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    Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-



    Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-
    ~Naruto's Jutsu!~


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    ~Chapter Start~


    “CRASH!” Dust fills the entire battlefield, emerging from a crater in the ground is Tobi, his clothes torn and scratches cover his mask. Behind him is Madara, still regaining strength from over using his Susanoo.

    Madara: You must try and stop the sealing, I cannot help you, I can barely move.

    Tobi: I know, I have it under control!

    Tobi *thinking*: This is bad, only a few more minutes and the Gedo Mazo is sealed away for good, I cannot let that happen, I have to find a way to stop it.

    Naruto: Hmph, I expected more of a challenge from you.

    Sasuke: You really have become weak since the war. It is laughable.

    Tobi: Don’t underestimate me you fool.

    *Tobi weaves various hand signs then proceeds to slam his hands on the ground*

    Tobi: Doton! Great Mud River!

    The Earth surrounding Naruto and Sasuke becomes softer, soon turning into mud, the two of them begin to sink into the ground. The mud then hardens, holding them in place.

    Naruto: Shit! I’m stuck!

    Sasuke: Me too!

    Tobi: Hmph!

    In an instant Tobi begins to warp away, disappearing into a spiral. He reappears behind one of the Jonin in the sealing squad. Tobi has a Kunai in his hand, he brings it up in the air and swings it down towards the Jonin’s neck.

    Tobi: DIE!

    “CRASH!” An orange spark appears, it is one of Naruto’s Kyuubi mode clones, he punches tobi square in the face, sending him flying backwards. As Tobi flies back the body begins to melt into a white liquid. In zetsu fashion, the real Tobi emerges behind another Jonin on the opposite side of the circle.

    Tobi: You fell for my clone technique twi….

    The sound of a thousand birds chirping rings loud in Tobi’s ear. Sasuke appears behind Tobi, his clone stuck in the mud disappears into a plume of smoke. Sasuke plunges his wrist towards Tobi’s chest, however it goes straight through Tobi, who makes himself intangible, nearly hitting the same Jonin Sasuke was protecting. Tobi warps back to his original location in front of Madara.

    Tobi: That was close, looks like you saw straight through my clone.

    *”Crack!” Naruto activates his Kyuubi mode, breaking free of the solidified mud, kicking it away*

    Madara *whispering*: Leave the Gedo Mazo, it isn’t necessary, I have another way to destroy their precious village.

    Tobi: Fine.

    A loud rumble is heard, the Gedo Mazo begins to disappear into the scroll. Small amounts of smoke appear from the scroll, new markings form and the scroll winds itself back up.

    Naruto: Thank you for your help. Take the scroll back to the storage chamber then help evacuate the rest of the villagers. Sakura can take care of any wounds you may have there.

    5 Jonin: Yes Hokage – Sama!

    *All of the Jonin immediately disappear with the body flicker technique, only Madara, Tobi, Naruto and Sasuke remain.*

    Madara: I am ready now.

    Tobi: Okay, proceed with your plan, this is it, it is time we fufil our purpose coming here.

    Sasuke: Naruto, what did he say? Brace yourself!

    Naruto: I am on it, I will end this with my new Jutsu! Sasuke, get as far back as possible.

    *Sasuke begins to sprint off behind Naruto, towards the village*

    Sasuke *thinking*: I better go help the Sakura evacuate the rest of the villagers. Naruto will be fine.

    Madara stands up, looking Naruto square in the eye.

    Madara: Prepare yourself.

    *Naruto begins to make handseals, preparing his new jutsu.*

    *Madara claps his hands together and shuts his eyes, focusing.*

    Madara: AAARGHHH!

    Madara’s skin turns papery, vast amounts float off into the night sky, his body begins to degrade, it starts to resemble his aged corpse. Madara opens his eyes, his Rinnegan is now activated.

    Madara: Chibaku Tensei.

    Large clumps of rock fly up high into the sky, colliding at great speeds, all combining to form one massive boulder, hovering above Konoha.

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    The scene is back inside the village, Sasuke and Sakura are standing together, the last few villagers are running towards the safe house behind the face of the Hokage mountain. Sasuke and Sakura both look up, shocked at what they see.

    Sasuke: Oh no! Not again.

    Sakura: There is nothing we can do, not even the safe house can withstand that.

    ????: WHAT IS THAT!?

    *Sasuke and Sakura both turn round at once, seeing the other 4 Kage and Bee looking up at the boulder.*

    Sasuke: It is Madara and Tobi, they are trying to attack the village.

