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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Suiton: Bareru Ro-Ru| Water Release: Barrel Roll
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user begins by performing the monkey hand seal and them slamming one hand on the surface of the water source. Once done, they channel their water chakra into the source, while using shape manipulation to create a large crocodile that forms from underneath the opponent. The crocodile takes down the opponent and drags them down into the waters depths.

    Note: Can only be used on a water source
    Note: Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle
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    Mention the exact size of the crocodile, and that your opponent has to be standing on top of the water source.



    (Suiton: Gosunkugi Gyaruson ) Water Style: Spike Boy
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Point: 30
    Description: The users begins by gathering a large amount of water chakra throughout their body. Once collected the user releases the chakra in a quick burst. The user uses shape manipulation to shape the released water into thin 'senbons' that cover the users whole body and can pierce anybody in close combat. The user has the option to manipulate the sebon created from their body, to shoot out from all over their body, piercing everything in short range.

    - Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    - Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
    - Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
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    i was fine up to that point of shooting the senbons from all over your body piercing everything around you in Short range, can't have that, make the water senbons each have like a 4 times bigger than a normal senbon, so they can be clearly seen by the opponent.

    Resubmitting both jutsu's.

    (Suiton: Gosunkugi Gyaruson ) Water Style: Spike Boy
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost:15
    Damage Point: 30
    Description:
    Note: The users begins by gathering a large amount of water chakra throughout their body. Once collected the user releases the chakra in a quick burst. The user uses shape manipulation to shape the released water into thin 'senbons' that cover the users whole body and can pierce anybody in close combat. The user has the option to manipulate the sebon created from their body, to shoot out from all over their body, piercing everything in short range. The senbon that are shot out are roughly four times bigger than orginal senbons. The senbons can be clearly seen, due to the large size of them

    - Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    - Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
    - Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
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    ✘ Declined ✘
    I told you that you can't have shooting the needles to pierce everything in short range around you and you ignored it? ok suit yourself, don't resubmit.


    Suiton: Bareru Ro-Ru| Water Release: Barrel Roll
    Type: Offense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user begins by performing the monkey hand seal and them slamming one hand on the surface of the water source. Once done, they channel their water chakra into the source, while using shape manipulation to create a large crocodile that forms from underneath the opponent. The crocodile takes down the opponent and drags them down into the waters depths. The crocodile is three meters long For this jutsu to work, the opponent must be standing on the water source

    Note: Can only be used on a water source
    Note: Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle
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    I said specify the size, i didn't say specify the length, add that the opponent must be standing on the water source "that you are using" to make the crocodile.


    (Suiton: Tsubasa Kara Inai ) Water Style: Wings From Within
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30 ( + 10 for each turn activated)
    Damage Point: 60
    Description: The user begins by focusing a large amount of their water chakra into their back. Using the unique Hozuki ability, they manipulate the water to forcefully emerge from within their own back. The user uses shape manipulation to form two dark blue, devilish, wings that are molded from the water. Once the wings are created, the user manipulates the wings to flap, giving the user the ability to fly. Each wing is slightly bigger than the user and strong enough to withstand a long distance flight.
    While in flight, the user can manipulate his water chakra in their wings , to form a large amount of senbons that are created from water. Once the senbons are created, the user can shoot them out, by flapping their wings. The senbons are slightly bigger than the normal senbons, making them visible to the naked eye. The senbons that are shot out are C rank.


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    - Lasts 4 turns while activated)
    - Can only be used 2 times per battle.
    - The user can't perform any A rank or higher water jutsu's in this mode.
    - Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
    - Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
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    Been done countless times before, doesn't even make sense.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-18-2013 at 10:48 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    [Meiton: Baria-Mei] - Dark Release: Dark Barrier
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A (40 if contacted with.)
    Description: The user builds up a large amount of dark chakra to his right hand and faces it outwards to an incoming attack. He then releases the dark chakra from his hand a manipulates it to take the form a see-through indigo barrier. The barrier just about covers the users body in front where he faces his palm but is still left vulnerable from behind. This is a helpful technique for blocking against straight up quick attacks. Since the barrier is formed by raw dark chakra, if the opponent somehow comes into contact with it he will take severe damage to the point of contact.
    -Can only be used thrice.
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    This isn't how Dark Release works, raw dark chakra? Dark Release is used to absorb the raw energy based techniques, then manipulate the chakra absorbed, the way you want to use this is nothing like the cannon Dark Release, and Collides with RokuNR's CE Dark Release, and is also the same as Solf J Kimblee's Dark Barrier technique.


    [Meiton: Yokoshima-Wa] - Dark Release: Evil Rabbits
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user preforms the rat, bird and snake hand signs and builds up a large amount of dark chakra into both hands. They then release the dark chakra from both hands simultaneously and manipulates it to take the form of two dark averaged size rabbits that quickly begin running in a criss cross motion towards the target. The rabbits speed is so immense that, since they are running in a criss-cross motion the target finds it hard to keep sight of them. The rabbits, when closed in, will both pounce and strike the target's torso at the same time causing the target to take severe internal damage.
    -Can only be used twice.
    -Cannot preform any A rank or above Dark techniques next move.

    [Meiton: Tsubasa issui Yoku] - Dark Release: Wings of Greed
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A (40 if contacted with)
    Description: The user builds up a large amount of Dark chakra and channels it to his upper back. The user will focus very hard and release the chakra from his back, manipulating it to take the form of a pair of dark wings. The wings are literally made from raw dark chakra so if contacted with by anyone on the battle field, even the user, The will suffer damage on the point of contact. The only reason the users back doesn't take damage from the wing sprout is because it is a point of highly concentrated chakra beneath the skin which makes it harder for the nerves to detect pain. The span of the dark wings is 3 and a half meters and height of them is 1 meter and a half. The wings are very similar in appearance to those of a bat just much bigger.
    -Can only be used twice.
    -While active, lasts 4 turns.
    -When the wings fade after the first use, the user must wait 2 turns before the next use.
    -User can only preform A Rank Dark techniques and below while active.
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    Same as above, that wings won't be approved, the rabbit one, because of the speed related ability i won't approved it as well.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-23-2013 at 01:09 PM. Reason: Spelling

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Resubmitting because it wasn't approved as i was banned.

    Mr.Impeccable | 非の打ちどころのない (Mr.Hi no uchidokoro no nai)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Mr.Majestic is a sword, the length of Sasuke's sword. It is a weapon that was believed to have been in the possession of the strong Fallen Angel in that time. After many years, when the time came for the Fallen to fade away into the light, the Fallen made sure of keeping his greatest most powerful weapon hidden. The Angel placed the sword on the top of the mountain where his father died. The Sword was placed in a tank full of water. After the death of the Angel, many travelers discovered the sword. They were amazed by the shear beauty of such a rare object. In there eyes, everything about the sword was impeccable. They tried taking it out of the tank, but they unable to lift it up. They tried many methods, but all failed, so left with no choice, they abandoned it. This was because the sword was just impossible to lift up, as it weighted the same as the mountain. One night, a bright lad came along. Unlike the previous failures,the lad read the riddle written in blood on the wall across the sword. The lad figured it out after many tries. The lad took different approaches each time, including one where he channeled his chakra into the water and sword. By becoming one with it and listening to the swords voices, the sword accepted him. During that night, the sword -telepathically- told him many secrets about itself. Many which included if the lad channeled enough chakra through it, the size and cutting power would increase. It even told him about it's previous owner -the Angel- and how he used to destroy the cursed ones from the light. Even though when the sword increases in length, it's still as light as a feather, which enables better control.

    ┼ Abilities ┼

    - Size can be Increased by channeling chakra through it.
    - The sword can speak telepathically to the user.
    - The sword is able to use water techniques up to B rank.
    - The markings on the sword automatically glows during night-time.
    - It's Indestructible.

    ┼ Restrictions ┼

    - Can only use Water techs via sword for only 4 times per battle
    - Can only be held by UchihaMadara01 bios.




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    No chakra infusable swords allowed anymore, can talk telepathically to the user =_=


    New Submission.

    Lightning Style: True Lightning Form | 真雷フォーム (Ma kaminari fōmu)
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will accumulate their lightning chakra and -through precision- will channel it into their cells which contain the deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA). By inserting their lightning chakra into their deoxyribonucleic acid (DNA) which is responsible for appearance, the user is able to alter the functions and genetic instructions for a few seconds. This enables the users body to fully transform into lightning. When this happens, the user can then -for about five seconds- decide to evade or move around in lightning form, before the alteration wears off. During this form, the user travels at a very high speed, making it extremely hard for non-doujutsu users to track. If somehow the user whilst in this form is hit by a suiton technique, this jutsu will immediately stop, and as a consequence, the user will be by paralyzed and will have second degree burns. Similarly, if the user is hit by wind techniques, the jutsu will stop but will not be paralyzed nor burnt.

    Restrictions:

    - The user is only able to stay in lightning form for five seconds.
    - The user cannot use any jutsu's in this form.
    - The user cannot use any other lightning techniques in that turn.
    - This jutsu can only be used twice per battle, and only once in a turn.
    - Must have Mastered/Completed Lightning element to perform this jutsu.
    - This jutsu can only be used by UchihaMadara01.




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    Transforming into an element is a no, done countless times with many elements, also don't include the Japanese names (Kanji) into your submission's titles anymore, only the Romanji.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-18-2013 at 11:00 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Raiton: Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō) - Lightning Release - Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 (-25 to the user)
    Description: The user charges up all his raiton chakra throughout his body, to the point where his body has shocks of lightning coming out around his body, after focusing all that chakra in his body, the user forms 5 hand seals and sticks his hand out in front of him with his palms facing out, four finger facing up and their thumb across his palm. The user then releases a large wide spread blast of lightning that tears up everything in its path.
    - Can only be taught by Better
    - Can only be used once
    - The user is can't use lightning techs in the same turn or the turn after.


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    Don't get why this is a forbidden ranked, it's just one directional lightning blast but ok, if you want it to be then your gonna have to follow some set of rules, first define the actual size of the blast, saying "large" or "huge" or "widespread" are vague terms which i won't allow anymore, and where's the physical drawbacks for being a Forbidden technique? a forbidden ranked technique should have some that really cripple you, that whole "-25" thing doesn't work, i need something like speed decrease, or the slightest movements put a strain on your body, so your overall speed is decreased, that also includes performing handseals and what not, also remove that whole "tearing up everything in it's path", and replace that whole "charges all of his lightning chakra" to "charges a large amount of lightning chakra" the earlier term means you can't perform lightning chakra anymore, also handseals are made to limit the amount of chakra being used for your technique, so it should be done before your chakra is charged not after it. after that put that you can't use any lightning techniques for the next 2 turns and any S-rank technique in the next turn.
    resubmitting..

    (Raiton: Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō) - Lightning Release - Flying Dragon-Striking Heaven-Shaking Thunder Cannon[/B]
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60

    Description: The user forms 3 hand seals and focuses a large amount raiton chakra throughout his body, to the point where his body has shocks of lightning coming out around his body, after focusing all that chakra in his body,sticks his hand out in front of him with his palms facing out, four finger facing up and their thumb across his palm. The user then releases a large wide spread raiton technique, as big as wide as Gamabunta. It can be compared to the size of a TBB, but doesn't have the same destructive power.
    Note: Can only be taught by Better
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: The user is can't use lightning techs in the same turn.



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    Same size as Gamabunta? can be compared to the size of a TBB? don't resubmit.


    (Raiton: doki Zeus) Lighting Style: Wrath Of Zeus
    Type: Attack/Sup
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will start off by doing 3 handseals.. Ending with the tiger. soon as the tiger handseal is form. A Huge thunderbolt will be shot down from behind the opponent. This Thunderbolt (If struck by it) can cause serious damage, but the purpose of the thunderbolt is not to cause damage but somewhat of a distraction. With A trigger handseal (1 handseal) or coming in contact with anything the thunderbolt Will disperse into non-focus lightning leaving the opponent paralyze.

