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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Dante.. View Post
    (Katon: Tsuinassai Ryūsē) – Fire Release: Twin Crushing Meteors
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After performing a set of 4 handseals, the user gathers a huge amount of fire chakra and releases it into the air, causing a portal similar to the "Sticky Earth Drop" technique to open to either of two opposite sides of the intended target, each portal is released 5 meters away from the opponent, summoning two identical meteor sized fireballs which are extremely compressed towards the opponent, approaching him from the two opposite sides, when the Fireballs each are 3 meters away from the opponent they resonate with each other, causing a "link" of fire to spread out connecting the two fireballs resulting in a ring of fire that's made around the opponent, entrapping him in the area he's in, however the opponent can escape vertically upwards since the ring of fire doesn't cover above him it only covers around him, the heat released from these two fireballs are enough to cause sweat to drip down the opponent's body when it's summoned out of the portals, letting him know the danger he's in, each Meteor sized fireball is considered an A-rank Fire technique, since it's an S-rank divided in two, when hit by either fireballs, anything caught in between the two fireballs will be crushed and burned severely.
    Note: Can only be used once.
    Note: No S-rank Fire Release or above techniques in the next turn.

    X-Declined-X Well, excluding the strong relation with space-time ninjutsu (Sticky Earth drop was used by an anbu and can very well be a variant of summoning like wheel of fortune). There are 2 things:
    -Mid Range? Mid range from you or your opponent? if you, you are in effect range.
    -3m is too less, make it at least 10-15m.
    (Katon: Tsuinassai Ryūsē) – Fire Release: Twin Crushing Meteors
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Mid
    Chakra Cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90
    Description: After performing a set of 4 handseals, the user gathers a huge amount of fire chakra and releases it into the air, causing a portal similar to the "Sticky Earth Drop" technique to open to either of two opposite sides of the intended target, each portal is released 15 meters away from the opponent basically a Mid range to both of his sides, summoning two identical meteor sized fireballs which are extremely compressed towards the opponent, approaching him from the two opposite sides, when the Fireballs each are 10 meters away from the opponent they resonate with each other, causing a "link" of fire to spread out connecting the two fireballs resulting in a ring of fire that's made around the opponent, entrapping him in the area he's in, however the opponent can escape vertically upwards since the ring of fire doesn't cover above him it only covers around him, the heat released from these two fireballs are enough to cause sweat to drip down the opponent's body when it's summoned out of the portals, letting him know the danger he's in, each Meteor sized fireball is considered an A-rank Fire technique, since it's an S-rank divided in two, when hit by either fireballs, anything caught in between the two fireballs will be crushed and burned severely.
    Note: Can only be used once.
    Note: No S-rank Fire Release or above techniques in the next turn.
    Note: -15 Damage to the user due to the sudden chakra exhaustion

    X-Approved-X Although i made this forbidden ^^ sorry i cant find a better way to get this approvable.

    Quote Originally Posted by Dante.. View Post
    (Katon: Honō Funka) – Fire Release: Flame Eruption
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: After utilizing a set of 4 handseals, the user gathers a huge amount of chakra which he spreads through the air, this Fire technique is not used like other Fire techniques, for example to be released out of the user's mouth or around him, this Fire technique is a burst of flames that erupt out of an enclosed place of earth, it uses the earth to erupt as a medium, for example this technique can be used in conjunction with the "Earth Release: Opening Earth Rising Excavation" technique, to form an erupting Volcano, by erupting flames out of the circular "void" of the volcano that mixes with the earth to form Lava that erupts out of the Volcano's tip and drips down it's length, not only that, but it also can be used in enclosed places like in conjunction with the "Earth Release: Earth Corridor" technique, in which it causes the walls of the tavern to erupt flames burning anyone who's inside of it, it can be used in conjunction with any techniques similar to the ones mentioned previously in which they "surround" or trap the opponent, however it's downside is that it can't be used in an area that doesn't surround the opponent, meaning it can't just come out of the ground beneath the opponent for example, unless they have "walls" around them, when the fire erupts it's similar to the "Fire Release: Firing Biscuit" Technique.
    Note: Can only be used Twice per battle.
    Note: No S-rank or above Fire techniques in the next 2 turns.

    X-Declined-X That would be simultaneous use of Earth release and Fire release. Impossible without KG or Yin/Yang. You could remake this technique to be used in collaboration of clones, summoning animals or team mates.
    (Katon: Honō Funka) – Fire Release: Flame Eruption
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This is a collaboration technique between a shadow clone or a summoning which has the fire affinity, the user gathers a huge amount of chakra which he spreads through the air, this Fire technique is not used like other Fire techniques, for example to be released out of the user's mouth or around him, this Fire technique is a burst of flames that erupt out of an enclosed place of earth, it uses the earth to erupt as a medium, for example this technique can be used in conjunction with the "Earth Release: Opening Earth Rising Excavation" technique, to form an erupting Volcano, by erupting flames out of the circular "void" of the volcano that mixes with the earth to form Lava that erupts out of the Volcano's tip and drips down it's length, not only that, but it also can be used in enclosed places like in conjunction with the "Earth Release: Earth Corridor" technique, in which it causes the walls of the tavern to erupt flames burning anyone who's inside of it, it can be used in conjunction with any techniques similar to the ones mentioned previously in which they "surround" or trap the opponent, however it's downside is that it can't be used in an area that doesn't surround the opponent, meaning it can't just come out of the ground beneath the opponent for example, unless they have "walls" around them, when the fire erupts it's similar to the "Fire Release: Firing Biscuit" Technique, for this technique to be used, there should be a technique made that forms an enclosed place around the opponent which is a medium for this technique, so the shadow clone or the summoning that has a fire affinity can use this technique simultaneously as the enclosed earth forms.
    Note: Can only be used Twice per battle.
    Note: No S-rank or above Fire techniques in the next 2 turns.

    X-Approved-X

    (Sōdō) – Rebellion
    Rank: S
    Type: Weapon
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra Cost: 40 (+ 30 for blocking each fire attack)
    Damage: (20 base attack for normal use) (+15 damage to every fire based jutsu)
    Description: the Rebellion sword is made out of a special metal that is able to use the user's fire chakra , it has a large white blade with a silver skull shaped handle ,it's worn on the user's back like Kakashi's sword when he was young , when the user channels his fire chakra into the blade, a fire Aura surrounds the white blade making the sword more lighter and enhancing the user with faster reactions and turning the blades color into bloody red, as long as the user is wielding the blade he can perform any fire technique with the use of only a single handseal, also by adding the +30 fire chakra of the user to the blade , the blade can block fire techniques up to A-rank negating the fire and absorbing it but still receives a certain amount of damage from the attack.
    Note: Cannot be used without mastering the fire element.
    Note: User takes -10 damage when absorbing a fire technique.
    Note: Can only block fire techniques 3 times per battle.
    Note: Can only be wielded by Dante..
    (Sōdō Geijutsu: Zenshin) – Rebellion Art: Drive
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user holds Rebellion in a reverse grip manner, around their back while it's in one of their hands as they bend their knees down nearly touching the ground getting in a crouching manner then he injects Rebellion with a large amount of Fire chakra, using the fire chakra around Rebellion as Rebellion begins glowing in bloody red aura to superheat the air by using Fire chakra in conjunction with a blazing fast horizontal shaped slash in front of the user that he makes, sending a superheated wave of air towards their opponent's direction in a crescent shaped arc, the wave can be clearly seen as a resonating wave of red aura that's heading towards them, it is consider a Fire Release technique.
    Note: Can only be used twice
    Note: No S-rank Fire techniques in the same turn.


