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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Already been approved... >> HERE <<


    (Just posting the symbol with the Style, cause this is how I see the symbolism)
    (Hyouga) Glacier Style

    Type:
    NinKenjutsu

    Background:
    Glacier Style was created by the Yuki Clan members, that were investigating the Samurai sword fighting styles,then combining the sword styles to create their own type of free style kenjutsu to release large amounts of Wind and Water chakra from the blade(s), allowing them to create Ice and use this as faster and stronger attacks and defenses.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The main idea of the style is too release Water and Wind chakra into the users blade(s), and then swing the sword(s) creating Ice which then burst forward from the users blade(s). While swinging the sword the user release layers of Ice that create the attacks or defensive jutsus.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - Must be of the Yuki Clan.
    - Must have master Water and Wind along with Ice.
    - Must be trained by -Tauburn- to use the Style.
    - Techs are quicker than normal ninjutsu techs, because the swinging of the sword is what gives the ice shape.

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    -Tauburn-, our loyal member, gave on the 25th of February 2012 a request for a Patent on custom fighting style (Glacier Style). I, Scorps of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Muay Thai

    タイ語 [タイご] - Muay Thaijutsu - Muay Thai Martial Arts


    Type: Advanced - Taijutsu
    Background: Muay Thaijutsu, the ultimate body techniques. It's a basic form of techniques and refers to any techniques involving the martial arts or the optimisation of enhanced human abilities. Muay Thaijutsu is executed by directly accessing the user's physical and mental energies, relying on the stamina and strength gained through training, and having complated regulair taijutsu. It typically does not require chakra as one would say, though chakra may be used to enhance its techniques. Taijutsu generally require no hand seals to perform, occasionally making use of certain stances or poses. Muay Thai is referred to as the "Art of Eight Limbs" because it makes use of punches, kicks, mostly elbows and knee strikes, thus using eight "points of contact", as opposed to "two points" (fists). This technique was created by Lucifer when he was little and lost in the high mountains of Iwagakure known for their brutal weather conditions and also for the dangerous animals, he discovered it by himself when he fully mastered taijutsu, he started using his elbows and knees more often making them just as hard as rocks due to the inhuman training sessions he went through. As said earlier this technique mostly uses elbows and knee strikes by focusing an enormous amount of chakra into the bones themself so making the body a deadly weapon of the user thus increasing the damage, if used in close combat the user can easly break a few bones (like ribs) of the opponent in a single strike also causing internal damages due to the shockwaves caused by high speed knee and elbow strikesn that the user sends through the body of his opponents. But before doing that the user has to enter a particulier stance which requires, that the user raising his dominant arm forward with the knuckles pointing tords the opponent, and the other arm under his chin, and coming to the lower region the user will raise his dominant leg, forward in the same manner of the arms but lifting it up as seen in this picture below.
    Example
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This is a unique type of fighting style mainly, uses the elbow and knee strikes to make impact on the opponent(s), by focusing a incredible amount of chakra into the 4 joints the bones the two elbows and knees themselves. Thus making the ninja body a deadly weapon, the user can use the speed to send schockwave trew the bodys of his opponents, in a similar manner that gai used when fighting kisame increasing piercing and impact ability. So in short it uses the four points of the human body creating a deadly fighting style which can shatter the bones and cause damage to any kind of creature.
    Example
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    ♦ The user will gain extreme strenght similar to Tsunade's.
    ♦ The user can use the eight joints to send shockwaves through his opponent's body.
    ♦ The user must have mastered regulair taijutsu inorder to use Muay Thaijutsu.
    ♦ This technique can only be taught by Lucifer.
    ♦ This technique also requires the user to have a strong build body as it uses the four joints.


    ±± Declined ±± How does this differ from anything you can do with regular taijutsu in free form? also, shockwaves...how come? and strength of tsunade...no. Sorry but no. Its too much and belittles her abilities. Same as i won't allow anyone to use a style to get the speed of rock lee without weights. same principle. I don't see anything special with this style that you can do with an elbow strike using Strong Fist.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-03-2012 at 11:35 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (Shindou no Hakuda)Tremor Hand-to-Hand Combat
    Type:Taijutsu
    Background:
    Shindou no Hakuda is a unique, and advanced form of Taijutsu, whose origins stem from the time of the Rikudou Sennin. Passed down from one generation to the other, within 1 family, this form of combat is secretive and unknown to most parts of the world. Despite being created in the early days, few have heard of the rumours of the Shindou no Hakuda, said to be one of the most powerful fighting styles to exist. In stark contrast to other taijutsu styles, Shindou no Hakuda specializes more in speed and acrobatic movements, placing strength of lower importance. However, due to the modifications and improvements in the fighting fashion, the passing on of this fighting style has become stronger over time, and the fists and punches can cause great and massive impact. It has been said that one fine day, a man used Shindou no Hakuda to smash down a mountain. No one knows where this style of fighting originated from, and how it was created, although it can be assumed that it requires great skill and training to use it to its full potential. The strength of Shindou no Hakuda has been said to rival Tsunade's strength.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    As mentioned above, the greatest strong point of Shindou no Hakuda is its acrobatic movements, and near elastic flexible limbs. The user focus chakra throughout his entire body, through his four limbs and body parts. Flowing his chakra through his joints, and bone structure, he makes it more flexible and thus allowing one to stretch his limbs backwards or in whatever angle in a more drastic manner. It is close to no trouble for a Shindou no Hakuda user to stretch his limbs over his body, and kick the opponent with great force that rivals a direct kick. This form of fighting would allow one to become a natural gymnast, performing stunts out of the ordinary. Your reflex would also undoubtedly be slightly faster, to say the least. The flexible and unorthodox movement dubbed this fighting style "High-Speed Taijutsu." Apart from the flexible movement capabilities of this fighting style, the other ability, is its great strength. Shindou no Hakuda users train from day to night, developing what you can call, Iron Fists. Their natural punches are strong, but it is further enhanced by chakra. The polar opposite of Tsunade's punching method, instead of releasing the chakra the moment the fist makes contact with the opponent's body, this style of fighting incorporates the use of chakra in the other way. The user focuses chakra to the part of the body in which he strikes with, a huge amount of chakra, that overflows the capacity of that limb. Most often the parts used are the fists, or the feet. The user would flow a hefty sum of chakra to his fist, and overflow the capacity it can store. As such, some of the chakra flow out from the hand, forming a sphere of translucent chakra around the fist. The sphere contains pure brutal killing chakra, encompassing the fist wholesomely. Due to the insane amount of chakra stored within a fist, it radiates slightly, with the huge amount of chakra staying at a single spot. The chakra causes slight vibrations as it stays on its fist, if held closely enough to objects, and mastered the way of the fist, it may cause the object to break apart, due to the vibration force. Due to the huge amount of chakra on the fist, it somehow has a 'pull' somewhat towards the chakra core. Since the huge orb of chakra has no container, it continuously draws the air towards the sphere of chakra, trying to gain more power. Due to this 'magnetic' force of some sorts, it causes attacks to also come towards the sphere of chakra at a faster pace, drawing chakra towards the sphere of chakra emanating from the fist. It naturally attracts chakra towards the core, making attacks come towards the user at a seemingly faster pace. All this things happen during the charging phase of Shindou no Hakuda. After one successfully accumulates the required force, the user swings his hand forward, in the direction of wherever he wants, and keeps the chakra still within the small container fist. The sphere/bubble of chakra never leaves the hand. As the fist swings/flail around madly, when it makes contact with an object, the sphere of chakra would make contact with it, and the humongous force of the punch coupled with the chakra would cause it to shatter easily. The sphere of chakra constantly stays on the fist, but when it makes contact, the force slowly is transferred like chemical potential energy----------->kinetic energy---------->and with that, it destroys the opponent. The force varies with the chakra you put in to the fist. This will be explained further later in the jutsus and the restrictions. It does not necessarily need to make contact with a solid, but instead, any thing will do. The fist generates massive vibrations, or shock waves, that travels through virtually any medium, including the ground, the seafloor, or even in the air. Thus, this form of fighting is extremely lethal, especially close-range.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    As a powerful form of Taijutsu, it has multiple normal restrictions, that apply to the fighting style itself. More restrictions will be added to the techniques themselves.

    Ranks

    Practitioner----->Sannin + required training sessions(Up to Creator's choice what rank you get)
    Expert---------->Kage + required training session(Up to Creator's choice what rank you get)
    Master----------->Sage + required training session(Up to Creator's choice what rank you get)
    The rank are for what your capable of learning, and what techniques your allowed to use. Putting major restrictions onto powerful techniques when they will be created in the future.

    -To use Shinjou no Hakuda as a practitioner, one must have started Taijutsu at least.
    -To use Shinjou no Hakuda as an expert, one must have mastered Taijutsu at least
    -To use Shinjou no Hakuda as a master, one must have mastered Taijutsu, NB Taijutsu, and allowed by the creator, Toshiro

    Abilities by Ranks

    None available

    -Cannot have KG on the same bio
    -Cannot use special bios eg. Minato | Eight Gates | etc.
    -The special punching method is a technique, and power will vary in the respective techniques.
    -Effects depend on what the technique the user is using(Meaning if this gets approved effects will depend on what the user uses)
    -Can only be taught by Toshiro

    (Please note I'll be the only one who has this mastered as of right now regardless of my rank. I also won't be teaching this to anyone except two people)


    (Shunpo) Flash steps
    Type:Agility
    Background:
    Back in the Third Great Ninja War, Shunpo was created by a lady called Yoruichi. She created it, based off an idea that she thought of while playing a Game of Tag. When Yoruichi was young, she was always very fast and swift in her moments. She could sprint at extreme speeds. Thus, she always won in Tag. One day, while she played tag, she played with other natural sprinters. It was tough catching the others, and it took a lot of effort to sprint for extended periods of time. Slowly, as she ran and ran, she realized that she was subconsciously applying chakra to the soles of her feet, and her movements sped up, getting faster and faster. Despite being tired, she found out that chakra can help boost ones speed and let her skip steps. Thus, the idea was born. She refined it throughout her life, and afterwards, passed it on to other young aspiring ninjas.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Shunpo is a movement style that allows the user to move faster than a normal eye can follow, as well as skips steps while moving making it easier to reach a destination quicker.
    The focal point that determines the basis of this fighting style is speed. As speed is the main point of this style the method is best characterized by how fast one can get from point A to point B in the least amount of steps.
    Training and skill are what determines how fast a user of Shunpo can skip steps as well as increasing the users speed; those of little skill in the technique or those who haven't used it an extended amount of time would obviously be out of practice,

    causing those individuals to be considerably slower, and also making the indvidual use more steps to reach the same distance as someone who uses less and is more experienced.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    Ranks

    Practitioner----->Sannin + required training sessions(Up to Creator's choice what rank you get)
    Expert---------->Kage + required training session(Up to Creator's choice what rank you get)
    Master----------->Sage + required training session(Up to Creator's choice what rank you get)
    Shunshin----------->n/a(Only one person may have this position)
    The rank are for what your capable of learning, and what techniques your allowed to use. Putting major restrictions onto powerful techniques when they will be created in the future. Meaning with your rank you can only learn techs up to your rank.

    -To use Shunpo as a practitioner, one must have started Taijutsu at least.
    -To use Shunpo as a expert, one must have mastered Taijutsu at least
    -To use Shunpo as a master, one must have mastered Taijutsu, NB Taijutsu, and allowed by the creator, Toshiro
    -To use Shunpo as Shunshin one must wield the title of Shunshin

    Abilities by Ranks

    Practitioner-----> Speed increases by 0.5 times|can skip up to 2 steps while moving
    Expert----------> Speed increases by 1.0 times|can skip up to 3 steps while moving
    Master----------> Speed increases by 1.5 times|can skip up to 5 steps while moving
    Shunshin--------> Speed increases by 3.0 times|can skip up to 10 steps while moving

    -Cannot have KG on the same bio
    -Cannot use special bios eg. Minato | Eight Gates | etc.
    -Effects depend on what the technique the user is using(Meaning if this gets approved effects will depend on what the user uses)
    -Can only be taught by Toshiro

    Note: I'll be teaching this style to four people and four people only who I feel are Senpai level and above. Teaching too many people would result in spam of this fighting style. :\


    ±± Both Declined ±± First one is nothing special. As i said to lucifer, what makes it so special you can do it in free form taijutsu? Second one is simply unnapprovable. So Don't Resubmit. Many variations of flash step were submitted in the past and Narutoverse has its own cannon one.

