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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Thread closed for checking.

    Also I'll take this chance to say that I won't be checking things in order. I'll be clearing the easier submissions first (like contracts, easy declines, etc) at random before starting on the harder ones. So if you see that I checked a submission after yours and yours is unchecked, don't worry or find it strange. Its just to make it easier and faster on my end.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±



    Devil's Fist (Maou Genkotsu)

    Type: NinTai

    Background:

    Vex upon his travels, happened to venture upon a strange land. The people of this land were brutally oppressed, to the point that they were planning a revolt. Vex was revolted at the state of the people, and pledged his help. He led the attack on the tyrannical ruler of the people. He broke down the doors to his castle and defeated him in single mortal combat (he also said a lot of really good, and witty banter). He toppled the throne, and the entire castle came down due to their struggle. When the tyrant was finally defeated, the people were so grateful that they taught him a new fighting style. However, it wasn't very developed. It was lacking in the cosmetics department. So Vex developed the style, making it much more flashy and eye pleasing. The people were so grateful that they erected a statue in his honor, but sadly it wasn't able to capture the full effects of his good looks. Vex then travelled the world further developing the style, and teaching it to his students.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The style is extremely simple. The user will use a variety of elbow and knee attacks, coupled with powerful punches and kicks. Almost all techniques use the entire body movement, rotating the hip with each kick, punch, elbow and block. The user is usually extremely physically strong, using their muscular strength to dominate the opponent. The style is very low and wide. So much so in fact that, some people mistake the regular stance as being completely open.

    The Stance:
    However, there is one thing that sets this style apart from normal taijutsu. The use of extremely precise chakra control, and friction to augment the blows. The user would for example throw a punch, he would then quickly channel chakra into his fist as it moves (mostly miniscule amounts of fire chakra). Friction which naturally opposes motion, would resist the movement. The user's chakra fuels this, and the opposing forces react to make the user's fist "hot". The enemy would then take damage from the actual force of the punch, and from the "heat" that augmented said punch. This can be used with elbow strikes, kicks, and knee attacks. This can also be applied to a sword. The user would swing a sword, and right before impact channel chakra into the edges of the blade. The blade's metal would conduct the heat from natural friction, which is enhanced by chakra into the sword making it "hot".

    What it looks like:



    Example Techniques:


    Ti Sok Club
    Type:Offense
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description: The user grabs his opponent by the head before delivering a powerful knee strike to their face while bringing the opponents head down. The user augments the knee with chakra, causing it to become hot from the friction. The force of the collision could cause a weaker opponent to become completely knocked out.

    Yan Erawan
    Type:Offense
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description:The user first places himself in an unguarded stance and waits for his opponent to attack. When the opponent strikes, he slams his knee into the chest of his opponent, where the heart is. The user then concentrates his chakra into his knee, augmenting the properties of friction and heating up his knee. Combined with the force of his strike and the power behind his opponent's speed, the attack is powerful enough to kill a normal person.

    Dee Sork Toron
    Type:Offense
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description:A technique where the user attacks the opponent with a swift elbow strike aimed at the opponent's head in a downward manner. The elbow is supplemented by the natural force of friction heating his elbow and making it hot. This has enough force to fracture small bones.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    Users of this style have faster and stronger attacks than a normal strong fist master
    Unfortunately, they have a harder time keeping up with fast movements and their reflexes are lessened slightly
    To use this style someone must be at least Sannin rank and at least started taijutsu, kenjutsu, and fire style
    Can only be taught by Vex

    Please watch the video for an accurate visual of the style



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    Friction isn't something you can simply "add" to your blows. I don't mind you adding fire chakra to solely increase the temperature of your limbs, adding "hot" damage and such...ok, as long as its not flames (whcih was already done and approved) then ok. Doing that and you'll have a very nice CFS.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Path of Nothingness

    Type:NinTai

    Background:

    The style was created by Roshi in order to show martial artists everywhere to simply use their power for self defense no for personal gain or to kill. Unfortunately, none had hearts pure enough except Goku to use the style. He was able to naturally master the style on his own. He then took it's philosophies, and used it as a way of life. He promised to never kill unless forced and to protect the weak with his new style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The Power of Nothingness is a state of consciousness transcending ordinary perspective, born through spiritual and mental refinement. Bearing common traits with states of being within Buddhism and martial arts, it is the power to act without being attached to emotions and thought, free of fear, anger, and ego, to draw upon the contents of one's heart intuitively without obstacle and hesitation, and to be aware of the world and to know one's place and meaning within its vastness, to flow with all of creation without the need of worry, desire, and doubt. Users of the style hold the philosophy that martial arts was made purely for self defense.


    It can only be used by a warrior who has a pure heart, and has replaced their hate and rage with compassion, mercy and justice - as well as embracing the peaceful and spiritual aspect of the art to their fullest extent. The style is not meant to kill, but simply to defeat the opponent. The path of nothing chakra is visible whenever the user uses the style, enveloping him in a blue aura of Path of Nothing chakra (purely cosmetic). The style features using palm strikes and quick punches enhanced with Path of Nothing chakra to stun the opponent setting them up for stronger hits, sliding, fluid punches and kicks, and physical representation of the Path of Nothingness chakra. These attacks are all powered by the user's compassion.

    There are 5 basic stances (each stance will be made into a seprate technique)

    Hyakkishu


    Using palm thrusts and having gravity do most of the work for you. Staying above the opponent through jumps and keeping your hands high in the air. While using the power of compassion to power the blows. This adds more momentum to your blows.


    Goheki

    By powering your blows with Path of Nothingness chakra and using leg sweeps and strong kicks to take away your opponents balance and using high jumps to try to avoid damage.


    Senkugoshoha

    Imbuing the heels of your feet with Path of Nothingness chakra and sliding to increase your momentum to deliver strong punches and palm strikes.


    You Hou


    The user sets himself motionless for a second and delivers one or two palmstrikes to the opponent. He then uses path of nothing chakra and knocks them up into the air with a strong uppercut. As they fall back down, he firmly plants his forward foot and delivers a devastating upward punch into the haplessly falling opponent


    Kikosho

    The user gathers intense Path of Nothingness energy in his palms, then releases a concussive blast, capable of toppling even the strongest of opponents. This is the final and most powerful form of Path of Nothing fighting, and can only be used by masters.


    Example Techniques:

    |Path of Nothingness|Kikosho*
    Type:Offense*
    Rank:S*
    Range:Short-Mid*
    Chakra:40*
    Damage:80*
    Description:The user focuses path of Nothingness chakra into his palms then releases a concussive blast, capable of toppling even the strongest opponents. This is the final and most powerful form of Path of Nothing fighting, and can only be used by masters.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Must be at least S rank to learn-
    - Some techniques can only be used by the creator of the style-
    - Users of this style have a clearer mind than the average person, and are much faster.-
    - Unfortunately, their physical strength suffers.-

    Good Representation of the Style


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    This is a nice idea. However, i would like to see more example techniques and remove the current one as it is too similar to some hyuuga abilities
    -Resubmitting-

    Path of Nothingness (Keiro Kyomu)

    Type:NinTai

    Background:

    The style was created by Roshi in order to show martial artists everywhere to simply use their power for self defense no for personal gain or to kill. Unfortunately, none had hearts pure enough except Goku to use the style. He was able to naturally master the style on his own. He then took it's philosophies, and used it as a way of life. He promised to never kill unless forced and to protect the weak with his new style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The Power of Nothingness is a state of consciousness transcending ordinary perspective, born through spiritual and mental refinement. Bearing common traits with states of being within Buddhism and martial arts, it is the power to act without being attached to emotions and thought, free of fear, anger, and ego, to draw upon the contents of one's heart intuitively without obstacle and hesitation, and to be aware of the world and to know one's place and meaning within its vastness, to flow with all of creation without the need of worry, desire, and doubt. Users of the style hold the philosophy that martial arts was made purely for self defense.


    It can only be used by a warrior who has a pure heart, and has replaced their hate and rage with compassion, mercy and justice - as well as embracing the peaceful and spiritual aspect of the art to their fullest extent. The style is not meant to kill, but simply to defeat the opponent. The path of nothing chakra is visible whenever the user uses the style, enveloping him in a blue aura of Path of Nothing chakra (purely cosmetic). The style features using palm strikes and quick punches enhanced with Path of Nothing chakra to stun the opponent setting them up for stronger hits, sliding, fluid punches and kicks, and physical representation of the Path of Nothingness chakra. These attacks are all powered by the user's compassion.

    There are 5 basic stances (each stance will be made into a seprate technique)

    Hyakkishu


    Using palm thrusts and having gravity do most of the work for you. Staying above the opponent through jumps and keeping your hands high in the air. While using the power of compassion to power the blows. This adds more momentum to your blows.


    Goheki

    By powering your blows with Path of Nothingness chakra and using leg sweeps and strong kicks to take away your opponents balance and using high jumps to try to avoid damage.


    Senkugoshoha

    Imbuing the heels of your feet with Path of Nothingness chakra and sliding to increase your momentum to deliver strong punches and palm strikes.


    You Hou


    The user sets himself motionless for a second and delivers one or two palmstrikes to the opponent. He then uses path of nothing chakra and knocks them up into the air with a strong uppercut. As they fall back down, he firmly plants his forward foot and delivers a devastating upward punch into the haplessly falling opponent


    Messatu Gou Hadou


    The strongest attack of the Path of Nothingness style, the user will first envelop himself in extreme path of nothingness chakra. It will become extremely dense, and the user will concentrate it into his palms. The chakra will become extremely condensed in the user's palm. The palms are then brought together, and launched forward in an extremely powerful blast. The blast if it hits, explodes on the opponent sending him flying. Due to the amount of chakra used, it will leave the user exhausted and unable to use anymore path of nothingness for the rest of the battle.


    Example Techniques:


    |Path of Nothingness|Activation
    Type:Supplementary
    Rank:A
    Range:Self
    Chakra:30
    Damage:N/A
    Description:The user concentrates on their feelings of compassion, and a blue aura of chakra (that is purely cosmetic) envelops them. They then stand in a stance with their legs far apart standing on the balls of their feet, and one arm is tucked in, while the other is out. This technique must be used before any other Path of Nothingness technique, and before the style can be used. It gives all Path of Nothingness jutsu a +5 boost. When this is active, the user has a clearer mind than the average person. He also becomes much faster than the average strong fist user. Consequently however, his physical strength suffers.

    |Path of Nothingness|Goheki
    Type:Offense
    Rank:C
    Range:Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description:The user powers his blows with Path of Nothingness chakra and uses a strong leg sweep, jumps, and lands a strong kick to the opponent's head. The user is very light footed while using this.

    |Path of Nothingness|Messatu Gou Hadou
    Type:Offense
    Rank:Forbidden
    Range:Mid-Long
    Chakra:50
    Damage:90 (-10 to the user)
    Description:The strongest attack of the Path of Nothingness style, the user will first envelop himself in extreme path of nothingness chakra. It will become extremely dense, and the user will concentrate it into his palms. The chakra will become extremely condensed in the user's palm. The palms are then brought together, and launched forward in an extremely powerful blast. The blast if it hits, explodes on the opponent sending him flying. Due to the amount of chakra used, it will leave the user exhausted and unable to use anymore path of nothingness for the rest of the battle.


    |Path of Nothingness|Senkugoshoha
    Type:Offense
    Rank:B
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:The user Imbues the heels of his feet with Path of Nothingness chakra and slides towards the opponent to increase momentum to deliver strong two strong punches to the arms, and several palm strikes to the chin sending the opponent flying into the sky.





    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Must be at least S class rank to learn-
    - Some techniques can only be used by the creator of the style-
    - Users of this style have a clearer mind than the average person, and are much faster.-
    - Unfortunately, their physical strength suffers.-

    Good Representation of the Style


    ~Added more example techniques, and removed the old one. Note however that the examples, are just examples. They will be edited before submition, to make them clearer and more developed. Also added a japanese name.


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    I got a report and it checks. This is too similar to Lok's CFS to be approved.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Jan Ken Po
    Type: NinTaijutsu
    Background: Suzaku after leaving his home in the village hidden in the clouds, went around the world. Searching for power, a sense of confidence in his abilities, and a new outlook on life. While traveling through the slum of a nearby village, Suzaku became more and more like the common people. Learning their way of life as well as accepting it. Suzaku after staying there over night with a friendly old man, he learned many things, but the best things have small beginnings. Suzaku had a revolution through the playing of one of the world's most common games. Rock, Paper Shoot or Jan Ken Po. The simple nature and concept of the simple game gave Suzaku a new outlook and a bright idea. Why not use these "tricks" to fight? He thought to himself. Suzaku left the slums of the neighboring village and returned to the village hidden in the clouds the next morning. But not to the village itself, Suzaku would travel to the mountains for a better thinking environment. Days of thinking and meditation overwhelmed Suzaku's week. But it paid off, when he got the basis for his new way of fighting. Jan or rock made by balling your hand up into a fist. Symbolizing the sturdiness and density of the earth in which we stand. Ken or paper, made simply by leaving your hand out flat. Symbolizing agility and freeness of paper. Lastly Po or scissor. The most deadly of the three, made by splitting you fingers evenly. Symbolizing the most dangerous element of lightning. But this wasn't the end, Suzaku had but only the foundation to the house in which he was building. Suzaku spent months up in the mountains of Kumogakure, breaking down every section of this style. Practicing each one until, he was a master at kneading his chakra in different ways. Now Suzaku was finished, and Jan Ken Po was created.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Jan Ken Po is a fighting style based off of kneading chakra and manipulating weight through your hands in different ways. There are Three main branches of Jan Ken Po

    Jan:
    Jan or rock, symbolizing the sturdiness and density of the earth in which we stand. By balling your hand up into a fist, and focusing all of your arms natural weight to your knuckles, the user's hands/fists grow significantly larger. Allowing for stronger strikes. When adding earth chakra to your enhanced weighted fists, the user's fist become denser to earth like texture, allowing the user to break through the largest of boulders with ease.

    Ken:
    Ken or Paper, symbolizing agility and freeness of paper. The easiest of the three branches of Jan ken Po to learn. The user would simply leave his hand out flat, and release all weight from his hands and back into his arms, to the point were the user's hand is paper thin. Allowing the user the swiftest of strikes, almost to the point when at top speed, the user's hands appear invisible to the naked eye.

    Po:
    Po or scissor, symbolizing the most dangerous element of lightning. By balancing weight between any combination of the user's two fingers and focusing lightning chakra through those fingers. The user gains the ability to cut through objects with ease. Po is a combination of the first to branches, having the destructive power of Jan and the swiftness of Ken. Makin Po the most lethal of the 3.

    Example Techniques:

    Jan:
    Knuckles of Mass Destruction
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user focuses all his weight from his arms to his hands then his knuckles. By channeling Earth chakra into his larger knuckles, his fists become as hard as granite. The user then jumps into the air, and dive bombs into the opponent.
    Note: Fists are the size of Doton Dropping Lid (When combined)

    Ken:
    Hands of Caper
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B Rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user releases all weight from his hands to his arms. Until the point where hi hands are paper thin. The user when in range, will deliver a combination of 4 strikes with super thin hands.
    Note: Though the hands are incredibly light and thin, they do the same damage as normal strike of the user's would
    Note: Hands appear invisible when at top speed.

    Po
    Wrath of Thor
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B Rank
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user balances all weight between a combination of any of the user' two fingers. The user when in range, will vibrate his hands intensely and channel focused lightning through the two fingers. The user after splitting the two fingers, will extend the lightning from his finger tips and close his fingers cutting the opponent with there lightning.
    Note: Can be used to cut through A rank earth using the same process

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    In order to use Jan Ken Po, the user must have mastery over that particular element.
    Anyone can use Ken, but they can't use any other style if they choose Ken
    Only Masters of this style may use al three branches of Jan Ken Po
    Must be Sannin Rank to learn and have started Taijutsu training

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    A CFS using earth chakra to manipulate weight on contact has already been submitted and is still being worked on.
     