    Note: Paralyze Last for 1 turn
    Note: Cant use Lightning Above A rank for 1 turn
    Note: The bolt is shot from long range. The Dispersing of the thunderbolt is short-mid range
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    How exactly would the thunderbolt be shot? and thunderbolt is just sound mate, it's called a lightning bolt, how would it be a distraction if it disperses into lightning that paralyzes the opponent? i don't like the technique honestly, also don't write "Sup" write Supplementary like other people do, if you do this again i'll decline your whole submission just for that.


    (Doton: nechinechi hando) Earth Style: Sticky Hands
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 25
    Damage: 50
    Description: This justu must be done in conjuction with Sticky Earth Drop. Once the user does sticky earth drop, he will then do 1 handseal. As he does the one handseal, 2 huge long arms will appear out of the sticky earth to form a fist. The fist quickly launch towards the enemy causing major damage. The hands are long enough to reach long range (From the sky) and big enough to cause a small crater in the ground with full force of the punch. The hands dont disconnect from the sticky earth

    Note: Must Use sticky earth before using this
    Note: Can use 2 times.
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    ✘ Declined ✘
    Similar to Scorps's Mud drowning technique, in which it forms a hand out of mud, don't resubmit
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-18-2013 at 11:14 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (katon: jigoku supirittsu) fire release: hell spirits
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Shot-Long range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user fires several large fireballs, five at most, that takes the shape of ghosts flying towards the target, if either of the fireballs impact on any physical object, it causes a massive explosion, incinerating everything within the explosions reach.
    - Can be used twice with a three turns interval
    - User cannot use fire for three turns
    - mastery of fire is required
    - Can only be taught by elmage

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    (katon: jigoku supirittsu) fire release: hell spirits
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: mid-Long range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user fires several large fireballs, five at most, that takes the shape of ghosts flying towards the target, if either of the fireballs impact on any physical object, it causes a massive explosion, incinerating everything within the explosions reach. the size of the explosion span up to 10 meters.
    - Can be used twice with a three turns interval
    - User cannot use fire for three turns
    - mastery of fire is required
    - Can only be taught by elmage
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    10 meters is too much, i advice you to keep the original version.


    (Dagger tail) tanken biyoku
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range:short-mid range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: the dagger tail weapon is a fearful chain sword weapon made of steel, gained as a trophy from his most ruthless rival. His rival used it against him during a heated battle, but his luck shined and he was barely able to defeat his rival, and since then he has been using this versatile weapon in battle.
    The dagger tail is worn on the hand, with the chains coiled inside a extend-retract mechanism where the user can freely extend/retract it at will. The user has the ability to extend a small part of it during close range combat, however, it can extend up to ten meters(mid range) in length.
    The weapons ability is simple, the user will channel his chakra through the weapon's sharp end, this will enable him manipulate the tip via his chakra, and with that, he can cause it to curve while extending/retracting by changing the direction of the sharp end, this includes but not limited to curving around the user as a defensive measure in close range combat, or directly curving it round his opponent to trap him. The user can also channel his elemental chakra to it, however, it would behave like any other weapon, though the user would still be able to use its ability. The weapon is tied to the users belt, till he decides to use it, it can also be worn on both hands
    The dagger tail can also be used in acrobatics in pulling himself/ objects towards him.
    - Must be stated in bio or at the beginning of the battle to use
    - Can be used throughout the battle
    - The user becomes slow in making seals once he starts to use it
    - Can only be used by elmage

    Dagger tail(as shown being worn on the left hand)

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    no chakra infusable swords, free retracting and extending the chain won't be allowed like that.


    (Raiton: raikou hazumi) lightning release: lightning rebound
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: the user extends his sword towards an incoming uni-directional lightning, then he channels his chakra through it, and as the lightning supposely performed by his opponent reaches the sword, the user absorbs the lightning into his sword. Once done, the user immediately point it in the direction of his target and shoots the absorbed lightning in form of a blast back at the opponent.
    - This technique counts as two moves out of the three jutsu limit per turn
    -Can be used three times per battle
    - No S-Rank lightning in the same turn
    -The user cannot use lightning in the next turn
    -can only be taught by elmage
    -Can only work for A rank and below lightning
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    ✘ Declined ✘
    No elemental absorbing techniques will be approved.
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    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-18-2013 at 11:23 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Ru-tsu no Amatsu Ganseki) – Earth Release: Roots of Heavenly Rock
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will gather a vast amount of chakra in their palms followed by them performing the Serpent – Ox hand seals. Afterwards the user will place their palms upon the ground in front of them, and by channeling their chakra into the earth; they will manipulate the earth beneath the surface to crumble in front of them, altering the texture and the shape of the rock, forming it into roots similar to that of a trees. The user will then manipulate several roots of rock to blast out of the ground to bind, pierce or smash them into the air, using the roots to entangle the opponent into several roots while other roots will simultaniously blast out of the ground to pierce the opponent from different angles. The user will be able to alter the length, width, density, and shape of the roots while controlling them to attack the opponent.
    Note: Can be used 3 times per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya
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    That's not how Earth techniques work, that's how Wood Techniques work, Earth doesn't have the versatility of Wood Release, so you can't make similar techniques to it, don't resubmit.


    (Katon: Kozue Tsuiraku Ha) – Fire Release: Treetop Falling Leaves
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will channel their fire chakra throughout their throat and mouth gathering a large amount of it inside their lungs, before he performs the Ox – Tiger hand sequence. This is followed by the user releasing the chakra which is converted into fire, sending it high into the air above him. While the super heated fire is rising into the air, it spreads out over the battlefield like a large treetop of fire, before it will drop it's leaves similar to a real tree, dropping the entire cloud down upon the enemy and burn the entire battlefield with its extreme heat.
    Note: Due to its scale it is only usable once
    Note: Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya
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    First off handseals are made before gathering chakra not the opposite, because handseals are used to limit the amount of chakra used for certain techniques, anyway too big of a radius, whole battlefield? come on, make it more reasonable, and remove all that "superheated" nonsense, and extreme heat.


    (Doton: Suponji Kabe) - Earth Release: Porous Stronghold
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user places both their palms onto the ground, causing a sizeable dome face to emerge from the floor within seconds. The dome face unlike normal earth techniques is covered in pores, making the wall possess a degree of new properties. Due to these pores, the wall is capable of absorbing great amounts of water (Up to A-Rank), growing in size proportional to the amount of water absorbed. When the wall has absorbed water, the wall looks like an inflated sponge, allowing the user to use it as a water source for various other jutsu. When the wall absorbs a B-Rank or higher Suiton technique, it doubles in width. When the wall absorbs a C-Rank or lower technique there is no significant change in the size of the wall. The rank of the Suiton jutsu absorbed is the maximum rank, the absorbed water can be used for as the source for other Suiton techniques.
    Note: Only usable once per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya
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    No elemental absorbing techniques, and pores? how would a solid dome grow in size by absorbing water? don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-18-2013 at 11:30 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Ushiro View Post
    Resubmitting:

    (Kuchiyose: Kishida) - Summoning: Kishida
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kishida, a white locust 8 meters in height wearing armor made of numerous rectangular metal plates covering his body. Regarding himself as a knight, he spends the majority of his time wearing this armor which has developed his strength substantially. He has no trouble moving around with it regularly but cannot fly while wearing it. The armor contains chakra, allowing it to withstand damage from an A-rank attack before being destroyed. Kishida is able to disassemble his armor and levitate it through the air to form protective barriers up to mid range from himself. He can also mold the metal plates together after levitating them to create a large lance used to attack with the strength of an A-rank jutsu. With his fire affinity, he may imbue the metal with fire chakra which can increase the power of the lance to S-rank and allow the armor to endure an S-rank attack. Anything that touches the metal is burned by the flames on it and flammable materials are turned to ash almost immediately. While wearing the armor, the flames are on the outer part of it, preventing Kishida from harming himself. Once a battle, Kishida may summon another set of armor from a scroll he produces from his mouth.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Can stay for 5 turns
    -Levitating the armor, imbuing the armor with fire chakra, and creating a lance, and summoning armor each count as a move of the user.
    -Must have signed the Locust contract

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    ♠ Declined ♠
    So, what you're saying is that can only do one thing at one time, correct? Either use the armor as a defense, use it as an attack, or use it as a lance?
    And you stated if he imbues it with Fire chakra, it can endure a S-Rank attack, but what if it is water? Does it get destroyed after it endures that attack?
    Lastly, "anything that touches the metal is burned by the flames on it and flammable materials are turned to ash almost immediately." So, you're saying that when he walks on the ground, it burns the ground to ashes as well? Is this close range contact or a certain range?
    And no, he can only stay on the field for four turns.

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    (Suiton: Hidora Taihō) - Water Release: True Hydra Cannon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user forms the Ram, Snake, and Boar handseals and calls forth a massive amount of water from the ground that quickly turns the battlefield into a small ocean. Seven giant hydra heads with long necks emerge from the water and attack enemies with their sharp teeth and heads. They can also fire spiraling streams of pressurized water from their mouths at the enemy, crushing them with the immense force of the water. This counts as an additional move of the user and is A-rank in strength.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -No S-rank or higher water jutsu for the next two turns
    -The hydra heads can also be create from a large water source.
    ♠ Declined ♠
    First, tell me where exactly on the ground can it appear. In front of you directly, from behind the opponent? Also, how deep can the water be and can the hydra heads only form after you've created the entire ocean?
    Approximately how big are the hydra heads as well and how far can they reach? Because if it is too big, then no, that's quite OP as it would cover the entire battlefield.
    And with such a strong jutsu, you can only use it once in battle.
    Resubmitting:

    (Kuchiyose: Kishida) - Summoning: Kishida
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kishida, a white locust 8 meters in height wearing armor made of numerous rectangular metal plates covering his body. Regarding himself as a knight, he spends the majority of his time wearing this armor which has developed his strength substantially. He has no trouble moving around with it regularly but cannot fly while wearing it. The armor contains chakra, allowing it to withstand damage from an A-rank attack before being destroyed. Kishida is able to disassemble his armor and levitate it through the air to form protective barriers up to mid range from himself. He can also mold the metal plates together after levitating them to create a large lance used to attack with the strength of an A-rank jutsu. With his fire affinity, he may imbue the metal with fire chakra which can increase the power of the lance to S-rank and allow the armor to endure an S-rank attack unless it is of the water element. Anything that gets within a few feet of the metal is burned by the flames on it and flammable materials like wood or dry earth are turned to ash almost immediately. While wearing the armor, the flames are on the outer part of it, preventing Kishida from harming himself. Once a battle, Kishida may summon another set of armor from a scroll he produces from his mouth.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Can stay for 4 turns
    -Levitating the armor, imbuing the armor with fire chakra, creating a lance, and summoning armor each count as a move of the user.
    -Must have signed the Locust contract
    _______________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    Needs a usage limit to all of the abilities, remove the colored, make the barrier extend up to Short range not Mid, and when you say barrier, do you mean a 360 meters defense? if so then i don't approved 360 degrees defenses or omni directional techniques anymore, add that after enduring the S-rank attack it's destroyed, when adding the fire chakra to it, and can he use any Fire techniques?


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    (Suiton: Hidora Taihō) - Water Release: True Hydra Cannon
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user forms the Ram, Snake, and Boar handseals and calls forth a massive amount of water from the ground at any point of his choosing that quickly turns the battlefield into a small ocean deep enough to submerge a two-story building. Once the water has been created, seven giant hydra heads with long necks emerge from it and attack enemies with their sharp teeth and heads. Each hydra head is double the size of the Water Dragon Jutsu and can reach 20 meters from where it orginated. They can also fire spiraling streams of pressurized water from their mouths at the enemy, crushing them with the immense force of the water. This counts as an additional move of the user and is A-rank in strength.
    -Usable once per battle
    -No other S-rank or higher water jutsu this turn or next
    -The hydra heads can also be created from a large water source.
    _______________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    Overpowered, needs de-powering so i'll leave that for you, for god's sake seven Giant Hydra twice as big as the Water Dragon, able to reach up to Long range, in addition to form an ocean? =/ honestly if Kiri hadn't checked that i would've put a DNR on it.