    Also, don't mistake CFS with custom clans. The rank parts are unnecessary and make this clash with the concept of custom clans.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-03-2012 at 11:41 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Wrestling (Resuringu no āto)
    Type: Taijutsu/Nintaijutsu
    Background: Wrestling is a form of fighting that dates back thousands of years, it bases on grappling, takedowns, slams, etc. While training Blade realized he can place elemental chakra into his attacks thus further developing his wrestling into a form of nin-taijutsu.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Wrestling is a form of grappling type techniques such as clinch fighting, throws and takedowns, joint locks, pins and other grappling holds. A wrestling bout is a physical competition, between two (occasionally more) competitors or sparring partners, who attempt to gain and maintain a superior position. There are a wide range of styles with varying rules with both traditional historic and modern styles. Wrestling techniques have been incorporated into other martial arts as well as military hand-to-hand combat systems.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Based on the speed chart the higher the user the harder it is to avoid a grapple
    -Can only be taught by Blade Hyuga
    -No other custom fighting style may be used
    -While executing a move the user boosts his power by +10 to deal more damage
    -Must be S-Rank Ninja to learn

    Please edit Scorps sensei


    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. Wrestling isn't a real form of fighting. Its just a staged performance. Also, anything you can do in wrestling you can mimic with free form taijutsu so no need to make a CFS out of something like that.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Previous Approved Techniques of the Style:
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...postcount=5299

    Tenmyaku Kisatsu| Killing the Spirit of the Divine Pulse

    Type: Taijutsu

    Background:
    Tenmyaku Kisatsu was created as a mean to easily neutralize the opponent, without having to resort to long fights or rely on humongous great strength. This way, a small person, could easily defeat the biggest one, regardless the gap between size and strength. Then, as soon as the opponent is incapacitated, the user deals the final blow.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This fighting style is in a way, similar to the Gentle Fist, since it's characterized by the power to cut ''The Divine Pulse'' inside one's body. In other words, the user will hit certain pressure points on the opponent's body, however, instead of blocking the chakra flow inside one's body, it temporarily blocks off the nerves in one's body parts.
    Humans sense the movements of their muscles and all associated sensations through their nerves. However, by blocking off those nerves, then not only the opponent's body part becomes immobile, but he also becomes unable to feel their existence. (It's similar to taijutsu mixed with lightning release, in order to make the opponent's limbs go numb, but without the use of any type of chakra)
    To be correctly used, one needs to have good knowledge about the human body, either by possessing medical training, having training in the arts of taijutsu for years or being on the ANBU (like Haku did know the vital spots on Zabuza's body), until he has discovered the certain points to hit and great agility, which may include weight training.
    Another way this style can be used, is to use your hand and fingers in a similar way to swords. Due to the hard training the user had passed through and their mastery using their fingers, it is said a master of this style, can fight against someone who is even holding a sword, by countering and deflecting swords with his bare hands.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - To start training on it, one must have medical training, being on ANBU or have mastered Taijutsu Arts (cannon) in order to have knowledge over the right spots to hit
    - To master it, one must have undergone weight training because of the agility needed in order to use it to its full extent at short range
    - A Tenmyaku Kisatsu user relies mostly on speed and agility than strength
    - Tenmyaku Kisatsu techniques don't rely on chakra to be used and as such, if facing a chakra enhanced technique, they can be easily overpowered
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    Last edited by Nexus; 03-12-2012 at 09:54 PM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (Jeet Kune Do) The Way of the Intercepting Fist
    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:

    Jeet Kun Do is a hybrid martial arts system and life philosophy founded by martial artist Bruce Lee with direct, non classical and straightforward movements. Due to the way his style works they believe in minimal movement with maximum effect and extreme speed. The system works on the use of different 'tools' for different situations. These situations are broken down into ranges (Kicking, Punching, Trapping and Grappling), with techniques flowing smoothly between them. It is referred to as a "style without style". Unlike more traditional martial arts, Jeet Kune Do is not fixed or patterned, and is a philosophy with guiding thoughts. It was named for the concept of interception, or attacking your opponent while he is about to attack. He believed that combat was spontaneous, and that a martial artist cannot predict it, only react to it, and that a good martial artist should "Be like water" and move fluidly without hesitation. Water is infinitely flexible. It can be seen through, and yet at other times it can obscure things from sight. It can split and go around things, rejoining on the other side, or it can crash through things. It can erode the hardest rocks by gently lapping away at them or it can flow past the tiniest pebble. The user needs to calm his mind completely, focus and wait for the opponent to strike. They will then use the opponents attacking force against them as the user moves in a relaxed state with fluid motion to take advantage of the opponents openings as the opponent attacks. Someone who masters Jeet Kun Do would have great reaction time, triple of what they had before being able to react instantly to normal taijutsu users. In close range a Jeet Kun Do master (like Bruce) can move a limb in the blink of an eye with great force, quickly catching the opponent off guard. Jeet Kune Do seeks to waste no time or movement, teaching that the simplest things work best.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Economy of motion is the principle by which Jeet Kun Do practitioners achieve:

    Efficiency: An attack which reaches its target in the least amount of time, with maximum force.

    Directness: Doing what comes naturally in a disciplined way.

    Simplicity: Thinking in an uncomplicated manner; without ornamentation.

    This is meant to help a practitioner conserve both energy and time; two crucial components in a physical confrontation. Maximized force seeks to end the battle quickly due to the amount of damage inflicted upon the opponent. Rapidity aims to reach the target before the opponent can react, which is half-beat faster timing, learned in Wing Chun and Western boxing.
    "When the distance is wide, the attacking opponent requires some sort of preparation. Therefore, attack him on his preparation of attack." "To reach me, you must move to me. Your attack offers me an opportunity to intercept you."This means intercepting an opponent's attack with an attack of your own instead of a simple block. It is for this concept Jeet Kune Do is named. JKD practitioners believe that this is the most difficult defensive skill to develop. This strategy is a feature of some traditional Chinese martial arts, as well as an essential component of European épée fencing. Stop hits & kicks utilize the principle of economy of motion by combining attack and defense into one movement thus minimizing the "time" element.

    Simultaneous parrying & punching
    When confronting an incoming attack, the attack is parried or deflected and a counter attack is delivered at the same time. Not as advanced as a stop hit but more effective than blocking and counter attacking in sequence. This is practiced by some Chinese martial arts. Simultaneous parrying & punching utilizes the principle of economy of motion by combining attack and defense into one movement thus minimizing the "time" element and maximizing the "energy" element. Efficiency is gained by utilizing a parry rather than a block. By definition a "block" stops an attack whereas a parry merely re-directs an attack. Redirection has two advantages: It requires less energy to execute; it utilizes the opponents energy against them by creating an imbalance. Efficiency is gained in that the opponent has less time to react to the nullification of their attack while having to worry about defending an incoming attack.

    Low kicks
    JKD practitioners believe they should target their kicks to their opponent's shins, knees, thighs, and mid section. These targets are the closest to the foot, provide more stability and are more difficult to defend against. However, as with all other JKD principles nothing is "written in stone". If a target of opportunity presents itself, even a target above the waist, one could take advantage of the situation without feeling hampered by this principle. Maintaining low kicks utilizes the principle of economy of motion by reducing the distance a kick must travel thus minimizing the "time" element.

    Five ways of attack
    * Simple Angular Attack (SAA) / Simple Direct Attack (SDA). Is a simple motion (punch or kick) which moves with no effort to conceal it, directly to the target on the most economical route. It can be indirect, beginning on one line and ending on another. Such as a punch that starts to the stomach (mid line) and ends on the chin (high line). SAA is an attack that is launched from an unanticipated angle that is achieved by moving in such a way as to create an open line into which to strike.
    * Attack By Combinations (ABC). This is using multiple rapid attacks, with volume of attack as a means of overcoming the opponent.
    * Progressive Indirect Attack (PIA). Simulating an attack to one part of the opponent's body, followed by attacking another part, as a means of creating an opening.
    * Hand Immobilization Attack (HIA) and its counterpart Foot Immobilization * attack, which make use of trapping/parrying to limit the opponent's function with that appendage.
    Attack By Drawing (ABD). The goal when using attack by draw is to "draw" the opponent into a committed attack by baiting him into what looks like an exposed target, then intercepting his motion. One can execute a motion that invites a counter, then counter attack them as he takes the bait


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - Can only be taught to Sannin and above who have learned basic taijutsu.
    - To master the user must learn the style of fighting, all of it's techniques and spar with the creator in a Taijutsu only match.
    - A master of this will gain a calm mind which is needed for most martial arts.
    - User of this style gains 3x the ability to read through enemy taijutsu and movement, capable of reacting with enourmous speed when compared to an average Strong Fist user. This, however, doesn't refer to running speed which suffers no differance and in essence the movement speed of the users body is only slightly above that of a normal Strong Fist user. However, coupled with the increased reaction time it makes the user capable of defending against most moves of Strong Fist with ease.
    - The reaction speed boost and heighten capability to track movement are less than that of a 1T sharingan and can't be added to the normal tracking/reaction speed of a Sharingan. Further more, it doesn't add to the normal tracking/reactions speeds of Swift Release or of EIG and is, in basis about the same as the first while much less than the second.
    - Can only be taught by -Yard-



    The only thing I changed was that you have to be Sannin to learn it. Before it was S-class and added the calm mind in the abilities just so that it's stated, which a calm mind is required in most to all martial arts to perform that art in battle. Also freedict couldn't translate Jeet Kune Do so I got the name from this site
    http://www.bruceleefoundation.com/index.cfm/pid/10606

    And here's the link to it from it being in my thread from before in case you want proof of that I didn't secretly change things. Since it was approved before.
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...6&postcount=25


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    -Yard-, our loyal member, gave on the 26th of February 2012 a request for a Patent on custom fighting style (Jeet Kune Do) The Way of the Intercepting Fist. I, Scorps of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Jeet Kune Do
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    Copyright 2012, -Yard- , NarutoBase.net

     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Magen Jikoku no Jutsu (Demonic Time Arts)

