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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Ninpou:Kikaku gisou|Ninja art: Projectile camouflage
    Rank:C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After throwing a projectile(shuriken,kunai etc),the user then uses his chakra to make the projectile invisible to naked eye.The users chakra coats around the kunai so as to make it invisible,its as if the chakra acts as a mirror to reflect the light.Although its invisible,it still is just a regular projectile.
    -Cannot be used on CW
    -Doujutsu users can see the chakra coat around the projectile
    - Can only be taught by Igneel

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    Sorry but i was reading the thread and couldn't help noticing this. Don't resbumit. Can lead to a multitude of abuse.

    Fuuton/Katon:Mame kaze|Wind/Fire Release:Blistering Wind
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60(+5 per turn due to the blisters)
    Description:The user sends a stream of heated air towards their target.This stream would just pass by the target as a hot breeze but after a turn,their skin would get covered in blisters leaving them in a lot of pain.
    -Blisters appear on the skin after a turn
    -Can only be used 1 time per battle
    -Can only be taught by Igneel
    -Must have mastery over wind and fire
    -No S-rank wind/fire in the same turn

    Raiton/Fuuton:Shunkou|Lightning/Wind Release:Flash Cry
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:Flash cry is an advanced jutsu achieved by wind and lightning manipulation.The user extends his dominant hand towards their target,and a spiralling vortex of wind appears around his hand.Electric sparks is seen eminating from the user.Immediately after the vortex of wind completely forms,a flash is eminated from the users body that blinds everything in range and simultaneously the vortex of wind is launched at the target with amazing speed.This vortex of wind has great cutting power and can even shatter huge boulders.The jutsu got its name based on the fact that the instant after the flash is seen,the cry of the person who got hit by the vortex is heard.
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -The user can't use lightning and fuuton the next turn
    -User can't use any S-rank and above lightning and fuuton for 2 turns
    -User takes 30 damage
    -User can't use S-rank jutsu's in the same turn

    X-Both Declined-X Simulataneous activation of 2 or more natures requires Yin/yang.
    Fuuton/Katon:Mame kaze|Wind/Fire Release:Blistering Wind
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60(+5 per turn due to the blisters)
    Description:The user channels katon chakra to the air and then channels fuuton chakra to push the katon chakra to the desired location in the form of a hot breeze.This stream would just pass by the target as a hot breeze but after a turn,their skin would experience a burning sensation.After 2 turns,their skin would get covered in blisters leaving them in a lot of pain.
    -Target takes the 60 damage only in the next turn
    -Blisters appear on the skin 2 turns after the jutsu's use
    -Can only be used 1 time per battle
    -Can only be taught by Igneel
    -Must have mastery over wind and fire
    -No S-rank wind/fire in the same turn

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    ±± Declined ±±
    You need to bold changes on resubmissions.

    Raiton:Shunkou|Lightning Release:Flash Cry
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:Flash cry is an advanced jutsu achieved by lightning manipulation.The user spreads his palm and extends his dominant hand towards their target.A ball of lightning is seen at the palm of the users hand pointing towards the target. Electric sparks is seen eminating from the user.Immediately as the ball forms,a flash is eminated from the users body that blinds everything in range and simultaneously the lightning ball is launched at the target with amazing speed.This lightning ball has amazing speed as it advance towards the target and can even shatter huge boulders.The jutsu got its name based on the fact that the instant after the flash is seen,the cry of the person who got hit by the lightnin is heard
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -The user can't use lightning the next turn
    -User can't use any S-rank and above lightning for 2 turns
    -User takes 30 damage
    -User can't use S-rank jutsu's in the same turn
    -can only be taught by Igneel

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    *you need to bold changes on resubmissions

    Genjutsu:Fukusuu kai|Illusion Technique:Multiple release
    Rank: D-S
    Range-Short-Mid
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:10-40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user channels his chakra through the ground or via air to his allies within range to release them from any form of gen they are caught in.This jutsu doesn't free the user if he is caught in a gen.The rank and the chakra depends on the number of allies the chakra is channeled to.
    D-rank: 1 person
    C-rank: 2 persons
    B-rank: 3 persons
    A-rank: 4 persons
    S-rank: 5 persons

    -Can only be 2 times in battle
    -No genjutsu in the next turn
    -User can't use this to free himself from the gen
    -Can only be taught by Igneel

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:15 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Genjutsu: Burakkuhōru) | Illusionary Arts : Black Hole
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs a single handseal and seems to dissolve into thin air, and appearing at the same time right in front of the his opponent. In reality, the user disturbs the chakra flow in his opponents brain so that 3 seconds that pass by only seem like an instant, giving the user the opportunity to close the gap between him and his opponent and attack.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing Genjutsu
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:15 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by 'Kurapika View Post
    (Meiton: Yami no kōtingu) - Dark Release: Dark Coating
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to wrap objects in a thin coating of dark chakra. The coating allows said objects to go through the jutsu of the elements weak to dark release. However, this coating is not strong enough to overcome or stop techniques of the elements of disadvantage.
    -This coating can't be applied to living beings as it would absorb the natural heat generated by their bodies, resulting in their death.
    -The coating must be applied while the user is physically in contact with the said objects and can't apply it from a distance. However, the object can be disconnected/thrown after the coating has been applied.
    -Coating bigger areas/objects increases the chakra consumption but doesn't increase the power of the coating, which is why the jutsu can cost more chakra than some S-rank jutsu yet only have the power of an A-rank.
    -The coating can only last for three turns.

    An image demonstrating how a Dark Release user coats an object with Dark chakra:


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    chakra info is wrong. What is the purpose of this technique? kunais thrown through Fire and Lightning attacks without the enemy noticing? If so why is this A-Rank? Its at best a B-Rank ability.
    (Meiton: Yami no kōtingu) - Dark Release: Dark Coating
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to wrap objects in a immensely compressed and condensed thin coating of dark chakra. The coating allows said objects to resist the flames and bolts of lightning produced by Katon and Raito Release. However, this coating is not enough to overcome or stop techniques of said elements of disadvantage due to it being too thin.
    -This coating can't be applied to living beings as it would absorb the natural heat generated by their bodies, resulting in their death.
    -The coating must be applied while the user is physically in contact with the said objects, and can't be applied it from a distance. However, the object can be disconnected/thrown after the coating has been applied.
    -The coating can only last for three turns.

    Edits: Made it an immensely compressed and condensed layer of chakra to justify its rank.

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    Regardless of how you want it to be, this is not an A-Rank.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:17 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    Updating an old technique. I can't quote it since it's form the old thread, so I'll leave the exact link here.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post2358050

    (Fūinjutsu/Doton: Kanashimi no Maisō) – Sealing Technique/Earth Release: Burial of Sorrow
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user focuses earth chakra into his/her hands and forms a single handseal. This causes a small wave of earth, to rise up and race against the target. When the user wills it, the wave builds up like a wave coming close to shore and becomes a five (5) meter tall wave, which imitates a great Samurai in appearance. Inside the mouth of the Samurai there is a tongue made of energy-based Kanji that’ll try to grab the target, and pull it into the Samurai’s reach. The Kanji has paralyzing properties. When the target is caught, the Samurai will sink into the earth and compress itself, crushing the target alongside itself.
    -Can only be used three times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

    X-Declined-X what you add can't be added to the technique wihtout making it S-Rank which requires special permission to submit.
    Re-attempting to update an old technique. I can't quote it since it's from the old thread, so I'll leave the exact link here.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post2358050

    (Doton: Kanashimi no Maisō) – Earth Release: Burial of Sorrow
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user focuses earth chakra into his/her hands and forms a single handseal. This causes a small wave of rock, to rise up and race against the target. When the user wills it, the wave builds up like a wave coming close to shore and becomes a five (5) meter tall wave, which imitates a great Samurai in appearance. In the Samurai's hand is a sword made of extremely durable rock. If the user wills it, the Samurai can collapse onto the target, burying it beneath a heap of rock.
    -Can only be used three times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

