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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    ‡(Ishikijutsu)- senses art‡
    Type:Ishikijutsu
    Background: sensing arts is a special type of fighting style where the user overflow's chakra to one or more of the five perception methods( sight, hearing, smelling, tasting, feeling) to the point that it exceed's a normal human being but doesn't come near to that of a dojutsu, inner sonar skill or inzuka. the technique was created by a group of ninja in sunagakure who remain only in the shadow's. once the user has trained properly the user can have crisp clear sight, noticing things that a normal human being couldn't see, but not one a molecular level, crisp clear sound, being able to hear things about 50 meters around them, but can't cancel out sounds, can smell up to 50 meters but cannot keep this constant. since the nose is a very sensitive organ of the body, keeping this jutsu active could result in nose bleeds and headaches. the overflowing chakra increases one's tastebuds as well. then, by overflowing chakra to one's skin, the user can feel little changes by keeping the neural receptors active , the user can sense heat and the absence of heat around them(short-range). with this the user can also activate pain receptors at any-time, causing one to feel pain but there is no pain
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The Art revolves around increasing someone's perception while on the battle field. the user uses raw chakra to do this.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Effect: A master of ishikijutsu will be able to overflow chakra to a maximum of two senses
    Restriction: one cannot overflow chakra for more than 5 turns or else the user will loose that sense.

    ~Declined~ How is this a fighting style? You are simply boosting your senses. If anything this should be submitted as a CJ with a very slim chance at approval. This is simply mixing multiple cannon abilities together.

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    ‡(sutoringujutsu)- string arts‡
    Type: sutoringujutsu
    Background: sutoringujutsu or string arts is a more advanced art of puppetry.The user still utilizes the very concentrated strings made out of raw chakra, but only the user's uses elemental chakra to construct the strings, or the user can channel elemental chakra through the strings to the puppets or the intended target. The affinities that can be channeled are earth and lightning.The one's that can be constructed are lightning and fire . By channeling earth chakra through the strings, the user can stop the puppet's movement by weighing the user down. By channeling wind affinity, it can greatly increase the sharpness of the strings. By constructing it out of lightning, one can greatly increase the speed of a puppet. These strings still retain the weakness to other elements, weather channeled or contsructed.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Great chakra flow in order to construct or channel elemental chakra
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Effect: there are none
    Restriction: must have mastered puppetry techniques
    Restriction: must be taught by a puppet master
    Restriction: must have a puppet bio

    ~Declined~ This is also not a fighting style but more of a custom technique that can be submitted in the CJ thread.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Shaolin Kung Fu
    Type:Kentaijutsu
    Background:
    Kung fu - ‘kung’ meaning ‘energy’ and ‘fu’ meaning ‘time’ - is a traditional martial art whose recorded history dates back before the first ninja world war, The man credited with introducing martial arts is said to be a monk known as Bodhidarma (who is also known as Tamo).

    Tamo had devised a set of '18 movement exercises', which are also known as the '18 hands exercises'; he taught these to his disciples in the temple, believing that the development of a strong body would prevent the disciples from falling asleep during meditation.

    The '18 movement exercises' had their origin in techniques formed and developed in the Mountains; they were designed in such a way that daily practice of these techniques would strengthen and improve the health of the disciples.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The power of the kung fu practitioner lay in his ability to defend himself against impossible odds and situations. After years of the most diligent practice, these ninjas became more than merely adept at the ways of survival. But the initial acceptance to be one of the chosen few was difficult.

    As academy students, childrens wanting to be ninjas were made to do the most menial and difficult work related to the upkeep of the temple. Their sincerity and ability to keep the secrets of the order were severely tested for years before the finer aspects of the order were revealed to them. But, upon being accepted by the elders of the temple, his or her entry into kung fu was to open a whole new world. The student would work long hours training mind and body to work together in a coordinated effort. He would learn the principles of combat, the way of the Tao, and together they would ensure his way to peace.

    One would be taught initially the first basic fist sets, the prearranged forms which simulated multiple attacks. These in turn became more complex as the student advanced, while he would simultaneously be learning the way of Taoism.

    Upon completion of the student stage, one became a disciple who would be taught the higher secrets of the arts and philosophies. Weapons of all descriptions would become familiar to him as weapons of attack and defense. One would perfect his movements to coincide with his breathing. One's mind would meld into the realm of meditation known as mindlessness. And one would learn to harness chakra.

    Essential to movements in kung fu are chakra-controlled actions. Compare the movements of a normal taijutsu user and a kung fu practitioner, and the differences are at once obvious. The taijutsu moves deliberately, forcefully, each move unique and distinct from each other move. He punches linearly, kicks in a straight line, and keeps his body as rigid as iron. The Kung Fu artist, on the other hand, is smooth and fluid in motion, allowing several moves to meld imperceptibly into one long, graceful action.

    Most Common Weapons being used in Shaolin Kung Fu

    Shaolin Halberd
    Shaolin Stick/Staff
    Shaolin Broadsword
    Shaolin Straightsword
    Shaolin Nine Section Chain/Whip



    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu is adept to both hand to hand combat and use of weapons.
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu gain the ability think clearly and to be calm yet alert.
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu gain the ability to react quickly, be more flexible, endure more physical damage, and to concentrate without mental fatigue.

    -Shaolin Kung Fu requires more stamina than normal taijutsu as the movements are more strainuous than other techs.
    -Shaolin Kung Fu focuses on precise swift strikes rather than brute physical strength giving its attacks less damage.
    -Shaolin Kung Fu requires 5 stages of training to master to fully use all its ability.

    ~Declined~ This can be achieved by free-form Taijutsu or by submitting Taijutsu customs in the CJ thread.
    If you want to utilize those weapons stated above then simply include them in your biography.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (ZX Basutā) ZX Buster
    Type:Taijutsu
    Background:Keotsu, a highly-regarded swordsman, was well aware of the fact that even Kenjutsu had a basis in the pure form of Taijutsu, and thus desired to create his own style. He observed both the Strong Fist – a “Hard” and “External” style that dealt with physical strength and overpowering your opponent’s blows – and the Gentle Fist - a “Soft” and “Internal” style that dealt with meditation and deflecting attacks, being more focused on deflecting and attacking with pinpoint chakra discharges -, both of which are the two extremes of the Taijutsu spectrum.

    Desiring to make a balanced fighting style that could be of great aide to its practitioners, he desired to take the best qualities from each style, and create a form that was both “Hard” and Soft”, both “Internal” and “External”, knowing the entire time that it wouldn’t excel in those areas as well as the Taijutsu forms that specialized in them; in order to make up for these shortcomings and as well to enhance and reinforce the style to his personal tastes and designs, he also decided to make Chakra Flow and Shape Manipulation integral parts of this form, creating this unique and diverse style of Taijutsu.

    The result of all this meditation was the creation of the ZX Buster; a unique style of fighting that relied upon chakra discharges to augment physical strength, and the use of Shape Manipulation and Chakra Flow to help give form and additional strength to the abilities.

    Meant to augment short-range fighters, it is the perfect complement to well-founded Swordsman and Martial Artists, while being a devastating style all its own.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:Generally, utilizing ZX Buster requires the use of small pieces of chakra metal which are placed on the user’s knuckles and the palms of their hand, though experienced users of the style are capable of performing the techniques without the gauntlet generally used; the mechanism, though, is also built into the user’s shoes, to allow for the feet to be used in the style.

    Since Chakra leaves the body through natural leakage, it is utilized in this style as a way to conserve more of the user’s own energies. Because of this, as much as being based upon momentum as are many Taijutsu styles, ZX Buster is based around Chakra Charge.

    The Chakra Charge is a basic and yet complex component to the style; ZX Buster works by when the user goes to strike, they accelerate their chakra flow in the direction of their strike, collecting a mass of chakra that helps focus the leaking chakra into the blow as well – upon contact, all of this chakra is released, making it so that a “Spiritual” assault is delivered as well as a physical one, doubling the force behind the strike in most cases. Chakra Charge involves withholding chakra prior to the movement, creating an even greater chakra discharge.

    With this chakra discharge, Shape Manipulation can be applied, meaning that ZX Buster becomes infinitely diverse; slicing “ribbons” could be created from movement, or all the chakra can be released as a great lance upon impact, in a sort of “repulse knuckle”, or the chakra could help create a type of shield.

    Simply called “Zero Knuckle” or “X Fist” depending on the practitioner, it should be noted that the Chakra used in ZX Buster is special; unlike the Gentle Fist, it does not damage the Chakra Pathway by sealing Tenketsu, but rather empties the area of impact and a small surrounding area of chakra for a split second; the result of this means that the Chakra Discharge is an effective way of fighting against those who integrate things such as Nagashi or Earth Spear into their Taijutsu styles, as it simply blows the chakra away, allowing the remainder of the chakra, and the actual physical attack, to make contact to do damage.

    Because of the reliance on Chakra, the “One-Inch Punch” is an integral part of the style; were as the total damage is supposed to be composed of 50% Physical Damage and 50% Chakra damage, that ration can be vastly changed via the Chakra Charge mechanic; put simply, Charging Chakra increases the force behind a blow.

    Not requiring as large an amount of strength as the Strong Fist, or as Precise chakra control as the Gentle Fist (as this is used to expel moderate, rather than precise amounts of chakra through chakra flow), this style offers a good middle ground, and does still require a user who is strong in body, and skilled in chakra control, as in the high-speed combat that comes with Close-range fighting, being able to manipulate their energies for this style must be second nature. It should be noted, though, that as the physical strength of a user increases, the momentum of a blow increases, and thus so does the size and strength of the chakra discharge.