    Type: Genjutsu

    Background: The Archipelago, which currently goes by the title of the Land of Water, is where these deadly arts originate. The arts of genjutsu, first invented and discovered by the Sage of Six Paths himself brought fascination to the world along with the other styles created by manipulating chakra. However, the illusionary arts peaked particular interest within monasteries and monks who studied in the arts of meditation and fine-tuning their minds. There were many who learned the arts of illusion, but very few to master them. As time progressed and the entity known as shinobi came into existence, there were 10 individuals, all hailing from islands within the Land of Water, who were extremely gifted in genjutsu. Many temples throughout the land claimed their spirits and Yin chakra were exceptionally strong, stronger then most. The 10 individuals traveled, not only through the archipelago but the entire continent, learning the ways of genjutsu. Few were rumored to have learned from the Uchiha and Kurama clans, some were monks, and one, Daichi Koga, was rumored to be a direct descendent of the Sage of Six Paths himself. At some point in their lives, during the age of endless war with the shinobi clans, the 10 individuals met each other, meeting up on the island, east of the central island. All had heard rumors of the others and had found a way to contact one another in order to meet. It was during their meet that the 10 individuals trained with one another and taught each other their techniques. Eventually the 10 collaborated together and created the Magen Jikoku no Jutsu style of genjutsu. Their style consisted of time manipulating genjutsu where the users would manipulate the areas of the brain, which centered on perception, allowing them to affect their opponent’s perception time in all of the five senses. They could control when they heard, smell, feel, and when and what they saw. Combining the arts of time perception with the demonic illusionary arts, these 10 individuals created one of the most deadly forms of genjutsu, revered and feared throughout the land. The 10 earned names for themselves as the Demons of Time, more feared genjutsu users then the Uchiha. The 10 shinobi were often hired for missions from Daimyou warring with other nations. In their later years, the 10 shinobi decided to pass on their techniques in order to keep their most prized treasures alive through the ages. Having tried to pass down their techniques before, each took on a select student to teach however; none had the potential to truly master this art. Favoritism for each individual student had both the teachers and the students arguing upon how far to take them. Eventually the students went on to use these techniques disgracefully, were killed in combat or gave up before reaching their fullest potential. Nearing their end of their lives they decided on a method, They would teach one student, one truly worthy of learning the arts and have him pass down the style to 5 disciples, 5 true disciples of the arts to master the genjutsu. Out of the 5, one would be chosen to carry on the title of Grandmaster, whom would be the only one permitted to learn the fourth style that makes up this art. From then on, every generation of student in this art would take on one student and train them up to master’s status and the group will decide upon whom is to carry on the legacy of Grandmaster of the style. During the 3rd Great Shinobi War, that entire generation of masters, with the exception of the Grandmaster died. Two of the masters were killed in combat against a platoon of Kumo shinobi, however living up to their title till their death. One died of a rare heart disease early in the war, and the last was killed in a fight against the Grandmaster, for attempting to assassinate him and take the master techniques for himself. In order to rebuild the tradition, the Grandmaster must now take on five apprentices to teach them the ways and pick among them who shall succeed him.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The entire style is centered around two main concepts, of which were considered during the naming of this style of fighting…Demonic meaning; unhinging the mind via excruciating pain and torture in order to cause insanity and Time; time perception manipulation of the five sense. These two things combine are what make up Magen Jikoku no Jutsu. Of these basic concepts there are four styles that make up this art, all having their own specific area of focus when concerning this style.

    Okure-Do (Lagging Style): The Lagging style inhibits the methods of affecting one’s senses in the way that they perceive everything to be going in either slow motion or cause them to experience things after it happens simply. How this works is the user will cause a disruption in their opponent’s chakra affecting the brain causing the illusion that something is going in slow or fast motion. With slow motion the victim will see events very slowly for example, their opponent making 4 seals, by the time they make four seals, the victim only sees two. With fast motion the caster will actually halt the signals the brain sends to the body, which controls how they see, smell, feel, and hear things. Although this will be only for a brief moment, it could be long enough.

    Heki Shourai-Do (Way of the False Future): The concept for this is false imagery. The jutsu in this style highly discrete, perhaps the hardest to detect of the all. The user plants illusions in their opponent’s minds that would have them appear to be doing something but in actuality they’re doing something else or not. Useful in having your opponents expend chakra on defending or trying to counter moves that don’t even exist on the playing field yet. Inspired by how the Uchiha clan shinobi can read a person’s techniques, a strong enough technique in this style may even fool an Uchiha.

    Toshigoro-Do (Way of the Age): These techniques involve casting illusions, primarily horrendous and/or extremely painful illusions that appear to last for long periods of time. It is in these techniques where the aspect of torture begins to fully appear within the style. The casters can make illusions that cause the sensation of burning, drowning, cutting or stabbing, etc for extended periods of time. Besides the Master Arts, these are perhaps the most powerful style within these arts.

    Shishou no Jutsu (Master’s Arts): Finally the Master’s Arts, these arts consist of the most powerful and most dangerous techniques inside this fighting style. Every technique within the Master’s Arts are forbidden as they pose extreme danger to the user and even possess extreme enough qualities that could induce physical harm (vomiting, physical trauma, etc…) Although the strongest techniques within the style there are very few.

    Additional effects and Restrictions: As is new tradition, decided upon by the Grandmaster, this style will only be taught to five people at the most, and only one will be able to learn the Master’s Techniques.

    ~Must have obtained the rank of Sannin
    ~Must have mastered genjutsu

    This fighting style is for masters of chakra control and manipulation. With each level of practitioner, they gain stronger abilities in chakra control and in their genjutsu as they gain more experience.

    ~Practitioners: masters of Okure-Do, They are strong enough to kneed their chakra into long range and cast longer ranged genjutsu, although this requires additional chakra to perform the technique and to maintain
    ~Masters: those who have mastered Okure-Do, Heki Shourai-Do, and Toshigoro-Do do need only one seal to activate these techniques.
    ~Grandmaster: Those very few have achieved the rank of Grandmaster, their skills so refined, can activate any technique below within the first three styles by simply muttering the word “Activate”. However, doing so limits the range of the technique (short range, within ear shot), to perform long ranged illusions would require a seal and direct line of vision towards their opponent, as would all gen.

    The makers of this fighting style were exceptional in genjutsu, however they were fairly average or just below that in their other skills as a shinobi, thus they focused on making their gen extremely powerful via intense chakra control and focus, therefore limiting the power of the other techniques they could perform unknowingly, however over time this was realized when certain attacks couldn’t be preformed because amount of focus needed for each individual technique.

    ~Any technique within this style A-ranked or S-ranked requires intense focus meaning no ninjutsu of any kind above A-ranked can be used while a gen is active.
    ~When using any technique in this style Lightning release ninjutsu above B-ranked can’t be used.
    ~F-ranked techniques in this style means no techniques above B-ranked are allowed along with any additional side affects the specific jutsu entails

    ~Declined~ Good job on the background story, however most if not all of the styles that you described can be created by submitting regular genjutsu customs. And the slowing down time or speeding it up is bordering Tsukuyomi.
     
         
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    Yagyu Shinkage (New Shadow)
    Type:Kenjutsu
    Background:
    A renowned school of swordsmanship was created by Hotaruko, who is credited with winning at least 60 duels in his lifetime. During his later life, he recorded his martial styles into the great works known as the Yagyu Shinkage. The modern school teaches his traditional methods, holding entirely true to the original writings of Hotaruko himself. This method of swordsmanship is defined by its extreme precision and the notable absence of flashy maneuvers. Direct, with no movements wasted, Yagyu Shinkage is among the most deadly of schools. The teachings of Hotaruko are those of a man who spent an entire life dedicated to the way of the warrior, without exception. Unlike many schools, which are a complication of the techniques of many, this school is founded on the skills of a single genius of the Katana.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Using this style of kenjutsu the combatant forsakes his ability for flashy assaults and acrobatics, Leaving there entire being and spirit ready at any moment to deliver a fatal blow with increased feint skills higher base agility and accuracy so deadly that hitting vital points on an enemy becomes a simple task, Using this style the combatant may target vital points on the human anatomy such as nerves tendons and organs as such this style is based around assasination missions and capture attempts giving the user the ability to kill or incapacitate with a single well placed attack.
    Also this style of fighting and its huge technical basis allows the user to read an opponents stance and motions in an effort to premeditate how they will attack, The honed mind of the user of this fighting style is skilled enough to invent new and random combat techniques in the middle of battle meaning they are quite literally full of suprises.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Can only be taught by ReXii-
    -Must be a samurai to use-
    -Using this style makes decreases your flexibility while attacking leaving little room to dodge or change positions once your attack is in progress-
    -Movement speed during an attack is increased +1-4 levels-
    -Using an attack of this style takes one jutsu slot-
    -The techniques of this school are varied in power from C-S rank needing to be stated by the user-

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    This is basically intended to be a more technical base for kenjutsu forsaking flashy techniques and tricks for dedication to the basic strikes. This will enable people focusing on the basics of kenjutsu greater accuracy and deadly skill without the need for extreme amounts of CJ instead relying on superior description of a technique. The speed and accuracy increase is dependant on the rank of the attack as stated by the user.

    ~Declined~ This can be achieved by free-form Kenjutsu and/or submitting custom Taijutsu/Kenjutsu techniques. Also, I will not allow speed boosts that are related with the speed chart.
     
         
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    (Hitoshirezu Yajuu Kata) Hidden Beast Style
    Type: Taijutsu + Ninjutsu

    Background: This Taijutsu based style incorporates both Ninjutsu as well as Taijutsu optimizing fighting in Short-Mid range. The user must train to connect with his more animistic instincts those base instincts such as the Fight or Flight response as well as many other learned and inherited behaviors. The simplest example of an instinctive behavior is a fixed action pattern/reflex, in which a very short to medium length sequence of actions, without variation, are carried out in response to a clearly defined stimulus. A true instinct is distinguished from other behaviors by mechanism; they do not go through the brain. Rather, the stimulus travels to the spinal cord and the message is then transmitted back through the body, tracing a path called the reflex arc. Reflexes are similar to fixed action patterns in that most reflexes meet the criteria of a Fix Action Patter which differs from an instinct. A reflex arc is a neural pathway that controls an action reflex. In higher animals, most sensory neurons do not pass directly into the brain, but synapse in the spinal cord. This characteristic allows reflex actions to occur relatively quickly by activating spinal motor neurons without the delay of routing signals through the brain, although the brain will receive sensory input while the reflex action occurs. This style greatly works off of this principle making a shinobi work off of intellectual actions rather than thought out plans.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Fight Or Flight response (Adrenal Rush): Animals react to threats with a general discharge of the sympathetic nervous system, priming the animal for fighting or fleeing. This response was later recognized as the first stage of a general adaptation syndrome that regulates stress responses among vertebrates and other organisms. In the human fight or flight response in prehistoric times, fight was manifested in aggressive, combative behavior and flight was manifested by fleeing potentially threatening situations, such as being confronted by a predator. In current times, these responses persist, but fight and flight responses have assumed a wider range of behaviors. For example, the fight response may be manifested in angry, argumentative behavior, and the flight response may be manifested through social withdrawal. This is one of the base principles for this style either the user prepares himself for a fight or he readies himself to run. If the person primes himself for a fight his mind will be much calmer and his movements will be fluid as well as unpredictable as there would be no thought in them. This Flight or Fight Response is one of the basic outline of Beast Art, it allows the user to enhance human abilities to animal levels. The stimulus caused by this response releases, in large amounts, a hormone that performs the following actions; it contracts the eye muscles decreasing the length of iris of the eye, which increases the diameter of the pupil allowing more light to come in (known as Pupil Dilation) thus increasing the normal vision of human eyes to maximum and good sense of interpreting the close combats, moreover it also causes Lacrimal Gland to produce extra tears which acts as a film of water around the eyes protecting them from sensitive injuries such as extreme bright light. These hormones are also responsible for body growth and with Ninjutsu combination it allows an instant growth with strength and ability to fight or defend with an equal strength and endurance of a beast.

    Stress: Is a term that is commonly used today but has become increasingly difficult to define. It shares, to some extent, common meanings in both the biological and psychological sciences. Stress typically describes a negative concept that can have an impact on one’s mental and physical well-being, but it is unclear what exactly defines stress and whether or not stress is a cause, an effect, or the process connecting the two. With organisms as complex as humans, stress can take on entirely concrete or abstract meanings with highly subjective qualities, satisfying definitions of both cause and effect in ways that can be both tangible and intangible. While under stress the human body has one of two reactions either it faces the stress head on and decides to over take the cause of the stress or he ignores it as if it might go away. This ties into the Flight or Fight response. The effects of stress are not only limited to the negative definition, if mastered in Beast Art it allows user to overcome the stress factor allowing them to think with a perspective. This nullifies the actual weakness caused by Flight or Fight Response by thinking logical attacks but still attacking in a non coordinate pattern. After overcoming stress other than mental abilities body also go through a physical change. Stress causes muscle contractions throughout the body, tightening the muscle and tendons to the exterior bones allowing user to actually take in attacks and stay unaffected. This also contributes to the Beastly characteristics making the user stronger and faster. Muscle growth occurs with these contractions and relaxations, which means that even if the Art fails the user will end up physically stronger than he/she was before using the Hidden Art.

