Lightning with Nathan.

[Unatural]

*waits for the holy man*

[Nathan.]

Okay lets get this started.

1. Why do you want to learn raiton?
2. What is raiton weakness and why?
3. What is raiton strong against and why?

[Unatural]

Okay lets get this started.

1. Why do you want to learn raiton?
2. What is raiton weakness and why?
3. What is raiton strong against and why?

1.cause i am going to make a deidara bio
2.wind(not sure)
3.water

[Nathan.]

1.cause i am going to make a deidara bio
2.wind(not sure)
3.water

Please, I expect longer descriptions.

[Unatural]

Please, I expect longer descriptions.

okay.how about this
Lightning techniques are strong against Earth and are weakened by Wind. Lightning release techniques are usally used with the monkey hand seal. Together with Water, it likely makes up the components for Ranton

[Nathan.]

okay.how about this
Lightning techniques are strong against Earth and are weakened by Wind. Lightning release techniques are usally used with the monkey hand seal. Together with Water, it likely makes up the components for Ranton

Why is lighting strong against earth?
Why is lighting weak against wind?

[Unatural]

Why is lighting strong against earth?
Why is lighting weak against wind?

Lightning is strong against earth because it can easily travel through and break the ground apart but weak against wind because it is a natural electrical insulator.

[Nathan.]

Lightning is strong against earth because it can easily travel through and break the ground apart but weak against wind because it is a natural electrical insulator.

Take this piece pf paper, I hand you, send your chakra into the paper, the paper should wrinkle if done correctly, please try it.

[Unatural]

Take this piece pf paper, I hand you, send your chakra into the paper, the paper should wrinkle if done correctly, please try it.

*sends the chakra into paper,and it starts wrinkles*

[Nathan.]

*sends the chakra into paper,and it starts wrinkles*

It didn't work, try again.

[Unatural]

It didn't work, try again.

*loads chakra and sends the chakra into the paper*

[Nathan.]

*loads chakra and sends the chakra into the paper*

Longer descriptions!

[Unatural]

Longer descriptions!

starts to increasing the high frequency vibrations of their chakra,and sends it to the paper as it wrinkles*

[Nathan.]

starts to increasing the high frequency vibrations of their chakra,and sends it to the paper as it wrinkles*

Good enough for now.
Lets start the first jutsu.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

Simply gather up your raiton chakra, then manipulate that chakra to create small bolts of lighting to attack your opponent.

[Unatural]

Good enough for now.
Lets start the first jutsu.

(Raiton no Jutsu) - Lightning Release Technique
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create small bolts of lightning to attack their target.

Simply gather up your raiton chakra, then manipulate that chakra to create small bolts of lighting to attack your opponent.

starts to increasing the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra and manipulate that chakra to creates small bolts.

[Nathan.]

starts to increasing the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra and manipulate that chakra to creates small bolts.

Longer then one/two lines please.

[Unatural]

"i am finaly going to do this"
*starts to increasing the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra and manipulate that chakra to creates small bolts.and tries out in tree*

[Nathan.]

"i am finaly going to do this"
*starts to increasing the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra and manipulate that chakra to creates small bolts.and tries out in tree*

Good enough for now, as it's only a low rank.

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

Gather your raiton chakra up in your right hand, then slam your hand on the ground to release a surge of lighting that races across the ground shocking your opponents feet.

[Unatural]

Good enough for now, as it's only a low rank.

(Raiton: Raikou Oonami) - Lightning Release: Lightning Surge
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra and slam their hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.

Gather your raiton chakra up in your right hand, then slam your hand on the ground to release a surge of lighting that races across the ground shocking your opponents feet.

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra up in my right hand and then slam your hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.*
"hows that sensei"

[Nathan.]

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra up in my right hand and then slam your hand on the ground to release a surge of lightning across the ground to the opponents feet to shock them.*
"hows that sensei"

Getting better.

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

Gather your raiton chakra around your whole body, then run at my clone and shock him.

-Creates clone.-

[Unatural]

Getting better.

(Raiton: Raijingu Sanda) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user hits the opponent with an electric field shield that covers the users body.

Gather your raiton chakra around your whole body, then run at my clone and shock him.

-Creates clone.-

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra around my whole body,and runs at sensei's clone and shock him*
"Lightning Style: Raging Thunder"

[Nathan.]

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra around my whole body,and runs at sensei's clone and shock him*
"Lightning Style: Raging Thunder"

Getting better.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Gather your Raiton chakra up then create an electric field shield that explodes on impact.

[Unatural]

Getting better.

(Raiton: Sandaa Saaburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: Hits opponent with an electric field shield that explodes and can blow back the enemy.

Gather your Raiton chakra up then create an electric field shield that explodes on impact.

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra up and creates an electric field shield that explodes on impact.*

[Nathan.]

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chakra up and creates an electric field shield that explodes on impact.*

It needs to be longer.
Please try with this next jutsu.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Now, gather your ration chakra in your mouth, then release a wave of lighting bolts at your target.

[Unatural]

[QUOTE=Nathan.;9370657]It needs to be longer.
Please try with this next jutsu.

(Ration: Ikazuchi Kashou) - Lightning Release: Thunder Burn
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: 20
Description: The user fires a wave of lightning bolts at the opponent.

Now, gather your ration chakra in your mouth, then release a wave of lighting bolts at your target.[/QUOTE

*gathers the high frequency vibrations of my raiton chaking in my mout and releases a wave of light bolts at tree boom and it get cut*