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    1. #1
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      Naruto 593

      Hey guys so this is my first time doing one of these so don't be too hard on me

      593- Orochimaru

      Sasuke- I guess it's time to leave (jumps out of the hole on top of the cave)

      Kabuto- (breaks out of Izanami) I have to see my brother... (jumps out after Sasuke)

      (Scene switches to Madara vs. The 5 kages)

      Madara- My neck... its hurting *In thought " seems as if I was implanted with Orochimarus chakra that bastard"

      Tsunade- What's going on Madara seems to be in pain?!

      Oonoki- WATCH OUT HE'S LOSING CONTROL

      (Scene switches to Naruto vs Tobi)

      Tobi (in thought)- Seems the time has come, forget the plan lets end the world as it is here

      Naruto- Hey BASTARD! Take the mask off already!

      Kakashi- naruto.... you need to focus on what you are doing, Tobi is about to revive something and its chakra is horrendous.

      Naruto-... i sense it let's stop this summon before it happens come on Kurama!!

      (Scene switches to Madara vs 5 kages)

      Madara- GAAAAAAAAAAH (orochimaru is scene behind the peeling skin of Madara)

      (Sasuke arrives)

      Sasuke- Orochimaru.... I need you to do something...

      (CHAPTER END)
       
           
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      Re: Naruto 593

      better than others but way too short

      id kick kishi in the face if he made it this short
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 593

      How does madara know orochimaru?
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 593

      IMO the scroll was a plan orochimaru had that he would revive in Madara's body... and then he would break out of edo tensei, thats how Madara knows the hand signs
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 593

      Quote Originally Posted by jghayes View Post
      How does madara know orochimaru?
      well if he new nagoto n orichimoru is older it would make sense
       
           

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      Re: Naruto 593

      Good one but tooooo short!
       
           

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