia is also capable of creating a forbidden ranked exoskeleton of water to surround her, the water being a exact replica of her, except enlarged. The exoskeleton of water can be as large as, if not larger, than gamabunta, and responds solely to Atlantia's will, for all of which Atlantia requires a equally large water source. Atlantia is incapable of flying through the air, however she can gain small periods of hang time by launching in and out of the water. Atlantia is capable of speaking fluent english, japanese, and greek.

    Note:
    - Atlantia can only be summoned 1x
    - Atlantia is capable of staying on the field for four turns.
    - Atlantia is capable of creating the water aura only 1x per match, and it lasts for only three turns.
    - Atlantia is capable of sensing living animals within a mid range of her, using her passive electroception.

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    ~ Declined ~
    B A and S rank stuff and no restrictions on them ?

    (Kuchiyose:Batoidea: Atlantia) -Summoning: Batoidea : Atlantia

    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Atlantia is a small eagle sting ray, between the size of a Frisbee and a basketball. Atlantia is one of the three bosses of the Ray summons, and is usually looked upon as the weakest due to her size. Atlantia is a vibrant deep sea purple with turquoise/blue spots. Like all eagle rays, Atlantia has small electroceptors in her snout that allow her to detect the exceedingly weak electric signals generated by prey, or in most cases enemies, within a mid range radius of her. Atlantia is extremely smart, and what she fails to make up in bulk, she makes up for in intelligence, skill and tactics. Atlantia must be summoned in water. Atlantia is incapable of using suiton jutsu, however she is capable of freely manipulating water to create B, A or S ranked constructs such as pillars, walls, vortexes and other useful apparatus, this of course counts as a jutsu. Atlantia is also capable of creating a forbidden ranked exoskeleton of water to surround her, the water being a exact replica of her, except enlarged. The exoskeleton of water can be as large as, if not larger, than gamabunta, and responds solely to Atlantia's will, for all of which Atlantia requires a equally large water source. Atlantia is incapable of flying through the air, however she can gain small periods of hang time by launching in and out of the water. Atlantia is capable of speaking fluent english, japanese, and greek.

    Note:
    - Atlantia can only be summoned 1x
    - Atlantia is capable of staying on the field for four turns.
    - Atlantia is capable of creating the water aura only 1x per match, and it lasts for only three turns.
    - Atlantia is capable of sensing living animals within a mid range of her, using her passive electroception.
    - Atlantia is capable of creating a maximum of 2 S rank structures, 3 A rank structures, and 4 B rank structures.

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    Fuuton : Tandokuno Tatsumaki | Wind Release : The Lone Current

    Type: Supplmentuary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20 (+5 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A simple yet effective jutsu made so that Kunai's and other projectiles such as senbon and shurikens would force opponents to take more drastic measures to counter, rather than simply throwing a projectile of their own. The user manipulates the wind currents slightly causing the wind to swirl and bend directly towards the enemy, the enemy will feel it become windy, or if it was already windy may detect a change in the wind currents if he is particularly observant, other than that no change will be visible. The user then continues to throw a projectile of choice. Due to the wind currents being altered when the projectile is thrown rather than simply taking a straight course, a number of unprecedented swerves and turns will be taken, as well as the Kunai increasing in speed. As such the Kunai rather than approaching from the front, they may approach from behind, the sides, or even above. This proves exceptionally useful when used with multiple projectiles, as the end result will be all of the projectiles approaching from different angles, at different speeds, and also constantly swerving in different directions. Not only that, but the projectiles actually gain a rank due to the speed boost, forcing the opponent to either avoid or counter through use of a jutsu, as the kunais would easily slice through any other conventional weapons. For instance, if a single Kunai is thrown, the kunai will become equivalent to D rank, however if a hoard of kunai's are thrown, the hoard of kunai's will become equivalent to D rank as a whole. Alternatively, the user can use this in conjunction with other jutsu that produce projectiles, for instance the C rank jutsu Flying Nail Mist Pierce, which would become B rank when used in conjunction with this jutsu, allowing it to pierce through stronger defenses than it could before. This could even be used with earthen bullets, however cannot be used with, wind, water, fire or lightning as they aren't "Solid". This jutsu lasts for two turns. However the boost only applies once per turn to either a single, or batch of projectiles.

    Note:
    - Can only be used 2x
    - No wind jutsu S rank or above for the rest of the turn.
    - With both the speed boost, and the random movements of the projectiles, it becomes very hard for the opponent to track the projectiles movements with the naked eye only.
    - The currents shift according to the position in which the enemy is in, as such they only work one way. While this is active, the enemy will have to exert more force to actually throw a projectile so that it reaches the opponent due to the currents pushing against them. In most cases for Sannin and lower ninja the Kunai's fall to the ground before they exit short range.

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    Simplify this please. As it stands, it simply does too much for one "simple" technique
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 08-22-2012 at 09:34 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range:All
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90
    Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast. The hand used by the user to perform this jutsu gets frozen, literally killing the muscle tissue in the hand, and the hand becomes extremely frostbitten, rendering the muscles in the hand useless and immobile.
    *Lasts three turns
    *while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
    *the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
    *can only be used once

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    Range is not "all", were is the damage to yourself? Tweak those formatting issues up. Rest seems ok.

