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    Musha Shukke Fuu (The Warrior Monk's Way)

    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:
    Fighting technique and styles don't just pop out of thin air. Most of the times, there are events that take place, or a following or something that triggered the creation of some type of styles, or religions even that do this as well. The Musha Sukke Fuu's story is no different then these. The creators of such a fighting style are no more then monks. Literally, "Musha Sukke Fuu" Stands for "The Warrior Monks Way." Now, being monks, they are not violent people in the least bit at all. This particular fighting style in derived primarily as a defensive style, however, that's not to take away form the fact that it indeed has offensive capability.

    The creation of Musha Sukke Fuu, as a formalized martial art, is attributed to Dong Haichuan in the early 19th century, who apparently learned from Taoist, masters in the mountains of Iwakagure. There is evidence to suggest a synthesis of several pre-existing martial arts taught and practised in the region in which he lived, combined with Taoist circle walking. Because of his work as a servant in the Imperial Palace, he impressed the Tsuchikage with his graceful movements and his skill at martial arts and became an instructor and a body guard to the court. Dong Haichuan taught for many years in Iwa, eventually earning patronage by the Imperial court.

    Famous disciples of Dong to become teachers were Ichiro Tamazaki, Kisihmo Kayuga, Raiden Matzui, Ike Lennon, Ma Weiqi , Liu Baozhen, Liang Zhenpu and Liu Dekuan. Although they were all students of the same teacher, their methods of training and expressions of palm techniques differed. The Cheng and Liu styles are said to specialize in "Pushing" the palms, Yin style is known for "Threading" the palms, Song's followers practice "Plum Flower" ( Mei Hua) palm technique and Ma style palms are known as "Hammers." Some of Dong Haichuan's students, including Ike Lennon, participated in the Boxer Rebellion. In general, most Bagua practitioners practice either the Yin , Cheng, or Liang styles of Baguazhang, although Fan, Shi, Liu, Fu, and other styles also used to exist. However with time those other styles and formations of the said style became lost as its creators and followers either died and vanished.

    It is said that only four of those who did such still exist, the Four masters of Musha Sukke Fuu. These teachers are Ichiro Tamazaki(尹福), Kisihmo Kayuga(程廷華), Raiden Matzui(宋長榮), Ike Lennon(劉鳳春).Each one resides in a different country, or so they say. There are very few people who even know of the fighting style and the rumors, and even fewer who practice it.The base style known today is really more of a combination of things from the past of the branch teachers, those of the past present. The thing about Musha Shukke Fuu, is even though they are Monks, they traditionally don't mind mixing styles, especially of the same base such as Musha Sukke Fuu. In fact, that's hows it came to be what it is today, or so it is said.

    Really, know one ever seems to know, and nothing more of which is ever really mentioned in the history books to prove otherwise. It is a really secretive style to begin with, and finding it would require ones full study and seeking of, and the actual finding of one of the few masters, should they still even exist.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Stage One: The Art of the Spirit (Chakra) Sphere.

    The main art of the Musha Shukke Fuu, is the knowledge of summoning the Chakra Sphere. This is the most basics of basic fundamentals with the style. Without the Chakra Sphere, the art could not exist. The Chakra Sphere is a small, hollow sphere of chakra that hovers over one's head. It is however, clearly visible to to others and can be touched, and popped rendering it useless furthermore. The Chakra Sphere consists of one's own chakra, and thus can be reentered into one's body in such a way, with of course proper training, in a way that may be used as an attack within said style. User usually concentrates in meditation in order to learn how to do this incredible feat. The stance is nothing short of a learning method for the Chakra Sphere Summoning. User sits Indian style with crossed legs and rests his hands together forming a special handseal. This handseal is created by pushing the users palms together, and crossing the middle and ring fingers, as the pinky fingers and index fingers clasp together. The thumbs cross as well. Eyes close, and user sits straight upward and meditates. This allows easier flow of chakra within ones chakra system.

    Stage Two: Reduce, Reuse, Recycle.

    Once Chakra Spheres have been properly summoned, the next challenge the user faces is having the Chakra Sphere re-enter the body for technique use. This is quite simple to do, and Requires a great deal less of training then first summoning the chakra spheres did. The user simply had to do said technique, and handseals and think about the sphere striking their body, and it should happen with rather repetitive training. This stage of training is perhaps the quickest and easiest stage of training. This reduces chakra output, reuses the chakra that is output, and recycles and leftover from the technique, because the chakra is still trapped within the body.

    Stage Three: Striking by Striking.

    Once the user has mastered the summoning of chakra spheres, and then mastered how to channel them throughout the body, The user now must undergo training to learn how to strike a foe while doing so, while channeling the chakra sphere. This isn't easy. User must stand in front of a stray dummy, tightly packed of course, and continue striking it until it explodes in a small 'boom' where the user strikes. It sounds easy and repetitive as well, but it is truly a lot harder then it sounds. Once the explosion had been seen, the user will repeat this until mastered, where every strike will be a minor explosion. At this level, the user will have mastered the art of the Chakra Sphere.

    Stage Four: Techniques

    This is the stage in which the user begins and starts training techniques within the fighting style that involve training and special usage of the Chakra Spheres. Specialized techniques that deal in both offense and defense, put primarily defense, are the techniques listed below within the style. Mastering all these techniques takes time, but when accomplished, the user will achieve the Master rank within the monk society.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - User must be from Kirigakure or Iwagakure
    - User must be trained by ~Sanji~
    - User must have Mastery of Taijutsu.
    - User cannot have a bio that contains Dojutsu.


    ±± Declined ±± i like the idea. but some things need editing. For example, this isn't a Taijutsu but rather a NinTaijutsu. Also, you need to tie this a bit more with Taijutsu as its appearing to be simply you creating (not summoning...so that also needs tweaking) an orb of chakra as a projectile and striking people with it. You must have Taijutsu moves as a basic and develop this to be something added to the taijutsu, otherwise its all ninjutsu.
     
         
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    Sorrowful Fist of a Thousand Abstract Materials and Weapons | Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai
    Type: Supplementary Fūintaijutsu & Fūinkenjutsu
    Background: The style of Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai, commonly referred to as ‘Majutsushi o Yoroi’ (The Conjurers Armor), was invented by civilians in Amegakure, whom had a basic knowledge of Fūinjutsu and scrolls. The style is based on the two abilities to seal and unseal materials and weapons into and out of scrolls, which are two extremely common abilities amongst Shinobi. The civilians invented the art in a desperate attempt to avoid looting, which only succeeded partially as they did not perfect the style; they merely created the basis for it. Over the years, Majutsushi o Yoroi has evolved into much more than just a mean to avoid looting and it continues to evolve at an extraordinary rate.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Majutsushi o Yoroi is a very unique style, in the sense that it has no particular stance, nor does it have a certain spiritual philosophy or meditation technique. The essential pillar in Majutsushi o Yoroi is the ‘Dakiau Kuroniku’ (Embracing Ink) which is simply a great collection of advanced summoning seals, all adorning the users’ body as tattoos. Before battle, the user seals all his weaponry and armor into the Dakiau Kuroniku, giving off the impression that he is unarmed and vulnerable when the battle begins. The impression, however, could not be farther from the truth. Whenever the need arises, the user will simply summon any defensive or offensive piece of armor or weaponry needed, creating not only a devastating element of surprise, but also a lethal diversity that can force all but the most experienced opponents to their knees. Though Majutsushi o Yoroi only works as a supplement to another style, it is one of the most versatile and effective supplementary fighting-styles in existence. Of course, masters of the art are able to seal their weapons and armor again, allowing them to conserve their assortment and quickly remove unnecessary weight. It goes without saying that the better a Kenjutsu and Taijutsu practitioner the user is, the better he will be at Majutsushi o Yoroi.
    There are two types of practitioners of the Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai:

    The Practitioner
    The regular practitioner is not able to reseal his weaponry and armor, nor is he able to create the seals on his body as he does not know the art of Fūinjutsu. Without knowledge of Fūinjutsu, the normal practitioner is slower than the Master practitioner when it comes to unsealing his weaponry and armor. A regular practitioner cannot prevent the poof-smoke that comes with unsealing an item.

    The Master Practitioner
    The advanced practitioner is able to reseal his weaponry and armor as he is trained in the art of Fūinjutsu. With the art of Fūinjutsu comes the ability to apply the Dakiau Kuroniku onto oneself and other practitioners. An advanced practitioner can prevent the poof-smoke that comes with unsealing an item.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -One must be a Taijutsu Specialist or a Taijutsu Master to learn Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai
    -Only two (2) members without the proper training in the art of Fūinjutsu may learn Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai
    -Masters of Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai have increased balance and agility when compared to a normal Strong Fist Master
    - Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai cannot be used to unseal or seal unrealistic items (following the Narutoverse) nor can it be used to seal an opponent’s techniques.


    ±± Declined ±± The way its written seems to be more like a version of what Tenten does, rather than a completely new style. Granted you have placed seals on you instead of only scrolls but still this is too similar to that.
     
         
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    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu

    Type: Taijutsu/Nintaijutsu

    Background:

    The Black-Leg Style is a martial-arts style that is based on Sanji's techniques from One Piece. It is designed to free the use of one's hands and prevent them from being damaged during a battle. As a result, practitioners tend to drop into certain stances in which their upper-body portions are most relaxed, such as placing their hands inside their pockets or crossing their arms together across their chest, and only puts them into action whenever the event requires them to do certain maneuvers such as handstands, which aren't prohibited.

    Skill levels of the style:

    Creator (created the style)
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    Master (knows Diable Jambe)
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    User (someone who knows basic techniques)
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    Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    As a fighting style, the style boasts a wide and impressive array of kicks, coupled with super acrobatic skill making it a very versatile fighting technique, allowing user to effectively weave continuous and powerful attacks upon adversaries and combine the power of his kicks with his respective strengths for devastating team combinations. Idea behind the simpleness of the style is to keep it as powerful as it can be while allowing biographies that possess no elemental knowledge to use them as well.

    The specialty of Black-Leg taijutsu is Diable Jambe which allows user to focus chakra into their leg and convert it into high temperature by igniting the chakra with friction, adding extreme heat to the impact of his kicks. In this form, user, due to the high temperature has the ability to slightly burn his opponents. While like this, he can light his opponent on fire.

    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Devil's Leg
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Mode
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 50 ( - 15 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Black-Leg taijutsu master can activate a mode which will double their speed. The mode requires user to be at least Sannin rank and to be trained in other Black-Leg taijutsu techniques. To activate this technique an user below Kage rank must stop and spin while guiding chakra into their leg, granting temporary speed boost. User that has already reached Kage or higher rank can activate this technique while battling without stopping moving. Once activated, the technique will increase user leg's strength momentarily and Leg taijutsu damage done by user will be multiplied with 1.5 with the leg this is activated on. Using this technique for longer durations will cause painful cramp and muscle strain if used for four consecutive turns. This also decreases user's speed by 25% of the original speed upon the first usage. Second usage will drop the speed from 75% that was left to 35% of the original speed before using this technique for the first time and the feeling of pain in the leg becomes overwhelming, making it almost impossible to walk. This technique can be used on one leg and can be maintained for max four turns. User's leg looks as if it were on fire when this mode is activated and is covered in chakra. Getting hit by this causes also nerve damage to opponent, giving slight sensation of burning to the nevers and opponent once hit due heated chakra in leg.
    • Causes strain to user's muscles and leaves user limping if used for long durations.
    • Can be activated twice per battle and the second usage will be extremely painful and second usage will last only two turns.
    • Costs 15 chakra per turn.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • A person who knows this fighting style has slightly stronger kicks and is faster than a normal ninja without it.
    • Only people on or above Black-Leg master rank can possess Diable Jambe.
    • Each person wanting to learn Black-Leg style must be approved by the creator, Passion.