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    (Doton: Kage Shinkō)- Earth release: Shadow Emerging
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user slams his hand on the ground, opening a deep, jagged fissure beneath his target. The shadows within this fissure materialize into several large shadow tendrils which emerge from the fissure and branch out numerous times, covering a wide area and impaling the target. The shadows can reach up to mid range from the fissure's opening. The user must maintain contact with the ground or this jutsu will end.
    -Usable 2 times per battle
    -This jutsu counts as two moves this turn.
    -No A-rank or higher shadow jutsu next turn
    -Must be a member of the Nara clan to use.
    _________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    keep the original version.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Erzo View Post
    (Suiton: Mizuchi's Kōken'nin) - Water: Mizuchi's Guardian
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Mizuchi's Guardian requires the user to have a water source (one artificially created via a jutsu or the user needs to be near/in a lake or ocean) or the user can simply spew out water, using that to form the Guardian. Once the user adds his chakra into the water source, he/she uses shape manipulation to create a man made of pure water to come out from the water source available. The size of this man is similar to the size of the Golem created by the A-rank Earth jutsu. This Earth Golem sized Water Guardian is not able to use cannon water jutsus, however, he has his own special water abilities which allow him to create sucking whirlpools, small blasts of water which are able to blast the opponent into the air/sides (depending on where they come out from) and water constructs (spikes, walls, pillars) made purely of water, all of these are equivalent to S-rank and if in a water source, he has the ability to release his chakra (Equivalent to S-rank) everywhere short range from his initial position, meaning the opponent can't manipulate the water short range around him. Due to his water abilities, the Guardian/man made of water has the ability to turn into a puddle of water and reform himself from other water sources, as long as the puddle of water he forms and the water he's looking to reform from are connected. If the user creates the Water Guardian by spewing out the water and there is no water source available, the water constructs are created by the Water guardian (by manipulating moisture in the air and using that to materialize the water) the water is then controlled by the use of hand movements, he can't however, use the whirlpool ability since the opponent would need to be under a body of water for that to be done.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Lasts 3 turns each time it's used.
    Note: All abilities of the Guardian count towards the users 3 moves per turn.
    Note: No Water jutsu higher than S-rank, after the Guardian is gone. (Gone = jutsu is deactivated or the number of turns he lasts are finished)
    ___________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    OP o_o there's already a technique that can do that called the water beast, as you might already know not all of the abilities you mentioned though, if you want this technique approved your gonna have to trim down the abilities, take out the reforming, i won't allow you to keep him reforming and prevent your opponent from using water techniques, remove the ability of using the moisture in the air, make him only use the water attacks from the water source and make them A-rank, add that you can't use Fire while the technique is active and add a +20 continuous chakra cost, make the damage 60 basically equivalent to an A-rank, honestly i don't like the technique myself.


    (Olm No Jutsu: Nensei no aru Shin ) - Olm Technique: Viscous Sin
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A (Though, can cause death if the opponent drowns in it)
    Description: Olms have a layer of Slime covering their outer body. The user can slam his hands down onto the ground, summoning a large amount of Slime (the amount is equivalent to the B-rank version Exploding Water Colliding Wave) from the land of the Olms. This slime is slightly viscous and so travels at a slower rate than water, however, due to it's thickness it can overcome large bodies of water with ease, making it so that only water jutsus 1 rank higher than the slime to overcome it. The user has his chakra infused within the slime, allowing him to choose the direction in which it flows via hand movements. In addition, the slime is extremely sticky, allowing it to be used to hold the opponent in place and/or drown them within it.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No other Olm Techniques in the same turn.
    ________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    Having the amount equivalent to the Exploding water colliding wave? you do realize that means the whole battlefield will be covered in slime? both you and your opponent will be caught in it and unable to move? remove the death when drowned in it thing, make it as big as the Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop technique and remove the hand moving ability to control the slime, also mention how exactly it is summoned, does it come from the ground? or a portal made in the sky?


    Approval of Olms: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post7135287
    (Suiton: Mizuchi's Kōken'nin) - Water: Mizuchi's Guardian
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40 + 20 Continuously to keep him active/alive
    Damage: 60 (A-rank Attacks)
    Description: Mizuchi's Guardian requires the user to have a water source (one artificially created via a jutsu or the user needs to be near/in a lake or ocean) or the user can simply spew out water, using that to form the Guardian. Once the user adds his chakra into the water source, he/she uses shape manipulation to create a man made of pure water to come out from the water source available. The size of this man is similar to the size of the Golem created by the A-rank Earth jutsu. This Earth Golem sized Water Guardian is not able to use cannon water jutsus, however, he has his own special water abilities which allow him to create sucking whirlpools, small blasts of water which are able to blast the opponent into the air/sides (depending on where they come out from) and water constructs (spikes, walls, pillars) made purely of water, all of these are equivalent to A-rank and if in a water source, he has the ability to release his chakra (Equivalent to S-rank) everywhere short range from his initial position, meaning the opponent can't manipulate the water short range around him. If the user creates the Water Guardian by spewing out the water and there is no water source available, the water constructs are created by the Water guardian but there still needs to be a water source from which he can create these constructs with. The water is then controlled by the use of hand movements, he can't however, use the whirlpool ability since the opponent would need to be under a body of water for that to be done.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Lasts 3 turns each time it's used.
    Note: All abilities of the Guardian count towards the users 3 moves per turn.
    Note: No Fire jutsu whilst this is active
    Note: No Water jutsu higher than S-rank, after the Guardian is gone. (Gone = jutsu is deactivated or the number of turns he lasts are finished)
    ________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    I said i won't allow you to prevent your opponent from using water techniques, remove that, keep in mind that he wouldn't be able to use water constructs other than the Pillars, Walls and spikes, and don't cover a 360 degrees around him or you in case of walls to defend, remove that controlling water by the use of his hands.


    Removed: ''Due to his water abilities, the Guardian/man made of water has the ability to turn into a puddle of water and reform himself from other water sources, as long as the puddle of water he forms and the water he's looking to reform from are connected.''
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    (Olm No Jutsu: Nensei no aru Shin ) - Olm Technique: Viscous Sin
    Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Olms have a layer of Slime covering their outer body. The user can slam his hands down onto the ground, summoning a large amount of Slime (the amount is equivalent to the B-rank Earth: Sticky Earth Drop) from the land of the Olms. This slime is slightly viscous and so travels at a slower rate than water, however, due to it's thickness it can overcome large bodies of water with ease, making it so that only water jutsus 1 rank higher than the slime to overcome it. The user has his chakra infused within the slime, allowing him to choose the direction in which it flows via hand movements. In addition, the slime is extremely sticky, allowing it to be used to hold the opponent in place and/or drown them within it. Due to this jutsu being a summoning jutsu, the Slime can be summoned either directly from below the opponent or in the area above them. However, if summoned in the area above them, it must be from a minimum height of 10 meters. Furthermore, if summoned above the opponent, a portal is created from which the slime comes out of. When the slime is summoned below the opponent, it gushes upwards, similar to the gushing done by B-ranked Water Gushing Imprisonment jutsu (but the slime doesn't form into an orb) in an attempt to cover the opponent's whole body in slime, making him/her sticky and due to the viscosity of the slime, slowing down movement.
    Note: Can only be used 3 times.
    Note: No other Olm Techniques in the same turn.
    ________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    I told you to take out the hand movement controlling ability, but you didn't and you added that it can be used like the Gushing water imprisonment as well? i told you to mention where it comes out from the ground OR above the opponent, not both, so you made it summoned from above and below as well? i told you how to make it approvable but you kept shoving abilities, suit yourself, don't resubmit.


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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon: Jetto Setto Go || Fire Style: Jet Set Go
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: -
    Description: For this jutsu the user makes
    focusses a large amount of katon chakra below the sole of his feet and releases it all in an out burst of chakra. This results into a large amount fire being emitted in a particular direction creating a force that moves the concerned body in the opposite direction. As a result the body gets propelled in any one direction at an extremely high speed. The speed at which the user moves after this jutsu is very high, about 4 times the users base speed. The drawback being it can only be used to move in one direction and you cannot change direction halfway through the move which makes it extremely dangerous in a way for the user as well.
    - can be used thrice in a battle.
    - Jutsu can be used to move from Short to Mid, Mid to Long at high speeds and vice-versa.
    ___________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    Similar techniques exist in other elements and Fire as well.


    Katon: Hotarubi || Fire Style: Firefly Light
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: For this jutsu the user releases his Fire chakra all over his body and then from the various pores on his body releases the chakra in the form of small balls of greenish light this balls then move towards the enemy and float around him. Now at the signal of the user these orbs start revolving around the opponent in high speeds and finally go off by creating a tremendous explosion that kills the opponent in the vicinity and which forms gigantic pillar of fire that reaches from the ground to the sky.
    - While the small balls float around the opponent the user is free to use other jutsu.
    - Can be used only once in a battle.
    - No jutsu above S-rank for the next turn.
    - No more Katon in the same turn.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Already exists. Cali's.

    Katon: Dai Enkai (Entei) || Fire Style: Great Flame Commandment (Flame emperor)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: Known as the ultimate Fire style technique technique. After creating great spiraling flames centered on his location the user then amasses it at a focused point (i.e. the palm of his hand), turning it into a gigantic fireball resembling the sun and hurls it at his opponent to try to obliterate them. This is nothing but a giant ball of flames that obliterates a wide range of the battle-field. The reach of this jutsu is such that its known to obliterate an entire village in flames. The image of the user holding a copy of the sun in his hands is enough to strike so much fear into his opponents such that shinobi below 2 ninja rank of the user simply fall loose consciousness.
    - user looses his ability to mold anymore Katon chakra.
    - chakra regeneration also suffers, due to which the user is only able to use 1 jutsu per turn for the rest of the battle.



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    ±± Declined ±±
    Already exists. Ace's.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon:Gōen Ryūga|Fire Release: Dragon Fang Flame
    Rank:Forbidden
    Type:Offensive
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:100
    Description:The user builds up katon chakra in his dominant hand and then slams his fist on the ground.As he does so,he releases the built up katon chakra into the ground making the ground shake vigorously,causing multiple fire spears shoot from the ground at various angles to trap the opponent in a prison of flames.The fire spears are shot at great speed,making it a very difficult jutsu to evade.Each fire spear's length being 20m,also adds to the difficulty in evading the jutsu by aerial means.After 50 spears erupt from the ground,the ground confined by the fire spears erupt in a violent explosion,burning anything and everything trapped in that confined space.
    -Can only be used once per battle
    -due to the excessive chakra required to perform the jutsu,the user can only use one other jutsu in the same turn
    -User takes 30 damage
    -User can't mold katon chakra for 2 turns
    -Due to the heavy damage the user takes,his running speed is reduced by half
    -Only taught/usable by Igneel

    Second half of the picture


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    ±± Declined ±±
    Done before.

    Fuuton: Choking Fog |Fuuton: Ikigurushii Enmu|
    Rank:B
    Type:Offensive
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:After trapping the opponent in a cloud of smoke or mist,the user super condenses the mist/smoke near the opponent making it hard for them to breathe. Although this isn't enough to kill someone straight away,it is enough to slow down their movements and place them into a panic-stricken state of mind. This altered state of mind helps the user in pulling off plans or just in simply finding them.The jutsu itself lasts for 3 turns and by the end of the 3rd turn,the opponent would pass out due to the lack of oxygen and would probably result in death if oxygen is not supplied quickly.
    -Lasts 3 turns
    -First turn:The opponent starts to breathe heavily and due to the lack of oxygen in every part of the body,it will result in the loss of motor skills or proper coordination.
    -Second turn:If the opponent is still unable to breathe,he would now be similar to paralyzed having very much restricted movements and inability to perform seals anymore
    -Third turn:When the brain is not receiving enough oxygen, the heart rate will increase in an attempt to deliver more oxygen.As such the heart will be unable to keep up with the demand and may eventually fail, causing a small heart attack which causes the opponent to faint in pain.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Only taight/usable by Igneel
    _____________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    OP, don't resubmit.


