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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    I have been given permission by RP mods to "update" the Elemental Dragon's summoning's so they each have their own summoning technique, and uniqueness. and since apparently we need to post the link to where the contract was approved....I don't have permission to see that post as it is in a mod only section. So here is a link to it in the approved Custom summons thread.....

    Approved Elemental Dragon Contract

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Elemento Ryuujin Bosu Kuchiyose: Iguniru Furui KaRyuujin) Summoning Technique: Elemental Dragon Boss Summoning: Igneel, the Ancient Fire Dragon
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (+80 if physically hit by this summon, +10 to the Fire based techniques it uses)
    Description: The user proceeds to bite their thumb and slam it onto the ground, and will be shrouded in a mass black smoke cloud as flames erupt from the smoke Igneel emerges from the smoke. Igneel is roughly 20 meters tall, to his shoulders, his wing span is 50 meters, and his length (head to tail) is 50 meters. He is the largest of all the elemental dragon's and the physically strongest. He has dark red scales covering most of his body except for his under side and jaw. Being the Fire Elemental Dragon, Igneel is immune to all flames, and capable of using every Fire technique that the summoner knows. Igneel is perfectly capable of speaking.

    Note: Can only be summoned Once per fight
    Note: Can only stay on the field for 4 turns
    Note: Can only use Custom Fire Techniques 2 times, and Basic Fire Techniques 4 times.
    Note: As being immune to all Fire based techniques, Igneel is weak to Water Based technique, and exceptionally strong to Wind Based Techniques
    Note: Can be summoned by Zanji, Hellsbadass, whomever signs the Fire Dragons part of the Elemental Dragon Contract.
    Note: Is very capable of flight.
    Note: If two people that have signed this contract are fighting each other, and one summons this Dragon the other is incapable of summoning him.
    Note: This Dragon cannot be summoned against either Zanji or Hellsbadass.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Elemento Ryuujin: Posaidra Furui SuiRyuujin) Summoning Technique: Elemental Dragon: Poseidra, the Ancient Water Dragon
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A (+40 if physically hit from this summon, +10 to water based techniques used by this summon)
    Description: The user will proceed to bite their thumb and slam it onto the ground, the user is then shrouded the summoning smoke, when it begins to vanish you are able to see a wingless Dragon standing around the summoner. Poseidra is 15 meters tall to it's shoulders, and is roughly 45 meters from head to tail. Poseidra along with the Lightning Dragon, are the same size. making them the second largest Elemental Dragons. Poseidra is incapable of flight due to having no wings, but is the fastest Dragon in and under water. Being the Water Elemental Dragon, Poseidra is immune to all Water Based attacks, and is able to use every water technique the summoner is able to use. Poseidra is perfectly capable of speaking.

    Note: Can only be summoned Once per fight
    Note: Can only stay on the field for 5 turns
    Note: Can only use Custom Water Techniques 1 time, and Basic Water Techniques 3 times.
    Note: Can be summoned by Zanji, Hellsbadass, whomever signs the Water Dragons part of the Elemental Dragon Contract.
    Note: As being Immune to all Water based techniques, Poseidra is very weak to Earth & Lightning based technique, and is exceptionally strong to Fire based techniques.
    Note: If two people that have signed this contract are fighting each other, and one summons this Dragon the other is incapable of summoning him.
    Note: This Dragon cannot be summoned against either Zanji or Hellsbadass.

    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    Last edited by Scorps; 03-01-2013 at 12:07 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Chanpurū kendō: Kao sumasshā)- Champloo Kendo: Face Smasher
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:
    After Taking the patient Champloo Kendo stance the Users will rush their opponent as they get into range the user will drop to the ground performing a leg sweep on the oppoent as the leg sweep is completed the user will lean back while remaining low to the ground and will place both their hands on the ground bringing their legs straight up in the air the user will charge both their feet with chakra and then while in the handstand will lean their body towards the opponent dropping both feet onto their opponents head driving their head into the ground due to the force and extra damage from the chakra

    Restrictions

    • Can only be taught by Hìmurā
    • Must have completed Champloo Kendo Training and be named a master of the style
    • can not use any other Champloo Kendo Technquies in the same turn

    (Kaze rirīsu: Coy no sakana no Sworm)- Wind Release: Sworm of the Coy Fish
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    The user will begin by gathering gathering up Wind chakra into their mouth as they gather up the chakra the user will do three handsigns and exhale the chakra and by using shape Transformation the user will shape the wind chakra into five Medium sized Sphere of wind shaped like coy fish the Coy fish will sworn on to the opponent greatly damaging him

    Restrictions

    • Can only be taught by Hìmurā
    • the user can not use A rank and above Wind technquies for 1 completely turn
    • can only be used 2 per match

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hìmurā View Post
    Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish [/B]
    Type: Attack / Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 ( 20 to self )
    Description:
    The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user. When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected [COLOR="#B22222"]after its released it attacks the User with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking The Koy Fish is made 10 meters from the opponent

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…

    ~Declined~ see the bold, trying to get yourself killed? lol, how would it be made 10 meters in front of the opponent if you are 5 meters in front of him? just mention that it comes out of the ground or from your body, because this reference isn't good enough.

    Hyouton: Kyodaina kōri no koi no sakana) Ice Release: Giant Ice Koy Fish
    Type: Attack / Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 ( 20 to self )
    Description:
    The user will Release a Very Large amount of Chakra into the air after releasing the chakra they will Use Shape Manipulation And Nature Transformation to turn the chakra into a Koy Fish made of Ice the Koy Fish is about 10 times the size of the user. When the Koy Fish is created it can be released in any direction the user choosen but it can not be redirected after its released it attacks the Opponent with great speed or acts as a defense againist anything its capable of blocking The Koy Fish is made from the users body

    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can not use any A rank or Above Ice Release Technqiues after using this Technique for 2 turns
    Note: Can only be taught by Kenshin…

    ~All Declined~ Resubmit when the ban is lifted.
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 02-19-2013 at 09:39 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
    Gurēsushēbingu: Shaving Grace
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/a (various amounts depending on where hit)
    Description: The Shaving Grace is a pair of gauntlets that are connected by 2 black armbands to the user's arm on the palm side and sharp golden spikes made out of a strong and resistant chakra metal going down the other. The spikes go from the start of the users forearm and continues down to each individual finger, so as not to disrupt handseals. The spikes are connected to a flexible material with the parts that go down the fingers also having small bands on the palm side so that they move with the users fingers. The Shaving Grace works by utilizing the high vibration used to make lightning chakra and channeling it into the gauntlets. This makes the gauntlets vibrate at a high rate, making the spikes on them function similar to a chainsaw when used, much like samehada, who shaves instead of cuts. Due to this the user is able to painfully tear and rip the flesh from an opponent upon contact and even shred normal metal objects due to the the immense shredding power given. Since a large amount of lightning is channeled into the gauntlets to achieve this, the gauntlets each have the cutting power of A rank lightning When activated the gauntlets make a sound similar to a chainsaw and due to the vibration the users handseals are slowed if they are activated while doing handseals.

    -Can activate only 2 times per turn.
    -Can only be used twice per turn for Taijutsu purposes (directly against an opponent and not a jutsu)
    -Can only cut through a jutsu once per turn

    -Can only be used by Broly and those he allows
    -Shaving effects can only be used 3 times before needing a 2 turn cooldown
    -In order to maintain control of the strong vibrations the user must have mastered basic taijutsu

    Added everything you wanted and cleared up the chakra metal issue

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    Remove the useless restriction of mastery over taijutsu. Its just a filler. Second, you don't seem to understand how a chainsaw works. I suggest you look it up. Has nothing to do with vibrations but movement. Second, if you have spikes in your palm, regardless of how you want it to seem, you can't do hanseals. Not all at least. The restrictions I bolded either don't make sense as a whole (some contradict eachother) or are simply are badly written and explained. What happens if you do a palm strike with no chakra on an enemy? Or a punch? Comparisson with samhada? It doesn't make sense because, again, the chainsaw reference throws the rest out of the window in terms of logic. Still a long way to go until its approvable.

    Fuuton:Zetsubō no kaze:Wind Release: Breeze Of Desperation
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40 (+15 in conjuction with fire techs)
    Description: This jutsu is best used in conjuction with a fire jutsu. The user make the tiger handseal. As the tiger handseal is made wind will form directly around the fire jutsu similar to Wave of inspiration and water techs. The only difference is as the wind circulates around the fire, the fire will become stronger due to the wind empowering it. If not used with a fire tech the wind will be released from the mouth as a circular wind breeze. Enough to call minor scratches but not major damage.

    -Can only be used 4 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-

    Did what you said, clarified the technique

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    Yet what you added makes no sense. If you want wind to form around the fire, you need to explain how it happens and limit it. What if its a fire technique that happens around your opponent? Its clear what you want from the technique but your description doesn't come even close to explaining in a suficienet manner how you achieve it.



