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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Genjutsu: Suiteki | Illusionary Arts: Water Droplets
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user would perform a single handseal and release his chakra into the opponents brain triggering an illusion where it seems that water droplets appear in front of him, making the image he sees appear a lot of times, which confuses him as he's trying to figure out where the user is and what his actions are. A regular shinobi would think that the handseal was intended to create the water droplets. With the confused and off focus opponent, the user gets an opening for his next move.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can teach this



    X-Declined-X Its A rank why?

    Hyouton/Katon: Toke kakatta kōri | Ice Style/Fire Style: Melting Ice
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After using an Ice jutsu, the user can, with a single handseal, add fire chakra into it. Using the properties of his fire chakra he can melt the ice and turn it into regular water. What is interesting with this technique, is that the water stays in the shape of the previous ice jutsu and doesn't hopelessly fall on the ground. If the ice technique was moving, then the water, after melting the ice, will also continue, in the original path of the ice technique, abiding to the weaknesses and strengths.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can teach this

    X-Declined-X Vague. Isnt retaining the shape part of shape manipulation of water release? Which makes this technique quite typical

    Hyouton/Futon: Kaze Okan Nohara | Ice Style/Wind Style: Wind Chill Field
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: With a single handseal, immediately after using an ice jutsu, the user can coat the ice jutsu with a layer of wind, that will protect the ice from lighting attacks and prevent it from shattering. In order to successfully perform it, the user must train the handseal and be able to string it with the handseals of the ice jutsu, so that it seems like it's only one sequence of handseals. With the wind layer, ice can finally fight with lighting at the same rank. Since the wind is covering the ice, it still has the double advantage against water, meaning that is still can freeze it due to the low temperature, but it becomes weaker to fire attacks because the fire would use the wind coating as fuel to burn the ice quicker and before the melted water manages to evaporate the fire.
    Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
    Note: Only McRazor can teach this
    Note: The rank of Wind itself would be A at maximum potential.
    Permission from Haku to submit his declined technique as mine.

    X-Approved-X Added a note. A rank wind=S rank lightning, that's enough protection for ice release
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-12-2012 at 09:24 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Jūkenpō: Chou)- Gentle Fist Style: Block
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A (+10 if the opponent makes direct contact)
    Description: The user exerts chakra from several tenketsu from a single part of their body, this chakra is gathered roughly ten centimeters away from the user's skin and forms a small shield of chakra, no bigger than twice the size of an average palm conveniently useable as a way to block tai/kenjutsu attacks(upto B-Rank) but is weak to elemental techniques as it's merely raw chakra which does not require advanced chakra manipulation. If the opponent makes physical contact with the shield they will suffer slight damage across the part of their skin which connected with it.

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    - Can only be used five times.
    - No Jyuuken above B-Rank in the same turn.
    - The shield is no bigger than twice the size of an average palm.
    - Can block Tai/Kenjutsu attacks upto B-Rank, within reason.
    - Can block Elemental attacks upto C-Rank, within reason.
    - Can only be taught by Tybone.

    X-Approved-X
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-12-2012 at 09:25 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Summoning Animal: Bunny
    Scroll Owner: Ouacus
    Other Users who have signed contract: none for now o.O
    Summoning Boss if existing:Soel
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Soel) -Summoning Technique-Soel
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user take out his blood, then user slams his palm to the floor to summon Soel .Soel is a white bunny with a red gem in his forehead similar to his twin bunny brother. Although he looks weak and harmless, he is extremely storng for his size. He can do up to A-rank fire jutsu.

    Soel:

    Note:
    -can only be taught by Ouacus
    -Stays on the field for 5 turns and can only be summoned twice per match

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Larg) -Summoning Technique-Larg
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user take out his blood, then user slams his palm to the floor to summon Larg .Larg is a black bunny with a blue gem in his forehead similar to his twin bunny brother. Although he looks weak and harmless, he is extremely storng for his size. He use do up to A-rank water jutsu.

    Larg:

    Note:
    -can only be taught by Ouacus
    -Stays on the field for 5 turns and can only be summoned twice per match

    Summoning Animal: rabbits
    Scroll Owner: Ouacus
    Other Users who have signed contract: none for now o.O
    Summoning Boss if existing:Soel
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Soel) -Summoning Technique-Soel
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: TThe user takes some blood and wipes it on their rabbit tattoo, then they make the rabbit handseal and slam their hand into the ground to summon Soel. Soel is a white rabbit with a red gem on its fore head similar to his twin brother, Larg. The fact that he looks weak and harmless tricks his foes when he releases his real powers. Soel is capable of using up to S rank fire techniques due to the fact that he is the boss of the rabbit summonings.

    Soel:

    Note:
    -can only be taught by Ouacus
    -Stays on the field for 3 turns and can only be summoned twice per match

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Larg) -Summoning Technique-Larg
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user takes some blood and wipes it on their rabbit tattoo, then they make the rabbit handseal and slam their hand into the ground to summon Larg. Larg is a white black rabbit with a blue gem on its forehead similar to the one of his twin brother, Soel. The fact that he looks weak and harmless tricks his foes when he releases his real powers and is capable of using up to A rank water.

    Larg:

    Note:
    -can only be taught by Ouacus
    -Stays on the field for 5 turns and can only be summoned twice per match

    Tattoo:

    Link to where it was first approved

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    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Larg) -Summoning Technique - Buneary
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Offense
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user takes some blood and wipes it on their rabbit tattoo, then they make the rabbit handseal and slam their hand into the ground to summon Buneary. Buneary is a brown bunny with yellow and fuzzy hair on the tip of bouth of her ears and on her lower part of her body. She is also small like most of the other rabbits in the rabbit contract and capable of using up to B rank earth tchniques.

