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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    (Bifū Tōfū) - Doll Fatality

    Type: Puppetry, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu

    Background: The art of Doll Fatality was created by a man whose name is unknown. He had developed a new type of puppet which he would've called a "doll". The purpose of the doll is to allow much more flexible movements within the doll, using a different build which allows the user to be much more flexible rather than rigid.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The main ability of Doll Fatality is the usage of the flexibility of puppets and using that to it's best ability. The style gives the advantage of cutting off a puppet's chakra strings in order to use certain moves such as rapid flailing of arms. While one wouldn't be able to control the puppet without the chakra strings, they're able to use force, velocity and momentum to achieve the moves wanted using this technique. For example, launching a puppet with proper trajectory and speed while letting it go at the right time to use it as a projectile. Another use may be rapidly pulling back a puppet's arm and letting it go to use momentum for it to be a flailing weapon of sorts. It's moreso an advanced style of puppetry which also utilizes Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, due to the physical blows of puppets.

    Additional Effects: The user of the style becomes more flexible with puppets, enabling faster control over them. The technique also practices a lot of flowing movements using the chakra strings, so using the style, a higher transition rate between the techniques and other movements such as hand seals is achieved.

    Restrictions: Using the style requires full concentration over puppets, and a synchronization with one's puppet. Unless the user is Kankuro, Sasori or Chiyo (in which they can use Karasu, Sasori's Parents etc.), the puppet must belong to one's self (custom). Also the user must have a mastery over puppetry to use this style. Additionally, this can only be used with puppets which are outside of the user, so it cannot be used with puppets which are used like armor, or if someone turned themself into a puppet, such as Hiruko and Sasori as himself.

    Video to further explain momentum and the style I wish to aim for.

    Note: It's only the first bit with Naruto, how he throws his Shadow Clones. In a similar fashion, one could release chakra strings while the puppet is moving at a high speed to act as a projectile.

    Also watch this for a better example of how I wish to utilize the moves.



    ±± Pending ±± Provide me with an example technique of this and its use.
    (Ningyō Sapo) - Doll Fatality

    Type: Puppetry, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu

    Background: The art of Doll Fatality was created by a man whose name is unknown. He had developed a new type of puppet which he would've called a "doll". The purpose of the doll is to allow much more flexible movements within the doll, using a different build which allows the user to be much more flexible rather than rigid.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The main ability of Doll Fatality is the usage of the flexibility of puppets and using that to it's best ability. The style gives the advantage of cutting off a puppet's chakra strings in order to use certain moves such as rapid flailing of arms. While one wouldn't be able to control the puppet without the chakra strings, they're able to use force, velocity and momentum to achieve the moves wanted using this technique. For example, launching a puppet with proper trajectory and speed while letting it go at the right time to use it as a projectile. Another use may be rapidly pulling back a puppet's arm and letting it go to use momentum for it to be a flailing weapon of sorts. It's moreso an advanced style of puppetry which also utilizes Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, due to the physical blows of puppets.

    Examples of techniques and how it could be used:
    (Ningyō Sapo: Hassha-tai) - Doll Fatality: Projectile
    Rank: C
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 30
    Description:
    • The user will charge a puppet towards the target while releasing the strings to make it like a projectile at them. The user can change the trajectory to increase the range to hit a target at long range.

    (Ningyō Sapo: Tatsumaki) - Doll Fatality: Tornado
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 25
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:
    • The user using Biyorigō will begin to move the puppet towards the target at a high speed while pulling back and releasing the puppet strings connected to it's arms to allow them to flail about around it. The swords which the puppet is holding allows it to hit the target with multiple sharp and blunt attacks while charging towards them.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used 4 times a battle.
    • Can only be used with a Biyorigō puppet.

    (Ningyō Sapo: Sunaarashi) - Doll Fatality: Sandstorm
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    •The user using a Biyorigō puppet will use great force to stick one of it's feet into the ground to use as an axis for spinning. It's swords are positioned at angles so that they can spiral with ease. Using aerodynamic movements and great control, the user will spin the puppet releasing it's puppet strings allowing the puppet to spin around on the spot. The speed is so great that it's capable of dealing major cuts and picking up dust.
    Notes:
    • Can only be used twice a battle.
    • The puppet cannot move after using this for one turn.
    • Can only be used with a Biyorigō puppet.


    Additional Effects: The user of the style becomes more flexible with puppets, enabling faster control over them. The technique also practices a lot of flowing movements using the chakra strings, so using the style, a higher transition rate between the techniques and other movements such as hand seals is achieved.

    Restrictions: Using the style requires full concentration over puppets, and a synchronization with one's puppet. Unless the user is Kankuro, Sasori or Chiyo (in which they can use Karasu, Sasori's Parents etc.), the puppet must belong to one's self (custom). Also the user must have a mastery over puppetry to use this style. Additionally, this can only be used with puppets which are outside of the user, so it cannot be used with puppets which are used like armor, or if someone turned themself into a puppet, such as Hiruko and Sasori as himself.

    Video to further explain momentum and the style I wish to aim for.

    Note: It's only the first bit with Naruto, how he throws his Shadow Clones. In a similar fashion, one could release chakra strings while the puppet is moving at a high speed to act as a projectile.

    Also watch this for a better example of how I wish to utilize the moves.



    ±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Sorry, but you continue to think that you can continue to control your puppet once you release the strings as its shown in your first example of use.

    This is simply you ramming your puppets at your opponents as projectiles by trowing them and releasing their strings. I gave you many chances to work it and keep it worked out so that you could make this approvable. IT had some potential but not that much. Sorry, DNR.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 04-30-2012 at 08:53 PM. Reason: changing the name of my style

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