    X-Approved-X Technique itself is fine, but Gamabunta is 100m in height and the technique is considered mid-range. Doesnt match so i edited it out to approve it. You could resubmit fixing the error but the wave wont be allowed to retain the same strength as it moves forward towards the long range.
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-26-2012 at 11:23 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Hyouton/Genjutsu : Touketsu Akumu ) Ice/Genjutsu: Frozen Nightmare
    Type: Supplamentary
    Rank: S rank
    Range: Mid-Long
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description: For this technique, the user will focus a large amount of hyouton (Ice) chakra into the atmoshpere. As they have done this, the will proceed to do two hand seals, trapping their opponent in a genjutsu where he/she believes they are in a frozen wasteland. As they have done this, this is where the ice chakra comes in. The user will then use the ice chakra that in the air to slowly freeze the opponents feet and hands, not allowing them to move for 2 turns. But because the opponent is trapped in the gen, they won't know that anything really happened to then, just that they are playing in snow.

    -Must have mastered genjutsu
    -Must have mastered ice
    -Must be Sannin frank of higher to use
    -Only usable 3 times per battle
    -No A-rank or higher gen for two turns after technique has been used
    -Can only be use by Light...

    X-Declined-X
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    Genjutsu: Enkin Fugu | Illusionary Arts: Distance Distortion
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: For this technique, the user will focus their chakra, sending it into there opponents nervous system, attacking their sense of sight. As the chakra has been implanted the opponent will then be trapped in a genjutsu. The user will then extend his/her hand, with a pulling motion as if they are pulling the terrain close together ex. From area being long range, person trapped in gen will think the range is mid. The opponent will then see ripples in the terrain.

    -Useable 2x
    -Must have mastered genjutsu
    -Must be Kage ranked or higher
    -Must be taught by Light...

    Image of technique:

    http://k-project.wikia.com/wiki/Kuro...#39;s_Pull.gif

    X-Approved-X
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    Ninjutsu: Ri-chi | Ninja art : Reach!
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a very simple technique, all the use has to do is focus their chakra into their dominant hand. As this had been done, the use will then reach towards that area, releasing an intangible arm of chakra towards that location. This arm dont do any harm, but it can hold onto solid objects, such as, head, rocks, ledge etc. The arm of chakra is also retractable. The reason for this is because if the user decides this is not the right time to use this they can stop on an instant.

    -Can only be taught by Light...

    Technique image:


    X-Declined-X Use Wind release: Beast Wave Palm
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-26-2012 at 11:27 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by -Cerberus- View Post
    Katon -Hinotama Kara Makai- Fire Release - Fireballs from hell
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user begins by tossing a lite cigarette into the air. Once in the air, the user manipulates the burning end to spark out. The user manipulates the sparks to transform into many fireballs that shoot up into the sky. The user can then direct the fireballs to shoot down onto a specific area down below.

    Can only be used 3 times
    Can only be taught by cerberus
    Only bio's that smoke can be taught this jutsu.



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    ±± Declined ±±
    How can this be possible? Also, add a bit more detail please.


    Katon -Hinotama Kara Makai- Fire Release - Fireballs from hell
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user begins by channeling their chakra into a cigarette. They then toss a lite cigarette into the air while its in the air they increase the amount of chakra that was in the cigarette causing the lite end to create sparks that shoot out from the lite end of the cigarette. The user then uses shape manipulation to shape the sparks into fireballs that shoot up into the sky. Once in the sky the user can direct the fireballs to shoot down onto a specific area down below.

    Can only be used 3 times
    Can only be taught by -Cerberus-
    Only bio's that smoke can be taught this jutsu.



    Katon - Katon Sui-pu - Fire Release - Fire sweep
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user begins by channeling their fire chakra into their feet. Once the chakra is built up in their feet, they release it in a quick burst. The user uses shape manipulation to shape the fire into a circle that sweeps the opponent off their feet and pushing them back. The fire causes first degree burns all over the opponents and lower parts of their legs feet.

    Note
    Can only be used three times
    Can only be taught by -Cerberus-





    Raiton - Raiton Waia -Lighting Release - Lightning wire
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user begins by channeling their lightning chakra into their fingertips. Once done each fingertip begins to glow due to the lightning chakra on each fingertip. They then wave their hands in front of them shooting out long 'wires' of lightning the wires are created by using shape manipulation. Once the wires wrap around the opponent, the user manipulates the wires into joining up into one large wire. The user increases the amount of lightning chakra in the fused wire causing the wires to electrocute the opponent to death.

    Note
    Can only be used three times in one battle
    Can only be taught by -Cerberus-




    X-All Approved-X
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-26-2012 at 11:31 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Tora Kuchiyose : Aeolus) - White Tiger Summoning : Aeolus
    Type : Summon
    Rank : S
    Range : Short (Summoning Range)
    Chakra cost : 40 (+5 every turn flight is active)
    Damage points : N/A
    Description : Aeolus, the White Tiger, was given his respective name after showcasing exceptional skill in the arts of Wind Release. Aeolus is roughly about half the size of Gamabunta and is well-known for his powers of being able to manipulate the surrounding winds around him, while at the same time, generate high amounts of air that seems to exerted from his body (which is not the case) to enable flight. The winds are produced through the molding of wind chakra of course. Flight was never accessible to the average White Tigers or any land animal summoning, but not Aeolus. With Wind Release being Aeolus' affinity, he is capable of performing all types of Wind techniques up to the user's rank and without the need of handseals, much like most summoning animals.

    Note : Can only be summoned twice per battle
    Note : Must have signed White Tiger contract
    Note : Lasts for four turns after activation or until dispersed
    Note : Only able to perform Wind Release techniques (Count as a move usage)
    Note : In any battle between two White Tiger summoners, Aeolus respects and obeys -Yusuke- over the other summoner

    X-Declined-X Link to being taught white tigers?

    (Fuuton : Ringu Kinko) - Wind Release : Ring Imprisonment
    Type : Offensive / Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : With this technique, the user is capable of conjuring up to three rings entirely made out of pure wind. These rings are formed around a desired target or enemy and is usually formed around separate locations on the upper or lower body but they must remain some distance between each other as to not clash and cancel themselves out. Upon creation, these rings spin at ferocious speeds, allowing them to cut through the human flesh and slice through bones, including those of Kaguya bloodline. At the user's will, these rings are capable of contracting inwards onto the enemy's body, possibly killing them if not dealt with or escaped properly.

