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    Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

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    602: Young Uchiha

    ~Scene shows a heavily wounded Obito on the bed Madara looking over him~

    Obito: Who are you... I can't feel my leg or arm..

    Madara: I am Uchiha Madara.. I brought you here and healed you.. it will take a few days before you can feel your body.

    Obito: But I was crushed the fact I'm still alive is...

    -Obito begins hyperventilating.. a decrepid Madara moves to him placing an oxygen mask on Obito-

    -Madara then sits in a chair besides the bed and several hours pass-

    Madara: Do you want to know why I saved your life?

    -Obito's eyes widen as he looks in suspense at Madara-

    Madara: Because you are the one shinobi who can end all the worlds hatred..All the pointless wars .. more will follow unless you accept your role..

    -Madara leans over and takes off Obito's oxygen mask-

    Obito: If thats my role I will accept it.. Where are my comrades.. Kakashi, Rin?

    Madara: The boy you speak of.. He is alive.. the girl he let die..

    Obito: Rin..died.

    Madara: She is unfortunately another shinobi who has suffered because of this cruel world.

    Obito: I don't believe you!..

    -obito gasps for air-

    Madara: Calm down boy.. You're no good to anyone dead, Tell me what happened to your other eye?..

    Obito: I gave it to Kakashi as a present for becoming a Jonin

    Madara: Foolish child.. the visual prowess of an Uchiha belongs only to our clan..

    Obito:....

    Obito: Madara-San.. How are you alive?

    Madara:... Ahh you are referring to how my passing is believed to have happened at the final valley all those years ago.

    Obito: ...

    Madara: I will show you my battle be warned though child.. No one but you and Zetsu know that I am still very much alive..

    -Madara activates his sharingan and begins to show Obito has fabled battle with Hashirama Senju-

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    603: My Last Battle
    ~Scene change to the final valley [Flashback]~

    Hashirama: Madara! Why have you left the village!?

    Madara: The Uchiha have been the Senju's dogs for too long..!

    Hashirama: My friend please.. We can talk about this.

    Madara: I never was your friend.. this was merely a way to keep my clan settled.. for years the old system ravaged every clan but we swore allegiance to those who shared our blood..

    -Madara then uses fireball jutsu without seals point blank at Hashirama-

    Hashirama:"right off the bat huh.. He's serious"

    -Hashirama then uses Wood Release Advent of a world of world of flowering trees-

    Madara:"Shit he intends to knock me out then drag me back"

    -Madara uses Great fire annihilation to set the newly sprung trees on fire causing the pollen to rise with the smoke-

    -a wooden branch then appears from the ground binding Madara a small branch then wraps around Madara's head and covers his Sharingan-

    Hashirama: Madara please can we talk about this.. I ask of you one more time friend..

    Madara: You always were to quick to drop your guard Hashirama.

    -Madara's Susanoo materializes and punches Hashirama sending him flying several hundred feet away into a pile of rocks-

    -the susanoo then picks the branches off Madara who stands there smiling-

    Madara: I'm disappointed.. my rival has gone sloppy with his old age.

    -Suddenly the rocks were Hashirama landed vibrate and one is sent flying in madara's direction with an explosive tag added-

    Hashirama: I'll admit building a village can offput ones sparring practice but I'm more then capable of beating you.

    -Madara's draws his gunbai and transfers susanoo's power into it causing it block the rock and dust to block Madara's eyesight-

    -The dust settles and Hashirama has disappeared-

    Madara: These new tactics of yours are weak Hashirama! Your the first hokage now.. fighting like this won't damage me.. We both know that.

    Hashirama: YOUR RIGHT BUT THIS WILL!

    -Hashirama is scene hurtling towards madara with a giant sword (similar to Siegfrieds from SC)-

    -Madara is then slashed in his arm.. quite deep but still able to use his arm.. His gunbai able to block Hashirama from severing his arm off-

    Madara: This is nothing!.

    Hashirama: Hmmm.. You've got slower.

    -Madara narrows his eyes glaring at Hashirama-

    Madara: I have yet to show you.. The True Power Of The Uchiha!

    Hashirama: The Mangekyou.. Heh' about time you used that Madara:

    -Madara activates his EMS-

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    604: Eternal Mangekyou

    Madara: Its been a while since I had to use my mangekyou.

