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    [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    Greetings, -Severus Snape-

    I will be administrating your rain test and the rules are as followed:

    -Rei's R&R
    -You may only use water, wind, nin, tai and gen
    -You may custom jutsus(only Water and Wind)
    -Breaking the rules will result in the failure of the test.
    -I will be using all 5 elements and Ken/Tai/Gen/Storm Release

    Please do not spam this fight. Only Myself, the participant, Admins, Mods, and Senseis (upon request) may post here.

    I'll be using my Yui bioagraphy for this test against you.

    Location: A large open field with giant rock fixtures around us,with a water source Long Range from us.We start at Mid Range
    State your biography and I will begin with the first move.

    Good Luck!
     
         
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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    Harry James Potter

    Thank you for conducting the test!
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    No problem ^^
    ------------------
    Yui standing only a few metres away,channels her water chakra from below your current location.Causing a pillar of water to rise you uo into the air,Yui performs a handseal casting a genjutsu where the entire terrain suddenly changes into the inside of a active volcano.As your landing Yui performs a few seals again then applying her hand onto the groung,causing the earth below you(in genjutsu the lava slips open) to open into a cavern of sharp edged rocks making you fall into the lava in the Genjutsu
    Hehehe Yui is ready for some fun!


    ( Suiton: Mizu Hashira Suiryoku no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Pillar Thrust
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then they create water to rise up from the ground beneath the target lifting them into the air.

    ( Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu ) - Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.

    (Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: The user performs the Ram → Horse → Tiger → Rabbit → Snake and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    Quote Originally Posted by Asuna View Post
    No problem ^^
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    Yui standing only a few metres away,channels her water chakra from below your current location.Causing a pillar of water to rise you uo into the air,Yui performs a handseal casting a genjutsu where the entire terrain suddenly changes into the inside of a active volcano.As your landing Yui performs a few seals again then applying her hand onto the groung,causing the earth below you(in genjutsu the lava slips open) to open into a cavern of sharp edged rocks making you fall into the lava in the Genjutsu
    Hehehe Yui is ready for some fun!


    ( Suiton: Mizu Hashira Suiryoku no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Pillar Thrust
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then they create water to rise up from the ground beneath the target lifting them into the air.

    ( Magen: Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu ) - Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.

    (Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 25
    Damage points: 50
    Description: The user performs the Ram → Horse → Tiger → Rabbit → Snake and slams their palm on the ground. Instantly, the ground to the sides of the opponent take the shape of huge jaws and attempt to crush and stab him between them.
    The moment Harry is thrust into the air he focuses his chakra into his mouth and blows out a stream of wind, causing him to move backwards into Long Range. As Harry is moving towards the ground, he preforms the Ram → Tiger handseals and spits out a stream of huge amount of sticky liquid towards Yui and the area between Yui and him, immobilising Yui the moment it comes in contact with her feet. The moment Harry lands on the ground, he starts running towards Yui while focusing some chakra into his feet to run on top of the starch syrup field, grabbing 4 kunai from his pocket and throws them at her, 2 are aimed at her legs and the other 2 at her shoulders. As soon as the kunai have left Harry's hands, he notices that earth in front and underneath him opens into a hole, and focuses his chakra into his right hand, creating a strong spiral of water coming from his hand and pushes him up into the air and out of the cavern, and while focusing his chakra in his feet, he lands on his feet on the starch field, next to the gap in the earth.

    You almost had me there, you know, you're pretty mean for a girl.

    (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.


    (Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Starch Syrup Capture Field
    Rank: C
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user After performing the required hand seals Ram → Tiger spits out high-viscosity, chakra infused water, aimed at a surface of wide scope. This is a stream of sticky liquid which can be used to form an adhesive trap that can inhibit a person's mobility. One can effectively reduce their enemy's area of activity with this technique, and has the effect of being able to take complete control over the battlefield. The normal scope of this technique is normally just a few metres, but if prepared, it is also possible to make an entire pond of starch syrup. Being caught in the technique can be avoided by channelling chakra to one's feet allowing one to walk upon it uninhibited, beforehand.


    (Suiton: Seiryūshō) - Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user unleashes a spiralling torrent of water from his hands.

     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    As Yui finishes the Cavern,she hears the slight whistling in the wind,look to see you throw the kuneai,but her feet stuck in the starch,she channels her chakra into her feet causing a rampart to rise under her freeing her from the starch,as Yui is still on the rampart,she can see you coming out of the carvern,she performs a seal creating a chidori in her hand and swiping it to unleash a barrage of lighting needles traveling swiftly at you but Yui at the same moment after,performs a few seals again channeling her earth chakra to fall from directly above you to drop.The needles and mud are almost instanly done making difficult to evade.
    Yui is testing you remember? I have to go abit rough!!

