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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Magic.. View Post
    New submission

    (genjutsu-Kai no te) - illusion technique- hands of time
    Rank: A
    Type: supplementary
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs a snake handseal,whilst ejecting chakra into the brains of their foes nearby,making them think everything in their souroundings,including the user,as well as theirselves and everything the can see in general,has frozen(motionless),though it would seem like some kind of time manipulation jutsu was used,while infact,their vision of reality was paused and they were placed in a trance like state.
    -last for a turn
    -Once per battle
    -No s-rank and above genjutsu next turn.
    -Can affect multiple targets.
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    Too high a rank and you need more than one handseal to induce such an effect...
    (genjutsu-Kai no te) - illusion technique- hands of time
    Rank: B
    Type: supplementary
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user performs 3 set of handseals,whilst ejecting chakra into the brains of their foes nearby,making them think everything in their souroundings,including the user,as well as theirselves and everything the can see in general,has frozen(motionless),though it would seem like some kind of time manipulation jutsu was used,while infact,their vision of reality was paused and they were placed in a trance like state.
    -last for a turn
    -twice per battle
    -Can affect multiple targets.
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    Ok my concern here is the "time manipulation" jutsu you mention, there isn't anything of the sort in the narutoverse or our RP, if you mentioned it to keep your opponent from noticing that he's under a genjutsu then it's invalid, because the second everything freezes they will notice that they are under a genjutsu from that, and define motionless, does it make the opponent freeze in reality, as in unable to move? paralysis or not? that needs to be defined.


    (genjutsu-Fukusū bijon) -illusion technique- multiple vision
    Rank: B
    Type: supplementary
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a basic genjutsu where the user performs just 2 handseals,whilst casting an illusion on the foe,which changes their vision of certain things like attacks and the user, to be in multiple forms.It can be used in conjuction with elemental attacks e.g(if a fire ball is heading for the target,he sees 5 fire ball thus won't knw which to dodge) and also taijutsu attacks,where the target can't tell which is the real hand or leg thus they will surely have a hard time blocking kicks and punches.
    -last for a turn.
    -twice per battle.
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    Similar techniques exist, in both genjutsu and ninjutsu.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Custom weapon

    (金沙羅, Golden Sal Tree)-Kinshara*
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid range
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Well the whip in it's self has a unique golden look while the scabbard has a 2.5 inch length. The whip can extends from the scabbard to the length of 25 feet while being manipulated by chakra to control the direction of attack and the speed in which the whip is being sent out at. meaning this is a chakra activated weapon as the whip will only extend when my chakra has been discharged into the scabbard.The whip has a flower like end at the end of it and has a unique ability where the user's sends chakra into to blind an opponent with bright flashes and light source beaming off the flower like tip. Knowing that this is a length based weapon puppet master's would have an advantage against this weapon they can easily attach chakra string to this whip to stop its movements. the whip is made of flexible titanium joints capable of flexing and moving at high speeds.This whip works very well for subdue tactics and disabling an enemy from being able to move or make hand sign by wrapping around there body as long as the enemy is wrapped up with the whip making hand signs is nearly impossible unless you can do handsigns with one hand.
    Look of the
    Secret technique: the user of Kinshara can change the frequency of his chakra to make a musical genjutsu that resides out of the small pin holes in the gold links of Kinshara the genjutsu is played in a crescendo type melody (meaning calming) hypnotizing the enemy leaving them motionless. Now to explain what changing the frequency will mean. By utilizing the different vibrations between raiton chakra in my hand the user can speed up the vibrations until they make a screeching type noise. Now by feeding that chakra in through the scabbard it is released out the the numerous pin holes which are setup in perfect coordination to release a melody by continuation of feeding the chakra frequencys to Kinshara.
    weapon:

    Restrictions:
    - light flash usage attacks with Kinshara have a limit of 3 attacks per battle and needs a one turn cool down to use.
    -genjutsu effect can only be used twice in battle. And has a three turn period in between uses.
    -Can only be used Roju
    - can be used 5 strikes per turn as the effects of Kinshara are very melodramatic.
    - The whip will only extend with roju's touch only as his my chakra has been mixed in with the fabrication of the whip

    Special notes: as this is a tactic type weapon does not do direct damage to opponents rather it has effect which were all list but will list again
    - binding
    -bright flower light
    -genjutsu
    -extension (can trip and or knock over opponent as fact that Kinshara is not sharp so can only leave bruising an or internal injuries from binding or being hit.)
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    Music genjutsu is a no, you need to have sound release and Roku NR's permission to have that, and you should in the future define the extension of a range it can reach up to, like Mid range, Long range etc, remove the flexible titanium joins, -Mugen- has Titanium release and thus your CW can't have that, and hypnotizing ability? that's a Sharingan's ability, what bright flower light? changing the chakra frequency? honestly the CW is a big mess.



    Summoning Animal: Venus flytrap
    Scroll Owner: Roju
    Other Users who have signed contract: None yet
    Summoning Boss if existing: None yet
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None as of yet
    Description and Background:*

    The Venus Flytrap (also Venus's Flytrap or Venus' Flytrap), Dionaea muscipula, is a carnivorous plant native to subtropical wetlands. It catches its prey—chiefly insects and arachnids— with a trapping structure formed by the terminal portion of each of the plant's leaves and is triggered by tiny hairs on their inner surfaces. When an insect or spider crawling along the leaves contacts a hair, the trap closes if a different hair is contacted within twenty seconds of the first strike. The requirement of redundant triggering in this mechanism serves as a safeguard against a waste of energy in trapping objects with no nutritional value.

    The Venus Flytrap is a *plant whose structure can be described as a rosette of four to seven leaves, which arise from a short subterranean stem that is actually a bulb-like object. Each stem reaches a maximum size of about three to ten centimeters, depending on the time of year; longer leaves with robust traps are usually formed after flowering. Flytraps that have more than 7 leaves are colonies formed by rosettes that have divided beneath the ground.

    two trigger hairs must be touched in succession within 20 seconds of each other or one hair touched twice in rapid succession, whereupon the lobes of the trap will snap shut in about one-tenth of a second. The edges of the lobes are fringed by stiff hair-like protrusions or cilia, which mesh together and prevent large prey from escaping. (These protrusions, and the trigger hairs, also known as sensitive hairs, are probably homologous with the tentacles found in this plant’s close relatives, the sundews.)
    The holes in the meshwork allow small prey to escape, presumably because the benefit that would be obtained from them would be less than the cost of digesting them. If the prey is too small and escapes, the trap will reopen within 2 minutes. If the prey moves around in the trap, it tightens and digestion begins more quickly.
    Speed of closing can vary depending on the amount of humidity, light, size of prey, and general growing conditions. The speed with which traps close can be used as an indicator of a plant's general health. Venus Flytraps are not as humidity-dependent as are some other carnivorous plants, such as Nepenthes, Cephalotus, most Heliamphora, and some Drosera.
    The Venus Flytrap exhibits variations in petiole shape and length and whether the leaf lies flat on the ground or extends up at an angle of about 40–60 degrees.*The plant's common name refers to Venus, the Roman goddess of love.*Closeup of one of the hinged trigger hairs.



    Prey selectivity
    Most carnivorous plants selectively feed on specific prey. This selection is due to the available prey and the type of trap used by the organism. With the Venus Flytrap, prey is limited to beetles, spiders and other crawling arthropods. In fact, the Dionaea diet is 33% ants, 30% spiders, 10% beetles, and 10% grasshoppers, with fewer than 5% flying insects.[9] Given that Dionaea evolved from an ancestral form of Drosera (carnivorous plants that use a sticky trap instead of a snap trap) the reason for this evolutionary branching becomes clear. Can attack any other animal or fish as well if the hair's are triggered by the summoner .


    Mechanism of trapping

    A closing trap.Closed cilia around the prey
    The Venus Flytrap is one of a very small group of plants capable of rapid movement, such as Mimosa, the Telegraph plant, sundews and bladderworts.
    The mechanism by which the trap snaps shut involves a complex interaction between elasticity, turgor and growth. In the open, untripped state, the lobes are convex (bent outwards), but in the closed state, the lobes are concave (forming a cavity). It is the rapid flipping of this bistable state that closes the trap, but the mechanism by which this occurs is still poorly understood. When the trigger hairs are stimulated, an action potential (mostly involving calcium ions—see calcium in biology) is generated, which propagates across the lobes and stimulates cells in the lobes and in the midrib between them.It is hypothesized that there is a threshold of ion buildup for the Venus flytrap to react to stimulation.The acid growth theory states that individual cells in the outer layers of the lobes and midrib rapidly move 1H+ (hydrogen ions) into their cell walls, lowering the pH and loosening the extracellular components, which allows them to swell rapidly by osmosis, thus elongating and changing the shape of the trap lobe. Alternatively, cells in the inner layers of the lobes and midrib may rapidly secrete other ions, allowing water to follow by osmosis, and the cells to collapse.

    Digestion
    If the prey is unable to escape, it will continue to stimulate the inner surface of the lobes, and this causes a further growth response that forces the edges of the lobes together, eventually sealing the trap hermetically and forming a 'stomach' in which digestion occurs. Digestion is catalysed by enzymes secreted by glands in the lobes.
    Oxidative protein modification is likely to be a predigestive mechanism of the Dionaea muscipula. Aqueous leaf extracts have been found to contain quinones such as the naphthoquinone plumbagin that couples to different NADH-dependent diaphorases to produce superoxide and hydrogen peroxide upon autoxidation. *Such oxidative modification could rupture animal cell membranes. Plumbagin is known to induce apoptosis, associated with the regulation of Bcl-2 family of proteins. When the Dionaea extracts were preincubated with diaphorases and NADH in the presence of serum albumin (SA), subsequent tryptic digestion of SA was facilitated. *Since the secretory glands of Droseraceae contain proteases and possibly other degradative enzymes, it may be that the presence of oxygen-activating redox cofactors function as extracellular predigestive oxidants to render membrane-bound proteins of the prey (insects) more susceptible to proteolytic attacks.
    Digestion takes about ten days, after which the prey is reduced to a husk of chitin. The trap then reopens, and is ready for reuse.

    Evolution


    Ablity:-When summoned the Venus flytrap comes to the summoner and sinks it's roots into the ground as soon as being summon to gain stability.
    -Can speed up digestion by channelling my chakra into my summon thus speeding up the acid break down
    -the teeth(cilia) of the flytrap carry a deadly poison if struck by the teeth the enemy become's paralyzed for 1 turn thus incapable of movement.(this only apply's to the boss summoning.
    The summoning's attack strength can be enhance by upturning the earth(cultivation effect) making the summoning happy and more aggresive during battle.(lasts the duration of the battle after being utilized).
    Signer's of the contract will receive the Venus flytrap tatto mark.
    http://emmzipopzxecstacy.deviantart....rdee-160412148

    Special note: there is a ninjutsu already for zetsu but no summon which I have found while searching for this.
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    Like i told you before plants can't be summoned like animals, and Passion has a plant CE that would collide with this.


