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      Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

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      597:'Identity' 598:'A Face' 599:'Them'

      Tobi: "Kakashi knows too much if I kill him now I still have a chance of capturing the jinchuriki"

      Naruto: Heh' You don't look so tough after taking that rasengan.

      Tobi: I won't fall for the same trick twice.

      Kakashi: Naruto, Gai.. Now that we have figured out Tobi's jutsu chances are he won't risk using it again.. He has the rinnegan and just used a jutsu we've never encountered when we have met him.. I think its safe to say he has all of the rinnegan powers.

      Naruto: Kakashi-Sensei I have a plan but its alot more risky and I don't know if we can pull it off..

      -Naruto nods back so they all jump near Bee & Hachibi and jump behind him to cover themselves whilst hachibi keeps lookout

      -tobi looks up Gedo-

      Tobi:"Everything I've worked for.. years of planning all are under risk from this child... He's just a child"

      Tobi: Its time to end this.. The infinite Tsukuyomi will end all of this!.

      -Naruto jumps out from hachibi to a few metres away from Tobi-

      Naruto: Tobi before we continue this I have a question..

      -Tobi watches Naruto intently-

      Tobi: Considering you are about to die I suppose letting you have one last request would be acceptable..

      Naruto: If you succeed in your plan what will you do after.. your 'purpose' will have been met.

      -Tobi's eyes narrow-

      Tobi:..... I ....

      -Suddenly Kakashi appears underground beneath tobi and drags him down into the earth whilst attempting to impale him with a kunai..-

      Tobi: Shinra Tensei!!....

      Kakashi intentionally attaches a paper bomb and throws it whilst activating kamui and sending it to the alternate dimension-

      -Kakashi is sent flying back and is catched by one of naruto's chakra arms-

      Tobi: Kakashi that was just a waste of chakra

      Gai:"If this doesn't work we're gonna have to retreat"

      -Suddenly Naruto appears from the sky yielding a planetary rasengan-

      Tobi:" When did he do tha-"

      -tobi remembers using shinra tensei and only focusing on Kakashi's actions-

      Kakashi:"Naruto used a perfect moment to launch a counter attack"

      Tobi:"Shit If I phase out I'll get hit by those paper bombs .. its a risk I will have to take"

      -Tobi teleports away as Naruto deactivates his planetary rasengan and hastily lands where tobi was standing-

      -Naruto turns to Kakashi, Gai & Bee who are talking then jumps back to them-

      [End Of 597]

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      [598]

      -Suddenly a fist emerge's and Naruto is sent hurtling away at jaw dropping speed-

      -Tobi teleports back to where he was standing.. His mask is covered in cracks-

      Naruto: Wow you don't look so good..

      -Tobi's clothes are in rags with half of them singed & burnt completely-

      Kakashi: Naruto are you ok?

      Naruto: Yeah just taken by surprise..

      -Naruto gets up and uses his speed to get to the others-

      Gai: He did exactly what we thought he would..

      Kakashi: Yes, although I expect the next part of the plan to be even more difficult.

      Naruto: We can do it.. we've gotten this far for a reason!.

      -Kakashi slams his hand down to the floor..

      Earth Style: Earth protection dome-

      -A huge layer of earth rises about naruto & co-

      Kakashi: I've never done an entire person so we should use a clone

      -naruto nods, uses kage bunshin to create and clone-

      Naruto: Now just one more thing.

      Kakashi: If this works I'll buy you some ramen Naruto.

      Naruto: Well now Ramens on the line I'm definitely gonna win!.

      -Naruto's clone stays behind with bee-

      -Kakashi creates an opening at the top of the dome so he, Guy & Naruto can jump out-

      Naruto:We're back!

      Tobi: Heh' Where is Hachibi?

      Naruto: He decided to take 5 but said to give you something..

      Tobi: Oh..

      -Bee's fires a bijuu dama point blank at Tobi from inside the dome causing the dome to burst open sending chunks of earth all around the area.

      -naruto's clone makes with this distraction then signals Kakashi-

      Kakashi:"Theres a chance this won't work but we're low on options & I'm low on chakra.. this might be my last one"

      -Kakashi Activates kamui making the hole bigger then usual to allow the clone to jump through-

      -Naruto's clone jumps in seemingly unscathed-

      -The bijuu dama is hurtling towards Tobi he teleports away avoiding damage-

      Kakashi:"Please let this work"

      Tobi:That was too close.

