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    Akatsuki Chronicles

    Akatsuki Chronicles

    Chapter One: Begin With A Bang

    [*woooooh* as the wind blows through Jacobs hair, He looks to the ground in desperation, in what seems to be the end for him. He wonders if he's made a difference in anyone's life, if he'll be remember'd for more than just being a shinobi. As tears start to form and slowly drizzle down his cheeks]

    [Flashback-15 years earlier]

    Young Girls Voice: [*yelling*] Jacob! .. Jacob!, where could he be? [she wonders, as she looks left and right continuously]

    Disgruntled Voice: Go Away..

    Young Girl: [Following the echo of the voice] Jacob, what are you doing here by yourself [finding Jacob sitting behind a tree]. I was worried about you [she says, as she wraps both her arms around his head pushing his head against her chest]

    Jacob: [*smiling* with the feel of love and comfort coming from the hug] Sisi, what must you always do this?

    Sisi: Because i'm your big sister and i care for you with all my heart. Your all that i have and you keep running away, it worries me [as she lets go of his head to look him in his eyes]. I don't know what i would ever do with out you [as a tear falls down the left side of her cheek]

    Jacob: Why does everyone else think i'm a loser, Sisi?

    Sisi: [wiping the tear off her face, with her arm] No one thinks your a loser, their just trying to bring you down because they see something in you that they wish they had. Since your all kids it upsets them that they don't see the something they see in you, in themselves [as she smiles with great confidence].

    Jacob: [*smiling* from ear to ear] you really think so ?! [he says with excitement]

    Sisi: I know so, Jacob [she says while hugging him again]. Now lets get out of here and get something to eat [now helping Jacob stand-up]

    [2 Years Later]

    Jacob: Sisi! Sisi! I'm a Chuunin now ! [showing extreme excitement in his face]. Sisi, whats wrong? [now the excitement on his face slowly changes to a concerned look]

    Sisi: [Looking away from Jacob] Nothings wrong Jacob, Im proud of you.

    Jacob: Why won't you look at me?

    Sisi: [*Trying to hold her tears back*] I have to leave on a mission.

    Jacob: [*puzzled and confused*] But, you always go on missions. Whats wrong with this one?

    Sisi: [turns her head towards Jacob. *Gulp* swallowing her emotions] I have to go to the Hidden Rain Village [as she puts a on a smile to hide her pain of sadness]

    Jacob: Isn't that Village Controlled by an Evil man

    Sisi: Yes, my mission is to spy on this man and a Organization of Rebels

    Jacob: [*begins to smile*] Sounds like S-rank Mission, ALRIGHT! My Sister is Amazing! Consider this mission a Success

    Sisi: [*Now beginning to feel the pain slowly disappear, feeling the comfort of her little brothers belief in her*] That's right, Little Bro, pretty soon we'll go on these missions together [now smiling in happiness]

    Jacob: I can't wait to become a Jounin, like you..

    [Jacob being interrupted by 3 other Jounin shinobi, that appear to have came to get Sisi]

    Jounin shinobi: Sisi, it's time to leave

    Sisi: [Looking at her team mates] Alright then [now turning her head back to Jacob] I love you, always remember that. I'll be back as soon as i can.

    Jacob: [*smiling*] I love you to Sis, I know you'll succeed

    [Sisi and the 3 other Jounin now leaving and heading towards the Hidden Rain Village. As Jacob stands there watching his older sister leave]

    [1 Year and 3 Months Later]

    [As Jacob is on his way back to the Village, coming from a successful mission with his team. They are stopped at the Gates by 2 Jounin sensei's]

    Jounin Sensei: Jacob you should come with us, we need you to verify something.

    Jacob: What is it exactly you need me to verify ? [he says with his head tilting to the right]

    Jacob's Sensei: [Instantly realizing the look on the faces of the other Sensei] Jacob, it's important. Just go with them

    Jacob: [Now really confused] Well, ok if you say so Sensei

    [As the Sensei's take Jacob to the woods near their Village. when they finally reach the location. The Sensei's put their heads down looking towards the ground]

    Jounin Sensei's: We're Sorry..

    [As Jacob looks at them with a puzzled look, he then quickly notices a group of medic ninja surrounding 3 bodies. Shocked at seeing such a Gruesome scene from the gap's between the medic ninjas legs. *Snaps out of the daze* and runs over to the bodies looking at all of them *Frantically* noticing their part of his sister's team that was sent on the mission with her to the Rain Village, also noticing his sister isn't among the bodies on the ground]

    Jacob: [*With tears dropping down his face*] Where is she? [he asks quietly]. WHERE IS SHE?! [he then yells]

    [Jacob seeing the medic ninja's eyes looking at a tree a little further in the forest, then where the bodies were. He quickly runs to it. Then slowly stopping to drop to his knees, in such dis-belief. He's sister Pinned to a tree, hanging lifeless with her neck slit open]

    Jacob: [*Crying mixed with Rage and Horror*] H..How…C..Could this happen [*Sniffles*] Who did this… WHO DID THIS! [screaming at the top of his lungs in an angered filled tone]

    Medic Ninja: [*Putting his hand on Jacob's shoulder gently*] They were on the way back from their mission, last night. We believe they were attacked by the very people they were spying on, they were killed because they had information that other people didn't want getting out.

    Jacob: [*now lightly crying* he mutters ] Im going to kill whoever did this

    [2 Days Later]

    [At his sisters and her teams memorial burring, where tons of Villagers and Shinobi gathered. Jacob walks up to the coffin of his sister (*Looking at it Determined * to kill who did this to her)]

    Jacob: I Love You Sisi. Your the only person whoever truly loved me since mom and dad past, [*starts to tear and sniffle*] You were only 13 years old taking care of me, a 2 year old. [*laughs lightly*] I remember you were always frustrated but determined to make sure i grew up feeling loved. If it wasn't for you i wouldn't be the person i am today, i'd be a loser not knowing what the feeling of being wanted and loved was. I wish you could have watched me grow from down here, so you could teach me all the cool techniques you knew but, now you can look after me with mom and dad all the time no matter what. I know they're proud of you for taking on the roll of theirs at such an early age. I'll train my hardest to become as strong as you are. "I'll Always Love You, Remember That", [*Now looking up towards the sky*] I know you will Sisi. I know you will.


    To Be Continued..
     
         
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    I like it!!! :izuna: Is there gonna be more? I want to read more!! :D
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    Quote Originally Posted by Netsui View Post
    I like it!!! :izuna: Is there gonna be more? I want to read more!! :D
    Thanks:D and Yes there is :D
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    love it
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    Quote Originally Posted by izinagi54 View Post
    love it
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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    nice
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    Freaking awesome cant wait for the next part. The sis part was kinds of ****ed up tho
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    Quote Originally Posted by KiDxJIGGLY View Post
    Freaking awesome cant wait for the next part. The sis part was kinds of ****ed up tho
    Thanks, it was, huh
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    I......... Like it
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    it was great thank you for sharing
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    Quote Originally Posted by Reji View Post
    I......... Like it
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    Quote Originally Posted by Yuka View Post
    it was great thank you for sharing
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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

    This is awesome, loved it, will read the other chapter tomorrow
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles

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    This is awesome, loved it, will read the other chapter tomorrow
    thanx bro :D, and thanx for thanking it
     
         

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