    (Hyouton:kenjitsu kitei) Ice Release: Solid Ground
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary/Defensive
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:0 (+15 to ground based ice/earth jutsu used by user)
    Description:
    The user channels his ice chakra into the ground, freezing the moisture in the ground. (If in an arid area like a desert, this jutsu will not work). Once the moisture is frozen, the ice that is holding the earth together makes it harder for the opponent to use earth based jutsu, or jutsu that require channeling different chakra natures aside from Ice jutsu, severely slowing the jutsu speed of such jutsu. The user's own earth and ice jutsu are empowered by the mixing of the elements, however the user is restricted by the same means, causing the user's own Fire, Lightning, Water, and Wind jutsu have problems traveling through the ground.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Jutsu lasts three turns before the ice in the ground melts back to it's original form of normal moisture.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    +15? Not for 2 elements at once.

    (Hyouton:Toride Yuukyou) Ice Release: Fortress of Solitude
    Rank:S
    Range:Short/Long
    Typeffensive/Supplementary
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80(+5 to wind jutsu used by the user)
    Description:
    The user channels a large amount of Ice chakra into his hands and feet, uses the Bird Seal, releasing the chakra into four corners around the user and opponent, causing massive pillars of ice to form a fortress around the user and opponent, creating a makeshift arena around the user and opponent. The top of the fortress is like a tent, meeting at the center above the user (shaped like a pyramid.) The Air in the fortress causes pain to anyone not used to cold air, causing wind jutsu used by the user against a non ice user +5 damage due to the chilling effect. The ice used in this jutsu cannot be used to make any jutsu, without causing the entire structure to fall on top of everyone within the fortress. Ice jutsu used inside the arena are colder than usual, causing numbness to limbs that are hit with Ice Jutsu. After four turns, the jutsu falls apart, causing massive chunks of ice to fall on the user and opponent.
    -Can only be used once Per battle
    -The user cannot leave the fortress unless the jutsu is broken.
    -The user is limited to water, Ice, and wind jutsu while the fortress is up, along with ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu, until three turns after the technique is over.

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    Make this Forbidden rank because of the huge amount of chakra needed and the scale of it and add some damage to yourself and this is good to go
    (Hyouton: shinsei hyou) Ice release: Pure Ice
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90(-45 to the user)
    Description: The user, focuses pure Ice chakra into his palm, and slams it into the ground, releasing a shockwave of pure ice chakra across the field. While the Jutsu itself is not a shockwave of Ice, but of Ice chakra, the field will not freeze unless there is a source of water to be frozen etc. What this jutsu does is change the entire climate of the field, causing ice jutsu to form twice as fast. The hand used by the user to perform this jutsu gets frozen, literally killing the muscle tissue in the hand, and the hand becomes extremely frostbitten, rendering the muscles in the hand useless and immobile.
    *Lasts three turns
    *while this jutsu is in use, the user cannot use fire or lightning jutsu.
    *the user cannot use any forbidden ranked jutsu after this is performed
    *can only be used once
    ~Declined~ First of all, how do you plan forming hand seals without the use of one hand? Second of all, why does this do damage? There's no mentioned effect on the opponent.

    (Hyouton:kenjitsu kitei) Ice Release: Solid Ground
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary/Defensive
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:0 (+15 to ground based ice jutsu used by user)
    Description:
    The user channels his ice chakra into the ground, freezing the moisture in the ground. (If in an arid area like a desert, this jutsu will not work). Once the moisture is frozen, the ice that is holding the earth together makes it harder for the opponent to use earth based jutsu, or jutsu that require channeling different chakra natures aside from Ice jutsu, severely slowing the jutsu speed of such jutsu. The user's own ice jutsu are empowered by the mixing of the elements, however the user is restricted by the same means, causing the user's own Fire, Lightning, Water, and Wind jutsu have problems traveling through the ground.
    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -Jutsu lasts three turns before the ice in the ground melts back to it's original form of normal moisture.
    ~Approved~

    (Hyouton:Toride Yuukyou) Ice Release: Fortress of Solitude
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Short/Long
    Typeffensive/Supplementary
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90(+10 to wind jutsu used by the user)
    Description:
    The user channels a large amount of Ice chakra into his hands and feet, uses the Bird Seal, releasing the chakra into four corners around the user and opponent, causing massive pillars of ice to form a fortress around the user and opponent, creating a makeshift arena around the user and opponent. The top of the fortress is like a tent, meeting at the center above the user (shaped like a pyramid.) The Air in the fortress causes pain to anyone not used to cold air, causing wind jutsu used by the user against a non ice user +10 damage due to the chilling effect. The ice used in this jutsu cannot be used to make any jutsu, without causing the entire structure to fall on top of everyone within the fortress. Ice jutsu used inside the arena are colder than usual, causing numbness to limbs that are hit with Ice Jutsu. After four turns, the jutsu falls apart, causing massive chunks of ice to fall on the user and opponent.
    -Can only be used once Per battle
    -The user cannot leave the fortress unless the jutsu is broken.
    -The user is limited to water, Ice, and wind jutsu while the fortress is up, along with ninjutsu, taijutsu, and genjutsu, until three turns after the technique is over.
    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ( Pokébaru, Iku ! ) Pokéball, Go !
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60

    The Kaguya rears his hand back, as if to throw something, and flings forward three baseball sized bone projectiles, either simultaneously or in succession. These projectiles, upon touching a target or at the user's command, expand suddenly to sizes large enough to swallow humans, and open up and clamp down upon the targets, engulfing them whole if they are small enough. The inside of the ball is spiked. The balls then contract, crushing and stabbing the target simultaneously.
    ~ This technique may be used only once every other turn.
    ~ If the target is larger than human sized ( e.g summons ), the balls merely clamp down on one of its parts that it touched and crush and stab that part. Very lethal if the balls land on the balls, if you get the drift.