    Illusion Release:Eyes Lie|Genjutsu:Metsuki Rai
    Rank:A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60(due to the mental stress)
    Description:After using a Ninjutsu that sends a projectile based attack towards the opponent like wind blade/water bullet/fire ball etc,the user does 2 more seals Horse → Snake in conjunction to the ninjutsu used,casting the opponent into a powerful genjutsu,making them think that the jutsu the user used multiplied by 100(similar to the shuriken shadow clone jutsu).Due to sheer number of attacks heading towards him,the opponents heart is struck with fear,making them doubt their own skills and abilities thereby creating stress on his mind.In reality the jutsu that the user uses will still continue on towards the target in the same trajectory it was shot at.
    -Usable 2 times per battle
    -No Genjutsu in the same and next turn
    -Can only be taught by Igneel
    ________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    Opponent's heart is struck in fear? making him doubt his own skills? what does that have to do with anything, i don't get the effects, so this is just striking fear to the opponent? seems like a pointless technique to me, plus i have a ninjutsu technique that does the same thing projecting fake illusionary clones of projectile techniques so this is pretty much the same.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Mokuton: Kyouku no Gaia | Wood Release: Strength of Gaia
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The "Strength of Gaia" is a simple Mokuton jutsu. By using the trees natural ability to draw in minerals from the earth the user enhances this ability with chakra. Using exsisting wood on the field, the user can by channeling chakra into the wood draw in what ever minerals or substances there are in the ground giving the wood the properties of the substance. This is used to strengthen the wood and make it more durable while at the same time it gains the effects and abilities of the minerals and substances it absorbed.
    Note: Must have a Wood bio to use.
    Note: No Doton in the same turn this was used.
    Note: Thrice per battle, and the effects remain on the wood for the rest of the battle unless destroyed.
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    ±± Declined ±±
    I like the idea but some limitations are required. We can't forget wood is wood. Things like a lava floor or a highly poisonous floor wouldn't be usable for this. also, you must list some effects that this would enable the user to bestow upon their wood.

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    Mokuton: Kokyuu Kyuuen| Wood Release: Breath of Relief
    Type: Supplementary/ Defensive
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced Wood Release technique. The user focuses Moku chakra in his lungs and closes his wind pipe for a brief moment. With his chakra the user creates small trees inside of his chest that practically become part of the users unique anatomy. These trees will then take over the user's respirational system and begin breathing for the user. This techniques primary function is to prevent damage to the user that can be created by poisonous gasses, smoke or any other type of gas or intangible, gasseous substance that may in any way harm the user's internal organs. After the effects of the technique have worn off these small, harmless trees will simply decay and disappear doing no internal damage whatsoever to the user in the process. This also protects the user from the effects of smell induced genjutsu and it's effects. This can also be applied to others but the user must be in touch with them.
    Note: Must have a Wood bio to use.
    Note: Can be used twice per battle, and once activated it lasts for 5 turns.
    Note: Upon activation, the user's face will turn purple and he will have no breath for a brief moment. Afterwards he will freely be able to breathe and move through poisonous gasses without fear of the effects since the trees will be breathing for him.
    Note: Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
    ♠ Declined, do not re-submit ♠
    Sorry, I like the idea, but logically, it makes no sense. Trees pretty much breathe the same way as we do and they would equally be rotting away in poisonous gases or such.


    Mokuton: Yabureme Ikioi| Wood Release: Tear of Life
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After having created trees or wood or by sending his chakra into already existing wood, the user will send his chakra into the wood and/or trees and use them to soak in the water and moisture in the surrounding ground and area. The user can then use the water filled wood as a "well" of sorts creating a water source. By performing a single hand seal the water from inside the wood will be expelled to the outside allowing the user to manipulate the water to his desire. Depending on the quantity of wood used, the collected water can vary from a small puddle to a large water source, big enough to perform "Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet" and other large scale techniques. After expelling all the water, the trees/wood will fall into dust due to the lack of water inside them. The effects of the technique can easily be noticed as the ground will become dry and crumbly.
    Note: Must have a Wood bio to use.
    Note: Amount of water expelled depends on the amount of wood used to gather the water.
    Note: Gathering of water lasts one turn.
    Note: Can only be taught by -Cobalt-.
    ♠ Approved ♠
    Wow. Nice jutsu.

    Dropping CW: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...95#post4630295

    For:

    Naginata: Niernen | Sword-Spear: Orchid
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 5- 50
    Damage: 10-100
    Description: The ancient sword-spear Niernen (which mean Orchid) is a weapon forged long before the shinobi were brought to the world by the Sage of the Six Paths. It is said to be created by Gods themselves. Niernen is a long staff made of the finest and most resistant wood that can be found. On the tip of the staff, an arched blade of chakra enhanced steel is attached which is unbreakable due to the hot fires it has been forged in. The color of the blade is a dark green hue, but it can turn to other colors upon the users wish. The whole weapon has been blessed by countless prayers making it impossible to destroy or damage in any way imaginable by mankind. The handle of the staff has two buttons on it with a hidden mechanism inside. Inside the staff a long, chakra enhanced wire is hidden, thus by pressing the button, the blade of the spear will shoot out and attach into any tangible surface with no need for the user to aim (does not count for persons). By pressing the button again the user can pull himself up almost any kind of obstacle. The second button when pressed, releases a small razor blade on the handle of the staff which the user can use to cut himself and release himself from genjutsu or to deal more damage to the opponent. Niernen has many abilities which the wielder of the staff can only benefit from. The staff, in order to functionate in it's full potential needs to feed on the user's chakra, much like Samehada. Niernen at all times takes small amounts of chakra from it's wielder. In return the weapon will begin to shine in a mixture of pink and white light (much like the color of orchids) as the user is set into a genjutsu by the opponent. This way, Niernen alerts the user that he is inside a genjutsu thus allowing him to react accordingly to the threat. Niernen also grants immunity to B-rank and below Genjutsu to the wielder of the weapon (since it has a chakra of it's own when the user is set in B-rank and below illusions Niernen simply releases them from it just like with Jinchuuriki and their Bijuu). Since Niernen is in constant chakra exchange it knows when the user is in a Genjutsu and thus it begins to glow upon any chakra disturbances. Niernen can also absorb the chakra of other persons when in touch with them.
    Note: Can only be touched by the wielder and whom he allows.
    Note: User loses -10 chakra each turn.
    Note: User gains +10 chakra for every time the weapons touches the opponent.
    Note: Each ability (genjutsu immunity and alertion, the absorbtion) counts towards the users moves and this technique must be posted each time an ability is activated.


    ♠ Leaving weird weapons for Scorps or Xylon. ♠

    X-Declined-X Similar to another existing weapon with similar abilities.
    Resubmitting the CW:

    Naginata: Niernen | Sword-Spear: Orchid
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 5- 40
    Damage: 10-80
    Description: The ancient sword-spear Niernen (which mean Orchid) is a weapon forged long before the shinobi were brought to the world by the Sage of the Six Paths. It is said to be created by Gods themselves. Niernen is a long staff made of the finest and most resistant wood that can be found. On the tip of the staff, an arched blade of chakra enhanced steel is attached which is unbreakable due to the hot fires it has been forged in. The tip grows in a dark green hue.. The color of the blade is a dark green hue, but it can turn to other colors upon the users wish. The whole weapon has been blessed by countless prayers making it impossible to destroy or damage in any way imaginable by mankind. The handle of the staff has two buttons on it with a hidden mechanism inside. Inside the staff a long, chakra enhanced wire is hidden, thus by pressing the button, the blade of the spear will shoot out and attach into any tangible surface with no need for the user to aim (does not count for persons). By pressing the button again the user can pull himself up almost any kind of obstacle. The second button when pressed, releases a small razor blade on the handle of the staff which the user can use to cut himself and release himself from genjutsu or to deal more damage to the opponent. Niernen has many abilities which the wielder of the staff can only benefit from. The staff, in order to functionate in it's full potential needs to feed on the user's chakra, much like Samehada. Niernen at all times takes small amounts of chakra from it's wielder. In return the weapon will begin to shine in a mixture of pink and white light (much like the color of orchids) as the user is set into a genjutsu by the opponent. This way, Niernen alerts the user that he is inside a genjutsu thus allowing him to react accordingly to the threat. Being named Orchid, this weapon is highly involved into the natural elements those being Water, Earth and Wood Release. Each of those three particular chakras can be channeled through the spear, and when done so kanji (one for each element) will glow on the handle of the spear. When this is activated, the chosen element will be boosted in power increasing the ranks of all techniques for the chosen element for a short period of time. Non-Mokuton users can use this weapon too, whereas they can only enhance their Earth and water technique.
    Note: Can only be wielded by -Cobalt-.
    Note: All abilities count towards the users three moves (excluding the hidden mechanisms which are activated with the press of the buttons).
    Note: Only one element can be boosted at a time.
    Note: When the chosen element is boosted, all techniques are increased by one rank for a period of 3 turns. During that time the user can use other elemental techniques, but only B-rank and below.
    Note: Once an element has been boosted, the user cannot boost the same element again in that battle. Another element can be boosted after a cooldown period of 5 turns.

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    Seriously too much, a mix of rip offs of other abilities, don't resubmit. ever!
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by mangekyo byakugan View Post
    Frozen Gauntlets(Touketsu Kougake)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short range
    Chakra: 10 per turn and 40 when used
    Damage: 80
    Description: The frozen gauntlets are two specially made gauntlets, they are unique, powerful, and extremely useful. It's uniqueness comes from it's shape, which can be devided into two forms, the first is the 'suppressed' form, in which the gauntlets extend towards the user's upper shoulder in a 'compressed' form where it is not bulky, but rather sleek and 'thin' similar to how a normal undershirt *extends on the arms area. The other form is the 'released' form in which the gauntlets take a more bulky shape(similar to picture shown below but without the nails sticking in and in a more 'clean' cut shape). The gauntlet's base color is light blue, it has black stripes around it shaped as flames. It's power comes from it being made of unknown metal, which makes the gauntlets very durable, the gauntlets being made of metal were conductive to electricity, the user being wary of such a disadvantage added a feature to the gauntlets, the inner side of the gauntlets were made of insulating material which 'appeared' in the 'released' form. The usefulness of the gauntlets came from three abilities, the first being the suppressing technique presented by the gauntlets, this technique was constantly active, regardless if the gauntlets were in the 'suppressed' or 'released' form, the chakra that is present in the hands of the user is suppressed or rather hidden, meaning that chakra sensing nin can't see chakra in the hand area. The second ability was the gauntlets ability to freeze water when it comes in contact with it, it allowed the user to freeze water based attacks of the opponent B rank and below, and all water techniques created by the user, it also was capable of freezing entire lakes making them 'ice rings', also when the gauntlets were in the 'released' form they will cause numbness to the opponent when it comes in contact with, and it can cause frost bites if it stays in contact with the opponent limb for more than 6 seconds. The third 'ability' was the user himself, if the individual trying to wield the weapon isn't permitted and isn't from the Yuki clan they will get frozen in their place.
    -Must have mastered ninjutsu to use and be a member of the Yuki clan with ice release mastered .
    -Each ability when used counts towards the three jutsu limit, except the suppressing technique it only counts as one move in the initial turn of the battle.
    -The changing in the form of the weapon doesn't count towards the three jutsu limit, and the user can change one arm if he wants.
    -While in the 'released' form no hand seals can be performed.
    -The freezing ability can be used four time per battle.
    -Each gauntlet can take a damage of 160 damage points.
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    ♠ Leaving for Scorps or Xylon. Not too sure about those abilities it has.♠

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Too much. Unreasonable. It makes all your Water techniques turn into Ice techniques... =_= Its too much.