    Doton: Daiyamondodarasupēji no daiyamondokattā no datto wa da teidan no atarimae o okonaimasu Earth Style: Diamond dallas page's diamond cutter dat does da ding dude duh
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: What can be seen as turning Moving Earth Core into an offensive technique, the user stomps their foot on the ground and makes the ground move down, up to 8m at high speeds, enough to make the opponent lose balance like "Moving Earth Core". Then as the opponent goes downward the user claps his hands and makes the walls around the hole close in at the same high speeds, crushing the opponent. The hole can be up to 8x8x8 meters in terms of size.

    -Can only be used twice per battle
    -No S rank and above earth for the turn after this jutsu is used
    -Can only be taught by Broly

    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    Similar to existing techniques. DNR. And name your technique decently please.
    Gurēsushēbingu: Shaving Grace
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/a (various amounts depending on where hit)
    Description: The Shaving Grace is a pair of gauntlets that are connected by 2 black armbands to the user's arm on the palm side and sharp golden spikes made out of a strong and resistant chakra metal going down the other. The spikes start at the users forearm and surround it all the way down to the wrist and continues down to each individual finger however there are no spikes on the palm side of the hand, so as not to disrupt handseals. The spikes are connected to a flexible material with the parts that go down the fingers having small bands on the palm side so that they move with the users fingers. The Shaving Grace works by utilizing the high vibration used to make lightning chakra and channeling it into the gauntlets. This makes the gauntlets vibrate at a high rate with the high vibrations of the spikes moving back and forth making them function similar to a chainsaw when used.Due to this the user is able to painfully tear and rip the flesh from an opponent upon contact and even shred normal metal objects due to the the immense shredding power given. Since a large amount of lightning is channeled into the gauntlets to achieve this, the gauntlets each have the cutting power and chakra of A rank lightning. When activated the gauntlets make a sound similar to a chainsaw and due to the vibration the users handseals are slowed if they are activated while doing handseals.

    -Can activate only 2 times per turn.
    - Can only activate in order to perform taijutsu (not cutting a jutsu and only striking an opponents flesh) twice per turn.
    - Can only cut through a jutsu once per turn, meaning that the user can either strike an opponent with the chainsaw function twice in one turn or he can strike the opponent with the chainsaw function once and cut through a jutsu once in the same turn or only do one of those options in a single turn if need be

    - If the opponent is hit with a non chakra infused strike he simply gets hit with a spiked gauntlet
    -Can only be used by Broly and those he allows
    -Shaving effects can only be used 3 times before needing a 2 turn cooldown


    Hopefully cleared everything up and did as you asked, bolded the changes

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    Each gautlet -Rank doesn't mean that combined they are S-Rank. Also the restriction about using it against a technique and in taijutsu and what not is compeltely and utterly confusing. Fix it. You say you can only activate them twice...then only once and in the end you can shave people 3 times... >_> Get your ideas straight.


    Fuuton:Zetsubō no kaze:Wind Release: Breeze Of Desperation
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40 (+15 in conjuction with fire techs)
    Description: This jutsu is best used in conjuction with a fire jutsu. The user make the tiger handseal. As the tiger handseal is made the user focuses wind chakra around the fire, creating wind that will form directly around the fire jutsu. As the wind circulates around the fire, the fire will become stronger due to the wind empowering it. If not used with a fire tech the wind will be released from the mouth as a circular wind breeze. Enough to cause minor scratches but not major damage.

    -Can only be used 4 times per battle
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-
    -If used on a fire that surrounds the enemy the wind will simply surround the outer layer of the fire, empowering it but not forming around the enemy

    Did as you asked, Bolded changes, fixed some grammar

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    Yeah, you wanted to use it like i feared. DNR.

    Burorī wa kemonodesu Broly is a beast
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: n/a
    Description: In the manga it has been shown that a large amount of chakra pressure is able to move things around, shake rooms, etc as well as the fact that focusing chakra to your feet while running makes you move alot faster since your pushing off the ground harder with the chakra. This technique combines these two principles and pinpoint chakra control by having the user focus alot of raw chakra behind them and using it to push them forward very fast in any given direction. The user can keep this up for as much distance as he wants as long as he has the chakra to do so. Due to the immense chakra control and pressure needed to do this the user may only use one other move in the turn this is used.

    -Can be tracked by a 2t sharingan and above or an S ranked and above Byakugan user
    - This will look like a blur to a 1t sharingan user
    -The user will dissappear from the view naked eye (like what lee did against gaara in the chuunin exams)
    -User may only use one other technique the turn this is used
    -Can only be taught by Broly

    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    DNR.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-01-2013 at 12:14 PM.

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    (Sono Toko Kae Kaze) The Ever Changing Wind
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 35 (15 when switching lengths)
    Damage: 70
    Description: This unique weapon, belongs to the those of the wind specialty. The sword is made especially to absorb wind chakra, and put out the most effects the more wind chakra is put into it. The sword’s main ability is to change is length. The sword has the ability to switch in-between 3 lengths, one at a standard katana length, long sword length (6 and a half feet) for more reach and precision cutting with its thinner structure and its buster form/length (5 feet) and is as thick as Zabuza’s Headchopper meant for power striking. The sword is created to absorbed wind chakra and hide (the blade at the users will) of the sword no matter what the form the sword is in, in a coat of wind/air which refracts and distorts light to make it transparent. The coat efficiently hides the sword from the opponent, thus making it harder for the opponent to defend properly and only the hilt can be seen. Also since the sword it imbued with wind chakra, the user can manipulate it to enhance the cutting capabilities, letting it cut through substances easier and cleaner. The user can also manipulate the chakra to create a strong B-rank gust of wind with cutting power by slashing the sword and blasting the wind at will.
    -Must have wind specialty
    -Must know wind to A-rank
    -The user can not switch sword lengths while attacking but takes time to focus
    -B rank gusts, count as one of the three moves.
    -Only Taught By The Jinchuurki Uchiha

    ~Declined~ No chakra infusable swords are allowed, no length alteration CW will be approved anymore, and incorrect chakra and damage info.

    (Katon:Hidama Burikka) Fire Style: Fireball Flicker
    Type:Offense
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra: 35 (45,if used with two hands)
    Damage: 45 (55,if used with two hands)
    Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra on the top of five fingers tips and creates a flickering ball of flame. The user can launch the balls of fire, from his finger tips as small orbs that travel almost slowly thorugh the air in a peculiar pattern. Then on the user's command the fireballs expands to the size of large fireballs that then take off through the air at a fast pace. And converge on the opponet severly burrning them from several directions.
    -Knowing Katon to A Rank
    -Only Taught by The Jinchuurki Uchiha

    ~Declined~ Incorrect chakra and damage info, and similar techniques exist.

    (Fuuton:Shuriken Funkei) Wind Style: Shuriken Decapitation
    Type: Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range: Mid-Range
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user raps there fingers in flexable metal wire, and attaches one shuriken to each of their ten fingers, and then concentrates their fuuton chakra into them. The user then throws all shuriken simultaneously, and manipulates the wires to wrap around the opponets mid section (neck to waist). Then with the shuriken wires wraped around the opponent the user pulls all the shuriken back, leading them to tear into the body of the enemy from ten angles. Cutting their arms off due to the increased cutting power of the shuriken.

    ~Declined~ Rip off of the Sharingan Windmill Triple Blade technique apart from the cutting part.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Liquid Steel (Rikiddo Koutestu)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: A special and unique material created back in the time of the Sage of Six Paths. At first glance, it looks simply like metalic, silver liquid. But, after the wielder infuses their chakra, the liquid seemingly comes to life. By infusing their steel chakra into the liquid, the user can then use shape manipulation to form the liquid into any shape they can imagine (blades, staff, shield). The user can also use their steel chakra to solidify the liquid to the point it is harder than steel. Also, by using their chakra, the user can make the liquid float in mid-air and can control the weapon at a distance up to mid-range. The Liquid is carried in a Medium sized steel Flask worn on the users back. Inside is enough Liquid steel to wrap around an entire average sized human.

    Some examples of what it looks like, and how it looks when being used.




    Liquid Copy (Rikiddo Genkou)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: By imbuing their chakra, the user makes their liquid steel take on the form of the themselves, becoming literally a clone. The clone can use all steel based jutsu that the user can do. Also, the clone can liquify itself and float in mid-air via the user in mid-range of them. Not only that, but the clone can make parts of itself morph into blades, or shields to attack and defend itself. Since essentially , the clone is still the weapon itself.

    example of what the clone looks like:


    Steel Release: Steel Wave devastation ( Koutetsu Shuuha Tensei )
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses their steel chakra. By spreading their focused Steel chakra across the ground, the caster then uses the steel's earth properties to transform the earth around them into steel, allowing the user to make large pieces of steel to rise out of the ground. The user controls the large pieces of the steel and can use them to entangle the opponent, or can cause several of the steel pieces to come rushing at the opponent, crushing them. The scale of the jutsu is so large, that it can trap large summon animals, and can impale them with several of the steel beams, and can easily overpower any earthen defense. Not only is this jutsu used as a way to attack, it can also be used to defend against large scale attacks, or to allow the user to create safer environment for themselves.

    ||Leaving for Scorps|| I'd prefer if he checked Steel Release techniques.