    Buneary:

    Notes:
    - Can only be summoned 3 times per battle
    -Lasts for five turns in the battlefield

    X-All Declined-X Including the contract that's 4 submission.
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-12-2012 at 09:29 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    CFS Approval
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post7764828

    (Hakkyou Taijutsu: Choyo Goburetto) Hakkyou Martial Art: Chrysanthemum Goblet
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: One will begin by effectively subjecting their target to a powerful Genjutsu, within which they are plagued with the irresistible urge to scratch their body – Primarily the upper body, Arms, Mid-section, face, etc. As the opponent begins to scratch, several grotesque sores and bullae filled with yellow liquid and puss will form on the surface of the skin, while producing burning pains as they do. At this point the afflicted person – still scratching – within the Genjutsu, will begin to tear away at their own flesh and grind into their muscles, maiming and mutilating themselves as well as inducing an ample amount of pain. Though no longer than a few seconds, the illusion bends the senses to slightly manipulate the afflicted person’s perception of time; To the opponent, it feels more along the lines of a full minute -This is because of the ‘evolving’ nature of the genjutsu, as it takes time to progress through the stages to effectively deliver a thoroughly terrifying experience. As the Genjutsu runs its course, the user will sprint towards the enemy and drive their fist into the opponent’s Solar Plexus, followed by a swift uppercut, knocking the opponent into the air. Once in the air, the user will jump up, grab their neck, and slam the opponents face into the ground. The initial strike to the Solar Plexus serves to violently and abruptly break the opponent free of the Genjutsu, while also dealing enough damage to temporarily impair movement and prevent the opponent from properly reacting to the following combo; They’re left in shock, causing them to keel over, which makes way for the surprise uppercut. The Genjutsu itself is induced through the use of erratic hand gestures/bodily movements and maniacal laughter.
    *In the following turn, the user is restricted to the use of A Rank and below Hakkyou Taijutsu as well as A Rank and below Genjutsu.
    *One must wait a full three turns before utilizing this technique a second time around.
    *This technique can only be used twice per battle.

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    You can make your opponent feel the itch...you can't force or make him scratch himself.

    (Fuuton:Zura Keimyou Nagusame) Wind Release:Zura's Clever Daytime Diversion
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user will begin imbue his chakra into the air surrounding his opponent and have it take on the form of several apparitions, or more specifically, fists that will simultaneously strike specific points along the opponent’s body. Instead of dealing cutting or slicing damage, the winds deal powerful concussive damage on contact. The air near the lower back will strike at the ischiadic nerve, inducing paralysis of the legs if it connects; The air near the opponent’s arms will strike at the radial nerves causing paralysis of the arms if they connect; The air behind the opponent’s head will materialize and strike them at the occipital ridge, producing unconsciousness if it connects. The technique is subtle by nature and excessively swift, making it hard to appropriately detect.
    *Can only be used twice per battle.
    *One must wait a full two turns before using this technique a second time around.
    *In the following turn, the user is restricted to the use of B Rank and below Fuuton.

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    This is quite op. As you fully well know, all those targeted places = more or less one move win. Specially because in most cases they are in the opponents blind spot.

    (Bachiatari no Kimagure; Hokou Michisuji Valhalla) Whims of the Accursed; Walking the Path to Valhalla
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90 [-20 to user]
    Description: The user will place one leg in front of the other and swing the corresponding arm (Right Leg, Right Arm) backwards across his chest. The user will then swing the respective fist back forwards and ‘strike’ the air, releasing massive amounts of chakra as he does so. The user striking with his hand sends devastating amounts of chakra propagating through the ground and air in the direction of the swing; From the spot in the air that was struck, one immense vertical wave of chakra bursts forward as the spearhead of the attack. From the spearhead, countless smaller blasts of chakra branch outward in all directions. These smaller blasts of chakra possess some aspects of the Rasengan - namely power and rotation - while ignoring the aspect of containment. The first wave of chakra serves to first smash any opposing obstacle apart in a blunt, barbaric manner, while the countless smaller blasts will grind any remnants to dust in a more civil manner, like the rotation of the Rasengan. The battlefield afterwards is left in a disastrous state. A large earth splitting fissure will be left where the frontal vertical wave of chakra once was, whereas the rest of the field would be scarred – literally carved away – by the countless disorderly rotations.
    *Can only be used once per battle.
    *The user cannot use any other Forbidden ranked jutsu in the same turn; In the following turn, the user cannot use any Forbidden jutsu at all.
    *The user can only use one other jutsu in the same turn.
    *In the following turn, the user is restricted to the use of Two techniques out of the usual allotted three.
    *The user cannot use any other Ninjutsu in the following three turns (Anything under the sub-section of “Ninjutsu” in the Jutsu List, as well as any CJ that fall under this category).
    *Because of the strain on the hand used, the speed at which the user can perform handseals is halved (More explicitly, it takes twice as long to perform handseals) for the following three turns.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    This is very similar to a simply enhanced version of a Hyuuga's empty palm or the principle behind Hirudora/Daytime tiger. Not only that but some existing techniques can be considered equal or too similar to this.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-14-2012 at 10:34 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Lyrebird
    Summoning Scroll Owner: Typhon
    Other Users Who Have Signed: N/A
    Summoning Boss if Existant: Unknown
    Other Animals Tied to this Contract: N/A
    Background Information: Lyrebirds are ground dwelling birds of the passerine family with what may be the most extensive library of calls out of all birds. They possess the most complex syrinx of all known song birds which allows them to accurately mimic the songs of other birds as well as sounds produced by humans such as camera shutters, chainsaws or car alarms.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lyrebird

    In the world of Naruto this incredible vocal ability has made them masterful at misdirection, confusion and illusions. While most of them are inept at combat, they all possess the ability to mimic any sound and use the empty cicada shell technique. Coupling those two abilities they can often confuse the enemy. Some of the elder lyrebirds are capable of casting unique genjutsu through the use of their calls while a few others have harnessed wind techniques with mild success. In terms of size the average lyrebird is around the size of a chicken though on rare occasions they can grow to be as large as a human. This group of birds live on a secluded island filled with a tall oak forest called Mukashoushima (Infinite Song Island). Within the forest are villages of hut-like structures resembling the nests lyrebirds usually make. It is said any visitor to this island is brought to tears by its melodies upon first hearing the endless songs.

