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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    -Resubmitting Again
    Quote Originally Posted by Kurotsuchi.. View Post
    (Meiton: Kirudesuto)- Dark Release: Hungry Dragon
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid-Long Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user gathers Dark chakra in both hands and brings them together, he then releases a Dragon composed of Dark chakra with help of shape manipulation, from his left hand, the dragon if clashed against a B rank or lower Fire or lightning based technique it will "eat" the technique meaning it absorbs it and will simply grow bigger, faster and stronger, however the user must keep the dragons tail attached to there hand, meaning if he stops the chakra channeling the dragon will simply dissapear. It has enough strength to smash an opponent to the ground and break a few bones.
    - Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    - Must wait 1 turns before using again.
    - Must be a Dark user.
    - Can only be taught by Mihawk.

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    You'll need to absorb something first to perform this.
    Quote Originally Posted by Kurotsuchi.. View Post

    Resubmitting~

    With the changes you pointed out, also made it S rank, and changed chakra & damage, aswell as decreased number of useage, and interval before using again.

    (Meiton: Kirudesuto)- Dark Release: Hungry Dragon
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Mid-Long Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: 80 Damage
    Description:
    After having user convert the absorbed chakra from the Dark Release: Inhailing Maw from an A or lowered ranked Lightning/Fire technique or S rank and lower raw chakra , then releases a Dragon composed of Dark chakra with help of shape manipulation, from his left hand, the dragon if clashed against a B rank or lower Fire or lightning based technique it will "eat" the technique meaning it absorbs it and will simply grow bigger, faster and stronger, however the user must keep the dragons tail attached to there left hand, meaning if he stops the chakra channeling the dragon will simply dissapear. It has enough strength to smash an opponent to the ground and break a few bones and whatnot.
    - Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    - Must wait 3 turns before using again.
    - Must be a Dark user.
    - Can only be taught by Kurotsuchi..

    -Declined-
    Keep it as it was, an A-rank. Also define how stronger the dragon gets when it absorbs other techniques.
    Changed it back to A rank and explained how stronger it gets when it absorbs other techniqes.
    (Meiton: Kirudesuto)- Dark Release: Hungry Dragon
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid-Long Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    After having user convert the absorbed chakra from the Dark Release: Inhailing Maw from an A or lowered ranked Lightning/Fire technique or S rank and lower raw chakra, then releases a Dragon composed of Dark chakra with help of shape manipulation, from his left hand, the dragon if clashed against a B rank or lower Fire or lightning based technique it will "eat" the technique meaning it absorbs it and will simply grow bigger, faster and stronger meaning it becomes an S rank technique, however the user must keep the dragons tail attached to there left hand, meaning if he stops the chakra channeling the dragon will simply dissapear. It has enough strength to smash an opponent to the ground and break a few bones and whatnot.
    - Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    - Must wait 3 turns before using again.
    - Must be a Dark user.
    - Can only be taught by Kurotsuchi..

    ~Approved.~

    (Fuuton: Uindo Kuruma) - Wind Release: Wind Wheel
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: B rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 40 Damage
    Description:
    The user releases a certain amount of wind through there mouth wich then is rapidly spun around the user and carries the person as inside a wheel. It is highly sharp on the outside, able to cut through solid objects such as C rank and lower earth techniques and slice through human flash with little to no trouble at all. Most comonly used for traveling.
    - Can only be used by Kurotsuchi.

    ~Declined. You made this sound like a mode, so restrict the time you can use this technique move~

    Summoning Animal: Dracos
    Scroll Owner: Kurotsuchi..
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: To be Created.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: To be Created.
    - Dracos Wikipedia Info Source.
    - Permission from Riku.. to submitt a sub-species of Lizards.

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    Last edited by Passion; 09-29-2012 at 09:35 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    ( Koukurage Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Dokueki) Box Jellyfish Summoning Jutsu: Agwe's Venom

    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Allows the user to summon a mist composed of thousands of nano-sized box jellyfishes. The mist moves concisely as a whole. Due to their small size, they don't require a large amount of water as per se, rather each individual is able to survive inside very small water sources, which would enable them to survive, for example, inside the droplets of the mist or inside the human body. Using their powerful venom, they infect the body and eat away the flesh, causing great pain throughout the process. Since they're minimal they are unable to preform jutsus of any kind. As they're summoned they bring forth a water mist, distinguishable from the regular mist by the naked eye only because of an soft and discrete unnatural glow on the droplets of the mist, as if it it alive, unless they're summoned directly into water, thus keeping the glow but summoning no additional water.[/COLOR]
    *It is possible to be infected and not feel severe effects, rather just pain from the venom, if the boxes are blocked early on*
    *Can only be used once*
    *Can't be summoned directly on the opponent*
    *Last 4 turns in the battlefield, take care of an average adult within a turn*

    -Declined-
    Define the size of the water sources where they can be summoned in. By just saying water you could pretty much summon them in the rain. Also, change the last restriction to at least 2 turns.


    ( Koukurage Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Taitou Oubochi ) Box Jellyfish Summoning Jutsu: Baron Cimitiére's Accession

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user performs a couple of handseals, summoning a giant jellyfish underground. The jellyfish possesses several dozens of tentacles, instead of 4. After being summoned, Baron Cimitiére rises them above ground, bursting forth with great power and strength, similar to the final dance of the Kaguya. In it's initial accession, it is capable of piercing through most metals crystals and other substances up to it's rank, and the strongest (Diamond. Tungsten) one rank lower. Afterwards, it can wrap around his opponents to crush them and poison them with it's venom.
    *Can stay in the battlefield for 3 turns*
    *Can only be summoned twice, if he didn't sustain critical damage*
    *Requires one turn in between usage*
    *The user must be on the ground or less than 10 meters from it to summon Cemitiére*

    -Declined-
    Overpowered


    ( Koukurage Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ou ) Box Jellyfish Summoning Jutsu: Maman Brigitte