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    Passion, our loyal member, gave on the 3rd of March a request for a Patent on custom fighting style Black-Leg Taijutsu (Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu). I, Scorps of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu
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    Autoraitotorihiki Inferuno ~ Outright Inferno
    Type: NinTaijutsu
    Background: This fighting style has been passed down from within a certain family. The fighting style was developed by Yukio Takeshi (God will nourish and is unbending like a bamboo tree) during his time of enslavement. During his enslavement he was banned from seeing his 3 sons and his wife. He was often tortured because of the guards never like the sight of him, always happy, and they could never break his spirit...like a bamboo tree. The method of torture used on him was fire. The guards often burnt his arms so that his fearsome fighting could not be displayed and so no opposition could arise from him.

    Despite the frequent torture, Yukio knew that someone was behind him and that he musn't give up so that's what he did. Since he knew with his physical scars he wouldn't be able to fight his way out, he knew he had to find a source of some power. Since he knew the guards used fire a lot, he devised a way of manipulating the fire that wrapped around his arms so much.

    He began his unknown training on external fire manipulation. He knew he was getting there slowly but surely. He could begin to manipulate the fire in the torches outside his cell to bend in different directions. Everytime the guards came to his cell, he performed his discovery on his arms and realized that it felt warm instead of raw heat burning his flesh away, he realized he could control it.

    Eventually in time, after months of training, he perfected what today is known as Autoraitotorihiki Inferuno. When the guards came to him, they set him on fire, little did they know...he was enjoying it. The guards knew something was wrong because Yukio's screams of agony suddenly subsided and he was smiling like a free man. Yukio embranced the flames on his arms and spread them over his entire body. He knew it was perfected as no pain was felt. The guards' faces showed fear as they knew what was coming. Yukio destroyed his place of enslavement and walked away while only ashes remained.
    Yukio returned to his family and taught his 3 sons the art of Autoraitotorihiki Inferuno


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Outright Inferno wraps the user in flames. The flames can be controlled in any way the user can think of. The flames can be manipulated and be extended from the user's body to form an attack or defense. The fighting style is usually used to attack a target at many different angles. It is also used as a quick defensive maneuver as the flames are highly dangerous upon contact. Outright Inferno users are very quick in offense and defense. Taijutsu used by a user of this style has a heightened effect in that it causes severe burns to the target. The user can also extend any limb of their body in to an enlarged version of it wrapped in flame (Such as a hand used for a slapping motion). The flames are very fast paced so barrage of attacks are often seen from these users as well as projectiles.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - Outright Inferno masters have keen eyesight. This is through evolution of the style from users suffering tunnel vision during Barrage attacks.
    -User must've Mastered Fire
    -Can only be taught by Outright Inferno Grand Masters
    -No water techniques maybe used during Outright Inferno form
    -The User must be Sannin ranked.
    -After the stance is halted/stopped, a 2 turn Break must be in play before the user can go in to the stance again.


    Note to mod: This fighting style is similar to FireBending from The Last Airbender. It's similar in the way they move the fire and the stances. It is also similar to Naruto in a Kyuubi Cloak at 4-tails (Just realized now) in how when he was fighting Pain and fists were flying out from him and that his limbs were extending from the "Flames"


    ±± Declined ±± A member in the first page already submitted a fire enhanced nintaijutsu.
     
         
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    Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin - Dance of the Bearded Sage
    Type: Nintaijutsu
    Background:
    A long time ago, a very powerful and wise Shinobi Viking named Gobi Gobletsson was bored. He was playing around with his chakra by molding and channeling it. One day, on accident, he channeled his chakra into his long viking beard. The long brown/blondish beard became stone hard and razor sharp. He reached his mighty fingers to touch it and was left with several cuts on his skin. This made him think more about hair and chakra. The next months he spent experimenting with chakra and his facial hair. He used the chakra to control his beard and facial hair changing it's volume, shape, size, strength, sharpness and other features. After perfecting the skill Gobi decided to show the shaved Shinobi what real Vikings can do.After designing this style, Gobi was from that point known as Beardy Beardsson, the Bearded Sage.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The Art of the Bearded Sages is a very simple Nintaijutsu which combines chakra control and the user's hair. By utilizing his chakra the user can make facial hair grow on his face, arms and other body parts to the desired length. By further use of chakra the user can control the movements of the hair, it's shape, volume, sharpness, strength and similar characteristics. There are several places the user could create hair from: Face(beard, nose-hair, ear-hair and eyebrows); Body (armpits, arms, back and chest); Lower Body (legs, feet and pelvis area.).The user can grow or shorten the hair at any time by simply channeling chakra into it. He can form it in any way he wants to resemble certain objects (tools, shapes and weapons), to be other colors (can be used as camofluage), different lengths, sizes and degree of sharpness and volume. The hair can either be made sharp or dull, soft or hard as steel-quality, long or short. The user can create a sharp armor of hair over his whole body cutting anything that touches the hair, use it to move around (attach the hair and swing around from branch to branch for example), attack the enemy with projectiles (hair needles from the users beard etc.) or with large volumes of hair by simply swinging their head and body parts around thus hurting the opponent (depending if the hair is sharp or hard damage can be inflicted differently).

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - One must be taught by Gobi Gobletsson
    - There are two ranks within those whom have been taught this certain art, the Bearded Warrior, and the Bearded Sage.

    Hayashita Sennin - Bearded Sage's abilities and restrictions; This is the rank given to those whom have fully mastered the Dance of the Bearded Sage, and is capable of manipulating ones hair as described above, in the ''Inner Workings'' description. To become a Bearded Sage one must be of Kage rank(Or higher.) due of needing extraordinary chakra control.

    Hayashita Senshi - Bearded Warrior's abilities and restrictions; These are those whom are still in training to become a Bearded Sage is only capable of reaching his beard up to mid-range(Even if the jutsus says long-range also, if a jutsu belonging to this style says short-range it doesn't mean he can extend the jutsu's reach to mid-range, it stays short.) and, cannot change the colour of his beard as it requires extraordinary chakra control. To become a Bearded Warrior one must atleast be a S-Class Ninja due the need of good chakra control.


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    Gobi Gobletsson, our loyal member, gave on the 4th of March, 2012 a request for a Patent on custom fighting style Dance of the Bearded Sage. I, Scorps of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin
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    Note: some characters like jiraya, already have ninjutsu envolving hair. Thus, they can submit hair related ninjutsu if it doesn't clash with your own style
     
         
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    Benso Yama | 守岳 Sambo

    Type: Taijutsu

    Background: Rasnall’s father, Kasotca, was a member of the Hyūga main house and was an assistant to the Elders, by placing the Cursed seal on the foreheads of the Branch members. Kasotca hated branding his fellow Hyūga brother and sisters , so decided to flee the clan with Rasnall’s mother, Nara (full story in Rasnall Bio history). Once they arrived in Kirigakure, Kasotca and Nara decided to keep a low profile and stay hidden. During this time Kasotca realised that if he ever needed to defend himself, he couldn’t use the Hyūga’s secret fighting style, because this would draw to much attention. Kasotca decided that he would create a new fighting style that was based entirely on defending one’s self with a silent, single counter strike to totally immobilise the opponent from continuing to fight or flee. He decided he would also utilise the powers of his Byakugan to help quickly decide on the most suitable and effective counter. Kasotca called this “Sambo” and spent the next 25 years developing this fighting style in secret, except for teaching his son, Rasnall from the age of 3, passing the future of the fighting style to him.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Sambo is designed to be a defensive and immobilising style of CQC. Its advanced moves target the joints of an opponent, and deliver damage to definitively obliterate the opponent’s ability to fight. Sambo also utilises the hardening of muscle (through chakra insertion) to take hits so the most effective counter can be used. This combination of effective and unique counters, together with the hardening of muscles, makes Sambo a very effective defense against other normal or advanced taijutsu's.



    The self-defence methods of Sambo use an opponent’s momentum, strength and speed against them. Sambo utilises advanced deductive powers of the user (general and Doujutsu assist) to apply the best counter to nullify a targets attack and also strike a vulnerable joint of an opponent’s body to either break it or trap them in a hold. Users of Sambo are also trained to manipulate the chakra in their body to temporarily harden muscles to increase striking power, defensive stances and creating the best opportunities for applying a counter.
    Example:


    (Benso Yama | 守岳|Shuushi Handou -) Sambo – Counter Kick
    Type:Defensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:25
    Damage:N/A
    Description: Watching the approaching kick from an opponent, the user channels chakra into his torso (left or right) to harden the muscle. As the kick is about to land, the user reaches the leading arm forward and catches the leg as it strikes the users mid-section. Without a moment’s hesitation , the user brings his far leg over the leg of the opponent’s, pushes themselves to the floor, bring the opponent down with them, while pulling their leg up, bending it up against the normal bend of the knee. This does not snap the knee, but breaks the tendents at the back of the knee and upper leg, the user then rolls to the side. The complete move takes around 5 seconds to complete. This makes the leg useless for the remainder of the fight.
    ~Must have mastered Sambo.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per match.
    ~Reffer to Sambo resistance chart for damage taken.
    ~This will not stop any kick ranked above A


    Once Rasnall came of age he started to expand on his father’s Sambo by adding more offensive techniques combined with the original defensive counters. He dubbed this “Aggressive Sambo” which delivers fatal blows by breaking the spine, neck etc.
    Example:


    (Benso Yama Aguresshibu | 守岳| -) Aggressive Sambo - Counter Arm Strike
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:60
    Description: The user watches an incoming fist or palm strike from the opponent, and prepares to counter by hardening the muscle through their right arm and hand. As the strike is coming, the user brings their hardened arm forward and meets the strike like a mirror image. Without hesitation the muscle is then returned to normal as the users hand slides to the grab the opponents wrist (the hand they used to strike with). The user then takes a quick step forward, brings the other arm forward and strikes and severs the elbow joint. They then bend this arm and use the elbow to strike the shoulder, severing this joint.
    ~must have mastered Sambo
    ~opponent can not use the struck arm until they reattach shoulder joint.
    ~opponent takes longer when forming seals for the remaining fight.
    ~can only be used once per fight.


    “Sambo leaves no room for mercy. It’s a cold, silent and mechanical martial art.” – Kasotca.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    ~Sambo users train extensivly to gain the ability to harden their muscles.
    ~Sambo's specially designed counters can only be used once muscle Hardening is mastered.
    ~Hardening of the muscles only lasts for 30 seconds maximum and can only be used once per turn.
    ~Users of Sambo train extensivly to read opponents movements and then quickly decide on the quickest and most effective counter.
    ~Sambo is unique, due to its all defensive nature. It has not techniques that involve the user making the first move.
    ~Sambo resistance chart:
    Hardening of the muscle only cuts the damage received by the user by:
    25% - A rank Kick
    50% - B rank Kick
    75% - C or lower rank Kick


    ±± Declined ±± This can already be achieved for example with free form taijutsu.
     
