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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
    Kurōn no Fukushū {Genjutsu Release: Revenge of the Clones}
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40

    Description: The user channels their chakra into an opponent and forces them to see multiple illusions of themselves throughout the battlefield. This works especially well when an opponent has one or more clones of themselves on the battlefield causing the genjutsu to effect the clones as well. The opponent will see multiple clones of themselves that are trying to attack him and is paralyzed in fear. If there are clones on the battlefield, instead of them being paralyzed they try to attack their original by throwing a barrage of kunai with explosive tags. The kunai with ex tags that are thrown take on the image of another clone attacking the original, which makes the image more terrifying. The user takes on the image of the opponent while casting this genjtusu, throwing multiple kunai at the opponent(s). This jutsu can be cast against multiple opponents to make them attack each other with multiple kunai with ex tags instead of being paralyzed in fear.
    Note: If casting against multiple opponents, can only be used 2x per battle, otherwise can be used 3x per battle.
    Note: No Genjutsu can be used the turn after this technique is used.

    [I changed the rank, chakra and damage ad removed the restrictions that belonged with the S ranked technique as it was being lowered. As for why this was S Ranked, simple in nature as it may be, the act of casting different types of Genjutsu on multiple enemies in one technique was the reason why I made it S Ranked. A paralyzation on the original and a Genjutsu that forces your opponents clones to attack the original.]

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    Blue rule.
    Kurōn no Fukushū {Genjutsu Release: Revenge of the Clones}
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40

    Description: The user channels their chakra into an opponent and forces them to see multiple illusions of themselves throughout the battlefield. This works especially well when an opponent has one or more clones of themselves on the battlefield causing the genjutsu to effect the clones as well. The opponent will see multiple clones of themselves that are trying to attack him and is paralyzed in fear. If there are clones on the battlefield, instead of them being paralyzed they try to attack their original by throwing a barrage of kunai with explosive tags. The kunai with ex tags that are thrown take on the image of another clone attacking the original, which makes the image more terrifying. The user takes on the image of the opponent while casting this genjtusu, throwing multiple kunai at the opponent(s). This jutsu can be cast against multiple opponents to make them attack each other with multiple kunai with ex tags instead of being paralyzed in fear.
    Note: If casting against multiple opponents, can only be used 2x per battle, otherwise can be used 3x per battle.
    Note: No Genjutsu can be used the turn after this technique is used.

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    Very similar to cannon Genjutsu. Yours is nothing more than a more elaborate version that somehow manages to paralize an opponent just because he sees a bunch of clones. Also, for further note, Genjutsu Release doesn't exist. Its Genjutsu which translates into Illusionary Arts or Illusionary/Illusion Style.

    Quote Originally Posted by Hazama View Post
    Ototon/Raiton: Sora O Nokku Shite Oto O Kiku [Sound/Lightning Combo: Knocking On The Sky and Listening To The Sound]
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs 5 handseals while channel's their lightning chakra into the sky/clouds in the air to create a violent storm within the battlefield. The user then channels their sound chakra into the clouds to manipulate the thunder that will come as a result of the Lightning being formed. The Thunder, now infused with the user's chakra causes extreme pain to all opponents on the battlefield, causing their ears to pop and bleed from the extreme pain and then pass out. The opponents will naturally place their hands to their ears in an attempt to drown out the pain and stop the bleeding from their ears, preventing them from using handseals.
    Note: This cannot be used to set up Kirin
    Note: If Kirin or another storm or lightning technique is setup prior to this technique, the user need simply to channel their sound chakra into the clouds to use this technique successfully as long as the technique produces thunder.
    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: User must wait 3 turns between each use.
    Note: The user could not have performed Lightning or Sound Techniques above A Ranked the turn before this technique is used.
    Note: No Sound techniques can be used in the same turn.

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    This is very oped and botherlining a DNR. Tone it down and make it more reasonable. Think on how one would be able to counter this or defend from this.
    Ototon/Raiton: Sora O Nokku Shite Oto O Kiku [Sound/Lightning Combo: Knocking On The Sky and Listening To The Sound]
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60

    Description: The user performs 5 handseals while channel's their lightning chakra into the sky to form a cloud in the air to create a violent storm. The user then channels their sound chakra into the clouds to manipulate the thunder that will come as a result of the Lightning being formed. The Thunder, now infused with the user's chakra causes extreme pain to [B]all people (allies included)[\b] on the battlefield within range of the cloud, causing their ears to pop and bleed from the extreme pain and then pass out. The opponents will naturally place their hands to their ears in an attempt to drown out the pain and stop the bleeding from their ears, preventing them from using handseals. This can be defended against by the opponent creating a strong enough barrier around their body or blowing away the cloud.
    Note: This cannot be used to set up Kirin.
    Note: If Kirin or another storm, cloud, or lightning technique is setup prior to this technique, the user need simply to channel their sound chakra into the clouds to use this technique successfully as long as the technique produces thunder.
    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: User must wait 3 turns between each use.
    Note: The user could not have performed Lightning or Sound Techniques above A Ranked the turn before or in the same turn this technique is used.
    Note: Counts as 2/3 moves in a turn.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. OPed

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    Osoroshii Kishu Tatsumaki Kaden Supin (Dreaded Horseman Tornado Charge Spin)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user surges their body with chakra and performs a short, quick backwards dodge gliding across the ground. The user then begins a rapid tornado spin with chakra surrounding their body in the direction of the target. This spin only lasts for a short period of time, enough to go from one range to another. The short quick backwards is not enough to send the user into a different range, and ranges between 1-3 meters backwards. When going backwards from the speed at which it occurs, it leaves a chakra impression of the user's body, however it does not harm the opponent in anyway. This techniques can be performed extremely quickly. The user's body is covered with a chakra coat with a diameter of 2 feet. If the user is in the air, this can be performed without the backwards dash. This technique is capable of plowing through a large summon.
    Note: Can only be used once per turn.
    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
    Note: User must wait one turn before using this technique again.

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    Sorry to say that this makes little sense Hazama. Do you surround yourself with the tornado and then rage forwards against the opponent like that? or do you send this tornado of chakra towards him? Because tornados have been done countless times before in mostly any and every element so far except for probably those which its not feasible that it would be possible to produce tornado with.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-29-2012 at 07:42 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Wind Release: Ten Spiraling Dragon Swords(Fuuton: Juu Rasen Doragon Touken)
    Type: Attack/Defensive
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15 (+5 each turn.)
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user concentrates a large amount of fuuton chakra into the palm of their hands, after that they release the chakra into the air and manipulate it to form 10 katana swords that float in mid-air, the user then flicks his hands in the direction of the opponent which causes the the swords to fly forwards at the opponent, the defensive part is that the user can station the swords behind him and when the enemy attacks the user quickly crosses his arms to cause the swords move in-front of him and clump together to deflect the attack and at the same time cause some minor cuts on the enemy's body part that was used to attack , the swords can also deflect lightning jutsu but dispersers after insulates the lightning.
    Note: The user can regenerate swords that were used to attack.
    Note: Can only deflect lightning jutsus c-rank and below.
    Note: It takes a full 3 seconds to move the swords from behind of yourself to in-front of yourself.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
    Note: The user can keep this jutsu lasting for 4 turns for each use.
    Note: May only be taught by kokubungi Huygamaki.

    Bug Style: Rising Destruction Dragon(Mushiton: Joushou Inmetsu Doragon)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user sends a large volume of destruction bugs into the air that then form into a dragon then the user sends the dragon at the opponent which then lifts the opponent into the air and then raps its self around the opponent and falls down to ground, during mid-drop the bugs then explode on the opponent sending the opponent crashing towards the ground.
    Note: This technique takes 2 seconds to get to the opponent at mid rang and 5 seconds to get to the opponent at long range, this technique can not be dodged at short range.
    Note: Can only be used 5 times in battle
    Note: May only be taught by kokubungi Huygamaki.


    Wind Release: Phoenix Strike (Fuuton: Fenikkusu Dageki)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user does a few hand seals then concentrates a mass amount wind chakra into his hands then claps them together and releases the chakra into the sky far above the user and opponent he then manipulates the air to form a phoenix in the sky it then bombs down towards the opponent and strikes the opponent with great force and causes a small crater to form due to the pressure of the speed the phoenix was traveling at.
    Note: Can only be used 2 time in battle.
    Note: The user can keep the phoenix in the sky for the next 2 turns but once the 2 turns are up the phoenix disperses automatically and the next note applys.
    Note: The user can not use any wind jutsu for the next turn regardless whether the user uses the phoenix or not.
    Note: May only be taught by kokubungi Huygamaki.

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    You're bolding the descirptions so I'm assuming this is a resubmit. On resubmits you need to quote the previous submission. If its not a resubmission, then you need to resubmit this without bolding the description. Bolding descriptions only pertains to resubmissions and the changes done.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-29-2012 at 07:43 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (katon/fuuton: shippuu inferuno) wind/fire release: hurricane inferno
    Type: offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range:short-mid range
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60(-20 if target is mid range)
    Description: the user performs the hand seals Dog>>Monkey>>Tiger creating a large tornado of wind created with the user in the middle, the user then release a burst of fire from around his body in a spiralling manner that ignites the wind creating a powerful and intense fire hurricane, that can blow back and cause severe burns to the enemy.

    - Can only be used once
    - no wind and/or fire can be used in the turn the jutsu is used as well as the next turn
    - the user's speed is reduced temporarily(2 turns)
    - Can only be taught by elmage

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    similar to existing techniques

    (fuuton: hitoshirezu kaze) Wind release: inward winds
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: mid-Range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: the user performs the Ram seal, he then utilizes the sorrounding wind, creating an inwards spiralling winds(shapes like a cyclone, but not as big), that is capable of pulling multiple victims within range inwards towards its center, leaving the victims crashing on the ground after the jutsu ends, its also capable of pulling jutsus inwards, stopping the propulsive force of the jutsu, e.g if a fire jutsu is used against it, the fire is pulled towards its center, and is inflamed in the process but is unable to pull any other thing. The real damage is done when used with in combination with a suitable fire jutsu.
    - Can only be used twice
    - Can only pull B-Ranked jutsus and below, and C-rank for fire jutsus, due to weakness to fire
    - if the user is caught, he suffers the damage in the process
    - No B-ranked wind or higher in the same and following turn
    - Can only be taught by elmage
    - due to the nature of the technique, it is slower to perform than other wind jutsu

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    Don't resubmit.

    (fuuton: kaze bakushin) wind release: wind dash
    Type: Supplimentary
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: mid range
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: while running or in air, the user releases his wind chakra swiftly from behind him propeling him at increased speed forward to attack an opponent or evade an attack
    - Can be used five times per battle
    - No wind in the same turn
    - the user must be moving or in air
    - Can only be taught by elmage
    -movement cannot be controled i.e. Can only move in straight line

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    Wind Stream, have you heard of it? Cannon technique that enables this. Also, before Wind Stream was shown in the manga, there was already a few customs like this. Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-29-2012 at 07:45 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Approval of Kite Contract
    Approval of Jeet Kune Do

    (Kuchyrose: Ichi) Summoning: Neo
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (+10 to own taijutsu)
    Description: The user will bite his thumb performing three hand seals (Boar-Rabbit-Horse) once done he slams his hands on the ground summoning Neo the only living Kite that is able to stand up right like a human. Much to the same effect as Ma and Pa toad Neo is able to stand upright as well as use Taijutsu based attacks. He is able to use all basic taijutsu excluding gates and special abilities as well as Jeet Kune Do taught to him by it's creator. Due to natural selection Neo has gained strong legs and his wings appear more like arms. His body structure has given him a knack for taijutsu so along with many Strong Fist masters he has trained for years to master the basics of taijutsu and trained his body in grueling ways to gain the strength needed due to his training and his body and muscle structure Neo gains +10 to his own taijutsu.
    Notes:
    -Can speak english
    -Can only be summoned twice per battle
    -Can only be summoned for four turns
    -Can only use Jeet Kune Do and Basic Taijutsu



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    No boost to Taijutsu. Lets be real here, your contract is for a bird...you're trying to submit a human that looks like a bird. Some leniency, yes. But this is taking it a bit too far.