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    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Lyrebird) - Summoning Technique: Lyrebird
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user performs the normal summoning technique and summons a basic Lyrebird. This bird is just small enough to sit comfortably on the user's shoulder or head. Like all lyrebirds it is capable of mimicing any sound and can throw its voice through the use of the empty cicada shell technique.
    -Empty Cicada Shell must be posted when used and counts as a move in the user's turn.

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    ±± Approved ±±


    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Cooper) - Summoning Technique: Cooper
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Coop is one of the largest Lyrebirds standing with his head at the same height as the average person. This large size has enabled him to become one of the few lyrebirds capable of using the wind element with some skill, capable of using up to B-rank techniques. He is also one of the few capable of sustained flight due to keeping a layer of wind beneath his wings; though this flight is still rather clumsy when compared to other airborne summons. His abnormal size allows him to comfortable carry one person on his back. Because Coop focused on refining his wind element, he never developed a genjutsu like some of his fellow lyrebirds. Like all lyrebirds he is capable of mimicking any sound and using the empty cicada shell technique.
    -Can use wind techniques up to B-rank.
    -All techniques used count as a move in the user's turn.
    -Can only be summoned once

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    Last edited by Scorps; 11-14-2012 at 10:43 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Katon: Chikyū o Kogashi | Fire Style: Scorching Earth
    Type: Attack | Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (+15 to Doton)
    Description: The user begins to channel fire chakra into the ground, anywhere on the battle field. Instead of creating an actual fire, the heat of the fire chakra is used to heat up the ground. This is done by performing the Dragon hand seal. The ground becomes incredible hot, turning a reddish colour and begins to burn through the opponents shoes until it begins burning their feet. If they fall it can effect the part of the body they land on. The heated earth remains when an earth jutsu is used too. So, for example, if the user uses spikes after this they will be boiling hot and cause severe burns on contact with the target. The ground can be returned to normal through a water jutsu (including the users, which is something the user must be careful of). By doing so steam will arise that can slightly burn skin and cause irritation.

    Restrictions
    – Can only be taught by Kryptiic
    – Can only be used three times per match.
    – The heat lasts two turns at maximum temperature.

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    This collides with a couple of CE's. Don't resubmit.

    Ninpou: Suwappu Shōkan | Ninja Arts: Summoning Swap
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: When a summoning animal is on the field, using this jutsu, it can be swapped with another animal of the same contract. The original animal disappears in a cloud of smoke, which masks the summon it has been swapped with. The new summon appears in the exact spot the previous one was.

    Restrictions
    – Can only be taught by Kryptiic
    – Can only be used three times per match.

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    Don't resubmit. Sorry but although inventive i can't allow this.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-14-2012 at 10:45 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Suiton: Bāsuto) – Water Release: Burst
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Depends on Earth/Wood jutsu used before hand.
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user would activate this jutsu which allows him to add his water chakra to all Earth/Wood jutsus used no more than a second after the usage of the Earth/Wood jutsu. Although it does no physical harm, this jutsu allows the user to shoot out an extremely quick burst of water straight after an Earth/Wood jutsu is used from wherever that Earth/Wood jutsu appears from. For example, if Spikes are used, this jutsu would allow a quick burst of water to shoot out to anywhere short range from the spikes themselves. This jutsu does not work on the mud related Earth jutsu. The water itself does no damage, however it has some pushing force which is able to knock an opponent back a meter or two, other than that it mainly distracts the opponent. The user can deactivate this jutsu at any time, and can stop the addition of water chakra so that he/she can control when the water bursts out.
    Note: Can only be used 2 times.
    Note: Stays activated for 4 turns.
    Note: After it's deactivation, no water jutsus higher than S-rank the next turn.

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    I find the wood part too similar to my own Day After technique which uses the same principle even if in a more powerful form.
    Conversation with Scorps, who allowed me permission to resubmit this: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...=3623&u2=83133

    (Suiton: Bāsuto) – Water Release: Burst
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Depends on Earth/Wood jutsu used before hand.
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user would activate this jutsu which allows him to add his water chakra to all Earth/Wood jutsus used no more than a second after the usage of the Earth/Wood jutsu. Although it does no physical harm, this jutsu allows the user to shoot out an extremely quick burst of water straight after an Earth/Wood jutsu is used from wherever that Earth/Wood jutsu appears from. For example, if Spikes are used, this jutsu would allow a quick burst of water to shoot out to anywhere short range from the spikes themselves. This jutsu does not work on the mud related Earth jutsu. The water itself does no damage, however it has some pushing force which is able to knock an opponent back a meter or two, other than that it mainly distracts the opponent. The user can deactivate this jutsu at any time, and can stop the addition of water chakra so that he/she can control when the water bursts out.

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    ±± Approved ±±
    Removed the restrictions. Its too weak to have them. Also, each use would be momentarily and not activation bound.
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    New submission:

    Link of approval of Olm Contract: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post7135287

    (Black Olm/Proteus Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kerzo) - Black Olm Summoning Technique: Kerzo
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Kerzo is a black olm who is around half a meter long, whilst being considerably thin, having a girth of about 100cm, looking like an odd shaped Katana. Kerzo has wind affinity can cover his whole body, excluding a 20cm area nearing the bottom half of his body unaffected by the wind, allowing him to be used like a Katana. Due to his wind affinity, the wind that covers his body is extremely sharp and cuts anything that comes into contact with it. Kerzo's body is covered in this sharp wind all the time, and he cannot use any other wind jutsus higher than B-rank whilst he's covered in it. However, he can channel all the wind chakra that is covering his body to his mouth, and exhale it as several (more than 2, less than 6) blasts of wind which are extremely sharp whilst having brute strength, the blasts are roughly the size of bowling balls. The Wind covering Kerzo's body is considered A-rank, as are the blasts he sends out of his mouth. After sending out the blasts, Kerzo is able to use all Wind jutsus up to A-rank as he no longer needs to focus on the wind covering his body. Furthermore, unlike all other Olms, Kerzo doesn't have the higher sense of smell and hearing, as his subspecies are less developed. However, to make up for this, Kerzo has the ability to cover his body with an extra layer of transparent skin, added with his chakra which makes him invisible to the naked eye (Black Olms have this ability in the RL, that's what this is based on). The layer of chakra itself is not harmful.
    Note: Can only be summoned once.
    Note: Lasts 4 turns.
    Note: No Olm can be summoned for one turn after Kerzo's time is up.
    Note: All Wind jutsus used by Kerzo counts as one of the users, including the layer of chakra which makes him invisible.