    (Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart
    Rank: B
    Type: Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then makes a gigantic rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. If the user increases the volume of earth too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption down. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

    (Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

    (Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    Quote Originally Posted by Asuna View Post
    As Yui finishes the Cavern,she hears the slight whistling in the wind,look to see you throw the kuneai,but her feet stuck in the starch,she channels her chakra into her feet causing a rampart to rise under her freeing her from the starch,as Yui is still on the rampart,she can see you coming out of the carvern,she performs a seal creating a chidori in her hand and swiping it to unleash a barrage of lighting needles traveling swiftly at you but Yui at the same moment after,performs a few seals again channeling her earth chakra to fall from directly above you to drop.The needles and mud are almost instanly done making difficult to evade.
    Yui is testing you remember? I have to go abit rough!!

    (Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart
    Rank: B
    Type: Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then makes a gigantic rampart rise up beneath the user's feet, by shaping the ground and increasing the amount of earth with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of the rampart can be anything from level ground to a steep, needle-like mountain. If the user increases the volume of earth too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption down. The user can combine this jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall Basin Technique to create a waterfall.

    (Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
    Rank: A
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: 60
    Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.

    (Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
    Rank: B
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.
    The moment Harry raises up from the cavern, he notices Yui standing on a rampart and creating a chidori in her hand. Harry immediately stops with the torrent from his hand, and while still moving upwards, due to his speed, he focuses his chakra in right hand. When he is about to punch his hand forwards, he notices the shadow above him, and instead of punching forwards, he punches his to his right side, causing him to be 'thrown' towards his left side, barely avoiding the mud that falls down. Just before Harry reaches the ground, he preforms a handseal and releases a burst of chakra towards Yui, causing her to only see darkness. The moment Harry is finished preforming the first handseal, he makes a 'Ram' handseal and spits out a huge amount of water, which knocks Yui over since she is unable to see it coming.


    (Fūton: Senpūken) - Wind Style: Hurricane Fist
    Rank: B
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:40
    Description: The user delivers a punch that releases a giant, adaptable whirlwind.


    ( Kokuangyo no Jutsu ) - Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
    Rank: A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost: 30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user makes one handseal, causing the opponent to believe they have been trapped in a world of infinite darkness, where their sense of sight is useless. It is capable of affecting multiple targets within range. However, it does not negate their other senses.


    (Suiton: Dai Bakusui Shōha) - Water Release: Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive,Supplementary
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: This technique is a stronger version of exploding water colliding wave technique. The user will first perform the ram hand seal and then spits out a large amount of water that covers an entire area, with massive waves that can crush the opponent. The user then forms the water into a giant orb, instead of releasing like weaker version of the technique.



     
         

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    Yui still on the rampart is watching you the whole time when suddenly her eye sight is blocked but remembering you perform a handseal she then realizes that its a Genjutsu,she then performs a single seal causing her to disrupt her chakra flow allowing her to break the Genjutsu.As Yui reopens her eyes she notices the water coming at her,she then channels her chakra infront of her creating 5 massive tornadoes to move in the same direction clashing with the water but still coming abit weaker.While this happening your vision of me is blocked,Yui then performs a few seals to cause thunder cloud to form right above your last known location,the several bolts of lighting desend to the battle field to appear and strike you down cause servere damage.
    ( Genjutsu: Kai ) - Illusion Technique: Release
    Rank: C-A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15-30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does one hand seal to focus and then proceeds to disturb his chakra flow by forcefully stopping it momentarily and then "spiking" his spiritual energy, unbalancing his chakra. This dispels any genjutsu set upon the user except MS Eye Techniques, Paralysis-like Genjutsu and Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Chant. The effectiveness of this technique is dependent upon the skill of the user. A Jounin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to C-rank. An S-class ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to B-rank. A Sannin rank ninja (and above) can dispel Genjutsu up to A-rank. The user may use this technique through physical contact on others to dispel them from Genjutsu.

    ( Futon: Tatsumaki Heki ) - Wind Release: Tordado Wall
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user generates a large wall of 5 Tall tornadoes that are sent towards the opponent. A flying summoning can create this technique by simply flapping their wings to generate the wind for the technique.

    ( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    Quote Originally Posted by Asuna View Post
    Yui still on the rampart is watching you the whole time when suddenly her eye sight is blocked but remembering you perform a handseal she then realizes that its a Genjutsu,she then performs a single seal causing her to disrupt her chakra flow allowing her to break the Genjutsu.As Yui reopens her eyes she notices the water coming at her,she then channels her chakra infront of her creating 5 massive tornadoes to move in the same direction clashing with the water but still coming abit weaker.While this happening your vision of me is blocked,Yui then performs a few seals to cause thunder cloud to form right above your last known location,the several bolts of lighting desend to the battle field to appear and strike you down cause servere damage.
    ( Genjutsu: Kai ) - Illusion Technique: Release
    Rank: C-A
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 15-30
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: The user does one hand seal to focus and then proceeds to disturb his chakra flow by forcefully stopping it momentarily and then "spiking" his spiritual energy, unbalancing his chakra. This dispels any genjutsu set upon the user except MS Eye Techniques, Paralysis-like Genjutsu and Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Chant. The effectiveness of this technique is dependent upon the skill of the user. A Jounin rank ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to C-rank. An S-class ninja can dispel Genjutsu up to B-rank. A Sannin rank ninja (and above) can dispel Genjutsu up to A-rank. The user may use this technique through physical contact on others to dispel them from Genjutsu.

    ( Futon: Tatsumaki Heki ) - Wind Release: Tordado Wall
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: The user generates a large wall of 5 Tall tornadoes that are sent towards the opponent. A flying summoning can create this technique by simply flapping their wings to generate the wind for the technique.

    ( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.
    The moment Harry sees the 5 tornado's coming towards him, he quickly spits out a large amount of water that forms a barricade between him and the incoming tornado's, intercepting them. As the techniques cancel each other out, Harry starts running forwards towards the spot where he last saw Yui, and while running he notices from the corner of his eyes that a big thunder cloud formed itself above him. He quickly exhales a huge blast of wind upwards, while still running and as the wind technique destroys the thundercloud Harry grabs two scrolls from his weapon pouch and throws them above Yui's head, who he now can see since the water has fallen down, while focusing his chakra in them. As they are above Yui's head hunderds of weapons are summoned from the scrolls and rain down on Yui, while Harry stops running and crouches down about 5 meters away from Yui.

    ( Suiton: Suijinchū ) - Water Release: Water Encampment Pillar
    Rank: S
    Type: Defence
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: A defensive technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth in a dense torrent, effectively creating a near instantaneous barricade that can be used to intercept incoming attacks.


    (Fūton: Atsugai) - Wind Style: Pressure Damage
    Rank: A
    Type:Attack
    Range:Short-Mid
    Chakra Cost:30
    Damage Points:60
    Description: A Huge blast of wind that levels anything in its path; Can cause major damage and requires a sufficient chakra level to perform. This large wind blast moves in tremendous speed and cannot be controlled. If the user gets caught in it, it will harm him also.


    (Sōgu: Tensasai) - Manipulated Tools: Heavenly Chain of Destruction
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: A stronger version of the Twin Rising Dragons, the user tosses their large scroll into the air above her opponent and summons hundreds of different weapons from it, which then rain down, impaling the opponent and anything in their path. The weapons move so fast that they appear as white streaks.

     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    Yui apon the rock suddenly hears a quiet moment when a faith whistling in the air looking you to see white streaks coming as a blade slashes past her face,she quickly manipulates her earth chakra do create a earth armour around her to stop the blade from hitting her anymore,as the barrage is stopped she stops channeling chakra from the earth and lean back from behind the rampart and freefalls at first then begins to run on the rampart.Due to her beginning unable to be seen she performs a hand seals and causes rain to start developing on the field,but as she looks down she remembers the starch from earlier so keeping her chakra in her foot she walks onto of as she reaches bottom,with now the ability to sense your location,she performs a single seal due to her water mastery(look in bio for reference) and causes a water dragon from the river not to far from us to create a water dragon to appear from behind to grab and send you into the air then coming down to make you crash into the carven made earlier.
    (Koka no Jutsu) - Hardening Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

    (Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.