    Ice Release: Frost Giants Sphere(Hyouton: Kanki Kyoukan tama)*
    Type: Attack
    Rank: F-Rank
    Range: Long range*
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90(-10 or full damage when hit by it)
    Description: *The user will first perform five hand seals and release their chakra into the air, as the chakra is in the air, the user will condense it to the form of a small ice orb levitating in the air in front of the user. After the orb/sphere is formed the user will perform another hand seal and cause the orb to travel towards the opponent(s) with speed(equivalent to that of user) the user then has two choices detonating the orb before it reaches the opponent by performing a hand seal and causing the orb to explode and have shrouds of ice spread in all directions from the detention point or the user cam allow the orb to hit the opponent and explode sending shrouds of ice through the body of the opponent and anyone near him(if in range).
    -Usable Once
    -No wind and water techs of B rank and higher for the next two turns so no B rank ice as well.
    -must be member of Yuki clan and mastered ice.
    -The technique is similar to Atsugai but in a wider effect so anyone within mid range will get pelted by the shrouds of ice.
    -The shrouds of ice will be of the size of Kunias in length and width of 1.5 kunia.
    -The shrouds of Ice are formed from the pressure the explosion presents in the air, it is like when a cold breeze of air passes through a warm patch the warm patch will become cold, here it is similar, and the reason why the air takes form of kunia is the special way the explosion occurs(in a manner that makes a molding block for the kunia)
    ♠ Leaving for Scorps or Xylon. ♠

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. Similar to existing technique.

    Ice Release: Advanced Ice Phasing(Hyouton: Koudo Hyouton Sou)*
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S rank
    Range: self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:*This technique is an advanced version of ice phasing technique, this version allows the user after performing six hand seals to phase through ice techniques of his creation of A rank and below, and B rank and below techniques created by the opponent.
    -Usable Twice per battle.
    -No ice moves above A-Rank that turn.
    -Must have mastered ice and be a Yuki clan member.

    ♠ Approved ♠
    Added another restriction

    Approval of the original ice phasing below

    Frozen Gauntlets(Touketsu Kougake)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S Rank
    Range: Short range
    Chakra: 10 per turn and 40 when used
    Damage: 80
    Description: The frozen gauntlets are two specially made gauntlets, they are unique, powerful, and extremely useful. It's uniqueness comes from it's shape, which can be devided into two forms, the first is the 'suppressed' form, in which the gauntlets extend towards the user's upper shoulder in a 'compressed' form where it is not bulky, but rather sleek and 'thin' similar to how a normal undershirt *extends on the arms area. The other form is the 'released' form in which the gauntlets take a more bulky shape(similar to picture shown below but without the nails sticking in and in a more 'clean' cut shape). The gauntlet's base color is light blue, it has black stripes around it shaped as flames. It's power comes from it being made of unknown metal, which makes the gauntlets very durable, the gauntlets being made of metal were conductive to electricity, the user being wary of such a disadvantage added a feature to the gauntlets, the inner side of the gauntlets were made of insulating material which 'appeared' in the 'released' form. The usefulness of the gauntlets came from three abilities, the first being the suppressing technique presented by the gauntlets, this technique was constantly active, regardless if the gauntlets were in the 'suppressed' or 'released' form, the chakra that is present in the hands of the user is suppressed or rather hidden, meaning that chakra sensing nin can't see chakra in the hand area. The second ability was the gauntlets ability to freeze water when it comes in contact with it, it allowed the user to freeze water based attacks of the opponent B rank and below, and A rank water techniques created by the user, it also was capable of freezing entire lakes making them 'ice rings', also when the gauntlets were in the 'released' form they will cause numbness to the opponent when it comes in contact with, and it can cause frost bites if it stays in contact with the opponent limb for more than 6 seconds. The third 'ability' was the user himself, if the individual trying to wield the weapon isn't permitted and isn't from the Yuki clan they will get frozen in their place.
    -Must have mastered ninjutsu to use and be a member of the Yuki clan with ice release mastered .
    -Each ability when used counts towards the three jutsu limit, except the suppressing technique it only counts as one move in the initial turn of the battle.
    -The changing in the form of the weapon doesn't count towards the three jutsu limit, and the user can change one arm if he wants.
    -While in the 'released' form no hand seals can be performed.
    -The freezing ability can be used four time per battle, and only when in 'released' form
    -Each gauntlet can take a damage of 160 damage points.
    -When using the freezing ability a 'shroud' will appear 0.3 Centi meters away from the gauntlets, the shroud allows the user to freeze water without having the gauntlets frozen along with the frozen water.
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    ________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    Don't resubmit =_=


    Lightning Release: Weak Attack(Raiton: Rui Seme)
    Type:
    Rank: B Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: +5 to attack
    Description: Lightning Release: Weak Attack, is a technique that allows the user to infuse lightning chakra to a attack of his, the purpose of the infused lightning chakra is to cause numbness on the attacked body part of the opponent, this will cause the pain receptors of the opponent to be fooled, this will cause the opponent to 'feel' that he hadn't sustained damage on the attacked body part. This will help the user greatly as the opponent will continue normally while he may be gravely injured, this will probably cause the opponent to cause more injuries upon himself.
    -Usable four times.
    -Only usable with Taijutsu moves.
    -Only able to 'hide'/numb the affects of A ranked taijutsu techniques.
    -Mastery over lightning is required.
    ____________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    Unreasonable and unrealistic, don't resubmit.


    (Hyouton: Touketsu Kobushi) Ice Release: Frozen Fist
    Rank: A rank
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Ice Release: Frozen Fist, is a technique executed after performing the Tiger hand seal, after performing the hand seal, the user will punch in the air towards the opponent, while simultaneously releasing ice chakra from his fist, the chakra will swiftly form into the form of the fist, it will be like a spherical cylinder extending to mid range with it's 'tip' in the form of a fist. The 'cylinder' will be connected to the users fist through chakra, but the user can choose to separate the 'cylinder' from her/his fist by 'unleashing' or rather 'breaking' the chakra that connects his/her fist with the 'cylinder'. That is normally the case, and when that is done, the user can choose to perform the Tiger—>Dragon hand seals, and cause spikes to emerge from the 'cylinder' portion of the technique, including the 'back' or in simpler terms where the 'cylinder' was connected with the user.
    -Usable three times per battle.
    -Mastery over ice is required.
    -If the secondary ability is used(spikes) it will count as two usages of the technique, but it will only occupy one jutsu slot.
    -Spikes can extend up to 50 Centi meters in length.
    -If used when in short range, it will send the opponent 'flying' into mid range.
    -The 'cylinder' and fist form after three seconds of the execution of the punch, and they 'travel' in the air through the 'push' of the users chakra.
    -Only usable by me(MB) and those I teach.
    _______________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    similar techniques exist, as in the formation of the Ice fist.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-18-2013 at 12:13 PM. Reason: Added third Jutsu~

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Light... View Post
    X-Tebukuro| X-Gloves
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 [when active]
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The X gloves were said to be passed down to a ninja that showed extreme power and use of the Katon element. These gloves are said to be mostly red, Vongola Emblem in the middle, has an orange cross on top of it reading "Vongola Famiglia," and Flame type designs also covers the base of the gloves. These gloves are metallic, allowing the user to have a firm grip on whatever her/she touches. These gloves are surprisingly light weight. These gloves are said to been made in the stomach of a dragon. These gloves have a abilities. To activate the ability, the user have to use special trigger word. When the user enters a dangerous situation, they will say 'X-Gloves Activate' causing a large chakra surge to flow to the gloves, encasing them in katon chakra. The user will then be ale to use the gloves as a fire technique. This only does damage if it makes contact with the opponent. This ability will count as a B-rank fire technique and ca be used every other turn. This takes up one of the users jutsu slots for that turn.

    -Must have Mastered katon
    -When glove ability is activated, user can only use B-rank and lower water techniques
    -Mus be Kage ranked or higher to use
    -Can only be used by Light...

    _______________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    The X Gloves are made by Axle already, so get his permission first and we'll discuss the abilities of the sword.


    (Katon: x-ba-na-)| Fire Release: X-Burner
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: For this technique, the user will extend his/her hands forward, focusing a large amount of Katon chakra. The user will then condense/charging this chakra into both of their palms. The user will have to wait about 7 seconds to make sure that their chakra is evenly charged in both arm or this won't work. Because of the strength of this technique, the user has to put one hand behind them, and then the other hand to release the blast. The user will turn to their side, achieving perfect symmetry then they will yell "X-Burner" releasing the large mass of flame from both arms. The arm that is facing away from the opponent is not to attack, but for support or-else the user would be sent flying because of the extreme pressure from the arm they fired the technique. The x-burner is a large beam of pure fire chakra that is sent toward the opponent in one direction which means it can be eaisly avoided, but does extensive damage if it makes a direct hit

    Drawbacks and notes:

    -When the user uses this technique, the user can't use ANY katon techniques for the Next 2 turns
    -User becomes very tired because of the extensive amount of chakra used and can hardly move
    -The user must stay stationary when using
    -Must be used as a last resort
    -Can only be fired twice
    -Must have mastered the basic 5
    -Can only be used by Light...


    ________________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    Add a speed decrease restriction, and no S-ranks can be used in the next turn that this technique is used in, define how big is the stream of fire, and by stream it means that you have to keep releasing the fire chakra through your palms it's not a blast, remove that whole "must be used as a last resort" thing, and you need to find a way to make the waiting period other than "7 seconds" as the RP is not measured by seconds, it's measured by turns and timeframes.
    Resubmitting

    (Katon: x-ba-na-)| Fire Release: X-Burner
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: For this technique, the user will extend his/her hands forward, focusing a large amount of Katon chakra. The user will then condense/charging this chakra into both of their palms. The user will then use two of their jutsu slots to make sure that their chakra is evenly charged in both arm or this won't work. Because of the strength of this technique, the user has to put one hand behind them, and then the other hand to release the stream. The user will turn to their side, achieving perfect symmetry then they will yell "X-Burner" releasing the large mass of flame from both arms. The arm that is facing away from the opponent is not to attack, but for support or-else the user would be sent flying because of the extreme pressure from the arm they fired the technique. The x-burner is a beam of pure fire chakra that is sent toward the opponent in one direction which means it can be easily avoided, but does extensive damage if it makes a direct hit. [B]This beam is about 4 meters in width.

    Drawbacks and notes:

    -When the user uses this technique, the user can't use ANY katon techniques for the Next 2 turns
    -User becomes very tired because of the extensive amount of chakra used and can hardly move
    -The user must stay stationary when using
    -No s-ranks the same turn and the turn after this technique is used
    -After this is used, the user becomes sluggish, not moving as fast as they did before, their speed is cut by half.
    -Can only be fired once.
    -Can only be used by Light...


    ________________________
    ✘ Approved ✘
    remove a "restriction" and edited a few stuff, removed destroying everything in it's path, 2 meters in width means it's rather a small beam so i made it 4 instead, not as big as you might think, keep in mind that if someone is hit by the fire used for stability he won't suffer any kind of damage or even be blasted away, also keep in mind that "using" two of your jutsu slots means it counts as 2 moves.


    New

    ( Sution: Makishimamu Ba-suto )| Water Release: Maximum Burst
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: For this technique, the user focuses a large mass of suiton chakra into their hands. The user will then place their hands together as if they were performing ' Storm release: Laser Circus' (didn't know how to describe the way the hands are put together >_<), channeling the chakra allowing it to surround their hand. After this step has been done, the user will then yell 'Go!' releasing this bird like wave. The wave spreads out to about 3 meters, still leaving a trace on the users hand, this allowing them to move it to attack. The technique is allowed to make one turn, but take time.

