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    cubes: chapter 3

    Messi: *talking while taking a bath*mom ...make me a hot coffee..i am in a hurry

    Mom: *in the kitchen*ok ..where are you going?

    Messi: *aloud*somewhere

    Mom: ok..Mai called me a few minutes ago while you were sleeping

    Messi: *while getting out of the bathroom*what did she say?

    Mom: *preparing coffee*all she said was to tell him to be fast!!

    Messi: *looks at the clock*what the....mom i go to go bye

    Messi ran out of the house while he was wearing his t-shirt

    Mom: here is you coffee son!!

    Messi: *while towards the north*later mom..bye

    Mom: *shouting*com back here you.........

    Messi couldn't hear what mom said then.messi blinked his eyes and he was behind

    Mai.she was waiting for him since 9: 00.Messi was wondering how he came there so fast.

    Mai turned to Messi before Messi says a word.





    Mai: *angry*so at last you have come!!

    Messi: *trying to cool mai*so let's go to the ice-cream shop?

    mai: *red face*what's the time now?

    Messi: 12 i think!!

    Mai: what was the time i told you to come here?

    Messi: 9 i guess!!

    Mai: m...ok then let's go in

    Messi: no please.. let's go to the ice-cream shop.. i am hungry!!

    Mai: ok





    Messi and mai went to a nearby shop where ice-creams and cool drinks are sold

    messi odered for a choclate ice-cream with extra jelly.Mai oderd for a strawberry ice-cream

    only.after few secounds a waiter arrived with there oderd foods.Messi was hungry so he

    started to drink the ice-cream as fast as he recieved it.then messi noticed something about the

    ice-cream.he was holding the cup of ice-cream.it wasn't ice or cold it was hot,hot like a coffee

    so he called to the waiter again and complained it to him.
    Messi: i told you to bring me an ace-cream not a hot choclate coffe

    Waiter: but i brought......

    Messi: ok bring me a coffee!!

    waiter: ok sir





    Mai was looking at messi while she was drinking her ice-cream.she was wondering

    about the ice-cream which was brought to Messi.

    mai: wasn't the ice-cream cold when he brought it to you?

    Messi: i think it was..

    Mai: you should not shout at the boy then.

    Messi: ok..

    Mai: that's better...so the guardians...do ya belive him?

    Messi: kinda.

    Mai: kinda?

    Messi: yap...yeah do you know why i came so fast?

    Mai: you were very fast,you made me wait 2 hours

    Messi: no no i was i ran out from the house and i reached here within secound

    Mai: realy?

    Messi: yap!!

    Mai: orb?

    Messi: i think...let's go to school library?

    Mai: yes i would like to.





    by then the waiter came to Messi's table with a hot coffe.he placed the mug

    in front of messi.as messi tried to touched the mug ,Mai stopped it and she touched the mug first and

    she tested wether the coffee was cold or hot.it was hot.after that Mai gave chance to Messi to drink it
    Messi: what?

    Mai: just testing!!

    Messi: hehe..ok

    Mai: *looking at Messi*drink it!!

    messi: *holds the mug up to mouth*ok..here i go

    Mai: *^^*

    Messi: *takes a sip of coffee*yuck!!this one is like narmal water with bitter powder in it!!

    Mai: *:D*i see

    Messi: *spits out the coffee he took in*let's go home i am not hungry

    Mai: *drinks the last drop of ice- cream*ok lets go.but first the park

    Messi: *^^*ok lets there and .....

    Mai: *grabs Messi"s hand and runs out of the ice-cream shop in a hurry*come on!!!!

    Waiter: *shouting aloud*where.... the money??

    Messi: *while running *later sir

    they ran right in to the park and sat on a bench

    and started to talk about what was happening to him

    To be continued on capter 4
     
         
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    Re: cubes: chapter 3

     
         

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    Re: cubes: chapter 3

    nice but fix the smilies that are shown
     
         

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    Re: cubes: chapter 3

    Quote Originally Posted by Zawar View Post
    nice but fix the smilies that are shown

    yeah
    all the " :" turned into smiles
     
         

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    Re: cubes: chapter 3

    Ive read all the chapters so far. Its good to read something that its not related to Naruto. I actually find the story interesting. Hopefully, there will be action coming next chapter. good job!
     
         

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    Re: cubes: chapter 3

    your getting better!
     
         

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    Re: cubes: chapter 3

    Chapter 2 didn't go wel like 1 and 3
     
         

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