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    Haku Yuki [Sandaime Raikage Bio Test]

    Greetings, Haku Yuki

    I will be your administrating your test and the rules are as followed:

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    ~ Rules and Regulations according to Rei.
    ~ All basic elements and techniques up to your current rank are to be used.
    ~ Custom Jutsu's and Elements are not allowed
    ~ Terrain: (desert terrain with multiple rock outcrops)
    ~ You may use Sandaime Raikage abilities up to your current rank
    ~ We start mid range from each other
    ~ If you have any questions please ask them via vm.


    I will be using a Cannon Kage Rank Uzumaki Naruto (with Sage Mode and 9 Tails Mode) and a Cannon Kage Rank Gaara (non Jinchuuriki) for this bio test against you. Please give a link to your bio that your testing and I will make the first move


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    Re: Haku Yuki [Sandaime Raikage Bio Test]

    third raikage: the kazekage and the nine tails jinchuriki...

    thanks for doing my test sorry for taking so long just got to a computer
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki [Sandaime Raikage Bio Test]

    Right lets get this show on the road shall we?

    Naruto will kick things off by using his all time favourite technique:

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


    creating 2 clones, one on each side of him and 5 feet behind him. both appear in a meditative state sat on the floor.

    Gaara takes to the air on his sand, giving him the overveiw of the battlefield and removing him from the danger of close range attack:

    (Sabaku Fuyuu) - Floating Sand
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A cloud of sand that levitates the user to protect them from harm or to give then an air advantage.


    Your move.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki [Sandaime Raikage Bio Test]

    Quote Originally Posted by -Minato- View Post
    Right lets get this show on the road shall we?

    Naruto will kick things off by using his all time favourite technique:

    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.


    creating 2 clones, one on each side of him and 5 feet behind him. both appear in a meditative state sat on the floor.

    Gaara takes to the air on his sand, giving him the overveiw of the battlefield and removing him from the danger of close range attack:

    (Sabaku Fuyuu) - Floating Sand
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary/Defence
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A cloud of sand that levitates the user to protect them from harm or to give then an air advantage.


    Your move.
    Third raikage: shadow clones, and sand manipulation this won't be an easy fight.

    The raikage goes runnign forward towards naruto while preforming the ram hand seal making black lighting appear around his body as he reachs close to teh end of shrt range he releases that lighting towards garra in the sky.

    Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui


    ( when i say as i reach the end of mid range i mean the lighting is formed by that point not i wait until i get there to use it and still in mid range just close to the end of it like the broder between short and mid)

    Then as i see naruto ahead of me i make the horse hand seal releaseing a large blast of fire at naruto.

    [SPOILER]
    Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.



    as teh fire blocks your vision of me i release two lighting blasts aimed at the location of the clones the lighting passes safely though teh fire and strikes your clones as you deal with the fire.

    (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.



    sorry for teh s rank spam will tone it down next attack its just i had this planned out and the jutsu for my plan happened to be s ranks

    time frame:

    i run at naruto while keeping an eye on gaara i form black panther and throw it at gaara mean time i use fire to attack main naruto and lighting to attack clone narutos.

    note: i keep my attention on both of you not letting my guard down. and i stop running as i release the fire jutsu
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki [Sandaime Raikage Bio Test]

    Quote Originally Posted by -Haku Yuki- View Post
    Third raikage: shadow clones, and sand manipulation this won't be an easy fight.

    The raikage goes runnign forward towards naruto while preforming the ram hand seal making black lighting appear around his body as he reachs close to teh end of shrt range he releases that lighting towards garra in the sky.

    Raiton: Kuropansa) - Lightning Release: Black Panther Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a single hand seal Ram the user creates a black panther like creature composed of electricity that seems to emanate from the users body. It can be used to attack multiple targets by extending from its body tendrils of lightning to electrocute the targets.
    Note: Can only be used by the Third Raikage or Darui


    ( when i say as i reach the end of mid range i mean the lighting is formed by that point not i wait until i get there to use it and still in mid range just close to the end of it like the broder between short and mid)

    Then as i see naruto ahead of me i make the horse hand seal releaseing a large blast of fire at naruto.

    [SPOILER]
    Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then the user kneads chakra inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.



    as teh fire blocks your vision of me i release two lighting blasts aimed at the location of the clones the lighting passes safely though teh fire and strikes your clones as you deal with the fire.

