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    Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

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    Chapter 9


    The next day

    Onoki was in his office he was finishing off the last lot of paper work and writing down what he had to tell Kurotsuchi after the announcement at the induction ceremony; which he was looking forward to so he could retire. A few mins later Onoki had finished the paper work and decides that it is almost time to head off, to the Induction ceremony and leaves the Tsuchikage mansion.

    Onoki then arrives at the ceremony

    Alot of people that had gathered for the induction of the new Tsuchikage, Onoki then spotted Akatsuchi.

    Onoki: hey Akatsuchi is everything ready

    Akatsuchi:
    Tsuchikage Sama yes everything is ready for you to make your announcement.
    Onoki: where is Kurotsuchi?


    Akatsuchi:
    with the elders I think

    Onoki: well I will make the announcement in a few minutes.

    A few minutes had passed and Onoki decided it was time to begin the induction ceremony.

    Onoki: we are all here today because we won the war thanks to the allied Shinobi forces. We have now attained peace I think I can retire with peace of mind; after much discussion the Elders and I have chosen a new Tsuchikage.

    Onoki then took a deep breath and called out the name of the Fourth Tsuchikage.

    Onoki: the new Tsuchikage is KUROTSUCHI

    Kurotsuchi then appeared in front of her grandfather once he had stepped back, she wearing the Tsuchikage hat as well as the long white coat; that was worn at one stage by all the previous Tsuchikage’s.

    Kurotsuchi: thank you grandfather I will happily accept all that time I was at your side I have learnt alot. You where my grandfather and my teacher I also thank my father; I only hope I can take that knowledge and put it to good use.

    After the ceremony Onoki & Kurotsuchi headed to the Tsuchikage mansion

    Onoki: I have a few things I have to tell you before I can officially relax Kurotsuchi.

    Kurotsuchi: well I guess we should talk in the Tsuchikage office.

    Only a few minutes had passed and they had arrived at the office.

    Onoki: I have made a list of things you have to know like the Chuunin

    exams are coming up soon, it will need to be organised since it is held in Konoha we only have to talk the Jounin to see who they think is ready oh and one more thing; you should read the letter that was sent from the mist Village soon now that’s all I had to say now I shall leave you so you can get settled Tsuchikage Sama.

    Kurotsuchi: grandfather you don’t have to call me that I will probably need your advice from time to time.

    Onoki: okay well I will see you later just give me a yell if you need help with anything.

    Onoki then left the Tsuchikage office.

    Scene Skip

    Back in Konoha Yamato, Kakashi and the others all arrive back to the village after their long mission.

    Yamato: we should take these storm Ninja to Inoichi then we should report to the Hokage.

    Kakashi: Yamato & I will go see Inoichi and we should also go see Ibiki as well, Neji & Sakura you and the others go report to the Hokage.

    Neji & Sakura: (in Unison) Understood

    Sakura: let’s go everyone

    Sakura & the others started to head straight to the Hokage mansion.

    Hinata: hey Sakura how did the mission go

    Sakura: it went well we are going to report to the Hokage.

    Hinata: I was heading there as well

    Scene skip

    Kakashi and Yamato had finally found both Ibiki and Inoichi.

    Ibiki: what brings you here Kakashi & Yamato I guess you have something you want to ask me and Inoichi here.

    Kakashi: yes can you find as much as you can from these ninja and I will come back in a few days to see what you have found out, me and Yamato better go see the Hokage now.

    Inoichi: okay Ibiki & I will see what we can do.

    Kakashi and Yamato then left Ibiki and Inoichi to get to work and they then headed towards the Hokage Mansion so they could make their report.
    Meanwhile Sakura and the others had just arrived at the Hokage office and Hinata then knocked on the door.

    Naruto: Enter

    Hinata: Sakura and the others are back from their Mission it seems it went well

    Naruto: that is good to hear

    Sakura: Hokage Sama this is Akira

    Naruto: yes the Raikage had informed me that he was going to be returning with you thank you Omoi & Karui for helping to escort him here I want all of you to go rest, Neji just for now take Akira to the cells and have him heavily guarded. Sakura, Hinata & Sai please stay the rest of you are dismissed; Oh Omoi & Karui before you leave come see me tomorrow morning.

