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    The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    The Amazing Adventures of
    Kotetsu & Izumo


    Chapter TWO: Plume

    [Review on previous chapter]

    Tsunade assigns Kotetsu and Izumo to locate 4 gems representing the five elements in order to unlock an heirloom her grandfather has pass down and she already found the first one; the red gem representing Hi no Kuni

    Hi no Kuni Translation
    [Land of Fire]

    The Konoha Chuunin pair board a boat to Mizu no Kuni (Land of Water) instead of crossing the Naruto bridge as it is under construction due to damage from a fight involving Konoha/Mizu shinobi several weeks ago

    The mist around the entrance of the village soon thickens around the pair as they ponder who was responsible

    Izumo: (Shouting) Fuuton: Boufuu no Jutsu!

    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Fuuton: Boufuu no Jutsu (Wind Release: Windstorm Technique)
    Classification: Ninjutsu
    Type:
    Class: Defensive, Offensive
    Range: All Ranges
    Hand Seal: Tiger → Horse
    Description: Chakra infused wind is released from the mouth of the user as it quickly consumes the area with a powerful blast of wind capable of blocking oncoming attacks or enemies.


    Narrator: Izumo leaps into the air and begins spinning as he blows a stream of wind from his mouth. Although, the jutsu was unable to clear out the mist entirely.

    Kotetsu: (In thought) My turn!-(Shouting) Doton: Ryuuseiu no Jutsu!

    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Doton: Ryuuseiu no Jutsu (Earth Release: Meteor Shower Technique)
    Classification: Ninjutsu
    Type:
    Class: Offensive
    Range: All ranges
    Hand Seal: Ox → Ram → Dog → Hare
    Description: A huge meteorite-like boulder materializes in mid air which then shatters into smaller pieces and is aimed at the intended target(s).


    Narrator: As Izumo lands back onto the ground near his partner, Kotetsu then unleashes the large boulder that formed several feet above him as it broke into pieces. This jutsu is used in combination with the windstorm to strengthen its impact and havoc begins to reek over the surrounding area. Several cries of the enemy can be heard in the chaotic storm.

    Izumo: (Whispers) It appears as though we were successful..

    Kotetsu: So it seems-

    Izumo: But because this land is naturally misty-my jutsu was unable to eliminate it completely..

    Narrator: Both shinobi then released their techniques as various bodies fall to the ground battered and without movement.

    Izumo: I suppose they attacked thinking we were the enemy?

    Kotetsu: Maybe..

    Izumo: We need to make a report of this..

    Narrator: A summary of what had occurred is noted and Kotetsu then summons a falcon via the scroll Tsunade provided in case of an emergency as he fastened it onto the bird. It is then directed to the Mizukage's headquarters.

    Izumo: No we can continue..

    Narrator: Izumo took out the gem shard as they began walking deeper into the village but suddenly a barrage of shuriken hit the two Konoha shinobi.

    Enemy 1: Damn it!..They were clones

    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Fuuton: Kaze Bunshin no Jutsu (Wind Release: Wind Clone Technique)
    Classification: Ninjutsu, Clone Techniques
    Type:
    Class: Supplementary
    Hand Seal: -
    Description: The user creates a clone made of wind using air as a median. This clone is unique as if struck, the wind breaks apart and attacks anyone nearby with sharp blasts.


    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Doton: Iwa Bunshin no Jutsu (Earth Release: Rock Clone Technique)
    Classification: Ninjutsu, Clone Techniques
    Type:
    Class: Supplementary
    Hand Seal: -
    Description: The user creates a clone made of rock which is done by expelling earth from their mouth. Unlike other clones, the rock clone does not disappear when attacked but rather breaks apart.


    Kotetsu: (Whispers) You were right..

    Narrator: As a cautionary measure, Izumo suggested to release a clone of themselves in case there were more enemies involved.

    Izumo: (Shouting) We have permission to enter your village!