    Note : Created by -Yusuke-
    Note : Can only be used four times per battle
    Note : No wind techniques higher than S-rank to be used in the same turn
    Note : Cooldown period of one whole turn is requires between every usage

    X-Declined-X Directly over the opponent? No

    (Fuuton : Implosion) - Wind Release : Implosion
    Type : Offensive
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user claps his hand together while concentrating wind chakra in the surrounding air around a particular area. With that, the user will manipulate the air currents around that particular area to begin moving towards a single point in the area. These air currents move slowly and steadily at first. After that, the user will then clench his clapped hands together and cause the velocity in which the air currents move at to increase. The wind implodes into the particular spot, causing what seems to be an explosion. Naturally, if a person or thing is to stand on that spot, they will be crushed and destroyed as the effects of the technique take place.

    Note : Created by -Yusuke-
    Note : Only three times per battle
    Note : No wind techniques higher than S-rank to be used the same turn
    Note : No wind techniques higher than A-rank to be used the following turn
    Note : The only sign that signifies the coming of this technique is the movement of air currents


    X-Approved-X
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-26-2012 at 11:34 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Batoidea: Ophelia)- Summoning: Batoidea: Ophelia
    Type: Summon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: Ophelia is the weapons expert of the Stingrays and thus focuses heavily on close range prowess. She has the looks of an small sized Eagle Stingray being only a meter long (not including tail length) with a wingspan of a meter 1/2 and is sandy yellow in colour with white spots. Despite not having a humanoid body to perform punches and kicks, she makes up for it through a unique moveset. Ophelia’s first ability is what allows her to overcome her lack of limbs to wield weapons. Ophelia is capable of freely growing Stingray stingers from all over her body, and is also capable of applying shape manipulation to the stingers so as to create various weapons of all different shapes and sizes. These stingers have the strength slightly greater than that of a Kunai. She is also capable of growing much more powerful chakra or elemental chakra enhanced stingers which is equivalent in strength to an A ranked jutsu, the stingers can also be retracted or shot if need be. Ophelia’s second ability is what truly allows her to shine in close range combat, and also earned her nickname; Rippling Ophelia. By channeling chakra to her body and reverberating it within while also utilizing her exceptional body control, she is capable of undulating her body, or parts of her body at high speeds creating an optical illusion where her body appears to be rippling. This effectively makes it exceptionally hard for her opponent to block as they will be unable to gauge exactly where Ophelia will strike, although they can gauge the rough vicinity in which she will strike and thus attempt to dodge using “wide dodges”. This allows her to overpower her enemies in close quarters combat by continuously forcing them to make large dodges by relentlessly following up each attack with a new one, preventing counter-attacks since the opponent will have to waste their movements on dodging. Thus it becomes a waiting game of when the opponent will either tire out, or make a dodge that he can’t recover from in time to dodge her next attack. This optical illusion can only be slowed down to trackable speeds by a Mangekyou Sharingan. The venom on Ophelia’s grown stingers aren’t the most potent, but are still quite deadly. Five senbon sized stingers being able to easily incapacitate a limb while causing the opponent minor heart rate and breathing problems such as lack of breath, and minute cramping like pains within the chest region.

    Note:
    - Ophelia can only be summoned once per battle and stays on the field for four turns.
    - Growing elemental enhanced Stingers or enhancing already grown stingers counts as a move and has a maximum of five uses.
    - Her rippling effect can only be activated once per battle and last for two turns.
    - Ophelia is capable of both swimming and flying through the air.

    Signed the Batoidea contract

    X-Declined-X
    -One element per summong (Hint hint!: Collaboration ninjutsu with summoning creatures)
    -Second Ability needs to be a seperate technique usable by Ophelia (likewise it should not be oped)
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-26-2012 at 11:39 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Doton/Fuuton: Heddo shotto Earth/Wind Style: Headshot
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short- Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: Best used while under cover or while the enemy has cannot see you. The user quickly creates an earth section within one of his hands the exact size and shape of a .50 caliber sniper rifle round. Then the user exhales a wind blast directly onto the base of the bullet that sends it flying at the opponent. The bullet moves so fast that it looks like a blur to the naked eye but it is still seeable similar to the speed of Manipulated Tools: Heavenly Chain of Destruction. Like real .50 caliber sniper rounds these bullets can pierce earthen walls up to C rank and regular skin.

    -Due to elemental advantage, will go through A rank water albeit slowed down
    -Will get destroyed if used against any lightning techniques
    -Will melt against B rank fire
    -Will get blown back by B rank wind techniques
    -Can only be taught by -Broly-


    Densetsu no chō saiyahito no henkan Legendary Super Saiyan Transformation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A (+5 to taijutsu and physical attacks)
    Description: Broly will enter an "extended transformation" similar to Tsunade's that he is able to maintain even while taking damage. When this jutsu is activated a green chakra orb will erupt from Broly that is capable of pushing an opponent back that is in short range. The orb will do absolutely no damage and neither will the push back but it will simply push the opponent to the edge of short range away from Broly. Within the orb Broly's skin seemingly explodes from within, revealing a new form of Broly with a much larger frame, increased muscle mass and pupil-less eyes. The increased muscle mass in this form gives Broly a modest +5 boost in taijutsu and physical attacks

    -Once Transformation is entered it lasts the entire battle or until the user is severely hurt/out of chakra, whichever comes first
    -Can only be taught by Broly
    -Can only be used once per battle

    Transformation

    New Form


    Quote Originally Posted by -Broly- View Post
    Watashi wa tobitai (I want to fly)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (activation) 20 (per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: These are a pair of golden boots with a blue pendant in the middle of them that Broly wears. These boots, at the users will, release high speed, precision wind stream at any angle out of them that the user wishes similar to the D rank wind stream technique. The wind stream can be maintained for as long as the user wishes however these drain his chakra the longer he does it, making him only able to sustain flight for 3 straight turns before needing a 4 turn cooldown. Also the user may only use lightning, wind, and tai techniques while in flight putting the user at a huge disadvantage in exchange for flight.

    -If used 3 turns in a row, boots need a 4 turn cooldown
    -May only use lightning, wind, and tai while using boots' ability
    -Can only be used by Broly and those he allows
    -Initial flight counts as a move when its activated, staying in the air counts as a move on the subsequent turns its activated
    -If used to dodge a jutsu within reason, this also counts as a move

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    Flying boots? :sy:
    Watashi wa tobitai (I want to fly)
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40 (activation) 20 (per turn)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: These are a pair of golden boots with a blue pendant in the middle of them that Broly wears. These boots, at the users will, release high speed, precision wind stream at any angle out of them that the user wishes similar to the D rank wind stream technique, however the user can only go up to a maximum height of 7 feet, also while the wind stream can be fast it is still easily see able with the naked eye. The wind stream can be maintained for as long as the user wishes however these drain his chakra the longer he does it, making him only able to sustain flight for 3 straight turns before needing a 4 turn cooldown. Also the user may only use lightning and tai techniques while in flight putting the user at a huge disadvantage in exchange for flight. The user can also only use lightning up to A rank.

