Re: Lurking in the shadows with oasis
Nice, but still a few mistake you are using the jutsu,
the kunai stuff for distraction was good, the FB blinding light also was good.
But the way you extend your shadow was quite enough statement, as i said before, if you are using the FB, state that after you extend your shadow, it'll move forward faster then usual so will catch the opponent shadow also faster.
then don't say it pop out, say it when you managed to trap your opponent shadow, you shape your shadow into a human hands which will crawl up upon the opponent neck and immediately choke and strangle him to death.
try it again one more time.
- create another clone-