    (Katon: Saiha) Fire Release: Blazing Blade
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-5 per turn to maintain)
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user begins by gathering up a fair amount of katon chakra letting it flow into a gauntlet and then manipulating it around a single area creating a visible flame almost a jet of fire that blasts out. He then compresses the katon chakra into a long thin blade that extends out from the gauntlet. It can be extended from nearly any part of the gauntlet and has both shape and form. It can easily cut through flesh creating deep searing wounds. The blade can be extended out to about the same size as a normal sword and can be used as an extension of the person's own self giving him a longer reach.
    Notes:
    -Can only be used three times per battle
    -Can't use S rank katon the same turn this is used
    -The blade can be held for as long as the user continues manipulating Katon Chakra
    -While maintaining the blade, the user is unable to mold any other chakra than Fire and can't do handseals.

    What it looks like minus the large flame dragon:


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    added note.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-29-2012 at 07:48 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by dm1202 View Post
    (raiden)-lightning bolt
    Type:weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:short
    Chakra:40(to summon)
    Damage:(+15 to all normal kenjutsu attacks)
    Description:raiden is a katana that is made from a blade metal that has been enhanced by raiton chakra while being molded, naturally gaining a negative charge. This feat not only makes this blade more durable than normal because of the high vibrating frequency, but it easily attracts and generates electricity without any effort made to the user by drawing the positively charged air molecules to itself. This also makes the blade’s piercing ability much stronger allowing it to cut thru the hardest metal since the raiton chakra is molded into the blade increasing the vibrating frequency. With a push of a button on the hilt causes it to divide to two blades.

    raiden's look


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    Don't resubmit. No more boosting swords. Tons of them already and they are always the same.

    kuchiyose no jutsu:Moesashi)-summoning technique: moesashi
    Type:summoning
    Rank: B
    Range: short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: the user bites their thumb to draw blood and weave the summoning jutsu handseals and place their hands on the ground. in a puff of smoke a red armored tocan about the same size of fully grown akamaru appears. armor is made with two different materials. the outer layer of the armor is made of a blood red diamond that prevents the absorbtion of heat. and the inner layer that is easily fends of direct attacks since it is made of a metal that is 30% lighter than normal metal but 60% stronger. this armor allows the summons to be fully immune to direct attacks and immune to katon up to b-rank. the blood red diamond is a mystical artifact that gives the summon to use up to c-rank katon.
    note-user can't activate suiton techs while summoning is in play
    note-one other summoning while in play
    note-last for two turns
    note-must sign toco toucan contract


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    On resubmissions you need to bold the changes.
    ~resubmitting~

    kuchiyose no jutsu:Moesashi)-summoning technique: moesashi
    Type:summoning
    Rank: B
    Range: short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: the user bites their thumb to draw blood and weave the summoning jutsu handseals and place their hands on the ground. in a puff of smoke a red armored tocan about the same size of fully grown akamaru appears. armor is made with two different materials. the outer layer of the armor is made of a blood red diamond that prevents the absorbtion of heat. and the inner layer that is easily fends of direct attacks since it is made of a metal that is 30% lighter than normal metal but 60% stronger. this armor allows the summons to be fully immune to direct attacks and immune to katon up to b-rank. the blood red diamond is a mystical artifact that gives the summon to use up to c-rank katon.
    note-user can't activate suiton techs while summoning is in play
    note-one other summoning while in play
    note-last for two turns
    note-must sign toco toucan contract

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    I think I said this before, but too many immunities. Generally, only boss summons and S-Rank summons have such power and generally given to them for their size, thus making them stronger than smaller, weaker techniques
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Demono) - Fire Style: Boil
    Type: Offensive | Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: (+30 to any liquid technique)
    Description: The technique is based off of the user utilizing their chakra, and inserting it into a liquid substance. After inserting the chakra, the user performs one hand seal, heating up the liquid substance incredibly, causing it to boil instantly, making the liquid substance far more powerful, and dangerous.

    - Can heat up any Liquid Substance
    - Can be used three times per match
    - No fire technique after this technique
    - Can only be taught by Toshiro

    (Katon: Ingo tacchi hon) - Fire Style: Can't touch this
    Type: Offensive | Defensive | Supplementary
    Rank: F-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 50 (+30 for every turn)
    Damage: 90 (+15 for fire Techniques | Taijutsu)
    Description: The user builds up intense fire chakra constantly within themselves. Using the nature of the chakra, they allow the heat to seep out all over their body, causing it to become incredibly hot, turning the users flesh into a reddish color, and releasing some steam from the users pores, due to the water evaporating from within. While in this mode, the user gains added speed, strength, and some immunity to fire. Though all these boost comes with a cost, if hit by a water technique, the user recieves double damage, and if used for a second time, the user is unable to continue the match due to exhaustion.

    - Speed increases to the point where only a second tomoe sharigan can track.
    - Strength is increases to the point where every taijutsu gets a +15 in damage points
    - The user is immune upto B-Rank fire techniques
    - If hit by a water technique, the user recieves double the damage
    - The user is unable to perform water techniques while in this mode
    - Last for three turns, and usable twice per battle
    - After using it for the second time, the user is unable to continue the battle, due to all the water within his body evaporating
    - Can only be taught by Toshiro




    (Suiton: Suihou) - Water Style: Bubble
    Type: Defensive | Supplementary
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30(+10 for every turn)
    Damage: n/a
    Description: The technique is based off of the user utilizing their chakra, and manipulating it to form a flexible bubble made of water. the bubble is very light weight, and can be used for traveling underwater, or through the air.

    - Can only be used five times per battle
    - The bubble shrinks every turn, due to the air inside disappearing
    - The bubble last for three turns, before the air inside completely vanishes
    - If used under water, the user is unaffected by the water pressure, allowing them to freely move around
    - If used within the air, the user is capable of floating up pretty high, but only in one direction
    - Due to the flexibility of the bubble, it would take a great amount of force to be able to destroy it, making the bubble immune to basic weaponry, and up to A-Rank elemental jutsus.
    - Can only be taught by Toshiro


    ||All Declined|| Do not Resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hyouton: Icemyster's teisei) Ice Release: Icemyster's Whisper
    Typeffensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short/Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:
    The user exhales a mist-like cloud that disperses evenly into the area. Afterwards, the user makes a single handseal and the vapors expelled focus onto a single area of the user's choice, with tremendous force, freezing that point densely and compact. This technique cannot freeze anything larger than 3 feet long, and hits with as much force as a normal punch.
    *Can only be used twice
    *Vapors can lie dormant for three turns.

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    OPed. Look at the broad, generic part i colored. Long range? Too many things wrong with this one

    (Hyouton:Icemyster's chi) Ice Release: Icemyster's Blood
    Rank:Forbidden
    Typeffensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range:Short/Mid
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90
    Description:
    Icemyster, after being cut and bleeding (or recieving a wound that will be fatal) with manipulate the remainder of his blood as if it were water being used for Ice jutsu, allowing him to create ice from within his own body with his blood. Using the liquids within his own body, he will assume a fighting style similar to that of a kaguya, releasing spike of ice and manipulating them according to his will. While using this jutsu, the user's Ice jutsu gain 20+ damage, and the user can only use Ice, taijutsu, and non-elemental jutsu (no shadow clones available)
    *If used, the user will die.
    **Lasts three turns before the user dies of exhaustion, blood loss, and organ failure

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    Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Doton: Yari Satsugai No Jutsu) - Earth Release: Spear Killing Technique
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A silent technique used in various situations in which user makes "Ram" handseal and a portal of 3cm radius opens behind the enemy at 5m distance. As the moment portal opens, it shoots a spear of 2.5cm radius towards enemy with cannon speed. Because the portal is at much distance and due to the size of the portal itself, it makes no wind, opening or any sort of noise, making it almost if not completely, impossible for opponent to know that a spear is coming at them. But because they saw the user forming handseal, they can predict it, since from front, top and bottom there is no technique coming towards them.

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    banned from the cj thread.

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    (Kame Ninjutsu: Atae Galápagos) - Turtle Arts: Gift of Galápagos
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User summons a small cake like peice of food, from the Mount Galápagos, the homeland of Turtles. The piece of food was given a name i.e. "Jurei Shokumotsu" whose literal meaning is "Food from long aged Tree", a tree in Mount Galápagos which is life saviour for many of the turtles, for saving their lives at crucial moments. The tree secrects a special kind of juice which is very healthy, nourished, enriched with all vitamins, minerals and proteins and a special type of magic, the turtles beleive. The juice is used in the food, along with the mixture of turnip green, carrot, leaves, peas, grapes, a few flowers, worms, snails, slugs, and a lot more of turtle's food. Using these substances the special food is made, which is then used in hospice of turtles, as a treatment. The food is highly nourished, enriched with all vitamins, minerals and proteins, healthy, which is all a living being need for gaining energy. In the battlefield, user snaps his fingers in order to summon the special cake like food, and eats it. This food which is composed of the special juice and turtle's food, do not have much effects on humans and other animals, as it is originally made for turtles by turtle food. So user can't utilize the food for his benefit at highest degree possible, but upon eating it, the food replenishes user's 50% of total energy i.e. chakra in this case, in very short period of time. The same food when eaten by turtles, replenishes their 75% of total chakra, gives them boost in stamina, increases their senses and other inherent abilities futher.

    Note: -After eating the food, it shows its effects in next turn.
    -Due to the amazingly level of energy and other things it provides, eating it more than once will cause death.
    -Instead of summoning, user can bring it along with him at the starting of the battle i.e. must put in bio first.
    -Can only be summoned by turtles themselves and the ones who have signed Turtle or any other specie or turtle contract.

    Link to approved contract

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    banned from cj thread

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    Creating a CJ for my above CW.

    (Doton/Katon/Shinigami: Sasori) - Earth/Fire/Shinigami Style: Scorpion
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80 (on physical contact)
    Description: Taking advantage of combination of elements, and transformation ability of Shinigami Reaper, user passes his earth chakra into Shinigami and while it starts transforming into earth version, user passes his fire chakra combining the two natures and as a result the sword transforms into an Lava version of "Scorpion", which can now use Lava techniques upto A-rank without any handseals.
    Note: -Technique lasts for 4 turns before turning Shinigami into his sword(normal) form.
    -This technique counts as user's 2/3 moves.
    -Any technique used by Shinigami counts towards user's 1/3 move.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be used by Enzup.

    Got the idea of making this CJ from a thread of Izuna, where he said that combining different element is possible, but that would count as 2/3 moves. And also its the ability of my CW to transform into the animal version of the Element's chakra passed into it. So I thought its possible.. ^^




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    (Doton: Yari Satsugai No Jutsu) - Earth Release: Spear Killing Technique
    Type: Offense
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A silent technique used in various situations in which user makes "Ram" handseal and summons a levitating earth spear behind the enemy at 5m distance. As the moment the spear is summoned, it shoots towards enemy while making very less to no noise.

    ~ Declined; what exactly is "less to no" noise ? Also, you can't "suimmon" an earth spear ~
    Resubmitting the first 2.

    (Doton: Yari Satsugai No Jutsu) - Earth Release: Spear Killing Technique
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A silent technique used in various situations in which user makes "Ram" handseal and a portal of 3cm radius opens behind the enemy at 5m distance. As the moment portal opens, it shoots a spear of 2.5cm radius towards enemy with cannon speed. Because the portal is at much distance and due to the size of the portal itself, it makes 'no to very less' wind, opening or any sort of noise, making it almost if not completely, impossible for opponent to know that a spear is coming at them. But because they saw the user forming handseal, they can predict it, since from front, top, bottom, and from either side, there is no technique coming towards them.
    Note: -Can only be used 4 times per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.


