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    Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio



    Basic Information
    Name: Laxus Dreyar
    Nickname: The Thunder Dragon Slayer/ Fairy Tail's strongest
    Gender: Male
    Age: 23
    Clan: N/A



    Looks: Laxus is a very tall and muscular blond man with orange eyes (portrayed as blue/grey in the anime). His hair is slicked back, its numerous spiky strands pointing backwards, though some of it falls down on his forehead. He has a distinctive lightning bolt-shaped scar on his right eye, and much like his father and grandfather, he sports dark lines circling his eyes, with each of them possessing a single, prominent eyelash jutting outwards. Laxus is almost always seen wearing his signature "Sound Pod" model of Magic Headphones, with his favorite music being Classic Rock & Roll. His black Fairy Tail stamp is located on the left side of his chest, and is surrounded by a large, additional design, which extends up to his left shoulder and covers part of the corresponding upper back. Being an artificially created Dragon Slayer, he enters Dragon Force mode when accessing his powers: in this state, his upper body bulks up (though this is much more evident in the anime), and his forearms become covered in flesh-colored scales.



    Personality:
    In his youth, Laxus was a truly kind boy, very attached to his grandfather Makarov, and greatly admired Fairy Tail. This, however, changed with the excommunication of his father from the guild, and Laxus’ growing thought and suspicion that his fame was a result of being Makarov’s grandson, and not of his own skills-something that made him eager to prove himself as a strong Mage in his own right.

    Laxus was initially portrayed as arrogant, overbearing, selfish, and prone to make fun of his own comrades. He believed himself to be the strongest member of Fairy Tail, and looked down on those he considered weak, heavily reprimanding their weakness and even resolving to hurt them whenever they stepped on his path. Laxus seemed to care very little about his fellow guild mates, usually suggesting that they had to give him something in order to acquire his help: in one of such instances, when he was asked for help during the Fairy Tail vs Phantom Lord confrontation, he also proved himself to be quite lecherous, offering to help his comrades out only if the "big-boobed" Lucy Heartfilia had become his girlfriend and Cana Alberona had stripped before him. Not even his trusted Thunder God Tribe were spared of this treatment, as seen when Laxus almost hit Freed Justine with one of his lightning attacks for contradicting him. The only things he appeared to truly care about were the strength and reputation of Fairy Tail, and he became enraged every time someone made fun of it. During his battle with Natsu Dragneel and Gajeel Redfox, he was shown entering a Berserker-like state, in which he showed the most ruthless side of him, being willing to laugh off Makarov’s possibly imminent death and to annihilate not only Fairy Tail, but also all of the inhabitants of Magnolia, for his goals.

    However, after his expulsion it appears that his attitude has changed. He seems far more light-hearted and serene, and apparently has grown fond of the guild in his current state. He was also willing to take all the responsibility of the crimes for himself, in order for the Thunder God Tribe to remain members of the guild, even encouraging them for the time being. Even before his excommunication, Freed claimed that Laxus inherited not only Makarov’s Magical prowess, but also his heart caring for comrades, something shown when none of his guildmates or the townspeople from Magnolia were affected by his Fairy Law. During the Fantasia parade, when Makarov, alongside the whole Fairy Tail, silently told Laxus that he would always be watching over him right before his departure, he shed tears and was ashamed of his previous actions.

    Village Info.

    Village of Birth: Kumogkauure
    Village of Alliance: Kumogakure

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Jounin

    Specialty:N/A

    Elements:
    Lightning-needs training
    Wind- needs training

    Your ninjutsu:
    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but it cannot use any juts.This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element.(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the user's presence.
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    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air. This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it. This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down. This only works with non-chakra ropes.
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    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background. Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong.Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu[Rank C and above].



    Background Info.

    History:
    Like many members of the guild, Laxus was a part of Fairy Tail since he was a child, given that he is also Makarov's grandson. Laxus constantly felt trapped in a shadow by being the grandson of Makarov and as a result, felt he never got the credit he deserved.

    From then on, Laxus vowed to become stronger and beat Makarov so he could prove himself and become a man in his rights. His father was kicked out of the guild because of being a danger to Fairy Tail. This incident enraged him as he tried to convince Makarov to bring his father back since they were still family members but despite this, Makarov refused. Laxus' father at the time set up his own guild, the Dark Guild 'Raven Tail'. Presumably, Laxus attained the rank of S-Class Ninja around 7 years ago.