         
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    Tranformation Malevolence (Henkan Akui)
    Type: Nin-Kenjutsu
    Background: Transformation was created by the skilled ninja Black Star and his Soma No Ko partner, Tsubaki. Tsubaki used an advanced transformation technique to turn herself into various weapons, all giving them access to special abilities, giving to them by sharing chakra and matching their chakra ratio's. They were know for being the strongest weapon users, even capable of outmatching samuri. They started a Demon Weapon Meister academy that taught ninja that didn't have access to the Twin Demons Technique how to use their abilities with plain shadow clones.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Transformation Malevolence is performed by the demon weapon (Can mean clone or SnK partner) transforming into a special ninja weapon, usually with ornate designs, making them appear to be special weapons, which they are. Because they are partners, they can focus their chakra and build it up on a single points, release chakra waves, combine 2 elemental natures, or make the weapon durable. Every weapon they transform into, they will use their chakra to make it twice as powerful as a normal weapon. They can also turn themselves back into human form in a moments notice, making powerful combo's possible. The ability to control and use each others chakra due to having the same chakra ratio's, and the demon weapon still being able to manipulate and control chakra in this form, is the main concept. (The techs will have most of the info)
    Example Techniques:
    Tranformation Malevolence | Severed Shadow (Henkan Akui | San no Kata Zetsuei)
    Type: Offensive/Weapon
    Rank: A
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user's demon weapon will transform themselves into a large black kunai-style dagger with white ornate patterns and a long strap of cloth tied to it, and 2 holes mean for the finger to be placed inside of it. The kunai is extremely sharp, a direct hit can easily pierce through flesh. The real power of course, is the ability for the user to coat the kunai in chakra, and the demon weapon will manipulate the chakra, making it a thin aura over the kunai, this drastically decreases the wind resistance when it is thrown by absorbing all of the drag and friction in the air, allowing it to sail through air much faster than any other known weapon projectile. The user will throw the kunai with tremendous force, making it move at x2 the current speed of the user. It has a passive damage ability of 30
    • Can only be used 4 times per battle
    • It's passive damage capability is 30
    • Kunai moves at x2 the current speed of the user





    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • Must have mastered Kenjutsu
    • Can be used by a Soma No Ko bio or by someone that knows the shadow clone jutsu
    • All kenjutsu attacks are increased by +10 (Outside of the Style)
    • The demon partner can communicate with the user in weapon form telepathically. They can also "see" through the eyes of the user

    Ranks
    • Bunshin
    • Weapon Meister
    • Student


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    Its a nice idea if used by the SNK clan, yeah...but the shadow clone part...its simply you trying to have a style that isn't limited to a given KG. Also, no passive boosts to any field of skills... Thats a no go.
     
         
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    Keysi shura shiyou - Keysi fighting method
    Type: Taijutsu
    Background: The Keysi Fighting Method has its origins on the streets of Spain. It is not an offshoot of any traditional martial art so it doesn't have any hierarchical structures and patterns or forms. Indeed it’s aim is to be constantly evolving into a dynamic modern style. The story goes that the founder, Justo Diéguez Serrano, was dissatisfied with his present martial art, then Hapkido, and so left after challenging the ruling body to a street fight. He went on to form KFM based on his martial arts knowledge and experiences of his youth. The word “Keysi” is Spanish for “from the heart”, the childhood nickname of Serrano. Andy Norman is the co-founder the art and claims, “Keysi is a method of fighting for people looking for a street application. Keysi was born on the streets and it’s almost a reflection of life itself.”

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Unlike many other martial art forms, Keysi Fighting Method doesn’t stick to the rigidity of old norms as propagated by various other MMA forms. Its basic ideology is to promote adaptability so as to help you evolve and be functional in modern times.
    Keysi Fighting Method’s Trademark Attack ‘Pensador’
    The trademark attack in Keysi Fighting Method is the ‘Pensador’ meaning ‘thinking man’. This technique entails smashing the adversary’s guard by coming very close to the enemy. In this stance the adversary is incapable of doing any harm to you as you are extremely close for his/ her punches to produce power.
    Once at this stance, you will use several short close range strikes that make use of the elbows and knees to create utmost momentum over the shortest space and to strike with the bony parts like elbows and knees.
    The approach in Keysi Fighting Method is to strike hard and speedily with utmost power, without any delay. KFM work with your natural instincts to motivate you to turn the tables on your attacker and motivate you to become the predator instead of being the prey. As a result, KFM helps you to protect yourself under pressure. KFM also makes use of close range locks and holds.
    Keysi Fighting Method’s self protection teachings include tools and techniques, theories and drills on awareness, avoidance, preventative striking, controlled striking, grappling and various other will drills.

    This is the basics of real life Keysi fighting method, Now to convert it into Narutoverse, to increase once ability with keysi fighting method the person must channel chakra all around his body, mainly toward his jointed bones and powerful muscles. So the majority of the chakra will go to the elbow, Knee and Fists when it comes to the bones, While majority of the chakra in muscle will go to the legs (Quads), Back (Lumbar, because the back helps reach and power for a punch) and lastly the core muscles (Stomach, abs however you wanna say it) because it helps with ones balance, strength and durability. To try and draw out a picture to how the power exactly would be is mainly towards which jutsu you use. But when someone fights with Keysi fighting method and gives a direct punch the opponent will be in serious pain, also like I stated above this style is only good to be used when your very close to an opponent. So the agility is increased as well dramatically so the user can dodge and also get back into a position close to the opponent without wasting time.
    Another important aspect to the fighting is the way the use increases his natural instincts, pretty much the user can dodge projectile weapons or easily evade close range taijutsu C-Rank and can also react to block B-Rank and below Taijutsu attacks.

    Most attack in KFM is directed toward main vital points to end the match quickly for example the head is the number one area aimed at, also rib cages, neck, and spine just to name a few.

    Example Techniques:

    (Keysi sensu hadou) Keysi Style Surge
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user will concentrate and channel a large sum of his chakra throughout his body. The majority of the chakra is directed towards the joints of the user, mainly to name the elbow, knee, and fist will have the majority of the chakra for the bones area. The chakra will also be directed towards different muscles in the body like the quads, back muscles, and the core. When the style is activated ones abilities will be strengthen and enhanced. All physical features is improved that includes speed, strength, and stamina. The user will be able to take strong hits and still last and also throw heavy blows without tiring. Evasion is also improved due to speed enhancement being able to dodge many projectile weapons and most taijutsu attacks. Overall the fighter is improved in every aspect.
    - Can only dodge C-Rank taijutsu and below
    - Can block only B-Rank Taijutsu and below
    - The style can only last 5 turns until the chakra wears out
    - Can be used 2 times in battle

    (Keysi sacchi) Keysi Sense
    Type: Defense/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Rank: B
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A
    Description: After the user perform the Keysi surge, he will be able to dodge any taijutsu attack from short range C-Rank and below projectile weapons, also if an opponent uses a B-Rank taijutsu attack the most the user can do is block it however is necessary. By being able to dodge an attack or block the user will be able to also come up with a counters.
    - Must activate Keysi Surge
    - Can only be used 4 time per battle
    - It must be a Keysi attack for the counter



    (zugaikotsu kanpan) Skull Cracker
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Rank: B
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: First you must channel your chakra through and directly towards the knee and elbow. The user will explode up and knee the opponent under the chin, while simultaneously bring his elbow up and smash it on top of the head of the opponent, the power behind the attack can crack the skull of an opponent or seriously damage the opponent heads, causing serious pain .
    - Must activate Keysi surge
    (Raitingu danmaku) lighting Barrage
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Rank: B
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: The user will hook his opponent in his ribs with his one of his fists, when it makes contact he repeats the process but on the other side of the opponent, lastly the user will grab the opponent by the neck and pull him down putting him off balance. Then he will focus the majority of chakra in the knee and thrust his knee on the opponents forehead causing serious damage.
    - Must activate Keysi surge


    Additional effects and Restrictions:


    - The user will have a great increase in speed, agility, and quickness.
    - Strength and stamina is also increased dramatically, The user will be able to last for long periods of fighting and still hit strong.
    - The mind of the user and senses also is enhanced, An example is the opponents senses will be increased due to his focus only on the fight and nothing else.
    - Also due to the chakra that covers the joints and muscles the users defensive and stamina will also be increased.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    [Denbuki] - Lightning Regalia Arts

    Type: Nin-taijutsu

    Background: After allying himself with Kumogakure, the village hidden within the clouds; Loki developed a unique fighting style using sharp-wire within an armor he created to improved and use more freely said steel wires. He named it, the Lightning Regalia. It is said that Loki defeated and also trained several years to improve the fighting style he had developed, making it stronger and more accessible to use, without much effort put into it, as he required on his first days of using it. Loki has also learned to move freely while wearing the amor where the regalia works from. Wearing it every day in every fight, so much that his speed is no longer decreased by it nor is his overall agility and movements.

    Skill levels of the style:

    Creator (created the style)
    ^
    Master (Knows Denbuki)
    ^
    User (Knows basic techniques)
    ^
    Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Lightning Regalia is unique and a full body Regalia (armor). Apart from his neck and head, the user's whole body is encased in the regalia (armor). The user specializes in manipulating electricity, allowing him to create powerful electric attacks with his wire system built into the Thunder Regalia, even if he doesn't need his Regalia "armor" to create powerful electric attacks. The user's Regalia is also very heavy, enough to create a small crater in the ground when he jumps down. However, after 2 weeks of wearing it (on the bio) the user get's used to the extra-weight and his body goes back to it's basic speed. The user also showcases an armorless version of the Regalia. He retains the gauntlets (wich have long claws of steel) and lower portion of the armor, but the top is replaced with a three-pronged wire mechanism on his back. This form appears to be significantly lighter than the armor form, and the user has no difficulty in keeping up with taijutsu specialist(s) during battle. The armor is sufficient enough to block regular weapons without recieving even a scratch and can block C ranked and below techniques within reason with ease aswell as B rank and lower tai. The wire not only serve for long range assaults, but also for melee and close combat techniques, making it perfect for close combat aswell.

    The main style that is enabled for the users is to be able to freely release razor sharp steel wires that aren't too thick from the regaila (armor) from the multiple spinning disks that work liike corkscrews and are activated and made to slide out of the armor. These wires can reach long distances and are control by meerly chakra control and thoughts alone. The wires are hard to spot by the naked eye, but due to them being infused all the time (when in use) with the user's chakra, they are able to be seen/spoted/sensed by Dojutsu or sensor users, or any other ability/KG that grants the user chakra dection of sorts. The lightning element can be channeled through the wires, not only making them even more sharp (even though their regular state can slive human skin with ease) and also introduce shocks onto the opponent. The said 'disks' the restrain and release the wires are a totall of 23. 4 are located on each arm or the armor; 1 above the palm, 1 to the side of the arm, 1 a bit above the wrist, and the 4th one on the shoulder(on each leg respectively). 5 for each leg, 1 on the shin, 1 on the foot, 1 on the leg, and the 5th one a bit below the waist (on each leg respectively). That makes up 18 of the 23, 2 others are on each side of the chest. And the last 3 are location on the back, on a vertical pattern above the spine. All of these are hidden within the armor, and are 'activated' by the user's will, sliding out of the armor into their respective locations, each able to release a long amount of wire that runs across the entire armor. The edges of the wire are highly sharp, enough to pierce a few inches (3) the human body. Aside fom releasing wire respectively, the user can manipulate the disks to work in conjuction; by releasing wire from several of them and them attaching the edges with chakra alone to surround and/or grab hold of the opponent, of course, this can be done with single wire(s) but it's more efficient for combinations and such. The user can also release wire into the ground in order to surprise the opponent from below. By putting in 'reverse' the disks, the user is able to make the disks retreat the wire back into them aswell, of course, this can help to drag opponents towards the user aswell, however, it takes atleast 2 wires (disks) to pull or move around 1 standard human.

    Example Techniques:
    (Denbuki: Atmosue) - Lightning Regalia Arts: Atmosphere Max
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: Once his desired target is completely entangled by his wires, the user generates a large surge of electricity from his Regalia (equivalent to B rank lightning) and sends it through the wires, essentially cooking the afflicted enemy. The speed in wich lightning travels should be around 2 seconds to reach it's destination, making it extremely hard to avoid once the target is entangled.

    (Denbuki: Kitou) - Lightning Regalia Arts: Regalia Fangs
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user activates the 4 wire disks on each arm respectively and has them release the wires, releasing a suited amount of wire and them gathering and compressing the wires into a single medium sized blade on each arm with great sharps, wich can be infused with lightning to improve their overall prowess. Each blade called 'Fang' has the length of 2 feet and wich of 3 inches.

    (Denbuki: Kirune) - Lightning Regalia Arts: Regalia Tornado
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user activates the 4 wire disks on each arm respectively and the 5 wire disks on each leg respectively. Then, after jumping towards or above the opponent, the user manipulates the wire released from all 9 disks to spin around him in form of a sharp tornado, with the sharp tip pointing towards the target. Then the user will impale and rip through the opponent's body. The user is able to coat this 'tornado' in lightning to improve its strength.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - May only be taught by Loki
    - The user must have Lightning complete and be atleast Sannin rank to learn Lightning Regalia arts.
    - After two weeks with the Regalia, the user's speed can be compared to Lee without weights, but not faster; without the Lightning Regalia on them or with the armorless version of the Regalia (no top armor).
    - The first two weeks with the Regalia, the user's speed is slightly decreased, by -2.
    - Users become more vunerable to Lightning based techniques when wearing the Lightning Regalia.
    - With the Lightning Regalia on, the user's Taijutsu techniques gain more strength behind them (+5), however this is after the first two weeks with the Regalia. Due to the improved speed and the extra strength grated by the Regalia.
    - The user can only use/manipulate the wire disks on their arms in the first 2 weeks of practicing the Lightning Regalia arts. After that, they are able to use and manipulate all of them with ease.

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    ‡ Declined ‡
    Tone down the armour massively and explain how it is realistic in the narutoverse
    [Denbuki] - Lightning Regalia Arts

    Type: Nin-taijutsu

    Background: After allying himself with Kumogakure, the village hidden within the clouds; Loki developed a unique fighting style using sharp-wire within an armor he created to improved and use more freely said steel wires. He named it, the Lightning Regalia. It is said that Loki defeated and also trained several years to improve the fighting style he had developed, making it stronger and more accessible to use, without much effort put into it, as he required on his first days of using it. Loki has also learned to move freely while wearing the amor where the regalia works from. Wearing it every day in every fight, so much that his speed is no longer decreased by it nor is his overall agility and movements.

    Skill levels of the style:

    Creator (created the style)
    ^
    Master (Knows Denbuki)
    ^
    User (Knows basic techniques)
    ^
    Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Lightning Regalia is unique and a full body Regalia (armor). Apart from his neck and head, the user's whole body is encased in the regalia (armor). The user specializes in manipulating electricity, allowing him to create powerful electric attacks with his wire system built into the Thunder Regalia, even if he doesn't need his Regalia "armor" to create powerful electric attacks. The user's Regalia is also very heavy, enough to create a small crater in the ground when he jumps down. However, after 2 weeks of wearing it (on the bio) the user get's used to the extra-weight and his body goes back to it's basic speed. The user also showcases an armorless version of the Regalia. He retains the gauntlets (wich have long claws of steel) and lower portion of the armor, but the top is replaced with a three-pronged wire mechanism on his back. This form appears to be significantly lighter than the armor form, and the user has no difficulty in keeping up with taijutsu specialist(s) during battle. The armor is sufficient enough to block regular weapons without recieving even a scratch and can block C ranked and below techniques, so that only half strength ( D rank) is dealt ( within reason ). As well as B rank and lower tai reduce it's damage in half, for example, a B rank tai would be half-blocked, allowing only C rank damage to get through. The wire not only serve for long range assaults, but also for melee and close combat techniques, making it perfect for close combat aswell. This is possible because it has already been show armors have been used in the narutoverse, not to mention, developing not only armors but further weapons or objects to have multiple uses. Just like the Infitine Armour that was able to absorb chakra from the adversary, aswell as several other armors created only from elemental chakra. It proves that taking a regular armor into the next level is possible, and wire has been shown to be widely used aswell.