    -Madara then uses Amaterasu at Hashirama-

    Hashirama:"As long as I keep my movement unpredictable I should be able to outrun the flames"

    -Hashirama then spreads his arm a branch appears from his palm which he uses to jump high in the air before grabbing the branch as he rises and throwing it at Madara's head-

    Madara: Nice try.

    -Madara uses Amaterasu to stop the branch which falls to the floor coated in black flames-

    Hashirama:"Good he took the bait now I need to get in closer"

    -Hashirama runs at jaw dropping speed sending a right hook to the back of Madara's head causing him to loose balance and fall near the black flames-

    Madara: HMM

    -Madara activates Susanoo then uses his mangekyou to disperse Amaterasu-

    Madara: "had it not been for Susanoo I'd be a goner.. Hashirama is the toughest opponent I've fought.. I might have to use 'that' "

    -Madara's susanoo sends a sword swinging at Hashirama-

    Hashirama: ....

    -Hashirama: Wood Style: Thick Flowered Tree Column... A huge branch covered in flowers similar to the ones in the advent technique are shown-

    Madara: Heh'

    - Madara's Susanoo sends its other arm to attack Hashirama-

    Hashirama:"Susanoo may be powerful but your limited in terms of movement"

    -Hashirama repeats the technique causing Thick Flowered Tree Column to appear on his over side-

    Hashirama: You aren't looking so confident now Madara..

    -Hashirama then claps his hands together causing a giant black trunk to emerge from the ground and tear open Susanoo's ribcage-

    Madara: What are you-!!??

    Hashirama: Release!

    -Hashirama jumps back as the flowers on the columns release a hazy yellow mist.. Hashirama then turns his arm into a branch and sends a huge just of wind so the yellow toxins from the floor fly right into Madara's face..-

    Hashirama: I suppose I should tell you about this new technique huh'.. Well.. after our last battle I realized your fighting style is centered around your eyes and that if I attacked your senses directly with nature I'd instantaneously gain an advantage..

    The toxin you just inhaled is called Atropa belladonna its a toxin that causes loss of eyesight and balance.. I made this jutsu for the day we sparred again so I could show you I'm still the strongest.

    -Madara can be seen with around his eyes bright red due to inhaling the toxins-

    Madara:"Hashirama you are without a doubt one of the best shinobi to live but I am better"

    -Susanoo then disappears.. A faint grin can be scene on Madara's face-

    Madara: Summoning Jutsu!:

    -Suddenly a huge cloud of smoke appears.. the Kyuubi's tails poke out from the smoke which disperses to reveal the kyuubi in full form snarling at Madara-

    Madara: Obey!

    -Madara's sharingan tomoe appears in the kyuubi's eyes-

    Hashirama: Madara Uchiha relying on a tailed beast for backup.. heh'

    Madara: Whilst you were gardening I was taming tailed beasts..

    -the kyuubi then roars causing the columns to fly in Hashirama's direction-

    Hashirama:"This is gonna be hard"

    -Hashirama Earth Style: Mud Wall. The columns stop and impact the wall which begins to shake-

    -Hashirama Wood Style: Giant Wood Torpedo's.. - Holes appear in the mud wall .. Giant straight branches emerge each about 30ft long and 8m in thickness-

    Madara: Not bad.

    -the kyuubi roars then sends it front paws hurtling to the ground to create a shockwave which sends the wood flying and the mud wall begins to crumble.. the area is then engulfed in a bright light due to the shockwave-

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    605: Looking To The Future.

    Madara: Well I suppose we should go..

    -Madara looks up as the sun which is slowly rising then notices Hashirama at the top of the mountain standing staring at him.. his armor battered and his clothes teared-

    Hashirama: No matter how much you throw at me.. as the Hokage I swore to protect the leaf and the ninja world!.

    Madara: So be it..