    -If used 3 turns in a row, boots need a 4 turn cooldown
    -May only use lightning and tai while using boots' ability
    -Can only be used by Broly and those he allows
    -Initial flight counts as a move when its activated, staying in the air counts as a move on the subsequent turns its activated
    -If used to dodge a jutsu within reason, this also counts as a move

    added in the bold, made it so i can only use lightning and tai, made a restriction on lightning


    X-All declined-X This is breaking my heart T_T somebody help the person make customs, what kind of community are we?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Genjutsu: Jaaku Kokyu ) Illusion Arts: Wicked Cuckoo

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: User casts a genjutsu on the surrounding area by linking together 2 handseals. Everyone in the area will then, in each target's mind, become it's opponent. This will make the user look, sound, smell, etc like an ally of each individual target, while making it's ally look, feel, like the user or an user's ally, inverting the roles. This is further masked by changing the appearance of someone's jutsu, especially custom jutsu or elements, allowing the user to preform any jutsu the opponent has, to the user own knowledge. This will not change the structure of a jutsu, but can alter it's sound/smell/colour/texture/temperature/nature/etc, as well as any decoy visual stimuli, making it seem as if the user or the opponent have used a signature move from the person they became, in a target's mind.
    *This can make an individual target see more than one person as the same person, it can even make everyone look the same. It can also keep one or more people with their normal appearances, while still changing the jutsus a person uses so it seems like someone else. It can also change everything but the voice, or the looks, or the smells*
    *It can't change the appearance of a person to someone who isn't there*
    *If the user is fighting one opponent, the usefulness of this genjutsu drops severely*
    *It works with ninja pets, summon animals, or shadow clones (the later 2 can be vanished in order to unveil the genjutsu)*
    *The genjutsu itself will not mask the changes of appearance, the opponent's will just see their allies and opponent's turn into each other. This can be masked by exterior forces (like a smokescreen)*
    *Can't use genjutsus while this jutsu is active, nor have other active genjutsus in play*
    *Can only be used 3 times per battle*

    X-Declined-X Erm how should i explain it.. youre affecting several different enermies with a "variable" genjutsu. Everyone isn't affected by the same genjutsu. Their sense of roles is being inverted and it would require you to manipulate everyone's illusion differently considering the fact that there can be enemies from more then one faction each with a different sense of allies and enemies. Not going to DNR but the technique is physically impossible.

    ( Oumou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Vó Gidja ) Parrot Summoning Jutsus: Vó Gidja

    Rank: S
    Range: N/A
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: Vó Gidga is an elderly parakeet, with white and gray body and exuberant silver plumage, twice the size of a large Altorio parrot. She is a powerful chakra sensor, and mastered to the max the Message and the Monkey Chase jutsu. She is incapable of using Ninjutsu other than Parrot Arts, for she chose to master her mental faculties.
    Mental Link: She is able to open lines of dialog with any parrot or contract signer, regardless of distance.
    Likewise, she is linked to any Message or Monkey Chase used by any human or parrot.
    Chakra Sensor: She is able to sense everything around herself for up to 100 meters. Motionless, she can increase that to a kilometer. To do so in a battle, it counts as a jutsu. Using a Message from her feathers will allow her to sense everything 50 meters around, or, motionless, 500 meters.
    Genjutsu Proficiency: She is able to fight using Genjutsu, and is quite proficient at it, allowing her to cast genjutsus one range higher (without changing the cost or damage).
    In battle, she is able to fight for 4 turns before vanishing. She can be summoned once. Outside an actual battle, she can be summoned for long periods of time, as long as she keeps motionless.
    Summoning her to the field allows the user additional damage points to any genjutsu technique, translating in stronger or less discernible techniques (+10 damage points)

    Approved Contract

    X-Declined-X Remove the part where it increases the range of Genjutsu, rest is fine.

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    ( Genjutsu: Soeki Kyuuzou ) Illusion Arts: Pest Proliferation

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 + (Decoy Jutsu)
    Damage Points: N/A ( Non quantifiable)
    Description: The genjutsu begins by replicating a weak, easily releasable genjutsu (by Kai or small pain) and place it on any number of opponents within range. An example would be False Surrounding, changing the area around the targets. When the target moves to release it, the second, stronger, genjutsu will recognize the output, be it a chakra peak caused by pain or a Kai. This is based on the notion that certain genjutsus, for their complexity and strength, require sharper pain or bigger chakra outbursts in order to be broken, anything smaller will not affect the genjutsu. After having recognized the peak, the genjutsu will duplicate and repeat it in increasingly higher frequency. This will overload the opponent, preventing the usage of complex jutsu (A and above), genjutsu or summoning jutsus, and exhaust the chakra reserves, equivalent to a chakra cost of a Kai for each peak.
    *Can only be used once every 4 turns*
    *Allows multiple targets, but not multiple layers of this same genjutsu*
    *Costs as 2 jutsus*

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    I have a problem with this and its that it would make strong genjutsu (and weak) unreleasable. Basically, upon release, this triggers so it becomes unreleasable. Its pretty unreasonable as its worded. I like the overal ability but it needs to be put in a manner that is can be approved.
    ( Genjutsu: Soeki Kyuuzou ) Illusion Arts: Pest Proliferation

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 + (Decoy Jutsu)
    Damage Points: N/A ( Non quantifiable)
    Description: The genjutsu begins by replicating a weak, easily releasable genjutsu (by Kai or small pain) and place it on any number of opponents within range. An example would be False Surrounding, changing the area around the targets. When the target moves to release it, the second, stronger, genjutsu will recognize the output, be it a chakra peak caused by pain or a Kai. This is based on the notion that certain genjutsus, for their complexity and strength, require sharper pain or bigger chakra outbursts in order to be broken, anything smaller will not affect the genjutsu. After having recognized the peak, the genjutsu will duplicate and repeat it in increasingly higher frequency. This will overload the opponent, preventing the usage of complex jutsu (A and above), genjutsu or summoning jutsus, and exhaust the chakra reserves, equivalent to a chakra cost of a Kai for each peak.
    *Can only be used once every 4 turns*
    *Allows multiple targets, but not multiple layers of this same genjutsu*
    *Costs as 2 jutsus*
    *The weak jutsu gets released upon the usage of Kai, small pain spikes or other means of releasing it. The second, stronger, genjutsu, will react to any method of countering the first genjutsu that would suffice to counter an A ranked Genjutsu.*
    *After the second genjutsu kicks in, although it restricts the usage of complex jutsus, will still allow different methods of countering, such as higher pain peaks, or 3rd person infusion of chakra*