    The main style that is enabled for the users is to be able to freely release razor sharp steel wires that aren't too thick from the regaila (armor) from the multiple spinning disks that work liike corkscrews and are activated and made to slide out of the armor. These wires can reach long distances and are control by meerly chakra control and thoughts alone. The wires are hard to spot by the naked eye, but due to them being infused all the time (when in use) with the user's chakra, they are able to be seen/spoted/sensed by Dojutsu or sensor users, or any other ability/KG that grants the user chakra dection of sorts. The lightning element can be channeled through the wires, not only making them even more sharp (even though their regular state can slive human skin with ease) and also introduce shocks onto the opponent. The said 'disks' the restrain and release the wires are a totall of 23. 4 are located on each arm or the armor; 1 above the palm, 1 to the side of the arm, 1 a bit above the wrist, and the 4th one on the shoulder(on each leg respectively). 5 for each leg, 1 on the shin, 1 on the foot, 1 on the leg, and the 5th one a bit below the waist (on each leg respectively). That makes up 18 of the 23, 2 others are on each side of the chest. And the last 3 are location on the back, on a vertical pattern above the spine. All of these are hidden within the armor, and are 'activated' by the user's will, sliding out of the armor into their respective locations, each able to release a long amount of wire that runs across the entire armor. The edges of the wire are highly sharp, enough to pierce a few inches (3) the human body. Aside fom releasing wire respectively, the user can manipulate the disks to work in conjuction; by releasing wire from several of them and them attaching the edges with chakra alone to surround and/or grab hold of the opponent, of course, this can be done with single wire(s) but it's more efficient for combinations and such. The user can also release wire into the ground in order to surprise the opponent from below. By putting in 'reverse' the disks, the user is able to make the disks retreat the wire back into them aswell, of course, this can help to drag opponents towards the user aswell, however, it takes atleast 2 wires (disks) to pull or move around 1 standard human.

    Example Techniques:
    (Denbuki: Atmosue) - Lightning Regalia Arts: Atmosphere Max
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: Once his desired target is completely entangled by his wires, the user generates a large surge of electricity from his Regalia (equivalent to B rank lightning) and sends it through the wires, essentially cooking the afflicted enemy. The speed in which lightning travels should be around 2 seconds to reach it's destination, making it extremely hard to avoid once the target is entangled.

    (Denbuki: Kitou) - Lightning Regalia Arts: Regalia Fangs
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user activates the 4 wire disks on each arm respectively and has them release the wires, releasing a suited amount of wire and then gathering and compressing the wires into a single medium sized blade on each arm with sharp edges, which can be infused with lightning to improve their overall prowess. Each blade called 'Fang' has the length of 2 feet and width of 3 inches.

    (Denbuki: Kirune) - Lightning Regalia Arts: Regalia Tornado
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user activates the 4 wire disks on each arm respectively and the 5 wire disks on each leg respectively. Then, after jumping towards or above the opponent, the user manipulates the wire released from all 9 disks to spin around him in form of a sharp tornado, with the sharp tip pointing towards the target. Then the user will impale and rip through the opponent's body. The user is able to coat this 'tornado' in lightning to improve its strength.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - May only be taught by Loki
    - The user must have Lightning complete and be at least Sannin rank to learn Lightning Regalia arts.
    - After two weeks with the Regalia, the user's speed can be compared to Lee without weights, but not faster; without the Lightning Regalia on them or with the armor-less version of the Regalia (no top armor).
    - The first two weeks with the Regalia, the user's speed is slightly decreased, by -2.
    - With the Lightning Regalia on, the user's Taijutsu techniques gain more strength behind them (+5), however this is after the first two weeks with the Regalia. Due to the improved speed and the extra strength grated by the Regalia.
    - The user can only use/manipulate the wire disks on their arms in the first 2 weeks of practicing the Lightning Regalia arts. After that, they are able to use and manipulate all of them with ease.

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     Declined 
    DNR. This collides with Cannon abilities, Custom Techniques and its simply outrageously oped.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Kanjoudakai Sensu |Mercenary Style
    Type: Nintaijutsu
    Background: Throughout time there have always been mercenaries, they differ in shape and form but there has been a certainty about them, that if they have no skill they have no work. The lifestyle of a mercenary is difficult and harsh, so succumbing to fear can’t be an option. Most of the time when mercenaries are hired they have to fulfil their objective, which sometimes requires capturing prisoners or wanted people of said village or area. When mercenaries are called upon the employer generally has chosen them as a last resort therefore there are generally time constraints and sometimes clauses i.e. The person must be bought back alive, the target must be alive but you must sever his leg to make a statement or you must bring him back but destroy all movement in his arms. These kinds of requests and time constraints forced mercenaries to devise the fastest and most effective methods for maiming, disabling, blinding and lethally killing their targets.
    Generations past and by unique circumstances a group of mercenaries began to exist. After much success with many underhanded missions and years of travelling, that specific group began to wonder if there was a unified form of fighting the mercenaries could call their own. Soon after realising there wasn't, they began inscribing all the techniques they had learnt and seen. The realisation that all their techniques did not balance well with each individual resonated deeply with their outcast like nature so they began to focus on the epicentre of what being a mercenary in combat is all about. After years of tenacious work they developed the fighting style that was as ruthless as them and requiring a mercenary’s reflexes and courage to execute. Once the style was fully developed the mercenaries inscribed the techniques and training methods in an extremely long scroll and passed it down to a select few who they deemed worthy to master it.



    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Mercenary style is a fighting style that involves only maiming, disabling, disfiguring, blinding and lethal killing in its techniques. This is the core of the fighting style and if doesn't do any of those it is not considered a part of mercenary style. It’s a controlled yet aggressive way of fighting which also involves the use of weapons and objects such as kunai and smoke bombs. The core and main physical stance of mercenary style is an upright position with hands at their sides situated near the outlining of their pockets. This was developed so that mercenaries could effectively blend in any social situation, seeming harmless to their unsuspecting target and become lethal in seconds. The movements of mercenary style are swift and fluid-like. This requires an intense amount of training to master due to the movement shift from the upright stance and position changes between attacks. Severe life threatening training has to be undergone to learn how to use the aversion tactics of mercenary style. While mercenary style is an offence way of fighting it requires aversion skills to execute the moves. Averting blows in mercenary style are always close and controlled movements barely avoiding and getting on the inside of blows at the last second, the near-death like training allows the user not to succumb to the fear of being hit that wells up in most fighters. Once this is done the user can perform close and dangerous attacks without the fear consuming or restricting his or her actions.
    The averting looks similar to the aversion of the first strike and not the counter blow:

    With the understanding that the blows had to be swift and counteractive the mercenaries used chakra to enhance their movements but due to the fact that everybody could not master chakra control they resorted in making it a little more basic yet intelligence was required to secure the survival of their style. They would force chakra only to the joints of their arms or legs to decrease the time it took to pull out a weapon, deepening their skills and used it to eventually make their movements simultaneous. Great time, mental and physical disassociation training and experience is required to learn this final yet pivotal part of mercenary style. After mastering mercenary style the teacher will carve a marking on the students left shoulder signifying their understanding, responsibility and respect for the style.

    Example Techniques:

    Mercenary Style: Mokumoku Yoru - Silent Night
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:30
    Damage:60
    Description: From the upright mercenary stance the user will lean forward to slightly avoid a strike. He then raises the corresponding hand to latch onto the forearm of the averted blow. Whilst the user’s one hand is locked onto the arm, the free arm will have chakra sent down it and swiftly pull out a kunai with a smoke bomb attached to it. The user will swiftly stab the opponent underneath the armpit severing his main tendon. Whilst dropping low, simultaneously he will quickly put his hand in his back pocket to pull out an explosive tag. As the smoke bomb detonates, the user administers a strong seeping 360 degree kick which knocks the opponent off their feet and as the opponent descends the user then sends a powerful open palm thrust with onto the opponents back, attaching the explosive tag onto the opponents back and sending him flying forward as the tag detonates.

    Mercenary Style: Sono kakou Goliath - The Fall of Goliath
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B
    Range:Short - Mid
    Chakra:20
    Damage:40
    Description:: The user will accelerate forwards, while simultaneously pulling 4 kunai out. (Two in each hand.) The user will then spring into the air shooting both legs outwards, as he leaves the ground he will throw one of the kunai in each hand into the opponents opposing thighs. Whilst in mid-air the user will twist 180 degrees as he releases the first set of kunai. Then lock his ankles around the opponents head and swiftly drop down the opponents’ torso and with the two remaining kunai slash deeply down the back of opponent’s thighs severing their hamstrings, disabling their ability to walk.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Mercenary style requires a high level of intellect and great hand to eye coordination to master it.
    -Must be at least Kage rank and above to learn Mercenary style
    -Masters of Mercenary style can perform offensively aggressive movements and defensively evasive movements’ simultaneously
    -Mercenary style cannot be used in the first month after mastering it.
    -Due to the chakra infused graduation marking after mercenary training the bio used cannot be in a fight for the next two weeks and for the following week B-Rank and above Mercenary Style techniques cannot be performed.
    -At the end of training masters of mercenary style can declare whether a student has completed or has sufficient understanding to have mastered the fighting style. (Later combat assessment and appropriate usage of the style can change the declaration at a later stage)
    -Official masters of mercenary style have increased reflexes and movement when compared with a regular strong fist user.
    -Every technique in mercenary style has to involve maiming, disabling, disfiguring, blinding or result in death of the opponent.
    -Mercenary style can only be taught to users who have been a member for longer than 8 months.

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    Nothing about this is unique or worthy of a CFS. DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±


    Dansu Mikon Chikushou - Dance of the Wild Beast
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Background: Similar to Naruto Uzumaki, it all started at the Ninja Academy however with a person called Kami. Kami had a problem similar to Naruto Uzumaki during the Ninja Academy. While Naruto Uzumaki's problem was Shadow clones, Kami's problem was (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique. No matter how hard he tries, he couldn't transform himself to any specific person/thing, correctly which would have been the reason for him failing. Fortunately, he heard some other students talking about a scroll which contains many kinjutsu, one of these kinjutsu was (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique. That day, Kami decided to go and steal the Scroll of Seals. Which he did, and he started his plan by going to The Hokage Residence where there are lots of scroll, however he didn't care about anything but the Scroll of Seals. After stealing it, Kami ran away till he reached the forest created by Hashirama Senju which is before the gates of Konoha. Kami then sat down next to a tree and opened the scroll. No sooner had he opened the scroll that he saw lots of kinjutsu, but the only one he cared about is Transformation technique which he found after a little while. Kami meanwhile learning the secret of the Transformation Technique and it's high skilled version, he felt somebody coming, it wasn't only one, they were several Anbus from the leaf searching for the Scroll of Secret. Kami knew that if he ran with the Scroll he would be caught no matter how much would it last, so he left the scroll closed next to the tree and hide. After founding the scroll the Anbus of the leaf returned to the Hokage Residence to return it to it's previous place, however they didn't know that the one who stole it, Kami had already learnt everything about Transformtion technique, the day after that day was the testing day, Kami surprised his teachers with the out came and then he graduated and became a genin, but not any normal genin, a genin that knows lots of secrets. After gaining the ability to transform himself to any thing he like, Kami decided to call himself Beast Boy and he was called so from that day.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: In this style, the shinobi would be able to transform his whole body, his appearance or any part of his own into any specific shape/look. The user of this style would be able to transform himself to normal animals and do have their properties. For example, when the one turns into Cheetah he would gain speed boost, when he turns into Gorilla he would gain Taijutsu boost, when he turns into an eagle he would be able to fly, etc... And the difference between this and Transformation technique, is that they user of the style would be able to change himself and return to his normal state in an instant.

    Example Techniques:
    [Washi] - Eagle
    Rank: B-rank
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Self
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/a (+10 to speed)
    Description: Using the user's high skilled abilities to transform, the user transforms himself into an eagle. With him turning to an eagle, the user will have two decent wings alongside with a small yet fast body and will gain the abilities to fly. However unfortunately, in this shape of an animal, the eagle, the user won't be able to perform any single attack but wind attacks which doesn't require any handseals and only up to B-rank.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - The master of the style will be able to perform all the techniques passively
    - In order to become a master of the style, the user will have to master the style and have it mastered for a month
    - All this rules applies to anyone who wishes to learn the style alongside with the creator himself.

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    DNR.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    heki houmen.sorrowful tear )
    Type: nin/gen
    Background:
    Plenty of people in the manga have been shown crying I want to utilize this in a fightng style making this it's own Cfs as it is easy to produce and can be added to with water to really boost the power. I call this idea the power of sadness and loneliness.

    Also I took the idea from war cry from fairytail which the concept of tears from there I added genjutsu as an aspect because it fits with the whole loneliness and sorrow and turning the enemy's feeling's against them. The whole basis is from using the user's tear ducts to utilize the basis of tear style arts from attacking to genjutsu and or binding an enemy, the defensive ability will be a tear armour to reduce the chance's of being put in a genjutsu.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The user uses Suiton chakra and unleashes a dubious amount of tears the tears themselves upon contact with the enemy can induce genjutsu because of the chakra infused tears they can project any and all feelings the tears are laced with such as tears of anger, tears of sorrow, tears of pleasure, tears of laughter. These three aspects can be utilized at whim with tears being the trigger for genjutsu and sending the user into which stated jutsu used. The user may also form a tear like armour that can repel the enemy's from putting you in a genjutsu however this does not work against doujutsu type genjutsu (visual uchiha based). But will work to defend against regular genjutsu up to A rank. Actual attacking type tears will be limited to a maximum of mid range and no further.

    Example Techniques:



    Usage Examples :

    (heki houmen : soutei heki tama ) - Tear Release :binding tear sphere
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    The user forms a sphere of tears while in short range of the enemy incasing the enemy in this sphere binding them in a tear prison sphere bind. The user does not need to be touching the sphere as the bind is self sustaining. This bind envokes a special genjutsu which is fed by the tears bringing up all the enemy's most sorrowful memories. Trapping them in a crying and loneliness state.
    The tears coming in contact with the enemy's eyes are the way this genjutsu takes effect.

    Restrictions: can only be used twice in battle
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    (heki houmen : sho-ro torune-do) -tear release: crying tornado
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:
    The user makes a sequence of handsigns and proceeds to expell a tornado of tears which soars out across the field picking up speed and velocity as it travels spinning anything around that it picks up and when it disperse's it drops it to the ground.

    Restrictions: can only be used three times per battle.


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    ( heki houmen:senka issei) -tear release war cry -
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description:
    The user builds up Suiton chakra in his tear ducts and proceeds to release a flood of tears which comes out in a wave like procedure that travels towards the enemy to sweep the enemy off there feet.

    Restrictions: can be used 4 times in battle.



    Students I passed this element onto :
    None.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Must have training in Suiton.
    Also great chakra control to utilize Suiton from the eyes.
    Maximum of mid range for attacking jutsu's.
    Must have Training in genjutsu.