         
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    Shadow Combat (Kage no Sentō)

    Type: Other (Nintaijutsu?? I don't know since it use shadow chakra)

    Background: This secret taijutsu style of Nara Clan was developed by Nara.. who knows that the Nara members are weak at hand to hand combat. Nara.. develop the tech by learning the work of the shadow. It took 3 year for him to discover this technique. He found that by corrupting himself by the shadow, their taijutsu are enhanced. When he learns that, he runs across the field and shouted "I did it!!!". Now, he opens a dojo in his clan house and teach these combat styles

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This ability works by molding the user's body with the shadow. With this advanced shadow tech, the shadow overwhelm one's body, adding a new layer on it. Whenever the user punch the enemy, the shadow chakra gather there, and extend the fist about a inch and improving one's range and power of punch because it has more mass which means more force. The same goes for the leg. For defensive purpose, the shadow can be extended from the user's body acting like a sharp spike which pierce through the attackers(of taijutus). The spike are strong enough to hold even a sword attack. To be brief, it is an usage of the shadow and to add a layer on the user's body (Act like another skin so that it can prevent enemy from direct contact with the user's body which mean if enemy attack the user, the attack is lessened by the shadow skin) In addition, the spike can be used for attack purpose too. When a spike is extended from the user's palm, it can pierce through enemy body too.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - User expert in Shadow Combat can use any Shadow tech faster
    - Cannot use in night time and cannot use near a huge light source
    - One cannot use normal shadow techs(like Shadow Possession) if he has activated his shadow taijutsu mode
    - User after activating are weak to fire attacks
    - User after activating are strong against taijutsu and Kenjutsu
    - User when exposure to sunlight has more power in using Shadow Combat moves
    - Users need to finish Shadow Training first

    Proof that the Nara Clan member can make his shadow goes up his body and to make spike from an existing shadow: Remember the part where Shikamaru fought with Tayuya? During that time, Shikamaru make his shadow goes up his body and make it strangle his finger to break the genjutsu. If the user is more expert in it, he can make the shadow goes up to full body. Shadow Sewing techniques prove that the user can make spike from his existing shadows

    If this is approved, do I need to submit techs? If yes, where can I do it? Feel Free to edit things if necessary ^__^



    ±± Declined ±±Off course you need to submit techs. You are patenting the idea of the style. A style is not a mode. That being said, you worked this out like a Mode, which it can't be. Please reword it. Also, the restrictions...it has been said multiple times, don't add useless restrictions on things. How does this make you weak to fire? This is a NinTaijutsu. Thus, you need to make it work like that.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Fuuin Genkotsu | Sealing Fist

    Type:Fuuintaijutsu

    Background:After unravelling and analysing the advantages and disadvantages of sealing techniques (fuuinjutsu), I noticed it was very easily combinable with taijutsu. I came on the idea after finishing my fuuinjutsu training, as well as watching the working of the Gentle Fist of the Hyuuga. This fighting style is similar to it, but is actually much more profound, refined and advanced than the Gentle Fist.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Fuuin Genkotsu has two aspects to it. It has the ability to increase the users own taijutsu techniques, as well as the ability to decrease those of the opponent. Depending on the situation, the user can easily switch from one intention to the other. It is also so that the users primarily work with seals. Being said, they have seal all over their own body as well as the ability to place certain seals onto the opponent, and thus weakening them to the desired point in order to take full advantage. Because fuuinjutsu and taijutsu alone both have such a wide variety, the same can be said about this fighting style, meaning that the only restriction to actually come up with moves is the mind (and the restrictions put up by the moderators). Hence, it is also hard to say the effects beforehand, though some can be made.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Restrictions:
    -User must have received proper training in fuuinjutsu and taijutsu to be eligible.
    -If taught to someone else, they must receive a training session dedicated to learning the style and its characteristics alone, loose from any kind of jutsu.
    -The user needs to have finished Fuuinjutsu Training up to A-Rank to learn this style.
    Additional effects:
    -The user is able to empower his own physical capabilities, as well as restricting those of the opponent
    -As for some techniques, the user is able to activate an attack by simply being in the vicinity, rather than actually hitting the opponent. They must still create the movements though.
    -Can be used as offensive and defensive measurement
    -If received the training and permission by nexus, (I’m not sure if this one is possible, so I’ll ask Nexus later on) one can incorporate medical skills into the technique to optimize it.

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    Wesobi, our loyal member, gave on the 5th of March, 2012 a request for a Patent on custom fighting style Sealing Fist. I, Scorps of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Fuuin Genkotsu
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    Copyright 2012, Wesobi , NarutoBase.net

     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Thunderbolt View Post

    ±± Declined ±± You are confusing a custom hand to hand/weapon fighting style with a technique/move.

    Quote Originally Posted by Thunderbolt View Post

    ~Declined~ Needles placed inside of your veins? What's preventing you from slowly bleeding to death? Blood would still leak out while having those needles placed inside. The only effective way to have those needles inside of your veins and not lose blood is through medical related means which require training/permission. Also channeling chakra to expand the needles is too similar to the Akimichi Clan's expansion technique. Lastly, this still looks like a technique rather than a fighting style.


    Ancient Embedded Hidden needleの組み込まれた隠し針 Kodai no kumikomareta kakushi hari

    Type: Nin-Kenjutsu

    Background: This Fighting style was originated and first known to have been practiced in the early Greece more than a 3 Million years ago by the ancestral descendant of the Greek Gods. it was rumored and said to have been developed by the Greek God Zeus who developed the technique as a way to mark his ground and show his strength and dominance as the king of the heavens and ruler to the earthlings. The style was said to be of such power that even Zeus feared its strength and the wrong it could be used if placed in the wrong hands he kept the style of fighting under bay and never practiced and taught it to no one even his brothers, This was until he mated with a human and gave birth to a son which was known as the brave man in Greek mythology called Hercules he taught this style to his son as final measure to keep him safe if he ever came to any serious harm or fear of harm but telling him not to ever teach no man the technique or even talk of it. Hercules intends to the wise words of his father and shows the techniques to no one not even his own flesh and blood and rarely used it and preferred to result tot other means to deal with his problems which resulted in him fighting. Hercules was just one man and soon word got out a technique which could take out several men is jutst one move and attracted people all over the globe especially individuals from places we come to know today I asia as china and Japan they came all to see the forbidden fighting style which was being used but to their disappointment they did not. It was all moody and deem for these travelers until a certain day where he was assigned on one of his tasks or so called labours this time it was to retrieve a monster livin in the swamps with the name of Lernaean Hydra which was a monster of great strength and demonic power Hercules was sent to destroy this creature with is nephew lolaus but the strength of the beast was to fierce for Hercules to over come so he performed the technique and upon one slay weakened the beast up where lolaus was able to hold a torch to each of the stumps to prevent the demon of coming back again upon sight of this technique after they had come back from their journey it was said lolaus was fascinated with it and on several instances asked Hercules to teach him .Not much was known from them but it was said that Hercules finally taught lolaus the technique with which to Hercules disappointment passed it on to few other before he died.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style
    :
    This fighting move is one of great strength and power and if wielded and used in a proper manner is one of the deadliest weapons in existence. The user prior to performing the the fighting move will carry several thin sharp needles finely carved And places into his veins on his hands he then uses his raw chakra and fuses it into the needles which make them grow to any desired length strength or thickness or numbers this is due to the needles being placed in the user body and chakra being implanted to it as if it was a body par and thus grows on it own the user also makes use of his wind chakra which he infuses around the already grown and neutered needles to further sharpen and strengthen the grown needles up to the point as If it were steel. The user can also use this style of fighting as a shield against taijutsu attack which deals with strong physical impact by bracing his arms together and using the needles as shield. The fighting style can also protect the user against lightning attacks of any sort due to the style usage of wind .The needles can be placed in one hands or two this is up to the opponent and his preference though two arms increases the strength of the style of fighting and also the damages on the user .This stye is able to create repel like impact when used on a target as the user as not only does it cut the target but die to the wind it pushes him back tremendously, this style one of little powerful a several abilities Is that it allows the user of the style to know the opponents whereabouts if he has being cut or impacted on by the fighting style since the usage of this fighting style revolves around the opponent veins and his blood system it is safe to say that when the opponent is being impacted on or cut by the style of fighting and also using little of the user blood and chakra and used in the attack and this affecting him too. Finally the last of the of this style ability and the and the most powerful .the style is done by a precise and strong and concentrated blow to the head of the opponent to his brain which affects his cerebral cortex the region of the brain which controls memory ,awareness ,thought and consciousness a direct from this technique can cause a sudden temporary but fast alteration in of the these functions this means it could render his opponent lacking memory loss and without knowledge of his jutsu or him not knowing his surrounding area due to no awareness or even passing out due to no or little concentrations and good consciousness.This needles can be pulled out and retracted at will upon choice of the user but is mostly left in arms later taken out after battle course this style has the capabilities depending on the user (Genin_Sage) to which amount of damage the technique does At full use or even at the mere hands of a practiced user with skill this jutsu is more than enough to overpower basic taijutsu attacks and even normal katana with basically minimal effort.This style of fighting combines with sharigan kekkei genkai makes this technique advance into another level where the opponents is able to dodge and intercept taijutsu and lightning attack with little efforts.This fighting style also provides the user with a great threshold against pain and a focused mind due to his ability to use the technique properly even though under pain this makes him more less to fall victim to ninjutsu attacks based on killing intentions and fears.This also seems to be a good defense against breaking genjutsu as the user can take use of the pain of the already imbedded needles and upon sudden movements can feel pain that can break low ranking genjutsu.

    Additional effects and Restrictions
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    Requires a sharingan to perform a concentrated blow which affects the cerebral cortex and affects the opponent human senses .

    Must have mastered wind and in Ninjutsu.

    Must need thunderbolt permission to use

    Can not use 3 jutsu for next 2 rounds due to pain from implanted blade needles.

    The technique which affects the senses due to a direct focused blow from the opponent can only be countered by a 2 tomoe sharignan.

    The technique last for 4 Rounds

    Solution to scorps decline issue: I changed it to nin kenjutsu making it be more of a weaponry fighting style but still involving ninjutsu i also made changes to the grammars and removed things about it be a jutsu . I increased the restriction from having starting training in ninjutsu to have mastered it i also made the specialized attack more dodge -able and not to be so op i did this by limiting the requirement of evading or dodging the move from having a 3 tomoe sharigan to 2.


    Solution to Mathias decline issues: The main problem why this was not approved was the fact that the needles we make me bleed out and thus lose blood and also that the expansion of the needle technique is similar to that of akaimichi so i removed all those things about the needles being expanded and i also made it - 10 damage to the user while he is using the fighting style i also indicated that the needles are nicely cut and craved which allows for easy passage through the veins similar to that of an iv in real life wards.

