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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    Resubmitting Alucards Dropped Grand Inhaling Maw.


    Meiton: Yuuen Kyūketsukō| Dark Release: Grand Inhaling Maw
    Rank: S
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: -
    Description: This technique is a stronger version of Dark Release: Inhaling Maw, used only to absorb high ranked techniques. It follows the same concept, however, instead of just one hand to perform, the user will need to use both. He will point his palms together in the direction of the incoming technique and will then absorb it. This is this technique's weakness: since the user needs both hands to perform it, he will be more vulnerable to a surprise attack, being unable to perform an adequate defense most of the times. The absorbed technique can then be released via Dark Release: Judgement or Dark Release: Imperial Judgement.

    Note: Usable twice per battle
    Note: There must be a gap of at least one turn between each usage
    Note: Can only absorb techniques up to S-rank or combos made of techniques up to A-rank

    X-Declined-X And where is your permission to resubmit this?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Water Release: Dancing Shruiken(Suiton:Jigoku Shuriken Wo Dansu)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will perform the dog hand seal then wave either their left or right hand as they do this shuriken made of water that is hardened using the users chakra ,similar to the way water dagger jutsu works, the shuriken will spin at 20 miles an hour as they are formed in front of the user, the shuriken are 8 inches wide and a inch thick,then the user will push their hand foward causing 10 shuriken grouped together at first to launch at the opponent and can be controlled,but can only change direction once.
    Notes/Restrictions
    -Require one turn breaks
    -Doesn't require a water source
    -Can only be taught by Sonnelion

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    Water Release: Heavens Scattering Shot(Suiton:Shotto Wo Sanran Ten)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description:The user will perform the dog and tiger handseals then after inhaling, as the inhale happens water from thin air forms around the users mouth in the shape of a ball of rapidly spinning water, the user will send towards their enemy with great speed,20 mph,that the user will cause to split up ,by crossing their arms, into 6 blasts of rapidly moving water blasts that will converge onto one target from all angles,except above.
    Notes/Restrictions
    -Can only be used 4 times a battle
    -Can only be taught by Sonnelion
    -Require 2 turn breaks between use
    -Each blast of water deals 5 damage

    X-Approved-X

    Water Release:God's Tears(Suiton: Kami No Namida)
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: The user will perform one handseal, ram, then release their chakra into the sky then after the clouds form the user will cross their arms while bringing them down towards the ground as this happens it triggers multiple blasts of water to fall from the sky and the only safe place is the one foot diameter formed around the users body.
    Notes/Restrictions
    -Can only be taught by Sonnelion
    -Lasts for one battle phase
    -Can only be used twice
    -Each blast of water does 3 damage by itself
    -Takes one battle phase for the clouds to form
    -Have to post it twice and counts as one of the three allowed jutsus
    -Isn't impossible to dodge but very difficult due to it raining downward for a period of time
    X-Declined-X OP-ed for C rank
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Reborn View Post
    Link to Contract approval

    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Senjo Karakaru (Summoning Technique: Nymphs of the Caracals)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Nymphs, are a select group of isolated female Caracals within the Caracal Sanctuary. In order to summon these special Caracals, the user will need to preform a unique sequence of hand seals: Tiger → Upside down Tiger → Ram → Half Tiger seal (Seal of Confrontation). With the last seal, the user will place the seal on the left side of his chest where his heart is. At that moment, the users body from the neck below, will become engulfed in a cloud of smoke and once cleared, the sexually ravenous females will appear suggestively holding the user against their bodies. These Caracals are summoned in a transformed state they take when they're summoned for battle. They take on the appearance of ordinary female humans while maintaining some feline features like their ears, tails, and their whiskers. They are capable of speech, however when they speak, most of their comments are usually sexual in nature. These females are amongst the strongest and most dangerous of the Caracal species due to their unique trait and abilities that only reside within them. These females are in constant heat meaning they are constantly sexually excited. Why these felines remain in such a state is a mystery even among the Caracals, but it has given birth, to a unique ability. Because of their constant sexual arousal, these Caracals release a pheromone that sexually excites the males of the species. The affects of the pheromones on their own species has caused the other members of the species to isolate these members from the rest of the species which only increases their frustration. With their proficiency in genjutsu, these Caracals have learned to mix their chakra with their chemicals and have it act as a medium for their special genjutsu. Their special technique is the ability cast a genjutsu that imitates the same powerful arousal in any other animals including humans and other summoning animals. The genjutsu creates intense insatiable feelings which creates a difficulty for those captured to focus on anything other than their arousal. The illusion also creates suggestive image flashes in the minds of opponents that act as brief lapses of the moment to distract those captured within the genjutsu. This genjutsu ability is the equivalent to a B-rank, however, due to the affects of the genjutsu being mixed in with the pheromones of the Caracals, once the illusion is cast, the captured will remain in the genjutsu so long as they are in the Pheromone's range. However, the isolation from contact has made the four females competitive with one another whenever they are summoned. As a result, for the sake of stability they are normally split apart from one another.

    ~Each Caracal has ¼ the chakra of a Kage, meaning 350 and can only use Genjutsu techniques up to B-rank including their own special technique.
    ~Their special genjutsu technique is activated through their special call which is a “meow” that is sighed in a somewhat sensual manor. The genjutsu is activated up to mid-range costing the chakra of a B-rank technique and the technique remains active until victims exit the range with an additional cost of 10 to them to maintain active.
    ~The genjutsu's affects make it difficult for those captured to focus disallowing them to use techniques above S-rank.
    ~Every 2 turns, the Caracals can create a brief image in the minds of those captured within the illusion that distorts/distracts the victim by affecting their senses and counts as one of the three moves per turn, however this effect can be shaken off like any other illusion.
    ~Only three members of the Nymphs can be summoned per battle, however only two can be summoned at a time. Also, only one Caracal can be paired with a specific bio due to the Caracal's competitive nature towards one another.
    ~Other bios, not related to the user, can be partnered with these Caracals if necessary.
    ~No other Caracals can be summoned while these four are on the field.
    ~These four remain on the battle field for until 90% of their chakra (315) have been used, by which point they would be exhausted and will return to their sanctuary.

    ||Declined|| I feel as though this is slightly lacking in restriction, as this genjutsu is pretty powerful, assuming the pheromone can only be avoided by escaping the range of the technique. Otherwise, good.
    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Senjo Karakaru (Summoning Technique: Nymphs of the Caracals)
    Type: Summoning
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The Nymphs, are a select group of isolated female Caracals within the Caracal Sanctuary. In order to summon these special Caracals, the user will need to preform a unique sequence of hand seals: Tiger → Upside down Tiger → Ram → Half Tiger seal (Seal of Confrontation). With the last seal, the user will place the seal on the left side of his chest where his heart is. At that moment, the users body from the neck below, will become engulfed in a cloud of smoke and once cleared, the sexually ravenous females will appear suggestively holding the user against their bodies. These Caracals are summoned in a transformed state they take when they're summoned for battle. They take on the appearance of ordinary female humans while maintaining some feline features like their ears, tails, and their whiskers. They are capable of speech, however when they speak, most of their comments are usually sexual in nature. These females are amongst the strongest and most dangerous of the Caracal species due to their unique trait and abilities that only reside within them. These females are in constant heat meaning they are constantly sexually excited. Why these felines remain in such a state is a mystery even among the Caracals, but it has given birth, to a unique ability. Because of their constant sexual arousal, these Caracals release a pheromone that sexually excites the males of the species. The affects of the pheromones on their own species has caused the other members of the species to isolate these members from the rest of the species which only increases their frustration. With their proficiency in genjutsu, these Caracals have learned to mix their chakra with their chemicals and have it act as a medium for their special genjutsu. Their special technique is the ability cast a genjutsu that imitates the same powerful arousal in any other animals including humans and other summoning animals. The genjutsu creates intense insatiable feelings which creates a difficulty for those captured to focus on anything other than their arousal. The illusion also creates suggestive image flashes in the minds of opponents that act as brief lapses of the moment to distract those captured within the genjutsu. This genjutsu ability is the equivalent to a B-rank, however, due to the affects of the genjutsu being mixed in with the pheromones of the Caracals, once the illusion is cast, the captured will remain in the genjutsu so long as they are in the Pheromone's range. However, the isolation from contact has made the four females competitive with one another whenever they are summoned. As a result, for the sake of stability they are normally split apart from one another.