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    ( Déjà Fu: Mettani Shiyō Kachiku Sutansu ) Déjà Fu: The Rarely-Used Animal Stances
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A

    The practitioner of Déjà Fu settles his body into one of a few awkward and unique looking stances, thus setting up a memorable image in the opponent's mind. The next time the same stance is repeated, the opponent's mind is placed under a illusion that takes their mind back to the previous occasion when it was used and temporarily confuses them as to the true situation of the battle. The stances are:
    • The Penguin: The practitioner holds his hands straight and near his sides and waddles left and right
    • The Worm: The practitioner lies down and wriggles on the floor backwards and forwards.
    • The Sea Anemone: The practitioner sits down, lifts his hands above his head and waves them about slowly and in little circles.
    • The Ring-Tailed Lemur: The practitioner holds his hands in a position reminiscent of the Egyptians, and thrusts them backwards and forward in a pathetic-looking dance.
    • The Crane Stance from Karate Kid: Taught by old Japanese man named Miyagi, the practitioner balances on one leg, arms held perpendicular to his sides, before overbalancing and falling backwards.
    This technique only counts as one of the three moves per turn the first time it is used. Henceforth, the practitioner can stand in one stance per turn without it counting as a move. The first time a particular stance is used, nothing happens. The second time, the opponent's mind is taken back to the first time it was used. The third time it is taken back to the second timee. The fourth time, it is taken back to the third time. And so on.

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    ( Déjà Fu: Meiwaku Mōtaguchi ) Déjà Fu: Annoying Motormouth
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15 ( +5 per turn )
    Damage: N/A

    The basis of the Art of Witty Banter. The practitioner of Déjà Fu must make some sort of statement very turn once this technique is activated to keep it activated. However, this may not be necessary if he uses further Art of Witty Banter techniques on top of this, depending on the technique. The opponent's mind begins to base its whole concept of the flow of time on the statements of the practitioner. Also, his voice pitched to a frequency set to grate on the opponent's nerves, causes a flinch of pain every time he says something, but no actual damage.
     
         
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    Fire release: Red Carpet~Katon: Akai Kapeto
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:C
    Range:Short to long
    Chakra:15(+ 5 to keep active each turn)
    Damage:30 (on contact if touched by opponent no damage to the user)
    Description: The user concentrates fire chakra beneath himself then he makes the tiger hand seal and red flames will start appearing beneath the user lifting him up half a meter above the ground. The user can freely manipulate the flames and move around on them, the carpet can also be used as a shield(doesnt count as a jutsu)and it can defend from one C rank jutsu.
    Restrictions
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Can last max 5 turns

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    how can your fire provide enough physical substance to actually support you in the air as a solid?

    Lightning Release: Lightning Cannon~(Rai Kyanon)
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user puts his hands together infront of him and collects lightning chakra in it for a mere second, then he quickly releases the chakra in the form of a bullet spear, the lightning travels at huge speeds, much faster then the chidori sendon, its not a big jutsu but it has a great concentration of power and with the huge speed its very hard to see it.
    Restrictions
    -Usable twice per battle
    -No other lightning in the same turn
    -No S or higher ranked jutsus in the turn in which the jutsu was used and in the turn after
    -Must be sannin rank to be able to use this



    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.

    Fire Release: Heat Wave~Katon: Atsusa Shuuha
    Type:Offensive/Defensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60 or N/A
    Description: The user acumulates his fire chakra and starts releasing it by thrusting his palms infront of him, but he does not release it in a fire like stlye like usual, he releases a heat wave. The heat starts going trough the air at avarage speed proceeding toward the opponent. If the jutsu gets hit by a fire or water jutsu in the way towards the opponent this happens:
    -The jutsu will collect the heat from the fire jutsu and continue towards the opponent powered up
    -The jutsu evaporates the water and extinquishes because of that only leaving the mist in the air
    Restrictions:
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -No fire jutsu in the same turn
    -Must be kage rank to use it
    -Must have mastered fire to be able to use it

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    (Doton : Hangurifukku) - Earth Release : Hungry Hooks
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : The user first concentrates his earth chakra around a desired targrt and brings upwards a barrage of swift, quiet, stealthy earthen hooks that comes from both behind, in front, left and right of the enemy so in total, there will be four. Once they get in hold of their target, the hook binds itself, turning into what seems like a single handcuff. At the user's command, he can force the earth to move back, ultimately ripping apart whoever it has caught ahold of.