    Fixed Action Patterns: In ethology, a fixed action pattern (FAP), or modal action pattern, is an instinctive behavioral sequence that is indivisible and runs to completion. While fixed action patterns and reflexes are clear examples of almost entirely instinctive behaviors, most behaviors are complex and consist of both instinctive and learned components. Fixed action patterns are invariant and are produced by a neural network known as the innate releasing mechanism in response to an external sensory stimulus known as a sign stimulus (a signal from one individual to another). A fixed action pattern is one of the few types of behaviors which can be said to be hard-wired and instinctive. A FAP is significant in animal behavior because it represents the simplest type of behavior, in which a readily defined stimulus nearly always results in an invariable behavioral response. A FAP can truly be said to be "hard-wired." FAPs are also unusual, in that most behaviors are modulated by the environment; a fixed response can lead to maladaptive results, whereas flexible behaviors are generally more useful. Because of this, most behaviors which are both FAPs and occur in more complex animals are usually essential to the animal's fitness or in which speed is a factor.

    Reflex Action: A reflex action, also known as a reflex, is an involuntary and nearly instantaneous movement in response to a stimulus. A true reflex is a behavior which is mediated via the reflex arc; this does not apply to casual uses of the term 'reflex. If attacked the reflex is a way to attack back without the opponent/enemy knowing. It usually happens at a fast speed and without much thought and is normally a death blow to incompasitate the opponent or mortally wound him. This may be as simple as a reactive attack. The major use of Reflex Action is the skill to dodge jutsus (Especially Taijutsus) with immense speed and uncontrollable reaction and then strike back with a powerful blow. Once the user enters the Reflex Action interval time is no limitation to him/her, it only lasts a part of second but in that part the involuntary action is the true test of beastly strength.

    Additional effects and Restrictions: Hidden Art Beast Style follows these four principle (ASFR) to increase strength, mental ability, balance, vision, endurance, stamina, and other senses beyond human levels, combined with Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, a ninja is entirely transformed into a warrior with beastly characteristics. With Taijutsu the user is mainly trying to attack the opponent but in Beast Style the user is just trying to defend himself and at the same time giving into instincts to attack the person back. Taijutsu would happen at a slower rate compared to this style as the user of Basic Taijutsu would have to think out a plan, but a user of Beast Style would just instinctually do what comes to him naturally.

    Owner(s): Howard | Blizzard

    ~Declined~ This is pretty much a more advanced version of the Inuzuka's Ninja Art of Beast Mimicry: All-Fours Jutsu and therefore a rip-off. Even if it wasn't a rip-off, this style has too many abilities and no draw-backs.
     
         
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    (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù) Reaper Scythe Arts
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Background: The Reaper Scythe Arts was a weapon style made by ~Johninto~ which utilizes using a scythe. His studying of The Grim Reaper using a scythe to claim victims made Johninto study this art. After obtaining many scythes and training to mix it with chakra Johninto made the Reaper Scythe Arts. This technique gave him the ability to mix chakra with scythes to allow him to claim victims fast like the Grim Reaper.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style involves using a scythe and mixing chakra and elemental chakra to make slashes more painful and faster. This also allows the user to use a scythe at long range even while dual wielding.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of this Art can use 2 Scythes at great speed and accurately.
    -They can mix any elemental chakra with there scythes.
    -Bio must have at least one scythe.
    -Has to be taught by a Reaper Scythe Art Master.

    ~Declined~ This is very close to approval but first I'd like you to tell me exactly how can the Scythe be used at long range? Are you talking about chakra related techniques that you release? Or possibly a chain that is attached to the Scythe that enables you swing it that far? Just minor details ^_^
     
         
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    Clumsy Deception style:-(Buzama Gi Kata)

    Type:

    Taijutsu/Genjutsu

    Background:

    A man had once been travelling around the lands and found himself in the Kumogakure tavern, whilst in the tavern he witnessed a lot of that villages drunkards who were loud and violent, not wanting to get involved the traveler left the tavern early in order to not be targeted or attacked by the drunkards for being an outsider. Once he left and walked out of the villages gates he heard some rustling sound behind him, in order to not let whoever was behind him notice he was aware of their presence the man carried on walking as normal but immediately started to run once he was hidden within some trees nearby which were located way outside of the village gates, however despite his frantic efforts he found himself surrounded by 7 bandits. These bandits were interested in the belongings of the traveler and wanted to rob him of all his money. Knowing his life was more precious the man dropped everything he had which was of value and told them it was theirs, however one of the bandits happened to be so viscous he wanted the travelers life, the traveler not knowing what he could to defend himself from 7 bandits started to panic and screamed, just as the bandits were about to attack him, a drunk Kumogakure ninja appeared. This ninja began to fight the 7 bandits and was beating them up with ease despite being extremely drunk, this weird fighting style enabled him to do surprise attacks on the bandits which they were not able to defend from without taking any damage, once he defeated the bandits the ninja went home without listening to what the traveller had to say to him, or what he even had to offer to him. The next day the traveler went back into kumogakures tavern in search for the man who had saved him and once he found him he thanked him for saving his life and offered him anything he wanted which the traveler could offer, the man stood there confused and had no idea what this random man was talking about. The traveler then explained what had happened and told the Kumogakure ninja that he was also from a long line of ninjas who specialized in Genjutsu, he explained that if he could take the mans swift and clumsy movements and by trap the enemy in a genjutsu whilst doing so it could make the ninja near unstoppable. The Kumogakure ninja agreed and trained under the man in order to enable him to be able to move like he did when he was drunk, without the consumption of alcohol but instead by simply emptying his mind and letting his body go loose. Once he had mastered that he learnt how to release chakra around his opponent and into his opponents brain making him see things which are not there or making him see things which are not happening in order to leave the enemy at a vulnerable state. After years of practicing the Kumogakure ninja mastered the art of the Clumsy death style and passed it on to his children who passed it on to theirs, passing the secrets of the technique from generation to generation.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The abilities of this technique require the user to move in a style which is similar to the drunken fist used by Rock Lee, but it gets more complex and also requires the user to release his chakra make it go into his opponent brain in order to make him see things which are not there, or things that have not happened.



    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Must have at least started Taijutsu.
    -Must have Mastered Genjutsu.
    -Must have permission from me in order to learn this style.

    ~Declined~ Similar styles already exists. If you really want this style then simply use the cannon Druken style technique and create some custom Genjutsu that enables you to do what you wanted to accomplish above with combinations.
     
         
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    Shinkirou - Mirage
    Type: Other (KenTaiGenjutsu)
    Background:
    This fighting style was experimented through years and hard work in the Second Ninja War, but almost all of it's users died in and after the war and the technique itself was forgotten. No one knows who invented it or from which village, but years later a man showed up in the Hidden Leaf Village and demanded to record him as one of the village's shinobi. Everyone laughed at him and wanted to chase him out of the village, but the Hokage made a deal with this man. If he can beat 3 Jounins at the same time and swear he will be faithful toward the village, he could earn his place in the village. Days later the fight was held and the man won. All of those who presented was suprised how fierce was that style and accepted the man as a fellow shinobi.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The origins of this technique lies in the Body Flicker technique, but instead of travelling it's focusing more on attacks and defenses. Using chakra the user strengthen his body to gain incredible speed just like the body flicker, but instead of making smoke it leaves an illusion behind. When the user starts to move he leaves a mirage behind him which can be seen for 6 seconds what deceives the enemy. The technique can be used with only 1 or more part(s) of the body, like arms or legs which allows the user more freedom in battle.

    Mirage Style - Step:
    This part of the style mostly focusing on movements. The user starts to move toward a chosen direction and leaves a full body image behind him. This mirage deceives the enemy for 6 second. This time the user could move or attack/defend freely without being noticed. To intensify the effect the user moves for a total of 7 seconds. In this time he leaves several images behind. The levels of this techniqe are different:
    1 step - 1 second -> 1 image
    2 steps - 2 seconds -> 2 images
    3 steps - 3 seconds -> 4 images
    4 steps - 4 seconds -> 6 images
    5 steps - 5 seconds -> 8 images
    6 steps - 6 seconds -> 10 images

    Mirage Style - Punch:
    This part of the style mainly focusing on attacks with the arms. Actually it's just a really fast punch what is hidden amongst the created images. The user starts to punch toward his opponent, but stops before it's actually reaching him. Just like with the step it's also creates a mirage. To make the punch effective the user has to create at least 2 images for 1 punch what is actually lands. This can be done easily, because the user only have to move his arms. The levels are different too:
    1 punch - 1 second -> 2 images
    2 punches - 2 seconds -> 6 images
    3 punches - 3 seconds -> 10 images
    4 punches - 4 seconds -> 14 images
    5 punches - 5 seconds -> 18 images
    6 punches - 6 seconds -> 22 images
    Using 2 arms at the same time doubles the effects, meaning the total punches could reach 12 and the images reach 44.

    Mirage Style – Kick:
    Similar to the punches it’s only focusing on attacks with the legs. The user creates images with his really fast fake kicks, before landing the actual kicks. To make the kicks effective the user creates at least 2 images for only 1 kick. The levels are different too:
    1 kick - 1 second -> 2 image
    2 kicks - 2 seconds -> 4 images
    3 kicks - 3 seconds -> 6 images
    4 kicks - 4 seconds -> 8 images
    5 kicks - 5 seconds -> 10 images
    6 kicks - 6 seconds -> 12 images

    Kenjutsu Integration:
    Increasing the speed of the arm not only allows the user to make faster hits, but to attack with weapons faster too. This can only be used with 1 handed weapons what are not too heavy to move. Usually with 1 handed swords and kunais, but other light weapons could be used too. The levels and the effects are the same as the kicks, but as the user has 2 arms, he could use 2 weapons at the same time which doubles the effects.

    Combining these 3 basic abilities the user could create additional abilities, but only after he masters this fighting style.

    However just like other styles it has a serious negative effect too. Using this increased speed puts too much stress on the body and makes the user exhausted.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - increased movement and attack speed
    - increased agility
    - slightly increased attack power
    - decreased stamina
    - can only be taught and used by Frozenstein
    - can only be used after started kenjutsu/taijutsu training

    ~Declined Do Not Resubmit~ Grossly OP
     
         
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    (Taekwondo) The Way of the Hand and the Foot
    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:
    Taekwondo is a Korean martial art and the national sport of South Korea. In Korean, 'tae' means "to strike or break with foot"; 'kwon' means "to strike or break with fist"; and 'do' means "way", "method", or "path". Thus, taekwondo may be loosely translated as "the way of the hand and the foot."

    It combines combat techniques, self-defense, sport, exercise, and in some cases meditation and philosophy.

    The oldest Korean martial art was an amalgamation of unarmed combat styles developed by the three rival Korean Kingdoms of Goguryeo, Silla, and Baekje, where young men were trained in unarmed combat techniques to develop strength, speed, and survival skills.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Taekwondo is known for its emphasis on kicking techniques, which distinguishes it from martial arts such as karate or southern styles of kung fu. The rationale is that the leg is the longest and strongest weapon a martial artist has, and kicks thus have the greatest potential to execute powerful strikes without successful retaliation.

    To master Taekwondo the practitioner has to know and be efficient in:
    • Stances
    • Punching
    • Kicking
    • Blocking
    • Patterns/Combinations
    • Meditation (Breathing Control)
    • Adding Chakra to Techniques
    • Adding Elemental Chakra to Techniques

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - Can only be taught to S-Class and above, who have learnt basic Taijutsu.
    - To officially master Taekwondo the practitioner has to learn all of the above and spar with their teacher in a Taijutsu only fight.
    - Once mastered the user can add elemental chakra to their techniques
    - Once mastered the user will have a calm mind and excellent breathing control, thus giving them tremendous stamina
    - Can only be taught be Kato Rokuemon

    ~Declined~ This can be achieved by free-form Taijutsu and/or by creating Taijutsu customs.
     
