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[Bio Test - Mei Terumi] Toshiro
Greetings, Toshiro
I will be administrating your test and the rules are as followed:
Rules:
~ Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
~ All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
~ Custom Jutsus and Elements are not allowed
~ Terrain: The room where Sasuke and the The 4th Raikage fought.
~ You may use Mei Terumi's abilities up to your current rank
~ We start mid range from each other
~ If you have any questions please ask them via vm.
I will be using a Standard Sasuke Uchiha (With MS) biography for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that you're testing and I will make the first move.
No one other than myself and the participant may post here. If required, administrators/moderators and official senseis can input their opinion as well.
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Re: [Bio Test - Mei Terumi] Toshiro
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Re: [Bio Test - Mei Terumi] Toshiro
Note: Talking has no effect on the timeframe throughout the battle
Sasuke: I won't continue to play these games Mizukage. If you won't tell me Danzo's whereabouts, I will find them myself!
*Sasuke closes his eyes and opens them again, revealing a 3 Tomoe Sharingan*
Sasuke: Now, it's time to feel the power of the Uchiha!
Sasuke starts by sending 3 dragon shaped fire balls at you. One goes directly at you, while the other two are slightly curved to the left and the right. They all hit you at the same time, though.
(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
As the dragon-shaped fireballs are shot he does three more hand seals, and disrupts the a chunk of rock in the ceiling above you. Doing this, causes the part of the ceiling above you to cave in. This would happen around the same time, or slightly after the fire balls connect to hit you.
(Doton: Iwayado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Rock Lodging Destruction
While this happens, he does the ram hand seal, creating a a sucking whirlpool in the ground under you.
(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
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Last edited by Wesobi; 04-18-2012 at 08:54 PM.
Reason: forgot to bold+spoiler jutsu.
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Re: [Bio Test - Mei Terumi] Toshiro
 Originally Posted by Wesobi
Note: Talking has no effect on the timeframe throughout the battle
Sasuke: I won't continue to play these games Mizukage. If you won't tell me Danzo's whereabouts, I will find them myself!
*Sasuke closes his eyes and opens them again, revealing a 3 Tomoe Sharingan*
Sasuke: Now, it's time to feel the power of the Uchiha!
Sasuke starts by sending 3 dragon shaped fire balls at you. One goes directly at you, while the other two are slightly curved to the left and the right. They all hit you at the same time, though.
(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
As the dragon-shaped fireballs are shot he does three more hand seals, and disrupts the a chunk of rock in the ceiling above you. Doing this, causes the part of the ceiling above you to cave in. This would happen around the same time, or slightly after the fire balls connect to hit you.
(Doton: Iwayado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Rock Lodging Destruction
While this happens, he does the ram hand seal, creating a a sucking whirlpool in the ground under you.
(Doton: Arijigoku no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Antlion Technique
"It always hurts my heart to melt a good-looking guy… But you're going to have to die."
I watch as you expel three dragon shaped fireballs towards my position. I quickly without hesitation perform the Ram Handseal as I build up Water Chakra into my mouth, and once done I release a large quantity of water from my mouth towards the dragon shaped fireballs. As my water technique and your fireballs begin to collide, my water begins to evaporate due to the heat from your fire jutsu. But in the end my water overpowers your fire technique canceling it out, and continuing onwards towards you. If my water hits you, you will be washed away up to long-range from my position, however despite the water jutsu coming towards you'd still have time to just about perform your second technique, and as the water finally settles across the room we would be standing in deep water which would be high enough to fill up the room up to the area between your ankle and knee.
Soon after releasing the water from my mouth, I notice a small rock about the size of my hand fall downwards in the area right in front of me, in addition to that I begin to hear a sort of crumbling sound from the earth above me and so as a normal reaction, I quickly look upwards noticing the ceiling is about to cave in on itself, without hesitation I quickly slam my hands onto the ground, and using the earth around me I form a dome made of earth to protect me. However unlike any other earth shelter I modify my shelter so that it curves in a way sliding anything that lands on top of it off. My plan however gets slightly affected by the collision of my water and your fire which creates some steam between us, which means I can only see your silhouette whilst you see the silhouette of my dome and the falling earth making it hard for you to make me out through the steam due to the falling earth, my dome and the steam further blocking your vision.