    It should be noted, as Chakra is such an integral part of this style, that it is possible to use this as a type of “ranged” Taijutsu, making it useful to defend a user so that they can work to close the distance to short range, as well; and due to the supplementary nature, some techniques can even be used through Weapons, despite being created for Taijutsu.

    Chakra Charge Mechanics:
    Able to be used through Body or Weapons
    Increases the strength/chakra cost of other ZX Buster moves according to the following:
    Lv1 = +10; Chakra = No change
    Lv2 = +20; Chakra = +10
    Lv3 (Max) = +40; Chakra = +40
    When used without another ZX Buster technique, Lv1 is B-ranked, Lv2 is A ranked, and Lv3 is S-ranked, and only reaches Mid-range.
    A charge can be collected at any time, and held until used; the beginning of a charge counts as a move, but not the release; being neutral chakra, it doesn’t interfere with Ninjutsu usage.
    Can only be used through weapons in Lv2 and Lv3.


    (Visual Representation and References)
    The top portion represents a generic chakra discharge upon contact; the gauntlet shown is reduced down to pieces of chakra metal.
    Various techniques utilized can be seen and are as follows (they are currently in planning and may or may not be submitted):
    2:09 – Chakra Charge[Lv1] (Fist; Ranged)
    2:15 – Chakra Charge[Lv2] (Fist; Ranged)
    2:40 – Chakra Charge[Lv3 (Max)] (Fist, Ranged)
    Various Shape Manipulation Aspects of a Charged Ranged Fist Follow
    5:30 – Nova Strike (Full-body; requires Hienkyaku)
    5:45 – Excellent Freeform Demonstration (“X-Fist/Zero Knuckle”)
    Various Special Techniques are as follows:
    1:35 – Chakra Charge [Lv2] (Weapon; Short)
    1:39 – Chakra Charge [Lv2, 3] (Fist, Ranged)
    1:50 – Rakuhouha
    1:58/3:49 – Rekkouha (Defensive/Offensive)
    4:57 – Chakra Charge [LvMax] (Weapon;Short)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -ZX Buster users have no strength difference than other Taijutsu users; however their blows do twice the damage as they normally would, due to the chakra discharge.
    -Most ZX techniques have moderate chakra cost and are reusable, as they draw from the chakra that is naturally leaked, reducing the “actual” chakra cost.
    -Due to training to withstand their own Chakra Blows, ZX Buster users are incredibly sturdy, having amazing stamina and endurance, when compared to even Strong Fist Masters.
    -ZX users have amazing chakra control, due to the fast-paced nature of Taijutsu, and the ability to utilize this style with every strike.
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    ~Pending~ Leaving for Scorps to check.

    ±± Declined ±± The only things that concern me were what you added. The levels and such. The +damage is relating to what? Also, the emptying of chakra in that place and the creating slices and etc through chakra expulsion is too close to Gentle Fist. I'll allow you (and i think its genius) to have chakra blasts to aid your taijutsu and have chakra powered moves and etc. as those are things we've seen beyond the sphere of gentle fist. However, some of what you describe is very very similar to Gentle fist. The damage part...i need to know exactly how that works mate ^^
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Thunderbolt View Post

    ±± Declined ±± You are confusing a custom hand to hand/weapon fighting style with a technique/move.

    Ancient Embedded Hidden needleの組み込まれた隠し針 Kodai no kumikomareta kakushi hari

    Type: Nin-Kenjutsu

    Background: This Fighting style was originated and first known to have been practiced in the early Greece more than a 3 Million years ago by the ancestral descendant of the Greek Gods. it was rumored and said to have been developed by the Greek God Zeus who developed the technique as a way to mark his ground and show his strength and dominance as the king of the heavens and ruler to the earthlings. The style was said to be of such power that even Zeus feared its strength and the wrong it could be used if placed in the wrong hands he kept the style of fighting under bay and never practiced and taught it to no one even his brothers, This was until he mated with a human and gave birth to a son which was known as the brave man in Greek mythology called Hercules he taught this style to his son as final measure to keep him safe if he ever came to any serious harm or fear of harm but telling him not to ever teach no man the technique or even talk of it. Hercules intends to the wise words of his father and shows the techniques to no one not even his own flesh and blood and rarely used it and preferred to result tot other means to deal with his problems which resulted in him fighting. Hercules was just one man and soon word got out a technique which could take out several men is jutst one move and attracted people all over the globe especially individuals from places we come to know today I asia as china and Japan they came all to see the forbidden fighting style which was being used but to their disappointment they did not. It was all moody and deem for these travelers until a certain day where he was assigned on one of his tasks or so called labours this time it was to retrieve a monster livin in the swamps with the name of Lernaean Hydra which was a monster of great strength and demonic power Hercules was sent to destroy this creature with is nephew lolaus but the strength of the beast was to fierce for Hercules to over come so he performed the technique and upon one slay weakened the beast up where lolaus was able to hold a torch to each of the stumps to prevent the demon of coming back again upon sight of this technique after they had come back from their journey it was said lolaus was fascinated with it and on several instances asked Hercules to teach him .Not much was known from them but it was said that Hercules finally taught lolaus the technique with which to Hercules disappointment passed it on to few other before he died.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style
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    This fighting move is one of great strength and power and if wielded and used in a proper manner is one of the deadliest weapons in existence. The user prior to performing the the fighting move will carry several thin sharp needles finely carved And places into his veins on his hands he then uses his raw chakra and fuses it into the needles which make them grow to any desired length strength or thickness or numbers this is due to the needles being placed in the user body and chakra being implanted to it as if it was a body par and thus grows on it own the user also makes use of his wind chakra which he infuses around the already grown and neutered needles to further sharpen and strengthen the grown needles up to the point as If it were steel. The user can also use this style of fighting as a shield against taijutsu attack which deals with strong physical impact by bracing his arms together and using the needles as shield. The fighting style can also protect the user against lightning attacks of any sort due to the style usage of wind .The needles can be placed in one hands or two this is up to the opponent and his preference though two arms increases the strength of the style of fighting and also the damages on the user .This stye is able to create repel like impact when used on a target as the user as not only does it cut the target but die to the wind it pushes him back tremendously, this style one of little powerful a several abilities Is that it allows the user of the style to know the opponents whereabouts if he has being cut or impacted on by the fighting style since the usage of this fighting style revolves around the opponent veins and his blood system it is safe to say that when the opponent is being impacted on or cut by the style of fighting and also using little of the user blood and chakra and used in the attack and this affecting him too. Finally the last of the of this style ability and the and the most powerful .the style is done by a precise and strong and concentrated blow to the head of the opponent to his brain which affects his cerebral cortex the region of the brain which controls memory ,awareness ,thought and consciousness a direct from this technique can cause a sudden temporary but fast alteration in of the these functions this means it could render his opponent lacking memory loss and without knowledge of his jutsu or him not knowing his surrounding area due to no awareness or even passing out due to no or little concentrations and good consciousness.This needles can be pulled out and retracted at will upon choice of the user but is mostly left in arms later taken out after battle course this style has the capabilities depending on the user (Genin_Sage) to which amount of damage the technique does At full use or even at the mere hands of a practiced user with skill this jutsu is more than enough to overpower basic taijutsu attacks and even normal katana with basically minimal effort.This style of fighting combines with sharigan kekkei genkai makes this technique advance into another level where the opponents is able to dodge and intercept taijutsu and lightning attack with little efforts.This fighting style also provides the user with a great threshold against pain and a focused mind due to his ability to use the technique properly even though under pain this makes him more less to fall victim to ninjutsu attacks based on killing intentions and fears.This also seems to be a good defense against breaking genjutsu as the user can take use of the pain of the already imbedded needles and upon sudden movements can feel pain that can break low ranking genjutsu.

    Additional effects and Restrictions
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    Requires a sharingan to perform a concentrated blow which affects the cerebral cortex and affects the opponent human senses .

    Must have mastered wind and in Ninjutsu.

    Must need thunderbolt permission to use

    Can not use 3 jutsu for next 2 rounds due to pain from implanted blade needles.

    The technique which affects the senses due to a direct focused blow from the opponent can only be countered by a 2 tomoe sharignan.

    The technique last for 4 Rounds

    I changed it to nin kenjutsu making it be more of a weaponry fighting style but still involving ninjutsu i also made changes to the grammars and removed things about it be a jutsu . I increased the restriction from having starting training in ninjutsu to have mastered it i also made the specialized attack more dodge -able and not to be so op i did this by limiting the requirement of evading or dodging the move from having a 3 tomoe sharigan to 2.


    ~Declined~ Needles placed inside of your veins? What's preventing you from slowly bleeding to death? Blood would still leak out while having those needles placed inside. The only effective way to have those needles inside of your veins and not lose blood is through medical related means which require training/permission. Also channeling chakra to expand the needles is too similar to the Akimichi Clan's expansion technique. Lastly, this still looks like a technique rather than a fighting style.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Genkoutsu Kamakiri | The Mantis Fist

    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:The Mantis Fist is a taijustu style that invovles the user striking the enemy with one or more of their fingers in rapid succesion in specific places alternating between hands for each strike . While striking the enemy, the user focus's a large amount of Raiton or Katon chakra on the tops of their fingers and when they strike the enemy, they allow the chakra to penetrate into the enemies body, however even though it is a very pinpoint strike done with the finger tips, its effects are devestating as when the user makes contact with the opponent, they insert their chakra into the opponents body, the chakra ripples outwards and in the direction of the original strike, much like when a pebble is dropped into a shallow pond and the water around it is disturbed and ripples outwards. The effects of the Mantis Fist can be increased further by striking certain spots on the body, such as pressure points or nerve endings.
    When this is done with raiton chakra, the chakra will ripple outwards on impact, which may affect motor and sensory neurons with its static charges, this can cause various effects.
    By using fire chakra the user can heat water present in bodies or the atmosphere causing the water to evapourate, this can be very effective as the body is made up of large sums of water and many organs rely on water present in the body

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    -Paralysation in the surronding area.
    -Loss of feeling and pain in that area. The users raiton chakra's static charges are used to counter the static charges of the opponents sensory neurons, making the opponent have a loss of feeling and pain in that area, this proves disadvantageous, as damage can be done to the opponents body via a strongfist follow up without the opponent ever being aware of the effects caused(Broken ribs pierced lungs ect.)
    -Heating and evapouration of water sources.



