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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Genjutsu: furi-zu waku) Illsuionary Techniques:
    Freeze Frame

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will send there chakra into there opponents
    chakra system. Then they will perform any action (ex.
    performing a handseal or throwing a kunai) The opponent
    will then see what seems like the user has frozen in time
    still doing the action. Everything else will move in normal
    time.

    Note:Usable three times a battle
    Note:Can only be taught by -BlueDevil-

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    ±± Declined ±±
    *Don't resubmit.

    (Genjutsu: Tosaku shita shiko) Illusionnary Technique: Perverted thought
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user first extends there chakra into there opponents chakra system and disrupting it. The user then causes the opponent to see a girl in very revealing clothes. The user will then cause the opponent to think he is having a massive nosebleed. The opponent will then start to get light headed from him believing he is losing a large amount of blood.

    Note:Usable three times a battle
    Note:Can only be taught by -BlueDevil-

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    Weirdly enough, similar genjutsu exist.
     
         
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    (Suiton: Doragon Senpuu) Water release: Dragon whirlwind
    Type: Attack/defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description The user sends water chakra throughout their staff or Nunchaku. They then spin the staff or nunchaku above their head as they release the water chakra and create a small dragon made of water that comes out from the center of the staff/nunchaku as it spins while the chakra is being released. The dragon will come down around the user as it spins, completely covering view of them and making a protective shield. Looking similar to Neji when he does his Rotation. After the dragon picks up speed from the spin, the user can shoot the dragon at the opponent as a B rank attack.

    Notes:
    - Can be used 3x per match
    - User is vulnerable due to loss of sight of the opponent

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    No different from the Cannon Water Dragon except its done from a weapon.
     
         
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    Ninpou Hijutsu: Genzai No Ya | Ninja Art Hidden Technique: The Arrow of the Original Sin
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: Forbidden Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: N/A (-20 to the user)
    Description:
    Said to be one of the strongest long range techniques known in the ninja world, the Arrow of the Original Sin is a very complicated technique that combines several ninja skills, from elemental ninjutsu to genjutsu and even fuuinjutsu. The user will join his hands together and pull back one of his hands as if pulling on an imaginary bow string. As he does this, a bow of pure chakra materializes with the hilt held by the other hand. The bow can be done of any raw chakra the user is able to manipulate, appearing translucent as if made of pure energy. In the bow, as the hand is pulled back, an arrow materializes of the aforementioned chakra nature, completely engraved in kanji symbols. As this is done, the users chakra spills to the battlefield in such a forceful way that everyone nearby is affected by a low rank genjutsu (D-Rank) that makes them experience either terrifying visions or soothing ones, depending if they are the targets of the technique or not. The genjutsu is not a very focused or detailed one and its only purpose is to pressure or assure those around the user. It will only change minor things like turning the sky red and darkening the ambient while making it seem as if all living things are decaying and dyeing (plants, insects, animals) or making it seem as if a golden, almost angelic light shines from the user, a long with a soothing warmth and even ethereal sounds that will add to the ambient created. Even if it adds to the "drama" of using the technique, the Genjutsu is nothing more than a proof of the amount of chakra focused and manipulated to use this technique and its ultimate abilities and is nothing by the secondary effect of the proximity to that amount of chakra. As the string of the bow if fully pulled back, the user will let go the arrow created at amazing speeds through tremendously immense distances. While the customary use is with only one arrow, the user will be able to unleash up to 2 or 4 similar arrows in quick succession if he so pleases. The arrows, engraved, as well as the ethereal bow, in tons of kanji are nothing more than vessels for a powerful sealing technique that will trigger on impact. Upon impact, besides the elemental damage done by the arrow (according to its own elemental weaknesses and strengths and taking the basic Forbidden-Rank rank damage with it), the sealing technique acts as a "purifier", a "cleanser". When activated, the sealing technique quickly expands a spherical barrier that suddenly collapses upon itself, sealing what was caught within it and siphoning any nearby chakra onto itself, cleansing the area thrice its size of any foreign chakra (enemies nearby will feel the chakra being siphoned and will be weakened but undamaged if not hit by the technique or left inside its primary range). The sealing technique expands on contact with foreign chakra or on the users own will (he can "hit" a target with the elemental part of the technique and trigger the sealing at a different time if he so pleases) and will seal anything within a 5m diameter sphere inside itself in a mere moment. The sealing technique ensures certain defeat if it hits the opponent and can be used to seal/counter any Ninjutsu thrown at the user (within reason and logic according to the applications of the technique itself) as well but in this case will act slightly different. The seal will expand and siphon the technique onto itself completely, instead of only sealing what would be within its area. If the user decides to make use of 2 to 4 arrows instead of one, the elemental damage will be spread through them equally and the sealing technique will be smaller in proportion (2 arrows = S-Rank arrows with 2,5 m diameter seals, 4 arrows = A-Rank arrows with 1,25 m diameter seals) albeit still having the same sealing strength.

    Note: Usable twice and counts as 2 techniques of the 3 per turn.
    Note: User will suffer severe damage to the hand that holds the bow and will be unable to do handseals on the same turn while suffering a speed loss in terms of handseals during the next 2 turns if not healed.
    Note: User will be unable to use techniques above S-Rank in the same and next turn.
    Note: The speed of the arrows is enough that in short range it simply cannot be countered (even if in this scenario its extremely hard to find the window of opportunity to use it) and in mid range only users with advanced reactions (dojuutsu, sensing, enhanced senses, EIG, etc) will be able to even notice it, while making a viable counter is a completely different story.
    Note: The distance the user is able to reach with the arrow is only limited by the chakra he puts in it and by his own aiming skills.
    Note: Can only be taught by Scorps
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    Kure-n Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Sarus, Inakamono | Crane Summoning Technique: Sarus, the Redneck
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Sarus is considered one of the fastest flying birds. It's not massive in size which grants its flying speed. With a wingspan of 6m, it can easily carry the user on its back. It is conspicuous and iconic and it's easily distinguished amongst the other cranes because of its red colored head that spreads to its neck, therefore the name, Redneck. The red head and neck aren't actually feathered, but rather bare flesh. Sarus is known for its loud trumpeting calls. These calls are, as in other cranes, produced by the elongated trachea that form coils within the sternal region. His calls are quite loud and can be quite unsettling to hear. His actions can be easily merged with the users own as Sarus, same as the other cranes, has the ability to easily communicate with its owner through a special mindlink or through speech. The main ability of Sarus, however, is its mastery over the wind element. Though it's considered a master it doesn't have the ability to perform all of the wind jutsus that the user knows, but rather a special ability, known only to Sarus. It can create a very thick atmosphere around a specific point, just inches thick but enough to disperse any lighting jutsu that tries to pass through it. It can form the thickening of the air in various of shapes, be it a sphere around the user or a shield-like formation in front of him (or to his sides, etc.). The thickening effects the short area around the thickening point. The process works by simply compressing the desired field of air and infusing it with its own chakra, in a way that cancels out lightning. This ability counts as 1 jutsu that the user is allowed to perform per turn.
    Note: Wind ability counts as an S rank wind technique from one of the users 3 techniques per turn
    Note: Must have signed the Crane Summoning contract
    Note: Can only be summoned once and stays on the field only 4 turns
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    Not too fond of the name tho.

    Crane Contract

    Hijutsu: Gaia no Futaken | Hidden Technique: Gaia's Twin Swords
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    One day, while fiddling with the Staff of Gaia, Scorps accidentally inserted his chakra into the staff while he was dwelling on the idea of training with twin swords. The staff glowed and transformed into a set of two identical Ninjato. These swords are quite simple in appearance, each double edged straight blades, with blades about 80 cms long each, engraved in Kanji, much like the original staff from which they are created. The hilts are simple, wrapped in wood and metal, containing the same kanji inscriptions. Scorps picks the Staff of Gaia with both his hands and separates them, as if pulling it to the sides, while focusing chakra into the staff. Both swords form from each side. To merge them, the opposite must be done. One thing funny is that the abilities of the staff are divided amongst the swords, with one of the swords retaining the water ability and the other the earth ability. However, once separated, the swords lost their ability to focus or interact with wood chakra. What Scorps noticed was that while the Wood abilities were lost in this form, the swords gained another ability, allowing them to create a powerful sealing technique.

    Abilities:
    -One sword retains the ability to use the Water technique, while the other retains the ability to use the Earth technique
    -Swords are, like the Staff, indestructible and retain its overall physical attributes and abilities with the exception of the Wood ability
    -Like with the Staff of Gaia, using the techniques while holding the swords doesn't require hand seals
    -The sealing technique counts as a move and is S-Rank. The user will cross the blades in front of him and a circle of blue kanji will appear in front of it, facing the opponent. Called Kami no Rifurekushon or Divine Reflection, this Fuuin technique works by intercepting an incoming technique, shiphoning it on to itself and then releasing upon command a raw version of its element as a simple blast. The size, nature, rank or properties of the technique are irrelevant as the Kanji will simply produce a vortex that will suck inside it anything it can, only to release a raw version of it with the same power, albeit as a "stream" attack, long ranged.

    Restrictions:
    -All restrictions of the Staff of Gaia apply
    -Sealing ability can only be used twice per match and counts as a move
    -Transformation between Staff and Swords is done through the use of this technique and can be done as many times as the user wishes them while lasting as long as the user wishes it.
    -The swords can be used for Kenjutsu techniques as well as other techniques that require the use of swords.
    -Must have the staff of Gaia in his possession
    -Can only be taught by Scorps
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ±± New Cycle ±±

    Thread opened for a new weekly cycle of submissions. It starts today, the 1st of November and ends on the 7th of November. As always, in this cycle, you can submit 3 techniques.

    I must remind members of the following:

    -Blue Rule is under effect and no tolerance will be given. You can find it in the first post of this thread.

    -Name your techniques correctly and abide by the proper template, specially in chakra cost and damage points.

    -Don't add useless restrictions just to try and make it seem your technique is more approvable than it is. Be logical.

