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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Katana Shishō Ryū | Swordmaster Style
    Type: NinKenjutsu
    Background: This style was implemented by Dante, a lone ninja that was in Konohagakure, after mastering both the Fire and Kenjutsu fighting to a certain extent, he decided that he needs to polish his abilities and take them to the next level, the result was the Swordmaster style, a style that uses Flames in melee weapons combat, this style lead Dante to have more accurate chakra control to imploy the fire to the sword's/melee weapon's blade, so as to not be affected by the intense heat and fire that exists around the sword, this is done by mastering both ninjutsu and Kenjutsu styles, along with the fire style.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Sword Master style revolves around using Fire release in conjunction with Kenjutsu mainly swords however it can be used with other melee weapons provided that they have a blade the bigger the weapon the better the effect of the style has, by using the vibrations of the fire release chakra, the user is capable of adding extreme heat to the point of impact of the blade making it cut through objects easier by greatly heating them, or uses the fire itself around the blade that's made through the usage of Fire Release, it's mainly a short - Mid ranged style of Ninkenjutsu, it also revolves around fast swings and movement of the melee weapon that's covered with super heated chakra affecting the air around themselves, often creating bursts of condensed heat around the user to protect them from attacks or attack opponents, or mainly to hurt the opponent to some extent, the superheated air around the user can also be used as means for other attacks to be performed, or Fire to be released through the blade, therefore it's required that the user has great Fire chakra manipulation and kenjutsu mastery, the superheated "air" would be visible to the opponent's normal eye sight, seeing it as a faint red aura that's resonating from the heated air, the aura's color varies according to the speed in which the blade is spinning at, varying from a faint red aura to a strong dark red aura.

    Example Of Techniques And How It Could Be Used:

    (Katana Shishō Ryū: Zenshin) – Swordmaster Style: Drive
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user holds their Sword or melee weapon in a reverse grip manner around their back as they bend their knees down nearly touching the ground getting in a crouching manner, using the fire chakra around their sword as the sword begins glowing in red aura to superheat the air by using Fire chakra in conjunction with a blazing fast horizontal shaped slash in front of them, sending a superheated wave of air towards their opponent's direction in a crescent shaped arc, the wave can be clearly seen as a resonating wave of "red-ish" aura that's heading towards them.

    (Katana Shishō Ryū: Kihō Jikoko) – Swordmaster Style: High Time
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Close
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A (+60 if used as an attack)
    Description: the user holds his sword tightly as he charges it with a mass of fire chakra, then proceeds to spin the sword/melee weapon at fast speeds causing the blade to glow in a red aura, resulting in heating the air around the blade, this technique can be used as a defense against incoming attacks in front of the user or to either of his right and left sides, by spinning the blade against the incoming technique and using the superheated air as medium of defense, or can use this technique as an attack to slice nearby opponent's of the user, however when used in attacking the sword is usually spinned to either of the user's left and right sides in a vertically spinning manner, when the user spins the blade at fast speeds it looks like a huge "cartwheel" shape of red aura, this technique is capable of blocking B-rank and below elemental techniques, and non elemental ninjutsu techniques of A-rank.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • Mastery of Fire Release
    • Mastery of Kenjutsu and chakra control "Ninjutsu"
    • The speed of the user of this style is slightly increased than that of a Taijutsu master's speed, allowing the body to use the style to it's fullest extent, mainly having one additional rank in speed, meaning that a Sannin will have the speed of a Kage, and a Kage will have the speed of an official sage
    • Strength of the user's arms is also boosted slightly, to be able to wield large weapons with little effort, the user of this style has an additional rank in strength in his arms, meaning that a sannin has the strength of a Kage, and a Kage has the strength of an official sage.
    • User of this style have certain resistance to heat, meaning that their bodies can withstand heated air to a certain extent because of the ability of this style, however that doesn't mean he's immune to heat, it can still affect his body.
    • The user must be at least a Sannin to use this style.

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    If this only extends to running fire chakra through your blade to heat it or releasing fire through your blade, then I can't approve this as many custom techniques that do similar things have already been made (perhaps not the heat part, but if you're just heating your blade then this isn't a CFS in the first place) that already do the same thing, and a lot of custom weapons already have elemental chakra infusing abilities. So on those grounds I can't approve this CFS because you can't quite patent the idea of running fire chakra through a weapon despite the fact that it's already been done in the past. If you can find something unique to do with the fire, then it would be easier to work with.
     
         
    Last edited by Riku..; 11-20-2012 at 10:09 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (Karada Omori Gigei)- Body Weight Arts

    Type: Nintaijutsu

    Background: This taijutsu style created by the Legendary Earth Prodigy, Genral Teno. He studied the element of earth day In and day out. One specific techniques that stood out was the Added/Light Weight earth styles. Studying them, he performed the techniques on himself day in and day out. He then found a way to add or reduce weight to each of his body part increasing his speed, defense and strength in certain places, thus creating: Body Weight Arts. Teno, however wished to keep quiet about this style, wishing to avoid the fame, and instead left it to his student, Broly, to pass it on.

    Description of the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style involves the user spreading their earth chakra to specific areas throughout his and his opponents body. In this fighting style the user is able to focus his earth chakra into a specific body part in order to either increase or decrease the weight, to either increase the damage of the attack This can be used to increase the force and damage behind the user's attacks, or decrease the damage from his opponents blows against as well as make the user faster. This can also be used to petrify an opponent or make him so light that they are blown away by even the user blowing regular air at them. Even with increasing the weight of an attack, it doesn’t necessarily mean the user is susceptible for damage. For example, we have seen Choji unleash massive punches into Jirobo, without suffering side effects or recoil. Tsunade and Sakura also have been shown to punch through concrete, rocks, and leave large craters in the ground upon impact, without damage to themselves or recoil. This works much in the same way, by simply hardening any part of the users body to be able to crush an object upon impact or take a hit while not making the user crumble themselves or be crushed under their own weight. The user can also transfer this into objects, like the cannon jutsu.

    In addition to this the user has mastered this jutsu to an extent that they are able to focus these weight jutsus, outward from his body across longer distances (up to mid range) to affect multiple things in the form of a shockwave however since this isnt as concentrated as when used in short range or on the user, these are only able to slow the opponent/object down in the case of decreasing the weight, can only make them weak (as in physically unable to lift things, or themselves). For example the user can punch forward and release a wave of added weight earth chakra into the air at his opponent that will slow him down to the speed of a chuunin.


    Usage Examples:
    Added Weight: Delay
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short- Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user claps his hands and releases a wave of added weight chakra at the user that if hit will bring his speed and reaction down varying levels depending on where he is if hit.

    Short- The opponent is brought down to the speed and of a ninja 3 ranks below him
    Mid- The opponent is brought down to the speed of a ninja 2 ranks below him

    Weight Switch
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user, while in contact with an opponent quickly transfers one weight change into the opponent while focusing one weight change into one of his limbs. For example he grabs the opponents arm and channels lightened weight into them while channeling added weight into his own arm. The lightened weight will make the opponent very weak, so it will be hard to fight back while the users, now weighted arm does extra damage due to how light the opponent is


    Added Weight: Stone Cold
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80 (turned to stone if hit)
    Description: The user, when in contact with his opponent for at least 2 seconds, focuses a massive amount of added weight chakra into his opponent and petrify's him for 1 turn.




    Aditional effects and Restrictions


    -Must have mastered earth release
    -Must have started training in Taijutsu
    -Only Taught by -Broly-

    -The user, while training for this cfs has went through intense weight training to master the manipulation of weight. They will have increased agility speed and strength from learning to manipulate his weight precisely, as well as training with so much added weight therefore his strength,strength and agility increases greatly, to that of a tai master



    Teno has given me permission to submit this due to his banning: HERE
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    Teno can submit it himself when his ban ends.
     
         
    Last edited by Riku..; 11-04-2012 at 03:14 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Power of the senses
    Type: Kenjutsu & Taijutsu
    Background: In the Land of Iron, there was once a great and powerful Samurai known as Mirandus. She was known throughout the land as a hero. In battle she was untouchable, some thought she could see the future, which is why she would be able to avoid attacks, or seemingly predict where they were coming from. When In actuality, she wasnt predicting them at all, but instead feeling them out, by using a unique fighting style that she invented which she used to face against powerful opponents. At one point in time, with this technique, she once bested a Kage with it since the fightning style was made especially to exploit a ninja's opening after and before performing jutsu with handseals.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Through serious meditation and discipline, one is able to clear their mind and hone in on their senses and can even get to the point where they can cancel out certain senses. The fightning style is all about chakra control and Mental power. By "taking away" some of their senses, they are able to focus more on the others (like how a blind person who has no sight, can hear extremely well and more precisely) In this case, the user will use their mind to cancel out all but sight and feeling making those two senses even more sharp and precise. With that, the user is able to precieve things alot better and their feelings are more in tune with their surroundings. In
    battle, one can use these upgraded senses to their advantage. With Hearing, by increasing the sense one can upgrade their hearing so well that they can hear even the smallest pin drop from several feet away. Feeling, one can upgrade their sense of feel to be able to feel even the slightest change in the wind, and can feel the pressure in the air, some jutsu give off a certain pressure, with this, the user can prepare for a correct counter measure before the jutsu is released. With sight, one can see the most subtle changes in an environment clearly noticing even the smallest detail, one can see the handseals begin and end with little difficulty, depending how fast they are preformed of course. Along with the upgrading of the senses, the second part of the fighting style is chakra control. By quickly concentrating their chakra levels in certain parts of the brain, one can quickly for an instant give themselves a seemingly powerful burst of energy, and direct that energy to their body giving them, for an instant extreme speed. With that speed, they are able to quickly lash out with an attack unexpectedly, catching the opponent off gaurd, along with their senses makes for a formiddible technique. The less senses the brain focuses on, the more powerful the chosen senses become. EX: taking out smell, hearing, increases sight and feel greatly.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    As one would expect, by increasing the senses, not only have they improved for the best, but there lies a great disadvantage as well. With an increased sense of hearing, loud noises can become harmful, with sight, bright lights can be blinding, and with feeling, things become more painful. So in by gaining greater abilities, one also gains greater weaknesses.
    Can be learned by anyone, but can be only taught by axXx

    example techniques

    Power of the senses: Sight
    Rank: A
    Type:Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: By only focusing on their sight senses, all other senses are null. With the brain focusing all its energy on the eyes. They can see the the slightest detail in even the most complicated handseals. Perception skills are doubled, and things seemingly move in slow motion.
    Note: Flashing techniques and bright lights have x2 the effect than normal.
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    Power of the senses: Zero Shift Counter
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user, by concentrating chakra in their mind and making the brain produce adrenaline energy, the user then channels that energy into their body. With the boost of energy, along with the users natural speed, they quickly close any distance and strike an opponent with a powerful blow to the body, the attack is nearly and can only be blocked due to it shear speed. The attack sends the target flying through the air several feet. The more skilled the user the faster and more powerful the attack is.
    Note: If used at close range, the attack is seemingly instant.
    Note: Speed and power is determined by rank, Works against same rank or lower.


    Battle scenario

    Girl B does the required handseals and slams her hand to the ground as she does the ground opens from beneath girl b and devours her.

    (Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: The user performs the Ram → Horse → Tiger → Rabbit → Snake and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them

    Girl A focuses her senses and cancels out all but sight. As she sees the users palm hit the ground and notices the jutsu begin to activate she sees the moment where the opponent rises from the ground after slaming her palm, with that small second of an oppening at that moment she quickly launches a fierce speedly blow to the opponent. The opponent, having just activated the justu has no time to defend themself and is hit and sent flying into the air.
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    Someone is already submitting the "Blind Arts" that focus on enhancing other senses by relinquishing sight, and sight enhancement pretty much falls under custom doujutsu, so this cannot be approved.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±


    Shigure Soen Ryu | Shower in Late Autumn

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    NinKenjutsu

    Background:

    The Shigure Soen Ryu is a sword style that is called the "Invincible Sword Style" for several reasons. This style originated with one man, and like a family tree, it grew. As the style was passed down, the more the tree grew. It is common for a generation to add a new technique to the Shigure Soen. This is a sword style that varies, depending on who your master was. Thus, there could be many different variations of the Shigure Soen Style. The Shigure Soen Style is a notoriously deadly sword style that is only passed down to worthy successors. Each technique of the style is only shown once to the student - if the student is worthy to succeed, he only needs to see it once to remember how to use it from then on. It originally only had one form that was passed down through generations of successors with each successor creating and adding their own techniques resulting in many branches of Shigure Soen Style. However, as new techniques were created, the weaker branches deteriorate, and others disappear as there is no worthy successor; hence, this style can be called the perfect, flawless style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The Shigure Soen Ryu, despite it's power and deadliness, is a very basic sword style that allows the user to infuse his water chakra into his sword and use it to create powerful and effective defenses, same as attacks. The style itself has six offensive and three defensive techniques, also called forms, and one ultimate form, where the user combines all the forms into one.

    Usage examples:

    Shigure Soen Ryu: Shajiku no Ame | Shower in Late Autumn: Axle of Rain
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: Shajiku no Ame is the first offensive form of Shigure Soen Ryu. The user simply channels his chakra into his sword and performs a stab. In case the stab appears to be too short to reach the opponent, he can release the water chakra, in the form of a thin stream of water, towards the opponent.


    Shigure Soen Ryu: Sakamaku Ame | Shower in Late Autumn: Rolling Rain
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Sakamaku Ame is the defensive, second form of the Shigure Soen Ryu style. The user creates a wave of water rise around him, in a circular area, short ranged from him that serves as a protection. The wave is about the users height. After creating the wave, the user ducks and places the sword, vertically in front of him, serving as a secondary defense.


    Shigure Soen Ryu: Yarazu no Ame | Shower in Late Autumn: Last Minute Rain
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Yarazu no Ame is the offensive third form of the Shigure Soen Ryu style. The user, drops his water infused sword and kicks its hilt, propelling the sword at a great speed, towards his opponent. The sword travels in a straight line, but due to the water chakra being channeled into it, he can slightly alter it's pathway, in case the opponent tries to dodge it.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    Abilities:
    Other than the apparent abilities that the Shigure Soen Ryu grants the user, it makes the blade of the users sword, very slippery due to the infused water chakra. The slippery effects grants the user the ability to easily take the advantage of the opponent and finish him off by dealing the deadly blow.