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    Dont forget to notify people to whom you might have allowed the previous version to be used that it no longer exists.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:19 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Electrically repel (erekutorikku oshi)
    Type:Defence
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user will charge lightning chakra around his body and then changed the electrons which are in the lightning and make them the same electrons to that of the attack which he has been targeted by.For example the enemy sends an attack the user will vibrate the lightning particles in his body to make them react with the lightning which is coming towards him and identify the type of electrons which are in the attack.The user will then change his electrons to either positive or negative ones to repel the attack.
    -Only usable three times a battle
    -Has to be taught by Lysander



    Electrically charge (Denkou houmen:Erekutorikku denka)
    Type:Defence
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:This defence focuses on the non offensive form of lightning.By removing a large amount of strength and charka the user will coat himself with lightning to form a weaker defence instead of a raw shield of lightning.The lightning formed will appear as small static shield which coats the users body.The user will then change the electrons in the lightning to the same ones in the water which he is being attacked to repel the water.
    -Only usable three times a battle
    -Has to be taught by Lysander

    X-Both Declined-X Use a proper name. Add Lightning Release.
    Resubmitting.

    Lightning release:Electrically repel (Denkou houmen:erekutorikku oshi)
    Type:Defence
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user will charge lightning chakra around his body and then changed the electrons which are in the lightning and make them the same electrons to that of the attack which he has been targeted by.For example the enemy sends an attack the user will vibrate the lightning particles in his body to make them react with the lightning which is coming towards him and identify the type of electrons which are in the attack.The user will then change his electrons to either positive or negative ones to repel the attack.
    -Only usable three times a battle
    -Can only repel A rank and below lightning.
    -Has to be taught by Lysander




    Lightning release:Electrically charge (Denkou houmen:Erekutorikku denka)
    Type:Defence
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:This defence focuses on the non offensive form of lightning.By removing a large amount of strength and charka the user will coat himself with lightning to form a weaker defence instead of a raw shield of lightning.The lightning formed will appear as small static shield which coats the users body.The user will then change the electrons in the lightning to the same ones in the water which he is being attacked to repel the water.
    -Only usable three times a battle
    -Has to be taught by Lysander
    -Can only repel A rank and below water and the water repelled will fall to the floor when within range.

    Added a new note which I made bold and changed both names.

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    ±± Both Declined ±±
    If this was the first time that the name thing was noted, I wouldn't mind editting it, but Xylon had pointed out the wrong name before and yet it persists. Denkou Houmen might literally translate into Lightning Release but you know fairly well that in Narutoverse Lightning release/Lightning Style is named RAITON :sy:
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:26 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Kenshin... View Post
    (Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
    Type: Attack / Defense
    Rank: Forbinned
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 ( 20 to self )
    Description:
    The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation to shape the chakra into a giant Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user due to the size and amount of chakra it takes to perform this jutsu the User is unable to use Genjutsu and Taijutsu while this jutsu is in use and The User can not run due to the Strain on their body that it takes to perform the jutsu... When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the user with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
    Note: Leaves the User unable to perform Genjutsu, Taijutsu or even Run for One Complete Turn
    Note: If the Koy Fish is destroyed the user Becomes extremely exhauster
    Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin...

    X-Declined-X How did you formed it again? Nature transformation or freezing the air?
    (Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
    Type: Attack / Defense
    Rank: Forbinned
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 ( 20 to self )
    Description:
    The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a giant Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user due to the size and amount of chakra it takes to perform this jutsu the User is unable to use Genjutsu and Taijutsu while this jutsu is in use and The User can not run due to the Strain on their body that it takes to perform the jutsu... When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the user with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
    Note: Leaves the User unable to perform Genjutsu, Taijutsu or even Run for One Complete Turn
    Note: If the Koy Fish is destroyed the user Becomes extremely exhauster
    Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…

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    Why would this limit your use of Genjutsu or Taijutsu? :sy: Why is this forbidden rank? This is nothing more than at best an S-Rank. And don't add useless restrictions that make no sense to the techniques. It will eventually only lead to a DNR.

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    (Hyouton: Gurētoaisuu~ōru) Ice Release: Great Ice Wall
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    The user will do a set of Two Handsigns (Dog + Snake) and Release their Chakra in front of them the user will then by using Nature Transformation will change the chakra into Ice creating a Giant wall of Ice The wall stand about 30 meters high and is 15 meters wide and Water if S rank and Below can not effect the the wall due to ices ability to freeze the Water

    Restrictions

    • Can only be used Once per battle
    • After the use of This Technique the User can not use any Ice Techniques of S rank and above for the following turn
    • Can only be Taught By Kenshin...


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.

    Hyouton: Sansei yuki) Ice Release: Acid Snow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-30 from self)
    Description:
    The User Will gather up a large amount of Ice chakra and release it into the air then by using nature Transformation the user will turn the chakra into snow as the snow starts to pour down and comes in contact with the users opponent the Snow will Start to burn the Opponent causing three Degree on them the only downside is that the user gets hit with a few flakes of the snow causing the user great pain and causes them not to be able to move at full speed for 2 turns

    Restrictions:

    • Can Only be used once per battle
    • The user can not use Genjutsu while the snow is coming down
    • the Snow lasts for 2 turns
    • User moves at half speed while the snow is coming down
    • Snow cuses Damage to the User aswell
    • Can only be taught by Kenshin…
    • User can not use any A rank or above Ice Techniques for the Next Turn

    X-Declined-X Do not resubmit. Acid is an element and you havent even explained how you formed snow. And well so far in my knowledge its pretty typical to freeze objects with ions like acid. Snow is entirely different.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:28 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Secret Art of the Yamanaka Clan: Fingers No More - Yamanaka Hidan no Jutsu: Yubi Iie Mada

    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: -
    Description: Like the Mind Body Disturbance Technique of the Yamanaka clan. A ninjutsu where one sends their chakra into the subject's nervous system. The user manipulate his chakra to block the enemy from moving his fingers. Prevent the enemy from forming handseals therefore restrict their usage of techniques that require handseals for a short while.
    -Lasts for two turns.
    -The user can not preform any Yamanaka technique for two turns after the usage of this technique.
    -Only a member of the Yamanaka clan can preform this technique.


    Art of the Sword: Cutting Flames - Kenjutsu: KokuHisaki

    Rank: S
    Type: Deffensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: -
    Description: When countering elemental shots. The user rapidly swings his blade in high accuracy and chakra running through it and his arm to increase its speed and strength, halving all of the shots send toward him no matter what they are shaped like or their size if possible, leaving enough space for his body to let the shots pass without causing him any harm.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -No kenjutsu techniques to be used next turn.
    -Must have mastered kinjutsu to use this technique, for the user need the full knowledge of the sword's angle in use, speed and power.
    -Cannot protect against lightning based techniques.

    Quote Originally Posted by Asskickulator View Post
    ♆ Puppeteer art: Chakra-Ball Shield - Kugutsu no Jutsu: Chakra-Tama Toku ♆

    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 45
    Damage points:N/A
    Description: The user channal a huge amount of chakra out of the suitable puppet compartment that sends a chakra shield unleaching a much stronger version of chakra shield technique. This shield must be done around the user and/or the body the user wants to protect for it can only protect what is close to it. This shield is made to protect whats inside of it serrounding it from every angle, like a ball of protection to the user.
    -Can only be used once per battle, and if they were used in a battle, the user can not use Change of Body Stance Technique in that battle.
    -Only usable by a puppet master through a puppet with a chakra shield producing.
    -The compartment that was used in this jutsu can no longer be used in that battle to create any other chakra shield.

