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    My First Bio: Kaji Sunaharu!

    Sorry if it fails its my first time so... <:D
    Name: Kaji Sunaharu
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    Age: 16
    Kekkei Genkai:Ryuujin Release
    Family: Deceased
    Background: Kaji has a rare kekkei genkai that runs through her family named Ryuujin Release, allowing her to summon and, if needed, transform into various dragons. Because she was the only current clan member with these abilities, she became a target for Orochimaru, and at the age of four he killed her family and kidnapped her. For four years he trained her, and during which she became close friends with Juugo, Kimimaro, Suigetsu, and Karin. After four years of training Kaji left to go to the chunnin exams. There she met the Konoha 11, and grew close to them. Afterwards she stayed in Konoha, became an ANBU for one year, and was kiddnapped again by orochimaru. She is currently an Akatsuki Subordanate, and a part-time member of Team Taka.
    People she dislikes: Kabuto, Orochimaru(Durr...), Sakura, and Ino.
    Elements Fire, Water, Ice, Wind, Wood, And Lightning.

    Jutsu: Water clone jutsu
    Rank: E
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 5
    Discription: Creates multiple clones of oneself from water.

    Fire dragon jutsu:
    Rank: E
    Chakra cost: 5
    Discription: Creats a giant fire dragon to torch enemy.

    Yeah... IT SUCKS. Please try not to flame me too bad...
     
         
    Last edited by katandthehat; 09-18-2012 at 01:44 AM.

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    Re: My First Bio: Kaji Sunaharu!

    You have already failed on so many levels, infact this is like the tutorial level failed.
     
         

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    Re: My First Bio: Kaji Sunaharu!

    Lmao
     
         

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    Re: My First Bio: Kaji Sunaharu!

    You're not done.
    This is how a bio is suppose to look like.

    My bio
    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...d.php?t=116560

    You need more detail,pics,etc

    You also need to put this as your ninjutsu

    (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
    Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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    (Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
    _____
    (Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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    (Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:N/A
    Damage Points:N/A
    The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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    (Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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    (Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
    _____
    (Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

    Rank:E
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:5
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)



    Take a look on this thread to see what you need in your bio.

    http://www.narutobase.net/forums/showthread.php?t=1950
     
         
    Last edited by ~WastelandSociety~; 09-17-2012 at 12:38 AM.

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    Re: My First Bio: Kaji Sunaharu!

    Check out my bio for ideas Doctor Mamoru

    Also read the bio rules as you can only have two elements being you are a chuunin.
     
         

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    Re: My First Bio: Kaji Sunaharu!

     
         

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    Re: My First Bio: Kaji Sunaharu!

    Thanks for using constructive critisisum instead of flames. Sorry it Blows. <
     
         

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    Re: My First Bio: Kaji Sunaharu!

    Sorry but you can't have an uchiha until you have 1500 posts.
     
         

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