    -Read the first post of this thread to try and remind yourself of the rules of the thread as well as some tips to make your techniques more approvable.


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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Kyōka Suigetsu) - Mirror Flower, Water Moon

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A(-15 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The only decoration is the crossguard, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle. This is aizen's normal weopan that he is in almost every single one of his battles.
    The name Kyōka Suigetsu hints at its illusionary properties; the moon reflected in water and a flower in a mirror are things that can be seen but not held. It is a Chinese saying for seeing and desiring something that is a dream that cannot be easily grasped in hand, teaching people about temptations.
    The katana's special ability is that three times per battle, the user can, for 2 turns, control the opponents sense of sight. The user can make the target see hawks appear next to them, but they wouldnt smell it, hear it, taste it(>.>) or feel if they grabbed it. It only affects the sense of sight and none of the other 5 senses. This can be done 3 times a battle and only last 2 turns unless canceled. A passive blade ability is to be able to detect the presence of chakra throughout the battlefield. Effects count as one of three moves per turn. User can’t use effect two consecutive turns. Effects is equivalent to C-rank genjutsu.


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    OPed.
    (Kyōka Suigetsu) ɸ Mirror Flower, Water Moon

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: N/A(-15 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The only decoration is the crossguard, which is a hexagon instead of a rectangle. The two sides parallel to the blade are long, whereas the four sides above and below the blade are shortened, making it into almost a diamond or prism-like shape. It has a green handle. This is aizen's normal weopan that he is in almost every single one of his battles.
    The name Kyōka Suigetsu hints at its illusionary properties; the moon reflected in water and a flower in a mirror are things that can be seen but not held. It is a Chinese saying for seeing and desiring something that is a dream that cannot be easily grasped in hand, teaching people about temptations.
    The katana's special ability is that three times per battle, the user can, for 1 turn, control the opponents sense of sight. The user can make the target see hawks appear next to them, but they wouldn't smell it, hear it, taste it(>.>) or feel if they grabbed it. It only affects the sense of sight and none of the other 4 senses. This can be done 3 times a battle and only last 1 turn. Effects count as one of three moves per turn. The requirements for this ability to work is for the target to look at the blade, and then the user will be placed in a genjutsu. The downside of this sword is that it is extremely "destructible", it will break apart if it comes in contact with the something of greater density. The current density is that of a regular blade. User can’t use effect two consecutive turns. Effects is equivalent to D-rank genjutsu.


    X-Pending-X

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    A D-Rank Genjutsu that can basically, without any restriction or cost to you, make it so that you can deliver a final blow to an opponent without him even realizing it. Too generic, to exploitable, to easy to abuse. Define, restrict, limit.

    (Suiton: kensei no doragon ) ɸ Water Release: Power of the Dragon
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This technique is specialized for those who have great control over their water chakra. This is usually used in close combat where the user will release their water chakra around a part of their body covering them in water. This water is rotating around their body like a rasengan wrapped around a limb. Due to it being the users chakra and not that strong, it wont hurt the user, which can be quite painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is hit by this water created be the user, it will great a burst of water on impact from the user, creating seveal torrents that flies forwards which can send the opponent back into mid-range with damage and in pain.

    ɸ Can stay active for 2 turns at a time
    ɸ Can't use earth jutsu while it lasts.

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    (Kanchiki Suna No Muya no Jutsu) ɸ Sensor sand cocoon technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20 (+15 per turn)
    Damage Points: N//A
    Description:
    This technique is used to convert gaara's regualar chakra infused sand into sensor sand. The user preforms two hand-seals and snaps their fingers, in that instant the user would send a wave of chakra throughout the sand. The chakra changes the chakra infusing the sand and its makeup/composition. This allows, upon contact with an enemy target, to alert the user of the location and presence of an enemy target. This can be used to turn a sand technique into sensory sand or regular desert sand into it. Of course this sand will be able to stick onto people and only dojutsu and sensor users will be able to differ this between sensor sand and regular sand.
    The user is capable of using the sensor sand to recreate/duplicate any Sand Element techniques that do no originate from inside the body of the user, by manipulating their chakra that is already inside of the Sand. This technique doesn't effect the damage points of any sand technique.
    ɸ Can only be used 2x per battle
    ɸ Can only be used by Gaara
    ɸ Cant turn S-rank techniques into sensor sand
    ɸ Can turn a maximum of 4 sand techniques to sensor sand per use
    ɸ Only last 3 turns
    X-Declined-X How? I mean how does the sand gives you sensory abilities by spreading chakra in them?
     
         
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    (Herutsumoi Mukotsu: Kongouseki Dou) - Heart & Mind, Six Harmonies: Tempered Diamond Body
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short (Self)
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    A secret ninjutsu involving water chakra technique that enables the body or parts of it to become as solid as diamond in seconds. It works by instantaneously concentrating the water, water chakra and dense chakra in one's body to a certain area, since the strongest water pressure can stop even bullets, this as a result hardens the area where the user's focused on to be hard as diamond, comonly used to block physical blows, but can very well work as an offensive technique if the user applies it at the end of a certain limb such as a fist, dealing a blow with their hard as diamond fist, this defence is capable of breaking the bones of the foe if they land a blow on the area the user focused the water on, since it would be like striking diamond. Same process with the offensive side of this technique, the user could break several bones of the part where they landed a hit on the opponents body, while using this technique on the limb.
    - May only be used 4 times per battle.
    - May only be taught by -Castiel-

    X-Declined-X Bad explanation, how does water harden skin? Up to diamonds level.
    (Suiton: Nuption's Orobu) - Water Release: Neptune's Orb
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A rank
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user will first focus chakra into the water molecules in the air around the opponent and firstly gathering it towards either of the opponent's side of their face and compressing the water into a roughly the sized of a human head orb to locate inches away from the opponents face, then by performing a specific handseal, the orb will violently explode, the blow towards the opponent's face will knock them unconcious and possibly deal brain damage, such as internal bleeding.
    - May only be used 3 times per battle.
    - May only be taught by -Castiel-

    X-Declined-X Over-powered, DNR

    The Wretched One| Wabisuke
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 Chakra
    Damage: 80 Damage
    Description:
    Wabisuke is a large jutte that is quite long. When using it the user wielding the jutte, can take enemies by surprise and using the weapon to deliver strong blunt attacks. It's composed of an indestructible material and clean strikes from it have Bone breaking force. Wabisuke once in contact with the user's chakra and taking a portion of it doubles the weight of any object it strikes therefor if the user lets go of it, it loses it's ability. The ability can affect both inanimate objects and living beings, and is cumulative. For example, the first strike on an opponent wielding a 10 lb sword doubles the opposing sword's weight to 20 lbs. If the user strikes the sword a second time, the weight of the sword doubles to 40 lbs. The user can continue doubling the weight of objects and opponents indefinitely. After about eight or nine strikes, most opponents would be unable to lift there sword incase they are using one, or anything else that was affected by wabisuke (including the opponent himself). Though the potential of this ability is limitless, a small number of strikes to an opponents is usually all that is needed to render them immobile. If someone other than Rufus where to grab it the jutte it wouldn't recognize the chakra and would use its own ability on itself auto, meaning it'll become 5 times it's weight, making it impossible for others to hold/lift it, therefor only -Castiel- can use it due to being the only chakra source the jutte likes. If the user doesnt allow it to suck chakra from the user, its ability won't be in effect, however its bone breaking force is kept due to it resulting from the material and strength its made of.

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    Similar weapons were attempted in the past. Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Suiton/Raiton: Tsuchi Kujo | Water Release/Lightning Release : Destruction of the Earth
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long.
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user releases their suiton chakra into the ground beneath the opponent, creating a small reservoir of water underground. The size of the reservoir of water depends on how much chakra is put into it, it can be as large as techniques such as Storm Upheaval. The user then releases their visible Raiton chakra essence into the ground while performing the "Dragon" handseal, infusing the water with their electrical essence; done in a similar manner to Discharge Lightning calamity. The lightning created begins to propagate from within the water, eventually creating a mass of electricity that surges upwards in the form of lightning bolts. The ground begins to shake vigorously as the lightning bolts rip through the earth, breaking through the ground that the enemy is standing upon and continuing to travel upwards. Finally peaking at it's maximum height; three meters above ground level. Should the enemy not defend, he'll be stunned and damaged by the rising bolts and fall along with the earth into the electrified water below, where he will be shocked continuously. The reservoir remains electrified for two turns and can also be used as a watersrource.

    Note:
    - No Lightning or Suiton jutsu above S rank for the next two turns.
    - Can only be used 2x
    - Can only be taught by Scaze

    X-Declined-X Erm, so what happens to the mass of below opponent, it cant just be replaced by water without any physical changes in the surroundings

    Genjutsu: Jishin Mukankaku | Illusionary Technique : Quake Numb
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs two handseals, releasing their chakra towards their target(s), placing them under a genjutsu that lasts four turns. For the Genjutsu to take effect, the opponent must experience the rumbling noise and vibrations commonly caused by earth techniques, even if only in the slightest. The Genjutsu effects need to take place four times for the full results to be achieved, thus at least four earth techniques must be used, one each turn, either by the user of this technique, or anyone else for that matter over the period of the Genjutsu's duration. When the opponent experiences the shaking and rumbling commonly associated with Earth jutsu, the genjutsu amplifies these effects, so that rather than a small rumble the opponent feels as if they're at the center of a full scale earthquake. This is done by altering the targets vision making it jumpy and hazy, inducing a shaking and trembling feeling all throughout their body, disrupting the feeling of organs that control balance such as the ears, increasing the feeling of vibrations to a violent shake and inducing a loud constant shaking sound and making it feel as if the persons brain is rattling within his head. After the trembling caused by the earth technique stops, the earthquake effect caused by the genjutsu will slowly fade. However the shaking caused by the illusionary earthquake will take its toll on the opponents body. The first time the opponent will feel slightly weak in one of their legs, their hands will tremble slightly, their vision will be slightly hazy and they will experience slight problems with their balance. The second time the opponent will begin to feel extremely weak in both legs, particularly the one that was affected the first time round, their vision will be unfocused and hazy, their arms begin to tremble more severely making it harder to perform arm movements. They will also be mildly disorientated. The third time the opponent will lose complete feeling in the leg that was first affected, to the extent that they would be inclined to believe that the limb has been removed completely until they affirm that it's still there with one of their other senses. Thus they will be unable to stand, or be forced to hop. They will be severely disorientated having immense trouble perceiving their surroundings as well as being in a near deaf state. Their balance is relatively non-existent while they also experience a severe headache that makes mental tasks difficult. The rest of their body will also feel weak and they will undergo uncontrollable trembling, making close range fighting nearly impossible. The fourth time the opponent will lose complete feeling of their body from the neck down. Thus they will collapse being completely incapacitated, while their mind is in a state almost as bad as a severe headache makes mental tasks extremely hard.

