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    Naruto 593

    Hey guys so this is my first time doing one of these so don't be too hard on me

    593- Orochimaru

    Sasuke- I guess it's time to leave (jumps out of the hole on top of the cave)

    Kabuto- (breaks out of Izanami) I have to see my brother... (jumps out after Sasuke)

    (Scene switches to Madara vs. The 5 kages)

    Madara- My neck... its hurting *In thought " seems as if I was implanted with Orochimarus chakra that bastard"

    Tsunade- What's going on Madara seems to be in pain?!

    Oonoki- WATCH OUT HE'S LOSING CONTROL

    (Scene switches to Naruto vs Tobi)

    Tobi (in thought)- Seems the time has come, forget the plan lets end the world as it is here

    Naruto- Hey BASTARD! Take the mask off already!

    Kakashi- naruto.... you need to focus on what you are doing, Tobi is about to revive something and its chakra is horrendous.

    Naruto-... i sense it let's stop this summon before it happens come on Kurama!!

    (Scene switches to Madara vs 5 kages)

    Madara- GAAAAAAAAAAH (orochimaru is scene behind the peeling skin of Madara)

    (Sasuke arrives)

    Sasuke- Orochimaru.... I need you to do something...

    (CHAPTER END)
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 593

    better than others but way too short

    id kick kishi in the face if he made it this short
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593

    How does madara know orochimaru?
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593

    IMO the scroll was a plan orochimaru had that he would revive in Madara's body... and then he would break out of edo tensei, thats how Madara knows the hand signs
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593

    Quote Originally Posted by jghayes View Post
    How does madara know orochimaru?
    well if he new nagoto n orichimoru is older it would make sense
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 593

    Good one but tooooo short!
     
         

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