    ~Declined. Incorrect chakra cost and define to compartment better. A regular one like the one we saw Chiyo use is not enough for a 360 degree shield.~
    ♆ Puppeteer art: Chakra-Ball Shield - Kugutsu no Jutsu: Chakra-Tama Toku ♆

    Rank: S
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points:N/A
    Description: The user channal a huge amount of chakra out of the suitable puppet compartment that sends a chakra shield unleaching a much stronger version of chakra shield technique. This shield must be done around the user and/or the body the user wants to protect for it can only protect what is close to it. This shield is made to protect whats inside of it serrounding it from every angle, like a ball of protection to the user.
    -Can only be used once per battle, and if they were used in a battle, the user can not use Change of Body Stance Technique in that battle.
    -Only usable by a puppet master through a puppet with a chakra shield producing.
    -The compartment that was used in this jutsu can no longer be used in that battle to create any other chakra shield.


    The compartment is the same as every other puppet master's chakra shield compartment. Because making another compartment would be more like making a custom weapon and I want this technique usable through all of the puppets I have that are capable of using it. This technique act more as an advance use of that compartment. Like lets say chidori and chidori nagashi. This technique is a drift off from the original technique that covers a larger field however it have its drawbacks for using it like breaking the compartment.


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    ±± All Declined ±±
    Under the Blue Rule
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-13-2012 at 03:55 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    New Cycle:

    (Raiton:Ākaibu) Lightning Release:Archive
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Holding a single outstretched hand towards the sky, the user sends a potent amount of their ration chakra into the sky, generating an electric arc. The collision with the winds and the lightning in the air serves to generate an electric storm – Several lightning bolts will then sub-sequentially rain down and bombard the opponent, completely obliterating them, along with the area in their general vicinity. As a result of the electrical breakdown of gases in the atmosphere (caused by the electric arc), a deadly gas will be created. The gas will cover the area around the lightning strikes, and diffuse into the air, ‘rotting’ or more literally, swiftly corroding the lungs of anyone who inhales it. The user is not immune to these gases, but can take precautions to avoid inhalation and remain at a safe range, being wary of the electric breakdown. The electric arc itself is based off of real life science.
    *Can only be used twice per battle
    *In the following turn, the user is restricted to the use of A Rank and below Raiton.
    *The user must wait a full three turns before using this technique a second time around

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    Don't resubmit

    (Katon: Kaen no Metsujin Hōrī Nova) Fire Release: Flame God Slayer's Holy Nova
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will stomp his foot on the ground, forming a large underground passageway, like the Exploding Flame Crater technique. The user will then channel his katon chakra through the tunnel – The chakra will not manifest as ordinary flame, it will instead vastly heat the air within the tunnel, immediately generating thermo-concussive impact because of the heat. The heat blast will then erupt from the ground at the exit point at extremely high pressure – like a powerful geyser – the heat literally flaying the skin off of anyone caught in its range. Having also super-heated the minerals and substances found within the earth as it travelled, the heat will also bring forth and spread volatile chemicals from underground. Thanks to the gases, evasion is difficult, considering that the gases spread through the area within the general vicinity of the geyser. Upon inhalation, the gases will form carboxyhemoglobin within the body and induce hypoxia of the limbs, as well as forming perforations along the eso****us and lungs. The user himself is susceptible to these gases, however, he can take precautions to avoid inhaling the fumes. Because this technique takes on the form of heat rather than lava, the process is far swifter than the Exploding Flame Crater technique - Roughly around three seconds.
    *This technique can only be used twice per battle.
    *In the following turn, the user is restricted to the use of A Rank and below fire jutsu.
    *This technique can only be used once per two turns.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit.

    (Sōkyoku Dai Nidaime:Izayoi Bara) Sonata Number Two - Sixteen Day Old Moon Rose
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This acts as both a Kai and actual Genjutsu - The first part of this jutsu allows the user to skewer an enemy's genjutsu, and turn it against him in the form of a counter offensive Genjutsu. When under the influence of an enemy's Genjutsu, a holy golden light will envelop their body and the user will disappear within a brilliant show of reverberating shock-waves, signifying ones release from the opponent’s illusion. For example, if the user was bound by the bringer of darkness technique, they would be enveloped by the golden light and sub-sequentially broken out of the illusion. In the next phase, the enemy will be enveloped in the same golden light. Once covered in the light, they will hear thousands of loud, high-pitched cries from the irrevocably shattered souls that once died on the battlefield. The high pitched cries are so overbearing, that they manifest in the form of concussive, reverberating shockwaves – The sound of the cries serves to completely impair the thought process, as well as the reverberations completely disabling movement, while continually dealing excessive (mental) damage. The damage is so excessive, that as a sub-sequent result of their hearing being ‘overloaded’ the target person will fall unconscious. Because of the cries, this technique can easily be mistaken as a Sound based technique, however, that is not the case – It is all an illusion. This technique can be used outside of Genjutsu as well – It is not required that it be used as a Kai first, but it can serve that purpose.
    *This technique can be used twice per battle.
    *In the two turns following the use of this technique, the user cannot utilize any Genjutsu – The user must wait a full three turns before utilizing this jutsu again.
    *Knocks the opponent out for one whole turn.
    *This technique is capable of countering Genjutsu of equal rank or below (Excluding Tsukuyomi).
    *The damage dealt is an illusion - All in the opponent's mind.

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    This is the same as Lili's Itsy Bitsy Spider genjutsu in essence. Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:30 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Shougeki Kokuhyou) - Fire style: Impact of Damnation
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: This technique can only be executed when the user is about to land on the ground, whether it be from an attack or just landing from a jump. The user releases their fire chakra around the area they are about to land in and moulds it into a circle that is difficult to see by the opponent. They release their chakra at the same time as they land in the circle, which creates an explosive force where massive flames shoot outwards in all directions. The longer the flames travel the weaker they get, so by the time they reach long range, the damage is cut to 1/3 of its original power.
    *Can only be used twice per battle.
    *The user can not perform any S rank or higher fire style techniques in the next two turns.
    *Must have mastered the fire element to use this technique.
    *Can only be taught by Genryūsai

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    ±± Declined ±±
    In all honesty I don't understand what this technique does. Explain it better.

    (Neko Mo-Do Tsugi San) Cat Mode Stage Three
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: N/A (-30 to the user for each turn it is in use)
    Description: When performed, the user cries out as their chakra begins to bubble and boil around them. It slowly starts to compress around them until it explodes and bursts out in a shock wave, taking on the form of a larger chakra cloak of a cat with the user at the centre. The size of this cloak is roughly the same size as Gamabunta if not a little smaller. Like the first and second stage of Neko Mo-do, the user takes on the characteristics of a cat. His senses become stronger then when in Cat Mode 1 or 2 however due to the sure bulk of the chakra cloak, the user's speed decreases so that it is equivalent to 2 ranks below the users current rank. However in place of their speed, Elemental Ninjutsu gains +10 damage and Taijutsu gains +20 damage. Due to the size of the chakra cloak, the user is protected from elemental ninjustu up to B-Rank.
    *Can only be used/taught by Genryūsai and must have signed the Cat Contract
    *Can only be used once a battle and lasts for 4 turns. After the mode has finished and the user has not won, they automatically lose the battle.
    *The chakra cloak can protect the user from B-Rank and below elemental ninjutsu a total of 3 times while it is in use.
    NOTE: The cloak is nothing like the Demon Cloaks the Jinchuuriki have; this cloak does not act on its own accord but on the thoughts of the user. The user must know where an attack is coming from for it to be able to defend him/her, they still take damage from the use of the chakra. Also this technique utilises the users own chakra. It does not use any form of Natural Energy that is used to enter the actual Sage Mode.