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    Ok, with your added notes there was a problem added. What exactly does the enemy experience in terms of the second genjutsu? The first one is a replication of a weak, non specific genjutsu and upon seeing it or experiencing it, the user produces some effect to release it, triggering the second one. However, what is this second one? And how can it actually restrict the chakra usage? There is a bit of a lack in explanation on how you achieve that. Or is this a Genjutsu/Ninjutsu? Genjutsu for the first part and Ninjutsu for the second part? Being that the Ninjutsu part would be a "noise" or fluctuation you trigger on your enemies chakra flow upon the release method, spending chakra for a limited amount of turns and thus weakening him. Also, note one thing. You're restricting (if it succeeds) your enemy a lot, yet you suffer little to no effect. Its still not very reasonable but it does have potential

    ( Genjutsu/Ninjutsu: Soeki Kyuuzou ) Illusion Arts/Ninja Arts: Pest Proliferation

    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30 + (Decoy Jutsu)
    Damage Points: N/A ( Non quantifiable)
    Description: The genjutsu begins by replicating a weak, easily releasable genjutsu (by Kai or small pain) and place it on any number of opponents within range. An example would be False Surrounding, changing the area around the targets. When the target moves to release it, the second, stronger, genjutsu will recognize the output, be it a chakra peak caused by pain or a Kai. This is based on the notion that certain genjutsus, for their complexity and strength, require sharper pain or bigger chakra outbursts in order to be broken, anything smaller will not affect the genjutsu. After having recognized the peak, the genjutsu will duplicate and repeat it in increasingly higher frequency. This will overload the opponent, preventing the usage of complex jutsu (S and above), genjutsu or summoning jutsus, and exhaust the chakra reserves, equivalent to a chakra cost of a Kai for each peak. The repetition of the chakra peak that exhausts the chakra reserves touches the Ninjutsu in it's technique, as it copies and sends out chakra signals that affect the chakra system physically, but in a very raw and primitive manner, highly distant from the Kurama KG.
    The Second Genjutsu clears the effects of the first one, and changes it with slight ringing noises, body palpitations and slight dizzy vision. If the used method of release was pain, it will recreate the pain by adding it to the body palpitations, seemingly making the body sore. These illusions are presented intermittently.

    *The phsyical effect of the second genjutsu only serves to exhaust the chakra reserves, not to make the illusion of the technique real. Thus no damage is done physically*
    *Can only be used once per battle*
    *Allows multiple targets, but not multiple layers of this same genjutsu*
    *Costs as 2 jutsus*
    *The weak jutsu gets released upon the usage of Kai, small pain spikes or other means of releasing it. The second, stronger, genjutsu, will react to any method of countering the first genjutsu that would suffice to counter an A ranked Genjutsu.*
    *High Ranked users will counter both genjutsus with a single Kai usage (because the second genjutsu is an A rank).
    *After the second genjutsu kicks in, although it restricts the usage of complex jutsus, will still allow different methods of countering, such as higher pain peaks, or 3rd person infusion of chakra , despite the primitive physical part of the genjutsu (ninjutsu)*
    *The user can't preform Summoning techniques or other Genjutsu in the same turn. Can only use 2 jutsus in the second turn. Can't use Forbidden techniques in the same or second turn*

    X-Approved-X Restricted it to once per battle
     
         
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    (Suiton: Seppaku tensuu) - Water Style: Pressure points
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damge Points: 60
    Description: The user would utilize their chakra, taking control of the vapour in the air around the opponent. The user would then use Suiton chakra to condense the water vapour into countless minuscule water droplets. The water droplets are hardly noticeable due to their size, yet still, despite their size, carry a sizeable impact upon hitting the opponent. The water droplets are highly compressed, with the molecules linked closely together to create a tighter bond which reinforces each of the water droplets strength. After doing so, the user snaps their fingers, causing the water droplets to quickly slam into the opponent's body, targeting the pressure points mainly. The water droplets, having been materialized close around the opponent, would take no more than a second to cause impact on the opponent's pressure points. The water droplets, being so strong already, along with slamming into the opponent at high speeds, would cause immense pain and temporary immobilization of the opponent. The pressure points, being hit with such force simultaneously, would generate a shock in the opponent's system, not allowing him to respond nor move his limbs for a couple of seconds due to the sudden impact.

    - Can only be used three times per battle
    - Can only be used by a Medical student(Has been or curently is), and doujutsu user
    - Can on be taught by Toshiro

    X-Declined-X The water droplets are undetectable initially which removes the technique from the criteria of approval.
    (Suiton: Seppaku tensuu) - Water Style: Pressure points
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damge Points: 60
    Description: The user would utilize their chakra, taking control of the vapour in the air around the opponent. The user would then use Suiton chakra to condense the water vapour into countless minuscule water droplets. Despite their size, the water droplets can be seen by the naked eye, and each one carries a sizable impact upon hitting the opponent. The water droplets are highly compressed, with the molecules linked closely together to create a tighter bond which reinforces each of the water droplets strength. After doing so, the user snaps their fingers, causing the water droplets to quickly slam into the opponent's body, targeting the pressure points mainly. The water droplets, having been materialized close around the opponent, would take no more than a second to cause impact on the opponent's pressure points. The water droplets, being so strong already, along with slamming into the opponent at high speeds, would cause immense pain and temporary immobilization of the opponent. The pressure points, being hit with such force simultaneously, would generate a shock in the opponent's system, not allowing him to respond nor move his limbs for a couple of seconds due to the sudden impact.

    - Can only be used three times per battle
    - Can only be used by a Medical student(Has been or curently is), and doujutsu user
    - Can on be taught by Toshiro

    X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else

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    one question: how can you, without a doujutsu, target the pressure points like that with such a high rank, hard to control, technique? Such pinpoint precision is what we call "stretching". You make an undefined, virtually infinite, number of minor water dropplets to materialize around your enemy (meaning some you won't even be following with your eyes) and then, by sheer will, they happen to pinpoint all the pressure points of your enemy, hit them and such? Just like that? Also, I must enforce that if you actually do target the pressure points of a person like that all together its = to instant defeat... I'm tempted to DNR this as i foresee tons of misuse but I'll allow you to resubmit and better it.

    Reworded a sentence, and made it so the water droplets were visible.