    Additional effects and Restrictions: The Mantis Fist has one last ability, because of the way that the chakra is released and inserted, the non physical chakra part of the Mantis Fist does not require contact with the opponents body to work. Infact once the ripple effect is released, it can travel through mediums such as earth water and air for up to 5 inches the ripples becoming wider and affecting a larger area but becoming less potent as it reaches further from the source, much like a wave that passess through a small gap into a large area. The area covered having a diameter of 6 inches per 1 inch distance form the source.
    This style of fighting is called mantis fist,since it mostly involves striking your opponent with the tip of your finger(s) in rapid succesion,and since mantis have scythe like fingers instead of hands and move in rapid ridigid jerky like motions i thought the name was befitting.
    The Mantis fist contains stances that are strange and unusual,and usualy unprecidented to the enemy,making a mantis fist users movements hard to read.
    -Due to the Mantis Fist involving mimicking the actual movements of a Mantis, a Mantis Fist User moves unlike any mammal with extreme precision and speed, and unlike that of a average human a mantis fist users reactions are not fueled by fear or instinct leading them to overeact and make unecesary movements but the mantis style involves the slightest movements so as to avoid things and thus avoid unnecessary reflexes making Mantis Fist users extremely effecient at dodging, and giving them room for a swift counterattack.

    Note:Anyone other than -Scaze- must be taught to use the mantis fist justu's
    ~Precise chakra control is needed to benifit from the full offense of the mantis fist.
    ~Requires the user to have mastered Taijustu/strong fist and started Raiton and Fire training
    ~Anyone other than -Scaze- must be Taught the Mantis Fist
    ~Because of the rigid jerky like motions, and the roundabout manner that Mantis Fist users use, the Mantis Fist and its techniques cannot be predicted by 2T Sharingan and lower, with some of the more draining Mantis fist jutsu being unpredictable even by 3T.(Will be noted underneath Mantis Fist Jutsu)
    ~Mantis Fist users are also exceptionally Agile.


    ±± Declined ±± First thing the back ground isn't the background but rather how the style works. So you need to come up with a background and pass all of that into the description of the abilities of the style. The sharingan part is overpowered. That would mean no one could defend or react against a move of that style. Take that out. Also the part about reflexes and speed needs to be translated into short topics that every Mantis Fist will be able to have

    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:The mantis fist is a Nintaijutsu style that was devloped after observing the Preying Mantis and he way it moves, and then mimicking its movements and speeds through intense training and practice. Chakra is then used to augement the pin point strikes which on their own would only be slightly more effective than strong fist.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The Mantis Fist is a taijustu style that invovles the user striking the enemy with one or more of their fingers in rapid succesion in specific places alternating between hands for each strike . While striking the enemy, the user focus's a large amount of Raiton or Katon chakra on the tops of their fingers and when they strike the enemy, they allow the chakra to penetrate into the enemies body, however even though it is a very pinpoint strike done with the finger tips, its effects are devestating as when the user makes contact with the opponent, they insert their chakra into the opponents body, the chakra ripples outwards and in the direction of the original strike, much like when a pebble is dropped into a shallow pond and the water around it is disturbed and ripples outwards. The effects of the Mantis Fist can be increased further by striking certain spots on the body, such as pressure points or nerve endings.
    When this is done with raiton chakra, the chakra will ripple outwards on impact, which may affect motor and sensory neurons with its static charges, this can cause various effects.
    -Paralysation in the surronding area.
    -Loss of feeling and pain in that area. The users raiton chakra's static charges are used to counter the static charges of the opponents sensory neurons, making the opponent have a loss of feeling and pain in that area, this proves disadvantageous, as damage can be done to the opponents body via a strongfist follow up without the opponent ever being aware of the effects caused(Broken ribs pierced lungs ect.)
    -Heating and evapouration of water sources.



    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    By using fire chakra the user can heat water present in bodies or the atmosphere causing the water to evapourate, this can be very effective as the body is made up of large sums of water and many organs rely on water present in the body The Mantis Fist has one last ability, because of the way that the chakra is released and inserted, the non physical chakra part of the Mantis Fist does not require contact with the opponents body to work. Infact once the ripple effect is released, it can travel through mediums such as earth water and air for up to 5 inches the ripples becoming wider and affecting a larger area but becoming less potent as it reaches further from the source, much like a wave that passess through a small gap into a large area. The area covered having a diameter of 6 inches per 1 inch distance form the source.
    This style of fighting is called mantis fist,since it mostly involves striking your opponent with the tip of your finger(s) in rapid succesion,and since mantis have scythe like fingers instead of hands and move in rapid ridigid jerky like motions i thought the name was befitting.
    The Mantis fist contains stances that are strange and unusual,and usualy unprecidented to the enemy,making a mantis fist users movements hard to read.
    -Due to the Mantis Fist involving mimicking the actual movements of a Mantis, a Mantis Fist User moves unlike any mammal with extreme precision and speed, and unlike that of a average human a mantis fist users reactions are not fueled by fear or instinct leading them to overeact and make unecesary movements but the mantis style involves the slightest movements so as to avoid things and thus avoid unnecessary reflexes making Mantis Fist users extremely effecient at dodging, and giving them room for a swift counterattack.

    Note:Anyone other than -Scaze- must be taught to use the mantis fist justu's
    ~Precise chakra control is needed to benifit from the full offense of the mantis fist.
    ~Requires the user to have mastered Taijustu/strong fist and started Raiton and Fire training
    ~Anyone other than -Scaze- must be Taught the Mantis Fist
    ~Mantis Fist users are also exceptionally Agile.


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    (Kapoeira Geijutsu) Capoeira Art
    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:
    Capoeira is a special type of fighting that consists of rhythm. The rhythm originated from dances formed by slaves long ago. This dance was created in the little free time the slaves received to rest. It was always fast paced and very upbeat. After some time performing these dances, the slaves noticed that the dance seemed very dangerous. After several discussions and attempts the slaves decided this dance style would be a good disquise for a new form of fighting. The slaves chose specific dancers to conquer and perfect the new fighting style. Time passed and the dancers had perfected the fighting style. They later on taught others how to perform this. Making it useful for defensive and offensive tactics, the slaves organized a revolt. The slaved then overpowered the people controlling them, doing it all in one swift and deadly “dance”. This dance was passed down to those who seeked and is now called: Capoiera.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This special Taijutsu relies on swift, rapid, strong, and very accurate movements.. The fighting style consists of sweeping the opponent of the ground as well as many flips and turns to both dodge and attack. The movements cannot be easily followed as the user can change the rhythm in which he is attacking at any given moment. When attacking, the user gets momentum from spinning and various other ways causing attacks to be several times stronger than they previously were. Capoeira makes practically every move both an attack and defense. A user could go for an attack and easily counterattack, dodge or defend, if the first attack was never successful. This form of fighting style proves to be really affective against many other forms of fighting because of its quickness and successfulness. The initial stance involves movement and is known as “The Roda”. The initial stance shows a part of the history of Capoeira, as well as it's fast movement and rhythm.


    This is the initial stance “The Roda”

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of Capoeira have increased Agility, Reflexes, Strength, Speed, and Accuracy compared to that of a regular user.
    -Capoeira users must be physically fit
    -Due to how much stamina is spent, regular users cannot fight in this style for long periods of time.
    -This fighting style can only be taught by a Capoeira Master

    ~Declined~ You need to find a way to incorporate music while you are fighting to get into the actual rhythm. Also Agility, Reflexes, Strength, Speed, and Accuracy? That's too much.. either tone it down or add more drawbacks. Lastly, I'd like you to specify exactly how long the user can fight in this style.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    "Kei Seken"

    Type:
    NinTaijutsu

    Background:
    Also known as "Strong Worlds" taijutsu; This style of combat was invented by barbaric ice warriors who pillage villages taking down their mightiest warriors using this style. This style was later adopted by wise monks who were able to incorporate it into a even more deadly style of combat which would explain it's somewhat brutal and barbaric type of attacks. This style became known as "Kei Sekken" Strong World Taijutsu.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Kei Seken is based off enduring blows to the body while performing one hit knockouts using all strength and energy into one specific blow rather than multiple ones. The user's stance is always having a fluid lower body while having a solid upper body (Opposite of gentle fists techniques that require fast paced with little damage) meaning that most techniques are slower but deal way more damage and this can be reversed to make kicks devestating. The fluid lower body is so that the user can move around freely and quickly while the solid upper body is to keep the muscles tense and clinched for powerful impacts(reverse if for legs). Some masters of this art were actually able to take it a step further and were able to incorporate their spirit and physical energy(chakra) into their body to increase it's reflexis, strength, and impacts to perform very powerful techniques that under normal circumstances, they can't perform (Nowhere near that of the 5th Hokage and Sakura although could be considered a water downed version). Most techniques of Kei Sekken involve enduring, countering, or dodging a technique and then performing a deathly blow to the opponent mostly through using a part of the body that can deal the most blunt damage such as the elbow, fist, knee, fore head, foot, etc. Its not the fastest style but it makes up for it in power

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -To learn this style, the user must already have a certain degree of strength and endurance(S-Class Ninja) and have trained in basic taijutsu as its not effective with people who are of weaker body or untrained.