    Additional Note: I realise that the second custom could be classified as a variation of Sage Mode, but I hope that since it doesn't require the use of Natural Energy that it can be considered otherwise. Thank you.
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    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:32 PM.

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    (Genjutsu: Ani wa Kōnan no sutairu) |
    Illusionary Arts : Oppan Gangnam Style
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user casts the opponent under a genjutsu where.....

    Opponent sees - The user puts on sunglasses and forms two shadow clones and then, both the clones use Henge no Jutsu to transform themselves into 2 different people. Once done, all three start dancing to PSYppan Gangnam Style and they ride their "invisible horse" where the songs n music are given by the people dancing.

    In reality - The user can either take this chance to attack or flee the battlefield.
    The whole process till the user starts dancing takes 3-4 sec. The entire process goes on until the opponent snaps out of the genjutsu or till either one of them is killed.

    Note: Can only be used thrice.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

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    ±± Declined ±±
    *Don't resubmit. Next time you try something like this, I'll consider you to be mocking the CJ thread.

    ( Kage Sode ) Shadow wings
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, by focussing
    their shadow chakra, creates wings made from shadow by manipulating his/her own chakra. These wings are created behind the user's back and can be used for flying. The user can manipulate his shadow to create upto 4 wings and can manipulate them to alter the size of the wings so as to gain advantage of the situation (ex. he can make it large to fly high up in the sky at very high speeds or make it smaller like eagles making him 'float' in the air). While the user uses 2 wings to fly, he may also use the other 2 wings to form shadow arms by manipulating it which may be used as a shield to protect the user from frontal attacks by kunais and other small objects. These wings can protect the users back from C-rank and lower water and wind attacks (should be reasonable) and B rank or lower raw chakra. The wings are made of pure shadows and as we know shadows don't have any mass. But when the user's chakra is used, it gains some weight (very light) allowing the user to fly.
    Note: Can only be used by a Nara.
    Note: Can only be used thrice.
    Note: While in this form, the user cannot use any other jutsus.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07


    ______________*
    ±± Declined ±±
    *Don't resubmit. Made countless times before for almost every element or technique


    (Kage Kurōku) Shadow Cloak
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user releases his shadow chakra around him which looks like he's wearing a cloak made of shadow. This looks exactly the same as that of kyubi's chakra cloak, except for the fact that it doesn't contain the same properties. Once the user is covered in this cloak, he can extend his arms made of shadow chakra (much like Naruto in his km mode) from his hands and deliver a fast punch to the opponent. These hands can also be used for various other works. The user can also create large shadow legs or whatever they want as an extension to their body. The cloak doesn't have the property to trap anything in its shadow, but can protect the user from C rank or lower water and wind attacks (reasonable attacks) and also B rank and lower raw chakra.

    Note: Can only be used by a Nara
    Note: Can be used twice.
    Note: Cannot perform any other jutsu while in this form.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. Similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:34 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    First jutsu is a mode:

    (Chikyū masutā) Earth Master
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/a (After activating all canon earth release techs will do +5 damage)
    Description: User will release enormous chakra through his feet and channel it into the ground, with the help of his hard training User can linked his chakra to every mid and large size rock/stone above the ground, those stones/rocks can be manipulate by the user to give any shape and can launch to enemy with very high speed. During this mode, user has layer of dark green chakra around his feet which can be easily visible like dark green flame type. All canon earth release techs will do +5 damage. This mode will be less powerful if the opponent is in long range, since the strength of user's chakra will be less at long range then short or mid range.
    Note: Can be activated once in battle.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns only.
    Note: Only be activated in rocky field.
    Note: Can only be learn by Thor.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit.

    (Doton:Yomo) Earth Release: Four Directions
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: User will send multiple of large rocks towards the opponent from all 4 directions, It will be very hard to dodge the stones since there speed will be high due to the Earth Master Mode.
    Note: Earth Master mode should be activated.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times.
    Note: Can only be learn by Thor.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.

    (Doton:Bāsuto) Earth Release: Burst
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: User will burst all the stones around the opponent, small pieces of stones will hit the opponent and blocking his vision due to small stones and dirt. This is un-predictable since the Earth Mode is activated and those stones were already linked to user.
    Note: Earth Master mode should be activated.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times.
    Note: Can only be learn by Thor.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Same as above.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:35 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Passion View Post
    Anyway I could make it less similar to other techniques? Yes, I know you're not supposed to ask for help, but I've worked the technique to an extend in which I cannot think of a way of making it different without changing the purpose of it.

    New techniques:

    ( Fūinjutsu: Chikai to Oni ) - Sealing technique: Oath with the Demon
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Oath with the Demon an advanced sealing technique that has been passed through the military command for ages to prevent information leaks or disobeying among the ranks of ninjas and soldiers. Before learning it, one must know Snake summoning and advanced sealing techniques and be taught to use it by the technique's creator. The technique is rather similar to Twin Snake Double Assassination and Danzō's Juinjutsu as its utilized in similar way to preserve the secrecy of unnamed parties. Before the technique being usable, user must make Dragon - Serpent - Rat hand seals and issue the restrictions for the seal. After that, the seal must be given to someone via bodily contact between the user and the target (such as a kiss or bloods coming in contact together). Through this contact, an user sends a snake shaped seal racing through the target's body until it reaches their heart which it coils itself around. The restrictions that user issued before sending the seal now affect the target, and if he/she breaks any of these restrictions the snake will tighten itself around the target's heart which causes a heart attack. If the target is about to break the restrictions, the seal will only tighten around the heart which causes difficulties of breathing and pain in the target's chest to keep them in line.
    • Requires snake summoning contract and sealing technique training.
    • It takes some time to set up, so it's barely useful in combat.


    ( Kuchiyose: Saigo-ni no Nāga ) - Summoning technique: Last of Nāga
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: User begins by drawing out blood and gathers chakra while performing Hare - Ox - Serpent - Ram hand seals. Once the previous steps have been completed, user must clap his/her hands together to cause several humanoir creatures to emerge from the surface of ground. These three creatures share snakes' tails and have identical clones of the user's upperbody. All of these creatures possess the ability and knowledge to use snake techniques and summon snake summonings. Also each one of them can be assigned with a single element that they can use by the user. The snakes' speed can be compared to Orochimaru's when he had the lower body of a snake and all of them possess vast knowledge of free-form hand to hand combat. Each snake can withstand a force that equals B - rank before being unable to fight. After rendered unable of fighting, the snakes will revert into clouds of smoke and disappear.
    • Can be used only once per battle.
    • Snakes using techniques count as one of the user's three techniques.
    • User cannot maintain clones at the same time with these summonings.


    The first technique is meant to be used in Ninja World only to prevent information from spreading.

    ±± All Declined ±± Posted outside the weekly markers
    Custom Weapon: ( Yamai ) - Disease
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Disease is the name of a custom crossbow that was developed by unknown craftsmen a long time ago. Even so, it's been passed along the generations of craftsmen for generations and each one of them has added their own touch on the weapon. The crossbow left the possession of these craftsmen during Third Shinobi World War when their village in Amegakure was destroyed by the other nations. Only the youngest of the bloodline was able of escaping with the legacy of their family, the crossbow. It's not common knowledge what happened to this child or the crossbow after the war but some sources say that he/she(?) is still alive, carrying on his/her personal vendetta against all nations. The crossbow can be wielded with just one hand and it uses arrows as its ammunition. Most parts of the crossbow are made of metal, but the stock still remains partially wooden and on the handle are carved the words ''Revenge solves everything''. The crossbow utilizes a sophisticated reloading method with crank mechanism and it has another metal apparatus that can be loaded with three arrows and then spun for quicker reload. To ensure that it can be wielded with one hand, it can be loaded with just one hand by pushing the trigger forward when the arrow is placed on the and the crossbow will rig itself like any repeater crossbow. The arrows of the crossbow can be attached with explosive tags.