    Restrictions:
    Mastery over Water release and regular Kenjutsu
    Water as specialty
    Sannin rank

    Note for checker: I tried submitting this a few days ago, but I erased the submission after people told me that Axle is the owner of Shigure Soen Ryu before the CFS thread was made. I went to him and asked him if he has any intentions in submitting it as a CFS and he gave me permission to do so. Here is the link to his permission.
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    The problem is that you just didn't explain the style. You mentioned that it was the ultimate defensive or flawless style, but never really clarified why. All that you really said under the description of the style is that you focus water chakra through your blade (which really isn't a CFS because that can already be done normally). You just need to explain this more. The usage examples are an extra, but you should focus more on the description of the style more to explain exactly what you're trying to do here, because I really don't know after having read the style.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Cane Arts *
    Type: Ken/Taijutsu
    Background: Long time ago in the era of swordsmen stood a man dominant to all his name was MB, the secret of his dominance is not his swordsmen ship, it was his ability to use a cane very profeccienlty, he was able to take down high level swordsmen by only his cane and his taijutsu. The secrets of the art have been passes down through generations.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Cane arts is based on three categorial principles," strength, resilience, and anticipation." The user of the art must have a good body structure, and a fair amount of strength since the warrior should cause maximum damage to the opponent using their strength so that the fight ends quickly and the number of casualties and insures are minimized. The users of the art must be physically fit, so they can dodge their opponents attacks and so that they maximize the amount of damage caused by moving their body to the perfect position to hit the opponent whether it requires being at a 180 degree angle while on their feet or being capable of twisting body at will. The third principle is anticipation the user mist have a keen eye to percept or rather anticipate the the opponents next move and block it before the opponent tries it thus minimizing the chance of getting hit and maximizing the chance of hitting.

    Taijutsu was also incorporated to this art where the user uses his cane in various ways and attacks the opponent by using taijutsu thus users of the art must have started their training in taijutsu to use the art and the higher their taijutsu level the better their use of the art their understanding of it.

    Some techniques:

    Cane art: Rowdy Spin

    Rank: B rank
    Type: Offensive/Defensive*
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will dash toward the opponent and before reaching them will thrust their cane in the earth so that it stands vertically erect, the user will use their running momentum and hold the upper part of the cane and spin around as if the cane is a pole. The user will deliver kicks to the opponent while in the air, it can be used to attack multiple opponents.

    Cane art: Ultimate Spin

    Rank: A rank
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user will thrust his/her cane into a body limb of the opponent and begin to quickly spin the cane while inserting chakra to the cane causing a drill like sensation to the opponent, causingnd *them great pain .

    Cane art: Cane Opening

    Rank: C rank
    Type: Supplementery*
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: The user will hit their opponent several times with the cane (4) then they will end it by hitting their opponent with a vertical "slash" with their cane and send them into the air. This is ment to create an opening for following techniques like rasengan or chidori for example.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:*
    -To use this art the user must be Sannin rank and above.
    -Must have started training in taijutsu.
    -The users of this art can't have a custom weapon since the cane will be there weapon although they can create custom canes.

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    ±± Declined ±±
    nothing special about this to be a CFS
    Note I basically changed everything from history to how it works I did bold the restrictions though

    Cane Arts/Canes of sin Style( Jou Gigei/Jou *Kamae)
    Type:Ninjutsu/Taijutsu/Kenjutsu
    Background: Long time ago in the era of swordsmen stood a group of men dominant in the battlefield these men were no ordinary "sword fighters" they were not even sword fighters at all, they were cane users, with there canes they ruled the battle field and it was believed that the powers of the canes rivaled the power of the current seven swords of the mist. Throughout time the cane users got older one by one each of them died but their deaths were not normal deaths, after they died it is believed that part of their soul transferred to their canes empowering their canes even further, some consider this idly talk and tall tales and believe that the canes themselves were already unique but the users only knew how to unlock a portion of the canes power and after their death the canes power were no longer held back. Now before the final cane user died he did extensive research on his comrades canes and discovered the truth of their strength and he was even able to predict what the power of his cane will be after his death *will be, so before he died he wrote all the info about the canes on three scrolls...Many generations later a man named MB discovered these scrolls: the first scroll contained info on the location of the canes and how to use them, the second contained info on the special abilities of the canes and the original users of the cane to easen the training process for the new cane users by giving them insight on the way the canes were used, the third scroll was severely damaged and only a small portion of it was readable the part that was unreadable was the part related to how to make the canes rival the seven swords of the mist, and thus without that part of the scroll the canes power was downgraded but the canes were still very strong and useful. MB then decided to share the power of the canes -after extensive research- to the ninja world. He divided the 7 canes as the tailed beasts were divided each village having one cane and the remaining two(amegakure not included in villages) were given to those of suitable skill regardless of there village affiliation although throughout generations it has been observed the one user of this art always posses two canes.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Through the usage of the first scroll the users were taught the basic criteria of cane arts which consisted of: "Attack Forms, Defensive Forms, and Ultimate Forms"

    Attack Forms and Defensive forms consisted of ways to simply attack and defend against attacks. Ultimate forms were the forms that were used when fighting very skilled opponent thus this form was only passed out to a select few students the forms were what allowed the user to use the real/special abilities of the canes which can be divided into two categories attack and defense some canes have similar ultimates attacks like water and fire some have similar defenses like ice and earth (all will be explained further in the techniques themselves if approved) the number of ultimate attacks is 4 leaving 6 normal techniques.

    The second scroll which contained info on the original users of the canes gave the students of this art insight on the way the original users fought and used their canes and what was there speciality(Fire, Wind, Earth, Lightning, Water, Ice, Nara) this enabled the students to know which path they will follow.

    The third scroll was severely damaged the only part that was readable was the continuation of the second scroll on it which contained the story of the original users and their canes and canes abilities:

    Mammon: She was the greediest of all of her companions she had an extreme urge to burn down anything and everything that crossed her path and her being a fire specialist increased her pyromaniancy tendency. Her cane was called "Cane of*
    Asmodeus: He was the quickest of his teammates he was the lightning master of the users he was a deadly adversary in the battle field that was rarely reckoned with. He cane was called "Cane of Superbness"
    Satan: Satan was the rival of Lucifer and was a good one as a matter of fact he had several fights with Lucifer by he never once won one this was due to the fact that Lucifer was the worst against Lucifer he was a proficient water user Lucifer was a ice user his attacks only empowered Lucifer. The cane of Satan was Called "Cane of Violent Tides"
    Beelzebub: He was a stealthy user even amongst his companions he used the wind element to it's fullest and was a very skilled user of it he was so skilled that he had the ability to manipulate the air around him and take flight in the sky freely. His cane was called "Cane of Pressure"
    Belphegor: She was one of the greatest earth users of her era, she was the laziest of the group but her laziness did not affect her skill in the usage of the earth element. Her Cane was called "Cane of Earth"
    Lucifer: He was the leader of the group of canes-men thus he was the strongest of them all, he was a merciless killer whom will aspire for his goals and will do anything to get to them regardless of the opposed. He had a cane that was labelled "Cane of Merciless Blizzards" the cane was an ice cane which was the perfect match for Lucifer since he was a member of the Yuki Clan.*
    Leviathan: He was a rather peculiar one he always maintained a low profile and was rare to be seen except when he was in the battlefield. He had the ability to manipulate shadows (Nara clan) he was one of the best users of this art and was the smartest of his companions thus he was more likely to be the one making the plans for an attack. His cane was called "Cane of Light" Ironically.

    Usage Examples:
    Cane Arts: Cane Series
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will place one hand on the middle of his cane and the others on either the upper or lower side of the cane the user will then attack the enemy with three consecutive attacks to the body after those attacks are complete the user will then lower his stance and strike with his cane the legs of his opponent causing them to fall on their back or face.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -The Canes are made of steel.[/
    -The Canes are divided among the five villages each village having a member holding one of the canes of sin and the other remaining canes can be wielded by anyone deemed fit regardless of affiliations and note that a single user can wield one or more canes(three max)

    -To use this art the user must be Sannin rank and above.
    -Must have started training in taijutsu and kenjutsu.

    Note: Oasis Nara holds the Fire and Shadow (Nara Canes) for now while I hold the Ice Cane
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    The fact that you added about the different canes divided between villages and everything doesn't change anything about the CFS; it's really just a bunch of superfluous information. The only saving grace that you have is the ability to focus chakra through the weapons, but that can already be done with any weapon without a CFS.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±


    (Gijutsu Gin Senkou) Art Of The Silver Flash
    Type:Gen/Kenjutsu
    Background:This style first developed by Minato Namikaze during his time spent in kirigakure, attempting to learn the startling proficiency in swordsmanship the members of the village had, he devoted himself to the way of the sword, mastering its usage quite quickly he adapted his style of swordplay to fit his own abilities working on fencing style kenjutsu practicing devestating thrusts of the blade combined with his amazing footwork and agility, allowing him to stand up to larger stronger opponents of the type kirigakure had, and to defend himself against the greatswords favored in the village.
    After several months he began to incorporate slight illusions in to his technique mirroring the sly mind effect technique present in the mist of kirigakure and learning to manipulate the illusions to his advantage within the mist, after a long time he began to use a similar effect outside the mist placing his opponents in a genjutsu technique similar to the sly mind effect, he achieved this through subtle means, the opponents eyes meeting his blade, the clang of steel on steel released stored chakra in his blade casting the opponent in genjutsu also, he named the style the art of the silver flash due to the speed of his techniques and the illusion making the opponent not even realize they had been cut.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The abilities of this fighting style are quite simple, the user relies on excellent manouverability and footwork to dodge and dance around the opponent in a close range setting relying on speed over power and awaiting the chance to make a critical blow, they become a bastion of defense easily allowing parrying and dodging but this lack of strength and force leaves them weakened in regard to directly blocking attacks, in the right situation the user will cast a genjutsu on the opponent using his sword as a medium for this, the genjutsu will affect the opponents senses making them believe the user is peforming a set of actions chosen by himself, when in reality something completely different is actually happening, this allows the opponent to attack unhindered while the genjutsu remains in effect, the genjutsu breaks as the opponents attack lands causing the enemy to be shocked as it almost appears the user must have moved at incredible speeds that he could not track.
    Though a variation of this is known as the quick draw, the user keeps his blade sheathed at all times and uses the drawing of the blade and the sound created by it leaving the saya to cast the genjutsu, making the initial draw cast the opponent in the genjutsu.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Focusing chakra in to the blade for genjutsu makes the weapon unable to mold any other chakra in to it for the turn used to cast the genjutsu-
    -The user of this style gains a passive movement increase and increased agility-
    -The user of this style becomes weakened overall giving all Taijutsu and Kenjutsu attacks a -5 in damage-
    -May only be taught by Rexii-


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    Scorps already has the Lazy Fist for using genjutsu through physical contact, and Severus Snape has already submitted (and will be resubmitting to my understanding) the use of genjutsu through weapons (it was only on hold until she got permission from Scorps to use genjutsu through contact), so this cannot be approved. Other than that, everything else here can be done free-form.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±


    Dansu Sono Senpuu Mori | Dance of the Whirlwind Lancer
    Type: NinKenjutsu
    Background:

    This style was founded by a powerful wind master, some even call him the original Sage of Wind, known as Xaldin. Xaldin not only became a master of wind release, but also a master of kenjutsu. Shortly after taking an interest in kenjutsu, Xaldin took a step further and instead of using swords in battle, he used lances.

    Lances themselves were difficult and sometimes cumbersome to use during battle. Being able to effectively balance them, aim them with pinpoint accuracy, and use them quickly enough to defend against sword and taijutsu strikes became a problem for Xaldin. He soon mastered the use of lances, but then decided to use his prowess with wind release to create a new style that would not only solve all problems that he had with perfecting his lance wielding, but also made battling with them simpler, more effective, and deadlier than ever. Xaldin became the original Whirlwind Lancer, combining wind release with his lances, and became a force to be reckoned with while using this style. Recently, his lances, known collectively as Lindworm, have been rediscovered along with his long forgotten style by Riku of the Yuki clan.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    This style employs six retractable and attachable lances, each of them only slightly less than three meters long, along with wind manipulation. The user uses their wind chakra to make the lances stay in the air in various formations, either motionless or moving, around him.

    The style must first be “activated” by a technique that allows the lances to “dance” around the user. Once active, the user can control the lances in any way that he sees fit with simple hand motions. One motion may, for example, make one of the lances swipe to the left, while another may bring all of the lances in front of the user to act as a protective shield. The users control over these lances is limitless. The free form aspect of this allows the user to freely move the lances in basic attacks, while the actual techniques in this style make the user focus either more or less wind chakra and move them in a more forceful or concentrated manner. The user can freely switch between attacking with hand motions and without holding the lances to quickly calling one of the lances to his grasp to fight using his hands.

    The lances, of course, aren’t carried by normal means due to both their size and abundance. Rather all of the lances are retractable and can be reduced to the size of a small dagger. Users of this style will normally carry the lances in their retracted form somewhere on their person (on their waist, leg, lower body, etc.) and upon initiating use of the style, a user will throw out all of these lances in front of him, and will then control their wind chakra to coat each of the lances. Using their wind chakra, they will then pull out the lances to their actual form. In addition to being retractable, as mentioned before the lances can be attached to one another from end to end in various forms. This can go from simply making a longer lance for more reach to connecting them in various shapes in the more complex techniques in the style.

    The user is in fact capable of using other techniques while this is active. However, while actually using any other techniques the lances will remain temporarily stationary; suspended in mid-air from wherever the user stopped controlling them. This is due to one of the special effects of mastering this style. The wind chakra that the user coats each of the lances in keeps the lances suspended slightly above ground at all times, and will keep the lances suspended from wherever the user stops controlling them as a result of the wind chakra still coating them. Since activating this style is a technique in itself (see below under example techniques) there is no need for the user to continually run chakra through the lances. They need only control the wind chakra already coating the lances, reactivate the chakra when it deactivates due to being hit by another technique, and add the necessary amount of chakra when using any additional technique involving the lances. The amount of lances necessary for techniques in this style vary, and the user does not have to necessarily use all of the lances at once (though obviously when doing this techniques that require all six lances simultaneously will be unavailable to the user).

    Example Techniques:

    Dance of the Whirlwind Lancer: Awaken
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: This is the core technique of the Whirlwind Lancer fighting style. By using this technique, the user will “awaken” as many of the six lances as he wishes. This simply means that he will coat them in wind chakra to allow them to levitate around him in mid-air. The default positioning of these lances is having three on each side. One in front of the user to the right, one in front to the left, one on each side of the user, one behind the user to the right, and the last one behind the user to the left. From this point, the user is able to, through hand motions described in the actual fighting style itself, control each and every one of the lances. (See the actual fighting style for more information)
    Note: All of the lances, being coated with wind chakra, have each of their strikes treated as D-rank techniques that can be dodged without the use of a jutsu (as a normal sword strike or taijutsu attack could be dodged) but due to their enhanced cutting power are capable of slicing through normal weapons as well as D-rank and below techniques. The other techniques in this style are treated with the rank given in their description without any regard to this note.
    Note: This technique stays active until the lances come in contact with a technique of equal or higher rank (excluding ration techniques). Once this happens the lance, or lances, that were hit will no longer be coated in wind chakra and the user will need to either reactivate the technique or continue fighting with the missing lance.
    Note: Even when attached the lances are still treated as one D-rank technique.

    Dance of the Whirlwind Lancer: Bite
    Type: Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user will focus wind chakra into all six of the lances at once. This technique requires two quick movements. First, the user will throw bring each of his hands outward away from each other. The lances will respond by positioning themselves directly in front of the user. Three will be in front of the user to his left, and the other three in front of the user to his right. With one quick movement, the user will clap his hands together from their former position, and the lances will clash into each other. They won’t hit each other head one, but rather they’ll go into each other, so that the result is each of the six lances being “stacked” on top of each other. The three lances to the right will be spread out just enough so that the three lances to the left can fit perfectly in between them, and vice versa. The result of this technique will either skewer the target in front of the user or provide a perfect shield of the lances and wind chakra right in front of the user.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Must have mastered ninjutsu, kenjutsu, and wind element manipulation.
    -Masters of this style have highly above-average chakra control.
    -Masters of this style also have increased reflexes, especially in close combat and general awareness of their surroundings; in order to use this style the user must be able to simultaneously control and be aware of what all three of the lances are doing simultaneously. This requires the user to focus on multiple things at once and be able to react quickly, increasing their reflexes and awareness.

