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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by Lord of Kaos View Post
    (This might be a bit advanced for a CFS and might be more of a ninjutsu than a nintaijutsu but you never know, right? If it doesn't fit the bounds for a CFS, please let me know and I will submit it in the custom jutsu section)


    Satsui no Hadō/ Dakku Hadō | Surge of Murderous Intent/ Dark Intent


    Akuma with the characteristics of the Satsui no Hadō red chakra 'flares' around him
    Type: Nintaijutsu

    Background:
    Akuma and his brother Gouken were students of their father Goutetsu, who taught to them a nameless life-threatening martial art, which incorporates elements of Karate, Judo, and Kempo. He also taught the Shun Goku Satsu (literally Instant Hell Murder), a lethal technique which, although incredibly powerful, puts the user in considerable danger.As the brothers progressed under Goutetsu's tutelage, a dispute arose on the true nature of their fighting style and the path to master it. Gouken, unable to accept the violent nature of the fighting style, left Goutetsu to begin his own dojo, however Goutetsu did not stop his student Gouken from leaving and even allowed him build his own dojo. Akuma continued Goutetsu's teachings and vowed to use their fighting style as it was intended.

    In order to learn Shun Goku Satsu, Akuma had embraced a malevolent chakra and principle of Satsui no Hadō, the "Surge of the Intent to Kill/Killing Intent". In addition, Akuma realized his limits as a martial artist could be expanded, and left Goutetsu's guidance of enlightenment to train alone to gain more power; however, due to embracing the Satsui no Hadō to his fullest extent, he developed a lust to fight to the death, unlike Goutetsu, who had been able to use the Satsui no Hadō without giving in to its dark side and did not constantly use it to its fullest extent. After coming back from his island, Akuma went back to Goutetsu, and fought and killed him with the Shun Goku Satsu. Akuma, believing that he was the true master of the Art, took the prayer beads of his dead master and placed it on his neck. When Gouken went to visit his master to see how he was doing, he only found his body lifeless and saw his brother, now no longer looking human. Gouken, shocked to see that his younger brother took the life of their master, berated Akuma, who said nothing and left for the woods.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Description of Style

    Satsui no Hadō is a manipulation of chakra that emanates greatly from oneself through the natural human instinct and desire to survive, to trample and impose over opposition, and on a metaphysical level, the natural occurrence and manifestation of loss, decline, and destruction. It is very hard to control. For those who do succeed in controlling it, they develop an almost cold, cynical detachment from themselves, as well as others. As such, Satsui no Hadō makes a human unbelievably powerful, increasing their strength, power and speed beyond that of a usual superhuman fighter or a supernatural being, but at the cost of one's humanity and compassion.

    To tap into the Satsui no Hadō, a fighter must be so consumed with the desire to win or have an intense rage, that they are willing to actually kill their foes. As a result, only people who push themselves to be the best at all costs, can take full advantage of it. However, the untrained mind can be driven to a temporary insanity if they have not prepared for it.

    Once a warrior has awoken the Satsui no Hadou within them, it can be very hard to resist. Learning Satsui no Hadou is the first step in learning the most fatal technique known to all of their martial arts - Shun Goku Satsu. If one has used it to their fullest extent for too long throughout years of their life, they will completely lose control, and will transform into a demonic being

    The art of the Satsui no Hadō is not automatically activated in the warriors once they began training. It is only first unlocked under some stressful or emotional condition after which the Satsui no Hadō may be used freely. (similar to how the Sharingan is accessed).

    Inner Workings of the Style


    The fighting style that accompanies the Satsui no Hadō boasts a wide and extensive assortment of powerful punches, quickly spinning kicks, and deadly strikes coupled with super acrobatic skill make an extremely adept fighting style, allowing user to effectively weave continuous and powerful attacks upon adversaries and combine the power of his blows with the surging power of the Satsui no Hadō to create flawlessly fatal blows.

    There are 5 methods, or main parts, or the style that are incorporated into the fighting style:
    *Shoryuken:



    A sweeping uppercut that can be enhanced by the Satsui no Hadō to cause internal damage to an opponent


    *Tatsumaki:



    An often quick spinning hurricane kick in the air, connecting up to 3-4 times that can be enhanced with the Satsui no Hadō.


    *Hadoken:


    A physical manifestation of the Satsui no Hadō, the user releases a burst of chakra from his hands that cause damage to an opponent's chakra paths, causing them to become damaged and have a slowed chakra flow. Can also be performed while jumping.


    *Shun Goku Satsu:



    One of the most powerful offensive Satsui no Hadō techniques, the user focuses the Satui no Hadō chakra that he is utilizing into his upper body, mainly his chest and arms and lashes the target, and upon contact, the Satui no Hadō chakra causes them to be momentarily paralyzed (depending on rank difference there is a certain amount of time) in which time the user releases the Satsui no Hadō in deadly punches and attacks at the target.


    *Ashura Senku:



    Using the Satsui no Hadō to augment the user's speed by moving across the field, bending the exerting chakra from the satsui no Hado to project a false illusion of himself 'lagging' behind his actual body, making taijutsu hard to land while using this.


    (Note: By approving the custom style, you are not approving the above part. Each of these will be submitted as their own jutsu as a part of the form, this if just for listing of them in the art.)

    Skill levels of the style:

    Grand Master(created the style)
    ^
    Master (knows Shun No Goku)
    ^
    User (someone who knows Hadoken and Ashura Senku techniques)
    ^
    Apprentice (is learning Shoryuken, and Tatsumaki techniques)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    *Due to the large amounts of chakra flowing through the user's body at all the times the art is being used, the user is less susceptible to Genjutsu, rendering this less effective (greater resistance to genjutsu) The user also has increased taijutsu strength by +10, increased speed slightly faster than Rock Lee (Part II) without weights but still lower than EIG speeds.*

    *In order for the user to be able to meditate long enough to access a darker part of his nature, the user must be standing completely still, similar to how Naruto originally enters Sage Mode.Once active, the form last until the end of the battle, but at the sake of the user's sanity. After the battle's end, the user is left with mental anguish that renders his chakra paths near useless and he's left in states of near-death.*

    *Another side-effect of this power is that when a warrior embraces the Satsui no Hadou to their fullest extent - even when the warrior can not control it - they will develop a lust to fight to the death, their eyes will turn white or red, and their beliefs in fighting become very dark and cold-blooded. The warrior's personality will also change and become very violent and dark. However, as shown in the case of Goutetsu, if one embraces it to a small degree, their eye's pupils will become blue, and they will have no willingness to destroy anything or anyone.*


    ±± Declined ±± The idea of using Rage to power your chakra and body, creating a denser more aggressive use of chakra is a cool idea and its beautifully made, worded and mostly explained. However, some points make it unapprovable without some minor edits:

    -Take the genjutsu resistance and the +10 to taijutsu. CFS don't give those bonus. Your bonus are SLIGHTLY higher or lower stats when compared to the benchmark of your CFS skill. Since this is taijutsu, the benchmark is a normal strong fist user

    -Be sure that your moves and "stances" / "methods" aren't too similar to Gentle fist. Read through the gentle fist moves to get an idea. Some of your moves, mainly Hadoken is basically Gentle Fist.


    Other than that, one of the best CFS submissions i've checked. Congrats

    Satsui no Hadō/ Dakku Hadō | Surge of Murderous Intent/ Dark Intent


    Akuma with the characteristics of the Satsui no Hadō red chakra 'flares' around him
    Type: Nintaijutsu

    Background:
    Akuma and his brother Gouken were students of their father Goutetsu, who taught to them a nameless life-threatening martial art, which incorporates elements of Karate, Judo, and Kempo. He also taught the Shun Goku Satsu (literally Instant Hell Murder), a lethal technique which, although incredibly powerful, puts the user in considerable danger.As the brothers progressed under Goutetsu's tutelage, a dispute arose on the true nature of their fighting style and the path to master it. Gouken, unable to accept the violent nature of the fighting style, left Goutetsu to begin his own dojo, however Goutetsu did not stop his student Gouken from leaving and even allowed him build his own dojo. Akuma continued Goutetsu's teachings and vowed to use their fighting style as it was intended.

    In order to learn Shun Goku Satsu, Akuma had embraced a malevolent chakra and principle of Satsui no Hadō, the "Surge of the Intent to Kill/Killing Intent". In addition, Akuma realized his limits as a martial artist could be expanded, and left Goutetsu's guidance of enlightenment to train alone to gain more power; however, due to embracing the Satsui no Hadō to his fullest extent, he developed a lust to fight to the death, unlike Goutetsu, who had been able to use the Satsui no Hadō without giving in to its dark side and did not constantly use it to its fullest extent. After coming back from his island, Akuma went back to Goutetsu, and fought and killed him with the Shun Goku Satsu. Akuma, believing that he was the true master of the Art, took the prayer beads of his dead master and placed it on his neck. When Gouken went to visit his master to see how he was doing, he only found his body lifeless and saw his brother, now no longer looking human. Gouken, shocked to see that his younger brother took the life of their master, berated Akuma, who said nothing and left for the woods.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Description of Style

    Satsui no Hadō is a manipulation of chakra that emanates greatly from oneself through the natural human instinct and desire to survive, to trample and impose over opposition, and on a metaphysical level, the natural occurrence and manifestation of loss, decline, and destruction. It is very hard to control. For those who do succeed in controlling it, they develop an almost cold, cynical detachment from themselves, as well as others. As such, Satsui no Hadō makes a human unbelievably powerful, increasing their strength, power and speed beyond that of a usual superhuman fighter or a supernatural being, but at the cost of one's humanity and compassion.

    To tap into the Satsui no Hadō, a fighter must be so consumed with the desire to win or have an intense rage, that they are willing to actually kill their foes. As a result, only people who push themselves to be the best at all costs, can take full advantage of it. However, the untrained mind can be driven to a temporary insanity if they have not prepared for it.

    Once a warrior has awoken the Satsui no Hadou within them, it can be very hard to resist. Learning Satsui no Hadou is the first step in learning the most fatal technique known to all of their martial arts - Shun Goku Satsu. If one has used it to their fullest extent for too long throughout years of their life, they will completely lose control, and will transform into a demonic being

    The art of the Satsui no Hadō is not automatically activated in the warriors once they began training. It is only first unlocked under some stressful or emotional condition after which the Satsui no Hadō may be used freely. (similar to how the Sharingan is accessed).

    Inner Workings of the Style


    The fighting style that accompanies the Satsui no Hadō boasts a wide and extensive assortment of powerful punches, quickly spinning kicks, and deadly strikes coupled with super acrobatic skill make an extremely adept fighting style, allowing user to effectively weave continuous and powerful attacks upon adversaries and combine the power of his blows with the surging power of the Satsui no Hadō to create flawlessly fatal blows.

    There are 5 methods, or main parts, or the style that are incorporated into the fighting style:
    *Shoryuken:



    A sweeping uppercut that can be enhanced by the Satsui no Hadō to cause internal damage to an opponent


    *Tatsumaki:



    An often quick spinning hurricane kick in the air, connecting up to 3-4 times that can be enhanced with the Satsui no Hadō.


    *Hadoken:


    A physical manifestation of the Satsui no Hadō, the user releases a burst of chakra from his hands that cause damage to an opponent's chakra paths, causing them to become damaged and have a slowed chakra flow. Can also be performed while jumping.


    *Shun Goku Satsu:



    One of the most powerful offensive Satsui no Hadō techniques, the user focuses the Satui no Hadō chakra that he is utilizing into his upper body, mainly his chest and arms and lashes the target, and upon contact, the Satui no Hadō chakra causes them to be momentarily paralyzed (depending on rank difference there is a certain amount of time) in which time the user releases the Satsui no Hadō in deadly punches and attacks at the target.


    *Ashura Senku:



    Using the Satsui no Hadō to augment the user's speed by moving across the field, bending the exerting chakra from the satsui no Hado to project a false illusion of himself 'lagging' behind his actual body, making taijutsu hard to land while using this.


    (Note: By approving the custom style, you are not approving the above part. Each of these will be submitted as their own jutsu as a part of the form, this if just for listing of them in the art.)

    Skill levels of the style:

    Grand Master(created the style)
    ^
    Master (knows Shun No Goku)
    ^
    User (someone who knows Hadoken and Ashura Senku techniques)
    ^
    Apprentice (is learning Shoryuken, and Tatsumaki techniques)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    *Users of this art have slightly better reflexes, increased agility, when compared to Strong Fist users and speeds increased to slightly faster than Rock Lee (Part II) without weights but still lower than EIG speeds.*

    *In order for the user to be able to meditate long enough to access a darker part of his nature, the user must be standing completely still, similar to how Naruto originally enters Sage Mode.Once active, the form last until the end of the battle, but at the sake of the user's sanity. After the battle's end, the user is left with mental anguish that renders his chakra paths near useless and he's left in states of near-death.*

    *Another side-effect of this power is that when a warrior embraces the Satsui no Hadou to their fullest extent - even when the warrior can not control it - they will develop a lust to fight to the death, their eyes will turn white or red, and their beliefs in fighting become very dark and cold-blooded. The warrior's personality will also change and become very violent and dark. However, as shown in the case of Goutetsu, if one embraces it to a small degree, their eye's pupils will become blue, and they will have no willingness to destroy anything or anyone.*



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    Remove information about Genjutsu resistance and changed Additional Effects area to fit standards. Also, I read over the Gentle Fist jutsus and abilities of the Gentle Fist on Naruto wikia. When I submit the techniques, I'll try my best to make them as different from the Gentle Fist jutsus as possible. And thank you for the complement. :3

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    Lord of Kaos, our loyal member, gave on the 14th of May, a request for a Patent on custom fighting style Satsui no Hadō/ Dakku Hadō | Surge of Murderous Intent/ Dark Intent. I, Scorps of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Satsui no Hadō/ Dakku Hadō | Surge of Murderous Intent/ Dark Intent
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±


    |Reikon Tomonari| Soul Resonance

    Type:
    Nin-Taijutsu/Nin-Kenjutsu

    Background:
    -A warrior known as Ermac, was so full of pride in his power that he even decided to fight the legendary Sage of the Six Paths. The fight didn't last very long but the Sage felt that Ermac had deffinately proved himself capable. The sage took him in as a student, teaching him extreme chakra control, allowing Ermac to develope a special style. Ermac was capable of manipulating his chakra in the form of a spirit, while hardening it at the same time. Ermac could create multiple limbs if he wanted to or simply project his being as a new opponent all together. Through this, his clan could even rival the future Senjus and Uchihas in power. Madara saw this style as a threat and had almost all members who knew this style killed. Those who were strong enough to survive went into hiding, passing this technique down to their children. When Madara and Hashirama finally died, all 7 known members came out of hiding and lit up the world with their awesomness. (So to speak)

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    - In essence, Reikon Tomonari is the manipulation of chakra in a new form of combat. The user projects his chakra in the form of a limb made of dense chakra. Through this ability, the user not only gains range and power, but a large variety in combat, giving him an advantage over any basic fighter (An example is creating 2 more arms of chakra to hold down the opponent while u beat him with the originals. Another would be coating the arm in chakra to increase it's overall size for more range and damage.). The draw back to this technique is the inability to use other ninjutsu while this is active but possibilities are worth it. Experts of this style take it to a whole new level. They can actually project a chakra body (In essence like a glowing shadow clone without being able to use ninjutsu, but is capable of increasing it's size) that is capable of fighting for them or making it a team effort . Masters can extend the range of which the limbs reach with some cases even reaching as far as mid-range and are capable of expeling this ability through weapons such as swords or hammers to extend range and mass.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    Addition:
    -greater chakra manipulation (Able to manipulate chakra at very high speeds)
    -Denser chakra, capable of actually doing damage on it's own.