     Approved 


    ( Ninpō: Muchiutsu ) - Ninja Art: Flagellant
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Flagellant is an ninjutsu advanced technique that requires the user to mold their chakra to form a rope of sorts. It was named after the method it was meant to replicate, the flagellant. The technique itself is utilized by the user bringing his/her hands together whilst releasing chakra from their palms. The chakra is then extended into a rope by user pulling his/her hands apart to his create a whip made of pure chakra that's approximately two meters in length. As a downside, user cannot perform any hand seals with two hands while holding the whip. When the whip's in use, the user can make the popper of the whip split into multiple smaller threads that are extremely useful when constriction opponent(s). The whip strength of the whip is not decreased when done so. What makes this technique from just every whip is that user can both extend the whip (up to 10 meters) and add elemental attributes into it when elemental chakra is guided into it. Both of these abilities cost additional 10 chakra to user and they do not count as additional moves. The elemental effects are:
    • Fire: Whip eaves a burn on the place it hits and will continually scorch the target(s) who's/re constricted by it.
    • Water: Whip will conduct electricity, allowing user to use this in combination with a lightning release technique.
    • Earth: Whip gains an increase in the mass of it and will hit targets harder along with making it more difficult to escape the grasp of it.
    • Lightning: Whip will have an electrical surge traveling within it and when getting hit by it results a muscle spasm and paralyzes the part it hit. The same effects apply to constriction of an opponent
    • Wind: Whip will create a cut on the place it hits and when constricting an opponent, the whip will suddenly tighten and make it harder for the target to escape.



     Declined  DNR. All of these have been made in individual customs: earth whips, wind whips, water whip is both cannon and custom, lightning whip and fire whip... And then you have the rope or string variations of the same concept, all already done as well.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by mangekyo byakugan View Post
    Re-submitting without allignment

    Enigma(Nazo)
    Type: Armor
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Enigma is an armor created in ancient times, it is fathomed to be created by the war god himself Bishamonten. Bishamonten was rumored to have created this armor from materials unknown to human that are only present in the god realm the armor itself was mistakenly transferred to the human realm and is now possessed by humans. The armor being created in the god realm is stronger than most armors. It has two main functions the first is acting like the materiel in bullet proof vests meaning that projectiles that have an aerodynamic shape like a bullet will be stopped while things that are non-aerodynamic like a knife can penetrate it. The Second function of this armor is that it is chakra adaptent meaning that it will take on the characteristic of the last elemental chakra used thus making the opposing weaker element effects lesser and nullified in some cases.

    -It can withstand C rank aerodynamic projectiles for example the kaguya bullets
    -The last elemental chakra the user uses will alter the abilities of the armor meaning that if the last element used was fire the user will have resistance to B rank wind elemental attacks if the fire technique was C rank but the maximum rank that it will be able to resist is A rank of the weaker opposing element. The same applies for the remaining elements.
    -The armor covers the user's entire body upper and lower, the armor does not obstruct the user's movements at all. The armor is carved to look like it has infinite circles in it, this appearance is always modified when chakra is infused for example when fire chakra is infused it gains a scarlet red color, when water is infused it gains a navy blue color, when wind is infused it gains a mystical silver color, when earth is infused it gains a brownish color, and when lightning is infused it gains a white/blue/yellow color

    Dropping X for this
    Pandemonium (Hyakkiyakou)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Short*
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: This sword was forged by a great blacksmith, the blacksmith made this sword from carbon fiber and another unknown element that causes the sword to be indestructible and add that to the carbon present it is extremely light yet very strong. The main ability of this sword and what makes it unique is that several techniques can be used through it and it can negate the effects of some techniques.
    The technique usable is a slash of wind that will appear when the user slashes the sword it will reach short range and is equivalent to B rank wind.*
    The sword can also be used as a lightning negater when wind chakra is infused it will negate C rank lightning techniques as long as they are reasonable for example electro magnetic murder will have a small area of it negated since it is in a wave form.

    -Every tech used is counted toward three jutsu limit


    Took out one ability from the sword due to scorps post

    X-Both Pending-X Leaving to another mod

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    ±± Both Declined ±±
    You can only have one Custom Weapon...you are submitting 2*

    Summoning Technique: Pikachou (Kunchiyo no Jutsu: Pikachou)
    Type: Summoning*
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: *The user after performing the required hand seals will summon pikachou the lightning king of the addax, pickachou unlike most addax has a yellowish color and a bolt like tail pickachou also has a scare as the shape of a lightning bolt on the left side of his body. Pickachou is of size equal to that of Manda. Pickachou is capable of using lightning techs up to the user's rank and is resistant to C rank and below lightning techs. His tail is equipped with an armor that can block B rank and below techniques the summoner can hid behind the tale for protection.

    -Can talk mentally with summoner
    -Can only be summoned once
    -Lasts 4 turns
    -must have signed addax contract

    Contract approval


    X-Declined-X Cant be the size of manda and make it last 3 turns
    Resubmitting weapon

    Pandemonium (Hyakkiyakou)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Short*
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: This sword was forged by a great blacksmith, the blacksmith made this sword from carbon fiber and another unknown element that causes the sword to be indestructible and add that to the carbon present it is extremely light yet very strong. The main ability of this sword and what makes it unique is that several techniques can be used through it and it can negate the effects of some techniques.
    The technique usable is a slash of wind that will appear when the user slashes the sword it will reach short range and is equivalent to B rank wind.*
    The sword can also be used as a lightning negater when wind chakra is infused it will negate C rank lightning techniques as long as they are reasonable for example electro magnetic murder will have a small area of it negated since it is in a wave form.

    -Every tech used is counted toward three jutsu limit

    Ice release: Ice phasing (Hyouton: Hyouton sou)*
    Type: Supplementary*
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Self*
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: *This technique allows the user after performing three hand seals to phase through ice techniques of his creation of B rank and below for example in 1000 needles the user will no longer have to jump to avoid the needles, the techniques also enables the user to phase through C rank ice techniques created by the user.
    -Must be member of Yuki clan.
    -Usable four times per battle.
    -Can only be used by mangekyo byakugan and those taught by him.

    Ice Release: Sticky Ice( Hyouton : Betabeta Hyouton)*
    Type: Supplemenatry*
    Rank: B rank
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: n/a
    Description: *Now ice release is based on water and wind now in the water element there are techniques that derive from the normal water uses into different categories like (Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field the user will use the characteristics of the chakra used in that technique and cause his ice techniques to be sticky for example ice release technique can be used to trap the opponent and create a medium for ice techniques.
    -Usable on a total of five ice techniques.
    -when used the user will use the normal technique as he will normally do but the technique will have sticky characteristics.
    -Must be member of Yuki clan.
    -Can only be used by mangekyo byakugan and those taught by him.