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    Can't have an invisible wind shooting sentient sword. Take out the invisibility part.

    (Black Olm No Jutsu: Shōshitsu No Kōi) - Black Olm Technique: Disappearance act
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This jutsu is specific to the Black Olms subspecies of the approved Olm contract as it relies on their special ability to be able to coat things with their chakra, making the coated object/element appear invisible. This jutsu requires them merely focus their chakra into the thing they want to make appear invisible and coat it with their chakra. Their chakra wouldn't give any extra damage boost to the thing being coated, it merely hides it from the view of the opponent. Furthermore, whatever is being coated must be short range from the black olm whicih is using this jutsu. However, once coated it remains coated, regardless of how far whatever is being coated is.
    Note: No other Olm techniques in the same turn as this jutsu.
    Note: Can only be used used by Black Olm summonings.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    This already exists and is a cannon. And to apply to objects is something that can't be done as the implications are very very prone to abuse. Not only that but it has been attempted before and declined. Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    (Fuuton: Kaisa Katta)Wind Release: Fire Cutter
    Type: Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: B/A
    Description: This jutsu is a defensive technique to be used against Katon techniques. The user will focus Fuuton around their hand, creating a blade of wind. The user will then throw the blade at an oncoming Katon jutsu. The wind will then expand and spread out, covering the Katon's entire middle section. The sudden amount of wind will cause all the fire in the center to be amplified, causing the fire to burn out faster. This creates a gap within the fire, effectively cutting the fire in two. As the two halves comes towards the user, the gap will widen. This will cause the two halves to travel pass the user, saving them from the Katon.
    ~Can only be used twice.~
    ~Only can used against A rank and lower Katon.~
    ~Must be taught by Rikerslade.~

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    Can't have a wind technique that doesn't respect elemental weaknesses and strengths. Wind if weak to fire... No way around that.

    (Fuuton: Kaze Domu)Wind Release: Wind Dome
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will flow a large amount of wind out of their fists. The user will them inhale all the wind and exhale it quickly, creating a large blast of wind. The wind is like a wall that will push back anything in front of you user and is capable of pushing back a Summoning Animal the size of Gamaken.
    ~Can only be taught by Rikerslade.~
    ~Can only be used twice.~
    ~Cannot be used a defense.~

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    Similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-14-2012 at 10:55 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Genjutsu: Mizu no Shutsugen Bakuhatsu) - Illusionary Technique: Exploding Water Emergence
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user performs the Snake hand seal in order to place the target in a genjutsu. The illusion creates a wave which appears similarly to the Exploding Water Colliding Wave technique, and crashes onto the target. Although the technique doesn't have an force, it puts the target under the impression of which they are drowning in a pool of water, being placed in a state of distress as well as struggling to breathe.
    Notes:
    - May only be used twice per match.

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    Why is this A-Rank? would be best suited as a B-Rank. Also, this is quite similar to an NB gen that produces a waver of water. But may main issue is saying it creates a "similar wave to...". I needs more definition. Then perhaps its not so similar to the existing genjutsu.

    (Genjutsu: Zoushoku) - Illusionary Technique: Propagation
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user casts an illusion on a single target, in which he sees something split up in a gooey way, propagating itself. This can range from the user's arms to make it look like they have four arms, or their entire body so that they look like a clone. The illusion still follows the movements of the user, so focusing on the arms, if one were to perform hand seals, they would see two sets of hand seals instead of one.

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    Description is confusing and in all honesty makes little sense. I know what you're trying to do but the technique's description doesn't portrait it. Also, this needs at least one handseal.

    (Suiton: Fudō no Mizu Burokku) - Water Release: Immovable Water Block
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: -
    Description: The user will perform the Bird and Tiger seals and create a water block out of the moisture in the air and their chakra under their feet. By condensing the water, they can create a block momentarily to use as a stepping stone, allowing aerial maneuverability.

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    Note this will only be usable by a fraction of time and can't sustaint you in the air.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-16-2012 at 01:58 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (kuchiyose no jutsu:Ue kara shi)-summoning technique: death from above
    Type: attack/summoning
    Rank:A
    Range:short-mid
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:after the user draws blood and weave the necessary handseals for the summoning jutsu, his toucan summoning will be summoned suddenly diving from the sky above the target beak first and impale the target with it's sythe like beak dealing heavy damage.
    note: being summoned in this fashion will cause the summons to last only 1 turn
    note: usable twice per battle
    note: must sign toucan contract

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    Similar technique exist.

