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    (Kaku Kenjutsu) Dividing Sword Arts

    Type: NinKenjutsu

    Background: Akisha, after completing his Kenjutsu training with Keotsu sensei he decided to go around the world and showcase his ability to use swords. With his great skills, he managed to defeat all of his opponents…until he met this rouge ninja whose name he never got the chance to find out. With the use of this fighting style, Akisha was easily defeated. Luckily the ninja was willing to trade and then it was when Akisha shared a lot of his own techniques in order to learn this Fighting Style by the rogue ninja. After becoming a master of it, Akisha hunted down and killed the ninja with his own Dividing Sword Arts as he did not want his techniques being used by a total stranger who might turn out to be an enemy later in the future.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Dividing Sword Arts is a fighting style that involves basic Kenjutsu along with ninjutsu. The user with the use of his chakra will be able to divide his sword into multiple parts that he can use in his advantage. Like for example the user is engaged in a fight with another kenjutsu user and their swords are crossed. With he use of his chakra he can manipulate the blade’s structure and will be able to divide it in a few little parts that he will control to attack the user while the remaining of his sword is crossed with the opponent’s sword. The user can also use shape manipulation to make the parts into different form like shuriken or kunai to better manage their acceleration and control. Along with that he can extend different parts of his sword like a spear in order to attack and at the same time, keep the length and shape of his blade. Lastly the use of chakra manipulation, the user can extend his sword or make it smaller depending on the situation in order to attack or defend.


    (Kaku Kenjutsu: Kaku ken Hyoushi) Dividing Sword Arts – Divide and Concur
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense/Defense/ Supplementary
    Rank: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Point: 60
    Description: The user will concentrate his chakra into his Sword and will divide it in multiple pieces that he is able to manipulate with his chakra as he pleases. The user can use this technique to divide his sword and attack the opponent from multiple angles or can use them to surround himself and act as a defense mechanism.

    (Kaku Kenjutsu: Dadai ken Sho-to) Dividing Sword Arts: Long or Short
    Rank: A
    Type Offense/Defense
    Rank: Short-Middle
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage point 60:
    Description: The user will concentrate his chakra into his sword and will extend it or make it smaller depending on the situation. The user can use this technique to attack with his swords opponents who like to run from Mele fighting or to make it small like Kunai so that it has better acceleration if thrown.




    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • In order to be used this fighting style, its users must go through a short battle that showcases their ability to wield sword.
    • The idea of this CFS itself shows that its users are weaker than normal kenjutsu users as he has to use the sneak attacks, provided to them by this fighting style in order to beat them, though they do have better strategic thinking and reflexes from the ordinary kenjutsu users.

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    How would this even work? You're basically trying to like, phase your weapon. Without space-time this is really impossible. Even if you had, like, steel release and could remove part of your weapon by using it, the top and bottom halves of the weapon would no longer be connected, resulting in you just basically slicing your weapon in half with the top half falling to the ground. I just don't see how you expect this to be possible.
     
         
    Last edited by Riku..; 01-20-2013 at 05:02 PM. Reason: Adding jutsu examples

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    (Yuukata) Toxic Eel Style

    Type: Nin-Taijutsu

    Background: Yuudoku Kata, also known as "Yuukata" was founded by ancient ninja that found shelter in the Caves of Eel Cove. During a time of battle, a ground of young Ninja known as the "Buraza" where fourced to leave there town from fear of death. Out numbered and overrun, they had no choice. Afrer fleeing there homeland, they made there way to the cost. Stealing a boat they found themselves caught in a massive storm. Crashing back and fourth between the waves they thought themselves dead. the next morning, they found themselves crashed upon a small Island. over the next few weeks the ninja scouted the island and found a chain of caves that reached deep within the ground. fallowing and mapping the caves became there only goal. months later they stumbled upon a Temple deep within the maze of caves. when they entered water began to flood the area leaving them neck deep. The water began to fill with Eels that swarmed the Ninja killing them.. that is all but one. The last Ninja asked why was he spared? the only words he heard in response were "We will give you the tools you need to take revenge on the ones that haunt you.." Accepting the words, the last ninja began learning the ways of the Eels. Over the next 25 years he learned, created and mastered the Art now known as "Yuukata". This fighting style was only achievable though extreme training in Dexterity, Stamina and Chakra Control.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Yuukata is a unique style of fighting that use's a mixture of swift fluent motion and fast reflexes with chakra and toxic fingertips. The user's of this Fighting style will often have elongated fingernails like claws dipped in and painted with a toxin made from the venom of Eels and plants only found at Eel Cove. Or have "finger rings" on there fingers that are designed to deliver the toxin when fighting. these rings will not limit the users handseal capabilities. the user uses his fluent motion to counter an opponent, mainly a defensive style the user will slice and scratch an opponent and imply chakra to eject the toxin into the opponents blood stream, this will then effect the opponent differently depending on the amount of toxin used. (Different Effects will be stated in the Jutsu's description)

    Finger Ring Example:


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -The user of this style will fight with a fluent movment
    -The user of this style must be a Signer of the Eel Contract
    -The user of this style must be at least Sannin Rank and be a member of the forum for at least 6 months
    -The user of this style must have mastered Taijutsu

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    Usage Examples:

    (Yuukata: Batsu) Toxic Eel Style: Strike
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will strike the opponent with there sharp nails or sharp "finger rings" and inject a toxin into the opponent. This will cause the opponent's infected area to burn cause a lot of pain on the opponent.
    Note:
    -Can only be used 3 times a battle.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    (Yuukata: Mokushi Batsu) Toxic Eel Style: Slash of Sight
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will strike the opponent with there sharp nails or sharp "finger rings" and inject a toxin into the opponent. This toxin will work it's way through the blood stream making it's way to the opponents eye's after the toxin takes effect, the opponent vision will be blurred making it difficult to see. This Toxin does not effect Doujutsu Users.
    Note:
    -Can only be used 3 times a battle.
    -Takes one turn to take effect.
    -Blurred vision effect last 2 turns.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent

    (Yuukata: Mokushi Batsu Mukankaku) Toxic Eel Style: Slash of Numbing Skin
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user will strike the opponent with there sharp nails or sharp "finger rings" and inject a toxin into the opponent. This toxin will work it's way through the infected area making it go numb. the numb area will no longer be usable until the toxin wears off.
    Note:
    -Can only be used 3 times a battle.
    -Toxin takes one turn to take effect.
    -Numbing effect last 2 turns.
    -Can only be taught by Serpent
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    One thing that needs clarification. How exactly are you differentiating between the different poisons that you use? If one of your nails or finger rings has a certain poison on it, then how exactly can one minute you use a certain type of poison and then the next minute, using the same exact set of claws, decide that you used a different one? See what I mean? You can't do that with your chakra because only medical ninja can actually control poison. That said, you can do one of two things: you can have different sets of finger rings that each have different types of poison in them and you have to equip them before using that type of poison, or you can have different types of poison from your eel on your person that you then apply to your nails. Otherwise, this won't really be able to work out. But that said, while I think that it could work out, I'll have to discuss it with Scorps a bit for confirmation when you resubmit it.
     
         
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    Soul Eater| Shibusen
    Type:Nin-Taijutsu
    Background:The art was founded by Shen,a monk who resided in one of the shaolin temples in the fire country.As shaolin monks,they kept to themselves and was a peaceful lot.During the second great ninja war,many ninja's took refuge in the temples after being heavily wounded.Soon the temple became an imminent target in the eyes of the Nindaime Kazekage.He ordered an attack on the temple and destroyed half of the residing population in the temple.Infuriated by this,Shen set out of the temple with the remaining monks and started developing a style to help defend themselves against ninja's.This art came to be know Shibusen.Shen developed this style after encountering a team of konoha shinboi's which comprised of a yamananka clan shinobi,Hyuuga and a Nara.Shen was amazed at each of their hidden abilites especailly the yamananka's,who had the ability to transfer his mind to another person or living thing and the Hyuuga's who could insert chakra into their opponents body.As these hidden abilities peeked Shen's interest,he closely studied them and their abilities.After 10 years,he developed a unique style clubbing a part of both yamanka and hyuuga abilities.This style was later known as Shibusen or Soul Eater.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:There are two types of energy in a human body,Spiritual energy and physical energy.The first is the chakra of the soul and the latter is the chakra in our body.Inorder to perform jutsu's the user must draw out both forms of chakra and mix it in appropriate propositions.The soul's chakra is the primary or principle chakra when creating jutsu's,the body's chakra is the Secondary or accessory chakra.Shibusen is a unique style that mainly targets soul chakra.This special type of art relies on taijutsu that requires swift liquid flow movements coupled with exceptional chakra control.Each person's soul has a particular wavelength,a shibusen users can sense the wavelength of a person's soul after making physical contact with that person.This however doesn't grant the user,the ability to sense the opponents location.After sensing the soul wavelength,the user adjust his chakra so that the wavelengths don't match with each other.He then can follow up with taijutsu blows that has been enhanced with user's chakra.The blows don't physically harm the opponent straight away.With each blow the user inserts chakra into the targets body.The chakra's wavelength doesn't match with the soul wavelength inside the opponent and is forcefully 'injected' into the target. This will cause an interruption in the target's spiritual chakra damaging the soul and consequently the whole body.This moreover reduces the opponents ability to mold spiritual energy inorder to perform jutsu's.