    Feel free to edit ^_^

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Ototon: Kasshoku Bunsho - Sound Release: The Brown Note
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: /
    Description: First believed to be an urban legend, it took wesobi a long time next to an insane amount of effort and diapers to achieve completion on this technique. The user start by creating high power sound waves in his throat. The frequency is below 20 Hz, meaning that the human ear can’t hear it. Even though the human ear can’t hear it, the opponent his body will still feel the vibrations. The vibrations cause the opponent’s bowels to involuntarily work, and thus making the opponent lose control of their bowel movement. This results in content of the opponent’s bowels leaving his body. To counteract the effect on the user himself, he also focuses high frequency sound waves around his body, to counteract the effect.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used once, unless used against members of the Akimichi clan, who eat an enormous amount of food compared to “normal” people. Against them, it can be used twice.
    Note: No other sound techniques in the same turn.
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by mist01 View Post
    (Bo no Elendil) - Bow of Elendil
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80(-20 if splited)
    Description: Bow of Elendil is a 70" metallic chakra bow made of hard lustrous metal alloy of unknown nature but is as hard as diamond with up to 35" draw length. it has a reddish color with body frame like that of a dragon's scales. It also has sharp spikes all over the curves except for the hilt in the middle which serves as the handle. the string is made of a thin metallic spring that draws doton chakra from the users hand thereby forming an arrow made of thick dense earth as the user pulls it. the arrow that it shoots been mainly pure earth chakra is fast and precise and can pierce through B-Rank earth but the arrows are weak to Lightning.
    Picture:

    Abilities:
    -the spikes can be used to slash and pierce opponent in close range.
    -because of the metallic composition of the bow, it is indestructible
    -can fire up to 8 arrows at once but the power is halved for each arrow
    -can be combined(coated) with fire, wind and lightning( 10 damage)
    Restrictions:
    -can't use techniques that requires handseals when using this since the wielder won't be able to do hand seals except its elemental combinations which can only come as projectiles.
    -Firing 8 arrows at a time strains the user so it wont be useable until after 2 turns.
    -when bow is used once, it counts as a move out of the 3 moves.
    -can only be wield and only listen to Mist01

    X-Pending-X Leaving for another mod.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Arrow = to A-Rank earth with no limit? (to pierce through B-Rank earth it needs to be higher ranked...thus A-Rank...) 8 X B-Rank = 4 A-ranks = 2 S-Ranks in one simple move. NO. It can be combined with other elemental chakrs how? you don't have yin/yang thus you create an earth arrow...how can you create a earth/wind arrow? The handseals restriction is messy

    Doton - Pesuku Riritu Obitu : Earth Release - Pesky Little Hobbits
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Sup
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 35
    Damage Point: 60
    Description: The user spreads his doton chakra, he then makes up to 10 earth dwarfs(1meter height) emerge from the ground taking the appearance the user wants. The dwarfs however can't use any jutsu but they are very fast and each of them holds a kunai which can be used to stab the opponent.
    -useable only 3 times
    -they stay on the battle field for 3 turns and unless destroyed

    X-Declined-X Incorrect Chakra cost

    (Suiton: Seiki no za Pirania) - Water Style: Age of the Piranhas
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 60
    Damage Points: 100
    Description: The user kneads large amount of his chakra into a large water source then creates thousands of normal fish-sized piranhas. piranhas are extinct species of fishes, blind but responds to movement and vibration underwater, they are are canivorous and hunt in packs. Due to the amount of chakra imbued the piranhas materializes anywhere in the water source in a split second devouring the opponent and the user(if he is also in the water source). The user takes +30 damage if he's on the water source since piranhas also hop out the water but to a short distance and can still harm someone standing on the water source.
    +++No A-rank and above suiton for the next 3 turns
    +++No S-ranks and above after this jutsu and the next turn
    +++The user surfer +30 damage(if on the water source) or suicide(if in the water source)
    +++Requires a large water source and the opponent(s) being underwater
    +++Usable only once per battle
    +++Last for 3 turns before they revert back to water
    +++Requires Suiton Mastery

    X-Declined-X Incorrect Damage points
    (Bo no Elendil) - Bow of Elendil
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80(-40 if splited)
    Description: Bow of Elendil is a 70" metallic chakra bow made of hard lustrous metal alloy of unknown nature but is as hard as diamond with up to 35" draw length. it has a reddish color with body frame like that of a dragon's scales. It also has sharp spikes all over the curves except for the hilt in the middle which serves as the handle. the string is made of a thin metallic spring that draws doton chakra from the users hand thereby forming an arrow made of thick dense earth as the user pulls it. the arrow that it shoots been mainly pure earth chakra (= to A-Rank) is fast and precise and can pierce through B-Rank earth but the arrows
    are weak to Lightning.

    Picture:


    Abilities:
    -the spikes can be used to slash and pierce opponent in close range.
    -because of the metallic composition of the bow, it is indestructible
    -can fire up to 2 arrows at once but the power is halved for each arrow
    -1 Arrow = A-Rank, 2 Arrows = Each arrow is B-Rank

    Restrictions:
    -can't wave handseals when wielding the bow
    -Can't use elemental ninjutsus except earth when wielding the weapon
    -Shooting the bow counts as one of the 3 moves per turn, regardless of shooting 2 arrows or only 1.
    -Useable only 5 times per battle
    -can only be wield and only listen to Mist01

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    *

    Doton - Pesuku Riritu Obitu : Earth Release - Pesky Little Hobbits
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Sup
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Point: 60
    Description: The user spreads his doton chakra and does 2 hand seals , he then makes up to 10 earth dwarfs(1meter height) emerge from the ground. The dwarfs however can't use any jutsu but they are very fast and each of them holds a kunai which can be used to stab the opponent.
    -useable only 3 times
    -they stay on the battle field for 3 turns and unless destroyed

    ______________*
    ±± Approved ±±
    *

    (Suiton: Seiki no za Pirania) - Water Style: Age of the Piranhas
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: The user kneads large amount of his chakra into a large water source then creates thousands of normal fish-sized piranhas. piranhas are extinct species of fishes, blind but responds to movement and vibration underwater, they are are canivorous and hunt in packs. Due to the amount of chakra imbued the piranhas materializes anywhere in the water source in a split second devouring the opponent and the user(if he is also in the water source). The user takes +30 damage if he's on the water source since piranhas also hop out the water but to a short distance and can still harm someone standing on the water source.
    +++No A-rank and above suiton for the next 3 turns
    +++No S-ranks and above after this jutsu and the next turn
    +++The user surfer +30 damage(if on the water source) or suicide(if in the water source)
    +++Requires a large water source and the opponent(s) being underwater
    +++Usable only once per battle
    +++Last for 3 turns before they revert back to water
    +++Requires Suiton Mastery

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-24-2012 at 08:43 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by william24 View Post
    (Genjutsu: Konoyo no jigoku)-
    Illusion arts: Hell on Earth

    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (+10 every turn)
    Description:
    The user does a small sequence of 3 hand signs ( Ram-Tiger-Boar) whilst sending chakra to his opponents brain thus taking over their senses. The jutsu effects the sense of sight, touch and hearing by making them seem like they are in a hellish environment.
    --It first effects the sight by making it seem as if the users entire body is coated with orange and red flames that burn the terrain around him. Fire would instantly cover the entirety of the terrain with Giant flames whipping around like title waves that are 15-20 meters high which removes the user from the opponents sight the majority of the time. The next part is that every attack that the user uses seems like its just huge waves of steaming flames being shot out.
    --The next is the sense of touch, The opponents skin begins to seem as if it is drying up drastically, causing their skin to crack and blister up, along with their mouth feeling dried out and hard to swallow, the air they breathe in even becomes thick, hot and hard to breathe in thus causing severe hyperventilation from the brain thinking the illusion is real. The brain also begins believing that the heat is unbearable and the opponents become dizzy from heat stroke type symptoms.
    --The last is the sense of hearing. The opponent would begin to hear the flames crackling and whipping around loudly thus making it slightly hard to communicate.

    • only taught by william24
    • Can only be used once
    • No Genjutsu in the same turn, and no S-rank genjutsu the next two turns.
    • The illusion lasts 3 turns unless broken.

    X-Declined-X Again, damage points in a illusion? ~_~
    Resubmitting with changes

    (Genjutsu: Konoyo no jigoku)-
    Illusion arts: Hell on Earth

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user does a small sequence of 3 hand signs ( Ram-Tiger-Boar) whilst sending chakra to his opponents brain thus taking over their senses. The jutsu effects the sense of sight, touch and hearing by making them seem like they are in a hellish environment.
    --It first effects the sight by making it seem as if the users entire body is coated with orange and red flames that burn the terrain around him. Fire would instantly cover the entirety of the terrain with Giant flames whipping around like title waves that are 15-20 meters high which removes the user from the opponents sight the majority of the time.
    --The next is the sense of touch, The opponents skin begins to seem as if it is drying up drastically, causing their skin to crack and blister up, along with their mouth feeling dried out and hard to swallow, the air they breathe in even becomes thick, hot and hard to breathe in thus causing severe hyperventilation from the brain thinking the illusion is real. The brain also begins believing that the heat is unbearable and the opponents become dizzy from heat stroke type symptoms.
    --The last is the sense of hearing. The opponent would begin to hear the flames crackling and whipping around loudly thus making it slightly hard to communicate.