    ~Declined~ You need to wait 15 days before resubmitting. Please read the rules next time.^^
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by XxFallenUchihaxX View Post
    (Hiryū geijutsu)Fire Dragon Arts
    Type:Taijutsu*
    Background:The fire dragon arts where made by the a member of the Uchiha clan known as Ian Uchiha.Its is the mix of Tai-Jutsu with the Katon Element turn the fists and legs of the user on fire.The Users of this style are able to manipulate the flames and and send small fireballs with use head seals.This style was made to be the Uchiha clan version of the Hyuga clan Gentle Fist.But the the Uchiha developed a more deadly type of style being able to mix there Taijustu and Katon Relese.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The inner works of the style is sending katon chakra to the legs and fists of the user so he can manipulate the flames and add more power.The user is basically using normal Taijutsu but also mixing in there Katon chakra to add more fierce force to the blow.Here is a diagram for a better look:
    Additional effects and Restrictions: *
    -Can only be used on a Uchiha bio
    -Must have started Katon training*
    -Can only be taught by XxFallenUchihaxX
    -Only Katon Jutsus can be used while using this style
    -Can absorb B rank and down Katon Jutsus
    -Can be stopped by B rank and higher Jutsus


    [color=royalblue]±± Declined ±± This is a Nintaijutsu. As for the restrictions and additional effects you are confusing this with a technique. This is a fighting style. Read my submission and mathias to get an idea of what or how to do it.
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    (Hiryū geijutsu)Fire Dragon Arts
    Type:Nintaijutsu
    Background:The fire dragon arts where made by the a member of the Uchiha clan known as Ian Uchiha.Its is the mix of Tai-Jutsu with the Katon Element turn the fists and legs of the user on fire.The Users of this style are able to manipulate the flames and and send small fireballs with use head seals.This style was made to be the Uchiha clan version of the Hyuga clan Gentle Fist.But the the Uchiha developed a more deadly type of style being able to mix there Taijustu and Katon Relese.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The inner works of the style is sending katon chakra to the legs and fists of the user so he can manipulate the flames and add more power.The user is basically using normal Taijutsu but also mixing in there Katon chakra to add more fierce force to the blow.Here is a diagram for a better look:
    Additional effects and Restrictions: *
    -Masters of the Fire Dragon Arts are able to create fire from the sun"s heat.
    -Bio must be at least Jounin Rank to learn this style
    -Must have started Katon trainning
    -Beginners will take damage from the trainning due to the harsh training

    Sorry I messed up the post iPod deleted the proper coding


    ±± Declined ±± Fire from the sun heat? Uh!? O_o also, you need to refine this. You talk about beginners yet you don't define them. Tweek this a bit more.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (Aomidori Dansu) Aqua Dance

    Type: NinTaijutsu

    Background: The Land of Whirlpools is well known for there outrages waters, and devastating currents. Whirlpools randomly form off the coast causing close by ships to rack. Viewed by the military as a defense against rival Clans, the local Traders and Fishermen found them to be a nuisance. An Uzumaki Clan general named Hakoda fought many battles during times of war. He would rarely come home to see his wife and daughter. but when he did we was in consent thought of the dead left on the battlefield. During dinner Hakoda would constantly talk about the war beyond the shores. Of the men he wished he could have saved. He would constantly tell his daughter Katara about how he wishes he could be as strong as the Whirlpools that defend this land. Hakoda viewed the Whirlpools as fierce and raw power but Katara viewed them differently. To her they where swift and calm entities, dancing in the beautiful currents of her homeland. After Hakoda left for another battle, Katara decided to study the whirlpools and practice their dance. months passed and Katara's chakra naturally felt cool around water unknowingly fusing her chakra with the water, she found herself able to "Will" the water to dance with her. One day upon Hakoda's return, he noticed Katara dancing with the water, he was amazed by the dance. "Outstanding Balance" Hakoda said. "Swift motion and a calm mind. This is what I've been needing, I'm so proud of you Katara, can you show me this dance?" Overjoyed, Katara gladly showed her father the dance unknowing of her fathers intensiveness for battle, he quickly turned it into a weapon, teaching the new style to Elite Clan members. After the dispersion of the Clan, a scroll with the secrets of the Aomidori Dansu was lost, only to later be found by a trader that sold the scroll to Hei, a Storm Master for an unknown price.




    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This unique style of NinTaijutsu is based on swift yet calm fluent movements. Having a calm mind helps the ninja be able to focus on their chakra within the water to be able to "Dance" with it. because of the amount of chakra within the water it becomes extremely dense over the years, making it stronger then normal, it will be able to cut though Steel with ease. The user will need to carry this "Chakra water" in a gourd or pouch depending on the amount they have with them. This Aqua Dance is used for close combat, focusing on slicing strikes of vital organs. it is extremely efficient for fighting multiple targets. Because of the chakra within the water, it is unable to fuse with other water sources, if dropped on water it would just float on top of the water like a thick oil, and if dropped on earth it will not be absorbed into soil. In order to use this style to it's fullest potential, the user will need to practice for many years, enhancing there agility and dexterity, allowing for quicker movement and reflexes.

    Co-creator: Kirabi

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of this Fighting Style move with enhance speed. (+3)
    -User of this fighting style have expert chakra control.
    -The Chakra infused water cannot be evaporated, even by the hottest of techniques.
    -The Chakra infused water cannot be Frozen, even by the coldest of techniques.
    -Must have an Affinity to Suiton to Learn.
    -Must have a Water Gourd or other container to hold water.
    -Cannot use Suiton Techniques with this water.
    -Must be at least Sannin Rank to learn.
    -Must be a Member for at least 6 months.


    ±± Declined ±± This is basically you trying to find a way to use water in the same way Gaara uses his Sand. Its not actually a Nin Taijutsu. Were is the Taijutsu part?
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±


    Hojōjutsu / Nawajutsu - Hidden Rope Art
    Type: Other (encompasses Taijutsu, Kenjutsu and Fuuinjutsu as well)

    Background: Hojōjutsu or Nawajutsu, is the traditional Japanese martial art of restraining a person using cord/rope/chain. Encompassing many different materials, techniques and methods from many different schools, Hojojutsu is a quintessentially Japanese art that is a unique product of Japanese history and culture.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Hojojutsu can be divided into two broad categories.
    1. The first category is the capture and restraint of a prisoner that was effected with strong, thin cord (usually 3-4 millimeters) called a hayanawa or “fast rope”, and sometimes the sageo carried by samurai on the sword-sheaths. In law-enforcement, this cord was carried by constables who secreted the rope in a small bundle that fed cord from one end. This torinawa ("capture-rope") was coiled so that the cord would pay out from one end as the bundled cord was passed around the prisoner’s body, neck and arms as he or she was tied. This was usually accomplished by one constable in the course of performing an arrest while the
    prisoner was actively resisting and had to be accomplished quickly.

    Even at this stage, attention was still paid to visual and aesthetic concerns in the tying method as well as to the cultural needs of Japanese society. According to experts, an accused but not convicted prisoner would be tied using methods which allowed the prisoner to be securely restrained but which contained no knots to save the prisoner the shame of being publicly bound. Instead of securing the tie with knots, the constable held on to the free end of the rope and walked behind the prisoner to keep him or her under control as the prisoner was taken for an interrogation which could involve the application of one or more forms of judicial torture to elicit a confession.

    2. The second category was effected with one or more “main ropes” or “honnawa” which like the torinawa could be any one of many different lengths, but was a proper hemp rope, possibly six or more millimeters in diameter and as much as eighty feet long—which was used to provide a more secure, long-term binding than is possible with the torinawa for transportation to a place of incarceration, restraint at legal proceedings, and—in the case of particularly severe crimes—for the public display of the prisoner prior to execution by such methods as beheading, crucifixion (i.e., the prisoner was displayed tied to a cross before spears were driven through the body), or, in arson convictions, death by fire.

    Honnawa ties were applied by a group of people, usually not less than four, whose presence allowed the use of more intricate and ornate patterns than was the case with the torinawa. Both forms combined effective restraint with a distinct visual aesthetic.

    In either form, the hojojutsu ties known today display a shrewd understanding of human anatomy through several recurrent themes. This can include leverage-removal (tying limbs in positions that decrease the force they can generate), rope-placement to discourage struggling or to make it less effective by placing one or more loops of rope around the neck and constricting restraint around points on the upper arms where determined struggle put pressure on blood vessels and nerves numbing the extremities.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -This style encompasses the raw strength of the user and requires finesse in its use. The cords/ropes are constantly feed chakra from the user and hidden under the clothes of the user in such a way that they are still capable of maintaining their full bodily movement without any restriction even though it is wrapped around the arms, torso, and legs of the user.
    -Constant placement of the user's chakra in the cords/ropes grants the user complete control.
    -Training with the slightly heavy cords and rope wrapped around their body occurs round the clock. When the user of Nawajutsu gets used to wearing a certain weight of rope/cord around their body, they increase the seal placed inside the very thread of the cord/rope, increasing its weight and hardness. This keeps the natural speed of the user in check. The weight of the ropes cannot exceed 100lbs.
    - The cords/rope are laced with lines of chakra flexible/malleable metal capable of channeling chakra especially in the bulb ends of the cords/rope that are great conductors of electricity. The metal keeps the rope from being easily ignited via techniques of the user or the opponent. The most skilled users are capable of tying kunai to the ropes to attack with as well and still keep them hidden under their clothes without hurting themselves. They have scars under their clothing proving how difficult this was to master.
    -This technique is so rare, that it is only allowed to have one person practice it in each village. User's not of a village cannot partake in the learning of this technique, as it can cause extreme stress on the body, and the user's have to be within the vicinity of a multiple medics in case of need. The Soke, or Grandmaster of Nawajutsu teaches each other village 1 of the 5 ways of sealing, leaving out the crucial component necessary that allows them to teach it to others. "Teaching them everything they know, but know All he knows."
    -Master's of this technique are capable tying knots in the rope/cord with a mere wiggle of the rope, that are incapable of being undone unless the user of the rope, who has their own specific way of undoing the knot. Only the originator of Hojōjutsu is capable of undoing every knot, having mastered the technique beyond any other.
    -The user is capable of using their chakra to cut part of the ropes/cords or even retract them back into their body with a movement of their arms/legs.
    -Masters of this technique who have learned Fuuinjutsu are capable of completely binding an sealing an opponent using the cords/ropes. The sealing is extremely effective, as it can only be undone by the person who sealed them. The owner of this technique, knowing all ways of sealing and unsealing, is incapable of having Fuuinjutsu used on him in this way.

    Soke Hojōjutsu - Hidden Grandmaster Rope Art Technique
    Kumo Hojōjutsu - Hidden Thunder Rope Art Technique
    Iwa Hojōjutsu- Hidden Stone Rope Art Technique
    Suna Hojōjutsu - Hidden Erosion Rope Art Technique
    Konoha Hojōjutsu - Hidden Flame Rope Art Technique
    Kiri Hojōjutsu- Hidden Wave Rope Art Technique

    -The Grandmaster is able to use any and all Hojōjutsu techniques.
    -Each Master in the village is limited to their element and those that do not require any element. The village that the Grandmaster resides in can have 1 additional person know and use Hojōjutsu, but are limited to the restriction based upon that village.
    - There can only be 1 Grandmaster per village.
    - To become a Grandmaster, after having Mastered Hidden Rope Arts for at least 3 months, must have beaten 2 opponents in a Taijutsu/Kenjtusu only fight with Hidden Rope Arts, then challenge and defeat the original or another Grandmaster.


    Grandmaster (Oraan) belongs to Iwagakure, however there can be a Master in Iwagakure, who will be limited to Hidden Stone Rope Art and rope art that does not contain any elemental value.....Jutsu for Hojōjutsu will look like the following. (Reference picture above)


    Hojōjutsu -8-Notto-zu (Hidden Rope Art - Figure of 8 Knot)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: C (B with applied Elemental)
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 20 (25 with applied Elemental)
    Damage: 30 (40 with applied Elemental)
    Description: The user charges his chakra (pure or elemental) rope/cord in one of his arms and thrusts his arm towards the ground. The knot of the rope/cord will bounce continuously ricochet across the ground at a rapid rate hitting multiple targets, one target in multiple areas, or multiple objects; until the user forces it to stop.
    *Grandmaster - Can use an element they know for a desired effect.
    *Stone - The knot is turned into a 10 inch(in diameter) stone, that causes mini craters in the ground and is capable of breaking bones and other objects up to its rank.
    *Thunder - The knot is charged with lightning, capable of paralyzing on contact.
    *Wave - The knot becomes extremely slick the more strikes the ground faster than normal and travels in a blur of speed and gaining power.
    *Flame - The knot will be enveloped in flames when it strikes the ground becoming increasingly hot from friction.
    *Erosion - The knot when hitting the ground will raise up a dust cloud from hitting the ground, making it hard for an opponent to see where the knot is coming from as it strikes. the dust cloud also hides the user from sight.