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    Dont resubmit. Op

    (Kame Ninjutsu: Atae Galápagos) - Turtle Arts: Gift of Galápagos
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User summons a small cake like peice of food, from the Mount Galápagos, the homeland of Turtles. The piece of food was given a name i.e. "Jurei Shokumotsu" whose literal meaning is "Food from long aged Tree", a tree in Mount Galápagos which is life saviour for many of the turtles, for saving their lives at crucial moments. The tree secretes a special kind of juice which is very healthy, nourished, enriched with all vitamins, minerals and proteins and a special type of magic, the turtles beleive. The juice is used in the food, along with the mixture of turnip green, carrot, leaves, peas, grapes, a few flowers, worms, snails, slugs, and a lot more of turtle's food. Using these substances the special food is made, which is then used in hospice of turtles, as a treatment. The food is highly nourished, enriched with all vitamins, minerals and proteins, healthy, which is all a living being need for gaining energy. In the battlefield, user snaps his fingers in order to summon the special cake like food, and eats it. This food which is composed of the special juice and turtle's food, do not have much effects on humans and other animals, as it is originally made for turtles by turtle food. So user can't utilize the food for his benefit at highest degree possible, but upon eating it, the food replenishes user's 50% of total energy i.e. chakra level in this case, in very short period of time. The same food when eaten by turtles, replenishes their 75% of total chakra, gives them boost in stamina, increases their senses and other inherent abilities futher.

    Note: -After eating the food, it shows its effects in next turn.
    -Due to the amazingly level of energy and other things it provides, eating it more than once will cause death.
    -Instead of summoning, user can bring it along with him at the starting of the battle i.e. must put in bio first.
    -Can only be summoned by turtles themselves and the ones who have signed Turtle or any other specie or turtle contract.

    Link to approved contract

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    Don't resubmit. Would require mastery over medical techniques as such things are learned in the final semesters of medical school when you learn how to make medicine and other treatments like food pills.

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    Shinigami Reaper
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A (+10 to kenjutsu)
    Description: The sword was made by ancient priests of hell and heaven at a sacred place by using hairs, bones, skin, blood and senses of a living shinigami himself which gave the sword life and transforming ability. The sword was named after the shinigami. And it is believed that the shinigami is living in the form of sword now.
    The size of the sword is very big. The hilt itself is of 2m height, and the blade is of 3m height making a total length of 5m. It is a double-edged sword. And have a little curvature in the edge part and pointed on front. The sword is quite thick but the whole blade is covered with the hairs of shinigami which are very sharp, as a normal katana. The blade is bloody red in colour which is supposed to be the blood of millions of people killed by it and of shinigami himself. It also has 2 black strips originating from the rain guard to some extent on blade, and it was supposed to be the curse of people died from it.

    Abilities:
    -This sword is indestructible
    -It has life of its own just like samehada and thus it can react on its own when required when its transformed into an animal.
    -When Chakra is passed to the sword, the sword transforms into an elemental animal familiar that represents the element used |Fire- Phoenix|, |Water-Shark|, |Earth- Dragon|, |Lightning- Snakes|, |Wind- Porcupine|
    -The sword only listens to Enzup.

    Restrictions:
    -Passing any chakra to the sword, counts as a move, which is equivalent to S-rank Offense/Defense/Supplementary.
    -Transformation lasts for a maximum of 4 turns and can only be done twice
    -If opponent's chakra neutralizes or overcomes the animal's chakra (when transformed), then the transformed animal will come to its normal form again. i.e. in sword form.
    -The sword transforms into an elemental version of the animal and not an animal on itself.
    -If user gets hit by a jutsu while holding this sword, then he will receive an addition of +20 damage points.
    -Sword cannot sense chakra.
    -The size of the animal in which the sword transforms differs little to nothing from the normal size of the sword.
    Link to approval of the CW

    A CJ of my above CW

    (Shinigami/Fuuton: Ame Hari) - Shinigami/Wind Style: Rain of Needles
    Type: Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: When the sword is transformed in the porcupine (wind) form, it can shoot its sharp and spikes like visible "hairs" from its body instantly which travels with great speed (although easily trackable). These hairs are as sharp as highly pointed needles and can penetrate even highly dense objects with ease, much like knife slicing through butter. Since the hairs covers pocupine's almost full body, the hairs are shot in all directions covering wide range. The only region from where hairs aren't shot is porcupine's below part, where hairs are not present. The porcupine can control the firing of the hairs and can limit it to exact location/directions.
    Note: -Can only be used in porcupine version of Shinigami Reaper.
    -Can only be used 2 times per battle.


    Just a pic to show the hairs covering porcupine's full (almost) body.


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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Raiton: Doragon Za Sora (Lighting Style: Dragon of the sky)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user channels his/her chakra to his/her mouth. The user will then mold the chakra and turn it into Raiton chakra. The user will then expel the Raiton chakra from the mouth and as it leaves the users mouth the user will continue to mold the chakra into the form of a dragon. The large Lighting Dragon will continue its way to the enemy and before it reaches the enemy (or when the user see's its time) the user will then change the pattern, and size of the Raiton chakra dragon into much smaller ones that go into different directions striking the enemy from all sides.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Cant use another Raiton attack during the same move that this is used
    ~Can only be used 3 times during battle

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    Similar to countless existing techniques.

    Yo-yo
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra If special technique is activated
    Damage: 80 Damage
    Description:
    Originally made as a weapon, the Yo-yo was created back in the medieval times and was all metal. It was 2 circular piece's (like the yo-yo's of today) with spikes on the sides connected to a wire that was attracted to a glove. When you used it, it would come back to your hand. It was used as a weapon because it was fast, deadly, and returned to you. This yo-yo however (same design) is quit different. When the user "throw" the yo-yo and it reaches full length (and if the user wants to launch the shurikens) shurikens fly out of the sides out of slits in the yo-yo. Using the yo-yo's extremely fast spin while at full length it launches the shurikens from the sides at regular speed. The Yo-yo itself is made out of Titanium and the wire is made out of a Titanium alloy making it incredibly strong and almost unbreakable. It can hold 5 shurikens on each side and by simply pressing a button on the right side of the yo-yo the inner compartment ejects out making it easier to replace the shurikens if needed by inserting a special clip in.
    Special technique: By making the dragon hand sign with the yo-yo in the user's hand and by channeling small amounts of Raiton chakra into the yo-yo itself the next time the user extends the yo-yo to full length and release the shurikens they will be stronger, sharper, and un-seeable by the naked eye. By channeling Raiton Chakra into the yo-yo it not only makes the shurikens sharper, and stronger but also faster than ever before. Because of the Raiton Chakra inside the yo-yo, the yo-yo's mechanism to spin the yo-yo fast is "super charged" making it spin ever faster causing the shurikens to go even faster as well. The speed of the shurikens with Raiton chakra is like how fast someone moves with Raiton armor on, and because they are small and going that fast its nearly un-dodgeable.
    ~This weapon above can only be used by Kwalker394
    ~Only 1 extra clip can be used during one battle
    ~Cant use a Raiton attack for 2 turns after this weapons special technique is activated
    ~Special technique can only be used once during battle

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    Titanium reference needs to be removed. Invisible shurikens? No.

    Suiton: Taikai Sadou (Water Style: Ocean Movement)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 40 Damage
    Description:
    The user channels and molds chakra into the user's hand's. The user will then (by a source of water) "grab" a large amount of water and throw it into the air or at the enemy. The impact of the water will not only feel like a brick wall but can also flood the battle field for a few moments by the sheer amount of water used.
    (Like what Jinbei *from One Piece* did during the war while trying to save Ace. He threw a ocean's current into the air .)
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used twice during battle
    ~Can be used against the user if the enemy use's a Raiton attack while the water is still in the user's hands

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    Similar to existing techniques.
    Yo-yo
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra If special technique is activated
    Damage: 80 Damage
    Description:
    Originally made as a weapon, the Yo-yo was created back in the medieval times and was all metal. It was 2 circular piece's (like the yo-yo's of today) with spikes on the sides connected to a wire that was attracted to a glove. When you used it, it would come back to your hand. It was used as a weapon because it was fast, deadly, and returned to you. This yo-yo however (same design) is quit different. When the user "throw" the yo-yo and it reaches full length (and if the user wants to launch the shurikens) shurikens fly out of the sides out of slits in the yo-yo. Using the yo-yo's extremely fast spin while at full length it launches the shurikens from the sides at regular speed. The Yo-yo itself is made out of very strong metal and the wire is made out of the same metal alloy making it incredibly strong and almost unbreakable. It can hold 5 shurikens on each side and by simply pressing a button on the right side of the yo-yo the inner compartment ejects out making it easier to replace the shurikens if needed by inserting a special clip in.
    Special technique: By making the dragon hand sign with the yo-yo in the user's hand and by channeling small amounts of Raiton chakra into the yo-yo itself the next time the user extends the yo-yo to full length and release the shurikens they will be stronger, sharper.
    ~This weapon above can only be used by Kwalker394
    ~Only 1 extra clip can be used during one battle
    ~Cant use a Raiton attack for 2 turns after this weapons special technique is activated
    ~Special technique can only be used once during battle

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    Edited a lot

    Note: Took out the Titanium part and lowered the speed

    Kuro Nodo Komadori: Soshi Harakar (Black-Throated Robin: Element Brothers)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and summon The Element Brothers. The Element Brothers are 4 regular sized Black-Throated Robins. They have black faces, throat and upper breast with a brown, red, and blue crown and nape, and a red diagonal mark on the neck. The upper parts are grey, and the underparts black to dark grey over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark red. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the black neck marking is diagnostic.
    These birds were born with special chakra absorption that allows them to coat themselves with chakra that they are summoned with.
    The Element Brothers are L. pectardens Species in the Genus Luscinia.

    Abilities:
    When the user prepares for this jutsu, the user will channel a specific type of element chakra to his/her summoning tattoo.
    Katon: The Element Brothers are summoned and when attacking the target are coated with fire.
    Suiton: The Element Brothers are summoned and when attacking the target are coated with water.
    Raiton: The Element Brothers are summoned and when attacking the target are coated with lightning.
    Doton: The Element Brothers are summoned and when attacking the target are coated with earth.
    Futon: The Element Brothers are summoned and when attacking the target are coated with wind.
    Once these 4 birds are summoned they go after which ever enemy the user was concentrating on at the time of summon in either a straight line formation or spread out side by side. Once they hit the target they all disperse.

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-Throated Robin contract
    ~Can only be summoned 3 times per battle
    ~No other Black-Throated Robin can be summoned at the same time as The Element Brothers
    ~Which ever element chakra used on the Element Brothers cannot be used the same turn
    ~All four birds are A rank while each individual is only B Rank

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    Similar to existing summons.