Soon after the ceiling finishes collapsing, I walk out of the dome I recently created while looking around. As I look around I only see a the mist which formed from the water evaporating earlier has become thinner but still around the room due to the room being slightly compact and closed off from any breeze or any gusts of wind you may have outside. Taking this information and using it to my advantage I decide to do a surprise attack. So I quickly perform the following Horse hand seal and release scorching hot lava shaped like a fireball towards your silhouette in the distance and as it goes towards you, you would originally think it's a normal fireball due to you not being able to see it properly through the mist, it then hits you knocking you back whilst severely burning your chest to the point you are nearly dead.
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Re: [Bio Test - Mei Terumi] Toshiro
 Originally Posted by Titania
"It always hurts my heart to melt a good-looking guy… But you're going to have to die."
I watch as you expel three dragon shaped fireballs towards my position. I quickly without hesitation perform the Ram Handseal as I build up Water Chakra into my mouth, and once done I release a large quantity of water from my mouth towards the dragon shaped fireballs. As my water technique and your fireballs begin to collide, my water begins to evaporate due to the heat from your fire jutsu. But in the end my water overpowers your fire technique canceling it out, and continuing onwards towards you. If my water hits you, you will be washed away up to long-range from my position, however despite the water jutsu coming towards you'd still have time to just about perform your second technique, and as the water finally settles across the room we would be standing in deep water which would be high enough to fill up the room up to the area between your ankle and knee.
Soon after releasing the water from my mouth, I notice a small rock about the size of my hand fall downwards in the area right in front of me, in addition to that I begin to hear a sort of crumbling sound from the earth above me and so as a normal reaction, I quickly look upwards noticing the ceiling is about to cave in on itself, without hesitation I quickly slam my hands onto the ground, and using the earth around me I form a dome made of earth to protect me. However unlike any other earth shelter I modify my shelter so that it curves in a way sliding anything that lands on top of it off. My plan however gets slightly affected by the collision of my water and your fire which creates some steam between us, which means I can only see your silhouette whilst you see the silhouette of my dome and the falling earth making it hard for you to make me out through the steam due to the falling earth, my dome and the steam further blocking your vision.
Soon after the ceiling finishes collapsing, I walk out of the dome I recently created while looking around. As I look around I only see a the mist which formed from the water evaporating earlier has become thinner but still around the room due to the room being slightly compact and closed off from any breeze or any gusts of wind you may have outside. Taking this information and using it to my advantage I decide to do a surprise attack. So I quickly perform the following Horse hand seal and release scorching hot lava shaped like a fireball towards your silhouette in the distance and as it goes towards you, you would originally think it's a normal fireball due to you not being able to see it properly through the mist, it then hits you knocking you back whilst severely burning your chest to the point you are nearly dead.
Sasuke: Hmpf, cheap tricks.
As your water is released and is coming my way, it hits my fire at first, stopping a small amount of its momentum. I notice this and at the same time the ceiling is crumbling. I then notice the water is still coming my way, and lower the earth in between us and under you (so basically, all of the earth infront of me lowers, except where i'm standing).
(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
The ground drops 10 meters, causing the water to actually flow back your way due to the sudden shift in the earth, as well as causing it to imbalance inside your dome (the dome itself is unharmed, as my technique does not alter the surface itself). Do take note that, due to your dropping so much so rapidly, it would take more time before the ceiling hits you. Also note that the water is now coming back your way, and due to the amount of water and the shift in earth, it would be able to overflow above your dome (as you didn't state how large it is).
Anyways, as the water is now racing your way, the ceiling is falling down and the mist that was made of our clashing attacks (which makes me hardly visible to you) would make it hard for you to perform your lava fire ball, if you do not defend properly to this situation.
I continue after shifting the earth by doing two more hand seals, causing the earth under you to turn into a swamp, and letting you sink into the ground, as well as the dome you created. Considering it is placed above you, you would not be able to go upward or you would hit it. The swamp also extends to the general area behind you and somewhat infront of you. The swamp, mixing in with the water that is coming your way, is now extra deadly.