    ~Declined~ Resubmit after the ban is lifted.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Taiguronsamon: Nel ) -
    Tiglon summon: Nel

    Type: Summon/Supplementary
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: /
    Description:
    The user draws his own blood and either wipes it on his Tiglon tattoo or uses the summoning technique in order to summon Nel, a warrior Tiglon. Nel takes on the typical look of a tiger but with a small clean mane along with a thick, gold cuffling around her neck and a small one around her tail. Around her paws hers fur is very thick and take on the shape of angel-like wings, which allows her to fly but at speeds 1 ranks below it's summoner. When she is first summoned she's small enough to fit on an average sized man's shoulder, only about a foot tall. And like all the other Tiglons she's able to communicate with the summoner via telepathy. She is also noted to be the only Tiglon to be able to walk on it's hine legs to function.
    Abilities
    Nel's abilities are more of a "support" type, she is able to use Genjutsu up to A-rank. Along with that she is able to feel her summoners chakra flow in a "sensing" type of way and force chakra into him/her in order to free them from A-rank and below genjutsu.. Nel is known to move at speeds equal to a Sannin Ranked Taijutsu specialist.

    - Only taught by william24
    - only summoned once per battle and lasts 5 turns
    - Breaking summoner out of genjutsu counts as a Kai
    - Only knows when the users in genjutsu when in contact

    ~Declined~ No to the colored, only up to B-rank genjutsu techniques are going to be allowed via summons, no NB genjutsu, the summon can already infuse their chakra into you by physical touch and use Kai to get you out of genjutsu, up to 4 turns max, and mention that she's summoned once.

    Contract approval, post #1514
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Doton: Ketsugō Kusari) - Earth Release: Binding Chains
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will manipulate the ground to form extremely durable chains that surreptitiously emerge from underneath the opponent, proceeding to bind the opponent by wrapping his legs. Because the ground provides an unlimited supply of doton, these chains can be as long and big as the user wills, making it possible to bind summon bosses and shinobi alike.
    Note:
    -This jutsu isn't to be used for launching chains above ground level, or in any fashion similar to chakra chains.
    -The user must remain in contact with the ground as the chains emerge.
    -Only usable 4 times per battle

    ~Declined~ So going by the colored portion, that means that the chains are unbreakable? because when the opponent attempts to break them it will be "supplied" with more earth? that needs to be removed, and if you say the technique isn't used for launching chains above the ground level, how are you going to wrap it around the legs of the opponent, which is above the ground level o_O Earth Release isn't as flexible as to form chains that wrap around the target, so i'm not going to accept this, this is more like Steel Release, or Wood Release.
    (Doton: Ketsugō Kusari) - Earth Release: Binding Chains
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will manipulate the ground to form extremely durable chains that surreptitiously emerge from underneath the opponent, proceeding to bind the opponent by wrapping his legs and being pulled back into the ground to tighten the grip. Because the ground provides an unlimited supply of doton, the chains' size and length can be determined at will, making it possible to bind summon bosses and shinobi alike.
    Note:
    -This jutsu isn't to be used for launching chains into the air ground level, or in any fashion similar to chakra chains. But rather to form them from the ground and be kept on the ground until pulled back.
    -The user must remain in contact with the ground as the chains emerge.
    -Only usable 4 times per battle

    ~Declined~ I already said that i'm not going to accept this in the earlier submission, Earth Release isn't flexible to form chains that wrap around your opponent's body, that's a Wood Release ability.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Cobalt- View Post
    Resubmitting the wood technique:

    Mokuton: Kyouku no Gaia | Wood Release: Strength of Gaia
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The "Strength of Gaia" is a simple Mokuton jutsu. By using the trees natural ability to draw in minerals from the earth the user enhances this ability with chakra. Using exsisting wood on the field, the user can by channeling chakra into the wood draw in what ever minerals or substances there are in the ground giving the wood the properties of the substance. This is used to strengthen the wood and make it more durable while at the same time it gains the effects and abilities of the minerals and substances it absorbed. This is applicable only when a mineral substance is present in the field, artificially created by chakra. This amongs others involves CE elements (mainly metal and earth based elements which do not involve Fire or any other element harmful to wood in the combination and water based elements). Depending on the properties of the element absorbed, these abilities will be replicated on the wood.
    Note: Must have a Wood bio to use.
    Note: No Doton in the same turn this was used.
    Note: Thrice per battle, and the effects remain on the wood for the rest of the battle unless destroyed.

    X-Declined-X Wrong in many ways.... but well there can be better explanations to make this technique work.
    Lets say you use wood release in collaboration with Chakra absorption technique to absorb chakra from another Earth Based (Physical/tangible) element. The adaptive qualities of the wood cells abosorb the physical traits of the elements when it absorbs the chakra. That would be more reasonable then absorbing minerals which simply kills the wood by osmosis. Again it would require reasonable restrictions. A turn limit, a usage limit and higher rank.


    Resubmitting the Spear with Dante's permission:

    Yari: Niernen | Spear: Orchid
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The ancient sword-spear Niernen (which mean Orchid) is a weapon forged long before the shinobi were brought to the world by the Sage of the Six Paths. It is said to be created by Gods themselves. Niernen is a long staff made of the finest and most resistant wood that can be found. On the tip of the staff, an arched blade of chakra enhanced steel is attached which is unbreakable due to the hot fires it has been forged in. The tip grows in a dark green hue.. The color of the blade is a dark green hue, but it can turn to other colors upon the users wish. The whole weapon has been blessed by countless prayers making it impossible to destroy or damage in any way imaginable by mankind. The handle of the staff has two buttons on it with a hidden mechanism inside. Inside the staff a long, chakra enhanced wire is hidden, thus by pressing the button, the blade of the spear will shoot out and attach into any tangible surface with no need for the user to aim (does not count for persons). By pressing the button again the user can pull himself up almost any kind of obstacle. The second button when pressed, releases a small razor blade on the handle of the staff which the user can use to cut himself and release himself from genjutsu or to deal more damage to the opponent. The user can affect the the staffs brightness by chanelling chakra into it either turning the light off completely, or making it shine bright enough to enlighten the whole short range from the user. Twice per battle the user can release a S-ranked shockwave of green (Short-Long) chakra into any direction which is near to unavoidable since it covers an expansive range.The thing that makes Orchid a extremely versatile weapon is that it can be, by infusing chakra into it changed into any kind of weapon the user desires, though it does not exceed the original size of the weapon. It can also take on the form of a cloak.
    Note: Can only be wielded by -Cobalt-.
    Note: All abilities count towards the users three moves (excluding the hidden mechanisms which are activated with the press of the buttons and are considered freeform).
    Note: Shockwave usable twice per battle.
    Note: Can only change once every two turns.
    Note: The weapon is indestructible.


    X-Declined-X Remove the reference of Gods or any absolutism, the part where it says the shockwave is unavoidable and well, why dont you make the shockwave as seperate technique for your CW?
    Mokuton: Kyouku no Gaia | Wood Release: Strength of Gaia
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The "Strength of Gaia" is a simple Mokuton jutsu. By using the trees natural ability to draw in minerals from the earth the user enhances this ability with chakra. Using exsisting wood on the field, the user can by channeling chakra into the wood draw in what ever minerals or substances there are in the ground giving the wood the properties of the substance. This is used to strengthen the wood and make it more durable while at the same time it gains the effects and abilities of the minerals and substances it absorbed. This amongst others involves CE elements (mainly metal and earth based elements which do not involve Fire or any other element harmful to wood in the combination and water based elements). Depending on the properties of the element absorbed, these abilities will be replicated on the wood. This also serves as a sort of chakra absorbing technique. The wood absorbs the chakra of earth based elements and gains it's properties, the users chakra enhancing the adaptive properties of the wood.
    Note: Must have a Wood bio to use.
    Note: No Doton in the same turn this was used.
    Note: Thrice per battle, the effects last for 5 turns, unless destroyed.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Sorry but you didn't comply to what Xylon said and what you added only made it worse. DNR. No salvation for this one.