    Raikage: WHAT!?! Them two!?! Who is fighting them, why were we not informed?

    Sasuke: I was, the Naruto told me to fall back, he is there fighting them now. Naruto did not want to bother you, it is his village, he wanted to protect it.

    Onoki: Well look at what has happened now, that thing will kill everyone in here, including us!

    Mei: Shut up you two! We have to stop that thing, I am sure Naruto has it covered. Can you not see it was his pride that caused him to act the way he did, he has to prove to the villagers he is a capable Hokage.

    Bee *thinking*: Naruto, what are you going to do?

    Gaara: We don’t have time to stand here arguing we have to do something about that boulder.

    The boulder begins to fall towards the village, starting off slow then picking up momentum. Gaara claps his hands together, a vast amount of sand shoots high up into the air, just below the boulder, forming a barrier.

    Gaara: I am going to need some help, I can only slow it down so much!

    Onoki: Remember that time against Madara when I made your punch harder, Raikage?

    Raikage: You seriously want to try and smash that thing?

    *Onoki jumps up into the air and flies behind the Raikage. He grabs a hold of him then uses his Jutsu to make the Raikage lighter.*

    Onoki: I am going to fly you up there!

    Raikage: Okay, hurry up!

    *Oonoki lifts the Raikage into the air, carrying him by the collar of his robe, they soar through the sky at tremendous speeds, towards the boulder.*

    Onoki: GET READY….. NOW!

    The Raikage swings his fist into the boulder, as he connects, Onoki makes the Raikage’s arm 100x heavier, a loud crash is heard, part of the boulder breaks away and turns to dust however it is merely a dent.

    Mei: IT IS GETTING CLOSER!

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    The scene changes back to Naruto who is just about to unleash his new technique.

    Naruto: Futon: Rasen – Hurricane!

    The same screech from Naruto’s Rasen-Shuriken is heard, this time it is a lot louder, large amounts of white chakra form in-between Naruto’s hand. It then spirals in a giant ball towards Madara and Tobi at speeds impossible to dodge, as it gets closer it expands, engulfing the two of them.

    Naruto *thinking*: Good, now to stop that boulder.

    Very small chakra needles attack Madara and Tobi at cellular levels, severing their chakra networks, the attacks are even more precise than Rasen-Shuriken. The ball then implodes and disappears, forming a crater in the ground leaving Madara and Tobi ripped to shreds, unable to move. Madara is now just a rotting corpse, his Rinnegan still clearly visible, untouched.

    Naruto: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu!

    Ten clones form around Naruto in a circle, all facing him. They activate their Kyuubi mode and Naruto activates his Biju Mode. Naruto and nine of his clones dart towards the village.

    Naruto *thinking*: I can’t risk it, I must have a clone guard these two just in case they managed to survive. Plus, I need to keep and eye on the Rinnegan, we can analyse it.

    ~Chapter End~


    I hope you all enjoyed that chapter, let me know what you think

    Next Chapter: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...23#post6691623
     
         
    Last edited by tom94; 05-28-2012 at 10:50 PM.

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    Epic, love the new jutsu! Another epic chapter
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    awesom as always. can't wait to see how the chibaku tensei is going to be dealt with.

    @Narutohokage: love the sig. saw the movie yesterday and that scene was funny as hell
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    Quote Originally Posted by ONE TIME ONE PLACE View Post
    awesom as always. can't wait to see how the chibaku tensei is going to be dealt with.

    @Narutohokage: love the sig. saw the movie yesterday and that scene was funny as hell
    "I AM A GOD I CANNOT BE BULLIED!" *hulk smash* "PUNY GOD"
    that and the bit where Hulk and Thor killed the worm thingy and Thor thought he was looking badass beside the Hulk so Hulk punched him
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    Quote Originally Posted by Narutohokage7 View Post
    "I AM A GOD I CANNOT BE BULLIED!" *hulk smash* "PUNY GOD"
    that and the bit where Hulk and Thor killed the worm thingy and Thor thought he was looking badass beside the Hulk so Hulk punched him
    yea I thought it was the best out of all the movies so far
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    this is amazing i just read all 15 chapters can't wait for the next one good job bro
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    Another awesome chapter, cant wait for more
     
         
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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    jzz epic
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    cool
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    another AWSOME chapter tom i can not wait for more
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    that was amazing
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    Thank you everyone for the comments, glad you all like it Chapter 16 is up!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto: Hokage Chronicles -Chapter 15-

    I love that new jitzu!! Creative and awesome
     
         

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