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    Naruto 601

    Final Battle of the War!

    Naruto- If Madara's here... then the Kages...!?

    Kakashi- !?

    (Sasuke appears behind all of them, along with Orochimaru, Suigetsu, Juugo)

    Sasuke- Madara and Obito...

    Naruto- Sasuke!? (His intention doesn't seem evil at all!)

    Sasuke- Naruto, let's put an end to this war! (Sasuke activates EMS and runs with Naruto to Obito and Madara)

    Obito- What happened Sasuke?

    (Flashback)

    Orochimaru- This is the secret Uchiha Temple... where you went as a child, Sasuke

    (Sasuke remembers Fugaku and Mikoto took him there as a child with Itachi)

    Sasuke- ...

    Orochimaru- Sasuke you might want to see this person

    (A monk with Uchiha clothes greets them)

    Sasuke- You are..?

    Monk- I am only a monk for the Uchiha Clan. Do you really want revenge on Konoha?

    Sasuke- Yes.

    Monk- Well... let me tell you this Sasuke... the Uchiha Clan was the one that started the darkness... Madara thirsted for power back then The Uchiha Coup was to get the Senju DNA, not to take over the village, but destroy it along with other villages.

    (Back to present moment)

    Naruto- ... I see Sasuke..

    Sasuke- I'll save the world with you Naruto! We'll make our parents proud that we overcame the darkness!

    Madara- Darkness is what takes over weaklings. You are both weak brats.

    Obito- Kamui!

    Madara- Super Amaterasu!

    Naruto- Bijuu Dama!

    Sasuke- Eternal Izanagi!

    What is this new jutsu Sasuke is using!?!? Next Week
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    nah...its too short..and i dont like the flashback and "eternal izanagi".....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    Quote Originally Posted by sanchonelson View Post
    Final Battle of the War!

    Naruto- If Madara's here... then the Kages...!?

    Kakashi- !?

    (Sasuke appears behind all of them, along with Orochimaru, Suigetsu, Juugo)

    Sasuke- Madara and Obito...

    Naruto- Sasuke!? (His intention doesn't seem evil at all!)

    Sasuke- Naruto, let's put an end to this war! (Sasuke activates EMS and runs with Naruto to Obito and Madara)

    Obito- What happened Sasuke?

    (Flashback)

    Orochimaru- This is the secret Uchiha Temple... where you went as a child, Sasuke

    (Sasuke remembers Fugaku and Mikoto took him there as a child with Itachi)

    Sasuke- ...

    Orochimaru- Sasuke you might want to see this person

    (A monk with Uchiha clothes greets them)

    Sasuke- You are..?

    Monk- I am only a monk for the Uchiha Clan. Do you really want revenge on Konoha?

    Sasuke- Yes.

    Monk- Well... let me tell you this Sasuke... the Uchiha Clan was the one that started the darkness... Madara thirsted for power back then The Uchiha Coup was to get the Senju DNA, not to take over the village, but destroy it along with other villages.

    (Back to present moment)

    Naruto- ... I see Sasuke..

    Sasuke- I'll save the world with you Naruto! We'll make our parents proud that we overcame the darkness!

    Madara- Darkness is what takes over weaklings. You are both weak brats.

    Obito- Kamui!

    Madara- Super Amaterasu!

    Naruto- Bijuu Dama!

    Sasuke- Eternal Izanagi!

    What is this new jutsu Sasuke is using!?!? Next Week
    this won't happen.
    but if it does, will happen in 20 chapters or so lol
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    and they all die. end of Naruto.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    Ermm.... Nah.
    Nice effort and +rep. :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    Cool. But won't happen.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    I'm sorry, but waaaay to corny, and straight forward.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    try again.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    Quote Originally Posted by snake orochimaru View Post
    and they all die. end of Naruto.
    yup thats gonna happen
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    nice try BUT NO!
    work harder
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    good effort ..

    too short first off
    besides that it was fine for your first one :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    if someone even just say eternal izanami/izanagi in the real manga id just literally quit
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    Sasuke and Orochimaru are in a dimension were the past is played like a VCR tape over and over, this will allow Sasuke to see the past events that lead to the Uchiha Massacre and who was to blame for it.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    I don't think so...
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    Quote Originally Posted by Simple Math View Post
    i agree to disagree
    pretty much this. like how sasuke just appears and says lets end this war together thatd be cool
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    Wouldn't happen that quickly.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 601

    surely u can do better then that
     
         

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