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    naruto: rise of the uzuamki chapter 8 part 3 light and dark

    all rights of music in here belong to the creators of naruto and asura's wrath

    also you can press the play button on the music in the icon and it will play even if you shut the show button (to those who don't know)
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    (a izinagi 54 and hinata020 fanfic)

    o yeah another thing music will be in spoiler tags or show buttons:D if you perfer




    kushina: NARUTO!

    the seal from the scroll moves across naruto's body. naruto eyes turn red and the whites turn black

    naruto (demonic voice): AWWWWWW!

    several medical nin barge in along with sasuke

    sasuke: WHAT THE

    naruto's body enters a new version of the bijuu mode except this one is made purely out of dark chakara

    minato: EVERYONE GET BACK

    naruto is fighting to keep from lunging at anyone

    naruto(demonic voice) HELP ME!

    naruto cannines grow like in kurama form

    kushina: THE SCROLL!

    sasuke makes a move toward the scroll, only to be met by a chakara tail that sends him flyin into a wall

    sasuke: what hell are you doing naruto *is naruto even there anymore*

    naruto slowly gets up, his hair goes from blonde to black with red baines. his claws turn black

    naruto (demonic voice): RAWWWWR

    the amount of force behind his roar sends everyone flyin into a wall

    naruto(demonic): help me........

    naruto blows a hole in the wall and escapes

    *outside the hospital*

    guard 1: what the hell is that

    he points to a demonic naruto

    naruto(demonic voice) run.... run please

    the guard does not get far before being hit by a tail and knocked unconsious, naruto then heads into the forrest in the mountains, sasuke and minato are in hot pursuit



    naruto crashes through trees leaving minato and sasuke avoiding them

    sasuke*damn he is fast* minato sama

    minato hands him one of his kunai, sasuke activates his DMS(divine mangenkyo sharingan) and speeds up toward naruto until right next to him

    naruto(demonic voice) STAY AWAY!

    sasuke barely has time to sumersault over naruto before he gets hit by a tail, sasuke throws minato's kunai and minato tries to kick naruto, but he is grabbed by one of naruto's tails and sent flyin forwards

    minato*damn he is strong is naruto even there anymore* MY SON STOP!

    naruto pauses momentalerily before charging at minato at break neck speeds, sasuke jumps over naruto and drops down on him with a kick sending him flyin into the ground

    sasuke*naruto wake up* NARUTO STOP NOW!

    naruto gets up his hands grow black claws and he begins to get on all fours

    sasuke*O S*** * HERE HE COMES

    minato forms a rasangan and warps to naruto

    minato forgive me.....

    naruto warps above minato sending him into the ground, sasuke shoots chidori senbuns at him, but naruto uses his tails to deflect them all

    kushina STOP! NARUTO!

    she sends chakara chains out of her body and wraps them around naruto, naruto struggles to get free but cannot as his dark chakara is slowly removed

    kushina*now lets see what the sour.... no* NARUTO!

    naruto reforms his transformation and rips out of the chains

    naruto(dark bijuu mode) HE IS NO LONGER HERE IM IN CONTROL NOW!

    they all looked shocked

    minato WERE IS MY SON!

    dark naruto waves and points his finger right at himself but in his heart

    kushina WHO ARE YOU!

    dark naruto gives her a nasty look

    dark naruto well thats a good question. i am him he is me but we are a differnet being. HAHAHAAA!

    he continues to laugh then somthing happens he charges right at his mother kushina

    dark naruto DIE!

    she gets punched straight through several trees and is knocked unconsious, he goes for the killing blow but he stops grabbing his arm in pain


    *in naruto's mind*

    naruto jumps from his oppenets rasenshuriken, he activates bijuu mode but somthing is different about this one it glows pure white

    naruto what the hell is going on

    naruto looks to his left and sees dark naruto coming to view

    naruto i thought we settled this before

    dark gives him a grin

    dark naruto i know but this time its not your own dark chakara

    naruto stares at him poundering what he means

    naruto*that stupid scroll what the hell did it*

    dark naruto warps in front of him

    dark naruto do?

    he begins to laugh and points at naruto

    dark naruto when you opened it part of the demon god "me" entered you hmph if you are izanagi legacy how pathetic

    he forms a black rasangan

    naruto who are then

    naruto charges up his own rasangan, they charge eachother

    *out in the battle field*

    sasuke NARUTO!