    -Pluses to learning is the strength and durability development in both mind and body. The user would be able to match someone a rank higher than him in both strength and endurance (Does not apply with being a sage). Also, the user could now ignore his/her surroundings except the opponent if he/she wants to.


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    Taiketsu Yagami, our loyal member, gave on the date February 29th of 2012 a request for a Patent on custom fighting style (Strong Worlds, Kei Seken). I, Mathias of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;[/justify]


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    Sutairu Yamazaru | Monkey Style
    Type: KenTaijutsu
    Background: Monkey Style is an ancient martial art which utilizes ape or monkey-like movements as part of its technique.

    There are five variations of Monkey Style that have been developed to be the core techniques.


    • Drunken Monkey
    • Stone Monkey
    • Lost Monkey
    • Standing Monkey
    • Wooden Monkey



    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Monkey Style includes includes running on all fours (i.e. the hands and feet), various difficult acrobatic movements such as flipping sideways in the air, front flips, back flips, back handsprings, hand stands, walking on the hands, forward lunges/dives, backward lunges, spinning on the butt, spinning on the back and many kicks and strikes. Most of the attacks are aimed at the knees, groin area, throat or eyes of the opponent and hand strikes are normally either open handed slaps or clawing with a semi-closed fist called the monkey claw. A wide array of facial monkey expressions are also practiced, inclusive of happiness, anger, fear, fright, confusion and bewilderment etc. Except for very brief periods, most movements inclusive of running are executed from either a squatting or semi-squatting position and are normally accompanied by very swift and 'jerky' head movements as the user nervously looks around.


    Drunken Monkey - uses a lot of throat, eye and groin strikes as well as tumbling and falling techniques. It incorporates a lot of false steps to give the appearance it is defenseless and uses a lot of off balance strikes. The practitioner waddles, takes very faltering steps and sometimes fall to the ground and lies prone while waiting for the opponent to approach at which time a devastating attack is launched at the knees or groin areas of the opponent. It is one of the more difficult of the monkey styles to master and also extremely effective against a standard, attack-oriented enemy. Countering this style involves shifting your body around often to ensure that the Drunken Monkey user impacts more solid, tougher areas of your body.

    Stone Monkey - more of a physical style. The user trains up his body to exchange blows with the opponent. Stone Monkey uses a kind of Iron body method. It will leave an area exposed on its body for an opponent to attack, so it can attack a more vital spot on the body. It is important not to attack reflexively at open spots, and try to hammer away at their weak spots until they give in.

    Lost Monkey - users of Lost Monkey give the appearance of being lost and confused to deceive the opponent into underestimating his abilities, and he retaliates when it is least expected. The hands and footwork change and flow from each other at will. This technique incorporates the fear, nervousness and mischief of a monkey who has wandered into a neighboring territory, while nervously looking around before scurrying back to its own home range.

    Standing Monkey - a relatively conventional monkey that likes to keep an upright position and avoid tumbling around. Tall monkey likes to climb body limbs to make attacks at pressure points.

    Wooden Monkey - mimics a serious, angry monkey that attacks and defends with ferocity. The attitude of this monkey is more serious, and its movements are noticeably less light than the other monkeys. Wood monkey likes to grapple and bring its opponent to the ground.

    The monkey staff, is one of this style's specialty weapon.The upper end of the staff is normally eye height for the user. There are also other weapons favored by Monkey Style users (e.g. the broadsword, straight sword, spear, and the iron ring). Monkey forms are not normally performed fast paced from start to finish as in other techniques, instead the practitioner will execute a very swift series of movements and then stop and plays around. With the exception of the Tall Monkey technique, all monkey forms tend to be executed from the squatting and stooping positions.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of this style tends to react more quicker than normal. They tend to be more agile and be responsive to enemy movements faster than normal.

    -Each variation of the style needs to be trained at in order to use.
    -Due to playfulness of this style, techniques cant be use in succession (1 technique per turn).

    ~Declined~ Drunken Monkey Style already exists.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    thought i'd make something original so i toke something haku did in part one ( when he span over to sauske then attacked) not sure if it was made ebfore but i made this up based on kenjutsu and that one movement haku made in his fight with sauske.

    justu of the tatsumaki ken ( art of the tornado blade)
    Type: kenjutsu/taijutsu/ninjutsu
    Background: it was first created by samurai in the land of iron by a normal samurai who wanted to expand on his kenjutsu and taijutsu skills at once. he practiced an art of spinning to cancel movements and then at the end of the attack would withdraw his blade and attack suddenly. it wasn't limited to sword play but could be used to throw weapon in many direction and was great for combat in which the person was out numbered. even to spin at such a fast rate that the user could build up air pressure around his blade stop swing teh balde and teh pressure from the spin could be directed at the enemy. it proved very well and began to be come a very popular form of kenjutsu so popular even the great nations learned of it and began to use it. it was mostly used in wars for when ninja were out numbered and proved very useful. however after many years it started to become less used due to the every growing number of ninja that decided to use ninjutsu over kenjutsu , and soon only a few people still used it it is very rare in the ninja and in the land of iron none the less it still exists being used by very few, mostly by the samurai in the land of iron however some ninja from the great nations still use it today.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Art of the spinning blade is a kenjutsu/taijutsu style where the user will spin at a high rate to hide his movements such as with dawing his blade but in order to do so he must be well trained in order to spin while making complicated moves such as going from a spin to a jump. The user focuses chakra into their legs and begins to spin at a fast passe and starts heading towards the enemy while his legs move the user does whatever be it taking out a weapon or forming a seal the user will need precise moves in order to use this and hit the enemy right if not the user will miss so he must have constant focus of chakra to his legs in order to keep himself going in the direction he wants and in order to change direction. Thus can only use the type of chakra he was useing to spin for ninjutsu if he wish's to use jutsu. ( an example if your using raiton chakra to spin then when you stop to use ninjutsu you can only use raiton, if your using fire chakra to spin then you can only use fire ninjutsu when you stop, same goes for any other element ) after the user has done what he wants he will stop spinning and attack at a moments notice. an example the user could spin towards his enemy then go around him withdraw his blade and stop then swing it the spinning gives more momentum for a stronger slash. using this can also be used to avoid attacks, for example the user could do a spinning blade art where he spins and it takes him in another direction. or take out a blade while he spins in order to cuts multiple targets at once. the most advanced skill in this art is when the user focuses all his chakra into his feet and spins at a very fast speed with his blade out then stop and swings the blade air pressure then goes forward hitting the enemy and sending him backwards. ( will be explained upon more when i make it a real jutsu for this art)


    Additional effects and Restrictions: while spinning the user cannot see anything very well unless he has a dojutsu but is still able to tell if something is heading at him but it will look like a blur due to how fast the user is going. user use of the spinning blade the user will be dizzy and can be knocked off balance easy. in order to use ninjutsu the user must stop spinning or it will not work. each move used based on this skill counts as a jutsu towards your 3 per turn.

    the whole point of this is the users speed is increased and has stronger slash due to the momentum and is able to hide his move while he moves. a reference to how the user spins wacth the begining of haku vs sasuke, the user would spin like that then strike in one swift attack.

    ±± Declined ±± This has nothing special enough in it to make it a CFS. In free form Kenjutsu you can already describe such movements. They are, in essence, normal Kenjutsu. CFS are for different applications of Kenjutsu, Taijutsu, etc were you apply some other skill and change the basis of the concept with something that can't be done in any other way.

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    not sure if i'm allowed to post two in the same post but i have one more in mind.

    rensei ken jutsu ( Drilling blade art)
    Type: ninkenjutsu
    Background: After having witnessed the raikages nintaijutsu the kumo nin wondered if the same could be done with kenjutsu. So they attempted it and manged to increase the power of their blades using raiton chakra. They then toke it one step further and tried to spin the hilt of the sword while infusing it with raiton chakra the result was like that of a drill it could drill threw many things and kumo soon tested it out in the fields of battle. other villages having witnessed this tried to copy what they had done but only those with raiton chakra could do it.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The user will begin to spin the hilt of his sword with one or both hands in a clockwise direction and will then begin to infuse it with raiton chakra until it goes so fast it looks as though it was a drill this is done by increasing the speed of the blade already in motion much like how A increases his speed with raiton this increases the blades speed with raiton. for this to work the user must have constant flow of raiton chakra into the blade if not it won't work, so the user cannot build up any kinds of chakra besides raiton while using this.

    Additional effects and Restrictions: After use users hand that was used for the raiton build will become numb and stiff for a few turns and will be unable to do any action with said hand for that to time that it is numb. ( how numb and for how long will depend on the rank of the jutsu being used for this style) After use in battle the user will gain plus 5 to all raiton jutsu in that battle only. After use in battle any fuuton jutsu used will be -five for the rest of the match. the user can only use raiton chakra while spinning the blade. users sword becomes much more powerful and will be able to drill into things while it spins. After the blade has stopped being span it will be covered in elect and hard to hold and may slightly shock the user a little bit but not enough to fately injury him/her, but is enough to make the user close his eyes for a single second in pain.

    the use of this is make make a drilling sword infused with raiton not only increaseing its cutting power but its pirceing power as it could now drill.