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: The user preforms one handseal, summoning Maman Brigitte. She comes forth covering the whole battlefield with a thick mist, throwing off chakra sensing techniques. The mist carries a strong genjutsu, as it is filled with both Maman and the summoner's chakra, making the opponent hear obscenities coming from a female voice, without being able to detect it's origin. Anyone trapped within the mist is flooded with images of black roosters, dead spirits and a burning taste and smell of rum and red peppers, all rounded and perverted by Maman's voice as if mocking them and the ones they lost. Maman herself is a great box jellyfish the size of a human, light enough to swim through the mist, taking advantage of the confusion of her opponent to strike him from behind. This takes the concept of a living Genjutsu, of a mist, a summon and, genjutsu mixing together. The genjutsu constantly shifts it's chakra signal, making it so that it adapts to any shifts in the opponent's chakra flow, making this a constant genjutsu even if the opponent is able to constantly shift his chakra or body, as long as the opponent is in the mist.
    *The thick mist can't be broken or pushed away by anything lower than it's rank*
    *The mist throws off Natural Chakra gathering, preventing Sage Mode Users from gathering enough to break the Genjutsu*
    *Can only be used once*
    *Lasts 4 turns*

    -Declined-
    Oped. If you want the bolded part, reduce the range of the mist (which I guess it's up to long-range). Also, edit your first note/restriction to something more reasonable. A b-rank wind technique could blow a bigger area than some S-rank techniques, depending on what the jutsu specifically does, meaning rank doesn't mind here, but the strength/size of the wind able to blow it away.
    ( Koukurage Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Dokueki) Box Jellyfish Summoning Jutsu: Agwe's Venom

    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Allows the user to summon a mist composed of thousands of nano-sized box jellyfishes. The mist moves concisely as a whole. Due to their small size, they don't require a large amount of water as per se, rather each individual is able to survive inside very small water sources, which would enable them to survive, for example, inside the droplets of the mist or inside the human body. Using their powerful venom, they infect the body and eat away the flesh, causing great pain throughout the process. Since they're minimal they are unable to preform jutsus of any kind. As they're summoned they bring forth a water mist, distinguishable from the regular mist by the naked eye only because of an soft and discrete unnatural glow on the droplets of the mist, as if it it alive, unless they're summoned directly into water, thus keeping the glow but summoning no additional water.
    *It is possible to be infected and not feel severe effects, rather just pain from the venom, if the boxes are blocked early on*
    *Can only be used once*
    *Can't be summoned directly on the opponent. The combined amount of boxes is about 1 cubic meter*
    *If summoned on rain, they'll fall to puddles, and are unable to move out of the puddle unless they find adjacent water pathways*
    *Last 2 turns in the battlefield, take care of an average adult within a turn*

    ~Declined. Your jellyfishes cannot be nano-sized and therefore only visible to doujutsu users.~

    ( Koukurage Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Taitou Oubochi ) Box Jellyfish Summoning Jutsu: Baron Cimitiére's Accession

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user performs a couple of handseals, summoning a giant jellyfish underground. The jellyfish possesses several dozens of tentacles, instead of 4. After being summoned, Baron Cimitiére rises them above ground, bursting forth with great power and strength, similar to the final dance of the Kaguya, having the same power as it. Afterwards, it can wrap around his opponents to crush them and poison them with it's venom.
    *Can stay in the battlefield for 3 turns*
    *Can only be summoned twice, if he didn't sustain critical damage*
    *Requires one turn in between usage*
    *The user must be on the ground or less than 10 meters from it to summon Cemitiére*

    ~Declined. The crushing part I understand but not the bursting forth with the power of Dance of the Seedling Fern technique I don't. How can a jellyfish that lacks high amounts of mass do so much damage?~

    ( Koukurage Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ou ) Box Jellyfish Summoning Jutsu: Maman Brigitte

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 80
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: The user preforms one handseal, summoning Maman Brigitte. She comes forth covering the whole battlefield with a thick mist, throwing off chakra sensing techniques. The mist carries a strong genjutsu, as it is filled with both Maman and the summoner's chakra, making the opponent hear obscenities coming from a female voice, without being able to detect it's origin. Anyone trapped within the mist is flooded with images of black roosters, dead spirits and a burning taste and smell of rum and red peppers, all rounded and perverted by Maman's voice as if mocking them and the ones they lost. Maman herself is a great box jellyfish the size of a human, light enough to swim through the mist, taking advantage of the confusion of her opponent to strike him from behind. This takes the concept of a living Genjutsu, of a mist, a summon and, genjutsu mixing together. The genjutsu constantly shifts it's chakra signal, making it so that it adapts to any shifts in the opponent's chakra flow, making this a constant genjutsu even if the opponent is able to constantly shift his chakra or body, as long as the opponent is in the mist, mid range from Maman
    *The thick mist can't be broken or pushed away by anything lower than one rank bellow it's rank, this is because of the consistency of the mist, battling against the power of the wind/scattering agent*
    *The mist throws off Natural Chakra gathering, preventing Sage Mode Users from gathering enough to break the Genjutsu*
    *Can only be used once*
    *Lasts 4 turns*
    *The genjutsu strikes mid-range from Maman Brigitte, despite the mist covering up to long range*

    Note: Added a note explaining the resistance, but lowered the rank nonetheless (Not B rank, as you said, or it would be really easy to break the jutsu).

    ~Declined. Is the chakra cost faulty or does this consist two S - ranked techniques? Please clear that up when resubmitting the technique~
     
         
    Last edited by Passion; 09-30-2012 at 08:52 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Rahl-san View Post
    (Futon: Aiorosu no Nemui Akubi)- Wind Release: Aeolus's Sleepy Yawn
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will perform two hand seals, Dragon → Horse, and then focus his wind chakra onto any spot on the battlefield. The user will form a flat circle shape, with a powerful, spiraling suction force like a vacuum. The suction has the ability to pull objects with great speeds towards it, sending it through the circle shredded and sliced due to the natural cutting properties of wind. The wind circle will release the object backwards in an uncontrollable spiraling manner, similar to how it draws the object in.
    Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
    Note: Usable three times per battle
    Note: No wind techniques in the same turn

    -Declined-
    Reduce range to mid. Define the size os the circle and what it can drag inside, including their size.
    (Futon: Aiorosu no Nemui Akubi)- Wind Release: Aeolus's Sleepy Yawn
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will perform two hand seals, Dragon → Horse, and then focus his wind chakra onto any spot on the battlefield. The user will form a flat circle shape, with a diameter of four meters. The circle has a powerful, spiraling suction force like a vacuum. The suction has the ability to pull objects or tangible techniques (such as water/earth) with great speeds towards it, sending it through the circle shredded and sliced due to the natural cutting properties of wind. The object at maximum size must be the same size of the wind circle or smaller in order to draw it in. The wind circle will release the object backwards in an uncontrollable spiraling manner, similar to how it draws the object in.
    Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
    Note: Usable three times per battle
    Note: No wind techniques in the same turn

    ~Declined. Define how long it takes for an object to be released from the circle.~
     
         
    Last edited by Passion; 09-29-2012 at 11:21 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Drizzeh View Post
    Resubmitting with the changes you pointed out, I didn't change the Rank though if that's alright.