         
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    Hokuto Shinken | Fist of the North Star



    Type: Nin-Taijutsu
    Background:
    Hokuto Shinken is a 2,000 year old Chinese assassination art formed during the Three Kingdoms era. The founder of Hokuto Shinken is a man named Shuken of the Hokuto Sōke (北斗宗家) bloodline and the ancestor of Kenshiro and Hyoh. Fist of the Blue Sky further develops the origins of Hokuto Shinken, where it is revealed that Hokuto Shinken is a blending of Shuken's original Hokuto style and the Keiraku Hikō techniques of Seito Gekken.

    Due to its deadliness, Hokuto Shinken can only have one successor per generation according to the art's law. Students who are not chosen to inherit the succession must renounce the style voluntarily or risk having their memories erased or their fists crushed. This is due to the extreme consequences of the style being held by one who is evil at heart; in this case, Raoh and Jagi were corrupted. Toki renounced his successorship due to his illness, hence nominated Kenshiro as the successor.The role of successor is also to have said to hold the responsibilities of the guardian of the Emperor of Heaven in Chinese Astronomy and legend, being the merciless punisher of evil and protector of the innocent.
    Late in the series, it is revealed that
    Hokuto Shinken was introduced to Japan through a pilgrimage of Kūkai in the 9th century.



    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The average person uses only 30% of their body's potential strength, but those who had mastered Hokuto Shinken can tap into the remaining 70% as well. The art's power lies into channeling one's energy in a single blow and striking into the 708 "Hidden Channeling Points" in the human body (also known as acupressure points, power points, vital points, tsubo, etc.) This causes the victim's chakra to build in in the point of contact or to be incapacitated after several blows. It can also be used to combat psychological wounds, such as cutting off flow of chakra within oneself by knowing, though the main purpose of Hokuto Shinken is assassination.

    Hokuto Shinken also derives power by using chakra into a battle or fighting aura to use the human body's full potential as well as to project energy attacks. These energy attacks can be also used to strike pressure points. As with many Chinese Martial Arts, there is a soft style, which depends on accuracy and agility, which the founding fathers Kenshiro and Toki use, and a hard style, which Raoh uses often, which relies on brute power to break down targets.

    Additional effects and Restrictions: This fighting style is similar to gentle fist with how fast it is, and can only be taught to one other person as it takes much experience in taijutsu in order to achieve such speeds in attacking as well as the accuracy in knowing the spots to hit. The purpose of the fighting style is to break down the opponents muscles and therefore the chakra system caught in the middle of it. The range of the capabilities of this fighting style are from: Causes the opponent's body to be paralyzed for a moment, Causes an opponent to walk against his will, Prevents an opponent's lung from exhaling, Immobilizes an opponent's arms, Stops an opponent's breathing temporarily, Causes one to lose their sense of depth perception, & Leaves an opponent's jaw permanently open. These are acheived through attacking the opponents acupressure points, power points, vital points, tsubo, etc. Due to being very skilled in this assassination style of fighting, the masters of this technique know exactly where to strike and take down their opponents the fastest, or take them out over time.



    The drawbacks of this technique far outweigh the advantages.

    Note: May only be taught to one other person by sparring with the master in 3 separate sessions.
    Note: Must be of at least Unofficial Sage to learn
    Note: Techniques for this style can only be performed three times per battle
    Note: This fighting style lasts 4 turns then you will be unable to move your arms for one turn.
    Note: Can only use up to B ranked taijutsu for 4 turns afterwards
    Note: After attacking, the user will be unable to use the basic 5 elements for 3 turns.
    Note: Affects can be countered if the opponent channels chakra into their fingers hitting the exact spot the blow occurred in, but will need one turn for affects to reverse.

    ~Declined~ As you said so yourself this is very similar to the Gentle fist. On top of that you'd need medical training to be able to locate and hit said pressure and vital points.
     
         
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    Eagle Claw


    Washi Tsume | Eagle Claw

    Type: Advanced-Taijutsu

    Background:While the details of the history alter according to the teller, with names and places shifting as they tend to do in any oral history, in essence the story of Eagle Claw began in the Shaolin Temple and in Chinese assasination training, became a tradition passed on from one single generation to the other.The style is normally attributed to the famous patriotic Song Dynasty General Yue Fei. Popular legends states that he learned martial arts from a Shaolin Monk named Zhou Tong and later created Eagle Claw to help his armies combat the invading armies of the Jin Dynasty. It was passed down until the Ming Dynasty when the monk Lai Chin combined the style with another form of boxing called Fanzi. Thus, the style took on long range strikes and aerial jumps. During the Qing Dynasty, the military instructor Liu Shi Jun became known as the modern progenitor of Eagle Claw and taught few students.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:Eagle Claw Kung Fu is a traditional chinese martial art and is one of the oldest and most complex of the surviving Northern Shaolin kung fu systems. Along with the long strikes and kicks that represent Northern systems, the Eagle Claw system is distinguished by its gripping techniques and system of joint locks, takedowns, and pressure point strikes, which represent one of the oldest forms of the Chinese grappling known as Chin Na. The user's 80% of physical strength is also utilized, making it very dangerous both for the opponent and the user

    How the Eagle Claw system is taught varies between each teachers skill and experiences. What is consistent of an Eagle Claw Master is their knowledge of the core set of the style.
    Lian Quan (Lin Kuen) is known as the Linking Fist. A very important set in that it not only provides the exponent with an encyclopedic base of various Seizing, Grappling and Joint Locks but a set that incoporates various Qi Gong Skills as well.
    • Arm Throws
    • Leg Locks
    • Vertical grab
    • Claw blocks
    Yue Shi San Shou aka Yī Bi Ling Ba Qín Na (Yat Ling Bat Kahm Na)– “108 Seize Grab” aka 108 Locking Hands is considered the "Heart" of the Eagle Claw System. Believed to be the material passed down by the legendary Yue Fei of China's Song Dynasty. This material is 108 different categories of skills/techniques that are trained to a level of pefection with partners.
    Missing any of the 2 core sets will severely hinder a students hope of mastering this style. This usually consists of the utilization of the user's physical strength to deliver strong attacks on the upper meridian of the user.Since the user's speed is also increased, the user can block efficiently against B-Rank taijutsu attacks without any damage and can dodge attacks fluently.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • The user's speed is increased by x1.5
    • Physical strength is very high and so is the reaction time.
    • Can only be used 3 times per battle.
    • Must be trained in normal taijutsu.
    • Since this style causes strain in the body, the user cannot move his arms for 2 turn.
    • Only one Eagle claw master is to be there.
    • Can only use 2 elemental jutsu's for the next rounds.

    Owners: pradattauchiha | Nagato..

    ~Declined~ Pressure point strikes require medical training. Also if you want this to ever be approved you're going to have to tone down the abilities. Speed increase of 1.5, increased strength, increased reaction time, and being able to block B-Rank Taijutsu without damage? Simply too much.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    ‡(Ishikijutsu)- senses art‡
    Type:Ishikijutsu
    Background: sensing arts is a special type of fighting style where the user overflow's chakra to one or more of the five perception methods( sight, hearing, smelling, tasting, feeling) to the point that it exceed's a normal human being but doesn't come near to that of a dojutsu, inner sonar skill or inzuka. the technique was created by a group of ninja in sunagakure who remain only in the shadow's. once the user has trained properly the user can have crisp clear sight, noticing things that a normal human being couldn't see, but not one a molecular level, crisp clear sound, being able to hear things about 50 meters around them, but can't cancel out sounds, can smell up to 50 meters but cannot keep this constant. since the nose is a very sensitive organ of the body, keeping this jutsu active could result in nose bleeds and headaches. the overflowing chakra increases one's tastebuds as well. then, by overflowing chakra to one's skin, the user can feel little changes by keeping the neural receptors active , the user can sense heat and the absence of heat around them(short-range). with this the user can also activate pain receptors at any-time, causing one to feel pain but there is no pain
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Art revolves around increasing someone's perception while on the battle field. the user uses raw chakra to do this.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Effect: A master of ishikijutsu will be able to overflow chakra to a maximum of two senses
    Restriction: one cannot overflow chakra for more than 5 turns or else the user will loose that sense.

    ~Declined~ How is this a fighting style? You are simply boosting your senses. If anything this should be submitted as a CJ with a very slim chance at approval. This is simply mixing multiple cannon abilities together.

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    ‡(sutoringujutsu)- string arts‡
    Type: sutoringujutsu
    Background: sutoringujutsu or string arts is a more advanced art of puppetry.The user still utilizes the very concentrated strings made out of raw chakra, but only the user's uses elemental chakra to construct the strings, or the user can channel elemental chakra through the strings to the puppets or the intended target. The affinities that can be channeled are earth and lightning.The one's that can be constructed are lightning and fire . By channeling earth chakra through the strings, the user can stop the puppet's movement by weighing the user down. By channeling wind affinity, it can greatly increase the sharpness of the strings. By constructing it out of lightning, one can greatly increase the speed of a puppet. These strings still retain the weakness to other elements, weather channeled or contsructed.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Great chakra flow in order to construct or channel elemental chakra
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Effect: there are none
    Restriction: must have mastered puppetry techniques
    Restriction: must be taught by a puppet master
    Restriction: must have a puppet bio

    ~Declined~ This is also not a fighting style but more of a custom technique that can be submitted in the CJ thread.
     
         
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    Shaolin Kung Fu
    Type:Kentaijutsu
    Background:
    Kung fu - ‘kung’ meaning ‘energy’ and ‘fu’ meaning ‘time’ - is a traditional martial art whose recorded history dates back before the first ninja world war, The man credited with introducing martial arts is said to be a monk known as Bodhidarma (who is also known as Tamo).

    Tamo had devised a set of '18 movement exercises', which are also known as the '18 hands exercises'; he taught these to his disciples in the temple, believing that the development of a strong body would prevent the disciples from falling asleep during meditation.

    The '18 movement exercises' had their origin in techniques formed and developed in the Mountains; they were designed in such a way that daily practice of these techniques would strengthen and improve the health of the disciples.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The power of the kung fu practitioner lay in his ability to defend himself against impossible odds and situations. After years of the most diligent practice, these ninjas became more than merely adept at the ways of survival. But the initial acceptance to be one of the chosen few was difficult.

    As academy students, childrens wanting to be ninjas were made to do the most menial and difficult work related to the upkeep of the temple. Their sincerity and ability to keep the secrets of the order were severely tested for years before the finer aspects of the order were revealed to them. But, upon being accepted by the elders of the temple, his or her entry into kung fu was to open a whole new world. The student would work long hours training mind and body to work together in a coordinated effort. He would learn the principles of combat, the way of the Tao, and together they would ensure his way to peace.

    One would be taught initially the first basic fist sets, the prearranged forms which simulated multiple attacks. These in turn became more complex as the student advanced, while he would simultaneously be learning the way of Taoism.

    Upon completion of the student stage, one became a disciple who would be taught the higher secrets of the arts and philosophies. Weapons of all descriptions would become familiar to him as weapons of attack and defense. One would perfect his movements to coincide with his breathing. One's mind would meld into the realm of meditation known as mindlessness. And one would learn to harness chakra.

    Essential to movements in kung fu are chakra-controlled actions. Compare the movements of a normal taijutsu user and a kung fu practitioner, and the differences are at once obvious. The taijutsu moves deliberately, forcefully, each move unique and distinct from each other move. He punches linearly, kicks in a straight line, and keeps his body as rigid as iron. The Kung Fu artist, on the other hand, is smooth and fluid in motion, allowing several moves to meld imperceptibly into one long, graceful action.