    Galuna Island arc
    Laxus first makes himself known when he comments on Mystogan. Natsu Dragneel wants to fight him but Makarov stops them. Later, when it is revealed that Natsu and Happy have taken an S-Ranked mission without permission, Laxus claims he saw a flying object take an S- class mission poster, but he didn't do anything about it, claiming that he didn't know it was Happy. After Makarov and Mirajane plead with him to get Natsu back, Laxus declines.

    Phantom Lord Arc
    Laxus does not bother coming to Fairy Tail's aid during the war on the Phantom Lord Guild. He says he would help only if Lucy Heartfilia becomes his girl and Cana strips for him. Enraged by this, Mirajane breaks the orb they are using to speak to him. Later after the war ends, Laxus shows up and acts very arrogantly, mocking Shadow Gear for their defeat against Gajeel. and claims that if he had been there, Phantom Lord wouldn't have dealt them so much damage. This aggravates Natsu to the point where he almost punches Laxus, but with his powers, he avoids confrontation and leaves, stating that he will remove all weak members from Fairy Tail once he becomes guild master.


    Fighting Festival Arc
    While on a job, he overhears some people talking about Fairy Tail's hilarious antics at a bar. He then walks up to them with a frightening look on his face. They instantly recognize him and run away. An ape named Zatô laughs at him and tries to pick a fight with him. The barkeeper asks Zatô to please stop trying to pick a fight with others and Zatô boasts that he could pick a dozen fights with anyone from "that useless guild" and the bar wouldn't even get a scratch. Laxus replies that has never heard his name before and Zatô further provokes him by saying that's because he doesn't get his face plastered all over magazines like some idiots in Fairy Tail. This angers Laxus to the point where he asks him if he wanted to die and tells him to step outside. Zatô then replies that the only one going outside will be him and blasts him out the wall. He then laughs, shouting that the guild members are weak after all and that maybe he'll "go hunting for big-jugged faeries tomorrow". However, lightning shoots up from the ground and strikes Zatô, frying him in an instant. Laxus is furious and asks when the old man decided to make their guild into a laughing stock. Afterwards, he finds Jet and Droy beating up Gajeel and joins in but tries to kill him, saying that he's the reason why other people look down on his guild. As Jet shouts at him to stop, he tells him to stay out of it as the weak have no right to say anything and shoots a lightning bolt at Levy that Gajeel takes instead; with this, Laxus leaves even angrier, saying that he can't stand it any longer and will make Fairy Tail his own.

    As he returns to the guild, Laxus (out of anger due to the "weakness" of certain members, along with the reputation that the guild had acquired) makes a play for the Guild Master's seat, by having Evergreen turn Cana, Juvia Lockser, Mirajane, Erza, Levy McGarden, Bisca Mulan and Lucy to stone, and having Freed Justine lock Makarov, and unintentionally Natsu and Gajeel, in the Guild building as well locking the other members within the vicinity of the town.

    His plan involved having the members of Fairy Tail fight each other in order to defeat him, and if they didn't, the petrified members would be turned to dust. However, with the defeat of Evergreen, at the hands of Erza, who had freed herself early due to her artificial eye filtering the effect of eye-based Magic, the women were released from their petrified state, removing Laxus' former hold on the guild.



    Because of this loss, Laxus activated the "Thunder Palace", a spell which sets up compressed orbs Lacrima filled with lightning that had the capability of causing dozens of lightning strikes through Magnolia Town. After Freed and Bickslow's losses to Mirajane and Lucy respectively, Laxus is confronted in Kardia Cathedral by Mystogan. After a brief discussion, Laxus begins to reveal a secret about Mystogan, prompting him to attack, thus beginning their battle. As their battle started off, Mystogan gained the upper hand via an illusion, only to be caught off guard by a bolt of Laxus' lightning. When Mystogan is asked by Laxus, who he believes is stronger, he replies, " I have little interest in such things, but I would propose Gildarts".

    Once Erza and Natsu appeared at the church, Mystogan was caught by surprise as Laxus attacked him directly, shredding the cloth on his face and revealing his face that exactly resembled that of Jellal. Next, Erza was attacked as she looked on in shock, taking her out of the match and leaving only Natsu to face Laxus, though he still treats him with indifference. Regardless, Natsu takes him on and manages to stay on par with Laxus while the two trade blows. Only to stop when Erza recovers, where the two trade a few blow, until Erza sets off to stop Laxus' Thunder Palace. Laxus tries to stop her only to be blocked by Natsu who holds him off to allow Erza to escape, forcing Laxus to continue the battle. As they do so, both argue about the outcome of how the Laxus' plan will end with Laxus firmly believing he can't be stopped. Natsu however starts to note that Laxus doesn't really want to execute his plan and only wants Makarov to give him control of the guild. Laxus constantly denies it but his expressions keep giving him away. Suddenly a report comes up telling the two the Thunder Palace has been shut down thanks to the efforts of the recovered Fairy Tail guild though they're knocked down due to the living link Magic but manage to survive.