    ~Each Caracal has ¼ the chakra of a Kage, meaning 350 and can only use Genjutsu techniques up to B-rank including their own special technique. However, when their special genjutsu is active they cannot use genjutsu techniques above C-rank
    ~Their genjutsu special genjutsu, once activated, will only last for four turns unless released prematurely and the activation of the genjutsu can only happen twice per battle
    ~Their special genjutsu technique is activated through their special call which is a “meow” that is sighed in a somewhat sensual manor. The genjutsu is activated up to mid-range costing the chakra of a B-rank technique and the technique remains active until victims exit the range with an additional cost of 10 to them to maintain active.
    ~The genjutsu's affects make it difficult for those captured to focus disallowing them to use techniques above S-rank.
    ~Every 2 turns, the Caracals can create a brief image in the minds of those captured within the illusion that distorts/distracts the victim by affecting their senses and counts as one of the three moves per turn, however this effect can be shaken off like any other illusion.
    ~Only three members of the Nymphs can be summoned per battle, however only two can be summoned at a time. Also, only one Caracal can be paired with a specific bio due to the Caracal's competitive nature towards one another.
    ~Other bios, not related to the user, can be partnered with these Caracals if necessary.
    ~No other Caracals can be summoned while these four are on the field.
    ~These four remain on the battle field for until 90% of their chakra (315) have been used, by which point they would be exhausted and will return to their sanctuary.

    ~Declined~ I will not allow a genjutsu that when activated can't be released, once one is released from the genjutsu they will stay that way, it's like how the Temple Of Nirvana technique works, even though you are constantly applying genjutsu effects to the field, once you are out of it you aren't caught in it once more, as this is now it isn't acceptable

    Do-Fuuton: Dokuyaku Jibeta (Earth/Wind Release: Poison of the Earth)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user of this technique will first begin the activation of this technique with the Snake hand seal, activating his earth chakra, channeling it into the earth mid-ranged/long-ranged from their position. The user will then complete the jutsu by using the Bird → Dragon seals to activate their wind chakra. The last two hand seals allow for the user to activate their wind chakra from underground and have the winds rise up. With the last seal the user will cause a large mass of condensed wind, mixed with the minerals from the earth beneath to rise from the ground. The winds rise almost like a dense wall capable of blocking B-ranked earth techniques. The earthly minerals mixed within the wind are all hazardous and poisonous (minerals like Orpiment and Cinnabar) and their mixing with the wind essentially creates a noxious gas. Once the dense wall of noxious gas rises it will immediately disperse in a strong gust in every direction, releasing the poisonous gas. The gas only needs to enter any open pour to take effect (inhalation, open wounds, etc). The effects happen in phases, the first phase upon entering the body is severe distortion of the vision and equilibrium and difficulty in breathing. The second stage is loss of consciousness and eventually death.
    ~Can only be used Twice per battle
    ~Gas remains on the field for three turns unless dispersed
    ~No S-ranked earth or wind techniques can be used in the following turn.
    ~With the creation of the Tiger seal, the user can manipulate the wind but only if the user/gas comes within close range of each other
    ~Within the first turn the victims will feel distortion and unbalance in their equilibrium which prevents them from using techniques S-rank and above. In the second turn the victims will fall unconscious and the third turn, they will die.
    ~If the user has an affinity to wind, the second set of hand seals can be done using only one seal.

    ~Declined~ OP, it also requires Yin/Yang, don't resubmit.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Typhon View Post
    Summoning Animal: Tanuki (Raccoon Dog)
    Scroll Owner: Typhon
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
    Description and Background: Raccoon Dogs, despite their common names, are not closely related to Raccoons nor are they actually dogs. Instead they are a basal species in the Canidae family and one of the few that like to climb trees. Their bodies are similar in shape and size to foxes with a long body but short legs. The fur coloration is very similar to Raccoons which led to the poor misnomer of a name. In Japanese culture the Raccoon Dog goes by the name "Tanuki" and is a common figure in classic folklore. They are often depicted with big round eyes, a pudgy build, and enlarged....how should I say this.... cojones. They're used to represent a trickster, and are considered talented shape-shifters, but are presented in a light-hearted and aloof manner.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Raccoon_dog

    The Tanuki of this contract generally stand on two feet like humans growing on average to the same size as a typical person. They're not the most physically fit species and often develop strong attachments to sake that leads to being overweight. Despite their physical short comings they're talented users of genjutsu and fuuinjutsu, staying true to their reputation as tricksters. Upon discovery of the Ichibi, the Tanuki immediately became drawn to the tailed beast which shared their form, though on a much larger and monstrous scale. They began to worship Shukaku as a God, and the creator of all Tanuki. Even the vessel for the Ichibi became worshiped and revered as a holy figure. This infatuation with the Ichibi led to the Tanuki moving their village to the deserts around Sunagakure. They found an abnormally large oasis in the western half of the desert which became their homes. The new village became known as the "Hachi-takioashisu" or "Eight-Falls Oasis", named after the eight waterfalls that supplied the water. Travelers lucky enough to stumble upon this paradise often can't remember the details of their stay due to the large amount of sake forced upon them, but they swear it to be the best time of their life.

    (I no longer own the Lyrebird contract as I handed it over to Himura here: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=320271)

    ~Declined~ Remove the genjutsu and fuuinjutsu reference, not going to allow genjutsu to be a passive ability for a contract, nor fuuinjutsu is going to be allowed for a summon to use.

    (Subakukaze no Jutsu: Suna no Jikoku) - Desert Wind Technique: Sands of Time
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Gaara mixes the hardest minerals of his sand with a very strong current of wind that swirls at incredible high speeds emitting a howling sound. He then envelopes his target in the storm where the sand particles whip into the target and grind them away. This technique can be used to devour an earth technique by having the sand almost immediately grind down the earth into even more sand, adding to the volume of the attack and making it even more deadly.
    -Can only be used by Gaara.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -Devouring an earth technique increases the damage by 1/3 the power of the technique used (i.e. an A-rank tech would add 20 dmg).

    (Bijutsu: Subakukazedama) - Tailed Beast Skill: Desert Wind Bomb
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80 (+20)
    Description: After going into either his initial, or full transformation, Gaara uses the principles of the tailed beast bomb to create a similarly devastating attack. He arcs his tail over his body holding the tip in front of his mouth and begins to construct a highly compressed ball of wind and sand. Once made Gaara fires the ball at his target where on impact it erupts into a giant storm of wind and and that shreds apart everything caught within it. The scope of this storm is the same as the explosive radius of a typical tailed beast bomb, leaving a large barren field covered with sand in its wake.
    -Can be used once per transformation.
    -Can be used in the initial or full transformation.
    -Damage is boosted by +20 if used during the full transformation.
    -No Sand or Wind techniques above S-rank the following turn.

    ~Leaving both for Scorps~
    (Reminder: Second two still haven't been checked)


    Summoning Animal: Tanuki (Raccoon Dog)
    Scroll Owner: Typhon
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
    Description and Background: Raccoon Dogs, despite their common names, are not closely related to Raccoons nor are they actually dogs. Instead they are a basal species in the Canidae family and one of the few that like to climb trees. Their bodies are similar in shape and size to foxes with a long body but short legs. The fur coloration is very similar to Raccoons which led to the poor misnomer of a name. In Japanese culture the Raccoon Dog goes by the name "Tanuki" and is a common figure in classic folklore. They are often depicted with big round eyes, a pudgy build, and enlarged....how should I say this.... cojones. They're used to represent a trickster, and are considered talented shape-shifters, but are presented in a light-hearted and aloof manner.
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Raccoon_dog

    The Tanuki of this contract generally stand on two feet like humans growing on average to the same size as a typical person. They're not the most physically fit species and often develop strong attachments to sake that leads to being overweight. Upon discovery of the Ichibi, the Tanuki immediately became drawn to the tailed beast which shared their form, though on a much larger and monstrous scale. They began to worship Shukaku as a God, and claimed he was the creator of all Tanuki. Even the vessel for the Ichibi became worshiped and revered as a holy figure. This infatuation with the Ichibi led to the Tanuki moving their village to the deserts around Sunagakure. They found an abnormally large oasis in the western half of the desert which became their homes. The new village became known as the "Hachi-takioashisu" or "Eight-Falls Oasis", named after the eight waterfalls that supplied the water. Travelers lucky enough to stumble upon this paradise often can't remember the details of their stay due to the large amount of sake forced upon them, but they swear it to be the best time of their life.

    X-Approved-X

    Removed the sentence.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (jigoku no goudatsusha )- Hell Reaver
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 80
    Description: A Polearm With spikes on the edge of the hilt and the bottom of the blade, along with 2 jagged spikes on the up most side. With the blade glowing with a red aura the hilt of the polearm is made entirely of a thick cylinder shaped wood. (Hashirama made it for me ).

    Restrictions :
    - Made by Me with the assistance of a wood release bio to make to make the hilt for more sturdiness.
    - Only members of the Hozuki clan and My bios can use this weapon and its duplicates (see above restriction)

    ~Declined~ I don't see why you want this, it doesn't have any special characteristics, custom weapons should be unique to generic weapons, it should have abilities unique to it as well.