    -The Kyuubi then uses tailed beast bomb in Hashirama's direction-

    Hashirama:"I need to get the nine tails away from Madara"

    -Hashirama then jumps out of the way but gets hit with the aftershock of the bomb causing his arm to bleed.. some blood then splatters on a tree-

    -The tailed beast bomb causes the side of the mountain to collapse and the water from the lake flows down into area which has been tore up by the fight-

    -Hashirama then jumps towards Madara & the Kyuubi in midair whilst grabbing a scroll from his armor which he opens and taps down on-

    - Several weapons appear including a sword identical to the one he injured Madara's arm with-

    -He then throws an array of shuriken at madara who uses his gunbai to blow them away-

    -Hashirama then lands on the ground-

    -He makes a handseal which causes tree trunks to emerge ans subdue the Kyuubi.. he then jumps towards the kyuubi using the Hokage-Style Sixty-Year-Old Technique — Kakuan Entering Society with Bliss-Bringing Hands technique to remove the kyuubi's chakra who then loses consciousness.-

    -With his hand he then uses mokuton on Madara who is landing towards him and performs the summoning break jutsu.-[Basically I've incorporated the Generations eointo the chapter as it did show a good end to the fight]

    -Hashirama then grips a his sword from the floor and stabs madara in the abdomen with it.. he removes the branches which sink back into his palm and looks coldly at Madara who is kneeling on the floor looking at his stab wound-

    Madara: HASHIRAMA YOU PLANNED ALL OF THIS!?.

    Hashirama: I didn't have too.. Madara your arrogance towards all non Uchiha blinds you from the fact that ones heritage does not ensure them immeasurable power.. Hard work and determination is what truely strengthens a shinobi.

    -Madara glares at Hashirama-

    Hashirama: I will speak to the leaf of our fight.. it was one of the hardest if not the hardest battle I have fought.. Uchiha Madara you are one of the most gifted shinobi I have ever met and I hope that in the next life you are not bound by your blood or your arrogance..

    -Hashirama then hops off into the sunset back to the leaf-

    Madara: HASHIRAMA!!!!!!!!!!

    -Hashirama has an expression of pure sadness as he is shown jumping through the trees hearing Madara's shouting-

    Zetsu: Wow you got pretty beat up huh'!

    -Madara glares at Zetsu then coughs up blood due to his injury-

    -Zetsu then reaches down to touch Madara's bloody shoulder-

    Madara: No.. see over there -Madara's eyesight still hindered because of the plant toxins- Hashirama's blood is covering a tree.

    Zetsu: Why his blood..he is of a different clan entirely.

    Madara: I read the tablet in Naka Shrine a few years ago.. I have a feeling that theres more and I think I can strengthen my body with his blood.

    -Zetsu then jumps over touching the blood.. and jumps back down to Madara-

    -He touches madara's shoulder and then notices how Hashirama's blood heals his arm-

    Zetsu: Incredible.. Its as if his blood is indeed strengthening you..

    -Madara closes his eyes a smile evident on his face-

    -Madara then pulls out the sword clenching his teeth at the pain with a smile still evident-

    Madara: Zetsu.

    -Zetsu uses his ability to transform into Hashirama.. He then picks up the sword that was impaled in Madara and chops his arm off causing bleeding-

    -Zetsu then hangs his chopped arm off above Madara's stomach and watches as the blood heals Madara upon contact-

    -Madara slowly opens his eyes revealing Rinnegan-

    Zetsu: ! Your eyes.

    Madara: Yes... I feel much better, Come Zetsu

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    606: You Are The One

    ~Scene change to Obito~

    Obito: !!!

    Madara: I should thank Hashirama.. It is probably because of his blood I have lived up until now.

    Obito: Why didn't you go back to the leaf and fight Hashirama again?

    Madara: Because even at my level it would have been a stalemate.. We Uchiha have stamina and visual prowess.. The Senju in Hashirama's case have vitality.. He dodged most of my strongest attacks.. Then the words he imparted to me gave me an idea.

    Hashirama was one of a kind and the world changes.. as do the ideals of each generation.. As strong and influential as one can be they can never control the tide of war.. something which came about every few years..

    Even if I commenced the Infinite Tsukuyomi and gathered the bijuu I'd be limited because of my advanced age..

    Obito:....Is this why you rescued me..

    Madara: Yes it is one of the reasons..I am a conduit to deliver the message of the I-T .. As will you be when you approach my age.. You owe it to Rin to become no one but a conduit so that none may suffer the same fate as her..

    Obito:"Everything he's saying is strange but it makes sense... No one should have to suffer because of war mankind would be better in an illusion.... For Rin" You're right Madara-San.



    Madara: ....Rin would have been proud of her team mate

    -Madara slowly gets up and walks out the room leaving Obito in the bed.. his tears rolling down his bandaged face.. Awakening his MS-

    ~Scene Change to a year later~

    Madara: With mine and Hashirama's DNA I have halted the effects your MS.. I haven't stopped them completely but you should be able to use your Sharingan and that useful jutsu of yours..