    (Fuuton: Kyuushuu ) - Wind Style: Suction
    Type: Offensive | Defensive | Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user concentrates his Wind chakra into a select area within range. Then he generates air currents which spin in a spiraling motion, and forms a vortex of wind in that area with his chakra. The vortex of wind acts almost like a vacuum. The vortex is capable of sucking in tangible or intangible objects, though it cannot suck in objects bigger in size than it. The vortex looks somewhat like Kamui, spinning rapidly to suck in objects. The size of this vortex varies, and so does the distance in which it can suck in objects from. If within range, the object would be sucked rapidly into the vortex at insane speeds, leaving almost no time to react. However, unlike Kamui, this technique has an exit. Depending on where the vortex ends, as in the tip of it, the other end, the object sucked in will reappear and continue as if nothing happened to it. In other words, any object sucked into it enters from one side, and exits from the other side, completely untouched and continues normally, as it would have if it did not get sucked into the vortex.
    The vortex has different sizes, and each size varies on the suction, and what can be sucked in. The vortex at its smallest size is around the size of a pinky finger, and can only suck in objects as small or smaller. It can suck in objects within five inches of it. The vortex can also be created in a medium size, being the size of a person, able to suck in objects as big or smaller. It can suck objects within five feet of it. The maximum size of a vortex, the size of a one storey building, can suck in objects as big or smaller within five meters. This can be used to change the direction at incoming techniques, or projectiles, sucking it in, and having it continue onwards in the direction the exit it.

    - While performing this technique, the user has to constantly focus on the vortex, and thus is opened for attacks.
    - The technique is extremely weak to fire techniques, and the moment fire comes into contact with it, it disperses.
    - Usuable three times per battle
    - Cannot use any other wind techniques, within the same turn or the turn after.
    - Can only be taught by Toshiro

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    (Genjutsu: Genzou) - Illusion arts: Vision
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user utilizing their chakra, will cast a genjutsu towards the opponent by disrupting their chakra flow in their brain. The user will simply wave towards the opponent much similar to how they would wave hello | goodbye, to put them under this genjutsu. While the opponent is under this genjutsu, their vision will be delayed by two seconds. With this the person placed under the illusion will see things happening two seconds later. The person under this genjutsu, will think that they are seeing everything normally, and may not notice what is actually happening.

    - Usable three times per battle
    - Last for two turns
    - Can only be taught by Toshiro

    X-Declined-X Well its still more or less the same technique. Vision needs to give you permission(where we can see it) or simply teach it to you.

    If this falls under Vision's time delay technique, I'm pretty sure he doesn't mind, as I was discussing with him about it via msn in terms of creating it.
     
         
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    Raiton: Raiton Rippou|Lightning Cube
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: S-Rank
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description:
    The user claps both of their hands together channeling lightning chakra into both his hands, he then slowly brings them apart and electricity is seen crackling in the space between his palms. He then releases his lightning chakra and molds it into a cube, about the size of a regular rubix cube. The user then pushes this cube towards his opponent, the user keeps his palms flat facing the cube as it flies towards the opponent and as it travels through the air it grows in size due to the user still feeding it lightning chakra until it becomes a certain size and discharges all of the lightning causing the explosion. This cube moves very fast through the air and is constantly growing in size creating a defense for the user if used properly but when it comes into contact with any obstruction like for example a wind jutsu of the same rank will explode completely enveloping the surrounding area.

    Note: The explosion covers a short range area so if it is used in short range the user will be caught in the explosion.

    Note: If it is used at long range by the time it reaches Mid range too much lightning chakra will have been put into it and so it will discharge the lightning creating the explosion.

    Note: Must be used at Mid range if you want this jutsu to have the proper effect

    Note: Can only use B-Rank and below Lightning jutsu for the three turns after it's used

    Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle

    Note: An F-Rank Wind jutsu will completely destroy it and prevent the explosion

    Note: Can only be taught by Tsuna...

    X-Declined-X Similar to a multitude of existing techniques
     
         
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    Genjutsu: Ureigoto Ryohan (Illusion Technique: Misery's Company)
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80 (-40 to user)
    Description: This is a highly advanced genjutsu that is cast on two shinobi, one of which being the caster himself/herself. This technique can only be used when the caster is placed under an illusion. Upon recognizing that they are trapped, the user will self inflict this illusion onto himself as well his opponent. With this illusion, both the opponent and the user will appear to be violently constricted by tight metal wire. The wire is so tight and sharp that it not only suffocates, but begins to cut through the flesh causing intense pain. The purpose of this illusion is to act as form of genjutsu release as well as a way to ensnare one's opponent in their own illusion. Being placed in an unfamiliar uncontrolled mental state by foreign genjutsu, this illusion allows for the user to break free from their opponent's illusion by initiating the sensation of pain, which the user himself initiates and controls. As a result the user can release himself from this illusion after casting it while still maintaining it on his opponent.
    ~The user is released from this technique at the end of the turn it's initiated while the affects against their opponent lasts for three turns unless released.
    ~Should this technique not be released released within three turns, those under its spell will be rendered unconscious
    ~This technique can only be used twice per battle
    ~This technique can release genjutsu up A-rank, S-rank for genjutsu specialists
    ~The user cannot use other genjutsu in the same turn that this technique is active

    X-Declined-X Illusionary pain wouldnt break a genjutsu. I had to confirm from my fellow mod.
     
         
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    (Bakuton: Yōsei no Shukufuku) Blast Style: Blessing of the Fairy
    Type: Defense | Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user concentrates Bakuton chakra into the air around them as the opponent comes into close-range. As the opponent attacks the user, the user can cause small explosion not large enough to harm the target, but large enough to redirect a punch or kick by "commanding" a small portion of the airborn chakra to explode with concious thought. This allows the user to cancel any physical strike which is noticable by the human eye.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~This jutsu is not automatic; the user must know the attack is coming and must be able to see the strike

    X-Approved-X Keep in mind its C ranked while using this technique

    (Bakuton: Monsutā no Dai Abare) Blast Style: Monster's Rampage
    Type: Attack | Defense | Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The sister technique to "Blast Release: Bombshell", the user focuses their Bakuton chakra around their body, creating a small aura of Bakuton chakra around themselves, which moves with the user's body. The aura is visible to the naked eye as a distortion of light (much like a distortion created through high heat). Any physical object which comes into contact with the aura (other than the surface the user is standing on when the jutsu is used) will cause the aura to spontaniously combust outwards from the point of impact, rendering an opponents projectiles and taijutsu useless. However, this technique takes it to the next level of its sister, allowing the shell to explode multiple times in a single use, instead of the lesser jutsu's single explosion per use.
    Note: ~Can only be taught by Sharingdork
    ~Can only be used 1 time per battle
    ~The aura lasts for two turns
    ~The aura is in the shape of the user, fits around the body of the user, and is 6 inches away from the user (the aura does not extend past the soles of the feet)

    X-Declined-X Sorry... i think i was the person to approve bombshell or atleast checked it once, but i forgot how it looked like and i cant search with the work pile. Resubmit it with the quote
     
         
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    (Genjutsu: Mushi ome) Illusionnary Technique: Bug vision
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: With a single handseal the user can put his opponent into a genjutsu where his vision will be split into 6 hexagons, much like the vision of bugs. Since he's not accustomed to that kind of vision he would be confused and disoriented because he sees the user, 6 times, same as every action the user performs. The user also has the ability to place himself into the genjutsu in order to increase his vision and awareness much like the Sharingan. Because he sees the image 6 times he can concentrate on different specific spots of the opponents body in each hexagon and this way, perceive his motions better than with regular vision. If cast on himself, the effect lasts for 3 turns.