    Resubmitting:
    (金沙羅, Golden Sal Tree)-Kinshara*
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range:short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Well the whip in it's self has a unique golden look while the scabbard has a 2.5 inch length. The whip can extend to the length of 15 feet while being manipulated by chakra to control the direction of attack and the speed in which the whip is being sent out at. The extending whip works because of the fact that by running you chakra into the joints you can make then extend or retract.The whip has a flower like end at the end of it and has a unique ability where the user's sends his chakra directly to the end of the whip allowing the user attacks light flash attacks from the flower tip. The attacks are to a limit though the flower has colored mirror's on the inside of the flower which emit light out of the flower by channelling chakra to the flower. The end of the flower has an opening where the light source flash comes out of. Knowing that this is a length based weapon puppet master's would have an advantage against this weapon they can easily attach chakra string to this whip to stop its movements. the whip is made of flexible joints capable of flexing and moving at high speeds.
    Look of the sword:
    Restrictions:
    - flower flash usage attacks with Kinshara have a limit of 3 attacks per battle
    -Can only be used Roju
    - can be used 5 times per turn as the effects of Kinshara are very flashy.
    - The whip's will only extend with roju's touch only as his blood has been mixed in with the fabrication of the whip
    -as explained the flower on the end of the whip has mirror's in it thus allowing the chakra to be utilized off of the mirror's to create a bright flash (if needs tweaking would use raiton chakra as it is bright and can be discharged to give off a bright flash)
    - the moveable metal joints must be left in because if they are taken out then I might as well not submitt a whip of any kind as they are taken by whip arts.(which is why this is a custom whip that extends from the scabbard by using chakra to extend the joint or retract them.)
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    When resubmitting you should bold the changes, i won't check a resubmission like this.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Kaen Bōrei Mōdo) – Fire Release: Blaze Mode
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is an advanced fire release technique which is unlocked after gaining mastery of the fire release, after the user gathers a huge amount of Fire chakra all over his body, basically converting most of their chakra into fire chakra inside of their body, the user undergoes a special state where he becomes covered in a fire aura, like a faint blazing red aura around his body that's resonating as long as the technique is active, this aura doesn't grant the user any defensive capabilities whatsoever, however it allows the user to power up his Fire techniques alone in rank, meaning that any Fire technique that the user uses while this technique is activated will gain an additional rank, like A-rank fire techniques when used while this technique is active will become S-ranked, the reason for the boost in rank is that the user utilizes double the amount of chakra that the fire techniques requires so if a technique requires an amount of 40 chakra points, the user performs it with 80 chakra points instead, similar to how Naruto does with the Rasengan by compressing and utilizing more chakra he upgraded it into the Big Ball Rasengan, this also makes the user capable of performing Fire techniques with one less handseal than they originally require, and able to change the solid aspect of the fire techniques at will, meaning if he utilizes a Fire technique that causes a physical effect, he can make it like a regular decompressed fire and if he used a normal fire technique he can cause it to cause a physical effect, like smashing through earth and other solid objects like how the Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire technique works, the user is capable of doing the compression and decompression of the fire techniques as a result of his chakra usage for each technique, so if he compresses more chakra into the fire he would make it have a more solid aspect by compressing the flames together however this doesn't increase the power of the fire technique, the only power boost they get is the rank which is the initial effect of the technique, maintaining this technique is rather difficult and require vast amount of chakra from the user, so they can only be maintained for a limited amount of time, while in this technique the user will be incapable of using any water techniques, as well as the wind techniques the user uses while in this mode will lose one rank, so if the user uses a B-rank wind technique it will become a C-rank, this technique also puts a huge strain on the user's body, decreasing their speed by half of the original amount, however they are still capable of stringing handseals just as fast as they were capable of before.
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns.
    Note: After the technique deactivates the user will be incapable of using Fire techniques for 3 turns.

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    A few notes: no handseal alteration, no physical characteristics alteration. Also, no boost in damage for F-Ranks or you'll die since the backfire of a f-rank would also hurt you much more. Also, please use more periods. Your description is big and its clear but hard to read. Rest seems...okaish.

    (Sennin Fūinjutsu: Naiteki Fūin) – Sage Sealing Art: Inner Seal
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a simple Sealing technique dedicated to the use of Senjutsu, basically the user previous has a large amount of natural chakra sealed into a specific seal that's found onto the center of the user's chest, when activating the seal that has the natural chakra stored inside, the Seal inserts natural chakra into the user constantly allowing the user to enter Sage Mode, the constant amount of natural chakra that's transferred into the user allows him to maintain Sage Mode for a limited amount of time, normally the user has 2 Seals that has large natural chakra stored into them, by using this technique the user is incapable of entering Sage Mode again after the natural chakra in the seals run out, only a seal can be active at a time, both cannot be active and apply the user with natural chakra at the same time, when switching to the other seal that has natural chakra stored inside of it, the user has to post this technique once more, counting towards his 3 move count per turn, each seal can only be used once per battle, by sacrificing one of the seals, it allows the user to summon Shima and Fukasaku the toad sages without having to wait a turn in order to summon them, by using the mass of natural chakra present in the seal to summon them instead, by doing this it scarifies one of the seals, leaving the user with one seal left, however when used for summoning the toad sages, the same seal cannot be used to enter Sage mode, he has to use the other seal in order to do so.
    Note: Each Seal allows the user to maintain Sage Mode activated for 3 turns.

    The approved bio i have Sage Mode on

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Doragon Naginata) Dragon Naginata
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid Range
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80
    Description: The Dragon Naginata consists of a hardened chakra resonant metal shaft with a curved blade, also made of chakra resonant metal, on the end. It has a stylised tsuba of a dragon, between the blade and shaft and has a hidden mechanism that allows the blade to break off under the tsuba where it is attached to a chain within the shaft. This allows for a slightly greater reach during a slash if activated at the correct time. The shaft is 120cm long and the blade 60cm long with a single cutting edge and a sharpened point like any other Japanese Katana, giving the Naginata a total length of 180cm. Through the unknown process this weapon was made in, the Dragon Naginata is indestructible when faced against similar ranked weapons and jutsu (S-rank). The chakra resonant metal this naginta was made from work particularly well with fire chakra allowing the user to channel their fire chakra into it to unleash an arc of flames during a slash, that is equivalent to an S-rank fire jutu, three time per match.
    Notes:
    - Can only be used by those allowed by Shinta,
    - Even with the chain attachment, without a specific jutsu it cannot reach anything outside of Short Range,
    - The fire arc counts as one of the users three jutsu per turn and cannot be used in succession, this must be posted as a reference in place of an actual jutsu.

    Stylised Tsuba:


    Naginata Appearance:

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    Alright, I just need a bit of clarification with your arc slash. Is there a certain range to this? The power, the reach? Also, add an usage limit on it.
    (Doragon Naginata) Dragon Naginata
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid Range
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80
    Description: The Dragon Naginata consists of a hardened chakra resonant metal shaft with a curved blade, also made of chakra resonant metal, with a stylised tsuba of a dragon, between the blade and shaft containing has a hidden mechanism that allows the blade to break off under the tsuba where it is attached to a chain within the shaft. This allows for a slightly greater reach during a slash if activated at the correct time in that in can reach out to mid-range. The shaft is 120cm long and the blade 60cm long with a single cutting edge and a sharpened point like any other Japanese Katana, giving the Naginata a total length of 180cm. Through the unknown process this weapon was made in, the Dragon Naginata is indestructible when faced against similar ranked weapons and jutsu (S-rank). The chakra resonant metal this naginta was made from work particularly well with fire chakra allowing the user to channel their fire chakra into it to unleash an arc of flames during a slash, that is equivalent to an S-rank fire jutu and is capable of reaching long range, three time per match.
    Notes:
    - Can only be used by those allowed by Shinta,
    - The hidden chain device allows the blade to swing out to mid-range and retract back into the weapon automatically,
    - The fire arc counts as one of the users three jutsu per turn and cannot be used in succession, this must be posted as a reference in place of an actual jutsu. The flame arc can reach long range and can only be done three times per match.

    Stylised Tsuba:


    Naginata Appearance:

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    Reaching Mid range with a single slash is a no, you need to define that this is NOT a sword when you mentioned "Katana" it lead me to say this, chakra infusable swords aren't allowed anymore, keep in mind that you can only channel fire chakra into it for the special "effects", define this "fire arc" it needs size definition, and what exactly does it look like, and remove that the sword is indestructible when facing S-ranks, instead you could just write indestructible, keep in mind that you can't use it to counter techniques because it's "indestructible" it simply means the sword won't break apart.


    (Raiton: Raitoningu no kōkan) Lightning Release: Lightning Replacement
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 30 (-5 for turn active)
    Damage: 60 (If the opponent makes contact with the user)
    Description: The user, by flooding their body with lightning chakra, will convert their physical form in a contained formed of pure lightning that allows attacks to pass harmlessly through the user's body. If used to block a taijutsu attack, the opponent will receive a powerful shock from the user as they would if they made contact with any other lighting attack. When in this form the user can move at a normal pace but cannot perform any jutsu however it does not cancel any jutsu the user already has active. While the users taijutsu will be ineffective they can however try to touch the opponent to deal powerful electric shock. From the opponents perspective the user will appear normal until hit by an object or jutsu where the users body will appear to disperse in a flicker of electrical current.
    Notes:
    - Can only be taught by Shinta,
    - Can only be used five times per match,
    - User cannot make any knew attacks in this form but can move around as normal,
    - Remains active for three turns unless cancelled by the user and can not be used in successive attacks.
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    Dear lord, don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Hana Furi-ku) Earth Release: Booger Flick
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20 (+5 per booger flicked)
    Damage: 40 (+5 per booger flicked)
    Description: The user begins by pooling doton chakra into their index finger and their thumb as they pick their nose. Once they have a booger on the tip of their finger they flick it towards the opponent releasing the doton chakra and condensing it into the booger. As the booger travels towards the opponent it picks up momentum and begins to coat in earth created from the doton chakra, it grows to the size of a basketball and can slam into the opponent with enough force to break bones. The user can perform the Seal of Confrontation before the earthen ball hits the opponent causing it to explode out towards the opponent. As it explodes it sends out a mass of airborne spikes (ten per booger flicked). These spikes are much smaller then the earthen mass being only the size of a kunai. Ear wax can be used instead of a booger.
    Notes:
    -Can be used four times per battle (once per nostril and once per ear)
    -Can flick more then one booger at a time but only four in total (referring to a small ball of ear wax as a booger)
    -The 'explosion' has no force and it's just the ball releasing the spikes
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    What the........................... @_@ unrealistic and just bleh, don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Genjutsu: Weberly Pureisu no Akumu |Illusion Technique: Nightmares of the Weberly Place
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack|Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 40[stress on the target(s) mind]
    Description: This technique enables the user cast a genjutsu on the target after performing 3 handseals in which the target believes that there are tiny cobwebs around his/her face. This causes the target to become distracted as he/she will try to remove the cobwebs from their face using their hand(s). The target will gradually begin to feel the cobwebs all over their body, making them uncomfortable, uneasy and distracted as the cobwebs become visible and in a bid to tear his/her way out of the thick cobwebs, he/she will start stumbling and walking around aimlessly in a darkness that sets in as their head starts to spin, causing them to become dizzy and hear voices of people laughing at them and mocking them. Eventually, they fall to the ground helpless, stressed out and weakened.
    -Usable 3 times per battle.
    -Can be used on multiple opponents at the same time as long as the are in range(short-mid)
    -Can only be taught by Naizen
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    You can't mention how your opponent is going to react when struck by the genjutsu, only what he sees/experiences in the genjutsu has to be mentioned, things like they will tear through the cobwebs when feeling that they are on their face or whatever can't be mentioned in the technique, second part about hearing people laugh at them is done countless times in other genjutsu techniques. so basically the whole description needs to be reworded.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Mouretsu Kamigami) The Gods Rage
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Many years ago The Trojan War was supposedly fought for a woman named Helen; secretly, however, the The Trojan Paris had also stolen Menelaus’ spear which was given to him by his godly father, Ares. The spear towers at 7’ with a chain and brace that leads back to the users arm to it can be pulled back to the user if they miss.