    -Madara begins to cough-

    Madara: I fear my time is coming to an end.. Obito.. We must go before somewhere

    Obito: Where Madara-San?

    Madara: Naka Shrine

    Obito:....

    Madara: With your jutsu we will be able to get there and back without causing any conflict.

    Obito: Understood..

    -Obito walks up to Madara and they teleport to Naka Shrine-

    -Madara slowly steps over to the tablet activating his Rinnegan-

    - He reads aloud the contents of the tablet-

    Madara: Just as I thought.

    Obito: Madara-San....

    Madara: Good.. saves me from explaining more then whats needed.

    -Obito walks up to Madara and they teleport back to the hideout-

    Madara: There is a boy in the Hidden Rain Village... by the name of Nagato.. I want you to implant my rinnegan into him.. Kill the boys parents... tell him the leaf did it... Once the leaf is dismantled the purification of the shinobi world can begin.. They are the root of this damned system which you Obito are destined to end... Ensure he uses the rinne tensei jutsu to revive me in a more youthful form then I can make sure the I-Tsukuyomi lasts.

    -Madara turns to Obito with his rinnegan still active-

    Madara: Remember you are no one.. merely a messenger for the message that will end all this suffering.

    -Obito reaches into his cloak -

    -Madara walks slowly up to him until he is face to face with him-

    -Obito then lunges a kunai into Madara's chest-

    Madara: You know what to do next.

    -Madara falls to the floor.. Obito looks down his face emotionless-

    ~Scene Change to a few hundred feet away from Naruto & Co's location~

    -The Five Kage stand watching.. Tsunade's forehead mark is half faded-

    Mei: Hokage are you sure you can handle another fight.

    Tsunade: I will make me grandfather proud and ensure that with everything in my power I protect not only Naruto but the entire Shinobi world.

    ---End----
     
         
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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    Good prediction and DAAAAAMMMM that was a long read!!
     
         

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    Quote Originally Posted by IDunno View Post
    . But srs dude you must have a lot of spare time on your hands.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    Too long, but nevertheless a good read.
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    that was the best prediction i have ever seen no joke. there is only one flaw, nagato is much older than obito, he is even older than minato so obito wouldnt have been alive when he was a child. +rep either way though
     
         

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    Wow that was really good IMO. Can tell you put some thought into this +rep for you!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    I would love if things go on your way! unfortunately I think there's no way Tsunade can survive this tragedy
     
         

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    nice great job +rep
     
         

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    That was a great read. Good job!
     
         

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    like it +rep
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by ThtOneGuy View Post
    that was the best prediction i have ever seen no joke. there is only one flaw, nagato is much older than obito, he is even older than minato so obito wouldnt have been alive when he was a child. +rep either way though
    yea nagato got it at a young age and nagato>minato>obito
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    Thanks everyone..
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    Awesome Thread . Really cool how you solved all the mysteries . Can you please tell me how Obito got his second sharingan during the the fight against Konan . And You are wrong about one thing , That Nagato is a lot older than Obito . He is even older than Minato . And at the time when Nagato's parents were killed , Obito wasn't even born . And I dont think that Obito becomes that strong in one year and activated his MS at such a young age .
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    Damn, realy nice predictions
    You actually got me to cry a little when madara was screaming hashirama's name, I dunno, the emotion was really well transcribed ^^
    Anyways, rep !!!
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    One problem is Tsunade got cut in half and asked the slug not to heal her but to instead bring the other Kages to her. She's as good as dead
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    Gr8 prediction BUT dude .. plzz
    Nagato is almost around Minato's Age Aand Obito is a kid in front of dem
    Soo how cud Obito implant those eyes in the young Nagato while at thaat age Nagato wud be a whole grown man ?/
    Think abt it bro' nd get a good explanation
    I wud like 2 here ur thoughts abt. it
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    Quote Originally Posted by repulse View Post
    Too long, but nevertheless a good read.
    it covered 4 chapters.....
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    606 was awesome it was god damn good
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    farr outt!! your predictions keep getting interesting especially your last one :D

    good job mate :D
     
         

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    Re: Naruto 602-603-604-605-606 Prediction

    read all of it nice job
     
         

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