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    DNR. You simply don't understand the concpet of this thread and what you submit in it. You simply copied your submission of Tear Release in the Custom Elements thread and made it into a CFS without editting anything. You don't understand either concepts apparently. Please try to be smart about your submissions and at least read approved ones to see what is approvable or not.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (Meka Ude Jutsu) Mechanical Arm Art.
    Type: KenTaijustu
    Background: During his time in the Kumogakure library, Vergil had come across some documents talking about the mechanics of the Asura path of the 6 paths of pain. He became instantly hooked onto the concept of utilizing mechanical weapons to benefit his combat. After months of gathering material he had found himself a surgeon and idea of how he wanted to use his mechanical weapons. Or so he thought. He had no idea what he wanted to do. After hours and hours of writing down and speculating ideas it finally hit him. He would have 4 retractable arms installed into his back. That he can control to attack his opponents. Providing a great addition to his close range combat. The arms are 4 feet in length, about a foot thick, and at the tip, have 3 claw/pincer type structures to be able to grab, grip, and even stab through targets. The arms are scale like medal covering the thin wires inside the arms. The idea was perfect. And it was kept secret from many people in the village. The surgeon on the other hand didn't like the idea. So he abandoned Vergil. Vergil had devised a way to install the arms himself. He would have a device which would be the base of the arms placed onto the back of him. The base has 4 structures similar to the chakra rods used by Nagato. Vergil knows of these rods due to the usage of them by Nagato(Serpent's Nagato bio). The rods will connect the chakra system of the user with the arms. Allowing Vergil to control the arms. Thus, one of the strongest styles of combat were born.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The power of the style resides in the robotic arms. The arms are first placed onto the user on the persons back. The arms will be in the four corners of the users back. Two at the lower back and two located at the upper back. The user can control the arms and cause them to strike as well as defend from attacks. In addition to that the arms can be used in free form combat in order to help the user in combat. The arms also provide the user with another method of transportation and evading(Will be submitted as CJ's). Since the arms are connected to the users chakra system, the user can low key mentally move the arms just as if they are his regular arms. Finally, due to the metal plating of the arms they're indestructible and lightning/any element cannot be conducted through them.

    Example Techniques:
    (Meka Ude Jutsu: Kaihou Meka Tsuppari) Mechanical Arm Art: Open mechanical Thrust.
    Type: Offensive.
    Rank: B ranked.
    Range: Short.
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 40
    Description: Using the mechanical arms on his/her back the user will have one of the arms thrust forward and strike the target in the chest with a quick violent thrust of the arm. The chakra reinforced hit is able to break bones if a clean hit is connected.

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    (Meka Ude Jutsu: Clamp) Mechanical arm art: ViceGrip.
    Type: Offensive.
    Rank: A ranked.
    Range: Short.
    Chakra: 30.
    Damage: 60.
    Description: The user sends 2 mechanical arms at the target. One of the arms will strike the target in the stomach with a hard blow, causing the target to flinch. The other arm will then thrust itself into the throat of the opponent. Choking the target with a serious grip which cuts off blood to the brain. If not broken up the target could pass out.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -A master of this art can use both his regular limbs and mechanical limbs at the same time.
    -In order to use this style the user cannot have a regular CW. The user can only have a Custom set of arms which could only be A ranked at the most(abilities will vary)
    -Must be trained in this art.
    -Must be at least Kage rank.
    -Must have started tai and ken.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (Namikazeron) – Theory of Waves and Wind
    Type: Fūinjutsu & Ninjutsu (Inton)
    Background:
    Namikazeron has its root in its namesake; Namikaze Minato, though the famed Sealing Master and Fourth Fire Shadow had no part in its creation, as the style was created after his death.
    Namikazeron began as a humble, philosophical movement among intellectuals that advocated experimental Sealing Techniques. Namikaze had displayed unmatched knowledge of seals when he layered two ‘Four Symbols Seals’ to create the ‘Eight Trigrams’ Sealing Style and many groups sought to take the new concept of ‘layered seals’ further. The resulting wave of experimental seals added a whole new dimension to the art of Fūinjutsu.
    The Kanji (which defines the central purpose of most seals) was discovered to hold the potential to be used independently of formulae as long as the given purpose was simple enough. Formulae (which deal with the lesser workings of most seals) were similarly proven able to exist and function independently of Kanji, as long as the given specifications were without a central purpose.
    As the experiments grew progressively more obscure (and dangerous) as time went on; a minor faction of the movement moved to implement a series of safety-measures to be used by the movement as a whole. The goal was to minimize the chance of injuries caused by destabilizing/overloading seals and the most effective measure, much to the surprise of the faction, was discovered to be calligraphy.
    Over the years; Namikazeron has become more than just a movement. The contributions of the Sealing Sage, Axle, and his son, Garrett Hawke, created a new, battle-oriented branch of the movement which is still used to this day.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The fundamental principle of Namikazeron is the separation of formulae and Kanji in Fūinjutsu and the combinatory usage of the two, both in and outside of combat. The difference between said concept and normal Fūinjutsu can be compared to a Yin-Yang Master’s simultaneous usage of two elemental natures and a Kekkei Genkai-wielding Ninja’s inherited ability to combine two elemental natures. Where normal Fūinjutsu always includes both formulae and Kanji, Namikazerian Fūinjutsu can use either concept separately or blend them in a multitude of ways.
    There are two ‘Columns’ to this, known as the ’Formula Line’ (Jutsushiki-Sen) and ‘Layered Characters’ (Sōjō Kanji) respectively.

    The purpose of formulae in Namikazerian Fūinjutsu is to act as a medium for the creation of Kanji. In regular Fūinjutsu; formulae is a mysterious phenomenon. As observed in the fight between Sasuke Uchiha and Shimura Danzō; formulae created in mid-air as part of the ‘Summoning Technique’ remained unaffected by the lack of solid mass beneath it and formed in a perfectly flat pattern. Similarly, formulae have been observed to form in gravity-defying designs and even move, as seen with the sealing formula of the Flying Thunder God Technique. Namikazeron takes advantage of these features to remain unaffected and unchanged by environmental/external factors and uses them alongside a relatively simple, Genjutsu-like form of Inton to create what is known as the First Column of Namikazerian Fūinjutsu; the Jutsushiki-Sen (Formula Line).

    Jutsushiki-Sen is not an Inton technique, thought the two categories are conceptually alike. As observed by the Second Mizukage; Inton is a broad term and the concept of ‘creating forms out of nothingness’ is also fundamentally linked to illusionary techniques. Just like Genjutsu however; Jutsushiki-Sen does not require Yin-Yang training to utilize.
    The ‘Formula Line’ is a self-sustaining, redundant circuit of chakra that assumes the shape of ever-changing black threads. The circuit always originates from its user’s body, but being a massless phenomenon – to the extent that chakra is massless – and simply a manifestation of the user’s chakra; it’s safe to say that it has virtually no limitations within fields such as speed and reach.
    In and by itself however; the Jutsushiki-Sen is useless in battle. The ‘threads’ can serve as visual barriers, but they are unable to interact with matter in any shape or form on their own accord.

    The purpose of Kanji in Namikazerian Fūinjutsu is to act as extensions of the Jutsushiki-Sen. Through miniscule changes in the chakra inside the circuit; the Sōjō Kanji-concept changes the shape of individual parts of the Formula Line into Kanji that, in turn, shapes its required formulae from the surrounding area of the Line. Multiple identical Kanji can be created simultaneously through the use of the Jutsushiki-Sen’s properties as a circuit. Similarly; Kanji can be created outside the user’s field of visions through the implementation of the calligraphy-safeguard, which is a vital part of Namikazeron as a field of study.
    One of the most important features of Sōjō Kanji is the ‘thickness’ associated with it. Like the name implies; the products of the Second Column are ‘layered’, in the sense that the created Kanji are based so thoroughly on the Formula Line that tags become obsolete. Naturally; this restricts the effectiveness of seals that require a continuous contact with its target(s).

    Example Techniques:
    (Namikazeron ♦ Bakushin) – Theory of Waves and Wind ♦ Ground Zero
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user infuses one or several Formula Lines with chakra, using the Sōjō Kanji-concept to create a great amount of explosive seals. Upon creation; the seals will detonate in the same manner as normal explosive tags, causing much destruction.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -If Namikazeron is the default CFS of the user’s biography; Fūinjutsu techniques that do not normally require a tag to perform are strengthened by one (1) rank due to the structural improvements brought on by the user’s experience with calligraphy.
    -Formula Lines can be created in freeform, as can seals that aren’t technique-related, such as non-ranked explosive tags.


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    This is not a CFS. It has no CQC aspect to it. You're trying to pattent something that is something currently any person who mastered non medical fuuinjutsu can do. Yes, the explanation is cool and all but in the end its not a CFS. Also, passive boosts in power to a given skill cannot be achieved by CFS.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    (Senbonzakura) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Background: Being a shinobi of the leaf, -Castiel- has spent much time on the forest that surrounds the land of fire's village, becoming one with nature, so much that no animal is afraid of him and allow him to pet them at will, while in the time he spent there he discovered a way of making the forest itself or actually the leafs themselfs help him in combat, even though being from konoha doesn't allow him any special fighting style, the forrest do serve as a training source for his unique fighting style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This is a simple yet efficient and strong fighting style, where the user focusses regular chakra and followed by Wind chakra into tree's nearby by, infusing the leafs with wind chakra so that the user is able to lift and move around the leafs (this will make them useful to protect the user from incoming lightning attacks aslong as the rank is appropiate and the strength is within reason, however it also makes this fighting style more weak against fire based techniques) and coats the leafs on them in sharp or dense chakra depending on the usseage he wants to give them obviously including wind chakra aswell to increase the cutting power and control over the leafs,, becoming more like sharp small blades and not leafs, he them is able to freely manipulate them in waves of thousands of petals, depending on the amount of leafs the user can gather them together and compress them, giving them a single solid form with great strength and such. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to appear as cherry blossom petals due to the extra type of chakra added by the user. The user can control the "blades" at will, allowing him to shred opponents at a distance and break through many defenses within reason. The blades are also used for defensive purposes, as they can even protect the user from an incoming sword swing, kunais, shurikens, and other regular ninja weapons. A master of this fighting style is allowed to carry a gourd full of petals already coated in his chakra, allowing him to use them, without the need of controlling the leafs of trees nearby by.

    Skill levels of the style:

    Creator (created the style, Dominates it)
    ^
    Master (knows Senbonzakura and advanced techniques)
    ^
    User (someone who knows basic techniques)
    ^
    Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • Can only be used if there are trees around the field, or if the user carries his petal gourd.
    • Must have mastery over Ninjutsu. (Due to the need of extreme chakra control)
    • Only -Castiel- may teach Senbonzakura.
    • Must complete 2 training sessions to be an Apprentice.
    • Must complete 3 training sessions to be a User.
    • Must complete 5 training sessions to be a Master.
    • Must be atleast Sannin rank to start basic training.
    • An apprentice can only learn up to C rank.
    • A user can only learn up to B rank.
    • A master can learn up to S rank.
    • Only the Creator can use F rank techinques.
    • Mastery over Wind release is required.

    Examples:

    (Senbonzakura: Chire) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Scatter
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will take control of a thousand petals and scatter them across the field, maknig it look like a pink ground is what they are on top of.
    • Must have several trees nearby by or carrying the user's petal gourd.

    (Senbonzakura: Senkei) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Annihilate
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user unites the scattered petals into complete glowing swords, numbering in the thousands, that form four rows. These rows float just above the other, and circle around the user and his opponent in a continuously moving, column-like array. It abandons defense in favor of a concentrated offense. Though visually menacing, this form is not meant for attack from all sides; rather, it is to concentrate his power into fewer blades, thus increasing his attack power. While the suer can control these swords, he commonly calls them to his hands for actual melee combat. When in his hand, they lose their glow, and take the form of a katana. While they seem solid in this state, the swords can just as easily dissipate back into the multitude of tiny blades that they are made up of. It seems to take fewer blows from a Senkei blade to gravely injure an opponent than the multiple cuts needed. The Senkei also cages himself with his enemy, allowing neither combatant to move very far from each other, though the area is still large enough for maneuverability. The most effective use of the Senkei form is that it allows for use of all the swords at the same attack level, making it highly versatile as a way to effectively defeat an enemy unaware of the danger of the situation.
    • May only be used 2 times per match.


    (Senbonzakura: Hakuteiken) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: White Emperor Sword
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This condenses each and every single one of his "blades" into a single, potent sword, drastically increasing its cutting power. The chakra and pressure of this form released is immense. The blade appears bright white and its aura takes the form of a bird, earning it the name Hakuteiken ("White Emperor Sword"). Pure white wings form on the user's back, as well as a halo-like circle, made of concentrated petals. The blade in this form is dangerous enough to cause aggravated injuries in one single blow. The wings are capable of being used for flight, the user can either only create the wings or only the sword, or both if wanted.
    • May only be used 3 times per match.
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    Now the problem is how unrealistic it is for you to be able to use this style. You describe being able to control thousands of these leaves at once. However, the amount of chakra control that it would require for you to coat each and every leaf with wind chakra and then simultaneously control all of them is basically impossible. Each one of these techniques would probably drain you of every bit of chakra. Scale down the number of individual leaves that you control (because with what you're doing with this CFS, controlling them in massive groups isn't really an option). Like, by a lot.

    Dance Of A Thousand Cherry Blossoms (Dansu no Senbonzakura)


    Type:Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu


    Background: The Dance Of A Thousand Cherry Blossoms is a style created by -Blade- while attempting to come up with an "Ultimate Offense". The style focuses on releasing an immense amount of chakra from a special made sword causing it to dissipate into thousands of tiny blades that normally shouldn't be seen but the light reflecting off them causes them to glow a purplish color. The blades can be used as an attack or defense depending on the users wish so long as he has the chakra to maintain the blades while they are split. The sword is usually held together via the users Chakra thus not just any sword can use this style. While attempting to create this style -Blade- took a special chakra metal sword and poured his chakra into it separating it into the tiny shards and began using them to attack in swarms and bunches.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style is meant to incorporate the use of Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu combined into an "Ultimate Attack". The user releases his chakra from his blade and cause it to dissipate into thousands of tiny blades that resemble cherry blossoms due to the light reflecting off the blades. Essentially this style is created for ways of completely shredding the opponent by constant rushing the opponent with thousands of tiny shards. The main weakness to this techniques is that the shards are still metal thus a megnetism user can in fact turn them on the user. While training a beginner must first have a sword they wish to convert into a Senbonzakura sword and pour their chakra into it and concentrate on separating it into the many blades. Then the user remolds the sword with their chakra and hold it together. While gaining experience with holding the sword together the beginner is normally exhausted after a few hours but begins to no longer feel the strain after a couple days. The user cant use the style until they have completed training for a week.


    Example Techniques:
    Initial Release, Thousand Cherry Blossoms (Shikai Senbonzakura)
    Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user says the word usually "Scatter" to activate this and releases their chakra from their sword causing it to separates into thousands of tiny blades circling them. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to resemble cherry blossom petals. By swinging the swords hilt, the user can control the blade fragments, allowing him to shred opponents at a distance and break through almost any defense. The blades can be used for defensive purposes, as they can protect the user from incoming attacks up to B Rank Elemental and A rank regular ninjutsu so long as the user can see and react to the incoming attack
    -Technique lasts for 5 turns
    -Must be taught by ~Orochimaru~



    Final Release, Vibrant Display of Thousand Cherry Blossoms (Bankai, Senbonzakura )Kageyoshi
    Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
    Rank: Forbidden
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 50
    Damage: 90
    Description:: This is a much larger version of Senbonzakura Shikai. To activate it, the user drops his sword straight down. The sword seemingly phases into the ground, as though it were a pool of water when in actuality the shards are just spreading around the user. The shards ripples and expand out, turning the surrounding area dark, and within moments, two rows of a thousand giant blades rise up from the ground. Those thousand swords scatter, and countless mini blades surround the user. No one knows the exact number of blades generated, and no one can predict, control, or even see the movements of these blades without the aid of a 3t Sharingan, sensing ability or Byakugan. The small shards continuously circle the user protecting him from incoming attacks(Forbiden rank Ninjutsu and S rank elemental jutsu) so long as he can see the attack. The user can concentrate the blades into a large mass to shred the enemy to pieces
    -Jutsu lasts for 5 turns
    -Must remain still to activate this jutsu
    -Only a 3t sharingan and Byakugan can control the movments of the blades and control the attack of them
    -The user cannot use any Senbonzakura techniques for 5 turns unless it is Sekei



    Annihilate, A Thousand Cherry Blossoms (Senkei Senbonzakura)
    Type: Attack/Supplementary
    Rank: S
    Range: Long
    Chakra: 40(-10 per turn remains active)
    Damage: N/A (Sword stabs and slashes apply as normal)
    Description: This unites the scattered petals of Senbonzakura(Bankai or Shikai) into complete glowing swords, numbering in the thousands, which form four rows. These rows float just above each other, and circle around the user and his opponent in a continuously moving, column-like array. It abandons defense in favor of a concentrated offense. Though visually menacing, this form is not meant for attack from all sides unless the user is able to control "Bankai, Senbonzakura Kageyoshi"; rather, it concentrates his Bankai or Shikai into fewer blades, thus increasing his attack power. The user can mentally control these swords, or call them to his hands for actual melee combat. When in his hand, they lose their glow, and take the form of the users normal Katana. While they seem solid in this state, the swords can just as easily dissipate back into the multitude of tiny blades they are made up of. Senkei seals the user in with his enemy, allowing neither combatant to move very far from each other, though the area is still large enough for maneuverability. The deadliest aspect of the Senkei form is that it allows for use of all the swords at the same attack level(Meaning each sword is just as dangerous as the next), making it a way to effectively defeat an enemy unaware of the danger of the situation.
    - The user must have 3t Sharingan or Byakugan to controll the swords movements
    -There is absolutely no way that the user can control each and every sword at once
    -The user can only mentally control a maximum of 4 swords at a time
    -The user can only call 2 swords to his hand at a time




    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Must be taught by -Blade-
    -Must be at least Sannin to learn this style
    -The user can use a blade shard to get themselves out of a genjutsu so long as they are able to control the shards by cutting themselves
    -User must have started Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu training to learn this style
    -Although the blades can in fact defend the user must have a way of knowing that there is an incoming attack thus leaving sneak attacks from behind very resourceful against this

    Re-Worded alot of the material
    -Took out Wind Element mainly
    -Removed the controlling leaves part


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    Perhaps its just me but these last 3 submissions are basically the same worded differently and there is a quoting issue. Please clarify who is the submitter of this CFS, who actually made it and such. I mean, 3 sequenced CFS with tremendous similarities? Whats up with that? Go, talk to eachother and clarify this please.
     
