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      naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      these are two chapters fused into single one so the fan will be happy ( i'm speaking like i was kishi lol )

      naruto chapter 592: NO LOSING
      sidetext: the uchiha brothers won their fight, will the kages and naruto team be able to do the same thing ?

      scene start with sasuke standing before kabuto:
      sasuke: i will kill all the konoha bastard nii-san i promise it !
      kabuto in izanami: he....help ....nee....need....hel....help....need help
      sasuke: kabuto you was a member of konoha ninjas so you'ra on my list too, prepare yourself
      kabuto in izanami world: so that's my truth ? my family i had a family but konoha took it ? I WILL KILL KONOHA ... i'm kabuto yakushi , I'M MYSELF
      at that moment kabutowake up and see sasuke with his sword
      kabuto:wait... NO NO don't kill me
      ???:don't kill him sasuke we need him
      sasuke turns his head and see jugo and suigetsu
      scene switch to madara and the five kages:
      madara: i'm back to end your life pitiful shinobis , and i'll end your pathetic life but i'll do it slowly that i'll be able to enjoy it ... be prepared to face your death kages!!
      tsunade: i'll fight you till my last breath !
      scene switch to naruto and tobi:
      (we hear a sound of something moving in the trees)
      tobi: so you hired a backup naruto
      naruto: any backup ? what are you speaking about ?
      many ninja come from the forest and naruto is surprised
      kakashi: they ended their fights thanks to your help naruto and now they are here to help you in your fight
      naruto: hahaha it looks like things are going bad for you masked idiot
      tobi: you're not the only one to bring back up uzumaki naruto ...
      tobi do a handseal then we see somthenig coming out of the gedo mazo
      gai: IMPOSSIBLE
      kakashi: this is ...
      a konoha ninja: it can't be ...
      shikamaru: you has to be kidding be me
      darui: this is .... shodaime hokage .... hashirama senju the most skilled kage in the shinobi history
      tobi: well i was able to recupare his body after his death and now i'm able to control his power ....
      naruto: that's dirty
      tobi: GO hashirama senju
      hashirama dissapear from his place and appear in front of naruto
      naruto: what a speed
      then all the ninjas behind hashi fall ( yes he did it with his speed )
      gai enter his gates state and kakashi use raikiri, their attacks are point blank but when they almost touched him he dissapeared
      gai: even with my gates his speed was greater than mine !
      hashirama appear next to tobi
      hashirama: MOKUTON: ki no kage ( wood's shadow )
      hashirama's clones strat raisinf from ninja's shadows ( behind them ) without them noticing then the clones trasform their hands into wood spears and kill hundreds of ninjas at the same time
      random ninjas: aaaaay
      random ninja: aaaaaaah
      randomninja: ayaaaaaaaaaaaaah
      killer bee: what a slaughter !