    Most Common Weapons being used in Shaolin Kung Fu

    Shaolin Halberd
    Shaolin Stick/Staff
    Shaolin Broadsword
    Shaolin Straightsword
    Shaolin Nine Section Chain/Whip



    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu is adept to both hand to hand combat and use of weapons.
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu gain the ability think clearly and to be calm yet alert.
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu gain the ability to react quickly, be more flexible, endure more physical damage, and to concentrate without mental fatigue.

    -Shaolin Kung Fu requires more stamina than normal taijutsu as the movements are more strainuous than other techs.
    -Shaolin Kung Fu focuses on precise swift strikes rather than brute physical strength giving its attacks less damage.
    -Shaolin Kung Fu requires 5 stages of training to master to fully use all its ability.

    ~Declined~ This can be achieved by free-form Taijutsu or by submitting Taijutsu customs in the CJ thread.
    If you want to utilize those weapons stated above then simply include them in your biography.
     
         
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    (ZX Basutā) ZX Buster
    Type:Taijutsu
    Background:Keotsu, a highly-regarded swordsman, was well aware of the fact that even Kenjutsu had a basis in the pure form of Taijutsu, and thus desired to create his own style. He observed both the Strong Fist – a “Hard” and “External” style that dealt with physical strength and overpowering your opponent’s blows – and the Gentle Fist - a “Soft” and “Internal” style that dealt with meditation and deflecting attacks, being more focused on deflecting and attacking with pinpoint chakra discharges -, both of which are the two extremes of the Taijutsu spectrum.

    Desiring to make a balanced fighting style that could be of great aide to its practitioners, he desired to take the best qualities from each style, and create a form that was both “Hard” and Soft”, both “Internal” and “External”, knowing the entire time that it wouldn’t excel in those areas as well as the Taijutsu forms that specialized in them; in order to make up for these shortcomings and as well to enhance and reinforce the style to his personal tastes and designs, he also decided to make Chakra Flow and Shape Manipulation integral parts of this form, creating this unique and diverse style of Taijutsu.

    The result of all this meditation was the creation of the ZX Buster; a unique style of fighting that relied upon chakra discharges to augment physical strength, and the use of Shape Manipulation and Chakra Flow to help give form and additional strength to the abilities.

    Meant to augment short-range fighters, it is the perfect complement to well-founded Swordsman and Martial Artists, while being a devastating style all its own.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:Generally, utilizing ZX Buster requires the use of small pieces of chakra metal which are placed on the user’s knuckles and the palms of their hand, though experienced users of the style are capable of performing the techniques without the gauntlet generally used; the mechanism, though, is also built into the user’s shoes, to allow for the feet to be used in the style.

    Since Chakra leaves the body through natural leakage, it is utilized in this style as a way to conserve more of the user’s own energies. Because of this, as much as being based upon momentum as are many Taijutsu styles, ZX Buster is based around Chakra Charge.

    The Chakra Charge is a basic and yet complex component to the style; ZX Buster works by when the user goes to strike, they accelerate their chakra flow in the direction of their strike, collecting a mass of chakra that helps focus the leaking chakra into the blow as well – upon contact, all of this chakra is released, making it so that a “Spiritual” assault is delivered as well as a physical one, doubling the force behind the strike in most cases. Chakra Charge involves withholding chakra prior to the movement, creating an even greater chakra discharge.

    With this chakra discharge, Shape Manipulation can be applied, meaning that ZX Buster becomes infinitely diverse; slicing “ribbons” could be created from movement, or all the chakra can be released as a great lance upon impact, in a sort of “repulse knuckle”, or the chakra could help create a type of shield.

    Simply called “Zero Knuckle” or “X Fist” depending on the practitioner, it should be noted that the Chakra used in ZX Buster is special; unlike the Gentle Fist, it does not damage the Chakra Pathway by sealing Tenketsu, but rather empties the area of impact and a small surrounding area of chakra for a split second; the result of this means that the Chakra Discharge is an effective way of fighting against those who integrate things such as Nagashi or Earth Spear into their Taijutsu styles, as it simply blows the chakra away, allowing the remainder of the chakra, and the actual physical attack, to make contact to do damage.

    Because of the reliance on Chakra, the “One-Inch Punch” is an integral part of the style; were as the total damage is supposed to be composed of 50% Physical Damage and 50% Chakra damage, that ration can be vastly changed via the Chakra Charge mechanic; put simply, Charging Chakra increases the force behind a blow.

    Not requiring as large an amount of strength as the Strong Fist, or as Precise chakra control as the Gentle Fist (as this is used to expel moderate, rather than precise amounts of chakra through chakra flow), this style offers a good middle ground, and does still require a user who is strong in body, and skilled in chakra control, as in the high-speed combat that comes with Close-range fighting, being able to manipulate their energies for this style must be second nature. It should be noted, though, that as the physical strength of a user increases, the momentum of a blow increases, and thus so does the size and strength of the chakra discharge.

    It should be noted, as Chakra is such an integral part of this style, that it is possible to use this as a type of “ranged” Taijutsu, making it useful to defend a user so that they can work to close the distance to short range, as well; and due to the supplementary nature, some techniques can even be used through Weapons, despite being created for Taijutsu.

    Chakra Charge Mechanics:
    Able to be used through Body or Weapons
    Increases the strength/chakra cost of other ZX Buster moves according to the following:
    Lv1 = +10; Chakra = No change
    Lv2 = +20; Chakra = +10
    Lv3 (Max) = +40; Chakra = +40
    When used without another ZX Buster technique, Lv1 is B-ranked, Lv2 is A ranked, and Lv3 is S-ranked, and only reaches Mid-range.
    A charge can be collected at any time, and held until used; the beginning of a charge counts as a move, but not the release; being neutral chakra, it doesn’t interfere with Ninjutsu usage.
    Can only be used through weapons in Lv2 and Lv3.


    (Visual Representation and References)
    The top portion represents a generic chakra discharge upon contact; the gauntlet shown is reduced down to pieces of chakra metal.
    Various techniques utilized can be seen and are as follows (they are currently in planning and may or may not be submitted):
    2:09 – Chakra Charge[Lv1] (Fist; Ranged)
    2:15 – Chakra Charge[Lv2] (Fist; Ranged)
    2:40 – Chakra Charge[Lv3 (Max)] (Fist, Ranged)
    Various Shape Manipulation Aspects of a Charged Ranged Fist Follow
    5:30 – Nova Strike (Full-body; requires Hienkyaku)
    5:45 – Excellent Freeform Demonstration (“X-Fist/Zero Knuckle”)
    Various Special Techniques are as follows:
    1:35 – Chakra Charge [Lv2] (Weapon; Short)
    1:39 – Chakra Charge [Lv2, 3] (Fist, Ranged)
    1:50 – Rakuhouha
    1:58/3:49 – Rekkouha (Defensive/Offensive)
    4:57 – Chakra Charge [LvMax] (Weapon;Short)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -ZX Buster users have no strength difference than other Taijutsu users; however their blows do twice the damage as they normally would, due to the chakra discharge.
    -Most ZX techniques have moderate chakra cost and are reusable, as they draw from the chakra that is naturally leaked, reducing the “actual” chakra cost.
    -Due to training to withstand their own Chakra Blows, ZX Buster users are incredibly sturdy, having amazing stamina and endurance, when compared to even Strong Fist Masters.
    -ZX users have amazing chakra control, due to the fast-paced nature of Taijutsu, and the ability to utilize this style with every strike.
    Previous Approval
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    ~Pending~ Leaving for Scorps to check.

    ±± Declined ±± The only things that concern me were what you added. The levels and such. The +damage is relating to what? Also, the emptying of chakra in that place and the creating slices and etc through chakra expulsion is too close to Gentle Fist. I'll allow you (and i think its genius) to have chakra blasts to aid your taijutsu and have chakra powered moves and etc. as those are things we've seen beyond the sphere of gentle fist. However, some of what you describe is very very similar to Gentle fist. The damage part...i need to know exactly how that works mate ^^
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Thunderbolt View Post

    ±± Declined ±± You are confusing a custom hand to hand/weapon fighting style with a technique/move.

    Ancient Embedded Hidden needleの組み込まれた隠し針 Kodai no kumikomareta kakushi hari

    Type: Nin-Kenjutsu

    Background: This Fighting style was originated and first known to have been practiced in the early Greece more than a 3 Million years ago by the ancestral descendant of the Greek Gods. it was rumored and said to have been developed by the Greek God Zeus who developed the technique as a way to mark his ground and show his strength and dominance as the king of the heavens and ruler to the earthlings. The style was said to be of such power that even Zeus feared its strength and the wrong it could be used if placed in the wrong hands he kept the style of fighting under bay and never practiced and taught it to no one even his brothers, This was until he mated with a human and gave birth to a son which was known as the brave man in Greek mythology called Hercules he taught this style to his son as final measure to keep him safe if he ever came to any serious harm or fear of harm but telling him not to ever teach no man the technique or even talk of it. Hercules intends to the wise words of his father and shows the techniques to no one not even his own flesh and blood and rarely used it and preferred to result tot other means to deal with his problems which resulted in him fighting. Hercules was just one man and soon word got out a technique which could take out several men is jutst one move and attracted people all over the globe especially individuals from places we come to know today I asia as china and Japan they came all to see the forbidden fighting style which was being used but to their disappointment they did not. It was all moody and deem for these travelers until a certain day where he was assigned on one of his tasks or so called labours this time it was to retrieve a monster livin in the swamps with the name of Lernaean Hydra which was a monster of great strength and demonic power Hercules was sent to destroy this creature with is nephew lolaus but the strength of the beast was to fierce for Hercules to over come so he performed the technique and upon one slay weakened the beast up where lolaus was able to hold a torch to each of the stumps to prevent the demon of coming back again upon sight of this technique after they had come back from their journey it was said lolaus was fascinated with it and on several instances asked Hercules to teach him .Not much was known from them but it was said that Hercules finally taught lolaus the technique with which to Hercules disappointment passed it on to few other before he died.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style
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    This fighting move is one of great strength and power and if wielded and used in a proper manner is one of the deadliest weapons in existence. The user prior to performing the the fighting move will carry several thin sharp needles finely carved And places into his veins on his hands he then uses his raw chakra and fuses it into the needles which make them grow to any desired length strength or thickness or numbers this is due to the needles being placed in the user body and chakra being implanted to it as if it was a body par and thus grows on it own the user also makes use of his wind chakra which he infuses around the already grown and neutered needles to further sharpen and strengthen the grown needles up to the point as If it were steel. The user can also use this style of fighting as a shield against taijutsu attack which deals with strong physical impact by bracing his arms together and using the needles as shield. The fighting style can also protect the user against lightning attacks of any sort due to the style usage of wind .The needles can be placed in one hands or two this is up to the opponent and his preference though two arms increases the strength of the style of fighting and also the damages on the user .This stye is able to create repel like impact when used on a target as the user as not only does it cut the target but die to the wind it pushes him back tremendously, this style one of little powerful a several abilities Is that it allows the user of the style to know the opponents whereabouts if he has being cut or impacted on by the fighting style since the usage of this fighting style revolves around the opponent veins and his blood system it is safe to say that when the opponent is being impacted on or cut by the style of fighting and also using little of the user blood and chakra and used in the attack and this affecting him too. Finally the last of the of this style ability and the and the most powerful .the style is done by a precise and strong and concentrated blow to the head of the opponent to his brain which affects his cerebral cortex the region of the brain which controls memory ,awareness ,thought and consciousness a direct from this technique can cause a sudden temporary but fast alteration in of the these functions this means it could render his opponent lacking memory loss and without knowledge of his jutsu or him not knowing his surrounding area due to no awareness or even passing out due to no or little concentrations and good consciousness.This needles can be pulled out and retracted at will upon choice of the user but is mostly left in arms later taken out after battle course this style has the capabilities depending on the user (Genin_Sage) to which amount of damage the technique does At full use or even at the mere hands of a practiced user with skill this jutsu is more than enough to overpower basic taijutsu attacks and even normal katana with basically minimal effort.This style of fighting combines with sharigan kekkei genkai makes this technique advance into another level where the opponents is able to dodge and intercept taijutsu and lightning attack with little efforts.This fighting style also provides the user with a great threshold against pain and a focused mind due to his ability to use the technique properly even though under pain this makes him more less to fall victim to ninjutsu attacks based on killing intentions and fears.This also seems to be a good defense against breaking genjutsu as the user can take use of the pain of the already imbedded needles and upon sudden movements can feel pain that can break low ranking genjutsu.