    Note:
    - No Gen next turn.
    - No gen S rank or above for the next two turns.
    - Can only be used 1x
    - Using more than one Earth Technique per turn plays no role in advancing the genjutsu progression.
    - Can only be taught by Scaze

    X-Declined-X Summarize the description, make it more simple. Its bound to cause problems during a match. Also, way too many effects

    Raiton: Sutatikku Menshoku| Lightning Release: Static Shock
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: A technique where the user builds and gathers their raiton chakra before releasing it out towards their opponent. Instead of targeting the opponents body, the user targets their clothes. Imbuing their Raiton chakra into all of the opponents garments. The purpose of this is to enhance and increase the chances of static electricity build up created by the opponents clothes when they move via friction and what not. Embedding so much chakra into the clothes of the opponents, that even with the slightest of movements the user experiences small static shocks. This makes tasks such as performing handseals or making bodily movements particularly hard as the opponent will be repeatedly shocked while doing so. Not to mention that tasks such as running and sprinting become extremely cumbersome as large electrical discharges are sent through the opponents body repeatedly. Due to the fact that the larger and more boisterous the movements, the more frequent and powerful the static discharges. This effectively makes the opponents own clothes both their prison and possibly even their demise and undoing. Weather also has a play in the technique, should it be breezy then the opponents clothes will be moved by an exterior force, thus static electricity will be produced.

    Notes:
    - Can only be used 2x
    - Lasts for two turns
    - No Raiton jutsu above A rank for the rest of the turn.
    - Can only be taught by Scaze

    X-Declined-X And the opponent uses a water technique which suddenly causes paralysis or death?
     
         
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    (katon: kaen kakuchou)Fire release: flame extension
    Type: Attack

    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: mid Range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user holds out his sword with both hands horizntally, while channeling a ton of chakra into it, one hand on the handle, the other at the dull side of the other end of the sword with the blade facing the opponent, then the blade turns red, and fire is released from the blade, however the fire is shaped to be almost as thin as the sharp side of the blade with a high penetration power
    - can only be used once
    - no fire jutsu is same turn and in the next two turns
    - Can only be taught by elmage
    - requires good chakra control
    - mastery of fire is required
    - Requires a sword

    X-Approved-X

    (fuuton: gekido kaze) wind release: raging wind
    Type: Attack/Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Long Range
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user unsheaths his sword releasing an extremely huge blast of wind that moves along the ground, carry debris of little rocks and dust towards the target, the user then make a single seal and the wind rises up to about 5 meters above the ground creating a wall of wind, blowing the target away as well as doing damage on the target
    - Can only be used twice times
    - Requires a sword
    - No technique which require sword in that turn
    - No wind jutsu for three turns
    - Can only be taught by elmage

    X-Declined-X A blast of wind, which then rises above the ground and creates a wall? Why kenjutsu?

    (manako sono arashi) Eye of the storm
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: ( 10 to any wind jutsu used along with sword)
    Description: The eye of the storm is a sword that was long lost is the desert sands, and buried deep within the earth. The sword was found by elmage during one of his adventures, A terrible sand storm blew away the sands covering the sword, bringing it to the surface revealing the sword, since when elmage found the sword it slowly revealed its power till he became proficient with it. Theres a phrase inscribed on the sword, that can only be read by the user of the sword
    When used, the sword absorbs wind chakra from the user, it increases the range of any wind jutsu used with the sword, e.g a short ranged jutsu used with the sword becomes mid range, also it increases the damage of a wind jutsu used with the sword by 10.
    Note: long range remains long range

    - Effects lasts /can only be used for five turns
    - must be stated at the begining of battle/stated in bio to use
    - Can only be used by elmage
    - Sword cannot be used with a forbidden Rank technique

    How sword looks like

    X-Declined-X No more element boosting swords
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Ushiro View Post
    Resubmitting:

    (Suiton: Ekitai Tojikome) - Water Release: Liquid Imprisonment
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user performs the Bird handseal and materializes 8 semi-solid cubes of water around his target. They are each 1 meter wide and have numerous cords of water linking the cubes which are difficult to break due to their dense composition. After their creation the user may clap his hands together, causing the cords to retract and swiftly pull the cubes towards each other. Anyone caught between the cubes is crushed as a giant water cube is formed around them.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -No other water jutsu this turn
    -No A-rank or higher water jutsu next turn

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    ±± Approved ±±
    Edited. 20 feet was too much

    Updating this:

    (Katon: Afutābānā)- Fire Style: Afterburner
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user clasps his hands together and creates a circular mark in the palm of each hand that emit powerful jets of flame that can propell the user for a total of 5 seconds. The jutsu's timing and jet power are controlled by the user. They can get the user to a target at mid range in 2.5 seconds.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Can only be taught by Katonpwnz

    To this:

    (Katon: Afutābānā)- Fire Style: Afterburner
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the snake handseal and gathers fire chakra on his palms in the the form of glowing red rings. At any time, the user can have the rings emit powerful jets of flame capable of propelling the user through the air faster than a ninja can run but can still be followed by the naked eye. The power of the jets are controlled by the user and may be activated and deactivated at will as long as the rings are still there. Over time the rings fade but the user can recharge them by performing this jutsu again.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns

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    To update a technique you need to link to it if its from the old thread or quote it if its from this one.

    New:

    (Katon: Haihahaini) - Fire Release: Ashes to Ashes
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user performs the Rat handseal and summons a white mist around his opponent resembling a large eerie skull which moves with him if he attempts to leave it. The mist is actually a flammable gas and will ignite when it comes into contact with fire or sparks. It is partially transparent so the opponent can still see what is outside of it, just not as clearly. Once the mist is ignited, the opponent is assaulted by raging flames now resembling the head of a demon for several seconds, causing him to collapse in a smouldering heap after receiving serious burns. The mist can be exhaled from the mouth instead but would only be able to reach out to mid-range from the user and will not follow the opponent unless it makes contact with him.
    -Usable 5 times per battle

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    ±± Declined ±±
    This isn't a B-Rank. Also, you should need to expel this gas, it wouldn't simply materialize around the opponent. Remember that fire is 80% of the time breathe related.
    Update:

    (Katon: Afutābānā)- Fire Style: Afterburner
    Type: Supplementary/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the snake handseal and gathers fire chakra on his palms in the the form of glowing red rings. At any time, the user can have the rings emit powerful jets of flame capable of propelling the user through the air faster than a ninja can run but can still be followed by the naked eye. The power of the jets are controlled by the user and may be activated and deactivated at will as long as the rings are still there. Over time the rings fade but the user can recharge them by performing this jutsu again.
    -Usable twice per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns

    Link to old jutsu

    X-Declined-X Well its still visible to naked eye so thats fine, but ninjas have variable speed. And its similar to many existing techniques even pain's jet boots. Would be better to keep the old, otherwise make it more precise its your way to avoid all projectile techniques for 6 turns

    Resubmitting:

    (Katon: Haihahaini) - Fire Release: Ashes to Ashes
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the Rat handseal and spews a white mist towards his opponent resembling a large eerie skull which follows its target and moves with him if he tries to escape it. The mist is actually a flammable gas and will ignite when it comes into contact with fire or sparks. It is partially transparent so the opponent can still see the other side of it, just not as clearly. Once the mist is ignited, the skull becomes an intense fireball now resembling the head of a demon, capable of inflicting serious burns in a few seconds.
    -Usable 3 times per battle
    -Lasts for 3 turns

    X-Approved-X

    New:

    (Kuchiyose: Kishida) - Summoning: Kishida
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kishida, a white locust 8 meters in height wearing armor made of numerous rectangular metal plates covering his body. Regarding himself as a knight, he spends the majority of his time wearing this armor which has developed his strength substantially. He has no trouble moving around with it regularly but cannot fly while wearing it. The armor contains chakra, allowing it to withstand damage from an S-rank attack before being destroyed. Kishida is able to disassemble his armor and levitate it through the air to form protective barriers up to mid range from himself. He can also mold the metal plates together after levitating them to create a large lance used to attack with the strength of an A-rank jutsu. With his fire affinity, he may imbue the metal with fire chakra which can increase the power of the lance to S-rank and allow the armor to endure An S and an A-rank attack. Anything that touches the metal is burned by the flames on it and flammable materials are turned to ash almost immediately. While wearing the armor, the flames are on the outer part of it, preventing Kishida from harming himself.
    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    -Can stay for 5 turns
    -Levitating the armor, imbuing the armor with fire chakra, and creating a lance each count as a move of the user.
    -Must have signed the Locust contract

    Link to Training or signing the contract would be nice, i'm sorry would bother to look through myself before declines but busy time of the year
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Satan no honō: Haipā hinshi suru mōdo)Satan's Flame:Hyper Dying Will Mode
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40(-5 per turn actiave)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:Hyper Dying Will Mode is the last and final stage of the Satan's Flame,the user while clasp his hands together,having the flare blue fire around them,there fingers will being a triangular form and on the users forehead a small flare in the shape of a V,will appear on there head.While standing the user will channel only his fire chakra around his body causing the area around him to heat up making it hard for unexpericened ninja(ninja of lower ranking of user)to vacute the area(short range).The users hand and the V will be sparking like starting a fire.Once the balance is made the user will open his eyes and complete the transformation of creating the Hyper Dying Will Mode.The user will have a fully lite blue/red fire around his hands and a flaring V on his forehead.While in this mode then user only has acess to Taijutsu,Satan's Flame and Fire related Techniques.The area around the user will make most shinobi backway from the heat radiating from them(other Satan's Flames students are unaffected).The mode boosts there Taijutsu by +5 due to the fire being instensly hot and Fire Related Ninjutsu gain +5 as well,the mode is however vunerable to A-Rank water due to it will extinguish the flames on there user,but even so the user can stop channeling there chakra to there fists and forehead to prevent them from outing and then can reignite them.The users can also unleash streams of fire from the hands to allow the to fly up to mid range by continously project fire from there body.

