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naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
these are two chapters fused into single one so the fan will be happy ( i'm speaking like i was kishi lol )
naruto chapter 592: NO LOSING
sidetext: the uchiha brothers won their fight, will the kages and naruto team be able to do the same thing ?
scene start with sasuke standing before kabuto:
sasuke: i will kill all the konoha bastard nii-san i promise it !
kabuto in izanami: he....help ....nee....need....hel....help....need help
sasuke: kabuto you was a member of konoha ninjas so you'ra on my list too, prepare yourself
kabuto in izanami world: so that's my truth ? my family i had a family but konoha took it ? I WILL KILL KONOHA ... i'm kabuto yakushi , I'M MYSELF
at that moment kabutowake up and see sasuke with his sword
kabuto:wait... NO NO don't kill me
???:don't kill him sasuke we need him
sasuke turns his head and see jugo and suigetsu
scene switch to madara and the five kages:
madara: i'm back to end your life pitiful shinobis , and i'll end your pathetic life but i'll do it slowly that i'll be able to enjoy it ... be prepared to face your death kages!!
tsunade: i'll fight you till my last breath !
scene switch to naruto and tobi:
(we hear a sound of something moving in the trees)
tobi: so you hired a backup naruto
naruto: any backup ? what are you speaking about ?
many ninja come from the forest and naruto is surprised
kakashi: they ended their fights thanks to your help naruto and now they are here to help you in your fight
naruto: hahaha it looks like things are going bad for you masked idiot
tobi: you're not the only one to bring back up uzumaki naruto ...
tobi do a handseal then we see somthenig coming out of the gedo mazo
gai: IMPOSSIBLE
kakashi: this is ...
a konoha ninja: it can't be ...
shikamaru: you has to be kidding be me
darui: this is .... shodaime hokage .... hashirama senju the most skilled kage in the shinobi history
tobi: well i was able to recupare his body after his death and now i'm able to control his power ....
naruto: that's dirty
tobi: GO hashirama senju
hashirama dissapear from his place and appear in front of naruto
naruto: what a speed
then all the ninjas behind hashi fall ( yes he did it with his speed )
gai enter his gates state and kakashi use raikiri, their attacks are point blank but when they almost touched him he dissapeared
gai: even with my gates his speed was greater than mine !
hashirama appear next to tobi
hashirama: MOKUTON: ki no kage ( wood's shadow )
hashirama's clones strat raisinf from ninja's shadows ( behind them ) without them noticing then the clones trasform their hands into wood spears and kill hundreds of ninjas at the same time
random ninjas: aaaaay
random ninja: aaaaaaah
randomninja: ayaaaaaaaaaaaaah
killer bee: what a slaughter !
part 2 is in a spoiler tag
chapter ends
next chapter: surpass gods
sorry for the long prediction .... i know it's not amazing but i think it's decent
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Last edited by cohaco; 07-02-2012 at 11:39 PM.
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
hashirama senju was sealed .....
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
i doubt anyone will read this
maybe if you tidy up a little divide into sections with spoiler tags
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
***** please hurry up and make the next chapter
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by Chode
hashirama senju was sealed .....
tobi has hashirama's body ...
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by Safater
i doubt anyone will read this
maybe if you tidy up a little divide into sections with spoiler tags
i don't think that spoilers tag will be cool in predictions but i'll trey to make it shorter
 Originally Posted by narutorikudoumode
***** please hurry up and make the next chapter
thanks alot friend
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by cohaco
tobi has hashirama's body ...
doesn't matter its the soul that has been sealed not the body
 Originally Posted by cohaco
i don't think that spoilers tag will be cool in predictions but i'll trey to make it shorter
thanks alot friend
you could also make names bold madara: xyz
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by cohaco
tobi has hashirama's body ...
a body is no good with out a soul to move it .....
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by Safater
doesn't matter its the soul that has been sealed not the body
you could also make names bold madara: xyz
tobi is controlling him even if his soul is not here he still use his body like a puppet somehow like sasori
also yeah i lik ethe bold idea thanks
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
i will + rep you for effort buddy space your sceens out more was hard to read good job all round
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by LssJBroly
well its pretty good fan fiction wise but I don't see sasuke saving the kage's,
maybe sparing kabuto because of the scrolls contents that was a nice prediction ,
As for Naruto breaking Tobi's mask - nah he wouldn't stop going intangible ,
and as for Hashirama - nah he is sealed and its highly unlikely he'd crawl out of the gedo maze or enter the battlefield in that fashion,
I like where your going with the body though I think something is going to happen revolving around hashi's body :P
***** for the effort - I read the whole thing 
o thanks for rep and reading the whole prediction 
also sasuke isn't saving the kages i'll show his true reason in the next chapter
tobi has hashirama body and he is controlling him like a puppet like sasori do ( not with wires )
 Originally Posted by Chode
a body is no good with out a soul to move it .....
tobi is controlling the body directly it's somehow like what sasori do for example
also for lss broly tobi didn't go intangible because he was busy cotrlolling hashirama body ( that take alot much more chakra and effort than doing it to the bijuu in order to use his fullpower )
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Last edited by cohaco; 07-02-2012 at 11:31 PM.
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by sage mode beat down
i will + rep you for effort buddy space your sceens out more was hard to read good job all round
thanks i'm working on correcting it
 Originally Posted by myhayjeff
nice bro :D
thanks bro
EDIT: first post edited
also after all i think the spoiler tag thing was a good idea
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Last edited by cohaco; 07-02-2012 at 11:40 PM.
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by cohaco
o thanks for rep and reading the whole prediction 
also sasuke isn't saving the kages i'll show his true reason in the next chapter
tobi has hashirama body and he is controlling him like a puppet like sasori do ( not with wires )
tobi is controlling the body directly it's somehow like what sasori do for example
also for lss broly tobi didn't go intangible because he was busy cotrlolling hashirama body ( that take alot much more chakra and effort than doing it to the bijuu in order to use his fullpower )
Oh really ? can't wait for the next chapter then ? :D nice ideas you deserve more rep, but i can't give it to you so next chapter I will
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by LssJBroly
Oh really ? can't wait for the next chapter then ? :D nice ideas you deserve more rep, but i can't give it to you  so next chapter I will 
oh thanks so much bro
i'm working in the next chapter ... i'd like to thank you hundreds of times but i can't so in the next chapter i will do it
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by cohaco
oh thanks so much bro
i'm working in the next chapter ... i'd like to thank you hundreds of times but i can't so in the next chapter i will do it 
Okay keep it up bro :D you obviously put a lot of effort into your threads you deserve more rep haha can't wait for the next one even though i'll have to wait a while
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by LssJBroly
Okay keep it up bro :D you obviously put a lot of effort into your threads you deserve more rep haha can't wait for the next one even though i'll have to wait a while 
thanks man you really are one of these goods NB members that encourage you in keeping the work
*****
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by cohaco
thanks man you really are one of these goods NB members that encourage you in keeping the work
*****
thanks :D and no problem see you when I see your next chapter ! :D
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by LssJBroly
thanks :D and no problem  see you when I see your next chapter ! :D
yeah we will meet in the next prediction
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
Great Great
thats right, tobi got hashi's body.
please do another cahpter.
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by David1996
Great Great
thats right, tobi got hashi's body.
please do another cahpter.
thanks dude well tomorrow i'll make naruto 593: surpass gods
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
yeah it was great please continue! *****
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Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING
 Originally Posted by Erikhog
yeah it was great please continue! *****
thanks bro i make the next chapter: SURPASS GODS check it out if you want
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