    ( Genjutsu: kageno tejixyun ) - Illusion Technique: shadow steps
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: After performing the hand seals tiger, Rabbit, ox, horse, the user focuses their chakra into their opponent causing a distribution of the brain waves which not only slows the opponent's movements, but also makes it appear to them that you are moving 50% of the speed your actually moving.

    Restrictions :
    - Must know atleast 1 D-rank Genjutsu technique.
    - Only teachable by Saikyokage
    - Only usable once every 3 turns.







    ~Declined~ Similar techniques exist, this is definitely not a D-rank as well.

    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Solf J. Kimblee View Post
    I will be dropping the weapon in the quote. Here is where it was approved------> http://narutobase.net/forums/showpos...postcount=5631





    (Mizu Beara) Water Bearers
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: These Water Bearers was created by Solf to have a unique water weapon in battle. He made two hilts that are called Bearers. The Bearers are made of a material so the user can channel their chakra and manipulate water sources or even the moister in the air for varies objects such as weapons, shields on top of them. These two hilts are the perfect weapon for a weapon user and water user. The user channels their chakra and absorbs some water or moister in the air. The highest the rank of the object that is made of water is A rank or lower.
    -Only used when the air has enough moister to make the weapon of chose of the user or a some type of water source is in the area of short range of the user to use to use to make the weapon of chose of the user and must have the user chakra in it or no chakra at all.
    -The weapons made from the water still go by the elemental advantages and disadvantages
    -The weapons also feel like the real weapon when used
    -The user has to use a jutsu slot everytime the user uses the weapon no matter if it is to attacking or defending, the change of the shape depends on the attack or defense like for an example. The user going against a fireball and the user has the bearers shaped into katanas but the user needs to defend. The user would change the katanas into a rectangler shield to defend against the attack.



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    Sealing Arts: Shine Bright (Fuuinjutsu: Akaruku Kagayaku)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user after having Fuuin for a year, makes a tattoo on both of their arms that reacts with their chakra. The only way the tattoos react to the user chakra is when it is irregular. The tattoos glow a white light down the whole tattoo when the user chakra is irregular. The light is bright enough to see when not even looking at the arms. The user can see the light from the corner of their eyes.
    -Must be posted in the bio or beginning of the battle
    -Must have fuuin for a year because they need the experience to developed such sealing tattoos on themselves.
    -The purpose of this jutsu is when someone places the user in a genjutsu of any type, the user can be notice by the light they are in a genjutsu

    How they look when they glow but it will be brighter then it is in the pic



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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. This already exists.

    Water Style: Help From the Deep (Suiton: Dīpu Kara Herupu)
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack/Defense/supplementary
    Chakra Cost: 40 (30 per post to keep active)
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user releases their water chakra around them. The user forms eight tentacles and a head of a Octopus, Jellyfish, or Squid. The user is standing right behind the two front tentacles while the rest a spread around them. The head of the animal they choose is behind them. When the jutsu is active, the user can't focused on no more jutsus expect this one. The user can have a summon or a partner to help them out but no clones of the user. When this is active, the user clones if they have any are dispersed so the user has all their chakra. The user can use this jutsu as defense and attacks, even as a way to avoid jutsus(not sure about this one) and each does count as moves.

    -The user can't move from the area inside of the tentacles and head so the user can move around in that space but not out of it
    -The user can repair this jutsu if it is damaged(counts as a move also)
    -Last for five turns
    -No other jutsus can be used by the user while this is active
    -No water jutsus for three turns after the last turn this is used
    -The user can't use A rank or higher jutsu after this jutsu is over because of the chakra it drains each turn

    How it looks


    http://www.animeflavor.com/node/12650

    starts on 13:59 till 14:15 on any of the videos but the first video is the fastest a nd the last one.


    If this gets approved, I will make jutsus that will go with it so I can use it for attacks, defense, avoid(not sure about this on) and repair its self.

    X-Leaving for someone else-X

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Don't resubmit. Already made.
    Updating this weapon with the bold

    Mizu Beara) Water Bearers
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: These Water Bearers was created by Solf to have a unique water weapon in battle. He made two hilts that are called Bearers. The Bearers are made of a material so the user can channel their chakra and manipulate water sources or even the moister in the air for varies objects such as weapons, shields on top of them. These two hilts are the perfect weapon for a weapon user and water user. The user channels their chakra and absorbs some water or moister in the air. The highest the rank of the object that is made of water is A rank or lower. The Bearers can also be channeled with raw chakra making it the same affects and ranking system as if it was channeled with water. This ability can only be used six times per match. This would be easier on the user when the user doesn't have enough water source to build an object with.
    -Only used when the air has enough moister to make the weapon of chose of the user or a some type of water source is in the area of short range of the user to use to use to make the weapon of chose of the user and must have the user chakra in it or no chakra at all.
    -The weapons made from the water still go by the elemental advantages and disadvantages
    -The weapons also feel like the real weapon when used
    -The user has to use a jutsu slot everytime the user uses the weapon no matter if it is to attacking or defending, the change of the shape depends on the attack or defense like for an example. The user going against a fireball and the user has the bearers shaped into katanas but the user needs to defend. The user would change the katanas into a rectangler shield to defend against the attack.
    -The Bearers can connect at the ends of each other
    -Raw chakra usage only six times per match



    X-Pending-X Resubmit it with a better explanation of the bolded part, i didn't get it. But even if i try to it will still be hard to understand for your opponents during battles.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kinjutsu Suiton: Itami Gisei) Forbidden Water Release: Sacrificial Pain.
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage points: 90
    Description: Before or After making contact with an opponent the user will drawl water from there own body and form small thin yet dense spikes as thin as needles stick out throughout there body or designated area of the user. This will form a defensive lair of countless needles that can easily pierce into an opponent. When these needles stab into an opponent they take old keeping the opponent stuck in the connected area almost like glue, although this is causes by small barbs located at the ends of each spike. Upon the users will they can release the water outwards in a large blast that will blast back the opponent causing extreme crushing power and force sending them flying backwards. Because of the use of the users own water within his body this Jutsu causes extreme dehydration. This makes the user feel drained and dizzy as well as blurs his vision stunting his ability to see well. This will also cause the user to look slightly "aged" after use of this Jutsu.
    Note:
    -Can only be used one time per battle
    -Dehydration last for two turns
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

    X-Approved-X

    (Fuuton: Teikiatsu) Wind Release: Cyclone
    Type: Attack/Defence
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will make a single handseal while focus chakra and exhaling out of there nose. This will release a large wave of wind that spreads out in a 360 degree area. This Technique is strong enough to blast away large summoning and picks up a lot of dust if used on solid ground causing a massive dust cloud to cover the battlefield.
    Note:
    -Can only be used twice time per battle
    -Requires a three turn cool down.
    -Dust cloud last for the fallowing two turns.
    -Cannot use Fuuton above A-rank next turn
    -This Jutsu can only be taught by Serpent

    X-Declined-X Existing technique
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Doton: Doro Yubi Funsha Kei - Earth Style: Mud Finger Jet Whip
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: An alternate earth release where the user compresses mud into his fingers then shoots out fast concentrated mud which are still connected to the finger through an elastic and glossy thin line of mud. The tip of the whip is made of dense mud with a cone shape while the lines connecting the cone shaped tips to the fingers are light, flexible and elastic wires of mud with glossy appearance and ancient markings on the body. The jet while been shot, can be manouvred in mid air before it hits an obstacle. it can be disconnected or retracted back into the fingers at the user's will but making another shot after it is being called back into the fingers will count as another move. 10 jets can be shot at a time with the 10 fingers while this is upto the user, he can reduce the amount of jets he wants to shoot by using less fingers.
    ++Must be taught by Priest
    ++Useable 5 times per match
    ++Re-shooting after retracting back into the fingers counts as a move

    X-Approved-X

    Quote Originally Posted by Priest View Post


    Summoning Animal: Hooded Pitohui(Pitohui dichrous)
    Scroll Owner: Priest
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
    Arwin
    Kulios
    Seth
    Description and Background:
    Origin:

    Hooded Pituhois live and Originates from the tropical rainforests and jungles of Modakeke from the lower forests to sea level.

    General Description:
    Hooded Pitohui, members of the family Corvidae (crows, ravens, jays, etc.), are beautiful passerines, i.e., songbirds. Their wing, head, and tail feathers are black and their back and belly feathers orange. They have black legs ending in sharp claws and a black beak that is strong and sharp. Male and female birds have the same coloration. When threatened, these birds erect
    their head feathers to form a crest.
    Their sizes varies from younglings to Adult birds. Some averaging sizes of a normal raven bird while others are as big as peins bird.
    Hooded Pitohuis are omnivorous, feeding on a
    variety of berries and insects.
    This species were the first documented poisonous birds. The poisons found in the birds' skin and feathers, A neurotoxin called homobatrachotoxin which for the most part, cause numbness and tingling, sneezing
    and other minor symptoms when touched.
    Serious side effects such as paralysis and
    death would occur if you came in contact with a higher quantity of this poison. They acquire its poison from part of its food, the Choresine beetles. the exact same poison that is found in the slightly more famous “Poison Dart Frogs”.