    -Mode last 4 turns and leaves user taxed out-
    -Stopping the mode counts as a move and reduces the mode activation by 1 turn
    -Can only be used with Fire,Taijutsu and other Satan's Flame Related moves-
    -Must learnt Satan's Flame-
    -Can only be used once per battle-



    X-Approved-X


    (Satan no honō: Hageshī sukarubasshu)Satan's Flame:Fiery Skull Bash
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:The user will coat there forehead with blue/red fire and will begin channeling more chakra till it looks like devil horns.The user will then run at full speeds and headbutt the target with a fiery head bash causing not only physicial damage but will also leave burn marks on the targets head.
    -Can be used 5 times-
    -Can only be taught by Asuna-

    X-Approved-X

    (Satan no honō: Kikku no akuma no o shiri!)Satan's Flame:Kick Satan's Butt!
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user will mimick the Hyūga Clans traditional stance,as they do they coat there fingers tips which are formed together(middle and index) and will begin strking the target at random spots,unhowever there not insering chakra into the target but simply touching the surface of there skin.After unleashing a barrage of 32 consecutive hits the user will then coat there feet in flames and unleash a kick into the targets chin sending them flying into the air, then the user will run and jump into the air by propelling flames from there hands and will smash a fiery fist into the target sending them flying into the ground.

    -Can only be used 3 times-
    -Must be taught by Asuna-

    X-Approved-X

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    (Katon: Tsuinassai Ryūsē) – Fire Release: Twin Crushing Meteors
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing a set of 4 handseals, the user gathers a huge amount of fire chakra and releases it into the air, causing a portal similar to the "Sticky Earth Drop" technique to open to either of two opposite sides of the intended target, each portal is released 5 meters away from the opponent, summoning two identical meteor sized fireballs which are extremely compressed towards the opponent, approaching him from the two opposite sides, when the Fireballs each are 3 meters away from the opponent they resonate with each other, causing a "link" of fire to spread out connecting the two fireballs resulting in a ring of fire that's made around the opponent, entrapping him in the area he's in, however the opponent can escape vertically upwards since the ring of fire doesn't cover above him it only covers around him, the heat released from these two fireballs are enough to cause sweat to drip down the opponent's body when it's summoned out of the portals, letting him know the danger he's in, each Meteor sized fireball is considered an A-rank Fire technique, since it's an S-rank divided in two, when hit by either fireballs, anything caught in between the two fireballs will be crushed and burned severely.
    Note: Can only be used once.
    Note: No S-rank Fire Release or above techniques in the next turn.

    X-Declined-X Well, excluding the strong relation with space-time ninjutsu (Sticky Earth drop was used by an anbu and can very well be a variant of summoning like wheel of fortune). There are 2 things:
    -Mid Range? Mid range from you or your opponent? if you, you are in effect range.
    -3m is too less, make it at least 10-15m.


    (Katon: Ryūhonō kyūzō) – Fire Release: Dragon Flame Explosion
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A – S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 – 40
    Damage Points: 60 – 80
    Description: This is a variant of the original "Fire Release: Twin Crushing Meteors" technique, in which after the user forms 4 other handseals, a portal is created above the opponent which is similar to the "Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop" technique, summoning one Large sized dragon that heads onto the opponent from above him, when used solely this technique can only make the dragon that hits the opponent head on delivering burning damage to them and is considered an A-rank Fire technique, however when this technique is used after/in conjunction with the "Fire Release: Twin Crushing Meteors" technique the Fire dragon and the two meteor sized fireballs resonate with one another, forming a semi transparent pyramid shaped barrier of fire around the opponent which can be clearly seen with normal eyes, which explodes eradicating anyone within the barrier when used in conjunction or after the technique mentioned previously it's considered an S-rank, this technique is normally made at least 5 meters above the opponent's height.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    Note: Each rank can be used once per battle.
    Note: No S-rank or above fire techniques for the next 2 turns after using S-ranked version.
    Note: No S-rank and above Fire techniques in the next turn after using the A-rank version.

    X-Declined-X Pick One rank, and submit this after the first technique gets approved.

    (Katon: Honō Funka) – Fire Release: Flame Eruption
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After utilizing a set of 4 handseals, the user gathers a huge amount of chakra which he spreads through the air, this Fire technique is not used like other Fire techniques, for example to be released out of the user's mouth or around him, this Fire technique is a burst of flames that erupt out of an enclosed place of earth, it uses the earth to erupt as a medium, for example this technique can be used in conjunction with the "Earth Release: Opening Earth Rising Excavation" technique, to form an erupting Volcano, by erupting flames out of the circular "void" of the volcano that mixes with the earth to form Lava that erupts out of the Volcano's tip and drips down it's length, not only that, but it also can be used in enclosed places like in conjunction with the "Earth Release: Earth Corridor" technique, in which it causes the walls of the tavern to erupt flames burning anyone who's inside of it, it can be used in conjunction with any techniques similar to the ones mentioned previously in which they "surround" or trap the opponent, however it's downside is that it can't be used in an area that doesn't surround the opponent, meaning it can't just come out of the ground beneath the opponent for example, unless they have "walls" around them, when the fire erupts it's similar to the "Fire Release: Firing Biscuit" Technique.
    Note: Can only be used Twice per battle.
    Note: No S-rank or above Fire techniques in the next 2 turns.

    X-Declined-X That would be simultaneous use of Earth release and Fire release. Impossible without KG or Yin/Yang. You could remake this technique to be used in collaboration of clones, summoning animals or team mates.
     
         
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    Watashi wa tobitai (I want to fly)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (activation) 20 (per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: These are a pair of golden boots with a blue pendant in the middle of them that Broly wears. These boots, at the users will, release high speed, precision wind stream at any angle out of them that the user wishes similar to the D rank wind stream technique. The wind stream can be maintained for as long as the user wishes however these drain his chakra the longer he does it, making him only able to sustain flight for 3 straight turns before needing a 4 turn cooldown. Also the user may only use lightning, wind, and tai techniques while in flight putting the user at a huge disadvantage in exchange for flight.

    -If used 3 turns in a row, boots need a 4 turn cooldown
    -May only use lightning, wind, and tai while using boots' ability
    -Can only be used by Broly and those he allows
    -Initial flight counts as a move when its activated, staying in the air counts as a move on the subsequent turns its activated
    -If used to dodge a jutsu within reason, this also counts as a move

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    Flying boots? :sy:

    Suiton: Watashi wa hontōni tobitai Water Style: I REALLY want to fly
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The user focuses thin water platforms just under his feet, the size of his foot, whether in the air or on the ground. This allows the user to stand wherever he creates these and can stop him from falling into a perilous situation. For example, if the user is about to fall onto an earth spike from high in the air, he simply focuses water just under his feet and this will allow him to float in mid air on these platform, saving him from his fall.However, due to the agility, balance, and strength needed to perform this, the user must be a taijutsu specialist.

    -Must be a taijutsu specialist to use
    -Can only be used 3 times before needing a 3 turn cooldown
    -Can only be taught by Broly

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    Makes no sense mainly because its similar to a wind technique already in existance. Don't resubmit.

    Kuchiyose: Hahanarudaichi Summoning: Mother Earth
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Mother Earth is Father Time's wife and is equally as old. Having to have the trickery of a woman to stand up against the wisdom of her husband, she of course learned and studied Genjutsu for many many years. Thus she is able to use any genjutsu the user knows up to A rank. Having studied Genjutsu tirelessly for many years she also is able to recognize any non dojutsu related genjutsu just by hearing about it or seeing it. Mother Earth also has a telepathic connection with her summoner and any cardinal on the field. She is a brown cardinal as small as the Ma toad and sits on her summoners shoulder, channeling chakra into her feet so that she does not fall of even when the user moves at high speeds

    -Stays on the field for 4 turns
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-
    -After being on the field for four turns Father Time requires a 3 turn cooldown before being summoned again

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Recognizing Genjutsu just like that? And as she is conveniently on your shoulder, she will simply inject chakra into you passively and release you from it right? No.

    I am the owner of cardinal contract
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    Kuchiyose: Hahanarudaichi Summoning: Mother Earth
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Mother Earth is Father Time's wife and is equally as old. Having to have the trickery of a woman to stand up against the wisdom of her husband, she of course learned and studied Genjutsu for many many years. Thus she is able to use any genjutsu the user knows up to A rank. Mother Earth also has a telepathic connection with her summoner and any cardinal on the field. She is a brown cardinal as small as the Ma toad and sits on her summoners shoulder, channeling chakra into her feet so that she does not fall of even when the user moves at high speeds, the chakra is just to her feet and will not break the user out of a genjutsu

    -Stays on the field for 4 turns
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-
    -After being on the field for four turns Mother Earth requires a 3 turn cooldown before being summoned again

    I am the owner of cardinal contract
    Signed here

    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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    This can only be summoned once and she needs to do something to trigger the genjutsu. Can she do handseals? Don't think so.
     
         
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    Link to Other CW.