    Hojōjutsu - Taitorōpusaikuron (Hidden Rope Art - Tight-Rope Cyclone)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: B (A with applied Elemental) (S with Grandmaster Combo)
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25 (30 with applied Elemental) (40 with Grandmaster Combo)
    Damage: 40 (60 with applied Elemental) (80 with Grandmaster Combo)
    Description: The user extends 10 feet of hidden rope out from both of their sleeves and charges it with chakra (pure or elemental) while spinning extremely quickly, creating a large cyclone. Each rope that extends out of the user's arm has a knot on the end of it. These are two separate ropes.
    *Grandmaster - Costing 2/3 moves in a turn, can choose to charge each rope with a different chakra (up to 2 elemental chakra), resulting in an S ranked Combination
    *Stone - Becomes an A Ranked Earth Cyclone
    *Wave - Becomes an A Ranked Water Cyclone
    *Thunder - Becomes an A Ranked Lightning Cyclone
    *Flame - Becomes an A Ranked Fire Cylone
    *Erosion - Becomes an A Ranked Wind Cyclone
    Note: Grandmaster can only be used 3 times per battle.
    Note: Grandmaster must wait 2 turns to use A Ranked and above Hojōjutsu.

    Hojōjutsu - Te no Musubime (Hidden Rope Art - Knots in Hand Style)
    Type: Attack/Defense
    Rank: B (A with applied Elemental)
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 25 (30 with applied Elemental)
    Damage: 40 (60 with applied Elemental)
    Description: The user extends hidden rope out from both of their sleeves and charges it with chakra (pure or elemental). The knots are held in the hands of the user and used in Taijutsu/Kenjutsu extreme close range fights or to deflect certain objects. Each rope that extends out of the user's arm has a knot on the end of it. These are two separate ropes.
    *Grandmaster - Costing 2/3 moves in a turn, can choose to charge each rope with a different chakra (up to 2 elemental chakra), resulting in 2 A Ranked Elementals or an A Ranked elemental of anything other than Basic 5 causing the Grandmaster 5 damage per turn per hand. Can only be used for 5 turns and will resort in being forced to use pure chakra for 1 turn)
    *Stone - turns knots to earth making bones crack
    *Wave - covers knots to water making countering quicker
    *Thunder - charges knots with lightning, causing paralysis in the body part that is hit.
    *Flame - covers knots with a small fireball, burning flesh and clothing upon impact.
    *Erosion - covers knots with wind, cutting more than bruising the opponent deeply



    ±± Declined ±± I really believed i was going to read something approvable, but you are actually trying to create something that isn't a custom Fighting style. Had you used the ropes combined with taijutsu to use in close combat techniques, using the rope as a weapon, i'd approve. But this surpasses that and much move, giving me the feel of a Ninjutsu set of techniques, instead of a Custom Fighting Style.
     
         
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    Gengo (The Original Language)

    Type: Ninjutsu

    Background: It is common usage to better mold the chakra using Handseals. They serve as guidelines for the jutsu to take action, and allow a great complexity of actions, although they're nothing more than a medium for a jutsu to take place. Studying the mechanics of the chakra usage, a style was created as a substitute to the handseals, which was named the Original Language, Gengo.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:


    The users of Gengo created a language where each word represented an handseal, an action for the chakra to behave, while still allowing for new words to be created, much like how each clan has discovered new handseals to preform different jutsus. The mechanics behind the Gengo take guidance on the movement of the throat and the tongue, which, although creating sounds, do not require the opponent to hear them in order for the jutsu to take action.

    Through mastery of this style, their users became able to link together the words as fast or even faster than an handseal's master, being able to effectively and correctly linking a large succession of sounds, words, in order to preform the desired Handseal.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    The users of Gengo gain access to the ability to preform any jutsu through spoken words, cannon or custom, by substituting the handseals for Gengo words, and the ability to create new words to adapt for new jutsus.

    Since it's the work of the throat and tongue (which then permit the creation of the sound) that guide the chakra, even if the opponent finds himself underwater or otherwise forbidden to make a sound, as long as the throat and tongue are free, they can still utilize Gengo instead of Handseals. It's called Mute Genko, commonly called Ventriloquism, but is a skill reserved to masters, S-Class and up.

    Any handseal known has a correspondent Gengo word, likewise, any Genko word has a correspondent handseal. Learning Genko is just has hard has learning Handseals, so the speed and mastery of a Genko User, just like Handseals, is based on the rank of the user.


    ±± Declined ±± This was tried out as a Ninjutsu before and it isn't a CFS. However, i will pm you with a way to actually make this work.
     
         
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    Tentou Kamigami Taijutsu: Heaven Gods style taijutsu
    Type:Taijutsu
    Background: Long ago in the heavens the Gods of man created a martial style known as the Heaven Gods taijutsu. This style was used to fight back dark forces in troubled times. The Gods taught this technique to the SO6P himself. He used it in his fight against the Juubi. This Taijutsu form is most difficult to learn. Sage of Darkness found the scroll of secrets of this art while he was out adventurering in a temple known as the Heaven temple.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Heavens style Taijutsu is a martial style that makes the user feel like in a cloud. This Taijutsu style revolves in flowing chakra in key points of your body Legs, arms and head to mantain stabilty in this form. This style gives the user more speed, accuracy, mobility, flexibilty etc. Due to its unique flow that lessens the gravity around you making you move better and faster. When using this Taijutsu form the chakra flow makes the body feel less the gravity pull thus making movment easier. It allows the user Make unique movements that a normal human can't such as jump higher than usual, mantain balance for a longer duration, when dropping from above it feels like a feather.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - This form can only be used by S class Ninja or higher
    - Can only be taught by Sage of Darkness and those who have learned it and given permission by him
    - The user will feel very exausted and weak after using this form and if used alot may damage the body permantly


    Please edit or remove anything to make it more realistic


    ±± Declined ±± This is basically simple taijutsu so, as i said multiple times, why make a complete Custom Fighting Style for this if i has nothing special about it?
     
         
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    (六式, Rokushiki) - Six Styles
    Type: Nintaijutsu
    Background:

    The Six Styles, believed to originate from the Sage of Six Paths, are a series of six unique forms of Nintaijutsu combined into one single art form. Each one is essentially created from observations from the user's environment. For example, watching a large boulder resist movement when pushed or watching a leaf float in the wind, then formulating a unique style that, over time, resembles the original imagery. Using these Six Styles, The Sage of Six Paths was believed to have been able conquered an entire village, or possibly even an entire nation, alone; however, this is mere speculation due to his pacifistic nature. The Six Styles that comprise Rokushiki are based off of paper floating in the air, man being able to perform normally impossible acrobatic feats on the moon, storms tearing apart wood or even steel housing, a spear piercing through a large entity cleanly, a sword slicing through the air, and a boulder resisting movement.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Rokushiki, litterally translating to Six Styes, consists of six sub-categories. They are each unique in their own manor, combining the raw strength of Taijutsu with the Chakra Manipulation of Ninjutsu to create a unique style based off of observations from the user's environment. They are as follows:

    Kami-e (紙絵 Kami-e, literally meaning "Paper Drawing"): The user allows their body to go limp and resemble paper floating in the wind freely. They can easily dodge attacks by decreasing their chakra flow, however are rendered unable to use jutsu of equal rank or above.

    Geppo (月歩 Geppō, literally meaning "Moon Step"): The user creates a small cloud of chakra below their feet, allowing them to literally "jump on air", similarly to acrobatic feats performed on the moon.

    Rankyaku (嵐脚 Rankyaku, literally meaning "Storm Leg"): The user creates a blast of chakra in their kicks, sending outward a devastatingly harsh frontal attack, similarly to storms ripping appart steel or wood housing.

    Shigan (指銃 Shigan, literally meaning "Finger Gun"): The user generates chakra in their finger muscles to create a "finger spear" capable of piercing through flesh, bone, and other sturdy materials, similarly to a spear piercing normally sturdy entities.

    Soru (剃る Soru, literally meaning "Shave"): The user moves their body speedily to a nearby location, merely by using their chakra to increase blood-flow to the moving body part ergo increasing its speed and strength temporarily but decreasing it afterwards, similarly to a sword slicing through the air.

    Tekkai (鉄塊 Tekkai, literally meaning "Iron Mass"): The user uses their chakra to increase the amount of iron in the affected muscle, making them stronger and more resistant to bruising or frontal damage, similarly to a boulder resisting movement when pushed or punched. Although it may seem as though it is an all-powerful technique, the user is still capable of receiving bruising and, from techniques of great powers, even extreme external damage or internal bodily harm when faced with an equal or stronger strength attack respectively.

    The one thing that each technique has in common is that they all combine two normally separate techniques on a new, methodical level, creating a devastatingly powerful combination of defensive, offensive, and supplementary Nintaijutsu.

    Additional Effects and Restrictions:

    ~The user must have previously mastered Taijutsu and have over 3,600 pots before learning.
    ~Must be taught by Kira.. or ~Sanji~.
    ~Due to the increased internal chakra flow on abnormal levels, users are not able to use Genjutsu or Kai.


    ±± Declined ±± Most were already done before and the ones who weren't aren't approvable in the context of your RP. Sorry
     
         
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    (Bifū Tōfū) - Doll Fatality

    Type: Puppetry, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu

    Background: The art of Doll Fatality was created by a man whose name is unknown. He had developed a new type of puppet which he would've called a "doll". The purpose of the doll is to allow much more flexible movements within the doll, using a different build which allows the user to be much more flexible rather than rigid.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The main ability of Doll Fatality is the usage of the flexibility of puppets and using that to it's best ability. The style gives the advantage of cutting off a puppet's chakra strings in order to use certain moves such as rapid flailing of arms. While one wouldn't be able to control the puppet without the chakra strings, they're able to use force, velocity and momentum to achieve the moves wanted using this technique. It's moreso an advanced style of puppetry which also utilizes Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, due to the physical blows of puppets.

    Additional Effects: The user of the style becomes more flexible with puppets, enabling faster control over them. The technique also practices a lot of flowing movements using the chakra strings, so using the style, a higher transition rate between the techniques and other movements such as hand seals is achieved.

    Restrictions: Using the style requires full concentration over puppets, and a synchronization with one's puppet. Unless the user is Kankuro, Sasori or Chiyo (in which they can use Karasu, Sasori's Parents etc.), the puppet must belong to one's self (custom). Also the user must have a mastery over puppetry to use this style. Additionally, this can only be used with puppets which are outside of the user, so it cannot be used with puppets which are used like armor, or if someone turned themself into a puppet, such as Hiruko and Sasori as himself.

    Video to further explain momentum and the style I wish to aim for.

    Note: It's only the first bit with Naruto, how he throws his Shadow Clones. In a similar fashion, one could release chakra strings while the puppet is moving at a high speed to act as a projectile.