    -Abilities-
    The spear can pierce through solid rock on its own
    The spear can be used Short range to be stab with (Not as strong as being thrown)
    The spear can be mixed with the users chakra making the spear have different capabilities, each of which counts as an S rank move in which case costs 40 chakra
    Wind- the spear is thrown and can pierce any material and pierce up to A rank jutsu (Can only be used once per move set, counts as a move, doesn’t work against fire Jutsu)
    Earth- The user throws the spear along or into the ground and the chain is broken off, the spear then is led by the users chakra into the opponent.
    Fire- A layer of fire is coated around the spear causing extra damage
    Lightning- The user throws the spear at his or her opponent, and if it hits a lightning strike then also comes down from the sky and hits the opponent, the lightning is unblockable
    Water- works like the Earth version, thrown into the water and goes underneath the opponent, when it rises the spear has gained enough water (Infused with the users chakra) along the way to when it rises water surrounds it in the form of a shark with its mouth open.
    -The chain and brace can be chosen to be put on (Will be stated in either the beginning of the battle or when summoned)

    -Restrictions-
    -During the battle the spear may only be used with the element capabilities 3 times per battle (Must use different elements Ex. No Wind-Wind-Wind use or Wind-Wind-Fire use)

    -Can only be used by Bad Luck Brian




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    Too many abilities, that lightning part really made me reconsider and just DNR it, you can't put a technique as "unblockable", what do you mean about "the spear can tower at 7'", can pierce solid rock on it's own? so that's pretty much every solid Earth technique out there? no, it's a big mess, make it reasonable.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Shurikenjutsu| Setsunada Kunai - [Sword Hidden in Hand Technique| Instant Capture Kunai]
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: -
    Description: The Instant-Capture Kunai are weapons designed specifically for disabling and capturing opponents by rendering them immobile. Unlike most of the other weapons created, these weapons inflict no actual damage to the opponent when used. The Instant-Capture Kunai are exactly identical to a typical kunai regarding appearance, allowing the user to maintain the element of surprise. When thrown the four sides of the blade open in order to release the capturing device sealed within the kunai, the device used is either a weighted net or a Boleadora and each is woven from a sturdy metal alloy to effectively detain the opponent. The alloy is designed to electrify itself when it comes into contact with excess chakra, effectively preventing the opponent from strengthening their body through the use of techniques such as Chakra Enhanced Strength to break the restraints. That being said the restraint is able to be broken through brute force but at the cost of the restraints digging into the skin of the opponent before breaking and due to the durability of the restraints they may only be broken by opponents with immense physical strength or their allies.
    Note: User only carries 4 of these in battle.

    Shurikenjutsu| Shouheki Kunai - [Sword Hidden in Hand Technique| Barrier Kunai]
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Defense
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (Upon Contact with a Barrier)
    Description: The Barrier Kunai is the only weapon designed and forged to be used exclusively for defensive purposes. Functioning similarly to Instant-Capture Kunai, these weapons are meant to provide the user with a quick, effective, and surprising defense against all modes of attack. Prior to throwing the blades, the user imbues them with a decent amount of chakra before throwing the blade into an object such as a tree, a wall, or even the ground. Upon impact the rear of the kunai splits into four sections and projects a barrier in the opposite direction, allowing this technique to easily block areas such as halls or paths inside forests. The barrier itself is of a light blue color and any thing, living or dead, that comes into contact with the barrier is deflected; beings that possess chakra signatures that differ even slightly from that of the user receive electrical shocks upon contact with the barrier, these shocks are meant to interfere with the nervous system of the victim in addition to inflicting physical pain. Objects such as kunai, shuriken, rocks, etc. simply bounce off the barrier and have the potential to inflict damage on the user through ricochet. In addition to the visible barrier, the kunai creates a notably weaker but invisible barrier around itself to deter the efforts of those who realize the kunai is the source. This barrier does not cause electrical shocks, it simply makes it impossible to physically grab the kunai and causes some difficulty in attempting to damage the kunai. That being said the barriers erected through the use of this tool are able to be dispersed by those with the ability to absorb chakra and may be shattered by higher powered techniques. The strength of the barrier is entirely dependent upon the amount of chakra the user pushed into the kunai before hand and a barrier may not be erected with a single kunai, pairs or sets must be used. The shape of the barrier is dependent upon the locations of the kunai used to form it and as such is determined by the user before hand, it must be noted that it is impossible to create a spherical barrier but it is possible to create a circular barrier through the use of this tool. As with most barrier techniques, the uses stem past forming defensive barriers and may be used to stop falls, restrict the movement of an opponent, or even completely detain the opponent by enclosing within the barrier.
    Note: User only carries 8 of these into battle.

    Shurkienjutsu| Burafu Kayaku - [Sword Hidden in Hand Technique| Bluffing Powder]
    Rank: D-S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: (Depends on Rank Used)
    Damage: -
    Description: Bluffing powder is a chalky, white substance created for use in more desperate situations. The powder itself is unable to do any damage to the opponent unless thrown into their eyes and beyond that and its intended use is absolutely worthless. The user can use this technique in two different ways. The first, the user must direct a small amount of their chakra into the powder after covering their inner palms with it, this must be kept hidden from the opponent. After this process the powder can then be diffused into the air to make it seem as though the user's chakra levels suddenly surged, preferably by clapping one's hands after weaving a series of handseals. The second the user can place the pre-attached bags on kunai with the powder inside and apply chakra and then throwing it another location, then at the user's will the powder can be made to explode outwards since it contains the user chakra. Once the powder is in the air it appears identical to the user's actual chakra to Sensors and those able to visualize chakra and is meant to frighten or cause doubt to rise in the minds of the opponents.
    Note: User only carries enough powder to use this technique 3 times.
    _________________________
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    What is this submission? Are you trying to submit a new type of Kunais? what? You talk about Sword Hidden in Hand...what is this? a cfs? You post the techniques but not only don't they say anything about what they are nor do you even explain what they are. contact me.
     
         
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    (Hikasazanami-Ken: Hyoro Darumadoru Kyuushuu) - Chop Hanging Rippling Fist: Swaying Daruma Doll Revenge
    Type: Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This technique is used to counter strikes towards the upper torso or head of the practitioner. Using careful chakra control they'll momentarily reinforce the point of impact to minimize damage while allowing their upper body to move with the strike by swaying their hips. They'll then use their hips to convert the momentum of their body and rebound towards the opponent at high speeds while striking out with both palms.
    -Can defend A-rank and below taijutsu.
    -Can be used three times per battle.

    (Hikasazanami-Ken: Hirashikkyaku Tsuchikujo) - Chop Hanging Rippling Fist: Falling Palm Earthly Destruction
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user raises up one of their hands and then brings it down slamming it to the ground. As they do this they release a massive burst of chakra into the ground that ripples outwards in all directions ripping up the earth as it travels. The speed of the ripple is immense making it difficult to avoid.
    -Can only be used by a Hyuuga.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
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    There should be a link to the approval of the CFS, when submitting techniques for it.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Akagami Shanks.. View Post
    (Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
    Type: Attack / Defense
    Rank: Forbinned
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90 ( 20 to self )
    Description:
    The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a giant Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user due to the size and amount of chakra it takes to perform this jutsu the User is unable to use Genjutsu and Taijutsu while this jutsu is in use and The User can not run due to the Strain on their body that it takes to perform the jutsu... When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the user with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
    Note: Leaves the User unable to perform Genjutsu, Taijutsu or even Run for One Complete Turn
    Note: If the Koy Fish is destroyed the user Becomes extremely exhauster
    Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Why would this limit your use of Genjutsu or Taijutsu? :sy: Why is this forbidden rank? This is nothing more than at best an S-Rank. And don't add useless restrictions that make no sense to the techniques. It will eventually only lead to a DNR.
    Resubmitting

    (Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
    Type: Attack / Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 ( 20 to self )
    Description:
    The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a giant Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user. When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the user with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…
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    So this can be made anywhere in the air? no, that needs to be defined, whether it is above your opponent or another location, if it's made above the opponent then there should be a gap of like 10 meters between the technique and the opponent, also remove "giant" out of the technique, it's 10 times as big as you, it's not THAT big lol.


    Removed the ridiculous restrictions and removed the part about genjutsu and Taijutsu also changed the Rank and placed it as a S Rank
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Zero Kelvin View Post
    Updating some old techniques. I can't quote them, as they're from the old thread, but I'll provide an exact link and a copy-pasted version.
    (http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post2619471)


    (Fūton ♦ Kaminaritataku) – Wind Release ♦ Thunderstrike
    Rank: A-Rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to defend against Sound by bending the Wind itself. By infusing chakra into the air, the user can create transparent shapes of wind that will reject Soundwaves by acting as shock-absorbers and redirecting the pressure. The user, applying the same concept on a larger scale, can also use this technique to compress attacks composed of some form of pressure, such as Sound and Wind. This can increase the power and density of the technique in question to such an extent that its rank is increased by one (1). Unfortunately, this also makes the technique in question much easier to avoid, given that it has decreased in size.
    -Can only be used three (3) times per battle.
    -Can only be used once every second (2) turn.
    -Can only be used to strengthen techniques of A-rank and below.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.

    X-Declined-X Remove the part where you increase a techniques rank or empower it in any way.