    Shibusen:Kon pa-ji|Soul Eater:Soul purge
    Rank:C-A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short
    Chakra:15-30
    Damage:30-60
    Description: Soul Purge is a great technique in the Shibusen arsenal.The user starts by delivering any kind of taijutsu attack such as a palm strike (the most used) and as the strike connects he injects the target with his own chakra.This chakra's wavelenght doesn't match the targets soul wavelength,and are forcefully 'injected' into the target. This will cause an interruption in the target's wavelength damaging the soul and consequently the whole body. The target will feel a sort of electrical shock throughout the body.As they receive this sort of electrical surge though out the body, their body will slightly numb for a few seconds, the numbness is equal to the area of impact.After a few seconds when the numbness wears off, the target will then feel pain all over his body,especially the area of impact

    -Opponent can't do S-rank jutsu and above for 1 turn
    -No shibusen jutsu in the next turn
    -Only taught by Igneel


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Must be Kage ranked to learn this style.
    -No additional passive abilities.
    -Must have great mastery over chakra.
    -Doujutsu users of sharingan and byaukugan has more advantage using this style.
    -Mastery over Ninjutsu[Including basic 5] & Taijutsu.
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    Do not resubmit. This is just too much. You're not only sensing your opponent's chakra "wavelength," which btw would at the very least require doujutsu to feasibly do if such a thing even exists, but your also altering not your chakra type but it's "wavelength" as well? In addition, diffusing pure chakra into someone is essentially Gentle Fist territory.
     
         
    Last edited by Riku..; 02-07-2013 at 09:21 PM.

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    [Hitotoki Kae Kata] - Time Alter Art

    Type: Gen-Taijutsu

    Background: Time Alter (時間が変更 literally meaning; Time Manipulation) is the art developed by Uchiha Clan in the ninja world war, and then later adapted by Genjutsu users after establishment of Hidden Village of Leaf. The art of fighting using illusions was already in practice by that time, but using the illusions to manipulate the enemy's mind to effect the time around them to cause a chain reaction to take advantage in the battle field was rather unique and rare among the individuals. When the Konohagakure was established, the Uchiha Clan showed faith in the village and the treaty of Senju-Uchiha clans, by passing on this trait to some of the most amazing shinobis of the village. Uchiha clan naturally shared the ability of perfect Taijutsu or weaponary fighting, using their eyes to create such illusions of false time they were able to develop and master this style quickly than other clans.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Time Alter Art, uses two different aspects of ninjas fighting styles to complete it. One being Genjutsu, and the other using Taijutsu. Time alter was developed to cast a wide-spread Genjutsu over a bounded field and use immense control over the surroundings illusion to make the mind of the subject believe that either the things are moving too fast, or they have significantly slowed down. It is not an ability that cannot be used along with ninjutsu on the battlefield where strategies must be quickly made in order to survive, as it takes time to prepare and used strategically even after the preparations. Hence after research the ability was to be only used along with weapons thus completing the magnificent style of fighting.

    The user keeping the scope to a minimal bounded field, it doesn't allow for the world to be affected, but rather allows for the user to "adjust" a few seconds of time within his opponent's brain. The Genjutsu makes the opponent believe that the time had slowed down for the passing seconds, or it has moved faster in the passing seconds. The illusions used are called; Time Accel, & Time Stagnate.

    » Time Accel: is when the time is accelerated in the opponent's brain seeming like the subjects are faster than usual and the surroundings around him/her are changing rapidly. But in reality it is just an illusion with the use of weapons which becomes the subject of the art.

    [Hitotoki Kae Kata: Nijuu Hayaku] Time Alter Art: Double Accel
    Rank: A-Rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: User makes a tiger hand-seal expanding his chakra over to mid-range or short range in a spherical form. The field casts an illusion over all the subjects within that field. The Genjutsu makes the opponent skip every half second of the reality after every one second. As long as the user stays in the field they are bound to skip the half seconds of all senses making them believe that everything is moving at an accelerated speed and that the time around them is adjusted, moving at a faster pace.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times.
    Note: Last for only 3 turns.
    Note: Can only be taught by Blizzard.

    [Hitotoki Kae Kata: Suterusu Senbons] Time Alter Art: Stealth Needles
    Rank: C-Rank
    Type: Attack
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: 30
    Description: After creating a Time Alter Art: Double Accel field, user throws three senbons in a consecutive method with pin point accuracy. The first one aimed for the leg causes pain feelings half second seconds due to the illusion. And the other two aimed at fatal spots, the pain in the leg causes diversion half seconds later when it is too late for the opponent to realize the last two senbons.
    Note: Can only be taught by Blizzard.


    » Time Stagnate: is when the time slows down in the opponent's brain seeming like the subjects are extremely slow and he/she is unable to complete his/her movements to the pace of reality. But in real, it is just an illusion where the subject of art seems like is slowed down.

    [Hitotoki Kae Kata: Sanjuu Teiryuu] Time Alter Art: Tripple Stagnate
    Rank: A-Rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: User makes a tiger hand-seal expanding his chakra over to mid-range or short range in a spherical form. The field casts an illusion over all the subjects within that field. The Genjutsu makes the opponent's brain believe that everything is moving one second slower than normal time span. For example; he or she if moves a hand in reality will be the same speed, but the brain won't comprehend the next action unless it is sure that the eyes and other senses have felt the completion of previous action, thus causing a second delay.
    Note: Can only be used 4 times.
    Note: Last for only 3 turns.
    Note: Can only be taught by Blizzard.

    [Hitotoki Kae Kata: Mousetsu Takai] Time Alter Art: False Death
    Rank: B-Rank
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: After creating a Time Alter Art: Tripple Stagnate field, user being in the close vicinity of the opponent, launches a side kick with chakra boost right on the opponent's head. The opponent's sees the kick stop in mid-way as if the user had canceled his action of kicking the opponent on his head, due to the Stagnate field, but in reality it hits the opponent with immense force on his or her head sending the opponent flying.
    Note: Can only be taught by Blizzard.


    Using these time alterations the user of Time Alter Art is able to create Taijutsu movements to be unexpected. The most common use of this art is with direct pin point weaponry attacks and basic Taijutsu movements. Further explanation or representation in a video where the character shows how it can be used to deduce user's actions;;



    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    » Can only be taught by Blizzard.
    » Must know Genjutsu or be a Sharingan User.
    » Time Illusionist: is the highest level one can attain in this fighting style. He/she must be Kage or above rank, and is able to perceive jutsus more clearly making accurate predictions.
    » Time Bearer: is the apprentice level user of this fighting style. He/she must be Jounin or above rank.
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    Sorry but this can't be approved. It is easily exploitable and easily oped. Not only that but its more about a set of Genjutsu techniques that enables you control over your enemies perception of time rather than a set of close quarter combat moves. Lets not forget, the whole concept is similar to tsukyomi mode and to existing genjutsu approved in the past. Don't resubmit.
     
         
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    [Inmetsu Sukuro-ru Kata] - Destruction Scroll Art

    Type: Weaponry Taijutsu

    Background: Destruction Scroll Art (破壊アート Literally meaning; Bomb Art) has been used since the oldest times when weapons started being used in battles. The Art was developed as both supplementary and attack based strategies against massive numbers of opponents. It was often used as an escape skill by some of the shinobis during extremely critical times in the ninja wars. Later the use was taken to another level and was implemented in live capture missions.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The user of Destruction Scroll Art uses specifically different types of bombs stored in a weapon summoning scroll along with skilled suitable Taijutsu skill to take control of the battle. Some of the following bombs are the most common in the fighting style;

    » Explosive Tag Bomb: A small four inches spherical ball wrapped with explosive tags, and explodes on chakra command (hand-seal).
    » Chakra Bomb: A fairly large sized ball, about the size of user's hand. Stored with compressed chakra and causes immense damage on contact due to chakra explosion.
    » Sleeping Gas Bomb: A medicinal bomb designed using a gas that explodes on chakra command (hand-seal) and causes dizziness and sleep if the gas is inhaled.
    » Smoke Bomb: A smoke screen bomb.
    » Chili Pepper Bomb: Causes tears in the eyes and sneezes.
    » Poison Bomb: Poisons the person who comes in contact or inhales the gas. Different variant of this bomb exist.
    » Shock Bomb: A bomb charged with lightning chakra, causes intense shock waves on initiation.
    » Sticky Bomb: A bomb designed using earth and water chakras, explodes into a sticky material, mostly used for trapping.
    » Flash Bomb: A flash bomb causes extreme light.
    » Ice Bomb: Only applicable to Ice users, where the bomb explodes into spikes of Ice, only an inch radius spherical bomb compressed with chakra.

    Above are only few of the possible weapons that are used in this style, with those bombs a proceeding Taijutsu skills allows one to develop this style in practice. Use of this Art, starting 3:00;



    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    » Can only be taught by Blizzard.
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    As it is its something that most ninjas can use through basic, free form skills. If you want a CFS out of something like this you need to develop it much more and tie it with some sort of close combat. What you purpose here is nothing more than a simple set of bombs that any ninjas can already use.
     
         
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    Elemental mayhem || Seirei dai konran || 精霊大混乱
    Type: Taijutsu - Ninjutsu Hybrid
    Background: In the recent years with the growth of his own personal expertise in the field of ninjutsu a very pro-efficient ninja and pirate named shanks was able to combine his powerful ninjutsu with his taijutsu to create a powerful fighting style. He created this fighting style keeping in mind the quick need to access his elemental chakra during a fight where he cannot hope to compete or is on par with the speed of his opponent.
    Later in time shanks also decided to teach this style of fighting to people he thought would do good to the world at large. He created a hierarchy in which this style could be learned. He created 3 levels.

    Maestro: This is the person who has total mastery over this fighting style. He is able to use all the body parts as mentioned below. He is also able to channel all the elements in their respective parts as mentioned below. At any given time there is only one maestro. He is able to teach this fighting style in its entirety to anyone he desires.