    Enemy 2: (Shouting) Its in our nature!-

    Enemy 3: (Shouting) You're at our mercy!

    Kotetsu: (Whispering) Maybe we'll get a nice reward from Mei if we bring these in alive *giggle*

    Izumo: (Whispers) Be serious-

    Eenemy 3: We're a few men down because of you-

    Enemy 3: But we who remain are the best!

    Izmuo: (Whispering) You know what you have to do-

    Kotetsu: (Whispering) Yes..

    Narrator: Having figured out that due to the mist, they'd be supseptable to any oncoming attack thus they stand back to back with clutched fists. Wind is then gathered before Izumo acting as a shield and mud erupts from the ground upwards blocking Kotetsu which creates a continuous flowing pillar as the pair stand their ground.

    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Fuuton: Yasei Reppuu no Jutsu (Wind Release: Wild Gale Technique)
    Classification: Ninjutsu
    Type:
    Class: Defensive, Offensive
    Range: All Ranges
    Hand Seal: Ram → Serpent → Boar
    Description: This technique creates continuous swirls of gale winds that can act as a defense or an attack. Depending on the users chakra will determine whether how much wind is created.


    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Doton: Doro Heki no Jutsu (Earth Release: Mud Burst Technique)
    Classification: Ninjutsu
    Type:
    Class: Defensive
    Range: Short range
    Hand Seal: Monkey → Bird
    Description: This technique causes a continuous flow of mud to erupt from the ground up in an act of defense. Oncoming attacks are absorbed once there is contact with the mud. If there is no Earth in which to use from, the user can create the mud needed. Depending on how much chakra used, the user can increase the amount of mud to a degree that can conceal any of the user's openings.


    Narartor: A few moments later, arrows made of water abruptly unleash towards the Konoha pair.

    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Suiton: Ekitai no Ya (Water Release: Liquid Arrows)
    Classification: Ninjutsu
    Type:
    Class: Offensive
    Range: All Ranges
    Hand Seal: -
    Description: The user emits continuous water projectiles that have taken a solid characteristic thus making it sharp from their hand.


    Narrator: This attack is however countered by Izumo and Kotetsu. Although, in the beginning it seems they have perfect coverage; the enemy then motions the arrows in different directions in an attempt to insure a hit.

    Kotetsu: Dame!

    Narrator: However, both are able to increase their defensive techniques which covers themselves completely.

    Kotetsu: (Whispering) They're costing us our chakra reserves-

    Izumo: (Whispering) Continue to bide as their reserves are also depleting..

    Enemy 3: (In thought) Shit! They won't budge!!

    Narrator: Mist once again thickens the area.

    Izumo: (Whispering) See! It is working-they have already begun to attack us close range-(In thought) Now!

    Narrator: As a result to his awareness, Izumo then forms hands seals and directs his attack onto one of the foes who comes into range having neared their location and began to pacing around them within the mist searching for a weak spot.

    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Fuuton: Sora Ori no Jutsu (Wind Release: Sky Cage Technique)
    Classification: Ninjutsu
    Type:
    Class: Supplementary
    Range: Short range
    Hand Seal: Horse
    Description: The user gathers air and creates a prison-like confinement to enclose the intended target; including themselves if wanted. How long the fortress remains active depends on how much chakra is used.


    Enemy 2: How can you be this skilled?

    Izumo: That honor goes to a former squad leader..

    Narrator: Their plan almost completes with Izumo's target captured and as Kotetsu readied himself against the remaining opponent, several lump-like masses of lava abruptly land around them.

    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Youton: Yougan Katamari no Jutsu (Lava Release: Lava Lump Technique)
    Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
    Type:
    Class: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: Shot to Mid range
    Hand Seal: -
    Description: The user releases several globs of lava of various sizes at the target. The technique can also be manipulated to block doors and narrow exits using the hardening process of lava to prevent a target from escaping.