    Karui & Darui: (in unison) yes Hokage sama
    Everyone then left the office just as Kakashi and Yamato walked in.

    Yamato: Hokage sama, we are here to make our report on our way we were attacked by the Hidden Storm Village Shinobi they gave us a tough time apart from that the mission was a success; it was also thanks to Kakashi here who knows what would of happened if he had not shown up.

    Kakashi: I was just in the right place at the right time.

    Naruto: where are these Hidden Storm Ninja Now?

    Kakashi: they are with Inoichi & Ibiki.

    Naruto: I see thank you for your report and I am happy that the mission was a success now you both may go rest and let me know when we know
    more about these storm ninja.

    Kakashi & Yamato then left the office and Shikamaru entered

    Shikamaru: Hokage sama you wanted to see me

    Naruto: yes Shikamaru

    Sakura: what did you need to discuss with us all Hokage Sama?

    Naruto: I know the last couple of weeks have been busy I have got a list of all the Ninja I wish to see tomorrow on the roof of the Hokage mansion;

    tomorrow morning after I have talked to Omoi & Karui can you all make sure they get told by one of you.

    Naruto then hands Sakura, Hinata, Sai & Shikamaru the list of names make sure they are all there by 10am sharp.

    Sakura , Sai & Shikamaru: (in unison) yes Hokage sama

    Sakura, Sai & Shikamaru then left the room and Hinata stayed to talk to Naruto.

    Hinata: are you almost done with today’s work Naruto

    Naruto: yes Hinata, how about after this we go out to Ichiraku’s.

    Hinata: okay I will go get the kids

    Naruto: it should just be you and me tonight it has been so busy lately.

    Hinata: okay, I will go make something for the kids while you finish up here

    I will also put Jiraiya to bed and I will leave Minato & Kushina in charge; and
    I will meet you out the front of the mansion in an hour.

    Naruto: okay Hinata I see you in an hour.

    The hour had passed fairly quickly and Naruto was waiting in front of the mansion.

    Hinata: the kids are all settled for the night lets go to Ichiraku.

    Naruto: yeah let’s go

    A few mins or so later Naruto & Hinata arrived at Ichiraku.

    Naruto: Hello Teuchi

    Teuchi: Hokage sama it has been awhile and hello Lady Hinata I heard the good news today your father was hear he told me.

    Hinata: That was supposed to be a secret till I told Naruto what do I do with my farther.

    Naruto: what is he talking about Hinata?

    Hinata: well I went to see my Father today since there was a Hyuuga Clan meeting he has decided to make me the Head of the family.

    Naruto: Congratulations Hinata it was about time he acknowledged you, Let’s celebrate I will have the usual what about you Hinata.

    Hinata: thank you Naruto & I will have my usual as well

    Teuchi: two bowls of Ramen on the house coming up.

    Naruto: thank you Teuchi

    Teuchi: it is a celebration after all.

    Hinata: thank you Teuchi

    A few mins later Teuchi had served Naruto & Hinata there ramen Naruto had seconds after that they both thanked Teuchi and they both headed home.

    Here is my Chapter 9 tell me what you think all opinions are welcome

    here is the the link to chapter 8 which has a link to Chapters 1-7 on it
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=187846
     
         
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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Wheres chapter 1 i love it! :noc:
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    WHERE IS THE NaruxHina lemons
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by uchiha manaku View Post
    Wheres chapter 1 i love it! :noc:
    Click the link to chapter 8 and that has the link to chapters 1-7 on it & I am glad you liked it
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    As always you keep making me happy with those stories ^_^
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by Braveknight View Post
    As always you keep making me happy with those stories ^_^
    Thank you
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    i love it

    can't wait for the next chapter !
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Lovely as always, serena!!
    By the way, can u give me a link to chapter 3....I kinda don't remember the storyline...
    Must have accidently skipped it
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    well..
    Teuchi is awesome xD

    and NaruHina all the way :P
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    awesome chapter Serana ^_^
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by basegirl View Post
    i love it

    can't wait for the next chapter !
    i glad you enjoyed it then

    Quote Originally Posted by shelma View Post
    Lovely as always, serena!!
    By the way, can u give me a link to chapter 3....I kinda don't remember the storyline...
    Must have accidently skipped it
    will do and i am glad you like chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by Zawar View Post
    well..
    Teuchi is awesome xD

    and NaruHina all the way :P
    teuchi is cool & yes NaruXHina

    Quote Originally Posted by Maina Deah View Post
    awesome chapter Serana ^_^
    Thank you i am happy you liked it
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    awesome work!
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Hey, this chapter was a character developing one and I liked it as it gave insight into Kurostuchi/Hinata who have both received huge titles respectively. It was interesting to see that Hiashi choose Hinata over Neji-I wonder how he came to that conclusion. I'm looking forward to the storm ninja/village's revelations. Good job and keep it up!
     