    [Suiton: Fuka Yari]Water Release: Shark Arrows
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: "Suiton: Fuka Yari" is a water based technique in which the user produces a source of water on both palms, they will then proceed to continuously launch small arrows/spike shaped figures . This technique is performed by channeling chakra to the palms and creating water from it, upon launching the water in small portions, the user will focus on shape manipulation and chakra manipulation to make them as sharp and destructive as possible. Gif #1 shows the movements made to release the water arrows, Gif #2 shows an example of the technique's speed.
    Note Usable only twice per battle.
    Note: A maximum of 35 arrows can be released per use.


    -Approved-

    Just note that each of those 35 bullets obviously won't have the strength of an A-rank


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    [Kuchiyuse no Jutsu; Kin-Gin Gama] Summoning; Gold and Silver Toads
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, with a little of his blood on hand performs the Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram handseals then clasps his hands. This calls upon the Gold and Silver Toads of Myobokuzan. They are two male toads, both the size of Fukasaku/Shima. They appear on the user's shoulders, channeling chakra to their feet so that they don't easily fall off, however, they can also leap off for various purposes. The appearance of the toads match with their names, Gamakin: The Toad of Gold is a golden colored Toad in a black coat and a golden circle on the cloak (the back). Gamagin: The Toad of Silver is a silver colored toad also wearing a black cloak, however, the circle on the cloak is silver. The Gamakin can perform Fire Techniques not requiring handseals up to Rank A, while Gamagin can perform Wind techniques up to A Rank. These Toads specialize in Wind and Fire combinations. Gamakin has greater physical strength than Gamagin, while Gamagin has greater speed.
    Note: Must have signed the Toad Contract.
    Note: Sage Mode is not required to be able to summon them.
    Note: They stay on the battlefield for only 4 turns before returning to Myobokuzan.
    Note: All techniques used by the Toads counts towards the user's 3 jutsu per turn limit.

    -Declined-
    Define their strength and speed, since you mentioned them and change the 4 turns in battle to 3



    [Doton: Shou Tsuchi Bakuhatsu] Earth Release: Destructive Earth Eruption
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs the Boar-►Dog-►Tiger handseals then releases his/her chakra into the earth by placing the palms on the ground or channeling it through the legs. By manipulating the earth with his/her chakra, the user may create a line of pressure within the earth. At the user's will, the earth will begin a violent eruption, causing chunks of rocks to emerge from below. Rising along with the rocks is a great amount of dirt, with this technique, the user can create a horizontal line to defend certain techniques, or direct the eruption towards the opponent.
    Note: Usable only twice per battle.
    Note: No S Rank earth in the same or following turn.


    -Declined-
    This hardly deserves to be an A-rank


    Note to person checking the above CJ (Earth Release: Destructive Earth Eruption). I have done my own research and I have went through the wiki, even though this was done in the Naruto Anime, it's only for the starting (Shippuden Opening 9) of the anime. It's just a dramatic effect and not an actual jutsu.
    Resubmitting these two.

    [Kuchiyuse no Jutsu; Kin-Gin Gama] Summoning; Gold and Silver Toads
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, with a little of his blood on hand performs the Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram handseals then clasps his hands. This calls upon the Gold and Silver Toads of Myobokuzan. They are two male toads, both the size of Fukasaku/Shima. They appear on the user's shoulders, channeling chakra to their feet so that they don't easily fall off, however, they can also leap off for various purposes. The appearance of the toads match with their names, Gamakin: The Toad of Gold is a golden colored Toad in a black coat and a golden circle on the cloak (the back). Gamagin: The Toad of Silver is a silver colored toad also wearing a black cloak, however, the circle on the cloak is silver. Gamakin can perform Fire Techniques not requiring handseals up to Rank A, while Gamagin can perform Wind techniques not requiring handseals up to A Rank. These Toads specialize in Wind and Fire combinations. Gamakin has greater physical strength than Gamagin, but has the speed of a regular small toad. Gamagin is faster than Gamakin, but has the strength of a regular sized toad.Since the Toads are not able to gather/manipulate Senjutsu chakra, the strength and speed respectively, is very limited. While Fukasaku can lift Gamabunta, one of the largest toads, Gamakin can only lift the weight of a small toad such as Gamakichi. Gamakin has the raw speed of a regular S-Class ninja.
    Note: Must have signed the Toad Contract.
    Note: Sage Mode is not required to be able to summon them.
    Note: They stay on the battlefield for only 4 turns before returning to Myobokuzan.
    Note: All techniques used by the Toads counts towards the user's 3 jutsu per turn limit.
    Note: Usable only once per battle.

    ~Approved. Speed chart references won't be tolerated though, so I removed it~

    [Doton: Shou Tsuchi Bakuhatsu] Earth Release: Destructive Earth Eruption
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the Boar-►Dog-►Tiger handseals then releases his/her chakra into the earth by placing the palms on the ground or channeling it through the legs. By manipulating the earth with his/her chakra, the user may create a line of pressure within the earth. At the user's will, the earth will begin a violent eruption, causing chunks of rocks to emerge from below. Rising along with the rocks is a great amount of dirt, with this technique, the user can create a horizontal line to defend certain techniques, or direct the eruption towards the opponent.
    Note: Usable only twice per battle.
    Note: No S Rank earth in the same or following turn.


    ~Approved~
     
         
    Last edited by Passion; 10-03-2012 at 11:21 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon: Hītoreizā [Fire Style: Heat Raiser]
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs 2 handseals and channels their fire chakra into a source of heat/fire and drastically increases the temperature of that source, sending a dangerous Heat wave up into the sky. The heat wave causes severe burns on an opponent/summon/target within the range of the heat source.
    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle
    Note: Cannot be input into an opponents jutsu.
    Note: No fire techniques above B rank for one turn.
    Note: No Fire techniques above A Ranked in same turn.