    (I know it's a lot of edits, but the purpose remains. I've just fixed most of the horrible spelling and grammar =/)



    Re-attempting to edit an approved technique. The technique was approved in the old thread, so I can't quote it, but I'll leave the link and bold the edits.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=3094

    (Fūinjutsu: Tōtemu Bakuyaku) – Sealing Technique: Explosive Totem
    Rank: A-Rank
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user focuses chakra through his body, marking an object he's in physical contact with as a 'totem', causing the Kanji for 'explosion' to appear on the object. When the user activates it, the totem will use the chakra stored inside it to destabilize itself violently, causing an huge explosion of chakra.
    -Can only be used two times per battle.
    -Activating the totem does not count as a move if it's done immediately after the seal is applied. Otherwise, it counts as a move.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
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    X-Approved-X
    Reattempting to update some old technique. I can't quote it, as it's from the old thread, but I'll provide a link.
    (http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post2619471)

    (Fūton ♦ Kaminaritataku) – Wind Release ♦ Thunderstrike
    Rank: A-Rank
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to defend against Sound by bending the Wind itself. By infusing chakra into the air, the user can create transparent shapes of wind that will reject Soundwaves by acting as shock-absorbers and redirecting the pressure. The user, applying the same concept on a larger scale, can also use this technique to compress attacks composed of some form of pressure, such as Sound and Wind.
    -Can only be used three (3) times per battle.
    -Can only be used once every second (2) turn.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
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    ✘ Approved ✘
    keep in mind that it can't be used to redirect wind or sound techniques, just absorb them or nullify them. so i changed the type to a "Defense" instead of Supplementary, if i ever see this technique used to redirect a wind or sound technique i'll decline it.


    (There's nothing to bold, as I've simply removed the parts I was asked to remove.)

    Updating an old technique. Same as before; http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post4207609

    Advanced Inuzuka Senses | Kōdona Inuzuka Kanchi
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (+5 every round)
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique is an advanced form of the heightened Inuzuka senses and can only be performed by members of the Inuzuka Clan whom have achieved full mastery of their Clan's techniques. This technique requires physical contact with the users Ninken, and it’s based around the principle that Inuzuka Clan members are able to mix and share their chakra with their Ninken, and the other way around. The user focuses greatly on the bond he and his Ninken shares and absorbs almost all its chakra, leaving it completely drained and unable to battle any further. The great presence of canine chakra in the users' body, will greatly increase the users sense of smell and hearing to a level that is far more advanced than even the most experienced and talented Inuzuka Clan members. This means that the user is, for example, able to hear the opponent’s heartbeat. Because of the massive animal presence in the users' chakra network, the user inherits a small part of his Ninkens “6th sense” (the sense that allows dogs to foresee storms, for example) which allows him to block out unnecessary sounds like explosions. The user is able to adjust his hearing and smell by controlling the chakra flow to his ears and nose.
    -Can only be used by a member of the Inuzuka clan.
    -Can only be used once.
    -Lasts for the rest of the battle.
    -The users ninken cannot move or battle for the rest of the battle after this technique has been used. Because of this, the user cannot use his ninken (or any ninken) for the rest of the battle.
    -No Inuzuka techniques can be used while this technique is active, nor after it's been deactived.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
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    No, keep the original version.


    Once again, an update: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post3029617

    (Senpō ♦ Kamikaze) - Sage Art Divine Wind
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (10 every turn)
    Description: The user performs two handseals while spreading great amounts of Wind chakra into the air around him and mixing it with Natural Energy. When the user feel like it, he sends the Wind towards his target as a great gust of air. The gust covers a great area and moves at incredible, though natural, speed. While the gust itself is harmless, prolonged exposure to the Natural Energy in the Wind causes petrification to those who cannot control Natural Energy. The gust moves in a circular pattern around the field to remain active. During the first (1) turn of exposure, the opponent should begin to cough and feel heavier and clumsy as dust-molecules inhaled turns to stone alongside all body hair, the tips of fingers, toes, ears and nose. During the second (2) turn of exposure, the opponent should begin to feel pain and nausea as the blood thickens and skin turns to stone. On the third (3) turn of exposure, the opponent should feel excruciating pain as muscles, nerves and eyes succumb to the petrification-process.
    -Useable once (1) per match.
    -Can only be used in Sage Mode.
    -Reduces the effect of Sage Mode by two (2) turns.
    -No Senjutsu techniques while this technique is active.
    -Lasts for a maximum of three (3) turns.
    -Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
    _______________________
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    Keep the original.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    [Genjutsu: Yuui Hia] - Illusionary Arts: Can't hear
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user channels his chakra to his opponent's mind, this said the user with the use of his chakra within his opponent's mind puts the opponent within a genjutsu. This genjutsu effects on the opponent's hearing, causing the opponent to hear nothing at all for a specific amount of time.
    Note: Lasts for 3 turns

    ______________
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    Similar to existing techniques.

    [Genjutsu: Adobansudo Sacchi] - Illusionary Arts: Advanced sense
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Such as some of NB genjutsu techniques, the user puts himself inside a genjutsu. This genjutsu gives the user the ability to increase a sense of his own. This ability that is given to the sense makes it able to do thing, normal senses that any normal humans possess can't do. However as a disadvantage the user is forced to weaken another sense of his own.
    Abilities:
    • When increasing the user's sight, the user becomes able to see anything that is up to 50 meter, clearly as of it is short ranged to him.
    • When increasing the user's hearing the user becomes able to hear any slight thing that happens within short to long range even if it is the move of a kunai.
    • When increasing the user's smelling the user becomes able to smell any slight thing that happens within short to long range.

    Drawbacks:
    • When weakening the user's sight, the user becomes blind.
    • When weakening the user's hearing, the user becomes unable to hear anything at all.
    • When weakening the user's smelling the user becomes unable to smell anything at all.
    • When weakening the user's tasting the user becomes unable to taste anything at all.

    Restrictions:
    Note:To increase a sense the user have to lower another sense and to increase two senses the user is forced to lower two.
    Note:The max amount of the senses that could be increased are only two.
    Note:Lasts only 3 turns.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Not only was this tried before as you would need to finish NB Genjutsu training up to restricted for it. DNR

    ‡ [Kumo Vongola Ringu] - The Cloud Vongola Ring ‡
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Cloud Vongola Ring is a very unique weapon. It was created by the Vongola Primo who is the leader of the Luciano Family. Like any other ring, The Cloud Vongola Ring possesses a metallic color. It also possesses a very unique symbol in it's surface, a cloud symbol that is carved in it. However it is not made of iron or steel, it is created by a very unique mineral that possess no name however this mineral allows the Ring to store a great amount of chakra with in. This said, with the use of this chakra that is within the ring the user gains the ability to sense anything/one within short to long range as long as the user wears it. Another use of the chakra is that the user could use it to gets out of the genjutsu however it has drawbacks to the sensing ability because of using the chakra within the ring.

    ʊ If the user took of the ring from his finger he can no longer use the sensing ability of the ring in the fight he is using it on even if he rewears it.
    ʊ Can only be used by Kamishiro and whoever has the permission to do so.
    ʊ Using the ability to release the user from genjutsu 3 times causes the ring to lose it's ability to sense in the battle.









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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. No sensing weapons.
     
         
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    [Sourukyaribā] ~ SoulCalibur
    Type : Weapon
    Rank : Forbidden
    Range : Short
    Chakra : 50
    Damage : 90
    Description :
    Soul Calibur is a fairly long sword, but still only a short range weapon. It is Easily Handled with one hand and the user is capable to multitask with the other hand whilst wielding this blade in the other.



    Chakra can be easily concentrated into it as the sword allows the user to. Making it able to cut through objects such as thing metal e.g Kunai, Shuriken and other weapons that also have Chakra concentrated through it, unless the opposing weapon is at the same rank and has chakra concentrated through it, this weapon cannot cut through it.


    Soulcalibur can, cut through certain elements attacks. It is strong at cutting through B rank or below
    Earth
    Ice
    Wood
    Techniques and can block S rank Techniques

    Soulcalibur is not able to cut through or block the rest of the elements not listed on that list.
    Soulcalibur can strengthen most elemental attacks by the user by + 20 damage though Soulcalibur must be in contact with this technique until it hits the opponent, if it is out of contact with the technique before it hits the opponent it doesn't add on the extra damage.

    Restrictions

    SoulCalibur is especially weak against Fire so cannot block or cut through any of these techniques and will force itself away from any kind of fire and if attacked by fire and hit by it, it become unusable for 4 posts
    (-80 Damage)

    Only LonelyAssassin Can wield this sword

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    No chakra infusable swords allowed anymore, and no forbidden ranked weapons as well, don't resubmit.


    Summoning Animal : Fisher
    Scroll Owner : LonelyAssassin
    Other Users who have signed the contract : N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing : N/A
    Other Summoning Animals Tied to contract : N/A
    Description: Fisher are usually dark brown in color. Males oftentimes have a lighter grizzled coloration on the face, head and over the shoulders. The longer guard hairs in the fur are 1 1/2 to 2 inches on the body and 1/2 inch longer on the tail. The fur on males is much coarser than on the females and both are darkest on tail and legs. Two small, white patches of fur are found in the front armpit areas.

    Fisher have 38 teeth. Five toes register in fisher tracks and the inside toes are smaller and placed behind the other four. The fisher cannot retract it's claws and they are usually dulled somewhat by constant contact with the ground and rocks.

    ~Approved~



    Summoning Technique: Buck the Weasel Boss (Kōatsu itachibosu)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary / Attack
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: N/A (+30 when with dagger)
    Description:
    Buck was a small furry weasel that had a long body, tail and a set of short limbs. His long body was flexible and versatile for any survival situation.
    He is no bigger than 75cm
    Blood is swiped across the tattoo of the weasel contract signers on the users body to summon Buck.
    He comes with smoke bombs and a small dagger (in pic) he can use up to A Rank Earth jutsu's with handseals and is a little skilled in Taijutsu (C-Rank)

    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Can only be on the battlefield for 5 turns
    -Weasel Summoning can only be taught by LonelyAssassin
    Buck :
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    What do you mean by his body is flexiable and versatile for any survival situation? that needs to be removed, and for the love of god make your description like other people, use periods and commas don't leave a line after every little sentence it's confusing and makes it look unorganized, reduce times to be on the battle field to 4 instead of 5, i'll leave Taijutsu, but define that he's only able to use normal strong fist Taijutsu up to C-rank, and no NB Taijutsu techniques, and no EIG techniques.
     
         
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    Kuro Nodo Komadori: Senpai Seijin (Black-Throated Robin: Elder Sage)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and summon The Elder Sage The ruler of all Black-Throated Robin's. The Elder Sage is a true 100% Black-Throated Robin and is a giant standing at 45 meters tall. He is also very old. He has a Red face, throat and upper breast with a brown, red, and blue crown and nape, and a Black Zigzagged mark on the neck. The upper parts are grey, and the underparts black to dark grey over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark red. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the black neck marking is diagnostic.
    The Elder Sage is a L. obscura Species in the Genus Luscinia.