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    Riku, our blue moderator, gave on the date November the 11th of 2012 a request for a Patent on Custom Fighting Style (Dance of the Whirlwind Lancer). I, Nexus of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by NarutoBase, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Dansu Sono Senpuu Mori
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±


    Debiru Saika 悪魔の剣術 | Devil's Slashing

    Type: Ninkenjutsu

    Background:
    Debiru Kenkaku 悪魔の剣術, Devil's Slashing is a Sword Style that has originated during a major Ninja War. Shinobi began enhancing the ability of swords (katanas) with their chakra and skill with Ninjutsu. The use of katanas as weapons escalated, and so techniques were created and it was enhanced upon. A group of shinobi from an unknown village invented Devil's Slashing. They were able to combine Dark Energy from one's will with chakra, they also had the ability to control this energy and ability. The style was eventually passed down through several shinobi outside the village who have the ability to control it, the village itself eventually lost existence, however, the Style lives on. The appearance of the chakra when released through the sword is black due to Negative energy, while the movement of the user while using this style is "unstable" yet effective, similar to the movement of a walking spirit which earned the name of this style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Dance of The Slasher|猛烈な

    The Dance of the Slasher is the style in which the user makes several unstable, loose movements while wielding the sword. These unstable movements grants the user the ability to dodge and attack more speedily and effectively. The user while in use of the Slasher's Dance, is capable of greater flexibility which is great for close combat slashing. Due to training, masters can control these movements where necessary.

    Swordsmanship of The Slasher|斬撃剣術

    In conjunction with the Dance of the Slasher, the user manipulates swords in order to inflict damage upon victims. The Sword Style allows the user to manipulate the granted abilities of the Dance, speed, flexibility and agility, to effectively strike opponents. The Sword Style consists of mainly free-form slashing, arc slashes and physical blows from the sword. Swordsmanship of The Slasher has two styles, One Sword Style, and Two Sword Style. Some techniques require a specific Sword Style.

    Ninjutsu of the Slasher|忍術は斬撃

    This Style deals with manipulating the user's ninjutsu abilities and the Swordsmanship of the Slasher Style. With this style, the user is able to combine one's Negative/Dark energy, with chakra, then channel it through a sword. As a result of the Negative energy, the user is able to release Dark/Negative Chakra Waves from the sword to add to it's cutting power, or to achieve the ability of attacking from a distance. Due to training, users are able to control Negative chakra, so that they may easily switch between Negative and regular chakra by pausing the focus of negative energy. This way, one can still perform Elemental or regular ninjutsu techniques.

    Example of Movements:


    Abilities:
    ✖ The Chakra released from the sword has great cutting power thanks to it's extreme compression, thus is able to cut through elements (including the solid elements but excluding metal elements) of the same rank and lower.
    ✖ The sword infused with Dark Chakra gets enhanced raw cutting power (similar to what regular wind chakra does).

    Examples of Techniques:

    [Debiru Saika: Kuchiake] Devil's Slashing: Activation
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 10
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user focuses on his chakra and negative energy. He begins to gather negative energy to initiate the style of Devil's Slashing. Once the activation is complete, the user gains access to the abilities and techniques of the style. The Style can also be deactivated by performing the [Tiger-Dog-Tiger] handseals.
    ♞ The gathering of negative energy takes a while, so the activation takes an entire turn to complete.
    ♞ Must have been taught in the Style of Devil's Slashing.
    ♞ If the user loses all his swords, the style automatically deactivates.
    ♞ Created by Drizzeh, thus can only be taught by him.

    [Debiru Saika: Wangetsu ze Ankoku] Devil's Slashing: Crescent of Darkness
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: D-S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 10-40 (Depends on Rank)
    Damage: 20-80 (Depends on Rank)
    Description: "Devil's Slashing: Crescent of Darkness" is a technique in which the user releases a crescent of Dark Chakra from his/her sword. This technique's strength ranges according to the intentions of the user, it also has limitations depending on it's use.
    ♞ Must be used with One Sword Style.
    ♞ D Rank crescents may travel up to Short Range.
    ♞ C and B may travel up to Mid Range while A and higher to Long Range.
    ♞ An A Rank crescent may only be used 3 times per battle.
    ♞ No A Rank Devil's Slashing techniques the next turn.
    ♞ An S Rank crescent may only be uses once per battle, and cannot be used if all three A rank slashes are used up.
    ♞ If S Rank, no Devil's Slashing techniques for the next 2 turns.
    ♞ Must have been taught in the Style of Devil's Slashing.
    ♞ Created by Drizzeh, thus must be taught by him.

    [Debiru Saika: Inta-seputo Dageki] Devil's Slashing: X Strike
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: "Devil's Slashing: Intercepting Strike" is a technique in which the user manipulates both swords by thrusting each diagonally opposite, releasing two Dark Waves (crescents) which intercept at the middle to form an X. This technique takes the appearance of a black X which travels at adequate speed towards the target .
    ♞ Requires two swords/The Two Sword Style.
    ♞ Must have been taught in the Style of Devil's Slashing.
    ♞ Created by Drizzeh, thus must be taught by him.

    [DebiruSaika: Dansu Saika] Devil's Slashing: Assault of The Slasher
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: "Devil's Slashing: Assault of the Slasher" is a technique in which the user freely swings and sways in an unstable manner until in range of the opponent. He will then coat his sword with Dark chakra, then proceed to perform an assault of slashes onto the opponent while releasing small blasts of the dark chakra on impact of the victim which leads to severe injuries.
    ♞ Can be used in either One or Two Sword Style.
    ♞ Must have been taught in the Style of Devil's Slashing.
    ♞ Created by Drizzeh, thus must be taught by him.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    ✖ This style enhances the user's speed, agility and reaction timing due to the unstable movements.
    ✖ The user cannot use techniques through the sword while the Style is active (eg. Wind).
    ✖ Only biographies with a sword may use this style.
    ✖ Can only be taught to a member with the post rank Sannin or higher.
    ✖ Can only be taught to a biography with a dark/negative personality.
    ✖ Can only be taught to a biography capable of at least free-form kenjutsu and basic ninjutsu.

    Note: Dark chakra is in no way special chakra, it's simply compressed chakra + negative mental energy. "Dark Chakra" was the name given to it so that opponents can understand when chakra contains Negative energy or not.
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    Well, basically, everything here can be done free-form or through normal kenjutsu techniques. You said yourself with the note at the bottom that there is nothing special about dark chakra (which is good because until then I wasn't going to decline it on the premise that there's no proof that "negative energy/emotions" are controllable and attempting to do so is beyond the scope of a CFS) which means that there's nothing special about this CFS. As I'm sure you know everything in the Dance and Swordsmanship of the slasher can be done free-form so I'll move on to the Ninjutsu of the Slasher. Given the fact that dark chakra is just chakra with a purely aesthetic touch that's basically just the normal channeling chakra into a sword or shooting forth crescent blasts, which is nothing special enough to become a CFS.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Zoldyck Style


    Type:NinGenTaijutsu

    Background:The Zoldyck family, is a powerful family of assassins who offer their services to the highest bidder. Over the years, they have perfected the art of assassination. The family has come up with many techniques to assassinate their targets. Killua Zoldyck, the youngest zoldyck learned this art when he was still a child. He now goes around the world perfecting it, adding new techniques and even teaching it.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The Zoldyck style revolves mainly around assassinating a target. The Zoldycks would target obvious vital spots like the heart, lungs,and spine. The zoldyck style also uses weaponry, and taijutsu. The taijutsu is designed to systematically bring your opponent down in the most painful way possible. The zoldycks channel chakra into their bodies. They use body parts such as knees, and elbows to provide maximum pain and damage. The Zoldycks also use ninjutsu to increase their skills in ways that normal people cannot (see example jutsu). Another of the zoldycks technique lies in stealth, the zoldycks are able to throw kunai, senbon, and shuriken with precision accuracy.

    Perhaps the most important part of the Zoldyck style, is mastery over Zanshin. Zanshin is the art of the one slash win. Any further slashes are considered a waste of the Zanshin. Zanshin itself is a state of complete awarness. Anything in your "territory" that moves, you will know about it. The more slashes you make, the more Zanshin you lose. After 4 slashes, your Zanshin is considered gone.

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    The Zoldycks also wear small arm bracers with retractable claws in order to surprise their opponents.


    The assassins can also use chains to capture their targets, and the chains can also be manipulated to choke a target.



    Finally, the assassins use bows and arrows to take targets out from a distance

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    A user of this style has increased speed and accuracy when compared to the average strong fist user

    Due to Zanshin, a user also has a calmer mind than most so is able to react to situations slightly faster than most.

    A users strength slightly decreases.

    Restrictions

    -Must be at least S rank to learn-



    Example of Jutsu

    |Zoldyck Style|Rythm Echo
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:N/A
    Description:An assassination art, the Rhythm Echo is a motion that creates an afterimage of the body through a varying cadence of steps. There is a total absence of noise during the movement and multiple phantoms. This technique can be used to confuse and disorient an enemy.

    |Zoldyck Style|Hand Claws
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user focuses chakra into their hands, more specifically their finger nails. The nails then grow, and get sharper. The nails become as sharp as knives, and are able to tear someone apart with ease.

    |Zoldyck Style|Zanshin
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:S
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:40
    Damage:80
    Description:The user will first focus his chakra into a "territory" which reaches up to mid range. This territory allows the user to have a calm mind, and react to almost anything. The user than draws a katana, and leaps at his opponent with great speed to cut him in half. The drawbacks of this jutsu is that with every slash of the sword, Zanshin runs out. After 4 slashes of the sword, Zanshin runs out completely. Another drawback is that this move can only be used once per battle as Zanshin cannot be recycled. The final drawback, is that once Zanshin is out the user's is unable to focus(see/hear) properly for a full 2 turns.

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    This isn't a CFS at all, just a set of rather unrelated custom techniques mixed with equipment. Also, everything that you said here is just vague enough to be easily abused. But everything here can be done without a CFS and with simple custom techniques.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Fishman Karate/魚人空手/ Gyojin Karate
    Type: Advanced Taijutsu
    Background: Fishman Karate was developed by a group of sailors. They had found several mermaids stranded at sea and trapped. They were being hunted by ninjas that wanted to sell them for being such beautiful beings. The mermaids taught the sailors their secrets since they were in no fit state to defend themselves. The sailors learned all the mermaids knew about Fishman Karate and managed to beat the ninjas with it. They freed the mermaids and then the Sailors used their new fighting style for good.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The secret of Fishman Karate is mastery of the water in the user vicinity using its power to send physical blows impacting the water within the opponent's body. Since every living creature is made up of water, the users of Fishman Karate are able to battle opponents that are usually highly resistant against blows and punches.

    Additional effects and Restrictions: The further the enemy is the weaker the attack becomes. If the enemy is in long range the attack becomes as soft as a poke or a flick. In mid-range it is capable of instead of fully harming the opponent just push them away. In close range it is used to its full power and the attack both harms and pushes the opponent away.
    -Must be taught by me
    -The user is also capable of making that water tangible and apparate but this has a limit in which he can only apparate 1 liter of water at a time. (Which will count as a move)


    -Jutsu examples
    Fish Brick Punch
    Rank: C
    Type: Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 20
    Description: A hard punch that can send an opponent flying. The user sticks his fist out in front of him and sends a punch via the water particles in the air through close range. This attack feels as if a brick has been slammed into your body.

    Fish True Force Punch
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user coats his fist in a thin layer of water particles from the air so thin that it can't be seen by the human eye. The user then punches the opponent which is strong enough to send small shockwaves through their body and making their whole body shudder. This attack requires physical contact.

    Note: I am more than ready to edit any thing that you want. I also toned this fighting style down a lot.

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    Gyojin Karate already exists. It belongs to Izuna's Custom Clan...Gyojin.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    (Sentō yōyōsutairu)Combat Yo-Yo Style
    Type:Nin-Taijutsu
    Background:Along time ago when the days where dark,many children used the toy known as Yo-Yo's for entertainment.But when a girl by the name of Yui found that there can be more to them than just toys.Yui eventually learnt to mix her chakra into the Yo-Yos making variations called Combat Yo-yo later now being used as weaponary in the ninja world
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The inner working are pretty easy to comprehend as the user will be using special designed Yo-yos for combat.The user will be wielding them in his hands while infusing chakra into them cause them to take on the effects of the style.Fire can be added to them creating small fire balls and detacht the strings to send them hurdling to the target.Earth can be used to add weight to them to make them lightee and harder to attack oppoents.However the user can also use them in Taijutsu using similar in the manner of chains to latch on to targets to reel them in add perform Taijutsu(strong fist on them)
    Sample

    (Sentō yōyōsutairu: Ryokō· yū· daun!)Combat Yo-yo Style:Trip you Down!
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B-Rank
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:40
    Description:Manipulating the strings on the Yo-yo the user while throw the Yo-yo head to fly to the target causing it to pass them,the user will manipulate the yo-yo strings to retract and rope up the targets legs and pulling them causing them to trip and get serverly injured.

    (Sentō yōyōsutairu: Kaen tatchi)Combat Yo-yo Style:Flaming Touch
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:The user while channel fire chakra into the Yo-yo creating a small ball of fire in there hands,the user while them throw the yo-yo to follow the target and manipulating the strings the user will wrap the head of the yo- yo to the target while still manipulating his chakra into the strings to keep the fire ablaze.

    (Sentō yōyōsutairu: Sumakku chikyū)Combat Yo-yo Style:Earth Smack
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:Manipulating chakra into the yo-yo the user will fling the yo-yo while manipulating chakra into the string,the user will use there earth chakra to lighten the weight of the yo-yo to travel faster,then when in range the user will manipulate it again this time causing the yo-yo to turn heavy,along with creating small earth spikes around it.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Must be Sannin to learn
    -Bios must possese a special Combat Yo-yo
    -Masters of this style can weild 2 Yo-yo's and use them at great speeds,with near perfect accuracy.
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    Define "use them at great speeds and with near perfect accuracy." Also add in the description and inner workings section that when focusing chakra into the Yo-Yos you cannot use any other techniques simply so that there's no confusion there. Finally, are you carrying around numerous Yo-Yos? Or just up to two? Because if so then after making a fireball out of the Yo-Yo you don't get that one back, correct? That needs to be clarified as well.