    Summon General Abilities:
    Hooded Pitohuis have chakra of their own and some are with elemental chakra, coupled with special characteristics that come with their different specific features, they have a general ability known to all of them though the power level of the ability may vary due to size.
    1. Hooded Pitohuis are song birds. They hum irregular tunes to which when heard, disrupts the chakra of the victims puting them in a kind of trance-like state(Genjutsu would be submitted as Pitohui Art)
    2. They secrete a paralysing odour which anybody who hasn't signed the contract is endangered to. All Pitohuis can secrete neurotoxin gas into the enviroment by flapping their wings and grooming their feathers which causes tingling, numbing, paralysis & cardiac arrest for longer inhalation and eventually death.
    Hooded Pitohui
    Toxic Songbird

    ~Declined~ Remove the general abilities, this means that it's a passive ability used by all summons of the contract, but if you want an ability your gonna have to submit it as a separate CJ one way or the other, and the abilities pertain to the summon should be all included in the summoning's description.


    Summoning Animal: Hooded Pitohui(Pitohui dichrous)
    Scroll Owner: Priest
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
    Arwin
    Kulios
    Seth
    Description and Background:
    Origin:

    Hooded Pituhois live and Originates from the tropical rainforests and jungles of Modakeke from the lower forests to sea level located Northeast of KIri.

    General Description:
    Hooded Pitohui, members of the family Corvidae (crows, ravens, jays, etc.), are beautiful passerines, i.e., songbirds. Their wing, head, and tail feathers are black and their back and belly feathers orange. They have black legs ending in sharp claws and a black beak that is strong and sharp. Male and female birds have the same coloration. When threatened, these birds erect
    their head feathers to form a crest.
    Their sizes varies from younglings to Adult birds. Some averaging sizes of a normal raven bird while others are as big as peins bird.
    Hooded Pitohuis are omnivorous, feeding on a
    variety of berries and insects.
    This species were the first documented poisonous birds. The poisons found in the birds' skin and feathers, A neurotoxin called homobatrachotoxin which for the most part, cause numbness and tingling, sneezing
    and other minor symptoms when touched.
    Serious side effects such as paralysis and
    death would occur if you came in contact with a higher quantity of this poison. They acquire its poison from part of its food, the Choresine beetles. the exact same poison that is found in the slightly more famous “Poison Dart Frogs”.

    ~Approved~ keep in mind that that "poision" would cause death if it was an ordinary summon, just numbness, you'll have to mention in the submission of the custom animals of this contract whether it has the amount of poison that can kill or not if you want that effect.

    Quote Originally Posted by Priest View Post
    Genjutsu: Waga Honmei Jibutsu - Illusion Style: My Favourite Things
    Type: Sup
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: The target is lured into a genjutsu after 3 handseals where he finds himself in a dreamworld (Totally white environment which looks like a flash light is been used) filled with floating fluffy Golden teddy bears. The teddy bears glow with entraping glare to which causes a kind of hypnosis. A mental growth deficiency where the opponent would think and act based on their childhood, their toys, playpen, they want to make a sand castle, walk naked and even cry. Their feeling is mesmerized and emotions enchanted making them feel like touching the soft and furry skin of the hovering teddies, grab them to their bossom and cuddle it till they fall asleep. In real life, opponent/s are in a dormant state, pertrified and goes into a deep sleep after 2 turns.
    Note:
    ++Can't affect multiple targets at once
    ++Useable Twice per match
    ++ Must be taught by Priest
    ++Opponent stays paralysed for two turns in which they fall asleep after that.

    ~Declined~ The colored portions are Sharingan genjutsu abilities not normal genjutsu ones, you can't force the opponent to do this and that with a normal genjutsu, only the Sharingan genjutsu can do that.
    Genjutsu: Yue soshite Tegotae - Illusion Style: Cause and Effect
    Type: Sup
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Point: N/A
    Description: The target is lured into a genjutsu after 3 handseals where he finds himself in a dreamworld (Totally white environment which looks like a flash light is been used) filled with floating fluffy Golden teddy bears. The teddy bears glow with entraping glare of white silverish light that flickers and upon direct contact with the opponent's eyes causing high frequency light penetration into their eyes. The sense of sight would interprete the penetration of light to be true and also its adverse effect. this is similar to the mind making believe someone is being crushed in respect to "Crushing snake contriction illusion". Due to penetration of light from the teddies, an effect called entoptic phenomenon is caused; tiny mesh of blood vessels grow outwards from the pheriphral side of the eyeballs spreading all over the eyeballs while the line of sight becomes blury. this could cause involuntry blinking of the eyes repeated(3-5 times) to correct the defect, however this would not force the opponent to blink but he might feel it is the right thing to do to clear the blury vision(some may even wipe their hand across their face or rub their eyes with their index finger). This illusion have physical basis in the image cast upon the retina. Hence, it is different from optical illusions.
    Note:
    ++Can't affect multiple targets at once
    ++Useable Twice per match
    ++ Must be taught by Priest

    ~Declined~ It still follows the same aspect as a visual illusion, the colored portion is pretty generic and vague.

    X-Pending-X Leaving for Dante
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Kyouheki Suke-ringu Suihou) Water Release: Parapet Scaling Bubbles
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This technique, after performing the ox hand seal, allows the user to assemble water from the moister in the ground or the humidity in the air, forming of up to 5 dense spheres of water. These spheres are strong enough to support the weight of an average sized shinobi, allowing one to hop from one to the other. Though once the shinobi pushes off of the sphere, the amount of resistance the sphere has to put up with is too big and thus they collapse. The spheres are 1x1 in diameter and only 20 centimeters thick, just strong enough to hold a shinobi on top of it. The spheres stay on the field until a shinobi has been standing on top of them. And due to the shinobi being capable of controlling the spheres at will, it allows one to climb up tall edifices or across gaps with tremendous ease or escaping from the ground.
    Note:
    - Can be used twice per battle
    - Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya

    X-Approved-X

    (Suiton: Poseidon Rippuku) Water Release: Poseidon’s Anger
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: This technique allows the user to release a massive amount of chakra into a large water source on the battlefield, which contains at least 4 cubic meters of water, after performing a single hand seal. And using the large amount of chakra in the water, the user will force the water to ripple and progressively get worse until they begin making violent waves, vicious currents or both. This technique is not an attack as such but makes moving about in water or on water almost impossible because of the effects.
    Note:
    - Can be used twice per battle
    - Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya
    - Needs a water source

    X-Declined-X Too generic?

    (Suiton: Mori Hando) Water Release: Helping Hands
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user will perform the Tiger – Ox hand sequence, whereas the user will pour their chakra into an existing water source which contains at least 3 cubic meters, and by doing so the user will perform the tiger hand seal and the water will when coming into contact with an object or person explode outwards with a surge of water. This surge of water will blast out and entangle, strangle, crush and drown the person.
    Note:
    - Can be used twice per battle
    - Can only be taught by Gutsy Jiraiya
    - Needs a water source

    X-Approved-X
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Sea Urchins
    Scroll Owner: Chime
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: The Urchins live on the Blue Fire Reef found along the natural harbors of the Fire Country. The younger Urchins live near the surface of the oceans, while the ancients live so deep that none but the strongest shinobi have ever managed to summon them. Sea urchins are small, spiny, slow moving, globular animals colored black and dull shades of green, olive, brown, purple, blue, and red. They are capable of surviving without a water source when the user summons them. Their spines are able to individually be controlled and either extend or contract on will, extending up to short range. The spines are also poisonous, and produce immediate stinging and paralyzation in the affected region two turns after the physical contact.

    ~Pending~ Mention that it has to be summoned within a water source or an equivalent amount of water in respect to it's size for it to survive. nice one btw ^^

    Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Dīpuburū no Kyōdai | Summoning Technique: Brothers of the Blue Deep
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user weaves a hand seal, and summons two, six foot tall, blue sea urchins in any short range position around him. The Brothers of the Blue Deep insert their hollow spines into the ground, and begin siphoning any liquid or semi-fluid within mid-range of their position. Each can siphon up to an A-ranks worth of liquid into their spines, whether the liquid lay on or underground. (Counts as a single move for one or both to siphon) However, anything like lava will of course kill the Brothers after it has finished siphoning into their bodies. After taking liquid into their body, they can release it as a spray of said liquid through their spines. In the case the absorbed liquid is normal water, the user/urchins can use the water present as a water source for their techniques. The brothers can use water techniques up to A-rank. They also carry traits universal to all sea urchins. First, they are capable of surviving without a water source when the user summons them. Their spines are able to individually be controlled and either extend or contract on will, extending up to short range. The spines are also poisonous, and produce immediate stinging and then paralyzation in the affected region two turns after the physical contact.
    - Lasts 3 turns; Can be summoned twice per battle

    ~Pending~ Resubmit when the contract is approved.