    (Hyō Unarigoe)- Pantera’s Snarl
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Hyō Unarigoe is an advanced, form fitting, white, segmented body armor that fits comfortably and perfectly around the entire lower portion of the wielder’s body. Hyō Unarigoe is composed of a lightweight, yet incredibly durable chakra metal. Tight, leather, chakra mesh is located under the basic armor and around the joints and points on the body requiring a large amount of movement and flexibility (such as the ankles, knees, etc). The knees have bladed projections on the front of them for cutting/slicing. The feet and ankle portion of the body armor are solid black, and contain several metal claws protruding from the toes. These provide the wielder increased traction on slick or difficult terrain (such as ice, etc). The claws can hook into surfaces to stop on whim, or aid the wielder in immediate directional changes. The bottoms of the feet are padded with a noise muffling material, allowing for near-silent running. However, the real ability that Hyō Unarigoe possesses is much more deadly. The strength of Hyō Unarigoe increases as it becomes dirtier, regardless of whether it is from mud, water, or anything containing chakra. Whenever a technique physically touches or makes contact with any part of Hyō Unarigoe, it saps the technique’s chakra, either completely dispelling or reducing the rank of the technique. This absorption does not apply to genjutsu, as genjutsu is not a physical manifestation of chakra. This also leaves the armor somewhat stained with black blotches. The chakra metal of Hyō Unarigoe will then stay charged with the chakra absorbed from techniques. When needed, the wielder will transfer the stored chakra from the armor to himself to be used to increase the power of his next technique.
    Note: Can only be used by Selendrile unless given permission
    Note: Can only absorb up to B-rank worth of chakra from a single technique per absorption
    Note: Hyō Unarigoe is indestructible, but doesn't mean it can destroy everything

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    Increase the power? how much? Also, how many times can it absorb? It needs to count as a move. If its a full body indesctrutible armor it makes you immune to kunais, blast damage and basically most lower ranked ninjutsu, taijutsu and kenjutsu. You know fairly well thats a no no. I asked you to define the armor and its techniques better, not to leave them generic and undefined while adding a factor to it that will make it unapprovable and prone to abuse.
    (Hyō Unarigoe)- Pantera’s Snarl
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Hyō Unarigoe is an advanced, form fitting, white, segmented body armor that fits comfortably and perfectly around the entire lower portion of the wielder’s body. Hyō Unarigoe is composed of a lightweight, yet incredibly durable chakra metal. The armor is a suitable defense against sword strikes, weapon projectiles, and C-rank and below taijutsu. Tight, leather, chakra mesh is located under the basic armor and around the joints and points on the body requiring a large amount of movement and flexibility (such as the ankles, knees, etc). The knees have bladed projections on the front of them for cutting/slicing. The feet and ankle portion of the body armor are solid black, and contain several metal claws protruding from the toes. These provide the wielder increased traction on slick or difficult terrain (such as ice, etc). The claws can hook into surfaces to stop on whim, or aid the wielder in immediate directional changes. The bottoms of the feet are padded with a noise muffling material, allowing for near-silent running. However, the real ability that Hyō Unarigoe possesses is much more deadly. The strength of Hyō Unarigoe increases as it becomes dirtier, regardless of whether it is from mud, water, or anything containing chakra. Whenever a technique physically touches or makes contact with any part of Hyō Unarigoe, it saps the technique’s chakra, either completely dispelling or reducing the rank of the technique. This absorption does not apply to genjutsu, as genjutsu is not a physical manifestation of chakra. This also leaves the armor somewhat stained with black blotches. The chakra metal of Hyō Unarigoe will then stay charged with the chakra absorbed from techniques. When needed, the wielder will transfer the stored chakra from the armor to himself to be used to increase the power of his next technique, equal to the amount of stored chakra. This ability can be used four times per battle, and counts as a single move of the user.
    Note: Can only be used by Selendrile unless given permission
    Note: Can only absorb up to B-rank worth of chakra from a single technique per absorption

    X-Declined-X Vague in theory, Gets stronger as it gets dirtier? No physical limit on absorption of chakra which allows this to even absorb forbidden ranked techniques with relative ease.

    (Genjutsu: Danpenka Sa Reta Tamashī no Bōrei): Illusion Technique: Apparitions of a Fragmented Soul
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will perform the Dragon → Bird hand seals, and inserts his chakra into his opponent(s) brain. Once done, the opponent(s) will experience a gradual burning sensation as a thick, smokey haze erupts from the area around their heart. The haze then spreads out all around the opponent(s), forming into several cloaked and hooded figures. All at once, the figures remove their hoods and fling open their robes, revealing themselves. The faces mimic the loved ones closest to the opponent(s), however with many prominent differences. The bodies of the apparitions are blackened, like severely burnt skin. Puss and blood ooze from every crack and crevice. Their faces have decayed skin hanging off in ragged strips, with maggots crawling throughout the eye sockets and mouth. Their voices are piercing and demonic, screaming constant, deafening curses and threats for not saving them before their untimely death. By this time, the burning sensation has spread throughout their chest and has begun to cook the opponent(s) skin, burning it a black color comparable to that of the apparition's. The apparitions then rapidly converge on the opponent, removing wicked looking swords and weapons. They proceed to stab the opponent(s) through every part and place on their body. As they stab through the opponent(s), they whisper "Welcome home."
    Note: Can only be taught by Selendrile
    Note: Usable twice per battle
    Note: No Genjutsu above A-rank for two turns after use

    X-Declined-X Similar to a multitude of existing techniques. And Damage points again?
     
         
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    Doton: Mimizu - Earth Style: Earthworms
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Point: 90(+30 to user due to chakra strain)
    Description: This is an advanced earth jutsu where the user spreads his chakra into a large portion of earth. He then breaks down earth into smaller molecules forming millions of earthworm which can burrow throw earth with ease.
    The first variant of this jutsu is when the opponent/s is underground, millions of earthworm would form in a split second from earth surrounding him overwhelming him and drilling through his whole body part.
    The second variant: the user can make the earthworms emerge from the ground and while piling up with great speed, wrap themself around the opponent in a matter of seconds ravaging him.
    -note-
    +++Earthworms are purely made of earth.
    +++Useable only once per battle.
    +++Last for 3 turns
    +++No S-rank and above earth for 2 turns
    +++Earthworms regenerate unless totally destroyed

    X-Declined-X Huh? Earthworms how?

    Quote Originally Posted by Priest View Post
    Doton: Tenkyo Tsuchi waku - Earth Style: Moving Earth Slide
    Rank: A
    Type: Sup
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30(-10 for each turn active)
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: This is similar to Marvel Ice-Man's Ice Slide. The user focuses his/her doton chakra and constantly release a stream of mud from one or both his/her hand which he/she extends a little bit forward so that a long earth slide is formed conveying the user along as it extends. The mud solidifies as soon as it is released so the user can stand on it. The user can ride this from his/her initial position(ground) to anywhere and can even go high into mid air and has high manouvreability. However, the user is only standing and barely moves. The user is prone to lightning when using this.
    -note-
    -can't use any jutsu apart from earth while using this.
    -Last 3 turns
    -Useable only 3 times
    -can carry a max of 3 passengers without breaking
    -Requires Doton mastery

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    You do realize that it works with Ice because its slippery and Iceman simply "skids" on it, right? If the mud solidifies for you to stand on, its not exactly a very "skid" prone surface right?
    Doton: Tenkyo Tsuchi waku - Earth Style: Moving Earth Slide
    Rank: A
    Type: Sup
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30(-10 for each turn active)
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: This is similar to Marvel Ice-Man's Ice Slide. The user focuses his/her doton chakra and constantly release a stream of mud from one or both his/her hand which he/she extends a little bit forward so that a long earth slide is formed conveying the user along as it extends. The mud solidifies as soon as it is released and the user uses his chakra to make the surface smooth and slipery, then the user while channeling chakra to his legs, is able to skid on it. The user can ride this from his/her initial position(ground) to anywhere and can even go high into mid air and has high manouvreability. The user is prone to lightning when using this.
    -note-
    -can't use any jutsu apart from earth while using this.
    -Last 3 turns
    -Useable only 3 times
    -can carry a max of 2 passengers who holds on to the user while he skids
    -Requires Doton mastery

    X-Declined-X It still does not work *

    Suiton: Shinkuronaizu - Water Style: Synchronise
    Rank: A
    Type: Sup
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: While standing on the water, the user spreads and kneads his chakra into the water and become one with water. He then can sense anything moving on the water surface and beneath the water. The user can also use this while he is in the water.
    ++useable only 3 times per battle
    ++Last 3 turns
    ++requires suiton Mastery

    X-Decline-X Multiple reasons, plus similar to numerous existing techniques
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Shadow Combat Style: Arc Slash (Kage no Sentō: Ākusurasshu)
    Type: Supplementray
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user form a sharp blade in his right or left hand. The user then make it harden. The blade is sharper than the normal. When it hits the enemy, it sew the enemy with shadow and make them immobile.
    - Can only be user by Nara.. and person he taught
    - Can only be formed at one hand at a time

    Like this one


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    Link to CFS?

    Fireborn Odachi (Fireborn Odachi)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Crafted by the sunagakura greater blacksmith. It is said that it is made up of greatest alloy, the combination of molten lava and steel with addition of chakra. It is lighter than a normal sword. The sword powers up fire chakra and scorch chakra. When fire chakra is added. The sword will start to burn. When Scorch chakra is added, the sword will be strongly heated that it can vaporize water that comes in contact with it. It amplify scorch release technqiue, mainly the ones which must be used with sword. When fire tech are used with the sword, they gain +1 rank, and scorch release the same. It is said that only Nara.. can wield the sword. When other touch it. It release a burning heat which can even melt the hand. When Nara.. wield it, the sword respond to it and shine brighter.
    - Can be used for burning sword which take 1 jutsu to make it burn.
    - Can be used to vaporize water which take 1 jutsu to make it fused with scorch chakra.
    - Fire and Scorch tech used with this tech gain +1 rank.
    - Can only be touched by Nara..



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    Similar weapons made countless times before. Yours is even more powerful than the 7SM Fire Sword, the goddess of fire.

