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    Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-



    Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-
    ~Gedo vs Gamabunta!~


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    ~Chapter Start~


    The dust slowly settles falling to the floor, standing tall is Madara’s full formed Susanoo, Tobi stands behind it, relatively unscathed apart from a few scratches.

    Madara: If I didn’t activate my Susanoo the both of us would be long gone, that Tailed Beast Bomb of yours is deadly.

    Tobi: I see it has gotten even bigger since the last time we fought, still not quite big enough.

    Madara takes up and attacking stance, his Susanoo draws its sword getting ready to charge.

    Naruto: Sasuke, get ready, this is going to be a lot harder than we thought.

    Madara: Let’s see how you like thi….

    Madara: *cough* *cough* What?

    Madara falls to the floor coughing clutching his stomach, his skin turns more and more flakey, parts of it falling off and turning to dust in the air.

    Tobi: That attack must have taken it out of you a little bit, let me handle this one.

    Tobi *whispering*: I said you won’t be able to go all out, the Edo Tensei is starting to wear off.

    Madara *whispering*: I had no choice; we wouldn’t have survived that otherwise. Before I go, I will take out that Sasuke brat.

    Tobi: Stubborn as ever, suit yourself but let me handle this attack for now.

    Tobi stands in front of Madara, shielding him, he begins to weave severall hand signs.

    Tobi: Kuchiyose no Jutsu!

    *A large plume of smoke appears, the ground rumbles. The Gedo Mazo statue emerges.*

    Tobi: It may not be as effective as the last time, but it should do some damage.

    Sasuke: Shit Naruto, this is bad, what are we going to do, theres no way we can deal with that thing.

    Naruto: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!

    *A Naruto clone forms, standing in between Naruto and Sasuke, it activates its Kyuubi mode.*

    Naruto: Get a sealing squad down here as soon as possible, we can hold him off for a while but we can’t take it out.

    Naruto Clone: Ossu!

    The clone sprints off back towards the village, it disappears into an orange flash. Sasuke draws his Katana and Naruto bites his finger, he begins to make some hand signs then slams his hand down on the ground.

    Naruto: Kuchiyose no Jutsu!

    In an instant another large plume of smoke appears, this time revealing Gamabunta, he stands as tall as the Gedo Mazo statue, Naruto and Sasuke stand on his head.

    Gamabunta: What do you want this time Naru….

    He looks shocked, staring at the Gedo Mazo statue.

    Gambunta: Do you want me dead or something Naruto, first Shukaku, then Pain and now this, I am getting old you know!

    Naruto: Don’t give me none of that chief, you toads live for ages!

    Gamabunta: Whatever, what is Sasuke doing on my head anyway! Last time I saw you, you two were fighting!

    Naruto: Its fine, he is on our side now.

    Gamabunta: Good, we are going to need all the help against this guy.

    Gamabunta draws his sword and begins to dart towards the statue.

    Gambunta: Hold on!

    He goes to slice the statue on the arm however it merely avoids the sword and pushes Gamabunta back. Gamabunta then jumps into the air, above the statue, slicing down on its head. The Gedo Mazo side steps avoiding the sword.

    Gamabunta: It is as I thought, that Tobi guy is controlling the statue, there is no way I can hit it with him in control, you two need to focus on him. Something’s not right though, look at the eyes on the statue.

    Sasuke: What do you mean? They are no different to what they were like in the war.

    Gamabunta: Exactly, Naruto you told all of us toads that when the war was over, Tobi and Madara were still in possession of 7 Bijus sealed away in the Gedo Mazo.

    Naruto: Yeah, they are, what is your point?

    Gamabunta: Urgh, For the Hokage and the world famous Uchiha, the two of you aren’t very intelligent. If they were sealed away in the statue, then the first 7 eyes would be open. In the war, they were sealed into Jinchuriki, so they were closed.

    Naruto: Shit, so are you saying they have created Jinchuriki, well where are they?

    Gamabunta: I don’t know, idiot! But it looks that way, I am not entirely sure.

    Sasuke: Still, that is not our priority right now, we need to take Madara and tobi out and protect the village, Naruto, me and you attack Tobi, Gamabunta, you focus on that statue.