    Restrictions:
    -Unable to to perform other ninjutsu or genjutsu while a jutsu is active in the turn
    -Must have mastered ninjutsu
    -Must have trained in basic taijutsu.


    ±± Declined ±± Don't Resubmit. Too similar to Bijuu techniques and chakra cloaks.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Ball arts (tama gigei)
    Type: Chakra Manipulation/Weaponary
    Background: A rogue shinobi once fled from his country, and while on his way to salvation he was surrounded by countless ninja of his previous village, the shinobi did not have a weapon to protect himself he fled from the hunting nin until he found a ball the shinobi felt desperate so he infused his chakra to the ball and the ball became very strong taking out many ninja's thus the ball arts were created.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The art works by infusing chakra to a ball making the ball more powerful and versatile the chakra infused can cause the ball to increase it's length and size, making the ball shape into a rubbery stick like shape that is rock hard, or a metalic ball.

    Elemental Chakra
    Fire Chakra : When fire chakra was inserted the ball would be engulfed with fire that the user can control by his will making fire either appear as a small spot or engulfing the whole ball.


    Wind Chakra: When Wind chakra was inserted the ball when kicked will travel at great speeds and it will also pick up dust or other small substances when it is heading to the opponent, and it will also become very spiky


    Earth Chakra: When Earth chakra was inserted to the ball the ball will become very hard, rock hard. Due to the ball being rock hard mangekyo can control the parts were the ball is hard like he can do in when fire chakra is inserted


    Lightning Chakra: When lightning chakra is inserted the ball will be able to electrify and temporarily paralyze the opponent. Also when lightning chakra is inserted the ball can pass through D rank earth defenses.


    Water Chakra: When water chakra is inserted the ball will liquefy and be able to separate and join on the users will. When water chakra is inserted the benefits are basically splashing the opponent in the face or stopping D rank fire techs


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -must be S rank
    -must pass a mission
    -Elemental chakra can be added to non-elemental chakra
    -Lengthened balls can only reach a maximum of 3.75 meters


    ±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. Not a CFS
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Tenken| Heavenly Punishment
    Type: Taijutsu; Kenjutsu [Can be implemented in multiple combat styles]
    Background:
    A style designed to grant the user a great advantage over the opponents, mostly used in close range combat.
    This style can only be achieved by those who possess strong will, desire or ambition and who have experienced multiple battles throughout their life. Only some people have witnessed this style and even few have attained it, however, it doesn't mean it cannot be taught to others. Some people consider it a curse, even comparing it with the Uchiha's Sharingan as to ''awaken'' the ability to use this style, the ones who did it have passed through difficult and sometimes even traumatic events in their life. Nonetheless, it is achievable through training.
    This style is rare because if one who has achieved it, breaks up the training current, in order for someone to come up with it again, it will need to do it by awaken it on its own, which it isn't something easy to accomplish

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    This is more of a supplementary fighting style which can be used for either defensive or offensive approaches.
    Upon achieving his ''self-awakening'', at any time during a battle, the user can use it to manifest an aura around him. This aura is the manifestation of his own inner energy and self. However this aura is solely a manifestation of one's own inner power. To make it usable in battle, the user then uses his own chakra to make that aura take a physical form, which can be then manipulated for multiple different uses in battle. This aura usually retains it's own user's physical appearance, but can also change depending on the situation. It's very similar in appearance to the Bijuu chakra cloak.



    Examples of Usage:
    - Mimicking the user's movements [It can mimic the user's movements normally or can do it following an axis of symmetry (The user swings his whole body from right to left side performing a horizontal cut and the aura around him performs the exact same movement but from left to right, that way, attacking the opponent from two different sides)]
    - Confuse the opponent [Making the aura perform a serie of movements or 'fake' attacks so the user attacks the opponent while he is occupied/distracted with the aura; Send the aura towards the opponent attacking the opponent and then the user attacks the opponent himself while he blocks the aura, etc]
    - Shapeshifting [Grow in size as to help the user fighting stronger and bigger opponents; Stretching to reach different ranges; Making the aura manifest multiple arms or different weapons, etc]
    - Tangibility/Intangibility [The user uses his chakra to make the aura around him to take a physical form and manifest itself, being able to do physical damage. By manipulating his chakra to a lesser extent, the user can make the aura to only take a form and shape it, making it intangible; Make the aura perform a first fake (intangible) attack, which is merely a diversion, followed by a physical one, which can harm and damage the opponent)

    All these abilities can then be combined between themselves according to each situation in order to attain better results in battle


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    - Must have mastered NB's Cannon Taijutsu [Strong Fist]
    - While using this styke, the user has enough power to overpower in strength someone of the same stature as the user and to fight evenly with much bigger opponents
    Note: I didn't classified it under Nintaijutsu, though it may seem similar, so i could use it with my Samurai bio. Samurais can also use and shape their chakra to some extent as some were even using the Samurai Sabre Technique to turn their sword into a chainsaw
     
         

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±



    Haki

    Type: Taijutsu/Chakra control
    Background:
    Haki (覇気 Haki?, literally meaning "Ambition") is a mysterious form of chakra control that is found in every living being in the world. It is not that different from the normal senses. However, most people do not notice it or fail to awaken/control it. Broadly, there are two types of Haki that everyone can use, given the proper training; however, there is a third type that only a certain group of "chosen ones" are said to possess. In simple terms, Haki is an ability to release your charka around you to feel out movement and to enhance your taijutsu.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    Haki is separated into three categories, or "colors": Kenbunshoku Haki, which grants users a sixth sense of the world around them and limited precognitive abilities; Busoshoku Haki, which allows the user to use their chakra as armor to defend against attacks or to make their own attacks more potent; and Haoshoku Haki, a rare type of Haki only one in a million can use which grants the user the ability to overpower the will of others. Most people who can use Haki tend to have a type they're better at and as a result focus on that type. However, a person can improve their abilities with all the types of Haki, it just requires more work.


    Kenbunshoku Haki, is a form of Haki that allows the user to sense the presence of others, even if they are concealed from view. With enough skill, one can use this Haki to predict an opponent's moves shortly before they make them, thereby making the attack that much easier to evade. The way this works, is the user, using the skill of Haki, will release their chakra around them in an orb. In doing so, anything that passes into that orb of chakra the user will feel the shape, motion and direction of it, and be able to react to it. (This will be submitted as a jutsu. It's the idea that chakra control can be used more in tai)

    Busoshoku Haki allows the user to create a force similar to an invisible armor around themselves made of chakra. Similar to hyuga techniques, this allows the user to defend against attacks that would otherwise cause them harm. Only significant physical force can overcome this defense. The user creates a layer of chakra around their body as they enter into a taijutsu battle. In doing so, it acts as a armour for the user. This ability increases the power of the users attacks, but not only that, it allows them to hit stuff they wouldn't usually be able to. The layer of chakra will make it so they can hit things such as a person who's body is made of water, and still hurt them. Naturally this "invisible armor" can be used as a weapon to strike others with. It can be used to augment the user's own attacks, projected ahead of the user as pure brute force, or imbued in weapons to increase their effectiveness. Any attack enhanced by Busoshoku Haki hits immensely harder than it would normally be without it. Pure charka can make contact with other forms of chakra and so this form of taijutsu allows the user to hit elements. The chakra is shaped into the armour form making it equilant to elemental power. (This will be made a jutsu in the future, this is just a reference/example of the style itself)

    Haoshoku Haki is a rare form of Haki that cannot be attained through training and only one in a million people carry it. It is similar to that of killing intent in the way it effects a target. The user has an aura about them that gives off an intimidating pressence. The user will release their pressence into the area around them, based on their rank/status (sensei ect). The greater their pressence the stronger the haoshoku haki, if their pressence is a that much higher than their targets, their targets will collapse under preasure, which will be made of pure chakra. This type of Haki grants the user the ability to dominate the wills of others. The most common usage in the series so far is knocking those with weak wills unconscious. (To be made a jutsu, another example of the control of chakra)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    - The user must have effective chakra control
    - The real power of this style lies within the jutsu
    - Must be a taijutsu master to be able to use effectively.


    ±± Declined ±± This was already submitted by Jacoob Moore
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Hayaisochi 速い 手順 - Quick Step

    Type: Nin-Taijutsu - Hayaisochi

    Background: The Quick Step is a Nin-Taijutsu style developed in the early ages, the age of the samurai before ninja even existed thought that was the prototype style, which made use of enormous concentration on ones mevements and a clear vision, the samurai used it for close combat to accelerate their body movements thus combining it with the katana, this technique was a enhanced form of that style using the mighty wind element thus evolving into something greater than a regular martial arts style. A style designed to grant the user a great advantage over the opponents, mostly used in close range combat but also at medium, thought one could say it's more suited for close combat. This was developed by a ninja in sunagakure who possessed the swift release also known as Haiyaton, it made use of the lightning and wind element to enhance ones speed giving their body enormous acceleration, Quick Step made use of circular motion is an example of a body experiencing acceleration resulting in velocity of a constant magnitude but change of direction. In this case, because the direction of the object's or person's motion is constantly changing, being tangential to the circle, the object's velocity also changes, but its speed does not. This acceleration is directed toward the centre of the circle and takes the value which is truly astonishing. Thought the man who developed this technique only used the wind element to enhance it. Thought this jutsu could also be used by regular ninja who didn't possess the swift release as it made use of taijutsu and the wind element, the sunagakure ninja developed five different types of quick step levels and each one gained a unique name. To use this style; One must have mastered the Wind element, one must have it as his/her specialty, thus stating this in their biography and also one must have mastered regular Taijutsu to make use of Quick Step.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This special and unique type of Nin-Taijutsu also refered to as the Hayaisochi relies on the regular movements, swift motion of the user thus making use of these things to hit specific places on the opponents body. Quick step also makes the users' body go limp in order to avoid any attacks, and float like a piece of paper through the air the user stretches and moves in ways slime or sludge would move in order to avoid attacks, making small wind currents while moving, thus gliding through the air. Putting it in a simple way, the user makes use of the wind element to glide through the air it's like a withered leaf that glides down from a tree landing safely on the ground and avoid direct and physical blows the user uses the same concept so no harm will come to the users' body. The user has to observe their opponents movements to use this style it's like dancing thought, making use of your opponents body to guide your own while doing that the user can attack freely wherever he want's.

    Example: Link (skip to 1:40 in the video)

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -The user must have mastered the wind element.
    -The user must have mastered NB cannon taijutsu and must have started training in K' Taijutsu.
    -The user must state in their biography that he or she has wind as one of the users' specialty and Taijutsu.
    -The user mostly gains enhanced reflexes, almost non human.
    -The user gains a fair amount of speed when used in close combat, thus seemily they glide through the air making the enemy see a blur.


    ±± Declined ±± bolded part makes no sense and it has some similar "feel" to a technique from Demosthenes.
     
         
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    Naiteki Rosendo | Inner Alignment

    Type: Weapons Taijutsu / NinTaijutsu

    Background:
    The most basic tenant of weapons-based Taijutsu is that one must feel at one with one's weapon in order to use it effectively; the weapon and the self must be thought of as one. This fighting style was developed by Bishamon over the course of several years of fighting with the same custom weapon. Many ancient cultures considered great weapons to have souls of their own. Through this fighting style, the soul of the user and the soul of the weapon become one.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    By aligning the souls of the user and his weapon, this fighting style allows the user to wield their weapon with greatly increased speed, strength, and reflexes. The style allows the user to use his weapon to the fullest.

    The effects of this alignment are similar to the effects of the alignment between a Jinchuriki and a tailed beast. The weapon grants all of its strength to the user, enveloping him in an aura of spiritual energy. This spiritual energy aura, besides enhancing the user's speed, strength, and reflexes, extends the reach of the user's Taijutsu attacks in the same way that channeling chakra through a weapon does. This spiritual energy aura is not strong enough to block Ninjutsu techniques, and simply adds strength to the user's Taijutsu attacks. If the user decides to channel elemental chakra through his custom weapon, however, the spiritual aura around him will gain the characteristics of that particular elemental chakra, equivalent to a C-rank elemental Ninjutsu aura.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -If the user and his weapon ever become physically separating during the battle, this style cannot be used.
    -If the user and his weapon become physically separated while this style is being used, the custom weapon cannot be used for the rest of the battle and the user will not be able to use any jutsus for an entire turn.
    -If the user and his weapon become physically separated while this style is being used, the user will lose half of his remaining chakra and life.
    -If the custom weapon is destroyed while using this style, the user dies.
    -No lightning, water, or wind jutsus over S-rank while this style is used.