    Scorch Release: Scorched Slash (Shakuton: Sakusen surasshu)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user make a slash with his sword, releasing an arc of super heated wave in conjunction with it. If enemy is hit by the slash, he'll be severely burned.
    - Requires a Sword
    - Can only be used by Nara.. and person he taught

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    Shadow Combat Style: Arc Slash (Kage no Sentō: Ākusurasshu)
    Type: Supplementray
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user form a sharp blade in his right or left hand. The blade is made over the hand, possessing a few small tendrils rising along the blade.When it hits the enemy, the tendrils elongates and sew the enemy with shadow and make them immobile. The user afterward can throw him as he wish.
    - Can only be user by Nara.. and person he taught
    - Can only be formed at one hand at a time
    - Sew for one turn
    Link: [X]

    X-Approved-X

    Scorch Release: Pointed Beam (Shakuton: Saki no togatta rēzā)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user concentrate his scorch chakra at the tip of a finger and then point it at the enemy. With shape manipulation, one can shape it into beam, and release a very small, concentrated narrow beam at the enemy, which can burn everything in it path. The beam travel very fast with nearly speed of sound. Since the beam is so small, the chakra is superlatively concentrate like how a beam of light is concentrated.
    - The beam can be launched quickly that it is launched as soon as the user pointed

    X-Declined-X No speed in comparison to sound. Dont use the term beam, it conflicts with my Radiation CE. Make it a blast of scorching heat you could direct at your opponent.

    Shadow Combat Style: Crushing Land (Kage no Sentō: Tochi o funsai)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user first add strong layer to his leg and then jump high into the air, and then add more layers to his leg and come down with such weight that it creates an earthquake around the landing place when it reaches the ground.
    - The user can perform jutsu while in the air and then crush down together
    Link: [X]

    X-Declined-X Weight using shadows?
     
         
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    (Kaden ryūshi) | lightning release: electrically charged particles
    Type: Boost
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (+15 to lightning jutsu's and + 5 to Taijutsu)
    Description: After performing this jutsu Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique and waiting for a turn for the weather to change, the user will get into a stance and will clear their mind and then close his eyes with his arms clapped together. The user with his chakra, will collect the electrically charged particles made by the thunder clouds in the atmosphere. When collected enough, the user will summon back his chakra and place it back into his body's chakra system. By collecting and inserting the charged particles into the users chakra system, the user will be able to utilize properties of a thunder, e.g. speed and reflexes. The sudden entrance of the electrically charged particles will cause the users constant flow of chakra supply to the muscles increase dramatically, thus increasing his reaction times. Because of the electrically charged particles, electrical current very similar to Nagashi will run through the users body.

    Restrictions

    - Jutsu lasts for 5 turns
    - No summonings allowed in these 5 turns
    - No wind jutsu's at all in these 5 turns, or this jutsu will automatically be cancelled.
    - Usable 1 time per battle.
    - While in this state, if the user is hit with a water jutsu above C-Rank, the damage point of the water jutsu will increase by 15 and also the user will be forced to deactivate the jutsu or he'd fall unconscious.
    - The user must perform Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique and wait for a turn in order for this jutsu to take place.
    - For the next 5 turns, the user is only able to use C-Rank jutsu's, but cannot use Lightning jutsu's. Then the user can only use A Ranks and/or below jutsu's can be used for the remaining of the battle.
    - If the user is interrupted while in the stance, gathering the particles, this justu will not happen.
    - The user cannot use Kirin during these 5 turns.
    - Can only be used/taught by UchihaMadara01

    Abilities

    - The user will be able to travel 2.5x faster than he usually would.
    - The damage points of all the lightning jutsu's performed by the user in the period of these 5 turns are increased by 15.
    - Reaction time is also increased, 1.5 seconds faster than an average ninja.
    - Physical hits are increased by 5 and due to the electricity crackling all over the users body, it will also numb where the opponent got hit.
    - Immune to Genjutsu for those 5 turns, because of the electrical current running through the users body constantly which is similar to Nagashi.


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    No font, size or alignment formatting.
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    (Kaden ryūshi) | lightning release: electrically charged particles
    Type: Boost
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (+15 to lightning jutsu's and + 5 to Taijutsu)
    Description: After performing this jutsu Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique and waiting for a turn for the weather to change, the user will get into a stance and will clear their mind and then close his eyes with their hands clapped together. The user with his chakra, will collect the electrically charged particles made by the thunder clouds in the atmosphere. When collected enough, the user will summon back his chakra and place it back into his body's chakra system. By collecting and inserting the charged particles into the users chakra system, the users abilities will be taken to a whole new level, e.g. speed and reflexes would increase. The sudden entrance of the electrically charged particles will cause the users constant flow of chakra supply to the muscles increase dramatically, thus increasing his reaction times. Because of the electrically charged particles, electrical current very similar to Nagashi will run through the users body.

    Restrictions

    - Jutsu lasts for 5 turns
    - No summonings allowed in these 5 turns
    - No wind jutsu's at all in these 5 turns, or this jutsu will automatically be cancelled.
    - Usable 1 time per battle.
    - While in this state, if the user is hit with a water jutsu above C-Rank, the damage point of the water jutsu will increase by 15 and also the user will be forced to deactivate the jutsu or he'd fall unconscious.
    - The user must perform Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique and wait for a turn in order for the weather to change.
    - For the next 5 turns, the user is only able to use C-Rank jutsu's, but cannot use Lightning jutsu's. Then the user can only use A Ranks and/or below jutsu's for the remaining of the battle.
    - If the user is interrupted while in the stance, gathering the particles, this justu will not happen.
    - The user cannot use Kirin during these 5 turns or for the rest of the fight.
    - The user must wait a turn before this jutsu is complete.
    - People with 2/3T will be able to keep up with the speed.
    - Can only be used/taught by UchihaMadara01

    Abilities

    - The user will be able to travel 2.5x faster than he usually would.
    - The damage points of all the lightning jutsu's performed by the user in the period of these 5 turns are increased by 15.
    - Reaction time is also increased, 1.5 seconds faster than an average ninja.
    - Physical hits are increased by 5 and due to the electricity crackling all over the users body, it will also numb where the opponent got hit.
    - Immune to B Rank and/or below Genjutsu for those 5 turns, because of the electrical current running through the users body constantly which is similar to Nagashi.

    ++++

    (Mizu rirīsu:-Sui no hentai) | water release: water transformation
    Type: Offense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This jutsu is similar to Water Style: Water Replacement. The user will concentrate and turn a part of their body into water, and will be able to freely utilize it. For example the user can turn their arm into water which takes the same physical form of their arm, and allows the users water arm to stretch towards a desired direction a couple of meters, max meters is 4.

    Restrictions

    - Can only be used 3 times in a battle
    - Lasts only 1 turn.
    - The user isn't able to perform any jutsu's while this jutsu is in motion.
    - Can be taught by UchihaMadara01.

    Abilities

    - The user is able to turn any part of there body into water and can freely control the shape of the water.

    X-Both Declined-X DNR, multiple reasons which include similarity with existing manga techniques and similarity with existing custom techniques
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Shearwaters
    Scroll Owner: Shin Kaito
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: not yet.
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: not yet.
    Description and Background: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shearwater




    Shearwaters are medium-sized long-winged seabirds. There are more than 30 species of shearwaters, a few larger ones in the genus Calonectris and many smaller species in the genus Puffinus.
    like the summons in narutoverse the size of the Shearwater varies. the larger one among the Shearwater is large enough to carry a person on his back while flying with little effort (almost the same size of sasuke's hawk that he summoned during the battle with danzo). they are also capable of using jutsu of one element according to their natural affinity.

    while signing the contract a tattoo will be placed on the bio.



    X-Approved-X They keep bringing newer species. Should've focused during biology classes >_>"
     
         
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    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “folklore”, Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire, folklore know as one of 5 treasure which the Wombat empire has. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire . The 3 elders merge all of their unique chakra upon the mirror to create a suction hole in the center of the mirror to suck in the evil elder and trap his ability inside the mirror, so every ability which the evil wombat elder has, it will also be performed by the mirror which is able to absorb 3 elemental ninjutsu

    Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Folklore ability count as the user moves
    Note: Folklore can only be use 2 times
    Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
    Note: After Alpha vanished, the user can’t use Ninjutsu for the rest of the battle
    Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara

    Picture of Folklore, the legendary mirror



    Wombat Approval Link : >>Here<<

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    If you want this mirror, you need to submit it separetely. Its too powerful to submit like this.
    Resubmitting

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu Arufa folklore senshi)- Summoning: Alpha the folklore Warrior
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user perform the rat , snake and dragon hand seal then slam his hand to the ground while screaming “Alpha”. Alpha is Cracker’s cousin whom is also a Wombat warrior and famous warrior from Wombat Empire and known as an earthen master who able to use earth release up to S-Rank earth jutsu with less/no hand seal required as earth his nature affinity. Alpha size same as cracker size / Gamakichi Sizes, Alpha always holding a legendary mirror which attach behind his back called “Folklore”.
    Note: Every Alpha ability count as one of the user moves
    Note: Alpha may be in battle field for 5 turns then auto vanished
    Note: Must sign the Wombat Contract by Oasis Nara

    Wombat Approval Link : >>Here<<

    Custom Weapon

    (Folklore, Abusōbā) Folklore, the Absorber
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description : Folklore is a magical mirror with average size of big mirror, known as one of the 5 treasure which the Wombat empire have. Folklore has been given by the Wombat elder to their warriors which has numerous experiences fight and battle to protect their empire. Creepy Folklore ability is it able to absorb an incoming attack from 3 basic element, wind, Fire and water with similar rank. Previously Folklore was just an ordinary mirror but then the 3 Wombat elders work together and use this mirror to seal off a finest but evil Wombat elder whom possess the ability to absorb 3 elements when try to conduct coup d’état of the Wombat empire . The 3 elders merge all of their unique chakra upon the mirror to create a suction hole in the center of the mirror to suck in the evil elder and trap his ability inside the mirror, so every ability which the evil wombat elder has, it will also be performed by the mirror which is able to absorb 3 elemental ninjutsu.

