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    Death is natural... and to
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    Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    A izinagi54 and ikikouchiha9668
    Sonic fanifc

    note the people in the above list i am honoring them for allowing me to push on through with my fanfic. (lawliet) i am the creator and author all material is mine, and mine alone. however ikikouchiha did a character line in the first one if it counts then she is in with me for next months fanfic competion

    also i removed killer vision, hinata020 because they had nothin to do with this and also... i did it because i wanted to make it acceptable and not against the rules (please forgive me guys i'll add on the next ones)


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    season 1
    title: the new enemy
    episode/ chapters 1/ 12





    Sonic launches the torrent of chaos spears at Hazard, they all hit there mark. Sonic gets back up and smiles and brushes of his shoulders, when Hazard appears and grabs him by the neck pinning against the wall.

    Sonic GWAAAA! (he chokes in pain as Hazard begins to squeeze)

    Hazard (he holds him against the tree) you damn blue fool, it took you and Shadow the all so powerful "ultimate" to subdue me. why the hell would you face me alone you idiot (he growls at Sonic)

    Sonic suddenly kicks him in the stomach, causing Hazard to loosen his grip. as he slides off the tree Sonic launchs his head into Hazards stomach. Hazard shrugs it off and punches Sonic in the jaw, he feels pain in his stomach and looks down to see blood from quills embedded in his stomach drop to the leafy forrest floor. his rage begins to boil over, he sends chaos spears flyin in every direction, Sonic easliy dodges them all.

    Sonic feel good? (he asked mockingly at Hazard)

    Hazard Shut up you blue yellow shit! (he yells hitting Sonics nerves)

    Sonic Really what are you going to do? talk me to death (he said with gusto as he begins to look at his inhibtors)

    Hazard (his rings on his arms and legs glow black) INHIBITORS OFF! (he yells loud)

    He looks at Sonic, as the rings fly off. he suddenly disappears, he is laughing in all directions of Sonic's hearing range. Suddenly Sonic feels a punch to the gut and gets kicked in the face sent flying into a tree.

    thumb thumb foot steps is heard smashin the leaves

    Sonic closes his eyes and he opens them fast, revealing he has activated chaos control and see Hazard runnin towards him. he snaps to the tree and Hazard runs right into it, Green blood pours from the bark grinding in his skin. Sonic sees the situation and begins to make his rings glow.

    Hazard oh now it is gettin to be fun! (he yells in excitement, he begins to take his violet chaos emerald)

    Sonic (removes the last of his rings) Guess you could say that (he retorts mockingly)



    Suddenly Sonic rushes at Hazard, he barely has time to dodge a kick. Sonic kick caused the tree to break. Hazard looks on in amazement, he begins to charge a chaos lance in his hands. Sonic feels the energy and dodges out of the way. Hazard growls at him and forms two more in his hands, Sonic rushes him fast However he is hit by a chaos lance and gets angry. however the second one is heading right for him. he has no were to move he is stuck on the forrest floor.

    Hazard GOTCHA! (he yells)

    Sonic bracess for the sharp pain of chaos energy, However he grabbed and teleported out of the way by Lux.

    Lux that was way to close fellow chaos user (he said while catching his breath as he teleports into a tree)

    Sonic that guy was a monster but now.... he is a beast (Sonic said panting)

    Lux i feel another presence coming in (he said while holding his head)

    Hazard looks off in one direction before getting kicked in the face by shadow, who has just now been added to our hero's fold

    end of chapter

    i am gearing up for august with this fanfic
     
         
    Last edited by izinagi54; 08-05-2012 at 01:58 AM.

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    Nice continuation
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    Good job
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    good job chris
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    Nice.
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    i liked the chapter ...but please send me the ff-1 's link ....
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    nice sequel bro
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    I feel entirely too honored. Wonderful ff chris!! Happy got to work with you on it. :D
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    Very good job :D
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    nicely done ^_^
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    Quote Originally Posted by izinagi54 View Post
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    end of chapter
    Nice fanfic! Thx for sharing:ice:
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    Couple grammar problems, but not bad
     
         

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    Re: Sonic origins: chapter 2 episode 2 Sonic vs Hazard inhibitors offline

    i really enjoyed reading this nicely written
     
         

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