    (Sentō yōyōsutairu)Combat Yo-Yo Style
    Type:Nin-Taijutsu
    Background:Along time ago when the days where dark,many children used the toy known as Yo-Yo's for entertainment.But when a girl by the name of Yui found that there can be more to them than just toys.Yui eventually learnt to mix her chakra into the Yo-Yos making variations called Combat Yo-yo later now being used as weaponary in the ninja world
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The inner working are pretty easy to comprehend as the user will be using special designed Yo-yos for combat.The user will be wielding them in his hands while infusing chakra into them cause them to take on the effects of the style.Fire can be added to them creating small fire balls and detacht the strings to send them hurdling to the target.Earth can be used to add weight to them to make them lightee and harder to attack oppoents.However the user can also use them in Taijutsu using similar in the manner of chains to latch on to targets to reel them in add perform Taijutsu(strong fist on them),but while channeling chakra into the Yo-Yos no other techniques that require chakra usage cannont be used.
    Sample

    (Sentō yōyōsutairu: Ryokō· yū· daun!)Combat Yo-yo Style:Trip you Down!
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B-Rank
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:40
    Description:Manipulating the strings on the Yo-yo the user while throw the Yo-yo head to fly to the target causing it to pass them,the user will manipulate the yo-yo strings to retract and rope up the targets legs and pulling them causing them to trip and get serverly injured.

    (Sentō yōyōsutairu: Kaen tatchi)Combat Yo-yo Style:Flaming Touch
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:The user while channel fire chakra into the Yo-yo creating a small ball of fire in there hands,the user while them throw the yo-yo to follow the target and manipulating the strings the user will wrap the head of the yo- yo to the target while still manipulating his chakra into the strings to keep the fire ablaze.

    (Sentō yōyōsutairu: Sumakku chikyū)Combat Yo-yo Style:Earth Smack
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:Manipulating chakra into the yo-yo the user will fling the yo-yo while manipulating chakra into the string,the user will use there earth chakra to lighten the weight of the yo-yo to travel faster,then when in range the user will manipulate it again this time causing the yo-yo to turn heavy,along with creating small earth spikes around it.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Must be Sannin to learn
    -Bios must possese a special Combat Yo-yo
    -Masters of this style can weild 2 Yo-yo's at once with better control than the students
    -The users of this style tend to carry a minimum of 10 Yo-yos with them to allow them to contiously use more techniques.

    Bolded:Added that other techniques cant be used while using this style's techniques and specified that learners minium of Yo-yos needed
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    (Sentō yōyōsutairu)Combat Yo-Yo Style
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Doki Sono Kamigami Wrath of the Gods
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Background:

    A very fierce man once lived in this world. He was ruthless, a one man army. He did have however followers, scared or loyal. They would defeat armies in small side-wars. Defeat foes even when outnumbered. Kratos they called him, weilding two blades. However in one night, during a seige, Kratos blided by his bloodthirst, murdered his wife and child.

    Overtaken by Grief and sorrow, Kratos burned his himself when he was alone, his blades by his side. Soon, Kratos was nothing but a pile of ashes. However the ashes merged in to the Blades themselves. It was believed that Kratos possessed the blades himself, as the blades were being passed on as blood was shed. Turmoil and despair awaited those who dared to weild the Blade of Exile...Until someone, could withold it's power. That someone, would weild the Godly strength of Kratos.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    This kenjutsu style relies on flowing and powerful movements. The twin blades have chains coming from the handle which the user can hang on to and swing for momentum or reach. When the swords are held in the user's hands, the user muscle strength increases (Believed to be the life force from inside the Blades), allowing the user to deal more physical damage and quicker. The power and strength, normally relies on emotions and natural chakra (Similar to the Kyuubi). Mainly fueled by Rage. The Blades of Exile are indestructible and can smash slabs of earth with just one swing (Size must be put in to consideration).

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    Gekido of Sparta Rage of Sparta
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases all inner emotions and the power of the sword, fueling the blade, creating an even stronger bloodthirst like aura. The release of the chakra causes the user's muscle strength to increase even furthur, and also increases (Sakki) - Killing Intent, allowing the user's bloodthirst have more depth and potency allowing them to "stun" users of the same rank and below.


    ---


    Maedate of Prometheus Plume of Prometheus
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user extends both blades straight forward (One after the Other), then the user quickly makes a 360 degree rotation swinging the blades slashing the target horizontally, then finishing off by swinging the two blades backwards and over the user's head to smash the blades causing an explosion of chakra where the blades land.


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    Teikiatsu of Ranmyaku Cyclone of Chaos
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user musters sufficient strength and swings his blades around their head with tremendous force multiple times attacking multiple targets. Cyclone of Chaos can be used to defend against Medium-Sized earth techniques.

    Ideas for future usage (Just Pictures):








    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    + The user will be physically more stronger then the average person
    + User awareness and and reflexes are increased
    + User is more flexible and agile.
    + The user's footwork speed is increased (Does not refer to Running speed)
    - The User's handseals speed is decreased.
    - Must have 3 training sessions to master it.

    _________________
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    The general idea is solid. However, since you state that these blades have special properties that make them indestructible, you need to make these into a CW, and this CFS will be extension replace your CW. If you don't want this, then you need to make them into two normal blades with chains at the end of them. Also, you need to cut back on the side effects. Increased reactions, strength, flexibility, and footwork speed are too many bonuses even despite the decreased hand seal speed. I'll allow bonuses so long as you provide an adequate explanation as to why you get these. Increased strength and flexibility may be ok considering what you're doing with this style, but footwork speed and reactions aren't as of now. And just remove everything about emotions, it's just irrelevant.


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    Doki Sono Kamigami Wrath of the Gods
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Background:

    A very fierce man once lived in this world. He was ruthless, a one man army. He did have however followers, scared or loyal. They would defeat armies in small side-wars. Defeat foes even when outnumbered. Kratos they called him, weilding two blades. However in one night, during a seige, Kratos blided by his bloodthirst, murdered his wife and child.

    Overtaken by Grief and sorrow, Kratos burned his himself when he was alone, his blades by his side. Soon, Kratos was nothing but a pile of ashes. However the ashes merged in to the Blades themselves. It was believed that Kratos possessed the blades himself, as the blades were being passed on as blood was shed. Turmoil and despair awaited those who dared to weild the Blade of Exile...Until someone, could withold it's power. That someone, would weild the Godly strength of Kratos.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    This kenjutsu style relies on flowing and powerful movements. The twin blades have chains coming from the handle which the user can hang on to and swing for momentum or reach, allowing the user to deal more physical damage and quicker. The Blades of Exile can smash slabs of earth with just one swing (Size must be put in to consideration).

    ---


    Gekido of Sparta Rage of Sparta
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases all inner emotions and the power of the sword, fueling the blade, creating an even stronger bloodthirst like aura. The release of the chakra causes the user's muscle strength to increase even furthur, and also increases (Sakki) - Killing Intent, allowing the user's bloodthirst have more depth and potency allowing them to "stun" users of the same rank and below.


    ---


    Maedate of Prometheus Plume of Prometheus
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user extends both blades straight forward (One after the Other), then the user quickly makes a 360 degree rotation swinging the blades slashing the target horizontally, then finishing off by swinging the two blades backwards and over the user's head to smash the blades causing an explosion of chakra where the blades land.


    ---


    Teikiatsu of Ranmyaku Cyclone of Chaos
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user musters sufficient strength and swings his blades around their head with tremendous force multiple times attacking multiple targets. Cyclone of Chaos can be used to defend against Medium-Sized earth techniques.

    Ideas for future usage (Just Pictures):








    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    + The user will be physically more stronger then the average person
    + User is more flexible and agile.
    - The User's handseals speed is decreased.
    - Must have 3 training sessions to master it.


    --

    ~Removed some of the additional effects.
    ~Removed indestructability
    ~Removed the chakra strength within the blade
    __________________
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    So now the problem is that there's nothing actually special about this CFS. Theoretically, twin blades with chains can be used free-form. There has to be something that actually makes this into a CFS and gives the blades some sort of ability that wouldn't apply if these were just two weapons that you used in free-form combat. However don't add back the emotions and blade strength for the reasons that I gave you before. As it is right now, there's nothing to separate this from just normally wielding chains with blades on them.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Spirits of Balance | Onryōdō
    Type:Fuinjutsu & Ninjutsu (Yin-Yang release)
    Background:
    Onryodo was developed from studying traditional practices of Onmyodo (The Way of Yin and Yang). It is based on the Chinese philosophies of Wu Xing and Yin and yang, It was accepted as a practical system of divination. These practices were influenced further by Taoism, Buddhism and Shintoism and evolved in a developed system after Second Great Ninja World War. Daimyo of nations accepted practitioners in the court. The practices were foul and involved rituals to resurrect the souls of the dead (御霊信仰 Goryō Shinkō). After the events of The Ghost Army (幽霊軍, Yūreigun). Xylon realized the origin of such abnormalities, and left of a journey to find all the Sages. He investigated, interrogated and annihilated each and every one. He realized the threat of these foul practices shall always remain, and started the development of a method to counter act the modern examples. Hence the development of Onryodo, the followers of Skill were titled Onryoji by Xylon himself.
    NOTE: While applications of fuinjutsu involve the appearances to take the form spirits, or ghost. The style itself does not involve any manipulation of souls, let alone any kinds of Resurrection or communication with the dead. Its appearances as Sai would prefer to use his artworks as a sealing technique and B would use ink as means to generate seals.
    For the sake of "theme" i'd prefer to use the term Onryo or Yurei. Meaning are not literal and aren't meant to abuse a culture in the process.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Onryodo is a unique range of strong fuinjutsu that uses Yin and Yang release simultaneously along with Fuinjutsu. The style requires the user to train and develop his consciousness. Years of meditation from Yin-Yang training gives the user a strong mind. Specially during Yin release practices. Using Fuinjutsu and Energy manipulation skill, user eventually separates a part of his consciousness for combat uses. This part of the users mind assumes an appearance and turns into the users inner world (Only a small fraction of it in the end). The appearance of this world varies from person to person, their personalities and changes in the users emotional balance. Much like how naruto fights and converses with Kurama in his inner world. Years of practice perfects this talent, until its fit for usage in actual combat.
    When the style is used in fuinjutsu, it easily overpowers other techniques because Yin-Yang energies are used to source the power of the seals. The seals are intelligent on their own and balance the Yin-Yang ratio of the chakra to combat any method to break down a seal. (Since they involve delicate numbering, arrays, and steady balance of energy applied.
    Examples involve:
    • Sai’s Sealing technique: Hidden Tiger Staring Bullet using emotional energy as a source of strength for the seal. Example from filler episode.
    • Tsunade’s Collaboration Fuinjutsu Four Corner Sealing Barrier which heavily emphasize upon chakra control to maintain a barrier which once successfully erected is even able to contain the three tails. Example from filler arc.
    • Orochimaru and Jiraiya’s Five Symbols Seal & Five Symbols Unseal are examples of seals that tamper the targets balance of chakra. Example from Manga)


    The practitioner of Onryodo, places heavy protection on his separated consciousness. Like Pein places fuinjutsu over his Six paths to prevent intel leak. This step is countermeasure against any mental instability. The steps to follow are:
    • Separate a very small fraction of your consciousness
    • Lock this part of your mind and seal of any connection between the world and your actual consciousness and access this only while using your techniques.
    • Place a mental seal over this portion, keeping it accessible only to the user himself. Attempts to breach this section of your mind by any foreign chakra forces are blocked off.
      (Reference taken from Inoichi Yamanaka’s attempt to access Pein’s animal path)
    • If the mental seal is broken, a counter measure is prepared. The foreign power that breached the defenses is affected by a chakra disturbance that changes the balance of his chakra. If the Yin ratio is higher, the mental ability gets stronger at the cost of weakening the body this result is the victim breaking up due to physical weakness. In the opposite case, physical energy overpowers mental resulting in a mental instability causing the victim to lose further ability to break the mental barrier.

    Apart from preventing any foreign forces from entering a delicate part of the users consciousness. The technique also prevents any incidents caused by the users own mistakes. Like imagination developed in this world going wild eventually acquiring a larger portion of the users mind. This could result in development of second personalities and mental incapability incapacitating the user until he recovers himself.

    After this training and preparations, the user is able to perform the actual techniques. Most techniques follow two steps, either in an ascending or descending order. These steps are
    • Yang to Yin technique (Yo to In no jutsu), where physical matter is sealed within the separated consciousness instead of scrolls or anything else. This removes the need to carry around objects. When summoned back they appear as they were left before sealing took place. This is a passive skill.
    • Yin to Yang technique (In to Yo no jutsu), where objects sealed within the consciousness are released back into a physical form. The inner world is also used to host imagination, which is accumulated within the body as spiritual energy. When released, these imagination takes appearance and fulfill the purpose they were designed for (Seperate technique for each)

    Example Technique:

    Spirits of Balance: 47 Ronin (Onryodo:Shi-jū-shichi-shi)
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Type: Defensive/Offensive/Supplementary
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: The technique requires placing a seal over the users body that collects huge masses spiritual energy from the user and stores it up over the period of time. When released the seal uses Yin to Yang chakra manipulation and manifests the spiritual energy into the users imagination of a story: The revenge of the Forty-seven Ronin (四十七士 Shi-jū-shichi-shi), also known as the Forty-seven Samurai, the Akō vendetta, or the Genroku Akō incident (元禄赤穂事件 Genroku akō jiken). Where a group 47 samurai who were made Ronin, and avenged their General. The spiritual energy amasses together and forms in 47 spirits of Samurai with a dark aura equipped with swords and straw hats. The spirits are intangible, they don’t dessipitate when hit with objects or techniques that disrupt chakra and are inexcusably only effective on Resurrection techniques, Ritualistic techniques and other Spirits related/Spiritual technique. These samurai are incredibly strong and hunts the products of such techniques down with relative ease. When the target is hit by the Samurai’s sword(s) they are sealed within it. The Samurai then grab their own swords, and out of guilt of murder they commit Seppuku, with the suicide the souls of the target are released from the swords and are guided by the Samurai’s spirit in to the Outer World plains.
    Restriction: Usable once per conflict.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    +Removes the need to carry scrolls or any other equipment for sealing purposes.
    -Objects sealed inside consciousness will have to be summoned during combat, which counts as a move. At double the chakra cost.
    +All of users Fuinjutsu are raised up by 1 rank (with the exception of forbidden rank), due to the addition of Yin and Yang energies in the sealing mix (look at the introduction of Description where it explains how energy affects fuinjutsu).
    -In order to use the above ability, Onryodo must be the default CFS of the biography, and all fuinjutsu used with Yin-Yang addition have double the actual chakra cost, and doubled recoil damage.
    +Increased Mental defense against Genjutsu, Yamanaka hiden or similar abilities.
    -Must know Yin-Yang release. Cannot use Onmyoton, Inton or Yoton in the same turn where Onryodo was used.

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    Xylon, our loyal moderator, gave on the date November the 14th of 2012 a request for a Patent on Custom Fighting Style (Spirits of Balance). I, Nexus of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by NarutoBase, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Onryōdō
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    Dark Thread Transfiguration Arts |Kuro Ito Gigei

    Type: Nintaijutsu

    Background:Kakuzu's abilities revolved around his unique body structure, which was composed of hundreds of thick, black threads woven throughout his flesh called Earth Grudge Fear, holding his body together like the stitches of a rag-doll. This allowed him to separate his body parts at will, to perform long-range physical attacks and sew up almost any injury he suffered. His threads could even compact together to form a giant octopus-like form around his body, used for long range battle. The threads were even capable of piercing the flesh and bodies of others.

