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    Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

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    597:'Identity' 598:'A Face' 599:'Them'

    Tobi: "Kakashi knows too much if I kill him now I still have a chance of capturing the jinchuriki"

    Naruto: Heh' You don't look so tough after taking that rasengan.

    Tobi: I won't fall for the same trick twice.

    Kakashi: Naruto, Gai.. Now that we have figured out Tobi's jutsu chances are he won't risk using it again.. He has the rinnegan and just used a jutsu we've never encountered when we have met him.. I think its safe to say he has all of the rinnegan powers.

    Naruto: Kakashi-Sensei I have a plan but its alot more risky and I don't know if we can pull it off..

    -Naruto nods back so they all jump near Bee & Hachibi and jump behind him to cover themselves whilst hachibi keeps lookout

    -tobi looks up Gedo-

    Tobi:"Everything I've worked for.. years of planning all are under risk from this child... He's just a child"

    Tobi: Its time to end this.. The infinite Tsukuyomi will end all of this!.

    -Naruto jumps out from hachibi to a few metres away from Tobi-

    Naruto: Tobi before we continue this I have a question..

    -Tobi watches Naruto intently-

    Tobi: Considering you are about to die I suppose letting you have one last request would be acceptable..

    Naruto: If you succeed in your plan what will you do after.. your 'purpose' will have been met.

    -Tobi's eyes narrow-

    Tobi:..... I ....

    -Suddenly Kakashi appears underground beneath tobi and drags him down into the earth whilst attempting to impale him with a kunai..-

    Tobi: Shinra Tensei!!....

    Kakashi intentionally attaches a paper bomb and throws it whilst activating kamui and sending it to the alternate dimension-

    -Kakashi is sent flying back and is catched by one of naruto's chakra arms-

    Tobi: Kakashi that was just a waste of chakra

    Gai:"If this doesn't work we're gonna have to retreat"

    -Suddenly Naruto appears from the sky yielding a planetary rasengan-

    Tobi:" When did he do tha-"

    -tobi remembers using shinra tensei and only focusing on Kakashi's actions-

    Kakashi:"Naruto used a perfect moment to launch a counter attack"

    Tobi:"Shit If I phase out I'll get hit by those paper bombs .. its a risk I will have to take"

    -Tobi teleports away as Naruto deactivates his planetary rasengan and hastily lands where tobi was standing-

    -Naruto turns to Kakashi, Gai & Bee who are talking then jumps back to them-

    [End Of 597]

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    [598]

    -Suddenly a fist emerge's and Naruto is sent hurtling away at jaw dropping speed-

    -Tobi teleports back to where he was standing.. His mask is covered in cracks-

    Naruto: Wow you don't look so good..

    -Tobi's clothes are in rags with half of them singed & burnt completely-

    Kakashi: Naruto are you ok?

    Naruto: Yeah just taken by surprise..

    -Naruto gets up and uses his speed to get to the others-

    Gai: He did exactly what we thought he would..

    Kakashi: Yes, although I expect the next part of the plan to be even more difficult.

    Naruto: We can do it.. we've gotten this far for a reason!.

    -Kakashi slams his hand down to the floor..

    Earth Style: Earth protection dome-

    -A huge layer of earth rises about naruto & co-

    Kakashi: I've never done an entire person so we should use a clone

    -naruto nods, uses kage bunshin to create and clone-

    Naruto: Now just one more thing.

    Kakashi: If this works I'll buy you some ramen Naruto.

    Naruto: Well now Ramens on the line I'm definitely gonna win!.

    -Naruto's clone stays behind with bee-

    -Kakashi creates an opening at the top of the dome so he, Guy & Naruto can jump out-

    Naruto:We're back!

    Tobi: Heh' Where is Hachibi?

    Naruto: He decided to take 5 but said to give you something..

    Tobi: Oh..

    -Bee's fires a bijuu dama point blank at Tobi from inside the dome causing the dome to burst open sending chunks of earth all around the area.