    Abilities:
    ~Elder Sage can use Katon up to S Rank
    ~Able to talk
    ~Because of his wing strength he can deflect any weapons thrown at him as well as any C rank attacks by flapping his powerful wings by creating a strong gust of wind.
    ~The summoner can ride on his back while flying
    ~When dispersing instead of the average white smoke, Elder Sage, when dispersed, erupts in a fire storm

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-Throated Robin contract
    ~Can only be summoned 1 time per battle
    ~Only the current onwer of the Black-Throated Robin contract can summon the Elder Sage but have to learn the technique from the previous owner (Unless the current owenr is the creator)
    ~No other Black-Throated Robin can be summoned at the same time as Elder Sage
    ~The Elder Sage can stay on the battle field for 6 turns
    ~Because of his age, as each turn passes while Elder Sage is summoned his power weakens (1st turn S rank, 2nd turn A rank, 3rd B rank, 4th C rank, 5th D rank, 6th D rank+dispersed as soon as the user's last jutsu is preformed
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    Make the summon last 4 turns on the field max, mention if he's able to use Fire techniques up to S-rank including the ones that require handseals or not, remove that whole fire storm eruption when dispersing, it will be misused and won't allow that, you could just add erupting in black smoke for effects lol, make the flapping wings to deflect attacks count as a move and limit the number of times it can be used, remove that last restriction, it's meaningless and doesn't make any sense, what does the "Short-Long range" refer to exactly?


    Summoning approval ~HERE~

    Katana Reikon (Blade of Souls)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Said to be forged by the Reaper himself, this scyord had been lost in time and to everyone. It was hidden in ancient ruins of old. During his travel through the Lighting Country, Kwalker394 stumbled onto some old ruins and found this sword sealed away. after trying to release the sword nothing worked then suddenly the ruins rumbled with heavy and deep words saying, "He who is worthy may only wield this scyord, for it only chooses one master." Hearing these words Kwalker394 stared at the crystal in the middle of the rings of the handle. Watching it glow dark red he tries to grab it. Slowly he griped the scyord and repeated to himself that "I am worthy." and pulled the scyord. After a good pull the seal wrapped around the scyord gave and the sword was free. In disbelief Kwalker394 closely examined the scyord and a whisper in his ear told him to channel chakra into the sword. As he did the blade of the sword pivoted and took a shape into a scythe. Taking the scyord with him on his travels Kwalker394 discovered another ability in the scyord as well. Later on finding out that the scyord was crafted from a very special dark metal called Reikon~Metaru (Soul Metal) which is indestructible metal that is soaked with chakra when forged and crafted which gave it special a ability.

    Ability's:
    Blade of Souls being able to have one master only responds to Kwalker394. The blade can extend or retract by using the users raw chakra making it a deadly sword to be in battle with. When the blade retracts the metal is compressed turning the scyord into a sword, and when the blade extends the scythe tip of the blade pivots out from the tip of the sword turning into a type of scythe. The weight and balance is different as well depending on the extending or retracting state. The sword can also be attracted to the user meaning that if the user looses the sword or the sword is knocked out of the users hand he can simply command the sword to return as long as the sword is in short distance away. Using the red crystal at the handle as a medium the user can cast a Genjutsu known as "The Graveyard" (A Rank). This Genjutsu makes the opponent believe that they are standing in a graveyard under a full moon. While the target is under this Genjutsu dead corpse's begin to rise out of the tombs and coffins and slowly limp towards the target. Surrounding him from all angles they trap the target and a shadow figure with a dark hood appears and chops off his limbs with the scyord. Releasing this genjutsu on to the opponent requires a cut, opponent looking at the sword, or some way come in contact with the opponent. Also Kwalker394 can swing the scyord and release the chakra in it at the target making a chakra slash. Once the target is hit with this chakra wave slash it will also put him in the genjutsu. If the opponent touches this scyord by the means of picking it up and using it for any reason the genjutsu is released automatically by the stored up chakra already in the sword from its master while also sucking a tiny bit of the opponents chakra.
    ~Only Kwalker394 can use this sword
    ~Must be a Master of Genjutsu in order to use this sword
    ~The Genjutsu "The Graveyard" can only be used 3 times per battle
    ~Self activating of the Genjutsu by opponents touch can only happen 1 time
    ~Either activation of the Genjutsu counts as a move towards the users 3 move limit/jutsu
    ~Can come back to the users hands if in short range and the user is able to use his hand
    ~Retracting/extending the blade can be used freely (But only 1 retract or extend per turn)
    ~Slashing the chakra from the scyord goes up to long range but gives makes the Genjutsu weak so it will be a B rank from mid range and C Rank from long range

    Scyord looks:
    Scyord= Sword+Scythe

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    There are too many things wrong with it, if i mentioned them all it'll take forever, mainly the retracting and extending thing, the balance and weight, chakra wave, i'm fine with the genjutsu as long as it counts as one of the moves per turn, that whole having "some kind of contact with the enemy" is vague, a cut or them looking at the crystal is fine, activating the genjutsu by a chakra wave? lolwut? that whole chakra wave triggering the genjutsu is a no


    Will be dropping THIS if approved

    Katon: To-chi Awai (Fire Style: Welders Light)
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will send out his Katon chakra and create a ball of fire. The user will then heat it up intensively by using his mastery of Katon to where the flames turn white. While the flames turn white the light given off by this jutsu is as bright as a welders torch blinding anyone that looks at it. The flame is up and above the users head so it will not effect the user but anyone in front or all around that can see this jutsu will be short termed blinded if looked upon. If forced to look, or if the target stares directly in the light, the target my go blind for the rest of the battle due to the intense light.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Must have mastered Katon to use
    ~Can only be used 3 times per battle
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    Go blind for the rest of the battle @_@? it's similar to lightning techniques that release a blinding light and too many of them are made already, don't resubmit.


    Kuro Nodo Komadori: Senpai Seijin (Black-Throated Robin: Elder Sage)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user wipes his/her blood on the hand that he/she has the summoning tattoo on. He/she will then perform the Boar-Dog-Bird-Monkey-Ram and summon The Elder Sage The ruler of all Black-Throated Robin's. The Elder Sage is a true 100% Black-Throated Robin and is a giant standing at 45 meters tall. He is also very old. He has a Red face, throat and upper breast with a brown, red, and blue crown and nape, and a Black Zigzagged mark on the neck. The upper parts are grey, and the underparts black to dark grey over the abdomen and under the tail coverts. The bill and legs are black, and the eyes are dark red. The plumage is reminiscent of a cuckoo-shrike but the black neck marking is diagnostic.
    The Elder Sage is a L. obscura Species in the Genus Luscinia.

    Abilities:
    ~Elder Sage can use Katon up to S Rank and can use both hand seals and non-hand seal Katon jutsu's
    ~Able to talk
    ~Because of his wing strength he can deflect any weapons thrown at him as well as any C rank attacks by flapping his powerful wings by creating a strong gust of wind 3 times per battle and count as a move.
    ~The summoner can ride on his back while flying
    ~When dispersing instead of the average white smoke, Elder Sage, when dispersed, erupts in a black smoke.

    Restrictions:
    ~Must have signed the Black-Throated Robin contract
    ~Can only be summoned 1 time per battle
    ~Only the current onwer of the Black-Throated Robin contract can summon the Elder Sage but have to learn the technique from the previous owner (Unless the current owenr is the creator)
    ~No other Black-Throated Robin can be summoned at the same time as Elder Sage
    ~The Elder Sage can stay on the battle field for 4 turns
    _____________________
    ✘ Approved ✘
    edited a bit, reduced usage times of the wings attack to 3 times per battle, and remove the "due to the katon element he possess" makes no sense, and wont' allow you using the dispersing ability as an attack, or even hint as one.


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    Katana Reikon (Blade of Souls)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Said to be forged by the Reaper himself, this scyord had been lost in time and to everyone. It was hidden in ancient ruins of old. During his travel through the Lighting Country, Kwalker394 stumbled onto some old ruins and found this sword sealed away. after trying to release the sword nothing worked then suddenly the ruins rumbled with heavy and deep words saying, "He who is worthy may only wield this scyord, for it only chooses one master." Hearing these words Kwalker394 stared at the crystal in the middle of the rings of the handle. Watching it glow dark red he tries to grab it. Slowly he griped the scyord and repeated to himself that "I am worthy." and pulled the scyord. After a good pull the seal wrapped around the scyord gave and the sword was free. In disbelief Kwalker394 closely examined the scyord and a whisper in his ear told him to channel chakra into the sword. As he did the blade of the sword pivoted and took a shape into a scythe. Taking the scyord with him on his travels Kwalker394 discovered another ability in the scyord as well. Later on finding out that the scyord was crafted from a very special dark metal called Reikon~Metaru (Soul Metal) which is indestructible metal that is soaked with chakra when forged and crafted which gave it special a ability.

    Ability's:
    Blade of Souls being able to have one master only responds to Kwalker394. The blade can extend or retract by using the users raw chakra making it a deadly sword to be in battle with. When the blade retracts the metal is compressed turning the scyord into a sword by retracting the scythe part of the blade back into the swords blade, and when the blade extends the scythe tip of the blade pivots out from the tip of the sword turning into a type of scythe. The sword can also be attracted to the user meaning that if the user looses the sword or the sword is knocked out of the users hand he can simply command the sword to return as long as the sword is in short distance away. Using the red crystal at the handle as a medium the user can cast a Genjutsu known as "The Graveyard" (A Rank). This Genjutsu makes the opponent believe that they are standing in a graveyard under a full moon. While the target is under this Genjutsu dead corpse's begin to rise out of the tombs and coffins and slowly limp towards the target. Surrounding him from all angles they trap the target and a shadow figure with a dark hood appears and chops off his limbs with the scyord. Releasing this genjutsu on to the opponent requires a cut, opponent looking at the sword, or by the opponent touching the sword. Also Kwalker394 can swing the scyord and release the chakra in it at the target making a chakra slash. If the opponent touches this scyord by the means of picking it up and using it for any reason the genjutsu is released automatically by the stored up chakra already in the sword from its master while also sucking a tiny bit of the opponents chakra.
    ~Only Kwalker394 can use this sword
    ~Must be a Master of Genjutsu in order to use this sword
    ~The Genjutsu "The Graveyard" can only be used 3 times per battle and counts as the users 3 move limit.
    ~Self activating of the Genjutsu by opponents touch can only happen 1 time
    ~Either activation of the Genjutsu counts as a move towards the users 3 move limit/jutsu
    ~Can come back to the users hands if in short range and the user is able to use his hand
    ~Retracting/extending the blade can be used freely (But only 1 retract or extend per turn)
    ~Slashing the chakra from the scyord goes up to long range but gives makes the Genjutsu weak so it will be a B rank from mid range and C Rank from long range

    NOTE: I removed "Once the target is hit with this chakra wave slash it will also put him in the genjutsu.", "some way come in contact with the opponent.", "The weight and balance is different as well depending on the extending or retracting state.",

    Scyord looks:
    Scyord= Sword+Scythe

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    Don't resubmit.