      part 2 is in a spoiler tag
      the three division captains darui the rock guy ( sorry i forget his name ) and mifune dash toward hashirama
      hashirama: MOKUTON: seicho ki ( growing trees )
      two wood clones come out from his body but they are attached to him ( somehow the same way of 4 tails naruto devise his body in anime ) , the main body block mifune attack with his sword a clone block darui's attack with wind release enhanced sword ( darui use lighting ) and the last clone grow a big wood fist and bock the rock guy's rock fist with it
      mifune: what a skill first hokage
      darui: even if you are strong we still an entire army you have no chace against us
      hashirama: MOKUTON: hana o hikiage ( raising flowers )
      the rock guy: what is this i can't move my body !!!
      all the army are paralysed
      tobi: this one of hashirama strong jutsus it grows flowers in the ground that paralyse all the enemys when they touch them
      hahsirama clones dissapear then with a single roundhouse kick he send all the three captains flying away
      naruto: what a monstrious power !
      bee:what should we do ?
      kakashi: MANGEKYO sharingan !!!
      kakashi is free now
      bee: oh i get it
      bee goes into his v2 form
      gai: 5th gate OPEN
      gai and bee are free also
      naruto: how ?
      kakashi: this jutsu pralayse your chakra system but when you enter a different state or yo rise your chakra level you can break free from it
      naruto: i get it
      hachibi to kyuubi: we have no choice left you should tell him
      kurama: it'll take some time but his chakra mode now is much stronger so ge should be able to rivalise hashirama with it until i teahc him that
      hachibi: are you sure he can do it ? this ninja is very strong
      kurama: i faced him and i know his power ... don't worry
      kurama to naruto: enter your chakra mode right now !!
      naruto: okey
      hashirama dash toward the ninja then start slaughering them with his sword and his speed then
      hashirama: MOKUTON: jukai kotan (Wood Release : Nativity of a World of Trees ) ( it's the same justus that madara used in the start of his battle )
      killer bee: i'll try to stop it
      naruto: no i'll do it
      gai: why does you look so different naruto ?
      naruto is in a chakra mode even more cool than the old one
      only by dashing with his amazing speed and strength naruto destroy the jutsu
      tobi: what's this power ?
      gyuuki: i didn't expect him to be that strong
      kurama: yes but that still nothing compared to his true power .. i need you to buy time also that's a naruto clone the original is hidden in the forest now
      gyuukil: well i'll help out in teachinging that to him
      naruto: why did you take me far away from the battle field ?
      kyuubi: i need to say something naruto
      naruto: ?
      scene switch back to naruto clone and tobi :
      tobi: hashirama attack him
      naruto: not so fast
      naruto clone appear behind tobi and punch in him in the face thus breaking his mask but tobi is in the dark so we can't see his face
      tobi: hahaha not bad at all ... hashirama show him your true power !!
      hashirama: ULTIMATE JUTSU: CREATION BIRTH: MANFISTASTION
      an aura that looks like the senju ancestor aura start manifesting around hashirama
      scene switch to madara and the kages:
      mei: his power doesn't know a limit or what ?
      tsunade: that's even worse than what i expected
      madara: enought playing time to finish the game
      someone appear behind madara: not so fast
      MADARA is cut with a sword but he regenerate
      madara: who are you ?
      sasuke: i'm uchiha sasuke
      madara: !! ?
      madara: and you count on defeating me ? i surpassed the level of a uchiha long time ago
      sasuke smiles
      scene switch to tobi:
      tobi: before killing you i'd like to now why are you doing all this uzumaki naruto ?
      naruto: what a stupid question it's because i'll win
      tobi: and are you sure about that ?
      naruto: yes ...
      sasuke: i can't loose...
      naruto: because loosing is not a possibilitie ...
      sasuke: i should win ....
      sasuke and naruto: because winning is the only possibilitie

      chapter ends

      next chapter: surpass gods
      sorry for the long prediction .... i know it's not amazing but i think it's decent
       
           
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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      hashirama senju was sealed .....
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      i doubt anyone will read this
      maybe if you tidy up a little divide into sections with spoiler tags
       
           

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      what the witty?
       
           

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      ***** please hurry up and make the next chapter
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by Chode View Post
      hashirama senju was sealed .....
      tobi has hashirama's body ...
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by Safater View Post
      i doubt anyone will read this
      maybe if you tidy up a little divide into sections with spoiler tags
      i don't think that spoilers tag will be cool in predictions but i'll trey to make it shorter
      Quote Originally Posted by narutorikudoumode View Post
      ***** please hurry up and make the next chapter
      thanks alot friend
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
      tobi has hashirama's body ...
      doesn't matter its the soul that has been sealed not the body

      Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
      i don't think that spoilers tag will be cool in predictions but i'll trey to make it shorter


      thanks alot friend
      you could also make names bold madara: xyz
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
      tobi has hashirama's body ...
      a body is no good with out a soul to move it .....
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      well its pretty good fan fiction wise but I don't see sasuke saving the kage's,
      maybe sparing kabuto because of the scrolls contents that was a nice prediction ,
      As for Naruto breaking Tobi's mask - nah he wouldn't stop going intangible ,
      and as for Hashirama - nah he is sealed and its highly unlikely he'd crawl out of the gedo maze or enter the battlefield in that fashion,
      I like where your going with the body though I think something is going to happen revolving around hashi's body :P
      *I mean if Tobi apparently made zetsu and those clones , you'd think he'd be able to make the body alive like zetsu or something or at least working and able to use jutsu's
      nice ideas bro
      ***** for the effort - I read the whole thing
       