    ±± Declined ±± It would make sense if in narutoverse, weapons had souls. Unless you have a living CW (mimicking Samehada for example) this CFS makes little to no sense. However, if you have such a CW you need to base this on that and need to explain exactly what this shroud is and what will it achieve when used. I suggest providing one or two example of uses.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by -Kamishiro- View Post
    Card Magic || Majikku Kādo
    Type:Ninjutsu-Kenjutsu--Genjutsu

    Background: Once Lyon.. was traveling through a jungle and suddenly he noticed and heard a sound of humans screaming in addition to sounds of sharp weapons clashing,Lyon.. trance and standing on his place for a while then he decided to go their to see if someone needs his help.Lyon.. rushed towards the location where the sound came from he ran at great speed till he noticed human bodies,he standing in a distance and watched carefully he noticed a couple of youth boys attacking a girl which seems youth too.He saw the boys attacking the girl with kuanis and shurikens and swords and he saw the girl holding very unusual and weird kind of weapons it even didn't seem as weapon.He saw the girl defending against herself with the unusual weapons which looks like some pieces of papers however they had had the ability to cut like the kunais/shurikens and it was very fast.He saw the girl throwing paper by paper till she throw all the weapons that the boys had had ,and at sudden time she took a paper from her bag it seemed like the others however it had had very effective and powerful attack Lyon.. saw her throwing that card on the ground and suddenly a huge torrent of flame coming out of the card burning all of the boys.Lyon.. became afraid and he was thinking about running away till the unknown girl noticed his movements and called him.Lyon.. came to her and he was a little afraid but she talked to him normally and she seemed very funny girl and after long conversation between Lyon.. and the girl he knew that her name is Akiza and she was a master of genjutsu and sharingan he also knew that that pieces of papers are called "Cards" and it's unusual and effective weapon.Akiza was the only one knowing the style of the card magic however after a spar with Lyon.. she knew that he worthy to hold and learn that style.After months of training Lyon.. mastered the magic cards style and he knew all the attacks and all the secrets of that style and before he leaves Akiza to go home she gave him a special deck of cards and she said "This was my father's and i want you to have it to remember me."after that Lyon.. took the cards and continue his way to his home.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Magic Cards style is based on the hand's movements and the special cards and there are several abilities of that style :

    Genjutsu



    By placing or pointing the face up part of the cards towards the opponent the user is able to cast a genjutsu on the opponent without any hand seal,also the user is able to use cannon genjutsu technique through the cards.

    Summoning



    The user is able to use the sharpness of the cards to cut a part of his body while swinging/moving his hands on the air causing the cards to be mixed with blood then the user can or throw the cards on the ground summoning the animal or pointing/placing the face up part of the cards towards the opponent summoning the animal.

    Kenjutsu :

    The user is able to use the cards as sharp weapons that is just like kunais and shurikens.

    Ninjutsu :



    By infusing the user's elemental ninjutsu the user is able to turn the user's cards to one of the five based elements :

    Fire : By infusing the user's fire chakra with the cards the user is able to turn the cards into very sharp and fast torrents of fire that is able to burn the opponent upon touching his skin.

    Water : By infusing the user's water's chakra with the cardsthe user is abe to turn the cards into very fast torrents of water that is capable to soak the opponent and inflect damage to him

    Wind :
    By infusing the user's wind's chakra with the cards the user is able to turn the cards into very fast and slicing weapons that is able to cut to cut the opponent's skin and make very deep injured.

    Lightning : By infusing the user's lightning chakra with the cards the use is able to turn the cards from normal cards to cards that is surrounds by electricity that is able to shock the opponent upon touching him.

    Earth : By Infusing the user's earth chakra with the cards the user is able to turn the cards from normal paper to very hard and sharp pieces of earth.

    Kekkei Genkai : By Infusing the user's kg chakra with the cards the user is able to turn the cards into the user's kg effect/ability


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    Ranks :

    • The Wizard || Mahoutsukai
      The Wizard is the person who masters all the effects and secrets of the cards magic style and he is able to use all techniques without any restrictions.

    • The Joker || Odokemono
      The Joker is the person who is able to use all the effects of the cards magic style however he doesn't know the secrets of the cards magic style and he is second in command.

    • The Hunter || Karyuudo
      The Hunter is the person who have spent some time learning cards magic style and he can only infuse cards with elemental chakra and use them as weapons.

    • The Junior || Mmeshita
      The Junior is the beginer who have just began learning the effects and how to use and control the cards and he can only infuse elemental chakra with the cards.


    - Must master :
    • Genjutsu.
    • Kenjutsu.
    • All the five basic elements.
    • Must master the user's kg before can infusing his kg chakra with his cards.
    • and must learn the summoning technique.

    - To use the summoning ability the user must first sign a summoning contract and can only summon the animal that he signed it's contract.




    ±± Declined ±± This is a mess and a mix of so many things it barely know were to start. One thing i'll tell you, magic references need to disappear all together, period. Also, genjutsu just by placing cards? Nope, not going to thappen.

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    Resubmitting removed the genjutus and summoning parts and changed the name of the style and removed all the magic related parts ^_^


    The Way of Cards || Majikku Kādo
    Type:Ninjutsu-Kenjutsu--Genjutsu

    Background: Once Ahmed was traveling through a jungle and suddenly he noticed and heard a sound of humans screaming in addition to sounds of sharp weapons clashing,Ahmed trance and standing on his place for a while then he decided to go their to see if someone needs his help.Ahmed rushed towards the location where the sound came from he ran at great speed till he noticed human bodies,he standing in a distance and watched carefully he noticed a couple of youth boys attacking a girl which seems youth too.He saw the boys attacking the girl with kuanis and shurikens and swords and he saw the girl holding very unusual and weird kind of weapons it even didn't seem as weapon.He saw the girl defending against herself with the unusual weapons which looks like some pieces of papers however they had had the ability to cut like the kunais/shurikens and it was very fast.He saw the girl throwing paper by paper till she throw all the weapons that the boys had had ,and at sudden time she took a paper from her bag it seemed like the others however it had had very effective and powerful attack Ahmed saw her throwing that card on the ground and suddenly a huge torrent of flame coming out of the card burning all of the boys.Ahmed became afraid and he was thinking about running away till the unknown girl noticed his movements and called him.Ahmed came to her and he was a little afraid but she talked to him normally and she seemed very funny girl and after long conversation between Ahmed and the girl he knew that her name is Akiza and she was a master of genjutsu and sharingan he also knew that that pieces of papers are called "Cards" and it's unusual and effective weapon.Akiza was the only one knowing the style of the card magic however after a spar with Ahmed she knew that he worthy to hold and learn that style.After months of training Ahmed mastered the way of cards style and he knew all the attacks and all the secrets of that style and before he leaves Akiza to go home she gave him a special deck of cards and she said "This was my father's and i want you to have it to remember me."after that Ahmed took the cards and continue his way to his home.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Magic Cards style is based on the hand's movements and the special cards and there are several abilities of that style :


    Kenjutsu :

    The user is able to use the cards as sharp weapons that is just like kunais and shurikens.

    Ninjutsu :



    By infusing the user's elemental ninjutsu the user is able to turn the user's cards to one of the five based elements :

    Fire : By infusing the user's fire chakra with the cards the user is able to turn the cards into very sharp and fast torrents of fire that is able to burn the opponent upon touching his skin.

    Water : By infusing the user's water's chakra with the cardsthe user is abe to turn the cards into very fast torrents of water that is capable to soak the opponent and inflect damage to him

    Wind :
    By infusing the user's wind's chakra with the cards the user is able to turn the cards into very fast and slicing weapons that is able to cut to cut the opponent's skin and make very deep injured.

    Lightning : By infusing the user's lightning chakra with the cards the use is able to turn the cards from normal cards to cards that is surrounds by electricity that is able to shock the opponent upon touching him.

    Earth : By Infusing the user's earth chakra with the cards the user is able to turn the cards from normal paper to very hard and sharp pieces of earth.

    Kekkei Genkai : By Infusing the user's kg chakra with the cards the user is able to turn the cards into the user's kg effect/ability


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    Ranks :

    • The Wizard || Mahoutsukai
      The Wizard is the person who masters all the effects and secrets of the way of cards style and he is able to use all techniques without any restrictions.

    • The Joker || Odokemono
      The Joker is the person who is able to use all the effects of the way of cards style however he doesn't know the secrets of the way of cards style and he is second in command.

    • The Hunter || Karyuudo
      The Hunter is the person who have spent some time learning way of cards style and he can only infuse cards with elemental chakra and use them as weapons.

    • The Junior || Mmeshita
      The Junior is the beginner who have just began learning the effects and how to use and control the cards and he can only infuse elemental chakra with the cards.


    - Must master :
    • Kenjutsu.
    • All the five basic elements.
    • Must master the user's kg before can infusing his kg chakra with his cards.



    ±± Declined ±± Remove the KG infusion and provide 2 or 3 techniques please.
     
         
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    Shigure Souen Ryuu (Shower in Late Autumn, Blue Swallow Style) (時雨蒼燕流)

    Type:NinGen-Kenjutsu

    Background: Shigure Souen Ryuu, literally meaning Shower in Late autumn, Blue swallow style, is a sword style that has been passed down from generation to generation of adept swordsmen, the style is famed as “The invincible Sword style” Due to the fact, that each time the Shigure Souen Ryuu style was passed down, the new generation of students created a new form for the Shigure Souen, or updated the old forms, in essence this resulted in the sword style becoming eternal, and of course perfect as it constantly improved. When being passed down, the forms of The Shigure souen are only shown once, as it is thought that if the student is truly worthy, he will only need a single demonstration to go on to learn and then perfect it himself. Each user of the Shigure Souen style, receives a sword entitled Shigure Kintoki (shower in late autumn golden moment), that looks and appears to be a standard bamboo bokken, however when used in accordance with the Shigure Souen, the Bokken transforms into a excellent sword, it is said that when using the Shigure Souen style with Shigure Kintoki, the blade will never dull or break. It is through use of this blade, that the user learns if he has truly succeeded the style and created a new form, as if he hasn’t, while performing the technique the blade will remain a bokken. Shigure Souen is rumored to work by combining Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, and Kenjutsu into one. The main elements of Shigure Souen, are water and wind, and anything that may be formed by these two elements cohesion, for instance Ice, or rain and also mist. Both the wind and water elements represent a true sword to its finest. A being that is a necessity to protect life, but also has the power to cause mass destruction, Tranquility and Harmony, Anarchy and Mayhem. It is said that a true swordsman can only come in contact with the spirit of his blade, if he knows what his blade in essence stands for, gaining extreme power by doing so. This is something that a real practitioner and successor to this style will know. The Shigure Souen consists of various forms that are categorized as either offensive, defensive or in only some occasions both.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The forms of Shigure Souen revolve around the manipulation of water or wind with each sword swing, for instance rain/water droplets gathering on the blade of the sword, condensing and enhancing the blades sharpness, resistance , reach and several other less prominent, but in many cases more potent abilities, or even causing a pillar of water to burst from the ground, the pillar bobbing and weaving in accordance of how the sword is swung and controlled. The genjutsu part of Shigure Souen, comes from the capability to both release and create Mist with your sword, and understand what Mist represents. Mist of course representing concealment and lies, a endless swathe of fog, where you can’t determine what is real and what is a figment of the imagination, where lies are hidden within the truth and truth within the lies. The mist weaving a genjutsu that could be either simple or complex, the genjutsu working along with the kenjutsu aspect, and enhancing it. Of course in most situations the enemy wouldn’t see the mist being released as it would take its immediate genjutsu effect and is usually the beginnings of the genjutsu rather than the catalysts. For instance the user putting the enemy under a genjutsu where they envision a floating sword behind them about to strike them. Or where the enemies vision is altered, making them miscalculate how far away the enemies sword tip is from them.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -The Shigure Souen style requires the most heightened abilities of swordplay, as such standard Kenjutsu techniques power is increased by +10.
    -The Shigure Souen style most prominent attribute is tranquility and peace of mind, resultantly the user gains a heightened level of calmness, furthermore the users reaction time and speed increases in accordance of how adept they are with Shigure Souen.
    -The Shigure Souen style, can only be learnt by those who have mastered water and wind, and have begun tutelage in genjutsu, although some of the finer, more advanced Shigure Souen forms can be enhanced by using in conjunction with KG and special abilities, such as Rain or Ice.

    I have permission from Axle to make this. http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...=2089&u2=70437


    ±± Declined ±± don't resubmit. This is a mix of many existing CWs abilities, custom techniques and many more things.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Budokai arts
    Type:Chakra manipulation/Supplementary
    Background: This art was discovered by a shinobi of the name mangekyo byakugan when he was on top of a mountain meditating and molding his chakra he discovered a new type of fighting art and decided to call it Budokai as the name of his cat
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The user of this art gains great strength, resistance, and unique traits. (will be explained later on). This art requires great deal of courage, determination, and self sacrifice, but all this for a great reward the users gain a more powerful body, faster reaction time, and unique traits such as the following:
    #1-The users can gains increased chakra control over their first affinity elemental chakra increasing the power of techs up by one rank except for already high ranked jutsu’s(A, S, ad Forbidden)
    #2-The user gains resistance over D rank techniques of his first affinity, since a shroud of chakra covers there body.
    #3-The time needed to perform jutsu’s of his first affinity that require hand seals is either cut in half or increased in rank but with same number of hand seals.
    #4-Increased speed of one rank(you may delete this since I know reference to the speed chart isn’t preferable)
    #5- The advantage of the versus elemental affinity becomes negligible ex D rank water becomes = to D rank fire.
    The use of the abilities of this art is restricted to the mastery of the person over it:
    Student: The students of this art can only use the second ability of this art(#2)
    Specialist: The specialists of this art can use two out of the abilities except ability #4 and 5
    Expert: The experts of the art can use abilities #1,2, and 3.
    Master: The master of the art can use abilities #1,2,3, and 4
    Budokai: Only a few can become a Budokai of the art due to the immense training, and strain on the body that comes with the title. Budokais can use all abilities of the art.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -For the user of this art to use the abilities of it he/she must perform a series of 4 handseals.
    -The students will lose consciousness after the activation of the art after 3 posts, specialists after 4 posts, experts after 5 posts, and masters and budokais after 6 posts due to the strain on the body.
    -One can not use this art in two consecutive official battles, he/she can not use the art after a official battle he/she must restrain the use of the art after an official battle or they will immediately die(get there rights to use this art taken from them)
    -Must pass a test to begin using the art.(don’t worry mods I will judge them )
    -Must have reached C rank in at least three elements.
    -Must be at least S-Rank shinobi.
    -No custom clans, or cannon clans allowed, except Nara, Uzumaki, and yamanaka.
    -No other chakra manipulation CFW allowed on the bio.
    -If an individual puts the art as his specialty he does NOT get any perks from them.
    -No effects on custom elements.


