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Naruto 593
Hey guys so this is my first time doing one of these so don't be too hard on me
593- Orochimaru
Sasuke- I guess it's time to leave (jumps out of the hole on top of the cave)
Kabuto- (breaks out of Izanami) I have to see my brother... (jumps out after Sasuke)
(Scene switches to Madara vs. The 5 kages)
Madara- My neck... its hurting *In thought " seems as if I was implanted with Orochimarus chakra that bastard"
Tsunade- What's going on Madara seems to be in pain?!
Oonoki- WATCH OUT HE'S LOSING CONTROL
(Scene switches to Naruto vs Tobi)
Tobi (in thought)- Seems the time has come, forget the plan lets end the world as it is here
Naruto- Hey BASTARD! Take the mask off already!
Kakashi- naruto.... you need to focus on what you are doing, Tobi is about to revive something and its chakra is horrendous.
Naruto-... i sense it let's stop this summon before it happens come on Kurama!!
(Scene switches to Madara vs 5 kages)
Madara- GAAAAAAAAAAH (orochimaru is scene behind the peeling skin of Madara)
(Sasuke arrives)
Sasuke- Orochimaru.... I need you to do something...
(CHAPTER END)
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Last edited by ultimateevil123; 07-06-2012 at 04:44 AM.
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Re: Naruto 593
better than others but way too short
id kick kishi in the face if he made it this short
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Re: Naruto 593
How does madara know orochimaru?
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Re: Naruto 593
IMO the scroll was a plan orochimaru had that he would revive in Madara's body... and then he would break out of edo tensei, thats how Madara knows the hand signs
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Re: Naruto 593
 Originally Posted by jghayes
How does madara know orochimaru?
well if he new nagoto n orichimoru is older it would make sense
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Re: Naruto 593
Good one but tooooo short!
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