    ±± Pending ±± We've already seen some puppeteers (namely Sasori) use similar movements when he used the 1000 puppet jutsu. Using a puppet as projectile isn't a CFs but rather a technique in itself. As for achieving movement without puppet strings in physics it would be possible to throw the puppets in special ways that would enable them to achieve simple aftermaths. However, those movements would require a generous amount of description on your part and a giant amount of visualization from your opponents, something that in our RP is hard to accomplish. I don't see how you can pull it off in a useful manner.
    (Bifū Tōfū) - Doll Fatality

    Type: Puppetry, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu

    Background: The art of Doll Fatality was created by a man whose name is unknown. He had developed a new type of puppet which he would've called a "doll". The purpose of the doll is to allow much more flexible movements within the doll, using a different build which allows the user to be much more flexible rather than rigid.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The main ability of Doll Fatality is the usage of the flexibility of puppets and using that to it's best ability. The style gives the advantage of cutting off a puppet's chakra strings in order to use certain moves such as rapid flailing of arms. While one wouldn't be able to control the puppet without the chakra strings, they're able to use force, velocity and momentum to achieve the moves wanted using this technique. For example, launching a puppet with proper trajectory and speed while letting it go at the right time to use it as a projectile. Another use may be rapidly pulling back a puppet's arm and letting it go to use momentum for it to be a flailing weapon of sorts. It's moreso an advanced style of puppetry which also utilizes Taijutsu and Kenjutsu, due to the physical blows of puppets.

    Additional Effects: The user of the style becomes more flexible with puppets, enabling faster control over them. The technique also practices a lot of flowing movements using the chakra strings, so using the style, a higher transition rate between the techniques and other movements such as hand seals is achieved.

    Restrictions: Using the style requires full concentration over puppets, and a synchronization with one's puppet. Unless the user is Kankuro, Sasori or Chiyo (in which they can use Karasu, Sasori's Parents etc.), the puppet must belong to one's self (custom). Also the user must have a mastery over puppetry to use this style. Additionally, this can only be used with puppets which are outside of the user, so it cannot be used with puppets which are used like armor, or if someone turned themself into a puppet, such as Hiruko and Sasori as himself.

    Video to further explain momentum and the style I wish to aim for.

    Note: It's only the first bit with Naruto, how he throws his Shadow Clones. In a similar fashion, one could release chakra strings while the puppet is moving at a high speed to act as a projectile.

    Also watch this for a better example of how I wish to utilize the moves.



    ±± Pending ±± Provide me with an example technique of this and its use.
     
         
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    Genkoutsu Kamakiri | The Mantis Fist

    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:The Mantis Fist is a taijustu style that invovles the user striking the enemy with one or more of their fingers in rapid succesion in specific places alternating between hands for each strike . While striking the enemy, the user focus's a large amount of Raiton or Katon chakra on the tops of their fingers and when they strike the enemy, they allow the chakra to penetrate into the enemies body, however even though it is a very pinpoint strike done with the finger tips, its effects are devestating as when the user makes contact with the opponent, they insert their chakra into the opponents body, the chakra ripples outwards and in the direction of the original strike, much like when a pebble is dropped into a shallow pond and the water around it is disturbed and ripples outwards. The effects of the Mantis Fist can be increased further by striking certain spots on the body, such as pressure points or nerve endings.
    When this is done with raiton chakra, the chakra will ripple outwards on impact, which may affect motor and sensory neurons with its static charges, this can cause various effects.
    By using fire chakra the user can heat water present in bodies or the atmosphere causing the water to evapourate, this can be very effective as the body is made up of large sums of water and many organs rely on water present in the body

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    -Paralysation in the surronding area.
    -Loss of feeling and pain in that area. The users raiton chakra's static charges are used to counter the static charges of the opponents sensory neurons, making the opponent have a loss of feeling and pain in that area, this proves disadvantageous, as damage can be done to the opponents body via a strongfist follow up without the opponent ever being aware of the effects caused(Broken ribs pierced lungs ect.)
    -Heating and evapouration of water sources.



    Additional effects and Restrictions: The Mantis Fist has one last ability, because of the way that the chakra is released and inserted, the non physical chakra part of the Mantis Fist does not require contact with the opponents body to work. Infact once the ripple effect is released, it can travel through mediums such as earth water and air for up to 5 inches the ripples becoming wider and affecting a larger area but becoming less potent as it reaches further from the source, much like a wave that passess through a small gap into a large area. The area covered having a diameter of 6 inches per 1 inch distance form the source.
    This style of fighting is called mantis fist,since it mostly involves striking your opponent with the tip of your finger(s) in rapid succesion,and since mantis have scythe like fingers instead of hands and move in rapid ridigid jerky like motions i thought the name was befitting.
    The Mantis fist contains stances that are strange and unusual,and usualy unprecidented to the enemy,making a mantis fist users movements hard to read.
    -Due to the Mantis Fist involving mimicking the actual movements of a Mantis, a Mantis Fist User moves unlike any mammal with extreme precision and speed, and unlike that of a average human a mantis fist users reactions are not fueled by fear or instinct leading them to overeact and make unecesary movements but the mantis style involves the slightest movements so as to avoid things and thus avoid unnecessary reflexes making Mantis Fist users extremely effecient at dodging, and giving them room for a swift counterattack.

    Note:Anyone other than -Scaze- must be taught to use the mantis fist justu's
    ~Precise chakra control is needed to benifit from the full offense of the mantis fist.
    ~Requires the user to have mastered Taijustu/strong fist and started Raiton and Fire training
    ~Anyone other than -Scaze- must be Taught the Mantis Fist
    ~Because of the rigid jerky like motions, and the roundabout manner that Mantis Fist users use, the Mantis Fist and its techniques cannot be predicted by 2T Sharingan and lower, with some of the more draining Mantis fist jutsu being unpredictable even by 3T.(Will be noted underneath Mantis Fist Jutsu)
    ~Mantis Fist users are also exceptionally Agile.


    ±± Declined ±± First thing the back ground isn't the background but rather how the style works. So you need to come up with a background and pass all of that into the description of the abilities of the style. The sharingan part is overpowered. That would mean no one could defend or react against a move of that style. Take that out. Also the part about reflexes and speed needs to be translated into short topics that every Mantis Fist will be able to have
    Genkoutsu Kamakiri | The Mantis Fist

    Type: Nin-Taijutsu
    Background: The Mantis fist was developed long ago by a man who constantly found that in fights his movements were to easy to read, and became predictable and easy to dodge since he often swung too wide or in a pattern, also he found that upon dodging he would often lose his footing or simply leave himself open for a quick follow up due to the fact that his movements were not controlled enough, they were to bodaucious, too outgoing, they were overeactions. After learning this and trying to learn from several great teachers whom he all failed, the man turned to nature, hoping that it would provide the answers he needed. Indeed it did, the man soon came across a Mantis, and upon seeing its rigid jerky movements, movements that were precise and were always in for the kill, seeing how controlled and meaningfull each of the Mantis's movements were, the man started to study the Mantis, mimicking its movements. This birthed a new Taijutsu, the Mantis fist, however it still was not complete, although it granted the user the means of great physical control being able to dodge attacks taking the easiest least time consuming route possible, and only making the movements that were absolutely needed leaving very little room for openings and allowing quick controlled yet rigd and inhumane like conterstrikes that were so bizzare that it usually forced for the opponent to block through the use of reactions or dodge through the use of instinct rather than dodging by predicting the path of trajectory and also the fact that its prowess was equal to that of a punch if not greater, but due to the force being applied to a smaller area than a punch its effects where more devastating. Eventually after several years of wandering, passing down this way of fighting to many students, he came across a certain teenager, after learning the Mantis Fist, the man was able to identify with it, and soon added the use of chakra to the Mantis Fist, completing the art, or so he thought...

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The Mantis Fist is a taijustu style that invovles the user striking the enemy with one or more of their fingers in rapid succesion in specific places alternating between hands for each strike the speed of hand movements rivaling that of the gentle fist . While striking the enemy, the user focus's a large amount of Raiton or Katon chakra on the tops of their fingers and when they strike the enemy, they allow the chakra to penetrate into the enemies body, however even though it is a very pinpoint strike done with the finger tips, its effects are devestating as when the user makes contact with the opponent, they insert their chakra into the opponents body, the chakra ripples outwards and in the direction of the original strike, much like when a pebble is dropped into a shallow pond and the water around it is disturbed and ripples outwards. The effects of the Mantis Fist can be increased further by striking certain spots on the body, such as pressure points or nerve endings.
    When this is done with raiton chakra, the chakra will ripple outwards on impact, which may affect motor and sensory neurons with its static charges, this can cause various effects.
    By using fire chakra the user can heat water present in bodies or the atmosphere causing the water to evapourate, this can be very effective as the body is made up of large sums of water and many organs rely on water present in the body

    -Paralysation in the surronding area due to muscle contraction, similar to that of chidori Nagashi.
    -Loss of feeling and pain in that area. The users raiton chakra's static charges are used to counter the static charges of the opponents sensory neurons, making the opponent have a loss of feeling and pain in that area, this proves disadvantageous, as damage can be done to the opponents body via a strongfist follow up without the opponent ever being aware of the effects caused(Broken ribs pierced lungs ect.)
    -Heating and evapouration of water sources.
    -Burning of Skin.



    Additional effects and Restrictions: The Mantis Fist has one last ability, because of the way that the chakra is released and inserted, the non physical chakra part of the Mantis Fist does not require contact with the opponents body to work. Infact once the ripple effect is released, it can travel through mediums such as earth water and air for up to 5 inches the ripples becoming wider and affecting a larger area but becoming less potent as it reaches further from the source, much like a wave that passess through a small gap into a large area. The area covered having a diameter of 6 inches per 1 inch distance form the source.
    This style of fighting is called mantis fist,since it mostly involves striking your opponent with the tip of your finger(s) in rapid succesion,and since mantis have scythe like fingers instead of hands and move in rapid ridigid jerky like motions i thought the name was befitting.
    The Mantis fist contains stances that are strange and unusual,and usualy unprecidented to the enemy,making a mantis fist users movements hard to read.
    -Due to the Mantis Fist involving mimicking the actual movements of a Mantis, a Mantis Fist User moves unlike any mammal with extreme precision and speed, and unlike that of a average human a mantis fist users reactions are not fueled by fear or instinct leading them to overeact and make unecesary movements but the mantis style involves the slightest movements so as to avoid things and thus avoid unnecessary reflexes making Mantis Fist users extremely effecient at dodging, and giving them room for a swift counterattack.

    Note:Anyone other than -Scaze- must be taught to use the mantis fist justu's
    ~Precise chakra control is needed to benifit from the full offense of the mantis fist.
    ~Requires the user to have mastered Taijustu/strong fist and started Raiton and Fire training
    ~Anyone other than -Scaze- must be Taught the Mantis Fist

    The first bolded bit is new as a background.
    The second bolded bit has just been moved from the background to the effects.
    Removed the sharingan part and re-worded some of the ~ Sentences.


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    Kiba Hebi Kata:Fanged Snake Style
    Type: (Nin)Taijutsu/Kenjutsu
    Background:
    After traveling the world for many years and watching the animals of the land a reknown taijutsu master observed the movements and attacks of snakes against other animals of the land. 2 snakes in particular caught his attention, the Viper and the Constrictor.
    The Viper, with its ability to strike with great speed and inject deadly venom to bring down animals much larger then itself in self-defence.
    The Constrictor caught his attention by binding the prey with its own body. its large, powerful body overwhelmed other animals as the snake crushed them.
    Using these 2 snakes the ninja created a new taijutsu style, using the Viper as the base for his offensive techniques and the Constrictor for his defensive techniques. Overall this style is for self-defense, just like the real snakes the Snake stylist is taught to only strike when nessicary and to not start pointless violence.
    This style is based upon speed. With extremely fast arm based attacks that mirror the natural movements of the snake's body. The fighter's body must remain strong and supple as it represents the snake itself during attack. The fist acts as the snake's head, the fingers are the snake's tongue and the legs mimic the snake's tail. The master of this style claimed that adopting the fluidity of snakes allows him to entwine the opponent in defense and strike them from angles they wouldn't expect in offense. Snake style especially lends itself to applications with swords (such as the Jian)
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Snake techniques focus on two elements.
    1.Precision striking to soft targets to symbolize the fangs of a snake.
    2. limb wrapping to symbolize the constrictor.