    Will keep adding restriction if it gets declined hope not


    ±± Declined ±± Don't resubmit. This is not a CFS
     
         
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    (Kemuri kuwa-Seishi): Smoke Control Arts
    Type: Ninsha (Ninjutsu & Shape manipulation)
    Background:
    The smoke full control style was found in a cave by Aizen in his training in the mountains of kumogakure, he found out that they were fully developed by an acient monk named Smokerjack, when he found the info and the scroll on how to learn this style he stayed in the mountains learning this style and mastered it in 11 months.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    It functions by having the user use shape manipulation with his chakra and with use of smoke to be able to make parts of his body, and when fully mastered up to the whole body, change form into smoke, and be able to simply have objects thrown at him such as kunai's to pass through him, dealing no damage, however when the whole body is changed into smoke properties it can't last much on it, with this the user can use this style as a form of defence, and maybe even offensive purposes if used correctly. If inserting a good amount of chakra into the body part that is being used as smoke the user can strike the opponent with the smoke, by channeling chakra into it as i have stated already.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - To use Smoke Control Arts one must have training with the current master of the Style who is Aizen..
    - When a body part is changed into smoke nothing can touch it, however the use can't grab anything either, unless he turns the body part back into it's original properties.
    - One must have started Smoke training to learn Smoke Control Arts Style.
    - One must have mastered Smoke, to use smoke control on the entire body.
    - No one besides Aizen.. may teach Smoke Control Arts Fighting Style.


    ±± Declined ±± How is this a CFS? Transforming your body into smoke would require a CE. Smoke ninjutsu is used by using chakra to manipulate and control existing smoke or creating one from wrist launchers or other weaponry. Transforming your body into smoke requires something that doesn't exist: Smoke Release.
     
         
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    Shaolin Kung Fu
    Type:Kentaijutsu
    Background:
    Kung fu - ‘kung’ meaning ‘energy’ and ‘fu’ meaning ‘time’ - is a traditional martial art whose recorded history dates back before the first ninja world war, The man credited with introducing martial arts is said to be a monk known as Bodhidarma (who is also known as Tamo).

    Tamo had devised a set of '18 movement exercises', which are also known as the '18 hands exercises'; he taught these to his disciples in the temple, believing that the development of a strong body would prevent the disciples from falling asleep during meditation.

    The '18 movement exercises' had their origin in techniques formed and developed in the Mountains; they were designed in such a way that daily practice of these techniques would strengthen and improve the health of the disciples.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The power of the kung fu practitioner lay in his ability to defend himself against impossible odds and situations. After years of the most diligent practice, these ninjas became more than merely adept at the ways of survival. But the initial acceptance to be one of the chosen few was difficult.

    As academy students, childrens wanting to be ninjas were made to do the most menial and difficult work related to the upkeep of the temple. Their sincerity and ability to keep the secrets of the order were severely tested for years before the finer aspects of the order were revealed to them. But, upon being accepted by the elders of the temple, his or her entry into kung fu was to open a whole new world. The student would work long hours training mind and body to work together in a coordinated effort. He would learn the principles of combat, the way of the Tao, and together they would ensure his way to peace.

    One would be taught initially the first basic fist sets, the prearranged forms which simulated multiple attacks. These in turn became more complex as the student advanced, while he would simultaneously be learning the way of Taoism.

    Upon completion of the student stage, one became a disciple who would be taught the higher secrets of the arts and philosophies. Weapons of all descriptions would become familiar to him as weapons of attack and defense. One would perfect his movements to coincide with his breathing. One's mind would meld into the realm of meditation known as mindlessness. And one would learn to harness chakra.

    Essential to movements in kung fu are chakra-controlled actions. Compare the movements of a normal taijutsu user and a kung fu practitioner, and the differences are at once obvious. The taijutsu moves deliberately, forcefully, each move unique and distinct from each other move. He punches linearly, kicks in a straight line, and keeps his body as rigid as iron. The Kung Fu artist, on the other hand, is smooth and fluid in motion, allowing several moves to meld imperceptibly into one long, graceful action.

    Most Common Weapons being used in Shaolin Kung Fu

    Shaolin Halberd
    Shaolin Stick/Staff
    Shaolin Broadsword
    Shaolin Straightsword
    Shaolin Nine Section Chain/Whi
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    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu is adept to both hand to hand combat and use of weapons.
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu gain the ability think clearly and to be calm yet alert.
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu gain the ability to react quickly, be more flexible, endure more physical damage, and to concentrate without mental fatigue.

    -Shaolin Kung Fu requires more stamina than normal taijutsu as the movements are more strainuous than other techs.
    -Shaolin Kung Fu focuses on precise swift strikes rather than brute physical strength giving its attacks less damage.
    -Shaolin Kung Fu requires 5 stages of training to master to fully use all its ability.

    ~Declined~ This can be achieved by free-form Taijutsu or by submitting Taijutsu customs in the CJ thread.
    If you want to utilize those weapons stated above then simply include them in your biography.
    Shaolin Kung Fu
    Type:KenTaijutsu
    Background:
    Kung fu - ‘kung’ meaning ‘energy’ and ‘fu’ meaning ‘time’ - is a traditional martial art whose recorded history dates back before the first ninja world war, The man credited with introducing martial arts is said to be a monk known as Bodhidarma (who is also known as Tamo).

    Tamo had devised a set of '18 movement exercises', which are also known as the '18 hands exercises'; he taught these to his disciples in the temple, believing that the development of a strong body would prevent the disciples from falling asleep during meditation.

    The '18 movement exercises' had their origin in techniques formed and developed in the Mountains; they were designed in such a way that daily practice of these techniques would strengthen and improve the health of the disciples.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The power of the kung fu practitioner lay in his ability to defend himself against impossible odds and situations. After years of the most diligent practice, these ninjas became more than merely adept at the ways of survival. But the initial acceptance to be one of the chosen few was difficult.

    As academy students, childrens wanting to be shaolin ninjas were made to do the most menial and difficult work related to the upkeep of the temple. Their sincerity and ability to keep the secrets of the order were severely tested for years before the finer aspects of the order were revealed to them. But, upon being accepted by the elders of the temple, his or her entry into kung fu was to open a whole new world. The student would work long hours training mind and body to work together in a coordinated effort. He would learn the principles of combat, the way of the Tao, and together they would ensure his way to peace.

    One would be taught initially the first basic fist sets, the prearranged forms which simulated multiple attacks. These in turn became more complex as the student advanced, while he would simultaneously be learning the way of Taoism.

    Upon completion of the student stage, one became a disciple who would be taught the advance techniques of the arts. Weapons of all descriptions would become familiar to him/her as s/he will be taught to handle all types of weapons. And one would learn to harness chakra.

    Upon completion of the disciple stage, one became a master who would be taught the higher secrets of the arts. Weapon mastery will be taught and how to use weapons as a part of the body. One would perfect his movements to coincide with his breathing. One's mind would meld into the realm of meditation known as mindlessness. Masters’ attacks are faster than those of the disciple and normal taijutsu users.

    Essential to movements in kung fu are chakra-controlled actions. Compare the movements of a normal taijutsu user and a kung fu practitioner, and the differences are at once obvious. The taijutsu moves deliberately, forcefully, each move unique and distinct from each other move. He punches linearly, kicks in a straight line, and keeps his body as rigid as iron. The Kung Fu artist, on the other hand, is smooth and fluid in motion, allowing several moves to meld imperceptibly into one long, graceful action.

    Break down of Rank and Technique Usage
    Student – Will be able to use basic attacks. Will be able to use up to B-rank techniques. Needs one training session.
    Disciple – Will gain familiarity with any weapon. Will be able to use up to A-rank techniques. Needs three training sessions.
    Master – Will gain mastery of weapon usage and will be able to use all techniques. Will be able to use up to F-rank techniques. Needs five training sessions.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu is adept to both hand to hand combat and use of weapons.
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu gain the ability think clearly and to be calm yet alert.
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu gain the ability to react quickly, be more flexible, endure more physical damage, and to concentrate without mental fatigue.
    -Masters of Shaolin Kung Fu have faster attacks than normal taijutsu users.

    -Shaolin Kung Fu requires more stamina than normal taijutsu as the movements are more strainuous than other techs.
    -Shaolin Kung Fu focuses on precise swift strikes rather than brute physical strength giving its attacks less damage.
    -Shaolin Kung Fu requires 5 stages of training to master to fully use all its ability.
    -To be a student one must atleast have trained in basic taijutsu.
    -To be a master one must have mastered basic taijutsu.



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    Tegatana Way

    Type: KenTaijutsu

    Background: A mysterius clan of elite Kenjutsu masters once remarked that they were too vulnerable in case they got disarmed... So, they practiced chakra manipulation, till they discovered the legendary Tegatana No Taijutsu. Basically, the practitioner hardens his lower arm through training and chakra manipulation, and uses it as a katana, imitating the movements he would do with a real Katana.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The first step in conquiring this style, is learning to compress all the muscles of the lower arm to a maximum level, making the arm very hard. To do so, the user extends his 5 fingers. As soon as this is archived, the user will manipulate his normal chakra flow, and release it around his lower arm, like an invisible glove, that will work as a shell, to protect the lower arm. Then, the user will be able to use his hand as a regular katana, were the outer hand is the cuting part, the fingers is the edge and the elbow is used to replace handle strikes. The higher the level of the practitioner, the more potent is his power. Here are the levels of the practitioners:

    Tegatana Way Practitioner:
    In this first step, the practitioner has learned to harden his lower arm, and, by doing so, he/she can dodge regular (non chakra enhanced/too strong/too heavy) weapon strikes with his bare arm. He/she can also strike with the hand, like a katana, but, due to unexperiance, the strike cannot pierce or cut the opponet. It is more like a club than a katana. It needs one training seminar to archive this level.

    Tegata Way Adept:
    At this level, the Practitioner can use his/her hand like a regular katana, and is fully able to cut or pierce his/her opponet with his bare hand, as long as he has activated it, ofcource. One can archive this level after a second training seminar.

    Tegatana Way Duelist:
    At this level, the Practitioner can use both his/her hands as regular katanas. This is archived by a third training seminar.

    Tegatana Way Master:
    After the Fourth training seminar, the practitioner will be able to enhance his tegatana with elements, like a regular Katana (only Lighting/Wind and Earth for further hardening, and only if they have the proper training to do so for each element). This is the final level one can archive by training.

    Tegatana Way Sage:
    Only 3 people can be Tegatana sages at any given time, and have to chose the element they will specialise in. Only the founder of the style can name a Sage. The sages are the following:

    Tegatana Sage of Raiton:
    This Sage has the maximum potential in piercing techniques, as well as the ability to extend the lighting enhanced tegatana for up to 3 meters lenghth almost instantly. Must have mastered Raiton.

    Tegatana Sage of Futon:
    This Sage has the maximum potential in slicing techniques, as well as the ability to send slicing winds to the opponet. Must have mastered Futon.

    Tegatana Sage of Doton:
    This sage has the maximum defence, as the tegatana can be covered with earth and hardened, making a blade of a maximum width of 50cm. Must have mastered Doton.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    -Activation of the tegatana takes some time. The time required depends on the level of the user:
    A) Practitioner: about 4 seconds
    B) Adept: about 3 seconds
    C) Duelist: about 2 seconds
    D) Master: about 1 seconds + 1 second to elementaly enhance the Tegatana
    E) Sage: instantly + 1 second to elementaly enhance the Tegatana

    -Wile the Tegatana is activated, the user cannot use any jutsu, except jutsu used to enhance weapons (and only if the user is Master level or higher). An exception to this rule is if one is a Tegatana Sage, so he can use any jutsu of the element he is a Sage of, as long as it does not require any handseals.

    -A Tegatana user can also wield a sword, wile activating his Tegatana. This will make the sword like an extention of his tegatana.

    -Can only be taught by a Tegatana Sage.

    -To begin training in this, one must be of at least jonin level. For the Duelist level, one must be of s-class level. Finally, to master it, one must be of at least Sannin level.


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    Dance of the Human Cocoon (Buyou no Jinteki Mayu)
    Type: Nintaijutsu
    Background: This form of fighting pertains to taijutsu-based techniques that are enhanced/altered with the use of kikaichū (parasitic insects used by the Aburame Clan). As such, Buyou no Jinteki Mayu can only be performed and taught to by members of the Aburame Clan; however only the most skilled and "enlightened" individuals are chosen to be taught this style and even fewer have mastered it.

    The Aburame Clan was one of the first clans to hold a position within Konohagakure and still to this day remains as one of the four noble clans of the Leaf. However, despite this, some members of the clan were particularly envious of their counterparts' taijutsu prowess (namely the Akimichi and Hyūga) and secretly yearned for such strength and elegance respectively. Put simply, some members of the Aburame Clan felt that they could not compete in a hand-to-hand confrontation with the Akimichi or the Hyūga; they felt inferior and so, over the course of several decades, a style of taijutsu was developed that was unique to the Aburame Clan which in a way mimicked or allowed practitioners to counter the Akimichi's strength or the Hyūga's unique style. And thus Buyou no Jinteki Mayu was born which sometimes is loosely referred to as Kikaichu Kumite (Destruction Bug Kata).