    After realizing the potential for his newly acquired body structure (after stealing the secret Kinjutsu of Takigakure), Kakuzu decided to master the manipulation of his dark threads, take his level control to a new height and ultimately create a completely new fighting style which utilized the threads as a medium to fulfill various purposes.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This fighting style utilizes Kakuzu's unique body structure for five main purposes.

    1) Arguably the main use of this fighting style is altering the nature of the threads themselves on an individual level. The threads can be extended, retracted, sharpened to the degree where they can completely impale the opponent's body. This constitutes to a large portion of the fighting style, with the user possessing the ability to expel Taijutsu attacks which seek to impale the opponent e.g. Sending out a extending a large stream of sharpened threads from their mouth to pierce/puncture the opponent's body multiple times. However these sharpened threads remain in contact with the user's body (Still physically attached) and are not considered projectiles but instead Long Range Taijutsu offensives.

    2) The threads can also have elemental chakra channeled through them to achieve various purposes.

    -Channeling Fire Chakra into the threads grants them a higher degree of lethality which each offensive using the threads to burn the opponent on contact and make it difficult for the opponent to keep contact with the user for extended periods of time.

    The Katon chakra doesn't cause flames to materialize but instead simply superheat the threads to scorching temperatures.

    -Channeling Lightning Chakra to the threads gives them increased penetrative abilities to cut through/pierce the opponent as well as minor stunning capabilities.

    The latter advantage is explained through the user channeling high frequency Raiton chakra into their threads which cause sudden bursts of energy to go through the opponent on contact causing them to have shaky and uncoordinated movements which leave them open to attacks.

    3) Weaving the threads into intricate and complex shapes to use as defenses. The threads would mainly be expelled from the user's chest as a large mass to protect against incoming/close proximity Taijutsu and Kenjutsu attacks. This could be used to provide a direct shield from the user's chest or back from direct hit, often greatly reducing the impact or alternatively to weave the threads together in an tense interbranching structure which effectively dissipates the impact of the original hit all around the user's body instead of it being concentrated on a single area. This ability can be paired with altering the user's own body structure to effectively defend against strength intensive fighting styles e.g. Chakra Enchanced Strength.

    This ability can further be expanded on by weaving the threads into tight structures which resemble the composition of trampolines. Taijutsu attacks against kind of defense would have a relatively small impact and instead redirect the same amount of force (from the attack) against the opponent, causing them to be flung backwards (proportional to the rank of their attack) and to take recoil damage from their own attack.

    These sort of defenses can only be created from the user's

    4) The ability to use the dark threads to alter his own body structure. This can be used to create various structures from the threads or expel the dark threads from his back creating pseudo-limbs and ultimately extra body parts to utilize in combat. These limbs would be stabilized by grouping together a large mass of threads so together they create concrete structures.

    5) Using the threads to ensnare, surround, restrain or trap the opponent completely. This being the most obvious use of the threads, the user simply benefits by manipulating the various threads to perform unique Taijutsu attacks which seek to both ensnare and restrain the opponent.


    The fighting style can only be accessed by first activating "(Kuro: Ito) Dark Threads" much like the 3rd Raikage only gaining access to his Nintaijutsu through the activation of his Lightning Release Armour.

    Once activated, the dark threads can be manipulated from:

    -The user's mouth to attempt to ensnare/capture or even impale the opponent by expelling streams of threads

    -The user's back to construct various pseudo-limbs and alter the user's own body structure, to the extent where the user is given appearance of an octopus or the fully mechanized Asura Path

    -The user's chest to expel powerful defenses constructed from Dark threads which shield the actual body of the user from attacks by providing a "cushioning effect".

    -The user's arms/hands/feet/legs to extend their limbs and fight the opponent from long range.

    The threads being considerably sharp, can be further manipulated to the extent where they become extremely jagged and possess the ability to completely pierce through the opponent's body much like a raiton enhanced blade.

    The weaving ability of threads also grants the user the ability to attack the opponent in an intricate manner by interbranching the individual dark threads into complex attacks that both serve to surround and impale the opponent.

    On a Final note, Kuro Ito Gigei, also grants the user one more additional benefit of being able to attack the opponent from below by integrating their dark threads into the ground and then causing them to emerge in another location to attack the opponent.


    (Kuro Ito: Gizagiza Supaiku ) – Dark Threads Jagged Spikes
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user channels chakra through their dark threads and release it into a sudden outburst of countless hardened spikes (constructed from 1000s of threads) from their body in all directions to impale anything in the immediate vicinity of the user. The end result is the user resembling a porcupine in shape. The technique can be altered to reach a radius of up to 10 Meters in all directions.
    Note: Must know Kuro Ito Gigei
    Note: Can only be used Thrice per battle


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Can only be used by Kakuzu's Bios due to him being the only character with this unique body structure
    -Must use "Dark Threads" Ninjustu Technique before using the style
    -Must be taught by Negative Knight to learn the style
    -The threads are sharp enough to pierce the bodies of others
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    The thing is that I'm not sure whether or not this is already possible without a CFS. I'm going to give you permission to PM me for this, because from what I've seen Kakuzu had a pretty great deal of control over all of his threads, so I don't see why you wouldn't be able to make normal customs. However, I'll give you permission to PM me and explain why this does need a CFS and cannot be done with normal custom jutsu.
     
         
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    Akatsuki Geijutsu | Xiaolin Arts
    Type: Taijutsu
    Background: When traveling around the ninja world Korra met a monk/shinobi named Chase Young. Chase taught Korra the way of martial art known as Xiaolin Arts. This taijutsu was only known to people that lived in Takigakure and that were chosen to learn it. After learning from Chase, Korra than learn how to use taijutsu with more balance, strength, power, and speed. By learning this from Chase Young the style was brought into the ninja world for chosen people to learn.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This style revolves around the moves being named after a motion and an animal. This taijutsu is different from normal taijutsu since it uses a more flexible and focus attacks than pure strength and power though some attacks could be used for power. This taijutsu also is use for swift movements to help the user avoid minor size jutsus(making a jutsu for this and if used a against a wide range jutsu the user would not be able to avoid) and taijutsu. This style also gives the user to react 1 level better than what they did before they learn this style. This style also lets the user interrupt and counter normal taijutsu easier than what a normal bio can. When learning this style the user must under take ranks before completely learning every aspect of this style. The user can also in cooperate weapons like katanas, nun-chucks, and staff to make the taijutsu of this style more deadly.

    Ranks of This Style
    Xiaolin Recruits - Achieve when just beginning the training
    Xiaolin Apprentices - Learned the basics ( D and C ranks)
    Wudai Warriors - Learned the entire Style
    Xiaolin Dragon - Complete Mastery of the Style

    Example Justsu

    Akatsuki Geijutsu: Mokey o gekitai | Xiaolin Arts: Repulse The Monkey
    Type: Offen/Defense/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A (80 if used for offensive purposes)
    Description: This technique was originally created by Chase Young and passed down to Korra, this jutsu is used by channeling chakra into the user palm and when contact with the opponent sends the opponent flying back. This jutsu could be used to counter all Xiaolin Arts and A rank and below taijutsu by stopping the taijutsu and sending the opponent back.
    Note: Must be taught by ~Korra~
    Note: Usable 3 times a match
    Note: Can counter all Xiaolin Arts Jutsu and up to A rank Normal Taijutsu.
    Note: Cannot counter Kaito Taijutsu


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - User becomes more rely on Taijutsu and gains a better balance
    - Must be Sannin and above
    - User must have Taijutsu Mastered
    - Must be taught by ~Korra~
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    This isn't a fighting style; everything here can be done with normal taijutsu. Saying, "more flexible and focus attacks" does not at all set it apart from normal hand-to-hand combat.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Hoippu Geijutsu | Whip Arts
    Type: Gentaijutsu
    Background: While travelling trough the ninja world, -Severus Snape- came across a lot of different fighting styles, but one of them made the biggest impact on him, a Sannin from the leaf who used his hair as a whip. This inspired him to start fighting using a self-made whip. In the beginning this didn’t help him in his battles, it even caused him almost to die. Starting to combine his whip attacks with genjutsu, he realised that this was an really effective fighting style and create his own style and use it in battles.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This type of genjutsu uses the whip the user carries with him to disturb the enemy’s chakra flow. This disruption of the flow of chakra makes the enemy perceives illusions, which puts enemy under a genjutsu. The damage done by the Whip Arts is both Physical (if hit by the whip) and Mental (the genjutsu the enemy is put under).
    Whip Arts techniques are usually fast but gracefully, relying on the short ‘whipping’ movements of the whip to hurt the enemy (If they did too much physical damage, the enemy they would automatically be released from the genjutsu) and then disturbing the enemy’s chakra flow to put them under a Genjutsu. The speed of the movements can be compared with the speed of an attacking snake, short but powerful.

    (Hoippu Geijutsu: Doragonraizu) | Whip Arts: Rise of the Dragon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will move the whip around his body while channelling his chakra trough the whip. As the whip hits the opponent, a small amount of chakra of the users chakra will disrupt the opponent’s chakra flow, putting him under a genjutsu where he sees a giant dragon appears behind the user, ready to attack him. This will distract the opponent, leaving openings for the user to attack.

    Note: Must know Hoippu Geijutsu to use.



    (Hoippu Geijutsu: Hebi ni kama) | Whip Arts: Snake Bite
    Type: Attack.Supplementary.
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will channel his chakra in the whip before whipping it towards the opponent, upon hitting the opponent the users chakra in the whip will put the opponent under a genjutsu. The second time the opponent sees the whip coming forwards he will think that it is a giant snake, leaving him frozen in fear.

    Note: Must know Hoippu Geijutsu to use.




    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Must be of at least Sannin Rank to learn
    -Must have mastered Genjutsu
    -The user must carry a whip with him
    -This style can only be taught by a Hoippu geijutsu Master.
    ____________________
    ~Declined~
    Inducing genjutsu on contact is a characteristic of the Lazy Fist style. Even though this is through a whip and that is through hand-to-hand combat, it's still the same concept. You can, however, speak to Scorps for permission to use his concept; since your methods aren't the same this isn't a complete rip off of his technique and can still be approved should you attain permission from Scorps himself.


    ~Resubmitting

    Hoippu Geijutsu | Whip Arts
    Type: Gentaijutsu
    Background: While travelling trough the ninja world, -Severus Snape- came across a lot of different fighting styles, but one of them made the biggest impact on him, a Sannin from the leaf who used his hair as a whip. This inspired him to start fighting using a self-made whip. In the beginning this didn’t help him in his battles, it even caused him almost to die. Starting to combine his whip attacks with genjutsu, he realised that this was an really effective fighting style and started to use it.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This type of genjutsu uses the whip the user carries with him to disturb the enemy’s chakra flow, by inserting a bit of the users chakra trough a whip into the opponents chakra flow. This disruption of the flow of chakra makes the enemy perceives illusions, which puts enemy under a genjutsu. The damage done by the Whip Arts is Physical (if hit by the whip) but can also be Mental (the genjutsu the enemy is put under).
    Whip Arts techniques are usually fast but gracefully, relying on the short ‘whipping’ movements of the whip to hurt the enemy (If they did too much physical damage, the enemy they would automatically be released from the genjutsu) and then disturbing the enemy’s chakra flow to put them under a Genjutsu. The speed of the movements can be compared with the speed of an attacking snake, short but powerful.

    ( Hoippu Geijutsu: Doragonraizu) | Whip Arts: Rise of the Dragon
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will move the whip around his body while channelling his chakra trough the whip. As the whip hits the opponent, a small amount of chakra of the users chakra will disrupt the opponent’s chakra flow, putting him under a genjutsu where he sees a giant dragon appears behind the user, ready to attack him. This will distract the opponent, leaving openings for the user to attack.

    Note: Must know Hoippu Geijutsu to use.

    ( Hoippu Geijutsu: Hebi ni kama) | Whip Arts: Snake Bite
    Type: Attack.Supplementary.
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will channel his chakra in the whip before whipping it towards the opponent, upon hitting the opponent the users chakra in the whip will put the opponent under a genjutsu. The second time the opponent sees the whip coming forwards he will think that it is a giant snake, leaving him frozen in fear.

    Note: Must know Hoippu Geijutsu to use.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Must be of at least Sannin Rank to learn
    - Must have mastered Genjutsu
    -The user biography must carry a (Custom) whip
    -This style can only be taught by a Hoippu geijutsu Master.

    Scorps Permission [[X]]
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    -Severus Snape-, our loyal member, gave on the a request for a Patent on custom fighting style Hoippu Geijutsu | Whip Arts. I, Riku.. of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Hoippu Geijutsu | Whip Arts
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±


    Dance of the Metal Shadow

    Type:Waiajutsu

    Background: This style was born recently when a young ninja from Suna was in battle with a Anbu from Kirigakure. While in the midst of an intense battle the Anbu from Kirigakure used Micro-filiament wires the bind the young Suna ninja. As he done so the wire cut the binded ninja's cheek that made it bleed. As the fight came to it's climax the Sunagakure ninja came to victory and returned the the village. While he was on the training ground the following day, he was thinking back on his fight with the Anbu member and he got an epiphany, he realized that those metal wires can be used as a weapon. The young Ninja was always eager to try new things so he began trying to manipulate Micro-filiament wires through chakra control. Spending weeks upon weeks at this new style he discovered he began to get extremely skilled with controlling metal wires. He became a master at it and is known to this day as "Metal Shadow".

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This fighting style revolves around chakra manipulation through very thin but strong metal wires. The user can use the wires to slice, bind, tear, and even set traps on the enemy since the are so hard to see due to their Thinness.

    Example Techniques:
    Rip 'em to Shreds
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user manipulates his wires to wrap around his opponent very quickly. Once the user has the opponent binded he adds extra chakra to his wires as he holds them to give them a more sharper edge. He then pulls the wires opposite ways with each hand and rips the opponent apart, allowing the wires to easily slice through the target.

    Toss an Whack
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C/B/A
    Range: Short/Medium/Long
    Chakra: 15/20/30
    Damage: 20/40/60
    Description: The user manipulates his wires to quickly move forward and bind his target. Once the target is bound by the wires the user faces the opposite direction and swings the opponent in the air, up over the users head and slams down on the ground the same distance away from the user as they were before. The further away the target is from the user, the more damage is down due to the extra height they gain while swinging and the faster momentum.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -In order to use this style, one must be at least Sannin Rank before they can begin learning this CFS.
    -One must under-go 2 training sessions to master this style.
    -One must be equipped with Micro-filiament wires to use this style.
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    Characters like Sasuke (think back to the Valley of End) prove that using wires in battle is already a basic ninja skill. The fact that they're micro-filament wires doesn't change the fact that you're still just manipulating and tossing around wires, which ninja can already do. More importantly, micro-filament wire doesn't actually exist so... that's a problem. Whether they exist in another anime is irrelevent, but unless you can prove that they could exist in the naruverse, which you can't because they don't exist in a real world, or could prove that you can create them somehow, which is even more unlikely, then using them is out of the question.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    I am reformatting my approved cfs posted here
    |Dracova no shinigami āto|Reaper Art Of Dracova

    Type: Other (Scythe Arts/Taijutsu/Kenjutsu Mixed)
    Background: The Reaper Art Of Dracova is based off the belief that one should always finish a opponent with his/her own hands. The art was created by a great blacksmith and scientist known as Dracova. Dracova lacked discipline as a child to the point where not one swordsman dojo would accept his ignorance. Dracova thus had never learned to wield a sword. Years past, Dracova was still searching for a school that would accept him. This was a long journey. Dracova had seen and taken samples of different types of metals while on his journey in hope of that someday he would be accepted to a swordsman dojo and create his very own sword. Dracova's one dream was to become a mighty warrior in the ninja world. Dracova knew that he would not live forever thus he wanted to be remembered forever. As years past and Dracova was 18 he had still not found a dojo that would accept him. One day, Dracova came across a dojo hidden in the mountains. This dojo was named Reaper Academy.