    Genjutsu: Tori Meshi (Illusionary Arts: Bird Call)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will channel his chakra to his mouth while whistling the Robin bird call and preforming the Bird hand sign. The sound of this bird call (when heard by the enemey) will put them under a genjutsu because the chakra from the user will effect the targets senses making them see leaves falling. While the leaves fall the leaves then turn into Black-Throated Robins that are flying around the target in a tornado like manner pecking at the enemy, making them feel dizzy, and dazed. Whats really happening is the enemy is just standing there with a blank stare on their face.
    ~Must have signed the Black-Throated Robin Summoning contract
    ~Can only be used 2 times per battle
    ~No Genjutsu or Black-Throated Robin summon this turn or next
    ~Has to wait 1 turn before using again

    Summoning Approval ~HERE~

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    Sound genjutsu requires you to have sound release yourself unless its done by your summon and not you (even so...hum...) or its a music done by an instrument but that require permission from the original creator of the concept, RokuNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Bakuton: Kaitai) Blast Style: Dissassembly
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Taking advantage of the innate properties of Blast Style, the ability to destroy objects, the user focuses Bakuton chakra into their hand, and then holds it out at arms length. The user then releases the chakra, creating a white net-like pattern of Bakuton chakra which goes in the direction of the pointed hand. The net then travels through anything it comes into contact with, the Bakuton chakra creates minute, pin-point explosives as it travels through the object, appearing to "slice" whatever it travels through. As the net travels, chakra pulsates through the empty squares created by the net-like shape at regular intervals, thus creating perfect cubes of whatever the net travels through. Due to the strength of this jutsu, it is capable of traveling through any non-jutsu object, and any jutsu up to A-rank.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~As Blast is strong against tangible elements, this jutsu can go through up to S-rank of such elements
    ~When a jutsu is affected by this jutsu, the original user of the affected jutsu is unable to keep control of their jutsu because it's no longer a single whole, but a collection of cubes (ie. if used on a fireball, because the fireball is now a large collection of fire cubes, it will not continue on its original path because of the user's chakra, but will burn itself out as it's now only cubes of flame)
    ~When used on objects which "flow" (ie. air, wind, water, etc.), the substance will reform itself (as it naturally flows), but if the substance was part of a jutsu, the jutsu is now canceled
    ~Useable only 2 times a battle


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    Again, this wouldn't work on intangible elements. Taking into account the weaknesses and strengths of Bakuton, this would only work on earth, wood and other similar elements. Also, you need to take into account that bakuton is about explosions...using an explosive chakra. This pertains to the ability of molecular disassembly. And yet you're still trying to get it to affect energy based techniques which wouldn't happen. This, for me, doesn't pertain to bakuton but rather what you want bakuton to be about.
    Resubmitting/Revamped

    (Fuuton: Kaitai) Wind Style: Dissassembly
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Taking advantage of the innate properties of Wind Style, a sharp cutting aspect, the user focuses Fuuton chakra into their hand, and then holds it out at arms length. The user then releases the chakra, creating a white net-like pattern of Fuuton chakra which goes in the direction of the pointed hand. The net then travels through anything it comes into contact with, the Fuuton chakra slicing through whatever it touches at a celluler level. As the net travels, chakra pulsates through the empty squares created by the net-like shape at regular intervals, thus creating perfect cubes of whatever the net travels through. Due to the strength of this jutsu, it is capable of traveling through any non-jutsu object, and any jutsu up to A-rank, as long as it's tangible.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~This can only be used on tangible elements/objects
    ~When a jutsu is affected by this jutsu, the original user of the affected jutsu is unable to keep control of their jutsu because it's no longer a single whole, but a collection of cubes
    ~Useable only 2 times a battle

    ~Even though in the spoiler it's used on fire, this version only affects tangible objects

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    Similar to exiting technique approved quite recently.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Ushiro View Post
    Resubmitting:

    (Suiton: Ekitai Tojikome) - Water Release: Liquid Imprisonment
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user claps his hands together and materializes about four thousand semi-solid water cubes around the target that remain stationary when in the mid-air. The cubes are 4 feet wide and each one is linked to other cubes by strong cords made of water. By performing the Boar handseal, the user can make the cords retract and pull all of the cubes towards each other, crushing anyone caught between them. When they are all together, they form a large structure resembling part of a castle but become unable to stay in the air. The cubes may be spread over a maximum area 50 meters in diameter to target multiple opponents. This jutsu can also be used to create a defensive wall by creating the cubes in the form of the finished structure without pulling them together.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -No other water jutsu on the same turn
    -No A-rank or higher water jutsu next turn

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    Too big. 50 meters is too much. This would span about mid range around the target you intend to catch. And the cubes need to be smaller to account to that. The structure you define as a castle... Its too big and too much. And 4 thousand cubes? Again, too much. Make this reasonable. The best option of this working would be to create 8 cubes, forming a large cubic prison around your target, where water cords stretch from cube to cube.
    Resubmitting:

    (Suiton: Ekitai Tojikome) - Water Release: Liquid Imprisonment
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs the Bird handseal and materializes 8 semi-solid cubes of water around his target. They are each 1 meter wide and have numerous cords of water linking the cubes which are difficult to break due to their dense composition. After their creation the user may clap his hands together, causing the cords to retract and swiftly pull the cubes towards each other. Anyone caught between the cubes is crushed as a giant water cube is formed around them.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -No other water jutsu this turn
    -No A-rank or higher water jutsu next turn

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    Edited. 20 feet was too much

    Updating this:

    (Katon: Afutābānā)- Fire Style: Afterburner
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user clasps his hands together and creates a circular mark in the palm of each hand that emit powerful jets of flame that can propell the user for a total of 5 seconds. The jutsu's timing and jet power are controlled by the user. They can get the user to a target at mid range in 2.5 seconds.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

    To this:

    (Katon: Afutābānā)- Fire Style: Afterburner
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the snake handseal and gathers fire chakra on his palms in the the form of glowing red rings. At any time, the user can have the rings emit powerful jets of flame capable of propelling the user through the air faster than a ninja can run but can still be followed by the naked eye. The power of the jets are controlled by the user and may be activated and deactivated at will as long as the rings are still there. Over time the rings fade but the user can recharge them by performing this jutsu again.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns

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    To update a technique you need to link to it if its from the old thread or quote it if its from this one.

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    (Katon: Haihahaini) - Fire Release: Ashes to Ashes
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user performs the Rat handseal and summons a white mist around his opponent resembling a large eerie skull which moves with him if he attempts to leave it. The mist is actually a flammable gas and will ignite when it comes into contact with fire or sparks. It is partially transparent so the opponent can still see what is outside of it, just not as clearly. Once the mist is ignited, the opponent is assaulted by raging flames now resembling the head of a demon for several seconds, causing him to collapse in a smouldering heap after receiving serious burns. The mist can be exhaled from the mouth instead but would only be able to reach out to mid-range from the user and will not follow the opponent unless it makes contact with him.
    -Usable 5 times per battle

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    This isn't a B-Rank. Also, you should need to expel this gas, it wouldn't simply materialize around the opponent. Remember that fire is 80% of the time breathe related.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Oasis Nara View Post
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    (Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user extend his shadow and then performs the Rat hand seal in order to divide his shadow. As the shadow splits, it goes right and left, moving towards the opponent in an arc. This way it forms a huge circle around the opponent, making him hard to focus on both and to choose which one to defend from. When either of the shadows reaches his shadow it makes him unable to move.

    Note :
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    - Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
    - Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
    X-Declined-X Why is it A rank?
    (Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
    Damage points: 80
    Description:This is the advanced version of the shadow impersonation jutsu used by Shikaku Nara. The user gathers a massive amount of his shadow chakra in every part of his body, causing it to emanate a blurry dark shadow. Then he slams his hand onto the ground, causing tendrils of shadows to spout out from his body. He uses the shadows to form a monster called Shadow Dark Warrior. Its size is double of a human and it has shadow tendrils all around his body. He is able to extend the tendrils to long range, faster than usual and he can use them to stab the opponent while also binding him. The SDW can shape the tendrils into huge human fists in order to punch the opponent or slash him with his sharp nails, made of shadow. The SDW can block water, wind and earth up to S rank if he uses the tendrils to create a shadow shield, in front of him. However, he is vulnerable to strong lightning and fire techniques. The SDW forms in front of the user, while being attached to the users shadow.

    Note:
    - Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
    - Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
    - Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
    - Can Only be use twice
    - Last only 5 turns then auto vanished
    - Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
    - While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
    - After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.

    Picture of Shadow Dark Warrior


    X-Declined-X Its a Shadow. One, you're making it tangible be more reasonable of how you do it? I'll give it a go considering shadow tendrils are used to stab opponents. Two, its oped. Three, blocks matter based elements despite being a shadow. Four, Lasts too many turns.
    New Submission.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Folklore ability is able to deflect any bright light which the opponent releases and causing the bright light to turn back blinded the opponents. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire .

    Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
    Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
    Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
    Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
    Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara

    Picture of Folklore, the legendary mirror



    X-Declined-X Explain the colored segment. And pick either the elemental abilities or the tool.

    Wombat Approval Link : >>Here<<

    Quote Originally Posted by Oasis Nara View Post

    Resubmitting

    (Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40

    Description: The user extends his shadow and then performs the Rat hand seal in order to divide his shadow. As the shadow splits, it goes right and left, moving towards the opponent in an arc. This way it forms a huge circle around the opponent, making him hard to focus on both and to choose which one to defend from. When either of the shadows reaches his shadow it makes him unable to move.

    Note :
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    - Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
    - Can only be taught by Oasis Nara
    Note : Lowering the rank to become B-Rank and automatically edit the chakra cost also damage point


    (Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
    Damage points: 80
    Description:This is the advanced version of the shadow impersonation and shadow sewing jutsu used by Shikaku Nara. The user gathers a massive amount of his shadow chakra in every part of his body, causing it to emanate a blurry dark shadow. Then he slams his hand onto the ground, causing tendrils of shadows to spout out from his body. He uses the shadows to form shape of a dark creature made of shadow with transparent shapehe (Shikaku) called it Shadow Dark Warrior. Its size is double of a human and it has shadow tendrils all around his body. He is able to extend the tendrils to long range, faster than usual and he can use them to stab the opponent while also binding him. The SDW can shape the tendrils into huge human fists in order to punch the opponent or slash him with his sharp nails, made of shadow. The SDW immune from any cannon shadow jutsu, meaning that any shadow jutsu won’t work to trap the user shadow while activating SDW . However, he is vulnerable to strong lightning and fire techniques with similar rank. The SDW forms in front of the user, while being attached to the user shadow.

    Note:
    - Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
    - Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
    - Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
    - Can Only be use twice
    - Last only 2 turns then auto vanished
    - Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
    - While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
    - After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.

    Picture of Shadow Dark Warrior

    [spoiler]Note : One, I change it to intangible shaped. two, reduce it’s ability, three, change the blocking ability with only immune with cannon shadow jutsu. Four, reduce it’s turn, from 5 to 2 turn.[/spoiler

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire . The 3 elders merge all of their unique chakra upon the mirror to create a suction hole in the center of the mirror to suck in the evil elder and trap his ability inside the mirror, so every ability which the evil wombat elder has, it will also be performed by the mirror which is able to absorb 3 elemental ninjutsu

    Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
    Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
    Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
    Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
    Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara

    Picture of Folklore, the legendary mirror



    Note : I’ve added more explanation in the description which the mirror able to perform the unique ability of the evil Wombat Elder which is absorbing 3 elemental ninjutsu ( Wind, Fire and Water) by trapping the Evil Wombat Elder inside the mirror, it’ll be the same principle with the Manga when Minato Trap Kyubi inside Naruto. 2nd one, I’ve been erased the Tool abilities and choose the elemental ability only
    Wombat Approval Link : >>Here<<


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    ±± All Declined ±±
    Under the blue rule and by using Spoilers for something other than images/videos.
    Resubmitting

    (Kagemaru no hōhō) - Shadow Circle Way
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40

    Description: The user extends his shadow and then performs the Rat hand seal in order to divide his shadow. As the shadow splits, it goes right and left, moving towards the opponent in an arc. This way it forms a huge circle around the opponent, making him hard to focus on both and to choose which one to defend from. When either of the shadows reaches his shadow it makes him unable to move while the user is maintaining the Rat hand seal.

    Note :
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    - Must be a Nara Clan member to use this jutsu
    - Can only be taught by Oasis Nara

    ______________
    ±± Approved ±±


    (Kage no kurai senshi) – Shadow Dark Warrior
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 every use)
    Damage points: 80
    Description:This is the advanced version of the shadow impersonation and shadow sewing jutsu used by Shikaku Nara. The user gathers a massive amount of his shadow chakra in every part of his body, causing it to emanate a blurry dark shadow. Then he slams his hand onto the ground, causing tendrils of shadows to spout out from his body. He uses the shadows to form shape of a dark creature made of shadow with transparent shapehe (Shikaku) called it Shadow Dark Warrior. Its size is double of a human and it has shadow tendrils all around his body. He is able to extend the tendrils to long range, faster than usual and he can use them to stab the opponent while also binding him. The SDW can shape the tendrils into huge human fists in order to punch the opponent or slash him with his sharp nails, made of shadow. The SDW immune from any cannon shadow jutsu, meaning that any shadow jutsu won’t work to trap the user shadow while activating SDW . However, he is vulnerable to strong lightning and fire techniques with similar rank. The SDW forms in front of the user, while being attached to the user shadow.