    Patriarchs: These are the people who are second to only the maestro in their understanding of the fighting style. They can use 4 elemental chakra natures with their respective body parts. They do not have the ability to use the Lightning chakra nature through eyes. They have the ability to teach this Fighting style to any 2 disciples of their choice. At any given time there are only two masters of this style.

    Disciples: These form the lowest echelon of this style. And basically they are the learners. They can have any 2 chakra types and their parts trained as per their choice (with the exception of eyes and raiton). At any given time there could be maximum 4 disciples.

    The subtle bodily properties that the concerned body parts will have will be achieved by all those who begin learning this fighting style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    In this style shanks brought together his taijutsu and combined it with his elemental ninjutsu. Shanks trained himself for a long time before creating this fighting style. Basically he divided his body into 5 parts each resembling an element.

    The right hand: The divine palm of serenity - Water
    The left hand: The rock solid resolution - Earth
    The Left leg: Wrath of the red hawk - Fire
    The Right leg: Movement of the dying Breeze - Wind
    The Eyes: Fury of the thunder god - Lightning

    In this style shanks made each of his body to excel into development and usage of a chakra nature in the ways mentioned above. He began with making each part learn the qualities of the element which they hope to imbue.

    Over the years his right hand began making movements that were fluid and calm but persistent. In case of obstruction he would clash against the obstruction multiple times causing little damage each-time but it would slowly erode the obstruction without it knowing. The user is able to charge this hand with water chakra creating an unstable orb of water around this hand. He can shape this orb into any shape of his desire. [The power of water]

    His left hand on the other hand was more decisive and powerful. It dealt powerful blows withh each impact. Each impact of his left hand crumbled huge stone structures. At the same time this hand was an incarnation of defense so impenetrable that it was able to withstand powerful opponent onslaught over time. The user can charge this body part with earth creating an armour like formation around this hand. When connected with any body part of the opponent this hand can crush bones or other things for that matter. [The power of earth]

    His left leg was trained to be a furious attacker. It attacked at high speed with pounding strength. Such was the strength of his left leg that it transferred all the pent up energy in his leg into the target object in the form of heat turning it into a smouldering mass of ash. The user can charge this body part with fire to create a golden flame around the lower part of his leg. This foot can be used to land high flaming blows on the opponent. [The power of fire]

    His Right leg was like a breeze and when raised up it would move like the wind. The most flexible body part. It could parry or avoid an incoming blow as if it was a sheet of paper, which would cut if you are not careful. The user can charge this body part with his wind nature chakra. It can literally act as a edged weapon, creating a slash across anything it strikes. [The power of wind]

    His Eyes were dark. They had the darkness of the most dangerous thunder clouds. They crackled with lightning in a way that even made the gods envy. He could creates traces of symbols on any object that he led his eyes on. The user can charge his eyes with lightning chakra. Allowing them to release a stream of concentrated lightning upto mid range which is able to pierce its opponent. [The power of lightning]

    The user is able to charge or de-charge any of these body parts with the specified chakra type in the blink of an eye. The subtle properties of the elements that are acquired at the end of the training, are bodily (Meaning they pertain to the users body) so they remain.
    For example,
    Any attack made by the users left hand will be more powerful as compared to any other regular shinobi after having trained in this style.
    The right hand will be extremely helpful at moving aside an incoming blow and launching a counter-attack.
    The left leg will tend to heat up that part which it strikes or makes contact with due to the high speed and power with which it strikes. [This is purely similar to the phenomenon where an iron bar gets heated due to continous beating]
    The right leg is a lot faster and moves at a moments notice propelling the body with itself.
    The eyes are quicker and notice subtle changes in the opponents posture or the surroundings of the battleground in the space of a heartbeat.

    Example jutsus:

    Divine palm of serenity || Drilling blow
    Type: Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: For this jutsu the user charges his right hand with the water chakra, creating an orb of water around his right hand and striking the opponent hard on any part of his body while letting the water spread over his body and then pass through his body while appearing on the other side and again forming an orb as it moves away from the body, leaving the insides of the body ringing.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -At any given time only one elemental chakra can be charged in anyone body part.
    -Requires the mastery of tajutsu.
    -Increased elemental switching speeds.
    -Highly draining form of taijutsu. As such only shinobi of Kage ranked and above can use it.
    -All the elemental weaknesses remain. [Although the effect will remain concentrated to the body part that was exposed to the concerned weakness]
    -The subtle bodily properties are not bound to the elemental weaknesses.
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    Too much being encompassed in one style. If you had some common aspect of the style that linked all of these elemental variations then maybe you'd have something to work with. But as it is now this is essentially just focusing different elements in your taijutsu for completely different effects when focusing each element that are completely unrelated to one another. Thus, this CFS simply includes too many abilities all in one.
     
         
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    (Yoroi Kansō) Armor Requip
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Background:

    Several Years ago, the shinobi Erza Scarlet went into intensive training. Having seen the advantages of the armor donned by the samurai of the Land of Iron, specifically the immunity to poison, Erza had collected sets of armor. She found that although the armor she had collected gave her the advantage in some fights, most of the time she was put at a disadvantage; the use of each set of armor was circumstantial. As a solution Erza developed a style in which she could freely change between the sets of armor in the midst of battle. She called this fighting style the Armor Requip.

    This fighting style parallels the same basic idea of Tenten's fighting style. Whereas Tenten summons ninja tools to fight with, Erza's summons sets of armor to fight with.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    This style revolves around the use of the summoning jutsu. The user summons a set of armor onto their body(the jutsu: Summoning: Rashōmon exemplifies the ability to summon in animate objects without scrolls). Unlike a normal summoning technique, the armor appears as a bright yellow light instead of smoke (this is purely aesthetic).

    Examples Jutsus:

    (Yoroi Kansō: Raitei no Yoroi) Armor Requip: Lightning Empress Armor
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40 (15 additional each turn it is worn)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This jutsu summons the Lightning Empress Armor onto Erza’s body. When donning this golden and light bluish armor, Erza’s appearance resembles that of an armored Greek goddess of sort. The breastplate is decorated by golden trimmings, and has thin plates going up to surround Erza’s neck; the similarly adorned pauldrons are composed of two plates one over the other, with the top ones each sporting a prominent protrusion. Similar protrusions, although less prominent, can also be seen on the armored gauntlets which cover the entirety of Erza’a arms. The greaves possess matching protrusion on them, with a particularly large pair adorning the knee guards, and are composed of plates attached to simple, thigh-high boots. The armor lacks a waistguard, instead sporting a decorated cloth hanging down from the breastplate to cover Erza’s groin. Summoning this armor, Erza’s head gets adorned by a band with two ribbons on it, and her hair gets styled in a long braid. When the armor is summoned, a long spear, with a very large blade and a decorated circle resembling a shield on the shaft, is summoned. While this armor is being worn the user gains a slight resistance to lightning ninjutsu (-5 to opponent's lightning ninjutsu upon contact) and the user’s lightning ninjutsu (+5) is slightly strengthened. As side effects of the armor, the user is more vulnerable to wind ninjutsu (+5 to opponent's wind ninjutsu upon contact) and both the user’s earth and wind ninjutsu are weakened.
    ~The armor remains on the field for four turns
    ~Only 1 Requip Armor can be active at a time
    ~While this jutsu is active the user may not use a custom weapon
    ~No summons can be used in the same fight as this jutsu
    ~This jutsu can only be used by Erza Scarlet bios that don’t possess Kekkei genkai
    ~This jutsu can only be used by Bedlington and people who have been taught it by him
    ~This jutsu can only be used 1 time per battle

    (Yoroi Kansō: Kyojin no Yoroi) Armor Requip: The Giant's Armor
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40 (15 additional each turn it is worn)
    Damage:N/A
    Description:This jutsu summons The Giant’s Armor onto Erza’s body in yellow light. True to its name, this golden armor has a somehow barbaric look to it, given the large amount of fur trimmings present on it. The breastplate sports a cross in correspondence to Erza’s belly, a medallion similar in shape to a four-leaf clover attached to a large stranded band around her neck, and a skirt, covering the upper part of Erza’s legs, made of plates and donning fur-lined edges. The curved, decorated pauldrons are very large, point upwards and possess fur trimmings on the lower edges too, just like the large gauntlets which are seen sprouting from under them to completely cover Erza’s arms. The greaves have fur sprouting from both the knee and the ankle areas; the knee guards sport jutting metal ornaments reminiscent of dragon’s wings, and the plates covering part of Erza’s thighs are held up by straps tied behind her legs. The armor is completed by a headgear with the appearance of a pair of large metal ears While this armor is being worn the user gains a slight increase in strength to taijutsu (+5) however the power of the user’s elemental ninjutsu (-5) is slightly weakened.
    ~The armor remains on the field for four turns
    ~Only 1 Armor Requip can be active at a time
    ~While this jutsu is active the user may not use a custom weapon
    ~No summons can be used in the same fight as this jutsu
    ~This jutsu can only be used by Erza Scarlet bios that don’t possess Kekkei genkai
    ~This jutsu can only be used by Bedlington and people who have been taught it by him
    ~This jutsu can only be used 1 time per battle



    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • This fighting style can only be used by Erza Scarlet bios that don’t possess Kekkei genkai
    • The armors are supposed to be weaker than the average custom weapon that is approved
    • A custom weapon cannot be used in the same fight as this fighting style
    • No summons can be used in the same fight as this fighting style (they both use the summoning jutsu and follows the same rule that animals from different contracts cannot be summoned in the same battle)
    • The absolute maximum number of turns that an armor can remain on the field is 4 turns (it can be less depending on the armor)
    • A minimum of 1 turn must pass before changing to a new armor
    • Only 1 Armor Requip can be active at a time
    • Each armor can only be used once per battle

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    You're just summoning armor; this isn't a CFS.
     