    Reaper Academy was a dojo which concentrated purely on the use of the scythe. With nothing left to lose Dracova decided to give the scythe a chance. 1 year had past and Dracova had finally but quickly learned everything that dojo could teach him. Dracova loved how wild the scythe was and the empowerment it had given him. Dracova at that point was close to having a piece of every kind of metal in the world in his possession. Dracova had left his dojo to travel to an oasis in which he would continue his training there. During his jounrey Dracova met a white haired blacksmith who told him "When you have enemies that you must defeat, you must take them down with your own hands. That is the pride of a scythe wielder".

    Once at the oasis Dracova had found that he was physically strong enough to wield his scythe with only one arm. This brought back the memory of the old ma's words. This led Dracova to create multiple techniques using his scythe one handed. Most of these technique's finishing blows were with Dracova's opposite hand because of his pride. Dracova continued to train becoming stronger and stronger. As Dracova trained his chakra reserved became larger and larger due to the mist given off by the sacred oasis he trained in. Soon, Dracova had mastered his one handed scythe art. Dracova named it The Reaper Art of Dracova. There was one problem, no scythe could withstand the force used with the art. This led to Dracova mixing many rare metal materials from all around the world to create a almost flawless scythe. Dracova named the scythe "The Forgotten Reaper" as the scythe was fit for the Devil himself. This scythe would help Dracova go toe to toe with some of histories strongest ninja. Before Dracova had died he had dedicated his life to creating more and more almost flawless scythes until the day he died and past it down to his son. His son would be known as the Grim Reaper.

    Levels of Mastery:

    Grim Reaper (Creator)= Use/Learned all techniques.
    Master= Use Learned S-Rank and below techniques.
    Warrior= Use/Learned A-Rank and below techniques.
    Novice=Use/Learned B-Rank and below techniues.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: When using this art the body is very loose giving the user the ability to dodge incoming attack when trying to get close to the opponent. The user can add chakra to the scythe to increase it's size and shape in multiple ways. Depending on the level of mastery the user is allowed to store massive amounts of chakra into their hands without repercussion as long as they are at a certain level of mastery. While using this art chakra is constantly pulsing through your scythe, arms and hands. This is to keep the blood rushing to that particular area so that the user can wield his scythe one handed for a long period of time. While using this state the blood is flowing so rapidly throughout the user’s body they are in a state similar to an adrenaline rush meaning they can surpass there limit and ignore pain for a limited time. The user is causing great strain on his body by practicing this art. If not used carefully it could potentially kill the user.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -You must have mastered basic taijutsu.
    -You must wield a custom scythe approved by the current “Grim Reaper”
    -You have the ability to release and manipulate chakra through your hand and scythe
    -You are very tolerant to pain such as non-lethal stabs and blows to the body.
    -You are granted enhanced strength and reflexes though it is far from Tsunade's strength and Minato's reflexes.
    -When engaging a opponent at short range the user can dodge almost any attack.
    -You must be S-Class to begin training.
    -You must have mastered basic kenjutsu.
    -Can only be taught by Grim Reaper or a Master with the Grim Reaper's approval.

    Example Techniques:


    Dracova no shinigami āto: Shinigami no gurippu|Reaper Art Of Dracova: Reaper's Grip
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user will engage the opponent by quickly pouncing at him/her. While he/she is moving quickly they will use their scythe to knock dust/mud/rubble/water into the opponents face temporarily blinding them. Without hesitation the user grabs the opponent by the neck and releases a large concentrated mass of chakra into the opponents body. By doing this the user's chakra will interfere with the opponents chakra flow making it harder for the opponent to perform jutsu quickly. The user then jumps back before the opponent can retaliate.
    -Must be taught by a Grim Reaper or Master
    -The effect last for 3 turns.
    -The speed of jutsu performance is greatly decreased.


    Note: It is somewhat similar to the way Franken Stein used his scythe in his fight against Medusa. Though they are not the same.
    _________________
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    The style is fine, but at least one of the additional effects need to be removed. Pain tolerance, enhanced strength, or enhanced reflexes. Your choice of the two that you want to keep. Also, completely remove the "can dodge almost any attack" part. Also note that the enhanced reflexes and strength will only be slightly above a taijutsu specialist's.
    I am reformatting my approved cfs posted here
    |Dracova no shinigami āto|Reaper Art Of Dracova

    Type: Other (Scythe Arts/Taijutsu/Kenjutsu Mixed)
    Background: The Reaper Art Of Dracova is based off the belief that one should always finish a opponent with his/her own hands. The art was created by a great blacksmith and scientist known as Dracova. Dracova lacked discipline as a child to the point where not one swordsman dojo would accept his ignorance. Dracova thus had never learned to wield a sword. Years past, Dracova was still searching for a school that would accept him. This was a long journey. Dracova had seen and taken samples of different types of metals while on his journey in hope of that someday he would be accepted to a swordsman dojo and create his very own sword. Dracova's one dream was to become a mighty warrior in the ninja world. Dracova knew that he would not live forever thus he wanted to be remembered forever. As years past and Dracova was 18 he had still not found a dojo that would accept him. One day, Dracova came across a dojo hidden in the mountains. This dojo was named Reaper Academy.

    Reaper Academy was a dojo which concentrated purely on the use of the scythe. With nothing left to lose Dracova decided to give the scythe a chance. 1 year had past and Dracova had finally but quickly learned everything that dojo could teach him. Dracova loved how wild the scythe was and the empowerment it had given him. Dracova at that point was close to having a piece of every kind of metal in the world in his possession. Dracova had left his dojo to travel to an oasis in which he would continue his training there. During his jounrey Dracova met a white haired blacksmith who told him "When you have enemies that you must defeat, you must take them down with your own hands. That is the pride of a scythe wielder".

    Once at the oasis Dracova had found that he was physically strong enough to wield his scythe with only one arm. This brought back the memory of the old ma's words. This led Dracova to create multiple techniques using his scythe one handed. Most of these technique's finishing blows were with Dracova's opposite hand because of his pride. Dracova continued to train becoming stronger and stronger. As Dracova trained his chakra reserved became larger and larger due to the mist given off by the sacred oasis he trained in. Soon, Dracova had mastered his one handed scythe art. Dracova named it The Reaper Art of Dracova. There was one problem, no scythe could withstand the force used with the art. This led to Dracova mixing many rare metal materials from all around the world to create a almost flawless scythe. Dracova named the scythe "The Forgotten Reaper" as the scythe was fit for the Devil himself. This scythe would help Dracova go toe to toe with some of histories strongest ninja. Before Dracova had died he had dedicated his life to creating more and more almost flawless scythes until the day he died and past it down to his son. His son would be known as the Grim Reaper.

    Levels of Mastery:

    Grim Reaper (Creator)= Use/Learned all techniques.
    Master= Use Learned S-Rank and below techniques.
    Warrior= Use/Learned A-Rank and below techniques.
    Novice=Use/Learned B-Rank and below techniues.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: When using this art the body is very loose giving the user the ability to dodge incoming attack when trying to get close to the opponent. The user can add chakra to the scythe to increase it's size and shape in multiple ways. Depending on the level of mastery the user is allowed to store massive amounts of chakra into their hands without repercussion as long as they are at a certain level of mastery. While using this art chakra is constantly pulsing through your scythe, arms and hands. This is to keep the blood rushing to that particular area so that the user can wield his scythe one handed for a long period of time. While using this state the blood is flowing so rapidly throughout the user’s body they are in a state similar to an adrenaline rush meaning they can surpass there limit and ignore pain for a limited time. The user is causing great strain on his body by practicing this art. If not used carefully it could potentially kill the user.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -You must have mastered basic taijutsu.
    -You must wield a custom scythe approved by the current “Grim Reaper”
    -You have the ability to release and manipulate chakra through your hand and scythe
    -You are very tolerant to pain such as non-lethal stabs and blows to the body.
    -You are granted enhanced reflexes slightly above that of a taijutsu specialist .
    -You must be S-Class to begin training.
    -You must have mastered basic kenjutsu.
    -Can only be taught by Grim Reaper or a Master with the Grim Reaper's approval.

    Example Techniques:


    Dracova no shinigami āto: Shinigami no gurippu|Reaper Art Of Dracova: Reaper's Grip
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: The user will engage the opponent by quickly pouncing at him/her. While he/she is moving quickly they will use their scythe to knock dust/mud/rubble/water into the opponents face temporarily blinding them. Without hesitation the user grabs the opponent by the neck and releases a large concentrated mass of chakra into the opponents body. By doing this the user's chakra will interfere with the opponents chakra flow making it harder for the opponent to perform jutsu quickly. The user then jumps back before the opponent can retaliate.
    -Must be taught by a Grim Reaper or Master
    -The effect last for 3 turns.
    -The speed of jutsu performance is greatly decreased.


    Note: It is somewhat similar to the way Franken Stein used his scythe in his fight against Medusa. Though they are not the same.

    I have made the required changes.
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    Shade Dracova, our loyal member, gave on the a request for a Patent on custom fighting style |Dracova no shinigami āto|Reaper Art Of Dracova. I, Riku.. of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    |Dracova no shinigami āto|Reaper Art Of Dracova
    Powered by Riku..
    Copyright 2012, Shade Dracova, NarutoBase.net

     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Yochi no Yami (World of Darkness style)
    Type: Ken~Gen~NinJutsu
    Background:
    Originating in the times of old, a special sword style was created and kept secret from the world for hundreds of years. Traveling from his village of Kumogakure Kwalker394 discovered old and ancient ruins off the coast of the land of lightning. Reading ancient text and scrolls he discovered the secret sword style known as Yochi no Yami. This style was created by powerful ninjas that specialized in Genjutsu and created a sword style that revolved around it and also new ways to cast people into Genjutsu's. Studying the styles and the knowledge in the scrolls Kwalker quickly grasped the style and mastered it himself. Heading back to Kumogakure he plans on continuing practicing this style and become stronger.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Yochi no Yami is a sword style that involves Ninjutsu and Genjutsu. By channeling ones Ninjutsu chakra to the sword he can create a elemental substance or orb shape by slashing the sword and releasing and using chakra manipulation on the elemental chakra. Once the orb elemental chakra is disturbed or dispersed it releases the users raw chakra that affects, who ever is near the raw chakra, the opponents senses trapping him in the Genjutsu. Closer range of the Yochi no Yami style just requires a cut or direct contact with the chakra from the sword but to affect targets from long range which is really hard to begin with it gives the Genjutsu more of a chance to affect, trap, and immobilize the target making it easier to trap targets into Genjutsu's.
    Channeling Ninjutsu chakra into the sword while swinging the sword mixes the sword chakra with the users elemental chakra forming in most cases an orb or a tube. With the swords charka in the middle of the Ninjutsu chakra its protected by most techniques. Using the elements known by the user he can encase the swords chakra in a protective layer that insures that the attack cannot simply disperse. By the mass amounts of way to dodge Genjutsu and counter/disperse it before it even takes affect, having a solid form surrounding the raw chakra for the Genjutsu better protects it. The user cast the Genjutsu on the opponent making him see a world of darkness and hopelessly floating while in reality he is completely stunned.
    Skill levels of the style:

    Sage (Created the style)
    ^
    Master (Knows all techniques)
    ^
    Expert (Knows most of the techniques)
    ^
    User (Someone who knows basic techniques)
    ^
    Apprentice (Is learning basic techniques)

    Examples jutsu's of the style:
    Yochi no Yami: Daikin (World of Darkness style: Charged)
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: E
    Range: N/A
    Chakra: 5 Chakra (+5 for each rank pass Apprentice-User)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user channels his chakra into the sword and the sword holds and storage the chakra for later use.
    ~Must have learned Yochi no Yami to use
    ~Can be used depending on you rank in Yochi no Yami
    Apprentice-User= 2 times per battle
    Expert= 3 times per battle
    Master-Sage= 4 times per battle
    ~Chakra is stored until used but will slowly disperse after a turn of not being used
    ~The strength of the Genjutsu depends on your rank in Yochi no Yami
    Apprentice-User= C-E jutsu's
    Expert= A-E jutsu's
    Master-Sage= F-E jutsu's
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394

    Yochi no Yami: Akuma Ouchi (World of Darkness style: Devils Pit)
    Type: Offinsive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will take his/her sword and swing the sword while releasing his Ninjutsu chakra while combining it with the swords stored up chakra mixing it and forming orbs (amount depends on rank). When the target is affected by the chakra inside the orb he is trapped in the genjutsu and is seen falling in a world of darkness while a small hole appear below him. As he gets close the red light and temperature brightens and rises. As he falls through the hole he is surrounded by fire and see's a demonic face in front of him and all around watching him and laughs as he falls into a pit of fire.
    ~Must have used Yochi no Yami: Daikin before using
    ~Must have learned Yochi no Yami Style to use
    ~Must be at least Expert level to use
    ~Orbs created varies from 10 orbs from Master-Sage rank to 5 orbs at Expert rank
    ~Can only be used twice per battle
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394

    Yochi no Yami: Nai Manako (World of Darkness style: Dead Eye's)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: D
    Range: Short-Mid Range
    Chakra: 10 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will take his/her sword and swing the sword while releasing his Ninjutsu chakra while combining it with the swords stored up chakra mixing it and forming orbs (amount depends on rank). When the target is affected by the chakra inside the orb he is trapped in the genjutsu and is falling in the world of darkness. As the target falls eye's of different shape and sizes open up in the dark void around him glaring at him from all angles scaring and stunning the target while in reality he collapses on the ground stunned.
    ~Must have used Yochi no Yami: Daikin before using
    ~Must have learned Yochi no Yami to use
    ~Orbs created varies from 10 orbs from Master-Sage rank to 5 orbs at Expert rank 3 orbs at Apprentice-User rank
    ~Can be used 3 times per battle
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394

    Yochi no Yami: Kurai Yochi (World of Darkness style: Dark World)
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: D
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 10 Chakra
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    The user will take his/her sword and swing the sword while releasing his Ninjutsu chakra while combining it with the swords stored up chakra mixing it and forming orbs (amount depends on rank). When the target is affected by the chakra inside the orb he is trapped in the genjutsu making him see a world of darkness and hopelessly floating while in reality he is just staring off into space with a blank expression on the targets face.
    ~Must have used Yochi no Yami: Daikin before using
    ~Must have learned Yochi no Yami to use
    ~Orbs created varies from 10 orbs from Master-Sage rank to 5 orbs at Expert rank 3 orbs at Apprentice-User rank
    ~This is the default Genjutsu for this style
    ~Can only be taught by Kwalker394

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    ~Masters-Sage of Yochi no Yami have increased speed to cast Genjutsu when compared to a normal Genjutsu users
    ~Expert-Sage of this style can use the sword at great speed and accurately
    ~Masters-Sage of this style can make a special sword to add to their bio to use with this bio
    ~Bio must have at least one sword
    ~Rank of Yochi no Yami depends on the training sessions with Kwalker394
    ~Kwalker394 can only teach this style

    Looks of the orbs:

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    For one I just barely get what you're even trying to do here, so you need to describe that more. The purpose using a sword in this eludes me because you're just creating orbs, and I honestly don't even get how you're creating orbs with a sword slash since creating a stable orb of elemental chakra would require at the very least hand seals to stabilize the orb. Furthermore, by channeling ninjutsu chakra (no such thing by the way; it's just chakra) into the sword you give the orbs that you create the ability to put people under genjutsu when dispersed? At what point during slashing a sword are you able to create a stable, apparently stationary orb of chakra that not only has elemental chakra in it but also has genjutsu stored in it. Additionally, elemental jutsu being used as a medium for genjutsu (since that's basically a big part of what you're doing here) is a characteristic of the NB genjutsu techniques. I'm sorry, but a lot of this I really don't understand, and what I do understand, or at least believe that I understand seems undoable for multiple reasons. Work on the description if you still plan on going forward with this.
     
