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    Naruto 593: "I'll revenge you"

    Madara: Onoki, you are a dead man.
    Onoki: No! We must defeat you! This is the duty of the 5 Kage!
    A: Yeah, you speak wisely old man...
    Gaara: Of course. Even if we are going to die we must defeat him! We must risk our lives!
    Tsunade smiling: As always...
    Madara: Fools. Then I have no choice. I wanted to let you alive. It was enough for me to see the 5 Kage defeated. But now I will kill you all.
    A: Hokage, hurry up and heal us!
    Tsunade: ( confidently) No.
    The Kages and Madara: ????
    Tsunade: I know what I have to do.... I should have used it earlier. I was naive. I thought we can defeat him. But the thruth is we can do nothing against him.
    Onoki: ( disapointed) Hokage? But you were so confident a few moments ago...
    Tsunade: I know what I have to do. I'll use a forbidden technique to bring back a person from death who can deal with Madara. ( she started to make some hand seals)
    Others: ????
    Madara: This is unexpected...
    Tsunade: I will replace my soul and my body with my grandfathers soul and body, so even if he is sealed away, I can bring him back.
    Mei: Hokage! Dont do this! Your village needs you! If you die...
    Tsunade: There are other suitable persons too. Like Uzumaki Naruto...
    ( She finished the seals and closed her eyes. Suddenly she started to dissapear. )
    Gaara: She is...fading...
    Madara: .... ( I could kill her easily but if she can ressurect Hashirama from death at least i can have some fun)
    Mei: Look! Her body is changed...
    Onoki: This is not her body... He is...
    Madara: Hashirama Senju!
    Hashirama opened his eyes. He seems sad: Tsunade... Don't worry. Your sacrifice wont be meaningless... I'll revenge you...

    The end :D
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    Pretty Nice. :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    nice, but short
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    i....this........
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    Nice chapter but not gonna ahppend
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    can't be, because you spelled 'revenge' wrong :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    if happens might be interesting
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    i think sasuke will defeat madara
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    Pretty Good :D +Rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    first : *avenge

    second : good , i mainly liked the idea of hashirama coming back to life..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    Quote Originally Posted by Slug Princess Tsunade View Post
    Madara: Onoki, you are a dead man.
    Onoki: No! We must defeat you! This is the duty of the 5 Kage!
    A: Yeah, you speak wisely old man...
    Gaara: Of course. Even if we are going to die we must defeat him! We must risk our lives!
    Tsunade smiling: As always...
    Madara: Fools. Then I have no choice. I wanted to let you alive. It was enough for me to see the 5 Kage defeated. But now I will kill you all.
    A: Hokage, hurry up and heal us!
    Tsunade: ( confidently) No.
    The Kages and Madara: ????
    Tsunade: I know what I must do. I should have used it earlier. I was naive. I thought we can defeat him. But the thruth is we can do nothing against him.
    Onoki: ( disapointed) Hokage? But you were so confident a few moments ago...
    Tsunade: I know what I have to do. I'll use a forbidden technique to bring back a person from death who can deal with Madara. ( she started to make some hand seals)
    Others: ????
    Madara: This is unexpected...
    Tsunade: I will replace my soul and my body with my grandfathers soul and body, so even if he is sealed away, I can bring him back.
    Mei: Hokage! Dont do this! Your village needs you! If you die...
    Tsunade: There are other suitable persons too. Like Uzumaki Naruto...
    ( She finished the seals and closed her eyes. Suddenly she started to dissapear. )
    Gaara: She is...fading...
    Madara: .... ( I could kill her easily but if she can ressurect someone from death at least i can have some fun)
    Mei: Look! Her body is changed...
    Onoki: This is not her body... He is...
    Madara: Hashirama Senju!
    Hashirama opened his eyes. He seems sad: Tsunade... Don't worry, I'll revange you...

    The end :D
    "revange" is not the only mistake[ya i m talkin about the whole thing] here but good try!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    I'll be bored if that happens.

    I'd prefer to see a new character.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    Quote Originally Posted by Slug Princess Tsunade View Post
    Madara: Onoki, you are a dead man.
    Onoki: No! We must defeat you! This is the duty of the 5 Kage!
    A: Yeah, you speak wisely old man...
    Gaara: Of course. Even if we are going to die we must defeat him! We must risk our lives!
    Tsunade smiling: As always...
    Madara: Fools. Then I have no choice. I wanted to let you alive. It was enough for me to see the 5 Kage defeated. But now I will kill you all.
    A: Hokage, hurry up and heal us!
    Tsunade: ( confidently) No.
    The Kages and Madara: ????
    Tsunade: I know what I must do. I should have used it earlier. I was naive. I thought we can defeat him. But the thruth is we can do nothing against him.
    Onoki: ( disapointed) Hokage? But you were so confident a few moments ago...
    Tsunade: I know what I have to do. I'll use a forbidden technique to bring back a person from death who can deal with Madara. ( she started to make some hand seals)
    Others: ????
    Madara: This is unexpected...
    Tsunade: I will replace my soul and my body with my grandfathers soul and body, so even if he is sealed away, I can bring him back.
    Mei: Hokage! Dont do this! Your village needs you! If you die...
    Tsunade: There are other suitable persons too. Like Uzumaki Naruto...
    ( She finished the seals and closed her eyes. Suddenly she started to dissapear. )
    Gaara: She is...fading...
    Madara: .... ( I could kill her easily but if she can ressurect Hashirama from death at least i can have some fun)
    Mei: Look! Her body is changed...
    Onoki: This is not her body... He is...
    Madara: Hashirama Senju!
    Hashirama opened his eyes. He seems sad: Tsunade... Don't worry, I'll revange you...

    The end :D
    If this happen i give you all my kumi
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    cool but still madara would **** up hasi
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    Quote Originally Posted by Shindo View Post
    Pretty Nice. :D
    Thank you :D

    Quote Originally Posted by Loome View Post
    nice, but short
    :shrug:

    Quote Originally Posted by rikerslade View Post
    i....this........
    :confused:

    Quote Originally Posted by IzunaUchiha2 View Post
    Nice chapter but not gonna ahppend
    Yeah, I know. :D

    Quote Originally Posted by DracoHazel View Post
    can't be, because you spelled 'revenge' wrong :D
    Sorry My english is not the best

    Quote Originally Posted by suzano View Post
    if happens might be interesting
    Thank you :D

    Quote Originally Posted by naruto74 View Post
    i think sasuke will defeat madara
    I hope that is not going to happen. :shrug:

    Quote Originally Posted by ElementNami92 View Post
    Pretty Good :D +Rep
    Thank you :D

    Quote Originally Posted by Safater View Post
    first : *avenge

    second : good , i mainly liked the idea of hashirama coming back to life..
    :D:D

    Quote Originally Posted by AWSUM SID View Post
    "revange" is not the only mistake[ya i m talkin about the whole thing] here but good try!!
    Thank you: D I know my english is bad, but I want to learn it :D ( Im hungarian. xD )

    Quote Originally Posted by -S- View Post
    I'll be bored if that happens.



    I'd prefer to see a new character.
    :shrug:
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    i like it rep+
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    Thx :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    Quote Originally Posted by IzunaUchiha2 View Post
    Nice chapter but not gonna ahppend
    yeah,i doubt that as well.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593: "I'll revange you"

    That was cool
     
         

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