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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
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    Sonic: origins chapter 1 part 3

    A izinagi54 and ikikouchiha9668,
    Sonic fanifc

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    season 1
    title: the new enemy
    episode/ chapters 1/ 12





    sonic dashes across the field quickly, he speeds up to the point were there is nothing but a dust storm behind him. he smirks at the possibility of finding a world ring or a chaos emerald, but what awaits him will forever change his life.

    "i'm goin too slow, i gotta speed this up!" he says grabbing a power ring from his pocket, he begins to speed faster that there is nothing but a blue blur behind him. "the blue wind is on the move" a shadowed figure said while looking through a scope. "yes and leaving his friends behind" another figure said. "we must start the sparks of war and gather the seven chaos emeralds to unock the masters latent power" another figure said while walking out of the opening.



    a red energy blast slices through a tree, Lux barely dodges it and manages to block a kick from Daemen."gotta admit not half bad" He said while still in mid block of Daemen's kick. "Shut up and die light blue bastard!" Daemen yelled sending a chaos spear down at Lux, he barely warps out of the way. "why won't you just die!" Daemen screams forming a large ball of energy in his hands. "uh ho someone mad" Lux mockingly said as he grabs his green chaos emerald.

    mean while back at tails house, Tails notices that sonic is missing and begins to have a tear flow down his eye. Shadow and Amy coem through the door holding Silvers hand. "Hey shadow, amy long time no see" Rouge said with her casual tone, Shadow stayed silent, while amy was bout to say somthin amiss about tails. "Tails what is wrong?" amy asked while holding a shy silver behind her back. "Sonic is gone" tails blurts out causing everyone to look around to notice he is gone. "where the hell is he" shadow said with anger coming in his voice.

    Shadow warps away to were sonic had gone outside and begins to follow his foot steps.

    Cling clang, zing

    Lux and Daemen have up the anty to using knifes, they are ready to spill their lifes on the ground were they stand. "tell me Daemen of dark, how many rings do you have left to stave off another one of my Chaos lances" Lux said with much confidence.



    suddenly a gust of wind surrounds them, a blue wind is begining to circle around the area, Daemen and Lux shout their eyes from the dirt. "yo whats up" Sonic says while on a tree branch, Lux and Daemen look up and notice his blue chaos emerald. "well well well, what do we have here, another damn sniviling hedgehog" Daemen said while sheathing is knive. "i guess i will call this little battle a loss to me, but..." Daemen said while grabbing his red world ring and chaos emerald. a massive red light begins to form around him, Sonic know this all to well. "i am going with a gift, come iblis lizard!" he shouts as a creature of fire and rock come fromt he portal he has made.



    "Oh crud, well i guess i can show off a lil bit" Sonic said with his usual confidence. Daemen begins to run fast, Lux tries to proceed to follow, but the lizard begins breath a large amount of fire blocking his way. "damn... looks like i am going to kill this thing." Lux said activating his super form.

    Sonic gets up and sighs, he uses chaos control to warp above the creatures head, he sends a volley of kicks to the head of creature. however this does not work and the creature shrugs him off, Lux charges a chaos lance, he throws were sonic made the dents in the armor. the creature falls and Sonic smiles and impressed, Lux deactivates his super form but before he can reach sonic. he is hit by a fire ball by another lizard. Sonic catches him and Lux is out cold

    next time

    sonic's lil secret chapter 2

    ps i got lazy when it came to hilighting characters so srry
     
         
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    Re: Sonic: origins chapter 1 part 3

    I only read a portion of what you wrote because there is a lot to read, but anyways You did a great Job so keep up Excellent-work
     
         

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    Re: Sonic: origins chapter 1 part 3

    Great.Keep Writing
     
         

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    And I hold within my hand
    Grains of the golden sand- How
    few! yet how they creep
    through my fingers to the
    deep, While I weep- while I
    weep! O God! can I not grasp
    them with a tighter clasp?
     

    Re: Sonic: origins chapter 1 part 3

    nice job Chris, keep it up
     
         

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    Re: Sonic: origins chapter 1 part 3

    nice story keep it up. reminds me of my sonic the hedgehog story i wrote concerning the secret past of knuckles the echidna. keep. let me now when you bring the next story
     
         

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    Re: Sonic: origins chapter 1 part 3

    Good Job Bro.
     
         

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    Re: Sonic: origins chapter 1 part 3

    i like this bro il be looking forward to its sequel
     
         

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    Death is natural... and to
    deflower such a natural thing
    is a sin, and those who defy
    the whims of Nature shall know
    the true pain in which none
    can shelter and shudder. s
    gift that we all can be happy
    for
     



    Re: Sonic: origins chapter 1 part 3

    hey new chapter at 9:00
     
         

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    Re: Sonic: origins chapter 1 part 3

    awsome! Keep writing
     
         

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