(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
I then continue by making two clones next to me, Lefty to the left, and Righty to the right.
(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
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Re: [Bio Test - Mei Terumi] Toshiro
 Originally Posted by Wesobi
Sasuke: Hmpf, cheap tricks.
As your water is released and is coming my way, it hits my fire at first, stopping a small amount of its momentum. I notice this and at the same time the ceiling is crumbling. I then notice the water is still coming my way, and lower the earth in between us and under you (so basically, all of the earth infront of me lowers, except where i'm standing).
(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
The ground drops 10 meters, causing the water to actually flow back your way due to the sudden shift in the earth, as well as causing it to imbalance inside your dome (the dome itself is unharmed, as my technique does not alter the surface itself). Do take note that, due to your dropping so much so rapidly, it would take more time before the ceiling hits you. Also note that the water is now coming back your way, and due to the amount of water and the shift in earth, it would be able to overflow above your dome (as you didn't state how large it is).
Anyways, as the water is now racing your way, the ceiling is falling down and the mist that was made of our clashing attacks (which makes me hardly visible to you) would make it hard for you to perform your lava fire ball, if you do not defend properly to this situation.
I continue after shifting the earth by doing two more hand seals, causing the earth under you to turn into a swamp, and letting you sink into the ground, as well as the dome you created. Considering it is placed above you, you would not be able to go upward or you would hit it. The swamp also extends to the general area behind you and somewhat infront of you. The swamp, mixing in with the water that is coming your way, is now extra deadly.
(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
I then continue by making two clones next to me, Lefty to the left, and Righty to the right.
(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
For a child, you have style. Shut up, or I'll kill you. It always hurts my heart to melt a good-looking guy… But you're going to have to die.
Extraordinary things happen, suddenly, the ground in between us and below Mei suddenly drops instantaneously without caution. The rapid rate of the movement of ground, causes my own volume of water to be turned around at me, and without hesitation knowing I have fallen, I create a gigantic stone golem, dense in mass, to rise up from the ground formation below us. Taking its shape, the sheer size of the rock golem overwhelms you. It assumes a crouching pose of covering me with its back from behind, shielding me from the falling debris of rock. The back taking the hit, the stupendous size of the golem supports the ceiling once reaching full growth, voiding all aggressive moves against me from the rooftop. The golem carries me upwards on its right hand, as I stand calmly on its palm, not afraid of the impending doom below which I have successfully got out of harms way. Undoubtedly, it would sink into the swamp, albeit at a much slower rate, or should I say taking a much longer time to completely sink, given the immense volume of earth making up the golem. The golem supporting the ceiling, and carrying me upwards whilst shielding me from the attacks above. Continuing almost as if uninterrupted, Mei carries out the rest of her move from her current position, as 2 clones poof into existence by Sasuke's side. I still remain above the gargantuan pit, in the palm of the golem held upwards, which is gigantic; It would take a while for the golem to completely sink, and as such, I will remain relatively above the ground so long as I remain on the golem's arms.
I had risen out of the humongous pit you created. Without much interruption, the moment I rise up of the pit, in which the clones would just have poofed into existence, I send my fiery chakra into the rocky ceiling above you. Being solely comprised of rocks, I melt the rocks with my Lava Chakra, thereby turning the solids soon changes into a thick crimson red liquid above you. It soon descends upon your three clones in a wide area, at least a circle of radius 5 meters of lava dropping upon your heads. The sheer substance of lava is relative to the rocks, and most of the ceiling above you has been changed into lava, existing as one of the hottest liquids that almost serve as a corrosive acid which heavily burns you to bits and melts you, should you get hit by the falling lava. Apart from that, the lava carries additional weight along with the effects of gravity, descending upon you at a much faster rate. Should any of your clones be caught, they would die immediately or suffer the pain of lava. The volume of lava if fails to hit you, would fall to the ground and create a considerably thin layer of liquid lava on the ground in which you are standing on. As such, it would be impossible to stand there anymore with the lava there.