    Mei: My my...I received your message and decided to come out myself to greet you both..

    Kotetsu: (In thought) Ah..So beautiful-

    Mei: I apologize for the trouble these criminals caused

    Narrator: She said; seductively wiping off the dripping lava from her lips.

    Kotetsu: There is absolutely no reason for you to apologize Mizukage-sama..

    Narrator: Izumo's face cringes at the sound of his partners words.

    Izumo: (In thought) Look at who has a crush now..

    Mei: The crime level has escalated recently and these professional criminals were able to delude us time and time again-they've taken advantage of being citizens and used that privilege to reek havoc, steal, murder and have it appear as though it was outsiders. You two can back away a clear distance from here now as I will take care of the rest-

    Izumo: Right!

    Kotetsu: Of course..

    Mei: Come with me now and don't add a resisting charge..

    Enemy 2: (In thought) No!

    Enemy 3: (In thought) Dammit!

    Narrator: After having briefly thought of the risks, they decide to chance an escape.

    Mei: (In thought) Fools!-(Shouting) Youton: Kazanbai no Jutsu!

    [Jutsu Insight]
    Name: Youton: Kazanbai no Jutsu (Lava Release: Volcanic Ash Technique)
    Classification: Kekkei Genkai, Ninjutsu
    Type:
    Class: Offensive, Supplementary
    Range: All Ranges
    Hand Seal: -
    Description: A gaseous stream made up of demolished rock and glass is released through the mouth. The gas is able to spread and envelop an area quickly. If this substance is inhaled, the result could be breathing problems and prolonged breathing can be fatal. The user is immune to the technique.


    Narrator: Refusing to head her words, the Godaime Mizukage angers to such an extent that she unleashes a technique in which would do away with their lives. Within seconds, their location is plunged with the toxic gas as the enemies are quickly affected and fall to the ground. With a flick of her finger, two guards appear behind her having been given the order to stay back while she checked out the situation are then alerted to move the corpses.

    Mei: I do apologize to you two for having troubled you in anywa-

    Kotetsu: Please Mizukage-sama..

    Mei: There is no need for the praise though I appreciate it

    Kotetsu: Right-

    Izumo: (In thought) That idiot..

    Mei: I may be able to help you both in locating the item that Tsunade-sama desires..

    To be Continued...next chapter entitled "Light"

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    if i said bad you gonna ban me...so Cheers for the free country!
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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

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    if i said bad you gonna ban me...so Cheers for the free country!
    jk great work
    I am actually not a MOD and even if I was-I wouldn't ban or punish someone for their opinion as it is their own prerogative. However, I will thank you for the compliment and lol at your joke
     
         

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    Thank you for checking my ff out and the compliment

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    wow, really great..keep coming the chapters!
     
         

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    wow that was cool I can't wait for the next chapter :D
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    very well done with chapter two keep up the good work plz let me know when you have released chapter 3

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    Another Great Chapter. As Always, Kotetsu's Thoughts And Antics Keep The Comedic Aspect In Check, Though It Still Maintains The Action And Dramatic Flare Provided By Your Descriptive Account Of The Battles. I'm Not Sure Whether The Jutsu You've Used Are Actual Techniques From The Anime/Manga Or Not, But In The Latter Case, They're Really Well Thought Out Dude. Looking Forward To The Next Chapter, Keep It Up.

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    That was fantastic, awesome job man.
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    Mhm you've done a splendid job. I shall read the other chapters too.
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

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    nice work dude
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    Quote Originally Posted by Maina Deah View Post
    wow, really great..keep coming the chapters!
    Thank you for checking out my fanfiction and for the compliments

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    wow that was cool I can't wait for the next chapter :D
    Thank you for reading ^.^

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    very well done with chapter two keep up the good work plz let me know when you have released chapter 3

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    Thank you-especailly for the +rep and I certainly will alert you to the next

    Quote Originally Posted by Sasuk3Uchiha View Post
    Another Great Chapter. As Always, Kotetsu's Thoughts And Antics Keep The Comedic Aspect In Check, Though It Still Maintains The Action And Dramatic Flare Provided By Your Descriptive Account Of The Battles. I'm Not Sure Whether The Jutsu You've Used Are Actual Techniques From The Anime/Manga Or Not, But In The Latter Case, They're Really Well Thought Out Dude. Looking Forward To The Next Chapter, Keep It Up.