    Note: Useable two times a battle
    Note: If the user casts this genjutsu on himself he can't cast any other genjutsu because they will end the effect
    Note:Can only be taught by AoiAkuma

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    (Kuchiyose: Aoi) Summoning technique: Aoi
    Type:Summon
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:N/A
    Description:
    The user will first bite there thumb, drawing blood. The user will then perform the bird handseal summoning flint. Flint is the brother to the boss booby, flint like his brother is a blue footed booby. Flint isn't as big as his brother, He only stands 10 meters tall. Flint wears a hooded that covers his face but leaves his beak sticking out, the hood extends down to the base of his neck. Flint has the mastery over genjutsu allowing him to perform genjutsu up to S rank without handseals. He can speak English. He also has a telepathic link with the user.

    -Can be summoned once per battle.
    -Stays on the field for 4 turns
    -Can carry two people
    -Must have signed the booby contract

    X-Declined-X Im confused, so why is the name aoi?
    Link gaining ownership of Boobies
     
         
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    Kage guardia ) shadow gard
    Rank: B
    Type:defence
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description the user will throw a Flash bome behind them and expand there shadow to wrap around them to to block the targets jutsu(note can block up to B rank jutsu

    X-Declined-X Shadow is not an element

    Summoning Animal armadillo

    Scroll Owner: TheGreyFox

    Other Users who have signed the contract: None

    Summoning Boss if Existing: Will Create Later with more thought

    Other Summoing Animals tied to contract: Will Submit Later with more thought



    info Armadillos are one of the oldest groups of mammals and have a quirky appearance, with a tough shell composed of bony plates in the dermis covered by horny scales.[4] The giant armadillo is the largest living species of this group, and has 11 to 13 hinged bands protecting the body, and a further three or four on the neck.[5] Its body is dark brown in colour, with a lighter, yellowish band running along the sides, and a pale, yellow-white head. These armadillos have around 80 to 100 teeth, which is more than any other mammal. They also possess extremely long front claws,[4] including a sickle-shaped third claw.[6] The giant armadillos typically weigh around 28–32 kg (62–71 lb) when fully grown, however a 54 kg (120 lb) specimen has been weighed in the wild and captive specimens have been weighed up to 80 kg (180 lb).[7][8] The typical length of the species from 75–100 cm (30–39 in), with the tail adding another 50 cm (20 in).[5]

    X-Declined-X Armadillo's exist

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    Your ban from the CJ thread was not lifted. You are hereby banned from the Custom System until July 2014. Failing to abide may lead to infractions for spamming or further punishments. Funny thing is that tomorrow, 1st of December, I had a notification to remove your ban. You blew it. Don't repeat it.
     
         
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    (Futon: Kedakai Subarashii Jekuto Shūto Mahha II) - Wind Style: Sublimely Magnificent Jecht Shot Mach II
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will form two hand seals and hold their hands out in front of their body palms facing outward with fingers extended. Small balls of wind form at the tip of each finger which the user then throws into the air where they grow to the size of a soccer ball. The user then jumps while going into a rapid spin and kicks each of the ten wind balls in a blink of the eye. Due to the user's spin when kicking these balls they travel very fast and "bend" making them difficult to follow without the aid of dojutsu while allowing the user to strike with them from various angles rather than head on.
    -Can be used three times per battle.
    -Leaves the user slightly dizzy.

    (Doton/Katon: Kedakai Subarashii Jekuto Shūto Mahha III) - Earth/Fire Style: Sublimely Magnificent Jecht Shot Mach III
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage: 80 (-20 if used in short range)
    Description: The user will preform three quick hand seals and stomp on the ground. This causes a large boulder sized chunk of rock to pop out of the ground behind them up into the air overhead. They then jump in the air grabbing the boulder with both hands while fusing the rock with fire chakra causing it to form red glowing cracks that cover the surface. Once done they toss the boulder down towards the target at high speeds where it explodes on contact sending volleyball sized rocks/fire flying out to short range, making it difficult to dodge. The explosion can be triggered by the user early with a single hand seal causing the same effect.
    -Can be used twice per battle.
    -No fire or earth in the same turn.
    -No fire or earth above S-rank the following turn.

    Vague Video of Technique:

    X-Both declined-X Existing techniques
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Sparrow Konpasu - Sparrow Compass
    Type: Weapon
    Rank: S-rank
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Long ago Jack Sparrow discovered a compass that was created, during the time of the sage of six paths, where the compass already had its own chakra signature, but dormant until it gets infused with the users chakra before it gets activated. The compass has a passive and main ability, the passive ability is its sensing like ability, where it can sense other peoples chakra around it and will point to the different chakras through the use of the needle within the compass. When pinpointing any opponent around you on the battlefield, the compass is only able to point around you, it is restricted to detecting the opponent around you but not beneath or above you. The main ability is activated by the users chakra inserted into the compass, when this happens, the compass needle will spin rapidly and then by combining its own and the user’s chakra it will burst out with chakra affecting both the user and the opponent at the same time. Though the user will know what is happening. It will latch onto anyone in the battlefield as if it's like a genjutsu however the chakra doesn't induce genjutsu. It only affects the physical limitations of all the members on the battlefield. The sense's which tells the motor skills of any person within the battlefield gets switched. For example if a person wants to punch with their left fist, the right fist will be used. If the person wants to walk forward, they will walk backwards. It only affects the physical motor skills and when using jutsu's it has no effect, the only affect it has on jutsu is when you use hand seals, let’s say you’re performing the Tiger – Boar – Ram hand seals you actually make the Ram – Boar – Tiger hand seals.
    Restrictions:
    - Only usable by Gutsy Jiraiya
    - Indestructible
    - Passive ability is active at all times
    - Passive ability will be ineffective when using the main ability
    - Main ability needs activation
    - Can be activated twice per battle
    - Activation counts as a move
    - Active for 5 turns

    Dropping: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...02#post7852102 (Post #4)

    X-Declined-X First ability is fine, second ability is an existing technique usable by most people

    Summoning Animal: Squid
    Scroll Owner: Gutsy Jiraiya
    Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
    Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
    Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
    Description and Background: The Squid are cephalopods of the order Teuthida, which comprises around 300 different Squid species. Like all other cephalopods, squid have a distinct head, bilateral symmetry, a mantle, and arms. Squid, like cuttlefish, have eight arms arranged in pairs and two, usually longer, tentacles. Squid are strong swimmers and certain species can "fly" for short distances out out of the water. The Squids was discovered by Jack Sparrow when he was swallowed by a giant squid and taken down to a cave 10 kilometers deep into the ocean, where the squids reside. The user can be reversed summoned inside the cave under the ocean, where it is protected from the giant pressure and a giant air bubble has formed to protect the user. To travel to this location, the user needs to have signed the contract, because if traveling by normal means, the giant pressure from the water would kill the person before reaching his destination.