    Additional effects and Restrictions
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    Requires a sharingan to perform a concentrated blow which affects the cerebral cortex and affects the opponent human senses .

    Must have mastered wind and in Ninjutsu.

    Must need thunderbolt permission to use

    Can not use 3 jutsu for next 2 rounds due to pain from implanted blade needles.

    The technique which affects the senses due to a direct focused blow from the opponent can only be countered by a 2 tomoe sharignan.

    The technique last for 4 Rounds

    I changed it to nin kenjutsu making it be more of a weaponry fighting style but still involving ninjutsu i also made changes to the grammars and removed things about it be a jutsu . I increased the restriction from having starting training in ninjutsu to have mastered it i also made the specialized attack more dodge -able and not to be so op i did this by limiting the requirement of evading or dodging the move from having a 3 tomoe sharigan to 2.


    ~Declined~ Needles placed inside of your veins? What's preventing you from slowly bleeding to death? Blood would still leak out while having those needles placed inside. The only effective way to have those needles inside of your veins and not lose blood is through medical related means which require training/permission. Also channeling chakra to expand the needles is too similar to the Akimichi Clan's expansion technique. Lastly, this still looks like a technique rather than a fighting style.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Genkoutsu Kamakiri | The Mantis Fist

    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:The Mantis Fist is a taijustu style that invovles the user striking the enemy with one or more of their fingers in rapid succesion in specific places alternating between hands for each strike . While striking the enemy, the user focus's a large amount of Raiton or Katon chakra on the tops of their fingers and when they strike the enemy, they allow the chakra to penetrate into the enemies body, however even though it is a very pinpoint strike done with the finger tips, its effects are devestating as when the user makes contact with the opponent, they insert their chakra into the opponents body, the chakra ripples outwards and in the direction of the original strike, much like when a pebble is dropped into a shallow pond and the water around it is disturbed and ripples outwards. The effects of the Mantis Fist can be increased further by striking certain spots on the body, such as pressure points or nerve endings.
    When this is done with raiton chakra, the chakra will ripple outwards on impact, which may affect motor and sensory neurons with its static charges, this can cause various effects.
    By using fire chakra the user can heat water present in bodies or the atmosphere causing the water to evapourate, this can be very effective as the body is made up of large sums of water and many organs rely on water present in the body

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    -Paralysation in the surronding area.
    -Loss of feeling and pain in that area. The users raiton chakra's static charges are used to counter the static charges of the opponents sensory neurons, making the opponent have a loss of feeling and pain in that area, this proves disadvantageous, as damage can be done to the opponents body via a strongfist follow up without the opponent ever being aware of the effects caused(Broken ribs pierced lungs ect.)
    -Heating and evapouration of water sources.



    Additional effects and Restrictions: The Mantis Fist has one last ability, because of the way that the chakra is released and inserted, the non physical chakra part of the Mantis Fist does not require contact with the opponents body to work. Infact once the ripple effect is released, it can travel through mediums such as earth water and air for up to 5 inches the ripples becoming wider and affecting a larger area but becoming less potent as it reaches further from the source, much like a wave that passess through a small gap into a large area. The area covered having a diameter of 6 inches per 1 inch distance form the source.
    This style of fighting is called mantis fist,since it mostly involves striking your opponent with the tip of your finger(s) in rapid succesion,and since mantis have scythe like fingers instead of hands and move in rapid ridigid jerky like motions i thought the name was befitting.
    The Mantis fist contains stances that are strange and unusual,and usualy unprecidented to the enemy,making a mantis fist users movements hard to read.
    -Due to the Mantis Fist involving mimicking the actual movements of a Mantis, a Mantis Fist User moves unlike any mammal with extreme precision and speed, and unlike that of a average human a mantis fist users reactions are not fueled by fear or instinct leading them to overeact and make unecesary movements but the mantis style involves the slightest movements so as to avoid things and thus avoid unnecessary reflexes making Mantis Fist users extremely effecient at dodging, and giving them room for a swift counterattack.

    Note:Anyone other than -Scaze- must be taught to use the mantis fist justu's
    ~Precise chakra control is needed to benifit from the full offense of the mantis fist.
    ~Requires the user to have mastered Taijustu/strong fist and started Raiton and Fire training
    ~Anyone other than -Scaze- must be Taught the Mantis Fist
    ~Because of the rigid jerky like motions, and the roundabout manner that Mantis Fist users use, the Mantis Fist and its techniques cannot be predicted by 2T Sharingan and lower, with some of the more draining Mantis fist jutsu being unpredictable even by 3T.(Will be noted underneath Mantis Fist Jutsu)
    ~Mantis Fist users are also exceptionally Agile.


    ±± Declined ±± First thing the back ground isn't the background but rather how the style works. So you need to come up with a background and pass all of that into the description of the abilities of the style. The sharingan part is overpowered. That would mean no one could defend or react against a move of that style. Take that out. Also the part about reflexes and speed needs to be translated into short topics that every Mantis Fist will be able to have

    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:The mantis fist is a Nintaijutsu style that was devloped after observing the Preying Mantis and he way it moves, and then mimicking its movements and speeds through intense training and practice. Chakra is then used to augement the pin point strikes which on their own would only be slightly more effective than strong fist.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The Mantis Fist is a taijustu style that invovles the user striking the enemy with one or more of their fingers in rapid succesion in specific places alternating between hands for each strike . While striking the enemy, the user focus's a large amount of Raiton or Katon chakra on the tops of their fingers and when they strike the enemy, they allow the chakra to penetrate into the enemies body, however even though it is a very pinpoint strike done with the finger tips, its effects are devestating as when the user makes contact with the opponent, they insert their chakra into the opponents body, the chakra ripples outwards and in the direction of the original strike, much like when a pebble is dropped into a shallow pond and the water around it is disturbed and ripples outwards. The effects of the Mantis Fist can be increased further by striking certain spots on the body, such as pressure points or nerve endings.
    When this is done with raiton chakra, the chakra will ripple outwards on impact, which may affect motor and sensory neurons with its static charges, this can cause various effects.
    -Paralysation in the surronding area.
    -Loss of feeling and pain in that area. The users raiton chakra's static charges are used to counter the static charges of the opponents sensory neurons, making the opponent have a loss of feeling and pain in that area, this proves disadvantageous, as damage can be done to the opponents body via a strongfist follow up without the opponent ever being aware of the effects caused(Broken ribs pierced lungs ect.)
    -Heating and evapouration of water sources.



    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    By using fire chakra the user can heat water present in bodies or the atmosphere causing the water to evapourate, this can be very effective as the body is made up of large sums of water and many organs rely on water present in the body The Mantis Fist has one last ability, because of the way that the chakra is released and inserted, the non physical chakra part of the Mantis Fist does not require contact with the opponents body to work. Infact once the ripple effect is released, it can travel through mediums such as earth water and air for up to 5 inches the ripples becoming wider and affecting a larger area but becoming less potent as it reaches further from the source, much like a wave that passess through a small gap into a large area. The area covered having a diameter of 6 inches per 1 inch distance form the source.
    This style of fighting is called mantis fist,since it mostly involves striking your opponent with the tip of your finger(s) in rapid succesion,and since mantis have scythe like fingers instead of hands and move in rapid ridigid jerky like motions i thought the name was befitting.
    The Mantis fist contains stances that are strange and unusual,and usualy unprecidented to the enemy,making a mantis fist users movements hard to read.
    -Due to the Mantis Fist involving mimicking the actual movements of a Mantis, a Mantis Fist User moves unlike any mammal with extreme precision and speed, and unlike that of a average human a mantis fist users reactions are not fueled by fear or instinct leading them to overeact and make unecesary movements but the mantis style involves the slightest movements so as to avoid things and thus avoid unnecessary reflexes making Mantis Fist users extremely effecient at dodging, and giving them room for a swift counterattack.

    Note:Anyone other than -Scaze- must be taught to use the mantis fist justu's
    ~Precise chakra control is needed to benifit from the full offense of the mantis fist.
    ~Requires the user to have mastered Taijustu/strong fist and started Raiton and Fire training
    ~Anyone other than -Scaze- must be Taught the Mantis Fist
    ~Mantis Fist users are also exceptionally Agile.


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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (Kapoeira Geijutsu) Capoeira Art
    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:
    Capoeira is a special type of fighting that consists of rhythm. The rhythm originated from dances formed by slaves long ago. This dance was created in the little free time the slaves received to rest. It was always fast paced and very upbeat. After some time performing these dances, the slaves noticed that the dance seemed very dangerous. After several discussions and attempts the slaves decided this dance style would be a good disquise for a new form of fighting. The slaves chose specific dancers to conquer and perfect the new fighting style. Time passed and the dancers had perfected the fighting style. They later on taught others how to perform this. Making it useful for defensive and offensive tactics, the slaves organized a revolt. The slaved then overpowered the people controlling them, doing it all in one swift and deadly “dance”. This dance was passed down to those who seeked and is now called: Capoiera.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This special Taijutsu relies on swift, rapid, strong, and very accurate movements.. The fighting style consists of sweeping the opponent of the ground as well as many flips and turns to both dodge and attack. The movements cannot be easily followed as the user can change the rhythm in which he is attacking at any given moment. When attacking, the user gets momentum from spinning and various other ways causing attacks to be several times stronger than they previously were. Capoeira makes practically every move both an attack and defense. A user could go for an attack and easily counterattack, dodge or defend, if the first attack was never successful. This form of fighting style proves to be really affective against many other forms of fighting because of its quickness and successfulness. The initial stance involves movement and is known as “The Roda”. The initial stance shows a part of the history of Capoeira, as well as it's fast movement and rhythm.


    This is the initial stance “The Roda”

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of Capoeira have increased Agility, Reflexes, Strength, Speed, and Accuracy compared to that of a regular user.
    -Capoeira users must be physically fit
    -Due to how much stamina is spent, regular users cannot fight in this style for long periods of time.
    -This fighting style can only be taught by a Capoeira Master

    ~Declined~ You need to find a way to incorporate music while you are fighting to get into the actual rhythm. Also Agility, Reflexes, Strength, Speed, and Accuracy? That's too much.. either tone it down or add more drawbacks. Lastly, I'd like you to specify exactly how long the user can fight in this style.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    "Kei Seken"

    Type:
    NinTaijutsu

    Background:
    Also known as "Strong Worlds" taijutsu; This style of combat was invented by barbaric ice warriors who pillage villages taking down their mightiest warriors using this style. This style was later adopted by wise monks who were able to incorporate it into a even more deadly style of combat which would explain it's somewhat brutal and barbaric type of attacks. This style became known as "Kei Sekken" Strong World Taijutsu.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Kei Seken is based off enduring blows to the body while performing one hit knockouts using all strength and energy into one specific blow rather than multiple ones. The user's stance is always having a fluid lower body while having a solid upper body (Opposite of gentle fists techniques that require fast paced with little damage) meaning that most techniques are slower but deal way more damage and this can be reversed to make kicks devestating. The fluid lower body is so that the user can move around freely and quickly while the solid upper body is to keep the muscles tense and clinched for powerful impacts(reverse if for legs). Some masters of this art were actually able to take it a step further and were able to incorporate their spirit and physical energy(chakra) into their body to increase it's reflexis, strength, and impacts to perform very powerful techniques that under normal circumstances, they can't perform (Nowhere near that of the 5th Hokage and Sakura although could be considered a water downed version). Most techniques of Kei Sekken involve enduring, countering, or dodging a technique and then performing a deathly blow to the opponent mostly through using a part of the body that can deal the most blunt damage such as the elbow, fist, knee, fore head, foot, etc. Its not the fastest style but it makes up for it in power

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -To learn this style, the user must already have a certain degree of strength and endurance(S-Class Ninja) and have trained in basic taijutsu as its not effective with people who are of weaker body or untrained.

