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Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
Read Spoiler before reading because it will give the format of dialog and motions
598 Title: The end of the One Jutsu
*Naruto runs towards Tobi*
Naruto: Kakashi Sensie by now I hope you know what to do
Kakashi: yea
"Kakashi: if I have enough chakra"
Guy: Kakashi, that battle, I think somebody was watching
Kakashi: yea but who
*Naruto tries to punch Tobi but slips through, Tobi turns and tries to grab Naruto, but before he could grab him Guy sees whats happening stopping the conversation with Kakashi and attempting to stop Tobi grabbing Naruto*
Tobi: such pathetic attempts from a lousy excuse for a shinobi
Guy: don't talk lightly of my youth
*Tobi grabs his war fan and blocks Guy's attack, but right before Guy hits he teleports and before the fan could hit the ground Guy tries to hit Tobi, but Tobi sees through it and retracts into the ground*
Naruto: how are we suppose to fight him now
*Tobi rises from the ground*
Tobi: your not, thats why i'm proposing this once again... Hand over the 8 & 9-tails to help with the 10-tails
Naruto: like hell we will
Tobi: fine then your fate is sealed
* Tobi starts to charge towards Naruto, we get a shot of Tobi's sharingan as it begins to swirl, and what looks like Kakashi's MS*
*Naruto begins to form a biju bomb*
Kakashi: Naruto and Bee, this right here can make us win, Bee use you eight tails to continually try to hit Tobi
Naruto: now ur catching on to my plan Sensie
"Kakashi: he came up with this plan before I could, good job Naruto, you are Hokage material now"
*Bee starts to attack*
Kakashi: NOW NARUTO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*Bee's attack lines up, Tobi goes into the alternate universe at the same time Naruto sends the bomb Tobi's way*
Kakashi: now its my turn... KAMUI
*The bomb warps away at the same time Killer Bee retreats, Tobi is still in alternate universe, Tobi is shown to be hit by the bomb, throwing him into the ground, his mask shatters*
Kakashi: Guys its done now, hes dead
Tobi: I'm not done just yet
*Tobi stumbles to his feet, the mask cracked to where it was during the Konan fight but his Sharingan eye is closed*
Tobi: this world will be mine
Naruto: how....? how in the hell did you live
Tobi: Izanagi, did you think taking me out will be this easy
"Tobi: m to think it would come this far, taking this eye, now all I have to fall back on is the Rinnegan"
CHAPTER END
599 title: The true fear of the 10 tails
Tobi: Good job for taking me this far... even your father didnt even do half this much to me
Naruto: and I plan to do much more..
Kakashi: Naruto, I cant fight no more
Naruto: but why Kakashi Sensie
Kakashi: im to weak, that last hit we landed sealed his eye, he dont have that one jutsu no more, he can only manifest in this world
Naruto: so what ur saying Kakashi is that he just became my ***** :flaw:
Kakashi: yes
*Kakashi falls*
"Kakashi: good job Naruto, your not the pesk any of us thought any more... your the hero of the shinobi world"
Naruto: Kakashi sensie
Guy: hes alright, stay focused
Bee: we have to take this motha ****a out
" Tobi: looks like its time"
Tobi: now know the true power of the 10-tails... UCHIHA KEAJIN RELEASE!!!!!
*The flames start to disperse, we start the get a look at the statue, only to see its shape has completly changed*
Naruto: the 10- tails
Guy & Bee: no? we are to late
* Tobi forms hand signs *
Tobi: now to seal the beast inside me
10-tails: gwarhhhhhhhhhh
Naruto: how are we suppose to fight this
Guy: we wont, our enemy is still the masked man
*When Guy finishes talking the 10-tails starts to glow and it grows smaller and smaller*
Tobi: your right, now all this power is mine, the true power of the So6P
Naruto: that dosent mean you will win
Bee: thats right its an incomplete 10-tails we still have a chance
Guy: i cant stay in the 7th gate for much longer, its either die or sit out
Naruto: sometimes youth needs a vacation, we Jinjuriki can handle it now
Bee: thats right
* Bee returns to human form*
" Hachibi to Bee: I think now will be the time to use your your new sword B.
bee to hachibi : yea"
Bee: Sameshada ready
Sameshade(growling only bee can understand): yeshhhh lets merge
* bee forms into a shark*
Bee: now to take it even futher... Host Transformation... yeaoh
* bee transforms into a octo-shark*
Chapter End
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Senior captain 9th div.
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
7 maybe 8 out of 10. Pretty sure tobi is not gonna wait and do offerings anymore though. The whole hand yourself over deal you could leave that out.
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Legend
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
Chapter 598 was good, but 599 wasn't even close to anything Kishi's ever done before. And the dialogue needs work gramatically.
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#D.J Beycun <3 Bon Qui Qui
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
Octo-shark haha thats awesome... :D
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The Counselor
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
Chapter 598 was good and Chapter 599 was meh..
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
that more like 12 chapters worth of stuff lol but sounds good
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YA BOY SPITS GAME
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Academy Student
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
Wonda wat naruto will transform in2
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doesnt really seem legit...
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Renegade ninja
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
I could see Octo-shark as you described plus naruto combining sage mode with kuyubi mode to make a sort of toad-fox mode,then they both take on the ten tails
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
Well A few things Wong with this post. One: the writing was cheesy as hell. Two:
There is no way in hell Kishi will do the dreadful combination transformation bullshit that many Anime/Manga have done. It's so over done and I'm sure
kishi has alot more respect for his work than that. And the next Manga will be going back to the Kage's or Sasuke.
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Renegade ninja
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
 Originally Posted by shipuden
TOBI ISS Setsuna Uchiha
Who is that?
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Jonin
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
Great job. Keep it up!
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
 Originally Posted by gordo1
Chapter 598 was good, but 599 wasn't even close to anything Kishi's ever done before. And the dialogue needs work gramatically.
this^ Though it is ironic since you spelled grammatically wrong...
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काला जादू
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
nice story, but its not even close to a prediction O.o
i mean tobi is not gonna lose his sharingan, i think kakashi would get EMS
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
Well done, but...octo-shark..?
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
"You just called him my *****"
Wow...
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
hehehe... predictions made me laugh... hehehe... nice to read them though maybe a bit far from reality
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Re: Naruto 598 and 599 Prediction :P
tobi wouldnt use izanagi..... he only has 1 sharingan left
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