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    Updated Son Goten 孫悟天 Needs Re-Approval



    Basic Information

    Name:
    Son Goten 孫悟天
    Gender:
    - Male
    Age:
    17
    Clan:
    Former Sarutobi

    Looks:
    Goten's appearance as a child has messy, unkempt hair and a playful face. His appearance drastically changes as he grows older. By the age of 13 he he has spiky straight and titled hair. Goten has an obnoxious appetite. When Goten gets mad enough his chakra flows very fast and it turns his hair yellow/gold and a yellow/gold aura appears around him. In the fight were he got revenge on the man who killed his mentor Zoro it appeared that he had blue lightning that would spark around him every now and again.

    Personality:
    Goten is always serious, especially when someone he loves is in danger. He is always on guard, and doesn’t trust many people. He is very vengeful and once you have pissed him off its very difficult to get back on his good side. You most likely wont be able to get back on his good side because youll be dead before you have a chance, but this all depends on how pissed off he is.


    Village Info.

    Village of Birth:

    Village of Alliance:

    Rank//Chakra Info.

    Ninja Rank:

    Specialty:
    None
    Elements:
    Needs Training in All
    Water
    Lighting
    Fire
    Wind
    Your ninjutsu:


    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

    (Ki Nobori no Shugyō) - Tree Climbing Practice
    Rank: E
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This is a training method used to gain the basic skills of chakra control. This training involves focusing a fixed amount of chakra to the bottom of one's feet, and using that to climb a tree without using one's hands. If the stream of chakra is too weak, the user will lose their footing on the tree and fall off. If it is too strong, the user will be pushed away from the tree, causing the bark of the tree to break around the point of contact and the user to fall. This technique becomes second nature to shinobi with more practice.
    Note: Technique only for use of training methods.

    (Suimen Hokō no Gyō) - Water Surface Walking Practice
    Rank: E
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This training method is used to gain better chakra control. To do this, the user has to be emitting a constant stream of chakra from the bottom of the their feet and using the repellent force to walk across the water's surface. This technique is more difficult to master than the Tree Climbing Practice, because the amount of chakra that needs to be emitted changes constantly. This technique becomes second nature to shinobi with more practices.
    Note: Technique only for use of training methods.

    Background Info.

    History:
    Goten life had an awful beginning. As a child, Goten was an orphan, he never knew his father or his mother. He was told that they were killed while fighting bravely to defend the village during an attack from a powerful enemy, whether or not this is true, he is unsure. He lived in his parents’ apartment. He eventually made a good friend named trunks, they were great friends for about a year and Goten finally stopped hating everyone and could finally trust someone. They were in the ninja academy together and then one day on a mission trunks died. After that Goten completely broke down becasue everyone he had ever loved or was friends with was now dead. He dropped out of the ninja academy and one day while searching for food he tried stealing from a man named Zoro. This man took Goten in and became his mentor and continuing on from that day on he trained Goten in basic ninja skills and swordsman ship skills. Zoro’s last words to Goten were where to find him again when he was a Jounin, with that he disappeared into the woods. After this he got into a fight with a kid from the Sarutobi Clan. The kids father was so impressed he brought Goten home and invited him to join the Sarutobi Clan. At the age of 8, using the skills that Zoro had taught him, he graduated from the ninja academy with great success. He passed the chunin exams easily at the age of 10. Gohan went on within the Sarutobi clan and one day he found out that his master Zoro had been killed. Gohan went after this man that had killed his mentor. The man’s name was Roku. When Goten found Roku he confronted him and Roku bragged about killing of Zoro and that he had beeged for his life which gohan knew wasn’t true. Goten got so mad he found new strength deep inside him and beat Roku. At the age of 14 he was promoted to a Special Jounin. At the age of 15 Goten learned that the hokage at the time had ordered Zoro’s death. After that Goten left the Village of Konohagakure. He had heard that a great swordsman named ace lived in the village of Kirigakure. He traveled there to find this man and learn from him. He pledged his allegiance to Kirigakure. At the age of 16 his new master taught Goten how to make his own sword. Rumor has it that it was a Kirigakure ninja that killed his best friend. Little else is known about Goten except that if he ever comes back to Konohagakure the village would be in grave danger. No one know if Gotens true intentions for going to Kirigakure were to find this great swordsman or to get revenge for his best friend. Rumor has it though that it was a Kirigakure ninja that killed his best friend.



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    Lost:

    N/A


    Original Son Goten 孫悟天 Bio
    Added Fire and Wind to elements

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    Last edited by Alucard; 03-18-2012 at 05:55 PM.

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    Re: Updated Son Goten 孫悟天 Needs Re-Approval

    that's a lot of hard work congrats
     
         

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    Re: Updated Son Goten 孫悟天 Needs Re-Approval

    Pretty nice bio.
     
         

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    Re: Updated Son Goten 孫悟天 Needs Re-Approval

    Quote Originally Posted by uchihadesendent View Post
    that's a lot of hard work congrats
    ehh it wasnt to bad but the whole border thing was a pain

    Quote Originally Posted by Nafan. View Post
    Pretty nice bio.
    thanks alot Nafan :D
     
         

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    Re: Updated Son Goten 孫悟天 Needs Re-Approval

    Cool bio.

    Goten's a boss. When/if my new bio gets approved, imagine Goten vs Jack Spicer
     
         

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