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    naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    human kurama (hinata020)

    (rep her for this if you like it :D cause she has been a good friend and i could never find anyone ever better to share this series with)


    izinagi54 and hinata020 production!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Arc 1


    Arc 2 chapters



    chapter begins here

    naruto (holding his stomach in pain) what the hell.... ugh (he coughs)
    hinata naruto? (she says in deeply concern over his well being)
    naruto naruto... (as if mezmorised he says his own name in a deep loud voice)

    naruto begins to form hand seals, fire forms on the tips of his fingers and he slams his stomach. he twist and kurama body comes flying out causing him to spit up massive amount of blood and he begins to fall backwards when hinata catches him. she looks up at disbelief as kurama begins to shrink into human form,kurama gasps for air and hinata activates byuakugan and sees that he is terribly injured and is "bleeding" chakra

    naruto (in a angry and nasty tone) damn it kurama you could've let me... (he stops and his voice turns into a concern) kurama?


    naruto looks at kurama who in his human form looks like a mix between him and sasuke. naruto gets up from hinata's arms and walks over slowly to kurama's side. he begins to cry tears as his friends fades in and out of consiousness.

    naruto (in a grieve stricken voice) you stupid fool... why did you do it. (he yells)
    kurama (struggling to talk and gasping for air) because.... you are my frie.... (before he could finish it he passes out)

    naruto cradles kurama and picks him up off the ground. he jumps to a tree and hinata follows suite. she looks at kurama in human form she looks at his chakra and sees it pure and warm not cold and dark. she lets out a tear that flops onto the dirt below.

    hinata *kurama.... please hold on* (she thinks to herself)

    they are soon upon a clear and open field. naruto and hinata meet the others who are all walking with someone that has pale blonde hair

    kiba (in a calm state of mind) yo naru.... shit (he looks at the person naruto is carrying and looks at sasuke and naruto) yo sasuke (he yells)
    sasuke what is it? (he says fustrated. he looks at kurama's body) no... naruto get him over here now (he yells)
    naruto what the hell do you think im doing (he retorts in anger)

    naruto and hinata land right where the group is and the blonde man looks at him and a memories of seeing naruto as 13 year old boy flash through his mind.

    naruto medic! (he yells)
    ??? im on it (the female voice yells)

    naruto is surprised to see shizune come out of the group. she looks dirty and her hair a mess. she looks the man in naruto's arms and gasps

    shisune is this?
    naruto (with anger in his voice) no time explain can you help him!
    shizune (puts her two first fingers on kurama's throat) he is still breathing (she says in relief) what happened?
    naruto (he has stress in his voice) i don't know all rememeber is taking a full forced shinra tensie to the face and waking up after yamamotto said some things about what he would do to you (he looks at hinata)
    hinata (with a calming and tender voice) naruto it is not your fault.
    naruto (he turns to shizune) is there anything you can do for him... anything (he has sadness in his voice and is stressed)
    shizune (she looks back up at naruto) i'll try but we don't even have the proper medical equipment and i don't even know where to begin with kurama since he is a bijuu (she says in fustration)
    naruto (he looks at the man leading the group) do you know anywhere near here with a hospital? (he asks in fustration)
    ???(looks at the young man) yes... the village of steel or the capital village in this land. its not to far from here. (he says in a calm demeanor)
    naruto looks upon this man and nods his head. they begin to walk and naruto makes a few hand seals causing a bed of rock to rise up. shizune and hinata set kurama on it. naruto breaks the top part of it. kiba and minato grab opposite ends. the mysterious figure that has been following them watches with much fervor

    kurama(out of his state of mind) izanagi... father is that you im sorry father i did not mean to hit so hard (he says in between gasps)
    naruto sir we need to hurry (he shouts)
    ??? give me a second and we'll be ready. (he says calmly)

    they begin to walk as the mysterious figure borrows underground. naruto senses this but ignors it and continues to walk by kurama's side. hinata stays close to him.

    *a few hours of walking 20 miles till the steel village night time*



    the open field closes off to a large forrest and the trees are massive. the man stops and puts his hand up. naruto and the group stop and shizune keeps the healing jutsu on kurama.

    naruto (looks toward the man) why have we stopped?
    ??? we need to rest there is no sense in continuing with your friend in his state (he says calmly)
    naruto we sure can! you don't know what me and kurama have been through the bond we have forged through constant fighting and yelling (he says angerly)
    ??? (he looks toward naruto stunned by his words) i know you mean well, but if that woman runs out of chakra she will be in danger and without a medical official (he points to a pregnant sakura) not only will we be in danger but your lover and that girl who is having a baby will be (he says in calm tone)
    kushina (she looks towards naruto) son he is right. we have been running for 4 hours straight and walking about 10. we need to take a minute to catch our breath (she says in a voice with sadness creeping into it)
    naruto but kurama... (he retorts in sadness)
    kushina will be fine naruto. i will keep watch over him right minato (she says in calm tone)
    minato (puts his hand on kushina shoulder and looks at naruto) that is a promiss my son we will keep (he says in a happy tone)

    naruto ackowledges and begins to form hand seals. the man stops him and pulls out his sword. he slams it into the ground causing a large crater to form. he then makes several hand seals causing plaques of earth to rise out of the ground in the form of tents.

