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    8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    A little kick to the chest?
    Bee was not impressed.
    Taka thought the kick was great.
    Bee said nope, ur boring mate.
    Bee pulled out a book, so he could write.
    Bee felt good, so he would fight.
    Next thing to see, 8 swords are flying.
    5 seconds later... Sasuke is dying.
    Multiple swords, multiple cuts.
    Then Bee kicked him square in the nuts.
    Oh yeah, also 2 swords through the skin.
    If Taka wasn't there - it was Bee's win.
    That is sasuke death number 1.
    But you can eat Karin, the fights not done.
    Bee's getting bored. Taka is trying,
    To regain composure as well as not crying.
    Taka went "black fight" in a 1 v 4.
    Bee didn't care, he'd own some more.
    Taka's intent to kill proved to fail.
    Bee got away, about to set sail.
    But eatible Karin detected the Bee.
    So he went cloak, red chakra to see.
    Sasuke could dodge, that's sorta nice.
    Bee didn't care. 3 more to slice.
    Taka so scared, they jumped away.
    So Bee charged back at lame Sasuke.
    Tsukyomi? Eye blood and some pain.
    Lariot for death number 2, insane!
    Thanks great 8, for being bold.
    Genjutsu on Bee - you broke the hold.
    Allowed Bee to get up, ready to strike.
    Decimate sasuke, sasuke was like.
    Goo oo uh floo shoo mah uo gasp pout.
    Jugo said Sasuke's organs flew out.
    Bee was like oops, i just killed a boy.
    Juugo's like no u didn't, sasuke's my joy.
    And better than Karin, you don't have to bite.
    I'll dump my body out, and sasuke's alright.
    Bee bored again, so he went straight 8.
    Karin poo'd her pants, said run but too late.
    Suigetsu stepped up and challened the tails.
    Mouth Kamehameha, more Taka fails.
    Sasuke decides to call forth black flame.
    And Bee got away, Taka equals shame.
    Bee went on vacation, doing quit well.
    Taka looked like, they came straight out of hell.

    Good Game.
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    That's so weird but good rhyming
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    DAmn thats cool Good job!!!
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    i couldn't' ever try to write a poem naruto-related
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    I loved it, but what the hell was "Goo oo uh floo shoo mah uo gasp pout."
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    Quote Originally Posted by -CURSE- View Post
    I loved it, but what the hell was "Goo oo uh floo shoo mah uo gasp pout."
    haha, thanks guys.

    the goo oo part was when Bee got up from the genjutsu and lariot'd the crap out of sasuke.

    that was me making random pain noises for sasuke.

    also imagining people reading that part is funny lol.
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    good job
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    I laughed at this x3 Good job, bro
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    That was actually good lol
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    ! more thanks guys

    Love rhyming, even better with some humor added
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    good, but the rhyming was just a tad off. Still really good though.
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    LOL nice job
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    haha, that was pretty good, many funny lines
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    very cool bro
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    Thanks for the positive feedback

    This part:

    "Allowed Bee to get up, ready to strike.
    Decimate sasuke, sasuke was like.
    Goo oo uh floo shoo mah uo gasp pout.
    Jugo said Sasuke's organs flew out."



    that part still makes me laugh - it sounds so funny.
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    that was great
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    Damn you.....So funny
    VM me some more of those funny poem of yours if you make more
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    thanks for more good feedback!

    I may get inspired one day to write one!

    Was having a convo @ work about how many times sasuke "died" but was saved. And my favorite sasuke "deaths" were delivered by killer bee! one of my fav. chars
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    Very nice and clever. +Rep
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    Thanks

    Maybe I can take ideas from people about something in the series and write a few lines on it!

    Will take that under consideration.
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    this is really really really nice!!!!
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    Quote Originally Posted by s0ciaL0utcast View Post
    this is really really really nice!!!!
    Thanks :D

    Been a while since I've checked in here!

    So a bump for anyone who might get a lol out of the poem :ice:
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    epic-nice
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    Thanks

    2 month bump!

    It's still a fun read!
     
         

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    Re: 8 vs Taka - a funny poem i wrote @ work

    *fist bump* nice job! clap clap clap!
     
         

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