    Yari: Niernen | Spear: Orchid
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The ancient sword-spear Niernen (which mean Orchid) is a weapon forged long before the shinobi were brought to the world by the Sage of the Six Paths. Niernen is a long staff made of the finest and most resistant wood that can be found. On the tip of the staff, an arched blade of chakra enhanced steel is attached which is unbreakable due to the hot fires it has been forged in. The tip grows in a dark green hue.. The color of the blade is a dark green hue, but it can turn to other colors upon the users wish. The whole weapon has been blessed by countless prayers making it impossible to destroy or damage in any way imaginable by mankind. The handle of the staff has two buttons on it with a hidden mechanism inside. Inside the staff a long, chakra enhanced wire is hidden, thus by pressing the button, the blade of the spear will shoot out and attach into any tangible surface with no need for the user to aim (does not count for persons). By pressing the button again the user can pull himself up almost any kind of obstacle. The second button when pressed, releases a small razor blade on the handle of the staff which the user can use to cut himself and release himself from genjutsu or to deal more damage to the opponent.[b] The user can affect the the staffs brightness by chanelling chakra into it either turning the light off completely, or making it shine bright enough to enlighten the whole short range from the user. Twice per battle the user can release a S-ranked shockwave of green (Short-Long) chakra into any direction. The thing that makes Orchid a extremely versatile weapon is that it can be, by infusing chakra into it changed into any kind of weapon the user desires, though it does not exceed the original size of the weapon. Not only can the weapon take the form of a weapon, but it can also be turned into a piece of clothing, depending on the users desire. Though when turned into a piece of clothing, it loses it's abilities, except for the shockwave.
    Note: Can only be wielded by -Cobalt-.
    Note: All abilities count towards the users three moves (excluding the hidden mechanisms which are activated with the press of the buttons and are considered freeform).
    Note: Shockwave usable twice per battle.
    Note: Can only change once every turn.
    Note: The weapon is indestructible.

    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    Too many abilities. Its one of thoe cases of "and and and and and and ". Shockwave makes no sense for the weapon specially since you don't say what shockwave it is. Then you explain a complicated intricate mechanism inside it only to say it can be changed into any weapon or clothe you want. Decidee what you want and resubmit then.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ( Futon: Hari tenchishinmei ) Wind Release: Needles of the Gods
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user raises their arms and releases wind chakra into the air around the battlefield up to mid range away from him and takes control of the air to twist it into numerous long thin piercing threads (same size as Kakzuzu's threads) that form at least 10 meters in the air above ground and can then be controlled by the user's hand movements. The threads are 20 meters long and capable of piercing through up to A rank earth but once formed can't move away from their starting location so they can only affect what is within the reach of where the wind is shaped.
    -Three times per battle.
    -Threads last for 2 turns.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    ~Declined~ No free manipulation techniques are going to be approved, also mimicing Kakuzu's threads is not going to be allowed.

    ( Suiton: Hayashi nepuchu-n) Water Release: Forest of Neptune
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user will mold a large amount of water chakra and concentrate it into the ground and then by making 3 hand seals will cause water to erupt from all ranges on the battlefield that take shape of trees the size of Konohagakure's forest. These trees keep their shape for 4 turns until losing form and leaving behind a large water source (after the 4 turns, empty of the user's chakra)
    -Once per battle.
    -No other S rank water the same turn.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.

    ~Declined~ Why does this have damage points? if it's intended to be a large water source, it can't have damage points, if it's not meant to be a water source but an attack then it's not going to be approved, because trees rising from all over the battlefield pretty much attacking everything at once, including the user? a bit too much mate.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kaiton/Raiton: hibana sunappu)Fire/Lightning Style: Spark Snaps
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will perform a single hand seal. Once the hand seal is performed lightning chakra is gathered around the left/right hand of the user. The user will then snap his fingers, sending the electricity toward the opponent, in the form of a small lightning bolt(five centimeters). The user will use the opponent as a 'spark', the lightning will then 'explode' in a 'pillar' of flame. The flame will cover 5 meters in length and 2 in width. This technique is similar to how fire is produced via rocks on rocks.(Referring to the spark)
    Note: No lightning techniques on the same turn.
    Note: No fire techniques on the same turn.
    Note: The user can choose to send multiple bolts, but the power will decrease with more bolts.(1bolt= A rank, 2 bolts=B rank etc)
    Note: Can only be uses only twice.

    2:08 -2:33

    ~Declined~ This makes no sense, Fire is released with rock on rock because of the massive vibration of molecules when you rub the rocks against one another, this vibration in turn releases heat which transforms into a spark, then needs a medium to release the fire into and keep it ignited, lightning can't simply erupt into fire.

    (Futon/Doton: Yurasu suke-to)Wind/Earth Style: Earth Skating
    Type:Sup
    Rank: B Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20(5 per turn)
    Damage: N/A(20 if used short range to opponent)
    Description: The user will first jump up, and once in the air the user will use wind chakra to send himself back to the ground(via flapping hands upward like a bird)As soon as the user begins his/her descend they focus earth chakra to their feet. Once the users feet come in contact with the ground the user will send earth chakra though the ground—both the user and chakra will be moving down, the user due to the force from the descend, and the chakra simply because it is being channeled that way— *which will be moving downwards due to the force. The user will then manipulate his chakra and causes the ground to rise in the form of a lump. The user can then move the lump through his chakra, this technique serves as a transportation method. While using this technique one foot at least must remain in contact with the ground.
    Note: Must keep at least one foot on the earth.
    Note: Enemies will only be injured if they are within short range, their injury comes *from the impact of the user to the ground.
    Note: Lasts for 3 turns.
    Note: Can only be used twice.
    0:37 - :45

    ~Declined~ Why is this Wind/Earth combination exactly? if it's used for transportation simply why does it cause damage to the opponent if he's within short range?, not going to allow this anyway.


    Submission Style: Ankle Lock(Shoufuku Fuukaku: Kurubushi Joumae)
    Rank: B rank
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 40
    Description: When in near proximity of an opponent who is on the ground, the user will grab the leg of the opponent specifically in the ankle area, the user will use both of his/her arms and twist the grabbed ankle of the opponent either left or right, causing the opponent intense pain.
    -The longer the technique is used the more damage is delivered

    ~Approved~
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    [Genjutsu: Kusari Naraku] - Illusionary Arts: Chains of Hell
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user transfers his chakra into the opponent's mind meanwhile performing a single handseal, the "Ram" handseal, casting an illusion into the opponent causing him to see the ground below him divided into two sections, a right section which moves at the right direction of the opponent and a left section that moves at the left direction of the opponent, leaving the opponent without any solid ground. Meanwhile the ground is moving countless chains shows up from the space that is left by the divide of the two earth sections. These chains are manipulated by the user, giving him the capability of binding the opponent with the chains, inflicting damage with the chains etc.. . Leaving the opponent open in reality and inflicting damage to him because of the amount of stress caused form the illusion.
    Note: Can only be taught by Hashírama
    Note: Can only be used 3 times a battle
    Note: Can't use any genjutsu technique higher than A-rank at the same turn.
    ||Approved||

    [Doton: Gurande Jishin] - Earth Element: The Grand Earthquake
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (only to the ground)
    Description: After building up the required amount of Doton chakra for the technique the user stomps his leg on the ground with great force that his leg would make such a noticeable print on the ground, releasing the user's Doton chakra from his body to the ground through his leg that is connected with the ground once his leg hit it. Once channeling his Doton chakra on the ground, the user causes his chakra to spread into one single specific direction (either his front direction or his rear direction) of the user's choice. With the due of the force and the chakra into this specific angle the user create countless clefts into both of the ground's crest and deep inside of the ground, turning the ground into nothing but fragile. This said, the effect of this technique causes any technique higher than D-rank that emerges from the ground or is connected to the ground to destroy the ground (go through the ground etc..).
    Note: Can only be used once per battle.
    Note: Can not use any earth technique at the same time
    Note: The clefts happens two meters away from the user.
    Note: Must be taught by Hashírama
    ||Declined|| Do Not Resubmit

    [Ninpō: Yaku-tame Sabusutansu] - Ninja Arts: Assimilate All Substances
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short/Self
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Yaku-tame Sabusutansu is an advanced technique of "(Shinra Banshō Dōka No Jutsu) - Assimilate All Creation Technique". Yaku-tame Sabusutansu is a high classed technique that could only be used by skilled and high classed Shinobis. The shinobi meanwhile having a physical contact with a specific substance could turn to this this substance and assimilate all of it's appearance and it's properties. However this only applies to Solid substances and liquid substance, the user cannot assimilate any gaseous because it has no physical appearance.
    Note: Can only be taught by Hashírama
    Note: Can only assimilate only one single substance and in one form, nothing more nothing less.
    Note: Only usable x4 times per battle.
    Note: Must know the original Assimilate All Creation technique in order to learn/use this technique
    ||Declined|| I want you to elaborate on this technique more. The concept seems interesting but the description is lacking. What exactly does the assimilation do and of what benefit is it?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (JIton:Jiton sabure yoroi) Magnetism: Gold Dust Armor
    Type: Sup
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/a
    Description: The user will do 1handseal and cause Gold Dust to surround his body. This gold dust makes the user One Rank slower but causes him to be immune to S rank and below Sand Techs, A rank and Below Taijutsu, and B Rank and below Elemental techs. Once the user gets hit the armor will break. Causing the user to go back to his original form.
    Note: Can use Twice
    Note: No Gold dust above S rank in the next two turns

    ~Declined~ Not going to happen

    +++++++++++++++++++++++++

    (Jiton: botsuraku enkai) Magnetism: The Fallen Ocean
    Type: Attack/Supplamentary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The 4th Kazakage will do 4 handseals and gradually send gold dust into the sky..Once the gold dust gathers into a large amount into the sky the 4th will then clap his hands causing the gold dust to come crashing down on the opponent from above. The force of this gold sand is enough to crush the chief toad and shatter his bones. Once it comes crashing down it then spreads around the whole battle field. leaving the battle field with nothing but Gold Dust

    Note: Cant Use No gold dust in the same turn
    Note: Cant use gold dust above A rank the next turn
    Note: Takes 2/3 user turns to finish this move

    ~Declined~ You are a jounin rank, you can't train nor submit above A-rank techniques.

    ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
    (kogane utsuwa) Gold Catapee
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:E
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points:N/a
    Description: This is the 4th Kazakage Special Gourd, He calls it the Gold Catapee It looks like a gold cylinder stapped to his back from . The countainer is about 3/4 the size of a normal human with a cap on it as well.. This Container produces unlimit amounts of gold dust similar to gaaras sand gourd. Thie differnce is, This gourd was made out of pure gold and highly unbreakable. This is only used to produce Gold Dust without the source of sand around the area.

    ~Declined~ Gaara's gourd doesn't produce unlimited amounts of Sand, it has a limited amount, Gaara can extract the sand from the ground by grinding the earth, and the 4th Kazekage uses his Magnetism Release to pull the Gold Dust particles together from the ground, i'm fine with having a gourd that can be used as medium for Gold Dust techniques, but you can simply update your bio mentioning that you have a gourd that has Gold dust contained within it like Gaara's sand.

    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=108489
    This is my Magnetism bio i had before the rules was set in place needing magnetism training. Meaning I been had magnetism mastered
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Great Ibex
    Scroll Owner: Megaamine
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    _________________________________________________
    Description and Background:
    Capra is a genus of mammals, the goats or wild goats, composed of up to nine species including the wild goat, the markhor and several species known as ibex.
    The domestic goat (Capra aegagrus hircus) is a domesticated subspecies of the wild goat (Capra aegagrus).
    Wild goats are animals of mountain habitats. They are very agile and hardy, able to climb on bare rock and survive on sparse vegetation. They can be distinguished from the genus Ovis, which includes sheep, by the presence of scent glands close to the feet, in the groin and in front of the eyes, and the absence of other facial glands, and by the presence of a beard in the males, and of hairless calluses on the knees of the forelegs.
    The Rocky Mountain goat is in a separate genus, Oreamnos, and is not dealt with here.
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    Form 1:

    Form 2:

    ............................

    ~Declined~ This is a set of 9 species, choose only one.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Fire Style: Dragon Emperor Soaring Bite Strike
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (10+ If gather more chakra into the dragons)
    Description: Dragon Emperor Soaring Bite Strike is 3 dragons made of fire nature. You would need to do these handseals: Tiger > Snake > Tiger > Clap. You then release the chakra you have gathered and release, causing 3 dragons to explode out of your palms and comes straight to the opponent. The 3 fire dragons slam the opponent up to the air, as it comes up and bits you. It then drags you down while still biting you, causing a huge firey explosion to accure.

    -Can be used 2 times in a battle
    -Cannot use a Katon jutsu after this jutsu til 1 turn
    -Weak against S-Rank Water Jutsus
    -As the dragon headbutts you, there is no escape
    -Escape by avoiding the headbutt
    -Can only be taught by Fusion Reborn

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques exist.

    Weapon: Fervid Blazer
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60 (10+ with Firion Bio)
    Description: To do this jutsu, you must have the 7 weapons of the Cosmos consisting : Sword, Lance, Staff, Bow, Knife, Axe, Dart. Now that you have that, quickly channel chakra to the weapons as it turns blood red. Then raise your bow to the target and focus on the weapons to line up on the bow. As it is lined up and ready, pull the string and releasing, making it like a assault rifle, firing the weapons and ending with a blow.

    -Can be used 1 in a battle
    -Can be avoidable but remember that it keeps shooting
    -Can only be taught by Fusion Reborn
    -Weak Against Water and Earth Jutsus
    -Can be use to only fire one shot at a time
    -Is avoidable

    ~Pending~ What exactly is this? bow releasing other weapons while being infused with chakra? vm me about this with clarification.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Hayashi Sendo) - Fire Style: Forest of Death
    Type: Offense/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short (when initiated)
    Chakra Cost: 50 (+5 for each animal after 10)
    Damage Points: 90 (-30 to user)
    Description: User focuses a large amount of fire chakra in his body before releasing it as a chakra surge. While user releases the fire chakra, it surges user in fire from top to bottom covering him in intense flames, after which user manipulates the fire, making dozen(s) of animals from it, which can spread throughout the battlefield, much like Sai's Ink Ninjutsu. By reducing the no. of animals, size of the animals can be increased accordingly. Upon user's command these animals can explode, and the blast from the explosion covers the short range of the animals.

    Note: -Must have had the Sai bio with Ink Ninjutsu for at least a year.
    -The animals can be of any variety, like, bull, dog, eagle, elephant, turtle, dragon, phoenix etc.
    -User cannot use any other fire technique in same turn.
    -User cannot use other fire technique above A-rank in next turn.
    -Can only be used once per battle.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~Declined~ Ya like i'm gonna approve something like that, you can't mix Sai's ink with elemental ninjutsu, it's just ink.
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    (Shiroari Ninjutsu: Seken Inmetsu) - Termite Arts: World's Destruction
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short (when used)
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A technique unique to termites only where one of them stings the earth, wood, sand, dead plant or any other organic matter and passes his/her chakra into it. The chakra then feeds on the said thing and slows and stops it down and destroys it completely, leaving nothing but crumbled pieces of it.

    Note: -Affects one rank above techniques and only of wood, earth, sand, dead plant and other organic matter.
    -Does no effect on other elemental techniques.
    -Though usable by every Termite, each one can use it only once per battle.
    -Only Termites can use it.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~Leaving for Scorps~

    Link to approved contract

    P.S. Termites feed on the earth, wood etc (above mentioned things) and when submitting the contract I stated that I'll be making separate ninjutsu techniques as CJs which'll be damaging the wood/earth/organic matter and it was approved by Scorps. You can check so in above mentioned link.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. One thing is to eat organic matter another is to sting it and use chakra to decompose it. That is Decay... My CE. Also, no need to state stuff like that. The mod will check the approved submission of your contract and read and gather what he needs to. Next time I'll simply decline it all under the blue rule.


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    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Hade) - Summoning Technique: Hade
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: User summons a brown stone-like color turtle named Hade, brother of Jackie, who is even smaller in height than his elder brother making 5cm while standing. Because of his small size and color, he is not noticeable easily to naked eyes. And when 'resting' at a place, one would easily misinterpret him with a stone, especially because of his body shell which is of irregular shape and resembles a stone. Unlike his brother, he is not a fighter but a helper to his summoner who don't have any fighting ability but to communicate with his user using telepathy and has ability to sense chakra similar to that of Karin's. He can be used in two ways;
    First; Because of his un-noticeable property and very small size, he can infiltrate villages without being easily noticed and can work as a spy. And using telepathy, he can give user information which, village is hiding from others.
    Second; If used in a battle, he can be of little uses like handing user some tools/weapons when dropped on field or thrown by opponent somewhere, while user is busy fighting his enemy. He can also, twice per battle bite(C-rank) his target causing the bitten muscle/vein to completely obliterate, causing pain and damage.
    Note: -Can only be summoned once per battle.
    -Because he don't have any special ability, he can stay as much as user wants or until he takes enough damage to poof himself back to Mount Galapagos.
    -Due to his body shell, like every turtle it also provides him immunity towards attacks but only upto D-ranks, and only to his shell, not to any other body parts and within reason.
    -Must have signed Terrapin contract.
    -Can only be taught by Enzup.

    ~Declined~ No chakra sensing, no telepathy, no to the colored as well.

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    (Kage Nui: Kyodaina kage ningen no ken) - Shadow Stitching: Giant Shadow Human Fist
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A Even greater version of the Shadow Sewing technique where the user will extend their shadow in zig zag manner and extend shadow needles, then the user will perform the rat hand seal to shape them into 3 giant human fist made of shadow where it will materializes like the shadow sewing and travel toward the opponents with triangular manner, left, right and center. The giant shadow human fist could destroy any solid object with same rank and like any other shadow jutsu, it could also trap the opponent shadow.

    Note:
    - Can only be used by members of the Nara Clan.
    - Can only be use twice
    - No other shadow jutsu for the following turn

    ~Declined~ This is 3 techniques crammed in one, you made it look similar to the shadow sewing when it's not, so remove that part, i'm fine with the technique itself, just keep in mind to destroy a S-rank solid structure, you'd need the 3 shadow hands to do so, remove trapping the opponent's shadow, this is only allowed to the Kage Mane technique.