         
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    Resubmiting~

    (Senbonzakura) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Background: Being a shinobi of the leaf, -Castiel- has spent much time on the forest that surrounds the land of fire's village, becoming one with nature, so much that no animal is afraid of him and allow him to pet them at will, while in the time he spent there he discovered a way of making the forest itself or actually the leafs themselfs help him in combat, even though being from konoha doesn't allow him any special fighting style, the forrest do serve as a training source for his unique fighting style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This is a simple yet efficient and strong fighting style, where the user focusses regular chakra and followed by Wind chakra into tree's nearby by, infusing the leafs with wind chakra so that the user is able to lift and move around the leafs (this will make them useful to protect the user from incoming lightning attacks aslong as the rank is appropiate and the strength is within reason, however it also makes this fighting style more weak against fire based techniques) and coats the leafs on them in sharp or dense chakra depending on the usseage he wants to give them obviously including wind chakra aswell to increase the cutting power and control over the leafs,, becoming more like sharp small blades and not leafs, he them is able to freely manipulate them in waves of thousands of petals, depending on the amount of leafs the user can gather them together and compress them, giving them a single solid form with great strength and such. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to appear as cherry blossom petals due to the extra type of chakra added by the user. The user can control the "blades" at will, allowing him to shred opponents at a distance and break through many defenses within reason. The blades are also used for defensive purposes, as they can even protect the user from an incoming sword swing, kunais, shurikens, and other regular ninja weapons. A master of this fighting style is allowed to carry a gourd full of petals already coated in his chakra, allowing him to use them, without the need of controlling the leafs of trees nearby by.

    Skill levels of the style:

    Creator (created the style, Dominates it)
    ^
    Master (knows Senbonzakura and advanced techniques)
    ^
    User (someone who knows basic techniques)
    ^
    Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • Can only be used if there are trees around the field, or if the user carries his petal gourd.
    • Must have mastery over Ninjutsu. (Due to the need of extreme chakra control)
    • Only -Castiel- may teach Senbonzakura.
    • Must complete 2 training sessions to be an Apprentice.
    • Must complete 3 training sessions to be a User.
    • Must complete 5 training sessions to be a Master.
    • Must be atleast Sannin rank to start basic training.
    • An apprentice can only learn up to C rank.
    • A user can only learn up to B rank.
    • A master can learn up to S rank.
    • Only the Creator can use F rank techinques.
    • Mastery over Wind release is required.

    Examples:

    (Senbonzakura: Chire) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Scatter
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will take control of a thousand petals and scatter them across the field, maknig it look like a pink ground is what they are on top of.
    • Must have several trees nearby by or carrying the user's petal gourd.

    (Senbonzakura: Senkei) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Annihilate
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user unites the scattered petals into complete glowing swords, numbering in the thousands, that form four rows. These rows float just above the other, and circle around the user and his opponent in a continuously moving, column-like array. It abandons defense in favor of a concentrated offense. Though visually menacing, this form is not meant for attack from all sides; rather, it is to concentrate his power into fewer blades, thus increasing his attack power. While the suer can control these swords, he commonly calls them to his hands for actual melee combat. When in his hand, they lose their glow, and take the form of a katana. While they seem solid in this state, the swords can just as easily dissipate back into the multitude of tiny blades that they are made up of. It seems to take fewer blows from a Senkei blade to gravely injure an opponent than the multiple cuts needed. The Senkei also cages himself with his enemy, allowing neither combatant to move very far from each other, though the area is still large enough for maneuverability. The most effective use of the Senkei form is that it allows for use of all the swords at the same attack level, making it highly versatile as a way to effectively defeat an enemy unaware of the danger of the situation.
    • May only be used 2 times per match.


    (Senbonzakura: Hakuteiken) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: White Emperor Sword
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This condenses each and every single one of his "blades" into a single, potent sword, drastically increasing its cutting power. The chakra and pressure of this form released is immense. The blade appears bright white and its aura takes the form of a bird, earning it the name Hakuteiken ("White Emperor Sword"). Pure white wings form on the user's back, as well as a halo-like circle, made of concentrated petals. The blade in this form is dangerous enough to cause aggravated injuries in one single blow. The wings are capable of being used for flight, the user can either only create the wings or only the sword, or both if wanted.
    • May only be used 3 times per match.
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    Now the problem is how unrealistic it is for you to be able to use this style. You describe being able to control thousands of these leaves at once. However, the amount of chakra control that it would require for you to coat each and every leaf with wind chakra and then simultaneously control all of them is basically impossible. Each one of these techniques would probably drain you of every bit of chakra. Scale down the number of individual leaves that you control (because with what you're doing with this CFS, controlling them in massive groups isn't really an option). Like, by a lot.
    (Senbonzakura) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Background: Being an ex-shinobi of the leaf, Loki had spent much time on the forest that surrounds the land of fire's village, becoming one with nature, so much that no animal is afraid of him and allow him to pet them at will, while in the time he spent there he discovered a way of making the forest itself or actually the leafs themselfs help him in combat, even though being from konoha doesn't allow him any special fighting style, the forrest do serve as a training source for his unique fighting style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This is a simple yet efficient and strong fighting style, where the user focusses regular chakra and followed by Wind chakra into tree's nearby by, infusing the leafs with wind chakra so that the user is able to lift and move around the leafs (this will make them useful to protect the user from incoming lightning attacks aslong as the rank is appropiate and the strength is within reason, however it also makes this fighting style more weak against fire based techniques) and coats the leafs on them in sharp or dense chakra depending on the usseage he wants to give them obviously including wind chakra aswell to increase the cutting power and control over the leafs,, becoming more like sharp small blades and not leafs, he them is able to freely manipulate them in waves of thousands of petals, depending on the amount of leafs the user can gather them together and compress them, giving them a single solid form with great strength and such. While the blades are supposedly too small to be seen normally, they reflect light in such a way as to appear as cherry blossom petals due to the extra type of chakra added by the user. The user can control the "blades" at will, allowing him to shred opponents at a distance and break through many defenses within reason. The blades are also used for defensive purposes, as they can even protect the user from an incoming sword swing, kunais, shurikens, and other regular ninja weapons. A master of this fighting style is allowed to carry a gourd full of petals already coated in his chakra, allowing him to use them, without the need of controlling the leafs of trees nearby by.

    Skill levels of the style:

    Creator (created the style, Dominates it)
    ^
    Master (knows Senbonzakura and advanced techniques)
    ^
    User (someone who knows basic techniques)
    ^
    Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)

    Examples:

    (Senbonzakura: Chire) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Scatter
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will take control of a thousand petals and scatter them across the field, maknig it look like a pink ground is what they are on top of.
    • Must have several trees nearby by or carrying the user's petal gourd.

    (Senbonzakura: Senkei) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: Annihilate
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user unites the scattered petals into complete glowing swords, numbering in the thousands, that form four rows. These rows float just above the other, and circle around the user and his opponent in a continuously moving, column-like array. It abandons defense in favor of a concentrated offense. Though visually menacing, this form is not meant for attack from all sides; rather, it is to concentrate his power into fewer blades, thus increasing his attack power. While the suer can control these swords, he commonly calls them to his hands for actual melee combat. When in his hand, they lose their glow, and take the form of a katana. While they seem solid in this state, the swords can just as easily dissipate back into the multitude of tiny blades that they are made up of. It seems to take fewer blows from a Senkei blade to gravely injure an opponent than the multiple cuts needed. The Senkei also cages himself with his enemy, allowing neither combatant to move very far from each other, though the area is still large enough for maneuverability. The most effective use of the Senkei form is that it allows for use of all the swords at the same attack level, making it highly versatile as a way to effectively defeat an enemy unaware of the danger of the situation.
    • May only be used 2 times per match.


    (Senbonzakura: Hakuteiken) - Thousand Cherry Blossoms: White Emperor Sword
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Description: This condenses each and every single one of his "blades" into a single, potent sword, drastically increasing its cutting power. The chakra and pressure of this form released is immense. The blade appears bright white and its aura takes the form of a bird, earning it the name Hakuteiken ("White Emperor Sword"). Pure white wings form on the user's back, as well as a halo-like circle, made of concentrated petals. The blade in this form is dangerous enough to cause aggravated injuries in one single blow. The wings are capable of being used for flight, the user can either only create the wings or only the sword, or both if wanted.
    • May only be used 3 times per match.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • Can only be used if there are trees around the field, or if the user carries his petal gourd.
    • Must have mastery over Ninjutsu. (Due to the need of extreme chakra control)
    • Only Loki may teach Senbonzakura.
    • Must complete 2 training sessions to be an Apprentice.
    • Must complete 3 training sessions to be a User.
    • Must complete 5 training sessions to be a Master.
    • Must be atleast Sannin rank to start basic training.
    • An apprentice can only learn up to C rank.
    • A user can only learn up to B rank.
    • A master can learn up to S rank.
    • Only the Creator can use F rank techinques.
    • Mastery over Wind release is required.

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    Perhaps its just me but these last 3 submissions are basically the same worded differently and there is a quoting issue. Please clarify who is the submitter of this CFS, who actually made it and such. I mean, 3 sequenced CFS with tremendous similarities? Whats up with that? Go, talk to eachother and clarify this please.
     
         
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    Konohagakure Ryu | Hidden Leaf Style

    Type: Other
    Background: This fighting style was formed long ago, by a ninja in the hidden leaf called Amon, this fighting style was formed in the birth of Konohagakure which was formed by the efforts of both Uchiha Madara and Hashirama, a short amount of time after the initiation of Konohagakure, peace was found in Konoha but only for a short time. Amon was originally a ninja monk, who made a lot of meditating sessions in the forest, after the peace has ended and Amon needed to defend himself against the Uchiha clan's rage, Amon formed this style as a form of defense, however it was used just as effectively in offence as it was used in defense.

    This style pertains to literally using the fallen leaves of trees, given that Amon didn't have the elemental chakra knowledge and only had to rely onto his raw chakra manipulation alone, spending as much time in the forest led him to come up with this style, however as times passed and the recent ages of Konohagakure came to exist, Konohagakure ninja who were passed this style, developed it even more, by the usage of their elemental chakra infusions, and fuinjutsu skills.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The hidden leaf style is simply the art of manipulating the fallen leaves of trees, normally this fighting style wouldn't work in case the user wasn't in a forest with a lot of trees around him to utilize it's leaves, however as the times have passed and ninja who had this style knew about fuinjutsu, they kept a massive amount of leaves stored within fuinjutsu seals they have marked their bodies with, as means of summoning the leaves to the battlefield and utilizing it in combat, making the earlier restriction of being in a forest no more and making this style even effective.

    The ninja who uses this style, the core usage of the style is to harden to leaves, in order to have a destructive power, up to the point where one leaf was as hard as a standard ninja kunai, however this is only a base of how this style used. Using the raw chakra manipulation, the ninja can levitate trees with their chakra alone, like how Orochimaru does with his Kusanagi blade, this feat gave the ninja the ability to manipulate the leave's movement according to his will "By utilizing specific techniques in order to do so", this is the raw chakra version, another advantage of fuinjutsu, is that when the ninjas stored leaves into a scroll, the mass of leaves was said to be endless, and contained the ninjas own chakra infused to them, having them able to manipulate it using mental commands via chakra.

    Like it was said previously, as this style was taught to a ninja who had skills of elemental chakra manipulation, he combined his elemental chakra with the leaves, coating the leaves in the specific elemental release, for example, if the ninja infused the leaves with wind chakra, the leaves would become super thin and sharp, allowing it to cut through even standard metallic objects with ease, if infused with Earth chakra, the leaves would harden even more and it's weight would increase, allowing it to be blunt, not exactly able to cut through anything, but a mass of leaves infused with earth chakra would pack a punch, delivering blunt physical damage to the target and so on, ofcourse this pertains to the 5 basic elemental natures of Earth, Fire, Lightning, Water and Wind, however, in any case, whether the leaves are infused with elemental chakra or raw chakra, the leaves utilized are as hard as steel. The following is what each specific elemental nature gives the leaves.

    Wind Release: When the leaves are infused with wind release chakra, they become super thin and sharp, causing the leaves to have the ability to cut through even standard metallic objects, or basically targets that comes in contact with the leaves within reason.

    Earth Release: When leaves are infused with earth release chakra, they become blunt and can't cut through objects unlike Wind Release infused leaves, instead of granted the cutting ability, the leaves increase in physical mass, each leaf would even would weight as much as a standard Fuma shuriken, without it's cutting ability though.

    Fire Release: When the leaves are infused with fire release chakra, the leaves are coated with a fire aura around them, being capable of burning anything that comes in contact with the leaves, there's however a layer of chakra that prevents the fire from literally reaching the leaf so it doesn't catch on fire, but simply is coated with fire.

    Water Release: When the leaves are infused with water release chakra, they become surrounded with water, however unlike fire release, there isn't a layer of chakra that prevents the water from soaking the leave, when leaves are infused with this type of chakra, they look like if they are rain droplets, albeit bigger in size than a rain drop.

    Lightning Release: When the leaves are infused with lightning release chakra, the leaves are granted a glowing ability, normally the leaves are green, but when infused with lightning chakra they have a very bright white glow with lightning energy around it, which blinds the eyes of the opponent if a large mass of leaves was used, giving an effect similar to the "Lightning Release: Illusion Flash Of The Lightning Pillar", in addition to the glowing ability, the leaves are capable of numbing the area they cut, or even shocking the target if it made contact with the leaves.