    Note: Every Folklore ability count as one of the user moves
    Note : Folklore can’t be summoned, it must always be carry by the Wombat warrior
    Note: Folklore can only be wield by the Wombat warrior (summons), can’t be use by the user (Summoner)
    Note: Can only be use to absorb 1 elemental per turn
    Note : Can only be use 5 times or absorbing per battle



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    You didn't get what I said. To have the mirror on the field you need to spend a move. So, if it comes with the wombat, the wombat needs to summon the mirror or transform into it or whatever it might be, spending a move so that you gain access to it.

    New Submission.

    (Doton: Futago no sutōkāhebi) – Earth Release : The Twin Stalker Snake
    Rank : S
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user perform 2 hand sign to emerge twin giant snakes made of earth come to the surface, pop out their head to tail with their giant size like Manda, Orochimaru’s Snake. When they start to emerge from the ground, they will stare at the opponent with fears look, thus their appearance shall petrified the opponent. Then the user perform a single hand seal to sink them into the ground, by then they will traveling underground which able to emerge suddenly from beneath the ground to the surface to attack the opponent at different locations, such as directly below the enemy, wrap their body and pulling them down into the earth or constricting them for another attack to hit from different angle, rear, front, left and right side of the opponent. The user could also use the twin snake to conduct an effective scout from underground or patrol/scanning a certain area to instantly gain information from the surface relying on their vibrations sense. But when they do the scout/patrol/scanning task, they will not be able to attack the opponent and will stay on the ground as the user required. The twin snake vibration sense are connected with the user.

    Note: Usable only twice per battle
    Note: Last for 5 turn then auto vanished (this effected also to the scout/patrol/scanning task)
    Note: Can’t attack the opponent while they conduct a scout / patrol / scanning an area and count as one of the user moves.
    Note: No S-Rank earth tech in the same turn
    Note : can only be taught by Oasis Nara

    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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    Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    ( Genjutsu: Soeki Kyuuzou ) Illusion Arts: Pest Proliferation

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 + (Decoy Jutsu)
    Damage Points: N/A ( Non quantifiable)
    Description: The genjutsu begins by replicating a weak, easily releasable genjutsu (by Kai or small pain) and place it on any number of opponents within range. An example would be False Surrounding, changing the area around the targets. When the target moves to release it, the second, stronger, genjutsu will recognize the output, be it a chakra peak caused by pain or a Kai. This is based on the notion that certain genjutsus, for their complexity and strength, require sharper pain or bigger chakra outbursts in order to be broken, anything smaller will not affect the genjutsu. After having recognized the peak, the genjutsu will duplicate and repeat it in increasingly higher frequency. This will overload the opponent, preventing the usage of complex jutsu (A and above), genjutsu or summoning jutsus, and exhaust the chakra reserves, equivalent to a chakra cost of a Kai for each peak.
    *Can only be used once every 4 turns*
    *Allows multiple targets, but not multiple layers of this same genjutsu*
    *Costs as 2 jutsus*

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    I have a problem with this and its that it would make strong genjutsu (and weak) unreleasable. Basically, upon release, this triggers so it becomes unreleasable. Its pretty unreasonable as its worded. I like the overal ability but it needs to be put in a manner that is can be approved.

    ( Fugu ) Blowfish

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: +5 / +10 per needle
    Damage Points: 80 / 90 per needle
    Description: Fugu is a hollowed wooden stick, made with Chakra Tree wood. It is a personalized weapon, allowing only the user to wield or manipulate it (Even if the opponent has Wood chakra or similar). By charging chakra into the Fugu and blowing through it, the user is able to shoot out Chakra-materialized thread needles, which gain substance with any elemental chakra or other properties. The user will first pour out chakra ( +5 for Normal or any Basic Element : +10 for CE/Advanced Elements or Poison/Other Substances), which will then be amplified and replicated by the Fugu stick, materializing a tiny needle, which gets shot out with great speed (near-bullet-like). The Fugu has the ability to be increased or decreased in shape and density, allowing the user to wield it like a staff or for further more accurate shots. If the opponent steals the Fugu from it's own, it will grow spikes, which will attach themselves to the thief. Likewise, when being held as a staff, the Fugu can grow spikes for extra damage.
    *Creating a shooting needles, while wasting chakra per single shot, does not count towards the jutsu count*
    *Charging an Advanced Element into the Fugu will materialize a needle with the properties of said element at it's most basic/main form. For example, if the user has Lava, it will be molten rock, not rubber.*
    *Poisons or other substances are only achieved by having a living source of that substance presence in the field ( Venomous Summons, for example, Hallucinogenic Mushrooms, etc). In the absence of such, the user will waste one of the 3 jutsus to "feed" said substance to the Fugu and have it memorized ( For example, if the user has Samples with her, or if the living source belongs to the opponent, but the user has retrieved a sample from it ). Allows the creation of 3 needles per battle*
    *With one handseal, up to mid-range, the user can infuse chakra on the Fugu remotely, to charge the defensive spikes or to create a needle. In the later, it can adjust itself and shoot a needle up to short-range*

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    Like it a lot. Indeed your custom making skills are "deliciously pleasurable". However, I have a few notes. Everything it does needs to count as a move. you need to rank the projectiles, enabling a more specific defense for them. Also, even if fast, these projectiles need to be visible. Rest seems at second glance ok.
    , thanks xD

    ( Genjutsu: Soeki Kyuuzou ) Illusion Arts: Pest Proliferation

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 + (Decoy Jutsu)
    Damage Points: N/A ( Non quantifiable)
    Description: The genjutsu begins by replicating a weak, easily releasable genjutsu (by Kai or small pain) and place it on any number of opponents within range. An example would be False Surrounding, changing the area around the targets. When the target moves to release it, the second, stronger, genjutsu will recognize the output, be it a chakra peak caused by pain or a Kai. This is based on the notion that certain genjutsus, for their complexity and strength, require sharper pain or bigger chakra outbursts in order to be broken, anything smaller will not affect the genjutsu. After having recognized the peak, the genjutsu will duplicate and repeat it in increasingly higher frequency. This will overload the opponent, preventing the usage of complex jutsu (A and above), genjutsu or summoning jutsus, and exhaust the chakra reserves, equivalent to a chakra cost of a Kai for each peak.
    *Can only be used once every 4 turns*
    *Allows multiple targets, but not multiple layers of this same genjutsu*
    *Costs as 2 jutsus*
    *The weak jutsu gets released upon the usage of Kai, small pain spikes or other means of releasing it. The second, stronger, genjutsu, will react to any method of countering the first genjutsu that would suffice to counter an A ranked Genjutsu.*
    *After the second genjutsu kicks in, although it restricts the usage of complex jutsus, will still allow different methods of countering, such as higher pain peaks, or 3rd person infusion of chakra*


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    Ok, with your added notes there was a problem added. What exactly does the enemy experience in terms of the second genjutsu? The first one is a replication of a weak, non specific genjutsu and upon seeing it or experiencing it, the user produces some effect to release it, triggering the second one. However, what is this second one? And how can it actually restrict the chakra usage? There is a bit of a lack in explanation on how you achieve that. Or is this a Genjutsu/Ninjutsu? Genjutsu for the first part and Ninjutsu for the second part? Being that the Ninjutsu part would be a "noise" or fluctuation you trigger on your enemies chakra flow upon the release method, spending chakra for a limited amount of turns and thus weakening him. Also, note one thing. You're restricting (if it succeeds) your enemy a lot, yet you suffer little to no effect. Its still not very reasonable but it does have potential

    ( Fugu ) Blowfish

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Fugu is a hollowed wooden stick, made with Chakra Tree wood. It is a personalized weapon, allowing only the user to wield or manipulate it (Even if the opponent has Wood chakra or similar). By charging chakra into the Fugu and blowing through it, the user is able to shoot out Chakra-materialized thread needles, which gain substance with any elemental chakra or other properties. These thread needles are the same size as vaccine needles, thus, to the naked eye, they become hard (yet not impossible) to see when in motion. Upon hitting a target, they serve to infuse their element into the target's body, albeit in a very small area. If the opponent steals the Fugu from it's owner, it will grow spikes, which will attach themselves to the thief. Shuriken Shadow Clone Technique can be used on the Fugu to make it act like a machine gun, multiplying one of the charged thread needles inside.

    #1: Needle Shooting: The Fugu stick allows the user to insert any small thread needle into it and shoot it out, by blowing through the other end, It is shot at a speed significantly greater than a normal needle thrower, but not as fast as any of the other needle shooting abilities the Fugu has, which will cost chakra. This attack is not, by itself falta but can, when used by Dojutsu users be used to strike fatal/nearly fatal points that will cause great damage. Doesn't count as a move.

    #2: Basic Needle Materialization - The user will pour chakra into the Fugu, creating 6 thread needles, of any of the Basic Elements or Simply Normal Chakra, which can then be blown out at great accuracy and speed. After creating the needles, the user can shoot them right away or keep them within the Fugu for later uses. Shooting needles counts towards the jutsu count per turn. This can be used once every two turns, in which case, if there are still needles stored, they will be erased and replaced by the new set. It is the equivalent to an A rank jutsu (30 chakra cost, 5 per Needle). Depending on the substance, the needles will be faster, stronger or sharper, as well as having any special properties that the element entails (Short-Paralysis for Lightning, Burning Wounds for Fire, Mineralization of the Tissues for Earth, Shredding Wounds for Wind and Swelling of the small Canals for Water).