    • only taught by william24
    • Can only be used once
    • No Genjutsu in the same turn, and no S-rank genjutsu the next two turns.
    • The illusion lasts 3 turns unless broken, each step of it pertaining to the 1st, 2nd and 3rd turns of activation

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    ±± Approved ±±


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    (Jentoru ken: Kūki tenohira o gatoringu)-
    Gentle fist: Gatling air palms

    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    - A Hyuga style master focuses a massive quantity of chakra into his arms and a focal point on each palm. When that's done he begins rapidly thrusting his hands forward (like when doing 361 strikes) so fast that it is a blurry motion to the naked eye. With each palm thrust the user unleashes a powerful, condensed chakra blast (air palm) that is 2× as fast as the basic air palm technique. Within the spand of 3 seconds the user lets off the maximum of 50 air palms towards the opponent(s) which in return destroys everything in its path (sort of like morning peacock) unless defended against. Just like any other air palm, each of the 50 is able to cause internal damage if it hits an opponent.

    • Can only be taught by William24
    • Can only be used twice (two turns between each use)
    • No S-rank Hyuga techs in the same turn
    • Must have Jyuuken mastered for 3+ months

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.

    -------------———----------------------------

    (Tiglon Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sosuke Aizen)-
    Tiglon Summoning technique: Aizen

    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    - A user first swipes blood either on his Tiglon Tattoo or just on his hands followed by the necessary hand seals and slamming his palms onto a flat surface. In return a big cloud of smoke will appear and when it clears will reveal a large 20 meter high and wide black box. At the users will the box falls apart, releasing Aizen; Who's tainted, evil, sadistic chakra pours out onto the battlefield and causing fear, anxiety and similar affects of an A-rank Killing Intent (Sakki) to overwhelm everyone but the summoner himself. Aizen as a cub learned to stand on his hine legs and uses only his hines as a primary use of moving, he is tall as Gamakichi and has a very muscular tone to his body along with a patch covering his left eye, and a large scar over his chest. He also wears a jacket that is buttoned near his collar and just hangs off his back, and also on his back is a pirate type sword.
    - Aizens special skills are that he is very adept at using Genjutsu, in which he can use up to B-rank. Along with his ability to cast illusions, he is also extremely adept with the suiton element, which he can perform up to B-rank also but with a single hand sign.
    Being one of if not the most skilled Tiglon's Aizen can move at blistering speeds, able to move at speeds equal to a Sannin leveled taijutsu specialist.

    • Only taught by William24 and must've signed Tiglon contract
    • Aizen stays in play for 4 turns
    • While Aizen is in play the user can't use any S-rank genjutsu
    • Once Aizen is gone the user must wait two turns to summon another Tiglon
    • Can only be summoned once
    • Killing Intent (Sakki) affect lasts one turn unless broken



    Contract approval

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    The sakki part is something I did for my own Grave of Maria. Same as the box entrance and the overall feel of it. Its also a Gen based summon just like my own. Don't resubmit. And stay away from my CJ thread =_=#
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hikasazanami-Ken Genjutsu: Hi-hirate kuresshendo) | Chop Hanging Rippling Fist Illusion Technique: Hidden Palm Crescendo
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: For this technique the practitioner will form two hand seals and then slowly assume the basic stance of the Chop-Hanging Fist style. This activates the illusion portion of the technique. The opponent will see the user slowly lower their body, leaving brief after images. Once the stance has been reached the opponent sees the user disappear in a swirl of wind. In reality the user will have been focusing large amounts of chakra to their legs and will burst forwards once the illusion activates, closing distance at high speeds and unleashes a barrage of eight palms strikes in the blink of an eye, never stopping their forwards movement. The strikes and the damage from them will break the opponent out of the genjutsu (should they still be in it) by the time of which the user will have moves past them by about three meters.
    -Can be used three times per battle.
    -Link to Approved fighting style: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...01#post5989501

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    *Perfect.

    (Fuuton: Seion Mayubachi) | Wind Release: Serene Cocoon of Retribution
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-20 to user)
    Description: The user begins weaving an intricate series of twenty hand seals. During this process wind begins to whip around them and lifts them into the air several meters. The wind builds and builds tightly enveloping the user in a swirling cocoon. The wind becomes so fast and so dense that it begins to take on a solid appearance, making a white, swirling ovular cocoon around the user which can defend them from incoming attacks. At its peak the cocoon creates a faint and soothing humming sound, a calm before the storm. Then at a moment's notice the user will stretch their arms out at their sides causing the cocoon to explode outwards in a torrent of large wind blades that decimates the battlefield leaving large scars in the earth all around. Due to the high speeds and density of the wind cocoon it becomes difficult to control causing minor backlash within, dealing numerous shallow cuts over the user's body.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -No wind techniques the following two turns.
    -No Forbidden techniques the following turn.
    -Can defend against neutral elements of the same rank, but will no longer be capable of being used offensively.
    -Can defend against S-rank fire, but will no longer be capable of being used offensively.

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    ±± Approved ±±
    Edited slightly
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by The 4th Raikage View Post
    Katon fuchi( Fire Style Flame Abyss)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user focuses katon chakra to his mouth. Then after performing 2 handseals releases a stream of fire at the ground. By doing this the fire tunnels under ground. Still breathing out fire, using shape manipulation the fire will widen itself and cause the above ground to collapse itself. Causing the opponent to fall into a firery abyss.

    Note: Can't be used in succession (meaning back to back turns)
    Katon fuchi( Fire Style Flame Abyss)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user focuses katon chakra to his mouth. Then after performing 2 handseals releases a stream of fire into the ground. By doing this the fire travels under ground. Still breathing out fire, using shape manipulation the fire will widen itself and cause the above ground to collapse itself. Causing the opponent to fall into a firery abyss.

    Note: Can't be used in succession (meaning back to back turns)
    Note: Can only be taught by The 4th Raikage

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    Don't resubmit. Next time you quote to make a resubmission be sure to quote the check the mod did to the technique.

    Katon Yakedo Shawa (Fire Style Burning Shower)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 35
    Description: The user focuses katon chakra to his mouth. Then after performing 3 handseals, the shoot a large fireball into the air. Once the fireball is high above the clouds. The user will blow out a stream of fire into the fireball, which would channel through the previous fireball causing it to split apart. then using shape manipulation. The user will cause the stream of fire and the fireballs to dvide into many pieces of fire which wil rain down upon the opponent.
    Note: Can only be used twice per match
    Note: Can only be taught by The 4th Raikage

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. Similar to countless techniques and some parts don't make sense.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Ninjutsu sutairu: Anata ni ari. Ninjutsu Style: Tagged With the Ants.
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user channels his chakra across his body , and then focuses and concentrates it on his two palms, then using shape manipulation he creates tiny-little ants filled with his chakra, and upon physical contact with the opponent the users tags the opponent with the ants before he notices, the user can cause the ants to explode on the opponent causing him minor injuries and damage, it also tags the opponent and makes it difficult for the opponent to conceal the location from the user ,unless the ants are off.