    Example Techniques:

    (Konohagakure Ryu: Rinse Kado) – Hidden Leaf Style: Vortex Of Nature
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60 (+10 If infused with elemental chakra)
    Description: The user summons a mass amount of leaves in front of them, initially coming out of a hidden Kanji formula on the back of the user's hand, releasing a burst of leaves in a clockwise spiraling motion, the spinning of leaves is so intense that it forms a large horizontal vortex on the user's command via chakra, this vortex can be used in two ways, one that the user sends the vortex of leaves towards the opponent, if the opponent is caught within the leaves vortex, he is constantly cut by the leaves due to them being as hard as steel, but with every elemental nature manipulation the effect varies, if infused with fire chakra, the vortex will become a blazing inferno that burns the opponent, water chakra will make the vortex consist of water and soak the opponent or crush him due to the water's weight, earth chakra will cause the leaves to increase in mass and deliver blunt damage to the opponent, lightning chakra would cause the vortex to turn into that of a lightning, shocking the opponent in addition to blinding him. Another usage of this technique can be applied, which is that the user manipulates the leaves around him, forming a vortex of leaves around the user himself and instead of using the technique for offensive purposes, he uses it as means of defense, also has varied effects according to the elemental chakra infused with the leaves, the user is also capable of using raw chakra alone.
    Note: Can only be used three times per battle.
    Note: No Hidden Leaf Style techniques in the same turn.

    (Konohagakure Ryu: Hachikara) – Hidden Leaf Style: Leaf Enhanced Strength
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: B
    Rang: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20 (+10 per turn to keep active)
    Damage Points: N/A (+20 to Taijutsu techniques)
    Description: The user summons a mass of chakra enhanced leaves from two scrolls that are each located onto the palms of the user, manipulating the leaves to surround his whole body, and whenever the user utilizes a Taijutsu technique, the user mentally commands the leaves to surround the attacking or defending limb of the user, increasing the damage of impact that the user delivers to the opponent, and adding an extra effect to the user's punches and kicks, according to the type of elemental chakra infused, if lightning chakra is infused into the leaves, the user's strikes will numb the area it hits and deliver small shocking damage but not enough for the opponent to be paralyzed, wind chakra will cause the user's strikes to have a slicing damage to them, slicing through the area they hit, fire chakra would make the user's strikes have a burning effect, burning the targets the user hits on contact, earth chakra will increase the mass of the leaves causing the user's punches to inflict even more damage, equivalent to shatter human bones. This technique however cannot be used with the addition of water chakra or raw chakra, the user has to infuse the leaves with Wind, Lightning or Earth chakra, otherwise the technique wouldn't be applicable.
    Note: Can only be used once
    Note: Lasts 5 turns once used.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • The user must have an accurate chakra manipulation, so they must be at least of Kage rank.
    • The user must know Fuinjutsu, due to the leaves having to be released through Kanji formulas or scrolls.
    • No physical advantages are gained through the manipulation of the leaves, but the chakra manipulation abilities of the user increases, making him capable of utilizing raw chakra techniques faster than normal.


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    This is too similar to the above style Loki submitted. You use the same basic concept of using leaves as weapons. His appear god knows from where and yours appear from sealings so its enough to make 2 different CFS but since it was reported as similar, it can only be done if he agrees upon it.
     
         
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    Oversoul : - Tairei

    Type:
    NinTaijutsu

    Background:
    The style was created by a little girl who was born from a mother and father that came from prestigious Taijutsu and Ninjutsu backgrounds. The girl was constantly pressured to excel in aspects of close and mid to long ranged fighting. However she was engrossed and obsessed with her countless stuffed toys and clothes, often forsaking practice to carry out her hobby. Eventually the pressure from her parents became unbearable, and in desperation she sought solace in her addiction. It was then that she thought of imbuing her clothes with chakra. By doing so she managed to create a style that allowed the user to warp and manipulate their clothing to their liking, such an ability made the girl exceptional at close combat, and rather adept at mid range combat. However she had yet to live up to her parents expectations. Thus she decided to experiment with imbuing chakra within her stuffed toys, and upon succeeding she realised that her style was complete. She had successfully created a way to dominate in both close, mid and long range combat while not having to physically overexert herself. Many years later, she came across three male Shinobi who were in search of a man Hiruko. They had heard of his ability to manipulate bandages, and sought to make it their own. However upon seeing the girls abilities they sought to learn from her instead, and thus the style was passed on.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The style itself remains to be fairly ninjutsu orientated, revolving around the concept of manipulating cloth. By doing so not only would the user be capable of manipulating their own clothes. Whether it be a patch of cloth or individual strings, but would also allow the user to animate and utilize stuffed toys or sack toys for offensive purposes.

    The basis of cloth manipulation would involve utilizing chakra to move the cloth, while also using the chakra to enhance and empower the cloths basic abilities. Advanced users of this style would be capable of passively manipulating basic cloth such as string or sleeve ends to a minor extent, mainly for strengthening and movement controlling purposes; although reinforcement, strength and speed would never exceed that of basic ninja weapons such as Kunai or ninja wire.

    However cloth manipulation can be taken a step further through utilization of elemental chakra. Elemental chakra would allow the cloth to assume certain properties, for instance water chakra could be used to drench cloth, making it more resistant to being ignited, and adding mass so as to make the force of the attacks heavier. Fire chakra could possibly be utilized to heat a cloth, perhaps to sterilize it, or maybe to scald the skin of a ensnared opponent. Lightning could be utilized to strengthen the overall cutting and piercing abilities, as could wind. Earth chakra could be utilized to enforce the physical durability of the cloth, or perhaps make them taut and hard. While elemental infusions can be done in a free form manner, as with basic weapons, the effects achieved would be rather minor. For instance a free form water chakra drenched cloth, would be incapable of resisting chakra infused flames. However jutsu techniques can take infusions to a new, powerfully advanced level, that would allow for effective combat against Ninjutsu.


    The animation of stuffed toys would be a rather unique process. In a way it could be perceived as similar to the Shadow clone technique, but would likely be much more akin to Sai’s Ink Ninjutsu. By channeling chakra into a teddy or sack puppet, or any stuffed toy for that matter, the user would be capable of animating the toy. Granting it basic sentience, and usually a savage and violent persona. While the toy would more or less have the ability to attack and defend of its own volition, orders can be transferred via a chakra link. Animation of puppets can lead to various effects, sometimes the initial animation may result in size expansion, resulting in human sized, or perhaps summon sized toys. While the features of the stuffed toy may have effects on its usefulness and abilities, for instance a cheetah shaped stuffed animal may be exceptionally fast. The user would also be capable of creating a puppet with wanted effects on the spot, although this would require the necessary materials and would likely need to be done manually, but they can also carry around preprepared toys. Stuffed toys generally attack with their physical traits, eg a human sack puppet would use freeform Taijutsu or perhaps weapon play should they have a weapon. However they can also manipulate their bodies for offensive purposes, such as attacking with threading, stitches and filling. Naturally, animating a truly offensively viable toy would count as a jutsu, and would require the suitable technique to do so. However the user is capable of applying basic movement to small teddies, they would never have any particularly offensive abilities, they would not change in size, but could be useful in surveillance or mundane tasks, such as scattering explosive tags.

    Example Techniques:

    (Tairei: Sode Hórudo ) - Oversoul: Sleeve Hold
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Sleeve hold is a jutsu which requires the user to simply focus his chakra in the clothing near his arms and manipulate it so that it suddenly extends outwards, towards the opponent, aiming to trap them completely as it forms into two snake like ‘monsters’, with the front of the sleeve used as if it were a mouth, allowing the clothing to swallow the opponent whole, whilst constricting their body, causing them to slowly suffocate as well as preventing any movement. The sleeves could be channeled with elemental chakra so that they have a distinct edge to them, as they perform their tasks.

    (Tairei: Kakushiken’ Oninotsume ) - Oversoul: Hidden Blade
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Hidden blade is a simple jutsu which allows the user to add chakra to his clothing and/or any other cloth in his possession and manipulate it so that they become sharpened, allowing the user to create swords, kunais and any other weapon he/she could imagine out of simple clothing. This can be used to create sharp spikes out of the users whole body (all parts covered by clothes), or it could be used to allow the sleeves to extend and form into two Katanas, axes (weapons in general), allowing a lot of flexibility.

    (Tairei: Sózó no Okurimono) - Oversoul: Gift of Creation
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Gift of Creation, a technique which allows the user to make simple ‘toys’ turn into savage beasts of death. This jutsu requires the user to channel his chakra into a stuffed toy, animating the toy and giving it a basic sentience required for attacking or perhaps defending purposes. Upon animation, the toy may expand, depending on the users wishes of course, their expansion allowing them to even rival boss summons in size. These stuffed toys are capable of attacking with their basic attributes, whether it be unleashing strings to bind the opponent, firing balls of filling, launching stitching towards the opponent, or attacking with their physical traits. The type of stuffed toy may have an effect on its usefulness, for instance cheetah shaped stuffed animals would be rather fast, while Gorilla shaped ones would possess uncanny brute strength.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    - Requires mastery of Ninjutsu.
    - Users of this style generally have increased dexterity due to their work with needles, stitching, strings, and other fiddly things.
    - All users of this style are capable of creating a stuffed toy within moments if they have the raw required materials, this generally showcases their master craftsmanship; although more complicated or intricate stuffed toys may require more time for creation.
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    Problem with this is that we've seen that cloth ninjutsu is used by Sunagakure ninjas. This would be possible but you'd need to have a bio that can use it.
     
         
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    isamashii toku : (valiant shield)
    Type: nin/taijutsu
    Background:
    The user carrying a round shield which can be any color was made out of an asteroid metal which is indestructible that touched down on the ground. The shield were painted in numerous color schemes but the shield always attained the same shape round diameter of about 3.5 feet in diameter. These shields also had a concave like shape to them giving off the shape of that of a wok for cooking with. The Inside or backside of the shield is a thick leather strap used for wielding the shield and for carrying the shield either on the users arm or back. The shield itself is made from an asteroid metal and is indestructible and extremely lightweight making running with it a breeze.
    shown carrying on the user's back from the hand straps around your shoulders
    http://i492.photobucket.com/albums/r...ricamarvel.jpg


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    So this fightng style requires the user to be carrying this particular round shield mentioned in the background info. Now the way or purpose of this style is to not only defend but to use e shield as offensive style as well. The user can throw the shield and it will spin rapidly to his or her target. Or the user can use. In close combat to attack and defend blows in manners of blocking kicks punch's and or thrusting the shield into the enemy. This shield art of fighting will have plenty of defensive type stances to block attacks and your usual offensive descriptions but with a shield making e impact a little harder then regular blow's. the attacking portion of the shield taijutsu is basically like thrusting the shield through the enemy either lifting them up into the air, or knocking them down or backwards with force. Shield defense from elemental attacks will be as follows fire,water,wind,earth,lightning will all be able to defend against projectile type attacks up to B rank and will either simply block the attack or redirect the attacks.

    Now a special way of throwing this shield requires chakra a string of chakra to be precise similar to that of puppet user's but works in only one way. This one way is that when attached to the shield you can tug on the chakra string directing the shield back to the user. This effect has no way in directing the shield's forward movements like that of a puppet but rather it simply controls the shield to revert back to the user. Another note is that the chakra line used to bring the shield back to the user can easily be seen so mid range attack's of throwing the shield can be dangerous as to the enemy being able to cut the chakra line for retracting the shield back to the user. Now using a slight bit of wind chakra can help propel the shield faster cutting the the air as you know on a windy day the shield would require immense force to hit someone while swinging against the wind or running with it against the wind. Thus utilizing wind in the slightest way will help propel swinging the shield and or hitting an enemy and causing more damage.
    By utilizing the elements into the shield you can cancel out a degree of attacks for example an enemy uses fire to attack I simply channel Suiton chakra into the shield to forcefully cancel the attack or redirect the attack. Another example would be utilizing wind chakra to block against a lightning attack it will work in the elements natural order of power. This being said to properly wield and defend against elements properly one must have mastery over all the basic five elements thus enabling quick enough reaction to channel the proper defending element into the shield.
    Example Techniques:



    Usage Examples :

    (isamashii toku :vicarious toku suro ) - Vicarious shield throw
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short -mid range
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description:
    The user first attaching a light chakra string to the shield will throw the shield in a discuss type manner at the enemy. The shield may redirect off any number of surrounding objects such as tree's building walls, and or rocks. The shield once hitting the enemy or at it's limit of reach will revert back to the user from a chakra string pull. Redirecting the shield off of other objects is a good way to keep the enemy guessing as to where e attack will come from as well.

    Restrictions: can only be used 4 times during battle
    : Can be used by avenger class and hero class shinobi.
    Must have special made round shield.
    Can only be taught by juha
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    ( isamashii toku : triumphant toku tsuppari) -triumphant shield thrust
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:
    The user while in close taijutsu range of the enemy does a small downward crouch and pops back up channels wind chakra into the shield thrusting the shield upwards and lunging into the air. While hitting the enemy the lunge lifts the enemy higher then a normal attack of launching the enemy into the air for an immediate follow up attack. The wind with the shield helps propel the enemy higher into the air especially if the enemy is blocking.

    Restrictions: can only be used three times per battle.
    : Can be used by avenger class and hero class shinobi.
    Can only be taught by juha



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    ( isamashii toku : toku feisu sumashuu ) shield face smash
    Type: Offensive
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description:
    The user having there shield on there left arm while blocking a hit from the enemy, the user then swings their left arm with wind chakra channeled to the shield from the center defense stance to the left while extending there arm forward while swinging. This enables the user to block an attack and counter quickly with an outward swing of the shield to the enemy's face.

    Restrictions:usable three times per battle.
    : can be used by avenger class and hero class shinobi.
    Can only be taught by juha

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    isamashii toku: soshi toku benso( elemental shield defense )
    Rank: S Rank
    Type: supplementary/defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description:
    The user wielding there shield for defensive purposes against oncoming elemental attacks will utilize elemental chakra into there shield to defend against the oncoming attack. Regular elemental weaknesses and strengths apply's to this defensive capability. So if the enemy is using fire the shield can be manipulated with Suiton chakra to block the fire attack. Should the enemy be using lightning the user can use wind chakra with his shield to block against the lightning attack. This form of blocking controls a thick condensed layer of that element onto the front of the shield to defend with, being that this is a S rank technique you can block up to A rank projectile type element attacks using this form.

    Restrictions: can only defend this way twice per turn
    : No S rank shield techniques in the next turn may be used.
    : can only be used by avenger level shield user's.
    : can only be taught by juha.

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    Avenger class: only avenger class shinobi can utilizes all the ability's and jutsu's of the valiant shield arts.

    Hero class: hero class can only use the regular taijutsu type attacks of the valiant shield arts.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Must have a shield on your bio.
    -mastery of the basic five elements.
    -Must be training or trained in taijutsu/ninjutsu.
    -Must have mastered wind and have good chakra control.
    -The shield is lightweight metal from an asteroid which feel from the sky so the weight of the shield will be maybe 5 ounces but will retain unbreakable resistance.

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    Do you have the shield as a custom weapon? If so link me to it in the resubmission, if not make it and get it approved. You cannot make this without a custom weapon, the shield you mention, made into a CW and approved. CFS is not to approve weapons.
     