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: This style of taijutsu is based on the user releasing their kikaichū out of their body and using the insects to coat/surround/cover the user's body. Being living, chakra-feeding (and chakra-containing) organisms this layer of kikaichū surrounding the user's body essentially encapsulates the user in an aura of chakra (chakra that is the user's since their kikaichū live and breed inside the user's body and within his chakra system, and most importantly feed on his chakra). This kikaichū "coat" (note, from now on this layer of kikaichū surrounding the user's body will be referred as the "coat") in itself already encapsulates the user in an aura of chakra but practitioners can expand this aura by manipulating their kikaichū to also release additional chakra from their bodies. By utilising this aura, the user can extend the range and force of their physical attacks. Strikes that seemingly or would normally miss will actually make contact with the target. And due to the highly chakra-infused nature of these strikes in addition to the sudden increase in size of the user's limbs, strikes using this style are typically more destructive compared to regular strong fist techniques. Power and strength which rivals that of the Akimichi.

    The concept behind the kikaichū "coat" is an integral fundamental of this style because it allows the user's limbs to have further reach/range and power. However, as mentioned earlier, skilled users of this style can further extend this range/reach by manipulating their kikaichū to release chakra. This can be done in one of two ways: gradually and continuously (soft) or rapidly and suddenly (hard).
    • If the soft technique is employed, the kikaichū surrounding the user's body release a gradual and continual "cloud" or aura of chakra out from their bodies which provides the user's limbs to have increased reach/range (on top of the increased range already provided by the kikaichū "coat" i.e. by the increase volume occupied by the kikaichū surrounding the user's body). This essentially maximizes the size of the user's limbs to the fullest extent possible. Also, this aura/cloud of chakra is so dense that it is visible even to the naked eye.
    • If the hard technique is employed, the kikaichū surrounding the user's body release a rapid and sudden burst of chakra on the user's command. What this means is that the user will envelop himself with his kikaichū "coat" (which normally would have no chakra being released by the kikaichū) and will proceed to strike the target then at his will or command, a burst of chakra will be released from a certain part of his limb. This chakra burst can not be inserted into the target and is merely used to blast/discharge onto the target, dealing direct external damage, even if his strike seemed to miss the target initially.

    The kikaichū "coat", being composed of living, chakra-feeding organisms also allows the user to reject foreign chakra or, in other words, shields the user from chakra being inserted into him; from Hyūga techniques for example (with reason of course, a technique of significant power can overpower the kikaichū "coat" and "pierce" into the user's body). How is this possible? In one of two ways. One, if the soft technique is used the aura/cloud of chakra surrounding the user shields the user from foreign chakra (although it can be pierced through by a sufficiently powerful technique as aforementioned). Or, by using just the regular, non-chakra emitting kikaichū "coat" by which the foreign chakra is absorbed by the kikaichū themselves (again, they can be overwhelmed by a sufficiently powerful technique - they can only absorb so much). The user's kikaichū can recognize and then absorb foreign chakra because the bugs have spent all their lives inside the user so they would be well accustomed to the user's chakra and can easily recognize "different" or foreign chakra. To do this however, requires intense training and requires the user to literally be "at one" with his kikaichū, so in tuned and in sync with one another that the user has, in a sense, become enlightened.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    - Must be an Aburame user to learn.
    - Must be at least Kage rank to learn.
    - Due to the high amount of chakra control required, users must have mastered basic 5 elemental ninjutsu.
    - No lightning or fire jutsus over S-rank while this style is used.
    - No Kaito's taijutsu which uses lightning or fire while this style is used.
    - Users of this style generally have greater chakra control.
    - Users of this style can use Aburame techniques much faster and gain +10 damage.
    - Techniques of this style deal more power than that of Strong Fist.
    - Users of this style are fitter and stronger than Strong Fist users.
    - Users of this style only have average speed and agility compared to Strong Fist users.
    - Masters of this style are exceptionally skilled with Aburame techniques.


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    ±± Opened once more ±±

    I edited the first post. You are now required to add 2 or 3 examples (techniques) of your style so its easier to understand what you are trying to accomplish with it.

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    Phoenix Blood Fist ‡ Fenikkusu Chishio-Ken


    Type: Taijutsu

    Background:

    Swordsmen have always been feared and respected throughout the ages due to their skill with the sword. It's after all a 'man's romance', however this created a problem. If the swordsman doesn't have a sword with him, his skills with it are useless. With other words there's a big flaw in the fighting style of a swordsman. A long time ago an infamous swordsman, who was named the one of the Abyssal Sword, came to this same realization. He used all the knowledge he had obtained during his life long travels to create a fighting style which allowed the user to fight armed opponents completely barehanded. This fighting style was since then passed down to only one person in each generation, the strongest swordsman of the era, all the way down to Caliburn in the current time.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The fighting style consists of the combination of two aspects, simplified as the Sword and the Shield.

    The Sword:

    The first phenomona, the Sword, is influenced by Chinese kingfu (a combination of Baguazhang, Northern Shaolin, Northern Seven Star Praying Mantis, Xing Yi and Southern Dragon Style) and Karate and is centered around the flow of blood in a human body. When you rotate your arm vertically or swing it from the left to the right quickly, you would notice that your blood is automatically pumped into your hands due to the centrifugal force. Several Chinese fighting styles discovered this useful trait and tried to utilize it so that it would benefit them as pumping blood into the hands and feet would make them as hard as steel, while still maintaining the flexibility of the body. By going deeper in on this ability, the nameless swordsman was able to find a way to use it to its fullest potential.

    The training starts with basic rotational movements of the arms and legs, trying to understand the feeling of getting blood pushed away naturally to the desired place. After that the user needs to gain a calm mind by meditating endlessly so that eventually he starts to feel his own blood flow throughout his body and especially in his muscles. As a result he creates an awareness of this flow and can manipulate it to a certain extent, mainly by contracting and resting his muscles. This way he can concentrate enough blood in the desired areas. This leads to the third and final step of the training and that is that the user can achieve the same results rotating would give, only without rotating, just by controlling the blood flow and contradicting/resting the muscles. The third step is only something only masters of the style can achieve. Even though rotation and dynamic movements are by then not required anymore, they still remain very helpful for them and are an important part of this fighting style. Also by drinking a small amount of iron dust each day, the user can increase the amount of iron in his blood, making it even more efficient.

    In practice this results in the user's body becoming a bladed weapon on itself:

    ➔ By twisting your wrist your arm could become an axe or even a hook used to grapple the opponent and flip him over:
    ➔ Swinging the palm downwards or launch a fist would make it practically a hammer:

    ➔ Thrusting your arm forwards with straight fingers would be just like the blade of a spear or lance:
    ➔ By stabbing and rotating your arm you could create a drill:
    ➔ Individual fingers can become daggers, even the infamous two-fingered-stab-opponents-eyes-out-move could be used:
    ➔ Two fingers can even be used as a scizor.

    ➔ Swinging your arm downwards with straight fingers would be the same as swinging a sword down:

    ➔ By smashing both your palms against the side of the opponent's head you could crush his skull like with 2 hammers.

    ➔ By spreading your fingers and making a clawing movement you could gash the opponent open like a tiger with extra long and sharp claws that could even rip out entire organs.

    ➔ By sweeping your arm and tightening/loosening your muscles at certain times, you could transform your arm into a whip or flail. Dislocating the arm joints can increase the efficiency and range of this.

    ➔ Similar attacks can be preformed with the feet, like bringing your knee up to your chest and then stomp on the ground, your foot could even crush the ground.


    As you can see there is a strong emphasis on the hands, wrists, arms, feet, ankles and legs. The reason being that these are the places in the human body where it's the easiest to concentrate your blood. This is where inexperienced users also start with and this can only be done for a limited amount of time, more precise as long as there is momentum (hence why a continuous flux of movements is needed), however masters can also focus their blood in other places and for a longer period of time without the requirement of continuous movement, making it also possible to use the Sword in a defensive way like an armor:

    ➔ By focusing blood into a hand, it can catch swords between two fingers or even grabbing it bare handedly like a steel gauntlet.

    ➔ By focusing blood into an entire arm, it can deflect weapons on itself like a steel arm.

    ➔ By focusing blood into the abdominal muscles and/or chest, the frontal part practically becomes a steel chest plate.

    ➔ Overall this way the user can transform parts of his body into a steel armor.


    The most important result of the Sword is that the entire body can be transformed into a weapon that can fight on equal grounds with armed opponents. However there is one weakness and that is that no matter how proficient one is at concentrating and controlling the blood flow, he can't create blood nor is it physically possible to cover every part of the body at the same time due to the limited amount of blood. Logically when you focus more blood into one part of the body, another will have less. To cover for that weakness, the nameless swordsman created the Shield.


    The Shield:

    The Shield is based around what the swordsman called the Seikūken, which could be considered similar to a kekkai or barrier. It revolves around the space surrounding you. The Seikuken is a combat method that involves controlling the entire radius within one's arm length, creating a metaphorical spherical shield around oneself and everything within that space is 'his' territory. Weapon users can extend the range to several feet around them with the additional length of their weapons.

    In Naruto you have got the distinction of Strong Fist and Gentle Fist users. Similar like that the swordsman follows the distinction of Dou and Sei users. Dou users use explosive power to fight and have often a more aggressive style like Lee or Gai, while Sei users are calm and use their spirit as a means to fight. Sei users aren't explosive nor aggressive, but calm and composed, like Neji, and this latter is what allows them to access the Seikuken as it can only be erected with a calm mind. If one is not calm, it would be near impossible for him or her to erect the Seikūken unless it would be a master that could do it on instinct.

    By meditating, and especially breath control, the user becomes aware of his Seikuken and as a result knows whenever someone or something enters it, even if it's from the back in a dead spot. Because of this he can prepare himself to counter the attack. Masters are even able to see the Seikuken of other people, meaning the reach of their attacks, and can act accordingly. In a certain way it can be compared to the Sharingan that can predict how a person is going to move based on the movements of the body. The Seikuken allows the user to prepare on an attack based on how it's moving through the Seikuken. The classical training method to learn the Seikuken is to stand motionless still in a river and whenever a fish swims into the Seikuken, scoop him out by predicting how it's going to move next in this space.





    Final Results:

    The Sword, referring to the control of the bloodflow, can transform parts of the body into weapons and armor even surpassing steel, but makes other parts vulnerable. The Shield, the Seikuken, covers that weakness as it allows the user to prepare for incoming attacks. These two combined form an efficient combo and results in the last aspect of this fighting style, namely counter attacks.

    The user already learned to contract his muscles in a special way to control his blood, likewise that gives rise to the ability to loosen their muscles completely. Just like contracting the muscles to push blood, by relaxing all of them at the same time, the user can absorb impacts by spreading it all over the body and then redirect their momentum into a counter attack. This sounds in theory very simple, but is in reality extremely hard and can only be achieved by people who have achieved the Seikuken by meditation.


    On the exact moment an attack would hit the user, for which he uses the Seikuken to anticipate it, he instantly relaxes his muscles. How many muscles depends on the strength of the attack. The stronger it is, the more muscles need to be relaxed to absorb the impact, eventually even going so far to relax them all. The damage inflicted by an attack not only depends on the power of the attack, but also on the resistance of the receiver. That resistance is rendered to zero by relaxing the muscles for an instant on the exact point of impact, absorbing the impact with the body. After that the user contracts his muscles again and uses the absorbed momentum of the attack to redirect its power towards the attacker. This is also why rotational and agile movements remain important for the user even if he can control his blood flow without it as it's easier to redirect the momentum of an attack by first following the direction in which the momentum originally went and then diverting it. Then combining it with the concentrated flow of blood the user can launch a devastating counter attack as, which is enough to decapitate a person, slice them in half, grabbing swords bare handed and even to crush rock and steel as even though it's as strong as steel itself, the body still maintains its original flexibility.

    The final result is that this fighting style is a very dynamic, agile one that both has a strong offense and defense. The training results in the user having a very flexible and agile body accompanied by a very large stamina to keep the movements going. Because momentum and rotation are very important, a previous move provides momentum for the next one (whether it be from the user or opponent) and the way how the user moves often depends on how the opponent moves, creating the ideal counters for it.

    This style is based on a mix of Bacchus' fighting style from the manga Fairy Tail (mainly the rotational movements and usage of palms of your hand), the airbenders from the cartoon The Last Airbender (agile movements, using the opponents energy against them), Ikki from the manga Air Gear (relaxing the muscles to absorb impacts), Natsu Tanimoto, Shirahama Kenichi and Siegfried from the manga History's Strongest Disciple (controlling of the blood flow, the Seikuken and rotational counter attacks with a very flexible body), Tetsuhito Kagiroi from the manga Tenjou Tenge (who gained the ability of to use iron blood naturally because his ancestors drank iron dust each day) and the Quincies from Bleach (who used something called blut vene as a protection).




    Usage Examples:

    (Fenikkusu Chishio-Ken: Fenikkusu no Chi Uroko) - Phoenix Blood Fist: Phoenix Blood Scales -

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive/Defensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user concentrates his blood somewhere in his body depending on which action he wants to preform. By focusing it for instance in his arm he can use that arm defensive to block an incoming attack or he can just use it to increase the damage of his own attacks. By focusing it in his abdomen he can create a shield to protect that area. The size of the area where blood is concentrated can vary, though it can be from just one finger to max half the body.

    (Fenikkusu Chishio-Ken: Kishin) - Phoenix Blood Fist: Demon Spearwood -

    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user stabs the opponent consecutively with his hand and arm like the thrusts of a spear. Normally done with a single hand, though it be done with both at the same time. Also the user can twist his hand making it into a hook or axe or to change the direction of the attack. By dislocating the joint it can also be turned into a whip that instead of stabbing, well whips.


    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    Restrictions:

    • The style can only be taught by Caliburn.
    • Gates users can't use this style in the same bio as 8IG because it requires a calm state of mind, which is the exact opposite of the 8IG, the epitome of Strong Fist and Dou.
    • The user needs to have mastered basic taijutsu and know Kaito's Taijutsu, excluding the restricted moves.
    • The user needs to be of S-Class rank.