         
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    Sage Morphing | Sennin Henge
    Type:Senjutsu
    Background:

    In many ancient cultures there are legends of shapeshifters. People who take on animal forms to obtain superhuman powers.

    American Indian Skinwalkers:

    According to the Book of the Navajo, the practice of animal emulation began with a hunter who thought of using the head of a deer so that he could approach them more closely to kill them. He was unsuccessful until the Gods came and showed him not only how to make the mask but how to emulate the animal. The practice of wearing the skins of the deer and emulating them began for the purpose of hunting. Locke also links the practice of witchcraft involving animal emulation and shape shifting to the Navajo folk tale of Coyote's wife. Believing that Coyote had been murdered, his wife takes the form of a bear and begins to curse and slay her husband's killers with witchcraft. The association of skin-walkers with Coyote is a prevalent belief in both their common usage of coyote skins and reputations of being tricksters. Skinwalkers are known as a Native American version of a Loup-garou. Even children have been known to become a skinwalker.

    Lycanthropy:

    A werewolf, also known as a lycanthrope (from the Greek λυκάνθρωπος: λύκος, lykos, "wolf", and ἄνθρωπος, anthrōpos, "man"), is a mythological or folkloric human with the ability to shapeshift into a wolf or an anthropomorphic wolf-like creature, either purposely or after being placed under a curse and/or lycanthropic affliction via a bite or scratch from a werewolf, or some other means. This transformation is often associated with the appearance of the full moon, as popularly noted by the medieval chronicler Gervase of Tilbury, and perhaps in earlier times among the ancient Greeks through the writings of Petronius.
    In addition to the natural characteristics inherent to both wolves and humans, werewolves are often attributed strength and speed far beyond those of wolves or men. The werewolf is generally held as a European character, although its lore spread through the world in later times. Shape-shifters, similar to werewolves, are common in tales from all over the world, most notably amongst the Native Americans, though most of them involve animal forms other than wolves.

    Huli - jing:

    In Chinese mythology, it is believed that all things are capable of acquiring human forms, magical powers, and immortality, provided that they receive sufficient energy, in such forms as human breath or essence from the moon and the sun.
    The fox spirits encountered in tales and legends are usually females and appear as young, beautiful women.

    Cyanothopy:

    The Greeks also spoke of cynanthropy (Kynior, dog). Cynanthropy, sometimes spelled kynanthropy, is applied to shapeshifters who alternate between dog form and human form, or to beings that do not shapeshift but possess combined dog and human anatomical features. It is also used for real persons suffering from the delusion that they are dogs. After lycanthropy, cynanthropy is the best known term for a specific variety of therianthropy.

    Ailuranthropy:

    European folklore usually depicts werecats who transform into domestic cats, sometimes of an enlarged size, or panthers. African legends describe people who turn into lions or leopards, while Asian werecats are typically depicted as becoming tigers. The transformation of each individual animal feline form possesses its own version of the "were" title, for instance werelions, wereleopards, werejaguars, werecheetah, and werepanthers. The general classification of werecat typically applies to all, excluding circumstances between werecats, whom identify each species by the appropriate specific title. Werecats have been represented as typically living in prides regardless of sub-classification.




    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:Sage morphing is a specialized branch of Senjutsu that makes simultaneous use of senjutsu along with transformation technique.
    Natural energy works in different ways, apart from enhancing all of the user’s capabilities if it’s not properly balanced it initiates body transformations. There are numerous known cases all of which had something to do with transformations in physical appearances:
    • Sage mode, Kabuto’s version: While humanoid, kabuto yakushi grew horns, scales and areas of pigmentation around his eyes that extended till his shoulder blade. The ability was a granted change in appearance simply by entering Sage mode while being a snake summoner.
    • Sage mode, Jiraiya’s version: Jiraiya’s version of imperfect sage mode had his appearance altered heavily. He also showed the ability to transform his limbs (e.g. his hands and feet) into those of frogs so as to aid in maneuverability. The transformation was a result of failure to balance chakra along with natural energy, similar to how naruto began to transform in a toad while learning Senjutsu.
    • Jugo’s Sage transformation technique: Juugo’s clan had the ability to passively absorb Natural energy, although they didn’t turn into statues, it did granted demonic features and the ability to freely transform their bodies.
    • Orochimaru’s cursed seal technique, level 2: Initiated transformations similar to Sage transformation of Jugo’s clan. The ability was related to natural energy.

    Sage morphing uses the user’s expertise in transformation technique and imagination along with the influence of senjutsu to make real vivid transformation that are more or less permanent unless the user ends a technique cuts his natural energy supply. For the duration of the transformation technique, senjutsu energy is passively absorbed to aid the transformation while still allowing the user to move, this ability is the result of extensive Senjutsu usage when the user eventually becomes adept to absorb very small fractions of natural energy even while moving. The energy isn’t enough initiate a sage mode transformation or allow use of a Sage technique but enough to actively source the energy for transformation techniques. In a more practical situation this may help access Sage mode quicker than the average time required, roughly half the time (if it takes 10 seconds to properly enter sage mode, 5 seconds for the CFS user) and extend the users Sage mode duration by 3 more turns.
    Transformations attained by Sage morphing are not in any way similar to Sage transformation, cursed seal or Piston fist. They are actual transformations made realistic by the use of Senjutsu, where they give the user various advantages of shape and form, growing wings for instance as well as additional effects such as an upgraded killing intent from particularly scary transformations; this may be both the result of Appearances and natural energy’s role in making them real.
    User could also disguise himself better when he copies the appearance of another person; he would go down to incredible details from smell, accents, unique traits and even chakra signature. This does not however include unique abilities or dojutsu, but so long it extends to just appearances even that could be copied.
    Using the style does have limitations or drawbacks however:
    • Transformations must always be of living creatures, if the user transforms into an inanimate no living object, due to the realistic effects of the transformation. User could permanent transform into the object and die or rather seize to exist, well at least as a living being.
    • Transformations with effects other than altering, appearance, size and anatomy must be submitted as separate techniques. The earlier is a passive ability however.
    • Lastly, there is always a risk involved when using Senjutsu, user could end up transforming in a statue: to avoid that.

    User of this CFS carry objects similar to fukasaku’s stick that was used to prevent naruto from transforming into a statue, these objects can be an article of clothing or additional equipment. In the midst of battle, these equipment can be used to filter/absorb/push back natural energy from the users body to save the person from his demise.

    Example Technique
    Sage Morphing: Chaos (Sennin Henge: Ranmyaku)
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40 (+10 per turn)
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: Chaos is a Sage morphing technique born of negative and dark memories and the sins of the user; it’s a person dark side taking physical form, an executioner and harbinger of death who comes during the user’s state of mental imbalance. Chaos has a satanic appearance, large black wings, pale skin and yellow glowing eyes. Adding to the theme, the hairs grows longer and stiffens making spikes along with the users cloth, being shredded in various areas. Gauntlets and knee guards appears that reflect a demon’s limbs and metallic ribs cover the abdominal area. The user’s chakra becomes similar to that of a cursed seal, dark and purple-ish in color. The area where the user’s heart is present begins to glow.
    Advantages:
    -Grants flight
    -Murderous intent improves by 5 fold. And user becomes emotionless therefore providing immunity against genjutsu, killing intent and any other technique that affects the users emotions. User is still affected to genjutsu that do not affect the emotions however.
    -User gains the ability to sense murderous intent, distinguish between several people and determine the strength of each person’s killing intent.
    -User’s Fire and Lightning techniques do additional damage (+15) due to natural energy.
    -User’s Genjutsu improves by 1 rank, excluding forbidden techniques. I.e. B rank genjutsu becomes A rank, and A rank becomes S rank. But S rank and forbidden ranked genjutsu don’t improve.
    -User is able to use Senjutsu techniques while the mode lasts.
    Restrictions:
    -Lasts 5 turns
    -User is unable to use Sage Morph or other Senjutsu techniques for 2 turns after the mode ends.
    -Cannot be activated at the same time as Sage mode or any other Senjutsu mode, including other Sage morphing transformations.

    Appearance: x
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Improved transformation abilities.
    -Ability to passively absorb senjutsu, although only sufficient to source the chakra for the modes used in this style.
    -Due to the senjutsu chakra regulating around the user at all times, his physical strength and durability increases (+5 damage to all taijutsu)as well as ninjutsu abilities (+5 damage to all ninjutsu).
    -Learner must be a Senjutsu user.

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    Well, the idea is awesome and its well worded...but for a Custom Clan. It can't fit what a CFS is or would be or would even enable to do. This is basically beyond the simple concept of a custom close combat style of fighting. However, this would make one heck of a custom clan Vincent. Really.
     
         
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    Bujinkan Budō Taijutsu (武神館 武道 体術)
    Type:Taijutsu

    Background:
    The style was develop by shinobis that lacks physical strength. Having been bullied by bigger and muscular shinobis, they focused on conditioning their bodies to give them a boost on their speed, sacrificing muscle build up that slows down their movement. They concentrated on toning to give them more flexibility and fluidity in movement.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Bujinkan Taijitsu seeks to use body movement and positioning rather than strength to defeat the opponent. All techniques in Bujinkan taijutsu involve unbalancing the opponent by using strikes, throws, sweeps, or combination of these to disrupt the balance of the opponent while maintaining one's own balance. The style teaches one redirect the opponents to give the user positional advantage. This movement is utilized during the moment of the opponent’s attack. To complete the movement, one moves out of the opponent's line of attack to the opponent’s blind spot. When executed properly, one can strike an opponent with great force, combining his attacking momentum and opponent's forward movement.

    Bujinkan Taijitsu strategy combines rhythm, timing, position, and distance to parry and counterattack in one continuous motion. The ability to turn defense into offense by using an opponent’s power and momentum against him lies at the heart of the Bujinkan method. The basic technique in Bujinkin Taijutsu is to parry the opponent’s attack in a way that redirects their attacking energy away from you. You then move to your opponent’s weak side or blind spot that has been opened-up by your parry and execute a strike, throw, sweep, or combination of these to put the opponent on the ground. The combination of movements involve circular or pendulum motions of the body in order to redirect the opponent’s attack without meeting it head-on (meeting force with force) and to counterattack with motions that generate energy and momentum. Many of the parries and sweeps are designed to put the opponent off-balance which makes it much easier to knock them to the ground as their own body and momentum assist in carrying them to the ground.




    Ranking and Technique Usage
    Menkyo Kaiden - Creator of the Style. Able to use all Techniques.
    Shidōshi - Highest attainable rank. Able to use up to S-rank Techniques.
    Judan - Have mastered all the basic training in the style. Able to use up to A-rank Techniques.
    Ikkyu - Started training the basics of the style. Able to use up to B-rank Techniques.
    Mukyu - Someone who's been accepted to train in the style of Bujinkan Taijutsu.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - Users of the style relies on toning the body and not strengthening it. Thus, give then a quicker reaction time.
    - Users of the style have enhanced speed and agility than a normal strong fist user.
    - The user, sacrificing strength and power, can attack quicker than normal strong fist user.
    - Users of the style have generally good chakra control.
    - Must be of Sannin Rank to get accepted.
    - Must have started training in basic taijutsu.
    - Only the Menkyo Kaiden can promote user in rank.

    Sample Techniques

    Junan Taiso
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Self
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description:
    Junan Taiso is a technique of stretching and breathing by means of which the Bujinkan practitioner may develop and maintain good physical condition and well being. The technique promote relaxation, blood and chakra circulation, muscle toning and flexibility. It is a form of conditioning and preparation for the body as all major joints are rotated and stretched in a proper manner while healthy breathing and concentration is being done. This allow the user to react faster and gain more flexibility and agility. Thus, giving the ability for the user to defend against taijutsu based attack which is one rank higher.

    Note: Can only be used by a Bujinkan user with the rank of Judan or higher.
    Note: This is a pre-fight technique that must be stated at the beginning of the match, if not it will not be in effect.
    Note: Defending can only be used against taijutsu based techniques up to A-rank.
    Note: Can only be taught by WastedMonkey


    Hiji Ayumi-Ashi Sutoraiki|Cross Step Elbow Strike
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description:
    The user first step across with their leg and uses their adjacent hand to push away the incoming attack. the motion will eventually make the user spin in a 180 degree manner and will be able to deliver an elbow to the face of the opponent.

    Note: If the opponent attacks with their right hand/leg, the user will use their right leg to step and right hand to push away the attack. then uses their left elbow to strike.
    Note: Can defend up to A-rank taijutsu based attack if Junan Taiso is in effect.
    Note: Can only be used by Bujinkan user with a rank of Ikkyu or higher.
    Note: Can only be taught by WastedMonkey

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    Everything here can be done free-form or with normal taijutsu customs. Re-directing attacks and doesn't fall under a CFS.
     