         
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    amazing as always serena-chan :D
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    Hey, this chapter was a character developing one and I liked it as it gave insight into Kurostuchi/Hinata who have both received huge titles respectively. It was interesting to see that Hiashi choose Hinata over Neji-I wonder how he came to that conclusion. I'm looking forward to the storm ninja/village's revelations. Good job and keep it up!

    i am happy you enjoyed this chapter

    well i have always thought Hinata deserves it over both Neji & Hanabi because she was first born into main family & she is kind and i think she can do alot when she puts her mind to it.


    Quote Originally Posted by marvinkid View Post
    amazing as always serena-chan :D
    thank you marvin-kun :D
     
         
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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    You have earned yourself a new fan I just read all if the chapters today and they are awesome. It would be interesting though if Kushina learned naruto's justu and not minato.
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by ONE TIME ONE PLACE View Post
    You have earned yourself a new fan I just read all if the chapters today and they are awesome. It would be interesting though if Kushina learned naruto's justu and not minato.
    i am happy you liked my Fan fic

    :overjoy: i am happy that i have a new fan

    we will see what happens with what you thought would be interesting i always like when people give my ideas.
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Nyccc +rep
     
         

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    Nyccc +rep
    thank you i am glad you liked it an thank you for the rep
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Nice work I like it
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

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    Nice work I like it
    Thank you i am glad you liked it
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    epic chapter as always D
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by serenaandrosie View Post
    i am happy you enjoyed this chapter

    well i have always thought Hinata deserves it over both Neji & Hanabi because she was first born into main family & she is kind and i think she can do alot when she puts her mind to it.
    I apologize for the late reply-I'm usually slow at replying to FF posts lol

    I completely agree as she is in the main branch. Besides, Neji has broken boundaries with his keen learning skills and promotions. Its time that Hinata receives the spotlight sort of speak Although, my only disappointment is that seemingly Konoha 11 (obviously excluding Naruto) will never get to the level of Naruto/Sasuke. Kishi should not have downplayed Konoha 11 such as he has. I just hope that before this manga ends, each former team member attain some sort of power-up that boosts them near Naru/Sasu's level lol
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by Kuroi Honoo View Post
    I apologize for the late reply-I'm usually slow at replying to FF posts lol

    I completely agree as she is in the main branch. Besides, Neji has broken boundaries with his keen learning skills and promotions. Its time that Hinata receives the spotlight sort of speak Although, my only disappointment is that seemingly Konoha 11 (obviously excluding Naruto) will never get to the level of Naruto/Sasuke. Kishi should not have downplayed Konoha 11 such as he has. I just hope that before this manga ends, each former team member attain some sort of power-up that boosts them near Naru/Sasu's level lol
    i am glad you agree and yeah they are all strong but they are not as powerful as Naruto & Sasuke but i will say this Sakura may not be completely there but she would not be far off since they where all trained by the sanins & we don't know everything sakura was taught buy Tsunade but Sasuke & Naruto have recieved more training since then i guess so she would be falling behind a bit.
     
         

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    Re: Life In Konoha After the War Chapter 9

    Quote Originally Posted by serenaandrosie View Post
    i am glad you agree and yeah they are all strong but they are not as powerful as Naruto & Sasuke but i will say this Sakura may not be completely there but she would not be far off since they where all trained by the sanins & we don't know everything sakura was taught buy Tsunade but Sasuke & Naruto have recieved more training since then i guess so she would be falling behind a bit.
    Nice point, I didn't even consider Sakura's training with Tsunade. Its true that that could potentially become fairly close to those two is she trains even more with Godaime. Hinata should also become even more formidable if she trains with her father even more but hopefully Kishi does something to that effect soon
     
         

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