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    Summoning Animal:Madagascar cat/rat /fossa Scroll Owner: TheGreyFox
    Other Users who have signed contract:None
    Summoning Boss if existing: None
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract none

    A relative of the mongoose, the fossa is unique to the forests of Madagascar, an African ... lemurs and most other creatures it can get its claws on, from wild pigs to mice.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Solf J. Kimblee View Post
    I will be dropping the weapon in the quote. Here is where it was approved------> http://narutobase.net/forums/showpos...postcount=5631



    (Mizu Beara) Water Bearers
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: These Water Bearers was created by Solf to have a unique water weapon in battle. He made two hilts that are called Bearers. The Bearers are made of a material so the user can channel their chakra and manipulate water sources or even the moister in the air for varies objects such as weapons, shields on top of them. These two hilts are the perfect weapon for a weapon user and water user. The user channels their chakra and absorbs some water or moister in the air and using shape manipulation shapes the water into any weapon or shield the user like to fit for the situation. The highest rank of the object that is made of water is A rank. The user can have already have water in the bearers but they must state this at the beginning of the battle.
    -Only used when the air has enough moister to make the weapon of chose of the user or a some type of water source is in the area of short range of the user to use to use to make the weapon of chose of the user.
    -The weapons made from the water still go by the elemental advantages and disadvantages
    -The weapons when made also feel like the real weapon when used
    ||Declined|| Restrict it a bit (I would suggest some form of limit to how often the shape of the water weapons can be changed)



    Sealing Arts: Shine Bright (Fuuinjutsu: Akaruku Kagayaku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user after having Fuuin for a year, makes a tattoo on both of their arms that reacts with their chakra. The only way the tattoos react to the user chakra is when it is irregular. The tattoos glow a white light down the whole tattoo when the user chakra is irregular. The light is bright enough to see when not even looking at the arms. The user can see the light from the corner of their eyes.
    -Must be posted in the bio or beginning of the battle
    -Must have fuuin for a year because they need the experience to developed such sealing tattoos on themselves.

    How they look when they glow but it will be brighter.

    ||Declined|| What's the point of this technique?
    I will be dropping the weapon in the quote. Here is where it was approved------> http://narutobase.net/forums/showpos...postcount=5631

    -Snake Tail (Hebi No O)
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Hebi No O(Short version:Hebi) was after Dei Dei made is stretchable scarf. He made this sword whip out of the same material just more stronger. Hebi is a 6-part segmented blade; each segment is wider than the one preceding it from the hilt with 2 pick-like protrusions on the front and back of each segment, with the ones on the front much longer than the ones at the back. The segments are connected by a stretchable thread that is a very strong material, making Hebi more useful as a whip than an actual sword, though it can serve as a regular sword just as easily, thanks to Dei Dei swordsmanship. Hebi's guard and handle remain the same as a normal katana. While Hebi can be stretched to incredible lengths in its whip form, Dei Dei has a limit of three consecutive attacks before having to bring the segments of Hebi back together for recovery -which makes him fairly vulnerable during this time interval. To make up for this, Dei Dei has to have a plan ahead of time. It is also wrapped in bandages when not in use and the bandages is attached on the hilt which acts on the user will.

    -Mid range is the limit it can reach
    -It can be used three times back to back when it is stretched out. After the third use it has to retract to recover for one turn.
    -Only used by Dei Dei




    (This sword just acts the same as in Bleach but without it going to long range.)

    Dropping this http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showpost.php?p=4318676&postcount=4663] weapon[/url] for the one above if it gets approved.

    I took out the bold part the mod had bolded. It really didn't mean anything but oh well it is out now.

    �� Approved �� Yeah it did actually. It meant you could grow your sword segments almost without limit. lol


    (Mizu Beara) Water Bearers
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: These Water Bearers was created by Solf to have a unique water weapon in battle. He made two hilts that are called Bearers. The Bearers are made of a material so the user can channel their chakra and manipulate water sources or even the moister in the air for varies objects such as weapons, shields on top of them. These two hilts are the perfect weapon for a weapon user and water user. The user channels their chakra and absorbs some water or moister in the air. The highest the rank of the object that is made of water is A rank or lower.
    -Only used when the air has enough moister to make the weapon of chose of the user or a some type of water source is in the area of short range of the user to use to use to make the weapon of chose of the user and must have the user chakra in it or no chakra at all.
    -The weapons made from the water still go by the elemental advantages and disadvantages
    -The weapons also feel like the real weapon when used
    -The user has to use a jutsu slot everytime the user uses the weapon no matter if it is to attacking or defending, the change of the shape depends on the attack or defense like for an example. The user going against a fireball and the user has the bearers shaped into katanas but the user needs to defend. The user would change the katanas into a rectangler shield to defend against the attack.



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    Sealing Arts: Shine Bright (Fuuinjutsu: Akaruku Kagayaku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user after having Fuuin for a year, makes a tattoo on both of their arms that reacts with their chakra. The only way the tattoos react to the user chakra is when it is irregular. The tattoos glow a white light down the whole tattoo when the user chakra is irregular. The light is bright enough to see when not even looking at the arms. The user can see the light from the corner of their eyes.
    -Must be posted in the bio or beginning of the battle
    -Must have fuuin for a year because they need the experience to developed such sealing tattoos on themselves.
    -The purpose of this jutsu is when someone places the user in a genjutsu of any type, the user can be notice by the light they are in a genjutsu

    How they look when they glow but it will be brighter then it is in the pic



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    Don't resubmit. This already exists.

    Water Style: Help From the Deep (Suiton: Dīpu Kara Herupu)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 40 (30 per post to keep active)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user releases their water chakra around them. The user forms eight tentacles and a head of a Octopus, Jellyfish, or Squid. The user is standing right behind the two front tentacles while the rest a spread around them. The head of the animal they choose is behind them. When the jutsu is active, the user can't focused on no more jutsus expect this one. The user can have a summon or a partner to help them out but no clones of the user. When this is active, the user clones if they have any are dispersed so the user has all their chakra. The user can use this jutsu as defense and attacks, even as a way to avoid jutsus(not sure about this one) and each does count as moves.

    -The user can't move from the area inside of the tentacles and head so the user can move around in that space but not out of it
    -The user can repair this jutsu if it is damaged(counts as a move also)
    -Last for five turns
    -No other jutsus can be used by the user while this is active
    -No water jutsus for three turns after the last turn this is used
    -The user can't use A rank or higher jutsu after this jutsu is over because of the chakra it drains each turn

    How it looks


    http://www.animeflavor.com/node/12650

    starts on 13:59 till 14:15 on any of the videos but the first video is the fastest a nd the last one.


    If this gets approved, I will make jutsus that will go with it so I can use it for attacks, defense, avoid(not sure about this on) and repair its self.

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    Don't resubmit. Already made.
     
         
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    Mokuton: Kyouku no Gaia | Wood Release: Strength of Gaia
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The "Strength of Gaia" is a simple Mokuton jutsu. By using the trees natural ability to draw in minerals from the earth the user enhances this ability with chakra. Using exsisting wood on the field, the user can by channeling chakra into the wood draw in what ever minerals or substances there are in the ground giving the wood the properties of the substance. This is used to strengthen the wood and make it more durable while at the same time it gains the effects and abilities of the minerals and substances it absorbed.
    Note: Must have a Wood bio to use.
    Note: No Doton in the same turn this was used.
    Note: Thrice per battle, and the effects remain on the wood for the rest of the battle unless destroyed.
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    I like the idea but some limitations are required. We can't forget wood is wood. Things like a lava floor or a highly poisonous floor wouldn't be usable for this. also, you must list some effects that this would enable the user to bestow upon their wood.



    Resubmitting the CW:

    Naginata: Niernen | Sword-Spear: Orchid
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 5- 40
    Damage: 10-80
    Description: The ancient sword-spear Niernen (which mean Orchid) is a weapon forged long before the shinobi were brought to the world by the Sage of the Six Paths. It is said to be created by Gods themselves. Niernen is a long staff made of the finest and most resistant wood that can be found. On the tip of the staff, an arched blade of chakra enhanced steel is attached which is unbreakable due to the hot fires it has been forged in. The tip grows in a dark green hue.. The color of the blade is a dark green hue, but it can turn to other colors upon the users wish. The whole weapon has been blessed by countless prayers making it impossible to destroy or damage in any way imaginable by mankind. The handle of the staff has two buttons on it with a hidden mechanism inside. Inside the staff a long, chakra enhanced wire is hidden, thus by pressing the button, the blade of the spear will shoot out and attach into any tangible surface with no need for the user to aim (does not count for persons). By pressing the button again the user can pull himself up almost any kind of obstacle. The second button when pressed, releases a small razor blade on the handle of the staff which the user can use to cut himself and release himself from genjutsu or to deal more damage to the opponent. Niernen has many abilities which the wielder of the staff can only benefit from. The staff, in order to functionate in it's full potential needs to feed on the user's chakra, much like Samehada. Niernen at all times takes small amounts of chakra from it's wielder. In return the weapon will begin to shine in a mixture of pink and white light (much like the color of orchids) as the user is set into a genjutsu by the opponent. This way, Niernen alerts the user that he is inside a genjutsu thus allowing him to react accordingly to the threat. Being named Orchid, this weapon is highly involved into the natural elements those being Water, Earth and Wood Release. Each of those three particular chakras can be channeled through the spear, and when done so kanji (one for each element) will glow on the handle of the spear. When this is activated, the chosen element will be boosted in power increasing the ranks of all techniques for the chosen element for a short period of time. Non-Mokuton users can use this weapon too, whereas they can only enhance their Earth and water technique.
    Note: Can only be wielded by -Cobalt-.
    Note: All abilities count towards the users three moves (excluding the hidden mechanisms which are activated with the press of the buttons).
    Note: Only one element can be boosted at a time.
    Note: When the chosen element is boosted, all techniques are increased by one rank for a period of 3 turns. During that time the user can use other elemental techniques, but only B-rank and below.
    Note: Once an element has been boosted, the user cannot boost the same element again in that battle. Another element can be boosted after a cooldown period of 5 turns.