    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Severus Snape- View Post
    (Ranton: Arashi no tsume) | Storm Release: Storm Claws
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: This technique is somewhat similar to (Fūton: Jūha Reppū Shō) - Wind Style: Beast Tearing Gale Palm, the user will focus his ranton chakra in his hands while performing the hanseals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger, creating one or two massive demonic-like claws that extend from the users hands, made of thunder clouds, that grab the target(s) and paralyse it completely while frying the opponents brain, leaving them incapable of doing anything.
    Note: Can only be taught by –Severus Snape-
    Note: No A-Ranked ad above lightning and water technique's in the same and next turn

    ~Declined~ the colored portion is a bit too much, it's a two simple claws, so this isn't supposed to be an S-rank, define the size of the claws, and how long does it last?
    ~Resubmitting
    (Ranton: Arashi no tsume) | Storm Release: Storm Claws
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: This technique is somewhat similar to (Fūton: Jūha Reppū Shō) - Wind Style: Beast Tearing Gale Palm, the user will focus his ranton chakra in his hands while performing the hanseals Rat → Tiger → Dog → Ox → Rabbit → Tiger, creating one or two massive demonic-like claws that extend from the users hands, made of thunder clouds and covered in lightning, that grab the target(s) and paralyse it completely.
    Note: Can only be taught by –Severus Snape-

    X-Approved-X

    ~Submitting
    (Hoippu Geijutsu: Mahi suimin) | Whip Arts: Numbing Sleep
    Type: Attack/Supplemtary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user flicks his whip, the sound of it placing the opponent into a genjutsu. After hearing the sound for the first time, the opponent will be set into a genjutsu where he feels slightly tired but nothing of actual concern. After hearing the sound for the second time the opponent will feel his limbs being heavy, painful to lift them. After the third time the sound is heard the opponent will
    become completely paralysed unable to move unless he somehow frees himself of the genjutsu.
    This can be applied to multiple targets due to the sound being the medium of the genjutsu.
    Note: Requires Hoippu Geijutsu training
    Note: Can only be taught by -Severus Snape-

    X-Declined-X Remove Damage and Reduce the rank. I'd do it myself but its getting annoying.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

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    (Doton: Ketsugō Kusari) - Earth Release: Binding Chains
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will manipulate the ground to form extremely durable chains that surreptitiously emerge from underneath the opponent, proceeding to bind the opponent by wrapping his legs and being pulled back into the ground to tighten the grip. Because the ground provides an unlimited supply of doton, the chains' size and length can be determined at will, making it possible to bind summon bosses and shinobi alike.
    Note:
    -This jutsu isn't to be used for launching chains into the air ground level, or in any fashion similar to chakra chains. But rather to form them from the ground and be kept on the ground until pulled back.
    -The user must remain in contact with the ground as the chains emerge.
    -Only usable 4 times per battle

    ~Declined~ I already said that i'm not going to accept this in the earlier submission, Earth Release isn't flexible to form chains that wrap around your opponent's body, that's a Wood Release ability.
    (Doton: Ketsugō Kusari) - Earth Release: Binding Rock Chains
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will manipulate the ground to form extremely durable chains made of stone that surreptitiously emerge from underneath the opponent, proceeding to bind the opponent by wrapping around his legs and being pulled back into the ground to tighten the grip. Because the ground provides an unlimited supply of doton, the chains' size and length can be determined at will, making it possible to bind summon bosses and shinobi alike.
    Note:
    -This jutsu is not to be used for launching chains into the air ground level, or in any fashion similar to chakra chains. But rather to form them from the ground and be kept on the ground until pulled back.
    -The user must remain in contact with the ground as the chains emerge.
    -Only usable 4 times per battle

    Sidenote: Real Life examples of chains crafted from rocks:
    http://www.anonmgur.com/up/529629629...93b55d243c.jpg
    http://www.anonmgur.com/up/5459179d1...edf493941e.JPG
    http://www.anonmgur.com/up/1f23895f8...1fccc66b94.jpg
    http://www.anonmgur.com/up/e57f67302...8a946abd40.jpg
    http://www.anonmgur.com/up/f6bef5cc4...fd7837abd.jpeg
    http://www.anonmgur.com/up/b102dd3b8...b6dd03202f.jpg

    X-Pending-X Leaving for Dante (Specifically)

    ~Declined~ Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Suiton: Heisha Sattou) Water Style: Chariot arrow Bombardment
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user preforms the *Snake* seal then releases a large amount of water from their mouth. The water forms into several chariots that Are all positioned in a long line.They then all from thelaunch 5 water senbon by their mouth.Depending on the sclae of the technique used the amout total shot varies.Upon doing so. The chariots are able to Charge at the opponent and. hit all at once or one at a time this causing the target to move around the constant battering of chariot. If a chariot hits the target, the target is hit with such force that they are pushed back and have several injuriesAnd if hit by the water senbon deeping cuts all over their body.

    Notes:
    - No water source required
    - Usable once per battle
    - only allowee max of 6 chariots.

    X-Approved-X

    (Kasu
    Rank:A
    Range:Mid-range
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user after performing 3 handseals will bite their thumbs and place them on opposite forearms. then lift their arms towards the enemy.Upon doing so relasing a dozen magpies from the users sleave.Which all upon impact explode creating a devestation explosion.The magpies are no bigger than that of a baby chiken so roughly 10cm by 5 cm making extremely hard to hit them with ninja weapons.They are also fast and agile.
    Restrictions
    ~Track the enemy for 1 turn
    ~Lasts 1 turn upon that they automaticly explode.
    ~Cant use any techniques.Only explode.
    ~Explode upon impact.

    Azula the Azure-winged Magpie
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:short-long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:It is roughly the size of pains bird summon which from the show seems to be 2-3 meter in length and 1-2 meters in width it has a shallow beak and slim body.It can shoot S rank water or below from its mouth/beak at enemies or objects.It is capable of holding 2 or less people on its back during flight.It can also protude chakra claws from its claws.Giving it the ability to cut through even the most dense of objects.It can in addition communicate with the summoner telepathicly.
    Restrictions:
    ~water blast counts towards users move limit
    ~summonable only once per battle.
    ~Remains in battle for 2 turns.

    X-Both Declined-X Link to summon?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Katon: Kagerō) - Fire Style: Heat Haze
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user starts by simply gathers a surprisingly large amount of fire chakra into the palm of both hands, while doing this the user will form the Tiger→ Hare hand seals. And after performing the two hand seals the user point both hand torwards the target it can also be used on multiple opponents and release a ocean of fire that speards out into the direction of the enemies having and enormous range on the ground and through the air. While traveling torwards the targets the ocean of inferno will violently rage (like the actual sea) and form into a many wave formations that corners the targets from every every direction. Making a circle of raging fire around the enemies thus enclosing them, while they burn.

    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Ichigo.
    ♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
    ♦ Note: The user cannot use any technique above A-Rank the following turn.

    X-Declined-X Generic
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    The Toad Sage Belt - Gama Seijin no Sanjaku
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A belt usable only by talented toad summoners, it takes years for the Gamabunta to entrust it to a loyal summoner. The built itself is usually summoned from a scroll held by the entrusted toad summoner around his wrist. The belt has multiple pre-opened mini scrolls that each has special seal written by the summoner's blood, each of the seals is designed to summon one of the toads the user is capable of summoning just by channeling chakra through it, replacing the old method of forming handseals and biting one's thumb then placing his/her arm over the ground to form the summoning. Once a toad was summoned through this belt, it cannot be re-summoned through it or by the old method.
    -Each toad summoned through this belt count as a jutsu usage.
    -Can summon all the toads the user is capable of summoning.
    -Can only summon four toads maximum per battle.

    X-Declined-X Should count as a CW

    Spit Summoning - Kushi Kuchiyose
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: E
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: N/A
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: When the user is about to summon a creature he already had a contract with, he form the handseals accordingly then, instead of biting his thumb and placing his hands on the ground, he bite his lips harshly while forming the handseals, then place his chakra into the spit he mixed with his blood and spit it at a surface accurately, preforming the summoning as it touches the surface normally. This method is developed to make a summoning technique formation proceed faster.
    -This method can only be used thrice per battle.
    -Doesn't count as a jutsu usage since its merely a method enhancer.
    -The user must have already mastered the summoning contract of the animal he's about to summon.

    X-Declined-X Raise to C rank, and be aware biting your tongue can cause death from bleeding.
     