    (kuchiyose no jutsu: Selenidera futago)-summoning technique: selenidera twins
    Type:summoning/attack/supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:all
    Chakra:40
    Damage: 80(40 damage each)
    Description: after drawing blood and weaving the necessary handseals before slamming his hand to the ground the user will summon two tonton size toucans with a wind affinity on their razor sythe-like beaks. the two toucans will then fly towards the target cutting them consecutive times while passing by from different angles leaving the target confused and unbalanced before attacking together in a spiral motion similar to the fang over fang technique as the finishing blow. they are able to fly in a circular motion while manipulating their wind affinity to create a barrier that protect only the front of the user from up to B-rank techniques.
    note: is active for 3 turns
    note: no other summons can be in play
    note: must sign toucan contract

    link to approved contract

    ______________
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    Don't resubmit.

    (Shōgeki)-impact
    Type:weapon
    Rank:S
    Range:short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:this sword is made from the strongest metals enabling it to withstand the explosion of up to 10 bomb tags simultaneously from point blank range. with 9 tags attached to the rings on the broadsword (1 on each ring) this allows the user to become even more dangerous in close range combat by causing one or all the tags to go off upon contact of the target or when the targets weapon while defending against the users attack. while the opponent is open while defending, one of the tags could go off. once all the bomb tags are used other ninja tools or more tags can be placed in the rings of the blade.

    picture of sword in hand of warrior


    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    This sword does nothing special. Its not a CW.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-16-2012 at 02:01 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Fuuin Genkotsu:Kasan-ki no Kiyome | Sealing Fist: Purification of the Adder
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Point: N/a
    Description: Purification is a full body seal that requires extensive preparation to be performed. The seal activates on will and the seal’s marks cover the entire body around all of the user’s tenketsu.

    The user of the technique retains his natural control over the chakra system. But this particular seal is like a command over-ride, secondary chakra control system and a firewall which lets the user control what chakra enters or exits the user’s body.

    By opening and closing the tenketsu and manipulating the chakra inflow and outflow, the seal could be used to counter act against techniques that corrupts and manipulates the users chakra, techniques that leech chakra and techniques that invades the chakra system. Due to the nature of the technique, any foreign chakra forces cannot harm the user via the chakra network and techniques as strong as tsukiyomi or kotoamatsukami could be broken through.
    Note: Usable 4 times per conflict.
    ____________
    -Declined-
    Bit too much... it'd have to be a forbidden sealing and in consequence affect your health as well to be approvable, and you can't have that so..

    Fuuin Genkotsu: Hantā no kari | Sealing Fist: Hunt of the Hunter
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: /
    Description: A Sealing Fist technique, while simple in theory, requires excellent timing and chakra control to perform. This technique, like most fuuin taijutsu techniques is based on a seal that is placed on the user his body (lefthand pectoralis major). The seal, unlike other seals has a peculiar ability. When the user activates, it detects chakras that act like shrouds or elemental armors around the opponent. The chakra of those armors or shrouds are then absorbed and redirected around the user himself, causing the opponent to lose it and the opponent to use it. The seal detects the chakra by using the user his own natural chakra flow as a medium.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: The absorbed shroud/armor that is absorbed lasts for 2 turn.
    Note: Due to the massive intake of chakra, and the redirection of it, the user can not use above A-rank during the same turn (with the exception of the absorbed armor/shroud, should it be S-rank or F-rank).
    Note: Can not use fuuintaijutsu during the next 3 turns
    ____________
    -Declined-
    DNR, come on...

    Fuuin Genkotsu: Ryū no ki no kurutta chi | Sealing Fist: Crazed Blood of the Dragon
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After taking a basic fighting stance that the user feels comfortable with, he assaults the opponent with a series of kicks or punches, anywhere on the opponent's body or from which he defends from up to 8 successive blows made by the user. With each kick or punch, upon contact, he places a special seal on the opponent (up to 4 seals of the 8 blows, but the user can choose which hit creates a seal). This seal uses the opponent's chakra as a source for its power. After placing the seals, they begin to siphon chakra from the opponent on to themselves. The user then does 1 hand seal and triggers the release of the seals. These seals cause the chakra to "blast open" (explode) as its released, causing enormous harm to the user's body (each one of the 4 seals is B-Rank). The user can also use a simplified version on any kind of solid matter, buy instead punches the matter 1 time, and uses the his own chakra to blast it away. He must be careful though as such an explosion might also harm him.
    Note: Can only be taught by Wesobi
    Note: Can only be used thrice
    Note: Each seal alone has the power of a B-rank raw chakra blast. One of these is enough to harm the opponent gravely.
    Note: When using the "1-seal" version, the seal has the power of an S-rank seal. This can not be used on humans though.
    Note: Can not use any other fuuinjutsu or fuuintaijutsu in the same turn.
    Note: Can only use up to S-rank in the same turn.
    ____________
    -Approved-
     
         
    Last edited by Wesobi; 11-04-2012 at 04:01 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Raiton: Dendou Mizu Hara (Lightning Style: Electric Water Field)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user focus on his Raiton chakra and release a surge of electrical energy around him. This field of electricity will travel through the water anywhere near the user (3 feet) electrifying anything touching, in, and in a short distance from the water (3 inches from the water). While also surging the molecules in the water making them unstable causing them to weaken and not able to hold together thus dispersing the water jutsu. The user is safe from any shock damage due to it being his chakra but also the heat from the electricity will evaporate the water in the air around the user as soon as the surge of electrical energy is released around him.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used for water attacks ONLY
    ~Can not use a Water based attack during the same turn as this or next due to the field of electricity
    ~Can be used 3 times during battle

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. Similar to an old custom and your description lacks logic.


    Genjutsu: Shigai Buhin Kai Ofu (Illusionary Arts: Body Part Cut Off)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will send his chakra into the target by either touching or by making him look at a false hand sign. The user will then effect the sense's of the target making him believe he's frozen and can't move. Then while frozen the targets body parts begin to dismantle from his/her body starting from the fingers and toes up. Even though the leg's of the targets are gone he is suspended in the air not able to move as his body parts are falling off and then turn into dust. While in reality the target is just standing there.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used 3 times during battle
    ~Can not use another genjutsu next turn

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing customs.

    Doton: Reikyuu Yougo (Earth Release: Coffin Protection)
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 40 Chakra (+10 for each turn +10 for repairs)
    Damage: N/A (+20 if target comes in contact with it)
    Description:
    The user will quickly preform the Dragon~Dog~Bird~Tiger hand seals and rise up from the ground 6 pillars of really hard and dense rock around him touching each other (basically creating a wall around the user with no gaps or anything in a Hexagon shape). He will then preform the Ox hand seal and a roof will cover the opening above the user as well as make sharp earth spikes appear on the outside of the pillars and roof (4 spikes on each pillar going up vertical and 8 spikes on the roof in a circle pattern) protecting the user from harm. The user can also repair the walls if damaged by channeling chakra to the walls either by touching or by releasing chakra from his/her body. If the user wants to come out he will then preform the Tiger hand seal making the rock and earth around him crumble and fall around him without harming the user.
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394
    ~Can only be used 2 times during battle
    ~Can not use Doton the same turn or next after this jutsu is active
    ~The user has no idea what is happening on the out side
    ~below the user is still vulnerable to enemy attacks

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-16-2012 at 06:09 PM.