    Unfortunately I Can't Give You +Rep Until I've Given It To Other Users First, But I'll Be Sure To Do So Once I'm Able.
    Thank you! I’m glad to know that Kotetsu’s actions are not out of context I’m pleased to know that I’ve brought the wow factor sort of speak lol Most of the techniques I use are unique. However, I have used a few anime/manga moves e.g. Mei’s unnamed Lava Lump Technique to which I gave a name-kinda fits that sexy beast, ne? Thank you for complimenting my moves which I take pride in ^.^ I can’t wait to release the next chapter. Please-that is fine so the Thank You +rep button wasn’t working? Not that I’m greedy or anything I just don’t understand why you’d have to rep me regularly when a thread should have the +rep option.

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    Thank you for your support

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    Mhm you've done a splendid job. I shall read the other chapters too.
    Thank you and happy to hear it! ^.^
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    its very good though i have one suggestion when only one man is talking then use the same line to describe because with very break in this style mind expects a different person
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    An error in the first sentence, it should be 5 gems, not 4, right?
    Again, you might want to add "Land of Fire" in "()" in this one, like with "Land of Water" in the previous chapter

    The very first thing I noticed was that you went from green and blue to just red on the coloring for the names on Izumo and Kotetsu, and with just one time coloring Izumo's name green. I found that a bit strange and thought I would mention it

    Anyways, battle already and you managed to turn it interesting even if it wasn't a big one. For some reason it kind of reminds me of the two Chunnins Naruto and Sasuke fought before Kakashi dealt with them, in the beginning of the Zabuza arc. Like someone above me mentioned, great work describing the jutsus!

    About the chapters lengths so far. Normally I would say that they might be a bit short, but for some reason, I think the style of this FF fits with short, but many chapters.

    Obviously I won't be able to match the post I posted on chapter 1 in this one, but I still feel like saying you've done an excellent job so far. Keep going!
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    :confused::confused::confused: h...mmmm
    good...
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    Couldn't help noticing how the humor those two have brought when the situation allowed goofiness in the real manga is present in your chapters, too :D Congratulations on that (now I envy you :lol: ) Nice little fight that gave us some basic insight on their skills (their chakra natures may have been shown in the original manga but it was long ago and I have forgotten ) The mizukage is going to join them on the mission, is she? That could be interesting Looking forward to reading your next chapter (even though I screwed my pc up really bad and have to get it fixed and that may take a while). I'd wish you a good time while writing next chapter, but I have a hunch you've written all the chapters of this fanfiction already, am I right? If not, then, by all means, have a jolly time writing next part
    p.s. no idea why the words chapter are in red o.O
     
         
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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    A very nice chapter as usual! I very much like the use of jutsus and techiniques in conjunction with the characters situations-very well thought out! I eagerly await the next chapter my friend! ~Haka~
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto kyuubi View Post
    its very good though i have one suggestion when only one man is talking then use the same line to describe because with very break in this style mind expects a different person
    Thank you and I have edited that-I hope the future chapters will be easier to read ^.^

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    An error in the first sentence, it should be 5 gems, not 4, right?
    Again, you might want to add "Land of Fire" in "()" in this one, like with "Land of Water" in the previous chapter

    The very first thing I noticed was that you went from green and blue to just red on the coloring for the names on Izumo and Kotetsu, and with just one time coloring Izumo's name green. I found that a bit strange and thought I would mention it

    Anyways, battle already and you managed to turn it interesting even if it wasn't a big one. For some reason it kind of reminds me of the two Chunnins Naruto and Sasuke fought before Kakashi dealt with them, in the beginning of the Zabuza arc. Like someone above me mentioned, great work describing the jutsus!