    Note : Created by -Yusuke-
    Note : Usable five times per battle
    Note : Maximum of four hooks only, though can be reduced
    Note : No earth techniques higher than S-rank to be used in the same turn

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar techniques exist.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Drench View Post
    Resumbting all

    (Doton | Mahou Rippoutai) Earth Style | Rubix Cube
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:The user performs 5 handseals(Snake-Horse-Monkey-Dog-Ram) and then slams both hands onto the ground surface while channeling chakra through the earth.The user will manipulate a large area of the earth around the enemy causing irregular shaped blocks of rock the rise from the ground.These blocks will almost instantaneously fly together to form a large air-tight cube around the enemy sealing them in.The cubes inside walls are laced with chakra and are almost impossible to break with the user able to shift the placement of the irregular earth blocks around to spread the damage along the wide surface area thus stopping any perceivable damage.However from the outside the cube is not so sturdy and is able to be destroyed with a powerfull area of effect lightning attack that must attack all sides of the cube at once.As a final resort the user can perform the ram seal and shout 'kujiku' causing the cube to start to decrease in size untill the user is completely restricted in which stone spikes will pierce the enemy from all sides of the cube.
    -Can be only be used once per battle due to large chakra use
    -No earth moves for one turn
    -Restricted to A rank moves for one turn
    -Can only be used by Drench

    Visual representation


    ~ Declined, almost impossible to break from the inside ? No. ~



    (Ninjutsu | Tsurutsuru Hedoro No Jutsu) Ninjutsu | Slippery Slime Technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will make 2 handseals and will excrete a large wave of slime from his mouth,which is produced naturally by all Axolotls.The slime is a see through color and is a sticky mucus with a paste-like consistency.The wave of mucus will quickly cover the battle field and will reach long range,its extremely slippery making it almost impossible for anyone to walk or even stand on the slime even the user.However,due to their natural coating of the same mucus,Axolotls can stand on the slime.
    Note:
    -Can only use 3 time's per battle
    -Must have Signed Axolotl Contract

    ~ Declined,range says mid but in the description you say long range ~



    (Kchuysei | Kenta) Summoning | Kenta
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: The user draws blood and wipes it on his tattoo on his wrist,summoning Kenta.This is a large Axolotl about the size of Tsunade's Slug,Kenta has considerable strength and good speed on land and water due to him being a Axolotl.Twice a match he can release a A-rank large blast of sticky liquid that covers the opponent,The liquid will bind anyone who is hit with it to the ground and any of this liquid on the enemy will cause him to move slower as it will weigh them down.The sticky liquid can also be used as the base for other Axolotl moves,If used in union with the users Slippery Slime technique it is almost twice as powerful.Like all Axolotls he can regenerate lost limbs quickly.
    Note:
    -Can only be used once a match
    -Must have Signed Axolotl Contract

    ~ Declined, this is the problem with quoting other unapproved techniques in the description, since I can't approve it now until that one is approved ~



    Resumbting all

    (Doton | Mahou Rippoutai) Earth Style | Rubix Cube
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:The user performs 5 handseals(Snake-Horse-Monkey-Dog-Ram) and then slams both hands onto the ground surface while channeling chakra through the earth.The user will manipulate a large area of the earth around the enemy causing irregular shaped blocks of rock the rise from the ground.These blocks will almost instantaneously fly together to form a large air-tight cube around the enemy sealing them in.The cubes inside walls are laced with chakra and are almost impossible to break with the user able to shift the placement of the irregular earth blocks around to spread the damage along the wide surface area thus stopping any perceivable damage,therefore the only plausible way to destroy the cube form the inside is using a S rank or above lightning move that will attack all sides at the same time. However from the outside the cube is not so sturdy as the inside and is able to be destroyed with a powerful area of effect A rank or above lightning attack that must attack all sides of the cube at once.As a final resort the user can perform the ram seal and shout 'kujiku' causing the cube to start to decrease in size untill the user is completely restricted in which stone spikes will pierce the enemy from all sides of the cube.
    -Can be only be used once per battle due to large chakra use
    -No earth moves for one turn
    -Restricted to A rank moves for one turn
    -Can only be used by Drench

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Any technique that tries to violate the basic elemental weaknesses and strengths is Auto-decline. You may not want people to use Nagashi against this but you'll just have to live with it.

    (Ninjutsu | Tsurutsuru Hedoro No Jutsu) Ninjutsu | Slippery Slime Technique
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will make 2 handseals and will excrete a large wave of slime from his mouth,which is produced naturally by all Axolotls.The slime is a see through color and is a sticky mucus with a paste-like consistency.The wave of mucus will quickly cover the battle field and will reach mid range,its extremely slippery making it almost impossible for anyone to walk or even stand on the slime even the user.However,due to their natural coating of the same mucus,Axolotls can stand on the slime.
    Note:
    -Can only use 3 time's per battle
    -Must have Signed Axolotl Contract

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Your summons can exude slime...not you.

    (Kchuysei | Kenta) Summoning | Kenta
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: N/a
    Description: The user draws blood and wipes it on his tattoo on his wrist,summoning Kenta.This is a large Axolotl about the size of Tsunade's Slug,Kenta has considerable strength and good speed on land and water due to him being a Axolotl.Twice a match he can release a A-rank large blast of sticky liquid,The liquid will bind anyone who is hit with it to the ground and any of this liquid on the enemy will cause him to move slower as it will weigh them down.The sticky liquid can also be used as the base for other Axolotl moves,If used in union with the users Slippery Slime technique it is almost twice as powerful.Like all Axolotls he can regenerate lost limbs quickly.
    Note:
    -Can only be used once a match
    -Must have Signed Axolotl Contract

