Naizen vs Gutsy jiraiya

[Gutsy Jiraiya]

Jiraiya: http://www.narutobase.net/forums/sho...09#post8601909

R&R
Killing Yes
Stealing No
CJ Yes
CE Yes
CW Yes
Speech does not affect timeframe
No Genjutsu
No Kai / Sub
Mid Range
Not Official (My bio is elsewhere)

Terrain: We are fighting on the platform in the water, where Jiraiya died in the anime (if you remember) the edge of the platform is long range then it is all water. We start mid range.
You can use both your bio's i dont mind.

Give a link to your bio, and I will start.

[DLA]

Hello Captain sparrow

[Naizen]

What platform is that again?
If I remember correctly, they were scattered through the water.
So are we on the same platform or different platforms? And are there other platforms around the water?

Karin in sig

[Gutsy Jiraiya]

(There is one giant platform nothing else, and the surrounding is just water - The water is in long range - So we are standing on the same platform in mid range as stated above)

Jiraiya: "Karin... you seem to be following me around... I better do something about that"

- Jiraiya quickly sends his chakra into the ground around you in an instant which is unnoticed as he doesn't move at all and there are no signals of molding his chakra and since Karin has not activated her Chakra sensing jutsu she is unable to notice this coming move. With the use of the chakra in the ground, Jiraiya forces the earth surrounding you in a square of a diameter of 10x10 meters, to drop 20 meters into the ground with great speed creating a large pit in the ground which your trapped in, and while the earth is dropping 20 meters down you will lose your foot hold and begin falling into the pit. The pit forms in less that a few seconds -

(Doton: Chidōkaku) - Earth Release: Moving Earth Core

Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is up to the user and rasing earth can be done up to 20 meters tall creating a small cliff or they can create trenches that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered, plant life and people retaining their same positions.

- Simultaniously Jiraiya quickly forms the boar - Tiger hand sequence, placing his hand on the ground quickly while Karin can't see me, using his chakra which is already in the ground, to manipulate the earth on the walls and ground around you in the pit, turning the bottom of the pit and the surrounding walls almost instantly into a massive and deadly swamp, making the walls of earth and swamp fall and collapse on you with massive force as your being trapped by the swamp on the ground in the pit -

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.

- Finally Jiraiya finishes his move by quickly releasing his chakra into the air creating a large boar shaped lid of earth with massive density, which immediately drops down upon the pit trapping and crushing you simultaniously, as your being crushed by the earth and the swamp -

Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant, boar-shaped, earthen lid high in the air that falls on the target, trapping them underneath.

[Naizen]

Karin: I sense that you are the one following me Jiraiya! You old pervert!
ps: I can also sense when someone's lying<.<

As the ground below her drops, Karin is unbalanced but immediately causes a square shaped pillar of sides 5x5m and height 30m to begin to raise her up.

(Doton: Doryū Jōheki) -
Earth Release: Earth Flow
Rampart

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then
makes a gigantic rampart rise up
beneath the user's feet, by
shaping the ground and
increasing the amount of earth
with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of
the rampart can be anything
from level ground to a steep,
needle-like mountain. If the user
increases the volume of earth
too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption
down. The user can combine this
jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall
Basin Technique to create a
waterfall.

As she rises, the earth still drops and the swamp begins to fill the 10x10 hole but she is unaffected. She then activates her chakra sensing

(Chakra Henkanshi no
Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing
Technique

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the
ability to feel chakra. The
technique allows the user to
concentrate and detect
someones chakra. Using these
technique sensors can tell when the enemy is approaching and
can easily track down targets.
(Techniques activation lasts 5
turns)
Note: Can only be used by bio
with sensory ability

Then as the lid drops, she touches it and it looses weight instantly. Then she hurls it at Jiraiya.

(Doton: Keijūgan no Jutsu)
- Earth Release: Light
Weight Rock Technique

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Contrary to the Earth Release: Added Weight
Rock Technique, instead of
making an object heavier, this
technique makes an item in
direct contact with the user
much lighter. This allows freer manipulation of the affected
objects, which would normally
carry considerably more weight
and as such, require a greater
amount of exertion to move. The
user if using this technique on a incoming object would still be
affected by the momentum of
the force but will not gain full
damage due to drastically
decreasing the weight. This
technique can be applied to the user himself or another person
to reduce their weight and
making them faster, however
the downside is that their
physical strength of the person
who is affected by this technique is reduced by -10 damage.
Note: The initial effects last for 2
turn before the weight of the
mass is returned to normal.

[Gutsy Jiraiya]

(The pillar your standing on would still sink because of the swamp, but not as fast)

- As your pillar is formed and Jiraiya's swamp is formed, he immediately changes his move as the pillar is finished forming, and he quickly inhaling a huge amount of air, and your sensory ability lets you sense my chakra but not what is about to happen, since the sensing ability only allows you to sense a persons chakra and when it is advancing. So from there Jiraiya expels a massive compressed sphere of wind which blasts straight into your pillar as it rises from the ground, crushing it, the sphere will also hit you delivering heavy damage which forces you to defend against the sphere, making you lose balance and begin to fall towards the ground immediately, while you probably still had the chance to activate your sensing ability in the last possible moment -

(Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After performing two hand seals Tiger → Dog the user launches a stronger version of the Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere technique, where the user instead chooses to compress the entirety of the previously inhaled breath into a single large, crushing sphere of wind chakra that they then proceed to expel from their mouth.