         
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    Gyouza Genkotsu - Gyoza Fist
    Type: GenTaijutsu
    Background: Gyoza fist is a fighting style created by the Genjutsu elders in order enhance their genjutsu abilities, however they couldn't create it by only themselves as they couldn't find a tool which was required for the use of the fighting style so they kept the fighting style pending till they figure out a solution. This lasted for like 3 years, 3 years without find any possible way to complete the fighting style, and because the fact that this fighting style was a top secret project that only the elders of the genjutsu in Konohagakure knew about, the elders couldn't ask for help because it was dangerous to ask anyone other than the high trusted genjutsu masters. And because the genjutsu elders have lots of things to care about, they assigned one of them to find a solution and find the right "tool" for this fighting style, this elder was called Fon, and in fact this person wasn't a he, it was a She, and it wasn't usual to have a woman amongest a council of elders, specially a young woman, but Fon was so skilled that they couldn't resist letting her join. Once Fon was walking in the Forest that is right outside Konohagakure trying to find a solution, she kept walking and breathing the fresh air for like half an hour meanwhile looking around her, trying to get inspired by something in the nature till she heard some sort of a noise and because she was a person that is very curious she couldn't resist heading towards the source of the sound. As she reached the source of the sound, she found a leaf shinobi that had the armor of the Akimichi clan practicing. For her it was a usual scene which she got used to it, however she decided to wait for a little bit maybe that Akimichi member would inspire her, which he really did eventually. Meanwhile watching him practicing, she found him taking several colored pills that had different colors, that wasn't such an important thing either as the Akimichi clan is famous for it's pills that helps them getting bigger, that was in fact it is Hidden Ability. But for Fon case it was very important because it is in fact guided her to the "tool" she, and all the other genjutsu elders were searching for. It wasn't a tool nor was it a pill or any thing of that sort. It was in fact Gyoza. A special type of food. It wasn't the Gyoza itself that was the tool, but in fact the amount of garlic is have. And the fact that they couldn't only use garlic because of it is taste and it is small size they decided to use the Gyoza. And so, Fon came back to the elders that day and told them about her idea and they managed to finish the fighting style eventually, and Fon was promoted to be the head of the Genjutsu elders in Konohagakure.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Gyoza fist is a fighting style that is made by a combination of there things, Martial Arts, Genjutsu and of course, Gyoza dumpling. By eating the Gyoza dumpling which possess a great amount of garlic, the user would produce sweat, the sweat then would be manipulated by the martial arts style. The user through using any shape of martial art that depends on the hands (like punching or just standing on a regular fighting stance which is to depend on the technique used.) would produce the sweat towards any specific thing, in any specific shape that is to depend on the technique, but this sweat isn't any regular sweat, it is sweat that possess chakra which the user would focus in as he is releasing it. Which leads us to the third and final part of the Fighting style, the genjutsu. By releasing the sweat towards any victim (Animal/Human or anything could smell) the user would cast a genjutsu on the victim which is to depend on the genjutsu technique.

    Example Techniques:

    [Gyouza Genkotsu: Hando no Fumeiyo] - Gyoza Fist: Hands of Shame
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: This is the most basic technique amongest the whole style. First off, the user would have some of the Gyoza dumpling which he would follow up by standing in any basic fighting stance, the user would produce sweat meanwhile putting chakra in it, after doing so, the user is to send the sweat towards his victim(s) through any basic punch or simply standing on his fighting stance. After doing so the user would manipulate the sweat through the use of his own chakra within it, turning it's shape into any amount of hands made from the sweat smell which the user would use to attack any amount of victims he would like to attack. However, the hands are to not inflict any damage to the victims, it is nothing but a tool in order to cast genjutsu on these victims.
    - Can only use it to cast B-ranked genjutsu techniques and below


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    Additional effects:

    - Because the Gyoza fist uses the smell of the sweat in order to cast genjutsu on the user, the range of techniques are to extend to Long range.
    - Any animal/human that possess inhumanly ability to smell such as inuzukas, any casted genjutsu on them would get +1 rank higher so any C-ranked Genjutsu would become B-ranked genjutsu, etc..
    - Because the fact that the smell is to spread around and not to stand on a specific location, a genjutsu that can only be used on one victim could be used on more victims as long as they are like 5 meters close to each other
    - Because the fact that the Gyoza fist is nothing but a tool to cast genjutsu, when using a Gyazo fist technique in order to cast a genjutsu, there will be no need to use the genjutsu technique as the Gyazo fist technique is already a way to cast the genjutsu, only the user has to do is to state which genjutsu he is using through the Gyazo fist technique ( e.g would be me using the basic Gyazo fist technique stated above in order to cast "(Genjutsu: Jigoku Gouka ) - Illusion Technique: Hell Fire" I won't have to use the technique only thing I would have to do is to state which technique I would use with this Gyazo fist technique.
    - Because the fact that Gyazo fist is all about smelling the sweat, any genjutsu technique will have +1 range extended, so any short ranged genjutsu would be Mid ranged genjutsu and so on.
    - Because the fact that the smell won't go away instantly, the victim(s) will have to get rid of the smell before getting rid of the sweat around them before releasing themselves from the genjutsu or else they would get in the genjutsu again as they release themselves out of it, however the smell would only last one full turn.

    Restrictions:
    - Requires mastery over Genjutsu for 3 months minimum
    - Require mastery over basic Taijutsu
    - Requires to have the Gyoza dumpling mentioned on the bio
    - The rank of genjutsu technique depends on the Gyazo fist technique (e.g the basic technique stated above is B-ranked technique which means you can only cast B-ranked and below Genjutsu techniques and so on)

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    (Xingyiquan) Heart & Mind, Five Harmonies

    Type: Sennintaijutsu
    Background: The exact origin of xingyiquan is unknown. The earliest written records of it can be traced back to the times of the Sage of Six Paths during an age of endless wars. Legends, credit the creation of xingyiquan to the Elder Son of the Sage of Six Paths, as a way to manipulate willpower and the life around him. This is however simply myths and legends passed down through time no actual proof of this exists. Scrolls with the teachings of Xingyiquan have been found, but no names were left and no official accreditation have been made. Xingyiquan deals with emotions, and the channeling of them into strength through motivation. If one can channel anger, guilt, remorse or fear into motivation instead of a hindrance he can use that to better himself physically and emotionally.

    "Let it go, it is not a sin to fight for the right cause. There are those who words alone can not reach. I know how you feel, you are gentle you do not like to hurt. I know because I too know these feelings but it is because you cherish life that you must protect it. Drop your restraints you have the strength, everyone does... just let it go."

    A few dozen of the scrolls have fallen into the hands of a member of the Valentine Clan, Yasutora Sado. He has applied their teachings to the use of Natural Energy making the style his own and applying various elements and intricate mechanics to them increasing the strength of the style as a whole. Over time he has created a style without a definite style, a way to manipulate the Natural Energy that regulates around him at all times mixing it with a hard martial arts that can be taught to anyone who can absorb Natural Energy.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The style revolves around meditation and the channeling of severe emotions such as anger into power Xingyiquan features aggressive shocking attacks and direct footwork trying to obliterate the foe before he has a chance to fight back is a core principle to the style. Despite its hard, angular appearance, cultivating "soft" internal strength, is important, it allows for the style to create crippling internal damage to the foe. Xingyiquan incorporates the use of Natural Energy and the ability to create an unseen 'aura' like that used in Frog Kata but instead of simply using the aura to extend one's reach and increase their strength it's used to augment the blows allowing for cutting, piercing, thrashing or even explosive impacts as well as transference of damage deeper into the more fragile parts of the body.
    The goal of the Xingyiquan exponent is to reach the opponent quickly and drive powerfully through them in a single powerful burst this is achieved by coordinating one's body as a single unit and the intense focusing of the Natural Energy that the user absorbs and then manipulates.
    Efficiency and economy of movement are the qualities of a Xingyiquan stylist and its direct fighting philosophy advocates simultaneous attack and defense. There are few kicks except for extremely low foot kicks (which avoids the hazards of balance involved with higher kicks) and some mid-level kicks, and techniques are prized for their working within key principles rather than aesthetic value. Xingyiquan favors a high stance called Sāntǐshì literally "three bodies power," referring to how the stance holds the head, torso and feet along the same vertical plane. It is a relaxed position, allowing for fast movement, and deals with not being overly tense. A common saying of Xingyiquan is that "the hands do not leave the heart and the elbows do not leave the ribs."

    Xingyiquan uses the five classical Chinese elements to metaphorically represent five different styles of combat. Also called the "Five Fists" or "Five Phases," the Five Elements are related to Taoist cosmology although the names do not literally correspond to the cosmological terms. These styles are used to augment the damage created by taijutsu movements, this is done by altering the aura giving it a different nature, instead of blunt force trauma it pierces or creates almost an explosive nature.

    Metal - Chopping: Like an axe chopping up and over.
    Water - Drilling: Drilling forward horizontally like a geyser.
    Wood - Crushing: Arrows constantly exploding forward.
    Fire - Exploding: Exploding outward like a cannon while blocking.
    Earth - Crossing: Crossing across the line of attack while turning over.

    Each element is a way to alter the aura, giving it a different nature. Sharpening it like an axe, causing it to create drill like motions, firing repetitive concussive shots that explode and pierce almost like arrows. Billowing outward and exploding like a cannon and even passing through the point of contact hitting deep into the opponent's body instead of at the point of contact.

    Being a weaponless art, Sado needed a way for Xingyiquan to stand up against those with weapons and from this need a branch of Xingyiquan something not found in the scrolls arose. It was the ability to create weapons from 'nothingness' these weren't real weapons with form and shape but instead a manipulation of the Natural Energy aura that surrounded him. He trained to learn how to extend and sharpen the aura creating sword like strikes that could defend against swords and had cutting properties just like a blade and he trained on how to dull the aura to create hammer-like strikes with severe blunt-force trauma. Deeming it Mutōryū "Swordless Style", it became almost impossible to use some of the other techniques without understanding the principles behind this, the ability to completely control Natural Energy.

    Example Techniques:

    (Uraate) - Backing
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: N/A (+30 to another jutsu if used in combination)
    Description: Uraate is a fulcrum-based transference skill; an example of Natural Energy transmission that teaches one to shift the point and force of impact by striking the dead center of a medium. At expert-levels, a practitioner can transmit the force of impact wherever they please, as long as a medium (air, water, solid earth or even the human body) exists to transmit the Natural Energy through. This technique forms the basis for most techniques used throughout the style. This can be used in combination of punches, palm strikes or even kicks. It causes fairly reasonable damage, about the same as the punches or kicks used by the user but causes it internally on the weaker parts of the body. Hitting internal organs directly causing bleeding and even deterioration of the organs therein is the basic principle of this technique.
    Notes:
    -If used by itself it simply does 30 damage points
    -Has a one turn CD meaning it can be used only every other turn

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    (Mutōryū) - Swordless Style
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: N/A
    Damage: 60
    Description: Mutōryū, is the ability to sharpen, dull and all around manipulate the Natural Energy that makes up the aura surrounding the user. This can be used to defend against weapon strikes, and even create slashing and piercing attacks. It can be sharp like an arrow, and long and flexible like a sword or dull, strong and unwavering like a hammer. With a stabbing or punching motion the aura can be extended to long range creating piercing damage or even extending the range of a simple punch. An example of using this technique would be the user dulling the area around his finger and using the aura to defend against sword strikes, or sharping the aura significantly and stabbing that finger into an opponent to puncture through the muscle and flesh, directly striking the internal organs, with piercing like blows. Dependent on it's use this technique can cause significant damage but usually isn't deadly by itself.
    Notes:
    -Must wait one turn before using again
    -Can defend against freeform, and A rank and below Tai and Ken, as well as various other weapon strikes A rank and below

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    (Hakka Soudoushou) - Double Pulsating Palms
    Type: Attack
    Rank: S
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: A move that uses the palms to transfer momentum and chakra from the fighter to the opponent in one fierce action, normally yielding incredible force. The chakra causes immediate damage such as cracking of the sternum fracturing of the ribs as well as blunt force trauma to the internal organs. However the manipulation of the Natural Energy produces a drilling effect almost like a horizontal geyser shooting out a powerful explosive rotational force. Enough to send an opponent flying backwards and causing significant internal damage like tearing and bruising of organs almost crippling the opponent. Used in mid-range there is no immediate damage caused by the transfer of chakra therefor the opponent is only thrown back with enough force to send him flying, it can still cause significant damage but it's simply exterior damage like lacerations and breaking of the ribs not deep internal damage.
    -Can only be used thrice per battle

    Appearance: [X]


    Additional effects and Restrictions:


    -Users of the style are slightly faster and stronger then a normal strong fist master
    -Due to the Natural Energy 'aura' the user is resistant to B rank and below taijutsu techniques taking half the damage for each. So B ranks are toned back to C ranks, C ranks are toned down to D ranks and D ranks become almost nothing.
    -The user is able to manipulate the Natural Energy he or she absorbs allowing him to create an aura that surrounds him and manipulate the aura freely allowing a simple punch to cause varying effects and the blocking of freeform weapon strikes
    -The Natural Energy can only be seen or sensed by someone who has trained with it thus only those who have trained with Natural Energy can use this style

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    Have you got Sage Mode? Also, no passive taijutsu resistance, remove the can only be seen by those with trainined in natural energy... that alone makes it very oped. It has to be something visible and clearly "blockable". Also, you need, for this to work, to explain specifically how this can be different from a Frog Kata because the core rp application of it is the same. Also, it needs a clear restriction that it can only be used by Sage Mode bios.
     
         
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    (Busoshoku Ken) - Armaments Fist
    Type: NinTaijutsu
    Background: Ieyasu Tokugawa was a taijutsu enthusiast who loved to utilize his Akimichi clan techniques in battle. During the course of many spars he realized that every time he expanded his limbs in order to hit the opponent he would risk losing those limbs for the remainder of battle due to a dangerous technique landing in the opponents counter. He was thankful that it was just spars, but he knew that if it were real battle he might end up limbless one day. So in response he created a fighting style that would protect his limbs being expanded while enhancing his clans technique in a way only unique to this style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The main jutsu this CFS is based upon is called Armament. Similar to Earth Spear technique, Armament is a jutsu that allows the user via earth chakra to create a thin flexible coating of dense earth around the desired limb changing it to a darker appearance. Unlike Earth Spear technique Armament sits and covers the skin instead of actually changing its composition which would need a constant chakra feed. After applying the Armament technique to the desired limb the Akimichi user will then utilize their special chakra to use either Super or Partial Expansion in order to expand that limb, and the Armament coating with it, delivering ranged powerful strike. While the users limb is coated it will gain equal strength Water, Earth, and dense natured techniques while being able to break through dense less elements like fire, wind, and raw chakra with ease. Being that it is an earth armor this still leaves the users limb vulnerable to lightning based techniques and it is only good for one strike.

    Example Techniques


    {Busoshoku Ken: Bōchō akkusu} Armaments Fist: Expansion Axe
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: While Partial Expansion is activated the user will create an Armament coating around one of their leg changing its appearance to a darker shade. The user will then perform a forwards somersault into an axe kick in the direction of the opponent while adding partial expansion to that leg in order to increase its size, weight, and reach while the Armament leg is at its peak position so when the user start to bring that 3m extended leg down they can deliver a devastating heel kick to the top of the opponents skull.

    {Busoshoku Ken: Bōchō dangan} Armaments Fist: Expansion Bullet
    Type: Attack
    Rank: C
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: 30
    Description: While Partial Expansion is activated the user will create an Armament coating around one of their arm changing its appearance to a darker shade. The user will then crank that Armament hand backwards and then throw it towards the opponent while adding Partial Expansion to it, increasing the fist size while extending the arm 3m forwards, allowing the user to deliver a high speed punch to the opponent.

    {Busoshoku Ken: Chō Bōchō akkusu} Armaments Fist: Super Expansion Axe
    Type: Attack
    Rank: B
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: While Super-Partial Expansion is activated the user will create an Armament coating around one of their leg changing its appearance to a darker shade. The user will then jump and perform a front flip into an axe kick in the direction of the opponent while adding partial expansion to that leg in order to increase its size to, weight, and reach while the Armament leg is at its peak position so when the user start to bring that giant 7m extended leg down they can deliver a devastating heel kick on top of the opponent in front of them.


    Additional effects and Restrictions
    -Requires Mastery of Earth, and Akimichi techniques
    -Specialists of this style is stronger and has a greater balance over a strong fist master.