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    can't check this until the other tech is approved.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Fūinjutsu: Fusenmei Fūin) – Sealing Technique: Self Disruption Seal
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique is a seal that's printed usually on the back of the user's hand, with the mark of "Disruption" in a large Kanji letter, this is a special seal that has only one purpose, which is to alert the user of foreign chakra in which it enters the user's body, which is basically what activates the seal's ability, This seal has some of the user's own chakra and is connected directly to the user's chakra circularity system, therefore when a foreign chakra enters the user's body, the user's chakra inside the seal is disrupted and when the disruption happens it causes the seal glows in a dark red color and surges of red lightning like surges of light, these surges produce a sound that's familiar by the user as well as the bright glowing light alerting the user that a foreign chakra has entered his body, this is a pretty useful technique since it alerts the user of foreign chakra in which inside his body by his opponent the second the foreign chakra enters the body, which is useful in letting the user know that he is under a genjutsu technique used by his opponent, the only downside to this technique is that if the user used a Cursed Seal, the Seal would glow as well since it's a foreign chakra that's not the user's own, thus the user isn't able to know if he's under a genjutsu whilst the Cursed Seal is activated.
    Note: The Seal glows 3 times per battle.

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    Needs one more restriction. Also add on EIG and SM to the CS restriction.
    (Fūinjutsu: Fusenmei Fūin) – Sealing Technique: Self Disruption Seal
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique is a seal that's printed usually on the back of the user's hand, with the mark of "Disruption" in a large Kanji letter, this is a special seal that has only one purpose, which is to alert the user of foreign chakra in which it enters the user's body, which is basically what activates the seal's ability, This seal has some of the user's own chakra and is connected directly to the user's chakra circularity system, therefore when a foreign chakra enters the user's body, the user's chakra inside the seal is disrupted and when the disruption happens it causes the seal glows in a dark red color and surges of red lightning like surges of light, these surges produce a sound that's familiar by the user as well as the bright glowing light alerting the user that a foreign chakra has entered his body, this is a pretty useful technique since it alerts the user of foreign chakra in which inside his body by his opponent the second the foreign chakra enters the body, which is useful in letting the user know that he is under a genjutsu technique used by his opponent, the only downside to this technique is that if the user used the Cursed Seal, Sage Mode, Bijuu Techniques or Eight Internal Gates, the Seal would glow as well since it's a foreign chakra that's not the user's own, thus the user isn't able to know if he's under a genjutsu whilst any of the previously mentioned modes are active.
    Note: The Seal glows 3 times per battle.
    Note: No Fūinjutsu techniques A-rank or above the turn the seal activates.

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    Hyouton: kooried kawa ( ice release: iced shell)
    Typeffensive/supplementary
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range: mid Range
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90
    Description: The user will take a stance crossing his arms over each other like an X focusing his futon and suiton chakra all throughout his body, and will start mixing the chakra into ice he will redo this many times building up more and more ice chakra to the point that the ground itself begins to shake. The users body will begin to become ice itself. finally the user will release all the chakra from inside his body expanding him into a giant block of ice that will trap everything in its path up to mid range, killing what ever is trapped inside it, including the user as he has now become ice itself.
    note: user dies if jutsu is completed.
    note: can even freeze a tailed beast but they won't be killed by it.
    note: ice can't be melted or destroyed, but can be avoided.

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    Oped and makes you lose the match.

    Hyouton: hiebie chi ( Ice release: cold blooded)
    Type:supplementary/defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user will focus his futon chakra into his own blood stream and muscle tissue cooling it down to slow his blood flow and calm his heart beat, and freezing his muscle tissue till the point it becomes numb. This will make any injury inflicted on the user hurt much less that he could move as if he wasn't hit and makes it hard to bleed from small puncture wounds or even limb loss. Like the user never was injured to begin with.
    note: can only be used 2 times
    note: lasts 3 turns
    note: user can still feel pain if a bone is broken
    Note: after jutsu wears off user will feel the pain of the hits he's gotten and will freeze up in pain for five seconds.
    note: using fire style ninjutsu will cancel the jutsu, if used by the user.
    note: allows user to take damage and still get up almost not hurt because can't feel the pain, but this does not stop an attack from being able to kill him like say teh user is hit in the heart with lighting it will kill him.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    This would kill you...
     
         
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    (Raiton: Nagare Raikou Kei)-Lightning Release: Stream Lightning Whip
    Rank: B-Rank
    Type: Offense
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 30
    Description:
    The user fully outstretches their arm, extends their index finger and points it at their opponent. The user then begins to concentrate their Raiton chakra into the tip of their finger. When the tip of the user's finger is surrounded by electricity they release it and it becomes a thin stream of lightning like a whip which the user will throw at the enemy in order to bind them. Once bound by the electrical whip it will shock the opponent and you can could pull him towards you.
    Note: Can only be taught by Me and my Rasengan

    (Raiton: Gouzen Hadou)-Lightning Release: Roaring Surge
    Rank: A-Rank
    Type:Offense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 50
    Description:
    The user will perform the handseals Horse → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Boar Then the user claps his hands together and begins to focus their Raiton chakra into their dominant foot. Once ready the user raises their foot in the air, very quickly slams his foot on the ground releasing a large and thin surge of Lightning which is fifteen feet tall and it gives off a very low pitched roaring sound similar to a lion's roar giving it its name. This moves very fast and from a front view it looks nothing more than a thin line heading straight towards the opponent but from a side view it looks like a very large blue wall moving very fast. If the attack hits the opponent they will be cut deeply along the area that was hit.
    Notes:
    ~Looks like this only on a smaller scale and blue

    ~Can only taught by Me and my Rasengan
    ~Can only be used three times
    ~Someone who has mastered Lightning release can perform this jutsu with just two hand seals Horse and Ox (They still have to clap their hands together)
    ~Both Declined~ Do not Resubmit
     