    X-Pending-X Heat waves have been made and the only way to transfer heat or raise temperature is conduction, convection and radiation. So declined on my end you should explain the technique better. But another mod can put his input here.

    ~Declined. I agree with Xylon said, so think of a better way explaining it without stepping into the boundaries of other techniques/abilities~

    Kurōn no Fukushū {Genjutsu Release: Revenge of the Clones}
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user channels their chakra into an opponent and forces them to see multiple illusions of themselves throughout the battlefield. This works especially well when an opponent has one or more clones of themselves on the battlefield causing the genjutsu to effect the clones as well. The opponent will see multiple clones of themselves that are trying to attack him and is paralyzed in fear. If there are clones on the battlefield, instead of them being paralyzed they try to attack their original by throwing a barrage of kunai with explosive tags. The kunai that are thrown take on the image of another clone attacking the original, which makes the image more terrifying. The user takes on the image of the opponent while casting this genjtusu, throwing multiple kunai at the opponent(s). This jutsu can be cast against multiple opponents to make them attack each other with multiple kunai with ex tags instead of being paralyzed in fear.
    Note: If casting against multiple opponents, can only be used once per battle, otherwise can be used 3x per battle.
    Note: No Genjutsu above A Ranked for remainder of battle if this technique has been used 3x.
    Note: No Genjutsu can be used the turn after this technique is used.
    Note: The user must wait 5 turns before using this technique again.

    X-Declined-X In reality its a really simply technique, i dont understand the high rank. Drop it atleast till B-rank.
     
         
    Last edited by Passion; 10-17-2012 at 01:27 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Merīgōraundo) Earth Release: Merry-Go-Round
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user makes a simple change to the battlefield, by sending chakra into the ground, rotating the crust of the earth a full 180 degrees, making the user and the opponent swap places. This happens at high speeds akin to Earth Release: Moving Earth Core, allowing them to avoid attacks; as such it makes the opponent lose their balance.

    - Can only use 4 times per battle
    - No S-rank earth techs in the same move
    - Only whats on the ground is effected
    - Can only be taught by Black Uchiha

    X-Declined-X Make it mid range, switching earth in long range battle feild completely puts your opponent against his own technique. Otherwie define how long the technique extends in metres. lasly, i think i saw this before. Post any previous submitions if there are.

    (Doton: Atorasu no ribenji) Earth Release: Atlas' Revenge
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 (25 & Restricts users Doton to zero for the rest of the battle)
    Description: The user makes one handseal and stomps/hits the ground pulling the earth apart leaving a thin layer of earth over a 90m deep hole lined with spikes (unknown to the opponent). The pulled apart earth flips up long range from behind the user and opponent enclosing them in a cone of earth in which has small holes to let light in. Due to the lack of earth underneath only C-rank and below earth techs can be used by the opponent while inside the cone, this tech strips the user of his Doton for the rest of the battle. After 2 turns (users) the thin floor collapses causing all thats standing on it to fall into the deep hole also making the cone of earth crumble and fall, with A-rank force, onto anything within it. Due to the holes in the cone any attack on it A-rank and above causes it to fall prematurely and cause the cave in.

    - Can only use once per battle
    - User takes 25 damage and loses Doton for the rest of the battle
    - The Byakugan can see the hole in the ground
    - No F-ranked teches for the rest of the battle
    - No S-ranked elemental jutsu while in use

    X-Pending-X Leaving for another mod

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    ±± Declined ±±
    This is too similar to existing techniques that create hole unknown to the enemy with a thin cover on top. Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Akuma Yuuchi|Devil Bringer
    Rank:S
    Type:Weapon
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40(+10 per turn)
    Damage:N/A
    Description: Devil bringer is a weapon forged by Igneel himself.He made this weapon to incorporate with his fighting style.Devil bring is a glove that is worn by the user on his right hand.The gloves has 4 kunai shaped blades attached to it and these blades are connected to the gloves by a long thread and so the blades can be dispatched at the will of the wielder.Both the thread and the blades are made up of a special material only found in the land of kumogakure such that they are virtually indestructible.User can control the threads and thereby control the blade using his chakra.The threads can extend upto mid range.
    -Must be from kumogakure
    -Must be atleast sannin rank
    -No special abilities besides being indestructable
    -can only be used by Igneel

    X-Declined-X Nothing indestructible
    EDIT: Approved.


    Ninpou:Kikaku Kae|Ninja Art: Projectile substitution
    Rank:C
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description:After throwing a projectile,the user can substitute the thrown projectile with anything that the user is carrying with him at the moment for example like substituting kunai with shuriken.User cannot swap the thrown projectile with his CW.
    -Cannot swap with CW
    -Can only be taught by Igneel

    X-Pending-X There are numerous ways it could be exploited but then again it should be fine. Another mods input needed

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    Don't resubmit. Has the potencial to be overused and exploited in excess
     
         
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    Genjutsu: Senkyoushi | Illusionary Arts: Missionary
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A (40 if done with hand seals)
    Description:
    The user will induce a simple but precise and useful illusion onto the enemy making him feel a blow was just delivered to the back of his knees. As a reflexive response, in reality his legs lose strength and the enemy falls on his knees immediately. While quite simple, the technique serves many purposes and leaves the enemy vulnerable. The technique can target other areas and deliver similar blows to induce other similar reflexive actions. If the user does 2 handseals (boar+rat) he can cause the enemy to experience pain and even target the enemy's neck from behind, making the enemy experience severe pain and loss of limb control for a few moments, collapsing to the ground as if a precise blow was given to a nervous cluster in the neck. Off course in reality, no damage is done but the body is fooled into reacting in a reflexive manner to the illusionary blows.
    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    Note: For the hit to cause damage, the user needs to do the handseals.
    ____________
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    Magarime | Flip
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    A simple Taijutsu move, Flip pertains to a set of specific movements that the ninja can execute to dodge, counter, avoid or simply to move on the battlefield in a more advantageous way.While any ninja can do this simple movement, this technique takes it to another level by, through training, combining it with chakra and making it that much faster, combining the muscle strength with focusing chakra into the limbs. This specific set of movements consists on flips, either lateral flips (or cartwheels) back flips or front flips. The user will charge his muscles and spring his body, performing either a lateral, front or a back flip, with or without the help of his hands. If he uses his hands he can do up to 4 consecutive flips that will bring him from short to mid range from his initial position. The speed of the flips is directly proportionate to the skill the user has in Taijutsu and can be enough to dodge certain techniques/attacks if the ninja is skillfull enough. Since its a basic Taijutsu movement, the user can perform it to attack by using weapons or techs that would logically be usable in the situation and with the Flip technique.