    Tenrou Island Arc
    As Makarov gets beaten by Hades, he says "It isn't over yet" and extends his hand saying "Reach... The one who will inherit my will.". Laxus, in a far off place, is seen wondering what this feeling is. Later, just as Hades is about to kill Natsu, a large lightning bolt strikes the Grimoire Heart's ship going through multiple layers down to hit Hades' arm. Laxus appears, acknowledging Hades as Makarov's enemy. Hades calls him "the brat" in a questioning tone mistaking him for a younger Makarov, and Laxus angrily headbutts him.

    When Erza asks him what he's doing on the island, Laxus responds that, having been a member of Fairy Tail, he came to visit his ancestors. He states that, having planned to visit Mavis Vermilion's grave, he was shocked to find out that the second Guild Master had forsaken him, and proceeds to threateningly say that they should be making a grave for him too, to pay him their respects. The two continue battling, destroying a large section of the room. As they fight, Laxus takes a hit from one of Hades's Amaterasu spells

    As Team Natsu comments on how great his power is, Laxus falls to his knees, feeling the after effects of Hades' Amaterasu. Laxus comments that the world is really huge, housing a powerful monster such as Hades, and says that he still has a long way to go. Hades responds that he has figured out his place, as he fires a large beam at him. Ignoring the pleas of his allies, who urge him to dodge, he instead asks them that even though he isn't a member of Fairy Tail anymore, he would still be able to get angry if something happened to Makarov. Having been told by Natsu that he surely can, he proceeds to envelop Natsu's arm in lightning. With him remaining on the spot, the attack strikes him in all of its power, destroying a part of the airship and affecting even Team Natsu and the Exceeds elsewhere in the process.

    As Laxus falls to the ground, he calmly tells Natsu that this is his treat, who's now enveloped in his lightning. Natsu thanks him for the meal. As a lying down Laxus claims to have given him every last bit of his Magic, Natsu asks him why he did so. Laxus replies that "it's not about being strong or weak" and claims someone with Fairy Tail's Mark should be the one to defeat Hades, not him. He then smiles and spurs Natsu to return Hades the pain he caused to the guild. Laxus loses consciousness shortly after.

    After Hades loses his Magic power due to the heart empowering him having been destroyed, Laxus, back on his feet, punches Grimoire Heart's Master, spurring Team Natsu to finish him off. Laxus calmly rejoices in victory as dawn breaks on Tenrou Island.



    When Makarov arrives on the scene with the other Fairy Tail members, both he and his grandfather are surprised to see each other. The two meet coldly, and Makarov comically reprimands him for stepping foot on Tenrou Island while he's still being exiled, something which Laxus shrugs off. Freed, Bickslow and Evergreen then notice him as well, and rush towards him, hugging him in another comedic manner.

    Back at Fairy Tail's camp, Freed and Bickslow show their enthusiasm at Laxus having returned, despite him stating otherwise. When Gildarts Clive makes his sudden return to the camp, the first thing he does is to comedically tease Laxus due to him having been exiled.

    Later, Laxus is shown pulling Lisanna's cheeks, much to her dismay and mild pain, to make sure that she actually is the Lisanna he thought to be dead.






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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    I think Zoro has it
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by -Gitanshu- View Post
    I think Zoro has it
    dammit this is the theard bio i have made this week and when i titled my thread nothing came up
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Looks nice
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zeref View Post
    Looks nice
    to bad it seems i'm not allowed to have it i am about to go ask zoro and cali
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    delete everything about magic

    use everything behind first "=" symbol in your youtube video and use that one
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    The Laxus bio has been made before, however currently there is no one else who has it as all of them have been dropped. However that doesn't take away that this is Naruto, not Fairy Tail and you just copy pasted everything from Fairy Tail wikia and thus makes no sense as this isn't the Fairy Tail world. If you want a FT bio, you still need to adept it to the Narutoverse.