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    Seriously too much, a mix of rip offs of other abilities, don't resubmit. ever!
    Resubmitting the wood technique:

    Mokuton: Kyouku no Gaia | Wood Release: Strength of Gaia
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The "Strength of Gaia" is a simple Mokuton jutsu. By using the trees natural ability to draw in minerals from the earth the user enhances this ability with chakra. Using exsisting wood on the field, the user can by channeling chakra into the wood draw in what ever minerals or substances there are in the ground giving the wood the properties of the substance. This is used to strengthen the wood and make it more durable while at the same time it gains the effects and abilities of the minerals and substances it absorbed. This is applicable only when a mineral substance is present in the field, artificially created by chakra. This amongs others involves CE elements (mainly metal and earth based elements which do not involve Fire or any other element harmful to wood in the combination and water based elements). Depending on the properties of the element absorbed, these abilities will be replicated on the wood.
    Note: Must have a Wood bio to use.
    Note: No Doton in the same turn this was used.
    Note: Thrice per battle, and the effects remain on the wood for the rest of the battle unless destroyed.

    X-Declined-X Wrong in many ways.... but well there can be better explanations to make this technique work.
    Lets say you use wood release in collaboration with Chakra absorption technique to absorb chakra from another Earth Based (Physical/tangible) element. The adaptive qualities of the wood cells abosorb the physical traits of the elements when it absorbs the chakra. That would be more reasonable then absorbing minerals which simply kills the wood by osmosis. Again it would require reasonable restrictions. A turn limit, a usage limit and higher rank.


    Resubmitting the Spear with Dante's permission:

    Yari: Niernen | Spear: Orchid
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The ancient sword-spear Niernen (which mean Orchid) is a weapon forged long before the shinobi were brought to the world by the Sage of the Six Paths. It is said to be created by Gods themselves. Niernen is a long staff made of the finest and most resistant wood that can be found. On the tip of the staff, an arched blade of chakra enhanced steel is attached which is unbreakable due to the hot fires it has been forged in. The tip grows in a dark green hue.. The color of the blade is a dark green hue, but it can turn to other colors upon the users wish. The whole weapon has been blessed by countless prayers making it impossible to destroy or damage in any way imaginable by mankind. The handle of the staff has two buttons on it with a hidden mechanism inside. Inside the staff a long, chakra enhanced wire is hidden, thus by pressing the button, the blade of the spear will shoot out and attach into any tangible surface with no need for the user to aim (does not count for persons). By pressing the button again the user can pull himself up almost any kind of obstacle. The second button when pressed, releases a small razor blade on the handle of the staff which the user can use to cut himself and release himself from genjutsu or to deal more damage to the opponent. The user can affect the the staffs brightness by chanelling chakra into it either turning the light off completely, or making it shine bright enough to enlighten the whole short range from the user. Twice per battle the user can release a S-ranked shockwave of green (Short-Long) chakra into any direction which is near to unavoidable since it covers an expansive range.The thing that makes Orchid a extremely versatile weapon is that it can be, by infusing chakra into it changed into any kind of weapon the user desires, though it does not exceed the original size of the weapon. It can also take on the form of a cloak.
    Note: Can only be wielded by -Cobalt-.
    Note: All abilities count towards the users three moves (excluding the hidden mechanisms which are activated with the press of the buttons and are considered freeform).
    Note: Shockwave usable twice per battle.
    Note: Can only change once every two turns.
    Note: The weapon is indestructible.


    X-Declined-X Remove the reference of Gods or any absolutism, the part where it says the shockwave is unavoidable and well, why dont you make the shockwave as seperate technique for your CW?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Summoning Animal: Opossum
    Scroll Owner: Merita
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: Will be added later
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Will be added later
    Description and Background: The opossums are marsupials that were one of the few ones who are able to survive the destruction of nature by humans in the Western Hemisphere. Opossums' most notable ability is of seeming dead (called 'play possum'), in which the animal mimics the appearance and smell of a dead body. Their tails are prehensile, giving them the ability to hang over trees or buildings.

    Opossums have a strong immune system, and show partial or total immunity to most poisons. This can be useful for RP means (I must note that, if this ability be used in the RP on future, it's an ability of the animal, not of the summoner).

    When threatened, they normally hiss at the enemy. Some species release a strong odor, similar to skunks.

    They have elemental affinities for Earth and Fire.

    Restrictions:
    - Must be taught by Merita
    _______________________
    ✘ Declined ✘
    Remove the elemental affinities for Earth and Fire, the elemental affinity is determined when you actually make the summons into techniques.
    Resubmitting


    Summoning Animal: Opossum
    Scroll Owner: Merita
    Other Users who have signed contract: None
    Summoning Boss if existing: Will be added later
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Will be added later
    Description and Background: The opossums are marsupials that were one of the few ones who are able to survive the destruction of nature by humans in the Western Hemisphere. Opossums' most notable ability is of seeming dead (called 'play possum'), in which the animal mimics the appearance and smell of a dead body. Their tails are prehensile, giving them the ability to hang over trees or buildings.

    Opossums have a strong immune system, and show partial or total immunity to most poisons. This can be useful for RP means (I must note that, if this ability be used in the RP on future, it's an ability of the animal, not of the summoner).

    When threatened, they normally hiss at the enemy. Some species release a strong odor, similar to skunks.


    Restrictions:
    - Must be taught by Merita

    X-Approved-X

    -I took out the elemental affinities.-
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal : Majestial Dragon Birds
    Scroll Owner : Cursed Prince
    Other Users who have signed contract : None yet
    Other Summoning Animal tied to contract : None yet
    Description and Background : Majestial Dragon Birds are bright-colored birds with skinny serpent like bodies and short legs.Older Birds are roughly the same size as an elephant. They have orange beaks and a birdlike face and a pair of wings. Its whole body is covered in feathers that are bright-colored and arranged in random patterns. It's Wingspan vary's from 5-10 meters. They live in large grassy planes on an uncharted island in the ocean. They are Omnivorous and drink sal****er because they have a gland in their mouth that captures the salt. They speak in their own language that the user must know to understand them. They are loyal to the summoner and will die in battle trying to protect them. They can of course fly and can be summoned in the air, through scrolls and by summoning them on the ground with the use of a blood sacrifice.

    Bāsākā no ōra
    (Berserker Aura)

    Type Weapon
    Rank A
    Range Short
    Chakra 30 (-20 every arm that is activated){-5 for every turn stays activated}
    Damage N/A (-10 to user for when its activated and for every arm thats activated) (-(-10 if opponent comes in contact with the user)(+5 to Katon techniques)(+5 Raiton)
    Description Berserker Aura is metal that bears resemblance to gold and is non conductive to electricity unless it is the users own. It is plated on both the users arms and infused with 2 gems in each arm that posses the power of gods, Gods that roamed the earth before the time of the SO6P. The user puts his palms together and channels Fire chakra into his arms to forcibly remove the barrier containing each gems power. Almost instantly each gem immideatly releases its power, turning the users skin black and scorching hot, filling his mouth with fire and cause strange glowing markings on his body, causing severe damage to the user. This is due to the users body barely able to contain the power of the gems power, and as a result, will throw the user in an uncontrolable rage and leave the user with very little reason. From there the user can force up to 4 glowing red bulking arms from his body sprout from under where his original arms are. Each arm is about 3½ Meters in length and contains power (= Users in Gate mode) .Each arm has the durabillity of an B-ranked attack. The arms are also scorching hot and are as hard as metal.
    - Can activate the Berserker Aura 2 times per battle
    - Berserker Aura lasts for 3 turns
    - User cannot use Suiton, Genjutsu, or any special KG's (Secret Clan abillities {ex: Nara Clan} and summons are allowed though)
    - Activating this can break the user out of genjutsu because of the damage the user takes.
    - The arms can use jutsu but cannot perform handseals
    - Can be activated almost instataneously
    - Each arm has the durability of an A-ranked attack
    - Activating an arm counts as on of the three usable moves.

    (Wasnt sure if this counted as chakra infusable or not)

    X-Both Declined-X
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Submitting with me as the scroll owner. Gained ownership >>here<< from Faust & also learned the boss summon.

    Summoning Animal: Elephants
    Scroll Owner: -Jiraiya-
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Mercurial
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background:
    Elephants are the largest living terrestrial animals. They have several distinctive features, including a long proboscis or trunk that they use for numerous purposes, particularly for grasping objects. Their incisors grow into large tusks, which serve as tools for moving objects and digging, as well as weapons for fighting.
    Elephants are intelligent, and have been compared to primates and cetaceans in this regard. An elephant's skull is resilient enough to withstand the forces generated by the leverage of the tusks and head-to-head collisions.
    Trunk
    The trunk or proboscis, is a fusion of the nose and upper lip, although in early fetal life, the upper lip and trunk are separated. The trunk is elongated and specialized to become the elephant's most important and versatile appendage. Elephant trunks have multiple functions, including breathing, olfaction, touching, grasping and sound production. The animal's sense of smell may be four times as sensitive as that of a bloodhound. The trunk's ability to make powerful twisting and coiling movements allow it to collect food, wrestle with conspecifics and lift weights. It can be used for delicate tasks, such as wiping an eye and is capable of cracking a peanut shell without cracking the seed. With its trunk, an elephant can reach items at heights of up to 7 m (23 ft) above their body as well dig up water under mud or sand. Elephants can suck up water both to drink and to spray on their bodies or over others. When underwater, the elephant uses its trunk as a snorkel to breathe while its body remains under water.
    Tusks
    The tusks of an elephant are modified incisors in the upper jaw. The dentine is known as ivory. As a piece of living tissue, a tusk is relatively soft; it is as hard as the mineral calcite. Tusks serve multiple purposes. They are used for digging for water, salt, and roots; debarking or marking trees; and for moving trees and branches when clearing a path. They serve as weapons when fighting, both for offense and defense, and protecting the trunk.
    Skin
    An elephant's skin is generally very tough & dry.
    Speed
    Fast-moving elephants can reach a top speed of 18 km/h (11 mph).
    Elephants are capable swimmers. They have been recorded swimming for up to six hours without touching the bottom, and have traveled as far as 48 km (30 mi) at a stretch and at speeds of up to 2.1 km/h (1 mph).
    Communication
    Elephants communicate by touch, sight, and sound and use infra-sound and seismics for long-distance communication.
    Elephants are known to communicate with seismics, vibrations produced by impacts on the earth's surface or acoustical waves that travel through it. They appear to rely on their leg and shoulder bones to transmit the signals to the middle ear.
    Elephants appear to use seismics for a number of purposes. An individual running or mock charging can create seismic signals that can be heard at great distances. When detecting the seismics of an alarm call signalling danger from predators, elephants enter a defensive posture and family groups will pack together. Seismic waveforms produced by locomotion appear to travel distances of up to 32 km (20 miles) while those from vocalizations travel 16 km (10 miles)
    Intelligence and cognition
    Elephants are among the most intelligent species; their psychology is comparable to primates. Elephants are popularly thought of as having an excellent memory.
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    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=73952 <Resubmit here

    Illusionary Arts: Inflating balloon (Genjutsu: Hidai fuusen)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user after performing the Ram -> Horse -> Rat hand seals will extend their chakra & put the opponent under an illusion in which the opponent will see and feel that his whole body swells up quickly like an inflating balloon, making his body almost like a spherical ball, obliterating any joint movements. As a result, in reality, the opponent will be rendered motionless.
    Note:
    • Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    • Must be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).