         
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    King's Folly
    Type:Spinjutsu
    Background:This ability was discovered by Goku on his travels. He had found a secret cave in the land of the bloody mist, and inside the cave were several scrolls. Goku read the scrolls, which allowed him to perform the art. He then went to Sunagakure, and taught this style to some of the elite ninja there.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:This style allows the user to concentrate his chosen element around his body, then begin to spin.This causes the user to become a tornado of his chosen element, the user can become a tornado of each of the basic 5 but none of the kekkai genkai such as wood or lava release. When the user becomes a tornado, he is still the same height, but with a couple additional inches. The user can still be hurt while inside the tornadoes just as if he had a physical body. But the opponent will still have to find a way around the spinning element surrounding the user.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Due to the constant spinning, when a user stops spinning he is disoriented for about 6 seconds.-
    -A user of this style has slightly less accuracy, because of the constant spinning-
    -A user of this style's speed and reflexes are better than the average strong fist master.-
    -You CANNOT become a Kekkai Genkai tornado-
    -Must have at least started training in every one of the basic 5 to learn this-

    Example Jutsu

    |Kings Folly|Spinjutsu style: Earth
    Type:Offense
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:The user concentrates doton chakra all over his body, and begins to spin. The user then becomes a tornado of earth who rushes at his opponent. When close, the opponent is pelted by rocks and stones all over his body.

    |Kings Folly|Spinjutsu Style: Wind
    Type:Offense
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description:The user focuses wind chakra all over his body, and begins to spin. The user becomes a rampaging tornado of wind which cuts up the opponent when near.

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    A CFS is in no way necessary for what you're doing here. You can just create a tornado custom for multiple elements and be done with it. Though quite likely that's already been done several times over.
     
         
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    Submission Style(Shoufuku Fuukaku)
    Type: Taijutsu and occasionally Chakra control/Ninjutsu
    Background: Long ago there was a hand to hand tournament, several shinobi from different countries entered this tournament, but only one man stood above all, he had ended his fights with his opponents limbs broken, others were injured for life, and some were even incapable of using some of their body parts forever.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style of fighting was very simple and efficient. It basically was taking position of an opponents limb, and bending/twisting it in a particular manner so that injury was caused to it.
    This art also exploited the opponents momentum against them for example if an opponent was delivering a straight punch the user can move out of it's way and by using both his arms the user will turn the opponents arm in a angle above 180° causing the arm to break.
    The art was not limited to fists and kicks, the user was capable of 'submitting' the opponents head through several techniques(to be submitted if approved) like the sleeper hold or Hells gate.


    Rank: B rank
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 40
    Description: When in near proximity of an opponent who is on the ground, the user will grab the leg of the opponent specifaccly in the ankle area, the user will use both of his/her arms and twist the grabbed ankle of the opponent either left or right, causing the opponent intense pain.
    -The longer the technique is used the more damage is delivered



    Rank: A rank
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: When an opponent is facing down towards the ground, the user of this art will grab hold of the opponents legs, the user will then sit on the lower back of the opponent while holding the two legs in a twisted manner which is towards the user.
    -The longer the technique is in use the more damage is inflicted.



    Rank: A rank
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will first stand behind the opponents back, after that the user will extend both his hands under the opponents armpits, after that the user will retract his arms, towards the opponents neck, this causes the opponents arm to move backwards in an awkward position. With his arms behind the user neck the user will clench both arms together through connecting the palms, this causes pain to affect the shoulder area of the opponent.
    -The longer the technique lasts the more damage is inflicted.


    Additional effects and Restrictions: *
    -Must be Sanin Rank to Learn.
    -Must have training in Taijutsu.
    -Most techniques will add more pain after time, after tue first turn has elapsed and if the technique isn't countered/stopped the damage increases by that of D rank techniques, second turn C rank and so on and so forth.
    -User of this art have good reflexes due to constant training to counter most if not all Taijutsu attacks.
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    Everything here can be done freeform. You're just putting your opponent into a variety of locks/holds.
     
         
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    (Kekkai no Ken)- Barrier Fist
    Type: Kekkaitaijutsu
    Background: Through his love for barrier ninjutsu and taijutsu, Selendrile developed a taijutsu based fighting style incorporating both. This was done after he was ambushed on a scouting patrol on the border of Konoha, while on a routine expedition. Facing over twenty enemy Kirigakure ninja, he needed to incapacitate them otherwise they would eventually overpower him by the numbers alone. So, he used his knowledge of barrier ninjutsu to trap each enemy ninja one by one until none remained able to fight properly. With the enemy ninja helpless, Selendrile slaughtered them all. Using his newfound ability, Selendrile created a whole arsenal of techniques to aid himself.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: A user of this style is known as a Kekkaishi, or Barrier Master. A Kekkai (結界, barrier) is a Kekkaishi's main source of offense and defense, and they have a wide variety of uses, in and out of combat. This style incorporates the use of barrier ninjutsu, taijutsu, and elemental chakra on occasion. The formation of a barrier is executed through physical movement of a body part or limb. Once a Kekkaishi decides to execute a technique of this style, they go through the following steps in rapid succession. These are not physical steps a user of the style must go through, but merely provides insight and information to the inner workings of the style.
    • Hōi (方囲, Engulf): Designates a target for the barrier, such as himself, an ally, or an opponent. The constructed barriers range in size and specific function depending on the technique used. The shapes of each barrier have the ability to be non-geometric, and irregular.
    • Jōso (定礎, Cornerstone): Determines where to create the barrier on the battlefield, specific to individual techniques. To be placed directly on the opponent, physical contact is needed. Barriers can also be transferred on contact. For example, if the opponent strikes an existing barrier on the user, it will extend the barrier onto him. This would retain any effects of the original technique. These barriers can be stationary, movable, multilayered, elastic, or selectively permeable.
    • Ketsu (結, Bind): Creates and activates the barrier, capable of producing a suspension and constriction of the object trapped within, if desired in all barriers. Due to the strong currents of chakra emanating from the walls of the barriers, objects within them are suspended, as if they were in a thick liquid that restricts any and all physical movement. The currents of chakra will constantly compress and completely crush any object within a barrier in 3 turns.
    • Kai (解, Release): Dispels the Kekkai without injuring the target trapped inside, if used on oneself or an ally. This would be used mainly for the defensive aspect of the style. The effects listed under Ketsu (結, Bind) do not apply to defensive barriers used on oneself or on an ally.
    • Metsu (滅, Destroy): Destroys a barrier, eliminating what is trapped inside by implosion, or collapsing the barrier. Collapsing the barrier will almost instantly reduce its size to nothingness, crushing or destroying anything within. This is typically done through the performance of a one handed hand seal, or injecting the user’s chakra directly into their own barrier to activate the effects.

    The barriers used within this style are also self-sustaining mechanisms. When created, they do not require a constant chakra source. However, due to this, the techniques can only last for certain periods of time before they disperse.

    Usage Examples:

    (Kekkai no Ken: Dai Ichi no Kisoku)- Barrier Fist: The First Rule
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: One of the most basic techniques a Kekkaishi can utilize. Once struck, or striking the opponent, the user will execute Hoi and Jōso. This forms a barrier upon the moment of contact with the opponent, at the largest size able to cover half of the opponent’s entire body. A Kekkaishi can use this on himself the moment before contact, to use as a defensive barrier while infusing an elemental chakra for added strength. If placed directly onto the opponent, Ketsu is initiated. This restricts any movement by the opponent and begins to compress and constrict the body within. Metsu can be utilized at any time after a barrier with the Ketsu affect has been successfully created, through the aforementioned process. The barriers used in this technique last two turns before dispersing.
    Note: Must be a user of Kekkai no Ken.
    Note: Can be composed of regular or elemental chakra (basic natures)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - Users of this style must have started training in ninjutsu and taijutsu.
    - Users of this style gain a doubled increased reaction time compared to Strong Fist users, due to the accurate timing need to immediately form barries upon contact

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    Don't resubmit. It has multiple things that aren't a CFS. This is, at best, a set of abilities of a Custom Clan as its streching what a normal barrier is. And lets not forget, a barrier ninjutsu or barrier technique is nothing more than an "extension" of Fuuinjutsu.
     
         
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    (Onojutsu)- Twin Blade Axe arts

    Type: Onojutsu

    Background:
    Round bladed axes were used mainly for executions back in the ninja war. They were used on either those who did not follow orders or those from the rival clan. Axes were most people's guillotine.

    The art of Twin Bladed axes was created in suna. A arrogant, stubborn, prideful and very barbaric man waled into suna. He was taught the art of the blade by the village's best. However, the man was extremely barbaric and muscular so a sword didnt cut it for him. He used a one handed double bladed axe to fight and integrated everything he learned from blade into fighting with a axe, whilst also adding his own twist and turns into it.

    During the 2nd and 3rd great war, the man became renowned for his usage of the axe, as he beheaded many fallen opponents. He took on 3 students and taught this style to them, and then they taught them to 3 students and so on and so forth. However, for most they quit half way. Why? Wielding a Axe is much more difficult then wielding a blade due to its size and weight, but has much more power.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Basically, the user with, a double-headed battleaxe with a pair of rounded blades, wields it with one hand as if it were a sword and sing and acts as if it were a sword. Though, they are multiple differences. Due to the weight, Its much harder to swing, contrary the swings have way more power and also momentum counts a big part.

