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    Akatsuki Chronicles [Cries and Laughter]

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    Chapter Three: Cries and Laughter


    [2 Months Later]

    [It's been two months since Jacob, Duece, Sling, and Mel left there Village, being sent out on an S-Rank Mission to retrieve a deadly member of an Organization that goes by the name Akatsuki. This member goes by the name of Hidan, also new intel shows that Hidan has been paired up with another member of their Organization, Kakuzu. Very little is Known about Kakuzu, and what happen to Hidan after he left his Village, murdering his neighbors before doing so. Two months have been spent tracking down these Rogue Ninja, but today is the day these criminals meet justice, or is it...]

    Sling: [*Yawning*] Wake up you meatballs.

    Duece: [*Raising from his cot, staring at Sling with evil intent*] What did you just say !

    Sling: [*Eyes beginning to widen*] WAKE..UP..[*he says while smiling like a creep*]

    Mel: Shut up you idiots !

    Jacob: [*Releasing a deep breath*] Let's get ready, we need to leave before noon.

    Sling: [*Looking away from everyone*] Oh but yawl listen to him…

    [15 Minutes til Noon]

    Jacob: Let's go

    [*Jacob, Duece, Sling, and Mel proceed to leaving the 'Inn' to continue their mission. Now leaving the little town they've spent the night in, they travel through a Forest jumping from tree to tree. Traveling high grounds will be easier for them to spot what's up ahead.*]

    Mel: I have a funny feeling [*starts to slow down*]

    Jacob: [*Looking back at Mel and then comes to a complete stop*] What do you feel ?

    [*Sling and Duece come to a stop aswel, looking at Mel*]

    Mel: [*With a confused look on her face*] I feel cold, and cautious. It's like it's warning me.

    Sling: Sh*t, maybe we better listen [*Then begins to Laugh*]

    Duece: [*Now looking towards Jacob*] Maybe we should go ahead First, and let them watch our flanks

    Jacob: [*Looks towards Duece*] Good Idea

    [*The Team then begins to move forward, Duece and Jacob ahead while Sling and Mel cover their flank*]

    [*10 Minutes Later- the Team slows down Hearing voices up ahead on a Dirt road next to the River, the Team then moves to a position on the ground in bushes to get a better look at the people they hear*]

    Sling: Crap it's gotta be them

    Duece: This is the only i'll admit that Sling is right.

    Mel: We need to be serious, their chakra is enormous and extremely cold.

    Jacob: Theres no doubt about it, the one to the right is Hidan, and the one to his left must be Kakuzu

    Duece: We should separate them, Two of us vs One of them

    Jacob: We don't know any of their abilities, we're better of just testing the waters first before we do something like that.

    --

    Kakuzu: [*Grunting*]

    Hidan: [*Smiling*] Something wrong big guy [*begins to laugh*]

    --

    Jacob: Duece trap Hidan. Mel, Sling and I will test Kakuzu

    Duece: Roger that [*Proceeds to perform handseals, then immediately smacking the ground with his palms *] -Earth Release: Earth Dome-

    Jacob: Now !

    [*As the ground shakes beneath Kakuzu and Hidan, Kakuzu instantly jumps to his left avoiding the raising rocks walls surrounding and closing over and around [Sphere shape] Hidan, trapping him inside. As Kakuzu jumps to the left, Jacob, Mel , and Sling attack while Kakuzu is in the air.*]

    Hidan: [*Confused*] The F*ck is this ?

    Jacob: [*Performing three swift handseals as Kakuzu leaps left*] -Water Release: Rapid Water Bullets-

    Sling: [*Performing Six quick handseals as Jacob performs his*] -Lightning Release: Sporadic Waves of Lightning

    Mel: [*Performing 4 Handseals as Jacob and Sling perform theirs*] -Wind Release: Wind Levitation-

    [*As the water from the river rises, it shoots out 50 extremely fast mini spheres of water at the same time high speed winds form underneath Kakuzu keep him levitated in the air but at an uncontrollable pace, following both techniques, Sling's Lightning Waves release from his arms, raging towards Kakuzu*]

    [*Kakuzu while in the air realizes the gust of wind forming beneath him and detaches his right hand, making it smash into the ground about 10 ft. away from him pulling himself away from the Wind and avoiding the Water Bullets. Kakuzu then immediately holds out his left hand causing Sling's Lightning to make full contact with Kakuzu's palm, but at the same time Kakuzu releases a -Lightning Pulse- off setting Sling's attack. Kakuzu then draws his right hand back in, re-attaching it*]

    Kakuzu: [*Showing a blank expression*] Your going to have to try better than that

    Mel: [*Surprised*] He avoided everything….

    Sling: [*Confused*] He detached his hand ?!

    Jacob: [*Yelling out*] Move !

    [*Kakuzu now knowing where their hidden detaches both hands and sends them flying at high speeds into the bushes, to grab and/or draw them out*]

    [*Jacob, and Sling move out of the way in time but Mel's leg is caught by one of Kakuzu's hands, Kakuzu drawing Jacob and Sling out of hiding and onto the dirt road then pulls his hands back in with Mel in his right hand*]

    Jacob: [*Yells out *] Mel !

    Sling: [*Yells out*] Duece get her !

    [*While Kazuzu is drawing his hands back in with Mel in his right hand, he opens his Mouth with 4 long sharp threads coming out, awaiting to pierce Mel's body like spikes, surely killing her*]

    Hidan: [*Still confused*] It seems like the Big Grump is having fun with out me [*Starts to Laugh, with his head tilting to the right*] We better change that.


    To Be Continued….
     
         
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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Cries and Laughter]

    This is very good, loved the fight scene. I can't wait to finish reading the rest of it
     
         
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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Cries and Laughter]

    Quote Originally Posted by General Yama View Post
    This is very good, loved the fight scene. I Can't wait to finish reading the rest of it
    Thanx bro :scorps::D
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Cries and Laughter]

    I just came across these and loved them. read the three back to back whaen r u making more? excited for the next chapter.
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Cries and Laughter]

    Quote Originally Posted by ClashinDevestation View Post
    I just came across these and loved them. read the three back to back whaen r u making more? excited for the next chapter.
    lol, thank u :D
    and hopefully soon
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Cries and Laughter]

    7 / 10 Stars.
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Cries and Laughter]

    nice plus rep
     
         

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    Re: Akatsuki Chronicles [Cries and Laughter]

    Quote Originally Posted by Green Hood View Post
    7 / 10 Stars.
    thanx bro
    Quote Originally Posted by serenaandrosie View Post
    nice plus rep
    thanx ::D
     
         

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