         
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    (Kitsune Sennin Modo) - Fox Sage Mode
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+15 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A (+15 to Taijutsu, +10 to Ninjutsu)
    Description: The users may enter this mode by infusing Fire chakra with gathered Natural Energy. Upon activation the user will have achieved a physical appearance similar to one of a fox, with almond-shaped eyes, with three whisker-like markings on each cheek similar to Naruto's. His eye bags gain a red pigmentation that extends down on his nose and cheeks, similar to the eyeline of a fox and his eyes turn red. He inherits the natural agility and stealth and speed, thus improving his speed drastically and also his Taijutsu. As the foxes belong to the canidae family they will also have increased hearing and smell. The user will have the other abilities of Sage Mode inherited(sensory, etc.), except cannon Sage Jutsu and Frog-related techniques.
    Notes
    *This mode lasts 5 turns.
    *The user must have had already mastered Sage Mode.
    *The user must be perfectly still upon activation, or he can have a clone hidden which gathers Natural Energy(must be specified at the beginning of a battle)
    *After this mode wears off the user cannot use any S-ranked jutsus the next three turns.
    *Must have signed the Fox Summoning Contract.
    *This technique may only be used once per battle.

    Inspired by Zen's Custom Sage Mode CJ, which also made it possible for me to submit such a thing.


    (Senpo: Biyoku Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Sage Arts: Tail Summoning Technique
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage Points: N/A (+5 to fire techniques, all Fire techniques may be used with only one handseal)
    Description: The user uses his Fire Chakra and Natural Energy to mould a tail made out of Fire. This tail can be used for both defense and offense. As it is infused with Natural Energy, it has a higher resistance to Water and Fire, being resilient up to C-rank, respectively up to B-rank. The tail is approx. 2 meters and is large enough to completely cover the user upon command, protecting him from physical(Taijutsu, not weapons) and the forementioned elements. The user is also able to shoot out Fire techniques out of the tail, only by performing the Tiger handseal(no techs above A-rank).
    Notes
    *This jutsu lasts 3 turns and reduces the duration of Sage Mode by 1 turn.
    *It may be used once per battle.
    *Must be in Sage Mode upon activation.
    ~Declined~ Do Not Resubmit. No Custom Sage Modes.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Kaze hatsubai-bi: Yasei no kaze no kaiten|Wind Release:Wild Wind Rotation
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user performs the Horse and Snake handseals and gather a large amount of wind chakra all throughout their body. Then, the user sends all the wind chakra they have into the palm of their hand. Next, the user forms a small orb of rotating air in the palm of their hand. The user sends more and more chakra into the orb until it is spinning at 9000 rpm. The user will then smash the orb into the ground below them and it will expand into a tornado like dome around the user which will redirect and slash anything it comes in contact with. as time progresses the dome with progressively become slower. At about 7 seconds the orb wont be moving fast to redirect large objects. At 10 seconds the orb wont be ale to redirect at all.
    -Can only be used/taught by Shade Dracova
    -Can only be used twice a match
    -Must have fully mastered Fuuton
    -If not held firmly in their palm the orb will cause the user to fracture their wrist and hand
    ~Declined~ Similar Techniques Exist

    Kasai/ chikyū hatsubai-bi: Kikkuofu!|Fire/Earth Release: Kick Off!
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will get in a normal fighting position. Then, the user channels chakra into their front and back legs. The user quickly converts the chakra in their front leg into earth chakra and stomps of the ground releasing the earth chakra into the ground which kickd up a giant boulder into the air in front of them. The user then spins 180 degrees as he is converting the chakra in his back leg into fire chakra. In a fluid motion the user spin kicks the boulder with his back leg and releases fire from his heel which shrouds the boulder in fire and launches it off at the opponent. the technique can be used to break down defenses and comparable to a meteorite due to the way it rains down upon the opponent.
    -Can only be taught/used by Shade Dracova
    -Must have mastered Taijutsu due to the large amount of leg strength it takes
    -Can only be used once a match
    -Counts as two moves due to the exhausting it is to perform this technique.
    -Must have mastered both Doton and Katon
    ~Declined~ Decent technique. It doesn't need to be S-rank, though.
     
         
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    (Hyouton: Yuki Kisuu) Ice Release: Snowy Drift
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user channels Hyouton chakra throughout their body and turns themselves into snow. The users body is intangible in this state so cannot perform jutsu in this state. Also the user cannot be dealt physical blows in this state as they are intangible, however they are susceptible to lightning jutsu.

    -Can be used 4x in a battle
    -Can only be taught by Kato.
    ~Declined~ Restrict it. 4x per battle is too much, and explain the stipulations of the technique overall and how long it lasts.

    (Hanshinfuzui Otakebi) Petrifying Roar
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will channel chakra into their throat and let out a roar, like that of a lion that petrifies the opponent, freezing them where they stand

    -Usable 3x a battle
    -Can only be taught by Kato.
    ~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists

    (Hyouton: Eda Hari) Ice Release: Frozen Limb Extention
    Type: Supplimentary/Offence/Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The releases Hyouton chakra from one of their limbs, Ice then forms from that limb as an extended verion of it, for example the user will use their right arm and ice will come from the users right fist and travel out in the shape of the users arm to whatever distance the user requires (maximum is mid range)

    -Can only be taught by Kato.
    ~Declined~ Why is this A-rank? It's just a basic projectile in the shape of an arm. It would do minor damage at best.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Vendetta- View Post
    (Genjutsu: Kikan Tegotae) Illusionary Technique: Mirrored Effects
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will form three hand seals and release chakra into the opponent's brain which manipulates the opponents sense of sight. Activating this jutsu on the opponent will cause their eyes to close for half a second and when they reopen them, everything will appear to be mirrored. For example, if your opponent is under the effect of the genjutsu and they are watching you, if you run to the left, it will appear to them as if you are running to the right.


