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    Satchi Zurake

    Basic Information
    Name: Satchi Zurake
    Nickname: N/A
    Gender: Male
    Age: 17
    Clan: N/A

    Looks: Satchi stands at about 5’8, weighing about 135 lbs. He has a slender build, similar to that of Sai. He has medium length, black hair and sickly, pale skin. His eyes are crimson red in color. When dressed casually or for a mission, he wears a mesh shirt with standard black pants, bandages around his lower legs, and standard shinobi sandals. Over this, he wears a robe similar to that of Naruto’s sage robe, except solid black in colo. Across his back is what appears to be a Katana, beige in color with a strange rune-like pattern on the sheath and hilt. He also wears fingerless black gloves.

    Personality: Satchi has many different sides to his personality. Outside of battle he has a somewhat cool demeanor, though he still remains friendly in most cases. In some cases he can somewhat sarcastic or snarky, and sometimes come off as downright arrogant and condescending. When alone he is often shown to be deep in thought about something, though he remains secretive about what is on his mind except when speaking to his sister or a friend he trusts very closely. He seems to have a thirst for knowledge and power, always looking for ways to further his abilities and arsenal. He is calm and analytical in the face of battle, sizing down many situations much in the same manner as Kakashi or Shikamaru. He also loves to test his skills in battle, and often enjoys showing off and can sometimes be quick to jump into a fight if he feels provoked.

    Village Info.
    Village of Birth: N/A
    Village of Alliance: Hidden Leaf

    Rank//Chakra Info.
    Ninja Rank: Chunin
    Specialty: N/A
    Elements: Wind (Needs Training)
    Your ninjutsu:


    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.


    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

    Background Info.
    History:
    Hailing from the deepest forests of the Land of Fire, Satchi, although talented compared to the average shinobi, didn’t display the power that was expected of him, and was ultimately banished from his family by his father at the age of 10. For several years he wandered the land of fire, unable to hone his skills without a teacher, until one day he came across the Hidden Leaf village. After some screening and close suspicion it was finally decided that he was not a threat and could be permitted to become part of the village. It was here that he would finally begin his training.

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    Battles

    Won:0
    Lost:0

    ~Approved~ you are not in a clan, you do not have a clan symbol on your back.
     
         
    Last edited by Caliburn; 08-25-2012 at 10:34 PM.

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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    You can't have a snake summoning tattoo unless you were trained in them, and since this is your very first bio I doubt you have had training in snake summoning.
     
         
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    Quote Originally Posted by AlbelTheWicked View Post
    You can't have a snake summoning tattoo unless you were trained in them.
    Whoops, meant to take that out.

    Quote Originally Posted by AlbelTheWicked View Post
    You can't have a snake summoning tattoo unless you were trained in them, and since this is your very first bio I doubt you have had training in snake summoning.
    So i just tried to fix it and the post shit itself.
     
         
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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    Quote Originally Posted by SatchiZurake View Post
    Whoops, meant to take that out.
    Also fixed your music videos. Just copy and past what I have into your bio.


    Background Music


    Quote Originally Posted by SatchiZurake View Post
    So i just tried to fix it and the post shit itself.
    Ouch
     
         

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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    Quote Originally Posted by AlbelTheWicked View Post
    Also fixed your music videos. Just copy and past what I have into your bio.


    Background Music




    Ouch
    Should i get a mod to delete it and try again?
     
         

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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    Quote Originally Posted by SatchiZurake View Post
    Should i get a mod to delete it and try again?
    Try to see if you can't just retype everything back in. It will be a while before Cali comes and checks your bio, so you should have plenty of time to do it.
     
         

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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    Quote Originally Posted by SatchiZurake View Post
    Should i get a mod to delete it and try again?
    Nevermind i fixed it.
     
         

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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    Quote Originally Posted by SatchiZurake View Post
    Nevermind i fixed it.
    Nice xD
     
         

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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    nice bio
     
         

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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    Quote Originally Posted by blaise12 View Post
    nice bio
    thanks but the history could be way better. I kinda just threw some shit together.
     
         

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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    Quote Originally Posted by SatchiZurake View Post
    thanks but the history could be way better. I kinda just threw some shit together.
    Still it's not bad for a first bio.
     
         

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    Re: Satchi Zurake

    Quote Originally Posted by AlbelTheWicked View Post
    Still it's not bad for a first bio.
    well i hope so, i've been scoping out the approved/rejected bios for tips on what and what not to do since I joined the base.

    But still thanks haha
     
         

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