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    (Yūbi-naru Daria) | Graceful Dahlia
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The Graceful Dahlia was created by Vexx when she was traveling around viewing displays of different styles of martial arts, and weapons use in battle. The Graceful Dahlia came to Vexx as an idea when she found that of all the weapons, while they were great at offense, not many had defensive capabilities apart from parrying.
    The Graceful Dahlia is unique as it is primarily more a defensive weapon rather an offensive. While it is a scythe and has a blade, it is top heavy, through the blade, allowing the user to regain balance quicker than normal, while holding the scythe. The staff, made of a flexible bamboo, is very malleable, more than normal yet still retaining strength. This allows the user to fling themselves upwards or at angle and build up momentum even in a short distance increasing speed.
    The Staff was made by the finest makers in Amegakure, and therefore has natural properties towards rain.
    While holding the staff, it increase rain jutsu by +10 damage.



    Notes:
    -Can only be used by Vexx
    -Increases Rain element by +10 damage
    -Unbreakable

    ______________
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    Why would your Rain techniques be powered by +10 just by holding this?

    (Genjutsu: Disupushon ) | Genjutsu: Dispersion
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user creates a Tiger hand seal and targets the opponent with genjutsu. To the opponent, the last justu used by the user, seems to have ran out of chakra and collapses on itself of dispersed because of a lack of chakra, while in reality it is still going forward.

    ______________
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    Don't resubmit. Similar to existing techniques, incorrect chakra info and not even a single restriction.

    (Fuuton: Puresha) | Wind style: Pressure
    Rank: C Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user channels an extremely high pressure air dome around them. This creates an air current surrounding the dome with a slipstream moving all the particles from the high pressure to the low pressure, changing the direction of the incoming attack.
    Notes:Must be channel to be kept up.

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    Incorrect chakra info. Similar to existing technique. Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-16-2012 at 06:13 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal:Magpie
    Scroll Owner:Me(Blaise12)
    Other Users who have signed contract:none
    Summoning Boss if existing:Azula
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:none
    Description and Background:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Magpie

    Remaining true to the animals nature the magpie is ferociously fierce and aggresive it can speak like a human in english.They will attack anyone who is not from the users village friendly or not.They are generally black and white colour but can also be in other colours such as Sri Lanka Blue Magpie which as the name suggest is mainly blue.
    The user also recieves a tatoo of a magpie in their shoulder.


    Azula the Azure-winged Magpie
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:It is rougly the size of peins bird summon which from the show seems to be 2-3 meter in length and 1-2 meters in width it has a shallow beak and slim body.It can shoot S rank water or below from its mouth/beak at enemies or objects.
    Restrictions:
    ~water blast counts towards users move limit
    ~summonable only once per battle.

    NOTE:for the azula magpie no japanese name came up for it.

    feel free to edit anything that you need/want to.

    ______________
    ±± All Declined ±±
    Under the Blue Rule
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-16-2012 at 02:02 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Raiton: Burikka no Jutsu| Lightning Release: Flicker Technique
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Type: Supplementary
    Chakra: 20( 10 per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A technique where the user does a small sequence of 2 hand seals and release raiton chakra to make himself flicker like a pulsating light rapidly turning on/off/on/off repeatedly. Others will literally see the user appear and disappear as he flickers and their eyes will find it very difficult to follow the user.If they focus their eyes to see the user,their eyes could suffer making it harder for them to concentrate their eyes on the user.A more pronounced eye damage from the bright flickering is temporary blindness which lasts for a few seconds,if not careful. The result is a confused opponent having difficulty tracking and following the user's movements, his position or his actions.This technique is very effective when used in conjunctuion with Taijutsu.This technique does not work against Doujutsu.
    -Lasts for 4 turns
    -Usable 2 times per battle
    -Can only use lightning techniques while active otherwise the technique ends.
    -Doesn't affect doujutsu.
    -Can only be used/taught by Igneel

    ______________
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    Edited a note. Smart technique. Well done.

    Fuuton: Ba-suto Tekidan|Wind Release: Burst Grenade
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Type: Attack
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:To use this technique, the user must be proficient in using the Fuuton element.The user will cause a large ball of wind in his or her hand.The core of which is a ball of unstable fuuton chakra. This wind ball can be thrown and it explodes upon physical contact.The explosion lets out a forceful burst of wind,which spreads short range around the explosion and would affect the user if he is even in range of the explosion. The gale is strong enough to snap huge trees and even toss a summoning like gamabunta around like a rag doll.

    -Can only be used 2 times per battle
    -No other fuuton jutsu in the same turn
    -Cool down 1 turn
    -No fuuton jutsu above A-rank in the next turn
    -Only usable/taught by Igneel

    ______________
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    Similar to existing techniques.

    Genjutsu:Hekki Gazou|Illusion Release:False Images
    Rank:S
    Type:Supplementary/Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:This is a unique 2 phased genjutsu developed by Igneel.The user does a simple hand gesture placing the opponent in a powerful genjutsu.The genjutsu affects the mind of the opponent making him think that the user of the genjutsu is his ally and one of his trustworthy friends.Then the user of the genjutsu throws a kunai at the opponent(in reality) starting the second phase of the genjutsu where the opponents mind gets thrown into a state of turmoil.His mind gets filled with images of him betraying his friend(the user).These false images in his mind invokes a sense of self loathing,making him think that he doesn't deserve to live in this world.The opponents reflexes decreases dramatically,his reaction time increases considerably and small sense of shivering is seen.If the opponent doesn't release from the genjutsu in his next turn,he will commit suicide by stabbing his heart out with a weapon/kunai.