    -Must have mastered Suiton
    -No Fire techniques the time this is used
    -Must be Sannin Rank or higher to use
    -Usable 2x
    -Can only be taught by Colonello...
    ________________________
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    remove the colored lol, what do you mean by no fire techniques the time this is used? o_O


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    ( Genjutsu : Osanago jikoku ) | Illusionary Arts: Baby time!
    Rank:B
    Type: Supplamentary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description: For this technique, the user sends their chakra into the opponent's brain, thus sending them into the genjutsu. This genjutsu attacks the opponent eyesight, allowing them to see a special phenomenon. The user of the Gen would shrink down and become a baby. The user who would 'seem' to be a baby by the opponent would stay the same, only people who are caught in the gen would see otherwise. As no one would forcefully attack a young and helpless baby, the user will have a chance, but their are some drawback with this. As the user wants this to seem real, the user is only allowed to use Mid- Short rage techniques while the opponent is under this genjutsu, the user will not be allowed to use any taijutsu while this is active. When the user talks, the opponent will hear babies wining.

    -Stays active for two turns if not broken
    -Once deactivated, can't be used for another 2 turns
    -No Long range techniques or Taijutsu when technique is active
    -Can only be taught by Colonello....
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    What the........... you can't make your opponent unable to attack you by using genjutsu, don't resubmit. EVER!!
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-18-2013 at 12:27 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Yukuji
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30 (-10 every turn it's in use)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Yukuji, known as Yu to the owner Cursed Prince, was created to fit in any battle situation. Forged by an ex-samurai, He created the ultimate shape changing sword. It is really nothing more than a extendable handle to a sword, with a hole where the blade would be. But, when chakra is poured into it, it can change into any type of word. It can go from being a katana to a heavy sword such as Zabuza's in an instant. It can even turn into other weapons, such as axes and spears. Once the user pours chakra into it, he can change it into the weapon he chooses. It is made from raw chakra, but is as strong and durable as any other blade. It does not retain any abillities from a sword it transforms to. (Samehada, Ameyuri Ringo's Lightning Blade ect.)
    - Can only extend up to 4 meters
    - Must know kenjutsu
    - Can only be used/taught by Cursed Prince
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    No chakra infusable swords allowed, don't like the idea of having a shape shifting CW either lol, you cna't make a CW take on the shape of Zabuza's sword, or any weapon of the seven swordsmen of the mist, or any cannon weapons for that matter.


    Raiton: 5 Gauge
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: To use this technique, the user builds a large amount of raiton chakra into their fingertips until it glows bright blue. The user then forms his hands to look like a gun, his index and middle finger pointed out and the rest of his fingers curled in. The user can then shoot C-rank lightning bolts at the opponents from each hand. If both are shot at the same target, it is equivalent to an A-rank attack. The user only has 5 shots, and 2 shots count as 1 turn. If the user moves his hand from its gun imitation, the technique is cancelled.
    - The user can only use lightning while this technique is active
    - The user cant move his hand from looking like a gun or the technique is cancelled.(No techs that require handseals)
    - The user has 5 shots
    - Each individual shot is C-ranked
    - 2 shots aimed at the same target is equal to an A-ranked attack
    - No raiton 2 turns after this tech is used
    - Can only be used 3 times per battle
    - Can only be used or taught by Cursed Prince
    ___________________________
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    similar techniques exist, also when making a technique the title should have a Romanji, and english translation of that romanji, so lightning should be "(Raiton) - Lightning Release" to make the template complete and not confuse us about what the technique is.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Want a fire version too if I could possibly
    [Katon : Gurandofaiyāfenikkusu ] - Fire Release : Grand Fire Phoenix
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Just like Korra's Grand Water Phoenix Jutsu but with fire the user will focus all their fire chakra into the sky. When they have enough chakra in the sky they start to create a giant phoenix that is the half the size of Gamabunta made of fire. When the phoenix is form it will explode into a large barrage of mini phoenixes that are the size of Abumanre bugs (and as such completely visible) and will come down onto the opponent with such great force that even if they were underground up to 3 meters underground the phoenixes would still break through and do minor damage like breaking a little into the skin but not do faultily damage. Although the small phoenixes don't actually move that fast, they pact great momentum.
    Note: Cannot use any fire jutsus for the next turn
    Note: It takes 2 jutsu moves to form.
    Note: Has to be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Every mini phoenix isnt S rank.
    Note: If the user does not find a way to defend them self or avoid the attack the jutsu will hurt the user.
    ♠ Declined ♠
    Reminds me of Selendrile's fire birds and also Kage Phoenix's technique. Too similar.


    Link to Reaper Scythe Arts Approval http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...8&postcount=71

    (Sishen Liandao Yishu: Shinigami wa u~iru) Reaper Scythe Arts: The Grim Reaper's Will
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Though it was develop form the elemental infusion, Korra was able to intensify the jutsu to create scythes made out of pure chakra non-elemental and elemental chakra. These chakra scythes are able to cut sharper then normal scythes. When using chakra the chakra scythes each have different effects.
    Katon: The scythe is made up of a dark reddish chakra and when in contact with an opponent can produce a burning effect upon contact.
    Suiton: The scythe is made up of a dark blue chakra, making the scythe more flexible and can increase the length up to 3 feet.
    Raiton: The chakra made up of yellow chakra increasing the scythes penetration and to have a numbing effect upon impact.
    Doton: The scythe made up of brown chakra can have its weight either increased (3 times as much) or decreased (3 times as much) to either increase impact or speed, depending on the situation (only one weight change per use, meaning either use this infusion for more weight or less with each use)
    Futon: The blade is made up of green chakra increasing its cutting power.
    Normal Chakra: The scythe is made up of light blue chakra and can be dense enough to stop ninja tools and ninjutsu (Up to B rank)
    Note: Usable 3 time a match
    Note: Must know Reaper Scythe Arts and must be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Can only have one infusion active. With earth infusion, each changing of weight counts as a use.
    Note: Each infusion can stop/cut in half the element its stronger then(depends on the opposing jutsu size) and can be broken by their weakness chakra by an A rank or higher.

    ♠ Declined ♠
    Alright, let's break this down, mate, as I am very hesitant about you using each of the scythes like that.
    First off, the scythe itself. How large is it, and how does one generally grasp it? It should also last a certain amount of time, as you are utilizing each of the elements.
    Katon: The scythe is made up of a dark reddish chakra and when in contact with an opponent can produce a burning effect upon contact. How does one expect to wield scythes of fire? They are intangible, and can easily be blown out by Wind jutsus.
    Suiton: The scythe is made up of a dark blue chakra, making the scythe more flexible and can increase the length up to 3 feet. Alright, I can relate this to D-Rank Water canon jutsu, but the way it works is a bit iffy. You can increase the length up to three feet? Does this make this mid range? And also, how might the attack of this differ from regular scythes? It can't be just water.
    Raiton: The chakra made up of yellow chakra increasing the scythes penetration and to have a numbing effect upon impact. The scythe's penetration? You need to be more specific here. And alright, I understand the numbing effect, however, you need to state a limit on that, and where exactly it numbs the opponent. Entire body? Certain limbs where the scythe makes contact?
    Doton: The scythe made up of brown chakra can have its weight either increased (3 times as much) or decreased (3 times as much) to either increase impact or speed, depending on the situation (only one weight change per use, meaning either use this infusion for more weight or less with each use). This makes sense, but you need a limit on how many times you can increase or decrease its weight.
    Futon: The blade is made up of green chakra increasing its cutting power. Hm...well, Wind would at least be the most emphasized upon, wouldn't it? There's much more you can do with Wind than just increase its cutting power, but alright.
    Normal Chakra: The scythe is made up of light blue chakra and can be dense enough to stop ninja tools and ninjutsu (Up to B rank) I grasp the concept of this, but Ninjutsu is a generic concept and I don't know how it can generally stop all Ninjutsu up to B-Rank. How would you stop killing intent or haze clones? But alright...


    Snake Signing Thread http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=141664
    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Arbok) -Summoning Technique-Arbok
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Arbok is a purple cobra that is slightly smaller than the snakes Orochimaru summons in the manga/anime. Arbok has the ability to use Genjutsu up to B rank. Arbok is most used to carry dead bodies for Korra and other people that can summon him. Arbok can carry upto 10 dead or unconscious bodies in his stomach. If he tries carry any more the 1st body that was swallow will be lost due to it being get kick out and move to Arbok stomach.(Sorry about the graphicness ).
    Note: Must have snakes
    Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Can be summon twice a battle and can be on the field for 5 turns.

    How he looks like:

    ♠ Declined ♠
    Alright, summons that can use Genjutsus are extremely sly. First off, ensure that this is the ONLY ability your summon can have. Secondly, can only be on the field for four turns.
    Also, when your summon uses Genjutsus, you need to state the range and how many times it can use Genjutsu in a match.
    Resubmitting

    Snake Signing Thread http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=141664
    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Arbok) -Summoning Technique-Arbok
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Arbok is a purple cobra that is slightly smaller than the snakes Orochimaru summons in the manga/anime. Arbok has the ability to use Genjutsu up to B rank which is the only ability he can use. When Arbok uses Genjutsu he can only use it up to short range of himself and can only use genjutsu 5 times in a battle. Arbok is most used to carry dead bodies for Korra and other people that can summon him. Arbok can carry upto 10 dead or unconscious bodies in his stomach. If he tries carry any more the 1st body that was swallow will be lost due to it being get kick out and move to Arbok stomach.(Sorry about the graphicness ).
    Note: Must have snakes
    Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Can be summon once a battle and can be on the field for 4 turns.
    ______________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    remove that whole dead bodies reference lol.


    New

    (Genjutsu: Furaingudatchiman No Noroi) Illusionary Arts: The Curse of the Flying Dutchman
    Rank: S rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user will start off by doing the Dragon sign and then snap their fingers which trigger the genjutsu. Once the user snaps their fingers the opponent will see a green ghostly figure come out of the ground underneath them that grabs them. When the Dutchman grabs the opponent it creates a paralyze state for the opponent causing them to barely be able to move like moving their hands will have take some time(20 seconds) for them to be able to do move it. The Flying Dutchman will then create a zip in the air and pull it down creating a portal that he throws the opponent in and then closing it. In the portal the opponent will see only ghosts of all kinds which cause stress on their mind making them immobilized and eventually causes them to pass out due to brain stress.
    Note: This Genjutsu takes time to cause the opponent to pass out and during that time the user cannot use any other genjutsu and can only use up to A rank for any other element or ninjutsu.
    Note: When the opponent is in the ghost zone it takes 3 turns to cause enough stress to knock them out therefore can only use up to two moves per turn while they have to maintain focus for the genjutsu to be use to its full extend.
    Note: Usable 2 times a match, and must wait 5 turns before using it again.
    Note: Must be taught by Kōrra
    To imagine it better its from spongebob and this video shows it.

    ____________________________
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    Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I will be dropping the weapon in the quote. Here is where it was approved------> http://narutobase.net/forums/showpos...postcount=5631

    -Snake Tail (Hebi No O)
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Hebi No O(Short version:Hebi) was after Dei Dei made is stretchable scarf. He made this sword whip out of the same material just more stronger. Hebi is a 6-part segmented blade; each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with 2 pick-like protrusions on the front and back of each segment, with the ones on the front much longer than the ones at the back. The segments are connected by a stretchable thread that is a very strong material, making Hebi more useful as a whip than an actual sword, though it can serve as a regular sword just as easily, thanks to Dei Dei swordsmanship. Hebi's guard and handle remain the same as a normal katana. While Hebi can be stretched to incredible lengths in its whip form, Dei Dei has a limit of three consecutive attacks before having to bring the segments of Hebi back together for recovery -which makes him fairly vulnerable during this time interval. To make up for this, Dei Dei has to have a plan ahead of time. It is also wrapped in bandages when not in use and the bandages is attached on the hilt which acts on the user will.

    -Mid range is the limit it can reach
    -It can be used three times back to back when it is stretched out. After the third use it has to retract to recover for one turn.
    -Only used by Dei Dei




    (This sword just acts the same as in Bleach but without it going to long range.)

    Dropping this http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showpost.php?p=4318676&postcount=4663] weapon[/url] for the one above if it gets approved.

    I took out the bold part the mod had bolded. It really didn't mean anything but oh well it is out now.