         
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    Summoning Animal: Kumonian Chough
    Scroll Owner: Shikago
    Other Users who have signed contract: n/a
    Summoning Boss if existing: n/a
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: n/a
    Description and Background: Choughs, members of the Corvidae family, are often mistaken for crows for having glossy, black plumage. They differ by the choughs having brightly colored feet, legs, and bills. They have long, broad wings, allowing them to perform amazing aerobatics. They make their homes in high mountain ranges, and normally eat bugs and insects as their main source of food.
    In Kumogakure, there is a certain flock of choughs that have acquired the taste for carrion, causing further confusion with other members of the Corvidae family. They can often be found at the scene of a recent battle feeding, singing songs in joy over their meal. It’s unknown how, but these birds can also utilize chakra, allowing for short burst of speed, intensified vision, increased sense of smell.

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu-Ishuu Chough)-Summoning Technique- Swarm of Choughs
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive, Defense, Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20 (+5)
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user will summon dozens to hundreds of choughs, which will fly around the target causing confusion with their dark forms and quick movement. With the target distracted by the birds, the ninja can strike more easily, using the shadows of the choughs as cover. They can also attack the target, using their beaks. When no longer needed, the choughs will disperse.
    Note: Must have signed the Summoning Animal: Kumonian Chough contract
    Note: Last two turns
    Note: Requires the use of a move if still active during the second turn
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Shikago

    (Chough Bunshin no Jutsu)- Chough Clone Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: A technique similar to Itachi's, the user produces a clone by projecting one's own chakra towards dozens of choughs. Because it uses choughs as a medium, it requires less chakra than the normal Shadow Clone Technique, while still being able to perform techniques. When the clone is struck, the birds will disperse, which can cause confusion with the sudden scattering of birds.
    Note: Must have signed the Summoning Animal: Kumonian Chough contract
    Note: Only usable when (Kuchiyose no Jutsu- Ishuu Chough)-Summoning Technique- Swarm of Choughs is active.
    Note: Can only be taught by Shikago

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu- Jaianto Chough)- Summoning Technique- Giant Chough
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Using the Summoning Technique, the user summons a Giant Chough. They stand at two meters, and have a wing-span of five and a half meters. They are large enough for normal sized ninjas to ride without slowing them down. Using their size to their advantage, they can swoop down on enemies, using their talons and beaks to attack. When struck by a B-rank or stronger hit, the chough is dispersed
    Note: Must have signed the Summoning Animal: Kumonian Chough contract
    Note: Last five turns
    Note: Can only be used two times per battle
    Note: Can only be taught by Shikago

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Erzo View Post
    Conversation with Scorps, who allowed me permission to resubmit this: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...=3623&u2=83133

    (Suiton: Bāsuto) – Water Release: Burst
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Depends on Earth/Wood jutsu used before hand.
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user would activate this jutsu which allows him to add his water chakra to all Earth/Wood jutsus used no more than a second after the usage of the Earth/Wood jutsu. Although it does no physical harm, this jutsu allows the user to shoot out an extremely quick burst of water straight after an Earth/Wood jutsu is used from wherever that Earth/Wood jutsu appears from. For example, if Spikes are used, this jutsu would allow a quick burst of water to shoot out to anywhere short range from the spikes themselves. This jutsu does not work on the mud related Earth jutsu. The water itself does no damage, however it has some pushing force which is able to knock an opponent back a meter or two, other than that it mainly distracts the opponent. The user can deactivate this jutsu at any time, and can stop the addition of water chakra so that he/she can control when the water bursts out.

    ______________
    ±± Approved ±±
    Removed the restrictions. Its too weak to have them. Also, each use would be momentarily and not activation bound.
    (Suiton/Hyouton: Bāsuto) – Water Release/Ice Release: Burst
    Rank:C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Depends on Ice jutsu used before.
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user would activate this jutsu which allows him to add his water chakra to all ice jutsus used no more than a second after the usage of the ice jutsu.(The only exception is the ice release Jutsu and only when it is used cause it to snow) Although it does no physical harm, this jutsu allows the user to shoot out an extremely quick burst of water straight after a ice jutsu is used from wherever that ice jutsu appears from. The water itself does no damage, however it has some pushing force which is able to knock an opponent back a meter or two, other than that it mainly distracts the opponent.

    ~Declined~ I already told Erzo that i will not be accepting variations of this technique.

    Permission from Erzo to submit a variant is Here


    Hyouton: Bāsuto)Ice Release: Burst
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid(Created Short with Mid range reach)
    Chakra cost: 4o
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Ice Release: Burst is a technique performed though the usage of a special scroll marked with the kanji Ice. The user will unroll/open the scroll and focus their chakra into it, this will cause a huge ice tiger to appear, the tiger is of 10 meter height, 6 meters 'fat' and 15 meters long(minus tail), it's tail is about 4 meters long. The tiger has a blue color, with a whitish-blue aura surrounding it. The tiger goes by many names, but it is commonly referred to as Burst mainly due to one of it's abilities.
    Abilities:
    -Can use up to B rank ice techniques that the user knows.(only 4 techniques in a battle)
    -Can breath out a cold breath that freezes any water source, and B rank and below water techniques of the opponent/user.(Technique is short range, but can freeze a long ranged water source)(usable thrice)
    -Can unleash a 360° 'wave' of chakra that freezes anything(user included) within short range.(Usable Once)
    -Is a fast sprinter, and proficient with his paws, he can also grow spikes on it's tail, the spikes have a damage point equivalent to C rank.
    -Has sharp 'teeth' that can break bones with eas.
    Restrictions:
    -Usable Once.
    -On the same and next turn the user can't use more than 2 jutsus.
    -Each move the tiger uses counts towards the three Jutsu limit.
    -Must have ninjutsu mastered.
    -Must have Ice Release completed.
    -Must state that the scroll is present.
    -The Scroll will release the chakra into the air which takes the shape stated above.


    The image isn't working for some people so here is a direct link http://www.a-gc.com/flames-ice-tiger...kground-74189/


    ~Pending~ This requires Fuuinjutsu, so link me to your Fuuinjutsu training in a pm so i can recheck.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Cerberus- View Post


    (Summoning Technique: (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Stinker

    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:The user bites their thumb to draw blood. Once done, they perform 5 hand seals and slams his/her hands on the ground to summon Stinker. Stinker is a green and black dragonfly that is too small to be ridden on. Stinker has the ability to release a colorless poison gas from his abdomen. If inhaled the opponents throat begins to swell, causing difficulty in breathing. They also begin to vomit, similar to a allergic reaction. The gas can reach up to long range. Stinker also has the ability to react to any gas or smoke in the air with his abdomen. Stinker sucks up any smoke or gas in the air, through his abdomen. If stinker sucks up any gas, he automatically, gets reversed summoned, along with the gas.
    Note-
    -Once summoned Stinker can stay on the field for 4 turns.
    - Stinkers ability , uses of the the users jutsu slots-
    - Can only be summoned once per battle.
    - Can only be summoned if signed the dragon fly contract

    X-Declined-X Make the gas visible to naked eye

    Kagerou Bunshin no Jutsu] Dragonfly Clone Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user performs the Tiger handseal, causing 30 dragonflies to appear short range from the user. The dragonflies come together, forming a clone of the user. The clone can't perform any ninjutus, but if attacked, the dragonflies that created the clone, can separate from the rest, allowing physical attacks, to cause no harm. They can also attack the opponent in a swarm, once they are attacked by the opponent.
    Note:
    Only two clones can be created at a time.
    Only those who have signed the dragonfly contract may use this jutsu.

    ~Both Declined~ posting a link to the approved summoning contract or taking over the contract is mandatory when submitting techniques related to the contract.

    Resubmiting

    (Summoning Technique: (Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Stinker

    Rank: A
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description:The user bites their thumb to draw blood. Once done, they perform 5 hand seals and slams his/her hands on the ground to summon Stinker. Stinker is a green and black dragonfly that is too small to be ridden on. Stinker has the ability to release a colorless poison gas from his abdomen. If inhaled the opponents throat begins to swell, causing difficulty in breathing. They also begin to vomit, similar to a allergic reaction. The gas can reach up to long range. Stinker also has the ability to react to any gas or smoke in the air with his abdomen. Stinker sucks up any smoke or gas in the air, through his abdomen. If stinker sucks up any gas, he automatically, gets reversed summoned, along with the gas.
    Note-
    -Once summoned Stinker can stay on the field for 4 turns.
    - Stinkers ability , uses of the the users jutsu slots-
    - Can only be summoned once per battle.
    - Can only be summoned if signed the dragon fly contract

    X-Declined-X Make the gas visible to naked eye

    Kagerou Bunshin no Jutsu] Dragonfly Clone Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user performs the Tiger handseal, causing 30 dragonflies to appear short range from the user. The dragonflies come together, forming a clone of the user. The clone can't perform any ninjutus, but if attacked, the dragonflies that created the clone, can separate from the rest, allowing physical attacks, to cause no harm. They can also attack the opponent in a swarm, once they are attacked by the opponent.
    Note:
    Only two clones can be created at a time.
    Only those who have signed the dragonfly contract may use this jutsu.