    (Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage Points: 80
    Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.



    sorry for teh s rank spam will tone it down next attack its just i had this planned out and the jutsu for my plan happened to be s ranks

    time frame:

    i run at naruto while keeping an eye on gaara i form black panther and throw it at gaara mean time i use fire to attack main naruto and lighting to attack clone narutos.

    note: i keep my attention on both of you not letting my guard down. and i stop running as i release the fire jutsu
    oh how I love moves like this, thanks for giving me a timeframe opening before you attack

    As the raikage dashes towards naruto( which is the first hostile act of your move, meaning this is the point at which I am allowed to start responding to you) the sand beneath the raikage begins to shift, seeking to drag him down and trap him:

    (Gokuamaisou) - Sand Prison Burial
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user loosens the dirt around the targets feet causing the target to sink deep in to the ground.The pressure at the targets depth immobilizes the target.


    ~ the clones now show clear red rings forming around their closed eyes~

    naruto, while you are being dragged down forms a rasengan in his hand and runs at your location, after 5 feet he jumps in a parabolic arc, aiming to bring the rasengan down on your head as you are dragged into the floor:

    (Rasengan) - Spiral Sphere
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Rasengan was a Ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage. The technique was taught to his sensei Jiraiya, who then passed it on to the young ninja Naruto years later. The technique is unlike many other jutsu in that it does not require any hand seals. It just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand, which can create a destructive impact. Limit: None


    ~The clones both display full red rings around their eyes as they have sat still for a full turn, in my next move, the fun will begin for real~

    Your Turn
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki [Sandaime Raikage Bio Test]

    Quote Originally Posted by -Minato- View Post
    oh how I love moves like this, thanks for giving me a timeframe opening before you attack

    As the raikage dashes towards naruto( which is the first hostile act of your move, meaning this is the point at which I am allowed to start responding to you) the sand beneath the raikage begins to shift, seeking to drag him down and trap him:

    (Gokuamaisou) - Sand Prison Burial
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user loosens the dirt around the targets feet causing the target to sink deep in to the ground.The pressure at the targets depth immobilizes the target.


    ~ the clones now show clear red rings forming around their closed eyes~

    naruto, while you are being dragged down forms a rasengan in his hand and runs at your location, after 5 feet he jumps in a parabolic arc, aiming to bring the rasengan down on your head as you are dragged into the floor:

    (Rasengan) - Spiral Sphere
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: Rasengan was a Ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage. The technique was taught to his sensei Jiraiya, who then passed it on to the young ninja Naruto years later. The technique is unlike many other jutsu in that it does not require any hand seals. It just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand, which can create a destructive impact. Limit: None


    ~The clones both display full red rings around their eyes as they have sat still for a full turn, in my next move, the fun will begin for real~

    Your Turn
    well i was hopeing you woulndt take advange of it but i really dont like to make it impossbale to fight me but i am trying to win i better step it up myself btw wont be online to fight till sunday going somehwere
    but i stated as i ran i made the black lighting panther and thew it at garra i did int run for like 3 minutes then attack i ran and made it at trhe same time but yours doesn't require hand seals so i'm not sure but shouldn't you still have to reply to that?



    As i begin to notice the sand under me begin to cave in i automatically remember that your a sand user knowing this i can tell your using one of your jutsu i quickly begint o form a tornado of lighting around myself tearing teh sand aprt and protecting me your naruto clone slams his rasnegan right into the lighting tornado the result would be the same as chidori vs rasenagn and yoru clone goes flying backwards.

    [SPOILER]
    Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.


    the tornado destroys the sand around me allowing me to move free and knocks you backwards from teh rasengan vs lighting clash ( like chidori vs rasengan) i then quickly activeate lighting armor ( the exact second after the lighting has stopped your rasengan and sent you flying since you were using it from above you'll go upwards) i jump up to your location inthe air as your pushed away using my speed from the lighting armor to get there of course

    [SPOILER]
    Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    having appeared behind you at great speeds before you could react ( as the lighting vs rasengan hit send you back up into the air only seconds ago) at the excat moment i get there using the lighting armor i bash my elbow into the beack of your head sending you to teh ground at great speeds as you fall i jump down after you landing on your back with my feet as i get there.

    [SPOILER]
    (Erubō) - Elbow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio


    not leaving a second to chance i go as fast as i can leaving no opening but keeping on eye on gaara.
     
         
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    Re: Haku Yuki [Sandaime Raikage Bio Test]

    Quote Originally Posted by -Haku Yuki- View Post
    well i was hopeing you woulndt take advange of it but i really dont like to make it impossbale to fight me but i am trying to win i better step it up myself btw wont be online to fight till sunday going somehwere
    but i stated as i ran i made the black lighting panther and thew it at garra i did int run for like 3 minutes then attack i ran and made it at trhe same time but yours doesn't require hand seals so i'm not sure but shouldn't you still have to reply to that?