    ±± Approved ±± Yeah it did actually. It meant you could grow your sword segments almost without limit. lol
    (Mizu Beara) Water Bearers
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: These Water Bearers was created by Solf to have a unique water weapon in battle. He made two hilts that are called Bearers. The Bearers are made of a material so the user can channel their chakra and manipulate water sources or even the moister in the air for varies objects such as weapons, shields on top of them. These two hilts are the perfect weapon for a weapon user and water user. The user channels their chakra and absorbs some water or moister in the air and using shape manipulation shapes the water into any weapon or shield the user like to fit for the situation. The highest rank of the object that is made of water is A rank. The user can have already have water in the bearers but they must state this at the beginning of the battle.
    -Only used when the air has enough moister to make the weapon of chose of the user or a some type of water source is in the area of short range of the user to use to use to make the weapon of chose of the user.
    -The weapons made from the water still go by the elemental advantages and disadvantages
    -The weapons when made also feel like the real weapon when used
    ||Declined|| Restrict it a bit (I would suggest some form of limit to how often the shape of the water weapons can be changed)



    Sealing Arts: Shine Bright (Fuuinjutsu: Akaruku Kagayaku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user after having Fuuin for a year, makes a tattoo on both of their arms that reacts with their chakra. The only way the tattoos react to the user chakra is when it is irregular. The tattoos glow a white light down the whole tattoo when the user chakra is irregular. The light is bright enough to see when not even looking at the arms. The user can see the light from the corner of their eyes.
    -Must be posted in the bio or beginning of the battle
    -Must have fuuin for a year because they need the experience to developed such sealing tattoos on themselves.

    How they look when they glow but it will be brighter.

    ||Declined|| What's the point of this technique?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Seals
    Scroll Owner: Defg
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a

    Summoning Boss if existing:n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:n/a
    Description and Background: Seals aka pinniped are a widely distributed and diverse group of fin-footed marine mammals which are semiaquatic comprising the families Odobenidae (the walrus), Otariidae (eared seals, sea lions, and fur seals), and Phocidae (earless seals).
    For in-dept info on seals
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    ±± Approved ±±
    this was hard to search in all the threads because Seals (animal) is written the same as Seals (from Fuuinjutsu, Handseals, etc). but I didn't find a match for it.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (kuchiyose no jutsu: ojichan ohashi)-Summoning technique: Grandpa Toucan
    Type:supplementary/summoning
    Rank: A
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:30
    Damage:None
    Description: the user properly performs the summoning technique before summoning the elder toucan. Grandpa Toucan is blind but somehow very aware of his surroundings. he is large enough to stand on the user's shoulder and doesn't leave that position until he returns to his home. Grandpa Toucan wears a withered gray cloak and the colors on his beak are faded which really shows his age. He is the oldest of the toco toucans and therefore speaks the ancient language of the toucans which only the contract signer and the boss toucan are taught thru training. As he speaks the language the sound of his voice causes those that are used to his voice to become immune to genjutsu as long as he is summoned and at the same time put those that aren't in an A-rank genjutsu.
    note: usable only to toco toucan contract signers
    note: last three turns
    note: genjutsu usable only once
    ||Pending|| Is this genjutsu user-specific or is it just any NarutoBase Genjutsu?

    approved contract

    (Futago no doragon: Kirikaeru To Kakeru)-Twin Dragons: Kirikaeru and Kakeru
    Type:weapon
    Rank:A
    Range:short-mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60(when cut by kakeru)
    Description:legend has it that there was a warrior in the ninja world that was so strong that he never lost a battle, including the battle between him and nidaime hokage, tobirama senju. After a while the warrior had gotten bored from all the weaklings he had defeated. After hearing legend about the power of two dragons in the distant land he traveled to face them but not for power but for the thrill of battle he had been longing for. After defeating the dragons, their power was absorbed by the warrior’s wakizashi and katana. the blade is made of dragon scales and the sheath made of dragon claw thus making both the blade and the sheath indestructable. Knowing that this power would make future challenges less entertaining due to the combined strength of his skill and the dragons’ power he discarded them leaving them for someone weaker and less skilled.

    Abilities:

    Kirikaeru: the wakizashi’s ability after cutting the opponent the sword can grant the ability to switch places with the opponent after focusing chakra into it.

    Kakeru: the katana’s ability after focusing chakra into the katana multiple blades can extend short range from the original blade making it more difficult to avoid. The blade returns to it’s original state after chakra is withdrawn.

    image of swords


    ||Declined|| Can you explain the Kirikaeru better? Also, these swords are pretty similar to those that already exist.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Ł Lawliet View Post
    ( Furea ) - Flare
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: C - Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user first Stands and extends his right leg in front of him and his left leg to the left of him. Then he places his hands on the floor with his right hand on the floor in between his legs. Then the user lifts his left hand in the air to help with both balance and momentum, after that he puts his weight on his left leg and swings his right leg up and around. The user rotates his legs around his body, shifting his weight from one hand to the other and back again as his legs pass. This process can be done much quicker if the user was of Sannin rank and higher.

    Note: Can only be taught by Ł Lawliet.
    _____________________________
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    What is this O_o why does it have damage points and mentioned as an attack when i don't see any kind of attack in the description, or chakra charging as well.
    -Resubmitting-

    ( Furea ) - Flare
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user first Stands and extends his right leg in front of him and his left leg to the left of him. Then he places his hands on the ground with his right hand on the ground in between his legs. Then the user lifts his left hand in the air to help with both balance and momentum, after that he puts his weight on his left leg and swings his right leg up hitting the opponent's leg, thigh, or knee which ever the user needs to throws him off balance and into the air sideways. The user rotates his legs around his body, shifting his weight from one hand to the other and once his head is tilted infront of his body he pushes himself off the ground with his hand and does a front flip where the back of his heel hits the opponent in his abdomen region slamming him into the ground. This process can be done noticeably faster if the user was of Sannin rank and higher.

    Note: Can only be taught by Ł Lawliet.
    (Good enough, Dante ?)
    ||Approved||

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    ( Genjutsu: Kabe ni mirāmirā ) - Illusionary Arts: Mirror Mirror on the wall
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user releases his chakra towards his opponent using ANY, VALID, medium, such as earth, water, or even through a wind gust trapping him in a Genjutsu where the opponent sees a mirror coming out of the ground infront him. The mirror has the exact same reflection of the opponent's image, but the -Mirror Reflection of the opponent- is being controlled by the user himself. This Genjutsu is aimed to shock and affect the opponent's brain by releasing a huge amount of the user's chakra towards the opponent making him disorientated to such a degree that he starts to imitate his mirror reflection instead of it being the other way around. The user then is able to control the opponent's movements using the reflection for (5) seconds, before the disorientation effect fades away and the opponent starts to realize that he's in a Genjutsu. The user cannot use the same element he used as a Chakra channeling medium in the same turn, ( example; The user used a wind gust as a medium to channel the Genjutu's chakra to the opponent, then he may NOT use any wind technique in the same turn ).

    Note: Can only be used (2) times per battle, and each time has to be separated by at least (2) turns before using this technique again.
    Note: If the user made handseals for a technique, the opponent will make the same handseals but CANNOT create the attack unless it was in his Jutsu arsenal from the beginning.
    Note: After the (5) seconds, the opponent still needs to figure out that he's in a Gen before releasing himself from it.
    Note: Can only be taught by Ł Lawliet.

    ||Declined|| No to the bold.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Raiton/Katon: Maruii kaen Zuchireiki) - Lightning/Fire Release: Twist of the Blazing Thunder
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: F
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description: The user will perform 1 handseal and focus lightning chakra into his palm, releasing it and manipulation the lightning into the shape of a rasengan-sized orb of lightning, then the user will gather fire chakra and spew out a large amount of it around the lightning orb, to serve as a coat. The user will then trust his palm foward and extend the orb into a large and fast beam of lightning, helped by the fire to twirl/spin around the lightning in ring formation, creating a fire/lightning beam combination. The shear speed of lightning and the devastating strength of fire combined with lightning make this technique deadly, and it's speed is bearly able to be tracked by a 2 tomoe sharingan. Regular naked eyes would see more of a blur move towards them. Thanks to the fire around the beam of lightning, this beam can pass through and overpower wind techniques, and thanks to it's lightning destructive strength it can also tear through and rip apart earth techniques. Due to the tremendous strength of this technique, the user's palm after using the technique is rather burned and paralized for the entire turn, not only this but the huge amount of chakra applied and controled spent on this techniques renders the user to be able to only use A rank and below Lightning and fire techniques for the following 2 turns of the match.

    May only be used x1 per battle.
    May only be taught by Lokí
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Lord Vile's Armor
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:Self
    Chakra:40 (-5 per turn)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This armor looks like something out of a nightmare. It is very simply decorated, it is as black as night with a helmet that completely covers the user's head. The history of the armor is a simple and bloody one. It was forged by a material as black as night called Ebony. It was melted down, and formed into the armor by one of the first Nara clansmen. That Nara has since passed it back and forth through his clan. The armor has the ability to manipulate already existing shadows. It can manipulate these shadows into B rank tendrils similar to the shadow stitching jutsu. The difference is that the shadow tendrils come out of the armor itself, and are controlled by the user. They can move up to mid range, and there are a fair amount of them. These tendrils can be used to stab, grab, rip, and trap the enemy. Like normal shadows, the shadows from the armor can be extinguished with complete darkness, or extreme light. The armor obviously being armor in it's very nature can protect the user from simple tools such as shuriken, and kunai. The armor's other ability is it's ability to create a surge of chakra through the user allowing him to break out of C rank and below genjutsu (of course he would still need to know he was in the genjutsu). If someone other than Killua zoldyck attempted to wear the armor, that person would be consumed by shadow chakra and stabbed in the stomach. He would then be tortured, being stabbed repeatedly by the shadows until he finally succumbed to his wounds and died a slow painful death. The armor has no chakra of it's own, so it must feed on the chakra of the user every turn it is in play to function.

    Restrictions

    -Cannot be put on during battle, only before or after.-
    -Lasts only 4 turns-
    -Genjutsu break ability only once per battle-
    -Only a Nara bio made by PresidentBush can use it.-
    - eats 5 chakra per turn-

    How the armor itself looks:

    ||Pending|| I want another mod's opinion. By the way, you might as well have made this the Ebony Mail

    Lightning Release: Thor's Hammer!
    Type:Offense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user pulls out a scroll, and concentrates lightning chakra into the scroll. The lightning chakra is then disperesed into the air, and reassembles directly behind the user about as large as an elephant and composed entirely of lightning. The materialization then swings a hammer composed entirely of lightning of course directly at the opponent. If the hammer hits the opponent, it has the potential to send him flying in the opposite direction in addition to electrocuting him. The materialization then disperses.

    Restrictions

    -Can only be taught by PB-
    -Can only be used twice per battle-
    -Can break through S rank earth-
    ||Declined|| Do Not Resubmit (Similar Technique Exists)

    Oh crap what the Hell is that?!
    Type:Offense
    Rank:B
    Range:Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:The user focuses fire chakra into his body, and pressurizes it. He then channels it into his elbow, and uses it to propel himself forward. This increases the forward momentum and speed of the corresponding arm. The user then drives his fist into the enemy at a very high speed . The enemy is then sent flying several feet away.


    ||Declined|| A member has brought to my attention that a similar technique already exists.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Fuuton : Disuasenburu) - Wind Release : Disassemble
    Type : Defensive / Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : The user releases from the palm of his right or left hand, a highly compressed senbon of wind. The senbon is slightly larger than the ordinary senbon, but being made out of wind, just makes it as invisible as a regular senbon. With a single fling of the arm towards the intended direction, the user is capable of launching the senbon at greater speeds than the average senbons, thanks to the senbon being made out of wind. The primary function of this technique is to intrude enemy techniques, reach the very core of the technique and explode, releasing an all-round raging blast of wind. As though disassembling the technique, it takes it apart from the inside, causing techniques to falter before this technique. That is the main purpose of this technique, though it could be mistaken that due to it's quick speeds and sharp piercing ability, it could be utilized to just pierce through the enemy, killing them instantly, just like that. However, an unwritten law oversees the usages of this technique. The senbon is incapable of piercing into human flesh, instead, it releases the blast of wind, knocking the opponent out cold, but not causing instant death. If they wish to rejuvenate, they may possibly be able to if the situation allows for it.