    About the chapters lengths so far. Normally I would say that they might be a bit short, but for some reason, I think the style of this FF fits with short, but many chapters.

    Obviously I won't be able to match the post I posted on chapter 1 in this one, but I still feel like saying you've done an excellent job so far. Keep going!
    No-its four gems as Tsunade previously (or before the start of the story) recovered the gem representing Land of Fire lol You have a keen eye however Yeah-When I sent multiple pms to the readers I accidentally posted a link with highlighted -_- Although, I now know for next time. Thanks and yes after having to forever re-re-edit you know what I had checked the early manga for research where they ran into the two missing-nin ^.^ Thanks for the compliment on the jutsu as I take heavy pride over it Yes the chapters are indeed short and I will not how long I’ve made this ff Thank you for your feedback as I always appreciate it

    Quote Originally Posted by reza8872 View Post
    :confused::confused::confused: h...mmmm
    good...
    Um...thanks

    Quote Originally Posted by danivass View Post
    Couldn't help noticing how the humor those two have brought when the situation allowed goofiness in the real manga is present in your chapters, too :D Congratulations on that (now I envy you :lol: ) Nice little fight that gave us some basic insight on their skills (their chakra natures may have been shown in the original manga but it was long ago and I have forgotten ) The mizukage is going to join them on the mission, is she? That could be interesting Looking forward to reading your next chapter (even though I screwed my pc up really bad and have to get it fixed and that may take a while). I'd wish you a good time while writing next chapter, but I have a hunch you've written all the chapters of this fanfiction already, am I right? If not, then, by all means, have a jolly time writing next part
    p.s. no idea why the words chapter are in red o.O
    I am again pleased to hear that I have provided accurate personalities for the two main protagonists ^.^ Thank you I can definitely elaborate-Izumo was shown to have Suiton element and Kotetsu thus far hasn’t been shown to have an affinity (which saddens me as he is my favorite out of the two -_-). So I have bestowed the non-cannon Wind element onto Izumo and Earth to Kotetsu lol It would have been nice if they indeed possessed that but oh well lol You will have to wait for next chapter indeed but I thought adding Mei into the story would be epic as I love her! I’m sorry to hear about your pc and your hunch was spot on as I am already done with the entire story I will however continue to edit upon any constructive criticism. I apologize for the red coloring as I realized too late that I sent the link with highlight in the coding to multiple readers -_- However, the mistake has been exposed and should not happen for the following chapters. Thank you again friend

    Quote Originally Posted by Hakachi View Post
    A very nice chapter as usual! I very much like the use of jutsus and techiniques in conjunction with the characters situations-very well thought out! I eagerly await the next chapter my friend! ~Haka~
    Thank you Can’t tell you how it feels to know that I successfully portrayed the two. Thanks for the compliments and I cannot wait to continue releasing upcoming chapters ^.^
     
         

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    Re: The Amazing Adventures Of Kotetsu & Izumo: Chapter TWO

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    No-its four gems as Tsunade previously (or before the start of the story) recovered the gem representing Land of Fire lol You have a keen eye however Yeah-When I sent multiple pms to the readers I accidentally posted a link with highlighted -_- Although, I now know for next time. Thanks and yes after having to forever re-re-edit you know what I had checked the early manga for research where they ran into the two missing-nin ^.^ Thanks for the compliment on the jutsu as I take heavy pride over it Yes the chapters are indeed short and I will not how long I’ve made this ff Thank you for your feedback as I always appreciate it
    See? I'm not flawless Guess I got too into "4 gems representing the 5 countries" and not the whole sentence

    I'm just glad I'm up to date with this one:lmao:
     
         

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