    -naruto's clone makes with this distraction then signals Kakashi-

    Kakashi:"Theres a chance this won't work but we're low on options & I'm low on chakra.. this might be my last one"

    -Kakashi Activates kamui making the hole bigger then usual to allow the clone to jump through-

    -Naruto's clone jumps in seemingly unscathed-

    -The bijuu dama is hurtling towards Tobi he teleports away avoiding damage-

    Kakashi:"Please let this work"

    Tobi:That was too close.

    Naruto: RASENGAN!

    Tobi:!!!!

    -Tobi is about to teleport when SM Naruto Hurls a rasengan at him landing a hit on his mask causing it to shatter

    A panel is shown of Tobi glaring at the clone His face has prominent age lines & bags under his eyes..

    Naruto: I told you I'd get that mask off Wrinkles!.

    -Naruto's clone smiles and poofs away due to exhausting itself of chakra-

    Naruto:"Kakashi & Gai might know who he is"

    -Tobi can be seen teleporting back to them.. his arm bloody and he looks to Naruto & Co-

    Kakashi: !!!!
    Gai: !!!!

    [End Of 598]




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    [599]

    -Sasuke & Co are making their way to those who know everything!-

    Orochimaru: Sasuke.. We could kill the villagers on our way.

    Sasuke:"He has a point but I made a promise to him -Remembering his meet with Naruto at the bridge-"

    Suigetsu & Jugo: '....'

    Sasuke: No.. I made a promise to someone that before I wipe the leaf out.. I would fight them and kill them.

    Suigetsu: Why do I get the impression it was that guy who tried to stop us when you were tailing Itachi.

    -Sasuke turns to Suigetsu with his Sharingan activated-

    -Suigetsu looks at Sasuke and slows down out of fear-

    Suigetsu:"He still has that temper"

    Orochimaru: The kyuubi brat I presume?

    Sasuke: Hmm, So Orochimaru Who exactly is 'Tobi'

    Orochimaru: I have a few people who I think he could be.. One thing I do know is that he is the one who orchestrated the attack on the leaf by the ninetails all those years ago.

    -Sasuke's eyes widen then turn to Orochimaru who turns to him looking at him blankly-

    Sasuke:"He told me the kyuubi attack was a natural disaster!, I wonder what else he has lied about"

    Orochimaru:"I see Tobi has been only telling Sasuke half the story"

    Orochimaru: We'll be there soon, then you will get the answers you want Sasuke-kun.

    Suigetsu: What do you intend to do after you've taken Sasuke there.

    -turns to Suigetsu narrowing his eyes-

    Orochimaru: Like I said back in the cave I have no interest in this war so I will probably go back to my hideout and continue my research.

    -Sasuke turns to Orochimaru looking at him intently-

    Jugo: We're here.

    Sasuke: Jugo & Suigetsu stay here and keep guard.. if anyone trys to get in incapacitate them.. I will be the one to kill the villagers when the time comes.

    -Scene ends showing Sasuke & Oro walking into the shrine-

    [end]

    (decided to leave 600 because I think it will be the chapter that gives us Tobi's identity & some of his backstory.
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    im gonna read all this
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    nice
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    everything is possible.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    Nice prediction Its possible +rep :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    I like + rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    tht was really good ur a smart guy r girl to think of sending a naruto clone to the other dimension and the first attack with the paper bombs thts something tht u would actully c in a manga so tht was cool too
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    I like it! +rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    Really nice!!!! I want to read more D: 600 would be like 4 weeks from now.
    All of it seems possible.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    lol i like how you think
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    man that was such a good read, normally predictions contain some ideas that make you think 'ummm no..' but these fall in line just nicely.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    Thanks for all the feedback
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    ohh, ... please let us know the next chapter
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    Great job, everything is plausible both length wise and everything that happens!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    Good one
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    i see a problem with this, if he cant use shinra tensei nor teleport away, he would just use the rinnegans ability to absorb the jutsu. else it was a nice efford
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by vollan360 View Post
    i see a problem with this, if he cant use shinra tensei nor teleport away, he would just use the rinnegans ability to absorb the jutsu. else it was a nice efford
    Kakashi was about to attack him with a Kunai.. If he attempted to use the human path's ability he'd of left himself open to a 3 way attack from Naruto, Gai, & Bee.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    dude freaking awesome reps
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

    I like rep
     
         

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