    he propels himself forward and kicks naruto square in the jaw, but he sees him still lying on the ground

    sasuke*what the hell is going on*

    *back in naruto's mind*



    dark naruto AWWWW! RASAN
    naruto GAAAN!

    they both collide light and dark overtake eachother and the blast sends them both back into opposing walls

    ??? you want to know who i am

    naruto gets up and points his finger at him

    naruto do i have to beat it outa yea

    the dark being shakes his head

    kazumo i am the demon god kazumo the one you saw sealed. well not the full kazumo im only 1% of his power but the scroll that damn izanagi sealed me in here so his next succesor could capture me and use me...... IM NOT GOING TO LET IT END THAT WAAAAY!

    he charges right at naruto launching a flurry of punches at naruto, naruto holds his ground while they eachother fight

    naruto IM NOT LETTING YOU TAKE OVER!

    naruto sends him flying with a punch to the face and uses the tailed beasts chakara in him to form the 10 tails chakara

    kazumo(left over chakara) how.. how do you have juraku

    naruto looks confused as he enters 10 tails bijuu mode intenting to whipe kazumo from his body

    naruto juraku who

    kazumo face plams his face he then charges naruto

    kazumo(left over chakara) DIE

    naruto warps behind and sends a tail that slams kazumo into the wall

    naruto NO YOU DIE!!!

    naruto sends 3 tails into kazumo's body

    kazumo GWAAA DAMN YOUN AND YOUR FRIENDS FOR WHEN IM FREE ILL KILL THEM ALL FIRST TO MAKE YOU SUFFER UZUMAKI NARUTO

    naruto warps to him and sends a white colored rasangan into kazumo's back

    naruto YOU WILL NOT HARM ANY

    kazumo grabs naruto's head with his palm sending his chakara though naruto's body, naruto falls to his knees holding is head as images pop in his head

    *naruto's vision*



    kazumo look upon the world

    a volcano erupts in a distance and meterors falls to ground over the allied shinobi army

    kazumo you have changed nothing, NOTHING!

    he sees sasuke getting stabbed by hundreds of demons and minato and kushina executed, sakura and her baby being dragged away to a slaughter camp

    kasumo look on their faces naruto, LOOK AT THEM

    he sees them all in pitch black staring at him only for them to lobbed off and the blood to go in his face

    naruto STOP THIS!

    he begins to cry

    kasumo o are you crying little naruto look no look

    he holds sakura's baby by its black hair

    kasumo they named him a simular name simular to you and his name sasuto uchiha

    the baby cries

    naruto no don't please don't

    he throws the baby down a dark deep hole, naruto tries to follow but his friends grab him

    naruto's loved ones (twisted) naruto why, WHY DID YOU LET THIS HAPPEN, ANSWER UUUSSSS!!

    kasumo HAHAHAHA HAAAA HAAA HA


    hinata STOP NARUTO!

    naruto looks over his shoulder to see a light

    kasumo WHAT NOOOOOOO!

    the lights causes him to bleed away, naruto slowly gets up and walks to the light

    naruto hinata?

    he walks to were he sees a femal figure in the light

    naruto HINATA!

    he runs to her now, they embrace, naruto starts to bowl

    hinata its ok naruto kun we are here for you

    they share a kiss, the light envelopes naruto in the darkness, his bijuu mode glows pure white but his iris stays the same as in dark bijuu mode

    *the real world*

    naruto wakes up to see everyone sitting around him sasuke, sakura, minato, kushina, and hinata who holds his hand as he lays on the ground in his new bijuu mode

    sakura welcome back knockle head
    sasuke hmph is that even you
    hinata naruto kun

    he opens eyes fully now and gets up

    *end of chapter*
     
         
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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzuamki chapter 8 part 3 light and dark

    i know it very long but we are about to wrap up ACT I and begin ACT II
    anyway if you wish to see music in future chapters please the only way i know if you want it is either voice your oppion on this thread or a pm me have a nice night or day
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzuamki chapter 8 part 3 light and dark

    im sorry for the double post but this is part 4 not 3 and i left out the dynasty damn i suck im sorry i trying to fix it
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzuamki chapter 8 part 3 light and dark

    Amazing :D
     
         

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    nice
     
         

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    Wow Toooooo Goood
     
         

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    Wow Toooooo Goood


    the music joins the fanfic
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzuamki chapter 8 part 3 light and dark

    good work :D, i also wanted to incorperate music with my stories
     
         

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    good work :d, i also wanted to incorperate music with my stories
    holly **** your zetsu looks like garra
     
         

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