    ±± Declined ±± O_o spinning the hilt...magically? Take that part out. Also, even if i accept this, don't forget that people can still make lightning techniques or kenjutsu technique in which the sword is infused with lightning. Try finding something additionally special for it.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    (Mune No Ero Musha) - Will of the Pervy Warrior

    Type: Senjutsu/Sage art

    Background:
    Long ago, in Mount Myōboku, the toads began to master the ability to feel narutal energy and taking it upon themselves to control it to increase their power and speed, after much experimentation and practice, this would later become known as sage mode. Sage mode would enhance the power of the user by combining their chakra with the chakra they have taken in from nature, fusing them as one stronger power.

    Through time sage mode was adapted to increase the power of all the users nin, gen and tai jutsu making everything stronger by adding natural energy to them. An example of this would be the the Frog Kata techniue used in a taijutsu battle. The user extents the natural energy around their body reshaping it to make a deadly attack.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    This fighting style is based on the control and reshaping of natural energy within the users body. A normal sage mode user can control and shape the natural energy, but this style has been developed to make it much quicker and easier to feel, take in, and control the natural energy.

    This pervy style was developed to make sage mode more useable in combat instead of having to stand for still as long. And with the greater chakra control, the user wouldn't waste as much chakra on larger sage attacks.


    Extreme chakra control to enhance/manipulate/cut/bind/shape/collect natural energy.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Masters of the Pervy Warrior style have increased Agility, Reactions, Speed when compared to a normal sage mode users
    -Sage mode users have generally great chakra control, but Pervy style users have greater chakra control allowing them to manipulate natural energy faster.
    -Pervy style users generally have better control over the natural energy and are able control the natural energy to enhance their abilities slightly more that normal sage mode users.


    (Got bored, wanted my own style )


    ±± Declined ±± Sage mode already gives you all of that and this is no custom fighting style. Sorry! ^^
     
         
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    Musha Shukke Fuu (The Warrior Monk's Way)

    Type: Taijutsu
    Background:
    Fighting technique and styles don't just pop out of thin air. Most of the times, there are events that take place, or a following or something that triggered the creation of some type of styles, or religions even that do this as well. The Musha Sukke Fuu's story is no different then these. The creators of such a fighting style are no more then monks. Literally, "Musha Sukke Fuu" Stands for "The Warrior Monks Way." Now, being monks, they are not violent people in the least bit at all. This particular fighting style in derived primarily as a defensive style, however, that's not to take away form the fact that it indeed has offensive capability.

    The creation of Musha Sukke Fuu, as a formalized martial art, is attributed to Dong Haichuan in the early 19th century, who apparently learned from Taoist, masters in the mountains of Iwakagure. There is evidence to suggest a synthesis of several pre-existing martial arts taught and practised in the region in which he lived, combined with Taoist circle walking. Because of his work as a servant in the Imperial Palace, he impressed the Tsuchikage with his graceful movements and his skill at martial arts and became an instructor and a body guard to the court. Dong Haichuan taught for many years in Iwa, eventually earning patronage by the Imperial court.

    Famous disciples of Dong to become teachers were Ichiro Tamazaki, Kisihmo Kayuga, Raiden Matzui, Ike Lennon, Ma Weiqi , Liu Baozhen, Liang Zhenpu and Liu Dekuan. Although they were all students of the same teacher, their methods of training and expressions of palm techniques differed. The Cheng and Liu styles are said to specialize in "Pushing" the palms, Yin style is known for "Threading" the palms, Song's followers practice "Plum Flower" ( Mei Hua) palm technique and Ma style palms are known as "Hammers." Some of Dong Haichuan's students, including Ike Lennon, participated in the Boxer Rebellion. In general, most Bagua practitioners practice either the Yin , Cheng, or Liang styles of Baguazhang, although Fan, Shi, Liu, Fu, and other styles also used to exist. However with time those other styles and formations of the said style became lost as its creators and followers either died and vanished.

    It is said that only four of those who did such still exist, the Four masters of Musha Sukke Fuu. These teachers are Ichiro Tamazaki(尹福), Kisihmo Kayuga(程廷華), Raiden Matzui(宋長榮), Ike Lennon(劉鳳春).Each one resides in a different country, or so they say. There are very few people who even know of the fighting style and the rumors, and even fewer who practice it.The base style known today is really more of a combination of things from the past of the branch teachers, those of the past present. The thing about Musha Shukke Fuu, is even though they are Monks, they traditionally don't mind mixing styles, especially of the same base such as Musha Sukke Fuu. In fact, that's hows it came to be what it is today, or so it is said.

    Really, know one ever seems to know, and nothing more of which is ever really mentioned in the history books to prove otherwise. It is a really secretive style to begin with, and finding it would require ones full study and seeking of, and the actual finding of one of the few masters, should they still even exist.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Stage One: The Art of the Spirit (Chakra) Sphere.

    The main art of the Musha Shukke Fuu, is the knowledge of summoning the Chakra Sphere. This is the most basics of basic fundamentals with the style. Without the Chakra Sphere, the art could not exist. The Chakra Sphere is a small, hollow sphere of chakra that hovers over one's head. It is however, clearly visible to to others and can be touched, and popped rendering it useless furthermore. The Chakra Sphere consists of one's own chakra, and thus can be reentered into one's body in such a way, with of course proper training, in a way that may be used as an attack within said style. User usually concentrates in meditation in order to learn how to do this incredible feat. The stance is nothing short of a learning method for the Chakra Sphere Summoning. User sits Indian style with crossed legs and rests his hands together forming a special handseal. This handseal is created by pushing the users palms together, and crossing the middle and ring fingers, as the pinky fingers and index fingers clasp together. The thumbs cross as well. Eyes close, and user sits straight upward and meditates. This allows easier flow of chakra within ones chakra system.

    Stage Two: Reduce, Reuse, Recycle.

    Once Chakra Spheres have been properly summoned, the next challenge the user faces is having the Chakra Sphere re-enter the body for technique use. This is quite simple to do, and Requires a great deal less of training then first summoning the chakra spheres did. The user simply had to do said technique, and handseals and think about the sphere striking their body, and it should happen with rather repetitive training. This stage of training is perhaps the quickest and easiest stage of training. This reduces chakra output, reuses the chakra that is output, and recycles and leftover from the technique, because the chakra is still trapped within the body.

    Stage Three: Striking by Striking.

    Once the user has mastered the summoning of chakra spheres, and then mastered how to channel them throughout the body, The user now must undergo training to learn how to strike a foe while doing so, while channeling the chakra sphere. This isn't easy. User must stand in front of a stray dummy, tightly packed of course, and continue striking it until it explodes in a small 'boom' where the user strikes. It sounds easy and repetitive as well, but it is truly a lot harder then it sounds. Once the explosion had been seen, the user will repeat this until mastered, where every strike will be a minor explosion. At this level, the user will have mastered the art of the Chakra Sphere.

    Stage Four: Techniques

    This is the stage in which the user begins and starts training techniques within the fighting style that involve training and special usage of the Chakra Spheres. Specialized techniques that deal in both offense and defense, put primarily defense, are the techniques listed below within the style. Mastering all these techniques takes time, but when accomplished, the user will achieve the Master rank within the monk society.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - User must be from Kirigakure or Iwagakure
    - User must be trained by ~Sanji~
    - User must have Mastery of Taijutsu.
    - User cannot have a bio that contains Dojutsu.


    ±± Declined ±± i like the idea. but some things need editing. For example, this isn't a Taijutsu but rather a NinTaijutsu. Also, you need to tie this a bit more with Taijutsu as its appearing to be simply you creating (not summoning...so that also needs tweaking) an orb of chakra as a projectile and striking people with it. You must have Taijutsu moves as a basic and develop this to be something added to the taijutsu, otherwise its all ninjutsu.
     
         
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    Sorrowful Fist of a Thousand Abstract Materials and Weapons | Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai
    Type: Supplementary Fūintaijutsu & Fūinkenjutsu
    Background: The style of Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai, commonly referred to as ‘Majutsushi o Yoroi’ (The Conjurers Armor), was invented by civilians in Amegakure, whom had a basic knowledge of Fūinjutsu and scrolls. The style is based on the two abilities to seal and unseal materials and weapons into and out of scrolls, which are two extremely common abilities amongst Shinobi. The civilians invented the art in a desperate attempt to avoid looting, which only succeeded partially as they did not perfect the style; they merely created the basis for it. Over the years, Majutsushi o Yoroi has evolved into much more than just a mean to avoid looting and it continues to evolve at an extraordinary rate.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Majutsushi o Yoroi is a very unique style, in the sense that it has no particular stance, nor does it have a certain spiritual philosophy or meditation technique. The essential pillar in Majutsushi o Yoroi is the ‘Dakiau Kuroniku’ (Embracing Ink) which is simply a great collection of advanced summoning seals, all adorning the users’ body as tattoos. Before battle, the user seals all his weaponry and armor into the Dakiau Kuroniku, giving off the impression that he is unarmed and vulnerable when the battle begins. The impression, however, could not be farther from the truth. Whenever the need arises, the user will simply summon any defensive or offensive piece of armor or weaponry needed, creating not only a devastating element of surprise, but also a lethal diversity that can force all but the most experienced opponents to their knees. Though Majutsushi o Yoroi only works as a supplement to another style, it is one of the most versatile and effective supplementary fighting-styles in existence. Of course, masters of the art are able to seal their weapons and armor again, allowing them to conserve their assortment and quickly remove unnecessary weight. It goes without saying that the better a Kenjutsu and Taijutsu practitioner the user is, the better he will be at Majutsushi o Yoroi.
    There are two types of practitioners of the Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai:

    The Practitioner
    The regular practitioner is not able to reseal his weaponry and armor, nor is he able to create the seals on his body as he does not know the art of Fūinjutsu. Without knowledge of Fūinjutsu, the normal practitioner is slower than the Master practitioner when it comes to unsealing his weaponry and armor. A regular practitioner cannot prevent the poof-smoke that comes with unsealing an item.