    X-Declined-X Exists
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Closed till tomorrow. I'll be checking as much as possible today and tomorrow and will post the new marker hopefully tomorrow night.

    Sorry for the delay!
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    ±± New Cycle ±±

    Thread opened for a new weekly cycle of submissions. It starts today, the 17th of November and ends on the 23rd of November. As always, in this cycle, you can submit 3 techniques.

    I must remind members of the following:

    -Name your techniques correctly and abide by the proper template, specially in chakra cost and damage points.

    -Don't add useless restrictions just to try and make it seem your technique is more approvable than it is. Be logical.

    -Read the first post of this thread to try and remind yourself of the rules of the thread as well as some tips to make your techniques more approvable.

    -Try to read through the thread. About 75% of the techniques being submitted are very similar to techniques already done or are exactly the like. Read through this thread and the archived one to avoid making techniques that aren't liked to be approved for being similar to existing techniques.


    Although the thread is still a bit backed up, I'll be opening it for a new cycle of submissions and try to keep it more or less checked. However, if by the end of this cycle its still backed up (more than 3 unchecked pages) I'll close it for a week to check and put up to date.

    Thank you!

     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Im making all the elemental variants for all the dragon slayer shiz <_>

    (Raiton: kensei no doragon ) - Lightning Release: Power of the Dragon
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 per turn)
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This technique is specialised for those who have great control over their lightning chakra. This is usually used in close combat where the user will release their lightning chakra around a part of their body covering them in lightning. This is a non focussed charge like nagashi but only on parts of the body, not the entire body. Due to it being the users chakra and not that strong, it wont hurt the user, which can be quite painful if an opponent is hit by it. When someone/something is hit by this lightning created be the user, it will great a burst of lightning on impact from the user, creating some static bolts that shock and burn what hit his. Since its surrounding the users body, it increases there speed making them thrice more faster.

    Note: Can stay active for 2 turns at a time
    Note: Can't use earth jutsu at the same time

    Permission

    X-Declined-X I know you have a fair permission but im not dragging this dragon slayer stuff any longer until its performed in an organised manner, make a list of people who hae been using the term, bring it to me then i'll make a group for you people.

    (Futon: Kaihō Ea suteppu ni ukabu!)- Wind Release: World Method Floating air step!
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B-rank
    Range: Short Range
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    A very useful and uncommon wind technique. The user begins by focusing futon chakra inside of their body. The user then causes the chakra to leak from their body. The chakra surronds the user as if it was a second skin, leaving them in a 2cm thick layer of futon chakra. The purpose of this chakra is to reduce the friction, making it to where the is almost known. The user is then able to float in the air or slide on the ground. The user uses the chakra to keep control over his movement. The downside to this technique is that the user is unable to grab or hold.
    Note: Last three turns max
    Note: Cant use S-rank and above Fire or Wind techniques while active

    X-Declined-X Similar to two different existing technique that were submitted by different users
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    (Ninjutsu: Takutikku Tanshinfunin) - Ninja Art: Tactical Transfer
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After carefully studying the shadow clone's ability to transfer information upon dispersal, Mathias developed a way to perform that same action while still maintaining the clone on the field. Either the user or the clone will perform the Snake → Tiger hand seals and transfer his chakra out just as if the clone has been dispersed, sending the signal of information back to the original user. If the user activates the technique, it will have a slight delay of about two more seconds because the command has to be given, then received. While on the other hand, the clone can send it directly without command by performing the previously stated hand seals.

    Notes:
    - Only one clone per usage
    - Must be taught by Mathias

    X-Declined-X No Mathy No :overjoy: Shadow Clones are hijutsu used by select konoha ninja. You make clones with slight variations but dont jump in to spectrum of Yamanaka or Wood Clones o-o

    (Genjutsu: Takutikku Furasshubakku) - Illusionary Art: Tactical Flashback
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short - Medium
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After performing the Tiger hand seal, the user will send out his chakra out towards his enemies or allies, successfully disrupting their flow, placing them within a genjutsu. Inside of the illusion the field would seem as if it came to a stand still as the induced targets receive images similar to a flashback. This technique is mostly used for tactical purposes, allowing the user to transfer information in the form of an illusion or even describe a story, reducing the chances of said information being leaked in the process.

    Notes:
    - The illusion will last the entire turn unless dispersed
    - Must be taught by Mathias

    X-Approved-X How come youre using the term Tactical when im the Sage of that?

    (Genjutsu: Takutikku Sogekihei) - Illusionary Art: Tactical Sniper
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Medium
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After grabbing a hold of a bow, the user will place it out in front of him, preparing himself to shoot. If the target catches a glimpse of this physical action, he/she will placed inside of an illusion. Inside of the illusion, he/she will see the user maintain his bow as he reaches for an arrow and prepares to release it, pulling back on the string. As the arrow is ready to be released, a demonic aura will start manifesting itself in the form of the enemy's greatest fear around the arrow, physically paralyzing him/her. In reality, the user has already released the arrow towards his desired location or attacked in another way.

    Notes:
    - Must wait one turn before re-using
    - Can be used four times per battle
    - Must be taught by Mathias

    X-Declined-X Remove that part about the greatest fear and add something else that doens't suggest that the technique would vary from person to person.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

    Link to summoning Approval

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...=1#post8661925

    Summoning Cerberus
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:Cerberus is a water type Fossa capable of using water style jutsu up to C rank, and fire a B rank water bullet once per battle. Cerberus is a blue colored Fossa, and is about the size of a person he is very cheerful and is quite happy most of the time. Cerberus is A warrior type Fossa.

    Restrictions

    -Can only be summoned once per battle
    - Lasts for 4 turns before he disperses.
    -Must have signed Fossa Contract to use.

    X-Approved-X

    Gon the Wind style Fossa
    Type:Summoning
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:Gon is a windstyle Fossa who can use wind techniques up to the B rank, with one A rank wind bullet per battle. Gon is about the size of a Horse, and will snap if you anger him. Gon is one of the most powerful warrior fossa, and wears a simple green cape. He likes to go hunting in the forests of Konoha.

    -Lasts 3 turns-
    -Can only be summoned once per battle-
    -Must have signed Fossa contract to use-

    X-Approved-X

    Fossa Frenzy
    Type:Offence
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:The user first wipes blood across his Fossa tattoo and summons several fossa. The fossa then proceed to run around the enemy at highspeed confusing him greatly. Two fossa will then unseen close in on the enemy closer and closer until they are next to him. The two Fossa would then proceed to reinforce their teeth and claws with chakra and bite and claw the enemy. The enemy would not see them, because of the gigantic circle of Fossa running around him.

    Restrictions

    -Can only be used twice per battle-
    -Must have signed fossa contract to use-

    X-Approved-X Edited the two tomoe part
     
         
    Last edited by Xylon; 11-27-2012 at 11:22 AM.

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