    (Shadow Vision) Kage bijon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: With long hard training and trying develop new shadow jutsu, Shikaku Nara succeeded to create a new technique of shadow manipulation called the “Shadow Vison”, the user who managed to achieve this technique able to manipulate the opponents shadow without having to connect with the user shadow. Shikaku must concentrate in one spot of the opponent shadow, once they gain and possess the opponent shadow using his eyes, the user freely to shape the opponent shadow as they pleased such as a sharp item made of shadow (like shadow needle) to stab the opponent using their own shadow, or turn the opponent shadow into a rope made of shadow to tie the opponent feet. But this technique can’t use to bind the opponent.

    Note:
    - Have to finish shadow training
    - Can not use to multiple opponents
    -Usable only 4 times
    - Can only be use by Shikaku Bio
    -After use for 2 turn, can’t use shadow tech for 1 turn
    -No shadow jutsu in the same turn.
    -Can’t use this tech to bind the opponent shadow

    ~Declined~ OP, manipulating the opponent's shadow without connecting with yours isn't going to be allowed.

    (Kage-Kata Horyū)- Shadow Style – On Hold
    Type: Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user focus a massive amount of chakra then channel it into his shadow beneath his feet and then the user perform 4 serial hand seal to sprout out his shadow with shape tens of shadow needles while extend his shadow in purpose to bind and trap the shadow of an incoming solid attack such as earth and water or ninja tools. Due to every shape or object has shadow within, so the incoming attack will be able permanently stop and undo it’s movement and effect.

    Note :
    ~ Able to stop and undo similar rank incoming attack from Earth and Water element which has shadow with shape or solid form.
    ~ Can only be used 4 times in battle then can’t use shadow for the next 1 turn
    ~ Can only be use once every turn
    ~ Must have finished Shadow training.
    ~ Can only be used by Nara's
    ~ Can only be taught by Oasis Nara

    ||Declined|| How does this stop water?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Steel Release: Liquid Steel Membrane ( Koutetsu Kaihou- Rikkido Koutetsu Maku)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: An advanced and new form of the Steel Kekki Genkai. By combining their water chakra into their steel chakra, the user is able to create a liquid steel. The liquid protrudes from the openings in the users pores enabling them to use the liquid quickly and easily. With that, the user can encase their entire body in a 1inch case of liquid steel. With there being no gaps, the user is protected from most of the elements, and thanks to its texture, most taijutsu & physical attacks only serve to knock back the user, dealing little to no physical pain at all. Because of the density of the liquid, the users movement is slowed.

    Note: Since it is Steel AND Water, lightning element jutsu do double the damage it normally would.
    Note:Immune to A-Rank and lower Taijutsu.
    Note: Immune to Water jutsu within reason.

    Steel Release: Steel Cable Whip ( Koutetsu Kaihou- Koutetsu Sakoujou Hoippu)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user launches out a single thick steel cable from both wrists each. The cables can extend for several feet. The user can use these cables to lash at the enemy, causing bone breaking damage. Or to wrap around the enemy and entangle them. Can also use the cables to latch on to nearby ledges and protrusions such as tree branches to manuever, or escape harm.

    Steel Release: Stainless Steel Armor ( Koutetsu Kaihou- Sutenresu Koutetsu Yoroi )
    Type: Supplementary/ Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: + 20 Taijutsu
    Description: The user does the Dog and Ram handseals, then channels an massive amount of Steel chakra. By doing so, they make their skin all over their body transform into a silver, steel-like armor, pushing their body's defensive capability to its utmost limits. It is said to be one of the known "Ultimate Defenses" Alongside the Hyuuga's Rotation, and Gaara's Sand. Most attacks that are directed at the user are rendered useless, the user's Taijutsu and defensive power are increased dramatically to the point that the user themselves can break through any form of rock effortlessly, and can even break through steel itself.

    Note: Immune to Earth & Water based Jutsu within reason. Immune to all lower ranked Taijutsu within reason.
    Note: Can only use C-Rank and below Steel Jutsu while jutsu is active

    Permission to Resubmit by Dante.

    ~Declined~ already checked in the previous marker.
     
         
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    (Doton: Sokumon Hekei) Earth Release: Earth Style Side walls Jutsu.
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user performs the Snake hand-seal and then creates a two solid walls of earth as a form of defense from the sides, this jutsu is just like the "Earth Style Wall Jutsu", the only difference is that, the user must split his chakra in half so he can make two walls,
    protecting his left and right sides.

    Note:
    - The user must learn the "Earth Style Wall Jutsu" first.
    - Only i can teach this Jutsu.

    ~Declined~ you can already do that with the Earth Style Wall Jutsu, you just need to use it twice, this is a rip off of a cannon technique and rip offs are not allowed.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Avenger- View Post
    ~Resubmitting

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Šamaš kotei) Summoning Technique: Šamaš The Emperor
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user summons Šamaš The Emperor, one of the oldest bustard. He has a golden colored crest on his head as result of his fire affinity. He is a fairly large summon about as big as the Hawk Sasuke summoned. He is able to use fire techniques up to S-rank as a result of intense training with the user. He is exceptionally fast and can carry one person on his back and with his sharp senses he provides the user all the aid he needs. Šamaš also has the ability to shoot feathers infused with his katon chakra from his fingered wingtips that can pierce through rocks. He has trained himself to use his beak and claws as extra means of attack.

    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
    Note: Any techniques used by Šamaš counts towards the user's move count.

    ~Declined~ *sigh* what sharp senses are you talking about? you just got yourself into a
    whole other issue, keep in mind that the fire chakra infused feathers can't counter other techniques, they
    are simply projectiles infused with fire chakra, like a kunai, unless you give it a rank, and a usage limit.


    Link of contract approval.

    (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Šamaš kotei) Summoning Technique: Šamaš The Emperor
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user summons Šamaš The Emperor, one of the oldest bustard. He has a golden colored crest on his head as result of his fire affinity. He is a fairly large summon about as big as the Hawk Sasuke summoned. He is able to use fire techniques up to S-rank as a result of intense training with the user. He is exceptionally fast and can carry one person on his back. Šamaš also has the ability to shoot feathers infused with his katon chakra from his fingered wingtips that can pierce through large rocks. After releasing the feathers, they set themselves on fire due to wind resistance/friction increasing its destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with any object/person(s) and the feathers will continue to burn after impact unless it's put out by an opposing technique. The feathers are 2 feet long and can shoot up to 6 feathers from each wingtip (12 in total). Šamaš can shoot these feathers in desired direction with a long range reach and is equivalent to A-rank. He has trained himself to use his beak and claws as extra means of attack.

    Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
    Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
    Note: The feather shooting ability can be used 3 times.
    Note: Any techniques used by Šamaš counts towards the user's move count.

    ~Approved~ If i ever see that "exceptionally fast" being exploited i'll void this CJ.

    Link of contract approval.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hanabi Taikai) Firework Festival
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Throw: Short-Long | Explosion: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: 10 each (x3)
    Description: The user will throw three balls of rolled up explosive notes that are the size of regular marbles (exploding balls hereafter referred to as marbles), after infusing them with chakra; this chakra coats the marbles and allows them to be thrown a greater distance than the marbles would otherwise be capable of reaching, due to their extremely low mass and weight. Due to their small size, and the lack of a kunai to give away their position, these become a viable option in battle, as they are harder to see. Not only that, but each marble can be detonated individually at the user’s command, like regular exploding tags, allowing the marbles to be used for strategic purposes, due to their explosive radius. The damage is caused solely by the explosive tags; the chakra does not amplify the damage in anyway, and is simply used to throw them greater distances.

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    (Mugen Ittōryū: Mugen Kyūsū) Infinite One-Sword Style: Infinite Series
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: +20 to IOSS
    Description: The name of the Infinite One-Sword Style comes from the nearly endless number of blades found on the battlefield during its use – this technique’s purpose is to allow the user to use them all. While most IOSS techniques do use multiple swords for their attacks, there is generally a set number for each technique. When this technique is activated, the user will double the number of swords used in IOSS techniques, thus increasing the techniques overall strength by adding extra blades to the barrage.
    *Once activated, it remains activated for the rest of the match.
    *Requires the Infinite One-Sword Style set-up to have been used.
    *Does not affect Gale Slash.

    ______________
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    Too much going on here. You know this can't be accepted as it is. +20 damage without a single activation limit? without a single real restriction? Nope. And lets not forget, without even a usage lmit.
    (Mugen Ittōryū: Mugen Kyūsū) Infinite One-Sword Style: Infinite Series
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: +20 to IOSS
    Description: The name of the Infinite One-Sword Style comes from the nearly endless number of blades found on the battlefield during its use – this technique’s purpose is to allow the user to use them all. While most IOSS techniques do use multiple swords for their attacks, there is generally a set number for each technique. When this technique is activated, the user will double the number of swords used in IOSS techniques, thus increasing the techniques overall strength by adding extra blades to the barrage.
    *Once activated, it remains activated for the rest of the match.
    *Requires the Infinite One-Sword Style set-up to have been used.
    *Does not affect Gale Slash.
    *Can be activated successfully once and remains active so long as IOSS techniques are useable.

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Again, +20 and no duration limit? DNR.

    I hold and created the Columbidae Contract.