    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
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    Ro-ru | Roll
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: C-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    A simple Taijutsu move, Roll pertains to a set of specific movements that the ninja can execute to dodge, counter, avoid or simply to move on the battlefield in a more advantageous way. While any ninja can do this simple movement, this technique takes it to another level by, through training, combining it with chakra and making it that much faster, combining the muscle strength with focusing chakra into the limbs. This specific set of movements consists on rolls, either back rolls, front rolls or side rolls (also called strifes or strifing rolls). The user will charge his muscles and take a lower stance, while using the strength of his body to either do a lateral roll, a front roll, or a back roll, with or without the use of his hands. The roll can be done on the ground (shorter but faster) or by jumping and rolling at the same time (longer but slightly slower). The speed of the rolls is directly proportionate to the skill the user has in Taijutsu and can be enough to dodge certain techniques/attacks if the ninja is skillfull enough. Since its a basic Taijutsu movement, the user can perform it to attack by using weapons or techs that would logically be usable in the situation and with the Roll technique.

    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
    ____________
    -Approved-
     
         
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    breathless rush (Ni ken iki sattou)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:This attack focuses on the ability of the user using two swords.He user will take in a deep breath while wielding a sword in both hands.After he has done he will unleash a barrage of attacks using the two swords.These strikes will be quicker and stronger than normal kenjutsu attacks as they are mixed with chakra and with the user holding his breath and releasing a breath with each strike each strike will become stronger and quicker than a normal barrage of attacks.
    -Only usable three times a battle
    -Must be taught by Lysander

    4.20 to 5.00
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ppOQ3Pf-CDA
    ||Approved||

    Lightning parry (raikou kassha)
    Type:Defense
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:The user will combine chakra with both of the swords he is holding and parry strikes with are hit at him.While parrying the user will releases lightning from the blade but only a small amount so that when every parry is successful lightning travels from the users swords through the enemy's and into there body slowly paralysing them.
    -Must be taught by Lysander
    -Only usable four times a battle
    ||Declined|| Define "slowly paralyzing them"

    Forceful strike (chikara dageki)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:While holding a sword in both hands the user will alternate stabbed lunges at the opponent and releasing a short stream of chakra from one sword and then a short stream of lightning with the other.When the chakra should strike the user it will leave a slight bruise and cause the area hit to become weakness making the place his more vulnerable,If the user should clash swords the release of chakra at the tip of the sword will push the sword/or weapon back leaving the opponent open.If the lightning should hit the enemy it will leave a slight burn and paralyses the area struck for a two seconds.
    -Must be taught by Lysander
    -Only usable four times a battle
    ||Declined|| Do not Resubmit
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    |Kei-Sekken| Strong World Insight
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:N/A
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description: To deal with high paced attacks or taijutsu that a Kei-Sekken user can't normally counter, the user will cut off his sight, hearing, touch, and smell while activating his mind's eye and utilizing chakra to enhance it. Through this, the user will rely on this and be able to sense incoming threats within the vacinity of close range and counter effectively with minimal, non wasted movements. While this is activated the user can't offensively attack as techniqually, he/she has no idea where the opponent actually is unless in close range, but can use defensive moves that will hurt the opponent.
    Notes:
    -Lasts a full turn after activation.
    -Usable 3x
    -Can't react to things that practically disappear when moving.

    ||Declined|| Do Not Resubmit

    |Kei-Sekken| Strong World Nail Punch
    Rank:C-A
    Type: Attack
    Range:short
    Chakra:15-30
    Damage:30-60
    Description: The nail gun punch is a special technique where the user punches the opponent with a lot of force. Utilizing chakra, the user causes the force to pass through the skin into the insides of the body from the impacted spot. (Allowing for passing through hard defenses) The user then releases the chakra in controlled bursts, causing multiple impacts on the infected spot for maximum damage. This happens in a fluid motion, simulating striking a nail into iron and is capable of easily breaking through terrain. There are 3 version, the 3 ren punch (C-rank), 4 ren (B-rank), and 5 ren (A-rank).
    Notes:This technique can be used up to the chakra limit of "60". (2 A-rank versions, 3 B-rank versions, 4 C-ranks, or anything imbetween that equals 60)

    ||Approved||

    |Tebukuro Armanents| Gloves of Amanents
    Rank:S
    Type:Supplementary|Attack|Defend
    Range:Self
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A (+10 to taijutsu)
    Description: The original Kei-Sekken user was a brawler who firmly believed that the body was your best weapon. He was forced to enter a tournament where some type of equipment was mandatory so he had an old friend forge him special gloves. The gloves of armanents are special gloves crafted from not only a very durable fiber capable of deflecting sword strikes and other sharp objects, but are highly resistant towards nature effects allowing a user to even perform a hand stand on fire or even an electrically charged floor (Of course the rest of their body would still be effected). The fiber being not only flexible but incredibly hard makes punches devestating, making it perfect for Kei-Sekken users. Although, their specific purpose is that they amplify all moves within the Kei-Sekken style by one rank in power and effectivness that have to deal with utilizing the limbs or body.

    Notes:
    -Any 5 Kei-Sekken techniques can be amplified and any technique can only be amplified once.
    -The gloves can limit chakra flow so only two non Kei-Sekken or taijutsu moves can be used per turn.
    -Only usable by Taiketsu Yagami and other Kei-Sekken users

    ||Declined|| Do not Resubmit

    Dropping:

    "Bakusaiga"
    Rank:S
    Type:Weapon
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:N/A
    Description: "Bakusaiga" the weapon of legend that gave the holder the supposed power of a tailed demon. Whoever held this weapon would get a very dense chakra so ominous that they were put into legends and folk tales. Taiketsu Yagami found this sword and the truth behind it came with a tablet only readable by those combatible with the chakra. The sword's abilities actually come from a monster known as "Yama" A artificial chakra monster with chakra levels so dense and high, it was considered a 0 tailed beast. The Sage of Six Path's decendent was able to kill off the monster and seal his chakra into the sword while engraving a seal that allowed the chakra to mix with the person who held it if compatable. When the user releases the seal, they become infused with the chakra making them a monster in a sense by giving them demonic chakra with very high chakra levels.