    #3: Thieving Needle Materialization - The user will pour a sample of any given substance into the Fugu, creating 3 thread needles, which can then be blown out at great accuracy and speed. After creating the needles, the user can shoot them right away or keep them within the Fugu for later uses. Shooting needles counts towards the jutsu count per turn. This can only be used once every 3 turns, in which case, if there are still needles stored, they will be erased and replaced by the new set. It is the equivalent to an A rank jutsu (30 chakra cost, 10 per Needle). Any substance can be fed to the Fugu, requiring direct contact with it. After the Fugu memorizes the substance (Opponent's Elements, Natural Occurring Substances, Etc), it will create needles with any special property that substance entails (Quartz from the ground, Venom from an animal, Keratin from an insect, etc). The act of sampling a jutsu it's not equivalent to blocking or hindering the jutsu in any way, thus, it needs to be blocked by any other means. Not only that but the memorization is not permanent and serves only during the battle its set. Only one substance can be memorized at each time.

    #4: Advanced Needle Materialization - The user will pour chakra into the Fugu, creating 4 thread needles, of any of the Advanced Elements the user has or a different substance the user is capable of creating, which can then be blown out at great accuracy and speed. After creating the needles, the user can shoot them right away or keep them within the Fugu for later uses. Shooting needles counts towards the jutsu count per turn. This can be used once every three turns, in which case, if there are still needles stored, they will be erased and replaced by the new set. It is the equivalent to an S rank jutsu (40 chakra cost, 10 per Needle). Regarding Advanced/Custom Elements, the needles will take form using the most basic/main form of the element (Lava will be Molten Rock, not Rubber, etc), and gain any special properties the element entails. For different substances, the user must have created it in the field before hand although it does not require contact with source, like the thieving method. The creation of this method can be done remotely, up to mid range, with one handseal.

    #5: Density and Height Manipulation - The user is able to change the density and height of the Fugu stick at will, allowing the user to wield the Fugu like a staff, or for greater accuracy. Smaller changes such as a few cm to 2 meters, or any humanely bearable weight will not require the usage of noticeable chakra through the course of a match. Anything higher/longer (never more than the equivalent of Short-Mid range) or 5 tons will be the equivalent of an A rank, 30 chakra points, counting towards the jutsu count.

    #6: Spikes Manifestation - The user is able to consciously induce the Fugu's inherited defense mechanism, creating spikes across the Fugu stick, for added damage. It costs 15 chakra, equivalent to a C rank. This can be done remotely with 1 handseal, up to mid-range and counts as a technique from the technique count.

    #7: Remote Sharp-Shooting - With one handseal, at any range, the user is able to make the Fugu shoot any stored needles inside it. It will quickly adjust itself and shoot the needles up to short range from the stick against the closest chakra-being (in case the user has no other target's location in mind). It requires a chakra cost of 20, equivalent to a C rank and counts as a move.

    Note: Once shot, be it 1 or a multitude of needles, it will always count as one move, with the exception of #1. The fugu can only have one type of needles inside it at each time. He can only memorize one substance/advanced element at any given point and will "forget them" once the battle ends.

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    Edited here and there to make it a bit more down to earth. If you spot anything you don't like, feel free to resubmit.

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    ( Koukurage Kuchiyose no Jutsu: ) Box Jellyfish Summoning Jutsu: Samedi of the Crossroads

    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user preforms one handseal, summoning Maman Brigitte. She comes forth covering the whole battlefield with a thick mist, throwing off chakra sensing techniques. The mist carries a strong genjutsu, as it is filled with both Samedi and the summoner's chakra, making the opponent hear continuous swearing and filthy jokes coming from a nasaly male voice, without being able to detect it's origin. Anyone trapped within the mist is flooded with images of skulls and top hats, dead spirits, a burning taste and smell of rum and tobacco, all rounded and perverted by Samedi's voice as if mocking them and the ones they lost. Samedi himself is a great box jellyfish the size of a human, light enough to swim through the mist, taking advantage of the confusion of his opponent to strike him from behind. This takes the concept of a living Genjutsu, of a mist, a summon and, genjutsu mixing together. The genjutsu constantly shifts it's chakra signal, making it so that it adapts to any shifts in the opponent's chakra flow, making this a constant genjutsu even if the opponent is able to constantly shift his chakra or body, as long as the opponent is in the mist, mid range from Samedi.
    *The thick mist can't be broken or pushed away by anything lower than one rank bellow it's rank, this is because of the consistency of the mist, battling against the power of the wind/scattering agent*
    *The mist throws off Natural Chakra gathering, preventing Sage Mode Users from gathering enough to break the Genjutsu*
    *Can only be used once*
    *Lasts 4 turns*
    *The genjutsu strikes mid-range from Maman Baron Samedi, despite the mist covering up to long range*

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    Well in a listed order:
    -Add a technique type: Supplementary?
    -Remove damage points. Its an illusion
    -Why does it throw off natural energy again? Mist properties but how
    -Long range is a vague term in such a move, a person wont be able to escape the grasp of this technique because the mist is "long range" therefore it indifferently goes as far as possible. It should have a unitary value of distance (30 m?)
    -Effects last as long as the target is within the mist and affects everyone indifferently (if not? why shouldn't it? Its an S rank genjutsu btw conventional methods and reasons wont work due to the strong effects, very unlikely to have that allowed but ill give it a go). And no paralysis type effects are achieved, its a technique that creates false surroundings.
    Thanks for the pointers, you didn't have to be that specific

    ( Koukurage Kuchiyose no Jutsu: ) Box Jellyfish Summoning Jutsu: Samedi of the Crossroads

    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user preforms one handseal, summoning Baron Samedi. He comes forth covering the whole battlefield with a thick mist, throwing off chakra sensing techniques. The mist carries a strong genjutsu, as it is filled with both Samedi and the summoner's chakra, making the opponent hear continuous swearing and filthy jokes coming from a nasaly male voice, without being able to detect it's origin. Anyone trapped within the mist is flooded with images of skulls and top hats, dead spirits, a burning taste and smell of rum and tobacco, all rounded and perverted by Samedi's voice as if mocking them and the ones they lost. Samedi himself is a great box jellyfish the size of a human, light enough to swim through the mist, taking advantage of the confusion of his opponent to strike him from behind. This takes the concept of a living Genjutsu, of a mist, a summon and, genjutsu mixing together. The genjutsu constantly shifts it's chakra signal, making it so that it adapts to any shifts in the opponent's chakra flow, making this a constant genjutsu even if the opponent is able to constantly shift his chakra or body, as long as the opponent is in the mist, mid range from Samedi.
    *The thick mist can't be broken or pushed away by anything lower than one rank bellow it's rank, this is because of the consistency of the mist, battling against the power of the wind/scattering agent*
    *The mist throws off Natural Chakra gathering, preventing Sage Mode Users from gathering enough to break the Genjutsu. This has to do with the organic properties of the mist being so tightly woven with the animal's own sustenance and habitat, which throws off and severs the connection of the targets with the battlefield.*
    *Can only be used once*
    *Lasts 4 turns*
    *The genjutsu strikes mid-range from Baron Samedi, despite the mist covering up to 30 meters radius
    *No paralysis type effects are achieved, its a technique that creates false surroundings*
    *Any means of countering an S rank Genjutsu are fair game once the opponent is out of range from Samedi. Otherwise, the user must counter the mist or Samedi in order to be able to release from the genjutsu (the later being a method or releasing the genjutsu itself)

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    Sorry but i'll have to ask you to resubmit this. Its a summon so why is the mist he produces filled with your chakra? Also, how can mist induce genjutsu? is it through inhalation? skin absorption? sight? And the mist needs a rank as well as the gen. And I can't allow you to have a gen that is unreleasable while the user is in it. I know how to easily counter this (Sealing the mist, blowind the mist, walking outside the mist, etc etc) but for the most part the effects are very very very unreasonable. Its a Long Range Mist that makes anyone mid range from a poisonous flying jellyfish unable to detect it and thus defend from it while being affected by a Genjutsu that confuses them to a high degree inside a sight hindering mist that blocks sensors, Sharingan/Rinnegan and Natural Energy uses. You need to make this a bit more down to earth or we can't approve it.
     
         
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    Kuchiyose no jutsu: Maiamimetoro no dekusutā: Summoning Technique: Dexter Of Miami Metro
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage points:40
    Description: Dexter is a binturong who is very bold and expressive,he is the type of binuturong that faces the problem head on and is prepared to lose his life for what he sees fit, he has a broad structure and fully standing is 9 feet in height, he weighs 90 kilograms and uses his stature as a way to intimidate his opponent ,he is quite big and about half the size of one story building complex..He can speak English and can perform wind jutsu up to b rank. He also has a little knowledge of ninjutsu and can create shadow clones of himself to aid himself in a battle , he carries a long katana with him on his hand which he uses to fight with him and has a rough scaly bark which he uses to defend himself from low ranked techniques[C rank and below.

    Note:Can only be summoned once
    Note:Last for three turns
    Note:Must have learnt shadow clones to use it.

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    Chikyū no sutairu: Suberi yasui chikei: Earth style:Slippery Terrain
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage points:N/A
    Description:The user channels his doton chakra across his body, he then gathers and concentrates it on his hands.When done, he slams his hand on the ground and using chakra manipulation creates a very slippery mud made of earth particles,around the opponent which makes the terrain where he stands slippery,and upon any acceleration or increasement in pase would make him lose balance and keep falling to the ground.

    Note:Can only be used once
    Note:Last for three turns
    Note:Must be taught by thunderbolt to use

    X-Declined-X Technique exists. 3rd Hokage used this, if its not in the list. You leave a PM to Nirvana and wait till its added in the list.

    Mākā:Marker
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points:80
    Description:Marker is a tall sword made of titanium,which weighs around 14-20 Kilogram , it has a golden handle which the user holds to wield the sword during battle. The sword is quite long and about 6 feet in height and cannot be broken or shattered by the opponent. It has a unique power of marking its targets. In short, when hit or struck at successful at the opponent ,the sword marks the opponent and copies it chakra signature making it unable for the user to hide in the battle field. The sword is capable of making powerful slashes[s rank] which is capable of creating great damages and slashing aside huge rocks [A rank] and deflecting kunai and shiruken with ease.

    Note:The sword Lasts for three turns.
    Notene slash counts as a move in one turn.
    Notenly thunderbolt can wield the sword.

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