    The Master Practitioner
    The advanced practitioner is able to reseal his weaponry and armor as he is trained in the art of Fūinjutsu. With the art of Fūinjutsu comes the ability to apply the Dakiau Kuroniku onto oneself and other practitioners. An advanced practitioner can prevent the poof-smoke that comes with unsealing an item.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -One must be a Taijutsu Specialist or a Taijutsu Master to learn Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai
    -Only two (2) members without the proper training in the art of Fūinjutsu may learn Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai
    -Masters of Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai have increased balance and agility when compared to a normal Strong Fist Master
    - Kanashiiken Ni Chimukei Kizai cannot be used to unseal or seal unrealistic items (following the Narutoverse) nor can it be used to seal an opponent’s techniques.


    ±± Declined ±± The way its written seems to be more like a version of what Tenten does, rather than a completely new style. Granted you have placed seals on you instead of only scrolls but still this is too similar to that.
     
         
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    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu

    Type: Taijutsu/Nintaijutsu

    Background:

    The Black-Leg Style is a martial-arts style that is based on Sanji's techniques from One Piece. It is designed to free the use of one's hands and prevent them from being damaged during a battle. As a result, practitioners tend to drop into certain stances in which their upper-body portions are most relaxed, such as placing their hands inside their pockets or crossing their arms together across their chest, and only puts them into action whenever the event requires them to do certain maneuvers such as handstands, which aren't prohibited.

    Skill levels of the style:

    Creator (created the style)
    ^
    Master (knows Diable Jambe)
    ^
    User (someone who knows basic techniques)
    ^
    Apprentice (is learning basic techniques)

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    As a fighting style, the style boasts a wide and impressive array of kicks, coupled with super acrobatic skill making it a very versatile fighting technique, allowing user to effectively weave continuous and powerful attacks upon adversaries and combine the power of his kicks with his respective strengths for devastating team combinations. Idea behind the simpleness of the style is to keep it as powerful as it can be while allowing biographies that possess no elemental knowledge to use them as well.

    The specialty of Black-Leg taijutsu is Diable Jambe which allows user to focus chakra into their leg and convert it into high temperature by igniting the chakra with friction, adding extreme heat to the impact of his kicks. In this form, user, due to the high temperature has the ability to slightly burn his opponents. While like this, he can light his opponent on fire.

    ( Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu: Diable Jambe ) - Black-Leg Taijutsu: Devil's Leg
    Rank: Forbidden
    Type: Mode
    Range: Self
    Chakra cost: 50 ( - 15 per turn )
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: Black-Leg taijutsu master can activate a mode which will double their speed. The mode requires user to be at least Sannin rank and to be trained in other Black-Leg taijutsu techniques. To activate this technique an user below Kage rank must stop and spin while guiding chakra into their leg, granting temporary speed boost. User that has already reached Kage or higher rank can activate this technique while battling without stopping moving. Once activated, the technique will increase user leg's strength momentarily and Leg taijutsu damage done by user will be multiplied with 1.5 with the leg this is activated on. Using this technique for longer durations will cause painful cramp and muscle strain if used for four consecutive turns. This also decreases user's speed by 25% of the original speed upon the first usage. Second usage will drop the speed from 75% that was left to 35% of the original speed before using this technique for the first time and the feeling of pain in the leg becomes overwhelming, making it almost impossible to walk. This technique can be used on one leg and can be maintained for max four turns. User's leg looks as if it were on fire when this mode is activated and is covered in chakra. Getting hit by this causes also nerve damage to opponent, giving slight sensation of burning to the nevers and opponent once hit due heated chakra in leg.
    • Causes strain to user's muscles and leaves user limping if used for long durations.
    • Can be activated twice per battle and the second usage will be extremely painful and second usage will last only two turns.
    • Costs 15 chakra per turn.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • A person who knows this fighting style has slightly stronger kicks and is faster than a normal ninja without it.
    • Only people on or above Black-Leg master rank can possess Diable Jambe.
    • Each person wanting to learn Black-Leg style must be approved by the creator, Passion.


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    Kuro-Ashi Taijutsu
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    Autoraitotorihiki Inferuno ~ Outright Inferno
    Type: NinTaijutsu
    Background: This fighting style has been passed down from within a certain family. The fighting style was developed by Yukio Takeshi (God will nourish and is unbending like a bamboo tree) during his time of enslavement. During his enslavement he was banned from seeing his 3 sons and his wife. He was often tortured because of the guards never like the sight of him, always happy, and they could never break his spirit...like a bamboo tree. The method of torture used on him was fire. The guards often burnt his arms so that his fearsome fighting could not be displayed and so no opposition could arise from him.

    Despite the frequent torture, Yukio knew that someone was behind him and that he musn't give up so that's what he did. Since he knew with his physical scars he wouldn't be able to fight his way out, he knew he had to find a source of some power. Since he knew the guards used fire a lot, he devised a way of manipulating the fire that wrapped around his arms so much.

    He began his unknown training on external fire manipulation. He knew he was getting there slowly but surely. He could begin to manipulate the fire in the torches outside his cell to bend in different directions. Everytime the guards came to his cell, he performed his discovery on his arms and realized that it felt warm instead of raw heat burning his flesh away, he realized he could control it.

    Eventually in time, after months of training, he perfected what today is known as Autoraitotorihiki Inferuno. When the guards came to him, they set him on fire, little did they know...he was enjoying it. The guards knew something was wrong because Yukio's screams of agony suddenly subsided and he was smiling like a free man. Yukio embranced the flames on his arms and spread them over his entire body. He knew it was perfected as no pain was felt. The guards' faces showed fear as they knew what was coming. Yukio destroyed his place of enslavement and walked away while only ashes remained.
    Yukio returned to his family and taught his 3 sons the art of Autoraitotorihiki Inferuno


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Outright Inferno wraps the user in flames. The flames can be controlled in any way the user can think of. The flames can be manipulated and be extended from the user's body to form an attack or defense. The fighting style is usually used to attack a target at many different angles. It is also used as a quick defensive maneuver as the flames are highly dangerous upon contact. Outright Inferno users are very quick in offense and defense. Taijutsu used by a user of this style has a heightened effect in that it causes severe burns to the target. The user can also extend any limb of their body in to an enlarged version of it wrapped in flame (Such as a hand used for a slapping motion). The flames are very fast paced so barrage of attacks are often seen from these users as well as projectiles.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - Outright Inferno masters have keen eyesight. This is through evolution of the style from users suffering tunnel vision during Barrage attacks.
    -User must've Mastered Fire
    -Can only be taught by Outright Inferno Grand Masters
    -No water techniques maybe used during Outright Inferno form
    -The User must be Sannin ranked.
    -After the stance is halted/stopped, a 2 turn Break must be in play before the user can go in to the stance again.


    Note to mod: This fighting style is similar to FireBending from The Last Airbender. It's similar in the way they move the fire and the stances. It is also similar to Naruto in a Kyuubi Cloak at 4-tails (Just realized now) in how when he was fighting Pain and fists were flying out from him and that his limbs were extending from the "Flames"


    ±± Declined ±± A member in the first page already submitted a fire enhanced nintaijutsu.
     
         
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    Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin - Dance of the Bearded Sage
    Type: Nintaijutsu
    Background:
    A long time ago, a very powerful and wise Shinobi Viking named Gobi Gobletsson was bored. He was playing around with his chakra by molding and channeling it. One day, on accident, he channeled his chakra into his long viking beard. The long brown/blondish beard became stone hard and razor sharp. He reached his mighty fingers to touch it and was left with several cuts on his skin. This made him think more about hair and chakra. The next months he spent experimenting with chakra and his facial hair. He used the chakra to control his beard and facial hair changing it's volume, shape, size, strength, sharpness and other features. After perfecting the skill Gobi decided to show the shaved Shinobi what real Vikings can do.After designing this style, Gobi was from that point known as Beardy Beardsson, the Bearded Sage.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The Art of the Bearded Sages is a very simple Nintaijutsu which combines chakra control and the user's hair. By utilizing his chakra the user can make facial hair grow on his face, arms and other body parts to the desired length. By further use of chakra the user can control the movements of the hair, it's shape, volume, sharpness, strength and similar characteristics. There are several places the user could create hair from: Face(beard, nose-hair, ear-hair and eyebrows); Body (armpits, arms, back and chest); Lower Body (legs, feet and pelvis area.).The user can grow or shorten the hair at any time by simply channeling chakra into it. He can form it in any way he wants to resemble certain objects (tools, shapes and weapons), to be other colors (can be used as camofluage), different lengths, sizes and degree of sharpness and volume. The hair can either be made sharp or dull, soft or hard as steel-quality, long or short. The user can create a sharp armor of hair over his whole body cutting anything that touches the hair, use it to move around (attach the hair and swing around from branch to branch for example), attack the enemy with projectiles (hair needles from the users beard etc.) or with large volumes of hair by simply swinging their head and body parts around thus hurting the opponent (depending if the hair is sharp or hard damage can be inflicted differently).

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - One must be taught by Gobi Gobletsson
    - There are two ranks within those whom have been taught this certain art, the Bearded Warrior, and the Bearded Sage.