Rocks to lava. A fitting end for a handsome man such as you...
Smacking her lips, she displays her voluptuous body in an alluring way, as her seemingly cursive figure seems to stand out from the battlefield in her subtle blue dress. To ensure your death, as the lava would have blocked our view of you, she performs the Horse → Tiger hand seals in a swift and fluid motion, and within moments, she expels a meteor-sized fire sphere. It is relatively huge, and travels at an astounding fast speed, dense and powerful, towards you covered in a thick liquid known as lava. As the sphere of fire manifests its shape and comes towards you, unable to see it through the thick lava encompassing you, and possibly killing you, the speed in which it comes and the resultant impact of the mere fireball hitting you would be powerful, you not expecting it. Furthermore, the fireball with enough force to push you back several meters, it explodes in an unworldly devastating blast, eradicating your existence from the face of the Earth.
It is a shame to have killed such a young and handsome guy.
Note: Mei doesn't make eye contact with Sasuke,but instead focuses her eyes towards his chin whenever she does look at him.
Sorry for late reply, was quite busy.
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Re: [Bio Test - Mei Terumi] Toshiro
 Originally Posted by Titania
For a child, you have style. Shut up, or I'll kill you. It always hurts my heart to melt a good-looking guy… But you're going to have to die.
Extraordinary things happen, suddenly, the ground in between us and below Mei suddenly drops instantaneously without caution. The rapid rate of the movement of ground, causes my own volume of water to be turned around at me, and without hesitation knowing I have fallen, I create a gigantic stone golem, dense in mass, to rise up from the ground formation below us. Taking its shape, the sheer size of the rock golem overwhelms you. It assumes a crouching pose of covering me with its back from behind, shielding me from the falling debris of rock. The back taking the hit, the stupendous size of the golem supports the ceiling once reaching full growth, voiding all aggressive moves against me from the rooftop. The golem carries me upwards on its right hand, as I stand calmly on its palm, not afraid of the impending doom below which I have successfully got out of harms way. Undoubtedly, it would sink into the swamp, albeit at a much slower rate, or should I say taking a much longer time to completely sink, given the immense volume of earth making up the golem. The golem supporting the ceiling, and carrying me upwards whilst shielding me from the attacks above. Continuing almost as if uninterrupted, Mei carries out the rest of her move from her current position, as 2 clones poof into existence by Sasuke's side. I still remain above the gargantuan pit, in the palm of the golem held upwards, which is gigantic; It would take a while for the golem to completely sink, and as such, I will remain relatively above the ground so long as I remain on the golem's arms.
I had risen out of the humongous pit you created. Without much interruption, the moment I rise up of the pit, in which the clones would just have poofed into existence, I send my fiery chakra into the rocky ceiling above you. Being solely comprised of rocks, I melt the rocks with my Lava Chakra, thereby turning the solids soon changes into a thick crimson red liquid above you. It soon descends upon your three clones in a wide area, at least a circle of radius 5 meters of lava dropping upon your heads. The sheer substance of lava is relative to the rocks, and most of the ceiling above you has been changed into lava, existing as one of the hottest liquids that almost serve as a corrosive acid which heavily burns you to bits and melts you, should you get hit by the falling lava. Apart from that, the lava carries additional weight along with the effects of gravity, descending upon you at a much faster rate. Should any of your clones be caught, they would die immediately or suffer the pain of lava. The volume of lava if fails to hit you, would fall to the ground and create a considerably thin layer of liquid lava on the ground in which you are standing on. As such, it would be impossible to stand there anymore with the lava there.
Rocks to lava. A fitting end for a handsome man such as you...
Smacking her lips, she displays her voluptuous body in an alluring way, as her seemingly cursive figure seems to stand out from the battlefield in her subtle blue dress. To ensure your death, as the lava would have blocked our view of you, she performs the Horse → Tiger hand seals in a swift and fluid motion, and within moments, she expels a meteor-sized fire sphere. It is relatively huge, and travels at an astounding fast speed, dense and powerful, towards you covered in a thick liquid known as lava. As the sphere of fire manifests its shape and comes towards you, unable to see it through the thick lava encompassing you, and possibly killing you, the speed in which it comes and the resultant impact of the mere fireball hitting you would be powerful, you not expecting it. Furthermore, the fireball with enough force to push you back several meters, it explodes in an unworldly devastating blast, eradicating your existence from the face of the Earth.