      Naruto: RASENGAN!

      Tobi:!!!!

      -Tobi is about to teleport when SM Naruto Hurls a rasengan at him landing a hit on his mask causing it to shatter

      A panel is shown of Tobi glaring at the clone His face has prominent age lines & bags under his eyes..

      Naruto: I told you I'd get that mask off Wrinkles!.

      -Naruto's clone smiles and poofs away due to exhausting itself of chakra-

      Naruto:"Kakashi & Gai might know who he is"

      -Tobi can be seen teleporting back to them.. his arm bloody and he looks to Naruto & Co-

      Kakashi: !!!!
      Gai: !!!!

      [End Of 598]




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      [599]

      -Sasuke & Co are making their way to those who know everything!-

      Orochimaru: Sasuke.. We could kill the villagers on our way.

      Sasuke:"He has a point but I made a promise to him -Remembering his meet with Naruto at the bridge-"

      Suigetsu & Jugo: '....'

      Sasuke: No.. I made a promise to someone that before I wipe the leaf out.. I would fight them and kill them.

      Suigetsu: Why do I get the impression it was that guy who tried to stop us when you were tailing Itachi.

      -Sasuke turns to Suigetsu with his Sharingan activated-

      -Suigetsu looks at Sasuke and slows down out of fear-

      Suigetsu:"He still has that temper"

      Orochimaru: The kyuubi brat I presume?

      Sasuke: Hmm, So Orochimaru Who exactly is 'Tobi'

      Orochimaru: I have a few people who I think he could be.. One thing I do know is that he is the one who orchestrated the attack on the leaf by the ninetails all those years ago.

      -Sasuke's eyes widen then turn to Orochimaru who turns to him looking at him blankly-

      Sasuke:"He told me the kyuubi attack was a natural disaster!, I wonder what else he has lied about"

      Orochimaru:"I see Tobi has been only telling Sasuke half the story"

      Orochimaru: We'll be there soon, then you will get the answers you want Sasuke-kun.

      Suigetsu: What do you intend to do after you've taken Sasuke there.

      -turns to Suigetsu narrowing his eyes-

      Orochimaru: Like I said back in the cave I have no interest in this war so I will probably go back to my hideout and continue my research.

      -Sasuke turns to Orochimaru looking at him intently-

      Jugo: We're here.

      Sasuke: Jugo & Suigetsu stay here and keep guard.. if anyone trys to get in incapacitate them.. I will be the one to kill the villagers when the time comes.

      -Scene ends showing Sasuke & Oro walking into the shrine-

      [end]

      (decided to leave 600 because I think it will be the chapter that gives us Tobi's identity & some of his backstory.
       
           
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      Re: Naruto 597/598/599 Prediction

      im gonna read all this
       
           

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      nice
       
           

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      everything is possible.
       
           

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      Nice prediction Its possible ***** :D
       
           

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      I like + rep
       
           

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      tht was really good ur a smart guy r girl to think of sending a naruto clone to the other dimension and the first attack with the paper bombs thts something tht u would actully c in a manga so tht was cool too
       
           

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      I like it! *****
       
           

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      Really nice!!!! I want to read more D: 600 would be like 4 weeks from now.
      All of it seems possible.
       
           

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      lol i like how you think
       
           

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      man that was such a good read, normally predictions contain some ideas that make you think 'ummm no..' but these fall in line just nicely.
       
           

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      Thanks for all the feedback
       
           

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      ohh, ... please let us know the next chapter
       
           

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      Great job, everything is plausible both length wise and everything that happens!
       
           

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      Good one
       
           

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      i see a problem with this, if he cant use shinra tensei nor teleport away, he would just use the rinnegans ability to absorb the jutsu. else it was a nice efford
       
           

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      Quote Originally Posted by vollan360 View Post
      i see a problem with this, if he cant use shinra tensei nor teleport away, he would just use the rinnegans ability to absorb the jutsu. else it was a nice efford
      Kakashi was about to attack him with a Kunai.. If he attempted to use the human path's ability he'd of left himself open to a 3 way attack from Naruto, Gai, & Bee.
       
           

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      dude freaking awesome reps
       
           

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      I like rep
       
           

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