    Effects:

    • The damage of the user's physical attacks is increased exponentially due to them being practically real weapons and armor, making it easy to decapitate people, smash the ground, crush rocks and bones and even metal itself can be destroyed. Being hit by a fist would be even worse than being hit by a hammer. On the other hand the defense could be compared to that of being an armor, making it possible to block swords and other weapons bare-handed. Because in the end it's still just normal blood, the body keeps its flexibility and thus can't be 'broken' like sword would break (though logically the user can still be harmed).
    • The user's speed itself doesn't really increase, what in fact happens is that simply the intervals between receiving an attack and launching and attack and launching severals attack consecutively, is decreased to the absolute minimum. This results in the user gaining increased reflexes (3x) to keep that interval so low.
    • The user gains a large amount of stamina and endurance which is needed to keep up the flux of the attack.
    • The user's body becomes incredibly flexible and agile, making it even possible to easy dislocate joints without harm.
    • The user's body becomes very resilient against impacts and shockwaves, redirecting their energy, however that is mainly effective against short impacts and way less against long ones (for the simple fact that if you keep your muscles relaxed too long, you will fall).



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    Caliburn, our loyal member, submitted on the 15th of June 2012 a request for a Patent on the Custom Fighting Style Phoenix Blood Fist (Fenikkusu Chishio-Ken). I, Scorps of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, Rei and Zise, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Fenikkusu Chishio-Ken
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    {Nunchaku-Bokushingu}Nunch-Boxing
    Type:Taijutsu,Nunchuck Style
    Background:Nunch-Boxing is a weapon-Taijutsu based style created by XxFallenUchihaxX..Watching many styles of field combat,weapon usage made FallenUchiha very interested and created this style himself.After obtaining his first Nunchucks Fallen began training with them allowing his chakra to flow within the Nunchucks and mixing his Taijutsu and created thd Nunch-Boxing style.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:This style is the involvement of Nunchucks and Taijutsu using the Nunchucks to add extra help while punching and kicking the enemy in short range.In this style the user can fuse there elemental chakra into the Nunchucks to adding more power,speed and durability of the Nunchucks
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Masters if the style can fight with 2 pairs of Nunchucks 2x faster along with accurate strikes-Bio must have at least 1 pair of Nunchucks
    -Has to be taught by a Nunch-Boxing Master
    -Must know basic Taijutsu to learn this style
    Samples:
    Triple *Nunchuck Strike
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:40
    Description:The user first grabs the enemy at does 2 to palm strikes to the foes jaw.Then the user spins his Nunchucks at high speed and does a strike to the opponent with both handles of the Nunchuck.

    Crazy Dragon
    Type:Offensive
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra:N/A
    Damage:40
    Description:The user first starts off swinging the Nunchucks in a few random directions then runs at the opponent and does a spinning heel kick and then slams the nunchuck the opponents jaw causing it to break on impact

    Nunch-Boxing Arts:Nunchuck Infusion.
    Type:Supplementary,Offensive
    Rank:A
    Range:Short*
    Chakra:30(-per turn active)
    Damage:60
    Description:The user add there chakra into the Nunchucks and gains effects based on the element
    Lighting:When infused the nunchucks sound like lighting crackles in the sky.The chakra makes the Nunchucks very sharp being able to cut though trees and rocks
    Fire:The user holds one handle and infuses chakra into there Nunchucks and cause the un held handle to turn on fire and can burn the enemy apon impact
    Wind:With wind chakra it increases the freedom flow and makes it easier to maneuver the Nunchucks
    -Can only be used by a Nunch-Boxing Master-


    Edit if possible to approve

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Quote Originally Posted by ~CoOkie Monster~ View Post

    Ansatsu Kaiji Assassination Delight
    Type: NinTaijutsu
    Background:


    Crimson Viper, The woman who developed Ansatsu Kaiji. C.Viper, was an Assassin who worked for an organization similar to Anbu Root. As the years past, Viper started finding weaknesses in her various targets. She started developing this style and then passed it on to her daughter. Her Daughter later Married Patrick Jane. Viper's Daughter then taught Jane the style before her sad murder.

    Jane then further developed Ansatsu Kaiji through his determination to avenge his wife and child.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:



    Ikazuchi Nakkuru | Thunder Knuckle


    Developed by C.Viper. She channeled her lightning chakra through to her hand as she thrusts herself forward and channeled her lightning chakra in to her target to paralyze them to stop them from shouting out or reacting as the Lightning would shock their nervous system.

    Nenshou Handou | Burning Kick


    Developed by C.Viper. This was normally the follow up technique C.Viper used during her assassinations. After Ikazuchi Nakkuru, Viper would turn around immediatly and channel her fire chakra through her foot and do a spinning. As her foot rises, she releases the chakra and burns her target from groin all the way up leaving them burned.

    Seismic Kanadzuchi | Seismic Hammer


    Developed by C.Viper. This was normally a technique of Viper where she would target the target's house (Or building of residence) and channel Lightning chakra through the ground and the chakra would gather in an area then burst causing the foundations of the building to crumble (Normally causing the building to collapse). When used on an opponent (Outside of structure) the burst would cause the target to be blasted in the air slightly shocked.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -User has to master Lightning | Fire | Earth
    -User must be Sannin Ranked
    -Masters of this style have better Lightning and Fire chakra control
    -Masters of this style will have better accuracy with Fire and Lightning techniques
    -Can only be taught By ~CoOkie Monster~


    ±± Declined ±± You failed to explain the basic inner working of this style in a proper manner. Is it simply combining Fire and lightning techniques into your taijutsu? You need to work this out a lot.
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    Ansatsu Kaiji Assassination Delight
    Type: NinTaijutsu
    Background:


    Crimson Viper, The woman who developed Ansatsu Kaiji. C.Viper, was an Assassin who worked for an organization similar to Anbu Root. As the years past, Viper started finding weaknesses in her various targets. She started developing this style and then passed it on to her daughter. Her Daughter later Married Patrick Jane. Viper's Daughter then taught Jane the style before her sad murder.

    Jane then further developed Ansatsu Kaiji through his determination to avenge his wife and child.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The inner workings of the style is the use of lightning and fire chakra channeled through the limbs. Lightning chakra normally used to either shock (Paralyze) or send waves through the earth to cause the opponent to be launched in to the air followed by a damage causing attack of Fire chakra (Burning). If you take chakra out of the equation, the fighting moves would look similar to capoeira style attacks (Either punch of kick followed by a singing punch or kick).


    3 techniques


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    Ikazuchi Nakkuru | Thunder Knuckle


    Developed by C.Viper. She channeled her lightning chakra through to her hand as she thrusts herself forward and channeled her lightning chakra in to her target to paralyze them to stop them from shouting out or reacting as the Lightning would shock their nervous system.

    Nenshou Handou | Burning Kick


    Developed by C.Viper. This was normally the follow up technique C.Viper used during her assassinations. After Ikazuchi Nakkuru, Viper would turn around immediatly and channel her fire chakra through her foot and do a spinning. As her foot rises, she releases the chakra and burns her target from groin all the way up leaving them burned.

    Seismic Kanadzuchi | Seismic Hammer


    Developed by C.Viper. This was normally a technique of Viper where she would target the target's house (Or building of residence) and channel Lightning chakra through the ground and the chakra would gather in an area then burst causing the foundations of the building to crumble (Normally causing the building to collapse). When used on an opponent (Outside of structure) the burst would cause the target to be blasted in the air slightly shocked.

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    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -User has to master Lightning | Fire | Earth
    -User must be Sannin Ranked
    -Masters of this style will have better Lightning and Fire chakra control
    -Masters of this style will have better accuracy with Fire and Lightning techniques
    -Can only be taught By ~CoOkie Monster~

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    (Musoh-Battoh-Ryu) Dream-Slashed Sword

    Type:
    TaiKenNin

    Background:
    This Particular style was made by a person who did not like to use ninjutsu in the form of jutsus but utilize it through their weapons and their body. Not only that but to master the art of cat reflexes. The ninja would practice how to channel their chakra to their brain enhancing their reaction time to situations. Not only that but to enhance their acrobatic skills. (Jumping, Somersaulting, Evade, and Agility) The ninja would carry Dual Kodachis at all times and that would be his training weapon. Due to the ninja having enhanced cat like abilities the blades was used in co-op manner with the taijutsu art. The ninja mostly use their legs (Kicks) in conjunction with Strikes from the blades.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The jutsu is somewhat simple. The Person Increases the chakra flow through their body enhancing their Acrobatic skills,Reaction time,agility,speed,jumping, etc. By doing so the user can dodge quicker then most. Jump higher then most and think faster then most during most situations. By increaing this the users taijutsu and kenjutsu speed increases. The User would channel lightning chakra into the blade and slam the blade on the ground below an opponent exploding the rock. The opponent will then flip in the air. With Quick Haste the user would catch their head between their legs as the opponent is flipping causing the user to flip and with pinpoint accuracy the user will release the opponent having them spiraling down to the ground . Another Way is. The user will kick the opponent upwards (At their chin . not strong enough to kick them off the ground) he/she will then follow up with 2 kicks back to back with the same foot. Somersault, and right as he/she get off the ground they slash the blade upwards towards the enemy. The amount of speed the user have is somewhat similar to Lee without weights. But can only be that fast within short range of the enemy. So this is pretty much Taijutsu Mixed with Kenjutsu
    Examples

    Exploding Dive
    Type:Attack
    Rank:B
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The User would channel lightning chakra into the blade and slam the blade on the ground below an opponent exploding the rock. The opponent will then flip in the air. With Quick Haste the user jump in the air and would catch their head between their legs as the opponent is flipping causing the user to flip also with pinpoint accuracy the user will release the opponent having them spiraling down to the ground.

    Devils Somersault
    Type:Attack
    Rank:A
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damge points: 60
    Description: The user will kick the opponent upwards At their chin . (not strong enough to kick them off the ground but to knock them off balance) he/she will then follow up with 2 kicks back to back with the same foot. Somersault toward the opponent , and right as he/she get off the ground they slash the blade upwards towards the enemy lifting them into the sky.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -Only Taught By General
    -Can Only Channel Fire,and Lightning into the blades
    -MUST have Dual Kodachis or something that resembles them (they are like min katanas. Like what kakashi had as a kid)
    -Channeling only last for about 4seconds.
    -Must be up to B rank in Tai and Mastered Kenjutsu
    -No Jutsus can be used when using this fighting style.

    This fighting style is a real fighting style. I just twerks somethings to fit it in. I based this fighting style off Taki from soul calibur. And below you can see the first 2 examples i put under the inner workings of.


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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    buin gigei Staff arts
    Type:nin/kenjutsu
    Background: Long ago there was an un ending war The jubii had yet to be sealed by the sage of six paths, and the only people not being a part of the war were monks who had followed the sage and learned ninshu from him. Soon they mastered the wind release but were still unable to protect themselves. Any weapon made by them was handmade and they refused to kill making any weapons used not lethal. They soon had invented a metal and wood staff and using their wind release alongside their staff made a great combination but soon after the jubii was sealed most of the monks who used this skill were killed but a few survived and continued to teach the staff arts.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: the user would take a stance with their staff in hand ( the stance will be described in the cj) and would focus wind chakra through the staff. Then the user will go from the stance and begin to hit the enemy with their staff ( jabbing, swiping etc.) while releasing some wind waves from the staff adding onto the range and power of the staff, the movements done while attacking with the staff will be like a dance so the user must be on their toes and ready to spin jump from whatever position. In order to be able to dance like the masters of this art the user will need to have a calm mind which they can achieve through meditating like the monks did. ( I.e. when training in this they will start by meditating)
    Additional effects and Restrictions: must have mastered wind
    Must have been taught this skill by me
    (Must have a clam mind and be ready to change positions while fighting with staff ( i.e. a bio that says personality hot headed wouldn’t be able to use this) master of this art is able to move very well in taijutsu battles.User can’t use any fire jutsu next turn after using this art.


    Examples of use

    Ideas of how it can be used




    in above picture user would be spinning the staff like a fan while focusing wind chakra from it the resulting wind can be used to knock the enemy back leaving them open from there the user can do whatever they want but it leaves the enemy open from a brief moment. Or be used to stay afloat in mid air like the user is falling they could rotate their staff while releasing wind chakra from it to keep them in mid air of course this would leave them open to attack.

    It can be used to add on to the moves from the staff like the user will get into a stance ( as said I would describe the stance in the cj) and make a few quick moves like move forward and strike the enemy 3 times once in face, gut and knee and then spin around holding the staff in both hands and release a blast of wind knocking the enemy onto the ground or backwards as well as cut their skin slightly causing bleeding on a small degree
    And of course as I said the movements using the staff will be like a dance using the staff in fighting moves from the dance followed up by wind chakra making the range and power of the staff better but giving the user the ability to change position quite fast.


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    ±± Declined ±± because monks do exist in narutoverse i need you to take them out of this background since it collides with the cannon story line. Also, some restrictions are useless. Its a style, not a technique. The one i bolded needs to go. Other than that, its quite good and nearly approvable.
    resubmitting





    buin gigei Staff arts
    Type:nin/kenjutsu
    Background: Long ago When ninjutsu was first invented and taught by the sage of six paths there were ninja whom had learned the wind release ninjutsu from the sage and with the power of wind release at their control they began to use it in new and inventive ways. One of these ways was by combining The wind release with a staff. This was a very effective battle style as it added on to the users range with the staff but as well as their power. By using dance moves alongside their staff and wind release staff arts was born.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: the user would take a stance with their staff in hand ( the stance will be described in the cj) and would focus wind chakra through the staff. Then the user will go from the stance and begin to hit the enemy with their staff ( jabbing, swiping etc.) while releasing some wind waves from the staff adding onto the range and power of the staff, the movements done while attacking with the staff will be like a dance so the user must be on their toes and ready to spin jump from whatever position. In order to be able to dance like the masters of this art the user will need to have a calm mind which they can achieve through meditating like the Inventors of this style did. ( I.e. when training in this they will start by meditating)
    Additional effects and Restrictions: must have mastered wind
    Must have been taught this skill by me
    (Must have a clam mind and be ready to change positions while fighting with staff ( i.e. a bio that says personality hot headed wouldn’t be able to use this) master of this art is able to move very well in taijutsu battles.