    Rather than fist strikes, fingertips and palms will strike with a variety of force at the eyes, throat and groin. Due to the serious nature of hitting such targets the snake-stylist should practice remaining calm and peaceful in the face of adversity in an effort to avoid fighting altogether unless the situation warrants such defensive actions.

    The Constrictor Style
    wraps up and grapples with an opponent, relying on strength and connectedness with the ground to make the techniques work.

    -A snake practitioner, to defend from arm-based strikes, traps the wrist and forearm of his opponent. From this position, he will strike the trapped arm just behind the elbow. Depending on how he delivers that strike, this move can take down, control, cause pain to, or break the opponent. This is a basic constrictor technique, wrapping up the opponent's arm and using leg position to deliver the most powerful and appropriate attack to the vulnerable elbow.
    -In close fighting with a leg-based fighter, a constrictor stylist might step between his opponent's leg to crowd his space and upset his balance. From there, he can wrap his leg around his opponent, much like a python coiling around prey. This leg check has many variations, aiming for a range of outcomes from unbalancing an opponent, immobilizing him, tripping or trapping and breaking the ankle.


    The Viper Style mimics the striking of poisonous snakes, represented in humans by speed and precise delivery of special hand forms that penetrate and damage an opponent


    -The eye thrust is a simple viper technique, relying on accuracy and fast delivery not only to injure the opponent but to protect the striking hand from injuring itself. To deliver an eye thrust, the snake stylist extends one or two fingers -- sometimes supported by half-extending other fingers -- and stabs it into his opponent's eye. Thrown too slow, a natural flinch reflex will pull the target eye out of range. Done inaccurately, the stylist will jam his own finger on his opponent's face or forehead
    -Pressure points are areas of the body that can cause disproportionate pain or disability as compared to how hard you hit them. The "funny bone" area is perhaps the best-known example. Even a light rap there can numb the arm and cause severe pain. Snake stylists use the viper aspect to strike pressure points with hand forms that minimize the surface area that strikes -- allowing increased penetration and delivery of maximum force.
    Only basic pressure points known to most can be struck unless the user has medical training for example the temples, the kidneys, the elbow and the neck. Overall the point is to strike soft parts of the body to inflict maximum amounts of pain in small areas.

    Distinguished by circular movement when delivering parries and attacks, fanged snake style employs an upright, mobile stance as opposed to the horse stance used by most other styles. This mobile stance enables quick advances and sidestepping. Since snake stylists are taught to spring from rest to full attack, they do not use preparatory stances. Snake stylists rely on rapid, alternating jabs as well as bobbing and weaving to evade counterattacks.
    To enhance the speed of their jabs Snake users will have weights attached to their forearms during training and can keep them attached to hide their true striking speeds. Slower taijutsu users can train with leg weights on as well but as this is not needed for the most part only users who specalize in the Constrictor Style use them to strengthen the leg muscles and allow for faster wrapping of limbs.

    -Snake Style and sword use
    The weilding short bladed swords such as the Jian (linked to above) or Ninjato is done when the Snake Stylist can no longer attack the soft spots of the body and must increase their striking power past that of the fangs. Using the same stance as before but weilding the sword in their striking hand the user combines their speed,agility and already increased arm speed to stab the tip of the blade into their target. The sword can be then left in to act as "venom" if the sword is no longer needed to fight or can be pulled out for another stab.
    Typically after inbedding the sword into their target (if the sword is no longer needed to strike) the user will utilize the Constrictor Style as the pain from the sword weakens their opponent the constrictor style allows them to immobilize the rest of the body or perform a strangling technique, shortening the breath, increasing the target's panic and cutting off oxygen to the brain.

    -The Viper Style is often enhanced with "Fangs" made of condensed chakra on the user's fingertips or palms to pierce chakra-made defences or clash with chakra enhanced weapons. These fangs can be made of normal or elemental chakra, and if the user has certain KGs that allow for control of a unique element that too may be made into "Fangs"

    -The Constritor Style can be enhanced with proper chakra control to the limbs to strengthen the muscles, allowing for control over larger and stronger opponents which is often as Snake stylists are useually small in size. This lets users constrict opponents up to two rank higher then themselves.
    -Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Users, after many years of practicing Fanged Snake Style obtain a high level of breath control, improved reflexes, flexability and overall calmness while in dangerous situations.
    -Users either carry weapons or have seals that contain weapons on them in order to utilize the swordplay aspect of this style in which the blade becomes the striking point instead of the fingers. Nessicary for armed combat or piercing harder points such as armor when eyes and other soft targets are too well protected to reach with your fingers.
    -Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
    -User must be trained in Taijutsu to learn

    ±± Declined ±± how is this special and how does this translate into nintaijutsu or ninkenjutsu? I fail to see how this is special.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Oni-Kemuri Kobushi/ Demonic Smoke Fist
    Type: NinTaijutsu
    Background:
    This form of Nintaijutsu, was developed by Otagakure, as a unique form of nin-taijutsu to compete with strong opposition to Orichimaru's will. Unfortunately the users of the form were all used a test subjects and subsequently died as result of the Curse Mark. However, the style and form was accurately recorded on Scrolls that were then scattered among the Ninja world. Once a lone ninja found one of the scrolls, and went on a search for the rest of the scrolls, finding all 27 verses of the Form.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Using this unique form of nintaijutsu, the user emulates the form of smoke, uniquely flowing his/her moves together in a calm, cool manner. Utilizing Smoke devices, the user is able to confuse the opponent, materializing fists, legs, etc from the smoke being used, overwhelming the opponent with quick and destructive blows, whilst lowering the opponent's vision and endurance as the opponent inhales the smoke. The user uses chakra control and advanced manipulation to control the smoke in such a way to keep the opponent at bay. This smoke also acts as a form of evasion, making it difficult to pinpoint the user's exact body location in the smoke. Extremely advanced users of the form seemingly take on the very appearance of smoke, confounding opponents and making the user extremely evasive. Due to the very nature of smoke, the user becomes very durable, taking in physical attacks and dispersing the impact throughout the smoke around them, allowing the user to have abnormally high physical endurance. The User is also has an extremely heightened sense of hearing, seeing that they cannot see through smoke, and reflexes matching that due to training in zero visibility situations with the smoke, relying on hearing and their reflexes alone to compensate for zero visibility.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Only Smoke users of Sannin rank may use this Form.
    -The Visibility of both parties is restricted, causing the user to need to know the opponents exact location to be effective
    -Users have a higher endurance from blunt force, allowing the user to take on full body blows that would normally incapacitate a normal ninja
    -Users have higher senses of hearing, allowing them to hear a ninjas movements by closing their eyes.
    -Users have much faster reflexes than usual, allowing them to react to situations that require split second movements. (Cannot use this to avoid a jutsu must be a practical response)
    -The user is considered an Advanced User after passing a battle test given by Icemyster.
    -Without the User's gas mask,the user is breathing in the smoke more-so than the opponent, causing the user to pass out due to his close proximity to the smoke.
    -The User can only use smoke nintaijutsu while in effect due to the advanced concentration of chakra manipulation to use this Form. Usage of anything else will cause the user to lose control of the smoke and it will harmlessly flow off like normal smoke would due to wind jutsu

    ±± Declined ±± Well, this has potencial, but i don't see how exactly can you call this Nintaijutsu. It fails in the Taijutsu part. If you use smoke only to confuse then all of this can be achieved through Cjs. However, i must tell you (even if i can't give the details) that there is a very very very awesome way to combine Smoke with Taijutsu.
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    Maimu-Dashimono/Mime Performance
    Type: Nin/Genjutsu
    Background:
    After studying street mimes, this fighting style was construed by Ninja from Kumogakure. The illusions given by them inspired the fighting style of imitation. The ninja noted that if the illusions could be included in fighting against other nations, they could gain an un-usual advantage in battle by means of peculiar chakra control and illusions.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The use of this style relies on great chakra control, and illusions to confound the opponent and keep them at bay. Using a very clear like chakra, the user can create objects that the opponent can barely see. The Components are as follows.
    -Chakra Mimicry: The user creates small to large almost transparent chakra objects. For instance, the user swings his or her arms in the same motion as throwing kunai, actually creating small chakra projectiles with the same properties as a normal kunai. Or the most noted Mime wall, where the user places his/her hands out like they are touching an actual wall, and the user's chakra takes the form of a transparent wall.
    -Illusion Mimicry: The user places the opponent in a genjutsu by using the mime art to simulate situations where movement or pain would ensue, for example the user imitates throwing a rope around the opponent around the opponent, the opponent sees this and begins to feel as if they are being pulled in.

    Using these principals the user controls his opponent, using chakra manipulation, control, and genjutsu to force the opponent into submission.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -The user Must be at least Sannin rank to have the amount of chakra control used to manipulate his/her chakra into the transparent shapes.
    -The user cannot use both forms of this style within the same turn.
    -The user cannot use another jutsu while using his shape manipulation due to the amount of focus being used
    -The Users of this form have exceptional knowledge of Genjutsu, allowing them to quickly identify reality
    -The "Transparent" chakra used by the user is visible at short range if within the opponent's range of vision

    ±± Declined ±± How is this a CFS? Were is the close quarter combat part? This seems like a specialized way to produce objects out of chakra that mimic real objects. Which isn't even Genjutsu.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Buraindo-Sentou (Blind Combat)
    Type: Taijutsu
    Background: This fighting style originated from blind sword style, which was used by samuraisby cutting off their visions to enhance their other senses. It has the same principles as the blind sword style except for a few differeces. they are:
    -Using of weapons is forbidden for Buraindo-Senptou users
    -Buraindo-sentou is based mainly on speed and strength
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The buraindo-sentou style cuts off the vision thus enhances the other senses to a whole new level. With all the other senses enhanced, it allows the user to easily evade most of the opponents attacks. Due to the training needed to master the Buraindo-Sentou style, the speed and strength of the user must be at a high level.
    The buraindo-sentou makes use of all martial art forms of fighting, such as boxing, knee-tai fighting, muay thai, kung fu, Brazilian jiu jutsu, krav maga, karate, the legendary bushido style (which was created by the legendary Bushido Brown) e.t.c
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -This style was created by U Chris and can be used by only U Chris
    -It can only be taught by U Chris
    -It can only be trained to people who have mastered all the forms of fighting syles that can be taught it

    ±± Declined ±± You aren't S-Class
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù) Reaper Scythe Arts
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Background: The Reaper Scythe Arts was a weapon style made by ~Johninto~ which utilizes using a scythe. His studying of The Grim Reaper using a scythe to claim victims made Johninto study this art. After obtaining many scythes and training to mix it with chakra Johninto made the Reaper Scythe Arts. This technique gave him the ability to mix chakra with scythes to allow him to claim victims fast like the Grim Reaper.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style involves using a scythe and mixing chakra and elemental chakra to make slashes more painful and faster. This also allows the user to use a scythe at long range even while dual wielding.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of this Art can use 2 Scythes at great speed and accurately.
    -They can mix any elemental chakra with there scythes.
    -Bio must have at least one scythe.
    -Has to be taught by a Reaper Scythe Art Master.