    Note:Can only be used twice in a battle
    Note:No Ninjutsu in the same turn.
    Note:Must be taught by thunderbolt to use.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon-Demon Fire
    Type: Supplementary-Defense
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user channels their Katon chakra all over their body,creating a blue flame armor covering their entire body.This armor protect the user from all Katon attacks B-rank and below.When the opponent makes physical contact with the user,the blue flame cause burn damage to the foe burning them severely.

    -Lasts 5 turns.
    -Water attacks causes more damage to the user.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to countless techniques. Not even proper named.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Sensa Sunaarashi - Sensor Sandstorm
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Gaara begins by releasing a bunch of sand from their gourd, this sand is a very special sand, its the same sand that Gaara uses with his sensor sand. After having done that, the user will use a wind jutsu to blow the sand all over the battlefield, this makes it into a battlefield filled with little particles of sand in the air that tell Gaara the location of his opponents. The sand can find invisible opponents just like his ground sensor sand. Due to the sand all over the area, the opponent won't be able to see properly due to the sand going into their eyes.

    -If opponent is from sunagakure, they aren't effected
    - must use wind jutsu in correlation with this jutsu
    - can only be taught by better

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    Don't resubmit.

    Chiisai Tatsumaki -Mini Twister
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B rank
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user releases a stream of wind chakra from the palm of their hand that takes the shape of a mini tornado, the user then swings his arm towards his opponent sending the mini tornado towards him, as it travels it gets bigger and bigger till its the actual size of a twister traveling towards his opponent.

    -Can only be taught by Better

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques. Not even properly named. =_=
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Technique: Roshi the Sea Turtle (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Roshi za Umi Kame )
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description:The user wipes the blood on the seal of his arm, summoning a sea turtle beside the user. The turtle's name is Roshi, unlike the other turtles, Roshi cannot use earth techniques but water. Also when in water, he moves as fast as Kisame fused with samehada. He cannot be pierced by A-rank or below attacks because of his shell.
    Note: can only be used once per battle
    Note: must have signed a contract with turtles
    Note: only Axle may teach

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Link to summoning contract?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton: Kagirinai Kinbaku)- Lightning Release: Eternal Tight Binding
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs seven hand-seals, and then takes 5ft. long braided hemp rope (usually worn as a belt or weapon harness) and infuses it with raiton chakra. Once infused with raiton chakra this rope can be independently controlled and manipulated solely by the user. These ropes can be used to bind, tie, or secure an opponent by wrapping around their head, legs or arms in specific rope patterns then bind the hands to the feet and the feet to the head. Once an opponent is bound the user can then send high-voltage shock waves through the ropes using the Tiger hand-seal. The user can electrocute an opponent by performing the Dragon hand-seal, sending enough electricity into the victim’s body to knock them out or kill them.

    -Note: Can only be taught by AntiHero
    -Note: Raiton jutsu B-rank or above can not be used while controlling/manipulating the ropes.
    -Note: Once infused with raiton chakra these ropes cannot be cut, sliced, and/or severed by normal means.
    -Note: The ropes can only be manipulated/controlled for up to 3 turns.
    -Note: Can only be used once in battle.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to a CFS that enables the user to do this.

    (Doton: Kyousei Kinezumi Bakemono)-Earth Release: Great Squirrel Golem
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs four hand-seals while focusing his/her doton chakra into their left foot. They then stomp his/her left foot on to the ground releasing their chakra into the earth. The earth then forms a dense 8ft tall, 4ft wide, 4ft thick Red Squirrel. This squirrel is extremely bulky making it a great shield as it can be used to block most C-rank jutsu without sustaining any damage. This squirrel cannot move as it weighs close to 500 pounds.

    -Note: Can only be taught by AntiHero
    -Note: Must be a signer of the Squirrel contract to use this jutsu.
    -Note: Cannot use other doton jutsu in the same turn as Great Squirrel Golem.
    -Note: Great Squirrel Golem can block up to 2 B-rank jutsu before being destroyed (respecting chakra nature for strengths and weaknesses).
    -Note: If Great Squirrel Golem is hit by a Raiton jutsu B-rank or higher it is destroyed.

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    ±± Approved ±±
    Earth is weak to Lightning so an A-Rank Earth can be destroyed by a B-Rank Lightning. Don't forget that or I'll start thking you don't have earth training.

    (Doton: Tebayai Kinezumi Bakemon)-Earth Release: Nimble Squirrel Golem
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 20(+5 for every Nimble Squirrel Golem made)
    Damage: 40(+5 if combined with an exploding tag/note)
    Description: The user performs 3 hand-seals, as they gather doton chakra into their dominate hand. They then slam their hand on to the ground releasing the chakra into the earth. The earth then forms up to 3 Red Squirrels (2ft tall, 2ft wide and 2ft thick) any where within a 10ft area around this jutsu's user. The Squirrel Golem(s) can then be used to attack an enemy or used as a distraction by placing an exploding tag/note to it, send it to attack an opponent, and then use the Tiger hand-seal making the Squirrel(s) explode. Being made of extremely dense earth and doton chakra Nimble Squirrel Golem can move about freely and is highly durable being able to withstand up to 2 C-rank jutsu before being destroyed.

    -Note: Can only be taught by AntiHero
    -Note: Must be a signer of the Squirrel contract to use this jutsu.
    -Note: Cannot use doton jutsu B-rank or higher in the same turn as Nimble Squirrel Golem.
    -Note: Nimble Squirrel Golem can block up to 2 C-rank jutsu before being destroyed (regardless of chakra nature).
    -Note: If Nimble Squirrel Golem is hit by a Raiton jutsu B-rank or higher it is automatically destroyed.

    Contract Approval: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...82#post6328682

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    Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±


    Summoning Animal: Chough
    Scroll Owner: ~Korra~
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summon Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: Choughs have black plumage and brightly coloured legs, feet, and bills, and long broad wings and perform spectacular aerobatics. In our RP these birds can get big up to two times of the size of Sasuke's hawk. The birds can fly at fast speeds and are able to use elemental jutsus as well as genjutsu. These birds thanks to their eyes are able to see objects at far distances. Korra was able to be the first one to find the scroll to these birds hidden within Amegakure.

    Dropping the cannon Salamander contract Zen gave me permission http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...17203&u2=71560
    And Dante gave me permission for this since it collides with his Crow contract http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...48678&u2=71560

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    Problem is that the Crow contract is also a cannon contract. Crow had it approved before it was shown in the Manga that Itachi actually summoned crows. I'll need to talk to the other mods about this. If i don't get back to you in a week, contact me.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±


    Summoning Animal: Funnel-Web Spider
    Scroll Owner: Vexx
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summon Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background:
    With 8 legs surrounding their body, also have two further pairs of appendages that have become adapted for feeding, defense, and sensory perception. The first pair serve in feeding and defense and the second pair are for feeding and moving. Their legs move hydraulically, enabling them the move in any direction almost as quickly forward. Arachnids have two types of eyes, the first that can enhance the ability to collect light, giving them greater sight in the dark. The second act like a lens, that can enhance the distance of their vision. In addition to the eyes, almost all arachnids have two other types of sensory organs. The most important to most arachnids are the fine sensory hairs that cover the body and give the animal its sense of touch. Finally, slit sense organs are slit-like pits covered with a thin membrane. Inside the pit, a small hair touches the underside of the membrane, and detects its motion. The abdomen has no appendages except those that have been modified to form one to four (usually three) pairs of short, movable spinnerets, which emit silk. Each spinneret has many spigots, each of which is connected to one silk gland.


    These Funnelweb Spiders were first discovered when Vexx journeyed to Amegakure. While traveling through a forrest, Vexx fell into a spiders den. The Spiders considered eating her, but then decided not to, after she talked her way out of it. Noticing her talent with a tongue, they decided to make a deal with her, and become her allies. Specific advatages of the FunnelWeb Spiders include fantastic trap making skills and traps with their silk web skills.

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    Spiders are a cannon contract.
     
         
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