    Hayashita Sennin - Bearded Sage's abilities and restrictions; This is the rank given to those whom have fully mastered the Dance of the Bearded Sage, and is capable of manipulating ones hair as described above, in the ''Inner Workings'' description. To become a Bearded Sage one must be of Kage rank(Or higher.) due of needing extraordinary chakra control.

    Hayashita Senshi - Bearded Warrior's abilities and restrictions; These are those whom are still in training to become a Bearded Sage is only capable of reaching his beard up to mid-range(Even if the jutsus says long-range also, if a jutsu belonging to this style says short-range it doesn't mean he can extend the jutsu's reach to mid-range, it stays short.) and, cannot change the colour of his beard as it requires extraordinary chakra control. To become a Bearded Warrior one must atleast be a S-Class Ninja due the need of good chakra control.


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    Tsubaki no Hayashita Sennin
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    Note: some characters like jiraya, already have ninjutsu envolving hair. Thus, they can submit hair related ninjutsu if it doesn't clash with your own style
     
         
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    Benso Yama | 守岳 Sambo

    Type: Taijutsu

    Background: Rasnall’s father, Kasotca, was a member of the Hyūga main house and was an assistant to the Elders, by placing the Cursed seal on the foreheads of the Branch members. Kasotca hated branding his fellow Hyūga brother and sisters , so decided to flee the clan with Rasnall’s mother, Nara (full story in Rasnall Bio history). Once they arrived in Kirigakure, Kasotca and Nara decided to keep a low profile and stay hidden. During this time Kasotca realised that if he ever needed to defend himself, he couldn’t use the Hyūga’s secret fighting style, because this would draw to much attention. Kasotca decided that he would create a new fighting style that was based entirely on defending one’s self with a silent, single counter strike to totally immobilise the opponent from continuing to fight or flee. He decided he would also utilise the powers of his Byakugan to help quickly decide on the most suitable and effective counter. Kasotca called this “Sambo” and spent the next 25 years developing this fighting style in secret, except for teaching his son, Rasnall from the age of 3, passing the future of the fighting style to him.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Sambo is designed to be a defensive and immobilising style of CQC. Its advanced moves target the joints of an opponent, and deliver damage to definitively obliterate the opponent’s ability to fight. Sambo also utilises the hardening of muscle (through chakra insertion) to take hits so the most effective counter can be used. This combination of effective and unique counters, together with the hardening of muscles, makes Sambo a very effective defense against other normal or advanced taijutsu's.



    The self-defence methods of Sambo use an opponent’s momentum, strength and speed against them. Sambo utilises advanced deductive powers of the user (general and Doujutsu assist) to apply the best counter to nullify a targets attack and also strike a vulnerable joint of an opponent’s body to either break it or trap them in a hold. Users of Sambo are also trained to manipulate the chakra in their body to temporarily harden muscles to increase striking power, defensive stances and creating the best opportunities for applying a counter.
    Example:


    (Benso Yama | 守岳|Shuushi Handou -) Sambo – Counter Kick
    Type:Defensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra:25
    Damage:N/A
    Description: Watching the approaching kick from an opponent, the user channels chakra into his torso (left or right) to harden the muscle. As the kick is about to land, the user reaches the leading arm forward and catches the leg as it strikes the users mid-section. Without a moment’s hesitation , the user brings his far leg over the leg of the opponent’s, pushes themselves to the floor, bring the opponent down with them, while pulling their leg up, bending it up against the normal bend of the knee. This does not snap the knee, but breaks the tendents at the back of the knee and upper leg, the user then rolls to the side. The complete move takes around 5 seconds to complete. This makes the leg useless for the remainder of the fight.
    ~Must have mastered Sambo.
    ~Can only be used 3 times per match.
    ~Reffer to Sambo resistance chart for damage taken.
    ~This will not stop any kick ranked above A


    Once Rasnall came of age he started to expand on his father’s Sambo by adding more offensive techniques combined with the original defensive counters. He dubbed this “Aggressive Sambo” which delivers fatal blows by breaking the spine, neck etc.
    Example:


    (Benso Yama Aguresshibu | 守岳| -) Aggressive Sambo - Counter Arm Strike
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:S
    Range:Short
    Chakra:40
    Damage:60
    Description: The user watches an incoming fist or palm strike from the opponent, and prepares to counter by hardening the muscle through their right arm and hand. As the strike is coming, the user brings their hardened arm forward and meets the strike like a mirror image. Without hesitation the muscle is then returned to normal as the users hand slides to the grab the opponents wrist (the hand they used to strike with). The user then takes a quick step forward, brings the other arm forward and strikes and severs the elbow joint. They then bend this arm and use the elbow to strike the shoulder, severing this joint.
    ~must have mastered Sambo
    ~opponent can not use the struck arm until they reattach shoulder joint.
    ~opponent takes longer when forming seals for the remaining fight.
    ~can only be used once per fight.


    “Sambo leaves no room for mercy. It’s a cold, silent and mechanical martial art.” – Kasotca.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    ~Sambo users train extensivly to gain the ability to harden their muscles.
    ~Sambo's specially designed counters can only be used once muscle Hardening is mastered.
    ~Hardening of the muscles only lasts for 30 seconds maximum and can only be used once per turn.
    ~Users of Sambo train extensivly to read opponents movements and then quickly decide on the quickest and most effective counter.
    ~Sambo is unique, due to its all defensive nature. It has not techniques that involve the user making the first move.
    ~Sambo resistance chart:
    Hardening of the muscle only cuts the damage received by the user by:
    25% - A rank Kick
    50% - B rank Kick
    75% - C or lower rank Kick


    ±± Declined ±± This can already be achieved for example with free form taijutsu.
     
         
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    Shadow Combat (Kage no Sentō)

    Type: Other (Nintaijutsu?? I don't know since it use shadow chakra)

    Background: This secret taijutsu style of Nara Clan was developed by Nara.. who knows that the Nara members are weak at hand to hand combat. Nara.. develop the tech by learning the work of the shadow. It took 3 year for him to discover this technique. He found that by corrupting himself by the shadow, their taijutsu are enhanced. When he learns that, he runs across the field and shouted "I did it!!!". Now, he opens a dojo in his clan house and teach these combat styles

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This ability works by molding the user's body with the shadow. With this advanced shadow tech, the shadow overwhelm one's body, adding a new layer on it. Whenever the user punch the enemy, the shadow chakra gather there, and extend the fist about a inch and improving one's range and power of punch because it has more mass which means more force. The same goes for the leg. For defensive purpose, the shadow can be extended from the user's body acting like a sharp spike which pierce through the attackers(of taijutus). The spike are strong enough to hold even a sword attack. To be brief, it is an usage of the shadow and to add a layer on the user's body (Act like another skin so that it can prevent enemy from direct contact with the user's body which mean if enemy attack the user, the attack is lessened by the shadow skin) In addition, the spike can be used for attack purpose too. When a spike is extended from the user's palm, it can pierce through enemy body too.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - User expert in Shadow Combat can use any Shadow tech faster
    - Cannot use in night time and cannot use near a huge light source
    - One cannot use normal shadow techs(like Shadow Possession) if he has activated his shadow taijutsu mode
    - User after activating are weak to fire attacks
    - User after activating are strong against taijutsu and Kenjutsu
    - User when exposure to sunlight has more power in using Shadow Combat moves
    - Users need to finish Shadow Training first

    Proof that the Nara Clan member can make his shadow goes up his body and to make spike from an existing shadow: Remember the part where Shikamaru fought with Tayuya? During that time, Shikamaru make his shadow goes up his body and make it strangle his finger to break the genjutsu. If the user is more expert in it, he can make the shadow goes up to full body. Shadow Sewing techniques prove that the user can make spike from his existing shadows

    If this is approved, do I need to submit techs? If yes, where can I do it? Feel Free to edit things if necessary ^__^



    ±± Declined ±±Off course you need to submit techs. You are patenting the idea of the style. A style is not a mode. That being said, you worked this out like a Mode, which it can't be. Please reword it. Also, the restrictions...it has been said multiple times, don't add useless restrictions on things. How does this make you weak to fire? This is a NinTaijutsu. Thus, you need to make it work like that.
     
         
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    Fuuin Genkotsu | Sealing Fist

    Type:Fuuintaijutsu

    Background:After unravelling and analysing the advantages and disadvantages of sealing techniques (fuuinjutsu), I noticed it was very easily combinable with taijutsu. I came on the idea after finishing my fuuinjutsu training, as well as watching the working of the Gentle Fist of the Hyuuga. This fighting style is similar to it, but is actually much more profound, refined and advanced than the Gentle Fist.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Fuuin Genkotsu has two aspects to it. It has the ability to increase the users own taijutsu techniques, as well as the ability to decrease those of the opponent. Depending on the situation, the user can easily switch from one intention to the other. It is also so that the users primarily work with seals. Being said, they have seal all over their own body as well as the ability to place certain seals onto the opponent, and thus weakening them to the desired point in order to take full advantage. Because fuuinjutsu and taijutsu alone both have such a wide variety, the same can be said about this fighting style, meaning that the only restriction to actually come up with moves is the mind (and the restrictions put up by the moderators). Hence, it is also hard to say the effects beforehand, though some can be made.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    Restrictions:
    -User must have received proper training in fuuinjutsu and taijutsu to be eligible.
    -If taught to someone else, they must receive a training session dedicated to learning the style and its characteristics alone, loose from any kind of jutsu.
    -The user needs to have finished Fuuinjutsu Training up to A-Rank to learn this style.
    Additional effects:
    -The user is able to empower his own physical capabilities, as well as restricting those of the opponent
    -As for some techniques, the user is able to activate an attack by simply being in the vicinity, rather than actually hitting the opponent. They must still create the movements though.
    -Can be used as offensive and defensive measurement
    -If received the training and permission by nexus, (I’m not sure if this one is possible, so I’ll ask Nexus later on) one can incorporate medical skills into the technique to optimize it.