    Examples of use

    Ideas of how it can be used




    in above picture user would be spinning the staff like a fan while focusing wind chakra from it the resulting wind can be used to knock the enemy back leaving them open from there the user can do whatever they want but it leaves the enemy open from a brief moment. Or be used to stay afloat in mid air like the user is falling they could rotate their staff while releasing wind chakra from it to keep them in mid air of course this would leave them open to attack.

    It can be used to add on to the moves from the staff like the user will get into a stance ( as said I would describe the stance in the cj) and make a few quick moves like move forward and strike the enemy 3 times once in face, gut and knee and then spin around holding the staff in both hands and release a blast of wind knocking the enemy onto the ground or backwards as well as cut their skin slightly causing bleeding on a small degree
    And of course as I said the movements using the staff will be like a dance using the staff in fighting moves from the dance followed up by wind chakra making the range and power of the staff better but giving the user the ability to change position quite fast.


    now the examples put into jutsu form:


    buin gigei ???? ( staff arts rotating staff fan combo )
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 40 ( if used offensively)
    Description: The user will take a horse stance ( legs separated like your riding a horse) and hold their staff in front of them with one hand or both. The user will begin to focus wind chakra through the staff, once having gathered enough chakra the the user will begin to spin the staff releasing the wind chakra going as fast as a fan the resulting wind can knock an enemy backwards and cause bleeding on a small degree. Upon knocking the enemy backwards The user will put both hands on the staff and step forward a little turning teh spinning staff above them and then they proceed to slam the spinning staff onto the enemies shoulder the wind from teh staff aswell as teh wight on his shoulder will flip the enemy into mid air from there the user will then jump spinning into the air above the enemy staff still rotating and point it down towards the enemy the wind will proceed to knock the enemy into the ground the user will then finish off the combo by slamming the end of tehstaff into the enemies making teh staff stand up ontop of the enemy the user will be doing a one hand stand on the staff and then proceed to jump off the enemy with his staff.
    Note: jutsu can knock weapons backwards
    note: jutsu is cable to dispelling lighting of the same rank if its within range
    note: can be used to stay in mid air ( holding it upwards and spinning it)
    note: staff continues to rotate as long as the user keeps spinning it but each turn counts as a jutsu used.
    note: can only be used 3 times per battle.


    buin giegi ??? ( staff arts 4 hit combo )
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: The user will take a stance placing his right foot infront of him with his staff in both hands his left arm is over top his right ( the right arm is further down then the left on the staff) and his staffs end facing the enemy. The user will focus A large amount of wind chakra into his staff and take a step forward with his left foot in front of right and will proceed to jab the enemys chest releasing a small blast of wind knocking the enemy back followed up by another step with the right foot jabbing the enemy's stomach while releasing a blast of wind, then the user will whack the side enemies neck with the staff while releasing a wave of wind turning him around. The user will then spin around holding his staff in both hands infront of him and his leg infront bend with his other leg behind him. ( the ends facing the left and right sides) and will release one more blast of wind knocking the enemy down to the ground.
    note: each blast of wind is only able to cause some bleeding and isn't fatal.
    note: can only be used 3 times per battle
    note: no fire jutsu next turn



    buin gigei ???? ( staff arts staff hand stand combo)
    Typeffensive
    Rank:C-Rank
    Range:Short
    Chakra:15
    Damage:30
    Description: The user will focus some wind chakra though his staff and take a step forward while slamming his staff onto the ground with releasing a wave of wind from the bottom which will hit the enemy feet if he's in range and possibly knock him down on his butt, the user will take a one hand stand on the top of off the staff after having done so, from there the user will flip off the staff garbing it as he goes forward upon landing on his feet he will spin around staff in hand releasing a wave of wind from the staff as he spin once.
    note: wind is cable of knocking enemy down but not enough to injury the enemy badly.
    note: can only be used 3 times













    put in new histoy in bold and removed fire resction and put the examples in jutsu form other then that everything is the same only edited the parts you mentioned. and made the examples in jutsu form.

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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±


    "The soft and the pliable will defeat the hard and strong."



    Kirinonai Kobushi - Boundless Fist Style

    Type: Taijutsu

    Background:
    Boundless Fist which had been passed down as a family secret for generations. The Chen family chronicles record Chen Wangting as the inventor of Boundless Fist. His success in fighting earned him the nickname "Unbeatable Yang", and his fame and efforts in teaching greatly contributed to the subsequent spreading of Boundless Fist knowledge.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    Boundless Fist is a type of internal Chinese martial art practiced for both its defense training and its health benefits. It is also typically practiced for a variety of other personal reasons: its hard and soft martial art technique, demonstration competitions, and longevity. As a consequence, a multitude of training forms exist, both traditional and modern, which correspond to those aims. Some of Boundless Fist training forms are especially known for being practiced at what most people categorize as slow movement.
    The physical techniques of Boundless Fist are described in the classics, a set of writings by traditional masters, as being characterized by the use of leverage through the joints based on coordination and relaxation, rather than muscular tension, in order to neutralize, yield, or initiate attacks. The slow, repetitive work involved in the process of learning how that leverage is generated gently and measurably increases, opens the internal circulation (breath, body heat, blood, lymph, peristalsis, etc.)

    Health: An unhealthy or otherwise uncomfortable person may find it difficult to meditate to a state of calmness or to use Boundless Fist as a martial art. Boundless Fist style health training, concentrates on relieving the physical effects of stress on the body and mind. For those focused on the martial application, good physical fitness is an important step towards effective self-defense.
    Meditation: The focus and calmness cultivated by the meditative aspect of Boundless Fist is seen as necessary in maintaining optimum health (in the sense of relieving stress and maintaining homeostasis) and in application of the form as a soft style martial art.
    Martial art: The ability to use Boundless Fist as a form of self-defense in combat is the test of a student's understanding of the art. Boundless Fist Style is the study of appropriate change in response to outside forces, the study of yielding and "sticking" to an incoming attack rather than attempting to meet it with opposing force. The use of Boundless Fist as a martial art is quite challenging and requires a great deal of training.

    In addition to the physical form, martial Boundless Fist also focus on how the energy of a strike affects the other person. A palm strike that looks to have the same movement may be performed in such a way that it has a completely different effect on the target's body. A palm strike that could simply push the opponent backward, could instead be focused in such a way as to lift the opponent vertically off the ground, breaking his/her center of gravity; or it could terminate the force of the strike within the other person's body with the intent of causing internal damage. The philosophy of Boundless Fist is that, if one uses hardness to resist violent force, then both sides are certain to be injured at least to some degree. Such injury, according to Boundless Fist theory, is a natural consequence of meeting brute force with brute force. Instead, Boundless Fist students are taught not to directly fight or resist an incoming force, but to meet it in softness and follow its motion while remaining in physical contact until the incoming force of attack exhausts itself or can be safely redirected.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    ~Only Kwalker394 can teach this
    ~Can only be taught to S-Class and above who have learned basic-advanced taijutsu.
    ~Must have a clam mind
    ~Users of Boundless Fist have slightly enhanced speed and flexibility

    example of use:

    7:05-8:40

    Yuen Wah (the guy in the middle of the two wearing hats and glasses) Is the master of this style. In this video from Kung Fu Hustle (great movie btw) Shows how softness can redirect his opponents attacks and also how he can easily dodge their attacks as well using their strength against themselves.





    Please edit if needed. If confused or have a question about this style or if not enough information is here on how this effects in Narutoverse please VM or PM me and I will answer any questions.

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    Chainsaw Arts (Chēnsō Gigei)
    Type: Other(Idk what to name this style sorry)
    Background: Double D going through the world looking for another way to use taijutsu. He came across different styles and have unique some of them were something he wanted to learn but no one would train him. He keep on thinking of differnet ways of making a style to use for his taijutsu skills. After three years of looking, he finally came a cross an idea. He knew of a man who could do amazing surgery. He wanted to get the man to do surery on his arms and legs to install chain saw chains. From this idea, Chainsaw Arts was born.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: The user must first undergo surgery to install the chain saw chains into the user's legs. The chains are control by chakra and rotate by chakra. The user can use these chains to increase the attack and defense where the chains are on the legs are increased to attack and defend.
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    -When the user uses this style the user shoes and legs of their pants are cut by the chains so the rest of the battle the user is bare footed.
    -Must have surgery done by Nexus
    -Must undergo training to get use to the chains
    -Must have learned all Taijutsu
    -Must have an extra chakra control training with learning this style of fighting
    -The users of this style gain great chakra control and able to maintain this style at the same as they are using some other thing(multitasking ablilty)

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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rnhaB...eature=related
    (0:52-0:56)
    (2:01-2:05)



    Chainsaw Arts: Gear Roation (Chenso Gigei: Haguruma no Kaiten)
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 each stage)
    Damage Points: (depends on the stage)
    Description: The user applies chakra to the chains and have them rotate to three stages. The first stage spins the chains fast enough to care the user to anywhere and increase the attack power and defense power by 15. The second stage spins the faster then stage one to the point the legs are surrounded by chakra aura in the shape of a saw and increases the attack and defense power by 30. The final stage spins the chains to the point the user can't control their legs. The attack and defense power is increased by 40. The final stage can slash through Kaguya bones, the second stage can slash through rock and the first stage can slash through human bodies.
    -Must post everytime the user changes or wants to use the stages
    -This must be used before the user uses the chains.
    -The user increase of defense or attack is from the user's orginal stats and not from the stage before.
    -The user can only use the final stage three times, second stage five times.

    Chainsaw Arts: Rotation Heel Drop (Chenso Gigei: Kaiten Hirudoroppu)
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: (depends on the stage of the gear)
    Description: The user spins around and raises their kicks in the air and brings in down onto the target.

    Chainsaw Arts: Uppercut Kick (Chenso Gigei: Kikku o Appākatto
    Rank: B
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: (depends on the stage of the gear)
    Description: The user raises their leg straight up in the air hitting their target with the tip of thier foot where the chains are.
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    The Nexus agreed to do the surgery to my bios if this gets approved first.

    Also the Gear Rotation is probably going to get decline in the custom jutsu because it probably needs somethings but it is just to show my ideas.
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    Extra and most important note: The user body where the chains are is protected by chakra which is constantly flowing where the chains are located and is costing the user +25 to the user per turn.

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    Solf J. Kimblee, our loyal member, gave on the 15th of June a request for a Patent on custom fighting style Chainsaw Arts (Chēnsō Gigei). I, Scorps of the Custom Fighting Style Bureau, by the power invested in me by Nexus, after reading the submission, have decided that the submitted style satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him rightfully earned patent on this style by the following;


    Chainsaw Arts (Chēnsō Gigei)
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    Copyright 2012, Solf J. Kimblee , NarutoBase.net


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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

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    Hokuto Shinken | Fist of the North Star



    Type: Nin-Taijutsu
    Background:
    Hokuto Shinken is a 2,000 year old Chinese assassination art formed during the Three Kingdoms era. The founder of Hokuto Shinken is a man named Shuken of the Hokuto Sōke (北斗宗家) bloodline and the ancestor of Kenshiro and Hyoh. Fist of the Blue Sky further develops the origins of Hokuto Shinken, where it is revealed that Hokuto Shinken is a blending of Shuken's original Hokuto style and the Keiraku Hikō techniques of Seito Gekken.

    Due to its deadliness, Hokuto Shinken can only have one successor per generation according to the art's law. Students who are not chosen to inherit the succession must renounce the style voluntarily or risk having their memories erased or their fists crushed. This is due to the extreme consequences of the style being held by one who is evil at heart; in this case, Raoh and Jagi were corrupted. Toki renounced his successorship due to his illness, hence nominated Kenshiro as the successor.The role of successor is also to have said to hold the responsibilities of the guardian of the Emperor of Heaven in Chinese Astronomy and legend, being the merciless punisher of evil and protector of the innocent.
    Late in the series, it is revealed that
    Hokuto Shinken was introduced to Japan through a pilgrimage of Kūkai in the 9th century.



    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:The average person uses only 30% of their body's potential strength, but those who had mastered Hokuto Shinken can tap into the remaining 70% as well. The art's power lies into channeling one's energy in a single blow and striking into the 708 "Hidden Channeling Points" in the human body (also known as acupressure points, power points, vital points, tsubo, etc.) This causes the victim's chakra to build in in the point of contact or to be incapacitated after several blows. It can also be used to combat psychological wounds, such as cutting off flow of chakra within oneself by knowing, though the main purpose of Hokuto Shinken is assassination.

    Hokuto Shinken also derives power by using chakra into a battle or fighting aura to use the human body's full potential as well as to project energy attacks. These energy attacks can be also used to strike pressure points. As with many Chinese Martial Arts, there is a soft style, which depends on accuracy and agility, which the founding fathers Kenshiro and Toki use, and a hard style, which Raoh uses often, which relies on brute power to break down targets.

    Additional effects and Restrictions: This fighting style is similar to gentle fist with how fast it is, and can only be taught to one other person as it takes much experience in taijutsu in order to achieve such speeds in attacking as well as the accuracy in knowing the spots to hit. The purpose of the fighting style is to break down the opponents muscles and therefore the chakra system caught in the middle of it. The range of the capabilities of this fighting style are from: Causes the opponent's body to be paralyzed for a moment, Causes an opponent to walk against his will, Prevents an opponent's lung from exhaling, Immobilizes an opponent's arms, Stops an opponent's breathing temporarily, Causes one to lose their sense of depth perception, & Leaves an opponent's jaw permanently open. These are acheived through attacking the opponents acupressure points, power points, vital points, tsubo, etc. Due to being very skilled in this assassination style of fighting, the masters of this technique know exactly where to strike and take down their opponents the fastest, or take them out over time.



    The drawbacks of this technique far outweigh the advantages.

    Note: May only be taught to one other person by sparring with the master in 3 separate sessions.
    Note: Must be of at least Unofficial Sage to learn
    Note: Techniques for this style can only be performed three times per battle
    Note: This fighting style lasts 4 turns then you will be unable to move your arms for one turn.
    Note: Can only use up to B ranked taijutsu for 4 turns afterwards
    Note: After attacking, the user will be unable to use the basic 5 elements for 3 turns.
    Note: Affects can be countered if the opponent channels chakra into their fingers hitting the exact spot the blow occurred in, but will need one turn for affects to reverse.