    X-Approved-X


    Illusionary Arts: Frigate Bird call (Genjutsu: Frigate Tori meshi)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After a Frigate bird is summoned, the summon will whistle out its birdcall. On hearing this sound, the opponent(s) will be put under a genjutsu as the chakra from the summon will affect the targets' senses making them to see a large flock of frigate birds descend from above them, all screaming out their birdcall & rattling towards them, which soon will surround them in a tornado-like fashion & fiercely pecking them all over his body, leaving them confused, agitated & dizzy. In reality, the opponent(s) will be standing there immobile, with a blank stare on their face.
    Note:
    • Must have signed the Frigate bird contract to use this jutsu.
    • Can be used 2 times per battle
    • Capable of affecting multiple targets within the range.
    • No other genjutsu in the same turn or next.
    • Link to Frigate bird summon approval: >>Click<<


    X-Approved-X Reduced the rank
     
         
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    (Ninja no hokori!) A Ninja's Pride!
    Rank:S
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points:(N/A)
    Description: The user boosts their self confidence through words, while surging their chakra throughout their body, which they then manipulate towards the brain. This causes the chakra to manifests itself into a spiritual chakra ego in the subconscious of the user, that continues to boost the users confidence.(What Sakura use to have as a Genin) The chakra mind manifestation prevents the user from falling into Genjutsu while it is present, by keeping the users chakra flow to the brain constant, and unable to be manipulated. This technique works by filling the chakra points around your head to the max, making it unable for the opponent to insert his own. This jutsu requires a lot of chakra, and limits the user when activated.
    NOTES:
    -Can only be used 1 time
    -Cannot prevent MS/EMS Genjutsu
    -Can only use jutsu up to A rank while activated
    -Lasts 2 turns
    -Can only be taught by ZandaT

    X-Declined-X Illusion release controling emotions and consciousness? Where is the logic?

    (Sen nuki) Corkscrew
    Rank:A
    Type: Offensive
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: The user channels their chakra around their dominate hand, and then manipulates it, making their chakra take on a corkscrew appearance around their fist extending to their wrist. The tip would be the middle point in between you're middle and ring finger, but unlike a corkscrew, the tip is flat. Chakra would then wrap around the users fist stopping at the end of their wrist, and when the punch thrown makes contact with the opponent, the manipulated chakra then skews into the opponent sending them backwards awkwardly. The damage done by this technique can be fatal, due to the fact that foreign chakra is being drilled into an opponents body, which causes internal bleeding (Attack itself has a 6cm radius), and damages underlying organs. The formation of the chakra is quite silent, but after the initial hit the technique makes a noticeably unique "Fsssh" sound, as it enters the opponent.
    NOTES:
    -Can only be used 2 times
    -Must wait 2 turn in between use
    -Can only be taught by ZandaT

    X-Declined-X Falls in other Fighting styles

    Summoning Animal: Hermit Crab
    Scroll Owner: ZandaT
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: Kaigara
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background:
    Most species have long, spirally curved abdomens, which are soft, unlike the hard, calcified abdomens seen in related crustaceans. The vulnerable abdomen is protected from predators by an empty seashell carried by the hermit crab, into which its whole body can retract into. Most frequently hermit crabs use the shells of sea snails, and the shells of mollusk. A few species do not use a "mobile home" and inhabit immobile structures like corals, sponges, hollow pieces of wood, and even stone are used by some species. These crabs usually have one big claw and one small claw used to protect themselves or catch prey.

    Tatt.

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    (Will drop current contract if approved.)

    X-Declined-X Crustacean contract exists
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Oraan View Post
    (Katon: Nōshintō Bura Suto) Fire Release: Concussion Blast
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80

    Description: The user channels an immense amount of their fire chakra into an explosion just as it occurs. The user uses their fire chakra to expand the power of the explosion, creating a secondary more powerful explosion which doubles the power of the concussion blast, sending a force outwards from the explosion that can deliver a powerful blow to all within short range of the blast (5 meters) in every direction with the explosion as its epicenter. The user does not cause the initial explosion with this technique, merely channels his chakra into an already existing explosion (kunai or other technique) to use this.
    Note: Can only be used 3x per battle.
    Note: No Fire Techniques above A Ranked can be used in the same turn.
    Note: if used 3x per battle, the user cannot use Fire techniques above A Ranked for 3 turns.
    ____________________________
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    reduce the usage limit of the technique, and mention that it can only be used on the explosions you make not the explosions that your opponent makes, or your opponent's explosive kunais, only yours, and mention that the explosion when expanding it will become much slower than the initial occurrence of it, that's the only way i see this technique getting approved honestly.

    (Katon: Nōshintō Bura Suto) Fire Release: Concussion Blast
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user channels an immense amount of their fire chakra into an explosion just as it occurs. The user uses their fire chakra to expand the power of the explosion, creating a secondary more powerful explosion which doubles the power of the concussion blast, sending a force outwards from the explosion that can deliver a powerful blow to all within short range of the blast (5 meters) in every direction with the explosion as its epicenter. The user does not cause the initial explosion with this technique, merely channels his chakra into an already existing explosion (kunai or other technique) to use this.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    Note: Can only be used on explosions purposely made by the user.
    Note: No Fire Techniques above A Ranked can be used in the same turn.
    Note: if used 2x per battle, the user cannot use Fire techniques above A Ranked for 3 turns.

    X-Declined-X If you get blast release its worth considering otherwise channeling fire chakra in a concussion is an over-estimation of abilities

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    Katon: Purometeusu no Okurimono to Noroi | Fire Release: Prometheus - The Gift and the Curse
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs 3 handseals and casts their opponent in a A Ranked Genjutsu where they believe themselves to have their head, arms and legs bound in chains (stretched outwards away from each other) unable to move as a large 5 meter griffon vulture descends upon them from the clouds/sky with a means to eat at their body. Outside of the Genjutsu, the user has channeled their fire chakra into the clouds/sky 20 meters above their paralyzed opponent and causes a large 5 meter flaming vulture with a 10 meter wingspan to quickly falling down from the sky towards them. When hit, the flaming vulture severely burns the body of the opponent, causing the opponent in the illusion to feel that their skin is being rapidly picked and torn at by the griffon vulture as they scream in agony.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    Note: User must wait 3 turns before using this technique again.
    Note: No Genjutsu for 2 turns.
    Note: No Fire techniques can be used the turn this technique is used.
    Note: Counts as 2/3 moves in a turn

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    Name is wrong. Its unreasonable as the Genjutsu needs to be B-Rank max since its not that strong. And where does the damage come from? from the fire? Long range? No. No Long Range Genjutsu. Period.

    Doton: Atorasu no Futan | Earth Release: Atlas' Burden
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs 3 handseals and casts their opponent into a B Ranked Genjutsu where they believe that they the user has summoned a large boulder directly on top of their back and neck; using their hands as a means to balance it so it doesn't crush them. Outside of the Genjutsu, the user will have channeled their chakra into the ground around the opponent and broken up the earth into large pieces of earth. The earth will then cling to the opponent and cause the opponent to be extremely weighed down unable to move. The earth will continuously break apart and pile up on the opponent burying them with earth until they are covered in a large 10ft diameter sphere.
    Note: Can only be used 2x per battle.
    Note: User must wait 3 turns before using this technique again.
    Note: No Genjutsu for 2 turns.
    Note: No Earth techniques can be used the turn this technique is used.

    X-Both Pending-X Leaving for Scorps

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Blue part doesn't make sense. Name is wrong. Earth effect has been done before in many ways, making your only difference having the genjutsu beforehand. I don't understand why the enemy wouldn't simply dodge the boulder... It doesn't make much sense that he's sitting there waiting and balancing it..
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Severus Snape- View Post
    (Ranton: Arashi purizun) | Storm Release: Strom Prison
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: : The user will shoot a single beam of lighting into the sky, that then will move in an arc shape down on the opponent. When the beam of lightning starts to drop down, it will split in 20 smaller lightning beams, that will surround the opponent in a dome like shape. Any contact with the "bars" of this cage will send the prisoner staggering back from a violent shock likely knocking them into the other walls and resulting in a blackout. The size of this cage can be altered by the will of the person that created it.
    Note: the beam has to stay in contact with the user for the prison to hold
    Note: Can be used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
    _________________________
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    Specify the exact size of the prison, size alterations i won't allow, specify how big the single beam is, take out the blackout and replace it with something else like paralysis for example, mention how far can the prison be made away from the opponent.


    Storm training [X]

    (Hoippu Geijutsu: Akuma no ikari) | Whip Arts: Devils Rage
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: : The user will move the whip around his body while channelling his chakra trough the whip. As the whip hits the opponent, a small amount of chakra of the users chakra will disrupt the opponent’s chakra flow, putting him under a subtle genjutsu B-Rank jutsu where he will feel a burning pain coming from the muscle's that are near the hit point. This pain will increase over the next turns, if not broken out from the Genjutsu, until the opponent has the feeling that pain is too much, and can't use the hit limb any more, which takes 2 more turns.
    Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
    Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-
    ________________________
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    I was just going to approve it when i realized something, what do you mean by not being able to use the limb anymore? like for the rest of the battle? that's not how genjutsu works, you can say he can't use the limb while under the influence of the genjutsu but when the genjutsu is released he's capable of using it, what genjutsu produces is mental trauma, not physical, reduce the genjutsu to B-rank.


    Hoippu Geijutsu approval [X]
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    (Ranton: Arashi purizun) | Storm Release: Strom Prison
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: : The user will shoot a single beam of lighting into the sky, that then will move in an arc shape down on the opponent. When the beam of lightning starts to drop down, it will split in 30 smaller lightning beams of 1 cm, that will surround the opponent in a dome like shape. Any contact with the "bars" of this cage will send the prisoner staggering back from a violent shock and results in a paralysed limb immediately upon contact. The cage has a diameter of 3 meters and a height of 2 meters, and can be made up to 10 meters away from the user.
    Note: the beam has to stay in contact with the user for the prison to hold
    Note: Can be used twice per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-

    Storm training [X]

    (Hoippu Geijutsu: Akuma no ikari) | Whip Arts: Devils Rage
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: : The user will move the whip around his body while channelling his chakra trough the whip. As the whip hits the opponent, a small amount of chakra of the users chakra will disrupt the opponent’s chakra flow, putting him under a subtle genjutsu B-Rank jutsu where he will feel a burning pain coming from the muscle's that are near the hit point. This pain will increase over the next 2 turns, if not broken out from the Genjutsu, until the opponent has the feeling that pain is too much, and can't use the hit limb any more, until broken out of the genjutsu.
    Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
    Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-

    X-Both Approved-X
     
         
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