    This is much like kenjutsu but with an axe, the user can also wrap an element around the axe to augment the power of the axe

    ???
    Type: Offensive, Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A very basic yet versatile technique. Much like all other elemental infusing techs, the user focuses one of the basic 5 elements into one of their round, double bladed axes. This gives off a multitude of different affects for each one.
    Fire- The user channels fire chakra into an double bladed axe, engulfing it in a blaze storm. On impact, the user can make a great burst if intense of flames that burns everything it touches
    Water- The user covers their axe in a condensed layer of water. It's extremely condensed to the point where it takes a "solid" form
    Wind- The user channels wind chakra into an axe, increasing its sharpness by ten fold. It could easily slice through a tree without much effort
    Earth- It increases the weight momentarily. The user can activate this instantly to increase weight and momentum so that it can force through even blades
    Note: Only infuse one element at a time
    Note: Last 4 Turns if not deactivated
    Note: Must have Axe arts



    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • Requires Double bladed Axe
    • The practitioner can use an axe with one hand and have complete control over their movement despite the weight of the axe.
    • Become stronger than the average ninja


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    Focusing chakra in a weapon does not make a proper CFS as that can already be done normally.
     
         
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    Buraindo Shuhou: The Blind arts
    Type: Taijutsu
    Background Since the beginning of their rivalary so to say, the Uchiha clan were feared for the visual abilities by everyone. When the Uchiha and the Senju decided to make a treaty and create a village together some senju members feared that the uchiha would use their visual abilites aka their skilled abilities in genjutsu with their sharingan to control the senju and make them do their bidding. Hashirama also feared this, so he ordered his brother Tobirama to take several senju ninja and develop a fighting style that can be use to combat the uchiha clans sharingan abilities. This is how the Buraindo Shuhou started and has been passed down from shinobi to shinobi that live in konoha.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: In order to master Buraindo Shuhou one must stand still in the forest for 20 days and 20 nights, then take a break and keep it going for more nights. With their eyes closed meditating and doing yoga, and by the use of chakra the need to amplify their abilties in each of their 5 senses other then their sight.The reason to do Yoga is to increase their durablity and flexibility, this is done with extreme forms of yoga that only a skilled ninja can do, making them able to twist and turn their body immediately when they sense danger approaching. After they have stayed and meditated the senju shinobi went against tobirama in a taijutsu spar while they had their eyes closed. This kept continuing until the senju shinobi all could handle the future hokage in taijutsu with their eyes closed. Then he added dodging and recognize different elements. They focused their hearing and smell of the crispiness of fire, the sound of gushing water, the sound of cracking lightning and the feeling and hearing of earth techniques. The practiced until it was perfect. The techniques of Buraindo Shuhou were then taught to Hashirama by Tobirama and it help them combat the Uchiha in any future altercations. These techniques were also one of the basic teaching that one clan decided to take a step further and perfect, that is the Inuzuka Clan.

    The abilites of a shinobi who has mastered the Buraindo shuhou are simple. A shinobi who has mastered Buraindo Shuhou has his all their senses strengthened except his sight. Meaning, His sense of smell, touch, taste, hearing are much stronger then the average shinobi. Although, they aren't as develop as the Inuzuka Clan.

    Also Masters of Buraindo Shuhou have extreme flexibility and durability thanks to the extreme workouts in Yoga. Making them more resistent to regular kicks and punchs, and for example taijutsu kick to the arm, it would normally leave a person with a broken arm but a shinobi who has mastered Buraindo Shuhou it wouldn't break their arm, but they'd still feel the pain of the direct attack. Their Flexibilty is shown of how they can twist and turn their body as they see fit, but nothing too extreme. This helps with scouting and dodging taijutsu by for example bending your whole back till the top of your head is hovering over the ground. Masters of Buraindo Shuhou are so adapt to fighting this way that, it seems they always walk around with their eyes closed.

    The real trick of these arts is that when they don't face an Uchiha their senses are still heightned plus they have their sight which makes them a tougher opponent. Also, when put under a regular genjutsu, shinobi who have mastered these techniques find that its much easier to realize they have been put under a genjutsu. This is because of the training and becoming more aware of their inner self. This DOES NOT mean they are immune to genjutsu or that genjutsus don't work. It means they can realize that they are in a genjutsu much quicker then an average shinobi


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    This fighting style would essentially renders all visual genjutsu useless.

    This fighting style once mastered can be used with eyes open and closed

    This fighting style's durability only works with taijutsu/Kenjutsu attacks, or hand to hand combat attacks. Does Not work that way with Ninjutsu and other attacks.

    Because of the meditating and grueling training of these techniques, Masters of this become more aware of their body and their inner self. So when it comes to regular genjutsus that are cast on them, Masters of these arts can figure out they are in a genjutsu much more quickly then the average shinobi.


    Must of have a bio that has been to konoha at some point in the characters history.

    Can only be taught by Better
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    Everything else is ok but this won't be approved if it's just a set of passive abilities. You need to give example techniques to prove that this is more than just a bunch of passive abilities that assist you when your eyes are closed.
    Buraindo Shuhou: The Blind arts
    Type: Taijutsu
    Background Since the beginning of their rivalary so to say, the Uchiha clan were feared for the visual abilities by everyone. When the Uchiha and the Senju decided to make a treaty and create a village together some senju members feared that the uchiha would use their visual abilites aka their skilled abilities in genjutsu with their sharingan to control the senju and make them do their bidding. Hashirama also feared this, so he ordered his brother Tobirama to take several senju ninja and develop a fighting style that can be use to combat the uchiha clans sharingan abilities. This is how the Buraindo Shuhou started and has been passed down from shinobi to shinobi that live in konoha.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: In order to master Buraindo Shuhou one must stand still in the forest for 20 days and 20 nights, then take a break and keep it going for more nights. With their eyes closed meditating and doing yoga, and by the use of chakra the need to amplify their abilties in each of their 5 senses other then their sight.The reason to do Yoga is to increase their durablity and flexibility, this is done with extreme forms of yoga that only a skilled ninja can do, making them able to twist and turn their body immediately when they sense danger approaching. After they have stayed and meditated the senju shinobi went against tobirama in a taijutsu spar while they had their eyes closed. This kept continuing until the senju shinobi all could handle the future hokage in taijutsu with their eyes closed. Then he added dodging and recognize different elements. They focused their hearing and smell of the crispiness of fire, the sound and feel of gushing water, the sound and smell of cracking lightning and the feeling and hearing of earth techniques. The practiced until it was perfect. The techniques of Buraindo Shuhou were then taught to Hashirama by Tobirama and it help them combat the Uchiha in any future altercations. These techniques were also one of the basic teaching that one clan decided to take a step further and perfect, that is the Inuzuka Clan.

    The abilites of a shinobi who has mastered the Buraindo shuhou are simple. A shinobi who has mastered Buraindo Shuhou has his all their senses strengthened except his sight. Meaning, His sense of smell, touch, taste, hearing are much stronger then the average shinobi. Although, they aren't as develop as the Inuzuka Clan.

    Also Masters of Buraindo Shuhou have extreme flexibility and durability thanks to the extreme workouts in Yoga. Making them more resistent to regular kicks and punchs, and for example taijutsu kick to the arm, it would normally leave a person with a broken arm but a shinobi who has mastered Buraindo Shuhou it wouldn't break their arm, but they'd still feel the pain of the direct attack. Their Flexibilty is shown of how they can twist and turn their body as they see fit, but nothing too extreme. This helps with scouting and dodging taijutsu by for example bending your whole back till the top of your head is hovering over the ground. Masters of Buraindo Shuhou are so adapt to fighting this way that, it seems they always walk around with their eyes closed.

    The real trick of these arts is that when they don't face an Uchiha their senses are still heightned plus they have their sight which makes them a tougher opponent. Also, when put under a regular genjutsu, shinobi who have mastered these techniques find that its much easier to realize they have been put under a genjutsu. This is because of the training and becoming more aware of their inner self. This DOES NOT mean they are immune to genjutsu or that genjutsus don't work. It means they can realize that they are in a genjutsu much quicker then an average shinobi

    Examples of Jutsu
    Buraindo Shuhou:karakuri : The Blind Arts: Evade
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user uses his enhanced Buraindo Shuhou abilities, to dodge punches and kicks and other taijustu and even kenjutsu attacks.

    -can be taught by better


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    This fighting style would essentially renders all visual genjutsu useless.

    This fighting style once mastered can be used with eyes open and closed

    Because of the meditating and grueling training of these techniques, Masters of this become more aware of their body and their inner self. So when it comes to regular genjutsus that are cast on them, Masters of these arts can figure out they are in a genjutsu much more quickly then the average shinobi.

    The gist of this whole thing is that a master of Buraindo Shuhou can fight with his eyes closed just as effectively as a regular shinobi with their eyes open. Also due to their eyes closed, visual genjutsu is useless.

    Must of have a bio that has been to konoha at some point in the characters history.

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    I'm sorry, I still need more. Three examples minimum for this. I should have been more clear last time. I need to be assured that more techniques can be made for this that don't just each involve moving around attacks with your eyes closed. You should be able to get at least five customs easily out of any CFS worth being approved. With this idea however, it seems much too passive for me to really foresee anything much further than the technique that you posted. Leading it to be more of a passive ability of your character than a real CFS for which techniques can be made.
     