         
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    Tenkou Gigei | Weather Arts
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Background:
    Long ago, during the era of the Sage of Six Paths, a forbidden land known for having the most extreme natural phenomenons, housed a clan that was well adapted to the harsh weather. The Sage of Six Paths, traveling the world, spreading his ideal and religion, came across this forbidden land, with the hope to spread his knowledge among the citizens of this land. The Sage taught the citizens of this land everything he knew, before leaving. Years have passed since then, and the citizens of the land began to adapt more with chakra, and began to rely on it. One religious person of the clan spoke about using chakra to manipulate the weather, and forever ending the harsh conditions that plagued the land. Countless decades passed, and the clan continued to research on manipulating the weather.
    During the era of the formation of villages, most of the clan gave up on manipulating the weather, and instead focused on making their village strong via military means. One old-man, and the direct descendant of the religious person who first spoke of the idea, continued to practice trying to manipulate the weather. The man first succeeded in mimicking weather by forging a powerful staff, which created weather through small little bubbles. After studying on how to mimic weather, he began trying to alternate the weather with the staff, and after a few years he finally succeeded, and ended the extreme weathers in the land.
    News of his success went haywire through the ninja world, and the thoughts about gaining the power to create, and manipulate natural phenomenons, made everyone power hungry. Countless approached, and countless died before the power of this new art. Madara having heard about this, and seeking power to forever destroy his rival, settled off towards the land, which was now know as the Weather country. Upon arrival, Madara tried to negotiate with the clan's leader, but he was refused immediately. Madara unable to accept the refusal, raged war against the Weather country, shedding countless bloods. The old man tries to vanquish Madara by using the power granted by the Weather, but ultimately failed due to Susanoo's impenetrable defences. The old man, knowing Madara's power to be too great, escaped when he had a chance, and went underground into a secret tomb which belongs to his fore-fathers. Within the tomb, he carved on an empty golden wall, on how to use the Staff. He then placed the staff into a golden box, before leaving it behind once and for all.
    Hundreds of years have passed since then, and a young girl wanders onto this land, in search of treasure. Having round the entrance to the tomb, she enters in carefully, avoiding any traps. Having reached the inside, she was amazed by the golden walls all around her, and by the immense amount of treasure spread out everywhere. After having looked through everything she came across the wall with the information regarding the staff. As she read the carvings on the wall, she grew amazed at the power it possessed. She then opens the golden box,taking the staff, and everything with her back home.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Mimic: Mimic is the first training session you'll learn. Essentially mimic revolves around the user creating | forming weather from the staff.
    The staff has three segments, each segment contains an opening on each end which can be used for various means. On each segment, it also contains a small gray pin-like hole, which stimulates the staff into forming bubbles. Depending on the chakra used to formulate the bubbles depends on the type of weather that can be mimicked.
    ✖ Earth: By focusing chakra into the staff. the user creates a bubble with large quantities of earth inside which can be used to create Earthquakes, and sand storms.

    ✖ Fire: By focusing chakra into the staff, the user creates a bubble with large quantities of heat inside which can be used to form heat waves which is capable of droughting the area from any water techniques.

    ✖ Lightning: By focusing chakra into the staff, the user creates a bubble with large quantities of lightning inside which can be used to create Thunderstorms, or rain down bolts of lightning.

    ✖ Water: By focusing chakra into the staff, the user creates a bubble with large quantities of water inside which can be used to create a Tsunami, or form rain.

    ✖ Wind: By focusing chakra into the staff, the user creates a bubble with large quantities of wind inside which can be used to form Tornados, Hurricanes, or large gusts of wind.

    Alteration: Alteration is the second training session you'll learn. Essentially alter revolves around the user altering weather with the staff. The user is capable of altering any weather to their liking, even with the possibility of the weather never occurring in that area. Such as causing it to snow or rain in the Lang of Wind, or creating Sand Storms in the Land of Fire.

    Levels
    Mage: The creator of this style.
    Sorceress | Sorcerer: Completed all training sessions, and has mastered all techniques, including forbidden.
    Expert: Completed second training session, and has mastered the basic techniques.
    Novice: Completed first training session, and has mastered the basic techniques.
    Apprentice: Undergoing the first training session.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    ✖ Requires two training sessions in order to learn the basics of Altering | Mimicking
    ✖ Requires three training sessions in order to master the entire style.
    ✖ An expert of this style gains enhancement to any weather based techniques.
    ✖ An expert of this style gains enhancement to moving their limbs, due to moving the staff constantly to perform techniques.
    ✖ A Sorceress | Sorcerer of this style is capable of sensing change in the weather, and pressure in the air.
    ✖ A Sorceress | Sorcerer of this style is capable of altering the weather without the staff.
    ✖ A Sorceress | Sorcerer of this style is capable of performing weather techniques with one hand seal.
    ✖ Every biography will be able to wield a copy of the staff, and be able to choose the colors they prefer.
    ✖ Must have mastered the Basic Five
    ✖ Must have mastered Ninjutsu
    ✖ Can only be taught by Toshiro


    Bubbles are merely cosmetic, and doesn't revolve around the Bubble Release.
    Weather Arts
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    Bubble techniques are already an ability specific to Utakata, so even though you're doing this with a weapon unless you have a Utakata bio I cannot allow this.
     
         
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    Shadow Clone Teamwork
    Type:Ninjutsu
    Background: One day, Lukaria was on her way back from a retrieval mission which required her to go through the land of fire, and near Konoha. For some reason, it was a gloomy day. As she was making her way through the forests, she heard a gigantic explosion coming from the direction of the village. Curious she made her way their to check things out, upon her arrival, the entirety of Konoha had been reduced to rubble. As she looked on, she spotted Naruto clashing with Pain (God realm). After the fight, she began to like the idea of using shadow clones as a clutch. With that, ever since that day, she has been practicing battle strategies with her shadow clones. By observing Naruto's usage of clones, she began to incorporate it into a fighting style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: By creating a shadow clone (multiple shadowclones) the user will then use them as extensions of themselves, by using specified teamwork and manuevers, and developing jutsu based on the teamwork of the clones. Creating techniques that will enable the user to dodge attacks, defend, and to plan attacks, plus the fact that whatever a clone experiences, the original will already know. Alot of the jutsu requires the use of mass shadowclones and alot of chakra is needed. Because she is of the Uzumaki clan, Lukaria has the stamina and chakra needed to do this.

    Additional effects and Restrictions: Must Know shadow clone jutsu. Only memebers of the Uzumaki Clan can learn this. Can only be taught by axXx

    Jutsu examples:

    Shadow Clone teamwork- Shadow clone boost
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:15
    Damage Points:N/A
    Descripton: The user quickly creates two shadow clones who then throw the user high into the air, useful to avoid incoming attacks, and to get into long range in the air.


    Shadow Clone Teamwork- Great Shadow Clone Wall Barricade
    Rank: A
    Type: Defense
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost:30
    Damage Points:N/A
    Descripton: The user creates 1000 shadowclones who then quickly grab eachothers hands and jump on eachothers back to form a wall a human wall. The wall can be used to block large scale jutsu, after its use, the clones are then dispersed.
    Note: Can only block up to A-Rank
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    This is not a CFS, just a set of taijutsu combinations dependent on clones. Everything here can be done with either normal ninjutsu customs or more likely by just creating clones and describing what they do.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Kōdona chakurasenshingu
    geijutsu|Advanced Chakra Sensing Arts (ACSA)


    Type:

    NinGenjutsu

    Background:

    It is common to see many sensory ninjas being underrated by their opponents. A lot of people would attempt to conceal their chakra or use other mediums to confuse mainly chakra sensors. This kept going on and a chakra sensor, Naizen, using his Karin bio decided to change this and spread the gospel of Chakra Sensing through the Shinobi World by constantly practicing and devicing new ways to improve his sensing abilities. Since he had the bio of the best sensory ninja in all of the Shinobi World, he took it upon himself to place chakra sensory ninjas on a level higher than any other sensory ninja in the Ninja World. With constant practice and dedication to improving his ability, he developed a unique way of fighting by constantly practicing with Aburame bugs and trying to find the main target by using his chakra to block those of the bugs and still find the main target. He also had a number of Shinobi suppress their chakra while he struggles to sense them. This was never an easy task but at the end, after months of intense training, he devoloped the Advanced Chakra Sensing Arts (ACSA).

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    As the name implies, this fighting style makes the user's sensing ability higher than the cannon Chakra Sensing ability. It is well-known that a chakra sensor is able to tell the location of individuals or incoming attacks by sensing chakra in them. This skill is easily confused by creating a large number of clones or summons or other controllable animals(insects work perfectly). This most times makes the regular chakra sensing ability useless.

    The ACSA enables the user to increase his awareness to chakra to the highest level humanly possible. With a unique chakra control that only sensors can possess, they are able expand their sensing range up to 5km except Karin bios that can sense and detect individuals tens of kilometers away.

    By focusing on their chakra source and opening up it's reserves, they will use this boost of chakra to attack and combat other forms of chakra they meet, sometimes casting a genjutsu on the targets. With this chakra boost, they are able to fool doujutsu users except byakugan and other sensors. Other sensors and doujutsu users(sharingan and rinnegan) will sense/see a burst of chakra in them as if they have just opened a gate or a mode but in reality, they are conserving their chakra as they create smaller chakra passages that connect back to the main source. After the burst, the doujutsu user/sensor will see/sense them glowing with chakra(mode begins) until it gradually fades a way(mode ends).
    @bold: this is what the opponents will think.

    But what is actually happening is that 60% of the chakra used is saved and only 40% is used to fuel the sudden increase in power. This allows the ACSA sensor to activate this mode up to 4 times per match, completely fooling the Sharingan, Rinnegan and other normal sensors everytime.

    Mastery of this CFS makes chakra sensing ninja always aware of external chakra sources that may try to enter their body. It makes them, not immune but aware of all forms of genjutsu cast on them or on others. Since their sensing abilities are always at it's peak, they are able to sense even the internal chakra flow of a person. Therefore, doubling their reaction time.

    When encountering multiple chakras created by one or more persons(i.e. Clones, bugs, bats, etc) a master of ACSA is able to create a harmless dome of sensing chakra that will immediately notify him of the presence of anyone within range in a second.

    Since their chakra is within their reach, ACSA users are able to cast genjutsu at an exceptionally fast rate. They are also able to dispel genjutsus at a faster rate than normal ninjas would. This is because as soon as a genjutsu is cast on them, they sense a foreign chakra and feel the irregularity in their chakra flow and so do not even need to think or try to figure out what is happening to them. They know a genjutsu when they sense one.

    Jutsu Example:
    Kōdona chakurasenshingu
    gijutsu|Advanced Chakra Sensing Technique

    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary|Attack
    Range: Short-Long(It can expand up to about 5km for normal sensors and tens of kilometers for a special sensor)
    Chakra Cost: 20(-10 per turn active)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This is a more advanced way of sensing chakra. It allows the user to feel chakra up to 5km away but Karin bios can sense individuals tens of kilometers away. It also gives the user a great deal of information on the target. It allows the user to immediately tell if they are fighting a clone or an original.
    -Can only be used by someone who has learned Advanced Chakra Sensing Arts.


    Ishiki no dōmu-Dome of Awareness
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary|Defense
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to pinpoint targets who suppress their chakra or create many clones or use summons that can multiply into hundreds or who control things that have chakra(e.g bugs or bees, etc). The user will simply build up chakra from within them and push it out. Then it will form a dome of chakra that will just phase through everything on the field in the blink of an eye without dealing any form of damage to them but will alert the user of their location and how many they are. This chakra can only be seen by a doujutsu user or sensed by a sensor but to normal ninjas, it will just be a normal breeze blowing. This dome can dispel genjutsu up to A rank in a second, as it spreads in a second.
    -Usable 5 times per match
    -It is capable of covering tens of kilometers
    -Can only be used by an Advanced Chakra Sensing Arts user.
    -Can only be taught by Naizen.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • This CFS can only be used by sensors with high chakra reserves so a rank of Sannin and above is required to learn it.
    • To learn this art, one must have possessed a chakra sensory bio for at least 3 months. This would mean that the person in question is farmiliar with chakra sensing.
    • One must possess a chakra sensing bio to learn this CFS. If the bio is dropped, the person can no longer use this CFS. But if the bio is picked again then the person can start using it again.
    • Can only be taught by Naizen

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    ~Declined~
    Do not resubmit. This isn't at all a fighting style, just an upgrade on the chakra sensing technique. This should be submitted as custom techniques usable only by sensors.
     
         
    Last edited by Riku..; 12-31-2012 at 11:34 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Chūsainin Hyōketsu | Arbitrator’s Verdict
    Type: Nuijutsu

    Background:
    This style was developed by a ninja from the Nara clan who often received missions involving the capture of enemy ninja. Even while highly adept in using shadow jutsu, facing multiple enemies or those with high-level ninjutsu proved too much for him at times. In order to compensate for the limitations of the Nara clan’s techniques he came up with a weapon style utilizing needles connected to wires meant to subtly bind an enemy, allowing him to pass judgment on whoever is caught by him. Inspired by the Shadow Sewing jutsu, he tried manipulating and strengthening the tools using chakra, striving to make them the most durable and versatile weapons. Once perfected, the ninja described Chūsainin Hyōketsu as the embodiment of law: Inevitable and absolute.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The techniques of Chūsainin Hyōketsu involve the manipulation of needles connected to fine wires imbued with high concentrations of chakra. These tools are typically hidden within the practitioner’s clothes and are ideal for sneak attacks because of their thinness. Each part of this combination of tools has their own unique role.

    Needles are used for piercing enemies while causing minimal damage due to its thin shape and small size. When chakra is condensed within a needle, its piercing ability could be enhanced to the point that only the hardest materials can resist it. With enough precision, it may disable parts of a target’s body or even cause a fatal wound. The needle is also given a powerful driving force when it is being manipulated, allowing the practitioner of this style to direct it swiftly through the air and obstacles while guiding the wire it is connected to.

    The wire, while guided by the needle, is also manipulated in order to bind targets more efficiently by tying them up or sewing them to other objects. Wires used by ninja are already difficult to break and when they are reinforced by chakra, they become almost unbreakable. Both the needle and wire exhibit this durability. Their thinness combined with durability allows them to move through enemy attacks without being damaged in the process. The techniques of this style allow the wires to extend, shrink, and break at the user's will, removing the need to carry large amounts of wire. Some techniques incorporate elemental chakra for additional effects.

    Example Techniques:

    (Chūsainin Hyōketsu: Bōmei) – Arbitrator’s Verdict: Asylum
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user controls a chakra enhanced needle and wire to pierce through the enemy’s arms and legs before going through his torso. By causing the wire to shrink, the enemy’s limbs are tightly drawn together and his movement restricted. He is left curled up in a painful position until the user decides his fate. More than one wire may be used on one or multiple enemies.

    (Chūsainin Hyōketsu: Girochin) – Arbitrator’s Verdict: Guillotine
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user controls chakra enhanced needles and wire to surround part or all of a target’s body before suddenly tightening them and cutting off the body parts caught by the wires. Alternatively, the wires may be infused with fire, wind, or lightning chakra to enhance the cutting ability of the wire.

    (Chūsainin Hyōketsu: Shikei) – Arbitrator’s Verdict: Execution
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: The user controls a chakra enhanced needle and wire to pierce an enemy while sending a surge of chakra through the wire resembling a small glowing sphere traveling across it. When this surge reaches the enemy it is released at once into his body, causing him to explode from within.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Must be at least S-class rank to learn
    -Must have mastered basic ninjutsu to learn
    -Masters of this style possess excellent chakra control needed to skillfully manipulate the tools
    -Masters of this style possess sharp observational skill needed to keep track of their tools
    -Practitioners of this style can combine techniques utilizing the wire unless they involve two different elemental chakras.
    __________________
    ~Declined~
    In truth, this can already be done by normal ninja; no CFS needed here. Just like how kunai can be used with wires, so could senbon with precise enough control, control that most ninja would already have.
     
         
    Last edited by Riku..; 02-07-2013 at 08:31 PM.

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