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    Fuuin Genkotsu
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Thunderbolt View Post

    ±± Declined ±± You are confusing a custom hand to hand/weapon fighting style with a technique/move.

    Quote Originally Posted by Thunderbolt View Post

    ~Declined~ Needles placed inside of your veins? What's preventing you from slowly bleeding to death? Blood would still leak out while having those needles placed inside. The only effective way to have those needles inside of your veins and not lose blood is through medical related means which require training/permission. Also channeling chakra to expand the needles is too similar to the Akimichi Clan's expansion technique. Lastly, this still looks like a technique rather than a fighting style.


    Ancient Embedded Hidden needleの組み込まれた隠し針 Kodai no kumikomareta kakushi hari

    Type: Nin-Kenjutsu

    Background: This Fighting style was originated and first known to have been practiced in the early Greece more than a 3 Million years ago by the ancestral descendant of the Greek Gods. it was rumored and said to have been developed by the Greek God Zeus who developed the technique as a way to mark his ground and show his strength and dominance as the king of the heavens and ruler to the earthlings. The style was said to be of such power that even Zeus feared its strength and the wrong it could be used if placed in the wrong hands he kept the style of fighting under bay and never practiced and taught it to no one even his brothers, This was until he mated with a human and gave birth to a son which was known as the brave man in Greek mythology called Hercules he taught this style to his son as final measure to keep him safe if he ever came to any serious harm or fear of harm but telling him not to ever teach no man the technique or even talk of it. Hercules intends to the wise words of his father and shows the techniques to no one not even his own flesh and blood and rarely used it and preferred to result tot other means to deal with his problems which resulted in him fighting. Hercules was just one man and soon word got out a technique which could take out several men is jutst one move and attracted people all over the globe especially individuals from places we come to know today I asia as china and Japan they came all to see the forbidden fighting style which was being used but to their disappointment they did not. It was all moody and deem for these travelers until a certain day where he was assigned on one of his tasks or so called labours this time it was to retrieve a monster livin in the swamps with the name of Lernaean Hydra which was a monster of great strength and demonic power Hercules was sent to destroy this creature with is nephew lolaus but the strength of the beast was to fierce for Hercules to over come so he performed the technique and upon one slay weakened the beast up where lolaus was able to hold a torch to each of the stumps to prevent the demon of coming back again upon sight of this technique after they had come back from their journey it was said lolaus was fascinated with it and on several instances asked Hercules to teach him .Not much was known from them but it was said that Hercules finally taught lolaus the technique with which to Hercules disappointment passed it on to few other before he died.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style
    :
    This fighting move is one of great strength and power and if wielded and used in a proper manner is one of the deadliest weapons in existence. The user prior to performing the the fighting move will carry several thin sharp needles finely carved And places into his veins on his hands he then uses his raw chakra and fuses it into the needles which make them grow to any desired length strength or thickness or numbers this is due to the needles being placed in the user body and chakra being implanted to it as if it was a body par and thus grows on it own the user also makes use of his wind chakra which he infuses around the already grown and neutered needles to further sharpen and strengthen the grown needles up to the point as If it were steel. The user can also use this style of fighting as a shield against taijutsu attack which deals with strong physical impact by bracing his arms together and using the needles as shield. The fighting style can also protect the user against lightning attacks of any sort due to the style usage of wind .The needles can be placed in one hands or two this is up to the opponent and his preference though two arms increases the strength of the style of fighting and also the damages on the user .This stye is able to create repel like impact when used on a target as the user as not only does it cut the target but die to the wind it pushes him back tremendously, this style one of little powerful a several abilities Is that it allows the user of the style to know the opponents whereabouts if he has being cut or impacted on by the fighting style since the usage of this fighting style revolves around the opponent veins and his blood system it is safe to say that when the opponent is being impacted on or cut by the style of fighting and also using little of the user blood and chakra and used in the attack and this affecting him too. Finally the last of the of this style ability and the and the most powerful .the style is done by a precise and strong and concentrated blow to the head of the opponent to his brain which affects his cerebral cortex the region of the brain which controls memory ,awareness ,thought and consciousness a direct from this technique can cause a sudden temporary but fast alteration in of the these functions this means it could render his opponent lacking memory loss and without knowledge of his jutsu or him not knowing his surrounding area due to no awareness or even passing out due to no or little concentrations and good consciousness.This needles can be pulled out and retracted at will upon choice of the user but is mostly left in arms later taken out after battle course this style has the capabilities depending on the user (Genin_Sage) to which amount of damage the technique does At full use or even at the mere hands of a practiced user with skill this jutsu is more than enough to overpower basic taijutsu attacks and even normal katana with basically minimal effort.This style of fighting combines with sharigan kekkei genkai makes this technique advance into another level where the opponents is able to dodge and intercept taijutsu and lightning attack with little efforts.This fighting style also provides the user with a great threshold against pain and a focused mind due to his ability to use the technique properly even though under pain this makes him more less to fall victim to ninjutsu attacks based on killing intentions and fears.This also seems to be a good defense against breaking genjutsu as the user can take use of the pain of the already imbedded needles and upon sudden movements can feel pain that can break low ranking genjutsu.

    Additional effects and Restrictions
    :

    Requires a sharingan to perform a concentrated blow which affects the cerebral cortex and affects the opponent human senses .

    Must have mastered wind and in Ninjutsu.

    Must need thunderbolt permission to use

    Can not use 3 jutsu for next 2 rounds due to pain from implanted blade needles.

    The technique which affects the senses due to a direct focused blow from the opponent can only be countered by a 2 tomoe sharignan.

    The technique last for 4 Rounds

    Solution to scorps decline issue: I changed it to nin kenjutsu making it be more of a weaponry fighting style but still involving ninjutsu i also made changes to the grammars and removed things about it be a jutsu . I increased the restriction from having starting training in ninjutsu to have mastered it i also made the specialized attack more dodge -able and not to be so op i did this by limiting the requirement of evading or dodging the move from having a 3 tomoe sharigan to 2.


    Solution to Mathias decline issues: The main problem why this was not approved was the fact that the needles we make me bleed out and thus lose blood and also that the expansion of the needle technique is similar to that of akaimichi so i removed all those things about the needles being expanded and i also made it - 10 damage to the user while he is using the fighting style i also indicated that the needles are nicely cut and craved which allows for easy passage through the veins similar to that of an iv in real life wards.

    ~Declined~ You need to wait 15 days before resubmitting. Please read the rules next time.^^
     
         
    Last edited by Mathias; 03-06-2012 at 12:07 AM.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by XxFallenUchihaxX View Post
    (Hiryū geijutsu)Fire Dragon Arts
    Type:Taijutsu*
    Background:The fire dragon arts where made by the a member of the Uchiha clan known as Ian Uchiha.Its is the mix of Tai-Jutsu with the Katon Element turn the fists and legs of the user on fire.The Users of this style are able to manipulate the flames and and send small fireballs with use head seals.This style was made to be the Uchiha clan version of the Hyuga clan Gentle Fist.But the the Uchiha developed a more deadly type of style being able to mix there Taijustu and Katon Relese.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The inner works of the style is sending katon chakra to the legs and fists of the user so he can manipulate the flames and add more power.The user is basically using normal Taijutsu but also mixing in there Katon chakra to add more fierce force to the blow.Here is a diagram for a better look:
    Additional effects and Restrictions: *
    -Can only be used on a Uchiha bio
    -Must have started Katon training*
    -Can only be taught by XxFallenUchihaxX
    -Only Katon Jutsus can be used while using this style
    -Can absorb B rank and down Katon Jutsus
    -Can be stopped by B rank and higher Jutsus


    [color=royalblue]±± Declined ±± This is a Nintaijutsu. As for the restrictions and additional effects you are confusing this with a technique. This is a fighting style. Read my submission and mathias to get an idea of what or how to do it.
    Resubmission
    (Hiryū geijutsu)Fire Dragon Arts
    Type:Nintaijutsu
    Background:The fire dragon arts where made by the a member of the Uchiha clan known as Ian Uchiha.Its is the mix of Tai-Jutsu with the Katon Element turn the fists and legs of the user on fire.The Users of this style are able to manipulate the flames and and send small fireballs with use head seals.This style was made to be the Uchiha clan version of the Hyuga clan Gentle Fist.But the the Uchiha developed a more deadly type of style being able to mix there Taijustu and Katon Relese.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The inner works of the style is sending katon chakra to the legs and fists of the user so he can manipulate the flames and add more power.The user is basically using normal Taijutsu but also mixing in there Katon chakra to add more fierce force to the blow.Here is a diagram for a better look:
    Additional effects and Restrictions: *
    -Masters of the Fire Dragon Arts are able to create fire from the sun"s heat.
    -Bio must be at least Jounin Rank to learn this style
    -Must have started Katon trainning
    -Beginners will take damage from the trainning due to the harsh training

    Sorry I messed up the post iPod deleted the proper coding


    ±± Declined ±± Fire from the sun heat? Uh!? O_o also, you need to refine this. You talk about beginners yet you don't define them. Tweek this a bit more.
     
         
    Last edited by Scorps; 03-13-2012 at 08:23 PM.

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