    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Summon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 0
    Description: Ushiwaka, or Waka for short, is Keotu’s personal summon. An average sized Dove with golden plumage, Waka is a Columbidae that is more oriented towards Kenjutsu, and has a minor wind element, capable of creating wind gusts equal in strength to Fuuton: Reppoushou. Waka is summoned with a flute in his talons, which is actually the mystical sword Pillowtalk. Pillowtalk sprouts a green blade of chakra from one end of the flute once chakra is directed through it. Pillowtalk has the standard slicing capability of a regular Katana, but when someone is hit by the blade of Pillowtalk, in addition to causing a wound, it also makes the opponent sleepy, an effect that worsens with each consecutive hit – no person has every stayed awake through more than five hits by Pillowtalk, regardless of what they’re doing. When Waka transforms into a human, he is shown with long golden hair, and in a pink kimono along with a purple Sashinuki-hakama, along with a hat that has the motif of a hawk with a long cloak that hides his hair, and tends to pepper his speech with French phrases. He is extremely talented in Kenjutsu, able to use any of the summoner’s “non-elemental” or wind element Kenjutsu moves at an equal cost, and has the ability to use his wind powers to allow himself to stay in the air, giving him the ability to “fly” (in actuality, he creates an updraft that allows him to hover, and can change the able to glide around). While in his dove form, he is extremely quick and agile, making him a difficult target.
    *Waka has a strong bond with Keotsu, and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when he summon him. When anyone else summons him, he remains on the field for 4 turns, though he can leave Pillowtalk behind for the user to use, until they dismiss the blade.
    *Waka’s Wind Gust in Dove form is equivalent to C-Rank, but only require 10 Chakra, due to its not damaging nature.
    *Pillowtalk can only be wielded by Columbidae contract signers.
    *Transforming to/from Dove/Human form takes 10 chakra and counts against one of that turns moves.
    Waka in human form


    This is a rather big change to Waka, so...not sure if this counts as an "update", or just dropping him to replace him with Agrias...However, I bolded the important changes, and I'll also list below the major differences between the two.

    (Hato-ka Kuchiyose:Aguriasu Ōkusu) Columbidae Summon: Agrias Oaks
    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Type: Summon
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Agrias is Keotsu’s personal summon. In her dove form, she appears as a regular size dove with yellow plumage. Her only ability in this form is the ability to summon other Columbidae at their normal summoning cost, by trilling a tune specific to each summon; conversely, she can be summoned through use of a piece of special reed grass that grows only in Eden, the realm where the Columbidae reside – using this grass allows her to be summoned at a regular chakra cost, but bypasses summoning ninjutsu, by using chakra to activate the glyphs found inscribed upon the wheat when a tune is blown on it; in essence, Agrias is summoning herself to the Summoner, but using their chakra for the job. As a Human, Agrias is a stunning young woman of 20 years old with long, golden hair that comes down to her hips and amber eyes; she keeps her hair tied back in one large braid, though. She wears a navy trench cloak and a pair of leather breaches, boots, and gauntlets, as well as wearing a steel breastplate, and her personal sword, Save the Queen; she also speaks with a slightly Old-English dialect. In human form, she is capable of using any Kenjutsu or Taijutsu that the summoner can use, and is also treated as the same rank (HP and Chakra). As a human, she also gains access to a personal Kenjutsu technique known as “Divine Ruination”, an S-rank technique that fires a helix-shaped shockwave at the enemy (described below).
    *Agrias is Keotsu’s personal summon, and thus remains on the field indefinitely when summoned by him. When summoned by others, she remains for four turns.
    *Save the Queen can only wielded by Agrias and Columbidae Contract signers; the sword itself is indestructible, but has no special powers.
    *Though Agrias has her own Health and Chakra pools, her moves still count towards the summoner’s 3 moves per turn.
    *Divine Ruination is a double helix (DNA) shaped, blue shockwave. The shockwave itself does no damage, but when it comes into contact with an object, causes a cross-shaped explosion to occur from within the object - this is the damaging aspect of the attack. When used by Agrias, it is treated as a justu with S-rank power and chakra cost; it can be used by the summoner as well, if they have a sword, but only while Agrias is in play. It reaches up to Mid-range before disappearing.
    *Transforming to/from Avian/Human form costs 30 chakra to Agrias and counts as a move.
    *Though she can perform Columbidae Summoning Techniques while in Avian form, Agrias is treated as a “Samurai” in human form.
    *Agrias in Human form:


    Changes: Traded Waka's Wind abilities in Dove Form for Agrias's Summoning abilities . Exchanged the sleeping lightsaber Pillowtalk for the regular Save the Queen. Gave her access to Taijutsu as well as her own technique Divine Ruination in exchange for Flight in human form and the use of Wind-elemental Kenjutsu . Increased her chakra cost for transformations, but she has her own chakra pool and health.

    ~Leaving for Scorps~

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    Decide if you want to update the older summon or drop it or what you want to do. You're changing the name...Its not a simple update so decide what you want please. Resubmit when you decide on what to do.
     
         
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    Summoning Animal:Summoning Animal:rhinoceros‑hornbill Scroll Owner: TheGreyFox
    Other Users who have signed contract:None
    Summoning Boss if existing: None
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract none
    one of the largest hornbills, adults being approximately the size of a swan,[2] 91–122 cm (36–48 in)[3] long and weighing 2–3 kg (4.4–6.6 lbs).

    Fire Tornado(kasai tatsumaki)
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description:the user blows out fire from the mouth and sipns useing chaka controle covers the users body as
    the user is spinng rapidly twords the target


    Demon hell blade(akuma naraku ken
    Type: Offensive
    Range: short-long
    Rank: B
    Chakra Cost: 20/40 with element charka
    Damage Points: 40/60 with element charka
    Description:the user uses there indix&middle filger and create a small bladethat thay can make long or short

    ~All Declined~ If you don't want to be banned from the CJ thread once more, i suggest you start posting your CJ submissions correctly and use proper grammar and periods.
     
         
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    |Fuuton: Weeee|Wind Release: Weeee|
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:C
    Range:Self
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user creates a swirling mass of condensed fuuton chakra underneath his feet. The fuuton chakra is then moulded into a shape of a very condensed tornadoe which propels the users body up. This gives him a bird's eye view of the entire area. The wind also stirs up loose dust and dirt on the ground and can make the opponent's eyes uncomfortable. The height can be increased and decreased by adding and taking away chakra. The user cannot go higher than Gamabunta's height.

    Restrictions

    -Can only be used once per turn-
    -Can only be used thrice per battle-
    -no jutsu while on the wind spout-
    -can only be taught by PB-

    ~Declined~ Similar techniques exist, and "self" is not a valid range, only Short, Mid and long are.

    |Sutādasuto Bureikā|Stardust Breaker
    Type:Offense
    Rank:F
    Range:Short
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90 (10 to the user)
    Description:The user rushes forward and delivers several quick and powerful punches to the opponent. Then, he jumps past the stunned opponent and turns around to knee them twice in the back of their head before backflip kicking them away. He then lands on the ground and concentrates massive amounts of katon chakra into a sphere of flames. Since there is so much chakra condensed into such a small sphere it becomes highly unstable. The user then throws it and it burns a hole in the opponent, and the user makes the tiger handseal. The sphere then combusts in a bright light that temporarily blinds the user and the explosion tears the opponent's body into pieces.

    Restrictions

    -Can only be used once-
    -No fire jutsu in the same turn-
    -the bright flash blinds the user temporarily-
    -This jutsu leaves the user extremely tired and panting heavily. He will only be able to use two jutsu per turn for the rest of the battle.-

    ~Declined~ It's "Forbidden" not "F" and such condensed chakra in this close proximity would do recoil damage and blow your body killing you as well.



    Hand Claws
    Type:Offense
    Rank:C
    Range:Self
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description:The user focuses chakra into their hands, more specifically their finger nails. The nails then grow, and get sharper. The nails become as sharp as knives, and are able to tear through limbs with ease.

    ~Declined~ No, this is an ability of the 4 Legged Technique of the Inuzuka clan.

     
         
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    (Katon: Soaringu Fenikkusu) - Fire Release: Soaring Phoenix
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user gathers chakra and then channels it to their hands and feet. The user then performs 2 hand seals and then gets into position; making their hands into fists and stretching their arms behind them. The user then releases flames from their fists and feet, that levitates them and propels them towards the opponent. Once the user is closing on the opponent the user then jumps and combines the flames behind them, and then lands and sends 2 separate blast of fire towards the opponent.
    Note:
    -can only be performed every other turn
    -can only be taught by Satan Soul



    ~Declined~ Similar techniques exist.