    Note:
    - Can only be used with Shikaku Nara Biography and must be taught by Oasis Nara
    - Only Kage Rank shadow user able to use this jutsu
    - Only skilled shadow user able to use this jutsu through various hard shadow training method
    - Can Only be use twice
    - Last only 2 turns then auto vanished
    - Every ability of Shadow Dark Warrior, count as one of shikaku’s moves
    - While summon the dark shadow warrior, shikaku can’t use other shadow jutsu
    - After shadow Dark warrior vanished, shikaku can’t use shadow and Ninjutsu for the next 2 turn.

    Picture of Shadow Dark Warrior


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Already said this countless times: don't add useless restrictions. Also, there is no such thing as shadow chakra. This is basically you shaping your own shadow into a warrior entity that you control and can attack others with shadow tendrils. Don't make it something its not. This said, this technique's principle is ok but the description is a mess. Also, if this warrior lasts 2 turns, don't you need to keep fueling it with chakra for it to be maintained? If so, you need to have a chakra cost per turn to keep active. All of its abilities count as your moves, ok....but what rank are they? Because are all the tendrils and punches and what not S-Rank? If so, then its a DNR off the bat.


    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire . The 3 elders merge all of their unique chakra upon the mirror to create a suction hole in the center of the mirror to suck in the evil elder and trap his ability inside the mirror, so every ability which the evil wombat elder has, it will also be performed by the mirror which is able to absorb 3 elemental ninjutsu

    Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
    Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
    Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
    Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
    Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara

    Picture of Folklore, the legendary mirror



    Wombat Approval Link : >>Here<<

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    If you want this mirror, you need to submit it separetely. Its too powerful to submit like this.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-31-2012 at 08:10 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Yoton: Gomu Gantoretto) Lava Release: Rubber Gauntlets
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (+5 per turn active)
    Damage: None
    Description: Dodai will use his lava chakra and his unique ability to create vulcanised rubber, to shape two masses of rubber around his forearms to create a protective gauntlets. These gauntlets cover both of his forearms and the back of his palms giving him an excellent defence against taijutsu attacks and also a measure of protection from other ninjutsu. These gauntlets will remain on Dodai's arms until they are either destroyed or Dodai can no longer maintain the jutsu. When using the gauntlets Dodai can only use Lava, Fire and Earth jutsus as he must keep a steady flow of lava chakra to the gauntlets to maintain their defensive capabilities. Dodai can use these gauntlets to block all Taijutsu up to S-rank and any elemental ninjutsu/ninjutsu up to A-rank, with the exception of Lightning (and other lightning variants) which it can only block up to B-rank without Dodai taking any damage. Anything stronger will destroy the gauntlets.
    Notes:
    - Can only be taught by Shinta,
    - Can only use Lava, Fire and Earth techniques when using the gauntlets,
    - After three turns the user can only use two jutsu per move due to the strain of maintaining the gauntlets,
    - After five turns the jutsu will deactivate and the user will not be able to use Lava, Fire or Earth over A-rank for the following turn,
    - No lava jutsu greater than A-rank for the turn of activation.

    This is what the rubber gauntlets look like:


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    =_= "Dodai can use these gauntlets to block all Taijutsu up to S-rank and any elemental ninjutsu/ninjutsu up to A-rank, with the exception of Lightning (and other lightning variants) which it can only block up to B-rank without Dodai taking any damage." Need I say more? They are gauntlets. How can they defend you from Fire Majestic Annihilation? Rasengan? Earth Dragon? Mountain Smash? Pressure Damage? Be smart and reasonable. Think about what you're submitting. :sy:

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    (Kawasemi Kuchiyose: Augustine Shōnetsu no tori) Kingfisher Summoning: Augustine the Fiery Bird
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After making a blood sacrifice and performing a sequence of five hand seals, the user will place the hand on the ground or facing the ground below them and release there chalra to create the summoning seal. This will summon Augustine the largest of the Kingfishers and he can be considered as the boss of all the other Kingfishers. Augustine has a large crest and finely spotted white on black upper-parts with a chestnut breast band and otherwise white underparts with dark flank barring. He is large enough to carry four people on his back being about two times larger than Sasuke's Hawk summon and has a the ability to speak with his summoner. Augustine has the ability to perform all Fire jutsu without hand seals by releasing them from his mouth or using his wings where the jutsu may state using an arm swing (all within reason as its clear that he will not be able to use ALL fire techniques). Twice per battle Augustine can coat his beak with fire chakra and dive at a target inflicting them with damage equivalent to that of an S-rank fire jutsu.
    Notes:
    - Must have signed the Kingfisher Contract,
    - His Flame Diving attack can only be used twice per battle with three turns in between each use and S-ranked,
    - Can be summoned once per battle
    - Remains on the field for up to four turns per summon,
    - The only exceptions to the fire jutsus usable by Augustine are the Flame Rasengan and ones that require ninja tools or scrolls to perform.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Wasureta shinigami|The Forgotten Reaper
    Rank:S
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 40(20+ with additional techniques in use)
    Description: The user will pull a scroll out of his/her pouch. The user will wipe his/her blood across the scroll, the scroll will poof, and summon The Forgotten Reaper into his hands. The blade is sharp enough to cut straight through iron. Chakra can be channeled though this scythe freely to increase the scythe's cutting power. When holding the scythe the user becomes more proficient in ninjutsu and his/her taijutsu becomes stronger. The scythe is black and has a thin handle. When being held chakra is infused in the handle to give the user a good grip on the scythe.

    Note:The Forgotten Reaper is indestuctible
    Note:The user gets a +10 boost in taijutsu and a +5 boost in ninjutsu
    Note:Can only be used by Shade Dracova
    Note:The scythe will become 500 pounds if it is wielded by anyone but the owner or anyone given permission to hold by the wielder
    Note:The Forgotten Reaper weighs 50 pounds so the user must have somewhat training in taijutsu to prove his muscle strength.
    Note:The user cannot perform any genjutsu as a downside
    Note:Compatible with "The Reaper Art Of Dracova".

    It should look something like this:




    Dropping weapon here

    ~Declined. No cutting through Iron and unless you explain how you're getting taijutsu and ninjutsu damage boosts, you can kiss that ability goodbye~

    Kuchiyose no jutsu: Jishin furuete iru chikyū|Summoning Technique: Jishin The Quaking Earth
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Jishin The Quaking Earth will appear. Jishin meaning earthquake is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a black bill, black face and a vibrant red body like most male cardinals. He can fly at speeds up to 52mph. He is ruffly the size of two normal hummer automobiles side to side which is twice a big as a female. Naki can use any earth technique's up to A rank that doesn't require any handseals without touching the ground. Once per battle, Jishin can also sing a song that could cause a massive earthquake. If the song is sung continuously without the enemy stopping him the battle could fall apart making it almost impossible to fight on the ground.
    *Must have signed Red Cardinal Contract*
    *Can only be summoned twice*
    *When summoned she last for 3 turns in total*
    *The earthquake technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move*
    *Summoning him counts as a move also*
    *The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed*

    I do own the Cardinal Contract.

    ~Declined. No massive earthquakes or fainting opponents by singing songs. Also take out the bolded part~
    Wasureta shinigami|The Forgotten Reaper
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 40(20+ with additional techniques in use)
    Description: The user will pull a scroll out of his/her pouch. The user will wipe his/her blood across the scroll, the scroll will poof, and summon The Forgotten Reaper into his hands. The blade is sharp enough to cut straight through stone. Chakra can be channeled though this scythe freely to increase the scythe's cutting power. When holding the scythe the user becomes more proficient in ninjutsu and his/her taijutsu becomes stronger. This is because when the user is holding the scythe, chakra is being sent in and out of the sight like a wave. the chakra sent through the wave is enhanced by the special metal the blade is made from. When the enhanced chakra is sent into the body the muscles are enhanced the same way his techniques would be enhanced. This aids the wielder in holding the scythe with ease. The scythe is black and has a thin handle. When being held chakra is infused in the handle to give the user a good grip on the scythe.

    • The Forgotten Reaper is indestuctible
    • The user gets a +10 boost in taijutsu and a +5 boost in ninjutsu
    • Can only be used by Shade Dracova
    • The scythe will become 500 pounds if it is wielded by anyone but the owner or anyone given permission to hold by the wielder
    • The Forgotten Reaper weighs 50 pounds so the user must have somewhat training in taijutsu to prove his muscle strength.
    • The user cannot perform any genjutsu as a downside
    • Compatible with "The Reaper Art Of Dracova".



    It should look something like this:




    Dropping weapon here

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    The explanation of why it boosts your abilities makes no sense. And +20 to that? +10 to taijutsu? why? In essence this would make you weaker in taijutsu by the added weight, the volume and the need to actually wield it. Why would it make your taijutsu stronger? Makes no sense.

    Kuchiyose no jutsu: Jishin furuete iru chikyū|Summoning Technique: Jishin The Quaking Earth
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:The user will draw blood, perform a line of several handseals then he or she will thrust their arm downwards and Jishin The Quaking Earth will appear. Jishin meaning earthquake is a powerful Red Cardinal from Aries. He has a black bill, black face and a vibrant red body like most male cardinals. He can fly at speeds up to 52mph. He is ruffly the size of two normal hummer automobiles side to side which is twice a big as a female. Naki can use any earth technique's up to A rank that doesn't require any handseals without touching the ground. Once per battle, Jishin can also sing a song that could cause a large amount of pillars to shoot out the ground at high speeds and recede back into the ground. If the song is sung continuously without the enemy stopping him the opponent will eventually be hit by the technique. The pillars shoot upwards with enough force to potentially break bones.
    • Must have signed Red Cardinal Contract
    • Can only be summoned twice
    • When summoned she last for 3 turns in total
    • The earthquake technique cost an additional 60 chakra from her summoner plus it counts as a move
    • Summoning him counts as a move also
    • The summoner will be dizzy after she is dispersed
    • The pillars can stretch to long range



    I do own the Cardinal Contract.

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    You do? hum...doesn't exempt you from proving proof and linking the contract. Like it says in the first post of the thread, when submitting summons you need to provide a link to the contract.

    Chikyū rirīsu/ kasai rirīsu: Yama kaji!|Earth Release/Fire Release:Wild Fire!
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user will channel his/her earth chakra and send it deep into the earth. They will send it low enough until they have struck methane gas deep inside the earth. Once they have done this the opponent will create a tunnel which would lead the methane gas upwards to the surface. On the surface the user summons a cylindrical earth statue at chin height. The methane gas is inside the cylindrical earth statue. That statue will have one hole pointing towards the opponent and one pointing towards the user. Once this statue is forming the opponent will gather a large amount of fire chakra in the palm of his dominant hand. The user will release it all at once but keep it compressed in the palm of his dominant hand(example below). With the compressed fire bomb in his hand the user will stick dominant palm into the statue. Once his palm is fully inside thee statue the user will release the fire from his palm while keep it under control. With the added power of the methane gas the user will manipulate his chakra to create several wild animals which shoot out of the opposite end of the statue all at once in a fire explosion. The animals that come out consist of 1 elephant, 2 tigers, 3 eagles, and 3 gorillas. All of the flame animals are at the users control as long as their hand stays with the statue. All of the animals can explode into a fair sized pillar of flames depending on the size of the animal at the user's command as long as he has his hand inside the statue. The animals can attack all at once of one at a time. This technique is very dangerous to use.
    • Can only be taught by Shade Dracova
    • Hand must stay inside statue while using this technique
    • Hand will receive severe burns from being in the statue.
    • Must have mastered Katon and Doton
    • No katon rank B or higher after using this technique
    • The burns would be so severe that you are left unable to perform hand seals for the rest of the match.
    • Your nose will begin to bleed as effect of chakra exhaustion
    • This techniques counts as two moves
    • Can only be used once per battle


    Changes have been bolded.

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    Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by Flash07 View Post

    (Doton: Daichinoikari ) Earth Release: Rage of Earth
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: By concentrating his doton chakra into the earth, the user creates several spears of rocks from the ground and shoots it towards the opponent. The spears are about 1.5 to 2 meters in length. The thickness may vary according to the user's manipulation. These spears can be shot to reach upto 500 meters above the ground. The height upto which these spears can be shot are directly proportional to the time taken/distance covered by those spears inside the earth surface.For short distances, these spears shoot up very fast (instantaneously). Due to the force with which these spears are launched, they can easily penetrate through most of the defences.