    So remove all those techs, you simply do not have them nor do they even exist and edit the entire bio so that it actually fits the Narutoverse. Magnolia? Fairy Tail? Magic? S-class wizard? Those things simply do not exist in Naruto. Don't just copy paste things.
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by Caliburn View Post
    The Laxus bio has been made before, however currently there is no one else who has it as all of them have been dropped. However that doesn't take away that this is Naruto, not Fairy Tail and you just copy pasted everything from Fairy Tail wikia and thus makes no sense as this isn't the Fairy Tail world. If you want a FT bio, you still need to adept it to the Narutoverse.

    So remove all those techs, you simply do not have them nor do they even exist and edit the entire bio so that it actually fits the Narutoverse. Magnolia? Fairy Tail? Magic? S-class wizard? Those things simply do not exist in Naruto. Don't just copy paste things.
    i actually retyrped these things the same exact way
    because i couldn't copy the whole page at once and i can tell you don't like me

    if i take out the techniques i'll have to fill them with something else any ideas
    and for village info was unsure what to put i looked at zoro's bio and it had what village he was in i am not in a village yet and Migualon J.J.
    told me the same thing about the magic/ techniques

    i guess i'll just put more history than
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by The 4th Raikage View Post
    i actually retyrped these things the same exact way
    because i couldn't copy the whole page at once and i can tell you don't like me

    if i take out the techniques i'll have to fill them with something else any ideas
    and for village info was unsure what to put i looked at zoro's bio and it had what village he was in i am not in a village yet and Migualon J.J.
    told me the same thing about the magic/ techniques

    i guess i'll just put more history than
    You don't get it, do you? You have to delete all the Fairy Tail techniques and rewrite his history. You can edit things like S-class wizard to Jounin if you're too lazy to create another one. And you can change the city names to cities from Naruto.
    The techniques are not something you have to fill in. Who told you that? You only have to put the jutsus from Naruto you have learned already.
    The villages are not something you can invent. Village of birth is something you can choose (sometimes you have to put a certain village in order to get a certain ability). The village of Alliance is upto you, but you really can't put villages wich don't exist in the Narutoverse.
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by The 4th Raikage View Post
    i actually retyrped these things the same exact way
    because i couldn't copy the whole page at once and i can tell you don't like me

    if i take out the techniques i'll have to fill them with something else any ideas
    and for village info was unsure what to put i looked at zoro's bio and it had what village he was in i am not in a village yet and Migualon J.J.
    told me the same thing about the magic/ techniques

    i guess i'll just put more history than
    I hate nor like you. I just think that what you're doing is something beyond your current skills. You're too inexperienced and lack too much knowledge about our RP system to try to succeed in what you are doing now.

    If you would have just copy pasted the basic template and filled that in, like most people do in their first bio, there wouldn't have been so much troubles. But for some reason you insist on trying to do things in a way that's just making things harder on yourself. For instance now you say you will put more history, but I did not ask that. I just want that you follow the basic bio rules, that you do not just copy paste things from other people's bio's or from wikia's so that it actually makes sense.

    If you give me 5 lines about describing his looks, 5 lines of his personality and 10 lines of history that's enough as long as it suits Naruto. You make things harder for yourself.
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by Caliburn View Post
    I hate nor like you. I just think that what you're doing is something beyond your current skills. You're too inexperienced and lack too much knowledge about our RP system to try to succeed in what you are doing now.

    If you would have just copy pasted the basic template and filled that in, like most people do in their first bio, there wouldn't have been so much troubles. But for some reason you insist on trying to do things in a way that's just making things harder on yourself. For instance now you say you will put more history, but I did not ask that. I just want that you follow the basic bio rules, that you do not just copy paste things from other people's bio's or from wikia's so that it actually makes sense.

    If you give me 5 lines about describing his looks, 5 lines of his personality and 10 lines of history that's enough as long as it suits Naruto. You make things harder for yourself.
    I did use the template
    and i did not copy from someone else's bio i used his bio as a referrence since most mods don't like me making threads

    And since i am having such a hard time attempting to make a bio i am considering quiting this crap

    and @ mattobi thanx for putting it in simplier terms/ actually telling me what to do i re attempted

    now both of you can actually enjoy it

    Caliburn i have a question for you
    Do you actually read every word from every bio you read
     
         
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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Bro, just create a bio on someone from naturo, it'll be alot easier.
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by sage naruto 123 View Post
    Bro, just create a bio on someone from naturo, it'll be alot easier.
    i made a kiba bio earlier today and i made 2 darui bios last week both of them were dropped

    i don't think he read my kiba bio but if he did all of my bios have the same fate in his eyes

    one tiny mistake and its eventually gonna get dropped
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by The 4th Raikage View Post
    I did use the template
    and i did not copy from someone else's bio i used his bio as a referrence since most mods don't like me making threads

    And since i am having such a hard time attempting to make a bio i am considering quiting this crap

    and @ mattobi thanx for putting it in simplier terms/ actually telling me what to do i re attempted

    now both of you can actually enjoy it

    Caliburn i have a question for you
    Do you actually read every word from every bio you read
    I have lack on all the other threads you made as that's irrelevant when you make a bio, unless of course you're making a mockery out of the bio, in which case I can classify it as spam.