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    a genjutsu can'y force someone to close their eyes just because. Also, A-rank without restriction is almost asking for it to be DNR.
    Resubmitting:

    (Genjutsu: Kikan Tegotae) Illusionary Technique: Mirrored Effects
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will form three hand seals and release chakra into the opponent's brain which manipulates the opponents sense of sight. Activating this jutsu on the opponent will make it appear as though a bright light flashes in front of them, causing them to see nothing but pure white for half a second. As they regain their vision, everything will appear to be mirrored. For example, if your opponent is under the effect of the genjutsu and they are watching you, if you run to the left, it will appear to them as if you are running to the right.
    Note: This jutsu stays active for two turns
    Note: The user cannot use B-rank or higher genjutsu the next turn

    ~Declined~ A Similar Technique Exists

    (Katon: Haifuku Bakuhatsu) Fire style: Creeping Eruption
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user creates a ring of fire that appears to rise out of the ground around the opponent. With the opponent at the center, the radius of the ring starts off at three meters and the flames are about 30 centimeters high. The ring then begins to get contract closer to the opponent rather quickly, at about one meter per second. As the ring gets closer, the flames get higher and higher. When the flames reach the opponent, they will be as tall as the opponent is and burn their entire body to a crisp.
    ~Declined~ Similar Technique Exists (sorry lol)

    (Suiton: Baindingu Shikki) Water Style: Binding Moisture
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Once the opponent's clothing is already wet, the user controls the water in their clothing to begin constricting them. After a short period of time, the power of the squeezing will crush bones and eventually lead to their death.
    Note: The opponent's clothing must be wet before performing this jutsu.
    ~Declined~ Just from wet clothes? Are you serious?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Hishou Shukumei Kunai (Flying Destiny Kunai)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Flying Destiny Kunai (Hishou Shukumei Kunai) are custom-made kunai. They differ from a standard kunai in that they have three thin blades instead of one and the blades (which is thicker than normal) is hollow, carrying different ninja tools inside the hollow kunai. These tools can be anything from; Senbon, smokebombs, tags, flashbombs etc. They are also slightly heavier than normal kunai, which also makes them more lethal in melee fighting. The mechanism behind the kunai is that, when the kunai strikes any surface or is stop in mid air, it will detach the end of the blade and release the hidden weapon inside the kunai. The mechanism can also be activated by simple weaving the tiger hand sign. These kunai can also be utilised in close combat and therefor they have a special ability to when, the wielder inserts his chakra into the kunai it will extend a small chakra blade onto it's original blade making it longer and more lethal in combat.
    Abilities:
    - Wielder can use any weapon related jutsu through these kunai
    - Cannot use Kenjutsu through the kunai (Kunai are not big enough)
    - Wielder can engulf the kunai in fire chakra making it more lethal
    - The kunai can emit a small blast of fire around the wielder when struck into the ground for defensive purpose (Can defend against C-rank earth and stop an enemy from closing in on you)
    Restrictions:
    - All techniques used through the kunai count towards the move count
    - All techniques used through the kunai does not need hand seals
    - Can only be wielded by Gutsy Jiraiya
    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    How many kunais are these? To much going on to be honest.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by xHoudinii View Post
    (Doton: Kasui Seisha)-Earth Release: Spike Volley
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will perform the Snake>Ox hand seals and the a small patch of ground up to mid range from the enemy will form silently into medium sized sharp spikes that are angled towards them. They will then shoot a volley of sharp rocks at the enemy, attempting to impale them. The spikes will then later reform their tips and with another Snake hand seal they can shoot more volleys at the enemy, shifting themselves to aim at the opponent as long as they stay in mid-range from the original location of their creation. The spikes will remain indefinitely as long as they are not destroyed.

    Note:
    ~Can only be used once per turn due to the tips reforming
    ~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

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    So..by continually using the snake handseal you can keep sending volleys out ? Or does the restriction mean that you can only send one volley per turn ? If so, clear that up.

    Removed the first note and changed the second.
    I also added that the spikes form silently, if its unapprovable with that feel free to remove it.
    (Doton: Kasui Seisha)-Earth Release: Spike Volley
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will perform the Snake>Ox hand seals and the a small patch of ground up to mid range from the enemy will form silently into medium sized sharp spikes that are angled towards them. They will then shoot a volley of sharp rocks at the enemy, attempting to impale them. The spikes will then later reform their tips and with another Snake hand seal they can shoot more volleys at the enemy, shifting themselves to aim at the opponent as long as they stay in mid-range from the original location of their creation. The spikes will remain indefinitely as long as they are not destroyed.