It is a shame to have killed such a young and handsome guy.
Note: Mei doesn't make eye contact with Sasuke,but instead focuses her eyes towards his chin whenever she does look at him.
Sorry for late reply, was quite busy.
Sasuke: You sure speak much for an old unmarried hag... Do you even know what it means to kill? I will show you what death means.
Sasuke and his clones hear a sizzling sound above them as the lava manifests. Lefty creates 3 pillars to make us avoid the lava. Lefty and myself are shot slightly backward (enough to be out of reach of the lava), while Righty is shot forward towards you.
(Doton No Jutsu) - Earth Release Technique
I myself, while Lefty is busy creating the pillars, do 4 hand seals and release it as I'm set backward, setting a light that illuminates the entire room (or what is left of it lolol). Righty is not affected by this as the light is behind him, while you should be blinded by the light.
(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
This all happens so that "Righty" is flying your way as you shoot out the fireball (basically, you shot the fire ball as righty is flying forward and I myself create the blinding light). Righty notices you firing the fireball at him, and realizes he needs to react quickly. He shoots out a jet of water out of his hand, nullifying the fire balls and lands next to you on the golem.
(Suiton: Suihachi) – Water Release: Hand of waves
(You should be able to see Righty again as he is busy nullifying the fire balls/nullified the fire balls and is about to land on the golem)
Righty: You were saying?
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Re: [Bio Test - Mei Terumi] Toshiro
 Originally Posted by Wesobi
Sasuke (in himself): That cloud of mist is full of chakra... I need to watch out for this technique. She wouldn't use it if it wasn't capable of harming me eventhough Susannoo is protecting me.
Lefty while the mist is coming his way releases a huge blast of wind, which would scatter the mist around, and blow it back to you, but I at the same time ignite the blast. This way, extra toxins and corrosive parts come free due to the heating, sending a toxic fire blast at you.
(Katon: Fuuton Ken Katon Bakufuu no Jutsu) Fire Release: Wind and Fire Blast Technique
Before that however, Sasuke took notice of where you were standing. As the blast comes your way, Sasuke ignites the part of fire that would hit your body with black flames.
Sasuke: Amaterasu...
(Doujutsu: Amaterasu) - Eye Technique: Shining Heaven
This increases the power of his attack, as a wall of fire and toxic fumes are now sent your way, with an amaterasu focused at the spot where the fire would hit you.
Small note: Sasuke keeps the amaterasu focused on the spot of where it will hit you, so it doesn't spread out over the entire fire.
I swear on my name as Mizukage that I will fulfil my duty. I will defeat this little punk!
As your clone releases the wind towards me, I quickly notice my mist being redirected back towards my position, and at the same time I notice you release a fire blast which combines with the wind. I quickly comes to a conclusion that the fire blast coming towards my way is now infused with the toxicity from the mist, which could be quite harmful towards me. As the fire technique comes towards me I quickly focus my chakra into the pre-existing toxic fumes within the fire, in which since it comes from the Boil I previously used, I should be able to control it. Using my chakra and great concentration, I reduces the PH level of the toxic so it becomes harmless. As soon as I finish lowering the PH level, I quickly without hesitation as the fire is racing towards me, spew out a dense torrent of pressurized water, which curves as it is expelled. It effectively within moments form a barricade that extinguishes the incoming fire, thereby creating a huge layer of steam that erupts from the clash of fire and water.
As I finish releasing the water from my mouth I quickly take out a small scroll, and I place it on the ground with my dominant hand on the center. As our jutsus start to collide with each other, I begin to release my chakra into the scroll, and as I move my hand away from the scroll, a large dragon made of fire erupts from it, and heads towards you at a incredible speed. As it heads towards you, I observe it carefully, and after it traveled a few meters I notice it come to a stop like its fighting off something. As I take a closer look I notice black flames, and as I continue to observe them, it seems that the black flames are pushing through and overpowering my fire. I quickly not wanting to be a stationary target, starts running towards the right in a arc so I wouldn't get hit by the flames.