    (Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.
    Note: Requires a water source to use.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    Quote Originally Posted by Asuna View Post
    Yui apon the rock suddenly hears a quiet moment when a faith whistling in the air looking you to see white streaks coming as a blade slashes past her face,she quickly manipulates her earth chakra do create a earth armour around her to stop the blade from hitting her anymore,as the barrage is stopped she stops channeling chakra from the earth and lean back from behind the rampart and freefalls at first then begins to run on the rampart.Due to her beginning unable to be seen she performs a hand seals and causes rain to start developing on the field,but as she looks down she remembers the starch from earlier so keeping her chakra in her foot she walks onto of as she reaches bottom,with now the ability to sense your location,she performs a single seal due to her water mastery(look in bio for reference) and causes a water dragon from the river not to far from us to create a water dragon to appear from behind to grab and send you into the air then coming down to make you crash into the carven made earlier.
    (Koka no Jutsu) - Hardening Technique
    Rank: S
    Type: Offense/Defence/Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra Cost: 40
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: By utilizing earth-based chakra, the user creates armour made of rock that encases their body. The armour can also be used to create extendable weapons to strike a target with.

    (Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique
    Rank: C
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short-Long
    Chakra cost: 15
    Damage Points: N/A
    Description: A perception ninjutsu, allowing one to freely manipulate rain infused with the user's own chakra after waving the Bird → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rat → Snake hand seals. The rain falls from rain clouds, formed with the users own chakra. During this technique, the falling raindrops are closely linked to the users senses. When the rain is obstructed by a chakra belonging to someone the existence of the target can be detected. The rain will keep on falling until the user uses the seal to cancel it.

    (Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu) - Water Style: Water Dragon Bullet Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offense
    Range: Short/Long
    Chakra Cost: 20
    Damage Points: 40
    Description: After performing a long series of hand seals Ox → Monkey → Hare → Rat → Boar → Bird → Ox → Horse → Bird → Rat → Tiger → Dog → Tiger → Snake → Ox → Ram → Snake → Boar → Ram → Rat → Yang Water → Monkey → Bird → Dragon → Bird → Ox → Horse → Ram → Tiger → Snake → Rat → Monkey → Hare → Boar → Dragon → Ram → Rat → Ox → Monkey → Bird → Yang Water → Rat → Boar → Bird the user then shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the user's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. The amount of water used will be in proportion with the user's skill. Tobirama was able to use this technique with a single hand seal showing testiment to his skill in water ninjutsu.
    Note: Requires a water source to use.
    The moment that sees Yui's armour appear around her trough the weapons which are falling down on he preforms the handseals Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog while taking a deep breath. A split second later, when Yui starts falling/running down, he exhales several wind blades, while moving his head rapidly, aimed a Yui and destroying her armour, while at the same time penetrating her arms, and blasting holes in her arms (note that the distance between Harry/Yui is around 5meters). Now Yui is falling motionless towards the ground, Harry starts running towards her, while still focusing his chakra and creates two shadow clones next to him. Still running forwards, the clones create 2 rasengan's in his hand, on in his left hand and one in his right hand, and while Yui falls onto the starch field, and is immobilised, Harry stands next to her for a second before slamming both his hands down on Yui's body, his left hand ends up on her chest, leaving a big hole in her chest, and his right hand hits her throat, ripping it apart.


    Forgive me for being so cruel, but I deemed it necessary to end it this way.
    (Fūton: Shinkū Renpa) – Wind Release: Serial Waves
    Rank: S
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Mid
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Description: After performing a the required hand seals Rat → Snake → Horse → Dog theuser takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The power of this technique can be dramatically enhanced when utilised in conjunction with the effects of extreme suction, such as that generated by the Baku, where the augmented attack proved effective enough to even slice through the defences of a complete Susanoo.


    (Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
    Rank:B
    Type:Supplementary
    Range:Short
    Chakra Cost:20
    Damage Points:N/A
    Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.



    (Tsuin Rasengan) – Twin Sprialing sphere
    Rank: S
    Type: Offensive
    Range: short
    Chakra cost: 40
    Damage points: 80
    Descripiton: The user using two clones creates two rasengans in each hand using both clones as help to create two regular sized rasengans.
    Note: Must already Know Rasengan and already have two shadow clones before jutsu.

     
         

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    Though it may seem hopeless for Yui,as she falls back she notices the last seal begin formed,she swiftly channeling her wind chakra to her mouth and unleashing a stream of wind sending her down more faster avoiding the several wind blades coming at her barely making it and landing on the ground into the sticky starch again but this time more angery,she performs a seal and channels her Storm Chakra into her hands and unleash 16 beams of lighting traveling towards you but since Yui can control them 8 of them appear infront of you while 8 more travel around the rampart and coming from behind of you.As they collide they shock you leaving you paraliszed and unable to move.
    ..Yui..Almost died...