    As i begin to notice the sand under me begin to cave in i automatically remember that your a sand user knowing this i can tell your using one of your jutsu i quickly begint o form a tornado of lighting around myself tearing teh sand aprt and protecting me your naruto clone slams his rasnegan right into the lighting tornado the result would be the same as chidori vs rasenagn and yoru clone goes flying backwards.

    [SPOILER]
    Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.


    the tornado destroys the sand around me allowing me to move free and knocks you backwards from teh rasengan vs lighting clash ( like chidori vs rasengan) i then quickly activeate lighting armor ( the exact second after the lighting has stopped your rasengan and sent you flying since you were using it from above you'll go upwards) i jump up to your location inthe air as your pushed away using my speed from the lighting armor to get there of course

    [SPOILER]
    Raiton no Yori) - Lightning Release Armour
    Rank: A
    Type: Defensive, Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 30 (-10 per turn activate)
    Damage points: N/A (+ 20 to regular taijutsu)
    Description: The user will wrap themselves with lightning chakra, which then electrically stimulates their nerves system and speed up their neural synapes to react faster to danger and push away any physical prowess to the absolute limit. allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and monstrous power. This armour, combined with Taijutsu allows the user to utilize a Nintaijutsu. However due to being enveloped by lightning chakra, wind techniques cause more damage.
    Note: Technique lasts for 3 turns
    Note: Can only be used or taught by the 3rd Raikage or Raikage A biography


    having appeared behind you at great speeds before you could react ( as the lighting vs rasengan hit send you back up into the air only seconds ago) at the excat moment i get there using the lighting armor i bash my elbow into the beack of your head sending you to teh ground at great speeds as you fall i jump down after you landing on your back with my feet as i get there.

    [SPOILER]
    (Erubō) - Elbow
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: After covering themselves with the lightning armour, the user thrusts his elbow at his opponent with extreme force.
    Note: Can only be used or Taught by a Raikage bio


    not leaving a second to chance i go as fast as i can leaving no opening but keeping on eye on gaara.
    as for the panther, keep forming the seals as your sinking? or defend from the sand swallowing you, your choice

    As you form the vortex and overpower gaaras move, one of the clones dissapates and naruto enters sage mode, and the rasengan he is carrying swells in size rapidly, overcoming your vortex and continuing at you:

    (Sennin Modo) – Sage Mode
    Rank: S
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: N/A
    Chakra cost: N/A
    Damage points: N/A (+ 10 to Taijutsu)
    Description: The user stands still in a motionless state to gather natural chakra to then enter Sage Mode. The user can eliminate the weakness of remaining still by using a shadow clone to stand still and absorb natural chakra whilst the main body remains in combat and by dispersing the clone the user will gain the natural chakra thus entering Hermit mode. This mode causes the user to take on characteristics of a frog. Red pigments surround the eyes and their pupils take on a rectangular shape. The user also gains the ability to sense chakra and the mode increase the power of the Taijutsu by +10.
    Note: Sage Mode lasts for a total of 5 turns.
    Note: if user uses Frog Katas length of Sage mode is cut by two turns.


    (Senpō: Chō Ōdama Rasengan) – Sage Art Super Great Ball Spiralling Sphere
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: Senpō: Chō Ōdama Rasengan is a bigger enhanced version of Chō Ōdama Rasengan by adding sage chakra to enhance the size of the technique and the power causing a devastating force.
    Note: Can only be used whilst user is in sage mode.


    Note: the rasengan will still be incredibly powerful even after getting through your vortex and it is not only stronger by nature, but as it is senjutsu, its also has a further strength advantage.

    while naruto comes down at you with the rasengan, sand begins creeping up you limbs as gaara positions himself to line up a clear shot with a spear of sand in his hands:

    (Sarō Sōgeki) - Sand Prison Spear Attack
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: Gaara binds his opponent with sand and pierces them with a sand spear.
     
         

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    Re: Haku Yuki [Sandaime Raikage Bio Test]

    ±± Test Failed ±±

    Sorry but your moves are not that good overall. You failed to showcase the overwhelming speed and precision known to Raikage bios as well as the "overpowering" fighting style known to the bio. Although you used many Lightning techniques, there was not enough real above average moves or uses of them. That coupled with minor and not so minor mistakes made for a fail. You can try again in one month.
     
         

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