    X-Approved-X

    Summoning approved here: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post8639639
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Doton: Ishi ude o shīrudo) – Earth release: Stone Arm Shield
    Rank: C
    Type: Defence/Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: After performing the required handseals Horse → Dog → Monkey → snake, the user gather nearby stones and creates a wide gauntlet that can be used as a shield. The shield is very durable, but it slows you down as it is heavy and due to wind resistance. This shield also could be used to bash an enemy.
    ~Note: If the user wants to, he can state that this jutsu would remain for maximum 3 turns (-5 chakra points every turn).


    (Raiton: Denki torappu) - Lightning release: Electrical Trap

    Type: Offensive/supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 20
    Description: The user creates a trap by charging a small field with ration chakra. When a human, animal or another conduit touches the field, the trap is going to trigger. The energy discharge isn’t very strong, but it harms you a little bit, causes numbness and partial paralysis. This jutsu can’t fool a chakra sensing technique.

    X-Both Declined-X Generic techniques
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Summoning Animal: Chickens
    Scroll Owner: Pain...
    Other Users who have signed contract: none (currently)
    Summoning Boss if existing: none (currently)
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: none (currently)
    Description and Background: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chickens
    Chickens are omnivores. In the wild, they often scratch at the soil to search for seeds, insects and even larger animals such as lizards or young mice.

    Chickens may live for five to ten years, depending on the breed. The world's oldest chicken, a hen, died of heart failure at the age of 16 according to the Guinness Book of World Records.

    Roosters can usually be differentiated from hens by their striking plumage of long flowing tails and shiny, pointed feathers on their necks (hackles) and backs (saddle) which are typically of brighter, bolder colours than those of females of the same breed. However, in some breeds, such as the Sebright, the rooster has only slightly pointed neck feathers, the same colour as the hen's. The identification can be made by looking at the comb, or eventually from the development of spurs on the male's legs (in a few breeds and in certain hybrids, the male and female chicks may be differentiated by colour). Adult chickens have a fleshy crest on their heads called a comb, or cockscomb, and hanging flaps of skin either side under their beaks called wattles. Collectively, these and other fleshy protuberances on the head and throat are called caruncles. Both the adult male and female have wattles and combs, but in most breeds these are more prominent in males. A muff or beard is a mutation found in several chicken breeds which causes extra feathering under the chicken's face, giving the appearance of a beard.

    Domestic chickens are not capable of long distance flight, although lighter birds are generally capable of flying for short distances, such as over fences or into trees (where they would naturally roost). Chickens may occasionally fly briefly to explore their surroundings, but generally do so only to flee perceived danger.

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    X-Approved-X I literally laughed my ass off when you posted this in the village xd

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    Contract already exists and is approved: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post3569351
     
         
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    (Fuuton/Suiton: Bakuhatsu kama ha ) -
    Wind/Water Style: Exploding scythe blade

    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short/Mid (explosion reaches mid range)
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description:
    The user manipulates moisture within the air in order to create a large scythe in their dominant hand. The blade of the scythe would be made up of compressed water that is sharp enough to easily cut through stone. Within the compressed water blade is pressurized wind chakra that lays dormant until comnanded to "explode". The pressurized wind inside the water blade would then explode in whatever direction the scythe's blade is pointing and would have enough force and cutting power (S-rank) to rip apart almost anything in its path.

    - Only taught by william24
    -Only usable 2x

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    (Genjutsu: Kuchi yuku karada) -
    Illusion arts: Decaying body

    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short/
    Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    The user begins by performing to hand seals which are used as a medium to place the opponent(s) under an illusion. The illusion begins by making the opponents think that their skin is starting to decay from their body slowly but gradually, starting from the finger tips and working its way up the arms and to the remainder of the body. While in the illusion the opponent will be suffering from the pain and psychological breakdown from their bodies being destroyed but in reality they'd be stuck standing in place, unaware of reality.

    - Only taught by william24
    - Usable once per battle
    - usable on multiple opponents
    - lasts for one turn

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    (Kyousei Kuro Ito No Jutsu) – Greater Dark Threads Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Kakuzu focuses and molds his chakra, using it to create tightly weaved threaded structures, pillars, spikes and etc to defend attack or support him. The threads can be created from the users body or directly from the ground and its limitations are only set by the users own imagination and the chakra put into the technique. With every use, the dimensions and shape of the created structures must be clearly defined. Each use can only create one structure and the dimensions of that structure cannot exceed a width of 10 meters and a length of 10 meters.

    Note: Can only be used Thrice per battle
    Note: Can only be Used by Negative Knight
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu

    ______________
    ±± Declined ±±
    Too generic and nothing more than a bigger version of the existing cannon technique. If something like this was to be allowed it would be added to the Jutsu list for all members to use. DNR.

    -Resubmitting-

    Quote Originally Posted by Negative Knight View Post
    (Kuro Ito Akki Hane) – Dark Threads Demonic Wings
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kakuzu channels chakra through the dark threads within his body and causes a pair of large dark black wings to emerge from his back. Both wings are extremely tightly weaved together, meaning they’re extremely difficult to break/cut through. Due to being so tightly weaved together, the wings gain a degree of elasticity, meaning they're capable of deflecting Taijutsu and Kenjutsu offensives by knocking them off their original trajectory, flinging the opponent away in the process. As a result, the wings are capable of deflecting B-Rank and below Taijutsu and Kenjutsu attacks. Furthermore, the wings can be used defensively to cover the front of the user’s body to act as a defensive shield. The wings can also deflect all small weapons e.g. kunai, shuriken and bullets. However, the wings do not grant the user flight, but they do allow the user to safely glide down from daunting heights.

    Note: Lasts for four turns
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu



    ~Declined~ I like it, for once someone made a wings related technique without using it for flight, although this can be done with the original Dark Threads technique, anyway remove the defense against Taijutsu and Kenjutsu.
    (Kuro Ito Akki Hane) – Dark Threads Demonic Wings
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Kakuzu channels chakra through the dark threads within his body and causes a pair of large dark black wings to emerge from his back. Both wings are extremely tightly weaved together, meaning they’re extremely difficult to break/cut through. Due to being so tightly weaved together, the wings gain a degree of elasticity, meaning they're capable of deflecting physical attacks by knocking them off their original trajectory, flinging the opponent away in the process. Furthermore, the wings can be used defensively to cover the front of the user’s body to act as a defensive shield. The wings can also deflect all small weapons e.g. kunai, shuriken and bullets. However, the wings do not grant the user flight, but they do allow the user to safely glide down from daunting heights.

    Note: Lasts for four turns
    Note: Can only be used once per battle
    Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu



    Removed "defending against B-Rank and below Taijutsu and Kenjutsu"

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    -Updating-

    Quote Originally Posted by Negative Knight View Post

    (Kuro Ito) – Dark Threads Underground Detachment
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user places their hands on the ground and feeds their dark threads deep into the ground. A large mass of sharpened dark threads then erupt like jagged spikes, (in a similar fashion to like volcanic geysers) from beneath and around the opponent in attempt to capture and drag the opponent into the ground. This jutsu can be used to take out multiple clones/opponents and is even capable of impaling summonings.
    Note: Must have Dark Threads active

    X-Approved-X
    (Kuro Ito Chika Bunken) – Dark Threads Underground Detachment
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description Kakuzu places both of his palms on the ground and feeds a large mass of dark threads straight into the ground. Immediately afterwards, hardened spikes composed entirely of dark threads begin to erupt beneath and around the opponent (in a similar fashion to like volcanic geysers), in an attempt to skewer through the opponent’s body. On an individual level, the spikes are five meters in height and 20 cms in width. This jutsu can create up to a maximum of eight spikes. Once the sharpened threads pierce someone, the user causes the individual threads (which make up the spikes) to sporadically spike out in every direction, impaling the opponent in an innumerous amount of places.

    Note: Can only be used Thrice per battle
    Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
    Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu

    Removed "Must have Dark threads active" and "This jutsu can be used to take out multiple clones/opponents and is even capable of impaling summonings."

    Completely re-wrote the jutsu since the previous one barely made any sense.

    X-Pending -X Leaving for someone else

    ______________
    ±± Approved ±±
    Edited.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by demon fang View Post
    ~updating summoning scroll~
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: kihonteki bouhatei) - Summoning Technique: Standard Mole
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/a
    Description: After peforming the necessary handsigns, the user slams their hand on the ground to summon a mole. These basic moles vary in color and appearance. The standard moles are 12-15 cm and are mainly used to perform techniques with the user since, they lack the ability to weave handsigns.