    (Katon: Nenshō Sākuru) - Fire Release: Burning Circle
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The gathers up chakra and channels it to either their right or left hand. The user then makes it fist and then jump into the air. The user then comes down and strikes the ground with their fist thus releasing a circular wave of fire towards their opponent. The wave of fire is capable of knocking the opponent back and is able to repel projectiles,shurikens,kunais,ect...
    Note:
    -can only be used 3x
    -can only be taught by Satan Soul



    ~Declined~ define the radius of this "circular wave of fire"

    (Katon:Fenikkusu Gekido) - Fire Release:Phoenix Wrath
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 100
    Description: The user performs several hand seals and then channels chakra to their right hand. The user then creates a flame in their right hand and then charges it. The user then leaps into the air and then stretches their right hand towards the ground. From their right hand the user releases the charged flame towards the ground. Upon release the flame grows wider and longer until it hits the ground. Once it hits the ground the flames expand across a wide radius of the area burning everything in its path. The heat of the flame is so strong its capable of turning the earth into lava.
    Note:
    -must have katon mastered
    -can only be performed 2x
    -must wait 3 turns to perform again
    -cannot use any katon techinuqes until 3 turns are up
    -the user takes 20 damage points from the intense flames from their right hand
    -can extinguish up to A rank Suiton techinques
    -can only be taught by Satan Soul

    ~Declined~ OP, been attempted countless times.

     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Ninja Art:Heavenly Light(Ninjutsu:Ten No Hikari)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:E
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:5
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user will first perform one handseal,Dog,then sslam their hands together as they're hands seperate a ball of chakra will be formed this ball will then be slamed into any surface causing an explosion of sorts causing a huge burst of light that's even brighter than a normal flash bomb.



    Restriction/Notes
    -Can only be taught by sonnelion.
    -Blindness lasts for one battle phase.
    -Require one turn breaks between use.
    -Doesn't affect people with doujutsu active.

    Ninja Art: Demon Smoke Bomb(Ninjutsuni Kemuri Kumo)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:E
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:5
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user will perform one handseal,Rabbit,then grab two smoke bombs and channel chakra into them then as normal they will throw them to trigger them and as they explode because of the chakra infused the user will be able to control it to an extent the smoke will be spread wider and form several demon heads at the end of the smoke cloud.
    Restrictions/Notes
    -Can only be taught by sonnelion.
    -Require one turn breaks between use.
    -Doujutsu users will be able to see through the smoke.
    -Lasts until the end of the opponent's battle phase unless dealt with.
    -The user can make openings in the smoke since it's his chakra.
    *It's a dark black color and disperses at a even rate in a complete circle*


    -Also the cloud's height is 14 feet high.

    Heaven's/Hell's Call(Ten Ka Jigoku No Yobidashi)
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:N/A[+5 for each turn chakra imbued for each weapon]
    Damage:20[+10 when ability active]
    Description:Heaven's call is a 8 feet wide and tall cross pike weapon that is composed of chakra absorbing metal and steel with a blue design on each of the four blades.Heaven's call has the ability to be imbued with chakra and once imbued the blades will be surrounded by lightning and can paralyze if a hit lands.It also has the ability when thrown to release the chakra in the shape of a lightning saw equal to a C-rank lightning technique.When thrown the cross pike will return to the user at 20 mph.

    Heaven's Rage(Ten No Ikari)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description:The user will,once the weapon is imbued,be thrown as this happens the command will be given by the user by performing a handseal with one hand,Tiger, causing the blade to be release the chakra in the form of a lightning saw and as it's released the weapon begins to return to the user.
    Restrictions/Notes
    -Can only be used twice a battle
    -Requires 1 turn breaks between use.
    -Can only be used with this weapon



    Hell's Call is a 8 feet wide and tall cross pike weapon that is composed of chakra absorbing metal and steel with a red design on each of the four blades.Hell's call has the ability to be imbued with chakra and once imbued the blades will heat up to the point that it is on fire and glowing red hot,but not to the point that it will lose it's strength.The blades also will b surrounded by fire balls that follow the blades.Hell's call can be thrown just like heavens call and use a similar attack.

    Hell's Rage(Jigoku No Ikari)
    Type:Attack
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description: The user will spin the weapon with one hand infront of them until the user has picked up enough speed,the fireballs look like one ring of fire after that the user will suddenly stop/catch the spinning weapon sending the fireballs towards the opponent and the user will be able to control the fireballs to a extent,as in able to turn them towards the opponent but that's essentially it.
    Restrictions/Notes
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Require 1 turn breaks between use.
    -Can only be used with this weapon.
    -There are 4 fireballs and the size of these are 1 and 1/2 feet wide by 1 and 1/2 feet tall.



    Note
    -Can be used at the same time or by themselves.
    -Have to be summoned to use.
    -Costs 2 chakra to summon one of the weapons.

    Heaven's Call

    Hell's Call



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    ✘ All Declined ✘
    Submitting more than 3 techniques between markers is against the rules, and thus i won't check any of your techniques. if you did this again you will be punished.
    Resubmitting all.
    I removed the jutsus that were linked to the weapon.

    ]Ninja Art:Heavenly Light(Ninjutsu:Ten No Hikari)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:E
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:5
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user will first perform one handseal,Dog,then sslam their hands together as they're hands seperate a ball of chakra will be formed this ball will then be slamed into any surface causing an explosion of sorts causing a huge burst of light that's even brighter than a normal flash bomb.



    Restriction/Notes
    -Can only be taught by sonnelion.
    -Blindness lasts for one battle phase.
    -Require one turn breaks between use.
    -Doesn't affect people with doujutsu active.

    ~Declined~ This is clearly not the effects of an E-ranked technique, and you can't cause pure chakra to release this kind of light, blindness lasting for a whole battle phase is too much.

    Ninja Art: Demon Smoke Bomb(Ninjutsuni Kemuri Kumo)
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:E
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:5
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user will perform one handseal,Rabbit,then grab two smoke bombs and channel chakra into them then as normal they will throw them to trigger them and as they explode because of the chakra infused the user will be able to control it to an extent the smoke will be spread wider and form several demon heads at the end of the smoke cloud.
    Restrictions/Notes
    -Can only be taught by sonnelion.
    -Require one turn breaks between use.
    -Doujutsu users will be able to see through the smoke.
    -Lasts until the end of the opponent's battle phase unless dealt with.
    -The user can make openings in the smoke since it's his chakra.
    *It's a dark black color and disperses at a even rate in a complete circle*


    -Also the cloud's height is 14 feet high.

    ~Declined~ This is exclusive to bios that have access to Smoke Ninjutsu, and not the effects of an E-ranked techniques, also you don't infuse chakra into smoke bombs to trigger them, they release the smoke when colliding with a solid surface.

    Heaven's/Hell's Call(Ten Ka Jigoku No Yobidashi)
    Type:Weapon
    Rank:C
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:N/A[+5 for each turn chakra imbued for each weapon]
    Damage:20[+10 when ability active]
    Description:Heaven's call is a 8 feet wide and tall cross pike weapon that is composed of chakra absorbing metal and steel with a blue design on each of the four blades.Heaven's call has the ability to be imbued with chakra and once imbued the blades will be surrounded by lightning and can paralyze if a hit lands.It also has the ability when thrown to release the chakra in the shape of a lightning saw equal to a C-rank lightning technique.When thrown the cross pike will return to the user at 20 mph.


    Hell's Call is a 8 feet wide and tall cross pike weapon that is composed of chakra absorbing metal and steel with a red design on each of the four blades.Hell's call has the ability to be imbued with chakra and once imbued the blades will heat up to the point that it is on fire and glowing red hot,but not to the point that it will lose it's strength.The blades also will b surrounded by fire balls that follow the blades.Hell's call can be thrown just like heavens call and use a similar attack.

    Note
    -Can be used at the same time or by themselves.
    -Have to be summoned to use.
    -Costs 2 chakra to summon one of the weapons.

    Heaven's Call

    Hell's Call




    ~Declined~ No they can't be used at the same time, they both require different chakra natures, so you'd need Yin/Yang to wield them and use their abilities simultaneously, each of the weapon's abilities needs to have a usage limit, and to count towards the 3 moves per turn, also it needs to be more than a C-rank.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Earth Release: Dragon Core Decaptiation(Doton Doragon Shin Funkei)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description: The user perform Six hand seals and then proceeds to channel a great deal of Doton chakra and a small ammount of Raiton chakra into the ground below the opponent,the user then merges the small ammount of Raiton in the Doton forming Earth with a small paraletic effect,The user then slams their hands on the ground and Two claws come out of the ground latching onto the opponents arms and shocking them leaving them momentarily Shocked by the Ration.After this a spike in the shape of a dragons head and neck petrudes the ground and stabs the opponent in the throat,the finishing move ends up looking like a dragon embracing the opponent.

    *Need to have Doton Learnt up to A rank
    *Need to have Raiton At B rank Or higher

    *No other Doton or Raiton Techniques can be used in the same turn
    *No Doton or raiton Techniques can be used for the next two turns
    *Can be Cancled With a Higher level Earth or Raiton technique
    *Can only be Taught By Delta

    ~Declined~ Using 2 elemental chakra natures simultaneously requires Yin/Yang training, and please don't use these useless "restrictions"
     
         
    Last edited by Ryūjin; 02-20-2013 at 08:54 AM.

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