         
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    スティンガー Sutingaa | Stinger Arts

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    Background
    Stinger Arts derived from no existing form of martial arts or fighting styles. Instead, it was founded by Scorpio, who is also known as the Desert Stinger. The Stinger Arts was developed by Scorpio after observing a tiny scorpion in the desert. Along time, he began observing Giant Scorpions instead, which do exist in the Narutoverse desert as seen with Giant Centipedes and Giant Birds. [Proof]

    After years of development and practice, Scorpio was capable of utilizing the scorpion-like stinger that he himself had attached to his back. How he does it will be explained in the section below. Co-founder of the Stinger Arts was a man named named -Yusuke-. He was friends with Scorpio and began utilizing Stinger Arts in his own way. Unlike Scorpio, -Yusuke- had no intentions of attaching a metal stinger to his back and instead, he developed his own usage of Stinger Arts and it was through stingers that was placed above the arm and hand (picture above), made entirely out of pure chakra.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style
    Within Stinger Arts, there are two different types of stingers. The ones that are worn on the user's back, directly on the tailbone and the ones worn on the user's hands. Some techniques may be only restricted to one, whereas other techniques might be available for usage for both types of stingers.

    Agility plays an important role in Stinger Arts. Unlike real scorpions, most users of Stinger Arts move with incredible stealthy speeds to land lethal blows. Stingers are naturally sharp and can pierce through human skin and flesh. With the incorporation of Stinger Arts, users will be capable of piercing, even through bones, when acquired enough practice and skill.

    Regarding back stingers, through the manipulation of chakra within those stingers, the user will be capable of moving it around, if needed or wanted to, just like how a normal Scorpion can move their stingers around and jab them into their foe.

    Besides this, the techniques under Stinger Arts mainly revolve around creative or not very creative usages of the stinger, along with twists here and there, involving chakra, elemental chakra, art of sealing or acrobatics.

    (Fuuton Piripirijutsu : Rasen Kichigai) - Wind Stinger Arts : Spiral Madness
    Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
    Rank : S
    Range : Short - Long
    Chakra cost : 40
    Damage points : 80
    Description : The user concentrates wind chakra as a layer over his body and stinger, then makes a short, yet swift jump into the in a backwards somersault-manner. As the user is in the air and reaches the desired angle, the user straightens both his body and stinger towards that angle. Using the prepared wind chakra, the user conjures both a burst of wind and a vortex of wind that envelops the user's body. The burst of wind makes it so that it pushes the user's entire body and stinger towards the intended direction, without messing up the user's body and stinger structure. The hurricane surrounds the user's body, taking on the shape of a drill, the tip of the stinger being the sharp tip of the drill. Another comparison could be made with a spinning top. This body of wind also acts as a defense against external attacks. The burst of wind to push the user and vortex happens simultaneously. The drill-like vortex of wind is capable of grinding through earth, imbue with fire, nullify lightning and pierce through water and wind. Following the principles of elements, this vortex will only be able to imbue and go through B-rank and below fire techniques, dissipate upon contact of A-rank fire techniques (S-rank and above earth, wind and water techniques) and get consumed entirely by S-rank and above fire techniques, which in the process, severely burns the user if not dealt with properly. If the user manages to travel at least one range (5 meters) while still retaining the wind vortex around him, the user's body and stinger will still be rotating madly fast, leveling the destructive power of a B-rank technique, even if the wind vortex gets dissipated or consumed in flames.

    Note : Created by Yūsuke
    Note : Can only be used twice per battle
    Note : Must be a master to use this in a practical battle
    Note : No wind techniques higher than S-rank to be used in the same turn
    Note : While technique is active, no performance of other elemental technique besides wind is allowed
    Note : Masters suffer dizziness momentarily (in the turn the technique finishes), students-in-training suffer dizziness for two turns (including turn it finished)

    (Piripirijutsu : Sasori Haji) - Stinger Arts : Scorpion's Grasp
    Type : Offensive / Defensive / Supplementary
    Rank : A
    Range : Short - Mid
    Chakra cost : 30
    Damage points : 60
    Description : With this technique, the user is capable of extending and launching the length of his scorpion tail to great extents to land a hit on a target. The user's stinger can be launched at high speeds, taking into consideration also that it's created out of metal, allows it to shatter rocks into pieces and pierce through metal. If need be, the user is capable of altering the direction of his stinger to his or her liking, but it may or may not have effect on it's built-up momentum and speed, based on the course of action executed with the stinger. The stinger can also travel underground for much more stealthy purposes and surprising results or bind around the body of several humans.

    Note : Created by Yūsuke
    Note : Technique lasts until retracted
    Note : Speed of stinger does not boost the technique's power beyond A-rank

    Additional effects and Restrictions

    - Hand Stingers; these can be created and dissapated at will, with pure chakra. The structure of the hand stingers is entirely up to the user when creating it. The first picture at the top is the, 'default' look of a stinger, if the user does not intend to have their stingers be longer, wider or have a special shape. Despite being made entirely out of chakra, the stingers have all the properties of a solid stinger. [Note that future techniques may require special shapes/length/width]

    - Strength & Flexibility; users with stingers on their back have tremendous strength and flexibility to avoid having the structure and weight, even if light, of the stingers from burdening them. The flexibility allows for unique movement patterns and tricks to be done.

    - Movement; users with hand stingers have been trained to be able to stealthily and swiftly move around the battlefield with the aid of chakra suppresion, as if, someone using Silent Homicide technique in the Hidden Mist technique. Applying quick speeds in their blows, allows them to pierce through flesh and bones.

    - Accuracy; masters of Stinger Arts are capable of pinpointing and stabbing certain spots on an opponent's body, even when blind after calibrating and memorizing the opponent's body size, structure and features.

    - Rank; there are only two ranks here, master and student. One shall be labelled as master after mastering all the techniques or after being deemed worthy of being at the level of master. Students are those still in training or just not ready yet.

    - Any additional effects or restrictions, not stated here, will or shall be within the techniques as they are made.
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    Really cool idea, just a few things that need to be fixed and clarified. One, you have too many additional effects; tremendous strength, great flexibility, swift and silent movement and pinpoint accuracy are too many all in one. And the only ones that truly make sense with this style are pinpoint accuracy and great flexibility (maybe increased strength, but that just gives you too many bonuses). So you need to reduce the number of those. In addition, I have a problem with the hand stingers; the idea of releasing pure chakra in that sustainable way seems to not only infringe on Hyuuga abilities but even go beyond what the Hyuuga clan is capable of. If anything I would say bracers that can retract and extend the hand stingers would be fine, but just releasing them from pure chakra without any sort of substance to mold them around would not only require Hyuuga-level chakra control, but if you want to still go with it and convince me that it's completely doable, you would need to use a technique whenever you use them. Finally, I need you to clarify how sealing techniques can be used with this, or just remove that part of the CFS, since you kind of slipped it in at the end of the description.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    ~Attention! This thread will be closed on Sunday 12/23 for massive checking. If you have anything left to submit, be sure to do it by then.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Doki Sono Kamigami Wrath of the Gods
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Background:

    A very fierce man once lived in this world. He was ruthless, a one man army. He did have however followers, scared or loyal. They would defeat armies in small side-wars. Defeat foes even when outnumbered. Kratos they called him, weilding two blades. However in one night, during a seige, Kratos blided by his bloodthirst, murdered his wife and child.

    Overtaken by Grief and sorrow, Kratos burned his himself when he was alone, his blades by his side. Soon, Kratos was nothing but a pile of ashes. However the ashes merged in to the Blades themselves. It was believed that Kratos possessed the blades himself, as the blades were being passed on as blood was shed. Turmoil and despair awaited those who dared to weild the Blade of Exile...Until someone, could withold it's power. That someone, would weild the Godly strength of Kratos.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    This kenjutsu style relies on flowing and powerful movements. The twin blades have chains coming from the handle which the user can hang on to and swing for momentum or reach, allowing the user to deal more physical damage and quicker. The Blades of Exile can smash slabs of earth with just one swing (Size must be put in to consideration).

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    Gekido of Sparta Rage of Sparta
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases all inner emotions and the power of the sword, fueling the blade, creating an even stronger bloodthirst like aura. The release of the chakra causes the user's muscle strength to increase even furthur, and also increases (Sakki) - Killing Intent, allowing the user's bloodthirst have more depth and potency allowing them to "stun" users of the same rank and below.


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    Maedate of Prometheus Plume of Prometheus
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user extends both blades straight forward (One after the Other), then the user quickly makes a 360 degree rotation swinging the blades slashing the target horizontally, then finishing off by swinging the two blades backwards and over the user's head to smash the blades causing an explosion of chakra where the blades land.


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    Teikiatsu of Ranmyaku Cyclone of Chaos
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user musters sufficient strength and swings his blades around their head with tremendous force multiple times attacking multiple targets. Cyclone of Chaos can be used to defend against Medium-Sized earth techniques.

    Ideas for future usage (Just Pictures):








    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    + The user will be physically more stronger then the average person
    + User is more flexible and agile.
    - The User's handseals speed is decreased.
    - Must have 3 training sessions to master it.


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    ~Removed some of the additional effects.
    ~Removed indestructability
    ~Removed the chakra strength within the blade

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    So now the problem is that there's nothing actually special about this CFS. Theoretically, twin blades with chains can be used free-form. There has to be something that actually makes this into a CFS and gives the blades some sort of ability that wouldn't apply if these were just two weapons that you used in free-form combat. However don't add back the emotions and blade strength for the reasons that I gave you before. As it is right now, there's nothing to separate this from just normally wielding chains with blades on them.
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    Doki Sono Kamigami Wrath of the Gods
    Type: KatonKenjutsu
    Background:

    A very fierce man once lived in this world. He was ruthless, a one man army. He did have however followers, scared or loyal. They would defeat armies in small side-wars. Defeat foes even when outnumbered. Kratos they called him, wielding two blades. However in one night, during a siege, Kratos blinded by his blood-thirst, murdered his wife and child.