    ~Abilities:
    -This sword syncs with the user making the user's chakra become very dense and demonic while taking on a green hue, increasing the power of non-elemental ninjutsu[+5] aswell as making all chakra based techniques to be equal to an elemental technique of the same rank.
    -The amount of chakra being channeled causes the user's chakra levels to rise substantually. (They can be considered a tailed beast without a tail like Kisame)
    -When a foreign object touches the user's chakra, they get burned in a similar manner to Naruto in his incomplete form since the chakra is so demonic.
    -The sword itself is virtually indestructable due to alloy it is made from and can stand very high temperatures.

    ~Restrictions:
    -While using this sword, the user can only use techniques that require creating the jutsu or element itslef since this chakra can't be channled into foreign objects.
    -The sword's granted abilities last 5 turns after activation
    -The user suffers in a similar manner to Naruto while wielding it after activation. (After 5 turns of using this chakra, the user's body begins to shut down starting with right arm, next turn left arm, next turn legs, and then next turn body making them completely paralyzed and in need of medical attention.
    -The user is limited to only two moves a turn while this is active
    -Can only be wielded by Taiketsu Yagami (Anyone else, the chakra would severly injure as it can't mix with theirs.)
     
         
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    Sarutahiko's Rakuseki Shibu | Sarutahiko's Fallen Branch
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short - Medium
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    It is said that the arm from the God - Sarutahiko was slashed off during a duel with his older brother who secretly wished for him to fail as the protector of all living things that reside on earth. When the arm was decapitated, it's said that from the heavens it fell and landed in a temple in the deserts of the land of Wind. For many years his arm was to have been guarded by the monks who inhabited the temple until the bandit raids. From then it rested with the temple unknown to those in the outside world. Though the myth is popular among local towns there is a weapon that is said to be forged with the power of the arm. This metallic arm fits on a humans arm up to around the elbow. It's colored with a dull grey and a black wrist. Even though this ancient weapon may looks old, the abilities is great. The branch metal arm harnesses the power that is surely mother earth to a godlike extent. Strengthening the abilities if related to Earth and smashing down the uses of water. If a source of chakra is underground, whether it be a enemy shinobi or sneak attack the weapon tightens on the wearers arm to give them a warning that something is impending in the ground below them. This arm has a permanent force upon it that equals "Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique", this however only applies in the arm that the weapon is worn giving physical attacks a +10 in offensive power that uses the arm - taijutsu mostly. This branch arm is a taijutsu users dream giving the boost of power in one arm, if a target is hit with that arm it's as if they've been directly in the chest with battering ram, severely damaging their internal organs. Due to the arms god-like power it's indestructible and cannot be broken by means of other weapons or elements. Anything else is listed below..

    Note: Indestructible
    Note: The +10 boost in physical attacks only applies to those in which the arm is used - certain taijutsu attacks
    Note: Sensing of chakra within the Earth only - up to mid-range/usable twice per conflict
    Note: Increases "Earth Release: World Shaking" by 2 ranks and also as the earth shakes, jagged rocks protrude from the ground
    Note: If a water attack comes towards the user or under them, the arm reacts by deflecting the water chakra - usable once per conflict
    Note: If another shinobi attempts to wear the branch, it turns them into stone - thus killing them
    Note: Once per conflict during a taijutsu attack if the arm makes contact with the target , the branch will release a large amount of chakra and increases the weight of the traget to an extremely high amount. This makes then drop to the ground by the sheer weight for 1 turn
    Note: All abilities are counted as a technique per turn other than the +10 to physical attacks
    Note: This weapon may only be worn by a biography used by Coyote unless stated otherwise

    ||Declined|| The description is polished, but this technique is void of any true restrictions, and it's pretty overpowered.

    Dropping this weapon
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    (Katon & Fuuton : Hotaru) - Fire & Wind Release : Fireflies
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user concentrates his fire chakra into the air around the designated area and uses shape manipulation to form firefly-like shapes in the air made out of fire that float in the air. They do not fly around like real fireflies and can only cause burns upon contact with the enemy. The real danger is after the first phase of technique, the user will then clap his hands and then begin channeling his wind chakra into the already-existing fireflies in the area and cause them to radiate even brighter and then go up in an fiery explosion, severely burning the enemy.

    Note : Created by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : User themselves are capable of getting caught in explosion if too near
    Note : No Fire and Wind Techniques above S-rank to be used in the same turn
    Note : While fireflies are in the air, no wind or fire techniques of any rank is to be used

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    Why is this S-Rank? Not only that but this has several techniques very similar all around. Its just tiny fireflies of fire. We have butterflies, falcons, eagles, sparrows, etc etc all of fire that work in a very similar manner.

    (Suiton : Shokushu Hakkyou) - Water Release : Tentacle Mayhem
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user performs a single handseal and concentrates his water chakra into four locations on the ground around him in a short-range radius. This will then allow him to materialize seemingly harmless, meter-long puddles of water on the ground, making the opponent think that it doesn't do anything but a moment later, huge tentacles of water erupt out of the puddles and have a long-range reach, similar to that of the 'Earth Release : Great Stone Golem' technique. Through the manipulation of water chakra within the tentables, the user allows the tentacles to take on physical characteristics. In other words, the tentacles will be capable of lifting opponents off the ground instead of letting them slip through since it is water. The water tentacles are capable of taking in the targets as well, drowning them within the tentacles.

    Note : Created by -Yusuke-
    Note : Usable only three times per battle
    Note : Number of water tentacles can be reduced
    Note : No Water Release techniques above A-rank in the same turn
    Note : Puddles of water can only be created short-range from the user
    Note : Water Tentacles last only 3 turns after activated or until released

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    If they are kept active, they need to spend chakra to keep them active. The reference to the stone golem makes no sense.
     