- As my wind is blasting your pillar and you, Jiraiya again exhales 3 giant dragon shaped fireballs which the first giant fireball is directed straight at you, which will make you unable to use fire to counter my wind, while the second fireball will go straight for the ground beneath you making you unable to go beneath the first fireball and will turn the ground beneath you into a blazing firestorm. The third fireball will go straigh behind the first fireball as a surprise as you would think it is only one fireball coming straight at you -

( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique

Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

- As all this is happening within a few seconds, Jiraiya quickly performs the needed hand seals and whipe blood on his palm as he slams it into the ground, whereas a giant toad will appear from the smoke with two giant katanas, one in each hand while Jiraiya stands on top of him -

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu) - Summoning Technique

Rank: C
Type: Defense/Attack/Suplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Hand Seals: Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, Ram, Palm On Ground
Description:To summon the creature the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. Though it appears that as long as significant pressure is placed against the blood in some form, the summon will be complete. There can be variations to the summoning steps, some ninja like Temari will wipe blood on her fan, then by swinging the fan the animal is summoned. Other ninja like Orochimaru wipe the blood across a snake tattoo on their arm first, then touch the ground.

Gamasushi-Demolisher Toad

This gigantic toad is one of the summons of Jiraiya.
is the most skilled of the second most powerful toad, and wielding two large katanas, he is known mostly as "Watch Tower Destroyer" and "Yataikusushi". He can wield some powerful skills, but his true talent is in swordplay. He speaks but only when not in combat, when he does fight, he typically doesn't say a word. Gamasushi is most known for battling alongside his summoner,
with great skill and execution.

Jiraiya: "You have to do better..."

[Naizen]

Sorry for the late reply..xD

Now, to clear you up with Chakra Sensing. I CAN SENSE EVERYTHING THAT HAS CHAKRA IN THEM. As far as you have your chakra in a technique, I can feel it. Period. Also, do not think that chakra sensing is something that I have to start meditating or performing handseals to activate.
You drop earth, I raise pillar.
You activate swamp, I activate Chakra Sensing.

You cannot release wind before I activate it, that is breaking the timeframe.
_____
As Karin activates her chakra sensing, you begin to inhale air and she immediately channels her chakra infront of you, unknown to you. Immediately you release the wind, she raises the earth about 2.5m in front of you, causing your wind to blast it and backfire, sending boulder sized chunks of rocks on your body and blowing you backwards with force, dealing about 60 points to you.

Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive,
Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A Description: The user lowers or
raises the ground in the
surrounding area at high speeds,
allowing them to create giant
holes in the ground or avoid
attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that
it is lowered to is up to the user
and rasing earth can be done up
to 20 meters tall creating a small
cliff or they can create trenches
that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved
below ground relative to the
surrounding surface the terrain
is not altered, plant life and
people retaining their same
positions.

As you are blow backwards, Karin forms a swamp below, 20m deep which extends from the wall she formed to the end of the platform. Now, with the force with which you are moving, you enter into the swamp like a rocket and the rocks hitting you push you in further.

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then
by changing the surface of an
object beneath an enemy into
mud and creating a non
flammable swamp, the user can
sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud
ensnares the enemy's body,
making it almost impossible to
recover one's strength and
escape from the swamp. The size
and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and
the amount of chakra used, but
if the user is an expert in this
technique, it will always be
possible to make a fair-sized
swamp which is extremely effective against a great number
of enemies or when having to
face gigantic creatures.

Karin: U____U Accept it old man! You can't beat me.

[Gutsy Jiraiya]

Sorry for the late reply..xD

Now, to clear you up with Chakra Sensing. I CAN SENSE EVERYTHING THAT HAS CHAKRA IN THEM. As far as you have your chakra in a technique, I can feel it. Period. Also, do not think that chakra sensing is something that I have to start meditating or performing handseals to activate.
You drop earth, I raise pillar.
You activate swamp, I activate Chakra Sensing.

You cannot release wind before I activate it, that is breaking the timeframe.
_____
As Karin activates her chakra sensing, you begin to inhale air and she immediately channels her chakra infront of you, unknown to you. Immediately you release the wind, she raises the earth about 2.5m in front of you, causing your wind to blast it and backfire, sending boulder sized chunks of rocks on your body and blowing you backwards with force, dealing about 60 points to you.

Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Defensive,
Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A Description: The user lowers or
raises the ground in the
surrounding area at high speeds,
allowing them to create giant
holes in the ground or avoid
attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that
it is lowered to is up to the user
and rasing earth can be done up
to 20 meters tall creating a small
cliff or they can create trenches
that can be as deep as 20 meters. Other than being moved
below ground relative to the
surrounding surface the terrain
is not altered, plant life and
people retaining their same
positions.

