(Satan no honō: Kikku no akuma no o shiri!)Satan's Flame:Kick Satan's Butt!
Description:The user will mimick the Hyūga Clans traditional stance,as they do they coat there fingers tips which are formed together(middle and index) and will begin strking the target at random spots,unhowever there not insering chakra into the target but simply touching the surface of there skin.After unleashing a barrage of 32 consecutive hits the user will then coat there feet in flames and unleash a kick into the targets chin sending them flying into the air, then the user will run and jump into the air by propelling flames from there hands and will smash a fiery fist into the target sending them flying into the ground.
-Can only be used 3 times-
-Must be taught by Asuna-
Pretty simple,give it a go on the dummy over there
I start to concentrate on my fire chakra and pass it into my middle and index finger and I charge toward the dummy and strike the dummy with a barrage of 32 strikes in crucial points like joints hand limbs etc, I then initiate the second phase and coat my feet with the same chakra and stike the dummy in the chin area and I send him flying in to the air and then I propel in air by unleashing flames from my hand and smash my fiery fist on his chest and send him down to ground again.
Gooodie 0^O now take the Lotsu position over there and try to begin regulating your chakra all around your body,all the way till you can feel the heat building up to a point.After yoi reach the peak of focus,slowly balance your chakra into a ratio of 7:3 which should produce a small ember on your head for a start
I start by taking the lotus position and start to maneuver a good amount of my katon chakra through out my body, I continue doing this for a small amount of time till the point I am sure that I have reached the highest temperature possible, I than start to use a small proportion of my chakra and start to maker embers to come out my head........
(Satan no honō: Haipā hinshi suru mōdo)Satan's Flame:Hyper Dying Will Mode
Chakra: 40(-5 per turn actiave)
Description:Hyper Dying Will Mode is the last and final stage of the Satan's Flame,the user while clasp his hands together,having the flare blue fire around them,there fingers will being a triangular form and on the users forehead a small flare in the shape of a V,will appear on there head.While standing the user will channel only his fire chakra around his body causing the area around him to heat up making it hard for unexpericened ninja(ninja of lower ranking of user)to vacute the area(short range).The users hand and the V will be sparking like starting a fire.Once the balance is made the user will open his eyes and complete the transformation of creating the Hyper Dying Will Mode.The user will have a fully lite blue/red fire around his hands and a flaring V on his forehead.While in this mode then user only has acess to Taijutsu,Satan's Flame and Fire related Techniques.The area around the user will make most shinobi backway from the heat radiating from them(other Satan's Flames students are unaffected).The mode boosts there Taijutsu by +5 due to the fire being instensly hot and Fire Related Ninjutsu gain +5 as well,the mode is however vunerable to A-Rank water due to it will extinguish the flames on there user,but even so the user can stop channeling there chakra to there fists and forehead to prevent them from outing and then can reignite them.The users can also unleash streams of fire from the hands to allow the to fly up to mid range by continously project fire from there body.
-Mode last 4 turns and leaves user taxed out-
-Stopping the mode counts as a move and reduces the mode activation by 1 turn
-Can only be used with Fire,Taijutsu and other Satan's Flame Related moves-
-Must learnt Satan's Flame-
-Can only be used once per battle-
Way to much restricted o-o, don't you think ? I understand the part that one can't use other elements and all but also leaves us taxed out >.> ? (do explain to what limit are we effected), the part that no one can come in short range of us without feeling the effect of the heat is kinda cool but then we are kinda stopping are opponent to enter in a close range battle and thus to some extent rendering this technique useless z.z, also why does cancelling it count as move >_>, so all in all its a good technique if you are faster and stronger than your opponent, like the stream part from hands, it can come handy. (in my opinion, you should revamp it a little bit)
(Akuma Homura : Kaen no Debiru Sureiyā no Jutsu)Satan’s Flame: Flame Demon Slayer Technique
Type: Offensive | Defensive
Rank: B- Rank
Chakra:20(-5 per turn active)
Description: This jutsu is the basics of Satan’s Flame. Through small chakra control, the user is able to manifest fire around any part of their body and help enhance their close combat specialty. The fire that covers the body part is also heated, so when the target is hit, they will be burned on contact.
-Cannot use jutsus of other elemental affinities other than Fire
-Can keep active for 2 turns
Okay its a really cool technique in my opinion, great for defense and offense, its proper usage depends on the user and how creatively he can integrate in with taijutsu, though don't you think you should have that can't use other elemental attacks which originate from our body, specifically skin ?
1. Well firstly modes are realllly hard to be approved now adays so I was kinda not thinking you know? Yeah it will be redone soon. As for the taxed out part, only mildly since your not overloading your chakra stream, it just your forcing one specific element or abnormal lengths to flow in your body, specifically heated chakra, so I don't say to the extreme, just tired but still can go forward. Anyway lll rework the jutsu once I get around.
2. Yes it is my own creation after all hue hue hue!! Now that question you may wanna rephrase it as I don't quite under stand
I mean that, its a restriction of technique that we can't use other elemental attacks, so I am saying instead of making it say that we can't use other elemental attacks why don't you restrict it saying that we can't use those attack which emerge from our body as the will nullify the effect of this technique.. hope it makes sense