    Naruto: Yeah, let’s go.

    Gamabunta: Whatever, just don’t die.

    *Naruto activates his Biju mode; he throws Sasuke towards Tobi with a chakra arm then leaps towards them both at high speed.*

    Sasuke: Chidori!

    Naruto: Rasengan!

    The two of them thrust their arms towards Tobi, he jumps back, narrowly avoiding the attacks.

    Tobi: Shinra Tensei!

    *Naruto and Sasuke fly backwards, Naruto catches Sasuke and they both regain their footing, landing safely. In an instant a Kyuubi Mode Clone appears behind Tobi, punching him in the back, sending him soaring through the air towards Naruto and Sasuke.*

    Naruto: He won’t be able to use Shinra Tensei for a few seconds, now’s our chance.

    *Naruto and Sasuke charge towards Tobi who is still flying through the air, as they both go to punch him Tobi makes himself intangible, the two of them pass straight through him. Tobi creates a clone in front of Naruto and Sasuke, it punches the two of them square in the face, sending them towards Tobi.*

    Tobi: Hmph, SHINRA TENSEI!

    Naruto: ARGHHH!

    Sasuke: ARGHH!

    A powerful blast hits them both in the back, Sasuke coughs up blood and Naruto’s Biju Mode deactivates. A loud crash is heard, Gamabunta plunges his sword through the chest of the Gedo Mazo, the statue falls to the floor.

    Naruto: Ha, you idiot. Do you really think we would let you hurt us that easily, it was a diversion, all so we can take out that Gedo Mazo.

    *Sasuke stands up, clutching his stomach, still winded from Tobi’s last attack.*

    Sasuke: I must admit, it hurt, but you are going to have to do better than that if you want to kill us.

    Tobi: Clever, but the statue will regenerate within a few minutes, it won’t be that easy.

    Naruto: Can it regenerate if it is sealed away?

    Tobi: Ha! No, of course it cannot, but how do you plan to seal it if you two are fighting me?

    *A barrier forms on the ground around the Gedo Mazo, 5 Jonin Shinobi form a circle around the statue. One of them rolls a scroll out along the ground, they all make the same hand signs in unison*

    Jonin Shinobi: Fuinjutsu!

    Chakra from the 5 Jonin becomes visible, surrounding them. Blue streams of chakra wrap around the Gedo Mazo.

    Tobi *thinking*: Shit, this is bad, I need to take them out.

    *Tobi sprints towards the Jonin carrying out the sealing Jutsu*

    As he gets closer a biju Mode Naruto appears in from of him. Naruto punches Tobi in the chest; Sasuke then appears behind Tobi, kicking him to the ground.

    Sasuke: Don’t even think about it.

    Naruto: Sasuke, the sealing will take around 5 minutes we need to hold him off until then.

    Sasuke: That shouldn’t be a problem.


    ~Chapter End~


    Thanks for reading, I hope you all enjoyed it, as always let me know what you think. Sorry it has taken a while for me to release this chapter but I have had exams all last week but they are all done now! Hope you all feel it was worth the wait!

    Next Chapter: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...38#post6675238
     
         
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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    Oooo awesome chapter I would love to see this fight animated. Brilliant stuff
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    it's very good. i like it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    Finally the epic returns
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    faplcon punch by bijuu naruto
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    Quote Originally Posted by LionDemon View Post
    moar?
    Very soon I promise, maybe tonight, but I am going out for my birthday because we couldn't celebrate in the week because of exams! If not, then tomorrow! :D

    Glad you all like it so far
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    tomorrow also wud be fyn but do upload 2moro nd if possible 2nite
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    great.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    for this series I officialy declare my love for you :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    AWSOME once again i can not wait for more plus rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    nice chapter. it was worth the wait. although unfortunately I have to take my exams starting next friday
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    so nice im still working on my fan fic :D

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    You are nothing but a genius bro +rep.
     
         

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    You are my GODD ryt now, so worth the wait! Keep em coming, love it!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    great chapter going the read the FF from the start after the contest
     
         
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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 14-

    Kishi should check this out and get some ideas..
     
         

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