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    Electric Phantom Fist | Raiyokaiken
    Type: NinTaiGenjutsu
    Background:
    This style was developed to counter the usage of the "Kai" technique. The woman who created it was called Medusa. Medusa felt the need to give back to the ninja world. Whether it be for good or evil, she wanted to give back anyhow. She spent years studying the human body and how it works, but one thing that interested her the most and caught her eye was the function and workings of the nervous system. On live animals, she tested the relationship of the nervous system to the brain and how the brain receives messages from that system. Multiple tests showed that she could cause pain or relaxation in the mind due to how she effected and stimulated the nerves of the body. With that information, she devised a way to do this by using the lightning element or "Raiton". By sending electrical signals into the targets nervous system, she can make them "feel" things and make their brain receive those feelings which provoke emotion or imagination, Hence putting them under an illusion.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Electric Phantom Fist is type Close-Quarters Combat Style that emphasizes on use of lightning release to achieve two distinct effects, Casting Illusions/Hallucinations & Physically augmenting the users body. So empowering the user and weakening the opponent is the basic philosophy of the combat style.
    As the definition describes it, the primary focus of fighting style is none other than casting illusions over the enemies and lightning is used as a medium to achieve this. Lightning in manga has proven to be versatile element which even aids the users in illusions as seen when C uses “Lightning Illusion Flash Pillar technique” to create a flash of light which cast an illusion using the sense of “sight”, Fast and barely avoidable because sight is the fastest sense of Human. Lightning release is involved in both creation of illusions and their delivery.
    The user creates currents of electricity using their chakra that, when delivered directly affects the nerves of opponents and using precise chakra control their senses are manipulated. The human nervous system works by sending charges across the body and the brain using the nerves, the currents pinpoints the neurons directly affecting the senses. The difference between effects achieved using Lightning Phantom Fist and Conventional Genjutsu is that Genjutsu use the Chakra Circulatory System and Lightning Phantom Fist uses the Nervous System, while illusion is casted by manipulating the chakra in the opponents brain, the CFS technique manipulates the charges across the body. Since both methods affects the senses in the long run, the primary advantage is that since the Chakra system is not involved, Kai as well as many other techniques are invalid defences, but it also means the user possess limited ability to cast these illusions as lightning is used a medium it possess a cyclical weakness (Wind Release) as well as limited range for most techniques (Close to Mid Range, being a Custom Fighting Style: Hand to Hand Combat is involved). The effects involve affecting the opponents motor skills by accelerating and decelerating the movement of electrons across the nerves, much similar to Tsunade’s Body Pathway Derangement, a major influence to the fighting style, affecting their reaction abilities, their perceptive skills and as the epitome casting actual illusions, in short anything that could potentially be achieved using the workings of the fighting style.
    Unlike other lightning techniques, electricity here is not simply shot at the opponent. In order to properly affect the opponents nervous system techniques that constantly tax chakra are required like, Chidori. This also means that without constant exposure to user’s techniques, the effects will be short lived and wear out in a small period of time (usually mentioned in the technique) restoring the body to its default state. Lightning reacts with humidity in the air and creates ripple like effects around the user combined with the luminosity, the style appears not to be lightning based. Majority of the fighting style consists of Open palm combat to deal Cutting, Piercing and pushing strikes with the use of electricity to temporarily boost the users reaction dealing faster more precise strikes in close range. The style does not encompass any means of traveling (to avoid any relation with Raikage’s Lightning release armor). The user is capable of concentrating electricity at a single point to deal pushing blows or form a defensive barrier around himself/herself, Shape manipulation is used to further aid this.

    Example Techniques:
    Electric Phantom Fist: Glare of Demon | Raiyokaiken: Akumagiri
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/a
    Description: Glare of Demon is a basic EPS technique that generates a flash of a light spreading from the user’s palm. Exposure to the intense light of this flash can change the electrical field around the opponents brain, this is not something harmful but causes the same effect as Body Pathway Derangement, the effects last for about 15 seconds, or 2 turns whichever comes first. The technique is useful as it does not require any hand seals and barely any concentration that the user is able to cast this while in movement.

    Electric Phantom Fist: Wings of Apkallus | Raiyokaiken: Yokaihane
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive-Offensive
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user releases a surge of chakra across his body, boosting his reaction speed and perceptive skills to track down opponents moves. The massive concentration of chakra leaks out through the backbone and becomes visible through friction with the shoulder blade, the friction causes the chakra to generate electrical bolts combined with the humidity in the air the technique generates bright luminous wings that surround the user. The process itself does not takes long as the technique is meant to help defend against fast opponents. When opponents enter close proximity to the user, the electricity enters their nervous system affecting the perceptive abilities. Part of the opponents brain imagines what it would be like if their technique lands, when the currents affect the perception of time this imagination would temporarily grow, literally making the opponent believe that their attack was successful while in reality they stop and remain paralyzed. This is where the user concentrates all the electrical energy in his palm and to deal one massive piercing blow to a vital part of the opponents body ending his life. The technique is named, after a Apkallus a Winged entity also known as a Winged Genie.
    Note: Usable twice per battle.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Restrictions:
    - One must have completed their lightning training.
    - One must have completed their genjutsu training

    Effects:
    - Since genjutsu cast using this style can't be broken with Kai, the only way is to stop the electric current from running throughout their body. This can be done in two ways

    A) Counter act the lightning with another lightning technique. This will cancel them both out.
    B) Through the use of extreme physical pain.

    - Illusions cast using this technique are twice as strong as normal genjutsu.

    - Easy to counter genjutsu of C-rank and Below all other genjutsu that affect the user will be reduced by one rank.

    - A stronger nervous system so that the user is resistant to attacks that have to do with paralyzation through the nerves or conventional paralyzing. (nagashi etc.)

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    Name: (Hone Assai Gigei) - Bone Crushing Arts
    Type: Nintaijutsu
    Background: Bone chushing arts is a unique fighting style created solely by Yashiro, It was said that one day Yashiro himself was starting to feel depressed because there were so many legendary fighting styles created across the world by legendary ninja, and he knew he was a legend himself, or atleast he though he was one, then eventually all these thoughts started to overwhelm him, he felt this rage building from within, until he lost control of himself and blacked out, from all the pressure he was putting on himself as well as the stress, next thing he knew when he returned to his normal self, he was standing beside a tree which was split in half with his hands slightly thickened and dark brown/black and it seemed as if his hands were as solid as rock or hardened steel, after a couple of days of experiencing this, still amazed by what he had done, Yashiro decides to try it out, only this time without "Blacking out", so that he can take note of what he is doing as well as study this new found "Ability", Yashiro had then walked up to a nearby tree and started charging his earth release chakra within his fists, trying to compress as much chakra into his fists while maintaining control of it so that he doesn't hurt himself,His hands then started changing color until it was eventually black and hardened like solid rock or steel, Yashiro then threw a punch into the tree and surprisingly it split right through the center of the tree, from that day on, Yashiro has been practicing this ability, mastering the flow of his earth chakra, in such a way that the movement of his chakra within his body could keep up with his fighting pace, after years of practice and severe training, Yashiro decided to test his ability in battle and during this battle he had, a clear win was his the moment he started using this ability, because every single attack that hit its target, either fractured or broke bones, and it was after that day that Yashiro came up with a unique name for his new unique ability called Bone Crushing Arts.

    Description on abilities and inner workings:

    Abilities - The user is granted power on a level much greater than regular strong fist and/or Power attacks, with the advanced control of a bone crushing arts users earth chakra focused to a certain part of the users body, the user is able to attack with might in order to break and shatter their opponents bones, the user is also able to counter/block regular strong fist attacks with much ease, taking direct hits to the parts where the earth chakra is focused wouldn't have much effect on the bone crushing arts user.

    Inner Workings -To explain the inner workings is rather simple, threw mastery of the earth release element and good chakra control, the user would be able to focus his earth chakra to a desired location of the users body, granting him more strength in his punches and/or kicks as well as blocks from regular hand to hand combat attacks.

    The flow of the users chakra runs at a certain pace within his body (Regularly) and to enable a successful execution of a bone crushing arts techniques or abilities, the user focuses gathered chakra to a certain area, for eg. His fists, and by increasing the earth chakra within his fists and compressing it as much as possible, the users fists would start to darken and thicken due to the pressure and power of all that chakra focused to a single body part of the users body, by doing this the user could be at risk, but that is why good chakra control is needed to execute these techniques/abilities without harming oneself.

    Example Techniques:

    Bone Crushing Arts: Sidewinder

    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user focuses and compressors earth chakra within his right hand to compliment the Bone Crushing Arts, and then proceeds by punching the opponent in the abdomen (The hip or Rib Cage), Potentially fracturing either bone the fist comes into contact with.



    Bone Crushing Arts: Spine splitting Elbow

    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Type: Offensive
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user delivers a series of punches into the abdominal area of the opponent, forcing him to lean forward, the user then slams his elbow (which the compressed earth chakra should be focused to) into the back of the opponent, fracturing his spine so that he is unable to walk.



    Bone Crushing Arts: Protection Within

    Rank: (B - S)
    Range: Short
    Type: Defensive
    Chakra: (20 - 40)
    Damage: N/A
    Description: The user focuses earth chakra to a certain part of his body and compressors it as much as possible, doing this the user would cause that certain body part to harden and potentially darken in such a way that the body part seems to be like some sort of Boulder or steel like object, giving the user the ability to block attacks without hurting himself.

    Note: The rank of the technique depends on the amount of chakra being focused of used.



    Additional Effects and Restrictions:

    - Must be at least S-Class Rank to learn Bone Crushing Arts
    - Must have full mastery over the Earth Release element and at least started taijutsu training
    - Only s single Bone Crushing Arts technique can be used per turn, for the safety of the user, however if the user uses it twice per turn, the second technique will deliver a +15 damage to the user
    - No Earth Techniques can be used in the same round as Bone Crushing Arts

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    A CFS made up of Earth + Taijutsu with the same core properties is already beeing submitted. Teno if memory doesn't fail me. This is, however, too generic and undefined either way.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    3D Maneuver Gear|3 D manūbagia
    Type: Nin-Kenjutsu

    Background: *
    The 3D Maneuver Gear's origin is set back to the great Ninja Clan Wars.The reign of the Senju and Uchiha clan was ferocios.The weaker clans such as the Taitankirāzu needed ways to equal out the power difference between the clans.So the Taitankirāzu created a special ninja fighting style that made use of multiple ninja tools and the rare element,Fūton.The 3D Maneuvering Gear.This device was able to give the users exceptionally speed,agility,and precision.It allowed for the Taitankirāzu to swing on nearby objects and then pull themselves in order to swing from one point to another.However,the Taitankirāzu needed a weapon in order to be able to use the device in battle as well.So they implemented into the 3D Maneuver Gear dual blades.These blades are metallic and very light.In size they are about the same as an average katana.But now the device needed a speed boost in order to produce quick and powerful blows to opponents.So the Taitankirāzu implemented Fūton into the device.However,the device needed a place for the Fūton to escape it to boost the speed of the user.So they created a funnel from a log and attached it onto the device.Making the Fūton escape the device and push the user foward at great speeds.With the Taitankirāzu's new device,they began to take over the ninja world.Over the years the device has gotten more high tech and functional.Keeping the Fūton in a container and attaching a metallic funnel onto the device.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The Three Dimensional Maneuver Gear is a set of ninja tools developed by ninja that allows great mobility when facing other ninja clans. The gear itself takes the form of a body harness that encompasses much of the body below the neck. Though using it will allow a skilled user great mobility, it carries a large risk of overtaxing the user's muscles, thus special physical conditioning is required to use this gear. Some tools involved in the apparatus include:

    -Handgrips*
    -Piston-shot grapple-hooks
    -Fūton powered mechanism
    -Iron Wire Propeller

    If there are no structures to swing on,the user can still use the grapple hooks to "shoot" at the enemy.Much like Sasori's metal wire.
    Example Techniques:
    (3D Maneuver Gear Style:3D Blitz)3Dマヌーバギアスタイル:3Dブリ ツ
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 20
    Damage: 60

    The simplest move possible with the 3DMG is simply aiming and firing the piston at an object and then activating the Fūton mechanism to reel oneself toward said object. They can then disconnect the piston and continue moving forward.The user can also add Fūton chakra into the funnel to boost the speed
    *
    -Ninja must be able to move around in order to navigate in general. Therefore, they tend to use their momentum in order to swing around targets.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -The Iron Wire can be broken by techniques B Rank and above only.
    -Users of the 3D Maneuver Gear must have Fūton mastered.
    -The 3D Maneuver Gear gives the user speeds above the average shinobi.
    -The dual blades are made of metal and are very sharp.
    -The user can only use Fūton,Kenjutsu,and Taijutsu while swinging.

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    I don't see how this is a CFS applicable in a battle in our RP...And this 3D Maneuver Gear...did you get a CW like this approved? If memory serves me right, no.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 08-16-2013 at 05:17 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±




    Straw Arts

    Type: Nintaijutsu

    Background: Toriko was on one of his searches for the worlds rarest ingredients when he encountered a strange looking man. Toriko noticed the man was wielding a strange looking straw like pipe. Toriko questioned the man of what that strange looking contraption was, The man replied with '' its how I fight''. Toriko observed the man for several weeks as he engaged in combat with other fighters. The man was undefeated for all those weeks Toriko watched him for. Toriko knew he had to add this to his arsenal and by asking the fighter, Toriko was accepted into Straw arts.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Straw arts is a fighting style revolving around the use of shooting chakra out a straw. Their are five straws ( one for each chakra nature) which is given to the student at the start of the training. The straws are made of a light/ indestructible/non-conductive and heatproof material that also have the ability to extend in size, from as small as chop sticks to as big as the users mind can think.
    The user channels the chakra nature into each straw, wind chakra for the wind straw, fire chakra in the fire straw etc. The amount of chakra the user wants to store in it is completely up to them, D rank or S rank. The straws are also colored for each chakra nature, Blue for the water straw, Red for the fire straw, White for the wind straw, Yellow for the lightning straw and Brown for the earth straw.

    Each straw has a different ability to the next.

    Fire straw

    The fire straw has the ability to shoot out a barrage of fire bullets that rank from D rank to S depending on how much chakra they choose to focus.
    It also has the ability to shoot out a stream of fire ranging from D rank to S depending on how much chakra they choose to focus. The user can change the end's of the straw, increasing the circles circumference, allowing the stream to be bigger and wider in size. The fire straw has one last ability, the user must channel S rank chakra into the straw to utilize this ability. Once gathered, the user stabs the straw into the ground, releasing the fire causing the entire ground around the user, apart from a diameter of five meters to turn into lava with the help from the earth.

    Water straw

    The water straw has the ability to shoot out a jet propelled stream of water that ranges from D rank to S depending on how much chakra they choose to focus. Once again the user has the ability to manipulate the size of the end of the straw meaning the smaller the size the more focused and pressurized the water will be increasing its damage.

    Wind straw


    The wind straw has the ability to suck in everything that isn't anchored down into the ground such as humans. The user utilizes his wind chakra and takes in a deep breath through the straw creating a large scaled vacuum drawing everything in the direction the straw is pointed at. The straw also has the ability to shoot out a massive S rank cyclone of wind that destroys and uproots everything in its path.

    Earth straw

    The earth straw has the ability of fusing with the earth allowing the user to notice all movements and sense everything that happens ground based up to long range. With the material its created from it can survive the deepest pressures as well as the hottest temperatures.


    Lightning straw

    The lightning straw has the ability to release fast beam of lightning that ranges from D rank to S depending on how much chakra they choose to focus. Once again the user has the ability to manipulate the size of the end of the straw. The lightning straw also has the ability to release a blinding flash of light that blinds anything up to long range.

    Example Techniques:

    Straw arts - Breath Bazooka
    Type: Attack
    Rank: D-S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 15-40
    Damage: 20-80
    Description: The user begins by channeling a large amount of their wind chakra into the straw. Once gathered the user blows out from the straw, creating a massive cyclone of wind that uproots and destroys everything in its path.

    -Can only be used thrice per battle


    Straw arts - Jet
    Type: Attack
    Rank: D- S
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra: 15-40
    Damage: 20-80
    Description: The user begins by channeling a large amount of their water chakra into the water straw. Once gathered the user shoots out a large jet of water. With the straw abilty the size of the end of the straw can increase and decrease allowing the user to either smallen the end creating a pressurized jet of water that can cut through rock or increase it size allowing more water to flow through it creating a large jet of water in size.

    -Can only be used thrice per battle


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Must be at least Sannin Rank to learn
    - Must have mastered the basic five elements-
    - Can only be taught by -Cerberus-

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    These straws need to be submitted as a CW as they aren't known weapons... You don't have here a CFS. You invented and are trying to pattent a special weapon (which isn't a weapon tbh) that you can use to use elements and what not.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 08-16-2013 at 05:19 PM.

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