    Restrictions:
    -Must have signed the mole contract.
    -Requires a ground source.
    ||Declined|| Specify what techniques they can use because the contract is rather unclear about that.
    ===============================================
    ~new submission~
    (Doton: Ishi appa-katto) Earth Release: Stone Uppercut
    Type: offensive
    Rank: D
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: 20
    Description: The user makes the snake handsign and creates a pillar of earth in the form of a fist from underground to knock the target upward towards the air.

    Restrictions:
    -Can only be taught by Fang.
    -Requires a ground source.
    ||Declined|| Similar Technique Exists

    (Doton: Genbugan Bu-meran) -Earth Release: Basalt Boomerang
    Type: offensive
    Rank: D
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: 20
    Description: The user creates a boomerang using their earth chakra. Which can be used as a melee weapon, allowing the user to hit and have it circle back to the user when thrown like a returning boomerang.

    Restriction:
    -Requires a ground source.
    -Can only be taught by Fang.
    ||Declined|| Similar Technique Exists (DNR)
    ~Resubmitting~
    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu: kihonteki bouhatei) - Summoning Technique: Standard Mole
    Type: supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/a
    Description: After peforming the necessary handsigns, the user slams their hand on the ground to summon a mole. These basic moles vary in color and appearance. The standard moles are 12-15 cm and are mainly used to perform earth-based techniques up to C-rank without handseals.

    Restrictions:
    -Must have signed the mole contract.
    -Requires a ground source.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Link to contract?
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    ~New submission~

    (Tsuin Kousa-Senshu Gigei - Shikou Atsusa) Twin Crossbow Arts - Aiming Heat
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: short-long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user focuses their katon chakra into both crossbows' arrows. Once they have gathered enough and upon firing, the user releases several blazing shots which fan outward in a wide arc in front of the user, and manipulates the arrows to home in on the target.

    Restriction:
    -Must have a crossbow in bio.
    -Can only be taught by fang.
    -Is ineffective if the user isn't facing the target, when performed since the blazing shots will not reach the targets location.

    X-Declined-X Mathias owns the CFS for bows.

    (Hanma Gigei- Yajuu Dageki) Hammer Arts - Beast blow
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: short-mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user begins by smashing the target downward with their hammer and then launching upward. The user then, focuses their chakra into their hammer while spinning once and fires a large lion-shaped chakra blast at the target.

    Restrictions:
    -Can only be taught by fang.
    -Must have a hammer in their bio.

    X-Approved-X
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-25-2013 at 03:36 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Noah) Summoning: Noah
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: Noah Is the boss summon of the Aye-Ayes.... Similar to Enma. He is Twice the size of a human.. about the same size as a gorilla With a line of yellow on his stomach and a yellow patch on his back in the shape of a cross..Though he naturally stays on all 4 legs he also stands up similar to humans and keep balance due to his large tail... He can naturally hang on to trees and climb them with no hesitation with his hands. And can hang from trees with his tail as his tail is the strongest part on its body. Noah Specializes in Earth Jutsus up to S rank and can do 1 handseal for all earth jutsus (He has hands so he is able to) Due to his long sharp claws he is able to cut/break through Earth Jutsus A rank and below with his bare hands... Naturally Noah can Use his sharp hands to fight 1on1 due to his love for fighting Making him able to use Taijutsu up to B Rank. Noah Can also speak English Very well... and move slightly faster than a human .. The user must bite their thumb and wipe the blood on the Aye-Aye tattoo, then do the ram handseal. Noah will then appear right beside the user.... Though its uncommon this summon can fit 1 human on its shoulder for whatever reason.
    -Going underground Count as 1 of the user 3 turns
    -Can Only be Summoned Once
    -Last for 5 turns on the field

    Link to approve summon
    http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...=1#post8165027

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    ±± Declined ±±
    Too many abilities. Lasts too long.

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    (kichigai)Madness
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: This weapon is a double sided weapon (A blade on both the bottom and top) leaving the user only able to handle it from the middle where their is a opening for handling. This weapon was said to be unknown how it was found but only one with the right intent for it will be able to wield it... A Killing Intent. Thats when General Socalo came to find this sword his counterpart seeing as nobody else can wield it. The abilitites of the sword is not very unique but depending on how you use it , it can be. The sword spins very violently by inserting chakra in the middle where the user normally holds it it causing it to spin with remarkable speed. Making the sword look like a huge disk spinning rapidly. The user wont be holding the sword while it spins but keeping a close chakra connection to it while it spins allowing the user to control the sword as it spins without touching it. The user is able to attack with the sword by making simple handmovements with the hand thats controlling the spinning sword. The special thing about this sword that due to the incredible speed it spins in, and the incredible sharpness, It is able to cut through many things.

    -Can Cut through 1 S Rank Jutsu, 1 A Rank Jutsu, 2 B Rank Jutsus, 2 C Rank Jutsu, 3 D Rank Jutsu
    -Anything Lightning based are excluded seeing as it cant cut through lightning
    -Each time the user cuts through a jutsu it counts as one of the 3 jutsus permitted.
    -Can only use the abilitites of cutting a jutsu in half, once a turn
    -This weapon sharpness can cut through a regular sword like butter.
    -Once the amount of jutsus that can be cut is met, the sword will stop spinning causing the sword to be pretty much useless.
    -Cant use no Basic Ninjutsu in the same turn as the abilitites.
    -Only can be wield by Teno

    Picture of sword not spinning (This is the sword in my bio)

    Picture of sword spinning



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    ±± Declined ±±
    Done before. DNR.

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    (yottsu joushou chuuseki supea) Earth Style: Quad Rising Pillar Spears
    Type:Attack
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: The user will do 4 handseals ending with the serpent handseal. Once done the user will then slam their hands on the ground causing 4 Huge earth spear pillars to rise from the ground upward or diagonal (Whichever way the user chooses) but it can not be shot straight forward. The earth pillars reach long range and each of the earth pillars of 6 meters thick in widgth and the force of the earth pillars are large and powerful enough to cause massive damage to the boss toad Gamabunta . This jutsu is meant to attack an enemy in the air maybe catching them off guard, or simply to attack them while in the air

    -Can Only use Once
    -Cant use S rank or above Earth jutsu in the same turn
    -Cant use Earth Jutsu above S rank in 2 turns
    -Only Taught By Teno



    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. Similar to countless techniques.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-22-2013 at 05:25 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Dropping my Thunderbolt Lance:

    (Sandāboruto Yari) - Thunderbolt Lance
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: -10 per turn
    Damage Points: Depends (+10 to Raiton jutsu)
    Description: The harpoon itself is 1m long and is composed of a silver star metal. The rope is a special rope made of the hair of a Yak, infused with Zinc so the rope itself is able ton conduct a stream of electricity. The rope can allow the spear to be thrown and pulled back, up to mid-range. The rope is only able to be destroyed with an A-Rank Jutsu or higher. The Spear itself is indestructible. The user can infuse their own lightning chakra into the harpoon before throwing it to increase the speed of the aerial harpoon. Upon penetration of the opponent, the harpoon can emit an electrical surge to them, stunning them. The user can also stick the harpoon into the ground and send lightning through the spear, spreading throughout the earth. The lightning can only spread out from a short area of the spear. The earth within short range cannot be altered by any Doton jutsu.
    Notes:
    - Must master Raiton before wielding the Sandāboruto Yari.
    - Must be wielding the Harpoon in some way for chakra effects to work.
    - Using the chakra effects with the harpoon counts as a move.
    - Stunning affect lasts for one turn.
    - Can only be wielded by Omnom (and those whom he allows).
    Found here: http://narutobase.net/forums/showthr...80#post4838180


    New Custom Weapon:

    Grimoire Weiss (Mahohon Waisu)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20/turn
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: Weiss is a book designed by an unnamed Sage with all his life long knowledge inscribed into the book. The book is meant to be used both as a weapon and companion on journeys, to unseal the book the user must first provide a blood sacrifice much like summoning technique and pour the blood over the first pages of the book. The book absorbs the blood and assumes a personality best fit for the user in battles as well daily life. The book floats around near and far from the user while passively absorbing chakra from the user. The book is capable of see, talk, smell, hear as well as feel if its being touched. Weiss talks in a wise man’s voice, in combat Weiss can help navigate the user of things he can’t see. Weiss can sense chakra, and can always feel where his user is and come back to him flying in case of being lost, and always keep an active communication with the user through telepathy, it could transmit visual and sound based messages by the user with itself as a medium (I.e. Book showing a message/recording in its pages) through long ranges. Weiss like any other custom weapon is indestructible, it can also be used as replacement to scrolls allowing the users to store objects within Weiss and use it for sealing techniques. Weiss can use special techniques by chanting verses (Will submit them separately in the form custom weapon techniques) and can use simple maneuvers like spreading its paper around to hide the user or distract the opponents but it cannot use any conventional ninjutsu.


    X-Approved-X LOL i know where this came from ^^ i like it. Dropping weird power boosts for intellegent advantages.
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 02-28-2013 at 08:57 PM.

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