         
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    Summoning Animal: Frogs
    Scroll Owner: Kamui...
    Other Users who have signed contract: none
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:n/a
    Description and Background:
    the frogs are close relatives to the toads they vary in size and are know to be very mean to hostiles the larges known frog stands at the same height as gamabunta hey are mostly green skinned and have yellow tounges they hale from the deeps swamps outside of konohagakure and where signed by Kamui.. at the age of 4 they are very commonly found as babies hopping around Konoha

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    Don't resubmit. All Toads are Frogs and some Frogs are Toads. Thus, with Toad being a cannon contract, no frog contract.
     
         
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    (Katon: akuma no ringu 悪魔のリング) - Fire Release : The Devils Ring
    Type : Offensive/Offence
    Rank : S
    Range : mid/long
    Chakra cost : 45
    Damage points : 75
    Description : The user takes a deep breath as they perform a few seals. As the finish the seals, the swallow their breath and push the chakra to their feet, releasing it into the ground. Fire shoots through the earth and surrounds the opponent underground. Flames shoot from the earth in the form of a circle around the opponent, surrounding them in a 10foot flaming wall. The flames twist and join at the top (like a reverse twister) the second the shoot from the earth and engulf the opponent in hellish flames.

    Note : Created by Saizo
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : If wind is added to it, the flames get stronger and intensify. It then becomes a forbidden jutsu and emits heat that burn anything within mid range.
    Note : Wind has to be added the second the flames shoot up from the earth, so the user will take 30 damage from standing within mid range.

    Either modify or state what needs to be changed if need be.

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    Sound Release: Resonance (Ototon: Kyoshin)
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Resonance is a damage dealing sound release technique. After performing a series of hand seals, the user focus on index and middle finger to write two circular seals in the air until they form into glyphs. These glyphs then move on the ground and the air until they position themselves appropriately to strike the correct area. The user then performs a seal of confrontation to activate the technique, following which both glyphs release a strong sound wave in between their vicinity. The waves are of the same resonance which results in a reaction, the aftermath is a huge concussive blast which spreads horizontally 360 degrees crushing everything with a tremendous force.
    Note: Requires Sound Release and Fuuinjutsu.
    -Usable twice/battle.
    -Cannot use S rank sound release the following 2 turns.
    -Visual Description of the glyph (Ignore the vertically laid ones beside the person, the only one above him and below):

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    Erm. . While we're at this
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post1392703
    Infernal Prison is a similar technique i created, im requesting permission to brand such glyph techniques by adding a Prefix to their name.
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    Sealing Technique: Dark Ecriture (Fuinjutsu: Yami no Chojutsu)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10/turn)
    Damage Points: 10/ turn (to the user)
    Description: Dark Ecriture is a technique that allows the user to detect hidden seals within the users field of vision. The technique activates using a seal of confrontation following which many sealing formula appear around the users left eye. They then begin to sink inside using the lens which itself is a painful process where the user needs to keep his eye open. Once performed the seals inside the eye filter the users vision making everything appear grayscale. All seals however that are hidden or apparent starts to glow, the user is able to see the glow even if the seals are hidden behind objects or clothes. With added focus he is able to read them identifying their purpose.
    Note: Usable twice in battle, Lasts 4 turns.
    ____________
    -Declined-
    Add that it can only detect seals up to its own rank.

    Sealing Technique: Flying Thunder God (Fuuinjutsu: Hiraishin)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20/Seal
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The technique is a espionage and anti-espionage technique. The user performs a series of hand seals and touches the seal or an object a sealing technique(Curse seals, FTG etc) is applied on. An FTG formula then appears on the user of the seal and from there replicates itself on every other person the seal is applied(by the same user of course) on allowing Minato to track the origin of a technique a precisely the number of people the same technique is used over. Adding to the ability to transport himself using Flying Thunder God technique, Minato is able to have a telepathic contact with the user allowing him to communicate before making any attempts.
    Note: Usable twice per battle.
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    Leave the thunder god alone lol
     
         
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    (Doton : Chawan) - Earth Release : Tea Cup
    Type : Offensive
    Rank : A
    Range : Mid - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : The user perform a single hand seal then slam his both hand into the ground beneath to raise up a giant tea cup made of earth with size 50M in diameter from beneath the opponent ground where the opponent as the center of the cup, when the earthen giant tea cup completely forming and trap the opponents inside of it, then it shot out numerous sharp earth spike from around the wall of the cup and also from the base of the cup which will impale the opponents. While simultaneously the cup arise, the user open up a portal above the opponent sky to drop down the cup lid, and closed off the cup when the cup completely forming. Size of the cup lid same size with the tea cup, and the lid will causing a small tremor when comes in contact with the surface of the cup. This lid shall prevent the opponent to escape to the sky.

    Note : May only be use and taught by Oasis nara
    Note : May trap several enemy inside (3-5 opponents)
    Note : Can only be used three times per battle
    Note : When the cup completely forming, the user may combine it with Water justu to drown the opponents or Fire jutsu to Toasted the opponents

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    Doumedaru Gitou : Furui Sakura (Bronze Sword:The Ancient Blossom)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: No Chakra cost
    Damage: 30 when using
    Description: A very old,ceremonial bronze sword that it was used from the priests of the Iwagakure,giving praise to their gods.

    Due to its age,the sword is fragile and it can break easily.

    It has not any other abilities.

    *Restrictions:
    1)It can only be held by Sade's bios.
    2)It can break easily if it comes in contact with A-Rank (and Higher) Lightning Techniques.








    Doton : Gosunkugi Kakuheki (Earth Style : Spike Wall)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra: 35
    Damage: 45
    Description: When the user performs this technique,a two-metres,spiky wall rises from the ground,from the users point,5 metres long.The wall cannot have any other direction expect a straight "line",from the user's point.It can be used for either attack an opponent or for defense.

    *Restictions/Further Explanations:
    1)This Technique can only be used if the user have the Doumedaru Gitou : Furui Sakura (Bronze Sword:The Ancient Blossom).
    2)The user must hold the Sword and swing it towards a direction in order to perform the technique.The User let his chakra flow into the ancient sword and then swing/wave it(for example) from up to down,creating the spike wall.
    3)There is no other use for the sword expect this technique and its usage as a normal sword/katana.
    4)It can be used only 5 times per battle,or else,the sword breaks,and both of them can be used after one week.
    5)The wall can be destroyed by A-Rank Lightning Techniques and higher.