           
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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by Safater View Post
      doesn't matter its the soul that has been sealed not the body



      you could also make names bold madara: xyz
      tobi is controlling him even if his soul is not here he still use his body like a puppet somehow like sasori
      also yeah i lik ethe bold idea thanks
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      i will + rep you for effort buddy space your sceens out more was hard to read good job all round
       
           

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      nice bro :D
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by LssJBroly View Post
      well its pretty good fan fiction wise but I don't see sasuke saving the kage's,
      maybe sparing kabuto because of the scrolls contents that was a nice prediction ,
      As for Naruto breaking Tobi's mask - nah he wouldn't stop going intangible ,
      and as for Hashirama - nah he is sealed and its highly unlikely he'd crawl out of the gedo maze or enter the battlefield in that fashion,
      I like where your going with the body though I think something is going to happen revolving around hashi's body :P
      ***** for the effort - I read the whole thing
      o thanks for rep and reading the whole prediction
      also sasuke isn't saving the kages i'll show his true reason in the next chapter
      tobi has hashirama body and he is controlling him like a puppet like sasori do ( not with wires )
      Quote Originally Posted by Chode View Post
      a body is no good with out a soul to move it .....
      tobi is controlling the body directly it's somehow like what sasori do for example
      also for lss broly tobi didn't go intangible because he was busy cotrlolling hashirama body ( that take alot much more chakra and effort than doing it to the bijuu in order to use his fullpower )
       
           
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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by sage mode beat down View Post
      i will + rep you for effort buddy space your sceens out more was hard to read good job all round
      thanks i'm working on correcting it

      Quote Originally Posted by myhayjeff View Post
      nice bro :D
      thanks bro
      EDIT: first post edited
      also after all i think the spoiler tag thing was a good idea
       
           
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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
      o thanks for rep and reading the whole prediction
      also sasuke isn't saving the kages i'll show his true reason in the next chapter
      tobi has hashirama body and he is controlling him like a puppet like sasori do ( not with wires )

      tobi is controlling the body directly it's somehow like what sasori do for example
      also for lss broly tobi didn't go intangible because he was busy cotrlolling hashirama body ( that take alot much more chakra and effort than doing it to the bijuu in order to use his fullpower )
      Oh really ? can't wait for the next chapter then ? :D nice ideas you deserve more rep, but i can't give it to you so next chapter I will
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by LssJBroly View Post
      Oh really ? can't wait for the next chapter then ? :D nice ideas you deserve more rep, but i can't give it to you so next chapter I will
      oh thanks so much bro
      i'm working in the next chapter ... i'd like to thank you hundreds of times but i can't so in the next chapter i will do it
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
      oh thanks so much bro
      i'm working in the next chapter ... i'd like to thank you hundreds of times but i can't so in the next chapter i will do it
      Okay keep it up bro :D you obviously put a lot of effort into your threads you deserve more rep haha can't wait for the next one even though i'll have to wait a while
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by LssJBroly View Post
      Okay keep it up bro :D you obviously put a lot of effort into your threads you deserve more rep haha can't wait for the next one even though i'll have to wait a while
      thanks man you really are one of these goods NB members that encourage you in keeping the work
      *****
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by cohaco View Post
      thanks man you really are one of these goods NB members that encourage you in keeping the work
      *****
      thanks :D and no problem see you when I see your next chapter ! :D
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by LssJBroly View Post
      thanks :D and no problem see you when I see your next chapter ! :D
      yeah we will meet in the next prediction
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Great Great
      thats right, tobi got hashi's body.
      please do another cahpter.
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by David1996 View Post
      Great Great
      thats right, tobi got hashi's body.
      please do another cahpter.
      thanks dude well tomorrow i'll make naruto 593: surpass gods
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      yeah it was great please continue! *****
       
           

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      Re: naruto 592 and 593 prediction: NO LOSING

      Quote Originally Posted by Erikhog View Post
      yeah it was great please continue! *****
      thanks bro i make the next chapter: SURPASS GODS check it out if you want
       
           

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