    Overtaken by Grief and sorrow, Kratos burned his himself when he was alone, his blades by his side. Soon, Kratos was nothing but a pile of ashes. However the ashes merged in to the Blades themselves. It was believed that Kratos possessed the blades himself, as the blades were being passed on as blood was shed. Turmoil and despair awaited those who dared to weild the Blade of Exile...Until someone, could withhold it's power. That someone, would wield the Godly strength of Kratos.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    This kenjutsu style relies on flowing and powerful movements. The twin blades have chains coming from the handle which the user can hang on to and swing for momentum or reach, allowing the user to deal more physical damage and quicker. The Blades of Exile can smash slabs of earth with just one swing (Size must be put in to consideration). When the user does a technique like Plume of Prometheus, the user's final movement is a release of fire chakra from through the blade, causing an explosion with the blades being the epicenter (Short Range).

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    Gekido of Sparta Rage of Sparta
    Type: Supplementry
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Close
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user releases all inner emotions and the power of the sword, fueling the blade, creating an even stronger bloodthirst like aura. The release of the chakra causes the user's muscle strength to increase even furthur, and also increases (Sakki) - Killing Intent, allowing the user's bloodthirst have more depth and potency allowing them to "stun" users of the same rank and below.


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    Maedate of Prometheus Plume of Prometheus
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user extends both blades straight forward (One after the Other), then the user quickly makes a 360 degree rotation swinging the blades slashing the target horizontally, then finishing off by swinging the two blades backwards and over the user's head to smash the blades causing an explosion of chakra where the blades land.


    ---


    Teikiatsu of Ranmyaku Cyclone of Chaos
    Type: Offense/Defense
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user musters sufficient strength and swings his blades around their head with tremendous force multiple times attacking multiple targets. Cyclone of Chaos can be used to defend against Medium-Sized earth techniques.

    Ideas for future usage (Just Pictures):








    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    + The user will be physically more stronger then the average person
    + User is more agile.
    +User's Fire Manipulation is improved
    -User must be Kage ranked to learn
    -Must master Fire Release
    - The User's handseals speed is decreased.
    - Must have 3 training sessions to master it.


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    ~Removed Flexibility
    ~Edited the Additional effects and restrictions
    ~Added to inner workings of style
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    Fire manipulation is improved how and what does that mean? Why is the user more agile? Why is he physically stronger than an average ninja? Also, do you have a CW of twin swords with chains that can be used for this? Because, such a degree of power and infusion of fire would mean that you need a weapon made specifically for this cfs with abilities to endure it. Still, this is a bit...hum...generic and too shallow. Your swinging 2 blades attached to chains and infusing them with fire...ok...but that needs a bit more development.
     
         
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    Sono heika kara Sona Fukai Shindo |The arms from the deepest depths


    Type:NinTai

    Background: Cerberus, who was the prodigy of the Hozuki clan, came up with many ideas that would benift the clan in many ways. He was the person, who every Hozuki would contact to learn new was of life. Cerberus was having his daily sword fights with his sparring partner. Cerberus never once won a spar due to the marvelous swordsmanship of his friend. His friend would always brag about his skills and taunt Cerberus, until one day, his friend told Cerberus that he would never win if he had tow extra arms. Cerberus's face lit up, and began to work on this idea.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Due to the Hozuki's ability of turning their body into liquid from a single hair to their whole body, they turn the kidney region of the body into water allowing them to manipulate the water to create two identical yet very muscular arms from their own body. The arms move slower than the original arms due to the large mass of water.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Must be at least S rank to learn-
    -Must of Mastered Water Release-
    -Must have a Hozuki bio to learn-
    -The user's speed is reduced, due to the mass of the extra water in the arms-


    Example Techs

    The arms from the deepest depths| Need a hand
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Range:Short
    Chakra: 20 ( + 10 for each turn activated)
    Damage:40
    Description: The users begins by gathering their water chakra in their upper body. Once collected using their unique hozuki ability, the user creates two very muscular arms created from water on each side of their waist. The water arms are slower than the users original arm due to the high levels of water. The water arms can perform handseals, but slower than the human arms.

    The arms from the deepest depths| The Hostage
    Type:Offense
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description: The user uses their extra arms, and lifts the opponent into the air, held by their arms. With the opponent vulnerable in the air, the user uses his original arms to deal any damage they see fit. From a simple punch, or snapping their neck.

    - Must have The arms from the deepest depths| Need a hand activated in their previous turn-
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    Or you could just make a custom that gives you two extra arms using the Hozuki clan abilities.
     
         
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    Saiyan Arts
    Type: Nintaijutsu
    Background: In Broly's home village of Vegeta, which was hidden away from the 5 great nations, there was a special type of fighting style where warriors utilized wind to its full advantage. These warriors used wind and its innate speed to incrase their own speed and in turn their strength, while using the wind to keep a fearsome aura about them.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The user is able to focus wind in their feet, hands and entire body to increase agility and strength. When wrapped in the wind aura (which does no damage if the opponent touches it and provides no defense against any techniques) The users strikes against the opponent can actually slice them instead of doing blunt damage as if sliced by a wind blade. The user also becomes stronger then a normal strong fist user by passively focusing wind behind their punches and kicks to speed up and strengthen the blows. Another ability of this is that they are able to focus wind into their feet so that they "jump" off the air ground a few inches with each step making their steps more agile and making them harder to track (will be explained in techniques)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • When the user activates this cfs they are envelop in a wind aura with a transparent color of their choice. This increases their speed and agility to that of Rock lee w/out weights due to the increased agility of the aura gives
    • The user gains strength above that of a normal strong fist user but no where near that of an Eig master or Tsunade
    • The user must be a Sannin and complete Wind training


    Saiyan Arts: Saiyan Pride
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:N/A
    Description: The user focuses wind into the bottom of their feet in order to literally "jump off the air" a few inches and evade attacks. (see pic for reference)



    Note: This is a very rough draft due to the imminent closing of the cfs thread so please dont judge too harshly and any tips on making this better would be appreciated

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    Don't resubmit. This is nothing but your attempt to create a "mode" of sorts. Its not a CFS.
     
         
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    ~Thread Opened~

    I would first like to thank most of you for being very patient with the re-opening of this thread and apologize for the extreme delay.

    The first post has been heavily updated with new guidelines on how to create a proper custom fighting style. It is highly recommended that you all read those guidelines since many submissions get declined for the same reasons.

    Example Techniques are now added to the template and are a mandatory part of every submission.

    Again, please read the first post even if you think that you understand how to create a proper CFS, because evidently many submitters do not.
     
         

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    Geukji-Do

    Type: Taijutsu+Water element(+Any elemental nature)

    Background:

    A long time ago, when Geukji-do was founded, there existed three great warriors, with powers rivaling kages. First among them was a man with a body of steel. He was a master of strengthening techniques and close-combat Geukji-do. His movement were like storm in motion; his punches, loaded with the power of vibration, exploded his enemied into fragments of fluff and thus they call him Fluffy. The second was a woman, the first to command long-distance Geukji-do. Her attacks made use of the atmospheric oscillation. Her powers of vibration were not strong, but they were sensitive enough to resonate with the air. Her enemies were forced to kneel before her even before they could approach. She was like a queen, the last of them... And after her, there were no more on earth. They called her moron-queen. The third and last was known to use an unusual technique that turned the vibrations of the opponent back on them. His technique proven even more effective against the stronger opponents. Countless opponents were frozen before the power of his Geukji-do, their movements retarded. The called him... Retard. The man known as "Fluffy", the one who taught the other two the powers of Geukji-do.

    GEUKJI-DO was birthed from a massage chair. Fluffy had thirty times the muscle mass of a normal human and thus, thirty times the muscle pain. Unable to satisfy himself with an ordinary massage chair, he chose to remodel his own. He placed a machinery puppet behind the chair that used his chakra to make stronger vibrations, its power can be equaled with the bike engine. Setting on that chair, Fluffy was able to understand the power of vibration and from there made his art, Geukji-do.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The rhythm of the massage chair's vibration is very similar to that of a human heartbeat, after a session on the massage chair made by Fluffy. The trainer would either die or become capable of repelling the extra vibration with his muscles, if he accomplish that, then he had finished the first step of learning the art. Geukji-do is a martial art which makes use of the vibrations within a human body. It started with three categories(mentioned above) but it developed to many and various of types enough that the initial categories lost their meanings. As time passes, it is becoming increasingly common to follow a style of fighting which involves strengthening one's own specialties with the power of vibration, rather than following the art of Geukji-do itself. The reason of this is the tremendous risk involved in using the power of vibration. The energy of vibration is the energy of life. Geukji-do is the art producing extreme strength, with one's own life force as insurance. The power of vibration is mighty enough to cause overwhelming destruction without using the athletic parts of a human body - such as the muscles or the bones. But the weakness of the Geukji-do is the recoiling energy caused by the vibrations that are stronger than one's physical ability come back into the body as heat and shock. In the jargon of Geukji-do, this self destruction phenomenon is called counter-strike. The obvious method is to absorb the shock of counter-strike by increasing your muscle mass.. However, this method has its limits. The biggest problem is that even if you can block the shock of vibration, you cannont stop the accompanying hear. Thus, the best means of alleviating the shock and the heat is by utilizing the moisture in the human body. It would not be exaggerating to say the among of moisture in a human body equals the talent one has at Geukji-do, and here is where the user need the usage of water element. The only way to neutralize the shock from the chair of virility, the chair Fluffy made, is to produce a vibration which corresponds to it, so that the two cancel out.