    Note:
    ~The user can only shoot one volley per turn due to the tips reforming
    ~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

    Cleared up the confusion with the useage per turn
    ~Declined~ The Spikes should not last indefinitely
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Asskickulator View Post
    Kuchyose No Jutsu: Trisura, Gogyou shikaku-Summoning Technique: Trisura, The Aqu-A-ssassin-
    Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: -
    Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a vulture as large as gamaken. This creature is the protector of the borders of the Vulture empire has with the sea. It has two huge wings, a long tail, webbing between its large toes and the ability to hold its breathe for a very long time to help it swim and dive. Trisura could use up to A rank water element techniques of the techniques the user know. She is great at transporting and unlike many of the vultures she is friendly.

    -Can only be summoned once.
    -Can only use one A rank water jutsu every three turns.
    -Can only remain on the battle field for 4 turns.
    -Absorb +15 chakra points from the user for every turn it remains on the battlefield.

    ______________
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    Quote the initial version which was declined so we can compare changes, not the one where Scorps tells you to bold it.
    Quote Originally Posted by Asskickulator View Post
    Kuchyose No Jutsu: Trisura, Gogyou shikaku-Summoning Technique: Trisura, The Aqu-A-ssassin-
    Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: -
    Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a vulture as large as gamaken. This creature is the protector of the borders of the Vulture empire has with the sea. It has two huge wings, a long tail, webbing between its large toes and the ability to hold its breathe for a very long time to help it swim and dive. Trisura could use up to A rank water element techniques of the techniques the user know. She is great at transporting and unlike many of the vultures she is friendly.

    -Can only be summoned once.
    -Can only use one A rank water jutsu every three turns.

    ~ Declined, number of turns its on the field ? ~



    Kuchyose No Jutsu: Trisura, Gogyou shikaku-Summoning Technique: Trisura, The Aqu-A-ssassin-
    Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: -
    Description: The user wipes blood on his fan and charges it with a huge amount of chakra. Then he swings it and summons a vulture as large as gamaken. This creature is the protector of the borders of the Vulture empire has with the sea. It has two huge wings, a long tail, webbing between its large toes and the ability to hold its breathe for a very long time to help it swim and dive. Trisura could use up to A rank water element techniques of the techniques the user know. She is great at transporting and unlike many of the vultures she is friendly.

    -Can only be summoned once.
    -Can only use one A rank water jutsu every three turns.
    -Can only remain on the battle field for 4 turns.
    -Absorb +15 chakra points from the user for every turn it remains on the battlefield.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Size of this vulture? Remove the absorb chakra thing...makes no sense.

    Magnetism Release: Flying Spark - : Haisen Pikapika

    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 45
    Damage points: -
    Description: The user channel his magnism chakra into a matel weapon as he/she throw it. The weapon could be anything from a sword to kunais and shurkiens. The weapon act as a magnate to lightening based technqiues, attarcting any lightening technique at short range of it to fuse with it, giving the weapon the strenght of it and covering it with electricity. This technque can be used to extend the range of a lightening jutsu and/or redirct lightening techniques to the direct the weapon was thrown at, making it perfect for both attack and defense.
    -Can only be used once times per battle.
    -The user must have mastered using magnetism.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    use proper chakra info before we even check this.

    My Custom weapon:

    ( Kazenomai ) - One who Dances with the Wind
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary and Defence
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40 (-10 per turn maintaining chakra form)
    Damage points: (Dependent upon rank of techniques used with the weapon)
    Description: Kazenomai is a unique customized weapon which has a material construct of a long chain reaching 10 meters in length and connected at each end two detachable handles. By concentrating their chakra throughout the chain and then they are capable of creating dence chakra ethereal weapons on each side. One of the two weapons is a Giant Warfan that is highly concentrated and is capable of cutting as sharply as a regular sword and can be used defensively as a shield or offensively to use cut or swat opponents with the flat edge of the fan. The second weapon is a cat of nine tails with which has strong concentrated chakra whips with sharp hooks along the whips. The whips themselves are 3 feet long and the user can use them in a variety of ways to shred or bind their target and their limbs. The user is capable of changing the chakras composition in both the weapons. The user can use earth nature for the cat of nine tails and wind nature for the Giant war fan.
    Abilities:

    The user can use any generic abilities that utilize the Giant War fan.

    Level 1: B rank level
    The user uses earth nature manipulation in their cat of nine tails chakra ethereal weapon and by using the properties of earth nature they can then manipulate their cat of nine tails and make it travel underground where they then use it to appear beneath the opponent and using the hooks to latch onto the opponents flesh and making them immobile and vulnerable to attacks.
    Note: Ability counts as Technique useage.

    Level 2: A rank Level
    The user uses their wind nature manipulation to create the Giant Wind fan. This makes the Giant wind fan capable of cutting through Lightning techniques B rank and below and the user can also generate gusts of wind or sickles maximum of 3 per use equivalent to A rank in power that reach up to long range.
    Note: The wind release abilities can only be used three times per battle but the cutting through B rank techniques merely counts as a technique useage.

    Level 3 S rank Defensive barrier.
    This ability allows the user to channel their chakra throughout their entire weapon and then by spinning the entire weapon around then by the chain they release the chakra to create a defensive barrier capable of defending against incoming techniques equal to S rank and below from all directions.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle and counts as one of the users three per turn techniques.

    Note: The user cannot use multiple elemental chakra etheral weapons at the same time as requires extensive chakra control from Yin-Yang to use dual element simultaniously.
    Note: This weapon can only be used by Asskickulator.

    ______________
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    Description is messy. Try making it make more sense. Describe these "ethereal" weapons better. A cat? How is that a weapon?
     
         
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