    ~Declined~ This is very close to approval but first I'd like you to tell me exactly how can the Scythe be used at long range? Are you talking about chakra related techniques that you release? Or possibly a chain that is attached to the Scythe that enables you swing it that far? Just minor details ^_^
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    (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù) Reaper Scythe Arts
    Type: Kenjutsu
    Background: The Reaper Scythe Arts was a weapon style made by ~Johninto~ which utilizes using a scythe. His studying of The Grim Reaper using a scythe to claim victims made Johninto study this art. After obtaining many scythes and training to mix it with chakra Johninto made the Reaper Scythe Arts. This technique gave him the ability to mix chakra with scythes to allow him to claim victims fast like the Grim Reaper.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style involves using a scythe and mixing chakra and elemental chakra to make slashes more painful and faster. This also allows the user to use a scythe at long range even while dual wielding by having a chain attached to the scythes.

    The user can also infuse the scythes with elemental chakras to achieve a multitude of effects from enhancing its damage to enhancing its length.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of this Art can use 2 Scythes at great speed and accurately.
    -Bio must have at least one scythe.
    -Has to be taught by a Reaper Scythe Art Master.


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    ~Johinto~, our loyal member, gave on the 12th of March 2012 a request for a Patent on custom fighting style (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù) Reaper Scythe Arts. I, Scorps of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    (Sǐshén liándāo yìshù) Reaper Scythe Arts
    Powered by Scorps
    Copyright 2012, ~Johinto~ , NarutoBase.net


    Note: the elemental infusions and such are things you'll submit as techniques.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Muttsu no pasu no hōhō - The way of the six paths
    Type: nin-taijutsu and nin-kenjutsu
    Background: Taijutsu/kenjutsu based on awaking every elemental nature a person may have to increase the speed and physical strenght of one self. Based on the probable teaching of the sage of six paths of using every element to create a powerful being, the user will be able to attain a sample (based on the level of the user) of the sages power in taijutsu for a period of time. Its similar to awaking the gates or entering sage mode but the only exception is that the user will not be able to preform any elemental ninjutsu during this fightning style.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This form of fightning style works efficient with the muay thai and Bokator combinations. due to the different types of elemental charkra flowing through the body the movement of the techniques and power will increase to a point that getting hit one attack would destory the body from the inside (depending on the type of technique and rank). The upside of using this fightning style, the user's skin will densed so that incoming attacks wouldn't effect him/ her that much but the user cannot handle getting hit to often because it will cause the user's skin tear appart if he de activate this style or remains active for too long.

    The element need to unlock this fightning style and its effects on the human body
    Wind- to cool the body and to help the increase damage by blasting the target away on impact
    Water- to cool the body and to help with the flexiability of the body
    Fire- The most important element... this element increase the user's body temperate but it gives an explosive damage to the target causing burns like the target was hit by a fire ball
    Lightning- to Increase the speed of the user and to stun the target's nervous system
    earth- for defence and density
    ying & yang- the most vital part of this style,this balance all these elements so that it can be use prefectly when its needed.
    example- when attacking, more fire, wind and lightning chakra with a dash of earth chakra will flow through out the body to increase the attack, speed and density. the remaining elements will remain the same low level through out the body

    when resting, more water and wind chakra will flow through out the body inorder to cool the user so the user wont over heat from attacking too much. The rest of the elements will remain at the same low level through out the body.

    when defending, more earth chakra will flow thorugh out the body and it will slow down the user

    when evaiding, more water and lightning chakra will through out the body but attacking this period will not cause that much of damage to the target... it will have the same damage cost as a regular person.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Due to the strain of using the style, the user will not be able to perform any elemental jutsus and after de-activating it... the user will be extremely fatigue similar to the effects of using the gates
    The style cannot be activated again in the same battle... only a one time activation
    yes there will be levels just like gates but it will be slightly different, with each level having its own side effect

    ±± Declined ±± The idea is too broad. I can't allow you to patent all 5 elemental nintaijutsu. Also, you need to think about it practically. You are trying to patent Nintaijutsu, basically the mix between taijutsu and ninjutsu. So, you need to explain how you achieve this in a way that hasn't been done before. Lighting is already a cannon Ninjutsu used by the Raikages. Also, i can't allow you to manipulate simultaneous elements at once in a nintaijutsu. Its too OP.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Dunno yet ~.~
    Type:NinTai| Inuzuka

    Background: After mastering the Inuzuka clan techniques, Tsuna found that there was something missing, at first he hadn't a clue what, but after journying far and wide, he soon came across the answer. The inuzuka techniques didn't quite have the devestating full beast like strength of a wolf, yet at the same time relied on the beast like Instincts to a extent that it became intoxicating to the user, and in effect, was wild and untamed, unconcentrated. It lacked the precision and thought that was gained from a sentient human mind, and also didn't take much advantage of chakra control. Tsuna realised that it was imperfect, and thus searched and trained for a solution which he eventually found. He managed to obtain harmony between the five aspects that both Animal and Humans had that would be beneficial for fighting. Precision and clarity of thought, Instinct and the raw intent to kill, using chakra and elemental chakra effectively for enhancement or Wolf-Ninjutsu, the raw strength and speed of a beast, and the advanced beast senses. Like the standard Inuzuka techniques, this style required the user to first change and enhance themselves through the use of chakra, the result, was being a fericous both bipedal and quadpedal animal that stood over 6ft tall on two legs being covered in fur and having a thick hide, large fangs that bared over the users bottom jaw with the nose and below of the face being a wolf like snout slightly shallower than normal, having claws that instead of being extended nails, are actualy fingers tapered and elongated to a sharp point at the fingers upper quater and being as hard as carbon and stronger than steel, having a fairly long tail that drooped down onto the floor spreading a foot or so behind regardless of being in a bipedal or quadpedal state, and through this the user retained clarity of thought to use their strength and chakra to the best of their advantage, yet also held the 6th sense present in dogs and wolves alike. Instinct. However it still was not finished, after spending weeks on end meditating with his Ninken Lycoan and allowing their personalities and their very existance to flow into eachother through their "bond", and through much severe training, Lycoan became adept in the use of... aswell, and Tsuna was enhanced further, the technique was finally perfected.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:After changing their body to the advanced Wolf-Ninja state, the user gains access to immense above human strength and speed while retaining the clarity of thought to use this strength, appearance and limbs to the best of their advantage in focused attacks rather than wild and savage ones. For example, using their tail as a whip, coating their claws with chakra while striking their claws forward to the opponents heart, piercing through with their inhumane strength. They also keep hold of what Instinct that lurks within most wolves and dogs, the same instinct that tells dogs when a storm is approaching or some sort of maleveount evil. Being able to harness this Instinct and apply it better to their fighting style through the use of chakra, the real advantage of this state however, is how the user is able to use their chakra and elemental chakra along with their beast like state much like a extension of their body, for instance coating thier claws with their chakra and slashing their claws forwards, the chakra on their claws extending forwards as they slash into long chakra blades creating a attack that can reach further than short range. Or by roaring and using their chakra to enhance the rawr creating a shockwave of energy that is sent blasting towards the enemy. Or even by coating their body with elemental chakra auras as they preform Gatsuuga and its variants resulting in them being able to drill through things over than rock. Furthermore after learning and gaining acces to this state, the user overall grows closer to nature, being able to call upon animals for help in a similar way to Juugo, and grow life long attachments to animals other than their Ninken which can then be used to further benifit the user.

    Additional effects and Restrictions: During the state that is the foundation for all.... techniques, the users speed and strength is enhanced greatly aswell as their five senses past the limits of that of a standard Ninken. Even a Taijutsu specialist and master would find it inexplicably hard to match their inhuman speed and strength.
    -The users sense of smell is heightned from being that of maybe a specialist breed of dog, such as a basset hound, to the extent that their sense of smell rivals that of a bear.
    -The users sense of hearing also greatly increases to the extent that their hearing would far surpass any species of cat, and also possibly even rival that of a Tawny Owls.
    -Not only are the users smell and hearing enhanced, but unexpectedly the users sense of taste is also enhanced, their sense of test being roughly between a quater and a half of a catfish's
    ~Must have mastered Inuzuka Techniques first.
    ~Still editing~


    ±± Declined ±± For being banned
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Kouyoutsumyaku/Living Bone Pulse
    Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
    Background: Skye Kaguya, One of the most senior members of the Kaguya clan, had a very unique parentage. His father was a high ranking member of the Kaguya elite and passed the Shikotsumyaku down to his son. His mother was a powerful kunoichi with the ability to manipulate Ice. Her physiology allowed her to take "A"(wind) and "B"(water) and meld them simultaneously in perfect balance to create "C"(Ice). While Skye has this latent ability of balance and synchronization, He was never taught ninjutsu as a child due to his fathers wishes but he was taught later, under the tutelage of Madara Uchiha. Upon mastering nature manipulation, Skye found that it was possible through concentration and training to infuse his regular Shikotsumyaku with elemental chakras each having its own effects and advantages. He also found that his recovery from using his KG became much easier.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Very basic to those with the ability to master it.
    The user can amplify bone techniques with any element/chakra they have mastered. This can provide effects such as: Wind for improved sharpness or weight reduction; Earth for sturdier shields, and more damaging blunt blows; Lightning for added range, damage/stunning, channeling, and healing/regenerative capabilities; Fire for increased damage, etc. etc.
    As with regular ninjutsu, these chakra infused attacks are more susceptible to their counterpart elements and vice versa. For example a fiery bone sword will not be very effective against a water sword but will make a wind infused sword blow up in the users face.
    Another important thing to note is that while a sword infused with earth will be sturdier and provide more punishing blows, the new weight of the weapon will take its toll on your attack speed and agility.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Probably the most beneficial effect to having attuned your body to using the Shikotsumyaku and Nature manipulation in tandem is the vast reduction in recovery time. This allows for any person who has mastered this fighting style to use any of their elemental ninjutsu in the same turn as the Shikotsumyaku was active without fear of negative side effects.
    Requires: At least S Rank Ninja, 1-on-1 training by a master of the art, Kaguya Clan(obi).

    ±± Declined ±± Hum...explain the underlined parts. Also, when you resubmit please give me an example of 2 techniques for this.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Danshingu Genkotsu | Dancing Fist
    Type: NinTaijutsu
    Background: Dancing Fist is a very dangerous and difficult martial arts was originally created and used by the senior members.It is created after months of meditating and training on taijutsu as it's very difficult to control their fists while the chakra is flowing on their fists.This style of fighting allows the senior member and the taijutsu master to combine their fists moves with their elemental chakra with ballet dancing which cause their fist to be stronger and also the chakra will cause their nails to grow fastly in innormal state and cause the fists to be very strong and in the same time makes their nails very sharp just like blades.Also the ballet moves allows the ninjas to move with irregular moves allowing them to escape from the opponent moves and in the same time create unexpected attacks.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The user will channel their elemental chakra to their fists and by using their chakra that is on their fists they cause there hand to be very strong and in the same time cause their nails to be sharp and by combing that with the ballet move the user is able to attack the opponent with unexpected attacks and also escape from taijutsu/kenjutsu attacks.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - Must master Taijutsu
    - The user won't be able to attack with their leg while fighting with their fists
    - Must master Kaito's Taijutsu
    - Must master all of the basics techniques.
    - If the user is From Iwagakure his pushes and kicks become stronger and his body become really strong due to the exhausting training in Iwa.
    - Hand Movement's speed is ✖ 2

    ±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit. I don't know were to start with this one... Perhaps the fact that this is just too broad and ill explained to ever be approved.
     
         
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