As you are blow backwards, Karin forms a swamp below, 20m deep which extends from the wall she formed to the end of the platform. Now, with the force with which you are moving, you enter into the swamp like a rocket and the rocks hitting you push you in further.

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then
by changing the surface of an
object beneath an enemy into
mud and creating a non
flammable swamp, the user can
sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud
ensnares the enemy's body,
making it almost impossible to
recover one's strength and
escape from the swamp. The size
and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and
the amount of chakra used, but
if the user is an expert in this
technique, it will always be
possible to make a fair-sized
swamp which is extremely effective against a great number
of enemies or when having to
face gigantic creatures.

Karin: U____U Accept it old man! You can't beat me.

My move is not break of timeframe, as you create the pillar (Rampart) which is a very slow jutsu, and it would not save you from the swamp and the fall that I made. My wind jutsu is not timeframe break as it is made after your first jutsu to try and save yourself from the swamp.

Secondly you cannot know what jutu is coming at you, but only the chakra within it. If you don't have eye contact to my technique, you can only sense it and then see it when it's too late. That is if your in the hole that i made. And even if you saw the jutsu coming before you would counter, my fire would already be on the way.

Finally since my pit is 20 meters deep and it is all made of a vast swamp, and your pillar is in the middle of this swamp, you have no contact to the ground. This means you cannot perform the moving earth core, to initially block my wind blast coming at you. Even if you had contact with the ground, the Rampart jutsu you used isn't fast enough to be conducted to save you in time.

As of this situation, you are in the swamp, and you need to defend against it.
http://www.narutobase.net/forums/con...5176&u2=100403

Please repost a valid move beneath this post If you not sadisfied, we can go to a sensei.

[Azazel]

Karin: I sense that you are the one following me Jiraiya! You old pervert!
ps: I can also sense when someone's lying<.<

As the ground below her drops, Karin is unbalanced but immediately causes a square shaped pillar of sides 5x5m and height 30m to begin to raise her up.

(Doton: Doryū Jōheki) -
Earth Release: Earth Flow
Rampart

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: By performing the Tiger hand seal the user then
makes a gigantic rampart rise up
beneath the user's feet, by
shaping the ground and
increasing the amount of earth
with chakra. Depending on what the user imagines, the shape of
the rampart can be anything
from level ground to a steep,
needle-like mountain. If the user
increases the volume of earth
too much, he can be forced to keep his chakra consumption
down. The user can combine this
jutsu with Water Style: Waterfall
Basin Technique to create a
waterfall.

As she rises, the earth still drops and the swamp begins to fill the 10x10 hole but she is unaffected. She then activates her chakra sensing

(Chakra Henkanshi no
Jutsu) - Chakra Sensing
Technique

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: This is a very advanced of advancing the
ability to feel chakra. The
technique allows the user to
concentrate and detect
someones chakra. Using these
technique sensors can tell when the enemy is approaching and
can easily track down targets.
(Techniques activation lasts 5
turns)
Note: Can only be used by bio
with sensory ability

Then as the lid drops, she touches it and it looses weight instantly. Then she hurls it at Jiraiya.

(Doton: Keijūgan no Jutsu)
- Earth Release: Light
Weight Rock Technique

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Contrary to the Earth Release: Added Weight
Rock Technique, instead of
making an object heavier, this
technique makes an item in
direct contact with the user
much lighter. This allows freer manipulation of the affected
objects, which would normally
carry considerably more weight
and as such, require a greater
amount of exertion to move. The
user if using this technique on a incoming object would still be
affected by the momentum of
the force but will not gain full
damage due to drastically
decreasing the weight. This
technique can be applied to the user himself or another person
to reduce their weight and
making them faster, however
the downside is that their
physical strength of the person
who is affected by this technique is reduced by -10 damage.
Note: The initial effects last for 2
turn before the weight of the
mass is returned to normal.

You are mistaken.

Since you made the pillar before he made the swamp, your pillar is turning to a swamp as well as it would overpower the chakra you placed within the pillar. Though you made the dropping lid light upon your touching it, the force of the lid should push you further deeper into the swamp.

But that was if you we're on level ground. This however is not the case. Your predicament is slightly worse.

As you made the pillar only 5x5 and 30 meters in depth vs his 10x10 20m in depth you made it inside the hole he made but 10m above your original start position. So when his earth chakra overwhelms yours, you should actually drop down 10m because your pillar is now a watery swamp and will drop to fill the gap you left with your pillar and his moving earth core. Leaving you falling into the swamp as the dropping lid falls on you.

You can still make the dropping lid light but the damage is done.

[Naizen]

So does he win?

[Gutsy Jiraiya]

- Your in the swamp, but if you want you can make a new move, or else i win -

[Naizen]

Nah. I don't believe in making new moves If I lose then I'm responsible for itu_u
I prefer a different battle altogether..