As I continue to run, I start manipulating my chakra once again, I create vapour which is concentrated around your location, enveloped with Susanoo. The vapour is released from the ground around you, in which with my chakra, I immediately cause them to explode, creating corrosive explosions around Susanoo that rise from the ground. They set off randomly around you, and being slightly acidic and toxic, the bones of Susanoo melt and the corrosive explosions severely injures you. Mei keeps watch as this is done, as you fall prey to her Boil Release.
You are helpless before my Boil Release.
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Re: [Bio Test - Mei Terumi] Toshiro
 Originally Posted by Toshiro
I swear on my name as Mizukage that I will fulfil my duty. I will defeat this little punk!
As your clone releases the wind towards me, I quickly notice my mist being redirected back towards my position, and at the same time I notice you release a fire blast which combines with the wind. I quickly comes to a conclusion that the fire blast coming towards my way is now infused with the toxicity from the mist, which could be quite harmful towards me. As the fire technique comes towards me I quickly focus my chakra into the pre-existing toxic fumes within the fire, in which since it comes from the Boil I previously used, I should be able to control it. Using my chakra and great concentration, I reduces the PH level of the toxic so it becomes harmless. As soon as I finish lowering the PH level, I quickly without hesitation as the fire is racing towards me, spew out a dense torrent of pressurized water, which curves as it is expelled. It effectively within moments form a barricade that extinguishes the incoming fire, thereby creating a huge layer of steam that erupts from the clash of fire and water.
As I finish releasing the water from my mouth I quickly take out a small scroll, and I place it on the ground with my dominant hand on the center. As our jutsus start to collide with each other, I begin to release my chakra into the scroll, and as I move my hand away from the scroll, a large dragon made of fire erupts from it, and heads towards you at a incredible speed. As it heads towards you, I observe it carefully, and after it traveled a few meters I notice it come to a stop like its fighting off something. As I take a closer look I notice black flames, and as I continue to observe them, it seems that the black flames are pushing through and overpowering my fire. I quickly not wanting to be a stationary target, starts running towards the right in a arc so I wouldn't get hit by the flames.
As I continue to run, I start manipulating my chakra once again, I create vapour which is concentrated around your location, enveloped with Susanoo. The vapour is released from the ground around you, in which with my chakra, I immediately cause them to explode, creating corrosive explosions around Susanoo that rise from the ground. They set off randomly around you, and being slightly acidic and toxic, the bones of Susanoo melt and the corrosive explosions severely injures you. Mei keeps watch as this is done, as you fall prey to her Boil Release.
You are helpless before my Boil Release.
As the fire comes my way, I activate amaterasu to coat my susannoo, protecting me from it.
(Doujutsu: Toku Amaterasu) - Eye Technique: Shield of Amaterasu
I then notice the acidity and toxins around me, and notice susannoo starting to melt. I put you under an endless genjutsu that tortures you, but at the same time forces you to end your technique.
Sasuke: Tsukuyomi...
(Doujutsu: Tsukuyomi) - Eye Technique: Nightmare Realm
I will now be submitting your test for grading. You will get your results once the mods have decided judgement. Good luck, and thank you for being my first testing subject!
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Viva ao 25 de Abril!
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I need a second opinion. Await the results.
Edit:
±± Test Failed ±±
Ok, the overal test is very very close to pass. Had you not done this move http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...92&postcount=6 and you would have passed. That move is a mess. You go back and forth on your word, first using the golem one way then stating you don't use it like that and use it another way, etc etc. Its both a bad move but also a time frame raping.
I have advised people before on this. When you want to put big descriptions be sure you aren't actually making yourself fail. It can be a good addition to a move and make the grader look at it and think "Wow, skill" or it can come to bite you in the behind, because the more detailed the description, the more flaws can be found.
Sorry, but you can try again in one month.
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