    ~Declined~ As you said so yourself this is very similar to the Gentle fist. On top of that you'd need medical training to be able to locate and hit said pressure and vital points.
    Note:Removed affiliation with vital points and gentle fist. Most of us that have Basic Taijutsu knowledge and Kaitos Taijutsu "In the RP sense" know where to strike an opponent to immobilize them, or subdue them. It doesnt take Medical training to know that If I hit you in the throat I can close your breathing passage way and stop you from breathing, or knowing that if you hit a muscle hard enough, or a bone it will feel numb and loose blood circulation for a bit.

    I also removed the bit about making people walk backwards and such. Just wanted to clarify its non affiliation with Gentle fist or needing medical training. Were all experienced shinobi here ^^




    Hokuto Shinken | Fist of the North Star



    Type: Nin-Taijutsu

    Background:

    Hokuto Shinken is a 2,000 year old Chinese assassination art formed during the Three Kingdoms era. The founder of Hokuto Shinken is a man named Shuken of the Hokuto Sōke (北斗宗家) bloodline and the ancestor of Kenshiro and Hyoh. Fist of the Blue Sky further develops the origins of Hokuto Shinken, where it is revealed that Hokuto Shinken is a blending of Shuken's original Hokuto style and the Keiraku Hikō techniques of Seito Gekken.

    Due to its deadliness, Hokuto Shinken can only have one successor per generation according to the art's law. Students who are not chosen to inherit the succession must renounce the style voluntarily or risk having their memories erased or their fists crushed. This is due to the extreme consequences of the style being held by one who is evil at heart; in this case, Raoh and Jagi were corrupted. Toki renounced his successorship due to his illness, hence nominated Kenshiro as the successor. The role of successor is also to have said to hold the responsibilities of the guardian of the Emperor of Heaven in Chinese Astronomy and legend, being the merciless punisher of evil and protector of the innocent.
    It is revealed that Hokuto Shinken was introduced to Japan through a pilgrimage of Kūkai in the 9th century.


    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:

    The average person uses only 30% of their body's potential strength, but those who had mastered Hokuto Shinken can tap into the remaining 70% as well. The art's power lies into channeling one's energy in a single blow and striking the human bodys limbs or muscles. This causes the victim's chakra to build in in the point of contact or to be incapacitated after several blows. It can also be used to combat psychological wounds, such as jumpstarting the chakra flow within oneselves brain, though the main purpose of Hokuto Shinken is assassination.

    Hokuto Shinken also derives power by using chakra into a battle or fighting aura to use the human body's full potential as well as to project energy attacks. These energy attacks can be also used to strike pressure points. As with many Chinese Martial Arts, there is a soft style, which depends on accuracy and agility, which the founding fathers Kenshiro and Toki use, and a hard style, which Raoh uses often, which relies on brute power to break down targets.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:

    The speed of the strikes can seemingly happen in the blink of an eye if not paying attention as well as penetrating through armor. can only be taught to one other person as it takes much experience in taijutsu in order to achieve such speeds in attacking as well as the accuracy in knowing the spots to hit. The purpose of the fighting style is to break down the opponents muscles and therefore the chakra system caught in the middle of it. The range of the capabilities of this fighting style are from: Causes the opponent's body/limbs to be paralyzed for a brief moment, cause extreme hyperventilation, causes one to lose their sense of depth perception, & can cause muscles to become relaxed(immobilization). These are acheived through attacking the opponents muscles while having chakra channels in their limbs pinpointing an accurate strike.


    Example Techniques:



    North Star Softness Ripping Slash | 北斗柔破斬 Hokuto Jūhazan
    Type: Nin-Taijutsu
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: The user channels chakra into either hand allowing them to swiftly form a small claw of chakra that surrounds their hands allowing them to slash through flesh and rip through clothes easier then by using bare hands alone.

    Note: Must know Fist of the North Star


    North Star Muscle Cutting Kick | 北斗鋼筋分断脚 Hokuto Gōkin Bundan Kyaku
    Type: Nin-Taijutsu
    Rank: S
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: The user quickly channels chakra into either legs causing muscles to quickly strengthening their legs for impact against an incoming kick or punch. The impact causes the opponents limb to be jolted with chakra and numbing its muscles temporarily.

    Note: Numbing lasts for one turn.
    Note: Must know Fist of the North Star
    Note: Can only be performed 2x per battle.


    North Star Seven Death Aura Interruption 北斗七死闘気断 Hokuto Shichishi Tōki Dan
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: A
    Range: Short
    Chakra: -30 per turn
    Damage: N/A
    Description: Only the most gifted users of the North Star fighting style can use the fighting aura. The user takes a deep breath channeling chakra throughout his body to heighten his strength, striking speed and perception in the midst of battle. This opens up for further North Star assassination strikes.

    Note: Lasts 4 turns or until deactivated.
    Note: Must know Fist of the North Star
    Note: Can be used twice per battle.


    Heaven Breaking Impalement | 天破活殺 Tenha Kassatsu
    Type: Nin Taijutsu
    Rank: S
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra: 40
    Damage: 80
    Description: After entering the North Star Death Aura, the user can fight with more emphasis on energy and speed by letting out a fury of punches and kicks that let out minuscule shockwaves with each blow that can cause opponents to cough up blood and become disoriented, after being hit.

    Note: Must know Fist of the North Star
    Note: Can only be used after entering the Death Aura
    Note: Can be used to stop incoming projectiles.
    Note: Can only be used twice per battle, but not in consecutive turns.
    Note: Users limbs will weaken leaving them open for a breif moment.




    Note: May only be taught to two other people by sparring with the master in 3 separate sessions.
    Note: Must have completed Basic Taijutsu & Kaitos Taijutsu[Excluding Forbiddens] to learn.

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    ±± Declined ±± This not only still mimics most of what Gentle Fist is about (chakra blasts for example) as well as mimics Chakra Enhanced strength. Then, when I look at your example techniques, its clear that this isn't unique. Its a mix of existing things coated with a different background and description. But the core is still too unoriginal.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    指銃 Shigan| Finger Gun
    Type: Nintaijutsu
    Background:
    A fightying style developed by the Second Branch of the Hyuuga Clan, using a similair method to the gentle fist, however due to not needing the byakugan, it was later learned by many shinobi around the Ninja World, who where specialized in Short Range Combat, later improved by a Kumogakure shinobi who extended it's abilities into Mid range as well.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The use revolves upon using there index and Middle finger, or just there index finger, and channel a good amount of chakra into them, using shape manipulation as well, creating a coat of chakra that is shaped with a sharp end, that is very small, almost not visible to the naked eye, the use then strikes with them or with just the index finger at any part of the target's body, piercing through the skin, when it pierces through it the user can extend the range of the chakra coat in there fingers and deal damage to the internal organs as well. Besides that experienced user's of this style have extended it's strength to being able to use it in Mid range from the opponent, using there index and middle finger in form of a gun, and shooting the small sharp coats at the target as if they were bullets.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • One must have Good chakra manipulation & Have atleast started Taijutsu Training.
    • A hyuuga cannot use Gentle Fist when using this Style.
    • One must Have atleast 3 training sessions with the creator to use the style at Mid range.

    Example Techniques:
    (Tobu Shigan: Bachi)- Flying Finger Gun: Plectrum
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 40 Damage
    Description:
    The user with use of this style, fires 2 sharp compressed chakra bullets from the fingers able to pierce through solid earth and a human body.

    ~ May only be used by users of Shingan.
    ~ May only be used 4 times per battle.

    (Tobu Shigan: Mitsubachi)- Flying Finger Gun: Three Plectrum
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    A Variation of "Flying Finger Gun: Plectrum" the user launches it three times in three rows.

    ~ May only be used by masters of Shingan.
    ~ May only be used 3 times per fight.


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    ±± Declined ±± This can already be made by a Gentle Fist user. The 2nd form of gentle fist revolves around creating tiny chakra blades on your fingers to damage tissues internally. Theoretically you can submitt customs for Gentle Fist that enhance that aspect. Because of that, this is not a CFS but rather a field of skills that falls under gentle fist.


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    嵐脚 Rankyaku| Storm Leg
    Type: Ninjutsu
    Background:
    A fightying style That even though it involves the user's feet it does not requier Taijutsu experience or ability, since it may be used aslong as the person has a healty body, and his feet have no bending problems what so ever, developed a Kumogakure shinobi named Mugetsu, who was tired of seeing so many taijutsu specialist, decided to use his feet for ninjutsu instead of Taijutsu. Wich also requires good Wind affinity, and chakra control.

    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:
    The Rankyaku (literally meaning "Storm Leg") is a powerful projectile technique, in which the users start by kicking at very high speeds and strength, sending out a sharp compressed air blades that can slice objects and greatly damage a human body. However, even thought it looks like it involves taijutsu, all that it requires is good kicking ability and a decent speed, in wich an S-Class and above shinobi is known to have that decent speed needed. This style requires great concentration and good chakra control into the user's feet.

    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    • One must have atleast 3 training sessions with a Master of Rankyaku.
    • Must have Wind Release training atlest up to B rank.
    • No Taijutsu can be used when using this style, as this requires chakra and focus only into the user's feet, and not the whole body.
    Example Techniques:
    (Rankyaku: Hyobi)- Storm Leg: Leopard-Tail
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: A-Rank
    Range: Mid Range
    Chakra: 30 Chakra
    Damage: 60 Damage
    Description:
    The user creates a large, powerful Rankyaku in the shape of a swirl by swinging there leg, which is launched at the enemy like a razor blade. When it hits the opponent, he/she is damaged and stunned, with an ability to send him/her flying if they get caught in mid-air by it.

    ~ May only be used by users of Rankyaku.
    ~ May only be used 3 times per Fight.

    (Rankyaku: Sen)- Storm Leg: Line
    Type: Offensive/Attack
    Rank: B-Rank
    Range: Mid-Long Range
    Chakra: 20 Chakra
    Damage: 40 Damage
    Description:
    The user targeting at the opponent kicks an amount of air wich is blasted straight ahead in a line towards the opponent, sharp enough to cut through human flesh, and C rank earth techniques.

    ~ May only be used by users of Rankyaku.
    ~ May only be used 3 time per battle.


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    ±± Declined ±± Remove the restriction I highlighted. Also, this needs to be worked into a Nintaijutsu (basically a kicking style of taijutsu were you focus elemental wind chakra to enhance it) because its simply that. Note that you can already shoot wind projectiles from your legs if you want to submit customs like that so it wouldn't make this special and thus it would remain unapprovable.
     
         
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    Re: ±±Custom Fighting Styles Submission±±

    Name: Volcano Style (Kazan no sutairu)
    Type:Ninkenjutsu
    Background: Many years ago the citizens of iwagakure were at war against kumogakure. While the ninja of both countries were nearly equal at everything (meaning that the coutnries were equal at everything) ninjutsu, taijutsu, genjutsu, fuuinjutsu etc there was one thing that the iwagakure shinobi were inferior at, kenjutsu and it was severely hindering their defences as it rendered much of their taijutsu (something they exell in) useless as you cant fight blades with fists. So volcano style was invented by a group of skilled lava users, it was so efficient that it was able to balance out the war eventually causing it to become yet another stale mate.
    Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: the style is based upon the ability to flow fire and earth chakra into your blade and, by combining them creating lava chakra. This is can then be used to make both offensive and defensive attacks or cause your blades properties to be amplified in many ways (if this is approved I shall be making jutsu for these later on)
    Additional effects and Restrictions:
    ~to learn one must have mastered lava
    ~to learn one must be at least C-rank in fire earth and kenjutsu
    ~must be trained by home or someone who has mastered volcano style with his permission to teach it to be able to use this style
    ~techniques are formed more quickly than normal lava techs because the swinging of the sword is what makes/shapes the lava
    ~due to how much emphasis is put on the speed of the lava techs of this style and how much extra control over your lava techs is gained through the mastery of this style all lava techs can be performed slightly faster after mastering this style

    Example Techniques
    Lava Blade
    Type: Supplementary
    Rank: C-rank
    Range: Short
    Chakra: 15
    Damage: N/A
    Description: should the users blade be broken in battle the user can cover the end of the now broken blade in quickdrying lava (much like the lava used in Blazing Boulder Stream) that is shaped into the shape of the bit the was broken off before hardening into rock that is as hard as steel which can then be used as the original part of the blade would have been.

    Note: the lava/rock can not exceed the size of the original blade.

    Name: Greater Lava Slice
    Type: Offensive/Supplementary
    Rank: A-rank
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: 60
    Description: the user covers his blade in a massive amount of hot, thick, compressed lava before swinging his blade powerfully while simutaneuosly letting the lava be thrown powerfully of his blade sending it flying toward the enemy at high speed

    Note: can also be kept on the blade and swung to massivly increase the concussive power behind the blow of the sword (up to the power of an A-rank kenjutsu technique)

    Name: Lava Propulsion
    Type: Supplementary/Offensive
    Range: Short
    Rank: B-rank
    Chakra: 30
    Damage: Additional 50 to damage of original tech this is used to enhance
    Description: As or before the user swings his sword he gathers a massive amount of dense chakra onto the back of it before expelling it powerfully backward sending the sword speeding forward with incredible power and speed behind it

    Note: this can also be dangerous to the user as the lava fired of the back could coliide with them, this means that this tech can only be used when the back of the blade isnt positioned facing toward the user, like in sideways strikes, downward strikes or when the user is holding his blade out to the side.

    Ps: i know this is a complete rip off of tauburns style (the only differences are it is performed with lava instead of ice, i think the jutsus are different and the history is different) but he has kindly given me permission to make it so i think it should be alright

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    ±± Declined ±± The core problem with this submission isn't that its a rip off of glaciar style, but rather that its impossible without a CW designed for it. You assume that a normal Katana/Sword would resist the temperature of lava but it wouldn't. The style fails right of the bat by not accounting to that. Metal is metal. You infuse it with chakra and it gains properties pertaining to that chakra. Fire makes a kunai hot...Lava would make it or a sword melt. Also, most of the restrictions are off or useless.
     
         
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