    -Pluses to learning is the strength and durability development in both mind and body. The user would be able to match someone a rank higher than him in both strength and endurance (Does not apply with being a sage). Also, the user could now ignore his/her surroundings except the opponent if he/she wants to.


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    Taiketsu Yagami, our loyal member, gave on the date February 29th of 2012 a request for a Patent on custom fighting style (Strong Worlds, Kei Seken). I, Mathias of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;[/justify]


    Powered by Mathias
    Copyright 2012, Taiketsu Yagami, NarutoBase.net

     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Sutairu Yamazaru | Monkey Style
    Type: KenTaijutsu
    Background: Monkey Style is an ancient martial art which utilizes ape or monkey-like movements as part of its technique.

    There are five variations of Monkey Style that have been developed to be the core techniques.


    • Drunken Monkey
    • Stone Monkey
    • Lost Monkey
    • Standing Monkey
    • Wooden Monkey



    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Monkey Style includes includes running on all fours (i.e. the hands and feet), various difficult acrobatic movements such as flipping sideways in the air, front flips, back flips, back handsprings, hand stands, walking on the hands, forward lunges/dives, backward lunges, spinning on the butt, spinning on the back and many kicks and strikes. Most of the attacks are aimed at the knees, groin area, throat or eyes of the opponent and hand strikes are normally either open handed slaps or clawing with a semi-closed fist called the monkey claw. A wide array of facial monkey expressions are also practiced, inclusive of happiness, anger, fear, fright, confusion and bewilderment etc. Except for very brief periods, most movements inclusive of running are executed from either a squatting or semi-squatting position and are normally accompanied by very swift and 'jerky' head movements as the user nervously looks around.


    Drunken Monkey - uses a lot of throat, eye and groin strikes as well as tumbling and falling techniques. It incorporates a lot of false steps to give the appearance it is defenseless and uses a lot of off balance strikes. The practitioner waddles, takes very faltering steps and sometimes fall to the ground and lies prone while waiting for the opponent to approach at which time a devastating attack is launched at the knees or groin areas of the opponent. It is one of the more difficult of the monkey styles to master and also extremely effective against a standard, attack-oriented enemy. Countering this style involves shifting your body around often to ensure that the Drunken Monkey user impacts more solid, tougher areas of your body.

    Stone Monkey - more of a physical style. The user trains up his body to exchange blows with the opponent. Stone Monkey uses a kind of Iron body method. It will leave an area exposed on its body for an opponent to attack, so it can attack a more vital spot on the body. It is important not to attack reflexively at open spots, and try to hammer away at their weak spots until they give in.

    Lost Monkey - users of Lost Monkey give the appearance of being lost and confused to deceive the opponent into underestimating his abilities, and he retaliates when it is least expected. The hands and footwork change and flow from each other at will. This technique incorporates the fear, nervousness and mischief of a monkey who has wandered into a neighboring territory, while nervously looking around before scurrying back to its own home range.

    Standing Monkey - a relatively conventional monkey that likes to keep an upright position and avoid tumbling around. Tall monkey likes to climb body limbs to make attacks at pressure points.

    Wooden Monkey - mimics a serious, angry monkey that attacks and defends with ferocity. The attitude of this monkey is more serious, and its movements are noticeably less light than the other monkeys. Wood monkey likes to grapple and bring its opponent to the ground.

    The monkey staff, is one of this style's specialty weapon.The upper end of the staff is normally eye height for the user. There are also other weapons favored by Monkey Style users (e.g. the broadsword, straight sword, spear, and the iron ring). Monkey forms are not normally performed fast paced from start to finish as in other techniques, instead the practitioner will execute a very swift series of movements and then stop and plays around. With the exception of the Tall Monkey technique, all monkey forms tend to be executed from the squatting and stooping positions.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of this style tends to react more quicker than normal. They tend to be more agile and be responsive to enemy movements faster than normal.

    -Each variation of the style needs to be trained at in order to use.
    -Due to playfulness of this style, techniques cant be use in succession (1 technique per turn).

    ~Declined~ Drunken Monkey Style already exists.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    thought i'd make something original so i toke something haku did in part one ( when he span over to sauske then attacked) not sure if it was made ebfore but i made this up based on kenjutsu and that one movement haku made in his fight with sauske.

    justu of the tatsumaki ken ( art of the tornado blade)
    Type: kenjutsu/taijutsu/ninjutsu
    Background: it was first created by samurai in the land of iron by a normal samurai who wanted to expand on his kenjutsu and taijutsu skills at once. he practiced an art of spinning to cancel movements and then at the end of the attack would withdraw his blade and attack suddenly. it wasn't limited to sword play but could be used to throw weapon in many direction and was great for combat in which the person was out numbered. even to spin at such a fast rate that the user could build up air pressure around his blade stop swing teh balde and teh pressure from the spin could be directed at the enemy. it proved very well and began to be come a very popular form of kenjutsu so popular even the great nations learned of it and began to use it. it was mostly used in wars for when ninja were out numbered and proved very useful. however after many years it started to become less used due to the every growing number of ninja that decided to use ninjutsu over kenjutsu , and soon only a few people still used it it is very rare in the ninja and in the land of iron none the less it still exists being used by very few, mostly by the samurai in the land of iron however some ninja from the great nations still use it today.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Art of the spinning blade is a kenjutsu/taijutsu style where the user will spin at a high rate to hide his movements such as with dawing his blade but in order to do so he must be well trained in order to spin while making complicated moves such as going from a spin to a jump. The user focuses chakra into their legs and begins to spin at a fast passe and starts heading towards the enemy while his legs move the user does whatever be it taking out a weapon or forming a seal the user will need precise moves in order to use this and hit the enemy right if not the user will miss so he must have constant focus of chakra to his legs in order to keep himself going in the direction he wants and in order to change direction. Thus can only use the type of chakra he was useing to spin for ninjutsu if he wish's to use jutsu. ( an example if your using raiton chakra to spin then when you stop to use ninjutsu you can only use raiton, if your using fire chakra to spin then you can only use fire ninjutsu when you stop, same goes for any other element ) after the user has done what he wants he will stop spinning and attack at a moments notice. an example the user could spin towards his enemy then go around him withdraw his blade and stop then swing it the spinning gives more momentum for a stronger slash. using this can also be used to avoid attacks, for example the user could do a spinning blade art where he spins and it takes him in another direction. or take out a blade while he spins in order to cuts multiple targets at once. the most advanced skill in this art is when the user focuses all his chakra into his feet and spins at a very fast speed with his blade out then stop and swings the blade air pressure then goes forward hitting the enemy and sending him backwards. ( will be explained upon more when i make it a real jutsu for this art)


    Additional effects and Restrictions: while spinning the user cannot see anything very well unless he has a dojutsu but is still able to tell if something is heading at him but it will look like a blur due to how fast the user is going. user use of the spinning blade the user will be dizzy and can be knocked off balance easy. in order to use ninjutsu the user must stop spinning or it will not work. each move used based on this skill counts as a jutsu towards your 3 per turn.

    the whole point of this is the users speed is increased and has stronger slash due to the momentum and is able to hide his move while he moves. a reference to how the user spins wacth the begining of haku vs sasuke, the user would spin like that then strike in one swift attack.

    ±± Declined ±± This has nothing special enough in it to make it a CFS. In free form Kenjutsu you can already describe such movements. They are, in essence, normal Kenjutsu. CFS are for different applications of Kenjutsu, Taijutsu, etc were you apply some other skill and change the basis of the concept with something that can't be done in any other way.

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    not sure if i'm allowed to post two in the same post but i have one more in mind.

    rensei ken jutsu ( Drilling blade art)
    Type: ninkenjutsu
    Background: After having witnessed the raikages nintaijutsu the kumo nin wondered if the same could be done with kenjutsu. So they attempted it and manged to increase the power of their blades using raiton chakra. They then toke it one step further and tried to spin the hilt of the sword while infusing it with raiton chakra the result was like that of a drill it could drill threw many things and kumo soon tested it out in the fields of battle. other villages having witnessed this tried to copy what they had done but only those with raiton chakra could do it.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The user will begin to spin the hilt of his sword with one or both hands in a clockwise direction and will then begin to infuse it with raiton chakra until it goes so fast it looks as though it was a drill this is done by increasing the speed of the blade already in motion much like how A increases his speed with raiton this increases the blades speed with raiton. for this to work the user must have constant flow of raiton chakra into the blade if not it won't work, so the user cannot build up any kinds of chakra besides raiton while using this.

    Additional effects and Restrictions: After use users hand that was used for the raiton build will become numb and stiff for a few turns and will be unable to do any action with said hand for that to time that it is numb. ( how numb and for how long will depend on the rank of the jutsu being used for this style) After use in battle the user will gain plus 5 to all raiton jutsu in that battle only. After use in battle any fuuton jutsu used will be -five for the rest of the match. the user can only use raiton chakra while spinning the blade. users sword becomes much more powerful and will be able to drill into things while it spins. After the blade has stopped being span it will be covered in elect and hard to hold and may slightly shock the user a little bit but not enough to fately injury him/her, but is enough to make the user close his eyes for a single second in pain.

    the use of this is make make a drilling sword infused with raiton not only increaseing its cutting power but its pirceing power as it could now drill.


    ±± Declined ±± O_o spinning the hilt...magically? Take that part out. Also, even if i accept this, don't forget that people can still make lightning techniques or kenjutsu technique in which the sword is infused with lightning. Try finding something additionally special for it.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (Mune No Ero Musha) - Will of the Pervy Warrior

    Type: Senjutsu/Sage art

    Background:
    Long ago, in Mount Myōboku, the toads began to master the ability to feel narutal energy and taking it upon themselves to control it to increase their power and speed, after much experimentation and practice, this would later become known as sage mode. Sage mode would enhance the power of the user by combining their chakra with the chakra they have taken in from nature, fusing them as one stronger power.

    Through time sage mode was adapted to increase the power of all the users nin, gen and tai jutsu making everything stronger by adding natural energy to them. An example of this would be the the Frog Kata techniue used in a taijutsu battle. The user extents the natural energy around their body reshaping it to make a deadly attack.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    This fighting style is based on the control and reshaping of natural energy within the users body. A normal sage mode user can control and shape the natural energy, but this style has been developed to make it much quicker and easier to feel, take in, and control the natural energy.

    This pervy style was developed to make sage mode more useable in combat instead of having to stand for still as long. And with the greater chakra control, the user wouldn't waste as much chakra on larger sage attacks.


    Extreme chakra control to enhance/manipulate/cut/bind/shape/collect natural energy.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Masters of the Pervy Warrior style have increased Agility, Reactions, Speed when compared to a normal sage mode users
    -Sage mode users have generally great chakra control, but Pervy style users have greater chakra control allowing them to manipulate natural energy faster.
    -Pervy style users generally have better control over the natural energy and are able control the natural energy to enhance their abilities slightly more that normal sage mode users.


    (Got bored, wanted my own style )


    ±± Declined ±± Sage mode already gives you all of that and this is no custom fighting style. Sorry! ^^
     
         
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