    -Usable once
    -Count as 2 jutsu per turn
    -User takes 15 damage
    -No Genjutsu for the rest of the fight
    -No forbidden ranked jutsu in the same turn.
    -No modes should be active whilst performing the jutsu
    -Only usable/taught by Igneel

    ______________
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    You can't through normal non-sharingan genjutsu control what your enemy thinks of you. You can only control or manipulate his senses and what he perceives of the world. Only way to control what an enemy thinks is through Sharingan Genjutsu, not normal genjutsu. Don't resubmit.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-16-2012 at 06:19 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Enzup View Post
    Link to approval of summoning contract.

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Rio) - Summoning Technique: Rio
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User snaps his fingers and summons a young flying termite who is not of very big size but enough to carry 3 people at a time. He is of whitish-bluish color, which resembles the cloud color. So when flying at high altitudes, its very hard to localize his position. He don't have any special ability but to fly, so practicing only in that, his speed is very fast when compared to any other flying bird. Also he mastered in his flying ability that far, that he "can" fly without making any wing flapping noise.

    Note: -Due to him being not much of help, he can stay on the battlefield as long as user wants.
    -Must've signed Termite contract.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.


    ±± Declined ±± Why is it mid ranged? The part i bolded can't be approved. Faster than any bird? Really? No sound? Hard detection? Its a B-Rank basic summon...
    Link to approval of summoning contract.

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Rio) - Summoning Technique: Rio
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User snaps his fingers and summons a young flying termite who is not of very big size but enough to carry 2 people at a time. He is of blue color. Due to his young age and small size, he is very active and thus his speed is quite fast when compared to other termites and most of the flying birds.

    Note: -Due to him being not much of help, he can stay on the battlefield as long as user wants.
    -Like every other Termite, he can also use Termite Ninjutsu.
    -Must've signed Termite contract.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.
    -Can only be summoned once.

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    ____________
    Link to approved contract

    (Kame Ninjutsu: Mu-n Hokou) - Turtle Arts: Moon Walk
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+5 for each turn active)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Most suitable to turtles, but other reptiles can also use this technique, like snakes, but only the ones who have the property to shed their skin.
    The scute (or plate) on the shell of a turtle corresponds to a single modified scale. The remainder of the skin is composed of skin with much smaller scales, similar to the skin of other reptiles. Turtles do not molt their skins all at once but continuously, in small pieces. Using this phenomenon, turtles add their chakra in the shell and molts their skin in small peices and then the chakra infused molted skin is transferred to the legs of the turtle, which now acts as "boots" for the turtle. The basic function of these "boots" is to walk over certain liquids, in which a being would usually sink, like quicksand. The time in which boots are prepared, is quite fast, being able to deal with "swamp of the underworld" technique in time. If in short range, turtles can also make boots for other ninjas.

    Note: -Can only be used by reptiles like Turtles and Snakes.
    -Though usable by every reptile, each reptile can only use it 2 times per batlle.
    -Lasts 4 turns.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. Ridiculous on so many levels its not even funny.

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    (Suiton: Doshaburi) - Water Release: CloudBurst
    Type: Offense
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: Based on the Real Life happening, upon calling rain clouds in the sky, user passes his chakra in the cloud(s) and causes it to burst. Due to the sudden burst of cloud, the water in the clouds fells all at once, on the ground, much like bucket full of water is emptied, which causes flood in the area. Due to clouds being on high altitude, so upon bursting of them, water has to travel much distance upon falling from sky to ground, so due to acceleration due to gravity, water attains very high velocity before finally crashing down on earth, which devastates the whole area and leaves it flooded. And since the user is the one who caused the water to fall, he manipulates the water such a way that water do not enters user's radius of 2m.

    Note: -Rain clouds must be present in sky.
    -No water tech above A-rank in same and in next turn.
    -Usable only once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    Wikipedia:CloudBurst

    ______________
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    Similar to existing techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 11-16-2012 at 06:23 PM.

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    (Meiton: Yami no kōtingu) - Dark Release: Dark Coating
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to wrap objects in a immensely compressed and condensed thin coating of dark chakra. The coating allows said objects to resist the flames and bolts of lightning produced by Katon and Raito Release. However, this coating is not enough to overcome or stop techniques of said elements of disadvantage due to it being too thin.
    -This coating can't be applied to living beings as it would absorb the natural heat generated by their bodies, resulting in their death.
    -The coating must be applied while the user is physically in contact with the said objects, and can't be applied it from a distance. However, the object can be disconnected/thrown after the coating has been applied.
    -The coating can only last for three turns.

    Edits: Made it an immensely compressed and condensed layer of chakra to justify its rank.

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    Regardless of how you want it to be, this is not an A-Rank.
    (Meiton: Yami no kōtingu) - Dark Release: Dark Coating
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to wrap objects in an immensely compressed and condensed layer of dark chakra. The coating makes said objects resistant to the flames and bolts of lightning produced by the techniques of Katon and Raiton Release. However, this coating is not strong enough to overcome or stop the techniques of said elements of disadvantage due to the technique's effect being limited to observing the chakra that comes in contact only.
    Note:
    -This coating can't be applied to living beings as it would absorb the natural heat generated by their bodies, resulting in their death.
    -The coating must be applied while the user is physically in contact with the said objects or connected through a third object. However, the object can be disconnected/thrown after the coating has been applied.
    -The coating can only last for 2 turns, and regenerating the coating or increasing it after the turn it was originally used counts as using the jutsu for a second time.
    -The infused items will glow in a blue color



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    (Meiton: Yami no Ame) - Dark Release: Rain of Darkness
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Following the use of a jutsu that causes the hailing of rain, such as the suiton jutsu 'Rain Tiger at Will Technique', the user will send a stream of his Meiton chakra into the already formed clouds by using the humid as a conductor to connect his chakra with the clouds. After storing the required enormous amounts of dark chakra within the clouds, the raindrops falling will be infused with dark chakra, thus gaining characteristics of meiton chakra on a minor scale. These rain drops will absorb chakra among physical contact and release it unfocused once hitting a surface and/or dispersing.
    The effect of the meiton rain is that it weakens the jutsu of the elemental disadvantage by one rank, and raw chakra by two ranks. The rain also causes normal shadow clones made of raw chakra disperse, and lightning clones disperse withing a turn of exhaustion and unease of movement, but has no effect on earth and water clones.
    Note:
    -This jutsu effects all ninja within the range of the jutsu, including the user.
    -Will only last for three turns.
    -Can only be used while Rain Tiger at Will, or a similar jutsu is in effect.