    ??? well lets get some rest and the larger tent is for the injured that is the man you all carried here


    naruto lets shizune and minato along with kushina carry kurama's body to the larger rock formation. he and hinata head to the other one. naruto can not shake the feeling he knows this person. sakura and sasuke enter another. kiba and neji stand guard while tenten goes in to get some sleep.

    naruto (he looks at hinata laying down on the bed) hinata are you upset at me? (he asks in concern)
    hinata (she puts her hand in naruto's hand) im not mad at you naruto kun. its just somthing weird is going with my body thats all (she says jokingly)
    naruto (he puts his hand on hinata's cheek) no matter what i will be here for you.... no matter what (he leans in for a kiss and hinata kisses him)
    hinata (she begins to lay down on the make shift bed) naruto.... you think kurama is going to be ok?
    naruto what him yeah..... i think (he stops when he feels tears form in his eyes) he could've just back down when i was blasted but he chose to almost die fighting for me.... times have change hinata (he says depressed)
    hinata (she rolls over to face naruto and their eyes meet) naruto he has changed. his chakra is no longer dark but pure whatever happened in the war changed not only him but the bijuu. kurama is tough he will pull through just like you do each and every time (she says smiling)

    *mean while in the larger tent*

    kurama master please forgive me i have failed to protect tetsu.... im sorry (kurama begins to form tears in his eyes. he is still not in the righ state of mind)
    shizune ninja art: anglelic palm (she says aloud)

    blue chakra begins to slowly to flow into kurama body. he begins to open his eyes up. his eyes are red and still slitted. he shoots striaght up to see kushina and minato standing there


    kurama (he rubs his eyes) o crap please tell me im not dead.... (he suddenly remembers naruto and yamamotto fighting) naruto! (he yells in concern)
    minato (he walks over to kurama) naruto is fine he is laying down with hinata right now (he says in a calm voice as he reaches for kurama bedside)
    kushina (she walks over to him as well) your lucky your stubbron as our son (she says jokingly)
    kurama (he gets red in the face) what like a i care about the damn brat (he retorts)
    minato (he puts his hand on kurama's head) come now kurama we know you care you yelled his name several times (he says in a relaxed demeanor)

    kurama gets even redder and gets ready to punch minato when he begins to exprience intense pain. minato and kushina are rushed out by shizune.

    shizune (she forms hand seals and place her palm on kurama's wound) listen kurama you need to hold off on the violence
    kurama yeah why? (he retorts)
    shizune cause you will die if you don't (she retorts in anger)
    kurama what do you care! (he yells back)
    shizune because naruto is like a brother to me and sasuke. you have always kept him safe kurama now shut the hell up and let me do my job (she yells in anger)

    *mean while in naruto's tent*
    naruto (hold hinata close to him) kurama knows how to make friends huh (he says jokingly)
    hinata (she huddles closer to naruto) are they going to argue all night (she asks in concern)
    naruto (he looks at her and smiles) i say i give it until shizune gets mad (he says jokingly)

    *meanwhile*

    ??? hello temujin izukage (a mysterious female voice says in a distant area in the forrest)
    temujin what do you want akami
    akami look im just here to talk to uzumaki naruto (she retorts in anger)
    temujin (gets up and grabs his sword) well lets see whatcha got first (he smiles unsheathing the blade)
    akami lets dance (she says in a calm tone)

    credits
     
         
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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    who will be brave enuff to read all that
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    Quote Originally Posted by unorthodox View Post
    who will be brave enuff to read all that
    who needs to calm down

    tell your friends and help keep this series runnin
     
         
    Last edited by izinagi54; 05-24-2012 at 10:58 AM.

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    its nice izi !!and like the later part very much !!
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    Quote Originally Posted by unorthodox View Post
    who will be brave enuff to read all that
    i got lost on the starting lines...
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    Nice story bro!
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    nice chapter chris
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    it was so emotional
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    Wat does izukage mean in Japanese? Something shadow....
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    Awesome
     
         

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    Re: naruto: rise of the uzumaki dynasty arc 2 chapter 8 naruto's friend

    nice, sorry for my late post.
     
         

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