    Note : Created by Yūsuke
    Note : Can only be used four times per battle
    Note : No wind techniques higher than S-rank to be used in the same turn
    Note : The unwritten law oversees the technique, as per said in description
    ___________________________
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    How would a senbon made of wind, meaning it has a very small scale do such things? that's unrealistic for one, why would you say that the needle is as invisible as other senbons, other senbons aren't invisible, you should've said "as visible as other senbons" core of the technique makes no sense, i'll leave the changes up to you, you even didn't restrict the kind of elemental or techniques it works, so this basically works against everything.


    (Fuuton : Suihourenda) - Wind Release : Bubble Barrage
    Type : Offensive
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user concentrates his wind chakra at about ten different spots in the air around his opponent. They have their distance between each other, and are placed at different angles from the opponent and are significantly near the opponent, but no where less than a meter. The tenth spot where the wind chakra is concentrated at will have to be directly placed over the opponent's body, at chest-level, behind, front or to the opponent's side. After the user get's the wind chakra in place, the user snaps his fingers and the wind chakra takes the form of bubbles of wind, that pops when in touch with any kind of surface, be it sharp or blunt. Upon being popped, it releases a sharp blast of wind that pushes the opponent into the direction where the wind sends them, which is directed by the user upon placement of wind chakra. The wind chakra that was placed directly onto the opponent acts as the techniques's trigger. Immediately after it becomes a bubble, it pops due to being so close to the opponent. It becomes much like pinball, where the enemy is the ball and he gets pushed around at high speeds, knocking against the other bubbles. Every bubble pop hurts the opponent. Within a few seconds, the technique would be over, since there aren't really a lot of bubbles. By default, if no changes was made to the final bubble, it will send the opponent flying into the sky, letting him fall back towards the ground. Most of the bones in the opponent's bodies would have already been broken upon the last bubble being popped as all the bubbles together rivals the level of S-rank.

    Note : Created by Yūsuke
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : While this technique is active, no wind techniques higher than A-rank can be used
    Note : The minimum numher of bubbles must be ten, having more will prolong the technique's activeness, giving more time to counter
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    This is a rip off of bubble Ninjutsu used by Utakata, wind doesn't form bubbles, only water does and with some form of shape manipulation, Utakata needs a bubble blower to do that, don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-20-2013 at 10:11 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Mockingbird View Post
    Resubmitting:

    Genjutsu: Komaiso; Taigo Sendai Yaburetayume) Illusion Technique: Great Burial; Ranks of the Irrevocably Shattered Souls
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced Non-Sharingan Genjutsu that can only be activated if and when the user can see the opponent’s body, or at least his upper torso. Within the illusion, the opponent believes that large amounts of water burst out of the ground and materialize from thin air to completely envelop and wash them away. The water will converge on and physically touch him no matter what methods of evasion are used, or whatever defense he has established. As the imaginary water washes him away, the opponent is exposed to a more powerful hallucination in which they, as a ninja, witness the pain and numerous deaths inflicted on others throughout history, during past wars and battles – The illusion manifests as a representation of the pain that war brings. The hallucination is excessively intricate and detailed, as the irrevocably shattered souls of the damned reciprocate the damage and pain that was once dealt to them in the past, using the water as their medium. While witnessing this, the water will thoroughly burn away the skin as if it was a potent acid. While this is not happening in reality – It’s nothing more than an illusion – the enemy is faced with such perceived agony and fear, that his muscles will begin to uncontrollably convulse, and he will scream out in pain, unable to fight, or even remain completely still as the pain washes over him, while under the influence of this jutsu.

    *This technique can only be used twice per battle.
    *The user cannot use any Genjutsu at all within the following turn.
    *The user must wait a full three turns before using this technique a second time around.
    *The user must remain still focused over the genjutsu through the entirety of the technique.
    X-Approved-X added a restriction
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    Genjutsu: Komaiso; Taigo Sendai Yaburetayume) Illusion Technique: Great Burial; Ranks of the Irrevocably Shattered Souls
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced Non-Sharingan Genjutsu that can only be activated if and when the user can see the opponent’s body, or at least his upper torso. Within the illusion, the opponent believes that large amounts of water burst out of the ground and materialize from thin air to completely envelop and wash them away. The water will converge on and physically touch him no matter what methods of evasion are used, or whatever defense he has established. As the imaginary water washes him away, the opponent is exposed to a more powerful hallucination in which they, as a ninja, witness the pain and numerous deaths inflicted on others throughout history, during past wars and battles – The illusion manifests as a representation of the pain that war brings. The hallucination is excessively intricate and detailed, as the irrevocably shattered souls of the damned reciprocate the damage and pain that was once dealt to them in the past, using the water as their medium. While witnessing this, the water will thoroughly burn away the skin as if it was a potent acid. While this is not happening in reality – It’s nothing more than an illusion – the enemy is faced with such perceived agony and fear, that his muscles will begin to uncontrollably convulse, and he will scream out in pain, unable to fight, or even remain completely still as the pain washes over him, while under the influence of this jutsu.

    *This technique can only be used twice per battle.
    *The user cannot use any Genjutsu at all within the following turn.
    *The user must wait a full three turns before using this technique a second time around.
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    Seriously now? when you don't understand something one of us has edited you should contact them asking for information, not resubmit it removing what we did, right now i could revoke your right to have such a technique just because of what you did here, it means when the genjutsu is cast you can't use another technique until it's finished, that's for me, contact Xylon about it and ask him for information.


    I removed the last restriction because I wasn't sure what it meant.
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    CFS Approval: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post7764828

    (Hakkyou Taijutsu: Asura no Manbennaku Hakkyou) Hakkyou Martial Art: Asura’s Ubiquitous Madness
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will begin by effectively subjecting their target to a genjutsu through the use of eye contact or hand gestures. Within the genjutsu, the user will disappear from sight, their body dissolving into a flock of crows – Though this is only the initial effect. As the user disappears, superfluous amounts of useless ‘information’ will be forcibly crammed into the mind of the opponent. The brain will interpret the ‘information’ as a form of psychosis and induce symptoms such as auditory hallucinations, bizarre persecutory delusions, giving rise to paranoia, as well as disorganized thinking, effectively disturbing cognitive function.The illusion basically serves to effectively hamper the opponent’s ability to process thought. While the opponent is deprived of the ability to think, the user will rush towards the opponent, appearing in front of them, delivering an initial punch to the solar plexus and then the left pectoral muscle. The initial two strikes serve to break the genjutsu and catch the opponent off guard as well as induce breathing difficulties, a few broken bones. The user will finish with a powerful upwards palm thrust to the throat, palm sideways, clenching down to reduce the blood flow to the brain, knocking the opponent out, and in the worst case scenario, causing cervical fracture. What makes this technique even more formidable however is that after the illusion is broken, the information is still retained within the opponent’s mind. This results in a lag of about three to four seconds in the opponent before they can focus long enough to perform techniques or undertake specific actions in the following turn.

    *The illusion will only work twice per battle.
    *In the following turn, the user is restricted to the use of B Rank and below Hakkyou Taijutsu.
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    Too much. Reduce range, reduce rank and reduce the overal effect.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 01-23-2013 at 05:26 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Ninja Art:Heavenly Light(Ninjutsu:Ten No Hikari)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:E
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:5
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user will first perform one handseal,Dog,then sslam their hands together as they're hands seperate a ball of chakra will be formed this ball will then be slamed into any surface causing an explosion of sorts causing a huge burst of light that's even brighter than a normal flash bomb.



    Restriction/Notes
    -Can only be taught by sonnelion.
    -Blindness lasts for one battle phase.
    -Require one turn breaks between use.
    -Doesn't affect people with doujutsu active.

    Ninja Art: Demon Smoke Bomb(Ninjutsuni Kemuri Kumo)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:E
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:5
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user will perform one handseal,Rabbit,then grab two smoke bombs and channel chakra into them then as normal they will throw them to trigger them and as they explode because of the chakra infused the user will be able to control it to an extent the smoke will be spread wider and form several demon heads at the end of the smoke cloud.
    Restrictions/Notes
    -Can only be taught by sonnelion.
    -Require one turn breaks between use.
    -Doujutsu users will be able to see through the smoke.
    -Lasts until the end of the opponent's battle phase unless dealt with.
    -The user can make openings in the smoke since it's his chakra.
    *It's a dark black color and disperses at a even rate in a complete circle*


    -Also the cloud's height is 14 feet high.

    Heaven's/Hell's Call(Ten Ka Jigoku No Yobidashi)
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:N/A[+5 for each turn chakra imbued for each weapon]
    Damage:20[+10 when ability active]
    Description:Heaven's call is a 8 feet wide and tall cross pike weapon that is composed of chakra absorbing metal and steel with a blue design on each of the four blades.Heaven's call has the ability to be imbued with chakra and once imbued the blades will be surrounded by lightning and can paralyze if a hit lands.It also has the ability when thrown to release the chakra in the shape of a lightning saw equal to a C-rank lightning technique.When thrown the cross pike will return to the user at 20 mph.

    Heaven's Rage(Ten No Ikari)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description:The user will,once the weapon is imbued,be thrown as this happens the command will be given by the user by performing a handseal with one hand,Tiger, causing the blade to be release the chakra in the form of a lightning saw and as it's released the weapon begins to return to the user.
    Restrictions/Notes
    -Can only be used twice a battle
    -Requires 1 turn breaks between use.
    -Can only be used with this weapon



    Hell's Call is a 8 feet wide and tall cross pike weapon that is composed of chakra absorbing metal and steel with a red design on each of the four blades.Hell's call has the ability to be imbued with chakra and once imbued the blades will heat up to the point that it is on fire and glowing red hot,but not to the point that it will lose it's strength.The blades also will b surrounded by fire balls that follow the blades.Hell's call can be thrown just like heavens call and use a similar attack.

    Hell's Rage(Jigoku No Ikari)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description: The user will spin the weapon with one hand infront of them until the user has picked up enough speed,the fireballs look like one ring of fire after that the user will suddenly stop/catch the spinning weapon sending the fireballs towards the opponent and the user will be able to control the fireballs to a extent,as in able to turn them towards the opponent but that's essentially it.
    Restrictions/Notes
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Require 1 turn breaks between use.
    -Can only be used with this weapon.
    -There are 4 fireballs and the size of these are 1 and 1/2 feet wide by 1 and 1/2 feet tall.



    Note
    -Can be used at the same time or by themselves.
    -Have to be summoned to use.
    -Costs 2 chakra to summon one of the weapons.

    Heaven's Call

    Hell's Call



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    Submitting more than 3 techniques between markers is against the rules, and thus i won't check any of your techniques. if you did this again you will be punished.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-20-2013 at 10:22 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Raiton:Kirameku Hiroi Atsuryoku - Lightning Release:Sparkling Wide Pressure
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user performs the Snake hand seal and then channels their chakra to their hands. The user then charges the chakra thus converting it into lightning chakra. The user will then separate their hands creating streams of lightning in the gap between them. The user then brings their hands closer to each other together while shaping and compact the lightning stream into a disc and launch it at the enemy.
    Note:
    -Can only be used 3x
    -Can only be taught by Kage Phoenix

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    Similar techniques exist.


    Raiton:Mokusei Ōku Shinka - Lightning Release:Jupiter Oak Evolution
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Medium
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the Bird->Rat->Horse hand seals and then gathers chakra and channels it all around their body and converts it into lightning chakra. The user then generates lightning from their pores and expands it from their body. The user then shapes the lightning into 10 discs of energy. After that the user start to spin rapidly, while launching the discs at the opponent.
    Note:
    -Can only be taught by Kage Phoenix
    -Can only be used 2x

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    Generates lightning from their pores? no you should remove that, and similar techniques exist, too generic, don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 01-20-2013 at 10:25 AM.

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