    Note: The user has to keep atleast any one of his hands on the ground for the jutsu to be executed.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

    X-Declined-X B rank? Atleast make it S, usable once per battle and remove the instant part.


    (Doton: Daichinoikari ) Earth Release: Rage of Earth
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: By concentrating his doton chakra into the earth, performing 4 hand seals, the user creates several (about 20) spears of rocks from the ground and shoots it towards the opponent. The spears are about 1.5 to 2 meters in length. The thickness may vary according to the user's manipulation. These spears can be shot to reach upto 200 meters above the ground. The height upto which these spears can be shot are directly proportional to the time taken/distance covered by those spears inside the earth surface.For short distances, these spears shoot up very fast.

    Note: The user has to keep atleast any one of his hands on the ground for the jutsu to be executed.
    Note: Cannot use doton jutsu A rank or above in next turn.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

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    -New Submission-


    ( Ninjutsu: Tamashī no dansu ) Ninja Style: Dance of the soul
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short.
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: With this ability, you could read the minds of your opponent or ally which would help you in certain battles. The basic idea behind this technique comes from how when a clone is dispersed, the data collected by the clone goes back to the user. In the same way, the user here first releases his chakra into another person's body and then slowly and steadily (every second) takes them back bit by bit over time. This makes it possible for the user to know what the other person is thinking and so he can act accordingly. The other way round is also possible. The user absorbs/asks the person to inject his/her chakra into his body and then over time releases them so that the the other person may also know what he's thinking. With the help of this jutsu, one can detect if his ally/enemy is under any genjutsu.

    Note: Once activated, lasts for the entire battle.
    Note: The range is short when you inject chakra. But it can be used as far as a clone can remain away from the original body.
    Note: Cannot be used to get out of genjutsu. Can only know if the person is under genjutsu or not.
    Note: The user won't be able to know if he himself is under genjutsu.
    Note: Can only use it on 4 people (both ways) at a time.
    Note: Can only be taught by Flash07

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    Bolded part is were it gets DNR. Yamanaka clan and Sharingan users are the only ninjas allowed to have mind reading abilities and those are already made and pertain to their own unique abilities. Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-31-2012 at 08:27 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Genjutsu: Gyoushi Umou | Illusionary Arts: Stare Down
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A momentary genjutsu where the user would place a genjutsu on the opponent by saying the words “look and eyes” within a sentence or a phrase. The chakra that is placed within the opponent will regulate the flow of the opponents chakra within their brain to break their concentration. Thus leaving them open to looking into the eyes of the user as they hear those words.

    Note: The opponent has to be looking at a body part of the user other than the eyes.
    Note: A momentary genjutsu, the opponent will only look into their eyes briefly before being able to turn away to look somewhere else.


    Katon: Hinote Yogen | Fire Release: Prophecy of Fire
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: A technique that was developed by Vision through countless individual training session with the use of the fire element. Vision was able to create a devastating technique. First the user will perform six hand seals and release their chakra into the ground. With an addition of a single hand seal tiger, and using shape manipulation the fire will release out towards the atmosphere at an instant around the user and his opponent. The fire will trap them both and melt away the earth around it thus leaving an island. The fire itself is tall as twice the size of gamabunta. The diameter of the fire is 15 meters and will leave the user and the opponent at mid range as the longest range possible. The place where the fire sits in a circle will have lava underneath the fire as it will create lava from the earth that used to be there. As time goes on the fire will eat up all the earth slowly and turn it into lava. Slowly closing in on both fighters as the fight progresses on. Eventually, the fire will turn all the earth into lava, if the user or the battle hasn’t concluded, both fighters will die from the fumes of smoke, heat and lava.

    Note: Only able to use once
    Note: Takes 6 turns for the fire to melt the earth into lava completely
    Note: If the user is dead the technique is canceled
    Note: If the battle hasn’t ended by the sixth turn both fighters will die
    Note: Cannot use anymore fire jutsu’s after the use of this jutsu for the remainder of the battle
     
         
    Last edited by Vision; 10-25-2012 at 07:04 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Nagato.. View Post
    Suuiton: Poppukōn Kyōki | Water Release: Popcorn Insanity
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the tiger handseal and then snaps his fingers causing water molecules around the opponent to slightly condense and then continuously pop like popcorn causing a chain reaction to the other water in the air to pop as well, like a domino effect. The popping effect stings likea burning sensation to the touch of skin and it's main purpose is to be a nuisance to the opponent giving the user opportunity to attack.

    Note: Can only be performed 3x per battle
    Note: No S rank water this turn or the next.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..


    Suition: Igaina Suteppu | Water Release: Surprising Step
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the handseals Ram → Horse and creates a small layer of water to materialize at the bottom of the opponents soles that has slippery properties to make them uncontrollably slip and fall on their back or side when theyre walking or running. If the opponent is standing still the user can manipulate the water to move backwards or forwards to create the same effects.

    Note: Can only be used 3x per match
    Note: Must wait two turns before using again.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..


    Suiton: Shizen Furueru| Water Release: Quivering Nature
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the handseals Snake → Horse → Ox and focuses water chakra around the opponent causing the water moisture in the air to vibrate vigorously causing the opponent(s) muscles to quiver uncontrollably as the sensation consistently runs up their spine and theyre skin feels as though theyre being tickled to death. This immobilizes the opponent so that they cannot perform handseals effectively without taking a substantial amount of time to just form one handseal.

    Note: Can Only Be used 2x per battle
    Note: No other A ranked or above water techniques this turn.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..

    X-All Declined-X
    -Remove the damage points in all of the submissions
    -For the First and the Last. Add that the technique can only be used in environments high with moisture. Like Rain or mist
    Fixed

    Suuiton: Poppukōn Kyōki | Water Release: Popcorn Insanity
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs the tiger handseal and then snaps his fingers causing water molecules around the opponent to slightly condense and then continuously pop like popcorn causing a chain reaction to the other water in the air to pop as well, like a domino effect. The popping effect stings likea burning sensation (although harmless) to the touch of skin and it's main purpose is to be a nuisance to the opponent giving the user opportunity to attack.

    Note: Can only be used in environments high with moisture. Like Rain or mist etc
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..

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    ±± Approved ±±
    Edited

    Suition: Igaina Suteppu | Water Release: Surprising Step
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs the handseals Ram → Horse and creates a small layer of water using the moisture in the earth at the bottom of the opponents soles that has slippery properties to make them uncontrollably slip and fall on their back or side when theyre walking or running. If the opponent is standing still the user can manipulate the water to move backwards or forwards to create the same effects.

    Note: Must wait two turns before using again.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..

    ______________
    ±± Approved ±±
    Edited

    Suiton: Shizen Furueru| Water Release: Quivering Nature
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs the handseals Snake → Horse → Ox and focuses water chakra around the opponent causing the water moisture in the air to vibrate vigorously causing the opponent(s) muscles to quiver uncontrollably as the sensation consistently runs up their spine and theyre skin feels as though theyre being tickled to death. This immobilizes the opponent so that they cannot perform handseals effectively without taking a substantial amount of time to just form one handseal.

    Note: Can Only Be used 2x per battle
    Note: Can only be used in environments high with moisture. Like Rain or mist etc
    Note: No other A ranked or above water techniques this turn.
    Note: Can only be taught by Nagato..

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. Makes no sense. You can't predict how your opponent would react to it and its taking it way too far. Its borderlining what a genjutsu would do. And vibrations to produce this would collide with either quake or sound.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-31-2012 at 08:32 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Jeet Kune Do Approval.


    (Fuuton: Jeet Kune Do: Intaseputo Sakini) Wind Style: Jeet Kune Do: Intercepting Repel
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will coat a limb with wind chakra. When they intercept an attack from the opponent (intercepting one of the opponents incoming limbs) their chakra will wrap around the opponents limb and erupt in a small blast of wind shooting the opponents limb away from them leaving the opponent open. The blast doesn't do any damage to the opponent, it simply repels their limb away. If the opponents center is open such as their chest and stomach, the user can coat both of their fists with wind chakra, strike the opponents center in unison and the chakra will wrap around the opponents body, blasting them back by 10 meters traveling at two meters per second. This also will do no harm to them unless of course a solid object such as a wall in short range behind them. The movement of the user himself is limited to his own skill of what he has learned whether he is a specialist in Taijutsu or a Taijutsu master and Jeet Kune Do's abilities which is being able to move limbs in a fast pace, the speed they can intercept would have to be a little slower than the users speed. It cannot intercept swift users, EIG users, Sage Mode users or any other speed enhancing modes/techniques that would grant the opponent those levels of speed or speed that's above the user. Due to the boost that Jeet Kune Do training provides, the user tries to be faster as well as to move like water to get around opponents attacks as they were taught to. So it is by this the user can only intercept Non Enhanced Taijutsu. The movement speed of the user is only slightly above that of a normal Strong Fist user. However, coupled with the increased reaction time it makes the user capable of defending against most moves of Strong Fist with ease.

    Notes:
    - Can be used 5x per battle
    - The wind chakra does not increase the users speed
    - Can intercept Taijutsu up to B rank
    - Applying to both fists counts as using it twice thus only one other jutsu can be used in that turn.
    - The wind chakra does not increase the users speed as explained in the speed explanation. The user is still at his base speed
    - Must connect to the opponents limb with your limb to perform this (Just to be clear)
    - Must know Jeet Kune Do

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit.

    (Jeet Kune Do: Doragon's Kei) Jeet Kune Do: Dragon's Thorn
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage: 30 (+10 per strike to the chest)
    Description: Deriving from the destructive force of a kick from Bruce Lee. The user will send a kick to the chest of the opponent with enough force behind it to crack the opponents chest slightly, making it so that the opponents arms are slower due to pain. This would make the opponents arms slower due to the pain they will feel by moving their arms due to their cracked chest. It can also lower regular body speed in general to someone that isn't skilled in controlling their own balance as any step would shake their chest as well because when someone moves, nearly every muscle in their body moves as well. After the first kick to the chest, any other kick afterwards will reduce the speed of their opponents arms by 10% and their over all body movement by 5%, until finally, the opponent can't move their arms anymore and is reduced to walking instead of running due to pain. The kick will also knock the air from the opponents lungs, immobilizing them for a few seconds. The kick it'self will send the opponent away by 7 meters, allowing the opponent to catch their breath before needing to defend the user again.

    Note: Must be a Jeet Kune Do master to perform this.
    Note: People or masses with great density and muscle mass won't be affected as much or affected at all. Examples: Bee, 3rd and 4th raikage. In other words this attack would work greatly on someone with the body type of rock lee whereas someone like Raikage would more than likely just feel a hard kick with their muscle tissue absorbing a lot of the impact.

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    Incorrect chakra info. I won't check any technique that doesn't follow template. As a submitter is your duty to fill out the template properly and to actually follow it.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-31-2012 at 08:34 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ninjutsu sutairu: Hako no naka ni tojikome):. Ninjutsu Style:Trapped In A box
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: This jutsu is a very unique one,yet simple and is done by the opponent as a last defensive means in life threatening fights.The user starts by channeling his raw chakra across his body,he then creates a massive huge cuboid similar to a cone which he encases his body in, and which he continually channels chakra into.When in this box the user can decide to go underground and masks him self but must have his hand continually attached to the box ,if not the box will deactivate in a turn.The box defends the opponent from all B rank jutsu and below

    Note:Can only be used once a battle
    Note:Cant use any s rank or above ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
    Note:Last for two turns.

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    Don't resubmit. Similar to existing techs.

    Summoning Animal: Binturong
    Scroll Owner: Thunderbolt
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:N/A

    Description and Background:The binturong (Arctictis binturong), also known as the Asian bearcat, the Palawan bearcat, or simply the bearcat, is a species of the family Viverridae. It is the only member of its genus. The binturong is not a bear, and the real meaning of the original name has been lost, as the local language that gave it that name is now extinct. Its natural habitat is in trees of forest canopy in rain forests.
    The binturong is nocturnal and sleeps on branches. It eats primarily fruit, but also has been known to eat eggs, shoots, leaves, and small animals, such as rodents or birds. Deforestation has greatly reduced its numbers. It can make chuckling sounds when it seems to be happy and utter a high-pitched wail if annoyed; when cornered, it can be vicious.