    (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

    (Ranton: Reizā Sākasu) - Storm Release: Laser Circus
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user creates several bright beams of electricity that shoots at his enemy. A halo of bright energy spreads from the users hands as they use this technique.
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    Quote Originally Posted by Asuna View Post
    Though it may seem hopeless for Yui,as she falls back she notices the last seal begin formed,she swiftly channeling her wind chakra to her mouth and unleashing a stream of wind sending her down more faster avoiding the several wind blades coming at her barely making it and landing on the ground into the sticky starch again but this time more angery,she performs a seal and channels her Storm Chakra into her hands and unleash 16 beams of lighting traveling towards you but since Yui can control them 8 of them appear infront of you while 8 more travel around the rampart and coming from behind of you.As they collide they shock you leaving you paraliszed and unable to move.
    ..Yui..Almost died...

    (Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
    Rank: D
    Type: Supplementary
    Range: Short
    Chakra cost: 10
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.

    (Ranton: Reizā Sākasu) - Storm Release: Laser Circus
    Rank: A
    Type: Attack
    Range: Short – Long
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: The user creates several bright beams of electricity that shoots at his enemy. A halo of bright energy spreads from the users hands as they use this technique.
    I assume from your description that I already made my clones, since that is a action I prefrom Immediatly after sending the wind blades, and at that point you fall down in the starch. If I am wrong, tell me and I'll edit my move if you agree.
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    As Harry Runs towards Yui, he notices the light forming around her hand. Suspecting that a Lightning attack is coming, Harry exhales a surge of wind all around him, that forms itself at the same time as the laser beams form itself from yui's hand. At the same time Harry's first clone (the on on his right side) slams his hands onto the ground and summons a huge amount of water 10 meters above Yui's form. While the first clone slams his hands onto the ground, the second clone grabs 2 scrolls and throws them above Yui, summoning hundreds of weapons that penetrate trough her body, just a split second before the water comes crashing down at her. Then the real Harry takes a defensive stance while the second clone walks trough the weapons on the ground to check if Yui is still alive.

    (Fūton: Boufuu oonami no Jutsu ) - Wind Release: Gale Surge Technique
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: 40
    Description: The user will create a large surge of wind that is capable of pushing a target back and dealing some small cuts to them. The wind technique is also strong enough to push back a large summoning creature.


    (Suiton: Haran Banshō) - Water Release: Stormy Blockade
    Rank: B
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Long
    Chakra cost: 20
    Damage points: N/A
    Description: The user will slam their hands against then ground allowing him/her to summon a massive amount of water from the sky, crushing it into the opponent. If needed, the user can cancel the technique in an instant.
    Note: The water needs to be summoned at least 10 meters above the opponent to have any real effect.


    (Sōshōryū Seichuu) - Rising Twin Dragons Control
    Rank: A
    Type: Offensive
    Range: Short - Mid
    Chakra cost: 30
    Damage points: 60
    Description: This technique is similar to the normal Twin Rising Dragons, but is an upgraded version. The user doesn't have to hold onto the weapons; they can just send them flying only with a movement of thier hand, which makes the weapons a lot faster. Also, with this new version, The user includes exploding tags in the spread in order to make the technique more effective.

     
         

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    Yui dies
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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    ~Test Failed~

    My main reasoning is your usage of the Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm, and the Wind Release: Hurricane fist techniques, first of all you used a technique that releases a stream/torrent of water from your hands to propel you in the air, it's water and not really "compressed" and it has a rather short reach, so you wouldn't be able to use that to lift you up in the air, and if you did it wouldn't make you evade a technique that has a large radius like the "Devouring Earth" technique, not to mention in that move there was a timeframe misconception, you altered it a little to your advantage.

    (Suiton: Seiryūshō) - Water Release: Azure Dragon Palm:

    (Doton: Musaborudzuchi) – Earth Release: Devouring Earth:

    Moving on to the usage of the hurricane fist technique, you used it while being in the air, like you said after being propelled by the "Azure Dragon Palm" technique, "punching your right", this wouldn't push you to your left, you'd need the wind vortex to hit a solid surface, creating enough pressure to get you out of the way, the way you worded this makes you release the wind vortex into the air, which wouldn't do anything but continue in the air, not to mention your timing of it makes it extremely difficult to get out of the techniques released at you, considering how fast the lightning needles go, and how big the mud is.

    Sorry, but you may take the test again in one month, as for Asuna, lol you died 3 times xD
     
         

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    Re: [Rain Test] -Severus Snape-

    Okay, thanks for the feedback Dante..
     
         

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