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    Dont resubmit. Not only does this not make sense but it is also quite oped.
     
         
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    Wind Release: Flight control (Fuuton: Chikuden shihai)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user while falling towards the ground in midair claps and holds his hands together and create a gust of wind beneath them and assume a spread eagle position to glide their way either in a straight line or in a circle to the ground without any injuries due to falling.
    Note:
    • Can only be used to glide down and while falling down.
    • Cannot make sudden turns in midair.
    • Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-)


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    Similar to existing techniques.

    Ninja Arts: Leaf clone (Ninjutsu: Ha bunshin)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user using his chakra gathers nearby leaves in the form of a whirling leaf storm around him to form leaf clones from those leaves. The leaf clone resemble the user and has all the normal movements the user has. Once hit, the leaf clone burst into a whirling gust of leaves and can be reformed as long as there are leaves left after the impact. The clone can also be intentionally dispersed to form a whirling gust of leaves around the target, obscuring his vision. The leaf clone is capable of releasing sharp leaf blades like shurikens from their palms. A variation of this technique, when performed in forest or any place with lot of leaves, the clones can be directly made from the leaves without whirling motion around the user.
    Notes:
    • Clones can be formed only when there are sufficient leaves around.
    • Can create only 3 clones & follows all clone related rules.
    • Only 5 leaf blade shurikens can be released by a clone in a turn.
    • Clones cannot use ninjutsu or taijutsu.
    • Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).


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    Earth Release: Underground detection (Doton: Chika kenshutsu)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user while forming the snake hand seal, forms a thin layer of his earth chakra over the ground surface and also channels his earth chakra into the ground beneath them to a depth of 5 meters up to mid range. This allows the user to detect any non-earth substances, foreign chakras which interrupt with the spread of his earth chakra underground and any breech in the earth surface either from under the ground or above the ground.
    Note:
    • The user must maintain the snake hand seal to be able to detect any foreign chakras, non-earth substances underground or any breech in earth surface.
    • Releasing the snake hand seal automatically disperses the jutsu.
    • The user can only use earth based jutsus which require no hand seals during this jutsu is in effect.
    • Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).


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    (Suiton: kyuushuu sono ou ) - Water Release: Revenge of the sunken
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user performs the handseals Tiger-Ox-Monkey. Once performed they channel their water chakra into the ground below. This gives them the ability to form water right under the opponent. Once the water is formed, several hands created from the water grab the opponents legs and ankles dragging them into the created water below eventually drowning them.
    The hands can be reformed if destroyed but for every restoration the rank of the jutsu decreases by one.

    Note
    Cannot use any water jutsu in the same turn.
    Can only be used three times in a battle.
    Can only be taught by -Cerberus-

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    Similar to existing techniques.

    Summoning Technique: (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Edmondus
    Rank- S
    Range-Short
    Chakra 40
    Chakra N/A
    Description- The user bites their thumb to draw blood. Once done, they perform 5 hand seals and slams his/her hands on the ground. Edmondus the rules of the dragonflies appears right under the summoner. Edmondus is grey in color and has a black shell that is as hard as steel. Edmondus is the same size as Sasuke's Hawk giving him the ability to carry his summoner. Like all dragonflies Edmondus can fly in six directions; upward, downward, forward, back, and side to side. Edmondus has the ability of speech and can mentally talk with his summoner.
    Edmondus speaclizes in wind being able to performs all wind jutsu's up to S-Rank including one's that include handseals.

    Note

    -Only can stay on turn for 4 Turns
    -Dosent need to use handseals as he specializes in wind
    -All Edmondus moves count as 1 move for the user.
    - Can only be summoned if signed the dragon fly contract
    -Can only be summoned once-

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    (Summoning Technique: (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Charge

    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user bites their thumb to draw blood. Once done, they perform 5 hand seals and slams his/her hands on the ground to summon Charge. Charge is a dark yellow dragonfly with several marks on his backs that appear to be bolts of lightning.
    Charge is smaller than Sasuke's hawk but can still carry the summoner on his back. Like all dragonflies Charge can fly in six directions; upward, downward, forward, back, and side to side. Charge has the ability of speech and can mentally talk with his summoner.
    Charge can perform A rank lightning techniques that doesn't require hand seals.

    Notes:
    -Only can stay on turn for 4 Turns
    -Dosent need to use handseals as he specializes in wind
    -All Edmondus moves count as 1 move for the user.
    - Can only be summoned if signed the dragon fly contract
    -Can only be summoned once-

    Summon approved here
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post8639639

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Merodīāto: Arashi no Uta | Melody Art: Song of Storms
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage: None
    Description: The user whistles a tune and entrances himself to activate the part of the his body that is associated with his wind nature affinity. This will only work if the wind element is the user's affinity. The user will cause himself to see the clouds darken and believe that the weather has turned heavily windy. The illusion causes the user to believe their wind techniques are stronger, while in reality they are simply performing the wind techniques at a higher level because their chakra system is producing the wind element more efficiently. While this technique is active, all wind techniques are increased by one rank, but all lightning techniques are decreased by one rank.
    ~This technique lasts until deactivated, and the user must wait the same number of turns the technique was active to reactivate.

    I have permission from Zero Kelvin to submit this custom.


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