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    Kuchiyose no jutsu: Maibahha no mīku Milzz:Summoning Technique:Meek Milzz Of Maybach

    Rank:C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage points:N/A
    Description:Meek Millz is a binturong who is 7 feet tall in height and weighs 77 kilograms,unlike his other pairs he is more of the mischievous and adventurous type. He is able to speak with his summoner and is skilled In the usage of wind techniques up to C rank.He carries 3 normal katana with him on his back which he uses to fight in combat and close range fights. He has a sharp scaly body which he uses to defend himself against low ranked techniques[D rank].

    Note~Can only be summoned once
    Note:Can only be taught by thunderbolt

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    Edited as you had a pretty useless summon.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-31-2012 at 08:43 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Burīzu o Shizume ϟ Calming Breeze
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Calming Breeze is a light red coloured staff with small, irregular grooves in it, it was said to be in the possession of Zephyr, the god of wind. The staff alters it's size to match the height of it's user for easy use. The staff is quite light, so that it can be used for fast strikes. However, if it comes into contact with someone other than the user (and hasn't been taught how to use it) it becomes so heavy not even the strongest shinobi can lift it. The staff's primary affinity is wind and has a few abilities that use this element. The Calming Breeze can coat itself and the user in a thick coat of wind chakra, equivalent to A rank and is only noticeable from short range. This allows for added damage done when fighting in close combat. The coat adds extra cutting power when striking due to the wind chakra. When this is activated the staff itself is capable of cutting through solid rock. Another ability the staff has is repulsion. Through the use of wind chakra, the staff can release surges of powerful wind that can push a shinobi in close range back to mid range. The blast itself goes up to mid-range and has slight cutting attributes. The blast is equivalent to an S rank wind technique that is sent by flinging the staff. Its final ability extends from its grooves. When the staff is swung, air goes through the grooves in all different directions, which causes it to be enveloped in a very small vortex of wind. With chakra applied, the vortex increases and has suction qualities, so if it is initially dodged, the opponent will be sucked back in and take the brunt of the attack. The vortex, with chakra applied it equivalent to C rank and can only affect enemies in very close proximity (while engaging in melee fights) of the staff, pulling only a limb or a part of the enemy but never with enough suction to pull the enemy in full.

    Restrictions
    – Indestructable
    – Can only be taught by Kryptiic
    – Repulsion can only be used three times per fight.
    – The vortex can only be used three times per fight.
    – Each ability the staff has counts as one of the users three moves when used.
    – Wind coat ability can only be activated twice per fight and lasts three turns (can be de-activated).


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    ±± Approved ±±
    Edited.

    Doton: Yawarakai Doshitsu | Earth Release: Soft Soil
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Doton: Yawarakai Doshitsu is a jutsu used to nullify earth based jutsu. The user will send their chakra up to short range around them and use it to soften the earth and what's under the surface. When an earth jutsu, A rank and below, is used it will simply fail to be constructed. The soft soil doesn't allow for strong enough binding or the earth, thus any earth jutsu extending from the ground within short range of the user simply collapse. However, it is the same for the user. This doesn't apply to terrain changing jutsu, such as Swamp of the Underworld.

    Restrictions
    – Can only be taught by Kryptiic
    – Can only be used three times per match.
    – No earth jutsu above A rank in the same turn.

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    Similar technique exists.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-31-2012 at 08:47 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Frozenstein View Post
    (Fuuton: Youkai Masurao) - Wind Style: Phantom Warrior
    Type: Attack / Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid (nearby the user)
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After a short sequence of 3 hand seals the user creates a human body from wind which has similar characteristics (shape) as a real person. However being made from only wind it can't be hit by average physical attacks. It's attack pattern is similar to a real human being when he is using free form taijutsu moves, but the actual attack is a concentrated wind blast generated upon contact. These attacks doesn't have any cutting ability, but instead blunt force which makes it more similar to a human being, but with increased strength. Any attack has the potential to send the opponent flying.
    - can only be used 5 times per battle
    - can only last 1 turn
    - can only be taught by Frozenstein

    X-Approved-X Changed the range, you dont form it long range behind the opponent.
    (Fuuton: Youkai Masurao) - Wind Style: Phantom Warrior
    Type: Attack / Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: After a short sequence of 2 hand seals the user creates a human body from wind which has similar characteristics (shape) as a real person. However being made from only wind it can't be hit by average physical attacks. It's attack pattern is similar to a real human being when he is using free form taijutsu moves, but the actual attack is a concentrated wind blast generated upon contact. These attacks doesn't have any cutting ability, but instead blunt force which makes it more similar to a human being, but with increased strength. Any attack has the potential to send the opponent flying. As the phantom is only wind, it can be moved in mid air freely.
    - can only be used 5 times per battle
    - can only be created 3 meters away from the opponent on his sides/above/under or in front of him
    - can only last 1 turn
    - can only be taught by Frozenstein

    Changed some parts to make it more useful and added a new restriction.

    (Raiton: Raikou Issou) - Lightning Release: Lightning Escape
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short (Short-Long when moving)
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A (60 if direct contact occurs)
    Description: The user performs a single hand seal and turn his body into lightning. Once turned into lightning he can move with high speed in every direction and even change directions freely. He can travel high into the air, on the ground, or in a water source. If the user turns into lightning he can’t see or hear anything around him, but can sense up to mid range. In lightning form he can’t even attack or use jutsus, however if the enemy gets in contact with him, he becomes paralised. User can't travel through earth, but if the opponent uses an earth jutsu againt the user, it can be destroyed.
    - can only be used 3 times per battle
    - can only be taught by Frozenstein

    Jutsu looks like this.


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    for being in detention.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-31-2012 at 08:49 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (fuuton-Fudou Daishi) wind style-floating mat
    Rank: A
    Type: Defence
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: After the user must have peformed a half tiger handseal,a flat sphere of wind instantly appeares below the user's foot,granting them ability to levitate into mid-air and also,navigate to their desired destination but this is rather a slow means of transportation.
    -twice per battle
    -lasts for 3 turns

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.


    (Raiton-Nyu san)lightining style- New sun
    Rank: forbbiden
    Type: Defence/offense
    Range: long
    Chakra Cost:50
    Damage Points:N/A(10 to user every turn its active)
    Description: after prforming the needed handseals,the user creates a huge bolt of lightining and launchs it into to sky afterwards,The bolts explodes upon reaching thus covering the sky with millions of tiny electricity static and bolts,then is further manipulated by the user and with the help of the rays from the sun that reflects on them.an extreme flash of light is produced.thus,dousing the entire area,this enables the user to execute a perfect escape and if possible a finishing hit on the target.
    -the blinding lights affects everybody on the battlefield including the user.
    -It takes a turn for the bolt to reach.
    -This jutsu is only possible with the presents of the sun.
    -lasts for two turn
    -ones per battle

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.

    Custom weapon

    (akuma ha-pu)Demon harp
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short/long
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The harp is made from pure stainless steel but light in weight and is capeable of conducting chakra.its strings are four in number and each strings produces different sharp tone when striked.Each tone brands it's listeners with a particular type of illusion.Also the harp acts as a barrier against illusion attacks thrown at the weilder. Because of it's portablity and stylishness,the weilder is able to strap
    it unto his or her back,whilst in battle.

    -Note: The user can't perform handseals whilst holding the harp.
    - the harp blocks
    illusiön based attacks,except advanced ones(forbidden or ms illusions) whilst in the user's possession.
    -illusion shielding counts as one of 3 moves a turn and can only shield 5 times per match.
    -Note: The harp can only be used by Seto Kaiba.


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    You need 2 permissions: RokuNR's and Zero Kelvin's.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-31-2012 at 08:51 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Igneel View Post
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    Fuuton/Katon:Mame kaze|Wind/Fire Release:Blistering Wind
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60( 5 per turn due to the blisters)
    Description:The user sends a stream of heated air towards their target.This stream would just pass by the target as a hot breeze but after a turn,their skin would get covered in blisters leaving them in a lot of pain.
    -Blisters appear on the skin after a turn
    -Can only be used 1 time per battle
    -Can only be taught by Igneel
    -Must have mastery over wind and fire
    -No S-rank wind/fire in the same turn
    X-Both Declined-X Simulataneous activation of 2 or more natures requires Yin/yang.
    Quote Originally Posted by Igneel View Post
    Fuuton/Katon:Mame kaze|Wind/Fire Release:Blistering Wind
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60( 5 per turn due to the blisters)
    Description:The user channels katon chakra to the air and then channels fuuton chakra to push the katon chakra to the desired location in the form of a hot breeze.This stream would just pass by the target as a hot breeze but after a turn,their skin would experience a burning sensation.After 2 turns,their skin would get covered in blisters leaving them in a lot of pain.
    -Target takes the 60 damage only in the next turn
    -Blisters appear on the skin 2 turns after the jutsu's use
    -Can only be used 1 time per battle
    -Can only be taught by Igneel
    -Must have mastery over wind and fire
    -No S-rank wind/fire in the same turn

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    You need to bold changes on resubmissions.
    Fuuton/Katon:Mame kaze|Wind/Fire Release:Blistering Wind
    Rank:A
    Typeffensive
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60( 5 per turn due to the blisters)
    Description:The user channels katon chakra to the air and then channels fuuton chakra to push the katon chakra to the desired location in the form of a stream.This stream would just pass by the target as a hot breeze but after a turn,their skin would experience a burning sensation.After 2 turns,their skin would get covered in blisters leaving them in a lot of pain.
    -Target takes the 60 damage only in the next turn
    -Blisters appear on the skin 2 turns after the jutsu's use

    -Can only be used 1 time per battle
    -Can only be taught by Igneel
    -Must have mastery over wind and fire
    -No S-rank wind/fire in the same turn

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    Don't resubmit. Makes no sense. And yes, it would need Yin/Yang as you're not manipulating first one element and then the other but rather one elemental chakra and without having it manifested (in this case as fire) using another to direct that one.

    New submission~

    Raiton:Me Hekireki jouten|Lightning Release:Eye of the Thunder God
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Type:Supplementary
    Chakra:30( +10 per turn active)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user does the seal of confrontation and channels raiton chakra through his optic nerves enhancing his vision.The raiton chakra channeled through the eyes helps the user keep track of opponents who have 5 speed lvls greater than what the user can normally track.Although it enhances the vision,it doesn't help the user react to it.
    >Helps keep track of opponents who have 5 speed lvl greater than what the user can noramlly track.
    >Lasts for 3 turns
    >Usable twice
    >User is immune to all forms of vìsual genjutsu while active
    >No raiton in the same turn
    >No S-rank above raiton in the next turn
    >Doesn't enhance users reaction in any way
    >Only taught by Igneel

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    Don't resubmit.

    Fuuton:Anshoubango Rakka Busata|Wind Release: Pin Drop Silence
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user channels his fuuton chakra around the opponents ears and creates a barrier of fuuton chakra.This fuuton chakra quicky pushes out the air in its place and forms a vacuum barrier.This vacuum barrier inhibits the entrance of anyform of sound waves making the target deaf.After 3 turns the vacuum barrier disappears due to the air pressure which acts on either side of the barrier.