    And as I said the reason as why you have such a hard time making a bio is because you are making it harder for yourself, which is what I said in my last post.

    In custom bio's I read every word, in canon bio's not as in 95% of the cases people just copy paste from Naruto wikia. However even in custom bio's I don't need to read the entire history when it's obvious from a single glance that there's so much wrong with it that I do not need to read it completely yet. If I see that the template isn't followed, like in that Kiba bio of yours, there's no reason for me to read anything else till that is fixed.

    Your Kiba bio was messed up from high to low and you simply do not have the requirements to make a Darui bio. If you would have just made a tiny mistake, I would have edited the bio myself and approved it as that's something I do all the time. You did not made tiny mistakes, you made fundamentally big mistakes.
     
         
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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by The 4th Raikage View Post
    i made a kiba bio earlier today and i made 2 darui bios last week both of them were dropped

    i don't think he read my kiba bio but if he did all of my bios have the same fate in his eyes

    one tiny mistake and its eventually gonna get dropped
    Im pretty sure if its a tiny mistake he won't accept it, it must if been a big mistake.
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by Caliburn View Post
    I have lack on all the other threads you made as that's irrelevant when you make a bio, unless of course you're making a mockery out of the bio, in which case I can classify it as spam.

    And as I said the reason as why you have such a hard time making a bio is because you are making it harder for yourself, which is what I said in my last post.

    In custom bio's I read every word, in canon bio's not as in 95% of the cases people just copy paste from Naruto wikia. However even in custom bio's I don't need to read the entire history when it's obvious from a single glance that there's so much wrong with it that I do not need to read it completely yet. If I see that the template isn't followed, like in that Kiba bio of yours, there's no reason for me to read anything else till that is fixed.
    well you have yet to tell me what is wrong in that bio and i think i fixed the problems in this bio
    and i'm not spamming anything
    i don't need anymore infractions i'm just trying to start rp


    And why are your answers so blunt and matter of factly you don't have to prove a point just tell me the flaws and i'll fix them
    i'm trying my best to make an above average bio
    that looks appealing and has good information

    @ naruto sage 123
    in this thread it was a huge mistake i didn't know it had to be narutoverse related
    i thought it was an actuall character bio that goes by the manga not the rules

    and i am about to make a thread askin nb what is the easiest character to make a bio on
     
         
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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by The 4th Raikage View Post
    well you have yet to tell me what is wrong in that bio and i think i fixed the problems in this bio
    and i'm not spamming anything
    i don't need anymore infractions i'm just trying to start rp


    And why are your answers so blunt and matter of factly you don't have to prove a point just tell me the flaws and i'll fix them
    i'm trying my best to make an above average bio
    that looks appealing and has good information

    @ naruto sage 123
    in this thread it was a huge mistake i didn't know it had to be narutoverse related
    i thought it was an actuall character bio that goes by the manga not the rules

    and i am about to make a thread askin nb what is the easiest character to make a bio on

    A thread like that isn't necessary. If you've read all the rules, you would know that a cannon biography is far easier to create than a custom.
    As for making biographies, follow the basic template. When you get the hang of making biographies, then you can do BB Coding, and so on.
    Everyone starts out basic, don't try and rush into things you aren't familiar with. if you need help making Biography, send me a vm.
     
         

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    Re: Laxus Dreyar ラクサス・ドレアー Bio

    Quote Originally Posted by Toshiro View Post

    A thread like that isn't necessary. If you've read all the rules, you would know that a cannon biography is far easier to create than a custom.
    As for making biographies, follow the basic template. When you get the hang of making biographies, then you can do BB Coding, and so on.
    Everyone starts out basic, don't try and rush into things you aren't familiar with. if you need help making Biography, send me a vm.
    on the thread i already made one i porbably get an infraction for it and biography help this one should get approved i fixed it
     
         

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