    From the ways the Geukji-do could be use, of the abilities that use earth chakra, the user could use his muscles to create a vibration equaling the object he is facing or enemy's strike, turning its kinetic energy into spiritual energy he could release back at the enemy in the form of vibration with the same strength as the enemy's attack to not only block but repel the damages or redirect its strength at other targets, Which is Fluffy's style. Or with wind elemental chakra, The user could also use his muscles to make vibrations that he send through a particular part of his body, such as his finger to release a compressed beam of vibrations from the user's body capable of cutting through stones. The user could also use that method while punching the enemy to priece there body. The user could also use the vibration to resonate with the air, by focusing the vibration through one's hand which marge with the air then blow the enemy down with one flexion his hand, which is moron-queen's style. With lightning, the user could release a shock-wave of vibration from his body with his muscles that could paralyze anyone in mid range of him, unless wind chakra separate them. That was Retard's style. With fire chakra, the user send vibrations that overheat and exhaust his enemy while combating at short range, making them unable to catch up with the user's attacks. There are many other methods of using Geukji-do, from strengthening move to Bruce-balls Lee's arm strike where the user punch an object and release his muscle's vibrations through it making it crush into pieces even if it was as hard as iron boulders.


    Example Techniques:

    Art of Geukji-Do: Bruce-balls Lee's Arm Strike- Geukji-Do No: Jutsu: Bruco-Balls Lee Heika

    Rank: A
    Type: Attack\Supplementary\Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Using his manipulation of his arm muscles to tune up a vibration, the user delivers a backfist punch or a spinning backfist punch, releasing a shock wave of vibration as he's fist contacts the target, the shock wave is strong enough to move through the enemy's skeleton, causing random cracks in it and keep the enemy unable to react for the fact that it literally blow his/her body. The user then deliver shovel hook punch targeting the enemy's chest, which causes supernatural vibrations in his/her heart and make it explode from the inside.
    -Can only be used once per battle.

    Geukji-Do, Air Ryu: Wrath of Moronqueen, Sky Strike - Geukji Do, Tei Ryu: Moronqueen No Doki, Sora Heika
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid/Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user focuses his/her body's muscles to rapidly keep in motion delivering a strong focused vibration through his/her finger. Its vibration is sensitive enough to resonate with the air where he contain it using his wind chakra and surround the enemy with it, at this stage, the wind around the user's finger will look like waving smoke. The user then wave his finger down, manipulating the wind which contains the vibration to fall at the enemy, pushing him/her down to kneel before him/her and deal with vibration that is now contained in his body, paralyzing him/her from moving until the vibration were off.
    -Can only be used twice per battle.
    -Requires mastery over wind element.
    -Picture:


    Geukji-Do, Resonance Ryu: Wrath of Retard, Ice Strike - Geukji Do, Kyoumei Ryu: Retard No Doki, Hi-Heika
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This is personal technique of Retard and it requires great amount of vibrations. The user first manipulate his vibrations to be contained in his forefinger and thumb. He then snap his fingers, releasing the vibration into one strong shockwave that freeze anyone in their place as their body/bodies host the extreme vibration which deal minor damages to their skeleton such as small cracks that can be painful.
    -Can only be used thrice per battle.
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    Geukji-Do, Energy Blast Ryu: The Wrath of Fluffy, Violent Discharge - Geukji-Do, Konki Bakuha: Fluffy No Doki, Hageshii Menkan

    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Attack\Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 50
    Damage Points: 90(-20 to the user)
    Description: The user focus his vibration into his fist with extreme concentration of his entire body's muscle, as he/she collect the vibration and maintain it using the water chakra to increase the moisture of his fist, the user unleashes his strength through one punch. Whatever this punch targets will be drilled with a big hole created by it, even the hardest of materials hold no strength against the shockwave created by it. However, while delivering this punch, the user must remain completely still having his body in a position similar to the sumo fighters as he deliver it.
    -Can only be used once.
    -The user would suffer minor injuries for no one but Fluffy can perfect this technique and any user would get stiffs which will make his/her movemet slower that usual for the next three turns.
    -The user cannot use any type of taijutsu for the next five turns.
    -Picture:


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    +A master of Geukji-do cannot be affected by C rank and lower taijutsu because he/she would be able to absorb any physical attack that weak using his muscles.
    -To learn this fighting style, one must master taijutsu, kaito's taijutsu, water element and any element used in one of this fighting style's techniques.
    -One must have at least one session on the specially made massage chair to be able to understand the power of vibration.

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    Explanation is a mess so you need to rework it. This sort of vibration.... it seems you simply assume you can produce it....however, you fail to explain how you produce it. Do you have sound release? One more go then its DNR.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-22-2013 at 12:07 PM.

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    (Raiton Kentou Sensu)Lightning Boxing Style
    Type: Nin-Taijutsu
    Background: Once upon a time, there was a man named MB, MB roamed the world in order to increase his taijutsu skills, in his search he met a man called Axle, Axle had a taijutsu style in which he used his fists and specific stances and foot work to attack the opponent, the style was called boxing, MB liked this art, but he felt it was incomplete, so after years of trail and error, he managed to infuse lightning chakra to his attacks, making them more deadly.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This style is simple yet efficient, it is a deadly fighting style feared by most. The style requires great stamina and chakra control, this is due to the fact that the user of this art is always on the move, and to maintain the stance, the previously mentioned traits are required. This art is composed of fast punches, nimble, fast, and graceful footwork, quick dodges, and spins either to increase the damage of an attack or to avoid an attack.
    (Kentou Sensu) - Boxing Style
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: (Taijutsu rules)
    Description: The user raises their fists up close to their face and begins jogging in place. By using this style, they must concentrate on their opponent at all times. And it has basically became a reflex to jab and dodge, making the user move a little faster than average (nothing compared to gates speed). The user also is ready to block at will, since his fists are already raised to do so. In this style the user only uses punches and constantly shifts their feet to move at lightning fast speed around the opponent when in elbow range.
    Note: Can only be taught/used by Axle
    Note: being in this style involves a strong cardio system, so it's very difficult to maintain without getting exhausted.
    1- training session let's the user maintain for 2 turns*
    2:3 - training sessions lets the user maintain for 5 turns
    5-training sessions lets the user maintain for 10 turns
    Note: takes 3 turns to use this style again in the same match.
    (original style creates by Axle)

    ( Raiton Kentou Sensu) - Lightning Boxing Style
    Rank: N/A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: (Taijutsu rules)
    Description: The user raises their fists up close to their face and begins jogging in place. By using this style, they must concentrate on their opponent at all times. And it has basically became a reflex to jab and dodge, making the user move a little faster than average (nothing compared to gates speed). The user also is ready to block at will, since his fists are already raised to do so. In this style the user only uses punches and constantly shifts their feet to move at lightning fast speed around the opponent when in range. After getting into the stance, the user will focus lightning chakra to his/her fists and prepare to execute a different array of techniques.
    Note: Can only be taught/used by MB
    Note: Being in this style involves a strong cardio system, so it's very difficult to maintain without getting exhausted.
    1- training session let's the user maintain for 2 turns*
    2:3 - training sessions lets the user maintain for 5 turns
    5-training sessions lets the user maintain for 10 turns
    Note: takes 3 turns to use this style again in the same match.

    Usage examples:
    Lightning boxing style: Attack of the Dragon
    Rank: A rank
    Type: Offensive*
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user will first jump/jog in place, he/she will then dash at the opponent, or approach the opponent, and deliver a quick clean stab to a selected body part of the opponent, as the user does this, he/she will release lightning from his/her punching fist in the form of a dragons head, with size twice that if a normal fist, the dragons head will send the opponent back due to the force it presents. The dragon ps head can be launched at a distance if desired, if that is done then the opponent will suffer 30 damage only.
    -Usable four times.
    -Must have learned lightning boxing style.
    -Mastery over lightning is required.
    -The dragons head will cause numbness to where it hits, the numbness lasts until the users next turn or users partner if it is a tag battle.

    Lightning Boxing Style: The Tyson Shuffle.
    Rank: A rank
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The Tyson shuffle, named after the great none Naruto world existent Mike Tyson, is a series of quick jabs and attacks to the opponents shoulders and upper body, the jabs are done while releasing lightning chakra, as the final hit(one punch to eat shoulder, and two to the chest area) hits the Lightning will come into affect, it will cause the opponent to be paralyzed for 5 seconds, the user can use this time to either deliver a finishing blow, or to run and save himself.
    -Must have learned Lightning Boxing Style.
    -Must have mastered Lightning.
    -Usable three times.

    Lightning Boxing Style: Wrong move*
    Rank: B rank
    Type: Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: When an opponent is attacking with his/her fists, the user will dodge the move by bending downwards and getting closer to the opponents body, the user will follow it up by delivering thunderous blows of lightning to the opponents abdomen and stomach, the blows won't be felt by the opponent due to the numbness, this can help in deceiving opponents, causing them to believe that they are uninjured.
    -Usable 4 times
    -Must be trained in Lightning boxing style

    Additional effects and Restrictions: *
    -Must be Kage rank and above.
    -Must have mastered lightning.
    -Must have training in taijutsu.
    -User will be slightly faster than normal shinobi of his level, due to the extensive training.
    -User will have good chakra control, as he/she trained a lot to master this art(only applicable to those with 5 training sessions)

    Note that I have Axles permission to submit this

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    ±± Declined ±±
    DNR. This will end up as a version of A's Nintaijutsu and a mimicry of two variations of Boxing (the regular and the fire one) already approved.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-22-2013 at 12:08 PM.

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