    >Barrier lasts for 3 turns
    >There is air on both sides of the barrier
    >Only a vacuum barrier is created around the ear,as such there is still air around the users ear which would mean that the jutsu doesn't harm the opponents ear in anyway.Just cuts of the sound wave from entering.
    >No S-rank or above wind in the same turn
    >Can be used 3 times per battle
    >Can only be taught by Igneel

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    Don't resubmit. Collides with both existing techniques but also the CE Vacuum Pressure.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Resubmitting;

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Batoidea: Kagutsuchi)- Summoning: Batoidea: Kagutsuchi
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Kagutsuchi is a rather small sized eagle like ray, being roughly 15 feet long (not including tail length), while his skin colour is deep orange with red ringed black spots. Kagutsuchi is unique among the rays, in the fact that he prefers heat, opting for warm water springs rather than cold water. His elemental affinity of fire reflects this. Kagutsuchi is capable of using all Katon techniques B rank and below and is capable of releasing a S rank blast of fire similar to that of Great Majestic Fire annihilation twice per battle, all of which counts as a jutsu. Kagutsuchi’s venom glands are also specialized in the sense that due to it being melded and mixed with his Katon chakra, it gains a similarity to oil in the fact that it’s highly combustible, viscous, sticky, and the venom doesn’t become denatured at higher temperatures but rather works even better before eventually turning into a dangerous gas if heated to high enough temperatures. Kagutsuchi is capable of spewing his specialized venom from his mouth in vast quantities, unlike normal venom, rather than relying on the piercing capabilities of a stinger, Kagutsuchi’s spewed venom sizzles on contact with skin, resulting in bruises and burns being formed, in which the poison can seep into the enemies blood-stream. Kagutsuchi spewing his venom counts as a A rank equivalent elemental jutsu which he is capable of applying shape manipulation to if he so wishes. Once per battle, Kagutsuchi is capable of spewing a gigantic maelstrom Fire/Venom combo towards the target which has the power of a forbidden ranked jutsu, the maelstrom leaving a fair amount of toxic gas behind. Like all Stingrays, Kagutsuchi has passive electroreception, his electroreception working through water, or using the moisture within the air as a medium. Kagutsuchi is capable of speech. Kagutsuchi’s venom results in the enemies heart and breathing rate slowing, not to mention that they begin to feel pain on the afflicted area as the enzymes take effect, this is proportionate to the amount of venom taken in, anything more than 30 mls leads to the next step. If enough venom is spewed, the cells in the contact area begin to die, resulting in the enemy experiencing a decline in health over the next few turns before dying of heart failure due to the heart and breathing rate lowering exponentially.

    Note:

    - Kagutsuchi can only be summoned once per battle and stays for four turns.
    - Kagutsuchi is capable of spewing his venom normally three times per battle and counts as a move.
    - Kagutsuchi is capable of using his Venom/Fire combo once per battle which counts as a move.
    - Kagutsuchi’s electroreception spans out to Mid range.
    - The user is relatively unaffected by the enzymes within the poison, however will still be marred by the offensive capabilities of the substance itself.
    - Kagutsuchi is capable of flying through the air, and water, however while submerged under water he cannot use any of his techniques, and his strength is slowly sapped. Leaving him bedraggled after resurfacing, and causing a -20 damage deficit to his techniques for the remained of the turn. Though he has to be submerged for a good while and not simply a quick dip before exiting.


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    X-Declined-X Thats still not a weakness...
    Resubmitting;

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Batoidea: Kagutsuchi)- Summoning: Batoidea: Kagutsuchi
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Kagutsuchi is a rather small sized eagle like ray, being roughly 15 feet long (not including tail length), while his skin colour is deep orange with red ringed black spots. Kagutsuchi is unique among the rays, in the fact that he prefers heat, opting for warm water springs rather than cold water. His elemental affinity of fire reflects this. Kagutsuchi is capable of using all Katon techniques B rank and below and is capable of releasing a S rank blast of fire similar to that of Great Majestic Fire annihilation twice per battle, all of which counts as a jutsu. Kagutsuchi’s venom glands are also specialized in the sense that due to it being melded and mixed with his Katon chakra, it gains a similarity to oil in the fact that it’s highly combustible, viscous, sticky, and the venom doesn’t become denatured at higher temperatures but rather works even better before eventually turning into a dangerous gas if heated to high enough temperatures. Kagutsuchi is capable of spewing his specialized venom from his mouth in vast quantities, unlike normal venom, rather than relying on the piercing capabilities of a stinger, Kagutsuchi’s spewed venom sizzles on contact with skin, resulting in bruises and burns being formed, in which the poison can seep into the enemies blood-stream. Kagutsuchi spewing his venom counts as a A rank equivalent elemental jutsu which he is capable of applying shape manipulation to if he so wishes. Once per battle, Kagutsuchi is capable of spewing a gigantic maelstrom Fire/Venom combo towards the target which has the power of a forbidden ranked jutsu, the maelstrom leaving a fair amount of toxic gas behind. Like all Stingrays, Kagutsuchi has passive electroreception, his electroreception working through water, or using the moisture within the air as a medium. Kagutsuchi is capable of speech. Kagutsuchi’s venom results in the enemies heart and breathing rate slowing, not to mention that they begin to feel pain on the afflicted area as the enzymes take effect, this is proportionate to the amount of venom taken in, anything more than 30 mls leads to the next step. If enough venom is spewed, the cells in the contact area begin to die, resulting in the enemy experiencing a decline in health over the next few turns before dying of heart failure due to the heart and breathing rate lowering exponentially.

    Note:

    - Kagutsuchi can only be summoned once per battle and stays for four turns.
    - Kagutsuchi is capable of spewing his venom normally three times per battle and counts as a move.
    - Kagutsuchi is capable of using his Venom/Fire combo once per battle which counts as a move.
    - Kagutsuchi’s electroreception spans out to Mid range.
    - The user is relatively unaffected by the enzymes within the poison, however will still be marred by the offensive capabilities of the substance itself.
    - Kagutsuchi is capable of flying through the air, and water, however while submerged under water he cannot use any of his techniques, and his strength is slowly sapped. Leaving him bedraggled after resurfacing, and causing a -20 damage deficit to his techniques for the remained of the turn. Though he has to be submerged for a good while and not simply a quick dip before exiting.
    - Due to Kagutsuchi's fire nature he is susceptible to water based attacks and takes half extra damage when hit by one.

    Signed the Batoidea contract

    X-Approved-X


    Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Batoidea: Morph)- Summoning: Batoidea: Morph

    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: n/a
    Description: Morph is a unique Eagle-Stingray who is capable of manipulating his body to achieve various effects. Morph is a bit larger than Sasuke's hawk and is capable of swimming through both air and water. Despite not being able to use jutsu, Morph makes up for it through a unique set of abilities. Morphs first ability is that he is able to create a clone through a division like process, normally when dividing Morph and his newly created clone are both half the size of the original, however it can be that one is much larger than the other. Morph is capable of dividing into dozens of mini-morphs, his division only being limited by the fact that he can never become smaller than a standard house-mouse. Of course the mini-morphs are capable of coming together to once again form "normal morph". Separating counts as a jutsu, however merging back into one does not. Morph also has the ability to freely grow as many Stingers as he wants, of whichever size, anywhere on his body. Thus Morph is capable of becoming like a porcupine with spines made of stingers. He (whether single or divided) can also grow or enhance already grown stingers with chakra or even elemental chakra, enhancement counts as a single A rank jutsu. Lastly while coated in stingers, Morph (or Morphs in unison) are/is capable of performing a continuous Gatsuuga like attack that allows them/him to plow through enemies, or even grant them/him underground movement by drilling through the ground. This unique move pool allows Morph to be a valuable asset in battle. The poison on Morphs stingers are also truly formidable. Three senbon sized stingers are potent enough to quickly release their protein toxins into a opponents body so as to induce severe cell damage and cramping that would be capable of leaving a limb incapacitated within a turn. While also negatively affecting the opponents breathing and heart rate to a degree that may leave them slightly sluggish.
    Note:
    - Morph can stay on the field for 4 turns.
    - Morph can only be summoned Once per Battle.
    - Morph can only separate a maximum of 4 times.
    - Morph can freely shoot his stingers.
    - The 'Mini-Morphs' are mentally linked to eachother.
    - Morphs's Gatsuga like attack can only be used 3x and counts as a S rank jutsu (or an S rank jutsu on a whole if multiple Morphs use it simultaneously.)

    Signed the Batoidea contract

    X-Declined-X Morph could split up, that is ability enough. Submit the other abilities as separate techniques.

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    (Katon: Nenshou no Baindo)- Fire Release: Burning Bind
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user weaves four handseals and then stomps their foot onto the ground, upon stomping their foot on the ground eight "ropes" of fire emerge from the ground around the opponent in a octagon formation, each rope being roughly three meters away from the opponent. Each rope of fire is directed towards the opponent's waist and upon contact with the opponent each rope connects with one another in the form of a circle which is tied around the opponent's waist, binding the opponent in place while the fire rapidly expands across their body, eventually covering them in flames and burning them completely.

    Note:

    - Can only be used twice per battle.
    - No Katon jutsu in the same turn.
    - Can only be taught by Tybone.

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    Similar to existing techniques. Fire chains, raw chakra chains, chakra ropes, fire ropes, lightning ropes, earth ropes, etc... All done.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ( Genjutsu: Soeki Kyuuzou ) Illusion Arts: Pest Proliferation

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 + (Decoy Jutsu)
    Damage Points: N/A ( Non quantifiable)
    Description: The genjutsu begins by replicating a weak, easily releasable genjutsu (by Kai or small pain) and place it on any number of opponents within range. An example would be False Surrounding, changing the area around the targets. When the target moves to release it, the second, stronger, genjutsu will recognize the output, be it a chakra peak caused by pain or a Kai. This is based on the notion that certain genjutsus, for their complexity and strength, require sharper pain or bigger chakra outbursts in order to be broken, anything smaller will not affect the genjutsu. After having recognized the peak, the genjutsu will duplicate and repeat it in increasingly higher frequency. This will overload the opponent, preventing the usage of complex jutsu (A and above), genjutsu or summoning jutsus, and exhaust the chakra reserves, equivalent to a chakra cost of a Kai for each peak.
    *Can only be used once every 4 turns*
    *Allows multiple targets, but not multiple layers of this same genjutsu*
    *Costs as 2 jutsus*

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    I have a problem with this and its that it would make strong genjutsu (and weak) unreleasable. Basically, upon release, this triggers so it becomes unreleasable. Its pretty unreasonable as its worded. I like the overal ability but it needs to be put in a manner that is can be approved.

    ( Fugu ) Blowfish

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: +5 / +10 per needle
    Damage Points: 80 / 90 per needle
    Description: Fugu is a hollowed wooden stick, made with Chakra Tree wood. It is a personalized weapon, allowing only the user to wield or manipulate it (Even if the opponent has Wood chakra or similar). By charging chakra into the Fugu and blowing through it, the user is able to shoot out Chakra-materialized thread needles, which gain substance with any elemental chakra or other properties. The user will first pour out chakra ( +5 for Normal or any Basic Element : +10 for CE/Advanced Elements or Poison/Other Substances), which will then be amplified and replicated by the Fugu stick, materializing a tiny needle, which gets shot out with great speed (near-bullet-like). The Fugu has the ability to be increased or decreased in shape and density, allowing the user to wield it like a staff or for further more accurate shots. If the opponent steals the Fugu from it's own, it will grow spikes, which will attach themselves to the thief. Likewise, when being held as a staff, the Fugu can grow spikes for extra damage.
    *Creating a shooting needles, while wasting chakra per single shot, does not count towards the jutsu count*
    *Charging an Advanced Element into the Fugu will materialize a needle with the properties of said element at it's most basic/main form. For example, if the user has Lava, it will be molten rock, not rubber.*
    *Poisons or other substances are only achieved by having a living source of that substance presence in the field ( Venomous Summons, for example, Hallucinogenic Mushrooms, etc). In the absence of such, the user will waste one of the 3 jutsus to "feed" said substance to the Fugu and have it memorized ( For example, if the user has Samples with her, or if the living source belongs to the opponent, but the user has retrieved a sample from it ). Allows the creation of 3 needles per battle*
    *With one handseal, up to mid-range, the user can infuse chakra on the Fugu remotely, to charge the defensive spikes or to create a needle. In the later, it can adjust itself and shoot a needle up to short-range*

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    Like it a lot. Indeed your custom making skills are "deliciously pleasurable". However, I have a few notes. Everything it does needs to count as a move. you need to rank the projectiles, enabling a more specific defense for them. Also, even if fast, these projectiles need to be visible. Rest seems at second glance ok.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-31-2012 at 09:19 PM.

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