    Well,as you can see,the sword and the jutsu are connected.Yes,I've made some mistakes but tell me what I have to fix.If one of them,even if I fix it,can't be approved,this means that the other one should be disapproved too.

    As far as I saw,there wasn't a jutsu,neither a sword,like this.

    Also the sword,is just a simple sword if the user isn't using the technique.


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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    ( Kaminari no yobidashi)- lightning call
    Type: supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:n/a
    Chakra:30
    Damage:(+15 to standard attacks)
    Description:kyofu makes the most unbearable croak that will send chakra out from his croak to the sky and cut off there sense of hearing. The chakra will cause clouds to form. once the clouds fully form to where thunder sounds and lightning passes thru the clouds kyofu will then fly to the sky and use his blade beak as a conductor and attract the lightning and mold it with his own chakra.
    -note: can only be used twice
    -note: one turn must be in between each use
    -note: jutsu last one turns
    -note: useless against sannin ninja or higher
    -note: no other summons can be in play
    -note: must signed the toco toucan contract

    ( Saigai no kaiten ha)-spinning blade of calamity
    Type:attack
    Rank:A
    Range:short-mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:kyofu begins raise his head to the sky as he opens his mouth, the top blade beak starts spinning. Once the blade spin at it’s highest velocity kyofu then slams it to the ground, drilling it with the blade beak. This in result creates a earthquake that alters the battlefield causes the shattering ground they're standing on to smash the opponent. this can be combined with the lightning call jutsu which makes the lightning on the beak travel thru the ground and shock the opponent.
    -note: can only be used twice
    -note: no other summons can be in play
    -note: lightning call used by this summons will count as one move.
    -note: must have signed the toco toucan contract.

    approved summoning

    (kuchiyose no jutsu:Moesashi)-summoning technique: moesashi
    Type:summoning
    Rank: B
    Range: short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: the user bites their thumb to draw blood and weave the summoning jutsu handseals and place their hands on the ground. an a puff of smoke a red armored tocan about the same size of fully grown akamaru appears. this armor gives the summon immunity to c-rank wind simply because the armor ignites into fire as it makes contact, and the summoning has a the ability to perform D-rank fire jutsu.
    note-user can't activate suiton techs while in play
    note-one other summoning while in play
    note-last for two turns
    note-must sign toco toucan contract

    -All declined, do not re-submit the first 2 techniques-
    Your descriptions are very confusing
    ~resubmitting~

    (kuchiyose no jutsu:Moesashi)-summoning technique: moesashi
    Type:summoning
    Rank: B
    Range: short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: the user bites their thumb to draw blood and weave the summoning jutsu handseals and place their hands on the ground. in a puff of smoke a red armored tocan about the same size of fully grown akamaru appears. the armor gives the summon immunity to c-rank water simply because the armor ignites into fire as it makes contact. also the summoning has a the ability to perform D-rank fire jutsu.
    note-user can't activate suiton techs while in play
    note-one other summoning while in play
    note-last for two turns
    note-must sign toco toucan contract

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    Now it makes even less sense... O_o Read the description and think of it...
     
         
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    Water Dragon Push (U~Otādoragonpusshu)
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user gather water chakra around their right hand and wrist. The user does a sumo thrust straight forward. The water chakra forms into the shape of a dragon head that the mouth is the palm and it is open. This attack can be used against fire jutsus B rank and below because of the water chakra around the hands are dense and thick enough to take on attacks.
    -Can only be taught by Solf J. Kimblee

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    Very similar to a Fishman Karate technique.

    Fury Strike (Fu~Yūrīsutoraiku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Descritption: The user gather water chakra around their hands and wrist. The user forms the water chakra into claws like bears. This attack can take on fire jutsus A rank and below because of the thickness and dense of the chakra.
    -Only used three per battle
    -Can only be taught by Solf J. Kimblee

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    if this is a water technique, you need to add proper naming. Also, this would only work on fire within reason, as you need to take into account the size of the technique you're facing.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning: Charonscythe, Toucan Of The Underworld
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After wiping blood on their Toucan tatoo or scroll, the user will perform the summoning jutsu hand seals, and then touch an object to summon Charonscythe (also nicknamed Charon). Charon is a Giant toucan, (half the size of Gamabunta), able to carry up to 3 persons. He is entirely black, except from his beak, which is entirely red, reminding exactly what his name means: a grim ripper's scythe. He can fly quite fast, covering long range distances in one turn. He has mastery over lighting release (but cannot use any hand seals), and can focus lighting chakra to his beak to turn his beak into a fatal weapon. He can also launch a lighting chakra blast from his beak that is S-rank focused raiton. Stays 2 turns and can only be summoned once per battle.

    I have signed the toucan contract here.


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    if a 50 meter tall bird takes one turn to travel about 50 meters across a certain route, then its quite slow, don't you think? Please read what you write...

    (Raiton: Raika no Jutsu) – Lighting Release: Lightification technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Similar to the Hydrification technique, this technique allows the user to turn his whole body (or partial body parts) into lighting at will, so this technique makes it impossible to receive damage from physical attacks. If an opponent touches the user's body wile he/she is using this, they will be numbed. In his pure lighting form, the user looks like a light blue, semi transparent version of him/herself. It is using the concept of E=mc², to transform solid matter (the user's body) into pure lighting and vice versa. In this state, the user can only use lighting jutsu. As this technique turns the body into lighting, the user is super-vulnerable to wind techniques because he must keep a balance in his lighting state (to be able to turn solid again), and wind will destroy that balance. The user can also link him/herself through metallic objects, and other conductors. Finally, the user can be physically hit by a natural insulator, such as rubber... Only a kage level (or above) shinobi with mastery over raiton can learn this technique.

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    similar technique exists.

    (Raika no Jutsu: Ryokō keitai) – Lightification technique: Travel form

    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: After using the lightification technique, the user can perform the tiger hand seal to turn himself into a blue lighting bolt (same size with the user), and travel as fast as a regular lighting technique, in a straight pattern. To change direction, the user must turn into the regular lightification form. The user is extreamly vulnerable to wind in this form, taking double vulnerability damage (meaning that even a C-rank futon that hits could cause fatal damage to the user).

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    the other technique wasn't approved
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 10-01-2012 at 09:03 PM.

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